Objectives: Draconis Combine, pdf:
Page 21: Victory Industries:
The statement:
"Main Products: Avatar, Black Hawk-KU, Firestarter, Griffin, and Wolverine Class BattleMechs"
is unclear, since we have both omni and non-omni Firestarters. However, going by TROs it looks like it is supposed to be the omni version.
Suggested Fix:
Change to:
"Main Products: Avatar, Black Hawk-KU, and Firestarter OmniMechs, Griffin, and Wolverine Class BattleMechs"
Page 43: Static Defenses:
The first paragraph is unchanged from Objectives: Capellan Confederation, and does not fit. Both the faction name and preferred weapons are wrong.
The worst offending line is:
"Many of these tend to be armed with weapons pro-
duced inside the Confederation border, so it is not surprising many of
the former Confederation static defenses contain missile turrets, sur-
rounded by minefields, and backed up by Artillery - ..."
also, the reference to Plasma Rifles at the last sentence in the paragraph seems out of place:
"Almost all factories producing
war materiel divert some of their excess production to build up static
defenses, so factories that produce Plasma rifles will likely have those
weapons mounted on many of their weapon turrets."
Suggested Fix:
At least change it to something like:
"Many of these tend to be armed with weapons pro-
duced inside the Combine border, so it is not surprising many of
the former Combine static defenses contain PPC turrets, and backed up by missiles - ..."
and
"Almost all factories producing
war materiel divert some of their excess production to build up static
defenses, so factories that produce PPCs will likely have those
weapons mounted on many of their weapon turrets."
Page: none - info missing, Yamato and Ryu:
There is no info on what these mobile factory ships are manufacturing.
Suggest Fix:
Add entries for them. Yamato should at least be manufacturing the Wight.