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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #600 on: 13 November 2013, 03:26:00 »
Herb's ruling is that one of the sources (Heir to the Dragon or the Kurita sourcebook) is in error, but he's unable to say which. 

Since the novel fiction generally trumps the sourcebook fiction (which, in this case, takes the form of an in-universe ComStar report), my take would be that Ottar Sjovold was the Rasalhague District Governor up until being knifed by Hassid Ricol in 3019, and was briefly succeeded on technical grounds of succession law by Marcus Kurita as a caretaker (holding the posts of both Governor and Warlord) before Marcus was transferred to his new role as head of the Otomo, leaving Mies as Governor.  Mies wouldn't have succeeded Marcus as Warlord, since Sorenson got that prize assignment.  The House Kurita sourcebook statement about a century of Rasalhagian authority for this branch of the Kurita line can be read to mean that they held various positions of authority in the District from 2925-ish onwards, though not necessarily always the Governorship. 

In fact, since Marcus was the Warlord in 3019, it makes perfect sense that someone else would be the Governor.  (Just a minor hiccup about the reference to Mies succeeding Marcus.)
« Last Edit: 13 November 2013, 05:23:06 by Mendrugo »
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #601 on: 13 November 2013, 08:50:58 »
Warlord Sorsenson related to Sorenson's Sabres commander Daniel Sorenson?
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #602 on: 13 November 2013, 10:07:48 »
Warlord Sorsenson related to Sorenson's Sabres commander Daniel Sorenson?

Yup.  Daniel is Vladimir's nephew.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #603 on: 13 November 2013, 12:15:32 »
----- 1 Day Later -----

Date: September 23, 3019

Location: Rasalhague

Title: Heir to the Dragon

Author: Robert N. Charrette

Type: Novel (Heir to the Dragon)

Synopsis:  Theodore joins Takashi in the Palace Hall – seat of government for the Rasalhague District.  He’d planned to enter the hall formally attired for his wedding, but the agenda for today is far grimmer.  Takashi is carrying out his retribution plan – ordering the execution of every individual involved in the conspiracy and every living relative.  Since Ottar Sjovold was one of the conspirators, that includes his daughter – Theodore’s fiancé – Anastasi Sjovold.

Theodore protests, telling his father that such actions are barbaric.  Takashi counters by citing the ancient Japanese tale of Heike Monogatari, a tale of enemies shown mercy who return to slay those who spared them.  Takashi has made an exception for Marcus Kurita, claiming that there is no solid evidence of his involvement.  Theodore doesn’t believe that line of reasoning, so Takashi points out a more relevant reality – that Marcus is too strong in the Rasalhague district to openly confront.  To undercut Marcus, Takashi appoints Vladimir Ivan Sorenson as Warlord of Rasalhague, while Marcus is appointed “Chief of Strategies for the DCMS,” forcing him to travel to Luthien and vacate his power base. 

Theodore ponders the deep political strategies Takashi is managing – if he were to call Marcus out as a traitor, giri would demand that the same punishment be applied to Marcus’ family members, including   Marcus’ parents Florimel and Undell, and his children, including Constance – gutting the ruling Kurita line.  He realizes that his father is making decisions for the good of the House and the Combine, but also realizes that his seemingly implacable, unbending father is capable of making compromises for the greater good.  He asks if Takashi might spare Anastasi Sjovold, but the Coordinator refuses, predicting that her children would rise up to seek revenge on House Kurita in the end.  Theodore rages at his father, then stalks out of the Government Hall as firing squads continue the mass executions.

Theodore seeks solace in Tomoe’s arms back at his lance’s starport barracks.  He tells her that he loves her and wants to marry her.  He promises that they can keep it a secret, with Subhash Indrahar’s assistance – keeping any children hidden as well, until they are old enough to be announced as heirs.

Tomore confesses that she was the masked assassin who cut him on the eve of his graduation from the Wisdom of the Dragon school – a jukurensha of the Order of the Five Pillars.  She admits that Florimel Kurita assigned her to get close to Theodore and protect him.  Tomoe says that she failed, because she fell in love with Theodore and lost the detachment needed to complete her task.  She also bemoans her lack of noble heritage – it would be improper for an orphaned daughter of a mere Isesaki merchant to wed the Dragon’s heir.

Theodore tells her that he doesn’t care about any of that, and that he loves her for who she is.  She accepts his proposal, and they find a Buddhist monk to perform the ceremony that very night.

Notes:  I should stop writing blog posts at midnight.  Yeesh.  Mies Kurita’s father is Malcom, not Marcus, and this scene clearly states that Malcom replaced Ottar Sjovold as District Governor, but was old and sickly (explaining why Mies held the position six years later).

Theodore is clearly beginning to learn how to play the long game of manipulation in true Kurita style.  He’s seen that his father is willing to compromise for the sake of appearances when the outcomes are beneficial to the state and the House.  If Theodore presents a lowborn wife and heirs as a de-facto reality, Takashi will have to compromise his stern insistence on a “proper match” and will most likely claim the plan as his all along, for appearances’ sake.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #604 on: 14 November 2013, 13:46:53 »
----- The Following Year -----

Date: December 25, 3020 [See Notes]

Location: Alexandria

Title: Up in Smoke

Author: Blaine Lee Pardoe

Type: Scenario (Cranston Snord’s Irregulars)

Synopsis:  During a 3020 assault on the world of Alexandria, Cranston Snord’s Irregulars were assigned to support a mercenary task force led by several regiments of the 12th Star Guards.  The Irregulars hoped to recover significant art treasures from Alexandria, but were disappointed when they found that most of the Star League-era artworks on the world had long since been destroyed.  They did find one cache buried in a hillside, but they were attacked by a unit of Rasalhague Regulars while in the process of excavating it, and the artwork was destroyed.  Enraged, the Irregulars charged the Regulars and put them to flight.

Notes:  I’m somewhat confused by the timestamp on this scenario.  It gives the date as 3020, and also adds a timestamp of 3020 hours (TST).  If TST stands for Terran Standard Time, that should top out at 2359.  Probably a case of Blaine accidentally putting the year where the timestamp belonged.

Historically, it appears that House Steiner succeeded in liberating Alexandria, since the 3025 map shows it firmly in Lyran blue.  That makes it odd that the Irregulars were treasure hunting.  If this had been an objective raid, then sure – dig up the artwork.  However, if the world was going to be rejoining the Lyran Commonwealth in the near future, then why did the Irregulars feel the need to dig it up in the middle of the campaign.  Isn’t he stealing from his employer at this point, since the people on this world will soon be Lyran citizens?

Special rules in this scenario have the Irregulars at the dig site (on the hill where Recon Lance started) go berserk for 1D6 turns starting turn 3.  They alpha strike every turn and close at top speed with the nearest enemy, intending to engage in physical combat.  If there are no ‘Mechs at the dig site on turn 3, all ‘Mechs check for berserk behavior and go crazy on a roll of 1.  The victory condition for the Irregulars is to “drive at least five ‘Mechs off the northern edge of the East Map.”  Any other result is a Kurita victory.

The wording is somewhat imprecise, here.  If “drive” is used in the sense of “drive a cattle herd” then that implies that the Irregulars have to push the majority of the Kurita ‘Mechs into retreating.  If it’s “drive” in the sense of “drive a car,” then five of Snord’s eight ‘Mechs have to exit the battle intact.  Since this scenario doesn’t include any “forced withdrawal” rules, I’m leaning towards the latter – making the victory condition a tactical retreat.

The Irregulars weigh in at 345 tons and have significant pre-existing damage, while the Rasalhague Regulars weigh in at 385 tons.  However, the Regulars only have one lance on the Western Map to begin with, while the second lance enters on the Eastern Map the second turn. 

For the Irregulars, I’d recommend an all out assault on the Western lance from the get go, hoping to use the 2-to-1 numbers advantage to crush the Kurita forces there before the Eastern lance can reinforce them.  Leave one light ‘Mech at the dig site to go berserk, leaving the rest of your force free to be more tactical in their attacks.  If you try to extract off the Eastern map, there’s a good chance that your slower ‘Mechs will be chewed up by the Western lance, while the Eastern lance will have a couple of rounds of fire to try to bring down your thinly armored fast movers.

For the Regulars, I’d advocate charging northeast from Tango Fire Lance’s starting position, firing at the Irregulars as they go, and then turning to form a blocking line once they get to the northern edge of the Eastern Map.  They’ll be joined by Bravo Recon Lance, and can position themselves so that the Irregulars have to go through them to extract.  You only need to kill four, so focus on the damaged Wasps, Locust, and Crusader, which should be the easiest kills.

[Edit: The datestamp given is just 3020.  However, the sourcebook section of the scenario pack notes that the Alexandria campaign lasted seven months in total, and that the Irregulars were sidelined for repairs for six months after that.  Since the Shrapnel short story "Dispatch" shows them raiding McAffe in November 3020, there's a timeline conflict unless the Alexandria campaign started after the raid on McAffe, in December 3020.  Since there's travel time involved from Clinton to Alexandria, late December seems to be the most appropriate date for "Up in Smoke."]
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #605 on: 14 November 2013, 14:43:35 »
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #606 on: 14 November 2013, 22:22:07 »
That was one of the issues that bugs me about Snord's Irregulars.  They continually shirk their contracted role as a support unit in planetary assaults to go treasure hunting.  Only the fact that they tend to run afoul of Marik patrols and win decisive victories keeps them from getting called out on contract violations. 

Another question is why the locals would have told them about the art cache hidden in the hills.  Presumably it was buried precisely because the locals wanted to retain some of their cultural heritage and didn't want mercenaries or House forces digging it up and hauling it offworld.  Did the Irregulars torture the locals for the information?
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #607 on: 15 November 2013, 14:52:37 »
----- That Same Year -----

Date: May, 3020

Location: Harrow’s Sun

Title: Cry Vengeance!

Author: Richard Meyer, Walter Hunt, Lisa Hunt & Evan Jarrison

Type: Scenario (The Fox’s Teeth)

Synopsis:  In Spring 3020, House Kurita invaded Harrow’s Sun and spent two weeks sweeping the AFFS garrison (a Ceti Hussars regiment and the 7th Crucis Lancers regiment) before them.  The 7th Crucis Lancers unit known as McKinnon’s Raiders lost its commander (Ross McKinnon) and XO (Kurt Lytton) in a single battle, leaving Ross’ son Ian McKinnon in charge.  Rather than trying to fight the Kuritan forces straight on, Ian launched a guerilla campaign, starting with an assault on a former Ceti Hussars communications relay, now garrisoned by a reinforced lance of the 12th Vegan Rangers.

The Rangers field 260 tons with pre-existing damage, while McKinnon’s Raiders field 360 tons, also with pre-existing damage.  The Raiders get 3 points for each enemy ‘Mech destroyed/disabled, and 5-15 points for each building destroyed (2-4 points for each one damaged).  The Rangers get 5 points for each Raider destroyed or disabled and 3 points for each Ranger that retreats off the map.  If the battle continues past turn 20, the Rangers start checking for reinforcements each turn.  If they arrive (1 in 12 chance every turn), the Rangers get 25 bonus points and a 185-ton lance of undamaged reinforcements.

Notes:  The scenario automatically ends at the end of the turn in which the reinforcements arrive, so there’s almost no point in printing the record sheets or putting the minis on the field unless the Raiders are right where the reinforcements enter.  All in all, the reinforcement roll is just to incentivize McKinnon’s troops to finish their job in less than 20 turns.

The 12th Vegan Rangers is a very, very odd mercenary force to be flying Kuritan colors in 3020.  Its write-up in Field Manual: Mercenaries (Revised) says that it was converted from a private army of a Federated Suns noble on Verde to a mercenary command, and hired out to the Federated Suns and Lyran Commonwealth.  The Galtor Campaign writeup indicates that the unit has contracted for the Lyrans, the Federated Suns, and “princes of the Periphery.”  If it was formed by a FedSuns nobleman and continued to provide income to the FedSuns planet Verde, why would it have a contract with the Draconis Combine to invade the Federated Suns?  It sounds like the Duke of Verde should be expecting to be arrested for treason at this point.  The Legion of Vega would make much more sense than the 12th Vegan Rangers.

[Update:  Herb Beas has confirmed that the Legion of Vega should be the OpFor, rather than then 12th Vegan Rangers.]

The Raiders want to get in, kill the buildings, and get out before turn 15, at the latest.  This is one of the earliest scenarios, so the rules for buildings use a threshold damage system rather than simply marking off damage on the armor diagram.  The stables take half damage from any hit, attacks on the silo only damage the transmission tower on a 6+ on 2d6 after a successful hit, and the ranch house only takes damage on an 8+ on 2d6.  No heights are indicated.  Given the difficulty of damaging the buildings with weapons fire, I’d recommend just walking up to them with an appropriately heavy ‘Mech and climbing on top, overwhelming the CF with mass and causing it to collapse.  Sure, you’ll take damage in the fall, but not much, and the building will be insta-killed – no fuss, no muss.  The Warhammer and Marauder can be in the thick of the buildings within three turns, so making the 15-turn deadline for killing all the buildings should be simple.  If you can do at least 6 damage to the heaviest buildings, your Shadow Hawk and Griffin will also be suitable for crushing real estate.  While smooshing the buildings, you can turn your weapons on the outnumbered and outgunned Rangers.

For the Rangers, this is a difficult scenario to win.  You’re outnumbered, outgunned, and have to protect weak buildings.  Your Archer, Crusader and Rifleman should hang back in among the buildings and provide long-range support, while the Stinger and Phoenix Hawk try for back shots.  There’s really no good way to stop the enemy from wiping out the buildings if they catch on to the trick of stepping on them and making them collapse (especially with mid-weight jumpers like the Griffin, which can waltz past your lines).  To balance that out, you might want to give the 12th Vegan some of the abilities from Field Manual: Mercenaries (Revised):  -1 to-hit bonus on all medium-range weapon attacks, may torso twist multiple times in the same phase (essentially giving a 360 degree arc of fire), and may fire at multiple targets with no penalty.

The Rangers should concentrate on ‘Mechs heavy enough to crush the buildings.  If they can be brought down, the enemy won’t have enough weight to easily take out buildings, and will have to resort to firepower. 
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #608 on: 16 November 2013, 07:22:44 »
----- 1 Month Later -----

Date: June 22, 3020

Location: New Avalon

Title: Irreplaceable

Author: Jason Hansa

Type: Short Story (BattleCorps)

Synopsis:  Six years after the fiasco on Halstead Station, Hanse gets more bad news from Ardan Sortek.  The AFFS has secured the planet of Mara, but most of the 34th Avalon Hussars’ command staff was wiped out when the DCMS hit their headquarters.  Hanse muses that it was too soon to have sent them out, when they’d just finished rebuilding.  He ponders a small statuette of Dana, made from her Enforcer’s cockpit ferroglass, and tells Ardan that yesterday would have been her birthday.

Ardan, similarly melancholy, discusses his recent breakup with Elaine.  (Ardan wasn’t ready to settle down and start a family.)  Hanse orders that the 34th and 36th Avalon Hussars be decommissioned and combined into a new 42nd Avalon Hussars RCT, hoping that the new designation will spare them, and himself, painful history.

Shortly thereafter, Minister of Foreign Relations Olivia Fenlon enters and delivers a message from Archon Katrina Steiner, proposing peace in the Inner Sphere.  Hanse studies the statue once again, then turns to take the message.

Notes:  Given all the derision directed at the DCMS for its messed up logistical tail, how did the 2nd Sword of Light get back to full strength only two months after being thrashed on Mallory’s World, while it took six years to reconstitute the 34th Avalon Hussars?  I guess the Sword of Light regiments always get top priority, and it’s the other units that generate the horror stories of having to scrounge for parts and supplies.  (I guess particularly when you’ve just killed First Prince Ian Davion, you get anything on your requisition list, no questions asked.)

Hanse has apparently been obsessed with Dana over the past six years, and the decommissioning of her RCT (the 34th Avalon Hussars) is a sign that he’s ending his mourning period and getting ready to move on with his life.  Fortunately for Archon Steiner, this puts him in exactly the right mood to be receptive to her famous 3020 Peace Proposal, which led to the formation of the mighty Federated Commonwealth.

The ComStar histories generally state that Hanse was the only leader who responded positively to the Peace Proposal.  However, that’s not exactly true.  Maximilian Liao responded very similarly to Hanse – offering a military alliance and proposing that Melissa Steiner be wed to his heir, Tormano.  If you’ll recall, Hanse also rejected full peace, but proposed a military alliance and marriage to Melissa.  While Hanse got the girls’ hearts on Tharkad a’thumpin’, the proposal from Max was dismissed as being an offer to wed Melissa to ‘one of his oily brood.’  Jeez, ComStar, prejudiced much?  Tormano didn’t look all that oily in the sourcebook illustrations.  (Of course, those were circa 3025, and Tormano might have had a major zit problem in his earlier years, what with Clearasil being LosTech and all…)
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #609 on: 17 November 2013, 08:52:28 »
----- 4 Months Later -----

Date: October 13, 3020

Location: McAffe

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  In a dispatch from McAffe to Bella I, Force Commander Simon X. Beckner of the 2nd Free Worlds Guards informs his commander, Colonel Josian Kimbolton, that a trap for Cranston Snord is ready to be sprung. 

An individual named Kincaid has pulled together a collection designed to be irresistible to Cranston, including several of the items stolen when the FWL raided and trashed his museum on Clinton in 3017.  A mole inside the Lyran Commonwealth will send Snord word of the location, drawing him in.  The bait includes Bright Thomlinson’s art pieces and a toy dog that used to be owned by someone famous. 

Notes:  According to his bio, Bright Thomlinson is an avid art collector, and his gallery on Clinton is one of the best known in the Successor States.  It is rumored that he has the only surviving works by Picasso there.  The attack on Clinton in 3017 cost him several of his best works, and at this point he has a personal grudge against House Marik.  His bio also lists a contact – Shormen Dal, a Steiner historian.  I wonder if Shormen is the Marik mole.

The Second Free Worlds Guards are known as the “Ever Faithful.”  They were founded in 2464 and made an unsuccessful attempt to capture Terra after the Star League collapsed.  They’re supported by an Aerospace wing and the 11th Bella Armor Regiment (which formally joined the unit in 3019) – a light tank force that serves in a reconnaissance role.

Interestingly, the whole “Junk Yard Dog” campaign of 3018 was framed in the Cranston Snord’s Irregulars scenario pack as Cranston’s attempt to make sure House Marik would never bother the Irregulars again.  It looks like that didn’t quite pan out as he’d hoped, since it was followed by a suicide strike in 3019 and now a baited trap in 3020.

Bella I’s primary historical significance is that it hosted the talks that led to the Marik/Steiner peace treaty of 2821, which ended the First Succession War on that border.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #610 on: 18 November 2013, 12:34:03 »
----- 18 Days Later -----

Date: October 31, 3020

Location: Bella I

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  Colonel Josiah Kimbolton, CO of the 2nd Free Worlds Guards, replies to Force Commander Simon X. Beckner that Snord’s entire company has taken the bait, jumping out of the Clinton system 36 hours after verifying the contents of the Kincaid collection.  He orders Beckner to await Snord’s arrival and be ready to prove that he’s worthy of his new rank. 

Notes:  The datestamp on this message is 31 October 3028, but comes between segments dated 13 October 3020 and 3 November 3020, so it’s just a typo.

Colonel Kimbolton makes a comment that he personally spoke in Beckner's defense to Janos.  This would imply that Beckner had previously made some massive screw-up that would ordinarily have derailed his promotion track, and/or that Janos micromanages the FWLM all the way down to signing off on command appointments at the battalion commander level.  Looking at the U.S. Navy promotion system for comparison, the Secretary of Defense approves promotions of lieutenant through rear admiral (with Senate confirmation), the Secretary of the Navy approves chief warrant officer promotion boards, and the President appoints admirals, vice admirals, and rear admirals. 

If Janos is directly running the promotions boards down to "Force Commander," what role does his "Seven Sons of Solon" Joint-Chiefs group play in the promotions process?  Since "Force Commander" is only used by the Marik Commonwealth forces, Janos' approval of promotions in this case might be part of his role as the head of that provincial state, rather than something tied to his Captain-Generalcy.  As Tomas Marik told Narinder Selaj at the end of "Fall From Grace," despite the weakness of his position as Captain-General, he remained the Duke of Atreus - seat of the Marik Commonwealth.  Force Commander is the lowest of the so-called "Field Grades," implying that Janos personally approves promotions to Force Commander, Lieutenant Colonel, Colonel, General, and Marshal.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #611 on: 18 November 2013, 16:03:25 »
I thought that McKinnon's Raiders were part of the 7th Crucis Lancers rather than the Davion Guards. I know that they were an independent unit at the time--had they been attached to the Guards?
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« Reply #612 on: 18 November 2013, 16:42:29 »
I thought that McKinnon's Raiders were part of the 7th Crucis Lancers rather than the Davion Guards. I know that they were an independent unit at the time--had they been attached to the Guards?
Fox's Teeth are formally attached to the 7th.  However, their assigned to whatever they're needed.  During the least the late 3rd Succession Wars, the 7th Crucis Lancers had number independent companies flying around on independent missions if memory serves correctly.
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« Reply #613 on: 18 November 2013, 19:55:19 »
I thought that McKinnon's Raiders were part of the 7th Crucis Lancers rather than the Davion Guards. I know that they were an independent unit at the time--had they been attached to the Guards?

You're right.  Fixed.  Thanks.
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« Reply #614 on: 19 November 2013, 05:29:28 »
Herb has confirmed that the presence of the 12th Vegan Rangers in "Cry Vengeance!" is "one of those wacky early BattleTech continuity mishaps" and said that the Legion of Vega would make more sense as the OpFor. 

With the odds stacked against the Combine forces in that scenario, it fits the Legion's pattern of being a modern incarnation of the Chain Gang units - disposable troops in broken equipment. 
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« Reply #615 on: 19 November 2013, 09:19:16 »
----- 3 Days Later -----

Date: November 3, 3020

Location: McAffe

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  Force Commander Simon X. Beckner replies to his CO, Colonel Josiah Kimbolton, that he has the entire third battalion of the 2nd Free Worlds Guards hidden on McAffe ready to trap and kill Snord’s Irregulars when they come for the artifact cache.  They plan to let the Irregulars get onto Kincaid’s estate via a causeway, and then block the causeway, trapping the Irregulars.  Beckner assures Kimbolton that his battalion is more than sufficient force to deal with a mere mercenary company, and that he can’t lose.

Notes:  A regular feature of the Marik units that face off against Snord’s Irregulars is that they’re often brazenly overconfident, yet woefully unprepared.  Beckner appears to fit solidly into this mold. 

Beckner appears confident that his battalion has entrenched itself on McAffe in utter secrecy.  I wonder why he’s so convinced that his efforts at a stealth redeployment from the 2nd’s baseworld of Bella I successfully escaped the notice of the Lyran Intelligence Corps.

Looking at Historical: Brush Wars, the Veteran/Fanatical 2nd Free Worlds Guards are still stationed on Bella I as of 3028, though they assault Claybrooke in 3033 and Conqista in 3038.  They appear to have sat out Anton’s revolt, fending off Lyran raids on Bella I in September and December 3014 with light damage.
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« Reply #616 on: 20 November 2013, 10:14:50 »
----- 4 Days Later -----

Date: November 7, 3020

Location: Bella I

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  Colonel Kimbolton responds to his subordinate with the following words:  “You said it very well, Force Commander.  You cannot lose.  Remember that.”

Notes:  Kimbolton’s statement can be read as a thinly veiled warning – screw this up and your career is over. 

This is, to date, the shortest entry for the Chronological Fiction Review.  12 words, in total.  The Shrapnel anthology was a very interesting product – a compilation of art and fiction that nicely set the stage for the tail end of the Third Succession War.  The various pieces of fiction came in a variety of formats – first person narratives, third person action pieces, annotated bio-medical reports, and this collection of HPG message transcripts setting up an attempted Marik ambush of Snord’s Irregulars.  I'm very glad that Catalyst decided to return to this format with the 20 Years of Art and Fiction collection.  I managed to acquire my copy at a store called Fantasy Forum in Clarendon, VA.  I walked in and browsed the shelves and found Shrapnel, the Star League sourcebook, and the original 3025 poster map sitting in the "used" section.

Elizabeth “Liz” Danforth is a frequent collaborator with Michael Stackpole, both for BattleTech and in other settings.  The two also worked together on the Wasteland computer game and the Dragon Crown War.  I recall that when I got my copy of Natural Selection autographed at Wargames West in Albuquerque, they were doing the signing together (since she’d done the interior illustrations).
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« Reply #617 on: 21 November 2013, 13:07:18 »
----- 3 Days Later -----

Date: November 10, 3020

Location: McAffe

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis: Force Commander Beckner reports that “the Western District went off line,” requiring him to dispatch technicians to the power station for repairs.  He notes that the rakshasa storms are playing hell with the instrumentation.

Notes: And the wheels begin to come off the FWL ambush stratagem… 

In Hindu mythology, Rakshasas were powerful warriors, expert magicians and illusionists.  Since Snord’s Irregulars are about to bamboozle the 3rd Battalion and pull their shorts up over their heads, having them approach under the cover of a “rakshasa” storm is quite apropos.  (On a side note – anyone else ever feel the overpowering urge to paint a Rakshasa mini as Mickey Mouse?)

In the narrative, Beckner refers to the technical staff as “Techs.”  During the tail end of the 3rd Succession War, people with technical knowledge were seen as prized commodities, as liable to be seized and carried off by raiders as spare parts or water.  Beckner notes that he sent support troops with the Techs to cover them.  One account records techs being herded into underground bunkers at a ‘Mech repair depot to keep them from being stolen during a raid.  Another has a Davion force getting slaughtered in an attempt to free some AFFS techs captured by the DCMS.  With kidnapping and forced labor such a high probability in the Successor States of this era, one wonders what sort of incentives the Great Houses had to offer to secure a Tech’s services.  From Mercenary’s Handbook, a Technician makes only 75% of what an equivalently skilled MechWarrior earns. 
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #618 on: 22 November 2013, 12:55:25 »
----- 6 Days Later -----

Date: November 16, 3020

Location: Bella I

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  Colonel Kimbolton informs Beckner (now busted down to Captain), that he is relieved of duty because of his inexcusable failure, and is to report to Atreus by 27 November for a board of inquiry.

Notes:  It’s 120.1195 light years between McAffe and Atreus, as the crow flies.  That works out to five jumps, not to mention the in-system transit time (unknown in McAffe, 16.1 days for Atreus).  If the message was sent November 16, it wouldn’t arrive until the 17th or 18th.  Unless a special command circuit was standing by to bring Beckner to his hearing on Atreus, it would take him roughly 50 days to get from McAffe to Atreus, arriving around January 7, 3021.  On November 27, Captain Beckner would still be aboard a recharging JumpShip in the Pingree or Rexburg system.  (Either that, or hopping the next available express flight to Galatea to find work as a mercenary under an assumed name.)

Talk about being late for your own funeral.  ;D
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« Reply #619 on: 22 November 2013, 16:52:33 »
I haven't read my Shrapnel in a while.  But if i were this guy, i'd be getting my 'Mech and going way of the Mercenary if i wanted keep breathing!
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« Reply #620 on: 23 November 2013, 08:24:09 »
----- 8 Days Later -----

Date: November 18, 3020

Location: McAffe System (En Route to Atreus)

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  Simon Beckner attempts to justify his actions to the enraged Colonel Kimbolton.  He reports that one lance guarded the Techs at the West District power station, while the other eight lances continued to guard the causeway leading to the Kincaid estate.  Snord’s jump-capable ‘Mechs walked through the slimy water across the ocean bottom from Marggraf’s Harbor to the Kincaid peninsula, then jumped from the seaward shelf and landed behind the Marik battalion.  The first volley destroyed Petralona’s lance, and the remaining eight lances withdrew in the face of Snord’s three. 

Beckner argues that the battle could be considered a draw, since the Irregulars only took Kincaid’s collection, and let the Free Worlds Guards return afterwards to collect the four destroyed ‘Mechs for salvage.

Notes:  As with many of chronicles of Snord’s Irregulars, there are some continuity issues.  The Snord’s Irregulars scenario pack says that the Irregulars hit Alexandria in 3020.  They spent seven months on Alexandria and then spend another six months to repair the extensive damage to their forces and equipment.  Even if the Alexandria campaign ran from January to July 2020, with the Irregulars returning to Clinton in August, that still puts them as not fully repaired until February 2021. 

Of course, that could just mean that Snord was so eager to get his collection back that he took his nearly wrecked ‘Mechs to McAffe – earning bonus bragging rights for defeating more than twice his number with severely damaged ‘Mechs.  (Or, perhaps the scenario pack’s story of a six-month repair job to fix twelve ‘Mechs was just a cover story for the probably unauthorized raid into Marik space to reclaim his artifacts.)

The Irregulars field a Wolverine, Shadow Hawk, Phoenix Hawk, and two Wasps with jump capabilities.  I can see that bunch downing a scout lance with precision shots to the rear armor in one alpha strike.  FM:FWL lists the 2nd Guards as a medium-weight unit that prefers fast, mobile actions in open or rolling terrain, making it something of a square peg in a round hole for fixed guard duty in confining terrain.  However, jump jets can’t be triggered underwater, so the Irregulars must have actually reached the shore and then taken off – probably concealed by high surf and the driving rain of the rakshasa storm.

The datestamp lists it as “En Route to Atreus,” but again, unless there was a command circuit standing by with the first and last legs using pirate points, Beckner would still be outbound towards the jump point when he transmitted this message to the local HPG for delivery.
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« Reply #621 on: 24 November 2013, 01:44:15 »
Just had a thought on the Snord's Irregulars 3020 chronology.  The Alexandria mission is given just as "3020."  The protracted campaign and extended repair session could actually fit in without any conflicts if the Alexandria campaign takes place in December 3020.  That would have the Alexandria campaign running through mid-3021, and the repair and refit completing in December 3021. Their next recorded mission wasn't until 3022, when they participated in the defense of Tamar.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #622 on: 24 November 2013, 06:47:42 »
----- 9 Days Later -----

Date: November 27, 3020

Location: Clinton

Title: Dispatch

Author: Elizabeth T. Danforth & Michael A. Stackpole

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  Cranston Snord sends a taunting HPG message to Janos Marik, thanking him for arranging the return of the items stolen from the museum on Clinton.  He passes along Rhonda’s particular appreciation for the toy dog, which was a fourth birthday present for Elvis Presley. 

Notes:  If the Irregulars were on McAffe looting the Kincaid estate on November 10th, they’d have a hard time getting back to Clinton by November 27th, since it’s normally a good five week travel time between the two systems.  Command circuits and/or exceptionally good commercial connections could shorten things substantially, but assuming a week of in-system transit time on each end, that’s just three days to make four jumps.  It certainly could have been done, as we’ve seen in “Memories of Rain” and “Fall From Grace,” but whether the Lyrans would dedicate four or five scarce JumpShips in support of a single company on a personal mission is open to doubt…unless Snord’s esteem in the Lyran court is much higher than expected. 

Perhaps dedicated Lyran fleet support to get in and out of McAffe quickly and back to Clinton was part of the contract deal to get the Irregulars to Alexandria.  The Irregulars may have bargained away their support in exchange, explaining why it took them six months to effect repairs to their equipment afterwards.

This being the last Snord's Irregulars coverage for a while (until the Rhonda's Irregulars scenario pack), I have to say that I've always felt that there had to be an untold story in Cranston's background involving the Goliath Scorpions.  His mania for collecting historical artifacts strongly signals that he's following the path of a Goliath Scorpion Seeker, with the other Irregulars playing the role of his entourage.  I know the Scorpions played some role in training the Dragoon troops before they departed for the Inner Sphere, but Snord seems to have felt their influence to a significantly greater extent than any other Clanner on the mission.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #623 on: 25 November 2013, 13:28:20 »
----- 3 Months Later -----

Date: June, 3024 [See Notes]

Location: Groveld III

Title: An Affair of Honor

Author: Richard Meyer, Walter Hunt, Lisa Hunt & Evan Jarrison

Type: Scenario (The Fox’s Teeth)

Synopsis:  Captain Rollin Stafford of the mercenary Stafford’s Light Cavalry is on the warpath – seeking out a duel with Ernst Lang of McKinnon’s Raiders over an affair with Stafford’s wife (now ex-wife) Sylvia.  Captain Ross McKinnon had broken up a duel between the two six months earlier, but now, on Groveld III, Stafford has sought out a rematch.  Lang, piloting a battle-damaged Rifleman, taunts Stafford as the two engage, telling him “Sylvia sends her love!”

The battle takes place on the open sands of the Vashner Flats (two maps laid side to side with no terrain at all), but the duel is interrupted by a force of Combine ‘Mechs (two Wasps and a Stinger) on a mission to raid Groveld III’s Seven Cities. 

This is a rare three-player scenario.  Lang’s player claims a decisive victory by killing Stafford, and vice versa.  The Combine ‘Mechs can enter from the west at any point between Turn 3 and Turn 10.  They get 10 points for each ‘Mech exited off the east side of the map before either Davionist ‘Mech can exit the field to the east, and lose 5 points for every game turn after Turn 6 that they delay coming onto the field.  They get a marginal victory with 10 points, and a decisive victory with 20 points or better.  The Davionist players can score a marginal victory by fleeing off the eastern edge (going for reinforcements) before any of the Combine ‘Mechs make it off.
 
Notes:  The scenario is undated.  I’ve arbitrarily set it in February 3021. 

Lang’s Rifleman has an edge in mass and firepower (able to kick out 36 damage a turn, compared to 20 for the Griffin), but the Griffin has a longer reach and greater maneuverability.  A conservative approach for Stafford would be to use his superior speed to hang out in the 19-21 hex range and pepper the Rifleman with long range missiles, wearing down the armor while the frustrated Lang is unable to retaliate.  Once the missile racks are dry, move in to the 16-18 hex bracket and trade PPC shots with the Rifleman’s twin AC/5s.  Never go closer than halfway across the western map, if you can avoid it.  Once the Combine ‘Mechs enter, you can use PPC fire to engage one (one solid hit will likely cripple any of the bug ‘Mechs) while closing to physical attack range with another. 

For Lang, I’d recommend a no holds barred charge to the middle of the map, followed by closing with the Griffin to try to bring your Medium Lasers into play.  You vastly outgun the Griffin at close ranges.  On a two-map setup, Stafford will eventually run out of room to back up, so you’ll get a round or two of close range engagement as he tries to break past you to get more distance.  Alpha strike during those close passes.  Just make sure he never gets a shot at your paper-thin rear armor.  When the Combine forces appear, plant yourself in the middle of the map and blaze away with AC/5s and Large Lasers, which should be able to reach most areas of the map.  Accuracy is more important than chasing after the bouncing bugs.

The two Davion players can ensure victory over the hated Combine by declaring a truce and refraining from attacking each other until after turn 10.  They can then play zone defense and vaporize the Combine troops as they make their run for it through overlapping kill zones.  Once the bugs are squashed, the two men can go after each other in earnest.  (Of course, that’s not much fun for whatever schmuck you suckered into playing the Combine forces.)

For the Combine forces, I’d recommend waiting until the Davion battle drifts to within three hexes of any edge of the map, and then making a break for it.  You’ll get a few turns when the Davion troops will be moving and many of their guns will be out of range, giving you your best chance to break through.  If they’ve stayed fairly consistently in the center of the board, wait until turn six and hope the accumulated damage will make it easier to slip by.

As one of FASA’s earliest products, there are some amusing continuity glitches.  The setup notes that the Davion forces on Groveld III spent their days patrolling for signs of Commonwealth activity in the badlands.  (The rest of the scenario refers to the Combine.)  Since Groveld III is waaaay out near the Outworlds Alliance, on the FedSuns/Combine border, that’s clearly an error on the writer’s part.  (Either that, or it’s the AFFS version of a snipe hunt.  “Hey, rookies!  Go out and patrol for Commonwealth activity in the badlands.  First one to bag a social general gets free suds at the officer’s club.  Haw haw haw haw haw!  Malfin' stoopid Outback hick recruits…”) 

The setup describes the AFFS contingent on Groveld III as a “light occupation force.”  To me, that implies that Groveld III had been a Combine world that was recently taken by the Federated Suns.  The 2822 and 2864 maps show Groveld III as a solidly Combine world, while the 3025 map shows it on the Federated Suns side of the border.  (Though it’s back in Combine hands by 3030.)

If the DCMS deployment in 3021 is anything like that in 3025, the Combine raiders are either the 4th An Ting Legion (staging off of Valentina) or the 8th Sword of Light (staging off of Delacruz).  Since the 4th An Ting Legion is fluffed as specializing in city fighting, and this group was en route to raid the Seven Cities, my guess would be the Legion, rather than the Sworders.  The 4th An Ting was wiped out by the time FM: Draconis Combine was published, having been splattered by the Smoke Jaguars on Itabaiana in 3050, but other units that specialized in city fighting (such as the 1st Ghost) get a +1 initiative bonus when fighting in Urban terrain.  (Not that it applies in this open desert scenario.)
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« Reply #624 on: 25 November 2013, 14:54:39 »
I think your timing is off on this one.
In Ernst Lang's dossier, this fight hadn't happened yet, only the first one "six months ago" where Cpt. McKinnon in his Marauder intervened. Now I can't say for sure what "present" year the module is set in but the default would be 3025. There's this queer Wolf's Dragoons campaign timestamped 3029, but that is obviously wrong as the Dragoons fought for Davion in the 4th Succession War - and Dragoon Cpt. Frank Woomack and his debriefing by McKinnon feature in a Charette novel, either Wolves on the Border or Heir to the Dragon.

Anyways, 3021 is way too early in my opinon.

Supporting evidence but no proof is the timeline on p. 7 of the book. Ross McKinnon died and Ian inherited command of the unit only in 3020 on Harrow's Sun. Hanse Davion awarded them a year's rest (i.e. well into 3021) and then they returned to the Draconis March. Davion wasn't back on the offensive until the FedCom accords of 3022. And then you have to factor in that duel from six months earlier. Placing this whole scenario well into 3023 at the earliest, but given that Groveled III isn't Draconis March probably well after. 3025 fits the bill nicely.

Supporting evidence #2: This scenario was also included in the BattleTech 2nd edition boxed set rulebook. Again, the default year given is 3025.
(At least in the German rulebook. I've never seen a printed english basic box set rulebook and FanPro had a history of making small changes such as switching stories and scenarios...)
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« Reply #625 on: 25 November 2013, 22:25:16 »
Thanks for keeping me honest, Frabby.  I'll have to look through the various sourcebooks and see if I can come up with better dates for the Fox's Teeth scenarios.  Fortunately, once we're through the Fox's Teeth and Tales of the Black Widow, nearly everything has a fairly solid datestamp.
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« Reply #626 on: 26 November 2013, 10:45:12 »
Hmmm.   

Page 7 of "The Fox's Teeth" says that "In 3021, the Raiders returned to the Draconis March.  At that time, the 7th Crucis Lancers were operating as a general reserve for the entire front, rushing from planet to planet in response to a whole series of Combine offensives.  McKinnon's tactics worked well under actual combat conditions, and his Raiders were able to inflict heavy losses on Kurita's 'Mechs.  Davion's alliance with the Lyran Commonwealth enabled him to regain the initiative in mid-3022.  Since that time, his BattleMech regiments have been on the offensive, launching a variety of raids, probes, and full-scale offensives into Kurita's territory."

To me, that would imply that the defensive scenarios (like "A Stab in the Back") took place between January 3021 and June 3022, while offensive scenarios (striking into the Combine) took place between July 3022 and 3025.

This would seem to be borne out by the defensive "Trial by Combat" scenario being dated November 3021, while the offensive "Fox at Bay" scenario is dated May 3023.

The bios refer to the May 3023 battle of Tancredi II being "a year ago," and as you say, the bios indicate that "An Affair of Honor" is just about to happen.  That being the case, I'd place the bios around May 3024, and therefore "An Affair of Honor" at June 3024. 

For the undated scenarios:

Defensive Scenarios (3021 to mid-3022): A Stab in the Back (the Amphigean LAG is assaulting Thestria)
Offensive scenarios (mid-3022+): The Swarm's Sting (TRO:3025's Blackjack entry mentions that Ravannion was killed in 3023 on Fallon II fighting McKinnon's Raiders), Fear No Evil (the 7th Crucis Lancers assault Beta Mensae V), Water Water Everywhere (The 7th Crucis Lancers assault Hun Ho).  Thus, May/June 3024 sounds like the best option for "An Affair of Honor."

Frabby - how does this sound:

"Cry Vengeance" - May 3020 (date confirmed)

R&R - June 3020 - May 3021 (per sourcebook section)

"Trial By Combat" - November 3021 (date confirmed)
"A Stab in the Back" - March 3022 (my speculation - it's a defensive mission against the Amphigean LAG on Thestria)

Defensive Missions End - Offensive Missions Begin - Mid-3022

"The Fight for Depot 217" - October 31, 3022 (date confirmed)
"Fear No Evil" - February 3023 (my speculation)
"Fox at Bay" - May 3023 (date confirmed)
"The Swarm's Sting" - August 3023 (the year is confirmed, the month is my speculation)
"An Affair of Honor" - June 3024 (based on "Fox at Bay" being a little more than a year prior)
"Water, Water Everywhere" - October 3024 (my speculation)
"The Battle For Udibi" - May 3027 (to match up with Chapter 33 of Wolves on the Border, set in June 3027)
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #627 on: 26 November 2013, 12:30:04 »
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Date: March, 3021

Location: Manteno

Title: Hot Time in the Hot Zone

Author: Ken' Horner

Type: Scenario (BattleCorps)

Synopsis:  A NAIS seismic research station on Manteno attracts the attention of the Capellan Confederation.  A Stapleton’s Grenadiers ‘Mech company, backed by two companies of light armor and infantry, squares off against Dasarick’s Knights – the private force of the Duke of Manteno.  The Grenadiers try to steal data and destroy the NAIS facility (a Heavy structure), while the Knights try to stop that from happening.  Only Grenadier infantry can steal data, and they must make it off the board to score points.

Magma geysers erupt randomly across the map following each movement phase.
 
Notes: This must have been one of the first NAIS research centers outside of New Avalon, since the main campus was only completed in 3016, five years earlier. 

The Grenadiers have an average gunnery of 3.33 and a total tonnage of 580 tons.  The Knights have an average gunnery of 3.58 and a total tonnage of 580 tons.  Between the superior gunnery and the support troops, the Grenadiers have a significant advantage over the garrison. 

For the Grenadiers, I’d recommend spreading out (to avoid getting multiple units hit by any magma eruptions) and advancing the ‘Mechs to the northern edge of the volcano caldera.  Pick one side and move up en masse, using your long-range units to pour down suppressing fire on the defenders.  While you do that, send your hovercraft across the caldera while your wheeled and tracked vehicles come around the other side.  The defenders will have to split their focus, and can be overwhelmed and rolled back.  To win, you need to get seven of your 12 squads away with data, and destroy the NAIS facility as well. 

For the Knights, the surest strategy for victory is just to destroy the NAIS facility yourself on the first round.  You’ll give the Capellans 10 points, but there’ll then be no mechanism for them to score additional points, locking in a Partial Defender Victory.  And then your opponent flips the table over and gives you an atomic wedgie for wasting his time.

A less obnoxious strategy might be to split your force into two elements and dig in around the facility.  You’re fairly well equipped with long range weapons, so you can trade long-distance shots with enemy ‘Mechs, then switch to massed fire on any incoming APC to keep infantry from entering the building.  Make sure you have a solid wall of metal around all the approaches to the building, so that the APCs can’t ram through the walls and deposit their troops inside.  They’ll have to down one of your units to penetrate inside.  The longer you can hold them off, the greater the chance that a lava burst will fry an APC.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #628 on: 27 November 2013, 13:46:09 »
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Date: September, 3021 [See Notes]

Location: Dromini VI

Title: Painting the Town

Author: Mark O’Green

Type: Short Story (Shrapnel)

Synopsis:  A DCMS armor/infantry column traverses the desert to start a six-month garrison of Sibitsu Station, a military outpost built around a dye factory.  The convoy includes Sergeant Gunnar Toshira, Recruit Miko Wanabe, Recruit Aragi Naiku, and Corporal Toragi Mannimoto.  The troops speculate on whether or not Theodore Kurita will be at Shibitsu Station to greet them. 

As they pass the landmark known as “Old Man’s Curse,” the column is ambushed by Marauders.  With their vehicles are destroyed, the survivors set out on foot for Sibitsu Station, picking up Lance Corporal Edith A. Gudmansen along the way.  Wanabe remarks that the Marauders are “perfect,” noting that “Marauders have special armor no one knows how to make anymore.  Any time one is hit, it must be replaced with lesser armor.  These ‘Mechs show no patches.”

Arriving at Sibitsu Station, they find it wrecked.  The Marauders had already been there.  And two of them are coming back.  Scavenging for weapons, they find dye markers and sprayers full of thermo-chem, iso-therm, and acid.

The Marauders arrive in the middle of town and broadcast a demand for sho-sa Kurita to surrender.  Toshira remarks that the mysterious attackers have the wrong information.  The DCMS squad pelts them with paint grenades, hoping to buy time until their real trap is ready – a cocktail of acid and iso-chem potent enough to bring a Marauder down. 

Inspecting the wreckage, they find that the pilot dead from a suicide pill before he could trigger a self-destuct sequence.  Wanabe reports that the insignia and normal manufacturing information is missing.  The squad defeats the second Marauder by clogging its heat sink vents, ratcheting up its heat, and dropping it into a concealed pit.  At the end of the battle, Miko Wanabe appears piloting the first downed Marauder, and dragging the hulk of the APC.

Notes:  This story provides neither date nor location, yet I think I can make a case for September 3021 on Dromini VI.  First, there are several references to Theodore Kurita being on this world at the rank of sho-sa (Major).  Theodore became a sho-sa on May 18, 3018 and was promoted to chu-sa when appointed to the staff of Warlord Vasily Cherenkoff around 3023.  He spent 3020 in the Benjamin District serving with three regiments of the Benjamin Regulars, and ended 3020 in the 2nd Sword of Light.  This was followed by a rapid rotation through the Arkab Legion, seven regiments of the Dieron Regulars, and then a staff assignment with Warlord Yoriyoshi. 

Second, though the identity of the attackers is never specified, the DCMS troops marvel that their Marauders have pristine armor.  Since Marauder armor was (at this time) described as being LosTech, this was cause for comment.  Circa 3021, there are three possible sources for undamaged Marauders:  a recently uncovered Star League cache; an undercover ComStar raiding party; and Wolf’s Dragoons – which had returned from a supply run in early 3020.  Of the three, there’s no real reason for ComStar or another organization to be hunting for Theodore Kurita, whereas the Dragoons were just starting a contract with the Lyran Commonwealth and would be looking to make a splash by nabbing the Kuritan heir.  I selected Dromini VI because Wolves on the Border places the Dragoons there in September 3021 fighting against the Combine.  Since the 2nd Sword of Light is confirmed to have been on Dromini VI in September 3021 (per the Wolves on the Border prologue), it makes sense that the attackers were hoping to find Theodore on Dromini VI, not realizing that he’d already been transferred to the Arkab Legion.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #629 on: 27 November 2013, 14:44:45 »
In the absence of hard information this is just speculation of course, but I find it hard to imagine the Dragoons to
a) field obvious lostech (granted, they made this error before, but by now they've got 15+ years of first-hand experience in Inner Sphere tech);
b) operate unmarked 'Mechs or false-color operations;
c) screw up a mission important enough to field these unmarked Marauders so badly, losing two ineptly piloted 'Mechs to five infantrymen with paint guns;
d) foul up their recon/target intelligence this bad (we're talking the infallible Dragoons here!)

What little information is available, but mostly the inept pilots, seems to indicate ComStar, if you can imagine a reason. The most likely/least unlikely perpetrator would be pirate/terrorist/Tyr forces who somehow found those lostech 'Mechs but otherwise made every error in the book.
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