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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #870 on: 29 June 2014, 22:12:38 »
First off, welcome back, Mendrugo!  I'm glad see you post your insightful look at fiction we've come to love and some we've never seen.

I wonder if Dragon’s Field will ever appear in any fiction.  It could be under a different name and it was perhaps listed as missing?  HPG never set up there originally, a semi-secret hide away?  By 2511 (from Maps of Handbook: House Davion), Stein's Folly was behind denselly inhabited worlds of House Liao, where it would remain until after the 2nd Succession War.
A world like Helixmar which existed until Third Succession War could been Dragon’s Field.

More realistically, its likely the world could be one those old double occupied worlds.  Two planets inhabiting, you only need one HPG.  System could have been named for other world.   World of Thomas is another missing planet which was listed in multiple sources, still considered canon.  Yet it missing from the maps. 
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #871 on: 29 June 2014, 23:03:09 »
The FedCom Civil War sourcebook notes that the AFFS set up networks of recharge stations in otherwise uninhabited systems forming covert links between major worlds and PDZ headquarters worlds, allowing the AFFS to move troops and supplies without watchers in inhabited systems seeing.  It would make sense to have more than just recharge stations along these routes - warehouse depot/staging base worlds would be needed as well, and Dragon's Field appears to be one of these.  Hamlin, Ral, New Cleveland and the others mentioned in the novel could also be off-map outpost systems along these supply routes - functionally uninhabited (no local government, just military bases and support staff).

I'd have to check the 2750 map of the region, but there aren't any mapped systems within 12 light years of Stein's Folly in 3025.
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« Reply #872 on: 30 June 2014, 04:35:22 »
Adler at 11.25 is the closest match for Dragon's Field, but nothing at 12.75 on the old maps.
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #873 on: 30 June 2014, 18:28:39 »
----- Sixty-Seven Hours Later -----

Date: March 5, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis: The Davion task force pushes through light resistance, continuing to worry Captain Danelle aboard the FSS Exeter.  All told, the task force has lost three aerospace fighters and taken light damage to the Union-class FSS Alphecca

Once the fleet is in low orbit, the MechWarriors prepare to execute combat drops, after which the DropShips will land and allow infantry and armored vehicles to disembark.  Captain Danelle wishes Ardan good luck as he straps into his Victor.

As the DropShips descend, Captain Danelle reports 112 inbound Capellan fighters rising from twelve hidden bunkers around the northern continent.  He notes that they initially vectored on an intercept course over Steindown (where the landings were originally planned) and are having to burn hard to correct their intercept course to the new AFFS approach vectors.

The AFFS ‘Mechs execute an atmospheric drop at 16,000 meters, rather than one from orbit.  As a result, they don’t use drop capsules, but are blasted out surrounded by a cloud of metal chaff and fragments of ablative plating, presumably intended to intercept incoming projectiles and lasers, and confuse tracking systems.  Rather than executing the standard position of legs-down and jump jets to maximum to decelerate, Ardan spread-eagles his Victor in a head-down position, like a skydiver.  At 800 meters, he fires his jump pack thrusters.  At 30 meters, he realizes he’s heading for a landing in a swamp, and frantically adjusts his pitch to land face down, in the hopes of not sinking into the mud too deeply. 

A 7th Hussars Crusader (MechWarrior Donald Fitzgerald of Company A, 1st Battalion) arrives on scene to assist, but it still takes half an hour to winch the Victor out of the morass.   Together, they strike out southeast through the swamp/forest surrounding the Ordolo Basin’s Lost Lakes in search of friendly forces.  They come across a battle raging in the midst of a Liao battalion’s campsite.  Ardan wades into the fray, joining Fitzgerald in engaging a Liao Thunderbolt and a Warhammer.  He discovers, to his horror, that the muddy landing has jammed his AC/20, but manages to defeat the enemy machines without it. 

Ardan meets up with his XO – Eric Garrand, who reports the 17th is down and scattered, with 40 percent reporting in.  Liao forces are falling back to the south.  No word as yet from the 5th.  Ardan listens to additional reports coming in, and soon hears that 85 percent of the 17th has reported in.  He begins working on clearing the mud from his autocannon with his survival knife, but is interrupted by a Garrand’s warning of incoming Liao aerospace fighters.  A veteran Liao Thrush (Uchita Tucker?) swoops over the clearing and unloads Inferno bombs, taking out a Stinger and Fitzgerald’s Crusader

Ardan orders the 17th to disperse to avoid mass casualties from additional bombing runs, and begins a push towards Jordan’s Pass.  In the dense forest, he loses sight of his unit.  Gold Seven reports contact with an enemy Rifleman.  Ardan hurries to engage, but is waylaid by a Capellan Zeus, which cripples his already damaged Victor.  He ejects, but his seat slams into an overhanging tree branch, sending it careening off across the swamp.  Wounded, Ardan watches the Zeus blast the Victor’s carcass for good measure, then move off to rejoin the main battle.

Finding himself alive, but with a concussion and a fractured arm, Ardan discovers both his laser pistol and survival kit gone.  He takes an inflatable sleeve out of the ejection seat and uses it to immobilize his arm, then, upon reaching the shore, passes out.

Notes:  Ardan notes that the transit time from the jump point to the planet at 1G is over 67 hours, so the combat landings take place just under three days after the AFFS task force’s entry into the system.

The naming conventions for the DropShips in this chapter (FSS Avalon, FSS Alphecca, FSS Exeter, FSS Deneb) would seem to indicate that the AFFS prefers to name DropShips after star systems.  However, Alphecca is on the Lyran/Combine border, and is not a FedSuns world, unlike Exeter and New Avalon.  Deneb could refer either to the FedSuns world of Deneb Kaitos or the Combine world of Deneb Algedi.  Do you suppose there’s an FSS Botany Bay in the Davion fleet?  Or an FSS Luthien?

Interestingly, the escort fighters are described as being Stuka and Corsair-class, without any mention of Sparrowhawks, Sabres, Lightnings, Hellcats, or Thunderbirds.  Given the role of the Sparrowhawk in the FedSuns’ utter domination of the CCAF at the Great Lee Turkey Shoot, one would think there would be more of them in the task force.

Like many MechWarriors, Ardan is packing heat in the cockpit.  He sports a Kelvin 000 Lancer 3-mm laser pistol (he initially refers to it as a Kelvin Triple-0 Lancer, but after his ejection it’s called a Kelvin Double-0 Lancer.  So it lost an 0 in the crash?  ^-^).  None of the RPG sourcebooks give stats for the Kelvin 000 Lancer.  The use of millimeter measurements for the aperture echoes the occasional use of centimeters for the apertures of ‘Mech class weaponry, where Small Lasers have been said to have 3-cm barrels, Medium Lasers 5-cm barrels, and Large Lasers 8-cm barrels (correspondingly matching up with their damage output).  Would that imply that a 3-mm barrel laser pistol would have an output of 0.3 BattleTech damage?  (TechManual lists standard Laser Pistol damage at 0.21, so perhaps the Kelvin 000 Lancer’s 3-mm aperture gives it an even higher damage output than the Sunbeam, which does 0.28 damage.)  If so, it probably has very few shots and terrible range in exchange for that level of stopping power.  No wonder the Lyrans took a liking to Ardan, if he’s packing a laser pistol that would make Thomas Hogarth proud.

Jordan’s Pass is almost certainly named for FASA president and BattleTech co-creator Jordan Weissman.
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #874 on: 01 July 2014, 21:41:55 »
----- One Day Later -----

Date: March 6, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Out in the swamp, Ardan awakens in the darkness, burning with fever.  The swamp teems with life, but he makes it through the night without anything trying to make a meal of him.  At daybreak, he tries to crawl/float through the shallow water to find a river.  His injuries and concussion slow his progress, and he pulls himself to a mudbank, then collapses, vomiting as a local reptile considers him with small, hostile eyes.  He passes out.

Notes:  I’m assuming here that Ardan can’t have been passed out in the swamp more than a day on his own without becoming breakfast/lunch/dinner
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #875 on: 02 July 2014, 12:14:44 »
----- One Day Later -----

Date: March 7, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Sian

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  At the Celestial Palace on Sian, Ridzik briefs Chancellor Maximilian Liao on the failure of the ambush on Stein’s Folly.  Max is flummoxed that Hanse’s field commanders would change his operations plan without his consent, and assumes that Hanse would have them killed for such a presumption, as he would deal with any similar action by Capellan commanders.

Ridzik estimates that the CCAF forces on Stein’s Folly will need to retreat offworld to Redfield within the next six days, or they will be overrun and forced to surrender.  Max wistfully muses on how close they were to achieving a major victory, and capturing Ardan Sortek as well.  Ridik mentions that a Victor was downed to the east of Steindown and its pilot was lost in the jungle.  Max orders Ridzik to have infantry sweep the swamp to find Sortek.

Ridzik salutes and departs to gather computer data and return to Stein’s Folly to oversee the retreat. 

Notes:  This is a hard scene to justify.  Narratively, I accept that Mayhar wanted another scene on Sian where Ridzik and Max could lay down some exposition.  To report to the Chancellor in person in a timely fashion, Ridzik would have had to take a ship to a JumpShip standing by at a pirate point, then use a Command Circuit to reach Sian.  From the report, Ridzik rode out at least one day of the battle, so that places this scene at roughly two days after the invasion landing, factoring in the trip from a Sian pirate point to the surface.  However, such a move requires the supreme commander of the CCAF forces on Stein’s Folly to abandon his men at a key point in the campaign.

Why isn’t anyone using the Stein’s Folly HPG station?  We know it has one, since the previous scene on Sian featured a report from the garrison commander via a ComStar courier.  We know from Ridzik’s report that the Liao forces still hold Steindown, so they should have free access to the HPG station.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #876 on: 02 July 2014, 20:08:58 »
----- That Same Day, on Stein’s Folly -----

Date: March 7, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Ardan awakens to see a pair of round pink eyes looking into his.  The swamp dweller has a round head, long-lobed ears hanging to its shoulders, and a thin, straight mouth.  It has long, thin legs, a stocky body, and a rudimentary tail.  Surprised by Ardan’s awakening, the creature jumps back and utters a high, thin wail.  Answering hoots and chirps come back through the jungle, and soon a dozen more pale furred homonids arrive on the scene, conversing in hoots and chirps.  They tie Ardan up and carry him off through the trees, and he passes out en route.

Notes:  This scene introduces one of the most controversial elements of The Sword and the Dagger.  This was early enough in the development of the BattleTech universe that the “no sapeint aliens in the Inner Sphere” rule hadn’t yet been set in stone.  In fact, Ardan later muses that other sapient aliens have been encountered on other worlds in the Inner Sphere, though none as strange looking as these.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #877 on: 02 July 2014, 20:13:42 »
He could very easily have been delirious and hallucinating.  For arguments' sake.
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #878 on: 02 July 2014, 20:17:15 »
He could very easily have been delirious and hallucinating.  For arguments' sake.

But how do you explain the fact that Ridzik's special operative Henrik saw the Pinks as well, and found Ardan tied to a tree along with multiple other human skeletons?  Henrik wasn't feverish or concussed, and Ardan certainly didn't tie himself to that tree.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #879 on: 03 July 2014, 08:17:18 »
----- One Day Later -----

Date: March 8, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Ardan awakens in a wicker hut on a pallet of tree moss.  A short figure enters carrying a bioluminescent torch (a stick festooned with glow worms), hoots, grunts, honks, and chirrups at him, prods him in the chest with its finger, then departs.

Notes:  It’s unclear how long Ardath Mayhar intended Ardan to have been a guest of the Pinks in the swamp, but it has to be spread out over a number of days to match Ridzik’s extremely fast round trip journey to Sian. 

The fact that the creatures use constructed light sources, have a spoken language, and build structures places them head and shoulders above the ape creatures found on various worlds, the Hobbes Takooma, or the methane-breathing tool-using (though not tool-making) sauroids (Tonners) from Enders Cluster.  One wonders where the Pinks are on the intelligence scale compared to, say, the Tetatae.  Granted, they haven’t learned to speak English, but that may be simply due to lack of contact with the human colony on Stein’s Folly.  They seem to have about the same level of native technology as the Tetatae (given the stone spear the avian alien is brandishing on the cover of Far Country).
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #880 on: 06 July 2014, 12:05:38 »
----- One Day Later -----

Date: March 9, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis: When Ardan awakens again, he smells smoke.  He feels ill, nauseous and chilly.  He muses that the creatures have fire, indicating sapience.  He notes that a few other non-human sapients had turned up on the worlds of the Inner Sphere, but that these were the strangest-looking of any yet encountered.

A procession of the creatures (Ardan decides to call them ‘Pinks’) ties him to a litter of green branches and decorate it with pink, green, and purple flowers with dragonlike yellow maws.  The Pinks tip the litter up so he is standing, and Ardan notes seventeen trees with human skeletons bound to them with the Pinks’ reed cords.  One tree remains without a skeleton.

Ardan surmises that the skeletons are those of colony founder Stein and his exploration party.  Six Pinks cut him down from the litter, prop him against the unadorned tree, then tie him to the trunk and depart.

Meanwhile, back in Steindown, Pavel Ridzik returns to Stein’s Folly and calls in one of his special operatives – Henrik.  He orders him to head up a sweep of the swamp in Sector Five, searching for Ardan Sortek.  Henrik is to bring Sortek, dead or alive, to the DropShip being readied for a retreat to Redfield.

Notes:  Not only would Ridzik have had to use a Command Circuit moving to and from pirate points in both Sian and Stein’s Folly, but he would have needed a double Command Circuit on the same route to make the return trip, since the ships he used getting from Stein’s Folly to Sian would still be recharging.  Why couldn’t Ridzik simply have reported the situation via HPG and continued overseeing the planetary defense?

Ardan’s musing about the other skeletons brings up some interesting questions about Stein’s Folly.  It would seem that the colony was founded by a man named Stein, who led a group into the jungles shortly after the colony was started, got grabbed by Pinks, and died tied to trees.  That would imply the world was founded under another name (probably something like “Stein’s World”), and got retitled after Stein’s untimely death.  That being said, Stein’s Folly appears on the 2366 map of the Capellan Confederation.  It’s doubtful that human remains would remain intact in such a humid environment for 700 years.   Thus, the skeletons in this glade are more likely somewhat more recent additions to the Pinks’ collection.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #881 on: 07 July 2014, 10:21:35 »
----- One Day Later -----

Date: March 10, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: New Avalon

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  As his command center in Mount Davion, Hanse reviews reports of the action on Stein’s Folly.  His personal aide, Ferral, brings a fresh report that Ardan has been reported missing in action.  His Victor’s wreckage was found, but Ardan remains lost.  Hanse gives orders for every effort to be made to find Sortek.  He pauses to reflect on cherished boyhood memories of time spent with young Ardan, then turns back to the campaign reports.

Notes:  I’m putting this on March 10, eight days after the Davion strikeforce arrived in the Stein’s Folly system.  Unless they tried to hot-charge the engines, they would have needed 7.125 days to recharge the K-F drive.  (And it was specified that the ships were beginning to deploy their jump sails as the Davion DropShip fleet burned towards the planet.)  Thus, the first courier ship reporting news from Stein’s Folly could have departed along the Command Circuit on March 9, arriving in New Avalon and transmitting a report the same day.  Since they have information that Capellan DropShips are withdrawing, the courier ship probably traveled on the 10th. 

The crews of the courier ships must have strong stomachs, or must be pre-screened to be immune to transit disorientation syndrome.  In Rhean Marik's time, a Command Circuit carrying express passengers from Atreus to Terra made no more than three jumps a day.  These couriers make easily twice that many jumps in a 24 hour period.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #882 on: 08 July 2014, 10:33:09 »
----- That Same Day, on Stein’s Folly -----

Date: March 10, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Tied to a tree, Ardan surveys the other skeletons in a fever-addled delirium.  He shouts for help, and hears an answering call. 

The call is from Pavel Ridzik’s special operative – Henrik – and his search team.  They have followed Sortek’s trail from where his field equipment was dropped.  They find Ardan tied to a tree, almost naked and covered with cuts, weals, and bloody gashes.  They shudder when they spot the skeletons tied to the other trees.

The team carries Ardan out of the swamp, their lights illuminating “myriad eyes shining malevolently about them” as they depart.

Back at the CCAF base, Henrik turns Ardan over to Pavel Ridzik, who has MedTechs take him for treatment.  Ridzik orders Henrik to prepare his unit to withdraw within the next two days.

Notes:  Some later references to Stein’s Folly have attempted to handwave the Pinks away as Ardan’s delusion due to his fever and injuries in the swamp.  However, Henrik saw a Pink on the way in and saw their eyes in the dark on the way out, and neither he nor his team were injured, concussed, or otherwise delusional. 

It’s interesting that Henrik and team were able to get so close to the battle zone where Ardan’s Victor was destroyed without running into AFFS forces (they found his survival gear, which fell off when he ejected).  The AFFS forces probably pulled back from the swamp, where McCarron’s Armored Cavalry was giving them a rough time, and set up siege lines – following Ardan’s plan of starving the CCAF troops out.  That would explain the lull in the fighting and Ridzik’s ability to come and go unmolested, as well as the deadline of being offworld by March 13 (after which food supplies run out for the civilians in Steindown and the strategic situation becomes untenable).
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #883 on: 09 July 2014, 10:00:24 »
----- Two Days Later -----

Date: March 12, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Stein’s Folly

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Ardan regains consciousness in the CCAF medbay, hallucinating about dead children dangling from trees.  A Liao MedTech injects him with something, and he sinks into a dream, imagining he’s piloting his Victor through a beautiful countryside, leaving devastation in his wake.

He awakens and sees medicines by his bedside marked with the Capellan insignia.  He slips off his cot and sneaks out into an empty hallway.  At the end of the hall, he finds a door that leads into a disused passageway.  He finds a large chamber full of unusual equipment, with glass fronted cubicles.  He hears a moan from one of the cubicles, and, upon investigation, he sees Hanse Davion inside – face blank, eyes closed, under a sheen of frost.  He gets the impression this is a blank, waiting to be finished.

He staggers back down the hallway to his cot, and passes out again.

Meanwhile, Lees Hamman and Ran Felsner discuss plans for a commando team to breach Capellan lines and rescue Ardan.  Felsner notes that there’s not much armor or staff left at the base, according to their spy’s report.  He questions, however, why there’s such a light guard.

Lees and his commando squad meet with a scout, Rem, who can guide them in via hovercraft, entering the facility via a drainage tunnel.  The team arrives at the tunnel under cover of darkness, don radiation suits, and then slip up the channel, penetrating to the interior.

Inside, Ardan awakens as a hand shakes his shoulder.  A voice from the hall asks “Did he see?” then cuts off with a thud and a scream.  Ardan opens his eyes and sees Lees and Rem, who get him dressed and take him out the main entrance (which the commandos have cleared of Liao forces).  The team gets Ardan to an abandoned CCAF troop carrier, and they tranquilize him with a hypospray as the vehicle gets underway.

Notes: I can see why Ardan was left in the unguarded medbay as the withdrawal wound down.  Ridzik probably wanted him around so he could be pumped for information to make the fake Hanse more believable.  Given his medical issues, Ridzik most likely felt he had to be stabilized before he could be moved.  If the only way in was an irradiated drainage pipe, I can forgive the lax security. 

What I can’t figure out is why the fake Hanse was on Stein’s Folly.  We know from later accounts that the fake Hanse was a surgical double, not a clone, and that he’d had substantial mental reconditioning.  But why was he in a freezer tube?  He doesn’t appear to be cryogenically frozen – not if he’s able to moan.  But what is he doing there? 

Under the original plan, the Davion strikeforce would have been suckered into dropping onto Steindown.  The DropShips would have been swarmed under by over a hundred fighters, and the survivors would have been surrounded and massacred in the streets.  House Liao would have retained control of Stein’s Folly, Michael Hasek-Davion would have scored a political victory over Hanse, and House Liao would have (possibly) grabbed Ardan Sortek in the fighting, and used him to make Operation DOPPELGANGER more believable. 

But what would be gained by moving Hanse’s double to Stein’s Folly?  The process of making the double had been underway since 3015, when the Maskirovka kidnapped seven genetic researchers from a Davion station on Sanilac.  Max and Pavel planned for the CCAF to win on Stein’s Folly, so it’s not like they were planning to swap Hanses when Prince Davion came for a victory tour of the world.  If the plan was to let Ardan see the fake Hanse to make him sound crazy and thereby discredit him and prevent him from supporting the real Hanse…just letting him die out in the jungle would have been easier and more effective. 

What this novel really needed was one more scene on Sian, where Max and Pavel smoke cigars, exchange high fives and sinister laughs, and provide exposition about how much they love it when a plan comes together.
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #884 on: 09 July 2014, 21:11:31 »
----- Two Days Later -----

Date: March 14, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: New Avalon

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Hanse receives a report from a courier – the mopping up on Stein’s Folly is complete, and the Liao forces have been pushed offworld at the cost of heavy casualties.  In addition, Ardan Sortek has been recovered, though he is suffering from dehydration, starvation, a broken arm, fungal infections, systemic infection from contaminated water, and mental disorientation – fixated on visions of an injured child, swamp horrors, and a doppleganger complex centered on Hanse.  The MedTechs suggest intensive care.

Worried that, if Ardan were brought back to New Avalon in his current state, he might accidentally leak secret information to the spies and informers that permeate the New Avalon Court, Hanse orders the courier to return to Stein’s Folly the next day and instruct the MedTechs to put Ardan Sortek on a House Steiner DropShip for transport to Tharkad.  The courier notes that Lees Hamman was worried about the light security at the medcenter, and suspected House Liao wanted Sortek to be rescued – perhaps having implanted an infectious bio-agent that could be passed unwittingly to Hanse due to Sortek’s close association.

After the courier departs, Hanse summons a ComStar Adept to take a message, and composes an encoded message to Katrina Steiner, asking her to take care of Ardan and ensure he doesn’t reveal any confidential information about the Federated Commonwealth treaty.  Adept Ara accepts his message and informs him it will take three weeks to reach Tharkad, which will still be ahead of Ardan’s arrival.  She asks if it is a message for Melissa, betraying her knowledge of the secret terms of the FedCom Treaty.  Hanse stares after her, shocked at her knowledge.

Notes: It probably took some time to debrief Ardan on the 13th, so the earliest a courier could have brought this information was the 14th. 

Hanse’s message to the ComStar courier is dated “Third Quarter, Ten-day, 3025.”  When I was originally trying to parse the chronology of The Sword and the Dagger, I used this as an anchor date, translating it as July 10, 3025 (the tenth day of the third quarter of 3025).  However, since Hanse got switched and announced the cancellation of the Federated Commonwealth treaty shortly after the start of the Galtor Campaign, which the Galtor sourcebooks place in May 3025, that can’t be the correct date interpretation. 

Of course, when I first tried to work out the chronology (before having a fixed date for the Galtor references), factoring in the transit times without reliance on double-layer Command Circuits and pirate points linking the major worlds, the story stretched more than a year and a half, ending in mid-3026.  The three week HPG transmission time to Tharkad creates continuity problems, since Hanse has to be abducted and switched by May 3025.  In order to get to Tharkad from Stein’s Folly, get treated, and get back before Hanse’s abduction, Ardan has to travel via Command Circuit, and get to Tharkad in less than three weeks. 

Hanse’s surprise at Adept Ara’s knowledge of the marriage provision of the FedCom Treaty is, itself, surprising, since the treaty was brokered under ComStar’s auspices at Hilton Head on Terra, with ROM agents monitoring everyone’s conversations (as seen in the prelude to Gauntlet: Descent).

Adept Ara’s claim that it will take three weeks for the HPG message to reach Tharkad due to the limits of hyperspatial physics is a bald-faced lie.  MechWarrior 3rd Edition states that average transmission time from Tharkad to Terra is only six days, which would imply a message could go from New Avalon to Tharkad in less than two weeks (which would fit the chronology I currently have, with Ardan arriving on Tharkad around March 27).  MechWarrior 3rd Edition also says that transmission can be sped up for a fee by paying to have the HPGs in between align for direct transmission.  Katherine Steiner-Davion famously invested enough to enable a real-time communications link between Tharkad and New Avalon.  Hanse Davion has the resources to pay for a priority transmission, and has indicated he’d like the message to go as fast as possible, yet the ComStar representative appears to be intentionally slowing his transmission down and giving him a runaround about the "limits of hyperspace."  No wonder Hanse was so interested in developing Black Box technology as an alternative form of interstellar communications.

Based on the information contained in the House Liao sourcebook, ComStar knew about Operation DOPPELGANGER as well, all the way back to the kidnapping of Davion scientists from Sanilac in 3015.  We know elements of ComStar regarded Hanse Davion and NAIS to be an existential threat to their LosTech monopoly.  Was ComStar (or at least elements therein…say, Precentor Dieron Myndo Waterly…) actively working to scuttle the FedCom treaty that it ostensibly brokered as a neutral body interested in furthering peace in the Inner Sphere?
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #885 on: 10 July 2014, 11:17:01 »
----- Five Days Later -----

Date: March 19, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Bethel?

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Ardan awakens aboard a Lyran JumpShip en route to Tharkad, under the care of Dr. Karn.  Suffering from both his travails in the swamp and his Transit Disorientation Syndrome, Ardan desperately tries to tell anyone who will listen about what he saw on Stein’s Folly, and is sedated. 

When he comes to, Ardan tells Karn there was a duplicate of Hanse at the Liao base.  He says the other doctors told him he was hallucinating.  Karn says he thinks Ardan saw something, but isn’t sure if he’s interpreting it accurately. 

Ardan asks why he wasn’t put into cryogenic stasis for the trip, as is the standard procedure for transporting wounded.  Karn says his infections prevented the process from working, but tells Ardan the problem has been resolved, and he can sleep for the rest of the journey to Tharkad.

Notes:  If Ardan is one jump outbound from Stein’s Folly, heading towards Tharkad, the logical destination is either Bethel or Alcyone.  Alcyone seems a bit too close to the Capellan border for safety, given recent Capellan aggression.  The fact that they’re stopping to recharge would seem to indicate that he’s not on a Command Circuit, but to make the storyline fit into the timeframe dictated by The Galtor Campaign we have to assume he got onto a Command Circuit at the next stop and then was taken straight to Tharkad without further pauses for recharging.  Though what a Lyran vessel was doing at Stein’s Folly is beyond me.

Ardan’s mention of cryogenic technology being in widespread use for interstellar transit is an artifact of the early fiction, along with sapient species.  Granted, cryo-tubes feature prominently in Devlin Stone’s master plan and Sun-Tzu Liao’s “ascension.”  The sourcebook entries for cryo note that, during the Star league, enhanced cryogenic tubes became standard features in the hospitals of Star League member states.  The Handbook: Major Periphery States entry says “stasis tubes were used by the rich to allow their lives to be prolonged until a cure for their condition could be discovered, but the First Succession War cost humanity the technical knowledge of how to make many of the key systems that flash-freeze and thaw the patient without causing devastating cell-crystallization damage in the process.  Without it, new tubes cannot be made, and so the stasis tube remains a rare and expensive item.”  Would the AFFS have retained enough of these systems to make them standard for transporting wounded?  Being put into a centuries-old LosTech capsule that hasn’t had proper maintenance or spare parts for centuries would seem to be something to be avoided if at all possible, rather than desired by Ardan.

I am increasingly convinced that Ardath Mayhar’s intended chronology for The Sword and the Dagger had the battle for Stein’s Folly taking place through the summer of 3025, concluding in early July, for Ardan to have been in cryogenic transit to Tharkad for months, wintering with House Steiner, and then to have returned to Stein’s Folly in spring 3026, in time for Hanse to be abducted and doubled in early summer 3026.  That would fit with some of the references from The Warrior Trilogy (made in early 3027) to Hanse’s illness “last summer.”  However, it’s clear that this timeline was voided by the time the House sourcebooks came out – they’re dated 3025, and they refer to both Operation DOPPELGANGER and the Galtor Campaign as being over and done with prior to the reports going to press.
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #886 on: 10 July 2014, 20:48:30 »
Given how old the book is, would it be said that final judgement call wasn't made on if non-combat technologies like cryo-tubes weren't established yet? 

In ways, it would made sense to put people to sleep for while.  Save on food and air for the journey, while leaving crews little less need keep eye on weary/bored passengers trying keep busy on months long journeys. 

Also,  I can see why it was forgotten that cryo-tubes were being used in the first place.  Novel became so rare to own, who would have read and knew they were in general use? 
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« Reply #887 on: 10 July 2014, 21:27:19 »
Cryo-tubes have gotten mentions in some of the other novels, as well as a writeup in the Periphery Handbook, so it's safe to say they're canon.  The Clans apparently stlll use the technology to transport the corpses of fallen warriors, presumably so that their genetic material won't degrade before the Scientist Caste gets a chance at it...though with all Clan warriors maintaining a giftake "on file" as it were at the master genetic repositories, one wonders why the Clans would want the bodies.  I suppose there is that tradition of burning the bodies and using the ashes as nutrients for kids still in the iron wombs.  But why use a cryo tube to bring a fresh body, rather than just transporting the ashes?

I can certainly understand the attraction of using the technology on critically wounded - stabilizing them until they can be treated.  The question remains, however, whether the AFFS has enough of these rare devices to make their use standard operating procedure for transporting wounded during the Third Succession War, especially given the existence of White Whale mobile army surgical hospital units, which aren't LosTech and can patch troops up and return them to duty without relying on scarce JumpShip resources.

There's a scene in the Warrior Trilogy on New Avalon at a hospital where wounded soldiers are being treated, so it seems apparent that the AFFS does, in fact, transport troops from the distant front lines to rear-areas for treatment.
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars
« Reply #888 on: 11 July 2014, 12:07:17 »
----- Eight Days Later -----

Date: March 27, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Tharkad

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Melissa Steiner sits by the window in her palace, gazing out at the raging winter snowstorm and thinking about Ardan Sortek.  She recalls the fun they had together playing pranks when she was smaller and he visited as part of a Davion delegation.

Inspired by Ardan’s insistence that he’d seen a Hanse double, she uses her e-reader to research impersonation, and finds several literary and historical references, including the case when the Elazar of Trimerrion was impersonated in 2381, plunging the world into a civil war.  She reads about another case where the impersonated party’s closest friends were eliminated to help cover up the plot – one was made so ill he was driven mad, and the other was accused of treason and executed.  Melissa wonders if there was a devious reason for Ardan’s recovery at the medical facility in time to see the duplicate Hanse.

Melissa brings her concerns to Katrina, who tells her Ardan is probably unbalanced, but shoud be better after a rest on Argyle while Hanse is at his summer palace.  Melissa says she is still concerned about a plot to replace Hanse, and asks Katrina to warn House Davion.  Katrina agrees to include that message in the next outgoing packet. 

Melissa goes to visit Ardan’s chambers, where he is being examined by Dr. Karns.  She hears Karns telling Ardan he is sane, and that what he saw was not a delusion, but Melissa recalls Karns telling Katrina that Sortek’s reports were hallucinations.  She begins to become suspicious of Dr. Karns.

Melissa invites Ardan to join her in the garden conservatory, which combines plants from hundreds of different worlds, including some from Stein’s Folly.  Melissa asks Ardan about Hanse, whom she last saw when he visited Tharkad to make the final arrangements for the betrothal.  Ardan tells her Hanse doesn’t have any close friends other than himself.  He adds that Hanse has to send the people he really trusts away as ambassadors or field commanders.  Ardan realizes, at that moment, why Hanse was so sad to see him depart New Avalon, since Ardan was his only real friend on the planet.

Ardan shares tales of boyhood adventures, and then of going off to war with Hanse.  Melissa reminisces about her engagement ball on Tharkad, when she dropped a fantastically expensive vase Hanse had brought as a gift.  She recalls that Hanse sought her out afterwards and comforted her, telling her “The Starbird weeps inside.”  Melissa says that’s when she knew she wouldn’t object to being Hanse Davion’s wife.

Notes:  Trimerrion (along with New Cleveland, Ral, Hamlin, Dragon’s Field, and many other worlds metioned in The Sword and the Dagger) does not appear on any published starmap.  If it was in the Lyran zone, it had to have been founded after 2341.  If it was in the Federated Suns, it had to have been founded after 2317.  If it was a Free Worlds League world, it had to have been founded after 2271.  If it was a Capellan world, it would have been founded after 2366.  The damage from the civil war appears to have resulted in the world’s abandonment during the Age of War.

Melissa also comes across a mention of a case in which a key ally of the First Lord of the Star League, Faillol Esteren, was replaced in 2738, altering his policies so much that they had an effect on the member states and contributed to the start of the Succession Wars.  Looking at the Star League sourcebook, we see that First Lord Jonathan Cameron died in 2738, passing the First Lordship to his son, Simon.  It was during Simon Cameron’s reign that the Federated Suns gradually withdrew its cooperation, ending its free trade and mutual assistance with the Terran Hegemony.  This was probably the doing of the impostor.  A House Kurita operation, perhaps, in revenge for SLDF actions against the DCMS during the War of Davion Succession?  Or, perhaps Max Liao dusted off the plans for Operation DOPPLEGANGER after finding them in Maskirovka archives?

Melissa’s background reading is clearly an attempt to show why House Liao was targeting Ardan.  However, rather than driving someone mad to discredit them…a battlefield death would be par for the course and utterly un-suspicious.  Henrik should simply have shot Ardan as soon as he found him in the jungle.

Ardan says he only went into battle with Hanse once, just before Hanse’s brother Ian was killed.  However, “Irreplaceable” shows Ardan together with Hanse on the Halstead Station campaign just after Ian’s death on Mallory’s World.  Perhaps Ardan didn’t want to mention that campaign, since it might have raised the awkward issue of Hanse’s first fiancé, Dana Stephenson.

Melissa mentions that Archon Katrina held a formal ball to celebrate Melissa’s engagement to Hanse during his state visit to Tharkad.  If the Court at Tharkad was aware of the betrothal, I can’t imagine why Hanse thought it could remain a secret from ComStar.  The only real surprise is that none of the Kapteyn Accord states caught wind of it ahead of time.  Granted, the MIIO had the Maskirovka’s undershorts hiked up over its head by then, thanks to Justin Xiang and Alexi Malenkov, and SAFE in 3025 was a joke, but why was the ISF blindsided as well, especially if Sharilar Mori was working for the O5P as a mole in ComStar by then? 

It’s winter on Tharkad when Ardan arrives.  Various other stories set on Tharkad have placed winter at various months of the year.  Looking at Tharkad’s writeup, its rotation period is nearly two Terran years, so the seasons are longer and don’t synch with Terran cycles, making it entirely possible for local winter to be in April in one story and in July in another.

It would have made sense for Ardan’s arrival on Tharkad to be at least a month after his departure from Stein’s Folly, to correspond with ComStar’s estimate of a three-week transit time for Hanse’s HPG message to Archon Katrina.  However, the primary canon anchor point for the chronology is the kick-off of the Galtor Campaign, which starts in May, 3025.  In order for Ardan to get to Tharkad, spend time recuperating, and get back to Stein’s Folly before that, he has to have traveled by command circuit most of the way to Tharkad.  It would appear that the Federated Suns and Lyran Commonwealth maintain command circuits between important worlds, and one would think that included Terra, so Ardan’s Lyran merchant vessel probably received clearance to use military priority JumpShip circuits to make the transit in a short time.
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« Reply #889 on: 11 July 2014, 22:16:00 »
----- Five Days Later -----

Date: April 1, 3025

Location: Marfik

Title: Heir to the Dragon

Author: Robert N. Charrette

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Theodore Kurita’s attempt to build esprit de corps in the Legion of Vega by setting an example fails, as nobody shows up for his voluntary maintenance work session in the ‘Mech hangar.  He realizes the Legion lacks both pride and discipline.

Thedore has brought his command lance with him to the Legion, including his secret wife, Tomoe, Takashi’s spy Benjamin Tourneville, and Hirushi Sandersen.  Also on Marfik is Theodore’s son, Hohiro.  At the base, Theodore also runs into his old friend (and fellow Son of the Dragon) Ninyu Kerai, now under cover as a Tai-i in the 2nd Legion of Vega.

Leaving the ‘Mech hangar, Theodore finds his personal Tech, Kowalski, severely beaten.  Kowalski tells Theodore he was assaulted when he requisitioned parts, being told he would have to establish his authority to requisition the supplies by force.

The group heads to the mess hall, where the assembled contingent of the 2nd Legion of Vega is already halfway through their meal.  Ninyu advises Theodore that the Legion doesn’t trust him, based on rumors that he’s a wimp and a disgrace to the Dragon.  When Tomoe and Theodore sit down, the others at the table immediately stand and leave, while a huge man with a blood-red scharacki feather tucked behind his ear approaches from another table and introduces himself as Sho-sa Esau Olivares – the real commander of the 2nd Legion.  He tells Theodore he will handle fighting the Lyrans while Theodore stays at HQ.

When Olivares attempts to physically intimidate Theodore, Kurita calmly draws his pistol and shoots the feather off Olivares’ ear.  The stunned Sho-sa sits down, and Theodore calmly offers him soy sauce.

Notes: The Legions of Vega are a wreck at this point.  As we saw in the Mallory’s World Historical Turning Points, the Legion’s regiments are routinely sent on suicide missions without proper equipment or supplies.  It’s essentially an institutionalized version of the 2nd Succession War’s “Chain Gang” units.  Since assignments to the Legion are generally punitive in nature, Theodore is in command of a group of malcontents, psychotics, and criminals.  (In many ways, it’s like the Black Widow company, but with a lower survival rate.)  Thus, Theodore has to take aggressive action to establish dominance over this mangy dog pack.  Facing down Olivares but allowing him to save face was a very good start.

Theodore notes that Hirushi Sandersen is aware of his marriage to Tomoe and Hohiro’s existence, and has been instrumental in helping keep this concealed from Tourneville. 

Kerai is, of course, Subhash Indrahar’s main protégé, and will go on to become Indrahar’s successor as head of the ISF.  He was one of Theodore’s opponents during his induction test for the Sons of the Dragon, and later assisted Theodore during a “commando scare” on Al Na’ir.  (This was probably during his tour with the Arkab Legions.)
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« Reply #890 on: 12 July 2014, 22:26:02 »
----- Four Days Later -----

Date: April 5, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Tharkad

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Ardan has used his time on Tharkad to recuperate both physically and mentally from his harrowing experience on Stein’s Folly, and spends much of his time engaged in serious discussions with Melissa.  He tells Melissa he needs to contact Candent Septarian and get her assistance to investigate what happened on Stein’s Folly.  Melissa tells Ardan she can get a message to Sep via ComStar in three weeks, noting that the laws of physics are “pretty immutable.”

Ardan asks Melissa to provide him a vessel to travel back to Stein’s Folly, and to rendezvous at Point X-r-23, behind the larger moon.

Ardan is invited to a formal dinner with Archon Katrina that evening.  Other guests include Capellan Ambassador Klefft, Combine Ambassador Hardt, Baron Sefnes from New Syrtis, and Melissa’s cousin Kelya.  Katrina opens the dinner with a formal speech extolling the virtues of Lyran entrepreneurship.  She also announces that her guest, Ardan Sortek, will be returning to the Federated Suns to join Hanse on Argyle during his summer retreat.  As the dinner concludes, Katrina invites the guests to retire to the ballroom for dancing and games.

Later that night, as Ardan prepares to depart Tharkad, Melissa comes to his quarters to discuss the Ambassadors’ reactions.  She tells Ardan that Dr. Karns used hypnotherapy while he was ill, and forbade anyone to monitor the sessions.  She warns Ardan that he may have implanted something in his mind.  The LCS Atlan is standing by to take Ardan back to Stein’s Folly, and will jump just after sunrise.  She asks Ardan to save her future husband from disaster.

Notes: Though the novel clearly states that Ardan spent several months recuperating on Tharkad, that has to be compressed down to roughly two weeks in order for him to get back to the Federated Suns before the Galtor Campaign kicks off in May.  In cases of conflict, the most recent publication generally trumps older ones, and Historical Turning Points: The Galtor Campaign is definitely more recent than The Sword and the Dagger.

The fact that everyone in the Inner Sphere simply takes ComStar’s word as to what is and is not possible speaks volumes about the degree to which, prior to the 3052 schism, the technologically regressed Successor States had come to trust ComStar and defer to its expertise on all things technological.  This is really what ComStar wanted to achieve – becoming a techno-priesthood with sole control of the “mysteries” of LosTech. 

Ardan’s requested rendezvous at Point X-r-23 shows that pirate points were definitely in use during the Stein’s Folly campaign – explaining how Ridzik got in and out without having to make a three day transit.  The odd thing is that the points weren’t used for either the CCAF or AFFS assaults in the first place.

It’s interesting that there is a Combine embassy on Tharkad.  The Age of War-era Embassy was simply a den of spies and a staging ground for terrorist attacks.  It must have been re-established during the Star League “era of good feelings” and been better behaved during the Succession Wars.

Hmmm.  Melissa has a cousin Kelya.  Interesting.  Katrina only had one sibling – her sister Nondi, and Nondi’s writeup lists her children as Iva, Richard, and Lisa.  That would imply that Kelya is from the Luvon side of the family.  Has it ever been stated whether Arthur had siblings?  (Granted, it could be a second cousin or even more distant, given the plethora of Steiner branches out there.)

Ardan notes displeased looks on the faces of the Liao, Kurita, and Hasek-Davion representatives when Katrina mentions his plans to rejoin Hanse on Argyle.  That would imply that House Kurita was aware of the DOPPLEGANGER plot, at least to some degree.  Perhaps the Confederation and Combine were taking the information sharing provisions of the Kapteyn Accords seriously at this point, though the military assistance elements obviously fell far short during the 4th Succession War.

During the dinner, Melissa overhears talk of trade relations with the Free States.  I’m guessing this was a mistaken reference to the Free Worlds League.  Alternatively, there might have been a transitory Periphery realm in the former RWR territories calling itself the Free States.
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« Reply #891 on: 13 July 2014, 20:20:15 »
----- Five Days Later -----

Date: April 10, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Tharkad

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  With Ardan gone, Melissa uses the palace’s library computer system to find out more about Dr. Erl Karns, the physician who had been attending to Ardan.  She discovers that Dr. Karns studied viruses on Luthien for four years, got an advanced degree in virology on Capella, and then moved to New Syrtis where he had a romantic relationship with a local Liao diplomat.  She says all his files in the library are locked with encryption that only Melissa and her mother have access to, meaning the LIC wouldn’t have been able to view them.

Katrina muses that Melissa would never have looked into Karns’ record if he hadn’t been sent to Stein’s Folly to attend the wounded on their trip to Tharkad.  She wonders if there has been interference on Karns’ behalf.  Melissa and Katrina conclude that the conspirators plan to get rid of Hanse and Ardan at the same time by playing them off against each other.  Katrina says she will send a message to warn Hanse, but cautions it will take weeks to arrive.

Notes:  Not that I’m telling the LIC how to do its job, but when reviewing the clearances for a person that has regular contact with the head of state and their family…everything gets opened.  Sounds like the Molehunters dropped the ball on this one, or that the Kapteyn Accord intelligence services have successfully infiltrated the LIC.

The situation begs the question, who put the files into the computer and gave them that classification in the first place?  If somebody didn’t want those files to be viewed, why not simply delete them, rather than putting suspicious locks on the files at such a level that only the royal family could ever see them?  It seems the DOPPLEGANGER conspirators have a penchant for seriously overcomplicating things.  Why hyper-encrypt files you don’t want read instead of just deleting them?  Why try to make it look like Ardan is crazy instead of just killing him?  Why move the surgical double to Stein’s Folly and store him in a cryo-tube in a poorly secured medical center in a base on the verge of being evacuated?  Of course, Hanse is guilty of this, too.  Why send Ardan all the way to Tharkad for medical treatment instead of just moving him to a secure AFFS military hospital and putting him in isolation?  In order for the story to work, many of the characters involved have to take extremely sub-optimal courses of action.

I can see the utility of ComStar maintaining that messages take far longer to get to their destinations than necessary.  That gives ROM and the First Circuit time to decrypt and analyze them, discuss the implications, and formulate an action plan without delaying the scheduled delivery, which of course is “governed by the immutable laws of hyperspatial physics.”

This novel predates both the Internet and Google, so by modern standards, Melissa’s exhaustive search of the library files appears quaint (BattleTech is, after all, the “future of 1984”).  I recall David Brin’s book Earth where people sent out customized “ferret” search programs through the Internet and were content to receive results the next day.  (Or further back, I read a 1940s era sci-fi novel where aliens used slide rules to calculate the course of their flying saucers.)
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« Reply #892 on: 14 July 2014, 04:22:18 »
A few more thoughts on what's going on here, trying to make sense of it all. (  ;D  )

I think we all agree that the entire hospital/doppelgänger scene was a setup. It's even hinted at in the novel, though ultimately left ambigous. I also doubt very much that what Ardan saw was the real doppelgänger; nowhere does it say there was only one. Maybe this man was an earlier attempt who ended up deep-frozen because his mind broke over the brainwashing process, leaving him catatonic - a disposable and reasonably safe double for a double...

Based on this premise, a few thoughts:

- Ardan's decision to join the forces against Stein's Folly was a spur-of-the-moment thing. He may have been brooding over it for some time, but I'd say there is no way whatsoever that Liao could have seen this coming.

Based on this deduction, any Liao "plan" would have been made up on the fly once they realized that they had actually captured Ardan Sortek:
Liao knows him to be one of very few people (actually, the only one around Hanse Davion at this time who wasn't already suborned by Liao) who can reliably tell Hanse Davion from his double. I already argued earlier in this thread that conveniently killing him may not be as effective as letting him ruin his own credibility himself after all. I'm willing to accept this as Liao's idea, concocted after Sortek's chance capture to add depth to the doppelgänger ploy. So once Ridzik reports on their prize, the plan sort of fell into place and the fake hospital was built. Easy to imagine the extra doppelgänger was shipped in from Sian on the same DropShip that carried Ridzik back to Stein's Folly via command circuit.

- Dr. Karns doesn't seem to fit in here at all.
For starters, he was apparently on Stein's Folly already before there was any plan in the first place as nobody could have anticipated Sortek's decision to join the attack. Next, nobody could possibly have anticipated that Hanse Davion would order Sortek be brought to Tharkad of all places. Again, this was obviously all planned on the fly, if it was planned at all. Personally, I feel that Karns wasn't operating on any orders at least at first. When he ended up traveling to Tharkad with Sortek in his hands he may either have been acting on his own initiative (quite possible given that he was a Liao agent all along), or he may have been let in on the improvised let's-paint-Sortek-as-crazy plot on Stein's Folly. I regard the latter as very unlikely, as it would have required the retreating Liao troops to know of the agent in the enemy camp, contact him, and let him in on a top-secret operation for no good reason at a point where nobody would expect said agent to have any role whatsoever in that operation later because of a chance decision by Hanse Davion.

So Dr. Karns was presumably just another Liao spy who was unaware of the whole doppelgänger double plot against Sortek. However, when that Liao spy suddenly had a Davion VIP in his care he immediately jumped at the chance to bring him under his control, an attempt totally separate from the doppelgänger stuff. As it so happened, the combination of those two plots going on led to both being uncovered by Melissa, who thought them to be one single conspiracy. Not that it made any difference, of course.

Sidenote: The Steiner DropShip that evacuated Sortek to Tharkad and presumably had brought in Dr. Karns in the first place was mentioned to be a vessel sent by House Steiner in support of Davion operations, providing primarily medical aid. (Was it perhaps a Dove-class modified Condor medevac ship?) Since it traveled back to Tharkad later it apparently wasn't brought in with the Davion fleet from Dragon's Field and the Liao spy on this ship (Karns) was operating in the Commonwealth, not the FedSuns. Even more indication that he wasn't part of any plan and just so happened to be there, too.
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« Reply #893 on: 14 July 2014, 05:10:40 »
Good attempt, Frabby. 

Just for fun, I decided to cross-check the conspirators' plot against the Evil Overlord list to see how many blatant violations it scores, and came up with ten major violations:

3. My noble half-brother whose throne I usurped will be killed, not kept anonymously imprisoned in a forgotten cell of my dungeon.

Fail.  Why did the conspirators not immediately kill off the real Hanse and Ardan?

4. Shooting is not too good for my enemies.

Fail.  Why wasn't Ardan left tied to a tree with a laser hole between the eyes for insurance?

11. I will be secure in my superiority. Therefore, I will feel no need to prove it by leaving clues in the form of riddles or leaving my weaker enemies alive to show they pose no threat.

Fail.  What the heck was the point of putting a Hanse-duplicate on Stein's Folly and (maybe) arranging for Ardan to see it?

12. One of my advisors will be an average five-year-old child. Any flaws in my plan that he is able to spot will be corrected before implementation.

Fail.  Average five-year-old children are too young to achieve citizenship, and therefore have no right to be listened to in the Confederation, obviously.

36. I will not imprison members of the same party in the same cell block, let alone the same cell. If they are important prisoners, I will keep the only key to the cell door on my person instead of handing out copies to every bottom-rung guard in the prison.

Fail.  Ardan and Hanse locked up together.

50. My main computers will have their own special operating system that will be completely incompatible with standard IBM and Macintosh powerbooks.

Fail.  Key incriminating files were encrypted, but left intact, and did not prevent the Steiner royal family from reading them.

52. I will hire a team of board-certified architects and surveyors to examine my castle and inform me of any secret passages and abandoned tunnels that I might not know about.

Fail.  The summer palace on Argyle has secret passages.

61. If my advisors ask "Why are you risking everything on such a mad scheme?", I will not proceed unless I have a response that satisfies them.

Fail.  Given that this was a trigger event for Operation RAT, perhaps Max's advisors should have asked that question at some point...

78. I will not tell my Legions of Terror "And he must be taken alive!" The command will be "And try to take him alive if it is reasonably practical."

Fail.  Henrik was instructed to bring Ardan back alive.

99. Any data file of crucial importance will be padded to 1.45MB in size.

Not necessarily a fail, but the "data files of crucial importance" in the Tharkad palace library were encrypted with a code that....hmmm....only the most prolific user of the library had access to.
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« Reply #894 on: 14 July 2014, 06:00:17 »
Actually, I disagree on some points. Just to play devil's advocate, I'll see if I can counter your analysis:

3. My noble half-brother whose throne I usurped will be killed, not kept anonymously imprisoned in a forgotten cell of my dungeon.

Fail.  Why did the conspirators not immediately kill off the real Hanse and Ardan?
They couldn't kill Hanse (yet), because they were still questioning him for personal secrets. I can even imagine that they would have kept him alive for a transition period while the double took over, in case any questions popped up. Having the real Hanse available to answer questions goes a long way to smoothing the transition process.

As for Ardan, my working theory is that they wanted to ruin his credibility, figuring this would be more effective than killing him which might cause suspicions. While Ardan is alive, the conspiracy nutters have very little to work from. Plus, as I wrote earlier, if Mad Sortek really digs himself into a hole, people will be more likely to believe the opposite of what he's shouting, i.e. that Hanse Davion is of course not a doppelgänger.

4. Shooting is not too good for my enemies.

Fail.  Why wasn't Ardan left tied to a tree with a laser hole between the eyes for insurance?
See above. The basic premise of Liao operations here, for all to make any sense at all, is that controlling Ardan (and Hanse) is better than simply killing them.

11 .I will be secure in my superiority. Therefore, I will feel no need to prove it by leaving clues in the form of riddles or leaving my weaker enemies alive to show they pose no threat.

Fail.  What the heck was the point of putting a Hanse-duplicate on Stein's Folly and (maybe) arranging for Ardan to see it?
Discrediting him over simply killing him, as it served the doppelgänger plan better.

12 .One of my advisors will be an average five-year-old child. Any flaws in my plan that he is able to spot will be corrected before implementation.

Fail.  Average five-year-old children are too young to achieve citizenship, and therefore have no right to be listened to in the Confederation, obviously.
Snark aside, I'm not sure if this is a viable complaint. Max Liao was (clinically) insane and a totalitarian leader. The overcomplex, overthought and somewhat far-fetched plot by a powerful madman is played totally straight here.

36. I will not imprison members of the same party in the same cell block, let alone the same cell. If they are important prisoners, I will keep the only key to the cell door on my person instead of handing out copies to every bottom-rung guard in the prison.

Fail.  Ardan and Hanse locked up together.
Technically, yes. But I have to question the premise of rule #36. Depending on circumstances, it may make sense to keep them together if it furthers whatever procedures are being implemented that warrant them being kept alive in the first place. Perhaps the questioners thought it would be conductive to their work on Hanse to keep Ardan around.

50. My main computers will have their own special operating system that will be completely incompatible with standard IBM and Macintosh powerbooks.

Fail.  Key incriminating files were encrypted, but left intact, and did not prevent the Steiner royal family from reading them.
But those files were only incriminating in the context of what Melissa had learned Karns was doing with Sortek. As you already pointed out, someone must have written this dossier on him and stored it in the computer in the first place.
My understanding is that Dr. Karns was thoroughly screened and greenlit before being allowed near the Steiners, and that all this information was known beforehand but wasn't considered incriminating. His position is also the reason why the files' encryption is so high on the totem pole (Archon level) - Dr. Karns is an Archon-level issue. Melissa Steiner then happened to have both the clearance to read Karns' inconspicious files and the information from Sortek that did make the information on Karns a little more suspect after all.

52. I will hire a team of board-certified architects and surveyors to examine my castle and inform me of any secret passages and abandoned tunnels that I might not know about.

Fail.  The summer palace on Argyle has secret passages.
It wasn't Liao's castle. It was Davion's. And maybe the secret passages were among those secrets they were still in the process of prying from the real Hanse Davion through interrogation.

61. If my advisors ask "Why are you risking everything on such a mad scheme?", I will not proceed unless I have a response that satisfies them.

Fail.  Given that this was a trigger event for Operation RAT, perhaps Max's advisors should have asked that question at some point...
Wrong. Liao risked hardly anything at all here. In the big picture, I reckon the costs of the doppelgänger program were insignificant - and there were no negative ramnifications to be feared at all.
Also, it's a stretch to claim the doppelgänger straight up was the reason for the 4th Succession War. That war had been in the planning stages for years already, and Liao probably was the target all along as the easiest target. I know that Hanse Davion later claimed the doppelgänger had an impact on the issue, but I find that very hard to believe. It sounds too much like taunting Liao, and giving a public reason for the war of agression Hanse started.

78. I will not tell my Legions of Terror "And he must be taken alive!" The command will be "And try to take him alive if it is reasonably practical."

Fail.  Henrik was instructed to bring Ardan back alive.
Obviously, given that there was now a plot going on that depended on Ardan playing along. It's arguable if Ardan was even worth the hassle of searching im in the swamps just to kill him. He was useful only if he could be manipulated, but not particularly dangerous otherwise.

99. Any data file of crucial importance will be padded to 1.45MB in size.

Not necessarily a fail, but the "data files of crucial importance" in the Tharkad palace library were encrypted with a code that....hmmm....only the most prolific user of the library had access to.
Makes perfect sense. Those data files must have been Karns' dossier as written by LIC. It was only the extra information Melissa had that made these files important.
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« Reply #895 on: 14 July 2014, 18:43:50 »
I really have to wonder under what possible circumstance "alive and crazy-sounding" is more capable of removing resistance than "died in the war".  The plan consistently and repeatedly fails on this very simple point.  Ardan does much less harm dead than he does spouting off about fake-Hanse.  Period.  It's bad enough that I think trying to explain it just legitimizes a sort of (not unfamiliar to BTech) plot problem regarding "he's the main character, we have to keep him alive."  The plan is stupid because a not-stupid plan would kill our narrator.
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« Reply #896 on: 14 July 2014, 18:55:45 »
  It's bad enough that I think trying to explain it just legitimizes a sort of (not unfamiliar to BTech) plot problem regarding "he's the main character, we have to keep him alive."  The plan is stupid because a not-stupid plan would kill our narrator.
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Oh man.  I like the book in general. Though I have to admit, that the intrigue was very transpartent to most young adults i believe it was targeted when the book came out.   Seriously, how old was the demographic at the time when novel came out? In their 20s?  Younger?   Was the author told to make it easy for people follow? 

Then again, i do recall older intirgue and spy books from yesterday like in the 1920s and 30s perhaps earlier being very basic when it came to plots.  Charlie Chan comes to mind, but i don't think its fair to compare them.

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« Reply #897 on: 14 July 2014, 21:22:11 »
----- Two Weeks Later -----

Date: April 26, 3025 [See Notes]

Location: Argyle

Title: The Sword and the Dagger

Author: Ardath Mayhar

Type: Novel

Synopsis:  Major Candent “Sep” Septarian is working on putting the Davion Heavy Guards through their paces on Argyle, following the unit’s transit to the world for Hanse Davion’s summer residency.  After a run through the training Gauntlet, she returns to her quarters and is surprised to see a ComStar message capsule waiting for her there, carrying the news that Ardan needed her to rendezvous at Stein’s Folly.

While on guard duty for Prince Hanse at the Argyle summer palace that night, Sep gives the message to Hanse, who agrees that Ardan should have the chance to investigate the facilities on Stein’s Folly.  He authorizes Sep to take Captain Jarlik and a hand-picked team of other officers on “leave.”  She nominates Ref Handrikan as well as Jarlik.  Hanse authorizes her to take ‘Mechs and use the courier JumpShip currently on standby in the Argyle system.

Sep wakes Jarlik and tells him to prepare to ship out to Stein’s Folly.  She tells him they’ve got four months to complete their investigation.  She then goes to Denek’s room and tells him he’s in charge of the Davion Heavy Guards until she returns. 

Sep, Jarlik, Ref, and their technicians ship out aboard their DropShip before dawn, unnoticed by all but a handful of troops at the port, none of whom pay it any mind.

Notes: Amusingly, Sep is reassured by the fact that the message capsule is pressurized, implying it has not been tampered with by the local ComStar Adept.  First off, ComStar certainly has the technology necessary to open a message capsule, read the contents, and restore it to its original condition.  Second, how does she think the message entered the capsule?  The HPG station received a signal, decoded it, and then transcribed the message to paper and put it into the capsule.  Why does she think there wasn’t a point in that chain when ComStar could have read the contents? 

Sep is bored by the conversation between Hanse and the staff of the New Avalon Institute of Science.  This is probably representative of the vast majority of the population of the Inner Sphere – they don’t understand almost anything about science, so they tune out and ignore it, accepting what scientists and technicians say at full face value without any intellectual curiosity or skepticism.  A fertile ground, indeed, for the Word of Blake to spread.

Sure, the troopers at the DropPort don’t mind when a ship takes off, but what about the guys up in the control tower?  Shouldn’t they be asking for a flight plan, launch clearance, identity, etc.?  Security around the absolute ruler of billions of people should probably be just a wee bit tighter.
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« Reply #898 on: 14 July 2014, 21:30:46 »
I got the idea when reading this book that they may have been going for a re-enactment of the King Arthur/Lancelot/Guinevere thing. Now THAT would have been an interesting twist...
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« Reply #899 on: 15 July 2014, 14:24:18 »
----- Five Days Later -----

Date: May 1, 3025

Location: Dixie

Title: The Heart of Dixie

Author: Blaine Lee Pardoe

Type: Short Story

Synopsis:  Fifty-six kilometers north of New Wichita, LosTech prospectors Randolph and Fletcher survey a grass covered hill out on the plains of the northern continent.  They are convinced that a long lost Star League-era Castle Brian lies beneath the hill, and begin preparing to run some ground penetrating scans to find the metal support structure and identify an opening. 

This is the culmination of three years of research, digging into centuries-old SLDF engineering corps records, following the trails of thousands of tons of otherwise unaccounted-for construction supplies.

The two set up a base camp and start their survey.

Notes: Finding a Castle Brian that survived the Star League Civil War and the Succession Wars without being looted is every LosTech prospector’s dream.  Granted, none ever paid off as well as the Nagayan Mountain complex on Helm will in 3028, but Randolph and Fletcher have reason to be excited. 

Interestingly, circa 2750 (per FM:SLDF) the Star League did not maintain a garrison on Dixie.  The closest unit was the 236th Mechanized Infantry Division on Zwenkau.  Thus, this Castle Brian must have been one of the hidden Castles built as an emergency fallback rather than an active garrison post.  (The 236th is notorious circa 2765 for a murderous rampage by half the ‘Mech battalion over not getting a toy with a fast food meal, so Dixie was probably lucky at the time not to have them for a garrison unit.)
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