Well done Gentlemen/Ladies. I am impressed.
The only thing I would have pushed for in Proofreading would have been a listing of which Amaris units where hired by which House Militaries (like the listing of SLDF units in the old Housebook; Star League). And a cutaway picture of the invitation to the Black Warriors to join the Exodus, which never arrived but was in Comstars hands.
Other than these 2 small personal items I don't see much more would have been needed to make them better.
Again, well done.