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Fist of Fire

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The Freebirth
« on: 19 August 2017, 11:19:47 »
My first fanfic. Please let me know what you think! And Enjoy

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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #1 on: 19 August 2017, 18:55:13 »
Nice read. O0
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #2 on: 19 August 2017, 21:19:53 »
Thank you!
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #3 on: 20 August 2017, 17:28:24 »
Great story!
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #4 on: 21 August 2017, 04:39:42 »
That, was bloody superb! Excellent writing and what a finish!  If this was your first story, I hope there will be many more from you :)
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #5 on: 21 August 2017, 08:54:35 »
Thank you!
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #6 on: 21 August 2017, 10:42:13 »
Just so you know: I stayed up until way after midnight to finish your story, because I just couldn´t stop. I don´t do that a lot any more.
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #7 on: 22 August 2017, 02:45:16 »
I was the same, couldn't put it down!  I do hope there's a continuation of this or at least a lil follow up telling us of their fate.
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #8 on: 24 August 2017, 08:11:15 »
Thank you for your encouragement. I'm glad you guys enjoyed it! I am working on the next part, but Grad school is kicking me in the butt this semester! Hopefully I can get back to it soon!
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Re: The Freebirth
« Reply #9 on: 26 August 2017, 05:08:12 »
RL is more important, but thank you so much for sharing this with us.  I've shared it with a friend of mine and he immediately fell in love with Cole whilst declaring his hatred for Hanna's mom and her CO.
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