Hi,
Given the scant complaints and lack of evidence, here are the fixes I've found that will correct everything to absolute perfection!*
p. 35: Empires Aflame WarShip listing - Change header date from "ca. 3100" to "Ca. 3095"
p. 36: Under Tech That Appeared Anyway - Change the first sentence here to read: "Clan technology that does have an Inner Sphere analog began to emerge—in its Inner Sphere version only—during the late 3000s, amid a surge of innovation that followed this universe’s Fourth Succession War. "
p. 46: In the second paragraph under the Terran Supremacy affiliation, the last sentence of the paragraph should be: "To the Supremacy leadership, the border world regions—often rife with remnants of their original cultures and political systems, tend to be viewed as occupied territories or buffer zones, rather than truly integrated (and thus, fully trusted) populations."
p. 46-47: In the second paragraph under the Draconis Combine affiliation (the one regarding Rasalhague-born characters), move the long dash between "language as" to directly after the word "Swedish".
TIMELINE CHANGES! - For simplicity, the following changes reference the EA timeline by year, rather than page number
2788 - "Operation Black Shield" should be "Operation BLACK SHIELD"
2790 - "Operation Black Shield" should be "Operation BLACK SHIELD"
2813 - "Taurian-Canopian War" should be "First Taurian-Canopian War"
2814 - "Taurian-Canopian War" should be "First Taurian-Canopian War"
2911 - The only entry here should read: "Taurian Concordat conquers Pleiades Cluster" (Delete all other events)
2991 - "Blake DeChavilier" should be "James DeChavilier"
3061 - "Naomi Centrella" should be "Naomi Centrella-Calderon"
And that's it; everything else is absolutely awesome, with no further errors whatsoever!*
*Give or take any errors that some helpful folks find and actually report, that is.
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