p51, 6th paragraph continuing onto p52:
"With his subsequent order, the Coordinator ended the Combine’s part in the Second Succession War. After reviewing their position, the Coordinator and his top military advisors believed they had come out on top again, with gains along both fronts. Eighteen Steiner and fourteen Davion systems were now in the Dragon’s fold, as well as all of its former worlds previously occupied by the Federated Suns. Conversely, the Dragon lost nine worlds to the Commonwealth and twenty-two to the Davions.."
1. According to the map on HBHK p53, showing the border status at the end of the 2nd SW, the Kuritans captured 19 Steiner worlds not 18 which matches the post-2nd SW map in HBHS (p40).
(Captured from Steiner according to map: 1. New Caledonia 2. Verthandi 3. Harvest 4. Planting 5. Ridderkerk 6. Basiliano 7. Karbala 8. Al Hillah 9. Orestes 10. Tukayyid 11. Dehgolan 12. Grumium 13. Rubigen 14. Najha 15. Pilkhua 16. Chandler 17. Numki 18. Sulafat 19. Lambrecht)
Suggested fix: change "Eighteen Steiner" to "Nineteen Steiner" in third sentence of above text.
2. According to the map on HBHK p53, the Kuritans captured 15 Davion worlds, not 14 as per the above quote, however there is a discrepancy between that map and the post-2nd SW map in HBHD (p60). The HBHK map still shows Saumar, but that system is missing from the HBHD map, so the count of worlds in the above quote may be counted as correct and the map incorrect, or vice versa.
(Captured from Davion according to map: 1. Alnadal 2. Klathandu IV 3. Xhosa VII 4. Breed 5. Dobson 6. Royal 7. New Ivaarsen 8. Lucerne 9. Rochester 10. Robinson 11. Franklin 12. New Aberdeen 13. Harrow's Sun 14. Colia 15. Saumur)
Suggested fix: Either remove Saumar from map on HBHK p53 or change "fourteen Davion" to "fifteen Davion" in third sentence of above text.
3. The end of the third sentence in the above quote has the claim that the Kuritans had recaptured "all of its former worlds previously occupied by the Federated Suns", however according to the maps on HBHK p53 and HBHD p54 Udibi was still in Davion possession. Udibi was a Kuritan world captured by the Davions during the 1st SW as per the map on HBHK p43 and HBHD p54.
Suggested fix: Remove ", as well as all of its former worlds previously occupied by the Federated Suns" at the end of the third sentence.
4. According to the map on HBHK p53, the Davions captured 13 Kuritan worlds not 22, with Liao capturing an additional 6.
(Captured by Davion according to map: 1. Quentin 2. Errai 3. Deneb Kaitos 4. Addicks 5. Ozawa 6. New Rhodes III 7. Mallory's World 8. Mara 9. Benet III 10. Cassias 11. Niles 12. Bryceland 13. Wittington)
(Captured by Liao according to map: 1. Fomalhaut 2. Hean 3. Ankaa 4. Ronel 5. New Florence 6. Tybalt)
Suggested fix: Change fourth sentence from "Conversely, the Dragon lost nine worlds to the Commonwealth and twenty-two to the Davions.." to "Conversely, the Dragon lost nine worlds to the Commonwealth, thirteen to the Davions and six to the Capellans."
