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Thorsdad

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Huntsman
« on: 26 January 2011, 01:16:22 »
This is a WiE Alpha Galaxy Huntsman...looking for constructive criticism
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Siberian-troll

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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #1 on: 26 January 2011, 01:28:27 »
Try to add some highlight.
What paints do you used for it?
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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #2 on: 26 January 2011, 01:36:40 »
((Nods)) It is pretty dark, but if you were going for the color of dried blood, I think you nailed it ;)

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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #3 on: 26 January 2011, 05:47:14 »
The red looks too "splotchy". It is not a great dark red but it is an awesome rust effect. I advice you to add more rust and weathering and you will end with a trully unique mech. I hope this comment helps you!

BTW, great "jewelling effect"
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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #4 on: 26 January 2011, 09:15:45 »
Cool :)
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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #5 on: 26 January 2011, 09:20:49 »
Not bad at all!  :)
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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #6 on: 26 January 2011, 13:33:44 »
THis is already good!  :)

You could try running a micron pen around the edges of the canopy, this will make it stand out more. And lighten the metallic parts with a tiny weeny bit  of silver. But as I said, it's already quite nice.  ;)
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Re: Huntsman
« Reply #7 on: 26 January 2011, 16:54:34 »
Thanks for the feedback, watch for the improvements....
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