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Easy

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« on: 22 November 2017, 16:55:52 »
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mikecj

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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #1 on: 22 November 2017, 17:45:39 »
Nicely begun!
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #2 on: 22 November 2017, 18:29:24 »
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #3 on: 22 November 2017, 20:53:00 »
Really well written description!  Thanks!
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"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

marauder648

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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #4 on: 22 November 2017, 22:42:02 »
Off to a darn good start!
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #5 on: 23 November 2017, 01:37:15 »
Always a good start when a warship is involved. O0
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #6 on: 23 November 2017, 02:56:31 »
Interesting. One small issue though - you have mention of avenging the Camerons but the date-stamp is early 2766. Amaris launched his coup just after Christmas 2766 so you probably want to move the date on a year or so.
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #7 on: 23 November 2017, 12:02:32 »
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #8 on: 24 November 2017, 20:54:32 »
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #9 on: 26 November 2017, 13:46:13 »
Clever way to deploy marines!
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"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #10 on: 26 November 2017, 19:40:25 »
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Re: Interlude: This Is The Season Of Our Discontent
« Reply #11 on: 27 November 2017, 17:22:20 »
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