It must make you feel terrible to know I have reread the whole story twice whilst on holidays.
Sitting on a beach reading about the 69th, what could be more relaxing. [cheers]
I felt like I did a quite a bit of cleaning up and streamlining and also tried to develop the underlying story arc a bit more. Just today in fact I was re-reading the escape from Alshain and fretting over what I've come to think of as the "missing scene."
Before this summer is over, I'm going to go back in there and fix it once and for all. I expanded it a bit from the original already but there is still so much left unwritten there. Aside from that, when I went back through it, I was pretty pleased for the most part :)
Also on the plate is to edit and republish the second saga along with new cover art. Thanks for dropping me a line!