Author Topic: Seven  (Read 74119 times)

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Seven
« on: 19 October 2014, 00:03:31 »
Basically a concept seed that hit me and made me go, "What If...?"

I've got a couple more scenes finished that follow on from it, but want to get feedback and ideas on what other people expect the consequences to be before I roll with them.

Seven

ARCADIA, CLAN HOMEWORLDS
MAY 20, 3048

Like any other child of the warrior caste, Vera had been born from an artificial Iron Womb with the rest of her sibling company, her sibko, and raised and educated in the same creche until they were ready to begin their training as warriors. Unlike any other she knew, though, she'd actually listened when the Scientist assigned to instructing the sibko in mathematics had said his specialty could be used to describe any problem and point the way to a solution.

After that lesson, she had asked him if 'any' problem included how to be a better warrior.

He hadn't studied that himself, he said, since it wouldn't have been his place as a Scientist-instructor - but that was exactly what the scientists in charge of the breeding program that produced new generations from the genes of the Bloodnamed, the most successful of the warrior caste, were charged with doing.

She'd known that, even then. Instead, she'd been talking about ways to get higher scores in training, to earn more regard from her sibkin and instructors. It wasn't until years later that she'd seen the tactical skill with which that scientist had used the promised reward of that knowledge to lead her through acquiring the basic and not so basic math skills every mechwarrior needed.

Armed with the conviction of that self-study that accuracy of fire was the greatest multiplier of a warrior's ability, she'd turned all her free time to the passionate practice of that skill, staying up late in the simulators and yawning her way through the rest of her lessons.

Over the years of warrior training, as the weaker members of the sibko were weeded out and assigned to lesser castes, the need for the reassurance those practice sessions offered her had become more and more important. For every good-natured companion like Kaeli, or honest respect like Jane's, there were two or three Adelais that despised her drowsing as weakness, or a Mal that saw in the lack of support left by the departure, the elimination of those sibkin she was closest to a target to vent their own insecurities.

Usually, Vera would have tuned out Mal's self-important ranting. Of all the members of their sibko, they liked each other least. He had a habit of dismissing any bad performance in his own training as the result of bias or skewed tests, and no intention of forgiving the way she didn't acknowledge his obvious superiority no matter how many times he thumped her in hand-to-hand.

Of course she wasn't going to do that; she was a warrior cadet just like he was, and it'd've been a disgrace to their genes to grovel the way he tried to demand.

For this of all days, she was fully and completely rested, of course, but the increased focus made him harder to ignore, especially when she was finding it harder than expected to reach the half-meditative state she always used for practicing.

She opened her eyes, saw his sneering face look back at her. He had the same densely muscled frame as she did, and all the rest of their sibkin, and the green eyes and intense regularity of features, but they didn't look much like siblings. His jaw was heavier than the rest of the sibko favored, and her features tended more delicately, just as every muscle rippled under his skin and her body seemed to cloak itself in a layer of smoothness no matter how much she exercised.

"Mal," she said, "if I offer to let you have a shot at my targets, will you stop talking?" The Trial of Position that would make them from trainees into true warriors was graded by number of targets defeated, with each of them being granted three to try with. Only the best cadets dared to try to claim four victories by turning the series of duels into an open melee, and - so far - none had managed it.

He glared at her, but the belief that she wouldn't be willing to allow him his 'proper four'  had been one of the things he was just complaining about, so he just snapped, "Well bargained and done," and began to ignore her ostentatiously.

Finally. Vera smiled to herself, ever so slightly, and closed her eyes as she began to meditate quietly. It was just like him to use that formal close, to pretend that they'd gone through the true Batchall, the bidding contest that determined which warrior or commander would face the enemy and earn honor by doing so while risking the smallest possible force.

When the time came and the test proctors called them to board their mechs, she went and did so with that same perfect calm singing in her center, strapping herself in and bringing the systems of the titanic war machine underneath her alive with motions so practiced that they seemed almost inevitable.

For this trail, for her Blooding, she'd contended for and won the right to select which omnimech and standard configuration she would use - a Nova, at fifty tons an unexceptional medium whose bullet-shaped body perched on squat, back-jointed legs, and in the potent A equipment package, a single medium pulse laser backing up a pair of deadly particle projection cannons. If she'd been allowed to tweak the systems individually, she'd probably have traded the pulse laser for an additional pair of cooling heat sinks, but the A was as close to ideal for her purposes as any of the standard configurations offered.

Mal, she noted, had been given a Nova Prime, the same basic chassis as her 'mech but fitted with  an overwhelming array of extended-range medium lasers, giving it considerably more pure firepower than her own selection but in a shorter-ranged and less concentrated form. Even he should be able to defeat at least one smaller 'mech with it.

Guided out onto the field, each of them found three 'mechs waiting for them - one a light 'mech, another of equal power, and the third a heavy mech that should make easy work of them, skill being equal.

When he founded the Clans, Nicholas Kerensky, the first ilKhan, had set the rule - to be accepted as true warriors of his Clans, to win glory, each would-be warrior would have to defeat at least one of their opponents, themselves all already blooded warriors, in open, live-fire combat. If they couldn't - or if they failed to survive - then they, and their genes, were obviously unworthy, and would be condemned to obscurity, failure, disgrace. Even in a Clan that, like the Ghost Bear, refused to immediately waste the training they'd invested in creating a potential warrior would move them to the lesser branch of the armor corps.

Even if her state of mind at the moment had allowed it, Vera wouldn't have been worried. Her practice sessions might not have been recorded by anything beyond her own memory, but they had been as intense and difficult as her mind was capable of conceiving, and earlier practice with the rest of her sibko in real 'mechs and training weapons had confirmed that that practice did transfer.

Well. Not too worried.

Embracing the warrior's path meant accepting the risks of death and the costs of dealing it, and the battle of this Trial, like every other of the Six Trials by Combat, was in deadly earnest. The blooded warriors she faced wouldn't be holding back, wouldn't be picking their shots to protect her - they would destroy her machine any way they could, and feel little regret if that killed her along with her mount.

The first opponent to advance was the light, a Kit Fox, whose body married a hemispherical foresection to a blocky engine housing, and balanced it on reverse-jointed legs like a spindly version of her own Nova's. The large laser mounted on its arm slashed through the air only a few meters from her cockpit as her Nova rumbled into motion, and a few moments later, the missiles from its long range racks dropped from the sky to batter at her armor like hail, and most were swatted from the air by snarling antimissile systems before they could strike.

Instinct, or honed impulse, pulled the trigger on the first particle cannon only a split second after her 'mech's gyro had stabilized it in the wake of the last missile's impact, and the searing bar of man-made lightning threw the entire field into stark, overilluminated relief as it reached out and bored straight through the transparent armor panels protecting the Kit Fox's cockpit and pilot.

As the now-uncontrolled mech tumbled to the ground, she glanced around, refreshing her memory of the entire field before tackling her next opponent. Mal was struggling with his opponent, a nimble, blindingly fast Fire Moth - a cube on skeletal humanoid legs, with arms that it carried above its shoulders - whose limited firepower was tearing slashing chunks off of his 'mech with each pass and showing no difficulty in evading his own attempts  at return fire.

A hint of amusement touched her calm at his difficulties. They couldn't be happening to a more deserving trainee.

She turned back and fired her pulse laser at the next mech in her own list - a Viper, faster than a Nova to go with its slimmer, elongated torso and legs, but with less tonnage available for mounting weapons on, in the A configuration that carried extended range medium lasers and a backing short-range missile cluster. She was far out of the range of any medium laser, of course, but that picked it out as her target under zellbringen.

For a moment, as the warrior commanding it fire its jump jets and launched it through the air towards her, she considered another cockpit shot. The ballistic arc of its approach would have made the shot easy, after all. But, since she'd already killed one warrior today, and assured her own advancement, she decided there was no need to. Instead, just instants before the jumping mech would have touched down at the very fringes of its own range, she fired again, PPC bolts reaching out to smash into the ankle and reversed knee of one leg right when they were needed most, fusing armor and joint together in a cloud of vaporized fragments.

The 'mech's entire forty ton weight came down on the leg as its pilot scrambled to compensate - and failed. The ankle locked, digging the foot into the relatively soft ground of the trial field and bringing all of the moving machine's inertia against the weakened knee joint.

The knee gave, shearing cleanly away in a scream of tearing metal audible even through the shielding of her Nova's cockpit and the half-kilometer of distance separating them. The Viper's torso continued the rest of the way to the ground, tumbling off of its mangled leg and rolling end over end. An arm thrown out to stop the motion was bent back upon itself, joints mangled and myomer driving bundles torn and twisted by off-angle stresses they were never built to absorb, before the remaining leg dug into the ground and bounced the tumbling wreck into the air again, splintering into flying shards in the process.

Centripetal force pulled the remaining arm outwards as the spinning hulk arced up and then down again, and the impact of landing, felt first by the outstretched arm, tore the entire assembly free in a spray of liberated O-rings. The limbless remainder rolled on and on several more times before finally sliding to a halt several hundred meters beyond the initial crash point, and Vera finally pulled her eyes away from the sight to glance around the battlefield again.

Mal's Nova was still standing, and so was the Fire Moth he was fighting - he'd clipped it, once, and in return its pilot had torn great wounds all across the Nova's frame. One arm, and probably at least half of the original armor, were missing already, and at this rate she doubted he'd last much longer.

Couldn't happen to a nicer freebirth, she thought again, and turned to sight in on the last of 'her' trio, a sixty-ton Mad Dog B, arms and weapons bolted to the sides of a torso like a brick turned on its long, narrow side with the top front corner cut off and a cockpit on the very top, all balanced on reverse-jointed legs. This fight she expected to be much more difficult; unlike the tiny Kit Fox or the shorter-ranged Viper, the Mad Dog had at least as much long-range firepower as she did, and backed it up with an even denser battery of short-range lasers and missiles as well as substantially more armor than her own machine.

That was what she thought; and then the world went somewhat mad. When she recovered her focus, she realized that her Nova was in the process of crashing to the ground, savaged from behind by a heavy volume of weapons fire. Even on her best of days, she had much more trouble getting her mech's feet and limbs to go where she wanted them to than she did with the fire of its weapons, and a crash already in progress was a challenge for much better pilots than she.

The crash happened, slamming her against her restraints hard enough to make her vision swim and send lines of bruising pain across her breasts and shoulders. Practiced at ignoring pain from her time as the sibko's hand-to-hand 'training dummy', she fought to bring the Nova back to its feet, twisting the torso to bring her wounded back away from the source of that fire.

It had been Mal. His Nova's remaining arm was still raised to point at her, to spit his hatred and to take advantage of the vulnerable point she had shown him in her focus on her legitimate opponents. He fired again, this time scoring only a single hit as battle damage and overheating and haste degraded his aim.

Automatically, she dropped the aim point of that arm's particle cannon slightly and put a bolt through the cockpit glass and Mal's irritating face. A half turn as her 'mech came back up to full speed let a bolt from the same gun exploit the only gap he'd managed to open in the Fire Moth's paper-thin armor and core its gyroscope and reactor out from under its pilot.

She turned her head, letting years of drill drive her movements, and put the pip of the other cannon on the head of the Mad Dog whose pilot was only now starting to react to the abrupt change from dueling rules to an open melee.

The lightning crashed out, and the heavy ‘mech dropped.

Two large laser tracks from the Stormcrow seared in and tracked along her Nova’s chest; this time she was lucky and was able to keep the ‘mech on its feet. She turned to look at it - another reverse-legged design, like most omnimechs, whose cockpit was at the front of a narrow core hull like a more angular version of the Viper's, but whose arms were mounted to the sides of the boxy equipment bays carried above the hull. Her right-arm PPC’s aim-point drifted across the Stormcrow’s cockpit - she fired.

Then frowned, as the bolt smashed home not against the target she’d chosen, but a meter or two away, against the much heavier plating of the other omnimech’s chest, scoring a long glowing trench in its glancing blow. The electrical corona from the PPC bolt would have temporarily scrambled the ‘mech’s computer systems, and give her a moment or two to…

The Nova’s bullet-like torso swiveled on its shallow, almost-hidden waist joint, and the left arm stabbed out - paused while she double-checked her aim - and then fired again as the Stormcrow’s arms started to bring their powerful large lasers to bear again.

This time she didn’t miss, leaving her alone with the Hellbringer that had been slated to be Mal’s last opponent.

She had only a moment to assess it, a tall, almost perfectly humanlike machine with thick plantigrade legs and a torso wider and taller than it was thick - to see the twin laser lenses on the left arm and the massive launcher box riding the right shoulder that marked it as an A-config unit - before its fire was reaching out to greet her. The autocannon burst walked across the ground by her Nova’s feet and then up one leg, and the long range missiles rained down around her in a rattling, battering hailstorm of fire that the anti-missile miniguns only blunted. She fought the controls desperately, trying to get her balance back and bring her PPCs on-target before...

Vera saw the left arm come up and fired a desperate, half-aimed snap shot from both particle cannons. One missed entirely, punishing the air over the Hellbringer’s left shoulder, and the other, aimed lower, smashed into the right torso, below the missile racks. A bloom on the IR band told her that she’d gotten a piece of its engine shielding as the last dregs of the particle bolt broke through its armor - for all its mass and firepower, the Hellbringer carried less protection than her own fifteen-tons lighter Nova - but then another, fiercer spike as the engine answered a power demand warned her of the shot from the lasers.

Both torrents of emerald fire, whether deliberately or by chance, found the already weakened armor plating of her left torso, searing and melting their way through the glacis and through her ‘mech’s delicate workings to slag the inner surfaces of the rear plating. The structural members, the metal bones that supported the entire left arm and held the ‘mech together, softened and deformed as they were heated beyond their tolerances by coherent light and radiation escaping from the damaged reactor shielding, and when the gyrocontrol computers tensed the myomers of the left arm - those that hadn’t melted in the holocaust - the additional strain sheared the weakened structure away. Bereft of that support, the shoulder and arm sagged, sawing half-ruined myomers against the razored, glowing-hot edges of the ravaged armor plating until they parted and the entire assembly dropped free.

Even at the best of times, Vera found it a struggle to keep her ‘mech on its feet in bad footing or sudden weight shifts like that, and now she cursed savagely as she failed again and measured her Nova’s height full-length in the dirt of the Trial field. Even as she fought to recover her wits, a part of her mind waited grimly for the salvo that would complete her Nova’s destruction…

...and waited. By the time she was capable of acting coherently again, she realized that the pilot of the Hellbringer was doing her the honor of granting her time to rise to her feet again. Or possibly he was simply unwilling to fire when his earlier strike and his damaged engine had already flooded his ‘mech with excess heat.

Either way…

She scrambled one of the Nova’s feet under it, just enough to stabilize the machine as she lifted its remaining arm and took aim. For a split second, she let the aim point hover over the Hellbringer’s head and the cockpit within - then dropped the arm a degree or so and fired into the gaping wound across its right chest.

There was a brilliant gold-orange fireball as the missile ammunition stored there cooked off, billowing out of the open wound and the designed blast-panels across the omnimech’s back, and the heavy staggered - and then a second fireball erupted from within the machine, probably as flying hot shards of metal or spreading flames touched off the machine-gun ammunition stored safely behind the thick plating of the central-torso glacis.

That explosion savaged fusion engine and stabilizing gyroscope alike, and the humanoid omnimech dropped unceremoniously to the earth even as the pilot's ejection system carried him safely away.

Vera panted as she looked at the wreck, abruptly conscious of the sauna-heat of her Nova’s cockpit, of the sweat pouring down her body and staining her cooling suit, of the strands of white-bleached hair clinging to her face and neck as she counted up the total.

Mal… the Kit Fox… the Fire Moth… the Viper… the Stormcrow… the Mad Dog… and the Hellbringer.

She forced the Nova to stagger drunkenly to its feet as the incredulous grin stretched across her still-damp face. SEVEN! Six blooded warriors and one of her own peers had walked onto this field with her, and only she was walking away. Since the day the Nicholas Kerensky had forged the Clans, tens of thousands of warriors had taken the Trial of Position, matched themselves against their kind and their future peers for the right to name themselves members of the noble warrior caste.

None had claimed more than three victories in that challenge, not ever. None but her, Vera of the bloodhouse Tseng, of Clan Ghost Bear.

She’d done it.

She was a Warrior.
« Last Edit: 31 October 2014, 16:10:38 by Valles »

Shadow_Wraith

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 1037
Re: Seven
« Reply #1 on: 19 October 2014, 00:30:04 »
Interesting!  Hope too read more soon!

drakensis

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 1477
Re: Seven
« Reply #2 on: 19 October 2014, 01:36:03 »
The usual questions asked by the supervisors of the Testing would be:
1. Did you agree to share targets with your fellow warrior. In this case it's moot since Mal fired on her, so it's beyond doubt she had a right to fire on him and his targets.
2. Did you cheat somehow? The BattleROMs and 'Mechs involved will be checked carefully. It's unlikely warriors would conspire to allow her the victory - besides Mal, there were at least two fatalities there, but someone will check.

After this Clan Ghost Bear have a few decision to make:
1. What rank does she take? Number of kills dictates the rank but it's not set up to cope with more than 3 kills. Probably she gets Star Captain with intent to push her career forward as fast as possible. Likely she gets a high profile assignment to a frontline cluster.
2. Who sponsors her at the next Trial of Bloodright? The likelihood is that more than one of the Tseng bloodnamed will want too, which may create enemies for her among the displaced. The Head of the Bloodhouse may simply declare she'll be nominated as one of those picked by the arbiter no matter what?
3. What happens when the other Clans hear about that? Trials of Possession for her genetic material will be inevitable.
"It's national writing month, not national writing week and a half you jerk" - Consequences, 9th November 2018

snakespinner

  • Captain
  • *
  • Posts: 2688
Re: Seven
« Reply #3 on: 19 October 2014, 02:03:11 »
Wonder if they will just make her Khan. ;D
Nice start, will you take it further. O0
I wish I could get a good grip on reality, then I would choke it.
Growing old is inevitable,
Growing up is optional.
Watching TrueToaster create evil genius, priceless...everything else is just sub-par.

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #4 on: 19 October 2014, 02:28:26 »
1. My initial assumption had been that Ghost Bear command kind of threw up their hands and went "Okay, Galaxy Commander's the highest we got" and rolled from there, but actually counting things out, if you count Novas as separate, higher steps from ordinary battlemech formations, as the Hell's Horses and Coyotes apparently do, then that has her come out as commander of a Supernova Trinary. Doing it the latter way would require that one assume that Natasha Kerensky's appointment to a Cluster command mostly rested on her demonstrated experience as a commander, rather than her performance in her re-blooding.

Hmmm. I'll need to think about it more.

2. Whoever wins the epic dueling tournament for the privilege? ...There'll probably be a number of slots opening up in House Tseng, come to that. Interestingly, Vera herself will want to put that off for as long as possible; she's dangerously specialized in battlemech gunnery - her scores in mechhandling and hand-to-hand are barely adequate, and she knows it. And counting on winning the Spiral Wishing Well Of Doom every time would not be wise.

3. Lots of Trials of Possession... and jokes about the ilKhan's successor.

consequences

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 291
Re: Seven
« Reply #5 on: 19 October 2014, 02:47:30 »





After this Clan Ghost Bear have a few decision to make:
1. What rank does she take? Number of kills dictates the rank but it's not set up to cope with more than 3 kills. Probably she gets Star Captain with intent to push her career forward as fast as possible. Likely she gets a high profile assignment to a frontline cluster.

At this point if they have a clue they find an excuse to make up a new rank or shoehorn an old one so that she can fulfill the tasking of 'murdering hellwitch who wins any Trial that can be settled by a one on one duel for us'

Quote
2. Who sponsors her at the next Trial of Bloodright? The likelihood is that more than one of the Tseng bloodnamed will want too, which may create enemies for her among the displaced. The Head of the Bloodhouse may simply declare she'll be nominated as one of those picked by the arbiter no matter what?

'I will fight anyone in a mech duel who disagrees with my placement.'

If I remember right, the challenged party gets to choose whether a fight is augmented(unless that's just the Dragoons' kludge of a semi-clan system). Considering her value and what her sib-mate pulled, any enemy would best be served by picking an easier target, as their older and wiser mentor who is presumably the one nominating them would no doubt point out if they insisted on pursing a silly path.

 IIRC, there's something like 24 nominations by existing bloodname holders presuming a full Blood house minus the vacancy, 25 if the existing holder offed themselves and made their post mortem nomination stick like was done for Phelan's spot, 6-7(or more) by assorted politicking and determinations, and one by grueling meant to be unwinnable slugfests. Presuming of course that Da Bears don't have their own unique take on the process.


Quote
3. What happens when the other Clans hear about that? Trials of Possession for her genetic material will be inevitable.

They'd have to put something of equivalent value on the line, and most importantly field someone who can beat her unless Da Bears unaccountably field someone other than her to stomp all over them. Frankly, her dna is either priceless, if the ability can be bred for and trained, or worthless, if it's a one off fluke that will take the Scientists a hundred years to pin down. The smart thing to do would be to wait 20 years for results, so naturally the Ice Hellions will be putting their battleship as collateral within the week.

Some of the Clans would be all over that. Others, like the Jade 'three mechs more dangerous than your piece of crap Summoner after having to fight your way to the cockpit sounds like a fair test for an unblooded warrior' Falcons would blindly deny that anything of consequence occurred.

Antagonist

  • Corporal
  • *
  • Posts: 65
Re: Seven
« Reply #6 on: 19 October 2014, 03:52:34 »
Going to keep an eye on this...

Sigil

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 807
Re: Seven
« Reply #7 on: 19 October 2014, 20:04:31 »
I'll be following your portrayal of Clan Ghost Bear.  Is there a particular reason you choose CGB instead of another Clan to write about?  I'm curious since I happend to trying my own hand at writing a bit about CGB.   :)

 

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #8 on: 20 October 2014, 02:46:27 »
I picked Ghost Bear because they're my second favorite Clan, after Snow Raven, and for plot-potential reasons I wanted to have an Invading Clan. I could have tweaked the timeline earlier, and had her butterfly the winners of the pre-invasion scrum, but that would've run the risk of being a bit too twee, a bit too Standard Clan Fixit Fic.

Vera's not that kind of author-avatar; she's just Vera.

Oh, and, next scene.




STRANA MECHTY, CLAN HOMEWORLDS
MAY 31, 3048

In memory, she fired the shot that ruined the Viper's leg, knowing now if not as it happened that the machine's fall would leave the cockpit uncrushed and that the pilot would recover fully from his injuries and count himself lucky to have had some small part in a legend that was already to be added to the epic poem of the Remembrance, the cultural touchstone of the Clans.

In the dream, she was aboard the forty-ton medium, desperation flooding through her as she fought a losing battle to regain control, feeling the world spin madly through sudden shocks and free-fall until at last the ground loomed outside her windows, inevitably growing closer with a horrific, impossible deliberation to crush her, leave her mangled corpse irretrievably mingled with the smashed wreckage of her machine...

Slouched against the straps of the personnel bus's seat, Vera came awake with her eyes still closed, then opened them to glance out the window. If the trip had still had a while to go, she would have closed them again, gone back to sleep even with the nightmare still waiting for her.

Instead, she could see the approaches of the Bear's Den, familiar from so many vid recordings and written accounts, so she came upright in her seat and stretched in a titanic yawn. She glanced around the bus's bare metal interior to see if anything had changed - saw the same minimal fittings, the bench-seats of synthetic fabric strung by straps from the seat frames, the same collection of other warriors being brought in from the nearby spaceport... The only thing that had changed was that the Elemental across the aisle from her was most of the way through his book, rather than just starting it.

She laid one hand on her travel bag, sitting in the seat next to her, and waited patiently as the bus - no rattletrap, here on Strana Mechty, but a like-new machine that moved with a perfectly maintained whirring smoothness - swooped off of the avenue and braked to a halt in the loading dock with the easy precision of a driver who had done the same thing a dozen times a day for as many years.

Vera stood with the rest of the passengers, filing out through aisle and doors to filter into the lines of the processing stations that controlled access to the headquarters building, the electric mind of Clan Ghost Bear. The station she picked was manned by a warrior, one arm half-immobilized by the network of spectacular scarring that explained what he was doing behind a desk on Strana Mechty rather than fighting still.

She held the bracelet that carried her codex - the summation of her gene profile, qualifications, and deeds and accomplishments - out for him to scan. "Galaxy Commander Vera," she identified herself verbally, pleased not to have stumbled over the still-unfamiliar rank. "I was ordered to report here for assignment."

The crippled warrior wore the identification color of an aero-branch warrior, and bore the marks of far more experience than she had yet earned, but there was still a double-measure of awe in his eyes if not in his voice or words. "I will arrange your bag's delivery to your temporary quarters," he informed her. "You are required for an immediate meeting with the Khan."

On one level, that was to be expected. Galaxies were the largest subformations of the Ghost Bear touman, the clan's military forces, and the commander of one - even of one that so far existed only on paper - could be expected to report directly to the two Khans who led the Clan. On the other, what kind of warrior expected to meet a Khan less than two weeks after their Blooding?

Vera tried not to look as nervous as she felt.

Less than fifteen minutes later, a worker-caste secretary showed her into the Khan's office; he waved her into a seat without looking up from the filepad he was examining.

She sat.

Examining the Khan while he finished his reading was... intimidating. The first ilKhan had created a society that was relentlessly driven to improve itself, to hone its skills, its technology, and even the very genes of its people. The new, built with the lessons and experience learned from previous iterations, was assumed to be superior to the old that it would inevitably replace. Warriors, in particular, lived with fast-burning intensity. The crippled one who had manned the counter would, at only twice Vera's own age, have been assumed to be approaching the end of his own useful career, the point at which he would have to either earn the Bloodname that would guarantee the perpetuation of his genes or begin the slow slide to the status of solahma, the dead-end and forgotten.

The senior Khan of Clan Ghost Bear wasn't the oldest human being Vera had ever seen, but he was not a young man. His skin was weathered, his face lined and seamed, and his hairline had receded halfway to the back of his skull, apparent even with the close-cut buzz he wore the silvering stuff in.

Seeing the precision of the motion as he set his filepad down at last, Vera knew that any apparent frailty was a lie - that those knotted muscles were as strong or stronger than her own, his endurance probably greater, and that the lifetime of experience behind those still-hard eyes were more than adequate to overcome her own knack for targeting.

Among the Clans, the old survived only by proving its superiority to the challenges of the new, over and over again.

“Your Trial of Position having been verified and attested by the entire staff of your training facility,” the Khan said, pinning her in place with eyes that seemed to pierce straight through her, “we of Clan Ghost Bear find ourselves in an… interesting position. A mechwarrior, a Star Captain, even a Star Colonel - these can be accommodated. Your own performance, however… Do you intend to exercise the rights to which it would by implication entitle you?”

"It is my duty to do so," she answered, which it was even if she knew she wasn't fully qualified to do so. She'd spent the dropship rides from Arcadia to the jump point and then from the next jump point to Strana Mechty studying frantically at all the strategic and organizational manuals she could find, even to the point of having reader-software feet them to her during her exercise and simulator time.

Surprisingly few of them were recent; the organization used by the Clans had been set by the first ilKhan, and within the code of zellbrigen that governed engagements between warriors there was only a minimal amount of 'wiggle room'... Unless zell was discarded. The means for dealing with those times, and for operating within the limits of honor, were well known and passed down from teacher to student in a living tradition that was learned in sibko and then in the field, and rarely written down.

But the Star League Defense Force that had trained the ilKhan and the Great Father before him, that honorable army from which the Clans had sprung, had drawn an immense number of soldiers and commanders from an unimaginable variety of backgrounds, and needed to weld them all together into a coherent fighting force. It had needed a unified doctrine, a systematic way of doing things and way of looking at warfare, had needed to know what worked and what didn't work so that it could instruct its commanders in how they should fight.

Vera has listened; unfortunately, the Clans had a shortage of senior noncommissioned officers. “My orders have already reached me, and do not violate the Martial Code. No opinion I might have is applicable.”

The Khan was looking at her speculatively; she couldn't have said what he saw. He asked, "Expand anyway. What role did you expect to take?”

Here went nothing. "I calculated that command of a binary would be accounted as a separate step from command of a trinary," she said, “and a nova as a separate step from a star. Accordingly, I anticipated appointment to the command of a supernova trinary.”

The basic unit of Clan deployment was the star, a formation of five omnimechs, ten aerospace fighters or combat vehicles, or twenty-five battle-armored Elementals. Stars were organized together into either binaries of two stars or trinaries of three, and three or more of those formations together formed a cluster. Most missions and commanders had troops deployed at that level; the galaxy, formed from three or more clusters, was usually more of an administrative formality than a unified combat formation. The nova was an innovation, a star of 'mechs and a star of elementals, trained to move and fight together as a team, elementals using the 'mechs as transports then splitting off to fight alongside them, and binaries and trinaries of that model were known as ‘supernovas’.

That surprised him, she thought. It was hard to tell. “You predicted only a trinary command after accomplishing an unprecedented feat of arms in your Trial of Position. Why?”

It was surprisingly easy not to sweat; the style of his questioning was much like that adopted by the instructors who had dealt with her sibko. "First, because the skills sibko training inculcates in potential warriors are not those required for higher command. Cluster and Galaxy command requires strategic and tactical judgement I have not yet had the experience to hone, and I had anticipated an awareness of this factor on the part of command.”

That was a risk, admitting even a little weakness in the fashion she was, but it was true, and her duty to be honest with her superiors demanded she take it. "Second, because there were no Cluster or Galaxy command vacancies listed in the last information available to me.” She’d checked, in the course of trying to figure out where she’d be assigned during the trip to Strana Mechty.

And now the most telling reason. "Third, because the intelligence available to us makes it clear that the armed forces of the Inner Sphere are ill-equipped, but also highly determined and supported and supplied by a population and industrial base several orders of magnitude larger than that of the Homeworlds. The need to prosecute Operation Revival in an effective manner would prohibit special accommodations for my case, since those would interfere with its organization.”

The Khan chuckled, a sound as dry and dead as dust. "How much have you slept since your Trial?" he asked.

It was a non-sequitur, as far as she could see, but she answered anyway. "Not at all the first night, twelve hours the second, three to five hours every night since."

"Celebration, then rest, then overwork," he diagnosed, and nodded. "What are your plans for your own future?"

"I hope to spend perhaps two years honing my personal combat skills and other weaknesses before attempting to claim a Bloodname," Vera said. It hurt to go on, but she had to: "My hand-to-hand combat skills were evaluated as the worst in my sibko-" he probably knew that, but she couldn't afford to assume "-and expecting other candidates for a Bloodname to face me in 'mechs, in light of my Trial of Position, would be... as unwise as assuming I would win every hunt."

The Khan said nothing, merely motioning her to go on. She did, even though... "I... am uncertain of the intelligence estimates' equation of Inner Sphere combat units with the Bandit Caste." Estimates that the Khan himself had signed off on, had bid in grand batchalls on the basis of. "Given the disparity in numbers already alluded to, I expect heavy and long-term fighting, on the terms of a Trial of Annihilation-" A war to the knife, and the knife to the hilt "-taking at least five and more likely ten or more years. Only after that point will it be possible for me to undergo the Clawing and begin waiting for a vacancy among the Clan's Khanate."

Among Clan Ghost Bear, it was expected that every would-be senior officer go out into the polar reaches of Strana Mechty clad in only a duty uniform and bearing only a plain alloy spear, there to survive the elements and find - and, armed only with that same spear and the assistance of his fellows in the ritual of the Clawing - kill one of the five-meter, multi-ton apex predators that were the clan's totem. Roughly a third of those warriors that attempted it were killed by their would-be prey - and most of the rest would have failed to find one.

The Khan chuckled again. "'Thoughtful, patient, and excessively honest', as your trainers put it." Vera felt a rush of relief that he'd apparently decided to be amused rather than offended. "But yes, I believe that you will do, although your leisurely plans will unfortunately have to be disordered."

"Yes, my Khan," she said, since there was nothing else she could say.

"The Clawing does not require an excess of hand-to-hand ability, merely physical conditioning and adaptability," he went on, "and so you will report to the Loremaster in three days to begin preparation to join the next ritual."

She refused to 'eep', but he heard it anyway, and made another noise of amusement. "When you return, you will be placed in command of Delta Galaxy, and take part in Operation Revival, accordingly. I would advise you to spend your transit time acquiring the tactical skills you feel you lack.”

"Thank you, my Khan."

Another chuckle. "Thank me if the Bear spares you, child."

"Yes, my Khan."
« Last Edit: 01 November 2014, 21:05:40 by Valles »

consequences

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 291
Re: Seven
« Reply #9 on: 20 October 2014, 11:19:02 »
Timeline issue, in 3046 iirc Operation Revival is still a pipe dream if you go by the canon timeline since the political unity to make it happen does not as yet exist. Granted said canon timeline is exceptionally silly and Outbound Light being taken a couple years early would make the whole thing far more sensible.

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #10 on: 20 October 2014, 11:24:30 »
...Let's go with that.

'Cause, well, IIRC, the first attacks on the periphery started happening in '48, and the travel time is about a year, so Vera's only barely going to have time to practice her hand-to-hand before trying for her Bloodname in the last round of such before Revival kicks off.

Even the Clans aren't dumb enough to stage an operation as big as Revival with no notice or prep. I can't believe it - like poddable Omni jumpjets, it's just too silly to consider.

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #11 on: 20 October 2014, 21:52:58 »
Spoiler: She's not dead.



STRANA MECHTY, CLAN HOMEWORLDS
MARCH 17, 3048

Because her reflexes were very, very fast, Vera lived. She caught the flicker of fast-moving white-on-white and flinched. Because she was already moving, the ghost bear's swiping paw caught - and broke - her shoulder, rather than taking her head quite literally off of her shoulders.

The bear, a fully grown male, weighed a ton and a half. The leg it had used to strike her, by itself, weighed more than she did, and was backed by all the momentum of that massive body moving faster than any human could have sprinted. The impact picked her up and threw her tumbling in a long, shallow arc. Instinct and practice curled her limbs in, despite the shrieking pain of shattered bone, and twisted her so that she landed with the flying impact distributed across her entire back.

Landing in a snowbank helped, too - she dropped into the heart of the bank and skidded through in an explosion of displaced flurries, even though the impact was enough to set off a further explosion of agony in her broken shoulder.

When she came to again, and had enough adrenaline flooded through her bloodstream to pick herself up out of the snowbank and look around for her spear, the bear was dropping the corpse of the Elemental it had been aiming at - Star Commander Bol Jorgensson, she remembered - and wheeling inside its own length to face off against the star and more of warriors who were closing in on it with spears in hand.

Vera could already see several spare weapons scattered in the bloody snow. She dashed for the nearest.

As she ran, the bear picked another target and lunged; its victim's spearpoint caught in the meat of its shoulder, bound - and then snapped the shaft like a twig. Blood-soaked jaws closed around the warrior's head and bit it cleanly in half in a spray of gore.

She bent at the run to scoop the fallen weapon up in her good hand - fortunately, the whole shoulder matched to her dominant arm - then swerved, feeling the snow creep inside her rough boots as her feet scrabbled in the snow as she turned to run towards the bear.

Three elementals lunged as one, fighting to drive their spearpoints into the massive beast’s vitals. One bit deep in its gut, a wound almost certain to kill it - but not for hours, days, even weeks. Another spear failed to penetrate, slashing a bloody line across the beast’s shoulder, and the third bound in the muscle of its back, snatching its wielder off of her feet as the beast spun within its own length to kill the comrade who had pierced its belly and whirling her away helplessly through the air as the spearpoint cut its way free again.

Vera took two more steps towards the bear as it rose up to stand on its hind legs and roar - an intimidation display meant to convince its attackers to run rather than fighting further, a sign that it was growing worried. She cast her spear like an athlete’s javelin, aiming for its neck and the mighty blood vessels there.

She hit, more or less, but from the absence of any sudden gush of blood, she’d missed her killing mark - and attracted its attention in the bargain.

She dashed for the next closest spear, snatched it up in turn with a stumble as her feet found a gully hidden under the drifting snow, then spun to see the beast charging straight for her, grey-pink nose and pale blue eyes and true-white fur moving with impossible silence in a storm of displaced snow, its massive form picked out more by the blood of its wounds and victims than by its motion.

There wasn’t time to dodge.

Vera threw herself down, falling on her back with the spear couched under her good arm like an ancient knight’s lance. Her shoulder jolted horrific pain again as she fell into the depths of the small hidden gully, but that didn’t keep her from guiding the spearpoint into the gap of the ghost bear’s clavicle and deep into the cavity of its chest.

It bellowed in agony, loud enough to drive a jag of pain through her ears, and stumbled as its own momentum impaled its lungs and heart on the length of the spear in an explosion of blood, enough to fill the gully and cover her entirely in that remaining instant before it collapsed on top of the meagre shelter she’d found.

The impact knocked her out, this time all the way.
« Last Edit: 31 October 2014, 16:12:16 by Valles »

imperator

  • Warrant Officer
  • *
  • Posts: 706
Re: Seven
« Reply #12 on: 20 October 2014, 22:09:18 »
I like the story so far.
Their is no problem Jump Jets and an assault class auto-cannon can't handle.

Dave Talley

  • Major
  • *
  • Posts: 3604
Re: Seven
« Reply #13 on: 20 October 2014, 22:44:54 »
Tag
Resident Smartass since 1998
“Toe jam in training”

Because while the other Great Houses of the Star League thought they were playing chess, House Cameron was playing Paradox-Billiards-Vostroyan-Roulette-Fourth Dimensional-Hypercube-Chess-Strip Poker the entire time.
JA Baker

drakensis

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 1477
Re: Seven
« Reply #14 on: 21 October 2014, 01:58:32 »
...Let's go with that.

'Cause, well, IIRC, the first attacks on the periphery started happening in '48, and the travel time is about a year, so Vera's only barely going to have time to practice her hand-to-hand before trying for her Bloodname in the last round of such before Revival kicks off.

Even the Clans aren't dumb enough to stage an operation as big as Revival with no notice or prep. I can't believe it - like poddable Omni jumpjets, it's just too silly to consider.

According to canon:
Outbound Light was captured by the Smoke Jaguars on 27 September 3048 and the vote to invade took place in November that year.
The first units for the invasion - the units that raided the periphery in 3049 - left the Clan Homeworlds in February that year to seize staging worlds and gather information. They arrived six months later (suggesting heavy use of LF batteries) and spent about six months taking periphery worlds.
The main invasion force left in June 3049 and arrived in about six months, with the final Grand Council meeting before the invasion taking place from 18th to 23rd February 3050.

So they sent their advance forces 3 months after the decision to invade and their main forces were ready to depart 4 months after that. That's not unreasonable as preparation time - and remember they're not really experienced in large scale operations or the way they consume supplies. The Ghost Bears in particular are noted to have seriously under-estimated the need for supplies and garrison forces.

I'd suggest - it is of course your story - moving the events of your story so far forward to early 3048 and moving the capture of the Outbound light and the Invasion decisions back to late 3047. This would place Vera's trial in the period between the decision to invade and the departure of the invaders. Then setting the transit times as a year rather than six months has the Clans arriving on schedule. It's a small change from canon but not really an important one.

Era Report 3052 has some of the best collected information on this. The Khans during the vote to invade were both killed in the Trial of Refusal over the invasion vote. The replacements were Karl Bourjon (born 3006) and Theresa Delvillar (born 3015). Of course, the prestige Vera's Trial of Position gave the Tseng bloodlines could easily have altered the politics of the election if the timing was right, leading to different Khans.

I like all the story parts of this and I'm eager to see more.
« Last Edit: 21 October 2014, 02:00:38 by drakensis »
"It's national writing month, not national writing week and a half you jerk" - Consequences, 9th November 2018

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #15 on: 21 October 2014, 03:01:49 »
...That does make rather more sense of the timing, and I think I'll roll with it. Thank you!

In regards to the Khan's age, I was working from memory of... One or another of the novels... which placed both of the Ghost Bear khans as elderly men. For purposes of the story, it's not a significant detail - Vera's hardly in a position where she's thinking politically enough to be aware of him as a individual rather than a Font Of Authority - and I think I'll correct it.

As I go on, I'd also like to get input on two points, probably near and dear to people's hearts.

First, I already know that Vera's favored ride is a Warhawk, and that she certainly has the pull to arrange a custom configuration. What I'm less certain of is whether she'll go for a layout that focuses on headcap-capable weapons, probably two PPCs and a gauss rifle, or if she'll go all-out 'maximize my odds' and go with LPLs in the knowledge that her Trial happened on one of her 'good shooting days'. (Not that she's not still hilariously deadly on her bad ones, but her ratio rarely gets that good.)

Second, and more plot-related... I'm consciously trying to avoid having Vera be 'too perfect' in her judgement; she's got to have room to grow as a character, after all, and if she gets everything right, that'd be hard. Still, one of her established traits is that she understands and trusts mathematics, and applies such calculations to her life.

Which should, reasonably, make her worried about the same under-packing noted in the previous post, and as a Galaxy Commander, she'd be in a position to do something about it.

Options I've considered are...
a.) Making sure that Delta Galaxy packs mostly energy weapons, and consolidates its ammunition types to a minimum.
b.) Exerting political leverage to increase the amount of spares and other gear brought along.
c.) Same methods, but bringing ammo and armor production lines.
d.) Using Trials to capture a Potemkin or three from non-invading clans.
e.) Some combination of the above.

Thoughts?

Chris OFarrell

  • Warrant Officer
  • *
  • Posts: 605
Re: Seven
« Reply #16 on: 21 October 2014, 04:12:14 »
Would have been way more fun if she had just vanished into the wilderness ... then come out a week later quite literally riding on a Ghost bears back to the extraction zone, with a Nova of Ghost Bear warriors staring with jaws somewhere around their feet as she jumps off and lightly pets it before sending 'Mr Snuggles' off on his way before sadly telling the Loremaster that she has failed the ritual.

Just to really drive the point home how awesome she is to everyone :p


As for what decisions she should make ... frankly I'd be very careful about those kinds of decisions. You've spent quite a bit of time with her going on about how she is a great shooter, but is utterly out of her depth at higher order strategic issues and thinking. It would be very OOC indeed to have her suddenly not make all the same mistakes the other Clans made because they just didn't get how war works. Because she really shouldn't be thinking on 'that' level - she should be doing what all good Junior Officer newbs do; focusing on the tactical at the expense of the strategic.

You could try to let her be shown by a master though. Say that for some reason she's temporarily assigned to work with Clan Wolf for something, a temporary staff role or something coordinating their combined jumpship trains. Because their invasion pathways are right next to each other and because they are long time allies, they are actually willing to help each other here. And in doing so, she happens to meet and work with Ulric, who she very quickly realizes is a strategic and operational genius absurdly beyond the other Clans Khans. And from even just a few months working with him, she picks up enough to throw out her plans and start over, resulting in her unashamedly copying a lot of the Clan Wolf thinking and putting her own spins (like the aforementioned heavy bias of the OmniMechs to energy weapons and/or making damn sure that they bring with them enough energy weapons pods to rapidly switch her Clusters over if supply problems become acute).
« Last Edit: 21 October 2014, 04:15:34 by Chris OFarrell »
"I, the Baron of Strang, care not for your new names. Clans? Jade Falcons? I call you by your true name: Scum of the Star League, traitors of free will, persecutors of the Periphery come back to lord it over freedom-loving people. Come ahead, you steel-eyed robots! Come ahead and taste what a million like-minded people think of you and your damn Clans!"

-Baron Stepan Von Strang

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #17 on: 21 October 2014, 04:42:04 »
Would have been way more fun if she had just vanished into the wilderness ... then come out a week later quite literally riding on a Ghost bears back to the extraction zone, with a Nova of Ghost Bear warriors staring with jaws somewhere around their feet as she jumps off and lightly pets it before sending 'Mr Snuggles' off on his way before sadly telling the Loremaster that she has failed the ritual.

Just to really drive the point home how awesome she is to everyone :p

Among other problems, I don't think a wild bear would stand for it.

As for what decisions she should make ... frankly I'd be very careful about those kinds of decisions. You've spent quite a bit of time with her going on about how she is a great shooter, but is utterly out of her depth at higher order strategic issues and thinking. It would be very OOC indeed to have her suddenly not make all the same mistakes the other Clans made because they just didn't get how war works. Because she really shouldn't be thinking on 'that' level - she should be doing what all good Junior Officer newbs do; focusing on the tactical at the expense of the strategic.

You could try to let her be shown by a master though. Say that for some reason she's temporarily assigned to work with Clan Wolf for something, a temporary staff role or something coordinating their combined jumpship trains. Because their invasion pathways are right next to each other and because they are long time allies, they are actually willing to help each other here. And in doing so, she happens to meet and work with Ulric, who she very quickly realizes is a strategic and operational genius absurdly beyond the other Clans Khans. And from even just a few months working with him, she picks up enough to throw out her plans and start over, resulting in her unashamedly copying a lot of the Clan Wolf thinking and putting her own spins (like the aforementioned heavy bias of the OmniMechs to energy weapons and/or making damn sure that they bring with them enough energy weapons pods to rapidly switch her Clusters over if supply problems become acute).

IIRC, the Wolves are about the only clan the Bears really do not get along with...

But yeah, that goal that she be in most respects a typical Junior Clan Officer, or even an ordinary mechwarrior, is exactly why I'm raising this question for discussion. Because on the one hand, there's that, and on the other, there's the fact that she's the sort who will do basic math/i] like, "x 'mechs fighting on y planets, typical fight consumes z resources..." and then not throw her answer out as far too high.

...Really, that logic makes the answer D, doesn't it?

Chris OFarrell

  • Warrant Officer
  • *
  • Posts: 605
Re: Seven
« Reply #18 on: 21 October 2014, 06:15:09 »
Among other problems, I don't think a wild bear would stand for it.


Was being slightly factious there :p

Then again, the two founding Khans were taken in by a Ghost Bear pack, which is the basis of the Clawing ritual. Then again, they might have just made up the whole thing after deciding their suicide pact idea was not well thought out, knowing that crazy Nicky would just buy it cause he's an idiot like that :p

Quote

IIRC, the Wolves are about the only clan the Bears really do not get along with...


Really? I thought that the Wolves and Ghost Bears generally got on quite well most of the time.

Quote

But yeah, that goal that she be in most respects a typical Junior Clan Officer, or even an ordinary mechwarrior, is exactly why I'm raising this question for discussion. Because on the one hand, there's that, and on the other, there's the fact that she's the sort who will do basic math/i] like, "x 'mechs fighting on y planets, typical fight consumes z resources..." and then not throw her answer out as far too high.

...Really, that logic makes the answer D, doesn't it?

Well it sort of makes sense. Look at Clan trial expenditures. Damage inflicted, replacement parts needed on a star, trinary, cluster and Galaxy level and extrapolate from that on a per engagement level what is needed to restore a Cluster to fighting strength. Then from there add in the rather longer resupply lines the Inner Sphere will mandate and be very conservative in estimates ... could at least get some basic frameworks in place.
"I, the Baron of Strang, care not for your new names. Clans? Jade Falcons? I call you by your true name: Scum of the Star League, traitors of free will, persecutors of the Periphery come back to lord it over freedom-loving people. Come ahead, you steel-eyed robots! Come ahead and taste what a million like-minded people think of you and your damn Clans!"

-Baron Stepan Von Strang

serack

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 808
Re: Seven
« Reply #19 on: 22 October 2014, 05:38:13 »
if looking for extra transport a starlord (6 collars)or monolith (9 collars) would be easier to get a batchall for , there more of them than the few Potemkin (25 collars) that are in Clan possession , even a Volga (4 collars)would be easier to locate :)  again just my 2 cents , and great story .

fitzgerald

  • Private
  • *
  • Posts: 36
Re: Seven
« Reply #20 on: 24 October 2014, 02:14:37 »

Options I've considered are...
a.) Making sure that Delta Galaxy packs mostly energy weapons, and consolidates its ammunition types to a minimum.
b.) Exerting political leverage to increase the amount of spares and other gear brought along.
c.) Same methods, but bringing ammo and armor production lines.
d.) Using Trials to capture a Potemkin or three from non-invading clans.
e.) Some combination of the above.

Thoughts?

Hi Valles this fics been fun

On D)

Much like the Falcons leased the Snow Raven Fleet, leasing Potemkins is pretty plausible.     Might I suggest on a visit to Tokasha Mechwerks offering a lease agreement with the Goliath Scorpions Tau Galaxy (who have a the Potemkin Epimetheus assigned to them.

The Scorps would find the resources alone quite valuable.

On the ammo / armor front:  Take a que from the Dragoons and get a jump capable space station built.    Obviously the clans have the designs and capabilities for them

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #21 on: 29 October 2014, 16:06:35 »
...Yeah, this took a while, didn't it? The earlier pieces had been written ahead of time, but real life struck just as I ran out of material.

Anyway, I just finished pounding this out.

Hope y'all enjoy!



HECTOR, CLAN HOMEWORLDS
JULY 3, 3048

“Galaxy Commander,” her second’s voice came over the comline as her Warhawk pounded down the narrow gully, following the trail of broken footprints her zell target had left as it fled. “I fear that perhaps we have underbid.”

“You fear that your superior is an inexperienced child with the brains of a surat,” Vera answered tartly, most of her attention on trying to pick hints of her prey out of the polar twilight dimness. “You know that she has bid badly - and aff, I know it too. A tactic that would rescue the situation would be welcomed.”

There was a moment of dead silence over the line, and then Bol Jorgensson laughed. “If you can recognize it, then you are smarter than any surat,” he said. “And yes, I have an answer. To win this trial, they must defeat us, not take some objective - if we concentrate ourselves, then their abortion of zellbrigen will allow us to support each other, or they may adopt the correct mode and face us individually -”

“Which will be to our advantage, given the weight difference,” Vera finished the thought. “Where? An open area, where they will be unable to pop out, strike, and then break contact?”

“No. Grid 6047 has a shallow lake, large enough to put the center out of convenient weapons range of the shores. To strike, they will have to enter the lake…”

“...and enter our range, slowed by the water. Excellent. I will-”

The Ice Ferret she had been chasing rounded the corner ahead of her, already at full speed and with short-range missiles roaring off of their arm-mounted racks. Even as her mech’s antimissile system opened up, fighting to claw the warheads from the air before they could reach armor, the compressed panoramic display showed her the rest of the ambush - a Viper coming over one wall of the gorge, a pair of Arctic Cheetahs over the other, and a Fire Moth hot on the Ice Ferret’s heels and still building speed.

“-Freebirth,” she swore, and fired all four of the Warhawk’s heavy pulse lasers, one boring deep into the Fire Moth’s lightly-protected heart and the other three gutting the Ice Ferret through its weaker flank armor. “Contact! One star! Give the orders, Star Captain, and I will join you.”

She’d been practicing, and hard, ever since her Trial; even with the battering of lasers and missiles from three foes she was - just - able to keep her mech on its feet.

If she picked one side, then the other would have a free shot at her mech’s rear, at its weakest armor. Viper A, five medium lasers and a short-range missile pack. Arctic Cheetah A, two streak missile packs, heavier but far more accurate than the older ‘standard’ SRMs. Arctic Cheetah C, six medium lasers. Even the damage from the salvo she’d already taken was devastating; the two Cheetahs between them had stripped nearly two thirds of her armor from that side, and the Viper’s pilot hadn’t missed even one of those shots..

She turned right, stomping on the control pedals in an instinctive effort to shift the Warhawk’s course more quickly, and swinging the torso around on the waist joint.  Both Cheetahs tried to evade, breaking in opposite directions, one across her field of fire and the other trying to keep ahead of her turn. She spread the Warhawk’s arms and fired.

The Arctic Cheetah was a fast, agile mech, ideal for Clan Ice Hellion’s philosophy of speed at all costs, but one of those costs was the armor no light mech had much to spare of to start with, so there was no need for fancy shooting. The center-of-mass pulse lasers bored straight through their armor and into their vitals, dropping both mechs where they stood.

Then the Viper fired, beams raking across her aft. If two of them had hit the same ablative panel on the Warhawk’s back, there would have been a breach - but they didn’t.

Her feet abused the pedals again as she whipped the assault omnimech’s torso back around towards her enemy, one outstretched arm leading the way. Once she had him targeted, it would be-

Only the most skilled pilots could make their mech’s jumpjets do anything but launch it in a ballistic arc, but the Viper’s pilot was one of them. The medium omni skated across the gully’s floor on a cushion of flame, displaced snow and dust billowing in a cloud in its wake until it turned and skidded to a halt, once more squarely in her blind spot.

Even with the intensity of the combat, the chill outside kept the Warhawk’s cockpit relatively cool. The sweat that was pouring down Vera’s face and body was fear, the knowledge that one or two more salvos would see her defeated, her mech destroyed, herself dead or a bondsman of Clan Ice Hellion, of all the possible options.

This time the Viper’s salvo drew blood. Damage alarms screamed as a laser found an already weakened plate and punched through, carving part of the massive assault ‘mech’s cooling array into ruin, but the jump had thrown its pilot’s aim off low, and most of the firepower told against her mech’s left leg, turning its armor into a tattered ruin that a single missile could slip through to ruin an ankle joint.

Practice or not, she wasn’t a good enough pilot to keep her feet through a failure like that. The Warhawk smashed down to the gully floor like an eight-five-ton avalanche, the impact stunning her momentarily senseless and leaving her mouth tasting of blood where she’d bitten her tongue.

“I am Star Captain Van Rood,” her opponent began to say over an open channel as his weapons cooled enough to fire again, the formal beginning of the ritual of taking a warrior as bondsman.

For a moment, she struggled with the controls, then, realizing that there was nothing she could do in time to stop him, she slumped against her straps.

At least she was likely to remain a warrior.

“Of Clan Ice Hellion, and I-”

Star Captain Van Rood’s words were cut off by the lightning-report and static hash of a PPC bolt. On her panorama display, she could see the bar of hard light reach down from the top of the gully wall and bore straight through the back of his omnimech. From the way it seized and twitched as it fell, she could tell that the bolt had gotten a piece of the gyro, whose spinning kinetic energy was now venting into the ‘mech’s interior as the mechanism tore itself apart.

“I am Mechwarrior Kirsten, of Clan Ghost Bear, and I claim Van Rood as my bondsman,” said the pilot of the Viper the bolt had come from. Vera had never been so glad to see Delta Galaxy’s livery.
« Last Edit: 31 October 2014, 16:17:07 by Valles »

Shadow_Wraith

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 1037
Re: Seven
« Reply #22 on: 29 October 2014, 17:16:43 »
nice!  O0  Hope you get inspired to write more!

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #23 on: 31 October 2014, 21:20:19 »
This really got away from me, and I may end up retconning it or something.

Not sure.






ARCADIA, CLAN HOMEWORLDS
JULY 27, 3048

“Do you have somewhere else you need to be?” Vera asked.

Kirsten shook her head. “No,” she said, shifting to settle against her superior’s side. Both young warriors were seated in the same well-padded chair scaled for Elemental use, working on data slates, Kirsten’s balanced on the chair’s arm and Vera’s spread across both their laps. “It is my off cycle, and I am working on the initial sketches for my Great Work.”

Every Warrior of Clan Ghost Bear tried to devote a portion of their life to some extensive project, as a demonstration of their dedication and focus. Vera still had no idea what she intended to do for hers, but she smiled as Kirsten went on teasingly, “I have nothing better to do than to serve as my Galaxy Commander’s concentration aid and supplementary pillow.”

“Other things as well,” Vera answered dryly - they’d become each other’s favorite partners for coupling in the weeks since the trial for Clan Ice Hellion’s Coterie - “which I am certain are nearer to your mind.”

Kirsten looked like butter wouldn’t melt in her mouth, which of course meant that Vera’s guess of her intentions for the evening was exactly correct.

“To my regret, this is work that cannot wait any longer than it must - reviewing and revising Delta’s logistical tail for Operation Revival,” she said. “And no, it is not something that may simply be left to the Technicians. Theirs the work of arranging the details, but first we must know the quantities to bring.”

“...All right,” Kirsten said, looking curious, “I have to ask - How?”

“Comparison,” Vera answered, and tapped one of her dataslates to call attention to it. “This is a copy of the reports sent back by the Wolf Dragoons scouting mission - too vague for much in the way of direct operational planning, but it does include the knowledge that the forces of the Inner Sphere fight extended campaigns and will accept considerable losses in pursuit of their objectives.”

Another slate. “This is a statistical analysis of typical supply usage for conventional trials of possession.”

A third. “This is a historical record of usages by both sides during the Widowmaker and Mongoose Absorptions.”

The fourth. “This is a similar record, from the Annihilation of the Not-Named.”

She held up the last. “So, what I am doing on this one is to pull all of these together to match how much we can expect to lose and use up per world.”

“Which will tell you how much we need to bring,” Kirsten finished. “That makes sense. But do the barbarians not fight differently from the Clans? How much value can you gain from our own records?”

“They do. But we may account for that; by considering their engagements with each other as equivalent to our own baseline numbers for trials - the losses and damage involved in ‘business as usual’. The Annihilation of the Not-Named shows us an upper limit, the baseline a lower - so we take the ratio between each of our three examples and then apply it to the losses we’d expect if we fought directly against the Inner Sphere, the way the Khan had predicted, and we get…”

She highlighted three sets of numbers. “These results.” Another three sets, in a different color. “The simulations I have had the Galaxy running these last few days are aimed at calibrating the amount of difference the quality of our equipment vis-a-vis theirs will make. Summing the results up has been most of what I was doing tonight-”

“Most?” Kirsten said, hopeful and mock-innocent.

“Yes, most, I am almost done,” Vera confirmed. “And in total it looks like we can expect to find ourselves needing to use up a trinary or so for every cluster that engages a Great House regiment.”

Kirsten’s smile had nothing to do with her hopes for coupling, and everything to do with the glory those numbers promised. “I quite like that ratio,” she said.

“I do not,” Vera answered. “A single Great House can field well over a hundred regiments in battlemechs alone, when we will have only fifty clusters in our invasion force and the other clans no better, and the Houses will be operating with far shorter supply lines. Worse, to do so we must bring members of our scientist and technician castes, who will have all the knowledge the Houses will need to reverse the damage done to their industrial bases during the earlier Succession Wars.”

She tossed the dataslates onto the table and rose to pace as frustration and worry possessed her. “If we pause, if we slow, the Houses will marshal their forces and drown us in battlemechs, in vehicles, in infantry. The invasion corridor will run through the territories of two Houses, and alliance will bring in the armies of a third. Four hundred and fifty regiments, at least. At least. And a thousand worlds - a thousand! - waiting to build more to face us.” Vera whirled to face Kirsten, still seated in the armchair. “And we will invade with two hundred clusters, and a year’s delay on our supplies, and only the Homeworlds to build those with.”

She took a breath and let it out, then spoke flatly. “The Clans of Kerensky cannot win a long war with the Inner Sphere. If the Great Houses deny their defeat - if the worlds we capture rise against the strangers, the invaders - if the House Lords hold to their will and fight on… Then we will be as caught in a quagmire as the Hellions were at Pike Lake.”

Kirsten looked stunned, and perhaps a little worried for Vera’s sanity, but she managed to ask a productive question anyway. “You would have raised more objections if you did not have a plan to win through anyway.”

Vera laughed, a harsh, cawing sound that was half sob. “My plan? My plan was to retire and become a Scientist. But Bol has one that is more useful. To build the tools to built the tools they will need, the Inner Sphere will need several years - three, five, seven. The plan is, to become ilClan, and quickly, and to call forward all of the Clans and all of their forces before the Sphere can wake to its danger. The plan is to bet everything on the earliest throw we can manage - to jump through empty space to Terra without occupying any more worlds than we must.”

Her grin was a death’s head. “The plan has been rejected by both Khans. And so here I sit with you, agonizing over what to take with us when I know, I know!” she shouted the word, “that it will not be enough. And if I challenge them, if I refuse, then they will meet me unaugmented - you may recall that saKhan DelVillar is an Elemental, yes? - and I will accomplish nothing.”

Kirsten looked at her, then sighed and set her own datapad aside as she rose. “Do you know what you need to do?” she asked.

“What?”

The taller warrior walked over and folded her ranting commander into a hug. “You need to relax. Even if all of your fears are right, agonizing about them will accomplish nothing except to ruin your fitness.”

Vera sighed and slumped against her, but before either of them could say anything more, the comlinks clipped to their codices rang - in unison.

They pulled apart, blinking at each other in automatic unison, and opened the messages.

“Meeting with Laurie Tseng…” Vera mused. Laurie Tseng was the head of the Tseng Bloodhouse, to which both Vera and Kirsten belonged.

“The same for me,” Kirsten said.

They met each other’s eyes and spoke in unison, the previous discussion completely forgotten. “Bloodname.”
« Last Edit: 15 November 2014, 21:23:13 by Valles »

Chris OFarrell

  • Warrant Officer
  • *
  • Posts: 605
Re: Seven
« Reply #24 on: 01 November 2014, 16:43:57 »
Seems to be making quite a few assumptions without any real evidence about the Inner Spheres current technology and industrial levels ... but none the less she is actually thinking.

Which is cool :)

Still very interesting!
"I, the Baron of Strang, care not for your new names. Clans? Jade Falcons? I call you by your true name: Scum of the Star League, traitors of free will, persecutors of the Periphery come back to lord it over freedom-loving people. Come ahead, you steel-eyed robots! Come ahead and taste what a million like-minded people think of you and your damn Clans!"

-Baron Stepan Von Strang

SulliMike23

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 1057
  • The Brotherhood will expand in the Inner Sphere!
Re: Seven
« Reply #25 on: 01 November 2014, 17:40:14 »
Got an error. The Burrocks weren't absorbed until 3058. That's 10 years later.

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #26 on: 01 November 2014, 18:11:21 »
*blinks*

*checks*

*swears tiredly*

Fortunately, this one is easy enough to edit out. *goes to do so*

Valles

  • Master Sergeant
  • *
  • Posts: 271
Re: Seven
« Reply #27 on: 01 November 2014, 22:08:28 »
ARCADIA, CLAN HOMEWORLDS
AUGUST 16, 3048

The first round hadn't been a problem. She'd won the coins, and hunted augmented. The Oathmaster had ruled that her Warhawk was close enough to equal to her opponent's Gargoyle that neither need switch. and he had chosen a close, tightpacked jungle as their field of combat, hoping to neutralize her advantage of accuracy by shortening the ranges. Since she'd still been able to concentrate her fire on just one plate of armor, she hadn't even needed to kill him.

Now she stood, watching as her coin and that of the glaring warrior across from her raced around the narrowing circumference of the funnel well between them, their edges on the metal surface making a ringing whirr that roared as loud in her ears as her pulse or tightly controlled breathing.

Eventually, with a clatter, the coins met and tumbled down out of sight. The Oathmaster bent and retrieved them, holding up...

His.

Only the second round, and already she faced the strong probability of being eliminated as he homed in on her weakness in hand-to-hand. Everyone knew it, just as they knew-

"I will hunt augmented," the voice of a young man snarled, and she snapped her gaze up to his face. He was glaring at her, eyes sparking with contempt and thwarted pride, and she realized that he was one of those former ristars that resented her for upstaging them, that believed her achievement was nothing more than pure luck.

She smiled into his hatred, an expression of open relief that was sure to goad him to a greater fury with its implied dismissal, as the Oathmaster asked her, "Galaxy Commander Vera Ghost Bear, where will you be hunted?"

"On the Trial Grounds of this base," she answered, grinning. "In one hour."

Just long enough to have the techs change their Omnimechs' configurations.

From the ugly look on his handsome face, Star Colonel Malek Ghost Bear was looking forward to it.

By the time they had reached the appointed hour, she knew why - he piloted a Dire Wolf, the largest and most powerful Omnimech ever designed, as well protected as possible and capable of devoting over half of its hundred-ton weight to the deadliest weapons the Scientist Caste could devise.

Waiting for the 'go' signal from the proctors, she brought up a visual magnification of his machine, the bulbous cockpit pod in its angular armored shroud, the thick reverse-joined legs, the bundled weapon on its arm mounts. Malek hadn't chosen one of the standard configurations - he'd gone with something different, and she studied the layout. That was a gauss rifle, that was a particle cannon muzzle... two laser lenses glinting below those, probably mediums of some sort, and then another two on the torso that supported the arm. Inside the lasers' range, he'd have nearly half-again her potential firepower, and even outside their reach, about three-quarters...

From that side. The other arm and torso mounted exactly the same array - half again her long-range firepower. Waste heat from the energy weapons, and from the reactor as it strained to meet their power demands, would keep him from using the lasers and the PPCs at the same time, but the gauss rifles were fed by capacitor banks and ran ice-cold; his close in firepower would be literally double hers.

Vera smiled, since the caveat was, 'if he could hit her with it'.

Her screens flashed the 'go' signal, and she pushed her Warhawk into motion, settling her aiming pip onto her target and waiting for the range to drop within the reach of her lasers' focusing optics. PPCs and gauss rifles had longer effective ranges than the heavy pulse lasers she was using, and Malek rippled off a four-shot salvo before she reached her own range. Both gauss rifles missed; both PPC bolts cratered uselessly at different armor plates - and then she was in range.

She fired, the brief emerald flare of the short-duration pulse lasers savaging the armor of the Dire Wolf's left arm and boring straight through to hit the still-charging capacitors of the gauss rifle mounted there. The capacitor banks, filled with power trickled from the Dire Wolf's fusion reactor, shorted out in a spectacular flare of white that finished the job of turning the entire weapon-filled block of the arm into a slag-dripping, utterly harmless lump.

There was no need to kill him.

That didn't make entering the range of his remaining medium lasers a good idea; Vera arced the Warhawk's course around to one side, angling away and rotating the torso to compensate and keep on target.

He fired again; this time it was the PPC that missed and the gauss rifle that hit, but again the shot did nothing but smash away armor.

She fired again, ten-centimeter laser fire carrying away most of his remaining arm's armor and a couple of the energy weapons, but this time missing the gauss rifle's capacitors.

This time his shot, the last she'd let him fire, told, bored through weakened armor plate to smash the shielded target-assistance hardware that was the Warhawk's distinguishing trait to so much scrap, and alarms blatted as the main computer reported the loss.

Vera smiled anyway. The targeting computer was helpful, and the reason she'd chosen a Warhawk, but she didn't need it. Another flare of laser fire amputated what was left of the Dire Wolf's right arm, and with it every long-range weapon Malak had left, and bored through the mounting ring of its shoulder to gore Malak’s entire starboard torso..

She keyed her communications line. "Malak, you know that you will not be able to bring your lasers within range."

"I can still crush you," Malak shouted back, nearly incoherent with fury, and gave a roar that was as near as a human throat could come to a ghost bear's.

His Dire Wolf was lumbering across the field towards her, a dignified pace as close as the massive machine could come to a run.

She sheared further off, opening the range again since her Warhawk was the faster machine, and ignored his bellowed accusation of cowardice until she’d reached the limits of the pulse lasers’ range.

Then she turned back and fired, bursts of emerald light flaring like suns even through her screens’ dimming effect as the armor burned and ran molten yellow-white under the energy weapons’ effect. Malak roared again over the communication line.

There was no need to kill him, although if he was really such a fool as she’d seen, it might have been better to.

Her lasers cycled again just before he came into range, and tore gaping rents in the Dire Wolf’s reactor shielding as they rampaged through the lost gauss rifles’ ammo bin and the last two weapons mounted on the hundred ton omnimech.

She cut the com line on Malak’s anguished, frustrated howl as his ‘mech shut down beneath him, switching it to the field manager’s frequency. “It is over. Malak is defeated,” she said.

“Vera Ghost Bear is victorious,” the Oathmaster answered. “I bear witness.”

Red Pins

  • Major
  • *
  • Posts: 4001
  • Inspiration+Creativity=Insanity
Re: Seven
« Reply #28 on: 02 November 2014, 00:04:57 »
Tagged.
...Visit the Legacy Cluster...
The New Clans:Volume One
Clan Devil Wasp * Clan Carnoraptor * Clan Frost Ape * Clan Surf Dragon * Clan Tundra Leopard
Work-in-progress; The Blake Threat File
Now with MORE GROGNARD!  ...I think I'm done.  I've played long enough to earn a pension, fer cryin' out loud!  IlClan and out in <REDACTED>!
TRO: 3176 Hegemony Refits - the 30-day wonder

drakensis

  • Lieutenant
  • *
  • Posts: 1477
Re: Seven
« Reply #29 on: 02 November 2014, 06:10:52 »
Ouch. That's the problem with having so many weapons in only 1 or 2 locations. One crit can disarm you.
"It's national writing month, not national writing week and a half you jerk" - Consequences, 9th November 2018