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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #30 on: 16 January 2018, 07:41:42 »
Dangerous game Vaughn is playing there.

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #31 on: 16 January 2018, 13:40:10 »
Enjoying this story, thank you!

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #32 on: 16 January 2018, 18:31:07 »
Karen thought she was going for a quiet drink. Dubble_g was not going to let that happen.
Nice twist. O0
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #33 on: 16 January 2018, 19:44:06 »
Nice story. Hope to see more soon!
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #34 on: 17 January 2018, 01:29:59 »
Asking for her name was brilliant
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #35 on: 17 January 2018, 06:54:23 »
Thanks to everyone who commented, great we have such a supportive community, and it's nice to see some new names.

If anyone's still playing the spot-the-Western references, McCarty (real person) and Bishop (movie character) both qualify ... unless we're just gonna let DOC_Agren sweep this?
 
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EIGHT
Outside Kuwabatake City


The Combine civilian guidance corpsman seated opposite watched her expressionlessly. His candy-cane striped uniform made her want to giggle. His grim face and the sonic stunner across his lap advised against it.

The local constabulary had arrived shortly after Karen had spoken with the woman, the mother of the murdered girl, probably fast enough that the crowd wouldn’t have been able to kill her or Vaughn, probably slow enough that there would have been stitches, if not crutches, in her future. She wondered if that had been deliberate; certainly, the cops had seemed almost disappointed at the lack of violence that greeted them when they’d come charging into the izakaya.

The invitation for a ride back to the Fort had been polite, generous, and clearly impossible to refuse. So here she was, bouncing along in the windowless rear compartment of a police van that gave every impression of having zero suspension, knees inches from those of the stony-faced guard opposite, wondering if they really were going back to the Fort, or to an unmarked grave instead. Vaughn, sitting next to her, spent the whole ride staring at his feet.

The corpsman leaned forward. “I watched your fight,” he said abruptly. “Awano no Akuma.”

Well, this could go one of two ways, she thought. “Which one?”

“All.” He smiled, revealing a mouth full of brilliant white teeth, but his eyes remained hard. “You’re good, very good, maybe the best of the Gunslingers.”

“Unity, I hope that isn’t a pick-up line.” Beside her, Vaughn covered his snort by feigning a coughing fit.

Kensei is better. I hope he kills you.” He gave a single, firm nod. “Jekk Allah jrid.”

Karen tensed, unsure if the last comment had been a threat, comment, question or death sentence.

The van suddenly juddered to a halt. This was it, she thought. A bullet in the head. Damned if she’d go without a fight. The corpsman stood, but then brushed past her without a word, swung open one of the doors at the back of the van, jumped down and stood looking at her and Vaughn expectantly.

“Well?” the man asked, impatient.

Karen stood slowly, shuffled out the van and leapt lightly down onto the dusty plain outside. She turned around and saw the looming gates of Fort Hebron. She felt a surge of relief, tempered when she saw Major Wallach, arms crossed, along with a platoon of heavily-armed infantry nervously fingering auto grenade launchers and laser pulse rifles.

“I thought you were going to kill us,” she admitted to the corpsman.

He jerked his head back and looked at her askance. “Whatever for?” He tapped his temple.

“Honor. Revenge. Samurai stuff. The usual.”

“You laugh, Mechwarrior Graham, but look around you. Look at this bare rock. The Combine is poor, MechWarrior Graham, always has been, always will be. We are never, ever going to be as rich as the Hegemony or Commonwealth. We embrace the Japanese culture because it’s the culture of a people who have nothing. We have rock gardens not because of Zen Buddhism, but because nothing grows in our gardens but rocks. We eat fish raw because we can’t afford fuel for a fire. We sleep on the floor because we don’t have money for a bed. And we defend our honor because it’s all we have.” He seemed almost sad, Karen thought. “You may think you are the ones being threatened,” he said. “You are wrong. It is we who are under attack. By your treaties, your merchants, your holo-vids, your empty promises of liberty, brotherhood and equality. We are fighting back the only way we know how.”

He bowed slightly, then extended a hand. Karen shook it, once. “Die well,” he said.

“Thanks, uh, you too,” she replied unthinking. Then winced a little. Phrasing, Karen, phrasing.

The man grabbed onto the open van door, half-hauled himself back up, then paused and looked down at Karen. “You were not the only strangers in town tonight,” he said. “Others, who sounded like Luthien and smelled like soldiers. Be careful tomorrow, Devil of Awano.” He stepped into the van, and slammed the door behind him. Soon, the police van was bouncing back down the road towards Kuwabatake, leaving Karen and Vaughn coughing it its dusty residue.

“What was that all about?” Vaughn asked her. “Does he want you dead or not?”

“Search me,” Karen spat, trying to get the taste of dust from her mouth. Wiped it with the back of her hand. “Like he wants me dead, but only in a fair fight? I dunno, Captain, you think this samurai BS is all a con by the Kurita family to keep people in line, or are people genuinely looking for an identity?”

It was Vaughn’s turn to shrug. “Bit of both, I suppose.” Karen looked over at him, as he frowningly watched the rapidly-disappearing police van. His usual cement-hard hair was disheveled after the night’s adventure, his chin darkened by a day’s growth of stubble. A better look for him, she thought. He looked back at her, his eyes met hers, then slid to look at something past her shoulder. “If you want a second opinion on that, here comes Wallach. Looking mighty pleased with himself.”

Karen turned to find, for the second time that night, someone bearing down on her with determined strides. Only, instead of rage, Major Wallach seemed to be riding on a cloud of pure satisfaction. “Off-based without leave, Lieutenant?”

“Don’t worry sir, we didn’t murder anyone this time.”

That took the edge off his smile. Wallach looked sharply at Vaughn, who spectacularly failed to look innocent. Wallach tried again, “When the Colonel hears about this—”

“She will do nothing, because the order for my transfer here came straight from the 14th Army HQ on Dieron, Major, and she’s not about to commit career suicide over this.” Karen had had enough of Wallach’s needling, his shallow pride and bloodthirsty need to salve it. She ignored him and began to march toward the Fort’s gates.

She’d hoped he’d explode. Call her a loose cannon, maybe, threaten to court martial her, better yet challenge her to a duel: she'd be ready this time. Make himself look like an ass in front of the regiment. Instead, there was only silence, broken by the crunch of her boots in the sand as she walked through the security platoon, now drawn up on either side like a sullen honor guard.

She glanced back, once, just before she passed under the gates. And found Major Wallach watching her, coldly. Calculating.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #36 on: 17 January 2018, 22:52:44 »
Very nice byplay with the guard.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #37 on: 17 January 2018, 23:26:56 »
So far so good

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #38 on: 18 January 2018, 09:07:09 »
NINE
Fort Hebron
31 October 2689


Karen had tried to talk to Steinfeld about the two astechs. She had. She’s tried, and been shot down immediately.

“Yes, yes, very sad, a terrible tragedy. There is no way the SLDF is going to hand over anybody to those backwards barbarians, Lieutenant. No way in hell,” Steinfeld had raged. “Now, I don’t care if your transfer was signed by First-malking-Lord Michael-malking-Cameron himself, while you are here you are under my command, and I am commanding you to accept this madman’s challenge and put a stop to it.”

Karen had stood there, in the conference room where she’d first met Colonel Steinfeld, mouth half-open, objections half-formed.

“If I hear one more ‘but’ out of you Lieutenant, I’ll take Wallach up on his offer and just nuke the bastard. So do not push your luck. Now shut that cake-hole of yours and get to your ’Mech,” Steinfeld’s words rolled straight over Karen’s conscience. “That. Is. An. Order.”

It was an order. She got to her ’Mech.

#

From her perch ten meters up in Blondie’s cockpit, Karen watched the Goliath’s approach from across the plain, an indistinct metallic beetle that gradually grew features as it grew closer. Forty-eight hours was just over a day on Oniwaka. The sun was higher than the first time she’d met the Rooster, the shadows a little shorter, almost truncated. Cut short.

Two unmanned drones circled overhead like vultures. Vaughn’s work again. Steinfeld had wanted to ship him back to Awano IV after their midnight adventure, but there hadn’t been time before the duel. It was almost strangely comforting, knowing he was watching. Hell, he was just about the only friend she had here.

#

In the command center, Colonel Steinfeld leaned back in her chair as she watched the ronin’s ’Mech draw closer. She frowned as she heard the rising tide of murmurs running through the room, techs and specialists too distracted by the legend on the screens to pay attention to their own terminals.

“Keep a lid on it people,” she barked.

She chewed her lip in thought as she watched the viewscreens. Half-hoping the arrogant Gunslinger would get her ass handed to her. Half-hoping Karen would have this Rooster for breakfast. But mostly hoping she’d come out of it looking good either way.

“I want every BattleMech prepped and ready,” she added. “Let’s just see those Snakes try something.”

#

The Goliath crunched to a halt in the same position as before. A light on Karen’s comm panel flickered to indicate an incoming message. She punched a button to open the channel.

“MechWarrior Graham.” He sounded calmer, more in control.

“MechWarrior Tachimori,” she replied.

A pause. The Goliath standing perfectly still. Finally, “Who gave you that name?”

“I met her.”

“Who?”

“The mother of the girl. Nozomi Tachimori.” It was important to say her name. “Your mother, MechWarrior Tachimori. Told her I was sorry. Sorry for what happened to Nozomi.”

There was a grunt at the other end of the line, the sound of air being sucked in. Like someone gut-punched. “And?”

“And I said that I would seek justice, for her daughter, for your sister. For Nozomi Tachimori. I will see that the two men face court-martial, and if found guilty—”

Harsh laughter broke across the crest of her words. “Ah, Karen-chan, Karen-chan. You almost had me there. If found guilty? If? The SLDF will never allow that, and for all your fame, you haven’t the power to force them. This is the only justice you or I will ever see.”

She’s suspected it would be hopeless. They were all like this moon, traveling in inevitable circles, shackled by duty and honor as surely as the moon was by gravity, faces always towards the god of war. Still, she’d tried. She would keep her promise, too, if she lived. “So what, walk ten paces, turn and draw?”

“If you like. Ready when you are.”

A beeping from her sensors distracted her. She glanced down. Eyes widened. “Tachimori,” she said sharply. “What the hell is that?”

#

Colonel Steinfeld pushed herself out of her seat. “What the hell is that?”

Alarms were ringing in the control room. On the monitors, red icons began erupting across the horizon like ugly red blisters, tagged with sensor profiles, tonnage and range numbers that were steadily dwindling.

A sensor tech twisted to look back at her. “Multiple BattleMech signatures, sir. They’re coming from the city, headed straight for Lieutenant Graham.”

“How many?”

“Forty-six, sir. Multiple models and weight classes. Pinging them, but no IFF signals.”

Steinfeld balled her hands into fists. “An ambush? Those malking Snakes!” She whirled on the closest commtech. “Show them our teeth. I want every gun, every cannon, every missile battery ready. Air cavalry squadron on the deck. Deploy Able battalion in front of the gates, have Bravo and Charlie standing by. Signal XIV Corps headquarters, unidentified Combine forces inbound.

"And get me a channel to whoever is in those ’Mechs.”

#

“Friends of yours?” Karen counted the icons. Forty-six. Of course, 46 plus Tachimori, 47. For the 47 ronin. And she had thought she was the one putting on a performance.

“No,” his reply came after a long pause, hesitant, uncertain. “I have no idea who they are. They have signaled me that they are patriots, but provided no further identification. I realize trust is in short supply now, but please believe me. I want justice, yes, but I will win it with honor, by my own hand.”

“I believe you,” Karen replied. The unidentified Mechs were coming into visual range now, specter shapes kicking up a wall of dust behind them. “Nobody back in the Fort will, though. Right now, they are going to think they are facing an imminent attack and will be scrambling everything they have. One wrong move from either of us and this whole thing is going to get a lot messier than one murdered girl. This is how wars get started, Tachimori-san.”

“Then back down. Surrender, admit your guilt, yours and that of the SLDF.”

“Can’t do that. I have my duty.” At maximum magnification, she could see the lead machines now. The blocky profile of a new 80-ton Awesome. An Orion on one side, a Thunderbolt on the other. Painted in stereotypical ronin style, with mismatched camo schemes and slathered with Japanese slogans, but no way did ronin stumble upon this much concentrated firepower. “You’re being used to provoke an incident, Tachimori-san. Stand down, now. Back off.”

“Can’t do that, Graham-san,” he echoed. “I have my honor.”

#

“This is Colonel Hayley Steinfeld, commanding the 149th Hussar Regiment. Halt and identify yourselves or we will open fire.”

“We know who you are, Steinfeld.” The lead MechWarrior kept his cockpit camera off; all they had was the voice, male, Luthien-accented, sneering. “We are here to ensure nobody interferes with the duel between the Kensei and the assassin Karen Graham. We know you have brought stealth technology to Oniwaka. We will be on the lookout for any tricks.”

“How the hell do they know about that?” Steinfeld slapped the top of the comp panel with her palm. “Wallach’s stunt, I’ll bet.” She nodded to the commtech to put her on again. “You’re damn right nobody is going to interfere with that duel. I’m sending out a battalion. You make any threatening moves and we will respond with total, overwhelming force. That’s a promise, Kenji or whoever the hell you are.”

Steinfeld fanned her hand across her neck, signaling the commtech to cut the channel. She looked around the control room. Speaking of stealth tech, where the hell was Wallach?

#

“Seems I am not the only one with unexpected guests, Graham-san.”

Karen swore to herself as she watched the Star League BattleMechs fan out behind her from the Fort gates, ranks of Lancelots and Thugs and Wyverns. She briefly fought the impulse to say ‘I told you so.’ Briefly. Then gave in. “I told you they’d react, Tachimori-san.” Then she switched to the Hussar channel instead. “This is Angel One. This is not helping, guys. This is between me and the Rooster.”

“This is Major Buchholz. We’ll make sure it stays between you two.”

“With respect sir, the risk of—”

“With respect, Lieutenant, my orders are clear. As are yours.”

Karen’s external mics picked up the sound of a dozen Lancelots raising their laser-cannon arms into firing position, locking into place with a metallic clang one after another in well-drilled sequence, like the hammer of a revolver coming down on each chamber.

#

“Major Buchholz reports Able battalion in position,” said a commtech. “Bravo standing by. Charlie standing by, but nobody has seen Major Wallach.”

Colonel Steinfeld’s brow furrowed. “What the hell do you mean, nobody’s seen him?”

“Just that, sir,” he answered helplessly. “He’s not in his quarters, not in the ready room. His Executioner is missing from the ’Mech bay, too.”

“His—” Steinfeld felt a sudden premonition, her blood running cold. “That malking idiot. Get me Buchholz, NOW—”

#

“Shit,” muttered Karen to herself. Time to swallow her pride. She raised the Phoenix Hawk’s arms skyward, so they wouldn’t be pointed at any other ’Mech, and reversed throttle, walking slowly backwards. They wouldn’t court-martial her for refusing to fight, she was pretty sure, not with her fame, not in this situation. Reassigning her to the ass-end of the Periphery, now, that seemed a lot more likely.

Let the Combine call it a victory, let them say she backed down. Better than the alternative.

“Alright, Tachimori-san, if you can’t see how crazy this is, I can.” Using the external loudspeakers, hoping Vaughn’s drones would get every word. “Maybe some other time, when we can find a little privacy.”

A nice touch, she thought. Just the right tone of insouciance.

They might get out of this in one piece.

She didn’t see the three laser beams that slammed into Blondie’s chest.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #39 on: 18 January 2018, 11:02:25 »
"And when the knight felt him stung, he looked down and saw the adder, and then he drew his sword to slay the adder, and thought of none other harm. And when the host on both parties saw that sword drawn, then they blew beams, trumpets, and horns, and shouted grimly. And so both hosts dressed them together."

But this is an Exterminator, not an Adder.

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #40 on: 18 January 2018, 18:37:43 »
Well 3 medium lasers won't take out a Phoenix-Hawk but this looks like an all in bar brawl coming up.
I hope someone remembered the popcorn.
Seriously what was Wallach thinking.
Battleroms will clearly show a stealth mech fired leave the SL looking very bad. O0
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #41 on: 18 January 2018, 18:46:37 »
Seriously what was Wallach thinking.
He wasn't thinking...

Now Colonel Steinfeld knows it an idiot and well this is going to be a mess
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #42 on: 19 January 2018, 07:30:02 »
Blah blah blah incoming--skip to the stars if you'd rather not read!

@Kidd: Le Morte d'Arthur! Great quote. I like the point that Arthur was always doomed to fail because he was trying to impose peace at the point of the sword--it was just another form of might makes right. Karen even refers to that when she talks about the Reunification War.

@snakespinner & DOC_Agren: Yes, of course, it's Wallach that wasn't thinking. Not the writer at all. Nothing to see here folks, move along. *innocent whistling*

Almost done here--just today & tomorrow. Two more stories on deck after this that I'm super-very-excited to share.

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“Graham is hit!”

“WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?”

“Didn’t see anything!”

“Triple lasers, must have been that Thunderbolt.”

“First company, target that ’Mech.”

Eye-searing laser fire flared again, this time stabbing into the Goliath’s front armor.

“WHO IS FIRING?”

The ronin reacting now, weapon arms coming up, missile bay doors swinging open.

“Being painted by targeting radar.”

“What are we waiting for?”

“Buchholz this is Stein—”

“FIRE!”

#

Karen Graham found herself in the eye of a hurricane of laser beams, particle cannon bolts and missile trails. The League and Combine BattleMechs were drawn up in facing lines, unleashing fury at point-blank range, like Napoleonic armies, filling her viewscreen with a killing incandescence, flashing strobe lights of murder.

The first laser burst had knocked her Phoenix Hawk to one knee. She stood it upright again, and was immediately hit by half a dozen projectiles and energy beams, she couldn’t even tell what or whose, great sheets of armor blown off like roof tiles in a gale.

Directly in front of her, Tachimori’s Goliath rocked as a laser barrage slammed into his rear armor. Rear, she noted, not front. Not the side facing the League. Lasers carving out of thin air.

Wallach.

Karen tried raising Major Buchholz. “It was Wallach,” she screamed into the comm. “IT WAS WALLACH.” Her comm cut out as Buchholz locked her out of the battalion channel.

In the middle of the maelstrom, Tachimori was swinging around, searching for his opponent, particle cannon firing blind, scorching lines of fused glass across the plain. An invisible fusillade rocked the Goliath again.

Tachimori was an enemy. He’d killed six men. Murdered them, like Wallach said. Ah, but men he'd felt were covering up his sister's murder. Half of her urged her to leave him to Wallach, wash her hands of the whole sorry, stinking mess. Tachimori was a killer—but—Tachimori was honorable, and only wanted justice for his sister. Wallach was attempting an assassination—but—Wallach was a superior officer, and only wanted to avenge his men. Wallach would start a war. The Combine had tried to provoke one.

It was all tangled and she’d lost the thread.

She watched the Goliath whirling in impotent fury, then stagger under yet another salvo. Watched the ground carefully, saw where dust was being kicked up by invisible feet. A slight shimmer as Wallach’s Exterminator moved. Poor damn kid didn’t stand a chance.

Oh, hell.

No communications channel. No way to signal. Maybe there was one way to get everyone’s attention though.

Karen stamped down on her jump pedals, lifting the Phoenix Hawk high over the battlefield. Angling towards the Goliath.

All eyes on her now. Making her the target of the dozen closest Combine BattleMechs. A flight of missiles cratered her lower torso, then a line of autocannon fire stitched holes up the right side before smacking into the head. A hole blew out in the side of Karen’s cockpit and something white-hot stabbed into her abdomen. Gritting her teeth against the pain.

Soaring high overhead. A show-off move. Flashy, not practical.

Three particle cannon bolts tore into the Phoenix Hawk’s right hip, melting armor, myomer and titanium bone, tearing the leg loose from the body. Karen screamed, wrenching the yokes to prevent herself from tumbling as the BattleMech’s center of gravity shifted wildly. Keeping Blondie upright, on course. Hurtling down now, half-burning. Flames everywhere. Like a fiery angel.

Crashing down into the blurred shadow of Wallach’s Exterminator.

The left leg slammed into a shoulder, then glanced off, while the jagged stump of the right actually worked in her favor, stabbing into back armor and lodging there, suddenly jack-knifing the Phoenix Hawk at the waist, snapping torso forward as 45 tons of tumbling metal and machinery tried to come to a halt in less than a meter. Karen’s five-point harness snapped and her helmet cracked against the ferroglass canopy. The world swam in black and red blotches.

The Exterminator’s chameleon shield stuttered and failed in static patches, twitching in and out of visibility, the shattered hulk of Blondie still draped across its back.

League and Combine MechWarriors stopped, stunned as a BattleMech blinked into existence before their eyes. Sudden silence fell across the battlefield.

Wallach twisted the torso back and forth violently, shaking Karen’s ’Mech loose. It tumbled to the ground and lay there, crippled and broken. Wallach raised both arms, aiming down at her cockpit. Karen could only watch, winded and breathless from the impact, vision blurred as blood trickled down her forehead.

A blue bolt took Wallach low in the back.

The Exterminator whirled. A second bolt slammed into the side of its chest, skewing it sideways. It straightened, just in time for a third blast to take it full in the chest, driving it to its knees.

The Goliath stalked forward.

The Exterminator found its feet, launched itself straight at Tachimori, lasers blazing.

The fourth particle cannon bolt pierced straight through the front ferroglass, blowing out the back of the ’Mech’s head in a bloodstained shower of metal debris. The Exterminator swayed a moment, then toppled over forward.

#

Karen found she could breathe again. She pushed back her helmet, wiping the blood from her face with the back of her hand. The gas giant Hachiman filled her vision, looking down on her silently. With approval, she hoped.

A dark shadow fell across the cockpit, blocking out the view. “Nice shooting, MechWarrior Tachimori,” she said through the loudspeakers. “Hope you’ll take that rain check. Blondie here seems to be missing a couple of pieces here and there. Like, you know, legs.”

“It’s alright … MechWarrior Graham,” Tachimori replied, wearily. “There won’t be any … duels. Not … anymore.”

The lead ronin Awesome stepped into the edge of her view, particle cannon aimed at her. The Goliath shifted, coming between the two. The Awesome took another step, then halted as the Goliath blasted a crater at its feet.

“Saving my life? Don’t get soft on me now.”

“This ends today. I got … what I wanted.”

Karen pushed herself slowly, painfully up out of the command couch, and craned her head to look through the spider-web cracked ferroglass. Saw Wallach’s BattleMech on the ground, round ragged hole punched straight through the head. “Yeah. I guess you did.” Tachimori had known he’d never get the two astechs, never get an apology or an investigation, Karen realized. He’d just clung to his honor and sought revenge, vigilante justice, revenge on those who let it happen, on the system, on those who wanted his sister swept under a rug. Men like Wallach.

The ronin were pulling back, she saw, their excuse for war gone as Tachimori turned on them.

She tried to laugh but that made something hurt, down in her stomach, and she wasn’t sure she wanted to look at see what it was just yet. “Well, Tachimori, what comes next?”

There was no answer.

“Turn this around, do something that would make your sister proud of you.”

Tachimori said nothing.

Karen turned back to peer up at the ’Mech standing over hers. Taking it all in again, the way she had done, back on the Drifter, all that time ago. The bulky, almost equine legs. The sloped armor of the front glacis and turret.

Two blistering, angry red holes in the side of the cockpit.

Karen remembered Wallach’s last salvo, just before he’d died. Hitting the Goliath like a sling stone. “Tachimori?” she called. Threw off her neurohelmet, hit the manual release on the cockpit hatch. “Tachimori?” Scrambling out onto Blondie’s chest, just below the Goliath. “Tachimori!”

The Goliath’s two front legs folded slowly, almost gracefully, pitching it face-first into the ground.

Karen leapt down from Blondie, kicking up plumes of dust as she sprinted for the ’Mech.

A suitcase-sized hoverdrone suddenly dropped right in front of her face, bringing her up short. “Karen, it’s too late.” She recognized Vaughn’s voice even through the drone’s tinny little speaker. “He’s gone. There’s nothing you can do.”

Billowing smoke from Blondie tangled about her, stung her eyes.

She tried to wipe away the tears with the balls of her hands. Standing alone, in the wreckage left behind.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #43 on: 19 January 2018, 07:49:01 »
Seppuku or death from injuries?
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #44 on: 19 January 2018, 16:27:20 »
Great ending.
I don't think the SLDF will ever forgive Wallach for using the Exterminator like that. O0
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #45 on: 19 January 2018, 23:07:23 »
The Coordinator will love to see that footage.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #46 on: 20 January 2018, 05:58:23 »
Ah but of course... and now what will Karen do?

P.s. Exterminator, mate... not Executioner O0

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #47 on: 20 January 2018, 07:21:34 »
@ Sharpnel: Injuries, mate. Having him do a seppuku when he feels his life is over would have been an interesting choice, but I think I'd have walked through that scene rather than have it just happen off-camera, as it were.

@ Kidd: Dammit, yes, you're right. When I first started writing, I put Executioner, then realized the mistake and went back and corrected. Looks like my brain really wanted it to be an Executioner. Anybody spot the grognard who never played anything but 3025/Intro tech?

Winding up withe the epilogue today--bit of black humor. Like I said, two more stories to come after this...

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EPILOGUE

A heavily edited version of the ‘duel’ between Lieutenant Karen Graham and MechWarrior Katsu Tachimori briefly became the most-watched holovid in the Inner Sphere. Audiences particularly appreciated the shots of Graham dashing across the desert sand in an attempt to save her doomed rival. Fort Hebron was abandoned, and both sides were more than happy to sweep the rest of the affair under the rug.

Lieutenant Karen Graham was promoted to Captain and promptly transferred to the 2nd Mechanized Infantry Division (The Red Steel Guards), stationed in the Magistracy of Canopus. Her fame was soon eclipsed by that of later Gunslingers.

Captain Harry Vaughn resigned his commission in 2691 and entered the private-sector entertainment industry, where he achieved a degree of fame as the producer for a number of holo-vid serials based on the First Hidden War, notably “Autocannonsmoke”, “The Lone Rasalhaguian” and “Lonesome Davion.”

The SLDF later announced Major Harmon Wallach had died in a VTOL crash.

Colonel Hayley Steinfeld was rotated back to Terra, where she served in a number of administrative functions before taking early retirement and moving to Las Vegas.

The two astechs faced an XIV Corps tribunal and received dishonorable discharges. The tribunal ruled there was insufficient evidence to convict them of the more serious kidnapping, rape and murder charges. Both men died soon thereafter, one in a hit-and-run car accident, the other from apparently ingesting radioactive polonium.

The dueling between the Combine and the Star League forces, later known as the First Hidden War, continued for the next 50 years before trailing off during the reign of Simon Cameron, effectively ending in a draw.

The 149th Hussar Regiment was annihilated almost a century later during the liberation of Terra, a campaign which heralded the collapse of the Star League and the beginning of almost four centuries of endless warfare.

The sword never departed their Houses.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #48 on: 20 January 2018, 07:45:58 »
*applause*
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #49 on: 27 January 2018, 09:34:21 »
Well done


so what is next
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #50 on: 27 January 2018, 13:58:18 »
For The Gunslingers...

Dance hall girls were the evening treat
Empty cartridges and blood lined the gutters of the street
Men were shot down for the sake of fun
Or just to hear the noise of their 44 guns

Now my widow, she weeps by my grave
Tears flow free for her man she couldn't save
Shot down in cold blood by a gun that carried fame
All for a useless and no good worthless claim

And there's fire on the mountain
Lightening in the air
Gold in them hills
and it's waiting for me there


Songwriter: George McCorkle
Fire On The Mountain lyrics © Spirit Music Group
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #51 on: 27 January 2018, 21:51:32 »
@ Sir Chaos: Thanks for reading!

@ DOC_Agren: New thread is now underway: Here. Back on my Dyubichev BS because I figured if there's one thing pop culture needs more than anything right now, IT'S ONE MORE PREQUEL!

@ Easy: For some reason the lyrics display in super-micro font (like, I think it's called Paramecium Narrow), so now I feel like I'm being serenaded by an inch-high country singer and his toothpick guitar. Which is a visual image I didn't know I needed until now.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #52 on: 29 January 2018, 15:02:24 »
intresting ending to the story and thanks for sharing. nice to see the wrap up after words what happend to people after this little event.

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #53 on: 29 January 2018, 18:47:17 »
@dubble_g: Fixed, I think. It's just a couple verses from one of my favorite 'cowboy songs'. You might call it The Ballad Of Marshall Tucker Vs. A Big Piece Of Humble Pie. I'm not, really, a big Marshall Tucker fan, but this tune isn't so bad and captures a piece of cowboy history fairly.

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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #54 on: 30 January 2018, 06:36:23 »
@ ckosacranoid: Hey, thanks for reading through to the end.

@ Easy: Yep, looks good. I was able to read it on mobile by pinching aaaaaaaall the way, but normal size is definitely better.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #55 on: 06 February 2018, 20:00:40 »
Great story.  I love the complex and conflicting motivations of your characters.  I have to agree with Kidd's reply @26 though.  The info about Karen comes too early and is a bit of a spoiler.  I only mention it because I'm not sure that came out in the discussion.  Thanks for the story, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #56 on: 07 February 2018, 06:19:03 »
Great story.  I love the complex and conflicting motivations of your characters.  I have to agree with Kidd's reply @26 though.  The info about Karen comes too early and is a bit of a spoiler.  I only mention it because I'm not sure that came out in the discussion.  Thanks for the story, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Ta for that. Never really considered it a spoiler to be honest, though I've long since learned my tolerance for spoilers is a lot higher than many people's on the Internet. The current work-in-progress is "The Day When Heaven Was Falling":
http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=60330.0
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Re: The Sword Will Never Depart
« Reply #57 on: 07 February 2018, 06:24:30 »
Quote
Through the story I wanted the main character to have an arc or journey, where she starts out as competitive, patriotic, a little distant but a quote-unquote good soldier, and then starts to see hints all is not well but at first ignores them precisely because she has that good soldier/it's-not-my-problem mentality. She gets pushed further, and I wanted her to have a change/turning point in her attitude to the situation, but for it to be driven (at least at first...) by her established personality, i.e. by her competitiveness, not by idealism.

This bit to be precise. Yes, would absolutely love to hear this after the fact. Not before.

 

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