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« Reply #180 on: 20 February 2017, 07:08:45 »
Sadly, the last known supply of avocados was destroyed in the First Succession War. In space, guac is still extra.
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #181 on: 20 February 2017, 07:31:31 »
Sadly, the last known supply of avocados was destroyed in the First Succession War. In space, guac is still extra.

Not on Woodstock, where the Ixtapa Mexican restaurant (on the outskirts of the Charleston DropPort) serves enchiladas smothered in cheese and guacamole in "Sword of Sedition."

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« Reply #183 on: 20 February 2017, 22:21:19 »
I'm assuming Ixtapa found a secret supply or "Brian Mash" of the stuff.

Food doesn't get mentioned much in the fiction, though the PPC gets some air time. Anyone ever tried drinking one?

If I recall it's 2 shots (4?) Grain alcohol + 1 of flavor (sake, kerosene ha ha!, ouzo, tequila, etc.) Sounds moderately lethal. Kerosene is probably a reference to baijiu, which trust me, smells and tastes the part.

Also, to quote Inglorious Basterds: There's a special place in hell reserved for people who waste good sake. Using it as a mixer qualifies.
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« Reply #184 on: 20 February 2017, 22:54:53 »
It depends on the author, but a fair amount of cuisine has been referenced in BattleTech fiction. 

ComStar gives wedding guests culturally appropriate lunch boxes on an excursion, giving Combine delegates sushi and giving the Feddies peanut butter sandwiches with quillar jam. 

All the food on Dragon's Field is flavored with local shad seed. 

Two soldiers have a debate about the best pizza place on New Avalon. 

Several scenes on Sian are set at a restaurant modeled after one of Stackpole's favorite places in Phoenix.

 Kincha addiction is a defining character element for members of Liao's Lost Legion. 

And so on...

I think Vic Milan did the most detailed descriptions of food, to my recollection.

I compiled a table of various trade goods mentioned in the fiction (for a random loot generator for a pirate based campaign) and there are a fair number of foods on the list.  The duplicate entries are because each entry was tagged by planet of origin in the database.  The numbers are C-Bill cost per ton.

Vodniks   
125
Donegal cherries   
1150
Shad-seed   
6650
Silver sable (furs)   
2500000
Chromite ore   
25
Wine   
75000
Brandy   
13250
Eden beavers   
300
Burrocks   
50
Widowmaker spiders   
1000
Eden vultures   
250
Jade falcons   
7500
Fire mandrills   
500
Oiseau de Tonnerre   
250
Homme d'Tonnerre   
4000
Nolans   
5000
Cabolos   
775
Cabolos wine   
75000
Thunderbeast   
250
Dobars   
150
Wine   
75000
Germanium ore   
383333
Galatean moles   
350
Lugen colada mix   
10000
Beefalo   
200
Ranger bull   
500
Lobo plumados   
250
Snallygaster leather   
3500
Snallygasters   
50
Night boars   
2000
Sugar corn   
1500
Katam corn   
600
Protonaria   
200
Fine furniture   
200000
Glenlivit   
15450
Glengarry Black Label Special Reserve   
6500
Crogh   
75
Crogh meat   
500
Crogh leather   
3500
Bloodpetal flowers   
35000
Rock swine   
50
Tree pumas   
250
Razorback alligators   
150
Surats   
50
Reindeer   
75
Reindeer meat   
350
Reindeer leather   
3500
Binsby berries   
2500
Recreational vehicles   
5000
Grausian bloodsuckers   
50
Scruffers   
45
Ironfish   
600
Grumian clams   
50
Gulkana geckos   
300
Ebony wood   
5333
Vindhaya nuts   
12500
Kuranosuke silk   
6000
Srinigar crystalware   
10000
Tiger eels   
45
Sea scorpions   
2800
Borstal Boy (beer)   
650
Hotei Black Label (whiskey)   
6500
Swine   
120
Gnu-oxen   
65
Gnu-oxen meat   
500
Bison   
275
Bison meat   
2500
Water horses   
425
Winter-harvest riesling (wine)   
90000
Meat lettuce   
650
Ice hellions   
5000
Great Helenic whales   
5000
Mottled lemurs   
20
Passion fruit   
1000
Tigerberries   
1250
Helm deep blue whales   
50000
Helm deep blue whale meat   
33500
Takooma   
300
Coal   
12
Lutefisk   
6000
Gravlaks   
6640
Gila toads   
50
Gila toad leather   
3500
Ortin marble   
100
Mineral water   
1200
Transe green tea   
2000
Mineral water   
1200
Prudholm dwarf deer   
500
Fire lizard   
250
Sheep   
200
Swine   
120
Horses   
3000
Razor-caws   
200
Ironhold nighthawks   
3000
Fire falcons   
450
Black lanners   
750
Wine   
75000
Perfume   
65000
Cosmetics   
125000
Drengkit flowers   
35000
Pengrya blossoms   
35000
Tetatae   
250
Tatsugonchu   
30
Kaifeng cows   
75
Shimmer granite   
15
Songbirds   
3400
Ice plants   
1000
Prudholm dwarf deer   
500
Klima-beasts   
2500
Eichhornchen   
275
Wire   
1500
Kendall honey   
1000
Cereal grass   
30
Kigamboni leopards   
2200
Kikuyan devils   
4500
Tri-vid sets   
220
Godan   
450
Stomach's Joy nutritional supplements   
100
Home Helper canned foods   
1000
Scarlet shrikes   
120
Winter wolves   
225
Mothers of the ocean   
25000
Nessie   
2000
Algae mats   
20
Arrack (liquor)   
20000
Bhang (narcotic)   
2
Glass cobras   
160
Tobacco   
3500
Blue fire opals   
3000000
Mailsloths   
450
Mailsloth meat   
500
Sheep   
200
Thoroughbred horses   
10000
Tea   
2000
Cholach   
1450
Razorback boars   
85
Branth-rats   
4500
Branths   
10000
Carved totems   
100000
Selkie furs   
2500000
Selkie   
650
Pelagic arthropods   
120
Varan lizards   
225
Gold panthers   
3500
Cattle   
50
Freshwater trout   
500
Weave-tree textiles   
500
Firestones   
1350000
Leech locusts   
50
Carp   
30
Carp fillets   
275
Denkaika   
300
Tarises   
70
Beer   
750
Swine   
120
Horses   
3000
Beefalo   
200
Beefalo meat   
450
Brockway goats   
120
Brockway goat meat   
1000
Wine   
75000
Plas-sculptures   
225000
Abstract myomer art   
500000
Kiffnuts   
4500
Hurricane kelp   
8000
Fire-kite   
4500
Plastic-crystal sculptures   
325000
Wine   
75000
Wine   
75000
Opium   
2750000
Pachyderm   
6500
Wine   
75000
Nestor Gold liqueur   
7500
Wine   
75000
Sheep   
200
Geef   
60
Geef meat   
500
New Avalon wheat   
50
Silver Ice Snake-Weasel furs   
2500000
Silver ice snake-weasels   
750
Ice serpent   
7500
Sprinter-killers   
300
Grassbirds   
30
Chewyweed   
25
Buffalopes   
225
Buffalope meat   
2000
Stalkers   
2500
Grand Avalon granite   
15
Avalon redwood lumber   
25
Fish   
500
Apples   
350
Carved ivory   
100000
Swine   
120
Gnu-oxen   
65
Gnu-oxen meat   
500
Bison   
275
Bison meat   
2500
Exford truffles   
550000
Art   
1000000
Personal music sets   
20
Swamp otters   
40
Swine   
120
Chickens   
60
Chicken meat   
500
Ki-rians   
3500
Armor bear   
5000
Marlin   
750
Tuna   
1500
Hodson's Fliers   
600
Sea bass   
1750
Speckled hoodoo   
1250
Lead-crystal glass   
375
Samarkite   
375000
Tamarlane melons   
450
Blue raptors   
400
Fuster lizards   
250
Whale-sardines   
35
Fine furniture   
200000
Blue Lotus portable compads   
250
Blue Lotus noteputers   
500
Seluguwesa   
600
Bufaali   
225
Buffaali meat   
2000
Malvern Black whiskey   
6500
Cholobara wine   
75000
Plum wine   
75000
Shilovian seskratts   
60
Kincha fruit   
100
Leopards   
2000
Giant pandas   
750
Ranger bull   
500
Ranger bull meat   
400
Whale   
2000
Kodiak bears   
1500
Horses   
5000
Simpson's Delight (spice)   
7500
Sirius Ale   
800
Blood oak timber   
380
Fine furniture   
200000
Viragos   
160
Direbeasts   
500
Direbeast furs   
2500000
Nostia gems   
1250000
Uleths   
150
Wildweed   
50
Vetchin   
185
Smolensk bull   
350
Schracks   
225
Bloodfish   
650
Bloodfish fillets   
6000
Spina-wheat   
40
Fine art   
2500000
Stewart roses   
35000
Stewart Malt Whiskey   
6500
Cranas   
50
Star adders   
230
Ghost bears   
1200
Snow ravens   
150
Smoke jaguars   
350
Strana Mechty wolves   
350
Diamond shark   
1250
Sea foxes   
250000
Sawfish   
10
Sawfish fillets   
65
Ice cod   
700
Ice cod fillets   
6750
HarJel   
250000
Perfumed herbal soap   
7500
Buleen anchovies   
100
Buleen anchovy fillets   
875
White ivory   
725
Whitetail deer   
125
Art   
1000000
Falcons   
7500
Coyotes   
400
Furs   
1500000
Home automatic hair styler   
150
Wine   
75000
Bamboo   
50
Prudholm dwarf deer   
500
Seacats   
450
Goats   
55
Goat meat   
400
Horses   
5000
Reptile cow   
40
Reptile cow meat   
350
Turin-leaf (narcotic)   
3
Gourds   
4000
Gyru lizards   
500
Ulan Bator java   
7150
Tiger raptors   
350
Frostwine   
75000
Burrowing tortises   
2000
Megasaur   
10000
T-Rex II   
25000
Tabiranths   
450
Tabiranths   
650
Horses   
3000
Modenan wolves   
230
Slug rats   
15
Horses   
3000
Camels   
700
Chromite ore   
25
Kevla   
2500
Blueleaf tobacco   
1500
Garlbean   
2400
Grovacas   
2000
Chirimsim   
100
Industrial crystals   
225000
Chocolate   
16500
Wine   
75000
Gold ore   
6688000
Wine   
75000
Bluestone   
100
Tobacco   
3500
Cigars   
800
Woodstock private reserve (lager)   
5000
Anti-radiation treatment kit   
250
Blue ice   
320
Horses   
3000
Black reapers   
800
Art   
1000000
Tiger-raptors   
450
Gorii-tuna   
1400
Gorii-tuna fillets   
13350
Speckled cockatrices   
125
Toliks   
75
Tolik meat   
400
Petrified wood carvings   
15000
Jaraals   
2000
Holovid discs   
5
Agrat   
1000
Agrat fillets   
10357
Alcoran swimmer fillets   
10350
Beefalo meat   
450
Blue snapper fillets   
12500
Brockway goat meat   
1000
Bucky Brown meat   
500
Buffalo meat   
2000
Chichiban whale meat   
33500
Crocale meat   
500
Crocale leather   
3500
Gillarg meat   
500
Goat meat   
400
Goat meat   
400
Grazer meat   
500
Grumian clam meat   
4000
Hodson's Flier fillets   
5000
Hodson's Flier fillets   
5000
Leather   
3500
Mammoth meat   
600
Mammoth meat   
600
Mara trout fillets   
4000
Marlin fillets   
6326
Night boar meat   
20000
Whale-sardine fillets   
300
Ostrich meat   
10000
Ranger bull meat   
400
Ranger bull meat   
400
Sea bass fillets   
15000
Marinated sea scorpions   
10000
Smolensk bull meat   
450
Thorin bull meat   
450
Troses fillets   
10000
Whale-sardine fillets   
300
Crowley lizard cow meat   
500
Freshwater trout fillets   
4000
Pelagic arthropod meat   
9000
Six-legged crab meat   
16000
Sturgeon fillets   
1880
Fisherpike fillets   
5000
Caribou   
215
Caribou meat   
1940
Hipposaur   
2500
Riding kangaroos   
1000
Ironfish fillets   
4750
Mermaid fillets   
4500
Speckled hoodoo fillets   
10000
Jewel Bass fillets   
4750
Kafa gold tuna fillets   
13350
Compound bows   
15
Crossbows   
10
Cromarty Black whiskey   
6500
Long-grass steers   
55
Thoroughbred horses   
10000
Fine furniture   
200000
Barberries   
9000
Jacotes   
1500
Dune rats   
25
Tressidan vipers   
100
Sand crickets   
25
Ironwood   
4000
Aston-Martin luxury car   
7407
Mara trout   
500
Whale-sardines   
35
Raxx   
250
Raxxen meat   
350
Caboa timber   
25
Syramon thunderbirds   
500
Oshika oxen   
50
Oshika ox meat   
400
Goji   
20
Goji meat   
150
Wine   
75000
Palosian stirges   
25
Tree shrikes   
125
Miniature parrots   
5850000
Pesht predator apes   
1750
Pinard pinot   
100000
Spice (narcotic)   
2
Yomita herdbeasts   
65
Yomita herdbeast meat   
500
Poulsbo pythons   
45
Champagne   
4500
Tri-vid camera   
375
Blood limpets   
50
Dragon iguana   
600
Crop devils   
2
Bloodworm silk   
6000
Bloodworm eggs   
10000
Blue jade   
1000000
Toxic life-forms   
25
Radstadt pine   
15
Toad-foxes   
75
Slimy rock-huggers   
20
Blue-tailed buzzards   
225
Lion moles   
300
Stone squirrels   
25
Nurfers   
100
Billiboos   
250
Ostriches   
1150
Pteroraptors   
750
Red wolverines   
250
Red wolverine furs   
2500000
Waltabu Valley dietary supplements   
8000
Anti-cancer medicine   
250
Eligus diagnosers   
165413
Titanium ore   
200
Segine tempest swimmers   
1250
Segine tempest swimmer fillets   
10000
Shadow mongoose   
125
Venom worms   
25
Vampire bats   
175
Skye boars   
2000
Skye boar meat   
20000
Skye boars   
2000
Skye boar meat   
20000
Deer   
80
Caribou   
215
Caribou meat   
1940
Tharkan gazelle   
40
Tharkan gazelle meat   
350
Tharkan moonwolves   
450
Wolves   
75
Snowtiger furs   
2500000
Coral   
20000
Snowtigers   
350
Nacht-lager   
5000
Berry apples   
2000
Aspergrot   
1500
Sunset chimps   
600
Oxen   
50
Butcher beasts   
250
Ox meat   
400
Butcher beast meat   
2750
Butcher beasts   
250
Butcher beast meat   
2750
Thorizers   
175
Thorin bulls   
60
Furs   
1250000
Thraxan devourers   
3500
Thraxan devourer hides   
300
Whalan   
7500
Whalan meat   
33500
Blue potatoes   
200
Badgers   
750
Badger furs   
2500000
Boars   
2000
Timbiqui Dark (beer)   
1000
Wine   
75000
Whiskey   
6500
Brandy   
13250
Sheep   
200
Tortugan wolverines   
2000
Crossfield krait   
75
Robsart shark   
200
Robsart shark   
200
Chickens   
60
Chicken meat   
500
Eiglotheriums   
15000
Rodan   
2500
Bloodwood   
380
Slo-mo   
600
Slo-mo meat   
400
Frost Giant's Daughter (beer)   
750
Trell spices   
125
Chigga wood   
25000
Industrial diamonds   
135000
Musi-chips   
4
Advanced forensic analysis kits   
562500
Basic counter-forgery kits   
175000
Electronics counter-forgery kits   
225000
Standard subvocal microcommunicators   
40000000
Wireless subvocal microcommunicators   
60000000
Electronic codebreakers   
500000
Advanced electronic codebreakers   
6666667
Biomedical compounds   
500000
Books   
3
Sugar   
275
Coat   
32
Wool   
14500
Cloud cobras   
300
Steel vipers   
250
Red granite   
15
Cuchulain Irish Whiskey   
6500
Cognac   
25000
Arc-Royal Red (beer)   
775
Arc-Royal Stout (beer)   
845
Razorcats   
350
Polar bears   
125
Memory crystals   
288000
Randall's roses   
35000
Mammoth   
750
Brace (addictive drug)   
5
Blood oranges   
1833
Wine   
75000
Goats   
55
Arabian horses   
21425
Neodolphins   
250
Kse'e   
10000
Brandy   
13250
Tapestries   
250000
Atranas   
2000
Tunna-beast   
140
Tunna-beast leather   
3500
Cactus juice   
500
Talasi   
75
Goliath scorpions   
400
Mole-rats   
20
Nibblers   
25
Troses   
1125
Diamond Negro (beer)   
750
Mandre-stags   
150
Wolfin   
175
Tri-D projection systems   
220
Wine   
75000
Bharati dragon   
25000
Bharati possums   
750
Bharati mushrooms   
15000
Petroleum   
250
Megasaur   
10000
Irish whiskey   
6500
Iron ore   
13
Swamp stunners   
50
Spring water   
750
Tobacco   
3500
SeraVideo video entertainment centers   
350
Mermaids   
500
White Hart truffles   
1000000
Harvest caviar   
850000
Sturgeon   
200
Tariq   
150
Brockway goats   
120
Crowley lizard cows   
65
Jewel Bass   
600
Hybrid wheat   
40
Bucky browns   
60
Six-legged mountain mules   
250
Dune pups   
350
Neomules   
60
Mordred lizards   
300
Chalice hunter   
7500
Dress   
31
Ginja wood   
4000
Canopian roses   
35000
Jade   
1000000
Hodson's Fliers   
600
Goats   
55
Elwrith   
4000
Bloodworms   
25
Crocales   
75
Red cedar   
7
Teak   
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #185 on: 20 February 2017, 23:14:36 »
Nolan, Takooma, Ice Hellion, Tetatae?
That's a strange list of "Trade Goods", even if they're stuffed and even by pirate standards.
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« Reply #186 on: 21 February 2017, 06:31:37 »
I could go for a Zeus Burger right now....

I recommend the Firestarter Burger with the sriracha sauce, but steer clear of the Locust Burger. Little bit crunchy for my taste.
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« Reply #187 on: 21 February 2017, 07:00:30 »
Nolan, Takooma, Ice Hellion, Tetatae?
That's a strange list of "Trade Goods", even if they're stuffed and even by pirate standards.

There's a bit of a tradition of rich nobles trying to stock private menageries or zoos (like Tormano Liao's herd of Prudholm Dwarf Deer on his Solaris VII estate), so why not?  Tetatae was only an option if there was a misjump that resulted in the ship being diverted to the Kaetetoa system. 

The algorithm was designed to stock cargo ships with goods that would be found on the worlds in that system and neighboring systems (within three jumps).  As players learned where the best stuff was, richer regions would attract more raids (in theory).
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #189 on: 22 February 2017, 07:08:08 »
Date: May 11, 3027
 
Location: Fomalhaut

Title: Warrior: En Garde

Author: Michael A. Stackpole
 
Type: Novel

Synopsis: Danica and Clovis Holstein meet with Captain William Pfister, aboard his JumpShip, the Meridian, and inform him that his chief technician, Kevin Mori, is an undercover ISF agent planning to sabotage his vessel's helium tanks to cripple the ship.  Clovis pulls up Monopole Lines records that show an LIC advisory about Mori, with a comparison between his academy records and current picture, showing a different bone structure.  Pfister worries that he won't be able to fulfill his contract to carry the Silver Eagle to Errai on May 21st.  Danica offers to send her tech, Stephen Leigh, over from her JumpShip, the Bifrost, to repair his helium tanks.

Danica and Clovis depart aboard the shuttle Mistletoe and gloat over having deceived Captain Pfister.  They order Leigh to take the shuttle Hemlock over to the Meridian and blow its helium tank seals, making it look like sabotage and timing it to kill Mori, who actually is an ISF agent.  Clovis reports success in his efforts to designate the Bifrost as the alternate carrier for the Silver Eagle in the event that the Meridian is unable to jump. 

Clovis expresses reservations about taking the Silver Eagle job for Gray Noton, reminding Danica that she's refused other jobs that would harm the Lyran Commonwealth in the past.  Danica says they need the money to keep their Heimdall base in the Styx system operating, and says that if they didn't take the job, Noton would assign it to someone else.  This way, she rationalizes, Heimdall can determine what the real objective of the DropShip diversion is, and decide whether or not to carry through with it. 

Notes: This scene introduces one of Stackpole's recurring tropes for disabling JumpShips - blowing the helium seals.  It gets used again by Frederick Steiner and Loki to disable a Combine fleet, and is responsible for Phelan Kell's being stranded in the Free Rasalhague Republic at the start of the Blood of Kerensky trilogy.  From a narrative standpoint, it was necessary to have a way to disable JumpShips while still adhering to the edict that the LosTech leviathans never be permanently crippled or destroyed. 

Naming their ship the Bifrost seems just a little blatant for a Heimdall cell, though Danica does note that most Lyrans don't even know about its existence.  Loki certainly knows, however, so you'd think they'd subject any ship with that name to extra scrutiny. 

Danica hints at her backstory - noting that she was rescued by Heimdall while she was pregnant with Clovis, barely avoiding a death that would have been blamed on a Kurita raid.  Careful readers will have noted that Duke Aldo Lestrade gained his title when his elder siblings and parents died in a Kurita raid on Summer, and will have been able to connect the dots between Lestrade and the Holsteins at this point - a plot point that is paid off at the end of Warrior: Coupe.  One wonders if it was the Heimdall extraction of Danica that cost Lestrade his arm and...other parts, since he appears to have been colluding with the Kuritans, and taking severe injuries in a raid he himself arranged seems careless. 

It appears that Gray Noton's original plan was for the ship to be taken to Sirius, where it would be handed over to the Capellan Confederation - enabling them to get revenge on Andrew Redburn, and (unknowingly) satisfying Aldo Lestrade's goal of...um...er... making Katrina Steiner vulnerable to a coup by Frederick Steiner because...erm...Melissa has vanished?  Still not entirely clear on his motivations or ultimate goals.  Does he want to be the power behind the throne when Frederick takes over? 

It seems questionable setting up a hidden base in a Combine system.  Even if you're on an asteroid, any sensors on the main colony will detect the jump signature of Heimdall ships arriving.  A fully uninhabited system would make a lot more sense.  Clearly, this novel predated the rules for jump signature detection.  Not to say that covert insertion is impossible - the Word of Blake managed it in Odessa for a decade or more. 

One oddity in the scene setup also appears to explain how the Silver Eagle is getting through these systems so fast and still visiting planets.  Danica tells Pfister she'll radio her ship as soon as her shuttle leaves planetary orbit.  This establishes that the Meridian is in Fomalhaut's orbit, presumably at a pirate point.  That would imply the Bifrost is in Fomalhaut's orbital space as well, and that they're expecting the Silver Eagle's carrier to arrive there. 

I talked with Mr. Stackpole at a book signing in the early 1990s, and he mentioned that the transit times were a problematic issue for story pacing, and that pirate points had been created to solve it, eliminating the weeks of in-system transit otherwise required.  He also noted that, when a system proved to be inconveniently located for story purposes, FASA offered to move it. 

The use of facial recognition scans by Loki and Bertillion analysis of bone structure would seem to make surgical doubles an invalid tactic.  Why would Mori's surgery to make him look like the replaced Tech have failed to adjust bone lengths?  Is that not possible?  If not, wouldn't an ISF scan of Jeana Clay determine that she's not Melissa?  Or couldn't they have used that technique to differentiate Hanse from Doppleganger Hanse?  Also, if they can scan people with that degree of accuracy, wouldn't a scan of "Joana Barker" immediately match her Bertillion measurements with those of Melissa Steiner?  Or was the ISF just cheaping out on the identity theft?
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #190 on: 22 February 2017, 10:34:48 »
House Kurita is known to be a little behind technoligically.  Perhaps they don't have the tech to do the bone changes or to do facial recognition...

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #191 on: 22 February 2017, 11:29:09 »
Hrrm....just thinking about all the plot points about Styx and am throwing them all together here, because well...I can't wait.

A mercenary from a Heimdall affiliated mercenary command bankrupted Styk Mining Corporation and made that base available for Heimdall to use.
The Heimdall backed kidnappers take a mission out of character for them and then take their captives to this place.
Then the Heimdall affiliated mercenary group shows up, what a great coincidence!
...or not, considering that in the third book it's revealed that Simon Johnson is Heimdall

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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #192 on: 23 February 2017, 06:09:15 »
Date: May 16, 3027
 
Location: Galatea

Title: SNES MechWarrior - Nosy Son of a Gun

Author: Tom Sloper
 
Type: Encounter

Synopsis: Herras Ragen returns to Club Zero-Zero and gets a tip from Cearle, the maitre'd, that something's up on Escalon.  He expresses confidence that Ragen will go there to investigate, since he's such a "nosy son of a gun."  Ragen reviews his inbox, and finds a message from his informant, Vermin Minter, who tells him there are four members of the Dark Wing Lance - but that neither Wolf Glupper nor Zach Slasher are the brains behind the operation.  The file is damaged, and cuts off before it gets to the information about the other two members.

Notes:  Trying to place this bare-bones "plot" into the larger context of the game universe, it seems oddly contrived that the information is clearly available early on, yet the reveal is delayed until more than a dozen missions later.  Thinking logically, why wouldn't Ragen just send a message to Minter and ask him to retransmit the data?  Minter sends an additional five messages before the end of the game, so Ragen's still in contact.  Yet, faced with full information about the Dark Wing roster, he never picks up the thread.

It's not much of a revelation that a group called the Dark Wing Lance has four members.  Of course, the Dark Wing had five 'Mechs in the final battle in MechWarrior 1, implying that the overall Dark Wing organization has far more than just four members.  The "Dark Wing Lance" from the SNES game appears to be a separate operational unit than the one supporting Operation INROAD, but the name would imply a common organizational affiliation.  It's possible that the Dark Wing group (a tiny little division of Matabushi Inc.) has several lowlife mercenaries on retainer, and assembles them into ad hoc groups for various operations - not unlike how the Bounty Hunter puts together a custom support crew for each mission. 

In the SNES plot, the Dark Wing Lance appears to be the command group for the much larger "Mercenary Underground" organization - albeit one being hamstrung by internal conflicts between the members of the command staff - suggesting that Matabushi has lost operational control of this splinter group of the Dark Wing.

I wonder if there's any mechanism for getting ComStar to re-deliver a corrupted message.  Copies theoretically exist at each HPG station along the chain of transmission, so if the data was corrupted during transmission at one point, wouldn't that be ComStar's fault?  And shouldn't they be obliged to go back through the system and find a clean version of the file, and deliver it correctly?  Since this evidently didn't take place, one wonders whether ComStar, in fact, is the one that corrupted the back half of the message.  This brings me back to a potential theory about the Dark Wing - that at least one member of the Dark Wing Lance is actually an undercover ROM agent who intends to use the Dark Wing's Mercenary Underground to discourage Successor States from hiring any mercenary group not fully under the aegis of ComStar's Mercenary Review Board. 
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« Reply #193 on: 23 February 2017, 09:41:15 »
The MW1 computer game for PC-DOS never had more than four opponents, and the final battle was against 3 BattleMasters and a Warhammer, iirc. I dimly recall, however, that the unit was previously described as four BattleMasters and a Warhammer within the game. It may also be noteworthy that the final battle is a mini-campaign of sorts, where you have to vanquish the Dark Wing twice in a row - once upon touching down on the planet, and then you have to fight three BattleMasters and a Warhammer again at the bunker holding the chalice. Game mechanics don't support actual campaigns, but the fact that the Blazing Aces cannot repair damage in-between these missions (can't remember if they could replenish ammo, but probably not) suggests that they take place within a very short timeframe, and maybe we're looking at six BattleMasters and two Warhammers after all.

Oh, and I seem to recall that Matabushi hired the Dark Wing, but didn't originally create it. Even prior to your analysis I figured the Dark Wing would be a Draconis Combine-based mercenary cartel of some sort, not registered with the MRB (either because of being a DC merc unit only, like the Aphigean Light Assault Group, or because they're straight criminals - which makes the Dark Wing the prototype Ghost Regiment).
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Re: Chronological BattleTech Fiction Review - The Succession Wars - Part II
« Reply #194 on: 23 February 2017, 11:20:17 »
Date: May 19, 3027
 
Location: Benet III

Title: Wolves on the Border

Author: Robert N. Charrette
 
Type: Novel

Synopsis: One week into a raid on the Federated Suns world of Benet III, the Black Widow Company is having a rough time.  Natasha's Warhammer and the rest of her Command Lance come under fire from rifle-toting AFFS infantry as they move through a pass in Gakken County.  Colin MacLaren scatters the AFFS troops with a burst from his Marauder's autocannon.  Natasha tries to reach the rest of the Black Widows, but Recon is unresponsive, and Ikeda's Fire Lance reports that AFFS scouts have probed the landing site for the unit's DropShip. 

MacLaren reports AFFS 'Mechs entering the valley.  Natasha joins the rest of her Command Lance - Hayes' Griffin, MacLaren's Marauder, and Sheridan's Crusader - behind a boulder, where they prepare to ambush the AFFS lance.  Massed fire shreds the lead Enforcer, forcing the pilot to eject from the smoking hulk.  The rest of the lance retreats.

Ikeda reports no sign of the DCMS forces that were supposed to be supporting the Dragoons on the Benet III raid.  Epsilon Regiment is being hard pressed, and Colonel Arbuthnot is preparing to withdraw offworld.  Natahsa orders Ikeda to prepare to leave as well, and to call Recon home if they can make contact.

Descending the mountain by a firefighting trail, the Widows smash a Valkyrie and a VTOL 'Mech-hunter at a firewatch station, and shoot down a VTOL scout that finds them in the dark. 

Just as Natasha thinks they'll get away clean, a boom upslope signals that the AFFS has detonated charges and triggered an avalanche.  Natasha's Warhammer is swept off the mountain trail in a torrent of shattered granite.  Sheridan, MacLaren and Hayes can find no trace of their commander.

Finally, Natasha responds, reporting that she had to rig up a spare antenna for her communications array.  She reports that her 'Mech, Black Lady is heavily damaged, and can't ascend the rockfall slope.  She asks them to link up with the Widow's Web and get a tacmap to find out where the canyon she's in exits.  MacLaren directs her to a point 20 km to the northeast, and they plan to rendezvous there. 

Before Natasha has gone 500 meters, she notes blips on her magnetic anomaly detector.  Initially dismissing them as granite chunks on the canyon floor, she is surprised by a bright green Marauder painted with silver credit symbols - the distinctive markings of her arch enemy, the Bounty Hunter.  His associates, an Orion, Quickdraw, and Shadow Hawk, emerge behind her.  Rather than attacking, though, he asks to talk.

She recalls their last meeting - battling on Le Blanc over renegade technicians, losing two Black Widow Company members in the process, but leaving with the Techs.  The Hunter suggests they call it even, but Natasha tells him he's cost her too much for them ever to be even.  He points out that if he'd wanted her dead, she would be.

The Hunter explains that he has a specific contract on Natasha and she's surrounded.  He knows that the DCMS support forces left the Dragoons to die, and that there's no way for the Dragoon DropShips to get offworld without heavy casualties unless the heavily guarded tracking station at Beaux Pawl is destroyed.  However, the Hunter allows that his team has also been double crossed by its employers, and lost its ride offworld.  He says he has an associate who can sabotage the tracking station, and will cancel the contract, in exchange for a ride offworld. 

Natasha says she doesn't work with cold-blooded killers.  The Hunter says that he's heard different - with a source placing her at a massacre on New Mendham eight months earlier.  She responds that she was elsewhere, and he says he believes her, but she can't prove it.  Natasha mentally acknowledges that she can't prove it without compromising Dragoon security. 

The Hunter confides that there are contracts out on other Dragoon commanders, and he thinks they're being set up.  He notes that his employer wore a badly disguised Waco Ranger uniform, but dismisses it as an obvious cover.  He promises more info once he's safely out of the system.  Natasha accepts, reluctantly.

Notes: Natasha muses that no one would get her to stand up to a BattleMech with nothing more than a rifle - ironic, given that such a match-up is exactly how most Clan warriors end their careers - in solahma infantry units. 

The bit about not compromising Dragoon security implies that Natasha was on a secret mission (possibly related to the Clans) at the time.  However...the official date given for "Fragile is the House of Cards" (Sorenson's Sabres scenario) definitively places Natasha Kerensky and the Dragoons on Kawabe four days before the massacre on New Mendham.  Since the fighting on Kawabe was just starting, either Natasha was on Kawabe killing anti-Drac rebel civilians, or that was her body double (the one from Misha's interview) and she was on another secret mission.  Girl gets around!  The thing is, though, even if she was on a hush-hush glory to the ilClan mission, she has a definitive record of someone who can pass for her having a heart-to-heart with Sorenson's Sabres on Kawabe and being in action there at that same time, on an official Combine contract.  The DCMS high command even uses the massacre there as a reason to hate the Dragoons when relations go south, so they must have battlefield records.  All Natasha has to do is point out that "she was on Kawabe, killing Drac civilians," and she won't be blamed for...being on New Mendham, killing Drac civlians...okay, bad example.  ;)

Natasha's claim that she doesn't work with cold-blooded killers is a bit of a joke, considering that at least one of her Widows was assigned to her unit because he was up on charges for murder.  There's also a reference to the instructor in "Final Exam" being the only person to survive two encounters with the Black Widow - implying that the Widows go out of their way to kill their enemies. 

The VTOL 'Mech-hunter isn't named or statted, but none of the VTOLs from TRO:3026 seem to fit that description.  The Ferret certainly isn't a 'Mech hunter, and the Warrior H-7's AC/2 wouldn't seem to give it the oomph to go after 'Mechs (though it is a dangerous machine in open territory).  I wonder if this is the mentioned, but not statted, Wild Weasel?  Certainly, LosTech is required to make real VTOL 'Mech hunters, like the Yellowjacket or Hawk Moth.

It's never specified who triggered the avalanche.  Since it was narrowly enough targeted to just get Natasha's Warhammer, I would suspect that the Bounty Hunter had somehow been tracking the Widows and planted explosives upslope along her projected line of march, intending to bring her into his trap and weaken her bargaining posture enough for him to get what he wanted.  Yet, if swarms of AFFS troops couldn't find her (and the one VTOL that did quickly died), how was the Hunter tracking her?  Did he put a satellite in orbit and use that to track her remotely?  Was another associate running a drone carrier and shadowing her with PathTracks or NapFinds?

It's weird, though, that the Bounty Hunter was betrayed to a sufficient degree that it would be dangerous for him to remain on an AFFS world.  If it was just that his transport departed, couldn't he mosey over to Beaux Pawl and contract a commercial transport back to Solaris VII?  It appears that, for whatever reason, he's not supposed to be on Benet III as far as the AFFS is concerned, meaning that he has to avoid the local garrison, too.  Since his name wasn't mud as far as the Feddies were concerned when he was under contract to Michael Hasek-Davion, one wonders exactly what changed. 

The Bounty Hunter chapters were the most maddening for me when reading the book, because it made extensive oblique references to events with which I was utterly unfamiliar.  Like watching a soap opera for the first time and having no clue that Julio is actually Teresa's surgically altered ex-husband pretending to be her dead son, and thereby being unable to make heads or tails of the big reveal - and for the backstory only available in a special issue of TV Guide.  It was released March 1, 1989.  The Wolf's Dragoons sourcebook also came out in 1989 to further flesh out this flagship mercenary unit.  Many of the characters and backstories referenced in Wolves on the Border are incomprehensible unless you have the sourcebook open next to you as you read (which, of course, spoils the ending).  Cross promotion is one thing, but the "story already in progress" bit was done to the extent that (prior to getting the Dragoon sourcebook) I felt like I'd somehow missed an earlier novel in the series.  When I saw Charrette's "Heir to the Dragon" I thought - aha - this must be the book that explains what the heck happened between Natasha and the Hunter earlier.  No joy (though still a spectacular roller coaster ride through the 4th Succession War and War of 3039).

I wonder why Natasha is so upset about there being a contract out to kill her.  She's been circling the Inner Sphere slaughtering her foes by the bucketload for decades.  Surely Wayne Waco isn't the only person with a grudge and some cash.  I guess it's her Clan ethos showing - since killing in the course of fights is considered a normal part of daily life for the Warrior Caste, and doesn't bear thoughts of retaliation by the loser's sibkin, except to encourage them to fight harder and gain more glory if they can beat the killer in the next Trial.  Civilian caste deaths are inconsequential - they should be grateful for being able to participate even peripherally in Warrior Caste activities. 

The discussion of the tactical significance of the tracking station at Beaux Pawl implies that the AFFS forces on Benet III enjoy substantial Aerospace superiority.  One wonders why it wasn't mustered to blunt the Dragoon insertion on arrival.  Overall, the Dragoons do seem substantially understrength in terms of AeroSpace assets, with a ratio of support well below the 2 fighters per 12 'Mechs that was advertised as "standard" at the time.  (It gets better if you factor in the LAMs, but still doesn't reach parity). 

The other question is why the Dragoons didn't have better coordination with the DCMS forces they were supposed to conduct the operation with.  Why didn't they stage together and launch only when all assets were in place?  Why would the Dragoons have gone in against (apparently) substantial AeroSpace defenses without the full invasion force - an elite unit wouldn't send its forces into heavy defenses piecemeal.  Given their concerns about the DCMS leaving them in the lurch several times before, why would Jaime agree to a plan where the Dragoons go in first and then get supported "later" by DCMS forces?  It seems like the Dragoons should have been more wary about betrayal by this point, especially after what they went through with Anton Marik. 
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« Reply #195 on: 23 February 2017, 11:35:03 »
The MW1 computer game for PC-DOS never had more than four opponents, and the final battle was against 3 BattleMasters and a Warhammer, iirc. I dimly recall, however, that the unit was previously described as four BattleMasters and a Warhammer within the game. It may also be noteworthy that the final battle is a mini-campaign of sorts, where you have to vanquish the Dark Wing twice in a row - once upon touching down on the planet, and then you have to fight three BattleMasters and a Warhammer again at the bunker holding the chalice. Game mechanics don't support actual campaigns, but the fact that the Blazing Aces cannot repair damage in-between these missions (can't remember if they could replenish ammo, but probably not) suggests that they take place within a very short timeframe, and maybe we're looking at six BattleMasters and two Warhammers after all.

Oh, and I seem to recall that Matabushi hired the Dark Wing, but didn't originally create it. Even prior to your analysis I figured the Dark Wing would be a Draconis Combine-based mercenary cartel of some sort, not registered with the MRB (either because of being a DC merc unit only, like the Amphigean Light Assault Group, or because they're straight criminals - which makes the Dark Wing the prototype Ghost Regiment).

The Operation INROAD files from Tasha specify one Warhammer and four BattleMasters.  The final text mentions some ineffectual infantry as well, at the bunker.  That's what I based my writeup on. 

I tagged Matabushi as the creators of the Dark Wing because of this passage:  "Matabushi has established an elite team of specialists not confined to specific divisions."  Sounds like a good cover for the Dark Wing.  None of the in-game text ever refers to the Dark Wing as mercenaries or them being hired (at least not according to the keyword search of my transcript).  One Matabushi executive just requests permission to "exercise the Dark Wing option."  Now, it is possible that the Dark Wing Lance went underground in 3017 and were given refuge by Matabushi, in exchange for providing the expertise for Matabushi to set up its own Dark Wing operations, and then the four originals re-emerged in 3027 to try to set up the Mercenary Underground (and to kill each other off trying to take sole control of the organization) - possibly still affiliated with Matabushi, or heading off on their own. 

Alternatively, Matabushi could have created the Dark Wing sometime prior to 3017, and killing Joseph T. Ragen was another instance of Matabushi "Exercising the Dark Wing option," but then going dark on the unit until exercising the option again in 3024, with a different set of pilots (since Glupper, Slasher, etc. were still in some sort of identity protection program, off the radar).
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"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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« Reply #196 on: 23 February 2017, 13:23:09 »
SNES MechWarrior is notably further down on the canonicity totem pole than MechWarrior for PC. That said, I'm all for including all sources, just like you.
The SNES game establishes that the Dark Wing existed long prior to Operation Inroad, and doesn't mention Matabushi at all. That doesn't preclude it being a Matabushi front; but I think it's circular reasoning to assume it was created by Matabushi because it is used in Operation Inroad later on. Given the available data, I maintain that the most likely scenario is a free-floating, possibly criminal, merc cartel or pirate band.

Natasha and the Bounty Hunter on Benet III is a big deal, in part because it is so understated. Yes, there's all that history between the characters that you need to know to fully appreciate the scene. But it's also the last time that the classic 3025 era Bounty Hunter makes an appearance. We're never told what happened after he boarded the Black Widow's DropShip; but the next time someone appears wearing the Bounty Hunter's PAL suit, it's none other than Michi Noketsuna on his Dragoon-sponsored revenge mission. This is a BattleCorps story waiting to be written.

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You'd think that the Bounty Hunter was hired by House Kurita at first; it would explain his extensive operational knowledge in the Benet III mission, his apparently excellent preparation, and why he can't simply walk away from the planet or the AFFS. Then again, it seems strange that Kurita would hire him for a hit on Natasha Kerensky, just to leave him stranded on Benet III with the objective in reach, as if they didn't want him to kill her after all.
This seems to suggest a third party hired him.
Or perhaps this was all some sort of ruse or setup enacted by Kurita together with the Bounty Hunter to make Natasha trust him enough to parlay with him and take him aboard her DropShip. But whatever the plan was, it apparently didn't work out.

The tactical situation can be explained away by the Black Widows having been lured into an AFFS trap deliberately. Keep in mind that this is the time period when Akuma and Samsonov were actively trying to company store the Dragoons, so bloodying them against the AFFS or putting them in situations where some of their MechWarriors are captured seems like a logical course of action.
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« Reply #197 on: 23 February 2017, 13:47:50 »
Since the next time we see the Bounty Hunter armor is on Michi...what do you suppose are the odds that Natasha put him on the "Widow's Web" and then spaced him and his team en route to the jump point, "freeing up" the armor as isorla?
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« Reply #198 on: 23 February 2017, 14:09:38 »
Since the next time we see the Bounty Hunter armor is on Michi...what do you suppose are the odds that Natasha put him on the "Widow's Web" and then spaced him and his team en route to the jump point, "freeing up" the armor as isorla?
Too simple. If that's what happened then Michi wouldn't have inherited the entire legacy. Even if they snatched "the book" out of his cold dead fingers I find it hard to believe that they could have enforced a smooth transition of the persona.

What I can totally see is Natasha drawing a circle onto the hangar deck on the way out, explaining something about a "Circle of Equals" to a nonplussed Bounty Hunter, then proceeding to beat the living feces out of him... and then making him an offer he couldn't resist. Breaking him, not killing him, is what I expect Natasha would do. And then she would make him pass the legacy on.
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Date: May 21, 3027
 
Location: Fomalhaut

Title: Warrior: En Garde

Author: Michael A. Stackpole
 
Type: Novel

Synopsis: In the cockpit of the Silver Eagle, Melissa Steiner, Andrew Redburn, and Captain von Breunig look out at the Bifrost as the passenger liner makes its approach for docking.  Redburn asks about the Meridian, and von Breunig responds that it had a helium failure. 

The captain tells his staff to inform the passengers that they are 15 minutes from jumping, and invites Redburn and "Joana Barker" to join him in his quarters, if they don't need dralaxine to combat jump sickness. 

In the captain's cabin, they can look through the transparent ceiling and look at the world of Fomalhaut V.  They buckle into chairs, and prepare to go weightless once they dock and shut down the acceleration drive.  The final warning tone sounds, and the ship jumps.  Melissa perceives it as the stars blurring and flaring, then the fabric of the ship crushing in on her, then drawing away and stretching out like the distorted reflection in a carnival mirror.   

When everything snaps back into focus, Melissa feels dizzy, and has to fight back nausea.  She looks up and sees a man-made dome among the pockmarked cliffsides and canyons on a nearby planetoid.  Hearing the worry in the crew's voices, she realizes something is very wrong.

Notes:  It appears that Melissa is subject to Transit Disorientation Syndrome - aka "jump sickness."  Linking this to my speculation in another thread that there might be a correlation between neurological conditions and jump sickness (and - very rarely - prophetic visions), recall that the Steiner bloodline has a genetic tendency towards manic depression, most notably expressed in Claudius Steiner. 

It would be an interesting experiment to see if dralaxine (dramamine...IN...SPAAAAACE) would have any effect on Nova Cat luck/vision quests, or if it would counteract the effects of necrosia.

If the thruster orientations are as we've discussed before, the Silver Eagle is using its belly thruster to approach the Bifrost, and then (presumably) small maneuvering jets to align itself with the JumpShip.  I wonder where the main docking collar is on the Monarch.  Nothing that looks like a collar is shown in "DropShips & JumpShips" or "TRO: 3057".  (TRO:3057 also shows the aft engines being used for thrust.)  Since nothing appears on the dorsal surface of the Monarch in the 3057 illustration, one would presume that it's on the belly - though that would point the belly thruster right at the JumpShip hull. 
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A mild dizzyness from jumping is normal. It's only when people are incapacitated for some time that it is called TDS. From my understanding we're looking at a sliding scale from nothing at all (rare, good to have for ASF pilots) via mild discomfort or weeks of agony all the way to psychosis, catatonia, and death.
Melissa doesn't qualify for clinical TDS. Her response it utterly normal.
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I am fairly sure most people are disorientated somewhat by Jumps.

I mean, you are telling physics to go screw itself with enough power to let you travel faster than light, its going to fight back as best as it can.

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It's interesting, though, that Melissa gets nausea and dizziness, but doesn't take dralaxine.  So, would dralaxine be only for people who have TDS?  Or just more severe symptoms that don't reach the level of TDS?  DropShips & JumpShips states that it is not possible to mitigate the effects of K-F travel, but here we have the captain mentioning a medicine described as mitigating the effects of K-F travel.   From the name alone, it would seem to be a hybrid of dramamine (for the nausea) and a relaxant (for the dizziness?).  Taking dralaxine doesn't seem to equate to the heavy sedation prescribed against TDS in Jihad Conspiracies.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Splitting hairs, it's probably impossible to mitigate the effects of K-F travel in the sense of preventively going after the cause (like, say, iodine tablets might prevent your body from absorbing radioactive iodine); but there seems to be reactive medication to treat its effects, in the sense of painkillers or making you sleep through it. Notably, such treatment of the (mild) effects wouldn't help against clinical TDS symptoms or the neurological effects that go beyond mild discomfort. And for active military personnel, esp. WarShip crews and ASF pilots, sedation isn't an option.
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Date: May 22, 3027
 
Location: Solaris VII

Title: Warrior: En Garde

Author: Michael A. Stackpole
 
Type: Novel

Synopsis:  In the Valhalla section of Thor's Shield Hall, Philip Capet is interrupted in his efforts to remove the late Gray Noton's "Legend Killer" shield from his private alcove and replace it with his own by the arrival of Justin Xiang, Tsen Shang, and a crowd of Battle Commission officials.  Capet reacts defensively, asking if Xiang has come to claim it for himself. 

Xiang cites the traditions of Valhalla - that an alcove can only change hands following a formal challenge and battle in an arena, which Capet has not done.  Xiang suggests that Capet may have had a hand in Noton's murder, and accuses Capet of getting many of his Capellan Mafia proteges killed by directing them to fight without ejection systems.  Adding insult to injury, Xiang blames Capet's glory-seeking defense of his home village on Uravan for its destruction, noting that the Capellans would have ignored it if not for Capet's presence.

Enraged, Capet rips Noton's shield off the alcove wall and attacks Xiang with it.  Xiang dodges and knocks Capet to the floor with a punch to the ribs.  Xiang suggests a 'Mech duel for the right to Noton's alcove, and Capet accepts.   

Notes: What this reminded me of most when I read it was the pre-fight conflict scenes on WWE.  (I actually googled to see if Michael Stackpole had written anything for TSR's "Headlocks and Haymakers" pro-wrestling RPG, but it appears that product was just a joke reference in the Marvel Super Heroes RPG's character writeup for Forbush Man.)

One wonders, however, how Xiang knew Capet's plans far enough in advance to assemble a "crowd" of Battle Commission officials to challenge the shield's removal.  Capet's pro-FedSuns "Capellan Mafia" stable (what's left of it) is unlikely to have ratted him out, though given Tsen Shang's presence, their support staff may indeed contain elements of the real Capellan Mafia (tongs), who leaked the plans to Shang.  Alternatively, Capet may have filed a transfer request with the Thor's Shield Hall management, and they're the ones who called in the Battle Commission.

The theatrics in Valhalla make me wonder if the Solaris Broadcasting Corporation has reporters in Valhalla to cover scrums like this, which would make fantastic footage for fight vids, or if Valhalla is off limits to the press, giving the warriors a place to associate with peers in private.

There's also the question of Xiang's right to be in Valhalla.  Previously, he'd been there as Noton's guest.  With Noton dead, and Justin still not a full champion, would he have been granted his own Valhalla membership?  What's the cut-off to get in?  Ranked in the Top 20?  What happens if your ranking slips?  Thrown out into Midgard on your shield?  If retirees like Noton are able to stay, do they clog the real estate?  Is that only a privilege accorded to retired grand champions? 

The Solaris VII games, circa 3027, have been depicted as thoroughly corrupt, with rigged fights being the rule rather than the exception.  Given that fact, one might suspect that the Battle Commission is quite amenable to being bribed.  I wonder why Capet didn't grease the skids appropriately before grabbing Noton's alcove.
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Certainly an interesting section of the book.  I don't think we've heard much from the Battle Commission in the form Justin called up here. 

Justin's son Kai stint on Solaris never brought it up and Illusion of Victory which was Solaris focus book never got into the Battle Commission when the riots happened.

I didn't get a chance to read it, but did Stackpole's short novelettes say much about the Solaris years which were just before the evens in this book?

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Are the Stackpole Kell Hound novellas out yet?  I hadn't heard that.

The Battle Commission only appears in Warrior: En Garde.  Based on the references therein, they mostly throw parties for popular MechWarriors, and adjudicate rankings and associated perks.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Are the Stackpole Kell Hound novellas out yet?  I hadn't heard that.

The Battle Commission only appears in Warrior: En Garde.  Based on the references therein, they mostly throw parties for popular MechWarriors, and adjudicate rankings and associated perks.
The Battlecorp short story, "Not the Way the Smart Money Bets" came out in 2008, but the printed version hasn't yet.
I thought there was a second one based on Solaris.   But i think i'm wrong about it.

Sorry.
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"It's 200 LY to Sian, we got a full load of shells, a half a platoon of Grenadiers, it's exploding outside, and we're wearing flak jackets." VoTW Destrier - Misterpants
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Ah - there are actually supposed to be three more Kell Hound-themed novellas due out from Stackpole at some indeterminate time in the future, in addition to his HBS serialized novel.
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

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Date: May 23, 3027
 
Location: Luthien

Title: Warrior: En Garde

Author: Michael A. Stackpole
 
Type: Novel

Synopsis: Subhash Indrahar interrupts Takashi Kurita's calligraphy session to report that Melissa Steiner may be in the Draconis Combine system of Styx.  He says the information came from an inadvertent disclosure by Precentor Dieron Myndo Waterly, and that the ISF has independently confirmed the rumor - running pattern matching algorithms on the passenger manifest, and noting that "Joana Barker" is an exact physical and medical history match for Melissa Steiner, and that her profile was "too normal."

Takashi uses his ki to probe Indrahar for any hint of deception, but Subhash focuses his own ki and confidently proclaims that he knows Joana Barker is Melissa Steiner.  He reports that an elite ISF unit of Jump Infantry is standing by on Dieron to move against Styx.  Takashi approves, but orders Indrahar to send the Genyosha from Nashira as well, with orders to capture Melissa if the ISF fails. 

Notes: Subhash and Takashi lay out some expository backstory, about Wayland Smith's Styx Mining Corporation defrauding investors in a played out asteroid mine in the Styx system and escaping to the Lyran Commonwealth with 25 million C-Bills in ill-gotten gains, leaving the abandoned mine to house malcontents.

In Norse mythology, "Wayland the Smith" is the "weird and malicious master craftsman" who forged the sword Balmung, among others, as well as magical armor and rings (and goblets from the skulls of his enemies' children).  Between putting up rainbows as signals to other initiates, naming their ship Bifrost, and having an agent use a pseudonym from Norse mythology, it seems like Heimdall is way, way too enamored of its theme, and can't help but send up red flags, almost taunting Loki to find and eradicate it.  The only reason it persisted, it appears, is that Loki was called off the hunt once Katrina became Archon.

An inadvertent disclosure to an ISF agent by Precentor Dieron?  Clearly, ComStar knows Melissa has a double and is traveling incognito to New Avalon.  (Heck, it was on their news broadcast on Galatea at Club Zero-Zero...) They brokered the marriage clause, after all. 

But what motive would ComStar have to scupper the deal?  Julian Tiepolo backed the FedCom treaty because he thought it would further the cause of reunifying the Inner Sphere if there were only two power blocs, rather than five.  Waterly opposed him, feeling the consolidation of power could result in a political entity too powerful for ComStar to control. 

So, option one is that Waterly intentionally leaked the information to a known ISF agent with the intent of shattering the FedCom accord and undermining Tiepolo's signature accomplishment. 

Option two is that "one of [Indrahar's] people on Dieron" is none other than Sharilar Mori, undercover O5P agent in ComStar, who obtained the information in the course of her regular duties, and passed it on to the ISF via the O5P. 

It's interesting that Indrahar refers to his Dieron strike team as "an elite unit of ISF jump infantry," rather than a "Draconis Elite Strike Team."  DEST, after all, is a subdivision of ISF, and they're pretty much the definition of elite infantry commando teams. 

Clearly, having insane amounts of personal information collected on central servers accessible by marketing departments is a huge security vulnerability for the Lyran Commonwealth - especially given the evident fact that the ISF has long since gotten hold of the database.  If ISF algorithms can accurately identify LIC cover-identities as "too normal," then Lyran efforts to place undercover agents in the Combine would seem to be doomed from the outset. 

I'm confused about the ki probing between Takashi and Subhash.  I understand that Takashi is paranoid (given the numerous assassination attempts, and the messy deaths of a long list of his predecessors), but why does Subhash need to draw on his own ki to convince Takashi of his veracity?  Is he lying to Takashi about something?  Concealing Sharilar Mori's cover?  Worried about launching an operation that has the potential to dramatically increase the hostility levels on the Lyran/Combine border?
"We have made of New Avalon a towering funeral pyre and wiped the Davion scourge from the universe.  Tikonov, Chesterton and Andurien are ours once more, and the cheers of the Capellan people nearly drown out the gnashing of our foes' teeth as they throw down their weapons in despair.  Now I am made First Lord of the Star League, and all shall bow down to me and pay homa...oooooo! Shiny thing!" - Maximillian Liao, "My Triumph", audio dictation, 3030.  Unpublished.

 

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