Wow...
For a, in essence, Introtech/Late SW era style Mech, this is impressive.
There's only one problem with your listing. You're seven armor points off. You should have 80 points for five tons of Standard Armor.
I worked it up in SSW just to be sure. Here's how I would of set up the Armor:
8/11(3)/9(2)/9/9 (H/CT(R)/L&RT(R)/FL/RL)
I'd love to see what you would do with SL Era/Recovered Tech.