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Jihad: Final Reckoning
« on: 23 October 2011, 02:10:22 »
This thread is for all issues and problems with Jihad: Final Reckoning.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #1 on: 23 October 2011, 10:41:16 »
P. 60 (.pdf), middle column, first paragraph "21 December 3078"

(21 December) A large Regulan JumpShip
fleet—loaded with assault DropShips,
fighter carriers, and troop ships—jumps to a
pirate point in the Gibson system.
    Throughout the crumbling Blake
Protectorate, messages from a


Error: Ends mid-sentence.

Suggested correction: Either finish or delete the partial sentence.
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #2 on: 23 October 2011, 11:54:56 »
pg. 122, Jihad: Final Reckoning

Typo at the start of the page:

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As you can see, Deviln, the <snip>

Fix: Change Deviln to Devlin.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #3 on: 23 October 2011, 12:35:28 »
p. 157 (.pdf), S-YR-1LAM YUREI

Overview section, first paragraph

The Yurei is the middleweight member of the Word of Blake’s
Spectral LAM series, Named for shape-shifting demonic spirits of
Japanese folklore, this model—only ten tons heavier and twentyfive
percent faster than the Pwwka—was nevertheless intended
to be the workhorse of the series.


Error: Comma after the word "series", followed by capitalized "Named" suggests two sentences.

Suggested correction: Replace the comma with a period, creating two sentences.
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #4 on: 23 October 2011, 12:41:38 »
p. 157 (.pdf), S-YR-1LAM YUREI

Overview section, first paragraph

The Yurei is the middleweight member of the Word of Blake’s
Spectral LAM series, Named for shape-shifting demonic spirits of
Japanese folklore, this model—only ten tons heavier and twenty-five
percent faster than the Pwwka—was nevertheless intended
to be the workhorse of the series.


Error: "... twenty-five percent faster than the Pwwka...". Yurei (5/8[15/23]) is not faster than the Pwwka (6/9[18/27]), but is indeed slower.

Suggested correction: Change the word "faster" to "slower".
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #5 on: 23 October 2011, 15:47:14 »
p. 59 (.pdf), right column, 4th paragraph (3 October)

(3 October) Allied forces manage to capture
the Krupp Armaments facilities outside
Budapest, forcing the Word to immediately
surrounding the area.


Error: Final clause of the sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect.

Suggested correction: Change the clause to "...forcing the Word to immediately leave the surrounding area." or "...forcing the Word to immediately surround the area.", whichever is the intended meaning.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #6 on: 23 October 2011, 23:22:27 »
Page 151, Omega, Overview, bottom of first paragraph:

Change  "Superheavy BattleMech that ultimately became the template for the Clans’ Behemoth/Bane assault ’Mech"

To  "Superheavy BattleMech that ultimately became the template for the Clans’ Behemoth/Stone Rhino assault ’Mech"

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #7 on: 24 October 2011, 00:14:34 »
p. 125 'Shadow Divisions'

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Originally, twelve Divisions were activated just prior to the Jihad, but evidence indicates that two more have been raised since.
The table Shadow Divisions on p.126 shows 15 Divisios in total.

If "prior the Jihad" is related to the 'classical' divisions, first named in Blake Documents, it should be
Originally, thirteen Divisions were activated just prior to the Jihad, but evidence indicates that two more have been raised since.[/quote]
[40th to 52nd SD are thirteen divisions...]

Otherwise the part "[...] but evidence indicates that xxx more have been raised since." have to be altered.
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #8 on: 24 October 2011, 00:17:52 »
p. 150, D2X-G "Gestalt" / Overview

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[...]no one has seen any more “Gastalts” or other evidence[...]
Typo. Should be "Gestalt".
Change "a" to "e".
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #9 on: 24 October 2011, 01:52:09 »
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pg. 111, The Clans, Clan Wolf, 1st sentence:

"These losses have placed , Khan Vlad Ward's position as the great savior of his Clan under increasing pressure."

Change to:

"These losses have placed Khan Vlad Ward's position as the great savior of his Clan under increasing pressure."



pg. 133, "Gabriel", 2nd column, 1st line:

"was easily hollowed out by a Star League core of engineered in just a few months' time."

Change to:

"was easily hollowed out by a Star League corps of engineers in just a few months' time."



pg. 151, SHP-X4 "OMEGA", Overview, 2nd sentence:

Although similar concepts were attempted since the Terran hegemony developed the first BattleMech,

Change to:

Although similar concepts were attempted since the Terran Hegemony developed the first BattleMech,
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #10 on: 24 October 2011, 05:54:51 »
  All errata come from the first 'printing' .pdf of Jihad: Final Reckoning, as downloaded 24/10/11.  All quotes taken directly from text, with the problem in bold text.  Problems and suggested fixes follow the quotes.




Quote from: p.16, main text, "A New Home for a Shattered League" section, left-hand column
By now, even the MPs who once represented up have come to accept this fact.
  (Wrong word - should be 'us'?.)

Suggested correction:
  By now, even the MPs who once represented us have come to accept this fact.



Quote from: p.18, main text, "Where the War Still Rages..." section, right-hand column, final sentence
... briefly threatened the fragile campaign of diplomacy and reconstruction that had already begun, as leaders and armies braced for a new wage of Blakist aggression.
  (Wrong word - should be 'wave'?)

Suggested correction:
  ... as leaders and armies braced for a new wave of Blakist aggression.



Quote from: p.22, right-hand column, "Only Way to be Sure" section, third paragraph
The inbound Regulans reportedly ignored repeated hails by the Heart of Blake, as well as the planetary government operating from the capital city of Bangor Heights, insisting the Poulksbo was, in fact, a free world.
  (Wrong word - should be 'that'; typo, planet's name should be 'Poulsbo'.)

Suggested correction:
  ... operating from the capital city of Bangor Heights, insisting that Poulsbo was, in fact, a free world.




Quote from: p.25, left-hand column, "Fear, Uncertainty Fuel New Mercenary Market in Former League" section, first paragraph
If you read some news sources you would think the mercenary industry is on its deathbed. Certainly, the Jihad was not best time in history to be a hired gun.
  (Missing word, 'the'.)

Suggested corrections:
  Certainly, the Jihad was not the best time in history to be a hired gun.



Quote from: p.25, left-hand column, "Fear, Uncertainty Fuel New Mercenary Market in Former League" section, first paragraph
The Kuritas went back to their old “death to mercenary” ways. The Word trapped good outfits in bad contacts and hired outlaws and other bad eggs to do even worse things.
  (Wrong word, should be 'contracts'.)

Suggested correction:
  The Word trapped good outfits in bad contracts and hired outlaws and other bad eggs to do even worse things.




Quote from: p.27, "Bearing the Bull" sidebar, fifth paragraph
[Image cuts back as Remonde is thrown against the side of the cockpit. A censored curse can be heard from the General McCaffee.]
  (Redundant word.)

Suggested correction:
  A censored curse can be heard from the General.
    OR
  A censored curse can be heard from General McCaffee.




Quote from: p.27, "Bearing the Bull" sidebar, eighth paragraph
[The video cuts to that of a gun camera. In the corner of the screen can be seen the Com ID for General McAffee.]
  (Spelling of the General's name is inconsistent with the rest of the passage.]

Suggested correction:
  In the corner of the screen can be seen the Com ID for General McCaffee.




Quote from: p.27, main text, left-hand column, "A World Held Hostage" section, second paragraph
Ridgebrook, also major world in the Capellan March, had an active resistance against the Taurians.
  (Missing word, 'a'.)

Suggested correction:
  Ridgebrook, also a major world in the Capellan March, had an active resistance against the Taurians.




Quote from: p.30, left-hand column, "Strange Bedfellows" section, third paragraph
... The quarters are to house official observers, who have full access to the ship and ensure that she does not cross closer to Federated Suns than
the Pirates Haven Cluster.
  (Missing word.)

Suggested corrections:
  ... who have full access to the ship and ensure that she does not cross closer to the Federated Suns than the Pirates Haven Cluster.
    OR
  ... who have full access to the ship and ensure that she does not cross closer to Federated Suns territory than the Pirates Haven Cluster.




Quote from: p.36, "Swords to Slag: Anti-Salvage Trend Gains Ground" sidebar, fourth paragraph
Freedom requires the chasses disposed of in a stellar body, concerned by the thought that they may one day be using remnants of a Grigori to remove their daily stubble.
  (Missing word(s).)

Suggested correction:
  Freedom requires that the chasses be disposed of in a stellar body, ...
    OR
  Freedom requires the chasses to be disposed of in a stellar body, ...




Quote from: p.36, "Swords to Slag: Anti-Salvage Trend Gains Ground" sidebar, fourth paragraph
Like many conquerors, the Word of Blake let their weapons take on a symbolism of its own, in the hopes of inspiring fear and awe in their enemies.
  (Mismatch of singular and plural.)

Suggested correction:
  Like many conquerors, the Word of Blake let their weapons take on a symbolism of their own, in the hopes of inspiring fear and awe in their enemies.




Quote from: p.36, "Swords to Slag: Anti-Salvage Trend Gains Ground" sidebar, last paragraph
As time marches on in the aftermath of the Jihad, the symbols that the Word hoped would win them respect will simply disappear, vanishing to the dark corners of lost trivia
  (Missing punctuation - no full-stop to end the sentence.)

Suggested correction:
  ... vanishing to the dark corners of lost trivia.




Quote from: p.39, "Kaumberg Archonette Defies Call to Stand Down" section, first full paragraph of right-hand column
... At least Beuna is kicking some Eagle tail, but Kaumberg doesn’t need to be made an example of by someone who decides we’re a threat.”
  (Typo - correct name is 'Buena'.)

Suggested correction:
  At least Buena is kicking some Eagle tail, but ...




Quote from: p.46, left-hand column, 16 October entry
Communications are lost with Canopus its neighboring systems.
  (Missing word, presumably 'and'.)

Suggested correction:
  Communications are lost with Canopus and its neighboring systems.




Quote from: p.46, left-hand column, 17 October entry
FWLM forces continue to press forward into Lyran space, striking at Syrma and Zebebelgenubi
  (Missing punctuation - no full-stop to close the sentence.)

Suggested correction:
  FWLM forces continue to press forward into Lyran space, striking at Syrma and Zebebelgenubi.




Quote from: p.47, last entry of middle column (1-28 September) continuing to top of right-hand column
The Word also assaults Van Diemen IV, shattering the Third Oriente Hussars
  (Missing punctuation - no full-stop to close the sentence.)

Suggested correction:
  The Word also assaults Van Diemen IV, shattering the Third Oriente Hussars.




Quote from: p.49, middle column, 25 April entry
The Kaumberg Planetary Guard mobilizes in response to urgent pleas from the embattled Enzesfled government, an act that further inflames the militant
Democracy Now movements on Batajnica on Calafell.
  (Wrong word - presumably should be 'and'.)

Suggested correction:
  ... an act that further inflames the militant Democracy Now movements on Batajnica and Calafell.




Quote from: p.53, middle column, 3075 section, 10 February entry
At the same time, AFFS and FedSuns militia forces, backed up by the Hansen’s Roughriders, strike at Lothair, Warren, and Hyalite.
  (Redundant word - 'Hansen's Roughriders' is a proper noun.)

Suggested correction:
  At the same time, AFFS and FedSuns militia forces, backed up by Hansen’s Roughriders, strike at Lothair, Warren, and Hyalite.




Quote from: p.53, right-hand column, 13 April entry
Citing no confidence in the League’s central government, the Rim Commonality formally bars all high-ranking Free Worlds representatives and invokes Camlann vs. Free Worlds, essentially breaking away from the Free Worlds League.
  ('Bars' them from what?  The following passage appears to be missing several words.  Perhaps 'expels' would be clearer.]

Suggested correction:
  Citing no confidence in the League’s central government, the Rim Commonality formally expels all high-ranking Free Worlds representatives and invokes Camlann vs. Free Worlds, ...




Quote from: p.54, middle column, 21-28 July entry
Also at this time, the Hansen’s Roughriders strike at Perdition, and subvert the Longwood’s Bluecoats mercenary command there.
  (Redundant word - 'Hansen's Roughriders' is a proper noun.)

Suggested correction:
  Also at this time, Hansen’s Roughriders strike at Perdition, and subvert the Longwood’s Bluecoats mercenary command there.




Quote from: p.54, right-hand column, 14-28 August entry
Their first strikes land on the Blakist-held worlds of Cebalrai, Vega, Eltanin, Alya. A second wave hits Kaus Borealis.
  (Missing word, 'and'.)

Suggested correction:
  Their first strikes land on the Blakist-held worlds of Cebalrai, Vega, Eltanin, and Alya.




Quote from: p.54, right-hand column, 7 September entry
The first aid ships arrive at Shinonoi to assist at local crisis centers. Also at this time, the Hansen’s Roughriders’ attack Grossbach.
  (Redundant word - 'Hansen's Roughriders' is a proper noun.)

Suggested correction:
  Also at this time, Hansen’s Roughriders’ attack Grossbach.




Quote from: p.56, left-hand column, 21 July entry
The Ghost Bear-Snow Raven task force supporting Stone’s allies moves on Dyev, Sabik, Moore, Lambrecht, Kervil, and Ko. Days later, an heavy deep-raid force hits New Earth, spearheaded by Com Guard troops, in an effort to determine how thin the Protectorate’s interior defenses are.
  (Wrong word, should be 'a'.)

Suggested correction:
  Days later, a heavy deep-raid force hits New Earth, spearheaded by Com Guard troops, ...




Quote from: p.56, middle column, 21 November entry
Blakist insurgents on New Hessen make a daring daytime raid against the New Hessen WorkMechs factory and succeed is smuggling a company’s worth of mostly-finished ’Mechs.
  (Wrong word used, should be 'in'.  Also, 'smuggling' needs qualification.)

Suggested correction:
  Blakist insurgents on New Hessen make a daring daytime raid against the New Hessen WorkMechs factory and succeed in smuggling away a company’s worth of mostly-finished ’Mechs.
    OR
  Blakist insurgents on New Hessen make a daring daytime raid against the New Hessen WorkMechs factory and succeed in stealing a company’s worth of mostly-finished ’Mechs.




Quote from: p.56, middle column, 2 December entry
Lacking allied support (reportedly because they were launched by rogue elements in the AFFS command), these assaults quickly bog down.
  (Either the word 'command' is redundant, or the term is meant to be something like 'command structure'.)

Suggested correction:
  Lacking allied support (reportedly because they were launched by rogue elements in the AFFS), these assaults quickly bog down.




Quote from: p.56, right-hand column, 3077 section, 12 February entry
... a large DropShip facility converting civilian ships into Pocket WarShips, and a limited, but active SDS network.
  (Either the comma is unnecessary, or it's missing a companion after 'active'.)

Suggested correction:
  ... a large DropShip facility converting civilian ships into Pocket WarShips, and a limited but active SDS network.




Quote from: p.57, right-hand column, 19 August entry
Alleged Marian hegemony forces sack Niops V, shattering the NAM defenders present there.
  (Improper capitalisation of a proper noun - should be 'Marian Hegemony'.)

Suggested correction:
  Alleged Marian Hegemony forces sack Niops V, shattering the NAM defenders present there.




Quote from: p.57, right-hand column, 14 September entry
Supplemented by mercenary troops, forces from Niops VI invade Niops VII, intent on deposing the Fallon.
  (Redundant word.)

Suggested correction:
  Supplemented by mercenary troops, forces from Niops VI invade Niops VII, intent on deposing Fallon.




Quote from: p.59, right-hand column, 14 November – 13 December entry
With Word of Blake largely contained at Cairo, Devils Tower, Hilton Head, and Sydney, the Coalition sends forces to shut down Word of Blake command centers on Mars.
  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  With Word of Blake largely contained at Cairo, Devil’s Tower, Hilton Head, and Sydney, the Coalition sends forces to shut down Word of Blake command centers on Mars.




Quote from: p.60, left-hand column, 12 December entry
Some Word of Blake elements evacuate the Devils Tower complex.
  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  Some Word of Blake elements evacuate the Devil’s Tower complex.




Quote from: p.60, left-hand column, 17 December entry
Word of Blake forces at Devils Tower employ tactical nuclear weapons in a desperate bid to stave off defeat.
  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  Word of Blake forces at Devil’s Tower employ tactical nuclear weapons in a desperate bid to stave off defeat.




Quote from: p.60, left-hand column, 19 December entry
Coalition forces defeat the Word of Blake at Devils Tower. In direct combat with Stone, St. Jamais is killed. Spoilsport nuclear charges are set off in the Devils Tower interior complex.
  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  Coalition forces defeat the Word of Blake at Devil’s Tower. In direct combat with Stone, St. Jamais is killed. Spoilsport nuclear charges are set off in the Devil’s Tower interior complex.







  And that's all I can find, for now.  :p  More will follow once I get a chance to read further.  ;)
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #11 on: 24 October 2011, 08:42:20 »
  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  With Word of Blake largely contained at Cairo, Devil’s Tower, Hilton Head, and Sydney, the Coalition sends forces to shut down Word of Blake command centers on Mars.



  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  Some Word of Blake elements evacuate the Devil’s Tower complex.



  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  Word of Blake forces at Devil’s Tower employ tactical nuclear weapons in a desperate bid to stave off defeat.



  (Improper punctuation of a place-name/proper noun - should be 'Devil's Tower'.)

Suggested correction:
  Coalition forces defeat the Word of Blake at Devil’s Tower. In direct combat with Stone, St. Jamais is killed. Spoilsport nuclear charges are set off in the Devil’s Tower interior complex.



Devils Tower is, in fact, correct.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #12 on: 24 October 2011, 14:02:34 »
pp. 164: The gyro is mistakenly given a third damage box.
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #13 on: 24 October 2011, 14:29:30 »
Bottom of Page 95: 

RCTs were created by Melissa Davion, not Hanse Davion.
Your stupid little opinion has been duly noted.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #14 on: 24 October 2011, 23:57:24 »
P. 120 (.pdf), right column, "Taurian Concordat and Calderon Protectorate," second paragraph

We should thus be able to hold up this state up as an example for the rest of the Periphery.

Error: Extraneous up.

Suggested correction: Eliminate one of the ups.

P. 120 (.pdf), right column, "Minor Periphery Powers"

...as none of these micro-powers have the means to defend against a determined to eradicate them.

Error: Missing noun phrase between a and determined.

Suggested correction: ...as none of these micro-powers have the means to defend against a foe determined to eradicate them.
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #15 on: 25 October 2011, 16:41:27 »
pg 162, Revenant record sheet critical hit table

Replace the "Roll Again" in the number 6 slot of each rear leg with "Endo Steel". Only 12 Endo Steel criticals are allocated.
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« Reply #16 on: 28 October 2011, 16:21:10 »
p. 97, "The Industrial State of the Federated Suns" first paragraph

Quote
With one of the strongest military-industrial sectors and
a history of opposition to pre-Clan ComStar

Suggested correction: pre-Clan Invasion ComStar
or even "a history of opposition to pre-schism ComStar"




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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #17 on: 02 November 2011, 21:57:57 »
Page 117

"Blakist and Roughrider attacks ultimately destroyed all industry on Perdition, along with Taurus Territorial Industries on the Concordat capital of Taurus."

and later in the next paragraph...

"but was it really worth the loss of Perdition and Organo, which also deprived the Taurians of the Pinard Protectorates factory and the exemplary Organo Flight Academy?"


The statements seem contradictory for Perdition, suggesting at once that all industry was destroyed, and that losing Perdition years later deprived the Taurians of Pinard Protectorates. 
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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #18 on: 03 November 2011, 00:54:27 »
Page 117

"Blakist and Roughrider attacks ultimately destroyed all industry on Perdition, along with Taurus Territorial Industries on the Concordat capital of Taurus."

and later in the next paragraph...

"but was it really worth the loss of Perdition and Organo, which also deprived the Taurians of the Pinard Protectorates factory and the exemplary Organo Flight Academy?"


The statements seem contradictory for Perdition, suggesting at once that all industry was destroyed, and that losing Perdition years later deprived the Taurians of Pinard Protectorates.

Not contradictory. Just means PInard Protectorates was rebuilt in the years between the HRR raiding and Operation Matador.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #19 on: 07 November 2011, 05:56:38 »
pge 22, "What of Lopez?" segment, third paragraph:

"...a large K-F signature detected outside the system's elliptical plane."

The proper word would be ecliptic plane.

"...a large K-F signature detected outside the system's ecliptic plane."

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #20 on: 29 November 2011, 22:20:37 »
Page 156:

The Yurei is listed at the bottom of it's stat block as having 7 jump jets.  Yet the unit only has five jump jets.

If you remove the excess jump jet weight when adding up the total tonnage for the Yurei it is : 4+4+8.5+2+2+8+4+1+1+21+.5+1=39 total tons.

If removed the Yurei comes in under weight by 1 ton.

The record sheet on pg 165 has the correct placement of Jump jet critical slots.  Only the stat block on page 156 is in error.


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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #21 on: 29 January 2012, 05:15:33 »
Page 143 states that the Tech and Availability of the Robotic Drone equipment is D/E-F-F.

Page 147 states that the Tech and Availability of the Robotic Drone equipment is C/E-X-F.

Obviously it can't be both.

Normally I'd suggest using the C/E-X-F since there's never been any indication that the Robotic Equipment is available during the Succession War, but page 124 of ISP2 states the Tech and Availability to be D/E-F-F. So I guess the fix is change page 147 to D/E-F-F.

Page 162, UBM-1A "Revenant" Record Sheet
The design is 30 tons with a 6/9 movement curve, meaning it has a 180 rated engine. 180/25 = 7.2 rounded down to 7 heat sinks in the engine. The design has 10 Double Heat sinks, meaning it should have to allocate 3 of them (10-7).

The Record sheet has 4 DHS allocated, 2 in the RT and 2 in the LT.

Fix: Remove one of the DHS from the RT and move all items in that torso up.
« Last Edit: 06 March 2012, 03:30:28 by Xotl »

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #22 on: 03 May 2012, 06:23:32 »
Quote from: PDF edition, p. 13, "Plagued By Blake"
Over twenty worlds report infection rates of 150 per 100,000 and eight worlds (Denebola, Liberty, Muphrid, Northwind, Nuskan, Styx, and Woodstock) report mortality rates in excess of thirty per 100,000

Typo: The correct name for the system/planet is Nusakan according to published maps, not Nuskan.

Solution: Change Nuskan to Nusakan.



Quote from: PDF edition, p. 45, "Timeline of the Jihad"
(20 May 3068) Skye/Bolan forces take Preston, Rexburg and McAfee.

Typo: The correct name for the system/planet is McAffe, not McAfee. The entry on the same page for 2 July spells the name correctly, for comparison purposes.

Solution: Change McAfee to McAffe.



Quote from: PDF edition, p. 45, "Timeline of the Jihad"
(1 August 3068) By this date, the Word of Blake non-violently secures full control over the governments of Acamar, Arboris, Car Coroli, Caph, Capolla, Epsilon Indi, New Home, Terra Firma, and Shiloh.

Typo: The correct name for the system/planet according to maps such as that on p. 63 of Jihad: Final Reckoning is Cor Caroli, not Car Coroli. The entry on the same page for 2 July spells the name correctly, for comparison purposes.

Solution: Change Car Coroli to Cor Caroli.



PDF edition, p. 53, "Timeline of the Jihad", 21 March 3075 entry

Typo: The description of the raid on Isesaki aimed at the HQ of Isesaki Shipping gives the location of the HQ as Ukonosi City. According to House Kurita (The Draconis Combine) p. 165 (PDF edition), Isesaki Shipping's HQ is located in the city of Ukonsoi. The narrative description of the raid in Jihad Hot Spots: 3076 p. 36 also gives the name of the city hit as Ukonsoi.

This typo is replicated in Jihad Hot Spots: Terra in the Jihad Timeline entry on p. 15.



Quote from: PDF edition, p. 54, "Timeline of the Jihad", 25 April 3075
Naomi Centrella-Liao visits Andurien as an envoy of both the Capellan Confederation and the Magitracy of Canopus

Typo: it should be Magistracy, not Magitracy.

This typo isn't replicated in the corresponding entry in Jihad Hot Spots: Terra p. 16 - it appears to be unique to Jihad: Final Reckoning.



Quote from: PDF edition, p. 55, "Timeline of the Jihad", 1-25 April
(1-25 April) Stragglers from Clan Ice Hellion reportedly raid the Periphery edge of the Ghost Bear Dominion, hitting Holmsbu, Constance and Pinnacle, before Rasalhague KungsArmé forces manage to pin them down on Damian.

Issue: According to the Timeline of the Jihad in Jihad Hot Spots: Terra  the events described above occured between the 1st and 25th of March, not April; this matches with the original article in Jihad Hot Spots: 3076, which is dated the 14th of March 3076.

Solution: Change the date range in Jihad: Final Reckoning to 1-25 March, to match the earlier sources.



Quote from: PDF edition, p. 92, "The Rim Commonality"
(1-25 April) This lack was only slightly alleviated when Colonel Bortmann sold the Bad Dream’s remaining ’Mechs to the state before formally disbanding the command.

Issue: The CO's name appears to be a typo. According to previous publications such as the Mercenaries: Supplemental Update and the Field Report: FWLM the CO of the Bad Dream during this era is Colonel Bortman, not Bortmann.

Solution: Change the CO's name given to Bortman in this paragraph.
« Last Edit: 22 June 2012, 14:16:51 by BrokenMnemonic »

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #23 on: 05 March 2013, 01:40:23 »
p. 165 (.pdf) S-PW-1LAM PWWKA record sheet

Typo: All three clan ER medium lasers show that they generate 7 heat

Solution: Change the 7 to a 5

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #24 on: 06 June 2013, 13:49:40 »
2011 print edition

Problem: In the "Gestalts" overview on page 150 it is said that there are no confirmed accounts of "Gestalts" being felled by local insurgents. Yet in the chapter "Machina Domini" on page 135 it is mentioned, that rebels managed to down a solitary machine and to kill its pilot.

My suggestion: Delete one of the contradicting statements.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #25 on: 03 November 2014, 16:01:25 »
pg 167  the WANETA sheet has a 4 jump but has 6 Improved Jump Jets this a mis print on the sheet? the annex states that it has 6 jump

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #26 on: 19 March 2015, 08:48:47 »
PG. 164 Revenant Record Sheet

Head Armor indicates armor value of 6, but there are 9 circles in the graphic, 9 armor points in the head would put the mech overweight at 30.5t. 

Suggested fix:
change record sheet to have 6 points of armor in the head.

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #27 on: 22 January 2022, 20:04:14 »
PDF, page 43 Map

Issue: Mica I is on the map label

Correction: Change to Mica II

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Re: Jihad: Final Reckoning
« Reply #28 on: 16 July 2022, 21:18:20 »
LOCATION: p. 60, "(12-19 October)"

THE ERROR:
"Summit opens with official dedication of the rebuilt Castle Davion and New Avalon City."

THE CORRECTION:
drop the "New"; there is an allowance that the city was re-named in the dedication ceremony, but the summary format of the "Jihad In Review" appears an odd decision as the only place/time (in the sourcebook) to reveal the new name.