I got out of bed for this? (Featuring Lisa Quentin)

[BATTLEMASTER]

IMO the end of the story was the one part after the trial of refusal, or thereabouts. The rest of the family and Clan conclusion is epilogue (sp?).

I don't mind the political stuff or character opinions.  It's all fictional and characters are entitled to their opinions - it makes them relatable and realistic.  After all, how many big cities, including Chicago, were destroyed in Bayformers?

Thanks for the story 

[croaker]

You've reached a good stopping point, enjoy it. Move on to the next idea.

[Hellraiser]

Aww,  but I wanted to see what Phoebe was going to create with her van load of toys.

Great Job,  Good Story!