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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #30 on: 12 May 2020, 22:05:38 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #31 on: 13 May 2020, 03:09:45 »
Will our little eyas take flight, fall out of the nest, or just flop? New fiction!

http://faithmccarron.blogspot.com/2020/05/dropship-blood-castle-anywhere-system.html
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #32 on: 14 May 2020, 03:10:23 »
The Falcons strike another world. Will our new heroine help or hinder the cause....

http://faithmccarron.blogspot.com/2020/05/woke-next-morning-and-although-their.html
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #33 on: 14 May 2020, 15:24:04 »
And just caught up...

Nicely written so far.  I'm enjoying the characters and the story.  Thanks for sharing.
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #34 on: 15 May 2020, 02:45:04 »
Glad you are liking it so far. It's been in my head for a while.
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #35 on: 15 May 2020, 02:46:01 »
No good deed goes unpunished, right? At least not for my heroines...

http://faithmccarron.blogspot.com/2020/05/dropship-blood-castle-steelton-tamar.html
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #36 on: 16 May 2020, 03:08:56 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #37 on: 16 May 2020, 10:43:37 »
 ;D ;D ;D ;D  :thumbsup:

Are you sure Lovvins is a Falcon?  Or maybe he has a trace of Chistu in him.   ;)
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #38 on: 19 May 2020, 02:26:49 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #39 on: 19 May 2020, 04:22:37 »
Our heroine faces her first "official" trial as a Falcon...


http://faithmccarron.blogspot.com/2020/05/fiona-stood-at-entrance-to-what.html
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #40 on: 19 May 2020, 06:17:57 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #41 on: 19 May 2020, 20:30:37 »
Nice.  Good fight, interesting times with her parents.  Thanks for sharing. 

I like the short, tight installments.
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"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #42 on: 20 May 2020, 10:17:21 »
Glad you are enjoying! Here's another nugget...

To trust old friends again or not...???
http://faithmccarron.blogspot.com/2020/05/hadnt-taken-them-long-to-get-berthed.html
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #43 on: 20 May 2020, 14:16:21 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #44 on: 22 May 2020, 12:04:40 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #45 on: 23 May 2020, 17:13:28 »
Wow.  That was cold.  :thumbsup:
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"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #46 on: 24 May 2020, 04:17:27 »
Glad you liked. I mean, if you're going to sever ties with the inner Sphere, you may as well do it with a bang...or an airlock.
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #47 on: 24 May 2020, 22:41:35 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #49 on: 25 May 2020, 14:33:43 »
Sheltered indeed... but the character interactions are great.  Alvin & Abner- two very different lives.
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"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #50 on: 25 May 2020, 15:41:33 »
Glad you are enjoying the side characters I'm using to shape her narrative. It's fun trying to find different avenues to explore.
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #51 on: 25 May 2020, 16:17:43 »
These side characters make everyone else more 3 dimensional and broaden the story.  And they all have different "voices" making the story richer.  Thanks.
There are no fish in my pond.
"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #52 on: 25 May 2020, 18:33:40 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #53 on: 26 May 2020, 03:44:35 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #55 on: 26 May 2020, 23:08:23 »
Now that was a neat little setup someone organized with the missiles.  Very clever.
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"First, one brief announcement. I just want to mention, for those who have asked, that absolutely nothing what so ever happened today in sector 83x9x12. I repeat, nothing happened. Please remain calm." Susan Ivanova
"Solve a man's problems with violence, help him for a day. Teach a man to solve his problems with violence, help him for a lifetime." - Belkar Bitterleaf
Romo Lampkin could have gotten Stefan Amaris off with a warning.

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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #56 on: 27 May 2020, 14:51:26 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #57 on: 28 May 2020, 13:44:28 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #58 on: 30 May 2020, 12:02:50 »
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Re: New Fiction: Clan Invasion
« Reply #59 on: 01 June 2020, 20:24:43 »
I hesitated to post the link to this blog post here, but reader feedback made me think twice, so here you go, a small aside illuminating the author a little bit...

http://faithmccarron.blogspot.com/2020/06/musings-on-personal-milestone.html
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