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Cannonshop

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #870 on: 24 January 2022, 10:06:53 »
[out of story]

I kind of hit a point I can't go further and it's wandering.  Too many side-plots.

I'm going to tie this one off for now.
"If ye love wealth better than liberty,
the tranquility of servitude
better than the animating contest of freedom,
go home from us in peace.
We ask not your counsels or your arms.
Crouch down and lick the hands which feed you.
May your chains set lightly upon you,
and may posterity forget that you were our countrymen."-Samuel Adams

Ajax_Wolf

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #871 on: 24 January 2022, 10:30:40 »
ok, but will we be seeing more of Mike and crew?
Why does everyone "Fire at Will"? Is he really that bad of a person? And what did he do to make everyone want to shoot him?

If a group of necrophiliacs met a group of zombies, who would do the chasing?

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Cannonshop

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #872 on: 24 January 2022, 11:11:45 »
ok, but will we be seeing more of Mike and crew?

They're among those I want to develop better, Mike Hogarth deserves his own story, unencumbered, as it were, with all the other baggage.
"If ye love wealth better than liberty,
the tranquility of servitude
better than the animating contest of freedom,
go home from us in peace.
We ask not your counsels or your arms.
Crouch down and lick the hands which feed you.
May your chains set lightly upon you,
and may posterity forget that you were our countrymen."-Samuel Adams

Euphonium

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #873 on: 24 January 2022, 11:40:48 »
Thank you for the story so far, it's been a good read!
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Daryk

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #874 on: 24 January 2022, 20:25:56 »
Bummer!  But I'll take all the Mike Hogarth stories you can write!  :thumbsup:

Ramblefire

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #875 on: 24 January 2022, 22:09:33 »
A shame, but if you actually don't like writing this one anymore than don't let any of us make you do anything you don't want to.

Although I really would like to read more about the adventures of Michael Hogarth.

ThePW

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #876 on: 25 January 2022, 01:26:44 »
What i do wish is you return to this at a later date. We blame you (YOU) for creating The American Horror Story series for Battletech. This particualr one has stuff of interest...  :))

DOC_Agren

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #877 on: 25 January 2022, 20:08:55 »
 :'(  this one has come to it's ending

but I have faith there will be more Cannonshop stories to come
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Daryk

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #878 on: 25 January 2022, 20:26:29 »
Well, that's at least two of us keeping a watch for the next Cannonshop fanfic!  8)

cklammer

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #879 on: 31 January 2022, 14:30:14 »
A well done tale :-)

mikecj

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Re: War is a grave.
« Reply #880 on: 31 January 2022, 14:56:27 »
Well, that's at least two of us keeping a watch for the next Cannonshop fanfic!  8)

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