page 5, right column, top paragraph:
"The sergeant sword..."
Typo, suggested correction:
"The sergeant swore..."
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page 5, right column, last paragraph:
"The squeal of armor plates, actuators and tank tracks were the only sound..."
"Squeal" is singular, "were" is plural. Suggested correction:
"The squeal of armor plates, actuators and tank tracks was the only sound..."
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page 6, left column, second-to-last paragraph:
"The trooper pretended study the papers for a few seconds then grunted. “Ja, Fräulein.†He handed the papers back and made a dismissive gesture. The trio of girls simpered at the solder..."
Missing word, missing letter. Suggested correction:
"The trooper pretended to study the papers for a few seconds then grunted. “Ja, Fräulein.†He handed the papers back and made a dismissive gesture. The trio of girls simpered at the soldier..."
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page 6, last word and page 7, first line:
"Second, story just to the left..."
Placement of comma, suggested correction:
"Second story, just to the left..."
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page 8, right column, line 18ff.:
"Peeking over the rise, he saw them charging toward the hulking machine. While Baker and the other squads laid down covering fire."
Sentence structure, suggested correction:
"Peeking over the rise, he saw them charging toward the hulking machine while Baker and the other squads laid down covering fire."
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page 9, left column, third paragraph:
"“Yes?†he called?"
Question mark. Suggested correction:
"“Yes?†he called."
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page 9, left column, fourth paragraph:
"The small man’s eyes took in the scene didn’t react."
Suggested correction:
"The small man’s eyes took in the scene but [he] didn’t react."
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page 16, last sentence:
"No state could afford to do so and risk the being marginalized."
Superfluous word. Suggested correction:
"No state could afford to do so and risk being marginalized."
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