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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #480 on: 23 December 2016, 04:06:58 »
Wrangler - no Peter Steiner-Davion yet plenty other ships named after Davions, Steiners or Steiner-Davions though

Vition2 - correct its pretty much a framework at Schyler and the destroyers are at Midway but they are in not operational unless you want to use canon Davion tactics.

marauder648 - the designs of the aerospace fighters are from the forum James Tanaga found them a while back and hopefully remembers the link.  The OmniMech and Battleship will appear soon enough it's going to be in service of the Federated Suns/Lyran Commonwealth and SLDF.

Up next is Christmas even if I am working into it.  So for everyone who had read this story, if you've commented or not, added you own contributions or just enjoyed the story have a Merry Christmas.

And as a Christmas present in the rest of this year...

A bloody hand, one crazy monkey, a Cat and a Dragon, a Varnay and a Mailed Fist, Furey steps into the light, the Hunter gets his due, Falcons rise, New First Lord, FWL cracks, a darkness rises in the depths of the Clans, betrayal is unveiled in the Federated Suns.

There's a bit more going on but I'll leave you with those to speculate over
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #481 on: 23 December 2016, 08:55:50 »
 ;D O0 :)) :)) :P  thank you for your AU!  Hmm... sounds like the new year for the AU will be interesting!!!  keep it up

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #482 on: 23 December 2016, 09:23:35 »
Dragon Cat you're a terrible tease!  Never ever change!  It has been a pleasure to contribute towards this amazing TL and thank you for accepting my random drabbles!

Ghost Bears: Cute and cuddly. Until you remember its a BLOODY BEAR!

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #483 on: 23 December 2016, 17:13:44 »
Thanks for the New Year tease. ;D
Merry Xmas and Happy New Year.
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #484 on: 23 December 2016, 17:21:54 »
You tease, merry Christmas and a happy new year to you all.

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #485 on: 28 December 2016, 01:06:40 »
Bonus before end of year (maybe an update coming haven't decided if I'm happy with it yet)

Indefatigable-class Battleship - including the original by JA Baker
http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=55882.msg1284433#msg1284433
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #486 on: 28 December 2016, 09:10:16 »
 O0 nice design!

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #487 on: 28 December 2016, 12:52:11 »
She's a beasty ship for sure!
Ghost Bears: Cute and cuddly. Until you remember its a BLOODY BEAR!

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #488 on: 28 December 2016, 19:45:57 »
This ship should make a big difference in the short term for the Lyrans and SLDF. O0
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #489 on: 31 December 2016, 14:47:04 »
FWL cracks

Not sure I like the sound of that.

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #490 on: 31 December 2016, 18:24:09 »
Not sure I like the sound of that.

I didn't say break though O0

Have a good new year all
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #491 on: 01 January 2017, 00:49:52 »
I read your old stuff all last year....  More new current stuff please!  ;)
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #492 on: 01 January 2017, 03:08:13 »
I read your old stuff all last year....  More new current stuff please!  ;)
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Can a guy not have five minutes??  Oh wait I've had six hours let's see what I've rustled up...

(Wasn't quite six hours and James Tanaga did a bit too)

Opening Ceremony, SLDF Facility Focht War College
Kentares City, Kentares IV
Draconis March, Federated Suns
6th June 3107


   More than three hundred students stood in front of the Focht War College, a training facility that had once been built on Tukayyid, which had been reassembled piece by piece here on Kentares IV with the cooperation of the Federated Suns and Star League Protectorate Governments.  Kommandant Maria Rudolph stood looking out over the assembled students “you have come from across the Inner Sphere and Periphery with the sole purpose of learning and bettering yourselves.”  She began speaking Maria Rudolph was a twenty year veteran of the Eridani Light Horse Brigade she had learned the way of fighting as part of the Elite brigade and had fought battles on more than two dozen worlds however she had also helped teach the dependents of the Eridani teaching them more than just combat skills dedicating her life to the future generations making her the perfect new leader of the facility.  “Some of you will return to your home realms with a greater understanding of the other nations of the Inner Sphere, others will join the ranks of the Star League Defence Force, to the many mercenary units or into civilian life employing the skills you have learned here to pursue whatever you want…” suddenly from behind Maria Rudolph in the foyer of facility a huge explosion ripped through the front of the College the blast and fire enveloped Kommandant Maria Rudolph, dozens of dignitaries including Duke David Dresari, the leader of Kentares, and spread over the crowd with debris showering the students causing dozens of fatalities and several more serious casualties.

   From across Kentares emergency responders attend the site of the damaged College to evacuate casualties.  Among the dead lay Maria Rudolph and David Dresari and nearly eighty of the students.  Several days later an HPG Broadcast from the “Sixth of June” claims responsibility for the explosion stating that “Blake’s Word will rise once again.”  Star League Protectorate and Federated Suns governments vow not to be bowed by terrorist attacks and intimidation and continue with the opening of the school despite the losses and the damage done with Kentares Militia training facilities doubling as a College Campus until the Focht War College is fully repaired.

Capellan Offensive
District of Oriente
Free Worlds League
12th June 3107


   Under the command of Isabelle Fisk several Capellan Confederation regiments move into the “Ipswich thumb” which consists of three systems that have been isolated from the rest of the District of Oriente.  Isabelle Fisk personally commands the assault on Pella II leading the Red Lancers against the Fourth Oriente Lancers killing the Free Worlds League unit’s commander in personal combat.  With the Fourth all but destroyed on Pella II the mercenary commands directed to defend Ipswich and Shuen Wan quickly fold under the assaults of Capellan Regiments supported by naval forces.

Khan’s quarters, RCDS Snarling Mandrill (Overlord C)
Schuyler, Alberio Prefecture
Military District of Pesht, Draconis Combine
13th June, 3107


Khan Natasha Faraday stood, drying her still-wet body from a shower, as she looked down on the holo-display of Jonathan Banacek, her saKhan.

“I warned you before we came here,” he grumbled to her, annoyed. “Trying to find a specific asteroid in an asteroid field is like looking for a needle in a haystack. Are you sure the Dragons have yet to destroy it?”

She sighed, as they revisited the argument. “The K-F drive manufacturing plant is in one of the asteroids. It is too important for the Dragons to destroy.”

“If it is so important to them, then why has the complex not yet been repaired?” he countered. “The Dragons had close to fifty years to get it back online since the dezgra Blakists attacked it.  They have the facilities earlier and where are the extensive defences?”

She shrugged. “If the plant was up and running the Bears would have hit Schuyler and the surrounding systems to either destroy or capture it and the Dragons would have lost one of their few remaining JumpShip yards at the time. So long as the plant remained down, the Bears did not entirely mind.  As for the defences the yards themselves are a state perhaps the Dragon does not think this system is worth trying to defend.”.

Jonathan grumbled to himself as he turned his head to look at something off camera before turning his gaze back at her. “And you are sure the Dragons had not moved the facility out of system, quiaff?”  He asked as she pulled on her duty vest preparing for another day on the planet.

“Aff,” she answered confidently back. “If they did, the Bears would certainly know about it.”

“As long as the Bear is not playing games with us…” saKhan Jonathan Banacek sighed again as Natasha continued to dress. “Has the Dragons on the planet’s surface been destroyed yet?”

Natasha shook her head looking back at the holo. “We currently have the Fourteenth District of Pesht Regulars pinned down in between a mountain range, but I am waiting until the Third Battle and Nineteenth Striker Clusters reposition themselves to finish them off. The First Cavalry Cluster has begun to garrison the capital city after destroying the dezgra mercs they took the fight into the city.”  She remarked disgusted by the tactic bending over to tighten her boot laces smiling as she thought about the Mandrill boots smashing the Mercenary Battalion.  Fighting in the city had cost her almost two Trinaries including a portion of Brienne Redburn’s nova but it had been worth it and the young Collection warrior had now been blooded claiming a kill over a mercenary Dragon BattleMech.

“Once you destroy the Dragons, I will signal the JumpShip fleet to begin evacuating the DropShip and JumpShip yards, Quiaff?” he asked.

“Aff,” Natasha answered back. “The sooner we begin disassembling the JumpShip yards from this world, the sooner we can get out of here. We do not have near enough forces in system to truly keep the system to ourselves for very long, with the Raven fight finishing sooner than we hoped we could face a counter attack at any time” she reminded him. “Still, I am hoping for us to find the asteroid before we withdraw from the system.”

“I know,” Jonathan agreed. “The K-F manufacturing plant would have jumpstarted our plans. Still, even the yards as they are currently will expedite them great.” He paused for a moment and smiled. “You concentrate on getting the yards out of here and I on the missing asteroid, quiaff?”

Aff,” she answered back, smiling.

Draconis Combine Counter-attack
Qandahar Prefecture, Pesht Military District
Draconis Combine
20th June 3107


   Working together with the Star League Defence Force several units of the Draconis Combine Mustered Society cross into the Nova Cat Occupation zone liberating Harshill, Gravenhage and Lupine V.  The DCMS/SLDF units destroy the Nova Cat’s Anders McKenna, a Swiftsure-class Cruiser, in the Gravenhage system while driving back the White Aerie, a Black Lion-class Battle-cruiser.  On the ground elements of the 201st Nova Cat’s Roar Cluster, the 109th Striker Cluster and Seventh Nova Cat Roar Cluster are destroyed as is the DCMS Sixth Pesht Regulars as are half of the Fifth Yokosuka Land Air Mech Regiment.

Command Deck, RCDS Snarling Mandrill (Overlord C)
Schuyler, Alberio Prefecture
Military District of Pesht, Draconis Combine
24th June, 3107


Natasha stormed into the command centre onboard her DropShip, Brienne hot on her tail. Both had been enjoying a sparing session in the cargo bay as their BattleMechs were repaired following another skirmish with DCMS forces on the planet.  Again the Mandrills had taken damage they couldn’t afford and again the DCMS units had faded away this time disappearing into the morning fog.

“Sitrep!” she shouted.

“The RCS Ash Storm and the RCS Firebrand are both reporting a WarShip have entered the system via a pirate point, Khan,” the male Technician manning the communications station reported, as Natasha and Brienne closed in on the holo-table. “Piping into the communications feed now.”

“-rally to navpoint Charlie!” Natasha heard Star Commodore Jason Thastus of the RCS Ash Storm, their York-class Carrier, yell out the York was at the Nadir Point while the Firebrand, their new Hakaze-class Escort Destroyer held station at the Zenith.  Natasha guessed that Combine spies had informed their navy that the Mandrills defended the traditional jump points.

“Aff!” Natasha heard the slightly strained voice of the solahma Star Commodore in charge of the JumpShip fleet answered back. “Timeframe on your arrival?” he queried.

“Both the RCS Ash Storm and RCS Firebrand are bearing full speed to the fleet, RCJS Smiling Monkey,” the Star Commodore reported. “I have all my DropShips and fighters heading your way, but you will have to hold on until the RCS Firebrand can arrive.”

Natasha looked at the Elemental Star Captain manning the holo-table. He shook his head, causing Natasha’s heart to sink. The Draconis Combine WarShip, identified as the DCS Dedication to Duty, a Tatsumaki-class destroyer, was already closing in on the barely unprotected fleet of invaluable JumpShip and would arrive before the Mandrill WarShips facing only a handful of DropShips and aerospace fighters it would be a shooting gallery for the DCMS WarShip.

“If they take out the JumpShips-,” warned Brienne.

“I know!” Natasha cut her off as she studied the system map, hoping against hope there was some way to buy time for her JumpShip fleet otherwise their salvage mission and strike force were doomed.

Suddenly, saKhan Jonathan Banacek’s calm voice came through. “RCS Ash Storm, RCJS Crazy Monkey, transmit enemy WarShip’s coordinates, heading and speed. RCS Firebrand, confirm them immediately.”  He commanded

Natasha brunched her eyebrows together, not understanding what her fellow Fire Mandrill Warrior was up to his JumpShip was detached from the others still scanning the asteroids for the fabled Combine manufacturing plant even his DropShips and fighters couldn’t help against the Combine destroyer. Thirty seconds later, both WarShips confirmed the DCS Dedication to Duty’s coordinates.

A minute later, more Fire Mandrill blips came onto the holo-image. It dawned on Natasha what the wily Warrior was up to at the same time as Brienne. “Oh god!” she head the younger woman gasp out. Natasha ignored it, too transfixed at the holo-screen knowing what was about to happen and knowing there was nothing that she could do.

Just as the blips reached the safety limit, Natasha watched the RCJS Crazy Monkey jump, momentarily disappearing from the holo-screen, before just as quickly reappearing, nearly right on top of the DCS Dedication to Duty in reality the Odyssey-class JumpShip had likely emerged right in front of the charging Combine Destroyer leaving no time for evasive manoeuvres. A second later, both Mandrill JumpShip and Dragon WarShip disappeared from sensors replaced with wreckage and debris.

“Confirmed. The RCJS Crazy Monkey just jumped right on top of the Dragon destroyer,” Natasha heard Star Commodore Jason Thastus report. “Both ships destroyed,” he added sombrely.  The Khan looked down at the table mourning her saKhan, and friend’s death in silence for a moment before looking at the communication’s officer for a moment who nodded her understanding.

“Jonathan Banacek will be mourned by the Mandrills and all citizens of the Rim Collection” she said quietly knowing her calm voice would be transmitted to all Fire Mandrill units within reach.  As she spoke she felt Brienne Redburn’s hand join hers in support and companionship.  The Khan looked at the younger woman for a moment “he and his crew have secured their place in our Rememberance they will live eternally in our warrior caste and in our memories.  Together we must succeed so their sacrifices were not in vain.”  She said nodding again towards the communications officer to cut the transmission before looking back at the DropShip commander “pass to the cargo bay I want all of our units prepared for action immediately, including my OmniMech, I want to kill something.”  She stated leading Brienne out of the command deck their hands still linked.

AFFS Border Fight
Sarna Commonality
Capellan Confederation
28th June 3107


   With the Capellan Confederation focused on the District of Oriente Federated Suns units supported by elements of the Hampton’s Hessens, the Thirty-second Recon Group of the Lexington Combat Group, the Medusans, Clinton’s Cutthroats and the Fourth Illician Lancers Mercenary Commands assault the worlds of Heligoland, Kaifeng, Truth, Minnacora and New Sagan destroying elements of the Third and Fourth Capellan Defence Forces and completely destroying the Third Liao Lancers.  Supporting AFFS efforts in the Truth system is the FSS Iroquois, which is the sister ship of the FSS Indefatigable and the ships delivered to the Lyran Commonwealth, the Iroquois is not needed to fire a single shot but is a symbol of the AFFS strength over the Capellan Confederation.
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #493 on: 01 January 2017, 12:09:50 »
 O0  woo hoo!  Nice update!  Now I wonder if they Clan FM found the KF drive facility?

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #494 on: 01 January 2017, 12:44:22 »
Nice way to start the new years with a bang!
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #495 on: 01 January 2017, 17:12:52 »
The FS have their new Battleship Iroquois looking for trouble in the CapCon.
Do I smell a naval battle in the air for the new year. :D O0
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #496 on: 02 January 2017, 04:57:56 »
A great update and starting the new year with a series of bangs :)
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Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #497 on: 02 January 2017, 05:21:38 »
The FS have their new Battleship Iroquois looking for trouble in the CapCon.
Do I smell a naval battle in the air for the new year. :D O0
Only if the CapCon feel like losing a warship: they don't have anything that can stand against the FedSuns fleet  >:D
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #498 on: 02 January 2017, 05:42:41 »
Only if the CapCon feel like losing a warship: they don't have anything that can stand against the FedSuns fleet  >:D

If I didn't agree then I'd say you said that because you helped give the basics for their fleet  O0

What do you think of the reworked Indefatigable?
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #499 on: 02 January 2017, 10:30:14 »
If I didn't agree then I'd say you said that because you helped give the basics for their fleet  O0

What do you think of the reworked Indefatigable?
Just give the word and I'll build the Cappies something that can goes toe to toe with an Indy or a Mercury. I may be a loyal Son of the Sun's, but I'm also freelance  8)

As for the refit; fits your AU, so I have nothing against it. I built her to my tastes, and you're free to refit as you feel appropriate.
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #500 on: 03 January 2017, 04:43:27 »
For Marauder648

Link below is the three Collection omnifighters. I found them while looking for fan-created omnifghters with 350 XL engines on the forums. My plan was originally just one new omnifighter for the Fire Mandrills but liked all three enough I put them into my part of the story. Like always, Master Arminas did a beautiful job.  ;)

http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=24674.0

Only thing missing is an Elemental-carrier configuration for the Hun, which I am slowly working on.

Some info on who produces the three omnifghters. While Clan Fire Mandrill designed the Sarmatia, Clan Sea Fox (Steelsoul Khanate) so far is the lone manufacturer. Clans Snow Raven and Jade Falcon have shown some interest in the design.

Clans Fire Mandrill and Hell's Horses both produce the Parthia, with all the Clans having a keen interest in the design, all wanting to replace their aging Visigoths with it.

Clan Fire Mandrill remains the lone manufacturer of the Hun, though all Clans have an interest in it, Clans Nova Cat and Snow Raven especially.

Rasalhague Dominion while not manufacturing any yet, has recently gained the production specs of all three.



This is the Kirghiz-M battlemech the Collection militia clusters are slowly getting. Not the -G series Omnimech, but something Dragon Cat created for me.

Here you go my first run through of the Kirghiz.  Plan being that you described it as slow so it goes slower than a standard assault even with an Extra Light Engine. 

You'll note that the Extra Light is of IS manufacture the idea being that the Mandrills are using their XL plants on OmniMechs while diluting their tech with IS equivalents.

The Streak SRM launchers follow the same path using IS tech they are smaller than the ones on the Primary configuration of the OmniFighter.  Same goes for the ER Large Lasers.  Main reason behind these is ER Lasers and Streaks I thought made the best sense to use IS tech as it isn't much different weight wise than their Clan equivalents and pretty much do the same job.

The ballistic weaponry and heat sinks are a different proposition.  The ballistic weapons of the IS gauss is way too heavy for this design so it got dropped while the LBX is too bulky.  The Heat sinks I went with the same too bulks so kept with Clan variants.

Standard armour and Standard structure makes more sense because it's a Standard Mech class so we don't need to see cutting edge tech on it and I couldn't find space.  I was tempted to throw a Composite or Endo Composite structure on it but if honest I'd only do that if I wanted to use more IS guns or a Light Fusion Engine (which I would have but wanted more heat sinks)

Let me know what you think if you want the armour balance changed (ie more or less rear on the torso) or the placement of the guns changed let me know.  Only thing I don't want to change is the Streak SRMs just because it's different than what you'd expect.

Kirghiz G

Mass: 100 tons
Tech Base: Mixed
Chassis Config: Biped
Rules Level: Experimental Tech
Era: All Eras (non-canon)
Tech Rating/Era Availability: X/X-X-X-A
Production Year: 0
Cost: 17,424,667 C-Bills
Battle Value: 2,117

Chassis: Unknown Standard
Power Plant: Unknown 200 Fusion XL Engine
Walking Speed: 21.6 km/h
Maximum Speed: 32.4 km/h
Jump Jets: None
    Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Unknown Standard Armor
Armament:
    2  (CL) Gauss Rifles
    2  (IS) ER Large Lasers
    1  (CL) LB 10-X AC
    2  (IS) Streak SRM-4s
Manufacturer: Unknown
    Primary Factory: Unknown
Communications System: Unknown
Targeting and Tracking System: Unknown

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Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
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Internal Structure: Standard                     152 points               10.00
Engine:             XL Engine                    200                       4.50
    Walking MP: 2
    Running MP: 3
    Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks:         (CL) Double Heat Sink        14(28)                    4.00
    Heat Sink Locations: 1 CT, 4 LT, 1 LA
Gyro:               Standard                                               2.00
Cockpit:            Standard                                               3.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA    R: SH+UA
Armor:              Standard Armor               AV - 296                 18.50
    CASE Locations: RT, LA, RA                                             0.00

                                                      Internal       Armor     
                                                      Structure      Factor     
                                                Head     3            9         
                                        Center Torso     31           49       
                                 Center Torso (rear)                  12       
                                           L/R Torso     21           31       
                                    L/R Torso (rear)                  11       
                                             L/R Arm     17           31       
                                             L/R Leg     21           40       

================================================================================
Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
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(CL) LB 10-X AC                              RT        2         5        10.00
(CL) Gauss Rifle                             RA        1         6        12.00
(IS) ER Large Laser                          RA        12        2         5.00
(CL) Gauss Rifle                             LA        1         6        12.00
(IS) ER Large Laser                          LA        12        2         5.00
(IS) Streak SRM-4                            RL        3         1         3.00
(IS) Streak SRM-4                            LL        3         1         3.00
@LB 10-X (Cluster) (10)                      RT        -         1         1.00
@LB 10-X (Slug) (10)                         RT        -         1         1.00
@Streak SRM-4 (50)                           RT        -         2         2.00
@Gauss Rifle (16)                            RA        -         2         2.00
@Gauss Rifle (8)                             RL        -         1         1.00
@Gauss Rifle (8)                             LL        -         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 2

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:     10    Points: 21
2          6       6       5       0      4     1   Structure:  4
Special Abilities: CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA, FLK 1/1/1



Again the above is the -M series, though it does say -G since it was Dragon Cat's first run through designing it for me.

Awesome design by the way! Not the Assault omnimech I was looking for originally, but a more then capable battlemech that will be seen in my Fire Mandrill parts as time goes on  ;)

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #501 on: 03 January 2017, 07:24:37 »
Ah hah! There they are :) Thank you James that really cleared up the Clan fighters and Mech's for us.  The Groundzig is also a really good defensive mech, she's a fine replacement for the Mars tank or a suppliment for it and makes good use of available tech.
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« Reply #502 on: 03 January 2017, 12:50:54 »
Trade Station
Kessel, Kessel Prefecture
Dieron Military District, Draconis Combine
7th July 3107


   For nearly two weeks terrorists had held the Kessel Trade Outpost and nearly forty hostages including a Star League Defence Force trade delegation.  Negotiations were going nowhere and the DEST had their orders.  Explosions and smoke rocked the Trade Outpost as sixteen Battle Armoured DEST troopers each dressed in Kishi Battle Armour suits smashed through the roof.  The whirl of the suits support machine guns filled the air followed by the roar as the weapons opened fire on the conventionally armoured terrorists.  The small arms fire from the terrorists was no match for the heavy weapons fire however neither was the trade outpost which suffered significant damage during the ten minute assault.

   Following the brief battle all of the terrorists are confirmed to be dead each of them torn to pieces by the heavy Kishi fire however over half of the hostages are also found to be dead including all but one of the SLDF trade delegation.  While it is clear the situation needed to be resolved the Star League questions why the DEST troopers made use of a new front-line Battle Armour suit with strong anti-armour capabilities which would likely cause high collateral damage instead of a known quantity like the Kage which could have made a precision strike and minimized the losses to the hostages.  The DCMS rebukes the SLDF comments stating that while the losses among the hostages were regrettable the DCMS had intelligence that the hostages were equipped with weapons capable of damaging Battle Armour which made the use of Kage suits a risk to the success to the operation which was unacceptable.

DropShip Rubicon
Independent Colony, Fasa City
Fasa, Deep Periphery
14th July 3107


   Following Operation Klondlike the original colony of Fasa taken over by the new Clans its people distributed moved to Strana Mechty and inducted into Clan society while the colony itself had been completely dismantled and the colony world abandoned.  Over the course of the Clan withdrawal from the Clan Homeworlds people fleeing the Society had fallen back to Fasa re-establishing the colony.  Now after all these years the colony had swelled to almost seventy-five thousand men women and children who wanted to live free of the Society and surprisingly the Society left the system be.

   On board an ancient Overlord-class DropShip that had been built into the colony years before Star Colonel Alex fought with another member of the Clan in one of the converted Mechbays on board the ship the two attacking and countering each other.  Off to the side an female in late forties, wearing a black and red jumpsuit entered and watched the two warriors spar.  After a moment Alex became aware of the observer and fought harder against his opponent knocking the other man to the ground.  The other warrior came back to his feet and bowed his surrender to Alex before turning and moving away.  Alex moved over to a grey metal bench picking up a towel before moving over towards the woman “Galaxy Commander Schmitt I did not realize you were on planet.”  He said greeting her

   “Congratulations on your victory yesterday, Star Colonel, I see your wounds have healed.”  She said glancing at the scar on his chest.

   “I pulled the stitches a couple of times but I am ready for duty and to take the fight to the Society.”

   “Very good” she said looking at him “grab your top there is something I need to show you.”  She said heading back out the door.  Alex quickly grabbed his jacket and followed the Galaxy Commander through the DropShip and outside onto the snow covered street it seemed whatever planet he was on at the moment was in its winter cycle.  “Do you know why Fasa works as a colony?”

   “Because there is nothing strategic here neither out Clan or the Society has attempted to gain dominance here these people do not care to fight for the Kerensky Cluster and the Society do not see them as a threat.”

   “But they have weapons” she pointed out the Rifleman IIC BattleMech standing at the end of the street was testimony to that.  “They also have territory and JumpShips so why do we not fight over this world?”

   “I do not know Galaxy Commander” Alex said it felt strange mingling with the people of Fasa and feeling like he was a hundred light years from a threat there was no war.  Since the conflict with the Society began there had been no war here.

   “Of course you do not few of us know the full truth of Fasa” Schmitt admitted “today you join a small group that know the truth.”  She said stopping in the middle of the street “look over there and tell me what you see.”  She said indicating towards the restaurant which had been cut out of the side of another DropShip with a fabric canopy covering most of the seating area.  Alex studied the seating area for several moments before seeing something, he looked a second time, he reached for his weapon before being stopped by Schmitt her hold on his arm strong and secure.  “I see you realize what this place’s secret is?”

   “That is Scientist General Gibson the head of the Society’s Research and Development.  He is responsible for the deaths of millions of citizens of the Kerensky Cluster.”  Alex said his lock still firm on the weapon but Schmitt’s grip not lessening.

   “Aff, he is a monster” she admitted “he is our enemy and we will not give up until he is dead and all of his kind are dead as well.”  She said Alex could hear the anger in her voice.  The young warrior felt a cold shiver pass over him as the Scientist General looked in their direction their eyes seemed to meet for a moment but Alex was sure he was actually looking directly at Karen Schmitt beside him.  “We have an unspoken agreement with the Society, Alex, we do not bring war to Fasa and nor will they.  We both need this world for trade and intelligence we learn things about the Society here and they learn things about our Clan here.”

   “How can we accept that?”  He demanded the Clan had taken great lengths to keep their current base of operations a closely held secret even Alex who would soon command a Cluster would not know where the homeworld was.

   “Because this place is a necessary evil” Schmitt admitted “every war has things that people will not agree with.  They do not break any laws and are not morally wrong but there is always something that will not sit well with you.”  She explained “this Compromise on Fasa is something that both us and the Society have to accept.  It is not a choice do you understand Alex?  If you come here representing our Clan and with your people there can be no retribution taken on the Society here.  The people here are innocent of the war and it is to remain that way.”

   “As long as the Society keeps to their end of it” Alex said his grip loosening on his sidearm but his eyes not leaving Scientist General Gibson.

   “They will until the bitter end” Schmitt said “now come, we need to eat but we won’t be eating with that bastard how about something from Circe?” She said keeping her grip on Alex’s arm drawing him away from their standoff with Gibson and into the main street of the bustling capital city of Fasa a world in the middle of a war but completely removed from it.

Briefing Room, Lyran High Command
Tharkad City, Tharkad
Donegal Province, Lyran Commonwealth
30th July 3107


   Kelly Varnay nervously brushed at her dress uniform trying to clean off yet another speck of dirt off it.  She had been summoned to Tharkad almost as soon as her unit had been pulled off the front-lines and back to Kaumberg while the rest of the unit had continued home she and her company commanders had been ordered to report to the High Command as soon as they arrived on Tharkad.  Once they had arrived she had been escorted here to this briefing room where she waited.  For the last thirty-four years she had done everything she had been expected to everything a Varnay would not do ever since her mother and uncle had smuggled her away from her father in the Federated Suns and into the Lyran Commonwealth.  She knew her mother had tried to take her older sister Terra with them but she had refused to come scared of being uncovered they had run.  Yet after all her efforts she was here, pacing the room Kelly looked around but took little of the room in, she was angry she had fought off the Stone Spirits and taken the initiative with actions that the generals could not take yet here she was.  The doors opened and in entered General of Armies Aiden Grey who had re-established his full command of the Lyran Commonwealth Armed Forces following the Stone Spirit crisis Kommandant Kelly Varnay instantly came to attention.  The General closed the door behind him and looked her over for a moment “at east Kommandant” he ordered with a disarming smile “welcome to Tharkad.”

   “Thank you, sir, sir if I could speak for my actions that have led me to this point…”  She began as Grey began to sit but the General raised his hand silencing her then turned it towards a chair opposite his indicating for her to sit

   “I want to thank you Kommandant” he said as she sat Kelly Varnay looked stunned and remained silent.  “The Rapid Response units were laughed at by the High Command when I first cleared their formation but your successes proved my faith in the concept so much so it has been decided that we will be raising further commands.”  He said leaning back in his chair taking in the stunned silence from the younger woman opposite him.  “I assume this is not how you expected today to go?”  He asked all she did was nod “you are not your father” he said quietly realizing where at least some of this was coming from “I do not know how you feel about House Davion but you are a loyal daughter of the Lyran Commonwealth I can see that as can the Archon.”  He said placing a small box on the table between them pushing it towards them “so as of this date you are a Leutenant-Colonel in the Lyran Commonwealth Armed Forces.  You will retain command of the First Fesnyng” he announced seeing her surprise “when you put the name on your official reports you have to expect it to catch on.”

   “Yes sir” she said wondering if he knew if the name referred to a number of ferrets together… but remained quiet she liked the name it described what her unit was a group that worked closely together and could fill each other’s rolls if required they worked as a tightly knit team.

   “Your unit is rotating to York there it will train with further Fesnyng units and bring new flexibility to the LCAF.”  He said finally surprising her as far as she was aware her unit had been rotated back to Kaumberg.

   “What about the Kaumberg militia?  They will be short staffed if my unit is not being reintegrated.”

   “We will take care of Kaumberg” he promised her.  He said “I’d also like to show you this” he said pressing a control on the table activating the holo projector.  This is a new DropShip design that was submitted to the LCAF for consideration.”  He said the blue holographic image displayed an aerodyne type DropShip that was roughly oval in shape as it turned in front of her.  Unlike most DropShips the ship appeared to have three distinct hull sections with the two wings spreading out from the nose and reconnecting at the rear of the ship leaving open space between the wings and the primary hull which appeared to be streamlined with multiple decks.  At the rear of the ship there was a massive engine section.  “We hope to develop this basic design into the Fesnyng-class DropShip specifically built to transport your new rapid response units combined with a single JumpShip we hope to make your units completely mobile able to respond to threats across our Commonwealth.”  He said Kelly felt embarrassed she had thought she was coming to Tharkad to be disciplined for disobeying orders and taking the fight to the enemy but instead they had opened up so many opportunities for her and her people.

   “Thank you for the opportunity sir” she finally said “we won’t let you down.”

   “I know you won’t” Aiden Grey said standing up as Kelly did the General of Armies extended his hand and they shook “you have our full support, Colonel, now go out and give the Commonwealth a new weapon.”
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #503 on: 04 January 2017, 07:14:19 »
Snow Raven After Action Report - created by Vition2 with a little polishing from me

http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=55961.msg1285918#msg1285918

Kirghiz M - now with fluff and a bit cleaned up

http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=55962.new#new
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My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #504 on: 04 January 2017, 08:47:34 »
nice update!

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #505 on: 04 January 2017, 13:11:37 »
Very nice update.

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #506 on: 05 January 2017, 00:01:25 »
Superb updates :)
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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #507 on: 05 January 2017, 08:16:42 »
Time for a little update

Hot Drop
Babylon, Pentagon Worlds
Deep Periphery
9th August 3107


   “Okay listen up boys and girls the Fourteenth have been pushed, battered and beaten but they are still standing on Babylon.”  Alex said sitting in his Conjurer’s cockpit as it was carried towards Babylon’s surface inside the DropShip.   Alex glanced around the small cockpit of his fifty ton BattleMech looking for the worlds the BattleMech had never seen war, it was a brand-new variant of the Conjurer built within the last six months to support operations against the Society, it had no stories to tell and no words to give up.  “We are all in this together let’s make sure the Fourteenth know that.”  He commanded cutting off the link as the DropShip began to rumble as hit the atmosphere.  “Here we go” he announced a couple of moments later looking at his sensors which were connected to the DropShip’s.  Outside the DropShip aerospace fighters rose through the atmosphere heading towards the DropShip “at four hundred metres jumpers go, secure our LZ, the rest of us when we land we get out of the DropShip we hit the Society hard.  We are going to locate the Fourteenth and allow them to ex-filtrate to the DropShip then we get ourselves out.  I want you all to get back on board the DropShip.”  He said as the DropShip came closer to the ground he knew if there was heavy Society resistance they wouldn’t all be coming back he’d already lost some as the aerospace fighters belonging to the Clan and to the Society continued to fight and die in the air.

“Jumpers go!”  He commanded watching metres tick by from the DropShip’s Mechbay a binary of BattleMechs and OmniMechs, carrying a star of Power Armoured Elemental troops and a star of ProtoMechs dropped from the Overlord-C heading towards the ground.  In an ideal world Alex would have had three full trinaries of OmniMechs to use from a DropShip of this size but this was not an ideal world instead all he had beyond what had just dropped from the DropShip was a second binary of ten ground-bound BattleMechs including his own Mech.  Alex watched the sensor feed as the BattleMechs and ProtoMechs fell around them aerospace fighters circled and ready to pounce.  Alex watched the sensors helpless as the Society aerospace fighters strafed his falling BattleMechs and ProtoMechs as they fell several of the battle armoured troopers, who were riding on board the OmniMechs, were knocked off the Mechs killed by the attack.  “For the cause” Alex whispered so his microphone wouldn’t pick up the words then louder fortunately the Mechs had all survived but the Elementals that had been hit were gone “ground force stand-by” he said as the DropShip rocked to a landing “go, go, go!”  He commanded throttling his BattleMech forward the Overlord’s doors opened as soon as the DropShip landed “Alpha Deployment, Alpha deployment!”  He commanded moving his Conjurer onto the ground already a battle was fully engaged between the forces that had dropped in and the Society forces already on planet.  Alex moved his BattleMech into the firing line immediately targeting a Septicemia OmniMech with his Conjurer’s LB X-class autocannon, short range lasers and one of his two large lasers.  Immediately there was a small spike in heat in the cockpit but Alex was glad to see the right arm of the enemy Mech fall off the OmniMech a burned and broken shadow of what it was before.

   Alongside Alex’s Conjurer an allied Shadow Hawk IIC stepped up alongside and unloaded its weapons into the target followed by the particle cannons from an Adder OmniMech.  The combination of the three Clan Mechs targeting the single Septicemia brought the enemy OmniMech down quickly.  “Adam, April kill it” he commanded the Shadow Hawk and Adder pilots the old laws of Zellbrigen had been forgotten by the Clan in its conflict with the Society neither of his sibmates ignored the command or hesitated.  With the Septicemia dealt with Alex had a moment to look at his sensors and take stock of what was happening he saw there were at least two Society Treys in the immediate area.  “Team One, step away from the line, we are a go” he said turning his BattleMech backwards turning away from the Society Mechs and towards the east “Team Two, keep the back door open Star Captain Jorgensson you are in command” he said.  The operation was simple Alex’s team would locate what remained of the Fourteenth while the other group of Clan Mechs and Battle Armour would remain and defend the DropShip.

   Around Alex a binary of BattleMechs and all of the remaining ProtoMechs ran through Babylon’s forests charging towards the last known position of the Fourteenth.  “Lima Fourteen, I repeat Lima Fourteen, this is Lima Two, repeat Lima Two, we are on Gamma and ready for Echo.  Charlie Oscar I repeat Charlie Oscar.”  He called out on an open channel the code words were generalized and would be picked out by their enemy but it was all they could do.  Smashing his fifty ton BattleMech through tree branches Alex caught a glance of something moving off to his right “Lima Fourteen?”  He called out raising his Mech’s right arm which held the autocannon aiming it at the sighting.

   “Down sir” the warrior said as Alex’s BattleMech cleared the trees the words hit Alex as if he had run into a brick wall.  As his Conjurer cleared the trees he saw a battered sixty-five ton Ebon Jaguar bearing the Clan’s insignia barely standing after the beating it had taken.

   “How many… how many are left?”  Alex struggled scanning the area around the allied OmniMech.

   “Twenty-one of us including a few support staff” the warrior said the words hit him as hard as the words confirming Mike Lassenem’s passing the Fourteenth had over one hundred staff including techs and support staff the command had been completely shattered in seven months of fighting against the Society.  “Sir, Lassenem gave me the Intelligence file he said that you would come for it.”

   “We came for you” Alex said stepping his Mech forward allowing his words to sink in with the other pilot he was aware of another Mech in close proximity glancing at his sensors he saw it was Elrick’s Summoner.  Alex switched comm. channels onto his own units “Elrick situation report” he commanded.

   “Sir, fighters are holding the air but we are running out of time.  We think there is the equivalent of a Society Cluster being mobilized to track down us and what is left of the Fourteenth.”  The older warrior reported with Alex’s promotion to Cluster command Elrick had finally received his promotion to Star Captain making him one of Alex’s most senior warriors a fact that he often reminded the younger Star Colonel.

   “There is not much left of the Fourteenth, we are pulling them out in one go.  Pass word to orbit we will squeeze them into our DropShip” he commanded overloading the DropShip would be frowned on but given that he hadn’t come to Babylon with a full unit the additional units and people shouldn’t stress the old Overlord too much.  He switched back to the general frequency “your people need to be ready to move now, Quiaff?”

   “Aff this way” the other warrior replied the broken Ebon Jaguar turning leading deeper into the undergrowth.

   “Star Captain have our lighter elements spread out in this undergrowth their eyes will be more useful than our sensors.  And pass to all of Team Two keep an eye on the Fourteenth something feels off.”  He said watching the Ebon Jaguar move despite its damage the OmniMech was moving very smoothly and each time Alex tried to scan the OmniMech his Conjurer’s systems were jammed by interference something that shouldn’t happen between friendly units.  The entered a clearing and Alex stopped short in the middle of the clearing there was Star Colonel Mike Lassenem’s Blood Asp OmniMech standing to attention facing an Osteon OmniMech painted in Society colours between the two OmniMechs was a pair of wires and hanging from the wires were bodies, at least two dozen of them.

   “Your precious Fourteenth all that remains of Clan…” the Ebon Jaguar pilot began to say just as Alex triggered all of his weapons into the back of the heavy OmniMech.  At this range there was no chance of missing the target every shot went straight into the back of the Ebon Jaguar knocking through the armour and internal structure shattering the fusion engine and gyro inside in seconds.  Safety systems quickly activated powering down the OmniMech as it fell to the ground destroyed.  Beside him Elrick was already firing on the Osteon but Alex could see more units coming in from in front of them and he could hear the ProtoMech pilots calling in that they were being engaged by Clan forces on all sides.

   “Fall back all units fall back to the DropShip!”  Alex screamed firing his autocannon, missiles and one of his large lasers as quickly as they would cycle was he began to pull back the Conjurer.  “Star Captain I said fall back” Alex commanded seeing Elrick and two other Mechs accelerating forwards engaging the enemy.

   “We will Colonel after you withdraw, you are the future of our Clan Alex, I am a solahma we are ready for this. FOR THE CAUSE!”  Elrick shouted continuing to fire his weapons on the heavier Osteon.  The massively armoured OmniMech standing up to the punishment as other Mechs arrived to support it Alex could see the bodies of the members of the Fourteenth had fall to the ground while the Blood Asp continued to stand strong.

   “You stubborn old man” Alex cursed “none of you will not be forgotten” Alex promised Elrick continuing to withdraw as one of the Mechs standing with the Star Captain’s Summoner was knocked to the ground under fire from several Society units.  “Team One firing retreat cover your partners let’s go” he said turning his Mech withdrawing into the undergrowth.  Like the others Alex twisted his BattleMech’s turret styled torso to fire on the enemy units while withdrawing along an irregular route it made for a longer distance and slower retreat but it also made them a harder target.  Elrick and the others fell quickly after Alex had withdrawn several of the ProtoMech pilots and two light BattleMechs had continuously attacked the incoming Society units keeping them off balance as they advanced it was suicide for Alex’s units but if they didn’t do it then none of them would escape.

   Clearing the trees Alex turned directly towards the DropShip he saw many of the units he had left guarding the DropShip were already boarding the DropShip.  “Star Captain Jorgennson you heard I assume?”

   “Aff, Star Colonel, nasty business.”  The Elemental warrior confirmed Alex noted that he still stood outside the DropShip along with most of the battle armour.

   “Is our own nasty business in place?”  Alex asked he noticed a simple green light acknowledgement from Jorgennson and assumed the Elemental was busy talking to someone else so continued.  “Understood, when you are ready Star Captain Jorgennson deliver our presents.”  Alex commanded seeing the last of his units return to the landing zone.  Moments later the entire tree line for three hundred metres in every direction was engulfed in a massive napalm explosion the fire would burn for three days if not tackled by the Society and would be enough to keep all but the most nimble of enemy units at bay.  “There is nothing left for us here all units withdraw.  They have won today but we will win this war.”  Alex said with Mike Lassenem’s death the words felt hollow they had failed to recover any intelligence for the planet, failed to rescue any members of the Fourteenth and failed to ex-filtrate one of their Clan’s most respected Cluster commanders.  This was a defeat on every level and today Alex was not sure if even he believed they could stop the Society perhaps the Clans were right perhaps their future was in the Inner Sphere.

Mechbay, Twin Sons Defence Base
Badlands, Twin Sons
District of Lesnovo, Free Worlds League
13th August 3107


   Forty-two cadets stood in lines to attention in front of several defence Mechs of the Twin Sons Defence Forces among the cadets stood Petra Furey, daughter of Michael and Sandra Furey.  Over the years the Twin Sons had united and divided more than ever with the Northern and Southern factions had warred as often as they had supported the reborn Free Worlds League.  While on Twin Sons the remnant Smoke Jaguar population who remained on the planet had become more and more radical in their beliefs that a single unifying force was needed to control the Twin Sons something Petra’s father Michael Furey had tried to control them over the years.  Petra knew that the Jaguar WarShip Streaking Mist had successfully avoided falling under the control of the Free Worlds League and the Twin Sons governments and there was a growing contingent of warriors who believed in the Smoke Jaguar way.

   As defacto leaders of the Smoke Jaguars and by extension of the Badlands Michael and Sandra Furey attempted to keep the peace on Twin Sons and had directed Petra towards the united defence force of the planet instead of supporting the Smoke Jaguars or Badlands forces with the intention that she could be the glue that held their world together.  Standing with the other cadets in the Mechbay Petra realized she didn’t care about being the glue looking up at the lead BattleMech of the Second Twin Sons Regiment, a fifty ton Uziel, she realized all she wanted to do was pilot a BattleMech and the rest would fall into place as she desired.  Either side of her stood other cadets from all across the Twin Sons each of them desired the same thing each of them had dreamed of being a MechWarrior and now they were here they had their chance.

Counter-attack
Schuyler, Alberio Prefecture
Military District of Pesht, Draconis Combine
18th August 3107


   MechWarrior Shauni Hartford’s stomach was in bits as the DropShip entered the atmosphere fourteen hours before the Fourth Amphigean Legion’s JumpShip had jumped into a pirate point in the Schuyler system and released their four DropShips heading for the planet.  They had passed the dispersing wreckage of the DCS Dedication of Duty and then made the high G burn towards the planet for fourteen hours the MechWarriors and armour crews had tried to rest inside their Mechs and vehicles as the DropShips burned towards the planet.

   The DropShip rocked heavily as it dropped through towards Schuyler Shauni didn’t know if it was because of the turbulence or if it was because of attacks from Fire Mandrill Aerospace units but she knew that soon it would be over and they’d be on the ground or they’d be dead.  The DropShip rocked almost constantly as the altitude decreased the lights in front of Shauni’s BattleMech began to blink orange giving her a countdown to the planet’s surface.  Suddenly the Mechbay lights turned green and the Mechdoors opened allowing the MechWarriors to exit.  Shauni stepped her Ha Otoko 3 BattleMech forwards towards the exit door immediately stepping into a barrage of autocannon fire which had been targeted on the DropShip doors as the Fire Mandrills attempted to contest the landing zones.  Shauni sighted an enemy BattleMech, a Fire Mandrill Crimson Langur OmniMech, and let rip with both of her Mech’s arm mounted extended range large lasers immediately following up with a volley of long range missiles from both torso launchers.

   “All MechWarriors hold the perimeter until our armour and infantry disembark” Tai-sa Kusunoki Masashige commanded as his Hatamoto-Chi stepped out of the DropShip immediately being hit by a long range missile volley ripping open the torso armour.  Masashige returned fire with his particle cannons into the undergrowth targeting a Mandrill Macaque armoured vehicle blowing through its armour burning off the ammunition bay the vehicle’s CASE was the only thing that saved the vehicle sending the blast through the rear and side of the vehicle.  It was out of the fight but the crew would fight another day.  Shauni got back to her own battle targeting a Fire Mandrill Shadow Cat targeting the OmniMech with two barrages of long range missiles she saw several of the missiles slamming into the OmniMech’s cockpit glass which shattered inwards the Shadow Cat stumbled and then fell to the ground without its pilot.  Off to her right the Crimson Langur reappeared firing a red large laser blast and twin opal heavy laser blasts into the side of Shauni’s BattleMech causing heavy armour damage destroying the large laser and medium laser in her Mech’s right arm.  She twisted the torso of the damaged Mech and raised the left arm firing the remaining two lasers and both long range missile launchers at the OmniMech while accelerating her Mech trying to avoid a second salvo of laser fire from the Crimson Langur this time the right leg took the brunt of the fire melting away the armour there.

   “Inferno missiles on the east and southern flanks lay down cover fire and smoke we are falling back to the North West.  The Order is ABADON repeat ABADON.”  Kusunoki Masashige commanded as his BattleMech took several autocannon blasts followed by more missile strikes.  The order for ABADON stated that the landing zone was lost and all remaining forces were to escape to fight an irregular battle at a later date.  Shauni ignored the order for a moment firing on the Crimson Langur again burning away more of the armour on the fifty ton OmniMech more laser blasts tore into the side of the Ha Otoko as the Mandrill pilot returned fire shattering her BattleMech’s knee actuator.  “Strike four ABADON” Kusunoki ordered her directly seeing she still stood where she was firing at the enemy OmniMech.  Kusunoki opened fire with his own particle cannons smashing the Crimson Langur’s right leg Shauni opened fire with her own lasers targeting the left leg knocking the Mandrill OmniMech to the ground disabled.

   “Negative Tai-sa, I will be standing rearguard with you, leg actuator damage” she said seeing that his BattleMech had not moved from the DropShips.

   “Understood then we buy them enough time to escape” he commanded “cover the right I have the left” he said she noticed there was a few of the heaviest vehicles which were remaining in position as well their crews knowing that there was no way for them to escape.  The fighting seemed to go on for hours with the two BattleMechs and six armoured vehicles holding position firing on the Fire Mandrills as they swarmed the landing zones.  When she ran out of missiles Shauni continued to fire her lasers and AP Gauss rifle until they too had been disabled or the ammunition was gone.  Kusunoki continued to stand against everything that the Mandrills threw at his Mech but even the Tai-sa’s BattleMech could not take the damage that was being thrown at him.  The Tai-sa’s Hatamoto-Chi exploded behind her Ha Otoko the blast knocking her BattleMech to the ground twisting her broken right leg disabling the BattleMech with no ammunition and her BattleMech immobile Shauni drew her Katana the blade of a warrior ready to die with honour but this fight was not her end.  As the Combine vehicles were disabled Mandrill Power Armour units moved in to mop up what remained with Shauni locked inside her cockpit the Mandrill warriors detonated concussion blasts on the outside of the BattleMech knocking the MechWarrior out without killing her.

   With complete air superiority the Fire Mandrill aerospace fighters were able to attack the retreating DCMS units for hours causing damage and harrying the Fourth Ampigean Leion as it retreated from the LZ.  But despite the Fire Mandrill successes at the landing zone two combined-arms battalions of Draconis Combine troops were able to escape into the wilderness of Schuyler prepared to resist the Clan invaders until their last breath.

Meeting Room, Ken’s Authentic Chinese Cuisine
Chinatown, New Canton
Star League Protectorate
21st August 3107


   In the backroom of a small restaurant in New Canton’s Chinatown district the Federated Suns DMI representative was escorted by local gang members into the rear room where he saw the single occupant already waited.  Sitting at the table was an individual dressed in a green power armour suit with the helmet still on concealing his identity while on the table were two Sternsnatch Slug thrower Pistols the DMI agent was not dressed for combat wearing a simple black suit and black sunglasses so he chose the diplomatic route.  “Mr Grant” the agent said looking at the suit “I did not expect to see you here in person is the Star League aware you are here?”  He asked the trooper remained completely silent “come now Mr Grant we know it is you inside that suit you spoiled the mystique of the Bounty Hunter by that little stunt on Robinson.  We were quite impressed that you stayed within the AFFS for so long to complete that job.”  He said moving around the trooper who still remained silent.  “I am wondering why you called for this meeting?  You must know that the Federated Suns will never forgive you for the assassination of Tancred Sandoval.”  He said stepping back towards the door “now Mr Grant tell me why I am here or it is time for me to leave.”

   “I do not know why you think I am this Grant you are speaking about” the Power Armour suited trooper said standing up the voice was distinctly feminine.  “If you refer to Christopher Grant he was simply an agent of mine” she said stepping forwards placing her hand on the agent’s shoulder gripping the expensive suit the DMI man wore.

   “Then I apologies” the man said turning around the Bounty Hunter allowing their hand to slip off his shoulder “my name is Smith a pleasure to meet you” he said removing his sunglasses revealing piercing blue eyes underneath “you are still an enemy of the Federated Suns.”

   “Convenient” the Bounty Hunter replied

   “Convenient?”  The agent asked surprised by the Bounty Hunter’s reaction.

   “Yes” the figure answered “I am your friend when I complete a contract for the Federated Suns to kill someone, which I have done many times,” they said walking around Agent Smith “but when I complete a contract for a Federated Suns citizen I am your enemy.”

   “You murdered a March Lord!”  Smith snapped

   “His position had nothing to do with the contract” the Bounty Hunter replied reaching over slipping a small data disk into the Agent’s top pocket “it was entirely a family affair.”  The Bounty Hunter said stepping around the Agent again “the person who took out this contract believed that they could rule the Draconis March better than Tancred Sandoval’s children they wanted to serve the Federated Suns in a greater capacity.”

   “By having someone killed”

   “Come now Agent Smith we have already agreed that the Federated Suns has contracted the Bounty Hunter to kill people in the past.  House Davion has killed many people in the past the only difference between House Davion ordering someone killed and me killing someone is I do it for money it is simple business.”  The Bounty Hunter said stepping towards the door “I want to continue to do business with the Federated Suns but it is up to you.”  They said finally before disappearing out the door.  Smith reached for his concealed communicator to alert the other DMI agents but found it was jammed instead he reached for the disk and pushed it into the top slot on the communicator glancing over the first few pages of the contract the Bounty Hunter had revealed.  If what Smith had read on the disk was true then he was quite relieved that the communicator was jammed now the DMI had work to do to verify the findings.

Training Room, Clan Staging Area
Barcella, Kerensky Cluster
Deep Periphery
23rd August 3107


   Alex screamed as his boot connected with the combat-helmet sending it across the room.  He was alone in the training room and had been alone for most of the last two weeks as he had tried to get over the loss of the Fourteenth and Mike Lassenem.  Grief was not something that warriors were supposed to dwell on but he couldn’t help himself he walked over to the gear rack and threw another helmet across the room trying to vent some of the anger he was feeling.

   “Do you intend on breaking everything on this base?”  Star Colonel David Nostra, the base commander, asked.  David Nostra, a former Nova Cat warrior, was completely calm at Alex’s attitude.

   “Perhaps” Alex admitted not looking at the other man “why not?”

   “Because it is not something that an officer or a bloodnamed warrior should be doing” Nostra said noting Alex’s recent victory in the bloodname contest for Mike Lassenem’s Bloodname.  “You have a legacy to uphold Star Colonel.”

   “Some legacy” Alex said looking back at David Nostra “what exactly are we David?  A hodgepodge collection of former clan warriors who have come together to what die slowly?”  He said angrily “we can’t win this!”  He said angrily

   “As long as the homeworld remains hidden we can survive” David said calmly “we are one Clan, we agreed to follow one Khan, and we stand against the Society where all else have fallen.  For the Cause.”  He said repeating the words that all Clan warriors knew to heart Alex Lassenem nodded he was no longer a member of the Hell’s Horses Clan he along with all others had given up that right when the other Clans withdrew from the Homeworlds they were now under one banner.

   “We have another mission for your unit” David Nostra said “if you are ready for it then follow me.”  He said without another words turning towards the exit.  Alex looked at the two combat helmets still lying on the floor for a moment before leaving following the other Star Colonel.  David Nostra moved through  the small complex and down into the Mechbay walking along past the Clan Mechs that were sitting in their bays silent waiting for their pilots they walked straight past Alex’s Conjurer to the furthest area of the Mechbay.  David Nostra stopped in front of a trio of Osteon OmniMechs which had been captured from the Society.

   “What are we doing here?”  Alex demanded barely able to look at the Osteon remembering the OmniMech from the death of Mike Lassenem and the Fourteenth.

   “This is going to be your new Mech while two others will pilot the other Mechs and three other warriors will pilot other captured Society designs.  Your mission will take you into Society territory on Babylon impersonating a Society escort force” David Nostra said Alex dreaded returning to that world “we are going to send you in front of a major offensive against the Society.  Your people will try to gather the intelligence we failed to get from the Fourteenth” he explained seeing Alex’s reaction “I know… before you say anything it was not the fault of the Fourteenth but they attempted to approach it as a Clan unit collecting intelligence as we do.  We need you to think out of the box.  Think as a Society unit does and gather strike data for our forces to exploit in an all out assault on Babylon.”

   “We do not have the resources to capture and hold Babylon” Alex said in fact they did but it would take all of their remaining WarShips and the majority of their ground forces to capture and hold the planet and even then it would be only for a couple of days then Society reinforcements would arrive and the planet would be lost once more.

   “You are correct but we can hit Babylon at the right time.  Overwhelm the defenders in that particular region and complete our mission.”  David Nostra explained

   “What is the target?”

   “That is need to know” David Nostra explained

   “Need to know?  I will be the man on the ground when this happens I need to know.”  Alex snapped angrily “if you do not tell me I will challenge you and defeat you in a Circle of Equals for the information.”  He said he was a clan warrior and would stand by these actions.

   “How do you know that I know the ultimate objectives?”  David Nostra asked his words and actions were very unclan-like but then these were unclan-like times.  The Star Colonel looked around the bay as if afraid someone who shouldn’t be was listening he looked back at Alex and spoke in a hushed tone “your mission will expose a weakness in the Society’s structure and set them back years if all goes to plan, that’s all I can say.”  He said Alex didn’t like it but didn’t say anything further instead he looked at three powerful Osteons.

   “How will we be inserted into the Society?  They would expect something if we were to suddenly appear on Babylon.”  He finally asked.

   “You will be inserted into a Society relief column here on Barcella.  Your Mechs and others will replace those defending the convoy and then you will be shipped off to Babylon.  We’ve created fake Society papers for your travel they will pass customs on Barcella and by the time you are on Babylon no-one will know who should have been piloting those Mechs.”  He said confidently Alex wasn’t convinced all they needed was for one of the warriors to have contacted someone on Babylon privately and everything would be bust as soon as they got there.  “From there you will be under control of the Society your orders will be to gain intelligence on their operations and be ready to support our offensive operations.”  David Nostra said informing him of what parts of the operation he was aware of.  “You and the others will be given a drop-box location to leave intelligence but otherwise you will be on your own on Babylon as all of our other assets have been compromised or eliminated.”

   “Spy work is not work for a Clan warrior” Alex Lassenem grumbled he had no training for this he was a warrior he confronted things with weapons and with his fists not behind closed doors and with cloaks and daggers.

   “Conventional Clan tactics are not effective enough.  The only military options that would be effective are Nuclear Biological or Chemical weapons or orbital bombardment.  I think you’ll agree Star Colonel Quiaff?”

   “Aff” Alex agreed “I suggest Star Captain Jorgensson takes command of the Cluster while I am on… detached duty.”  He said finally looking back at the OmniMechs again it was not an ideal situation but perhaps it was for the best. 

Ambush
Barcella, Kerensky Cluster
Deep Periphery
26th August 3107


   The Clan forces on Barcella watched as the convoy moved into position through a shallow canyon as expected it was being escorted by three Osteons, two Septicemias and one Cephalus the exact composition of Alex’s substitute force.  Alex watched the Society forces move close “All units execute battle plan.”  He commanded as they entered the target area.  From all sides Clan units of various sizes engaged the six enemy Mechs with almost every weapon that a fighting unit could carry.  Even the robust nature of the Society OmniMechs was not enough to protect them from the amount of weapons fire directed on them all six were rapidly neutralized while Electronic Counter Measures covering the area blocked any transmissions.  “Elementals move in secure the transports, clean up teams remove the wreckage I want no sign of our fighting here.”  He commanded from the undergrowth.  “Mimic team move in” he said the five other warriors in captured Society OmniMechs moved out of their concealed positions and approached the six supply vehicles taking up the escort positions that had been occupied by the defenders before Alex could see plenty of mistakes with the defensive positions but decided to retain the Society positions.

   “Boss, the drivers are Barcella natives who just want to survive this thing, they will take you to the DropShips without issue.  I have got teams shadowing you if things go wrong we will pull you out before anything goes wrong.”  Star Captain Matt Jorgensson said Alex could see his Battle Armour suit jumping down from one of the vehicles.  “Good luck sir” he said Alex noted that the young Elemental did not say what would happen if things went wrong when they were onboard the DropShip mainly because by then it would be too late Alex checked his gauss pistol was still concealed in the cockpit glad to find it exactly where he had stashed it.  Even if the Society techs found it the weapon wouldn’t stand out plenty of MechWarriors had small arms hidden in their cockpits to be used as a last ditch defence for them if the cockpit was breached or if they needed.  Alex couldn’t help but feel a little apprehensive about the mission which was largely still an unknown but it was what the Clan needed to do and he would do everything he could to make sure it happened.
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #508 on: 05 January 2017, 13:28:28 »
Does this Clan on Fasa have name? This is a fascinating little jaunt in the Clan Homeworld Space.

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Re: Alternate Timeline with Thanks (FULL) Part 2
« Reply #509 on: 05 January 2017, 13:50:18 »
My three main Alternate Timeline with Thanks fan-fiction threads are in the links below. I'm always open to suggestions or additions to be incorporated so if you feel you wish to add something feel free. There's non-canon units, equipment, people, events, erm... Solar Systems spread throughout so please enjoy

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,20515.0.html - Part 1

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,52013.0.html - Part 2

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,79196.0.html - Part 3

 

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