I'm almost tempted to write off the whole novel as an in-universe Davion holofiction
I could go along with that!
I just finished an every so often re-reading when I've forgotten a number of the plot twists. It's still entertaining light summer reading (with a great many flaws).
The best part for my tastes are mechs in sensible military formations of mono or limited types that make much more sense for unit maintenance and supply. I've never been fond of the motley assortment of mechs in every lance approach for the larger forces. Stackpole is my go-to inspiration for building Alpha Strike battalions. I'm back to working on my battalions again, and hence re-read the trilogy. And my Capellan battalion has a full company of Cicadas so I can do the battle on Kittery (with the Valkyrie:Rifleman duel somewhere off-table).
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As always, the book ends with the baddies winning again. With all the villain characters abounding, Hanse Davion is the biggest villain and jerk in the Inner Sphere, announcing he already started the 4th Succession War at the wedding. In-universe holofic is a great way to explain him as the supposed hero.
Not only is the marriage creepy, but Melissa Steiner goes from wailing over people dying for her sake to blithely drinking tea, watching holovids, and being kept in her chamber while 100,000,000 die in the war that was her wedding present.
Kym Sorenson is quite badly written, and inexplicably absent from the wedding and a confrontation with Justin.
Clovis Holstein is so cringely written, gah.
But overall pulpy styling, and big battles, yay!