Errata on pg110, Alshain:
"Currently, ten slips for commercial vessel repair and manufacturing cover the equatorial orbit, while the three massive WarShip dockyards follow a geosynchronous orbit above the northern pole."
There's no such thing as a "geosynchronous orbit" over a pole. Geosynchronous orbits follow the planet's rotation in such a way that the ground appears stationary below the satellite. This can only be done at the equator. At space station sticking over a pole would not be in an orbit; it'd be stationary.
Further, an orbit over the north pole is going to cross over the southern pole.
Accordingly, I'd suggest: "Currently, ten slips for commercial vessel repair and manufacturing cover the equatorial orbit, while the three massive WarShip dockyards follow a polar orbit."
Further, if the Tseng facility is in orbit, then the following sentence should be modified: "The elaborate Tseng Facility complex, which produces fighters and small craft in abundance, spreads like an elaborate glass spider web over the southern pole."
to
The elaborate Tseng Facility complex, which produces fighters and small craft in abundance, spreads like an elaborate glass spider web that drifts around the planet in a polar orbit.
