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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #450 on: 07 February 2021, 11:21:04 »
The point Elizabeth is trying to make is war crimes beget war crimes.  Or rather, "Oh, so you want to play with war crimes, do you?  Let me show you how it's done so you won't want to anymore..."
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #451 on: 07 February 2021, 14:22:23 »
The point Elizabeth is trying to make is war crimes beget war crimes.  Or rather, "Oh, you so want to play with war crimes, do you?  Let me show you how it's done so you won't want to anymore..."

Or as a fanfic put it "Pick the rules you want to play by, and those are the rules we'll play by."

This was a threat, that if one side was willing to fight dirty, then the "hero" was just fine with flipping the game table and lighting it on fire.  If one side tears up the laws of war, that morally and legally frees the other side from having to follow them either.

The Phone Companies decided that inviting two Clans into the New Star League was grounds for going to a war of no or jungle rules.  They don't get to bitch when their targets decide that throwing out the rules means they don't have to play nice either.

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #452 on: 07 February 2021, 14:35:38 »
Exactly!   :thumbsup:

And I have to say, the number of stories here that I literally can't wait for the next post is at an all time high.  We are SPOILED...  8)

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #453 on: 07 February 2021, 16:40:15 »
Kowloon, January 19, 3068...

Medical personnel were standing by as she went hard into labor.  The deliveries were really relatively easy-a son, and a daughter. 

Multiple births aren't common, but they aren't unheard of either.  Nathan Roshak was actually present for the births, though how 'present' a man passed out on the floor can be is anyone's guess.  The use of smelling-salts and a stiff drink propped him up long enough to meet his children.

His son already had hair, thin, fine and blonde like his father's, while the daughter had her mother's greenish hue.

"Patrick, and Amanda." Elizabeth said from the bed.  "That's their names, Nathan, our son and daughter."

intermixed with the vague confusion and shock, was pride as he regarded his children.

"give." she said, and he handed the small bundles awkwardly back to their mother.

She cradled the bundled children, one in each arm.  "We're going to make a better world for you both. Yes we are..." She looked up from her children, "Nathan, sweetheart? could you have the latest reports on the offensive brought up to my room please, and could you forward a request for a Commlink with Peter and Marthe? It's time we settled on a strategy to win this."
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #454 on: 07 February 2021, 16:50:56 »
Of COURSE Elizabeth would request those things right after childbirth...  ::)

For reference, I've been lucky enough (and for someone in the Navy, that's LUCKY) to see it four times now.  Women in that state are suprisingly lucid (anathesia notwithstanding), but no less... surprising!  :)

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #455 on: 08 February 2021, 11:07:14 »
Mandoaarau System, January 30, 3068...

Deep radar is how capital worlds run early warning.  Unfortunately, it's very expensive to operate, has a narrow field of view, and suffers from lightspeed delay.

The Star League Defense Force built a lot of their warship doctrine around the existence of it-both in terms of relying on it for early warning, and in developing techniques to take advantage of the light speed delay.  Deep Radar is the reason Aleksandr Kerensky was willing to spend time clearing the zenith and nadir points of the Sol system-The reliance on it meant that scrambled defense forces had to either be station bound near the proximity limit, or move from deep in-system bases-clearing the stations could be done before backup could arrive most of the time, because most system defenses in the Star League era moved at sublight speeds, creating delays of hours or even days, since a dropship can't outrun a lightspeed echo.

The Clans, Comstar, and the Word of Blake inherited SLDF doctrine.

The Mandaoaaru militia has been refit by the Kowloon Horde.  In a rare case of Orcs providing arms to non-Orcs, the local miliz was equipped, and trained, by the Kowloonese in the wake of the Civil war and the Falcon incursions.

Horde doctrine doesn't rely on sublight response, any more than Kowloonese industrial development relies on surface based industries.  Ngo Industries floated the loans for the Mandoaarau Key Stations, as well as the planet's space based industries.  What industries?

Refit and repair yards, metals processors and chemical refineries, null-gee foundries and petrochem harvesting from uninhabitable moons and gas giants.

It's been a boom here, the close economic partnership had to be protected, and the Horde gifted them rights to produce Longships, training in how to use them, and a doctrine.

The WOBS Infinite Sum, is a salvaged and rebuilt Luxor class vessel left behind in the Sol system when Kerensky left, she has a new jump-core, LF battery array, and fully reconditioned armor and armament.

The Militia has a squadron of twelve Sampan III Longships, a set of surveillance monitors at the major jump points linked with pulse-beacon blackboxed surveillance satellites, and a nice, uniform collection of fighters based on a carrier-modified pair of jumpships.

Horde trainers have been working with the local militia for the last eight years, they're well trained, but inexperienced.

The Blakist crew is also well trained, but inexperienced.

It's a clash of doctrine as much as a clash of arms, as the WOBS Infinite Sum enters the system to attack the space-based infrastructure with an escort of pocket warships and heavy fighters.

SLDF doctrine says the Luxor-class vessel has all of the advantages, with more, and heavier weapons, deadly escorting assault ships, and the ability to deliver more fighters.

Kowloon's doctrines include methods like FTL response and communication, depressurized combat vessels to limit fire and shockwave damage, mobility, and linked fire-control.  The methodology that the Mandos have been trained to use, is that of spacers who sometimes fight, rather than warriors who occasionally visit space.

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #456 on: 08 February 2021, 11:36:19 »
Small point - The Luxor class are Heavy Cruisers, not battleships.

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #457 on: 08 February 2021, 12:39:47 »
Small point - The Luxor class are Heavy Cruisers, not battleships.
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #458 on: 08 February 2021, 13:13:18 »
The methodology that the Mandos have been trained to use,

I see what you did there. ^-^  Do you want George taking another legal swipe at BattleTech?

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #459 on: 08 February 2021, 18:40:57 »
Odds on the Mandos using nukes? Anyone?  Bueller?  :D

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #460 on: 08 February 2021, 19:00:05 »
Odds on the Mandos using nukes? Anyone?  Bueller?  :D
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #461 on: 08 February 2021, 19:11:14 »
Thanks, but I've had enough cider in my ear for the time being.

That's just because you were caught using in cider information

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #462 on: 08 February 2021, 19:18:20 »
That pun...  ::)

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #463 on: 09 February 2021, 07:04:17 »
puns are loads of fun.
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #464 on: 09 February 2021, 11:25:52 »
That pun...  ::)

The pun is the lowest form of humour. It's author should be hung, drawn, and quoted.
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #465 on: 09 February 2021, 11:45:33 »
Arluna system...

Cadet Apprentice Debra Jane MacAulliffe's big brother flies big fighters for the Arluna Naval Reserve's 11th Squadron.  At Sixteen, she's still too young to attend Coventry Military Academy or enlist in the LCAF.

But the Horde will sign you up if you can pass the written and the physical, assuming your parents will sign the waiver, and she could pass both.

The verbal interview? well...

"Attention on deck."  The Black-helmet Training officer's voice was calm and level.  "MacAulliffe, Front and center."

She scrambled from her seat to snap to attention in front of the T.O., an Orc.

"These are your test results." he said, holding it up, "You've passed the top ninetieth percentile in maths and technical aptitude.  Your physicals are within eighty one percent of peak human for your age and build.  You will not be boarding ship for Basic Training."

"But whah???" she was shocked.

"You failed the verbal." he said it in front of the other applicants.  "you're going to be given one of two options when you walk through the door behind me.  Option one, is delayed entry program at the Giap Island Residential Academy where you will be drilled and trained in Rhetoric and elocution.  Option two, is to head back to Folsum County to return to your civilian life, you are not to make this decision until the board officer has explained what is involved in each of your two options fully, and you have had a chance to discuss this with the Staff Chaplains."  He regarded her with dark, purple eyes, and waited a breath.  "Do you understand?"

"Ayeh." she said, crestfallen.

"Proceed." he said, and gestured to the door at his back.

Debra squared her shoulders, and walked past him.

"Rickson, Gregory Gerald!" he was already calling the next candidate up  as she hesitated for a moment at the door.

hesitantly, she reached out, and turned the lever, opening the hatch and stepping through...

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Lt. Commander Anh Cu'ong was from the Spider Moon itself-a born rockjack, with mostly human ancestors.  She'd served with the Advisory Command Arluna since '65, and she'd been put in charge of the Recruiting office here in the Arluna system this year because it was her turn at the short straw.

The redhead in front of her, was Hillfolk, and Hillfolk made good infantry recruits, but the kid's scores were, in Anh's simple calculus, far too high to put on the ground as a grunt infantryman, too high for a tanker  either.  she shuffled papers, glancing at the girl in silence for several minutes.

"MacAulliffe." she said, "Do you understand why your enlistment was rejected?"

"No'm ah den't."  Debra said.

Anh laid the papers in a sharp-edged stack in a tray, and closed the cover to keep them from drifting.  "You signed up for Mechanized Infantry training." she said, "We did our evaluation.  You're not a good fit for self-propelled sandbag."

"Mayam?"

"You heard me.  My god your accent is atrocious in english as it is in German..." Anh shook her head,  "you scored upper ninety ninth percentile. Gifts in Mathematics and number theory, a natural candidate, Kids like you are why we put recruiter stations in out of the way areas on planets.  If you accept the offer I'm going to extend, you'll have to commit for a minimum ten years, with five of those being school."  Anh told her, "Unlike the enlisted, once you sign that contract you can't resign for ten years."

"contract?"

"Officer's training, MOS will be Navigation and command, and that means you have to take Elocution and Deportment, along with speech therapy-which extends your training period.  You'll be under Shipboard discipline for your entire career, MacAulliffe, that means leaves will be scarce and short, and demands will be high." Anh told her, "if you have any hesitation about that, you need to head out the blue door."  Anh gestured, "Because once you go through the Red Hatch, you're in the Horde and you can't leave until your term is up.  If you accept this, you'll come out the other side with Spacer's Guild certification, a Nest Egg and the possibility of partial ownership of a ship...and if you go through the blue door, you will return to your home, your life, and your family."

"kin ah ask mah Ma?" Debra inquired.

"No." Anh told her, "You have to make this choice on your own, joining the Horde as an Officer Trainee requires you to grow up now.  Your parent will have no say in what happens to you from the moment you sign your name and walk through the red door...which is why we offer it this way-you can go home, finish high school, apply at a Lyran State Academy and the letter of recommendation from this office will get you into the school of your choice, especially with these scores...but it's a choice you have to make."

Anh laid out the two PADDs, one was a letter of acceptance, the other, a recommendation that would get her into The Nagelring.

Debra's mind ran through the options, wheeling in confusion.

"Take your time." Anh told her, "we've got all night.  Would you like to speak with a chaplain before making your choice?"

Debbie swallowed.

she reached out...hesitated. 

She imagined what it would be like, being Hillfolk surrounded by the sons and daughters of nobility, the mockery and the teasing, worse than she'd had to deal with from the city kids in Folsum.

she took the padd.  looked at it.  read the contract, and then, she read the letter of recommendation, and then she read the contract again.

she applied her thumbprint to the contract, and signed, "Ah'm readah." she said.

"No, but you will be." Anh told her, "Dismissed Cadet."

Debra went through the red door.
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #466 on: 09 February 2021, 13:26:40 »
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #467 on: 09 February 2021, 16:49:32 »
When we're done with ya lil' one, you'll be one of the badassest gals all around the Commonwealth and fear won't be something that touches you easily. :thumbsup:
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #468 on: 09 February 2021, 20:37:53 »
She's going to put Seether to shame... I can't wait to read about it!  :thumbsup:

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #469 on: 10 February 2021, 13:08:19 »
[out of story]

I'm running out of steam on this one, I think I hit all the elements I could with this setting, at least, most of them.  I'm gonna tie this one off here for a while, might return to it sometime in the future.

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« Reply #470 on: 10 February 2021, 13:20:42 »
Thank you for a fun ride!
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #471 on: 10 February 2021, 13:58:18 »
Has been a hell of a ride so far Cannonshop. :clap: Thanks for that. :thumbsup:

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #472 on: 10 February 2021, 17:45:02 »
Definitely a fun read... I look forward to the future adventures of Jenny Cohen!  :thumbsup:

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #473 on: 10 February 2021, 18:36:30 »
Thanks Cannonshop, all the different Ngo stories you have dropped recently, I feel like I have jumped through alternate universes to watch the same story over and over.

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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #474 on: 10 February 2021, 18:58:53 »
Thank you!  Another fun look from 5 degrees askew.
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #475 on: 10 February 2021, 21:50:22 »
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Re: another shot at a fantasy mixup.
« Reply #476 on: 02 May 2021, 14:41:16 »
Cannonshop, I want to say this was a great read somehow I missed this one when it was out..
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