Author Topic: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor  (Read 31532 times)

marauder648

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #120 on: 15 May 2018, 02:15:34 »
damn good stuff as always!
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Kasaga

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #121 on: 15 May 2018, 05:17:09 »
My goal is to show the hostility between WoB and THiE

Kasaga

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #122 on: 23 May 2018, 19:32:15 »
Chapter one complete.  If I could get some feed back on this it would be great.  Should I post this in traditional Fanfic by forum updates or should I continue to post updated PDFs?

DOC_Agren

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #123 on: 23 May 2018, 19:52:32 »
a question are these what have already been written or rewrite/new pdf?

and i vote posting if it me
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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #124 on: 23 May 2018, 20:28:31 »
I vote for the regular text version as well, that way I can quote particularly interesting passages

Kasaga

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #125 on: 24 May 2018, 04:56:04 »
Ok I’ll run a new thread with From the Shadows and then I’ll repost the entire From Shadows to Light book.

Kasaga

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #126 on: 19 June 2019, 19:04:38 »
removed to fix my life and out a better product out.
« Last Edit: 21 June 2019, 10:48:50 by Kasaga »

Kasaga

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #127 on: 21 June 2019, 10:48:07 »
I took down the update as it's not what I am going for. I need to flesh out a few more things and like I the storyline back together. it's kinda disjointed at the moment.  sorry for the co fusion.

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #128 on: 21 June 2019, 18:14:21 »
i thought it was good.  looking forward to see what you come up with.

Kasaga

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Re: Project LEGION: Strength and Honor
« Reply #129 on: 22 June 2019, 05:29:12 »
well I just typed out this long nice response and then my phone deleted it. but short version Marauder did an awesome job of creating independent operating warships for clean fleets but these designs are not very good in fleets. or are too good. they all have tomany missile launchers for a battle group to use in my opinion.

Avalon 14
Temeraire 16
Typhon 10

So they will most likely be used in their intended roles and homes according to Marauders fluff.