The spelling is always an issue with these, which can be expected since they're direct to customer quickies, and the people who write them probably don't have the same resources as they do when they write stories.
This unit was way off the marker for me, it didn't work for me at all. The units character had no substance, it was just written, and that's about it. I didn't feel it at all and i had no strong reactions to any of the characters, whick IMO is not a good thing
There were a bunch at the beginning thatwere awesome, the very first one and the medical one, but I'm still waiting for someone to top those
