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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #210 on: 19 February 2020, 17:40:03 »
Good points, but I think Hanse's reasons have been pretty well explained in the story already, so there won't be too much (reader) surprise at them...

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #211 on: 20 February 2020, 03:14:40 »
LIC Station 73

"Names are Greg Cutter and Max Higgins," the operative, Alex Heinkel, reported. "Credentials indicate they're a pair of freelance mech pilots who came here looking for work a couple of weeks ago."

"Their timing's great," Major Genna Stern said. Too great, obviously, given what the two men had gotten up to. "Not pros, though."

"Professionals would have probably been better at it," Heinkel agreed. "They figured out the Hegemony lass' bodyguard well enough, but it didn't occur to them that we'd notice them too. I feel insulted, really."

"It's always best if people think you're incompetent in this game," Major Stern replied. "Except during budget allocation. You get eyes on them?"

"Picked out where they're staying and had it bugged before they got back," Heinkel confirmed. "They're speaking freely, mostly debating whether or not they should get off world or stick around for more orders."

Major Stern nooded. "Better if we can keep them onworld for a while. They're mechwarriors, you said. They got mechs?"

"Yes ma'am," Heinkel acknowledged. "In storage at the spaceport. Red tape?"

"Bury them in it," Major Stern confirmed. "So sorry, the system's been overwhelmed due to all the recent arrivals, so we can't release your mechs at the moment."

Heinkel nodded and made a note on his noteputer. The vagaries of bureaucracy were usually enough to sell the con all on their own, but the sudden influx of Hegemony ships would make it bulletproof. Unless they were willing to ditch their machines, that would keep both men onworld.

"We know who sent them?" Major Stern asked.

"Not yet," Heinkel replied. "They talk about a boss in the recordings, but no details. They described Colonel Adams' escort as 'some sort of domini', and the use of Domini as a slur for augments tends to hint at a Free Worlds origin, but it's hardly definite. Their tradecraft definitely indicates they don't do this for a living. We're thinking they were tapped because they were expendable."

"The fact that they don't know what to do next probably means they've been expended," Major Stern concluded. "Something tells me their boss figured we'd get eyes on them. Maybe even planned for it. A misdirect, or maybe there's a message for us in there, too. 'Hey look, I'm here too! There's more you don't know!'" She sighed. "Big ****** surprise there. Keep an eye on them. Anything from Krentz?"

This time Heinkel sighed. "Feeds from the surveillance in Krentz's apartment only just got uploaded, so the analysis team is still going through them." After the girl had casually taken out their active surveillance systems in the bar, they'd resorted to more stealthy means. The devices planted in Krentz's apartment recorded passively, and their data chips had to be recovered by hand after she left. It took away the vulnerability, but it slowed things down a bit.

"Our ears at the bar might have got something, though," Heinkel continued. "They didn't stay there long, but just before they left, she said something about studying French, Berber, and Auxum Arabic in school."

"Showing off," Major Stern said. "Fits the profile."

"Maybe," Heinkel said. "One of the analysts twigged on that and did some checking. She thinks Auxum Arabic refers to a dialect spoken in the Auxumite Providence."

"Never heard of it," Major Stern said.

"Neither had I," Heinkel said. "Apparently it's a tiny state about a thousand lightyears anti-spinward of Terra. Interstellar Expeditions found them in 3035, and formally made contact back in '85."

The implications were pretty clear. "Are you saying Interstellar Expeditions already found the Hegemony's bolt hole?" she asked.

"If they did, they don't know it," Heinkel said. "Apparently the Auxumites are relatively primitive, only an interstellar nation in the sense that they still have a couple of their old jumpships. Definitely no Hegemony in exile. But still..."

"Could be in the same neighborhood," Major Stern concluded. "It's a starting point."

"It's thin, though," Heinkel said. "Based on a guess about what Auxum Arabic is."

"It's more than we had yesterday," Major Stern said. "Kick it up the line."
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #212 on: 26 February 2020, 22:07:59 »
Author: So here's what's going on here. Either my inherent lack of confidence in my abilities have caught up with me, a set of pent up frustrations have ceased to be pent up making it difficult to concentrate, or I've been sick off and on for a month now and it's making me grouchy.

What that all means is that I've really only got it in me to putter around with small things at the moment. So this one is kind of on hold for the time being.

Much apologizings.
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #213 on: 27 February 2020, 02:10:35 »
No worries, dude.  Just want to say that there's nothing wrong with your writing, but I do get it.  Been there.  You write when you can. When you can't, you can't.
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #214 on: 27 February 2020, 03:54:55 »
Same!  That's at least two of us who will look forward to when you can write again!  :)

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #215 on: 27 February 2020, 18:43:43 »
Three.
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #216 on: 28 February 2020, 03:37:03 »
It takes as long as it takes.
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #217 on: 29 February 2020, 09:59:48 »
Gut' Ding will Weil haben.

=> English: Good things take their own time.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #218 on: 20 June 2020, 00:40:55 »
damn i get busy and you guys bring back an old god

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #219 on: 10 September 2021, 03:53:42 »
The passive devices they'd planted in Leutnant Krentz's apartment hadn't been strictly audio. In fact there had been a number of concealed cameras put into place. Three of them in his bedroom.

Of course nobody had told Leutnant Krentz that his activities with the Terran girl would be filmed in high resolution and examined in minute detail. He was primarily an analyst after all. Such knowledge might have tripped him up, or even made him forget his responsibilities.

"She seem strong to you?" One of the technicians said as they observed the recordings of the pair's most intimate moments.

"Excitement of the moment," the other remarked.

"I don't know," the first said. "That's sustained activity. She's, what? say forty kilos? No indication of developed muscle mass. She shouldn't be able to support his weight like that for that long. At the very least, you'd expect some sign of injury afterwards."

LIC was all about these sort of hidden camera stings. Given so many of the Commonwealth's problems could be traced to corrupt nobles or business leaders, it was often useful to score the leverage you needed. Here though, it served a different purpose; to learn everything they could about the Commonwealth's supposed benefactors, hopefully before it was too late.

"They're all augments, aren't they?" the other technician said.

"Yeah, but..." the first tech turned away from the action on the screen and paged through audio logs. "Here it is. She said in the bar augmentations are mission specific, and her job is information warfare. That sounds like she should be baseline human otherwise, don't it?"

"Maybe she lied?" the second tech suggested.

"Maybe she's got no idea what a baseline human would be like," the first tech responded. "Maybe human don't apply to them anymore."

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-Helenstern Laboratory-

Anya noted the disgust and suspicion in the tech's voice as she voiced her theory, even before the computer stress analysis had flagged his agitation. It wasn't too surprising. The Commonwealth had only a small sample size of societies that practiced human enhancement to such a degree on such a large scale, and all of them had been bad experiences.

The recordings they were analyzing made her uncomfortable for several reasons. She never had privacy of her own, even with her newer, kinder caretakers. The casual way the Leutant's privacy was being violated for arguably very sketchy reasons was nothing new to her. But then, actual people were supposed to have rights, weren't they? 

There were other feelings... sensations brought on by the images she was seeing. The worst of them was... she wondered if it was jealousy?

"I'm not comfortable with this." she said aloud.

It took a moment for a voice to come over the intercom in response. "Any insights you can glean could be vital," the doctor on the other end replied.

"It's just distracting. I don't know what you expect me to see watching two people watching two other people have sex." Anya said with a little bit of indignation.

"What about the technician's theory?"

"She doesn't have a theory," Anya replied. "She has a supposition. If you want me to look into the biological limits of human anatomy and how to alter it, I can do that without watching this." Mentally, she'd already added it to the research queue, because she knew they'd ask.

The doctor wasn't quite quick enough on his mike to completely mute his sigh. "Fine," he said as the video feed cut out. Anya didn't have direct control of her computer feeds at the moment, because of her stunt yesterday. They couldn't completely disconnect her from the interface without risking her life, but they could lock out the vast majority of the command protocols, leaving her as something not to dissimilar to someone sitting at a regular computer console with its administrative functions locked out.

They said it was for her protection, so that she couldn't access the higher level interfaces again and risk further shortening her life, but it also kept her confined to the tasks they defined for he to do, and stripped her of what passed for any autonomy she had left. So here she was, looking for little hints about the Hegemony's intentions among mindless minutia instead of doing something actually useful.

So among the hundreds of research queries she'd been making to the system were just a few, here and there, directed to batch commands she'd hidden on the network long ago. A competent person on the other end could certainly see something was up if they watched each search command run. But even hobbled as she was, she could still enter search terms faster than any unaugmented person could read, or any technician would want to try to read, particularly in real time. If she was careful they might not even notice.

"Let's move on to other things," he continued. "Any thoughts on this Axum Arabic thing?"

Everything, every scrap of data LIC got about the Hegemony was being routed to Anya, no matter how apparently insignificant, and often almost immediately. The data set was mountainous, ranging from observations of personnel to minute variations in observed performance in the fleet of spacecraft keeping station at the L1 point. The biggest, most strenuous part of her work was sorting it all and organizing it in order of priority, based not so much of how important it was, but how important her handlers would assume it to be.

The "Axum Arabic thing" had only popped up in the queue a few minutes ago. This Major Stern woman had probably only just mentioned it. But Anya's handlers had already learned of it and passed it on, and as she expected they wanted answers immediately. There was literally no time for a truly deep dive into the topic, so she could only work with what she could gleen through a quick database search. Probably the exact same database search that had led to the mention in the first place. They were having her duplicate someone elses work simply because it seemed more credible coming from her.

"The connection to the Axumite Providence is almost certain," Anya said.  "While there are several distinct cultural groups currently in existence that identify themselves with the ancient African kingdom of Aksum, the Axumite Providence is unique because of its majority Arabic speaking population, where Oromo or Amharic dialects would normally be expected. This was because the original expedition was drawn from all across Northern Africa, and chose the name to honor a historical, almost legendary African nation state in a bid to instill unity, rather than any close cultural ties to ancient Aksum."

"Which means?" the doctor asked, almost sounding impatient.

Anya sighed. "There is probably nowhere else in the known galaxy where you would find a dialect of Arabic that could be described as 'Axum Arabic.'"

There was a pause before the doctor responded. "I will pass your analysis along."

She could have added more, of course. Like how it was extremely suspicious that the girl would have casually dropped a mention of an obscure dialect that could only really be traced to one specific region of virtually unexplored space. But she didn't. Because they didn't ask. And because it wasn't her job.

If the LIC were competent in their jobs, they'd catch it themselves. Anya didn't really care one way or another.

"Let's move on," the doctor said. "The movements of the Terran personnel on these transport ships..."

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~THS Haystack Rock~

"Ugg..." Niki said as she laid her head on the desk. The headache and the shakes were making it difficult to concentrate on her work.

"You didn't eat enough at breakfast," Beverly said as she set a ration bar on the desk. "You know better than that."

Niki rolled her head to one side where she could kinda look at Beverly. "I wasn't going to eat all his food," she said. "He has to pay for that. Not just luxuries. Staples. He has to pay actual money for pancakes. Can you even imagine that?"

Beverly actually laughed in response. "And you wanted to do aid work in the Providence?" she said.

The mention of the Axumites did nothing to improve Niki's mood, for a whole collection of reasons, so instead of responding she sat up and snatched the ration bar, ripping the package open and munching on it.

Beverly tilted her head slightly. "Did you remember to..."

"Yes," Niki snapped, and even she would acknowledge it sounded bitter. It felt a little bit like lying, even though she'd told him the truth. She really did know how to speak French, Berber, and Axum Arabic. But she'd only shared it because she was told to, because the Director General wanted the Lyrans pointed in that direction. "So why'd you make me do it?"

"Orders," Beverly said. "Nobody tells me why."

Niki could guess though. The Hegemony had invested heavily in the Axumites these last few decades. Building up infrastructure, helping them develop their technology, selling them jumpships to boost their trade network, and also establishing military bases and a sling shot array in range of Terra.

If the Lyrans or anybody else took the bait, a hostile expedition would find itself facing off against a battle fleet and an entire network of defensive systems and bases very far from home and, most importantly, nowhere near actual Hegemony territory.

And if they just came to poke around without looking for a fight, they'd at least find a thriving population that the Hegemony was legitimately helping. An excellent example of what cooperation could bring.

Niki was young, but she'd been around long enough to know that this was just how the Director General did business with potential rivals. He could be your best friend or the guy who buried you, the choice was yours.

"We've got time before the DG's big speech," Beverly said. "Take a break and process those calories."
« Last Edit: 10 September 2021, 03:56:06 by Liam's Ghost »
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #220 on: 10 September 2021, 03:54:38 »
~Author's note: IlClan managed to salvage my interest in the dark age. Time to get back to work.
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #221 on: 10 September 2021, 03:58:05 »
You have our gratitude!
* No, FASA wasn't big on errata - ColBosch
* The Housebook series is from the 80's and is the foundation of Btech, the 80's heart wrapped in heavy metal that beats to this day - Sigma
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* Because Battletech is a conspiracy by Habsburg & Bourbon pretenders - MadCapellan
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #222 on: 10 September 2021, 16:52:14 »
Woo!  It's back!  :thumbsup:

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #223 on: 11 September 2021, 19:35:45 »
~Government House, The Triad~

Information still flowed in the Lyran Commonwealth, albeit more slowly over interstellar distances without the HPG network. Ten years of emergency shipbuilding and appropriating civilian ships to bulk up the numbers had allowed the Commonwealth to establish a courier network that ensured Tharkad received reports from most of the realm every eight to sixteen days.

This was about as good as you could get for an entire nation state given the time and resources available, and, really, far better than some other states had managed. Hundreds of worlds required hundreds of couriers, and each jumpship needed time to safely recharge.

Some worlds, considered more vital, or at least more influential, had a shorter turn around of maybe four days. But they did it by tying up more ships purely for courier work. In other cases, especially along the Wolf and Jade Falcon borders where things could change catastrophically very quickly, still more ships were held back simply sitting and waiting for something terrible to happen, so they might get the word out in time to actually respond.

In addition to Gibbs and Tharkad itself, Eutin, Vorzel, Donegal, and even Coventry had gotten couriers to Tharkad bringing news of WarShips bearing the Hegemony banner. More would be on the way, restrained only by physics.

And these ships weren't military. They couldn't be. The Commonwealth Navy didn't have the manpower to staff that many ships, and the Commonwealth government didn't have the political will to take that many civilian ships into full military service for that long. Because of that, and because the Hegemony was completely open about their identity and basic intentions, there was no way to keep word from getting out.

Even in Government House, the rumors flowed freely as a result.

Colonel (and Baron) William Brunswick had heard them all. It was the Republic, it was the Word of Blake with a fresh army of cyborgs, It was the Homeworld Clans rebranded and reorganized, It was a secret army Trillian had created long ago. Some even believed it actually was the Terran Hegemony, back from the dead to retake what they'd lost.

Some of the representatives in these very halls even believed the ridiculous rumor that Hanse Davion himself was leading them, back to set right everything that had gone wrong since his own death (or "death") almost a hundred years ago.

Some even toyed with somehow more ridiculous notions involving time travel or parallel worlds. Anything to find some sort of sense in it.

Brunswick didn't see the point in wasting time with speculation. These new arrivals had crushed the Wolves and the Falcons on Gibbs. Word was they were pushing the Falcons off Coventry. Right now, they were helping the Commonwealth. Maybe keeping it afloat. Brunswick knew there'd be a price for that in the future. There always was.

But... well, he figured as the speaker motioned for the assembled Estates General to rise for the Archon as she entered the chamber, the least they could do is listen to what the Archon had to say.
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #224 on: 13 September 2021, 12:18:41 »
It's back, baby. :laughing_skull:
Ever felt that The Powers That Were at FASA, WizKids and FanPro never gave Victor Steiner-Davion and the Federated Commonwealth a fair shake in the canon timeline? Then you might be interested in my Victor Victorious AU at

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=65976.0

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« Reply #225 on: 14 September 2021, 04:40:01 »
Some members failed to rise, Trillian noted. In some cases it was because of physical inability, But in most it was a form of protest. Nothing that was actually all that new to her reign, and Trillian wasn't sure if the numbers had gone up since the last session.

Her staff and other arms of the government would already be determining that for her, as would the news media, who'd normally have profiles and think pieces on every member of the Estates who refused to rise, and what kind of fresh doom it would mean for Trillian's reign in the works before the session was even concluded.

Normally. She was about to give her people something much more compelling to obsess over.

"Thank you," she started out as the assembled members returned to their seats. "The past week has seen a dramatic change in fortune for the Lyran State. As many of you are already aware, major invasion forces from both Clan Wolf and Clan Jade Falcon have been utterly crushed on Gibbs, securing one of the Commonwealth's most important industrial centers. In addition, Lyran and allied troops have repulsed an initial push by the Jade Falcons to take the world of Coventry. Though conflict is ongoing, we have every reason to be confident that we will achieve victory there as well."

There were murmurs in the crowd. Some shouting, demanding answers. Even some a bit more forceful than that. The term "Levin's Bitch" was even thrown out from representatives of the worlds close to Skye.

She waited for the speaker to restore order.

"I will not pretend that these were solely the achievements of the Lyran Military," she said. "You are all aware of reports from Coventry, Donegal, Gibbs, here in orbit of Tharkad, and other worlds of ships and soldiers. I regret not being able to present a more immediate answer the Lyran people, as maters of diplomacy took precedence. But now, I can give you the definitive answers you seek, and quell some of the most outlandish..." some, she mused privately, but definitely not all, "rumors that have made the rounds."

She paused for a moment to sip some water. "I can confirm, without fear of rebuttal, that these ships and the soldiers that man them are exactly as they identify themselves. They are the Terran Hegemony Armed Forces, in the service to an exiled government that had maintained unbroken political continuity with the original government on Terra since the end of the Star League. And in exchange for the Commonwealth's financial and economic assistance, they have offered to provide military aid in ending the threat the Clans represent to the Lyran Commonwealth."

The exact order of things was a bit off. The Terrans had made it clear they were going to end the clan menace regardless of whether they had a treaty with the Lyrans, but framing the whole thing as a service done in exchange for Lyran aid painted a better narrative. Allies of mutual benefit rather than a great power coming to the rescue of a broken neighbor.

She paused to allow the Estates General to take it in and was greeted with a wall of incredulous inquiry. Actual questions... well those would have to wait.

"The exact text of our formal diplomatic agreements has been forwarded to your consoles," she said. "In brief, the Terran Hegemony has already provided the Commonwealth with a large supply of needed war material. In addition we have concluded agreements that will see the transfer of a large number of capital warships to Lyran control, as well as logistical and training assistance in reconstructing the Lyran Navy to a state that it has not seen since the start of the Succession Wars."

"In addition, as has already been ably demonstrated on Gibbs and Coventry, Terran troops have taken up positions on the borders of the clan occupation zones, both to contain any further advance, and to begin liberating Lyran worlds under Clan occupation."

She spared a glance for the representative from Arc Royal, easy to pick out in his grey Wolf Clan leathers. Even with the distance between them, she could see the anxiety at her statement. Coexistence with the Clans had been state policy for generations now. Trillian's word choice wasn't subtle, and it wasn't even narrowly focused on the Jade Falcons. Though direct talk of re-unifying had been scuttled due to the actions of Trillian's predecessors. The kinship between the two halves of the Wolf Clan wasn't completely dead.

But the time for straddling that line was over.

"Finally, the Terran Hegemony has granted exclusive rights to Commonwealth industries to support the future effort to rebuild the Terran Worlds. The scope of this planned endeavor, after so many centuries of war and destruction, is truly staggering, and the benefits of such a program will be felt not only in Terran space, but in the Lyran Commonwealth itself for centuries to come."

There were many in the Commonwealth that would see that as the real prize, even above securing the Commonwealth from future invasion. Rebuilding an actual self sufficient Hegemony, essentially rebuilding everything the Terrans had once spent the better part of seven hundred years building in the first place, was a gold mine for every segment of the Commonwealth's economy.

"In exchange for all of this, the Commonwealth has extended formal recognition to the Terran Hegemony and recognized its territorial borders as of December 25, 2766. The Lyran Commonwealth has also pledged neutrality in any conflict that may result from the securing of those borders by the Terran Hegemony."
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #226 on: 14 September 2021, 18:17:49 »
Hmmm... the second coming of Hanse Davion hasn't leaked yet?  ???

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #227 on: 14 September 2021, 19:35:53 »
Hmmm... the second coming of Hanse Davion hasn't leaked yet?  ???

Rumors, yes. They would gain more traction if it wasn't so unbelievable.  ;D
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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« Reply #228 on: 14 September 2021, 19:37:38 »
I can't wait to see his first press conference...  ^-^

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #229 on: 15 September 2021, 01:14:27 »
"Well that happened," Colonel Brunswick said to himself, not really sure how to react over this news.

His console dinged as the Archon continued to speak about her personal negotiations with the Director General of the Terran Hegemony, notably not referring to him by name.

"You met with the Archon yesterday" the (currently orphaned) representative from New Capetown had messaged him. "Did you know about this?"

No, he messaged back. We talked about secessionist problems in the rim. She didn't say anything about this. Though in truth, she had been surprisingly confident that she could move troops into the troubled region, and she had briefly mentioned the dropships that had been descending on Tharkad throughout the day.

Brunswick had been too focused on the problems they faced back home, and too referential to the Archon's dismissal immediately afterwards, to really question it. Probably not his finest moment as a representative in this assembly.

"It's a fair trade," the New Capetown representative mused. "Wash our hands of the Republic, push out the clans, and let our boys get to the business of securing our own house. So long as we can trust anything these so-called Terries have to say."

That was the question, wasn't it.

"But now," the Archon said, "the Director General of the Terran Hegemony would like to address this body. As such I yield the floor to Director General Hanse Davion."

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~THS Haystack Rock~

There were six news services providing live coverage of the Archon's address, and Niki was watching all of them while monitoring the signal relay to the ships in orbit and at the L1 point.

Amid all the gasps, the shocked denials, the confusion, and one bout of incredulous laughter, her favorite reaction was probably the correspondent from TCB, who probably never had the best marks in history class, and was apparently oblivious to the shitstorm of reactions around him.

"So now we have our first look at the leader of the Terran Hegemony, a man named Hanse Davion. We don't know at the moment if the name is coincidental or if there might be some possible distant relation to the ruling family of the Federated Suns..."

"The DG does love his theater," Beverly said. "There has to have been a better way to ease the Inner Sphere into all of this."

"It's not about the whole Inner Sphere," Niki said. "At least I don't think so. This show is just for the Lyrans."
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #230 on: 15 September 2021, 01:18:33 »
I wonder where Nyarlathotep is watching from.
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« Reply #231 on: 15 September 2021, 02:02:09 »
Hanse waited for the furor to die down. The reactions from the Estates General had been impressive. No small amount of anger, shock and disbelief had greeted him, with a heavy bit of cursing the Archon or the Hegemony for even attempting such a ridiculous stunt.

It would take time for that to completely die down across the Commonwealth, and there were certainly people who would never believe it. They'd always known that. In fact the idea of Hanse Davion returning from the dead as the leader of the lost Terran Hegemony would seem so unbelievable to the common folk of the Inner Sphere that they had originally invested considerable thought in concealing his identity.

But keeping that sort of secret long term was deemed at best barely plausible. More importantly, Hanse refused to hide. Not any more.

"Thank you, Archon, for the introduction," he said before turning to the assembly. "You all have a great many questions for me, and the time for that will come. For the moment, however, I will say this. I am the man I claim to be. Not just a man named Hanse Davion, but former First Prince of the Federated Suns. Husband of Melissa Steiner-Davion. Father of Victor, Katherine, Peter, Yvonne and Arthur Steiner-Davion. The evidence of this claim has been passed to Archon Trillian, my great granddaughter, and her government, and I have requested it be made freely available to all who wish to see this proof for themselves."

How many would be convinced by that evidence wasn't really important, Hanse reasoned. Distrust in Hanse's identity might feed into distrust about the Hegemony's intentions, but those were always going to exist, and the only thing the Hegemony could do about it was to clearly demonstrate those intentions by action. Ultimately, the only choice was to prove that the Hegemony was both benevolent and far far too powerful to oppose.

"In 3052, while Comstar continued to battle the Clans on Tukayyid, I suffered a massive stroke that left me incapable of ruling and with no expectation of recovery. Because of this, and to calm any lingering tensions with former enemies of the Federated Commonwealth, the decision was made to publicly announce my death and allow Victor to take my place."

"As should be clear now, I was in fact able to make a full recovery, and much more, due to the assistance of Hegemony medical technology. Technology that we will be sharing in the future as we help to rebuild the Inner Sphere from centuries of war."

Gradually, at least. Longevity treatments would have a catastrophic effect if they simply handed them over to the great houses, to the point where doing just that was considered a potential contingency plan should war with the Successor States seem likely. Less world shattering medical breakthroughs, however, could be handed out quickly. In fact, they were already laying the groundwork.

"Though I had fully recovered from my stroke by 3055, I made a deliberate choice not to return home, nor even reveal my survival. At the time I believed that my presence was a threat to the fragile alliances that had been built to resist the Clans, and that the best thing I could do for the Inner Sphere was to remove someone both hated and feared by nation states now bound together by those agreements."

He was unable to suppress his sigh. "And for that, I am truly, deeply sorry."
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #232 on: 15 September 2021, 02:40:09 »
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #233 on: 15 September 2021, 03:35:10 »
This is going well... what could possibly go wrong?  :D

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #234 on: 15 September 2021, 19:58:55 »
~Hellenstern Facility~

Though her mind was on other thing, Anya couldn't help but note the clear guilt in Hanse Davion's voice. Like his prior interaction with the Archon, it was clear that he wasn't simply putting on an act, but he honestly blamed himself for everything that had transpired since he left the Inner Sphere.

"It would be the height of arrogance to assume that I would have prevented the mistakes, or treasons, of my children and the literal millions of deaths that resulted from those actions and inactions. But regardless, I chose to abandon my duties as both a leader and a father in some vain hope that the next generation could guide our people away from centuries of destructive warfare, even though they lacked the experience, guidance, or at points even the moral foundation to repair all that had been broken by the Succession Wars. I do not know if I could have changed the course my children put us on, which led to civil war, the collapse of the Second Star League, Jihad, and now this, a nation under threat from enemies that have been allowed to fester and grow for generations."

"I don't know if I could have changed any of this. But everything in my heart tells me I should have tried."


To an extent, the fact that Hanse Davion hadn't been there to at least advise his children still mystified Anya. His private conversation with the Archon had suggested that he left to eliminate the temptation of becoming a tyrant out of grief and anger, but somehow that didn't track with her. How could he have been so terrified of that possibility that it led him to abandon everything he knew, including all of his children and the nations he claimed to love?

Was it a hole in the story? An option bouncing around in her sub processors was that this man was a clone somehow imprinted with the memories and personality of Hanse Davion. Motive was beyond questionable, particularly now. And capability? Theoretically possible, but any practical attempts never seemed to be particularly successful. Even Blakist technology that Anya had unfortunate direct experience with wasn't particularly effective at creating a flawless replica.

But it was a possibility, something to chew on. Hopefully for someone else to chew on. Anya's mind (and some of her processing power she'd managed to quietly unlock again) was on other things.
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #235 on: 15 September 2021, 20:06:26 »
LOL!  Just... LOL!!!!  ;D

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #236 on: 16 September 2021, 22:09:21 »
Colonel Brunswick didn't have much experience with politics. He considered himself foremost a military commander who had the good fortune to be low enough on the command chain to avoid having to be a political animal, and a technical landlord who had the opportunity to let a civilian government rule his world.

As such, the nuances that went into a political speech were something of a mystery to him, but regardless, this speech seemed less a leader offering a calculated monologue and more a pained man finally able to air his long held regrets.

Which itself might be a political tactic. Looking around him, Brunswick could see a mixture of emotions on the faces of his fellow represenatives. Some anger, a lot of uncertainty, and even a little sympathy here and there.

And it hit Brunswick that maybe that was the point. Right now, all eyes were on Hanse Davion. His story, his contrition, the unbelievable tale of a legend who returned when the Lyrans needed him most, not only alive but just as he had been at the peak of his life. It wouldn't just captivate audiences, but it took the pressure off the Archon.

There were going to be reactionaries, of course. The Archon's security detail would certainly be getting a workout, but the real powers in the Estates General and the nobility weren't going to act against Trillian while she had this Terran Goliath at her back. 

"But the past can't be changed," the Director General continued to his captive audience. "All that ultimately matters is what we do now. I have two mandates, handed down not only by the Terran Senate, but my own moral judgement. One of these is obviously the reclamation and reconstruction of the Terran Hegemony's ancestral worlds, by diplomacy if possible, but we will use force if needed."

"The second, and far more immediate mandate is to bring an end to the threat posed by the Clans in the Inner Sphere," Davion said. "Those clans that have been willing to integrate with their populations, to respect the autonomy and history of their citizenry, and do not stand it our way have nothing to fear." 

His tone turned cold. "Those who continue their mindless agression, who crush occupied peoples under the heel of their insane social construct, will face the full fury of the Terran Military, as the Jade Falcons and Wolves have already tasted. To that end, I am happy to annouce that offensive operations against the Wolves are already underway. In the last day, Terran naval forces have struck seven worlds under Wolf occupation, destroying all resistance and placing those worlds under naval blockade. If the clan forces trapped on the ground are willing to surrender, it will be accepted. If not, our own ground forces will respond with overwhelming force. These operations will continue until every world under Wolf or Jade Falcon occupation is free."

"Once those operations are complete, the other Clans, assuming they don't interfere, will have an opportunity to take stock and consider their own future, and how quickly they want that future to end."

And all Trillian had to do to cement her legacy was hope that Hanse Davion delivered on his promises.

The Inner Sphere was no stranger to Arthur legends. The return of Kerensky hadn't paid off, and Brunswick doubted Devlin Stone would be any different. But this one...

This one Brunswick almost wanted to believe.
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #237 on: 16 September 2021, 23:12:06 »
That's the first time I ever recall somebody in-universe being consciously aware that they're being confronted  with a situation that parallels the Arthur-will-return legend. Nice touch!
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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #238 on: 17 September 2021, 07:06:45 »
Well, I don't think ilClan is going to happen in this timeline!

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Re: And I Feel Fine: Book III: Thunderclap
« Reply #239 on: 17 September 2021, 20:59:52 »
~THS Haystack Rock~

"He's good at this," Niki said as the Director General started taking questions from the assembly.

"It's not what he say," Beverly said. "It's how he says it. It's the conviction, charisma. He knows how to play to the audience. Everybody not enraptured by the sound of his voice is righly scared shitless by what their Archon is dragging them into. But most of them are even more scared of being on the wrong side and taking a stand right now, up against what's in front of them."

Niki raised an eyebrow. "You almost sound like Colonel Adams," she said. Not just the obvious admiration, but also the hint of caution. "Where is she, anyway? I figured she'd be here."

"She had another errand to run," Beverly said.

~Government House, The Triad~

The first truly obvious question was actually the second one asked, and came from the representative of Donegal.

"Mister Director General," the representative said. "Whoever you are or were, you require us not only to accept that your death was staged and your life saved using the technology of your Hegemony benefactors, but also that they have not only halted, but possibly reversed the aging process to at least some small degree. Yet you have made no comment on this. If we are to assume you are who you claim you are and not some simulacrum, are we to also assume that you are somehow resistant to the ravages of age?"

Hanse smiled. Donegal's representative was no young man himself, so he couldn't be sure if it was driven by skepticism or interest. "Hegemony citizens reach physical maturity at the same rate as any baseline human, however beyond that, no, we do not appreciably age. This is an advanced, more refined form of longevity technologies developed at the end of the Star League era, and some of our oldest citizens were around to see the fall of the Star League."

Murmurs ranging from anxious to eager, rippled through the assembly. "And will the Hegemony share the secrets of longevity with the Lyran Commonwealth?" the representative asked, sounding just a little eager himself.

"We will teach you to repair catastrophic brain and nerve damage. We'll make cancer a trivial disease and give everyone ready access to cloned replacement tissue if they need it. We'll help you eliminate the Arluna Flu and restore the worlds of your quarantine zone to the rest of the Commonwealth. Your people will live happier, healthier, longer lives, but this kind of longevity? No, not now. Not until the Commonwealth, and the rest of the Inner Sphere, is socially and economically strong enough to accept it."
Good news is the lab boys say the symptoms of asbestos poisoning show an immediate latency of 44.6 years. So if you're thirty or over you're laughing. Worst case scenario you miss out on a few rounds of canasta, plus you've forwarded the cause of science by three centuries. I punch those numbers into my calculator, it makes a happy face.

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