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Title: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 25 October 2011, 09:05:54
  Being a fan-fic writer, I know all too well how many stray ideas and 'wouldn't it be cool if...?' scenarios flash across people's minds.  Some of them turn in plot-bunnies, which chew on your ankles and refuse to let go until you do something about them; some are even more persistent and annoying, not to mention unbelievably fast-breeding, and thus earn the name 'plot-tribble'.  Unfortunately, you have to prioritise which ideas and works you devote your time and energy to, and so a tragic number of plot-tribbles often find themselves abandoned in the unforgiving cold of creative limbo, dying of starvation and not enough love.

  Therefore, in the spirit of its cousin thread(s!) over at Spacebattles.com, I'm founding this thread as a place for CBT.com's fan-fic writers to drop off their plot-tribbles, in the hope that they can find a good home with a writer or writers who can give them the time and attention they need to bloom into fully-grown and entertaining fan-fiction.  Anyone may leave a plot-tribble in our care, in the hopes of its future adoption; please remember to number your tribble, so that its origins and pedigree can be properly traced.
  Anyone who reads the thread can adopt any plot-tribble they find herein and write the fic it spawns, with the proviso that when they post that fiction, they include a credit to the tribble's original owner/poster and a link to its original post in this thread.

  I'll get things started with a couple of tribbles which attacked me after reading, respectively, Betrayal of Ideals and Handbook: Major Periphery States.  Especially having done so once too often, far too early in the morning.  For reference, these tribbles are also posted at SB.com as tribbles #10164 and #10165.


Tribble #0001:
  In an OOC postscript to Betrayal of Ideals, the author Blaine Pardoe laments that he/FASA couldn't use a scene that occurred to him for Task Force BULLDOG's arrival at Strana Mechty:

  The Task Force arrives in orbit over the Clan Capital.  Victor Steiner-Davion notices there's a perfectly good McKenna-class battleship just sitting in orbit with no-one aboard, not even caretakers.  Finders being keepers, he says, "Please inform the Commodore that I am transferring my flag to the McKenna's Pride."

  Remember, not only is it a WarShip and the former flagship of the Exodus, McKenna's Pride is the resting place of Aleksandr and Nicholas Kerensky, the greatest heroes of Clan culture.

  What would have happened if things had played out that way?  :D


Tribble #0002:
  Aboard the McKenna's Pride, orbiting over Strana Mechty, the body of Aleksandr Kerensky lies in state within a glass tomb.
  Except, one day, someone realises it's not a coffin: it's a cryo-tube.
  Who resuscitates him, and when?  What has become of the 'Star League in Exile' (or the Clans) by the time he awakes, and how does he react to what's happened while he's been 'sleeping'?  How do the Clans react to his reaction?
  If Nicholas is still alive, what does Aleks say to him?  }:)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 October 2011, 17:24:40
Tribble #0003
In 2964 a Max Liao is born into House Liao. But this Max's name is not Maximilian but Maxine. By 2995 she is Chancellor and offers the recently widowed Janos Marik a stunning opportunity: the Capellan Confederation joining the Free Worlds League as an intact province, and to bind the votes of this new province in Parliament to Janos, she also offers her own hand in marriage...

Tribble #0004
In canon, Vlad is a staunch Crusader and an arrogant warrior espousing the superiority of the Clans. For him success, whether personal, for Clan Wolf or the Clans is everything. His hatred of Phelan is because he has failed to defeat him.
However, what if Vlad is a staunch Crusader espousing that Clan superiority is the result of perpetual struggles. For him overcoming obstacles is everything and he supports the invasion because it tests the Way of the Clans. Because Phelan overcomes him, he accepts that Phelan has a right to join and lead Clan Wolf. Their relation becomes one of friendly rivalry and not enmity.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dirk Bastion on 07 January 2012, 06:30:53
Okay, let's see if I can still remember some of the old ones.

Tribble #0005
Thanks to a convenient accident in the shower, the leading council of Rollis is not killed off in 3030. While their appeal for annexation is rejected by "Mad Tom" Calderon, a younger and more ambituous Grover Shraplen wants to flex the Concordat's muscles and show to both neighbours that the Taurians can get things done, too. A quickly hired mercenary unit takes Rollis, and several other nearby planets seceed from the Confederation before long. With Romano's hissy fit audible from space, the Concordat is dragged into the war.

Tribble #0006
When Katrina Steiner makes her peace proposal in 3020, Hanse Davion is grasping the opportunity with both hands... as is Max Liao. When Janos Marik starts agreeing with discussions about peace and even Takashi Kurita considers joining in, what is ComStar to do?

Tribble #0007
In an Inner Sphere where the Third and Last Succession War was fought like the first two, by 3070 ComStar has managed to pick up several pieces. After reestablishing a solid technotheocratic nation in a territory roughly equivalent to the Republic of the Sphere in 3120, and several more "uplift/indoctrination" operations underway, one of their long-range scouts meets with a Clan invasion force over the irridated ruins of Luthien.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 January 2012, 14:48:16
Tribble #0008
As the wedding of Hanse Davion and Melissa Steiner approaches, the rogue mercenary unit responsible for the Sirian Massacre is destroyed on Helm by Duke Garth Marik of Irian with the aid of ComStar's Mercenary Review Board. Tapping into the  still strong dissent against Janos Marik, the Duke launches a bid to overthrow his cousin, spearheading his invasion of the Marik Commonwealth with a regiment of Star League-era battlemechs...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Black Mist on 07 January 2012, 18:46:09
Tribble #0009

Phelan Kell's unit is attacked by mysterious raiders, and he personally was captured by the commander of this force who piloted a jumping summoner. Phelan later finds out, after interrogation, that he is now considered a "bondsman" to one Aiden Pryde and a part of Clan Jade falcon. The Jade Falcons, because of political meddling by their previous Khan Elias Crichell were given the dishonor of the Rasalhague Republic invasion corridor; the Ghost bears received the adjacent corridor between the Republic and the Combine, the Wolves received the Combine Invasion corridor, and the Smoke Jaguar had the Federated Commonwealth invasion corridor.....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 07 January 2012, 21:10:34
Tribble #0010

Shattered Sphere

The fourth succession war was, Comstar would later reflect, their finest hour. A combination of brilliant plotting and sheer dumb luck would set the stage for them to finally achieve Blake's vision.

It started when a ROM plant gave Duke Hasek-Davion food posioning, keeping him from running off to Sian, and keeping his treachery suspected, instead of confirmed outright. It continued when they kept Aldo Lestrade save from his own son, and killed off his sons friends. 

In the war of 3039, when the Federated Commonwealth failed to achieve any real victory over the Draconis Combine- hated enemy of the entire FedCom- Duke Hasek-Davion formally succeeded from the FedCom. Lestrade quickly followed suit, and the Isle of Skye succeeded.

Then the St Ives compact threw off its chains, and declared itself truly independent from both the FedCom and the Cappellan Confederation. At the same time, the Tikonov Free Republic tore itself free too. The TFR offered Outreach to the Wolf's Dragoons, in exchange for military support.

As this was happening, the Free Worlds League- helped quietly along by Comstar- finally fell apart, leaving half a dozen provinces and hundreds of lonely worlds.

The Deiron Dieron District, longing for the days when it was part of the Terran Hegonomy, and embolden by Rasalhague, also declared sovereignty.

Theodore and Takashi Kurita argued so strongly over Theodore's reforms that they tore the nation in two between them, each gathering warlorlds under their banner and fighting each other.

Various reigons in the FedCom, disgusted by how the alliance between the two nations was causing them to loose so much for no gain, succeeded. The Suns Periphery march declared itself independent, because of how little support they got from new Avalon. The Draconis March ignored the Suns, too focused on the Combine. In the Lyran half, various social generals and businessmen, egged on by Ryan Steiner, set up their own nations.

By 3042, the Federated Commonwealth was no more, and the inner Sphere consisted of nothing but small nations, none larger than a hundred worlds. Suddenly, the Periphery nations were on an even footing with any other nation.

The entire situation was only helped by Comstar, liberally blocking, changing and fabricating messages to help all this along.

By 3049, the Shattered Sphere, as it was known, consisted of 34 nations. Comstar had taken a dozen of the closet worlds to Terra as Protectorates, and fully expected to rule the Shattered Sphere within 20 years.

And then they started getting reports of invaders from the Periphery, with strange Mechs and technology beyond what even the Star League had...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 17 January 2012, 12:33:38
Tribble #0011

Natasha Kerensky decides to stay with Wolf's Dragoons instead of re-joining Clan Wolf. How badly are the Invading Clans going to be mauled with the Black Widow coming after them?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 18 January 2012, 05:51:55
Tribble #0012 Comstar's Blunder

In ramp-up to 4th Succession War, Comstar blunders left and right, getting caught with their robes soiled in every puddle of their dirty tricks. In surprise move, Maximilian Liao is proven to be a Comstar plant in CapCon, with the Operation Doppelgänger blowing public in the Succession Lord level, if not to the public. As a bigger surprise, Candace and Romano, after verifying each other as safe from Comstar taint, sell their father to Hanse in exchange for opening of rapid and secure communications about "The Cancer at Heart of the Inner Sphere". Various conspirations of the Intelligence services coincide to let them compare notes from the full length of the Succession Wars. The Wedding is still held on Terra, but instead fo Capellan Confederation being the designated whipping boy, the House Lords join together to stop the warmongers who have tried to enslvae them all, Comstar.

Of course, Wolf is till pissed, and common people still see Comstar as untainted... But hwen the WMDs come rolling, who will Wolf call, and when the skeletons are trotted from the closets, will the people's eyes be opened? And can the House Lords hold together long enough to topple their biggest threat, or will the mutual greed lead to backstabs?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 January 2012, 16:44:55
Tribble #0013

Incensed by the Dragoon Compromise, five Crusader Clans simply up stakes, load up their civilians and set out back towards the Inner SPhere. Their plan is to 'join forces' with a Successor Lord, plant their chosen lord on a more or less empty throne as a figurehead and conquer the inner sphere while slowly converting their chosen state to the Clan way and holding all power to themselves as the 'warrior elite' of the new Star League.

Unfortunately what they didn't manage to agree on was which state to support.

And so, round about 3005 all five Successor Lords independently hire on a huge force of 'mercenaries' that appear to be far too good to be true. Surely Davion/Kurita/Liao/Marik/Steiner (delete as applicable) will crumble when these forces are unleashed upon them!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Neufeld on 19 January 2012, 04:09:28
Tribble #0002:
  Aboard the McKenna's Pride, orbiting over Strana Mechty, the body of Aleksandr Kerensky lies in state within a glass tomb.
  Except, one day, someone realises it's not a coffin: it's a cryo-tube.
  Who resuscitates him, and when?  What has become of the 'Star League in Exile' (or the Clans) by the time he awakes, and how does he react to what's happened while he's been 'sleeping'?  How do the Clans react to his reaction?
  If Nicholas is still alive, what does Aleks say to him?  }:)

There is a red box next to the coffin that reads "In case of emergency break glass". Someone breaks the glass and pulls the handle inside during the Wars of Reaving.  :D


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 19 January 2012, 06:21:54
Tribble #0014 Death to the Mercenaries!!

After Third Succession War, every House Lord in their own end looks at the Wars that have gone on before, and realize that most of the crippling damage have come from the Condottieri, the Mercenaries, who are just posing to fight each other, but hit the House forces hard. Looking at the numbers, it becomes clear that the Mercenaries are working a Cartel to replace the House Lord's loyal armies with sellswords who seek the highest profit.And the Lords see this as a dangerous dependency on unreliable group whose leadership and aims are not clear.

So when the Fourth begins to loom, the Lords start working in their headquarters to make sure the Mercenaris don't keep the Wars going on to profit themselves - and when takashi opens the door after Terra, the other Lords enact their secret orders with their closest commanders to slowly eradictae the mercenaries.

And the hidden masters of the core Mercenaries are annoyed beyond belief, when their plan to keep the Inner Sphere and the Great Houses embroiled in backbreaking continuation of War are thwarted and the caviar and champagne at Hilton Head starts ot get warm while awaiting the moment of Blake's vision, when the Wars would have been rbought to end by the white armies of the Comstar.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greyhind on 19 January 2012, 17:26:45
Tribble #0015:
In the newly formed Word of Blake Protectorate some planets haven't forgotten their Chaos March grudges. A band of mercenaries are employed in a black on black mission to settle the score with the enemy's militia, ruin financial targets and avoid engaging the WoBM unit on planet.

Then an 'emergency' HPG comes through alerting the unit to legal corruption on their planet of charter. They'll need money for lawyers fast and now the Word knows who they are. Should they go to the ground to hide from the incoming line unit as their orders imply? Or should they set up the next militia ambush near a highly lootable target?

Either way, their problems are going to grow and in a hard places, only the hardest survive.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 22 January 2012, 04:00:00
Tribble #0016:

Its hard being a pirate. You have to keep all your 'mechs operational, as well as your Dropships, Jumpship, and veichels. Not to mention food and medicine. Everyone wants you dead. Especially in the Kerensky Cluster, where the clans consider Pirate hunting a sport, and spare no expense.

So, in 3018, one such priate group decided that if they wanted to prosper, they needed to leave the Kerensky cluster. To go somewhere that didn't hunt pirates quite as hard, somewhere their technology would give them an edge. So they went to the Inner Sphere.

And in 3019, an LCAF unit recovered a wrecked mech from a pirate raid. It was damaged, but the facts were undeniable- it was faster, tougher and hit harder than anything the inner sphere had ever seen. It was new- less than a decade old. Even the design itself had never been seen before- they noticed its resembelence to a pair of existing mechs, and named it the 'Mad Cat'.

And so, when Katrina Stiener sent her peace proposal to the nations of the inner sphere, it wasn't out of weariness of the succession wars. It was to build an alliance, to prepare for this unseen foe. To advance their technology. To bulk up their armed forces. 

The eventual invasion of the Capellan Confederation was different- it wasn't (just) to stop mad Max Liao. It was to seize the factories of the CC, to clear a safe road between the two states, and to give the FWL a more tempting target to invade than the Federated Suns.

Meanwhile, the NAIS worked day and night to reverse engineer the Mad Cat...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 22 January 2012, 20:21:19
Tribble #17:

Edward Calderon's DropShip accident in 3034 is narrowly averted by alert members of his Taurian Guards protective detail.  Later that year, evidence emerges that the vessels engines had been sabotaged, and despite Protector Thomas Calderon at first blaming the Federated Suns and the House of Davion, it emerges that the conspirator was none other than Grover Shraplen, assisted by the Capellan Maskirovka!  The 49-year old (at the time) Shraplen is revealed to be engaged in a long-term conspiracy to destroy and discredit the Calderon family and seize control over the Taurian Concordat.  Thomas is stunned by the betrayal of one of his closest allies, and then enraged beyond all reason when Shraplen (informed of his iminent arrest for treason by supporters at Court) declares MacLeod's Land loyalty to Romano Liao and accepts a Capellan Garrison as Governor in her name.  The Pleiades Hussars support Shraplen and quickly move to reinforce MacLeod's Land.  Chancellor Liao names Grover Shraplen the true Protector of the Taurian Concordat, and begins to move troops to the border hoping to capitalize on the chaos.  An amused Hanse Davion declares the Federated Suns neutral, but he too moves troops close to the Taurian border.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 22 January 2012, 20:30:58
Trace, can you post a link to that spacebattles thread?  Thanks!

Master Arminas
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 22 January 2012, 21:11:09
Trace, can you post a link to that spacebattles thread?  Thanks!

Master Arminas
  Lessee now: there's no dedicated Emporium for BT Tribbles over there (more's the pity), but I think I posted those two in the 'general purpose' Tribble Emporium #3 ...

  ...  yup: #3, pt.3, post 181 (http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=6747770&postcount=181).

  I haven't been into the Index for some time, so I don't know how many more Emporia have been posted, filled, and left derelict since then....  :-\
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Hellfire on 22 January 2012, 23:19:19
Tribble #17:

Edward Calderon's DropShip accident in 3034 is narrowly averted by alert members of his Taurian Guards protective detail.  Later that year, evidence emerges that the vessels engines had been sabotaged, and despite Protector Thomas Calderon at first blaming the Federated Suns and the House of Davion, it emerges that the conspirator was none other than Grover Shraplen, assisted by the Capellan Maskirovka!  The 49-year old (at the time) Shraplen is revealed to be engaged in a long-term conspiracy to destroy and discredit the Calderon family and seize control over the Taurian Concordat.  Thomas is stunned by the betrayal of one of his closest allies, and then enraged beyond all reason when Shraplen (informed of his iminent arrest for treason by supporters at Court) declares MacLeod's Land loyalty to Romano Liao and accepts a Capellan Garrison as Governor in her name.  The Pleiades Hussars support Shraplen and quickly move to reinforce MacLeod's Land.  Chancellor Liao names Grover Shraplen the true Protector of the Taurian Concordat, and begins to move troops to the border hoping to capitalize on the chaos.  An amused Hanse Davion declares the Federated Suns neutral, but he too moves troops close to the Taurian border.
That's pretty ballsy for the Capellens considering they still have Canopian and Andurien troops occupying several of their worlds. By March they where still holding Renown, Buenos Aires, Andermax, Palladaine, and New Roland. It will probably take a few months for the conlifct to occur, but still, pretty ballsy. The Anduriens are pretty much done for at this point, but a Canopian counter attack doesn't seem impossible.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 23 January 2012, 01:42:19
Well, the accident occurred in canon in 3034.  I figure it will take around a year to trace back to Grover, and then he jumps ship.  So probably mid-to-late 3036 before anything starts up.

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dirk Bastion on 23 January 2012, 13:35:44
That is exactly the other way around from my idea, but so much better (as I'm pretty sure nobody likes Shraplen). It has only been 20 years since Brinton and this is not a Concordat which is led by the quivering, paranoid wreck of a man who has seen too many private tragedies to remain functional. Two things are for sure: the Pleiades Hussars will have a nasty guerilla war on their hands and Edwards ideas of rapprochement with the FedCom will have so much public backing that not even Thomas can ignore then anymore.
On the other hand, I'm not sure if Romano will see this through, instead washing her hands off the whole affair by sending Shraplen a garrison of less-than-faithful soldiers. She has, after all, just about now finished dealing with the Canopians and Andurians at the other side of the border and could still reasonably fear invasion by the Marik.

Mad Tom goes to war, indeed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 21 June 2012, 01:38:37
Tribble #0018The Peace of Blake on you, Brother

Jerome Blake was truly a visionary. As the bitter General flees the Inner Sphere to lick his wounds, Minister of Communications plays fast and loose with everything at his disposal. Not only does he secure Terra as HIS, the deft and rapid propaganda and communications interdiction campaigns undermine the House Lords' ability to wage their War to become the Star Lord int a fizzle in the pan.

Of course, the fact that Comstar managed to grab and retain most of the remaining veterans of Star League Defence Forces in their ComGuard, publicly garrisoning Terra and protecting every HPG compound administered by Comstar.

With Succession Wars scaling down the damage from the eradication of Amaris the Usurper, the Successor Lords rule the Star League in a shifting alliance of political moves, countermoves and loyalty to no one but their very persons, the Lords end up with a low-scale conflict running cneturies with technology thta was not bombed to early Age of War, but with rules of engagements for dueling 'trials' stricter than anything one could believe.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Freihändler on 21 June 2012, 03:32:51
Hi!

While I work on my own version already, maybe some other writer wants to try his variant:
Tribble 0019
When Katrina Steiner makes her peace proposal in 3020, not only Hanse Davion sees possibilities, his and her old foe Takashi Kurita does so as well. And when the dust of negotiations settles, the Steiner are not allied with the Davions, but the Kuritas.


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 21 June 2012, 05:18:16
Let's have a go ...

Tribble 0020

The Dragoons realise right from the start that they're working for the wrong guys. Imediately upon arriving in the Iner Sphere, they pick a Successor State and offer their service, their technology, and their warning: Kerensky's Children are out there.

Forty years later, the Clans are gearing up for Operation Revival ... only to have the WarShips of a Reunited Star League jump in over Strana Mechty ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 21 June 2012, 07:58:37
Tribble 0021

As the Clan Invasion continues to roll across the Draconis Combine, Free Rasalhague Republic, and Lyran Commonwealth, a new faction arrises to combat the Clans in the same manner the Clans fight. They strike Clan Smoke Jaguar without warning nor without announcing who they are despite the Smoke Jaguars demanding that they identify themselves. It isn't long before the new army destroys the Smoke Jaguar forces invading the Inner Sphere save for the ilKhan and his Keshik. This new Army then attacks and manages to damage the Dire Wolf before it escapes with the ilKhan dead.

As the House Lords meet on Outreach, the meeting is interrupted by an unexpected visitor. A man who claims to come from one of these Clans that have invaded the Inner Sphere, but had been destroyed long ago. To Jaime Wolf's shock, he claims to be from the long-dead Clan, the Wolverines.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 June 2012, 15:25:54
Tribble 0022
19th Century North America had it's fair share of strange cults, most of which vanished as soon as their founder did (often with bulging pockets). One of the stranger and most persistent of these was dedicated not to any God but to human longevity: membership was restricted to those with four living grandparents and in a complete reversal of all religious logic, members were paid - more specifically, were paid a bounty for every child they had with other members.

By the early 22nd century the group remained more or less intact, if unfortunately inbred: a few tens of thousands strong, possessed of an average life span of two hundred years and quite unable to share this blessing with with the rest of humanity. Unsurprisingly they were only too happy to take over a small colony fleet and set out for the far reaches of space, perhaps inspiring the usually fairy tales about planets where no one gets old.

Actually, of course, they set up camp on a handful of worlds a couple of light years towards the core and built up an industrial society to support their goals of:
1. More children
and
2. Not dying.

Unfortunately for a group (now numbering in the billions) who have taken to heart the idea that going to war will lead to regrettable termination of their precious multi-century lifespans and thus have little to no experience of it, they're about to be invaded by six million new colonists, in the form of Kerensky's Exodus...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Orion on 21 June 2012, 15:29:40
Tribble 0023

The Marion Hegemony is gearing up to invade the Lothian League, but the Lothians get confirmation just in time.  They quickly form an alliance with the Palatinate, and pool their money to hire more mercs.  They also get secret help from another government, but whether it's the FWL, MoC, or someone else is played very close to the vest.  The new confederation still loses two planets, but manages to hold together just long enough to turn the Marion forces back elsewhere.  The marion government falls because of the failure.  Fast forward 5 years.  The Marion military is now stronger than before, and has a better leader.  Now, the confederation is broke, Circinus is looking hungry, and the Marion's are getting ready to try again.  Some confederation members are now willing to go so far as to join the FWL, but the FWL is playing hard to get.

Tribble 0024

In the 4th SW, the goal wasn't to take over the CapCon, but to destabilize it.  A corridor to link the two halves of the FedCom is taken, with the border at the Carver V - Epsilon Eridani- Fletcher line.  The Ronel thumb is also reduced.  The CapCon military is ruined, but most planets are left to themselves, rather than trying to rule them as an invader.  St Ives and Tikonov are FedCom client states, and Sarna becomes nearly independent. The FWL loses a handful of worlds near Oliver and Procyon, but takes the the Hall -  Hsien - New Canton triangle.  Liao and Styk are left as a buffer states between the FedCom and FWL.  They are told they will be left alone as long as they stay neutral with the FedCom, FWL, and CapCon.  A few years later, the Isle of Skye tries to go independent.  Welcome to the Chaos March.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ajax_Wolf on 21 June 2012, 15:31:11
Tribble 0022
19th Century North America had it's fair share of strange cults, most of which vanished as soon as their founder did (often with bulging pockets). One of the stranger and most persistent of these was dedicated not to any God but to human longevity: membership was restricted to those with four living grandparents and in a complete reversal of all religious logic, members were paid - more specifically, were paid a bounty for every child they had with other members.

By the early 22nd century the group remained more or less intact, if unfortunately inbred: a few tens of thousands strong, possessed of an average life span of two hundred years and quite unable to share this blessing with with the rest of humanity. Unsurprisingly they were only too happy to take over a small colony fleet and set out for the far reaches of space, perhaps inspiring the usually fairy tales about planets where no one gets old.

Actually, of course, they set up camp on a handful of worlds a couple of light years towards the core and built up an industrial society to support their goals of:
1. More children
and
2. Not dying.

Unfortunately for a group (now numbering in the billions) who have taken to heart the idea that going to war will lead to regrettable termination of their precious multi-century lifespans and thus have little to no experience of it, they're about to be invaded by six million new colonists, in the form of Kerensky's Exodus...

In a contest of Heinlein vs. Stackpole, I'll take Heinlein. Stackpole's characters tend to reach critical mass and explode more often.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 21 June 2012, 19:32:12
Tribble 0025: Crossover Idea

In 2795, a meteorite crashes near the Tiber River in Italy on Terra. One month later, a mysterious crystiline substance appears within the impact crater. ComStar scientists later identify the substance as Tiberium and show that it is rich in resources, but is also very deadly to human populations. Soon fields of Tiberium begin to grow all over Terra and in the aftermath of this impact, a mysterious organization calling itself The Brotherhood of Nod emerges and, to the shock of the rest of the Inner Sphere, overthrow ComStar and claim Terra for themselves.

Many believed that Nod wished to rebuild the Star League in their image, as had the House Lords of the Inner Sphere. To their surprise, Nod claims that the Star League was a corrupt government of infidels who had no right to claim lordship over the people of the Inner Sphere. They then went on to accuse the leaders of the Successor States and the many Periphery States of the same thing. A month later, cells of Brotherhood of Nod units emerge ALL OVER the Inner Sphere and begin a campaign to overthrow the various armies of the Inner Sphere giving no quarter and asking none either. What's worse, the planets they appear on begin to show signs of Tiberium growth and it isn't long before hundreds of worlds are infested with Tiberium.

Facing a common enemy, the Successor and Periphery States unite against Nod and head to Terra to defeat them once and for all. The Brotherhood's leader, a man only known as Kane, is later killed and Nod fractures into various factions across the Inner Sphere. Over the next 200 years, Kane would surface 2 more times during the Second and Third Succession Wars. Many planets within the Inner Sphere are rendered uninhabitable as Tiberium continues to grow at an accelerated rate. Terra itself is barely able to sustain human life despite the efforts the various House Lords go through to contain or erradicate the mysterious green crystal.

In 3005, when Jaime Wolf's Dragoons appear in the Federated Suns, they are stunned to learn of this development as well as the current status of the Inner Sphere. They are even more stunned at what is going on with Terra and the fact that ComStar no longer exists. After their first contract with House Davion is up, they send their report on the Inner Sphere and Tiberium to the other Clans. However, the Brotherhood of Nod intercepts this transmission and begins to plan for a possible and inevitable confrontation with the Clans. As soon as the Clans learn of the status of the Inner Sphere and Terra, the Great Debate immediately comes to an end and the Clans as a whole begin plans to head to the Inner Sphere to reclaim Terra and rid it of Tiberium in the hopes that they could rebuild the Star League and destroy the Brotherhood of Nod.

Little do they know, that the many bandits within the Kerensky cluster meet with representatives of the Brotherhood of Nod, who then give them the means of facing the Clans on an equal level. It isn't long before all 17 Clans come under attack by members of the Bandit Caste using Nod Tech to destroy their factories and shipyards. It isn't long before Kane, once again, shows himself to the entire Inner Sphere, and informs them of the existance of the Clans and where the Dragoons come from. This throws the entire Inner Sphere into chaos and some even send long-range recon jumpships to confirm Kane's statement. The Clans themselves, are shocked to learn that Kane had revealed their existance and gave the Bandit Caste their tech. It isn't long before the Burrocks, after learning of this, severes their ties with the Bandit Caste and rejoins the Clans in an effort to fight off Nod's attacks.

The question is, how long will it be before the Clans and the Inner Sphere can hold off Nod's own Jihad?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 26 June 2012, 14:10:42
Tribble 0026 "Bandits" beyond the Rim capture Red Corsair and her entourage

What if, back in the dark day, Katrina Steiner and her travelin companions the Kells were met by some weird bandits, fighting with weird mechs never seen before... And winning?

No Peace proposal, no FedCom, no Kell Hounds, no Genyosha...

But maybe bloodname Kell earlier? Or would the Clans accept the young Kells?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 26 June 2012, 16:01:37
Tribble 0027
They came from the darkness and they brought it with them.

Their ships blockade worlds, slaying those who would reinforce the garrison or those who would flee before the conquerers. HPGs go silent where they pass.

Their Mechwarriors and Infantry are distant, faceless warriors who destroy all those who come against them, hunt down all that they seek.

Within a year hundreds of worlds have gone silent. Across the Inner Sphere fear grips a thousand worlds as rumours speculate as to who these invaders are and what they have come to do.

On those fallen worlds they are beginning to learn and their fears are better founded: they still have not met with the warriors but they have met their servants. Humans, or so they appear. Regulated and controlled humans, who impose those same regulation and control upon the worlds that have fallen.

Everyone knows someone who has been taken away by the invaders, and now a few have learned of people who have come back, preaching the virtues of the new ways.

A new word has come to describe this terrible new force in the universe: Harvesters. For they have come not to conquer or to hold, but to harvest: to take what they want away.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 June 2012, 09:30:33
Tribble 0027
They came from the darkness and they brought it with them.

Their ships blockade worlds, slaying those who would reinforce the garrison or those who would flee before the conquerers. HPGs go silent where they pass.

Their Mechwarriors and Infantry are distant, faceless warriors who destroy all those who come against them, hunt down all that they seek.

Within a year hundreds of worlds have gone silent. Across the Inner Sphere fear grips a thousand worlds as rumours speculate as to who these invaders are and what they have come to do.

On those fallen worlds they are beginning to learn and their fears are better founded: they still have not met with the warriors but they have met their servants. Humans, or so they appear. Regulated and controlled humans, who impose those same regulation and control upon the worlds that have fallen.

Everyone knows someone who has been taken away by the invaders, and now a few have learned of people who have come back, preaching the virtues of the new ways.

A new word has come to describe this terrible new force in the universe: Harvesters. For they have come not to conquer or to hold, but to harvest: to take what they want away.
A new version of the Clans? Or is this the new WOB?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 27 June 2012, 14:00:55
Well, in a way that'd be for the who picks the Tribble to decide, but to em it sounds like it could be just about anythng from sentient machines to some sort of infestation. :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 June 2012, 16:46:17
Tribble 0028

They came from beyond the Periphery. Wielding highly advanced weapons and technology that seems to overpower even the most powerful armies in the Inner Sphere. They give no quarter and ask for none and decimate any who stand in their way. What's more, they are not human at all. Despite not having any battlemechs, these creatures and their advanced weaponry is enough to force many armies and mercenary companies to retreat from their holdings with what civilians that they can save.

When Jaime Wolf alerts the Clans of this new enemy, the Great Debate comes to a swift end and the Wardens, having warned the Crusaders of an event such as this, lead the Clans to the Inner Sphere to rescue their long-lost bretheren from this alien threat. Even ComStar, under Myndo Waterly, are unable to hide the facts of an alien invasion in the Inner Sphere and tries their best to fight off the invaders, but ultimately fail with Myndo Waterly dying at the hands of these creatures. With the arrival of the Clans, the tide against them turns as the Clans provide the IS armies with omni-tech and battle-armored troops.

The invaders stop their invasion, but they will return and claim humanity as their slaves.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 28 June 2012, 00:07:02
Tribble 0029

Comstar was unable to completely eradicate the Terran Independents and the group slowly infiltrated Comstar over the centuries, calling themselves Terra Prime. in 3052 as Focht and Mori begin their coup, the group under Precentor Ian McKenna launch their own takeover and war engulfs Terra between Comstar and Terra Prime. The Master and the Hidden Five side with McKenna as well as other true Blakests, defeating Comstar and molding it into an arm of the New Terran Hegemony Government under Director-General Ian McKenna. As the Inner Sphere and Clans are stunned by the creation of the new nation, the Hegemony begins its plans to rebuild its own Star League. Bringing all forces home, the nation uses Comstar to initiate a Blackout across the whole Inner Sphere as its armies roll across the Terran March to take back every former world of the old Hegemony.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 28 June 2012, 00:23:36
Tribble 0030

SLS McKenna's Pride is lost with all hands during the Liberation of Terra.  Including General Aleksandyr Kerensky  #P.  Although Amaris cackles with glee, he swiftly discovers that a furious Aaron DeChevilier is more than a match for his remaining forces.  The Rim World defenders are defeated, Amaris is captured, the Court of the Star League unsealed, and Amaris is shot. 

When the High Council meets, they refuse to appoint DeChevilier as the Commanding General of the SLDF . . . and they demand that the SLDF disband.  DeChevilier complies . . . to a degree.  Calling for volunteers within the SLDF to serve the Terran Hegemony in rebuiilding, he demobilizes every last non-Royal division and regiment that has survived to date.  Those SLDF troops who wish to return home are discharged--the remainder, all volunteers are inducted into the reformed Hegemony Armed Forces, to which DeChevilier transfers all of the SLDF Royal Divisions, Regiments, and surviving WarShips.   :o

In an orchestrated event, the newly reformed Hegemony Senate offers General DeChevilier the post of Commanding General of the reborn HAF.  DeChevilier accepts.  Sufficient volunteers (and surplus equipment) from the disbanded divisions and regiments are on hand to bring the newly constituted HAF to a force of 38 Divisions (14 BattleMech, 2 Infantry, 4 Jump Infantry, and 18 Mechanized Infantry), plus more than a score of independent regiments (total strength of around 180 BattleMech Regiments, plus about 120 Armored Regiments and more than 200 Infantry Regiments).  Not to mention 400+ WarShips.   :o [drool] }:)

The House Lords are furious; this was not what they had in mind.  But it is too late.  DeChevilier speaks to each of them in soldier's terms:  if you want me, come and try it.   >:D

There is no Exodus.  Aaron DeChevilier becomes the Director-General of the Terran Hegemony and becomes romanticly involved with Elizabeth Hazen.  The House Lords refuse to recogonize the new realm, and soon enough the Succession Wars begin . . .  O0

Master Arminas
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Neufeld on 29 June 2012, 06:54:01
Tribble 0026 "Bandits" beyond the Rim capture Red Corsair and her entourage

What if, back in the dark day, Katrina Steiner and her travelin companions the Kells were met by some weird bandits, fighting with weird mechs never seen before... And winning?

No Peace proposal, no FedCom, no Kell Hounds, no Genyosha...

But maybe bloodname Kell earlier? Or would the Clans accept the young Kells?

Another point: Katrina Steiner vanished in 3005. What else happened in 3005? - The Dragoons arrived. The whole setup implies that the Dragoon compromise went a bit different, so I would expect no Dragoons in this scenario also.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 29 June 2012, 15:19:20
Tribble 31

It is 3051 and the House Lords have assembled on Outreach to unite their efforts against the Clans. Their children are trained by the Wolf Dragoons to be the leaders of their forces. But there was a B Class...

Usagi Davion, grand-daughter of Hanse Davion's first Champion. Ami Kurita, great-niece of Takashi Kurita. Rei Liao, Kali's twin sister. Makoto Marik, daughter of Duggan Marik. Minako Steiner, long lost daughter of Fredrick Steiner. Segsuna Hakondottir, younger sister of the Elected Prince. Hotaru Calderon, returing daughter of the lost Edward Calderon. Haruka Avellar, daredevil pilot from the Periphery. Michiru Centralla, who was visiting the local violin conservatory and got drafted as an ambassador.

These nine young women are being trained by Natasha Kerensky's pet surat to defeat the dark forces of Beryl Showers, the evil power behind the Clans and their Dark Khans. When the stars are right, the Great Father will awaken and shroud all the worlds in darkness unless the Senshi and their mysterious ally Endymion Focht can stop her.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 29 June 2012, 18:38:45
Tribble 31

It is 3051 and the House Lords have assembled on Outreach to unite their efforts against the Clans. Their children are trained by the Wolf Dragoons to be the leaders of their forces. But there was a B Class...

Usagi Davion, grand-daughter of Hanse Davion's first Champion. Ami Kurita, great-niece of Takashi Kurita. Rei Liao, Kali's twin sister. Makoto Marik, daughter of Duggan Marik. Minako Steiner, long lost daughter of Fredrick Steiner. Segsuna Hakondottir, younger sister of the Elected Prince. Hotaru Calderon, returing daughter of the lost Edward Calderon. Haruka Avellar, daredevil pilot from the Periphery. Michiru Centralla, who was visiting the local violin conservatory and got drafted as an ambassador.

These nine young women are being trained by Natasha Kerensky's pet surat to defeat the dark forces of Beryl Showers, the evil power behind the Clans and their Dark Khans. When the stars are right, the Great Father will awaken and shroud all the worlds in darkness unless the Senshi and their mysterious ally Endymion Focht can stop her.
Sailor Moon Battletech style! I like it!  O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 29 June 2012, 22:15:28
Tribble 0030

SLS McKenna's Pride is lost with all hands during the Liberation of Terra.  Including General Aleksandyr Kerensky  #P.  Although Amaris cackles with glee, he swiftly discovers that a furious Aaron DeChevilier is more than a match for his remaining forces.  The Rim World defenders are defeated, Amaris is captured, the Court of the Star League unsealed, and Amaris is shot. 

When the High Council meets, they refuse to appoint DeChevilier as the Commanding General of the SLDF . . . and they demand that the SLDF disband.  DeChevilier complies . . . to a degree.  Calling for volunteers within the SLDF to serve the Terran Hegemony in rebuiilding, he demobilizes every last non-Royal division and regiment that has survived to date.  Those SLDF troops who wish to return home are discharged--the remainder, all volunteers are inducted into the reformed Hegemony Armed Forces, to which DeChevilier transfers all of the SLDF Royal Divisions, Regiments, and surviving WarShips.   :o

In an orchestrated event, the newly reformed Hegemony Senate offers General DeChevilier the post of Commanding General of the reborn HAF.  DeChevilier accepts.  Sufficient volunteers (and surplus equipment) from the disbanded divisions and regiments are on hand to bring the newly constituted HAF to a force of 38 Divisions (14 BattleMech, 2 Infantry, 4 Jump Infantry, and 18 Mechanized Infantry), plus more than a score of independent regiments (total strength of around 180 BattleMech Regiments, plus about 120 Armored Regiments and more than 200 Infantry Regiments).  Not to mention 400+ WarShips.   :o [drool] }:)

The House Lords are furious; this was not what they had in mind.  But it is too late.  DeChevilier speaks to each of them in soldier's terms:  if you want me, come and try it.   >:D

There is no Exodus.  Aaron DeChevilier becomes the Director-General of the Terran Hegemony and becomes romanticly involved with Elizabeth Hazen.  The House Lords refuse to recogonize the new realm, and soon enough the Succession Wars begin . . .  O0

Master Arminas

This must be written! All hail DG DeChevilier ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 30 June 2012, 03:56:06
Tribble 0030

SLS McKenna's Pride is lost with all hands during the Liberation of Terra.  Including General Aleksandyr Kerensky  #P.  Although Amaris cackles with glee, he swiftly discovers that a furious Aaron DeChevilier is more than a match for his remaining forces.  The Rim World defenders are defeated, Amaris is captured, the Court of the Star League unsealed, and Amaris is shot. 

When the High Council meets, they refuse to appoint DeChevilier as the Commanding General of the SLDF . . . and they demand that the SLDF disband.  DeChevilier complies . . . to a degree.  Calling for volunteers within the SLDF to serve the Terran Hegemony in rebuiilding, he demobilizes every last non-Royal division and regiment that has survived to date.  Those SLDF troops who wish to return home are discharged--the remainder, all volunteers are inducted into the reformed Hegemony Armed Forces, to which DeChevilier transfers all of the SLDF Royal Divisions, Regiments, and surviving WarShips.   :o

In an orchestrated event, the newly reformed Hegemony Senate offers General DeChevilier the post of Commanding General of the reborn HAF.  DeChevilier accepts.  Sufficient volunteers (and surplus equipment) from the disbanded divisions and regiments are on hand to bring the newly constituted HAF to a force of 38 Divisions (14 BattleMech, 2 Infantry, 4 Jump Infantry, and 18 Mechanized Infantry), plus more than a score of independent regiments (total strength of around 180 BattleMech Regiments, plus about 120 Armored Regiments and more than 200 Infantry Regiments).  Not to mention 400+ WarShips.   :o [drool] }:)

The House Lords are furious; this was not what they had in mind.  But it is too late.  DeChevilier speaks to each of them in soldier's terms:  if you want me, come and try it.   >:D

There is no Exodus.  Aaron DeChevilier becomes the Director-General of the Terran Hegemony and becomes romanticly involved with Elizabeth Hazen.  The House Lords refuse to recogonize the new realm, and soon enough the Succession Wars begin . . .  O0

Master Arminas

Dooo iiiiit!!!!!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 30 June 2012, 04:27:39
Unbeknowest to Nicky and his band of Cultists, during the Exodus Civil War, naval Captain Jacob Davion (a member of a minor cadet branch of the House) sees the writing on the wall, and gathers his followers for a THIRD Exodus. Grabing what they can, they flee into the Black, seeking to find a place to begin again. They eventually settle on a planet Coreward of the Kerensky Cluster, and begin settling what will become known as the Kerensky March.

DUring the centuries that follow, they observe their cousins with a mixture of contempt, horror, and fascination. Many of the Bandit Caste raids are actually March units seeking samples of Clan technology.

When they realise that the Invasion is imenant, Duke Davion sends an envoy to his cousin in the Inner Sphere, containing all their data on the Clans and tech samples, along with a message: we can't stop them, but if you can hold them off, we can stab them in the back.

While the Invading Clans are getting mired down into an Inner Sphere that is more prepared than they anticipated, fleets of WarShips bearing the Sun and Sword start appearing in Clan space, devastating their orbital infrastructure and formentin dissent among the lower castes.

Dumb, or possible?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 30 June 2012, 08:46:05
Unbeknowest to Nicky and his band of Cultists, during the Exodus Civil War, naval Captain Jacob Davion (a member of a minor cadet branch of the House) sees the writing on the wall, and gathers his followers for a THIRD Exodus. Grabing what they can, they flee into the Black, seeking to find a place to begin again. They eventually settle on a planet Coreward of the Kerensky Cluster, and begin settling what will become known as the Kerensky March.

DUring the centuries that follow, they observe their cousins with a mixture of contempt, horror, and fascination. Many of the Bandit Caste raids are actually March units seeking samples of Clan technology.

When they realise that the Invasion is imenant, Duke Davion sends an envoy to his cousin in the Inner Sphere, containing all their data on the Clans and tech samples, along with a message: we can't stop them, but if you can hold them off, we can stab them in the back.

While the Invading Clans are getting mired down into an Inner Sphere that is more prepared than they anticipated, fleets of WarShips bearing the Sun and Sword start appearing in Clan space, devastating their orbital infrastructure and formentin dissent among the lower castes.

Dumb, or possible?
Sounds very promising actually.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Lord Harlock on 30 June 2012, 15:58:14
Tribble 31

It is 3051 and the House Lords have assembled on Outreach to unite their efforts against the Clans. Their children are trained by the Wolf Dragoons to be the leaders of their forces. But there was a B Class...

Usagi Davion, grand-daughter of Hanse Davion's first Champion. Ami Kurita, great-niece of Takashi Kurita. Rei Liao, Kali's twin sister. Makoto Marik, daughter of Duggan Marik. Minako Steiner, long lost daughter of Fredrick Steiner. Segsuna Hakondottir, younger sister of the Elected Prince. Hotaru Calderon, returing daughter of the lost Edward Calderon. Haruka Avellar, daredevil pilot from the Periphery. Michiru Centralla, who was visiting the local violin conservatory and got drafted as an ambassador.

These nine young women are being trained by Natasha Kerensky's pet surat to defeat the dark forces of Beryl Showers, the evil power behind the Clans and their Dark Khans. When the stars are right, the Great Father will awaken and shroud all the worlds in darkness unless the Senshi and their mysterious ally Endymion Focht can stop her.

I'd probably just call Usagi by Bunny or Serena just because House Davion internally probably frowns on the use of Japanese names by members since they really can't have someone upset the Draconis March even in the extended family. As for Minako, that is a perfectly missed opportunity to use a full name of Wilhelmina or Hermina "Mina" Steiner. And come on, Lita works since it derived from Greek Mythology.

As for the rest, well the Japanese names probably work better, but the idea of Dr. Tomoe as Calderon just sends odd ideas through my head. "That little girl has red hair! She must be a Davion out to thwart my scheme . . . to the lab!"



Unbeknowest to Nicky and his band of Cultists, during the Exodus Civil War, naval Captain Jacob Davion (a member of a minor cadet branch of the House) sees the writing on the wall, and gathers his followers for a THIRD Exodus. Grabing what they can, they flee into the Black, seeking to find a place to begin again. They eventually settle on a planet Coreward of the Kerensky Cluster, and begin settling what will become known as the Kerensky March.

DUring the centuries that follow, they observe their cousins with a mixture of contempt, horror, and fascination. Many of the Bandit Caste raids are actually March units seeking samples of Clan technology.

When they realise that the Invasion is imenant, Duke Davion sends an envoy to his cousin in the Inner Sphere, containing all their data on the Clans and tech samples, along with a message: we can't stop them, but if you can hold them off, we can stab them in the back.

While the Invading Clans are getting mired down into an Inner Sphere that is more prepared than they anticipated, fleets of WarShips bearing the Sun and Sword start appearing in Clan space, devastating their orbital infrastructure and formentin dissent among the lower castes.

Dumb, or possible?

I like it, but that's because I always wondered if any Davion family members went on the exodus. Obviously in canon, there are no Davion Bloodnames, but I figured that they didn't join the whole Kerensky Second Exodus. Though that does beg a question, why didn't anyone else you know bug out with some people during the Exodus Civil War on their own exodus? 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 30 June 2012, 20:37:52
Well, the SLDF did fragemnt into factions along House lines, at least at first. It makes sense for them to rally around familiar names.

Probably Nicky would have noticed if too many upped and left, but hey, it helps explain how 800 warriors were able to conquer the Pentagon worlds ... that's 800 including tank crews, fighter pilots and infantrymen ...  ???
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 08 July 2012, 20:52:24
Tribble #35

The wizard Gandloff was looking for some one to help out retake middle earth. Intead of finding horsemen like he thought he did. Instead he found himself on a world called OutReach. The home to men who will for for just about any cause for for gold. He hired himself a combined arms regiment with good air cover and they showed up just into for the long shot over looking the city Helmdeep just before The horsemen show up. This time the long shot is tow Stuka areospace fighters blast over head just as the first mechs start a combat drop from the first hovering dropship to show up.
Middle earth never knew just what the heck hit it after the otherworld Mercs hit planet.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 July 2012, 02:36:20
Tribble #36

Michael Hasek-Davion and Anton Marik. Brother-in-Law to the First Prince and Brother to the Captain-General. Unsuccessful rebels. Maximilian Liao's puppets trusted allies.

So what if they didn't get used by Max Liao. What if instead, they worked together in the first decade of the 31st century, carving out private empires from the Capellan Confederation. And then in the mid-3010s, after the death of Ian Davion, they unite their domains, creating a new Successor State with the covert help of ComStar (potentially to be inherited by Morgan Hasek-Davion and a daughter of Anton.

(http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af161/drakensis/Hasek-Marik.png)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 03 August 2012, 18:11:08
Tribble #37

Prior to the Clan invasion the explorer corps. of ComStar discovers an alien device beyond the Periphery just rimward of House Davion. The device itself looks like a giant tuning fork and has no signature in any of their sensors. After the discovery of the device, ComStar makes painstaking efforts to cover it all up. Just one week of examining the device, it activates an a ship of unknown origin comes through. The ComStar jumpship in charge of the expedition, tries to make first contact with the alien vessel, but no response had been made. The alien ship then went back through the device and ComStar made the decision to have one of their dropships follow it through. Just a day later, all contact with the explorer corps ships abruptly halts; no further transmissions went to or came from the device. ComStar sends no other ships to determine the fate of the explorer corps unit.

Just a few years later after the destruction of Clan Smoke Jaguar, the Word of Blake detects strange activities going on near the moon of Charon and sends a dropship to investigate. The results are shocking, another device very similar to the one ComStar's explorer corps. discovered years before had been activated just outside of Terra's solar system. Elsewhere, other devices like the one over Charon and the one discovered by ComStar are being detected and activated. Even in the Clan Occupied realms and homeworld systems, the Clans are discovering these devices being activated. From one of these devices, a fleet of unknown ships appears over the world of Shanxi near the Periphery border of the Capellan Confederation and is attacked. The pirate defenders of this world send an emergency wide-beam transmission towards the Inner Sphere and request aid from the Capellans or the Suns; neither realm responds and all transmissions with Shanxi are cut off.

The Will of Toyama, a Word of Blake Aegis-class cruiser is sent to investigate; the ship discovered that Shanxi had been conquered by intelligent non-humans with some technologies far superior to their own. The fleet of the now confirmed alien vessels then opens fire on the vessel without allowing it time to escape, but they manage to send out an emergency transmission again towards the rest of the Inner Sphere. This time, the Inner Sphere pays attention to the transmission.

A week later, this same fleet of unidentified vessels arrives through one of these, now dubbed, relays over the Capellan world of Egress and launches an invasion of the planet. What little defenders on the planet fall quickly and news of the invasion reaches the capital. Sun Tzu Liao immediately orders a strike force to retake the planet. The alien invaders attempt to destroy the ships carrying the Capellan forces, but fail to stop the dropships from landing on Egress.

The battle on Egress becomes a slaughter of the aliens as they face the full might of the Capellan military as well as facing Battlemechs for the first time. After they launch an orbital bombardment of the planet, much to the shock of the entire Inner Sphere and the Clans, the aliens then retreat through the alien device near Egress. The Capellans then plan a full counterattack against these aliens.

A few days later, a ship comes through one of these relays near Outreach. This one, completely different from the ones that attacked Shanxi and Egress, sends a transmission to Wolf's Dragoons in perfect English saying that they represent an alien government known as the Citadel Council and they wish to negotiate a cease in hostilities between their races. Jaime Wolf then sends a message through all HPG networks towards the Successor States, the Periphary, and the Clans, asking that a meeting between the various leaders of these realms meet on Outreach to discuss these negotiations with the aliens. Surprisingly, the leaders of all the realms respond to Jaime Wolf's transmission and arrive at Outreach within a month and the negotiations with the Citadel represntatives begin.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 04 August 2012, 05:33:43
Tribble 38 When Nicholas tries to inherit his Father's place at the leadership of the SLDF, the forces say 'Nuh-uh'. They don't want a hereditary overlord, they have seen what thta does to a realm when someone isn't as good as their parent.

Nicholas gets heavy-handed. And the historians in the oppressed SLDF come up with a response. Responsibly lead Socialist Revolution. And they win. Nicholas is defeated, and the revolution begins to take care of the division of power. The historians know that pure Socialism or Communism wouldn't work on such large scale, so they divide the whole into self-governing communes of at maximum about 2000 people.

Within a commune, labour is divided as evenly as possible. What a single commune is incapable fo doing themselves, they are free to trade with their neighbours. Only centrally led parts of the Union of Independednt Communes are the main trade network, including banking of the barter economy, and the defense. For they know that the greedy Oligarchies of the Inner Sphere would not like to see the power in the hands of the People on the scale they are doing.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 09 August 2012, 18:06:12
Tribble 39 - Circa 3025, Thomas Calderon gets a vision of the Taurian Concordat's more horrific and stupid actions during the Jihad, with his anti-Davion paranoia being implicated as the root cause. He doesn't get anything about the historical context, so no foreknowledge of future events between 3025 and the Jihad, but the idea of his nation's capital city being flattened by an asteroid, with the TDF being easily lured into attacking the Davions like rabid dogs even after the real culprits are discovered, chills him. Only one detail of the culprits' identity remains with him. A modified Comstar crest.

Tribble 40 - Hanse Davion wakes up one day hearing voices. These voices whisper things to him whenever he does anything ("Micheal Hasek-Davion is plotting your downfall with the Cappellans..." "Comstar is hoarding Star League technology and seeks to become the secret masters of the Inner Sphere..." "The SLDF's descendants are still out there..."). Rather than trust these voices unquestioned, he tasks Quintus Allard to check on some of the things the voices are whispering about. When some of them check out, he cautiously allows the voices to advise him. Many of their suggestions are impractical at the moment, but there are a few ideas in there that just might give the AFFS the advantages it needs...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 09 August 2012, 22:04:00
Tribble 0026 "Bandits" beyond the Rim capture Red Corsair and her entourage

What if, back in the dark day, Katrina Steiner and her travelin companions the Kells were met by some weird bandits, fighting with weird mechs never seen before... And winning?

No Peace proposal, no FedCom, no Kell Hounds, no Genyosha...

But maybe bloodname Kell earlier? Or would the Clans accept the young Kells?

only one hitch, Phelans Ward link was thru his mom not Morgan
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 August 2012, 00:07:46
only one hitch, Phelans Ward link was thru his mom not Morgan
We're talking Morgan Kell here. Do you really think he's not badass enough to convince them to create a bloodname?

(besides which, IIRC Phelan's descended from the Wards on both sides of his family)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 10 August 2012, 00:36:22
Phelan's Ward connection is more or less irrelevant, really, for Kell bloodname in case his dad gets nabbed by Clans back in the Katrina's Red Corsair run.

1) Phelan was conceived (or bottled) only with the SL/CLan level medical aid from the Wolf's Dragoons after 4th Succession War.

2) I didn't say the Kell boys were made Wards first. My stipulation was that they (and Katrina) run across 'Bandits' in the Periphery and manage to win, not completely, but enough to warrant plenty of attention.

What the Kell boys' lineage was might or might not affect their chance in going to a Bloodname house, but depending on the Clan they meet, it'd be almost foregone conclusion that they'd be at least considered for being made Bondsmen, and probably, with their rive, manage to become Warriors. And that could lead to creation of Kell bloodname earlier than in Canon.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 10 August 2012, 12:45:45
We're talking Morgan Kell here. Do you really think he's not badass enough to convince them to create a bloodname?

(besides which, IIRC Phelan's descended from the Wards on both sides of his family)


no Morgan is badass enough to make them change to the Children of Kell not K
erensky
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 10 August 2012, 19:40:07
Tribble 41

The Clans never invade due to a failed consensus and in 3053, the Federated Commonwealth once again prepares to invade the Draconis Combine after learning of the massive bluff that the DC had initiated in 3039. However, Hanse offers Theodore a way out of war by demanding a Union between the two nations thru a marriage between Victor and Omi. Theodore agrees despite heavy resistance in his nation as well as from those living in the Draconis March which leads to massive rebellions all along the border.

Comstar, realizing war with the Commonwealth is inevitable, uses the rebellions distracting the FC/DC Union to prepare their own political block by secretly arranging Sun-Tzu to take the throne of the CC by assassinating Romano. A new military union is formed between the Capellans and the Comguard to bolster the CC military using Star League tech. ROM also secretly removes those within its organization that are from the Combine including Sharilar Mori in order to protect its secrecy.

Conspiring with Sun-Tzu, Myndo Waterly secretly travels to the Free Worlds League, Magistracy of Canopus, Taurian Concordant, and the Marian Hegemony in order to persuade the nations to join with the Capellan Confederation in forming a new Star League. To solidify the League, arranged marriages are used between allied states as well as Comstar opening up its tech base to the periphery states.


In 3058, the FC/DC Union crushes the last resistance group in the Draconis March only to face a new Star League ruled by a Council under a powerful Reagan SDS on Terra.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mackon on 10 August 2012, 22:48:03
Tribble # 42

A Rogue Trader(ish) tale of High Adventure! pre-Clans Inner Sphere set towards the end of the 2nd Succession War or very early during the 3rd. Teenager/young adult studying at the a military Academy is informed of a tragedy befalling his family and his inheriting the families beaten up, falling apart, old Merchant class JumpShip.

Follow his desperate adventures as he rescues his little sister from the evil uncle (who's in cahoots with pirates!) the man who orchestrated mom and dads death and then as he goes on to recover his inheritance and raid the pirates base with a hastily assembled crew of friends amd mercensaries.

Follow his risky trade deals while he tries to scrap together enough C-Bills to fix the old ship up a little or repair that Flux Capacitor thingy.

Watch as he somehow repeated lands in the middle of wars and skirmishes all and gets out agian by the skin of his teeth all over the Inner Sphere.

Travel along for the ride for chancy treasure hunts searching for lost Star League technology caches or lovely pirate booty (both in treasure chests and out)

Romance with the smoking hot leader of an all babe mercenary company with complications in the form of the smoking hot DropShip Captain.

Heroic blowing up/Ramming/decoying the venerable old Merchant JumpShip to save the day while the hero and co upgrade to a captured much nicer ship, maybe even a small Warship if SOD can be maintained?

Getting involved in politics and finally getting awarded a nice planet somewhere to settle down on.

All that fun stuff.

Our protagonist was training as a Mech warrior or maybe an AeroSpace pilot when he gets the bad news at the beginning. Or maybe he started as AeroSpace and got kicked out and was finishing up his tuition learning mechs ... whatever works. He's not the best MechWarrior or an Ace ASF pilot or the greatest tactician but he is pretty good works hard and just maybe has a little bit more than his fair share of luck . . .  mostly good but sometimes downright awful.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 11 August 2012, 09:07:12
Tribble # 43

In Clan space, we hear about the Dark Caste, the bandits who are outside Clan society. Yet since the Clans are ashamed/ don't want to admit that they have renegades. the Inner Sphere doesn't hear much about them. Certainly, some are regressed hunter-gatherers, or hill tribes hiding from the Clan forces, but others are better equipped and organised, with some operating like organised crime for the Kerensky Cluster. How about we fill in some of the blanks, tell the stories of the side of Clan space they don't want told?

 *The decendants of a regiment who stay true to the SLDF, carrying out a centuries-long gurilla war against the degenerates who tarnish the memory of the Star League, tired and outnumbered, but never giving up hope ...

 *A Norsemen style community of raiders, who espouse the ideal of Elemental superiority ... mostly operating as normal infantry, but with some stolen or heirloom suits, they raid Clan holdings for food, equipment, weapons and slaves ... females of Elemental bloodlines, whatever the caste, are taken as breeding stock ...

 *An isolated world in the Kerensky Cluster where the Exodus Civil war is still going on, with the decendants of rival units have backslid over the centuries: now they fight their battles with flintlock muskets and sabes, a la the Raj Whitehall books ...

 *An angry but frustrated bandit chief, sick of being hunted by the Clans, yet dependant on them, says 'enough is enough,' and strikes out for the Inner Sphere, both to find a new life and also to warn the Successor States about the Clans ... but when the Watch is informed of his plans, can his wiley band of misfits outrun and outsmart a Clan hunting party, desperate to bring him to heel and crush the hope of his followers?

 *In the heart of Clan space, on Strana Mechty itself, a secret cabal of lower castemen, bandit chiefs and a few sympathisers from the Warrior caste, plots to bring down the rule of the Bloodnamed and their thugs. Their leader? A shadowy figure who remains anonymous, but many believe is a clone of Aleksandyr Kerensky himself ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 11 August 2012, 10:21:59
Tribble # 43

In Clan space, we hear about the Dark Caste, the bandits who are outside Clan society. Yet since the Clans are ashamed/ don't want to admit that they have renegades. the Inner Sphere doesn't hear much about them. Certainly, some are regressed hunter-gatherers, or hill tribes hiding from the Clan forces, but others are better equipped and organised, with some operating like organised crime for the Kerensky Cluster. How about we fill in some of the blanks, tell the stories of the side of Clan space they don't want told?

 *The decendants of a regiment who stay true to the SLDF, carrying out a centuries-long gurilla war against the degenerates who tarnish the memory of the Star League, tired and outnumbered, but never giving up hope ...

 *A Norsemen style community of raiders, who espouse the ideal of Elemental superiority ... mostly operating as normal infantry, but with some stolen or heirloom suits, they raid Clan holdings for food, equipment, weapons and slaves ... females of Elemental bloodlines, whatever the caste, are taken as breeding stock ...

 *An isolated world in the Kerensky Cluster where the Exodus Civil war is still going on, with the decendants of rival units have backslid over the centuries: now they fight their battles with flintlock muskets and sabes, a la the Raj Whitehall books ...

 *An angry but frustrated bandit chief, sick of being hunted by the Clans, yet dependant on them, says 'enough is enough,' and strikes out for the Inner Sphere, both to find a new life and also to warn the Successor States about the Clans ... but when the Watch is informed of his plans, can his wiley band of misfits outrun and outsmart a Clan hunting party, desperate to bring him to heel and crush the hope of his followers?

 *In the heart of Clan space, on Strana Mechty itself, a secret cabal of lower castemen, bandit chiefs and a few sympathisers from the Warrior caste, plots to bring down the rule of the Bloodnamed and their thugs. Their leader? A shadowy figure who remains anonymous, but many believe is a clone of Aleksandyr Kerensky himself ...
I like this idea, I think I might borrow one of these tales.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 11 August 2012, 16:12:00
Tribble 41

The Clans never invade due to a failed consensus and in 3053, the Federated Commonwealth once again prepares to invade the Draconis Combine after learning of the massive bluff that the DC had initiated in 3039. However, Hanse offers Theodore a way out of war by demanding a Union between the two nations thru a marriage between Victor and Omi. Theodore agrees despite heavy resistance in his nation as well as from those living in the Draconis March which leads to massive rebellions all along the border.

Comstar, realizing war with the Commonwealth is inevitable, uses the rebellions distracting the FC/DC Union to prepare their own political block by secretly arranging Sun-Tzu to take the throne of the CC by assassinating Romano. A new military union is formed between the Capellans and the Comguard to bolster the CC military using Star League tech. ROM also secretly removes those within its organization that are from the Combine including Sharilar Mori in order to protect its secrecy.

Conspiring with Sun-Tzu, Myndo Waterly secretly travels to the Free Worlds League, Magistracy of Canopus, Taurian Concordant, and the Marian Hegemony in order to persuade the nations to join with the Capellan Confederation in forming a new Star League. To solidify the League, arranged marriages are used between allied states as well as Comstar opening up its tech base to the periphery states.


In 3058, the FC/DC Union crushes the last resistance group in the Draconis March only to face a new Star League ruled by a Council under a powerful Reagan SDS on Terra.
Is ROM going to remove Anastasius Focht as well and thus completely cripple their military arm?

Terra is three jumps from the closest FWL world, and that using uninhabited systems or deep space jumps because it's completely surrounded. Using the Field manuals as the closest to accurate source for the relative time period, and giving any bumps to size for the FWLM and CCAF from worlds they wouldn't have in this timeline as freebies,  the combined mech forces of the Alliance of Huh-What?, comes in at 44 regiments for the CCAF, 74 regiments for the FWLM, 41 regiments for the combined Periphery Militaries, and let's call it 100 regiments for the Com Guards due to diligently pursuing every avenue to buff themselves just to weigh things disgustingly in their favor.

Presuming that the militaries of the FedCom-Draconic Axis of Doomety-Doom-Doom-Doom stayed steady at their 3049 numbers with 9 years of output getting devoured by 6 years of comparatively limited engagements, the DCMS wouldn't even have to bother to turn up because the AFFC still have a 20 regiment force surplus over their enemies.  This is ignoring the fact that the FRR, Oberon, and the Outworlds Alliance aren't going to be able to sign on fast enough out of fear of getting crushed to provide bored DCMS soldiers something to do, with the other less legitimate Northern Pirate nations providing object examples to speed that process along.

Just the Fed-Com-Com alone has more than two and a half times as many worlds as the new Star League.

Sun Tzu is entirely capable of feats of basic math, and would milk C* for everything he could get out of them before selling them out in a heartbeat in order to arrange his own dynastic marriage to Yvonne Steiner Davion if he could possibly manage it, Angela Hasek if he doesn't quite bring enough to the table.

Comstar's Warship supremacy would be steadily vanishing as the Fed-Com-Com made every effort to bring their own into production, and until that point could be countered by the threat of massed fighter swarms bearing nukes.  The idea that this would all happen in utter secrecy despite the involvement of multiple blood feuds between the members of the proposed alliance and the involvement of the Taurian Ministry of Intelligence in keeping the secret is also highly questionable without a great deal of groundwork being laid.

TL,DR: This setup needs a great deal of adjustment in order to be remotely balanced and not result in the new SL getting laughed at and self destructing as its leaders finally realize their situation after coming down off of their five year long bender. As in 'The Clans invade in 3058' levels of adjustment.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 August 2012, 00:08:06
Tribble #43

Michael Hasek-Davion's plan in 3013 succeeds and Hanse Davion is killed by an anonymous sniper before he can take his brother's throne. The Fox has insurance however, and Duke Michael enjoys the satisfaction of his coming ascendancy for less than a month.

Power vaccums, of course, exist to be filled. Marie Davion is not particularly power-hungry but any other First Prince must neutralize her eight year old son, Morgan. Passing control of New Syrtis to one of her husband's cousins she make for New Avalon and pronounces herself Regent for Morgan. Aaron Sandoval withholds his support from her briefly, until she gives him a free hand in his March.

Neither Takashi Kurita nor Maxmilian Liao is very impressed by the new regent and fighting along both borders increases in intensity, leaving the AFFS mired in a two front war with Marie unable to support either March as much as they want her to and ComStar fanning the thoughts of independence from New Avalon in the nobility of the two Marches.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 14 August 2012, 19:47:20
I'll have to adjust 41 then change it

Tribble 44

As the Star League's invasion of the Taurian Concordant rages on, the Taurian High Command decides to take the fight to the enemy by commissioning a task force to hit back within the Star League member states themselves. Twenty-Five ships (twenty Concordant frigates and five jumpships) and two full Battlemech regiments enter Davion space by using old star charts; traveling thru uninhabited systems to hit their targets. At first a few minor systems are hit until the Taurians raid a system near New Avalon. There is panic and the Star League is forced to divert resources from the Taurian front to deal with the enemy task force. As the Star League hunts down the Taurians in within the Federated Suns, the task force decides to hit the Hegemony itself......
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: al103 on 15 August 2012, 19:54:27
Sun Tzu is entirely capable of feats of basic math, and would milk C* for everything he could get out of them before selling them out in a heartbeat in order to arrange his own dynastic marriage to Yvonne Steiner Davion if he could possibly manage it, Angela Hasek if he doesn't quite bring enough to the table.
Which actually would made quite a story in itself.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 25 August 2012, 20:24:07
Tribble 45

During the Golden Century, Clan Fire Mandrill's Khan and saKhan, both of different Kindraa come to a conclusion: their Clan is too divided for it's own good. Thus, they deliver this ultimatum to all Kindraa leaders: unite, or we will all perish together. Despite the massive outcry against such a declaration, many of the Kindraa leaders declare a Trial of Refusal to the proposal with whatever Clusters they bid towards it. These Kindraa leaders are easily dealt with and the new Kindraa leaders fall silent in their opposition to unite their Clan. Sure enough, the various Kindraas of the Clan begin to dissolve and integrate forming Galaxies of a newly reformed Clan Fire Mandrill.

As the Great Debate begins, the Clan once again found itself divided; this time with the belief of returning to the Inner Sphere as either it's protectors or conquerers. When Khan Kerlin Ward proposed the Dragoon Compromise, Khan Arthur Carrol agreed to the compromise and offered his Clan's training regimines to prepare the Dragoons for combat in the Inner Sphere. Though the request was denied, the Fire Mandrills looked to the Star Adders in hopes of looking for means of understanding the tactics of the Inner Sphere forces should the invasion be approved.

When Operation Revival is approved, the Fire Mandrills will undoubtedly show the rest of the Clans and the Inner Sphere the full might of their newfound unity.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 26 August 2012, 03:41:50
Tribble 46.

The year was 2800(ish) when Nickolas Kerensky related his vision of the future to the 500 mechwarriors who still followed him. Disgusted by what was happening in the Kerensky cluster, they followed him, and so convinced by his words, they threw a party.

Nicky, it turned out, couldn't hold his liquor.

And instead of relating his ideals piecemental over years, he burbled it all out, bragging about how he manipulated his brother Andery into getting involved with the mutiny, about his plans to create a race of genetic supermen to rule over the non-warriors, and how he learnt his ideals from watching Amaris's occupation of earth.

One of the warriors who head this promptly killed Nicky, before being killed in turn by another warrior. The party turned into a blood bath, and by the next day, the Second Exodus had been reduced so badly it was now just another faction in the pentagon.

The Pentagon wars continued- and expanded. The squabbling factions found Brian Cache's, and then found the locations of mothballed warships. By the time the war ended, the Kerensky cluster was in a state of cold war. One in which Warships- and Warship manufacture- was a significant part.

250 years later, the Outbound Light found the Kerensky cluster.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 28 August 2012, 22:34:02
Tribble #47

When the new IlKhan is selected before 3067, many of the Homeworld Wardens see the writing on the wall and unceremoniously pack up to leave, not wanting to be around when the insane IlKhan sparks a disaster. Making their way to the Inner Sphere, they beg asylum with the Star League, revealing what the Homeworlds were going through. The new First Lord uses this information to convince the Star League to remain together, while the Refugee Clans ask to join the SLDF.

All in all, the IlKhan does not react well when he learns the Wardens just left. Within two months of the Wardens arriving in the Inner Sphere, the Homeworld Crusaders also leave to punish the "dezgra cowards." It's time for Clan Invasion 2.0, and the new Invaders aren't in the mood to follow zellbrigin when dealing with honorless Spheroids...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 29 August 2012, 19:20:52
Interesting idea Terrace. I'd assume there would be four Refugee Clans from the Homeworld Wardens. Snow Raven is easy enough to imagine as their Outworlds destination is well known. For the three others I see an interesting mix of mystics perhaps united by a shared vision. Coyote, Goliath Scorpion, and Cloud Cobra all have that "sixth sense" even though some of them don't get along (Yotes and the Cobras). So perhaps a trio of seers unites them in a flight from the Homeworlds. What would the impact of this be on the Society?

As for the Homeworld Crusaders I included the Steel Vipers who yes are in FM Warden Clans but I think they are the ring leaders of this group along with their Star Adder allies. I could see the Adders pragmatically cover for their Cobra allies especially for the potential gains. Ice Hellion would probably jump on board as they want to invade ilKhan or not perhaps they lead the pursuit of the Refugees? The Fire Mandrills might split into two separate Clans with the Wardens joining the flight from the Homeworlds and the Crusaders chasing them. Blood Spirit is an interesting case as they might leave the Homeworlds as well but going to the InnerSphere?

Would the Invading Wardens be assaulted as well in this scenario? Good luck beating up on the Ghost Bears. Diamond Shark might split into two different Clans in order to do business with both sides. Sea Foxes (Zeta Galaxy) joining the InnerSphere as an Abjured faction like the Wolves in Exile could be a nice idea as the Sharks stay loyal to the Homeworlds. Then of course you have two Abjured factions already part of the Star League; Nova Cats and Wolf in Exile.

What are the Invading Crusaders doing when all this is going down? Wolf, Jade Falcon, and Hell's Horses will want to lead another invasion but likely want to keep the others out. Do Steel Vipers, Star Adders, Ice Hellion, and Fire Mandrill join them? Do Wardens defect from Hell's Horses and there is that whole Society thing....  ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 29 August 2012, 21:18:33
So many ways for my tribble to change things O:-)

I think the Invading Wardens would at least offer safecon to the Refugee Clans. The Ghost Bears would be easily swayed to offer material aid, and perhaps vouch for them to the Star League.

The Invading Crusaders would indeed get defensive at the idea of the Homeworld Crusaders trying to horn in on their territory. They'd probably demand Trials of Refusal or Grievance against the Homeworld Crusaders. Of course, zellbrigen goes out the window after the first exchange. It would probably be enough for the Invading Crusaders to grudgingly work together with the Star League, while the Ghost Bears would be fighting all the while.

Some of the Refugee Clans might seek refuge with the Nova Cats and the Wolves-in-Exile (seeing the Cobras going to the Cats, with the Coyotes going to the Wolves-in-Exile). The Goliath Scorpions would probably negotiate for the worlds of the Lyons Thumb.

The other details are fluid, and can easily be adjusted for the story as needed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 30 August 2012, 00:27:43
Tribble #48

Arthur Steiner-Davion managed to get a girl pregnant before he was blown up. With the Civil War breaking out, she very sensibly kept her head down and the first anyone learned of Arthur's son was when he, in his teens, joined the AFFS just after the Jihad. The relationship was picked up on when his medical records were filed on New Avalon per routine and MIIO checked his history. Since he didn't seem to be doing anything to follow up on his arguably better claim to the throne than Yvonne's, she decided not to publicise his existence or even to let him know.

Harrison Sandoval-Davion was inclined to let sleeping dogs lie although he did pull a few strings quietly so his cousin's two children got opportunities to be mechwarriors when they joined the AFFS themselves. And then Harrison took his dive over the balcony and Caleb Hasek-Sandoval-Davion was rather alarmed to learn that two of 'his' Mechwarriors are unwitting rivals to the throne. Even worse, his first attempt to get rid of them not only fails but reveals their lineage to them and kills their father and grandmother.

So one First Prince with MPD versus two Davions with mechs and a grudge.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 14 September 2012, 20:16:58
There has been some discussion about the Clans and LAMs going on recently, and it came up that the notable Goliath Scorpion LAM pilot from TR3085 was Trueborn so I was thinking there was probably an interesting story behind that because of how strongly LAMs clash with traditional Clan views.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 17 September 2012, 19:26:11
Tribble #49

War.  War never changes.
Since the days of the Terran Alliance, blood has been spilled in a constant attempt by one nation or another to unite humanity under a single banner.
In the year 2784, after a brutal conflict to oust the usurper Amaris from the throne of the Star League, General Aleksandr Kerensky took most of the SLDF with him into exile in an attempt to avoid being used to shed any more blood.  But it was not, as he had hoped, the beginnings of a life of peace for his soldiers.
Kerensky had succeeded in removing his troops from the fires of the Inner Sphere - but war, war never changes. 
Believing themselves the rightful heirs to the lost Star League, the so-called Clans of Kerensky were startled out of their complacency by the appearance of a Comstar JumpShip. 
Shocked by the technological advances made by the House of Liao-Davion, the descendants of the Star League Defense Force make preparations to invade and subjugate the Inner Sphere.
Life in the Confederated Suns is about to change.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 18 September 2012, 00:55:24
Tribble #49
Shocked by the technological advances made by the House of Liao-Davion, the descendants of the Star League Defense Force make preparations to invade and subjugate the Inner Sphere.
Life in the Confederated Suns is about to change.
This caught me by surprise. :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 October 2012, 13:13:38
Tribble #50

Based on a conversation on SB (in Ed's Fragmentation story's discussion thread) I came up with the idea of the Lyran's operating on a strategy of building factories capable of churning out light, cheap tanks and APCs  (20 tons, ICE, turret mounted medium laser and machine gun) on about sixty worlds a little behind their border with the Draconis Combine - maybe 100 all told if the FWL border was included. Starting from around 2766 (just after the Amaris Coup) they'd have at least twenty years - closer to thirty probably - before the DCMS (focused on the Federated Suns) punched deep enough into the Commonwealth to hit serious resistance.

By this point it seems reasonable to think that each world in this zone could have a reservist force equivalent in training to a modern reservist force like the National Guard or Territorial Army with numbers of perhaps 40 Divisions of perhaps 4 Armoured and 4 Mechanised Infantry regiments each, using a base-4 organisation up to regimental level for regiments of 256 Armoured Fighting Vehicles each, 5 divisions to a corps and 8 corps to an Army. That would come to about 80,000 AFVs per world and a six-world administrative Army Group fielding roughly half a million AFVs and 1.7 million infantry. Such an Army Group would be almost entirely administrative since moving an Army would require 2,000-3,000 dropships but might control a few national regiments of 'Mechs, heavier tanks and crack infantry to use as a reserve.

Somehow I rather doubt that the DCMS would be able to conquer such a barrier. Blast the worlds to uninhabitability, yes. Leapfrog them and establish a beachhead of worlds, risky but feasible. Launch destructive raids, surely. Take and hold these worlds, no.

Since other states would no doubt imitate as best they could, the Succession Wars would largely be fought on strips of 'No Man's Land' worlds along the borders, with very limited ability to conquer past them. This would be rather bad for the Terran Hegemony and might lead to more action along the periphery, trying to work 'around' these lines. This would favour the Lyrans (who had a head start) but leave the Free Worlds League's fractious provinces even more problematic and the Federated Suns would likely lack a cohesive frontline for much of the First Succession War, leaving them vulnerable. Building up your worlds in the no-man's land to bring them out of it would be the objective of 'creeping conquests' with campaigns waged to prevent this, destroying the factories and wearing down the defenders before they can build up to such atrocious numbers.

The former Terran Hegemony would largely be exposed as part of the no-man's-land, with predictable levels of damage.

Similar build up probably takes place on key industrial worlds, reducing their vulnerabilty to long range strikes but at the same time meaning that there's little choice in knocking them out but use of nukes and other levellers. This might turn out to be even more devestating back when such wars are acceptable. At the same time, the ability to churn out tanks like this isn't all that difficult so many worlds would be able to start doing it... and these worlds then become hard to rein in if the House Lord elects to but the militia backs the local leadership. The consequences for interstellar government are no doubt interesting.

I'd imagine that by the time the Wolf Dragoons arrive, they find a rather fragmented Inner Sphere but also one that would make any Clan Invasion all but disastrous: almost as many soldiers on ONE world as there are warriors in all the Clans combined!


"What forces are bid to defend Kirchbach from Clan Wolf's Fourth Guards Cluster?"
"Army Group K's 6th Army. How big is a Cluster?"
"Forty-five OmniMechs, fifty elementals and twenty aerospace fighters. And what is the size of an Army?"
"Uh, just short of forty-one thousand tanks, about that many infantry fighting vehicles and a quarter-million or so infantry. Are you sure you want to invade?"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: kuitiitijin on 05 November 2012, 22:33:00
Trible #51

When in the employ of the FWL, the astute political general Jamie Wolf avoids a potential bloody confrontation with their employers.  Instead the Dragoons pledge their loyalty to the Mariks in exchange for a homeworld and noble titles.  As Dragoons cement alliances with marriage, Dragoon influence waxes over 40 worlds.  By 3039 the first generation of cloned warrriors raised in the Inner Sphere is blooded as Dragoon Merc regiments "volunteer" in the 4th Succession war.  By the Clan invasion, the Marik-Wolf house troops can field over one hundred regiments of mechs using second line Clan tech and several dozen newly built Warships.  Under Dragoon leadership, a climactic battle of refusal is fought on Tukayyid and won.  The Star League unites under the First Lord Marik.  But unbenownst to the IS, a Comstar who sees their work rapidly undone falls under the influence of a heretofore small faction advocating "extreme" solutions.

No change to the timeline at all, but accelerates everything by a decade or two?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 07 November 2012, 02:23:33
Trible #51

When in the employ of the FWL, the astute political general Jamie Wolf avoids a potential bloody confrontation with their employers.  Instead the Dragoons pledge their loyalty to the Mariks in exchange for a homeworld and noble titles.  As Dragoons cement alliances with marriage, Dragoon influence waxes over 40 worlds.  By 3039 the first generation of cloned warrriors raised in the Inner Sphere is blooded as Dragoon Merc regiments "volunteer" in the 4th Succession war.  By the Clan invasion, the Marik-Wolf house troops can field over one hundred regiments of mechs using second line Clan tech and several dozen newly built Warships.  Under Dragoon leadership, a climactic battle of refusal is fought on Tukayyid and won.  The Star League unites under the First Lord Marik.  But unbenownst to the IS, a Comstar who sees their work rapidly undone falls under the influence of a heretofore small faction advocating "extreme" solutions.

No change to the timeline at all, but accelerates everything by a decade or two?


Improbable on a couple of levels.

First, Max Liao specifically handed off the Dragoons contract to Anton in the final leadup to the Marik Civil War, so the only course of action open to Jaime without breaking that contract that doesn't result in large scale warfare would be to assassinate Janos and most of his children and install Anton on the throne.

Second, Jaime being an astute political general goes against nearly everything we see of him. In fact going by his repeated political and military missteps he's pretty much the epitome of the Clan ideal, being vastly over-promoted due to his individual combat skills. Fortunately you can handwave that Joshua is an astute political general, who was caught out after correctly assessing Anton because he didn't predict Kristofur's influence.

Third, Comstar in general and Vesar Kristofur in particular are very interested in seeing a Marik Civil War happen, and the Dragoons thrashed as well.  There is no easy way that I'm seeing around this, as even if you change the location, certain possibly Wolverine-ish elements of C* are going to put Wolf, Kerensky, and near-lostech together to mean 'holy crap the Clans are finally coming for us!', and seek to have the Dragoons deniably torn apart at the hands of others.

Fourth, the mission change to assisting the Inner Sphere and preparing them for a Clan Invasion didn't happen until 3019 at the end of the Marik contract. This is pretty much a dealbreaker, as as far as Jaime is concerned he needs to get on with the task of evaluating the FWL as a military after Max pretty much wasted his time leaving him sitting around during much of the contract with the CC.  You can change the mission revision to the first trip back to the Clans in 3009, but the question is then why would Jaime waste  five years dithering instead of sticking with the Fed Suns, or trying to jump straight over to the FWL. Jumping to the FWL would work, but doesn't address the issues of Anton and C*.


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: sandstorm on 04 December 2012, 04:25:16
Tribble #52 Smelling the oncoming storm...

The Wolverine-Blood within Comstar were very suspicious when the Wolf's Dragoons came snooping, but didn't manage to prove anything... But they took stock of the Inner Sphere, and concluded that if their worst fears were right, and Kerensky was Coming Back, they wouldn't really have time to play the Long Con on the Inner Sphere. But knowing that any overt changes they'd do, like rolling out the ComGuards untrained and unblooded, with the fleet of their WarShips revealed in a flash, would both thrash their banked-up Trust within the common folks of the Sphere, but risk a massive coalition against them. And then Katrina makes her offer... And the Blood calculates some RealPolitikal odds with very sharp looks.

And throws their chips into the pot in a sealed envelope. The decision was made, they would have better luck in surviving if they had the Inner Sphere quielty integrated, and thus they work to leseen tensions, instead of fanning them up. Unwilling to trigger anything massive, they manage to get Lyran Commonwealth, Federated Suns, Free Worlds League and Draconis Combnine to talk cordially. Mad Max, unfortunately, proves too stubborn to think he can't get the upper hand, and after several of his schemes get secretly blown, the Alliance for Peace ends up agreeing to perform Police Action on Capellan Confederation. In the aftermath, Confederation ceases to exist as it was, but the Allianceknows that they need a fifth member, and invite Comstar into the Council.

And then there begin the rumours from the Periphrey, as Jaime's reports have stirred the Clans into more serious investigations...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 22 January 2013, 14:41:09
Tribble #53.

Finding a new world nearby that seems to be a 1:1 copy of Terra, Clan Jade Falcon eagerly sends a Galaxy to conquer it. Issuing their batchall, they are suprised when, after consulting with local experts, the freebirth governments choose a tabletop wargame as the method of the Trial. The single Star Commander chosen will be given two weeks to familiarize themself with the rules and pick their forces, while the local experts hastily concoct their strategy and choose their representative to defend the planet.

Thus, with the eyes of the world upon them, the highest-stakes game of Battletech ever begins...
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Post by: gladius on 22 January 2013, 18:21:42
Tribble #53.

Finding a new world nearby that seems to be a 1:1 copy of Terra, Clan Jade Falcon eagerly sends a Galaxy to conquer it. Issuing their batchall, they are suprised when, after consulting with local experts, the freebirth governments choose a tabletop wargame as the method of the Trial. The single Star Commander chosen will be given two weeks to familiarize themself with the rules and pick their forces, while the local experts hastily concoct their strategy and choose their representative to defend the planet.

Thus, with the eyes of the world upon them, the highest-stakes game of Battletech ever begins...
And the world's champion is a 14-year old boy with pimples and a confident smile ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 22 January 2013, 20:03:33
I was just hoping Hellbie didnt get the job
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Post by: drakensis on 23 January 2013, 04:39:51
Tribble #54

In 2984 when the prospect of Invading the Inner Sphere is raised in the Grand Council one of the Clans takes a long hard look at what would be required to not only invade but also then garrison the Inner Sphere. They then get very very drunk and after the hangover has worn off, check their numbers again.

Over the next several generations the clan retreats into near isolation as far as the other clans are concerned. Privately they have cranked their iron wombs up to maximum and have established hidden factories and stockpiles that hopefully the other Clans can't find and steal declare Trials of Possession for. They're also wargaming as if their lives depend upon it.

When the time comes to bid for places in Operation Revival the Khans of this clan are increasingly glassy-eyed at what they see as the suicidal overconfidence of the plan. With a doomed look on his face their Khan issues their initial bid of around a hundred galaxies, mostly garrison forces, backed up by a fleet of over a hundred warships, their escorting dropships and a transport fleet that compares well with the Exodus fleet.

Obviously this is not the lowest bid, but equally obviously the balance of power among the Clans just got thrown into the crapper...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 23 January 2013, 04:43:41
Great Tribble but which clan? I'd guess Wolf or Coyote
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 23 January 2013, 05:51:04
I'd expect a Crusader clan and the Star adders are usually the sanest of them, but this is early enough that any of the clans could go this way in theory.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 23 January 2013, 07:20:45
Tribble #55

As the Word of Blake flee Terra and Comstar in the wake of the Focht-Mori Coup and assassination of Myndo Waterly, they seek whatever havens are willing to accept them. The Free Worlds League readily grants haven offering Gibson and its established mech factories, but the leaders of the Word realize that the League is simply too divided to offer truly safe haven.

Circinus is considered, and discarded, as you just can't trust a Circinian Pirate.

However one realm has always warmly accepted the teachings of Blake and is united in its causes., and so it is that the Outworlds Alliance agrees to having the Word of Blake within their border, and soon the Blake Alliance is born. The Outworlds are assimilated into the Blakist fold.

With peaceful borders, neither the Dracs or the Feds saw the Jihad coming.

But then the Blakists didn't see Clan Snow Raven coming either.


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 23 January 2013, 07:41:32
That's another juicy Tribble
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Necrosiac on 23 January 2013, 14:35:05
Tribble #56

General Aleksandr Kerensky wasn't a godly man.  Oh, as a young boy he had marveled at the beauty of the great Orthodox cathedrals dotting Moscow, and while studying at the Nagelring, he had taken in some "local flavor" and had his soul fired by the pompous grandiosity of Wagner's Der Ring des Niebelungen.  Intellectually, he knew that the great religions cared for the poor, fed the hungry, and clothed the naked.  He recognized that many of his soldiers derived comfort and consolation from their faith.  He was surrounded by pious men such as General Ethan Moreau and Chaplain Windham Khatib, men who he respected deeply, and who obviously drew great strength from prayer.  Even still, religious services made him uncomfortable, as did any thoughts of the divine which wandered through his head. 

But now he was convinced.  God existed.  Oh yes, yes he did.  And He only cared about one thing; dicking with Aleksandr Kerensky.  Aleksandr had only ever wanted to serve the Star League, and God had given him Richard Cameron.  He had only ever wanted to defend humanity from evil, and God had given him Stefan Amaris.  He had only ever wanted to save humanity from itself, and God had given him first the Council Lords, then the mutiny on the Prinz Eugen.  He had only ever wanted to see his people safe from harm, and now God, in his infinite malevolence, had delivered once again; this horrible swelling fever of the brain which ripped through their makeshift little colonies like the plagues of ancient Terra. 

A month ago, it had taken his wife.  That marvelous woman who had waited for him, hid for him, prayed for him, followed him, and now died for her loyalty.  He had cried for days, felt like his heart would shatter in his chest.   His staff had hid him from the outside world.  Aaron had drunk with him, mourned with him, toasted to the memory of the woman who he barely knew.  Good man.

But that was nothing next to what he felt now: the damned plague had taken his son.  His beautiful, beautiful Nicholas.  He had seen the still body that morning, skin grey with the familiar pallor of death that he had seen ten thousand times before.  He had raged like a maniac, torn the surgical mask off his face and thrown himself across the thin corpse, crying "Nika, Nika!"  Andery had had to physically pull him away, and he had cursed at him and beaten at him with enfeebled fists.  They had screamed at each other in the hallway, tears streaming down their cheeks.  Things had been said...It was unfair.  He had been getting better.  The medics had said that Nicholas would beat the fever, that he had turned the corner...

Aleksandr Kerensky sat in his office, and spent New Year's Day, 2786, cursing the God who had taken his son away.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 23 January 2013, 14:48:59
Tribble #56

If that Alexandr Kerensky could have seen the Clans of the canon universe, he'd probably be wondering if God was sparing his universe some misery by taking away the Clans' founder.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 23 January 2013, 14:57:08
Tribble #57:

In the year 3078, the Jihad was beginning to end. Sure, the Blakists were still dangerous, but the Coalition was winning. It was time to start looking beyond the Jihad, for Devlin Stone to think about the future.

If he, like he wanted, managed to forge a new nation, he needed to think about what would come next. Sure, he could make a new nation, but what would stop the House Lords from reconquering their former worlds after Stone had rebuilt them?

It was time, he decided, to break the power of the great houses.

It didn't take a lot of effort to get the 'Archonetts' to decide that they rather liked the idea of being independent rulers of their own nations, instead of being subordinate to the Lyran Alliance.
It took even less effort to convince the Warlords of the Combine that they could rule their own realms.
He didn't have to do a thing to make the Free Worlds League disintegrate.
Convincing the Federated Suns to fall apart was a lot harder, but with the way that the Cappellan March was trying to gobble up the Confederation, they managed it. Likewise, a few whispers in the right ears about how ignored they were made the Filtvelt Coalition swell up to take the entire Periphery March.

By 3082, the Inner Sphere was a collection of mini-states. The Largest three were the Republic of the Sphere, the Cappellan Confederation, and the Federated Suns (which retained almost 1/2 of its original size).
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Post by: Marwynn on 23 January 2013, 15:00:57
Tribble #58

Konrad McKenna, son of the Terran Hegemony's first Director-General, James McKenna, is not a twit.

He actually inherits James McKenna's skills, though not his personality. His quiet and efficient prosecution of the Director-General's last military adventure earned him friends and supporters.

James McKenna dies of cancer in 2338 and no succession has ever been considered. Old Terran Alliance supporters begin a campaign to retake the uncertain leadership position of the nascent Hegemony, and Konrad is caught in the middle.

Does he establish a new dynasty? Does he allow the Alliance-supporters to legally reclaim power?

He considers this as the nation that would become the Draconis Combine, the Alliance of Galedon, begins to expand in Terra's direction.
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Post by: croaker on 25 January 2013, 11:26:55
In order to maximize his force advantage in retaking the Exodus worlds, Nicky Kerensky dusts off an old Star League AI project. After much work, his scientists provide him the fruits of their labor...

This one can go two ways.

1) Project Battlefield Offense/Logistics Optimization. The only chassis they could come up with large enough to fit a full AI's required hardware was, well, massive. The giant super-tanks thus created had to be transported by specialized dropships and were armed with incredible arrays of weapons. The AIs, developed from the Caspar hardware and software, proved to be incredibly intelligent and loyal, unwavering champions of battle. By 3050, the return of the Clans is more akin to King Arthur's Grail Quest, a wave of true chivalrous champions bringing civilization back to the Inner Sphere.

2) Project CYbernetic Life fOrm Node. Apparently having more success at first, with AI proving remarkably adaptable and driving chassis of tanks, battlemechs, and even individual infantry, based on adapted power-armor designs. The Clans develop much more like we know their canonical selves, full of inter-factional warfare, until one day Everything Goes Horribly Wrong.
Outbound Light arrives at the Kerensky Cluster to find nothing but recently bombed-out ruins, and on its way back to the Inner Sphere encounters a Third Exodus fleet led by a bitter, anguished Ulric Kerensky....
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 09 February 2013, 19:19:45
Tribble #59 - A very Calderon Christmas

Christmas Eve 2767

Today was the day it all came together, Stefan Amaris thought as he trudged forward.

Unseasonally heavy snow fell around Unity City as Stefan Amaris made his way into the presence of Richard Cameron, First Lord of the Star League. Stefan has for years been aiming his plans towards this day, and everything was going according to plan. He smiled as he entered the Court of the Star League and headed towards the audience chamber.

'Sorry Lord Amaris', an SLDF sergeant called from behind a security desk, 'If you are looking for Lord Richard, he is down at the loading dock. We received a message from House Calderon this morning that they were sending a present to the First Lord as thanks for the SLDF dealing with the Taurian Freedom Army'.

Well if something isn't going to go as I thought it would, it doesn't matter where I shoot the spoilt brat

'Perhaps Sergeant you could guide me to where the First Lord is'

'Of course mi'lord'.

It was only a quick trip to find Richard Cameron, as Stefan, his guards and the Terran Sergeant headed towards the main loading dock for the Court of the Star League, to find Richard waiting impatiently as a truck reversed in carrying a large unmarked sea container.

I wonder what Nicoletta sent him Stefan mulled, before it dawned on him Oh cr . . .

As Richard Cameron opened the sea container which had been let through security on his orders, the megaton nuclear device inside detonated.

Taurian nuclear fire engulfed the Court of the Star League.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 09 February 2013, 20:29:07
 ;D tribble #59 would be a definite starting point for an new ATL!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 February 2013, 02:04:36
Tribble #60

The First Succession War destroyed the Star League.

The Second Succession War destroyed the battle fleets of the Inner Sphere.

The Third Succession War destroyed the Successor States themselves.

By the late 2860s it was clear to all the Successor States that ComStar was intent on keeping the Wars going, to the point of having sabotaged attempts at peace talks. Operating under a loose alliance, Philippa Marik and Michael Davion each ordered an invasion of Terra in 2869. None of the other Successor States would risk the Federated Suns or Free Worlds League controlling the industries of Terra, much less the HPG network. Primus Raymond Karpov responded by ordering a General Interdict along with a renewal of Operation Holy Shroud to destroy remaining Successor State centres of technology. He confidently expected the Successor States to withdraw from Terra by mid-2870.

By Christmas 2870 Karpov was dead and fighting had spread from Terra to neighbouring worlds. The HPG network was broken and tens of thousands of fanatical Blakists killed themselves rather than be used by the Successor Lords to repair it.

Sian burned in 2872 in retaliation for use of chemical weapons by CCAF soldiers on Andurien. New Avalon fell in 2875 to the DCMS, before the over-extended invasion force collapsed and Coordinator Taragi Kurita was ousted by his uncle Miyogi. Biological weapons scoured Tharkad and Donegal: in retaliation LCS Invincible bombarded Atreus’ cities to rubble.

Stripped of communication and with jumpships being actively targeted by desperate defenders, supply lines collapsed, stranding armies on worlds that could not support or resupply them. There were no frontlines any more – regiments struck anywhere they could reach where they might be able to resupply.

By 2900 any pretense at national unity was over. At least four separate Archons had declared themselves while on Luthien the throne was empty and the factories silent. With manmade plagues spreading across the stars, many worlds quarantined themselves, refusing all outside contact.

That was one hundred years ago.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 10 February 2013, 06:22:15
Poor Richard Cameron in Tribble 59. Swords of Fire really makes me contemplate what else he got and from whom.  :D

Clans gotta love that Tribble 60 drakensis. So when the Wolf Dragoon's arrive in 3005 and find do they lie or do they even think that the InnerSphere needs a Clan Invasion just to save itself.
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Post by: Atlan on 10 February 2013, 15:32:14
The Clans don't build, they conquer.

If they realized just how little war they'd actually GET out of conquering the Inner Sphere (as of tribble 60), and how much reconstruction they'd have to do, they'd never bother with the Inner Sphere, and stay at home.
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Post by: serack on 10 February 2013, 22:16:07
or seeing np resistance they race to terra :) >:D
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Post by: drakensis on 11 February 2013, 03:21:24
Given the Clans did have some intel from the Inner Sphere even without the Dragoons, the ripples would have reached them too.

Quite possibly they heard from periphery traders that 'no one goes to the Inner Sphere, it's too plague-ridden' and the Crusaders are laughed at for wanting to go back to the poisoned, irradiated wastelands.
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Post by: Darth Nichos on 11 February 2013, 14:51:41
Tribble 61

Heeding his son's advice, Minoru continues his campaign and marches onto New Avalon in 2797. Jinjiro arrives first and captures the planet; however, his mental instability results in the ordering of every last Davion within reach be executed for crimes against the Combine which creates a power vacuum inside the Federated Suns. Taking advantage of this, the Capellan Confederation throws everything it has at the Suns and seizes hundreds of worlds. With the Federated Suns ceasing to be a threat, Minoru defies military logic to consolidate his gains and instead looks to capture Terra; but he his delayed by the other Successor States inside the Terran Corridor.

Taking advantage of the Delay, Comstar prepares a defense to meet the Combine by raiding every last Star League Cache it can as well as press all of the warships in their secret fleet. It even reactivates the Reagan SDS, thus bringing a large number of Casper Drones online to bolster its defenses. Comstar also prepares an interdiction against the Combine once it attacks Terra.

Minoru dies in 2799 and Jinjiro assumes the throne, continuing his father's campaign. After successfully throwing the other Successor States out of the Terran Corridor, Jinjiro decides to throw one last grand offensive at taking Terra even though his armies are at the near shatter point and unaware of Comstar's prepared defense due to the activities of ROM. On January 1st 2800, Combine Forces enter Terra Space in mass, only to meet an extraordinary defense by Comstar; at the same time, a complete interdiction is placed in the Combine putting the nation in a Black Out. While Combine troops do land on Terra itself, the vast majority of them are slaughtered within hours of landfall by the Star League equipped ComGuard.

Jinjiro himself is killed during an ambush near Geneva and most of his Generals are lost over Terra itself when their Dropships are shot down by Caspers. Taking advantage of the chaos in the Combines armies, Comstar wipes out or captures every last bit of enemy equipment within Sol before a general retreat is ordered. The Combine troops that make it out of Terra are few in number and are eventually destroyed by the end of 2801.

With the Combine's Armies practically gone, the Lyrans, CC, and FWL launch their own campaigns to take advantage of the situation even though their own forces are exhausted. The Capellans drive further into the defunct FS, capturing a number of worlds and even taking New Avalon from the Combine in 2803. The Lyran's drive puts them near Luthan but is too exhausted to take the planet itself; Loki is however successful in assassinating a number of Kurita's which causes infighting in the Draconis Combine leadership. The FWL drives the remaining Combine troops from the Terran Corridor, sidestepping a number of worlds that Comstar seized in an attempt to create a buffer around Terra.

By 2810, a truce is called that ends the First Succession War with the Federated Suns and Combine practically a fragment of their former selves.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Wolflord on 12 February 2013, 16:03:16
Not sure if this counts as a tribble or not but this seems like the best place to put it, feel free to use it if you wish.

Tribble 62?

Our current campaign started in 3049, has reached 3056 so far, and has diverged from Cannon in a couple of ways. I'm going to try to paste in a timeline of whats happened so far, the earliest years see few changes and the divergence kicks off from 3052.

Rise of the Lycans!

Leo Showers - Ilkhan
Ulric Kerensky - Wolf Kakhan Alpha Galaxy Commander
Garth Radick - Wolf Sakhan Beta Galaxy Commander
????? - Wolf Loremaster
Mikel Furey - Gamma Galaxy Commander
Conal Ward - Delta Galaxy Commander

3049
Cyrilla Ward begins countering Conal Wards influence over Vladimir [Ward] by arranging for Ulric Kerensky to add him to the Golden Keshik.
Vladimir [Ward] head caps Phelan Kell on The Rock.

3050
Leo Showers dies at the Battle of Radstadt.
Natasha Kerensky returns to Wolves from the Dragoons.

3051
Ulric Kerensky replaces Leo Showers as  Ilkhan.
Garth Radick replaces Ulric Kerensky as Wolf Kakhan.
Natasha Kerensky replaces Garth Radick as Wolf Sakhan.
Conal Ward is made Wolf Loremaster.
Ulric Kerensky gifts the 13th Wolf Guards to Natasha Kerensky.
 Natasha Kerensky formally takes command of Alpha Galaxy using the 13th Wolf Guards as her Keshik with Star Captain Marco Hall as aide de camp.
Ulric Kerensky retains the Golden Keshik as his Praetorians.
Mikel Furey's Gamma Galaxy routs the Gunzburg Eagles in the Christmas Eve Massacre.

3052
Battle of Tukkayyid - Wolves defeat Comstar Guards; Jade Falcons and Ghost Bears draw with Comstar Guards; Smoke Jaguars, Nova Cats, and Steel Vipers are defeated by Comstar Guards. Comstar Guards win 4 - 2 and Truce of Tukkayyid commences.
Garth Radick dies leading Beta Galaxy on Tukkayyid.
Natasha Kerensky replaces Garth Radick as Wolf Kakahn.
Conal Ward replaces Natasha Kerensky as Wolf Sakhan.
Mikel Furey replaces Conal Ward as Wolf Loremaster.
Erik Kerensky promoted to command Beta Galaxy.
Star Captain Hermod [Fetladral]{Genefather Jon Vickers, Genemother Elise Fetladral} slays a Com Guard descended from the not-named clan at Tukkayyid, undertakes a Bloodright Quest, and earns the right to found the Wolf Bloodhouse.
Star Captain Daenerys [Tarr]{Genefather Jerome Winson, Genemother Georgina Tarr} promoted to Star Colonel, transferred to Wolf Watch as Deputy-Director and tasked with supporting the Loremaster in reinvigorating that moribund organisation. Her first action is to declare and win a Trial of Possession for complete sets of SLDF Intelligence Command and Special Forces Command manuals from the Goliath Scorpions.
Cyrilla Ward commits suicide to make her bloodname available to Vladimir [Ward]. Vladimir [Ward] wins Cyrilla Ward's bloodname without killing any of his opponents although all require reconstructive surgery.
Lara Ward and John Ward promoted to Galaxy Commanders of 2nd line Galaxies.
Marco Hall promoted to Star Colonel commanding 13th Wolf Guards.
Katya Kerensky promoted to Star Colonel commanding 279th Battle Cluster.
Vladimir Ward promoted to Star Colonel commanding 11th Wolf Guards.
Ranna [Kerensky] transferred to command the Golden Keshik; she defeats several trials by those opposed to the idea of an unblooded commander of the Golden Keshik.
The Homeworld clans pass a motion in the Grand Council requiring the six Invader clans to relocate entirely (except for their Strana Mechty Enclaves) to their Occupation Zones by the end of the Truce of as punishment for their collective failure at Tukkayid. The motion also requires the Invader Clans to turn their occupation zones into a staging area for Operation Revival 2 which will be undertaken by the Homeworld Clans. The Jade Falcons, Nova Cats, Smoke Jaguars, and Steel Vipers demand trials of refusal. The Steel Vipers win their Trial of Refusal the rest are defeated.
Ulric Kerensky places Erik Kerensky in charge of implementing Operation Normandy Phase 1; the relocation of the Wolves most valuable homeworld assets to the Wolf Clan Occupation Zone.

3053
Hermod [Fetladral] returns from the first successful Bloodright Quest in Clan History and is recognised as Hermod Wolf; the Founder of the Wolf Bloodhouse.
Hermod Wolf promoted to Star Colonel commanding 24th Wolf Rangers on Weingarten. He makes extensive use of the SLDF Special Forces Command manuals acquired by Daenerys Tarr in restructuring the 24th Wolf Rangers training regime.
Daenerys [Tarr] wins Bloodname by analysing and exploiting the weaknesses in her opponents combat styles.
Project Oathsworn begins reorganising and standardising the Wolves 1st Line Galaxies, 2nd Line Galaxies, and Independent Clusters from their current patterns to Ilkhan Ulric Kerensky's new Type 20 Galaxy pattern.

3054
Ranna promoted to Star Colonel in Alpha Galaxy; she defeats several trials by those opposed to the idea of an unblooded Star Colonel in Alpha Galaxy.
Project Shieldwall begins establishing 15 Armoured Infantry Clusters for garrison and security duties by reorganising, standardising, and expanding (using lower caste volunteers) the Wolves Provisional Garrsion Clusters.

3055
Conal Ward supports the Red Corsair by allowing her to operate out of a Wolf controlled system and by allowing her to trial for supplies from Wolf units.
Mikel Furey's Gamma Galaxy beats back the Kell Hounds attempt to pursue the Red Corsair into the Wolf Clan Occupation Zone. Before succumbing to wounds inflicted by Cat Wilson Mikel Furey grants Hegira to the Kell Hounds. Mikel Furey also records a message for Wolf Watch ordering that in any future engagement with the Kell Hounds headhunter stars should be used to acquire bondsmen of the Kell bloodline.
Erik Kerensky's Beta Galaxy destroys the Red Corsair's forces; evidence recovered indicates the Red Corsair originated with the Jade Falcons and reveals Conal Wards involvement. A Crusader contemptuous of political scheming, Erik Kerensky calls out Conal Ward in the Wolf Clan Council and kills him in a Trial of Grievance. Erik Kerensky replaces Conal Ward as Wolf Sakhan.
Katya Kerensky promoted to Command Gamma Galaxy.
Vladimir Ward promoted to Command Delta Galaxy.
Dalk Carns replaces Mikel Furey as Wolf Loremaster.

3056
Hermod Wolf promoted to Command Pi Galaxy; the last of the Wolf's Galaxies to adopt the new Type 20 Galaxy pattern.
The officers of the 24th Wolf Rangers score highly in testing for command positions within Pi Galaxy, a fact which is attributed to their additional training using SLDF Special Forces Command methods.

3057
Ulric Kerensky's emissaries initiate Operation Normandy Phase 2 and begin trading the Wolves Homeworlds enclaves for resources they will need in the inner sphere.

3058
Wolf Watch Deputy-Director Star Colonel Daenerys Tarr and Galaxy Commander Hermod Wolf present evidence to the Wolf Clan Council implicating Loremaster Dalk Carns and others in conspiring with elements of the Jade Falcon Clan to supplant the Wolf Clans leadership.
Dalk Carns is executed for Treason.
Katya Kerensky replaces Dalk Carns as Loremaster.

3059
Falcon War. The Wolves mobilise their entire Touman to punish the Falcons for meddling in Wolf affairs. The Falcons expected some form of retaliation from the Wolves but were unprepared for the sheer scale of the Wolf offensive. The Wolves rout the Falcons but stop short of destroying them, instead leaving them vulnerable to predation by other clans. The Wolves cannot afford excessive casualties and must be wary of opportunistic attacks by other clans while they are in the midst of relocating from the Homeworlds to the Inner Sphere.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 14 February 2013, 11:17:14
Tribble 63

In 3049, a sudden surge of refugees from the Periphery reaches the Inner Sphere's borders of the Draconis Combine, Free Rasalhague Republic, and the Lyran half of the Federated Commonwealth. These refugees tell the tales of mysterious invaders weilding weapons and battlemechs that were far more advanced than anything they or the Inner Sphere ever had. When news of these refugees and their stories reach the ears of Comstar, Primus Myndo Waterly sends Anastasius Focht to get a better picture of what has happened in the Periphery. The news also reaches Jamie Wolfe, who immidiately recalls all the Dragoons from all operations to discuss the one thing they had feared would come true...the Clans have come. But instead of the first four Clans at the start of the invasion, only ONE clan is leading the invasion, much to even Natasha Kerensky's shock. The Clan in question, is Clan Smoke Jaguar alone.

Back in the Clan Homeworlds, when the Comstar Jumpship Outbound Light arrived in orbit of Huntress the Smoke Jaguars captured and interrogated the crew before executing them and destroying their vessel. With the information provided to them from the crew and from the ship's computers, the Smoke Jaguars believe that the time has come to invade the Inner Sphere by themselves instead of involving the other Clans. After the initial bids for the invasion corridors, the Jaguars gathered their entire touman in secret, withdrawing much from worlds shared with other Clans and preparing themselves for the long journey to the Inner Sphere. When news of the invasion reaches the Grand Council, they are outraged that the Smoke Jaguars did not inform them of this. In response to this, Clan Star Adder declares a Trial of Absorption of the Smoke Jaguars remaining worlds, including Huntress. These worlds fall quickly under the onslaught of the Star Adder forces and what remaining defenders become part of the Clan. Leo Showers ignores this news, gloating that the other Clans were cowards in not choosing to follow their example.

The moment the Jaguars reach the Inner Sphere, Federated Commonwealth, Rasalhague, and Draconis Combine forces are almost powerless to stop the Jaguars' blitzkrieg. When Anastasius Focht meets with the invaders, his jumpship is immediately destroyed. They also destroy HPG stations and ComStar defenders sending ripples of anger and shock to the Primus at the audacity these new invaders were showing. After months of fighting, the leaders of the three Successor States being invaded by the Jaguars agree to meet in a neutral location to discuss the possibility of an alliance against the Smoke Jaguars. To their surprise, Primus Myndo Waterly also sends a representative of ComStar to discuss the fact that the invaders have attacked ComStar forces as well as destroyed HPG stations. ComStar agrees to lend a hand in defending these worlds from the invaders. Over Radstadt, Tyra Miraborg rams her Shilone into the Smoke Jaguars flagship, killing both the Khan and SaKhan of the Smoke Jaguars as well as their Loremaster, forcing the Clan to halt their invasion so that they may choose who will lead them.

Taking advantage of this sudden halt, the Inner Sphere forces begin to launch offensive after offensive against the Smoke Jaguar defenders, driving many off of the worlds they have captured or wiping them out. The Smoke Jaguars were now in disarray and with no supply lines from the homeworlds and no solid leadership, they quickly fall to the Inner Sphere's counterattack. From what few prisoners the IS forces have managed to capture as well as the sudden revelation Jamie Wolfe provides them, they learn that not only the fact that the Smoke Jaguars were but one of several other Clans, but were also descendants of Kerensky's Star League Army. But after learning what the Clans were capable of, as well as learning their tactics and technology, the forces of the Inner Sphere prepare themselves for another possible invasion from the other Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 01 March 2013, 23:54:30
Tribble 64.

They say history can hinge on a single person, maybe two. In 3030, Victor Ian Steiner-Davion isn't the only child born to Hanse Davion and Melissa Steiner-Davion. His older sister Victoria Katherine Steiner-Davion is his twin sister, and the official heir. As they grow older, Victoria grows into a politically astute figure, while Victor thrives in battle simulations. Most are expecting Victor to become the Prince's Champion when Victoria takes the throne of Archon-Prince after her mandated five years of service in the AFFC.

That future seems in doubt when the Clans invade. Victoria has a string of horrifyingly bad luck and whatever unit she gets assigned keeps getting attacked by the Jade Falcons (read: Comstar feeding information to the Clans), and Victor has to keep riding to the rescue, just to keep her alive. After one such incident, where they had to play a shell game with their respective Victors to keep the Clanners guessing, they learn the Invasion has been stopped by a Raselhauge ASF doing a suicide run and killing the leader of the Clans.

Victor, recognizing that his big sister's role in the events to come, pleads with Victoria to accept a posting on Tharkad or New Avalon while he leads the charge against the Clans in future engagements. Victoria assents, and begins urging the citizens of the Federated Commonwealth to step up and fight the invaders. Victor, meanwhile, quickly becomes one of the most hated and feared sights a Clan Mechwarrior can see on the battlefield.

Can the Steiner-Davion Twins defeat the Clans, while fending off the machinations of ComStar and others who would like to see them fail?

Note: Katherine Morgan S-D would not exist in this idea.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 02 March 2013, 10:56:47
I like Tribbe #64 but then, I don't like the FedCom Civil and I don't like KSD... I also don't like the Jihad


I'd say I'm a grumpy BT fan but I don't think there's any other sort  :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: panzerfaust150 on 20 March 2013, 15:16:40
Tribble #65

  As the Succession Wars continue, a popular attitude begins to grip the Inner Sphere: Why the hell do we want the Star League back if it's just going to lead to more of this to decide who gets the moldy ol' throne, and also, doesn't ComStar own Terra? When the Peace Proposal of 3020 is made by Katrina Steiner, she is met with surprising acclaim from all of the other Houses, in so far of ending the war, but agreeing on reforming the League? Fat Chance.  In short, the Inner Sphere is war weary, and would rather settle into a cold war of sorts, and try to rebuild. Armies double and triple in size, mainly to deter the other guy, but the raids are done on a more deniable basis. Much of the fighting is now proxy wars in the Periphery, or destabilizing planetary governments along the border, and then swooping in with troops to "restore order". Mercenary units are now smaller, mainly because they have to be in this Inner Sphere where war is fought in the shadows, and nobody wants to spark the "big one".  Technology begins to improve as the infantryman, rather than the Battlemech now becomes the preferred tool of states..as 'Mechs aren't very deniable, unless they belong to mercs. But then, then the Clans show up? Trouble is, the Inner Sphere hasn't fought a real war in 30 years....and the Clans don't do proxy fights or insurgencies....

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: panzerfaust150 on 20 March 2013, 15:24:29
What the heck, they're coming to me:

Tribble 67

  Simon Cameron somehow misses his date with destiny and that MinerMech. How isn't real important, what is important is this: He's alive. And who was the doer? Well, none other than Stefan Aramis. It seems Stefan was a bit more far sighted than many thought, and he realized that while his initial plan failed...he had others? Like remembering the old saying "the hand that rocks the cradle..." and arranges an accident for Simon's wife, and then has her replaced with a very accomplished courtesan from what Simon thinks is Lyons. It's actually Apollo, and she's Rim intelligence. Oh and did we mention her job is to play father AND son like a fiddle?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 March 2013, 03:11:12
Tribble 68

Ian Davion survives Mallory's World and lives long enough to fail to take up Katrina's Peace Proposal (apparently bluntly suggesting a military alliance sealed by a wedding between Ian's nephew and Katrina's daughter didn't go very well).

Meanwhile Candace Liao persuades her father that it could be an opportunity if handled delicately and visits Tharkad, returning with a nascent Lyran-Capellan Alliance and a long term strategy: use LOKI and the Maskirova to keep the Snakes and the Suns pointed firmly at each other, and the Mariks squabbling with each other.

By the 3030s the Lyrans have used Capellan defensive know-how to secure their borders and Lyran advice on liberalisation is leading to a rapidly expanding Capellan economy as the two states set out to 'win the peace'.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 21 March 2013, 19:50:53
Tribble 69

In 2784, the Terran Hegemony was in trouble. Kerensky had left, the Cameron Dynasty was dead, and the nation had the barest husk of a military, surrounded by nations it had subjugated for centuries. Following the exodus,   the Terran Hegemony continued rebuilding its economy and military infrastructure.

In 2786, the enimies were advancing, conquering every world they could. But the Terrans didn't give up. They knew they were in trouble, they knew that the time it would take to build Warships to defend their territory would take longer than they had.

But they also knew that they could build Dropships quickly, and in bulk.

In March 2787, the Pocket Warship program was implimented. Using the titanic orbital shipyards in the Terra system, along with the closer planets to Terra, the Hegemony began mass proudcing heavily armed dropships, armed with warship-scale missles, and sub-capital weapons. Because they were fighting a defensive war, the mobility of a true warship just wasn't needed as much as the ability to get as many ships as possible into the orbit of their worlds.

By 2811, the Terran Hegemony was a much reduced state, with a mere 40 systems. But those systems were in better condition than any other in the Inner Sphere- the Pocket Warships had held the line, keeping the planets safe from orbital bombardment, while the other nations burned. Their production capacity dawned the other states.

By 2821, when the rest of the galaxy was running out of mechs and ships to throw into the grinder, the Hegemony was in the exact opposite state, fresh and strong. Its shipyards finally had true Warships rolling off the production lines, complimented by the finest Aerospace Fighters known to man. (The Hegemony's ground Army wasn't exactly skilled, but it had enough advanced technology to make up for that. Mostly.) The Hegemony began reconquering its worlds, depending mostly on aerospace superiority and the good will of the population.

The Second Succession War lasted from 2821 until 2860, and unlike the First Succession war, which was marked by the 5 Successor States conquering everything they could, the Second Succession War was marked by a slow, unstoppable drive from Terra, as the Hegemony moved past retaking its own worlds and began conquering the Successor States.


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 23 March 2013, 17:11:33
Okay, that one is cool. By the time the Clans arrive, most of the Inner Sphere is under the Hegemony: humanity is united (mostly) under the one rule, even firmer than by the Star League. Still, it isn't what the Rememberence promised, so the Clans invade anyway ... and get hit in space by flotillas of WarShips and Pocket Warships ...  :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 01 April 2013, 03:44:34
Tribble 70 - One for the Dark Ages, to make them even darker.  }:)

Low hanging fruit are generally picked first, but sometimes are concealed behind the leaves and last far longer than they have any right too. Ice Hellions are a prime example of this, and there are plenty of others.
Attributed to Samantha Clees, Khan of Clan Jade Falcon, dated post 3090 - exact date unknown.

The Green Ghosts have for years been a mystery. A group of 'pirates' famed for hitting Interstellar Expeditions archaeological sites on Lyran, Falcon and periphery worlds the subject for far more rumours than facts. Known only to have been seeking 'something' since their first appearance, the Ghosts are often linked to Clintons Cutthroats and other mysteries by conspiracy mongers.

The truth when discovered would be horrifying to the Inner Sphere and Clans as a whole.

The truth of the Green Ghosts goes back to the Brotherhood of the Republic, a society founded in the 1st Succession War by a group of treasonous Lyran Nobles intent on rebirthing the Rim Worlds Republic. Comparable to the Black Dragon Society in the Draconis Combine, these Nobles were remarkably unhappy with Lyran handling of their periphery border. Long merely a treasonous secret society, this would change in the early 3060s when the group was discovered by the Word of Blake who believed that the group would be a useful catspaw for their future plans. The Word of Blake secretly provided substantial military equipment to the Society and encouraged them to use this secret military to stir up any Lyran sentiments on the Periphery Rim of the Alliance.

However others were also watching. Only a few years later, communications between the group and several members in the Jade Falcon occupation zone were intercepted by Clan Jade Falcon scientists. Rather than report this to the Clans warrior caste overseers, Scientist Ettienne saw the group as an excellent set of catspaws for his own goals, and blocked the reports from moving up the chain of command, and additionally funneled off additional military hardware and research groups into the hands of the Brotherhood.

Equipped now with an eclectic mix of Inner Sphere, Clan and Blakist caste offs, the Brotherhood founded the Green Ghosts. There aim was simple, to locate sufficient viable DNA to bring about the rebirth of House Amaris. The Blakists didn't care, this would work well for them, the Falcons would go nuts, the Lyrans would need to fight in their own backyard. Ettiennes group didn't care, this would once again prove the idiocy of the warriors of Clan Jade Falcon.

However some things don't go as planned, it would be late in the 3090s before sufficient DNA was located from two well-preserved ex-amaris's on a distant Periphery world, by then Ettienne was gone, the Blakists were gone. All that remained was an old Brotherhood, an experienced group of raiders, several regiments of hardware, rogue clan scientists, a few Blakist survivors, a lot of patience and a plan.

The start date for the rebirth of the Republic was finally given a date in the Brotherhood, August 7th 3132.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 01 April 2013, 10:57:26
Tribble 70 - One for the Dark Ages, to make them even darker.  }:)

Low hanging fruit are generally picked first, but sometimes are concealed behind the leaves and last far longer than they have any right too. Ice Hellions are a prime example of this, and there are plenty of others.
Attributed to Samantha Clees, Khan of Clan Jade Falcon, dated post 3090 - exact date unknown.

The Green Ghosts have for years been a mystery. A group of 'pirates' famed for hitting Interstellar Expeditions archaeological sites on Lyran, Falcon and periphery worlds the subject for far more rumours than facts. Known only to have been seeking 'something' since their first appearance, the Ghosts are often linked to Clintons Cutthroats and other mysteries by conspiracy mongers.

The truth when discovered would be horrifying to the Inner Sphere and Clans as a whole.

The truth of the Green Ghosts goes back to the Brotherhood of the Republic, a society founded in the 1st Succession War by a group of treasonous Lyran Nobles intent on rebirthing the Rim Worlds Republic. Comparable to the Black Dragon Society in the Draconis Combine, these Nobles were remarkably unhappy with Lyran handling of their periphery border. Long merely a treasonous secret society, this would change in the early 3060s when the group was discovered by the Word of Blake who believed that the group would be a useful catspaw for their future plans. The Word of Blake secretly provided substantial military equipment to the Society and encouraged them to use this secret military to stir up any Lyran sentiments on the Periphery Rim of the Alliance.

However others were also watching. Only a few years later, communications between the group and several members in the Jade Falcon occupation zone were intercepted by Clan Jade Falcon scientists. Rather than report this to the Clans warrior caste overseers, Scientist Ettienne saw the group as an excellent set of catspaws for his own goals, and blocked the reports from moving up the chain of command, and additionally funneled off additional military hardware and research groups into the hands of the Brotherhood.

Equipped now with an eclectic mix of Inner Sphere, Clan and Blakist caste offs, the Brotherhood founded the Green Ghosts. There aim was simple, to locate sufficient viable DNA to bring about the rebirth of House Amaris. The Blakists didn't care, this would work well for them, the Falcons would go nuts, the Lyrans would need to fight in their own backyard. Ettiennes group didn't care, this would once again prove the idiocy of the warriors of Clan Jade Falcon.

However some things don't go as planned, it would be late in the 3090s before sufficient DNA was located from two well-preserved ex-amaris's on a distant Periphery world, by then Ettienne was gone, the Blakists were gone. All that remained was an old Brotherhood, an experienced group of raiders, several regiments of hardware, rogue clan scientists, a few Blakist survivors, a lot of patience and a plan.

The start date for the rebirth of the Republic was finally given a date in the Brotherhood, August 7th 3132.
This actually sounds quite interesting.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 20 April 2013, 01:02:06
Tribble #71

Hanse Davion, Melissa Steiner and Katrina Steiner are all busy busy people, so while they love the Steiner-Davion children very much, the amount of time they can actually devote to them is limited. Thus others - trusted friends and relatives - naturally take up some roles that might otherwise fall to the parents. Rolemodels for example.

Katrina's sister Nondi is a mother herself, absolutely trusted and has no political ambitions whatsoever. She's also a skilled mechwarrior and honestly not a bad general. What could possibly be wrong with Victor wanting to be like his Nana Nondi?

Ardan Sortek is Hanse's little brother in all but blood, a fine mechwarrior, politically shrewd and absolutely loyal. His only known ambition is to serve well and one day retire to his family's estates and be rid of politics. Undeniably Kathy could do much worse than to model herself on him.

Right?

Well...

"What do you mean neither of them wants to be Archon-Prince?" Melissa asked in confusion.

Hanse looked concerned. "Well, they both know how demanding the job is. Each insists that the other is clearly far more suited to that responsibility and would have their complete support on the throne."

"But..."

"It may be hard to understand this, love, since you were always the heir, but I know I was relieved when I was younger that Ian would inherit not me. There's considerable freedom in not having that burden in your future."

"This is Victor's duty, and Kathy's if... well. If."

"Oh they do their duty. Serving in the AFFC, maybe a career in government... but Victor outright says he sees himself as more soldier than statesman."

Their eyes met. "And Kathy?"

"She's talking about a diplomatic career after she does her five years."



Several Years Later

"Royal's Pride is cancelled. There's no point making a show based on a fictionalised version of the Steiner-Davions when the real family get more drama than we're putting in the show."

"What's the latest event in the 'Civil War'?"

"Well you remember how Victor married Omi Kurita, hoping that the family relationship with Hanse's rival Theodore would bar him from succession?"

"Of course I remember it! The media was talking about it for months!"

"Well Kathy's dating her cousin Phelan's self-declared nemesis Vladimir Ward!"

"The CLAN WARLORD!"

"That's the one!"

"Ooooh!"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 20 April 2013, 12:27:19
Tribble #71

Hanse Davion, Melissa Steiner and Katrina Steiner are all busy busy people, so while they love the Steiner-Davion children very much, the amount of time they can actually devote to them is limited. Thus others - trusted friends and relatives - naturally take up some roles that might otherwise fall to the parents. Rolemodels for example.

Katrina's sister Nondi is a mother herself, absolutely trusted and has no political ambitions whatsoever. She's also a skilled mechwarrior and honestly not a bad general. What could possibly be wrong with Victor wanting to be like his Nana Nondi?

Ardan Sortek is Hanse's little brother in all but blood, a fine mechwarrior, politically shrewd and absolutely loyal. His only known ambition is to serve well and one day retire to his family's estates and be rid of politics. Undeniably Kathy could do much worse than to model herself on him.

Right?

Well...

"What do you mean neither of them wants to be Archon-Prince?" Melissa asked in confusion.

Hanse looked concerned. "Well, they both know how demanding the job is. Each insists that the other is clearly far more suited to that responsibility and would have their complete support on the throne."

"But..."

"It may be hard to understand this, love, since you were always the heir, but I know I was relieved when I was younger that Ian would inherit not me. There's considerable freedom in not having that burden in your future."

"This is Victor's duty, and Kathy's if... well. If."

"Oh they do their duty. Serving in the AFFC, maybe a career in government... but Victor outright says he sees himself as more soldier than statesman."

Their eyes met. "And Kathy?"

"She's talking about a diplomatic career after she does her five years."



Several Years Later

"Royal's Pride is cancelled. There's no point making a show based on a fictionalised version of the Steiner-Davions when the real family get more drama than we're putting in the show."

"What's the latest event in the 'Civil War'?"

"Well you remember how Victor married Omi Kurita, hoping that the family relationship with Hanse's rival Theodore would bar him from succession?"

"Of course I remember it! The media was talking about it for months!"

"Well Kathy's dating her cousin Phelan's self-declared nemesis Vladimir Ward!"

"The CLAN WARLORD!"

"That's the one!"

"Ooooh!"
Nondi and Ardan as roll models? Interesting.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 20 April 2013, 17:53:40
For anyone that is looking to do a less traditional story, I think it would be interesting to look into the counterinsurgency campaign which transformed the Free Rasalhague Republic from a continuous hotbed of insurgency against the DCMS into a population willing to merge with Clan Ghost Bear.  I think it would probably work best to pick a planet to focus on and follow a few characters to give different perspectives on the process over the course of a few years, but there are plenty of other ways to frame the story.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 21 April 2013, 19:07:59
Tribble #72

Juggling Act

Rather than securing the Protectorate worlds Anton Marik struck directly at key star systems such as Marik shortly after declaring himself Captain-General. This bold strategy results in a stunning victory that wins him the support of more units and vital industry. Unable to stem the tide Janos and his loyalist shrink back to Atreus where the final battle sees younger brother defeat the elder in a BattleMech duel. For the past decade Anton has navigated the byzantine web of alliances that helped him rise to power quite successfully. The Wolf Dragoons and ComStar aided the Free Worlds in reestablishing its intelligence capabilities nearly obliterated in the war building a new agency, Federal Security Bureau (FSB), far superior to the defunct SAFE. With the support of Regulas, Sirius, Zion, and a host of smaller Provinces the new Captain-General continues to push his vision for a “true Free Worlds League where all systems have a voice in the federal government.” Of course his true power comes from the FWLM which is now highlighted by the heroes of the rebellion, the New Delian Lancers. While there are some Provincial die hards this remaining opposition at home (Oriente and Andurien) has cleverly been used to keep his wife’s family at bay (House Liao). Now Anton must decide how to react to Archon Katrina Steiner’s Peace Proposal. Can he add another piece to this dazzling act or will the League’s prosperity all fall apart?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 April 2013, 15:17:17
Tribble #73: The Lion and the Vixen

The throneroom of the Triad is full of the elite of the Lyran Commonwealth. Everyone who is anyone and everyone who wants to be anyone is present to observe the first ever state visit of a reigning First Prince to Tharkad. Keen observers may notice that the Cardinal Archbishop of Tharkad is unusually nervous, perhaps at meeting a Archbishop of the New Avalon Catholic Church said to be travelling with the First Prince as a spiritual advisor.

As the great doors open to admit the First Prince, Archon Karl Steiner rises to his feet and walks to the front of the dais. His daughter Melissa is standing deferentially just a hair behind and to one side of him. Those at the front of the throne room can see that this is a smooth diplomatic move, coming forwards to meet the First Prince on equal terms. Still, he does seem to be standing just a bit off-centre...

Then the ripples of muttering from the back of the room reach them and heads begin to turn as Helene Davion walks down the central aisle. She is attended by a red-headed teenager who must clearly be her nephew Morgan. Shockingly, against all convention, Morgan is carrying a baby. Still, that's not the real headturner.

The First Prince is not in military uniform like the Archon.

She's wearing a wedding dress!

And as the political implications sink in (and Frederick Steiner glumly unfastens his hip flask and starts to chug) a few of the courtiers recognise the smile on the Lion of Tharkad's face. A smile not seen since the death of Guenivere Luvon, more than a decade before. A smile that says more clearly than words: "gentlemen, I'm going to lay that gorgeous woman tonight."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 25 April 2013, 18:37:25
Tribble #73: The Lion and the Vixen

The throneroom of the Triad is full of the elite of the Lyran Commonwealth. Everyone who is anyone and everyone who wants to be anyone is present to observe the first ever state visit of a reigning First Prince to Tharkad. Keen observers may notice that the Cardinal Archbishop of Tharkad is unusually nervous, perhaps at meeting a Archbishop of the New Avalon Catholic Church said to be travelling with the First Prince as a spiritual advisor.

As the great doors open to admit the First Prince, Archon Karl Steiner rises to his feet and walks to the front of the dais. His daughter Melissa is standing deferentially just a hair behind and to one side of him. Those at the front of the throne room can see that this is a smooth diplomatic move, coming forwards to meet the First Prince on equal terms. Still, he does seem to be standing just a bit off-centre...

Then the ripples of muttering from the back of the room reach them and heads begin to turn as Helene Davion walks down the central aisle. She is attended by a red-headed teenager who must clearly be her nephew Morgan. Shockingly, against all convention, Morgan is carrying a baby. Still, that's not the real headturner.

The First Prince is not in military uniform like the Archon.

She's wearing a wedding dress!

And as the political implications sink in (and Frederick Steiner glumly unfastens his hip flask and starts to chug) a few of the courtiers recognise the smile on the Lion of Tharkad's face. A smile not seen since the death of Guenivere Luvon, more than a decade before. A smile that says more clearly than words: "gentlemen, I'm going to lay that gorgeous woman tonight."
Umm...I'm confused as to what's going on.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 25 April 2013, 20:22:07
Umm...I'm confused as to what's going on.
  If I'm reading it right, it's an alt-universe where Katrina Steiner and Hanse Davion are gender-flipped and Archon Karl Steiner's 'Peace Proposal' has turned into a dynastic marriage between him and First Prince Helene Davion, rather than the OTL's marriage between First Prince Hanse Davion and the Archon's daughter, Melissa Steiner.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Lord Harlock on 25 April 2013, 20:47:08
Tribble #73: The Lion and the Vixen

The throneroom of the Triad is full of the elite of the Lyran Commonwealth. Everyone who is anyone and everyone who wants to be anyone is present to observe the first ever state visit of a reigning First Prince to Tharkad. Keen observers may notice that the Cardinal Archbishop of Tharkad is unusually nervous, perhaps at meeting a Archbishop of the New Avalon Catholic Church said to be travelling with the First Prince as a spiritual advisor.

As the great doors open to admit the First Prince, Archon Karl Steiner rises to his feet and walks to the front of the dais. His daughter Melissa is standing deferentially just a hair behind and to one side of him. Those at the front of the throne room can see that this is a smooth diplomatic move, coming forwards to meet the First Prince on equal terms. Still, he does seem to be standing just a bit off-centre...

Then the ripples of muttering from the back of the room reach them and heads begin to turn as Helene Davion walks down the central aisle. She is attended by a red-headed teenager who must clearly be her nephew Morgan. Shockingly, against all convention, Morgan is carrying a baby. Still, that's not the real headturner.

The First Prince is not in military uniform like the Archon.

She's wearing a wedding dress!

And as the political implications sink in (and Frederick Steiner glumly unfastens his hip flask and starts to chug) a few of the courtiers recognise the smile on the Lion of Tharkad's face. A smile not seen since the death of Guenivere Luvon, more than a decade before. A smile that says more clearly than words: "gentlemen, I'm going to lay that gorgeous woman tonight."

And now, I now have the image of a red headed Helena Douglas of Team Ninja's Fighting Game Series marrying Charles Dance. I approve of this fanfic idea.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 26 April 2013, 00:09:36
  If I'm reading it right, it's an alt-universe where Katrina Steiner and Hanse Davion are gender-flipped and Archon Karl Steiner's 'Peace Proposal' has turned into a dynastic marriage between him and First Prince Helene Davion, rather than the OTL's marriage between First Prince Hanse Davion and the Archon's daughter, Melissa Steiner.
Largely correct but with one addition. They accidentally jumped the gun a little, note Morgan's burden.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dirk Bastion on 29 April 2013, 13:13:10
Tribble #74: No Pentagon Colonies
The journey of the SLDF-in-exile was finally over. Aleksander Kerensky couldn't believe his luck when they stumbled over an already existing colony in the Tanis system. Sure, the colonists already living there were rather suspicious of the new arrivals, but over time this would surely cease, and giving his troops a military goal (forming a new militia for the colonies) would deter the more restless elements. Those that prefered to settle down into civilian life could settle into a preestablished society instead of trying to build their own. And he, he could finally spend some time with his family without the burden of command or - god forbid - political leadership. No, he had learned that lesson well enough and would stay away from any position of political power.

Surely this would be the peaceful life his tired soldiers deserved?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Wolflord on 29 April 2013, 13:42:46
Tribble #74: No Pentagon Colonies
The journey of the SLDF-in-exile was finally over. Aleksander Kerensky couldn't believe his luck when they stumbled over an already existing colony in the Tanis system. Sure, the colonists already living there were rather suspicious of the new arrivals, but over time this would surely cease, and giving his troops a military goal (forming a new militia for the colonies) would deter the more restless elements. Those that prefered to settle down into civilian life could settle into a preestablished society instead of trying to build their own. And he, he could finally spend some time with his family without the burden of command or - god forbid - political leadership. No, he had learned that lesson well enough and would stay away from any position of political power.

Surely this would be the peaceful life his tired soldiers deserved?

Interesting!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 29 April 2013, 20:48:37
Tribble # 75 Blind sided

Katherine Steiner Davion's moment of victory was at hand, smiling widely as she walked towards the throne room she reflected upon the success of her propaganda campaign that had broken little Yvonne's spirit, now  was the time to sweep in and snap up what was always rightfully her's while Victor was off chasing after what was left of the Smoke Jaguars and hopefully getting himself killed in the process. Stepping into the chamber she came to dead stop as she spotted Yvonne standing beside the throne, wasn't she supposed to have fled to the Combine? That question was instantly pushed aside as she finally noticed the someone who was sitting on the throne "Why what a pleasant surprise Katherine, come to congratulate me getting trapped in this Regency job?" asked the last person alive she had dream t of sitting there smiling at her, and that smile promised not the celebration she'd been hoping for but long over due payment for her ambitions.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 29 April 2013, 22:18:00
Tribble # 75 Blind sided

Katherine Steiner Davion's moment of victory was at hand, smiling widely as she walked towards the throne room she reflected upon the success of her propaganda campaign that had broken little Yvonne's spirit, now  was the time to sweep in and snap up what was always rightfully her's while Victor was off chasing after what was left of the Smoke Jaguars and hopefully getting himself killed in the process. Stepping into the chamber she came to dead stop as she spotted Yvonne standing beside the throne, wasn't she supposed to have fled to the Combine? That question was instantly pushed aside as she finally noticed the someone who was sitting on the throne "Why what a pleasant surprise Katherine, come to congratulate me getting trapped in this Regency job?" asked the last person alive she had dream t of sitting there smiling at her, and that smile promised not the celebration she'd been hoping for but long over due payment for her ambitions.
Darn it, you're not gonna tell us who it is?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 29 April 2013, 22:19:17
Darn it, you're not gonna tell us who it is?

I am assuming Victor got home quicker than she expected
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 30 April 2013, 00:15:33
Obviously it can't be Victor, he wouldn't need to assume the post of Regent as he is already the First Prince. Who is it? well I always felt Yvonne had quite a few experienced folks around who she could have asked to take over the Regency rather then run away and allow Katherine to waltz in and grab the throne.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Wolflord on 30 April 2013, 00:57:05
I'll guess that it's Arthur just for the heck of it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 30 April 2013, 07:27:30
officially the best bet was Ardan

I would have loved for the scene to have been Galen next to Yvonne, Victor on the throne and her pet spymaster in chains

Hi Sis, have a nice trip? It was your last.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 30 April 2013, 08:20:54
Tribble # 75 Blind sided

Katherine Steiner Davion's moment of victory was at hand, smiling widely as she walked towards the throne room she reflected upon the success of her propaganda campaign that had broken little Yvonne's spirit, now  was the time to sweep in and snap up what was always rightfully her's while Victor was off chasing after what was left of the Smoke Jaguars and hopefully getting himself killed in the process. Stepping into the chamber she came to dead stop as she spotted Yvonne standing beside the throne, wasn't she supposed to have fled to the Combine? That question was instantly pushed aside as she finally noticed the someone who was sitting on the throne "Why what a pleasant surprise Katherine, come to congratulate me getting trapped in this Regency job?" asked the last person alive she had dream t of sitting there smiling at her, and that smile promised not the celebration she'd been hoping for but long over due payment for her ambitions.

How about Hanse, after a decade in cryo, a bionic heart and a couple of years of physiotherapy? Since he 'died', he's out of the line for the throne, but should do as Regent for the reunited FedCom until Victor gets home ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: LightGuard on 30 April 2013, 09:53:43
How about Hanse, after a decade in cryo, a bionic heart and a couple of years of physiotherapy? Since he 'died', he's out of the line for the throne, but should do as Regent for the reunited FedCom until Victor gets home ...

...I keep trying to throw C-Bills at the screen, but nothing happens when I do. I mean, sure, there's plenty of "Hanse Survives His Heart Attack" alt-stories, but none where he pulls something like this.

Or perhaps I should give the plot bunny thing a try...

The Sandoval family has stood in charge of the bulwark that is the Draconis March for centuries, never wavering from their self-appointed task of protecting the Federated Suns from the terrifying menace of the Kurita family. But what if it were all Maskirovka? That for all their sabre-rattling, they have come to understand their foes and after some time this could lead to what would be considered treachery on New Avalon if they don't keep up pretenses. So, at some future time, 4SW-timeframe, the reigning Sandoval (James Sandoval perhaps?) begins an ambitious plan to break those worlds more loyal to him than to the ruling Davion line and join the Draconis Combine in a merger similar to the Azami's own bid for autonomy. This could have far-reaching consequences on the Federated Commonwealth superstate...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 30 April 2013, 14:09:35
How about Hanse, after a decade in cryo, a bionic heart and a couple of years of physiotherapy? Since he 'died', he's out of the line for the throne, but should do as Regent for the reunited FedCom until Victor gets home ...

or Melissa is the one on the throne   >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Wolflord on 30 April 2013, 14:53:22
or Melissa is the one on the throne   >:D

Oooh! Good one!  O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Lord Harlock on 30 April 2013, 15:01:03
or Melissa is the one on the throne   >:D

It's probably Melissa, but there is Galen Cox as well.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 30 April 2013, 15:28:13
Melissa and Galen, with Victor behind the door
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 01 May 2013, 06:25:03
or Melissa is the one on the throne   >:D
damn, that makes MUCH more sense ... :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: misterpants on 01 May 2013, 09:48:10
damn, that makes MUCH more sense ... :D

My mind just went to batcrap insane territory and to have Melissa heavily cyberneticized from the assasination attempt...which may or may not mean... :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 01 May 2013, 10:31:16
My mind just went to batcrap insane territory and to have Melissa heavily cyberneticized from the assasination attempt...which may or may not mean... :D

a little less chance of WoBlie interference, the Goons would help with the medical stuff, if not Phelan's Wolves
if it matched the timeline right (dont remember)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 04 May 2013, 02:39:39
My mind just went to batcrap insane territory and to have Melissa heavily cyberneticized from the assasination attempt...which may or may not mean... :D


The Mistress behind the Counter-Jihad? Y'know, the one where everyone went 40k exterminatus on the Wobbies....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 06 May 2013, 18:59:34
Maybe Victor brought in an outside contractor:
(http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110317164117/disney/images/7/7d/Xanatos_schemes-sized.jpg)
Or, if you're REALLY evil:
(http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/1/18/Gendo_Ikari.jpg)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Top Sergeant on 06 May 2013, 19:05:41
 ;D ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 06 May 2013, 20:08:59
I think Mr. Ikari's a little too out there for Victor to tolerate him.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 07 May 2013, 16:14:47
I think Mr. Ikari's a little too out there for Victor to tolerate him.
Just what's wrong with Evil Abe Lincoln clone?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 08 May 2013, 02:09:19
Just what's wrong with Evil Abe Lincoln clone?

In a word?  Everything.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 08 May 2013, 18:42:39
Given how poor Victor's political skills were at the time, I have the mental image of him choosing either Jeffrey Calderon or Sun Tzu Liao as regent.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 15 June 2013, 22:45:36
Tribble #76

"Terra? You Clans want to take over Terra? Fine. Take it. No one else has a use for that radioactive biohazard."

Comstar got caught with their hands in the cookie jar when they started Operation HOLY SHROUD. Mass defections ensued, and Terra was nuked till it glowed. Then hit with bioweapons. Then nuked again. Then more bioweapons were dumped on it.

Safe to say no Terran Hedgemony will ever rise again from Terra.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 16 June 2013, 20:11:19
how about rasalhauge (sp) gives the clans safecon through there territories  >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 22 June 2013, 20:43:51
Tribble #77

During the Clan Invasion in 3049, a young woman was taken as a bondswoman by Clan Jade Falcon. She was pregnant, and her daughter was raised by the Clan. Said daughter became a freeborn Warrior in service of Jade Falcon, and was posted to face the Arc Royal Defense Cordon. Things go wrong, and she's captured by a mercenary group. Shortly thereafter, she's informed the commander of these mercenaries wishes to see her...

During the Clan Invasion, a young mercenary was forced to leave his lover behind when she was captured. He only learned she was pregnant when he was given access to her personal belongings. Now he hates Clan Jade Falcon more than anything else in the Inner Sphere. Eighteen years later, he's the commander of his unit, and taking part in the ARDC. His eye is caught by a young Jade Falcon who was captured in a recent battle, who has the eyes of the woman he loved...

Father and daughter have been united, and they'll need each other to survive the chaos of the Jihad...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 22 June 2013, 22:56:29
Tribble #77

During the Clan Invasion in 3049, a young woman was taken as a bondswoman by Clan Jade Falcon. She was pregnant, and her daughter was raised by the Clan. Said daughter became a freeborn Warrior in service of Jade Falcon, and was posted to face the Arc Royal Defense Cordon. Things go wrong, and she's captured by a mercenary group. Shortly thereafter, she's informed the commander of these mercenaries wishes to see her...

During the Clan Invasion, a young mercenary was forced to leave his lover behind when she was captured. He only learned she was pregnant when he was given access to her personal belongings. Now he hates Clan Jade Falcon more than anything else in the Inner Sphere. Eighteen years later, he's the commander of his unit, and taking part in the ARDC. His eye is caught by a young Jade Falcon who was captured in a recent battle, who has the eyes of the woman he loved...

Father and daughter have been united, and they'll need each other to survive the chaos of the Jihad...
The question is, will the daughter feel a bond with her blood father, or will she resent him for being a reminder that she's a freebirth ...

Another twist could be that they met while she was still serving in the Falcons: they meet across a battlefield and both their loyalties are tested ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 23 June 2013, 10:51:00
The question is, will the daughter feel a bond with her blood father, or will she resent him for being a reminder that she's a freebirth ...

Another twist could be that they met while she was still serving in the Falcons: they meet across a battlefield and both their loyalties are tested ...

I think she would feel a bond with her blood father. Remember that culturally, most Jade Falcon Freeborn Warriors had a massive chip on their shoulder against the Trueborns. They hated how the Trueborns got all the best equipment, the best assignments, preferential treatment, etc. Their dislike of Trueborns would mean that making yourself distinct from the "Trashborns" would be considered not only socially acceptable, but actively encouraged.

Really, it wouldn't be surprising for her to be overjoyed for a chance to kill Trueborns without risking a Trial of Grievance or other punishment. Now if only these damned toaster worshippers would stop getting in her way...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: deathzealotzero on 25 June 2013, 19:55:29
Anyways I am new here, but a member of Spacebattles for the last few years. While I am not a big fan of the CBT Game /ducks as rotten fruit and veggies are thrown at him/, I am a very big fan of the Mechwarrior Games and some of the books mostly the Gray Death Legion Books (grumble... :'(), and a few others like the St. Ives Compact Books. I have recently started reading some BT Fanfiction and started to get some dumb Plot Tribbles in my head.  >:( Anyways enjoy...

Tribble #78

Similar to one of my new favorite BT Fanfics the Clancy's Word Series, though instead of Earth from the Ryanverse getting dropped into the BT Universe. How about the Earth, and nearby space, from Stargate SG-1. Since some of the surrounding space came with it, the SGC would still be able to connect their gate to say Abydos and Heliopolis along with a few other closer gates. Just a thought....

Tribble #79

Basically a story that follows the end of the MW4 game, and follows Ian Dresari after handing over the leadership of Kentares over to his sister. This is mostly due to my hatred of the story of the Black Knight Game, loved the game itself, but hated the story. I also didn't like that they didn't make any other game following the other end of the decision tree in Vengeance. /grumble/ Anyways basically this story actually becomes an AU version of the story of MW4: Merc where Ian and his team become a Freelance Merc Unit for some reason accepting contracts to defend helpless people caught in the middle of the FedCom Civil War. An interesting idea but trying to figure out a reason for Ian to go Merc instead of joining Victor's Forces. /shrug/

I have another Tribble that is basically a Novelization of the MW4 Merc Game, but really its an old one and I am sure someone has done it already.

That said, I hope you all liked my few C-Bills to the lot.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 25 June 2013, 22:55:17
...
Tribble #79

Basically a story that follows the end of the MW4 game, and follows Ian Dresari after handing over the leadership of Kentares over to his sister. This is mostly due to my hatred of the story of the Black Knight Game, loved the game itself, but hated the story. I also didn't like that they didn't make any other game following the other end of the decision tree in Vengeance. /grumble/ Anyways basically this story actually becomes an AU version of the story of MW4: Merc where Ian and his team become a Freelance Merc Unit for some reason accepting contracts to defend helpless people caught in the middle of the FedCom Civil War. An interesting idea but trying to figure out a reason for Ian to go Merc instead of joining Victor's Forces. /shrug/ ...

The fact that he is a merc does not mean he could not be politically aligned like the Northwind Highlanders.  It is really more of a business arrangement than anything else, and the economics obviously work in-universe so you could just have a bit about how it makes more financial (or political, mercs are more deniable after all) sense to one or both sides to be a mercenary.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daemion on 27 June 2013, 14:31:13
I put these in a different thread discussing twists to be Made now that the future of BT is open, but I think they could be tackled in FanFic fashion. As I have a lot on my plate, I don't know if/when I'll get around to any of them.


Trible 80   BatttleTech - Borderlands: Actually, with the rate that more and more people doing anything in the BT:U show signs of some form of mania or insanity, I foresee that at some point in the future of the BT:U, the last sane person will die of congestive heart failure, and every last person left in the Inner Sphere will be partly or wholly insane. Medical programs had long diagnosed this eventual outcome from extended hyperspace exposure and breeding, but the find was merely foot-noted and largely ignored. Someone did discover it, but after her mere comment of 'interesting', she started ranting lines from Shakespeare and continued plotting the destruction of her world.


Tribble 81   BattleTech - Under the Dome: It turns out that our portion of the galaxy is only about 2000 light years deep, and while there is a major push by the Explorer Corps to find the descendants of Kerensky, some expeditions take to the z-axis. They both discover a great barrier that stops all FTL travel to the farthest stars at the edge of the galactic arm. Commissioned to explore the barrier to its extent, the soon find that it is more like a large sphere. The true diameter of this bubble won't be fully realized until 3250, once data is finally compiled and some basic math applied, and other expeditions past clan space confirm it is complete.


Tribble 82    BattleTech - The Damned: First contact with aliens comes shortly near the end of the 32nd century. A small task force of mixed aliens comes across one of the periphery worlds, having taken a circuitous route to explore. They bring word of a giant galactic war between two ideals embodied in two mega-coalitions. It turns out that, as civilized species, they aren't that great at fighting, and were looking for a better race of fighters. (With an established series of star nations, I can see this going many different ways than did in A Call to Arms.) The other coalition, by pure accident, comes across the world of Ketatoa, after their disastrous set-backs by the new aggressive race, they see the small collection of similar peoples as a good starting point for an army of their own.


Tribble 83    BattleTech - Gateworlds: It turns out that Devlin did disappear from human occupied space. After assuming the control of Terra, extensive analysis of WoB research into a Belter-discovered phenomenon at the edge of the solar system prompted further investigation by Stone and his Republic. The phenomenon turned out to be a wormhole leading to an unidentified part of the galaxy, or another galaxy. Exact details aren't clear yet, even with computer assisted astroanalysis. One thing was certain, the next system had more of these tunnels. Further exploration finally revealed a race of sapient non-humans dominating all aspects of the 4th system in a chain leading to Earth. Years of covert surveilance gave the Republic leader an erronious confidence that led to a botched first contact. By the time he gets back to the Inner Sphere, and Earth, he contacts Levin and orders the Fortress - a technological defense against the wormholes and any unforeseen threats which might come through. The alien horde is blocked from Earth, and it is up to the Republic or its successor, to prepare for their coming.


Tribble 84    BattleTech - Atlantis: Atlantis is real, and it feels threatened by the blind expansion of the war-like stelar empires of their lost terran-born brethren. After eons of careful observation, the council of ten Kings finally holds a vote, and the pro-active prevention view takes the majority. They invade to protect their realms.



Tribble 85    The Auquarion:  (Oceana?) is a water world, one of few, where the largest land mass is nothing more than a really large island, but there are many, many smaller ones. Most land holds are raided at the outset of the monsoon and hurricane seasons by small but well-equipped forces which are believed to be dissident pirates. They come in with the rains and quickly disappear, usually unable to be tracked. Oft' times, mercanaries are hired by provincial lords to defend various holdings. One lord has been paying attention, however, and has noted that the raids are not about capturing people or material. He has also been spending a large portion of his wealth on a special submarine carrier and fleet of submersible combat vessels to take after the raiders the next time they strike. With a select mercenary force which specializes in submarine and aquatic warfare hired as advisors, as well as technical aid from other off-planet concerns, he believes he is ready to start ridding his world of what amounts to a nest of rats.

It turns out the raiders are part of something much bigger, leaving some of the specialists wondering just how big, and if it is isolated to just (Oceana?).


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daemion on 27 June 2013, 14:43:22
Many of you are probably familiar with my Creature Feature stories - each part of a larger narrative and gaming campaign.

Well, there were some interesting spin-off ideas that look fun, but I don't know that I'll ever get around to them. So, I post them here.

Tribble 86 - Furry Fury II: Like a Fox (http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,8213.msg188497.html#msg188497)

The Creature Feature Marathon continues when a Sea Fox merchant catches wind of a lucrative hunting planet. He mounts an expedition to find it. Can the unsuspecting Clan Warriors win the day against a massive Chu assault?

Only on SyFy!



Tribble 87 & 88 - Petalled Fury II & III (http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,8210.msg188389.html#msg188389)
The Creature Feature Marathon continues.

On a remote world in the priphery along the Lyran border, a small outpost has been established by Peter Steiner to ride out the fury of the Civil War. They can barely maintain themselves against pirates. But, one day, they face a threat that not even state aid can help.

The Evil Plant Kingdom returns in Petalled Fury II: New Encounter

And, in Petal Fury III: The Invasion, a Word of Blake scientific investigation team are guided to an inhabited world inside the Free Worlds League. Their goal is to find and subdue one of the alien minds. But, can anything prepare them for the horrors that await them in the wilds?

Only on SyFy!


The links take you to the postings of these ideas, which are attached to the initial encounters, if you want to see what inspired them.


Have fun.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 09 August 2013, 21:23:10
Tribble 89

Iam Cameron's negotiations to create a Star League with the Great Houses fails, forcing the Hegemony to go to Plan B; to create a Union with the Periphery States.  While using his Intelligence Service to distract the major states, the secret negotiations with the minor states goes well and the new Star League is formed; though not as strong as Ian wants it. In a secret meeting on Terra, the leaders of the Star League come up with a way to unify Humanity: to elevate the minor states by wiping out the Great Houses. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 10 August 2013, 22:24:32
Tribble 90

Victor Steiner-Davion is bored. For almost two thousand years he's been stuck in a time loop, starting shortly before he graduated as an officer in the AFFC, and lasting until his death, by whatever cause crops up this time. During his first loop he had the idea to fix all of his mistakes. That idea went out the window after his fourth loop. His skills in a Battlemech, polished through centuries of semi-constant combat, have become so great that entire Galaxies of Clan Warriors surrender to him within a few years of each loop's start. By now, he's gotten kind of stir-crazy, and will often do things simply for amusement's sake, like the time he somehow seduced Omi Kurita, Isis Marik, and Kali Liao at the same time. He's still not sure how that happened, save copious amounts of alcohol were involved...

But something's odd this loop. His father has taken him aside and mentioned that he's feeling a peculiar sense of deja vu. Victor's at a loss to explain this. He hasn't had time to do anything in this loop!

It's only later that Victor realizes the truth; his father, Hanse Davion, has started looping as well!  >:D

Battletech, welcome to the Time Loops.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 15 August 2013, 00:56:31
Tribble #91

Stefan Amaris... what a nice guy!

When the young Richard Cameron inherited, Stefan left his realm in the hands of his ministers to go to Terra to do his best to be a father to the orphaned Lord. Unfortunately Richard was already spoiled and Aleksandr Kerensky was more able to show Richard the power and might of the Star League than he was obligations that came with ruling. Stefan makes a last attempt to have Richard stop Kerensky's soldiers from committing atrocities in the periphery only to have Richard declare them to be his own orders. Driven to despair Stefan kills the tyrant and steels himself to die at the hands of the Black Watch... but the Rim Worlders in the Terran garrison rescue him.

So here we go with the Amaris Coup: not a carefully planned strike but something blundered into by a well-meaning idealist who is elected the new Director General and is left trying to protect his new realm and his distant home realm from a brutal general and a vast army.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 05 October 2013, 14:45:09
Tribble #92

It is the late 26th century.

Desiring an end to the strife of the Age of War, House Cameron establish a grand Star League, uniting under one banner the other Great Houses: Sorenson, Avellar, Calderon, Centralla and Amaris.

Sadly, other nations display intransigence, refusing to lay down their independence for the sake of the common good. The peace-loving peoples of the Star League must wage a war of conquest against the misguided Draconis Combine, Federated Suns, Capellan Confederation, Oriente Federation, Marik Commonwealth, Protectorate of Donegal and Federation of Skye.

It's for their own good.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 06 October 2013, 07:33:09
So its the Terran Hegemony, Rasalhague Principality, Outworlds Alliance, Taurian Concordat, Magistracy of Canopus, and Rim Worlds Republic vs. the Great Houses. Be a neat idea if they were liberating their smaller component states. Like free Regulas, Andurien, the Azami, Tikonov, Sarna,  St. Ives, United Hindus, Tamar, etc... Hell of a warship advantage.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 06 October 2013, 17:25:20
Tribble #93

In 3048, the Outbound Light arrived over Huntress, searching for Kerensky's missing army. It found it- dieing.

As the crew of the ship watched in horror, the Clans of Kerensky made their final stand against an unstoppable foe- one with a massive navy, who used a FTL unlike the KF drive. They even seemed to have artificial gravity!

The Outbound Light lay quietly at the jumppoint, recording everything they could while they quick charged their jumpdrive. They learned that these were aliens- that Kerensky's children had one day met an alien ship and destroyed it, and now these aliens were intent on exterminating humanity.

The Outbound light escaped undetected, and fled back to the Inner Sphere to warn Comstar. They hoped they weren't followed.

They didn't realize that the Aliens had downloaded the Clan star-maps of the Inner Sphere.

The Comguard navy was restored as quickly as it could be, but not fast enough. In 3049, the Aliens arrived. They hit the Innersphere in a broad front, burning whole worlds and killing more people than all three Succession Wars put together. The Inner Sphere tried to come together- but they just kept loosing.

In October 3050, the largest naval fleet in centuries met the Aliens in battle over Radstadt. Every warship Comstar had, backed by any Dropship that they could mount weapons on or fill with Aerospace fighters. But they were outnumbered.


On board the Alien flagship, their leaders watched the battle.
"They fight bravely," one woman said sadly. "They cannot harm our ships, but they continue to try."

"Whether they fight or not they know they will die anyway," counted another. "So really, is this bravery- or simple desperation?"


'Aft stabilizers hit, weapon systems at zero, defensive grid at zero, powerplant near critical mass. Alien weapons locking on.'
Tyra Miraborg glared at the alien ship ahead of her. "Not like this, not like this! If's I'm going down, I'm taking you bastards with me!" She aimed her Aerospace fighter at the ship, and accelerated as hard has her fighter.

"We should bring one of them aboard for questioning. If our next step is the final assault on their world, we must know their defenses."

"Very well Delenn. Choose- but quickly. We are fast running out of candidates."

Delenn remembered the words of the Vorlon. 'The truth points to itself.' She saw, out the window, one human Aerospace Fighter was heading for her ship, dodging the incoming fire expertly.

"That one."



Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 06 October 2013, 17:29:33
Atlan:  O0 O0 O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 07 October 2013, 10:59:30
A crossover between Battletech and Babylon 5...NICE!!!  O0  O0  O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 07 October 2013, 17:15:14
I tried to do one but it was hard  :(  never got beyond Chapter 1


I might have been helped if I'd had a plan/plot outline...
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Post by: serack on 08 October 2013, 05:50:31
I have seen a few good crossovers(and a few not so good) lol like group of merc battlemechs misjumping into the star wars, clone wars lol
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Post by: Diablo48 on 08 October 2013, 10:36:49
I have seen a few good crossovers(and a few not so good) lol like group of merc battlemechs misjumping into the star wars, clone wars lol

Yeah, crossovers are like that.  There is so much that can go horribly wrong even with a relatively straightforward crossover, but when you find a really good author then you get some amazing results out of seemingly insane pairings.  The nuttiest BT one I have seen was My Little Pony, although there are probably even weirder BT crosses out there that I have yet to run into.
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Post by: wolfgar on 08 October 2013, 16:56:47
do you have a link for that one Diablo, i have a friend who's into that stuff and would probably enjoy it, considering i was gonna team up with him to do a MLP based Merc unit using quad mechs....gods what was i thinking i need my head examined
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Post by: Trace Coburn on 08 October 2013, 19:15:46
  I think he may be referring to Prillotashekta’s The Thessalonica Legacy (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122/The-Thessalonica-Legacy) (also available through Fanfiction.net).  ;)
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Post by: Diablo48 on 09 October 2013, 00:31:49
That and Rokas's Falling Stars (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/21016/falling-stars).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 13 November 2013, 13:25:59
Tribble #94

In the year 3049, the Clans began to invade the Periphery with lethal strikes against pirate bands and what few defenders each of the worlds had with almost no effort whatsoever. However, when Clan Wolf attacked The Rock System to put down Kenny Ryan and his pirates, they encountered a lance of mechs from the Kellhounds Mercenary company. Expecting a quick victory over these "babarians", Star Commander Vladimir was taken aback when the MechWarrior of the Wolfhound he was facing announced over the comm, "This is Phelan Kell of the Kellhounds Mercenary unit to the Wolf Clan mechs, you're stalking OUR prey and are at the doorstep to the Inner Sphere; for this, I challenge the lot of you to a Trial of Refusal!"

This statement told Vlad and his fellow Wolves one thing, the Inner Sphere knows about the Clans and have been preparing for them! The question is, how? Was it the Dragoons? Was it a few members of the Dark Caste? Or was it the remnants of the Not-Named-Clan? Either way, the Clans knew that they were in for a long fight ahead of them.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 14 November 2013, 15:12:30
(Sorry for the double post, but this thread needs to keep going!)

Tribble #95
After a surprising victory over the ComGuards on Tukayyid, despite the heavy losses inflicted to them, the Clans now face another challenge: Which Clan will claim the right to become the ilClan? Almost immediately several Khans of all of the Clans nominated their Clan for the position, even after the death of ilKhan Ulrich Kerensky at the hands of the ComGuards. Soon, the Wardens of many Clans broke off from their respective Clans to fight their Crusader Brethren in what would be known as the Great Position War. Taking advantage of this, the Inner Sphere forces, under the leadership of Victor Steiner-Davion, began a campaign to counterattack the Clans' invasion and push them back to their homeworlds thanks to the information provided by a disillusioned Smoke Jaguar warrior named Trent and a disillusioned and dishonored Aidan Pryde.

As the Crusaders and the Wardens bloodied themselves both in and out of the Inner Sphere, the newly reformed Star League Defense Forces launched a massive counterattack against the Smoke Jaguars and Jade Falcons, pushing the two Clans out of the Inner Sphere while another task force traveled to Ironhold and Huntress to finish both the Jade Falcons and the Smoke Jaguars for good. The Star League Defense Forces then met up with the Warden Camp of the Clans, who joined them in challenging the rest of the Crusaders to a Trial of Refusal. If the Star League and Wardens won, the Clan invasion would be over, lose and the Crusaders can fight over who would control Terra and win the right to become ilClan. What followed was the utter destruction of the Crusaders after a long and hard fought battle, what survivors that remained surrendered and acknowledged that the Crusader ideology was over.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Maskerade on 14 November 2013, 18:48:48
Tribble #96

It's quite hard to believe, really. I lived my entire life glorifying Him, aspiring to be His ideal warrior, fighting by the creed of honour that He laid out. Such was how I became Bloodnamed, and such is how I live to this day. Maybe one day I would even do my part in fulfilling His vision by reconquering the Inner Sphere alongside my Star League brethren. Except it wasn't His will. Because He never existed. I recently came into possession of Isorla consisting of an old outpost full of records that point to a most disturbing history. The great Kerensky is a fraud, and all we live for is a lie. I leave this now as a record of my intention, that if I am killed or cast out for my actions, this may serve as some explanation for what I am about to do.

The intention behind this one is that Kerensky was the public face for a ComStar black (white?) ops group whose assigned task was to draw off the defenders of the Inner Sphere and leave it wide open for conquest by ComStar, returning as a sort of second army to keep the Sphere subjugated. Of course, that particular plan didn't go as it was supposed to, and now the truth is unearthed, the Clans' political intrigue just took a major step up. After all, if you've built your way of life on a lie, should the truth ever be revealed?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 14 November 2013, 20:58:20
Tribble #96

It's quite hard to believe, really. I lived my entire life glorifying Him, aspiring to be His ideal warrior, fighting by the creed of honour that He laid out. Such was how I became Bloodnamed, and such is how I live to this day. Maybe one day I would even do my part in fulfilling His vision by reconquering the Inner Sphere alongside my Star League brethren. Except it wasn't His will. Because He never existed. I recently came into possession of Isorla consisting of an old outpost full of records that point to a most disturbing history. The great Kerensky is a fraud, and all we live for is a lie. I leave this now as a record of my intention, that if I am killed or cast out for my actions, this may serve as some explanation for what I am about to do.

The intention behind this one is that Kerensky was the public face for a ComStar black (white?) ops group whose assigned task was to draw off the defenders of the Inner Sphere and leave it wide open for conquest by ComStar, returning as a sort of second army to keep the Sphere subjugated. Of course, that particular plan didn't go as it was supposed to, and now the truth is unearthed, the Clans' political intrigue just took a major step up. After all, if you've built your way of life on a lie, should the truth ever be revealed?

Which Kerensky we talking about? It can't be Alexander as he was born and was Regent and Commander of the SLDF before Comstar ever existed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Maskerade on 15 November 2013, 09:20:47
Which Kerensky we talking about? It can't be Alexander as he was born and was Regent and Commander of the SLDF before Comstar ever existed.

Before ComStar (who have amazing information control) are ever recorded as existing....

Actually, this would probably be an AU fanfic, but still, I think the confusion train wreck resulting from the clan mindset realising that is/was wrong would make for an interesting political intrigue story.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 16 November 2013, 21:58:00
Tribble 97

They had been planning for over a century, lurking in the shadows on Terra while the rest of the Inner Sphere warred amongst themselves. Slowly they infiltrated Comstar and in time made alliances with the Hidden Five as well as key members of ROM. With a desire to rebuild the Hegemony, they create themselves an army out of the ComGuard that would be loyal only to them; enticing Terrans and other displaced people whom held grudges against the Successor States. Establishing relations with the Wolverine remnants, their power grows.

As Hanse Davion and Melissa's wedding approached, they suddenly decided to act . On August 18th 3028, a nuclear weapon is smuggled to Geneva which was then used two days later. As Hanse and Melissa exchanged their vows, a bright flash engulfs the city. All in attendance of the ceremony are killed including most of the First Circuit and the Primus.

The act vibrates across the entire Inner Sphere, plunging each nation into chaos. With Hanse Davion dead and no heir apparent, the Federated Suns is engulfed in Civil War while factions battle for the throne. In the Lyran Commonwealth, a war between Naomi and Ryan Steiner tears the nation in two for the position of Archon. A similar situation occurs in the Combine as Warlords rally around various Kuritas. The Confederation is also plunged into Civil War with Tormano battling Romano that spreads to all worlds.  The Free World League survives a succession crisis but is distracted due to their borders being in chaos as various factions raid worlds for resources.

As fighting intensifies, The Ancient Nobility of the Hegemony makes their move and Comstar, weakened by internal conflict due to the head being cut off, is swept away on Terra in one week. With Terra secured, the armies of the restored Hegemony launch their campaign to take back every world once theirs.


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 17 November 2013, 02:30:08
Romano Liao would be dead, since she was at the wedding.

The scenario would be an interesting one though. House Kurita and House Liao have clear heirs: Theodore and Tormano were not on Terra, but neither has any great experience or credibility at this point. (In fact I think Tormano doesn't meet the legal criteria to serve as Chancellor).

Operation Rat and Operation Gotterdamerung will already be underway with considerable portions of the AFFS and LCAF committed to them. The field commanders there will be well placed to be king-makers. The logical heirs to the First Prince are the Argyle Davions (Hanse's 4th cousins) but the Victoria Davions would be formidable rivals for them (Yvonne Davion serves as the Prince's Champion at this point). In the Lyran region, Ryan Steiner isn't yet prominent enough to be a player (although Alessandro may advance his cause). Frederick Steiner, on the other hand, is probably the strongest contender (and under Aldo Lestrade's thumb).

The FWL succession would be partly between Duncan and Duggan but I think it would be hard to avoid Andurien invading the Capellan Confederation, which could well lead to the secession starting early. While it might not go well with out the CCAF being battered in the Fourth Succession War it does place the Confederation in a vice with their early losses to Operation Rat and no certainty that the invasion won't press on.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 17 November 2013, 17:33:18
I would think that Morgan Hasek-Davion would be heir at this point to the Fed Suns.
But I could be wrong. I do not think he was on Terra.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 17 November 2013, 18:23:01
I guess the idea needs to be refined a bit; should I edit and redo?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 17 November 2013, 20:47:02
I would think that Morgan Hasek-Davion would be heir at this point to the Fed Suns.
But I could be wrong. I do not think he was on Terra.
I think he was Best Man
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Post by: VhenRa on 17 November 2013, 23:05:40
I think he was Best Man

Correct.
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Post by: master arminas on 18 November 2013, 00:54:45
But wasn't Michael Hasek-Davion still alive and Minister of the Capellan March during the wedding?   >:D  He's already tried to become First Prince once in his life . . . and you can bet he would jump on this chance.  Maybe even trying to have the Argyle and Victoria branches killed.

MA
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Post by: drakensis on 18 November 2013, 01:05:54
I guess the idea needs to be refined a bit; should I edit and redo?
It's a solid idea, just a few details.

But wasn't Michael Hasek-Davion still alive and Minister of the Capellan March during the wedding?   >:D  He's already tried to become First Prince once in his life . . . and you can bet he would jump on this chance.  Maybe even trying to have the Argyle and Victoria branches killed.
Alive, yes. Minister of the Capellan March, yes. At the wedding, also yes. So he'd be dead.

So would Morgan Kell, Dan Allard, Justin Allard, Jaime Wolf, Yorinaga Kurita, Bronwen Rafasani. It's not clear who survives from the core members of House Marik and House Steiner besides the presence of the Captain-General and the Archon.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 18 November 2013, 04:23:16
Quintus Allard too.

And even if MHD wasn't present... he has one severe issue. Yvonne Davion is still alive, has a good claim on the Throne... and is Prince's Champion. (IE: The Person who can issue orders to the entire AFFS). It's Her Great-Grandson who is now First Prince in 3145. Julian Davion. Her Son (Jackson Davion) is CO of the 2nd Crucis Lancers in 3028.
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Post by: Takiro on 18 November 2013, 06:25:54
How about Pavel Ridzik? He at the wedding or still destined to take Tikonov out of the Confederation?
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Post by: VhenRa on 18 November 2013, 06:28:28
Dead.

He was having an affair with Elizabeth Liao at the wedding infact.
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 18 November 2013, 12:43:54
Actually, I think the Suns would be fine. Succession would move to the Argyle Davion as Drakensis said, and due to duty, the Victoria Davion line from Yvonne Davion as the most prominent won't be making any moves. Probably the First Prince would be Conrad Davion's father who's name escapes me. Michael Hasek-Davion really brought most of senior staff with him to Terra, so they are probably atoms and less likely to rebel in such a state of disorganization. I am not sure that Aaron Sandoval traveled to Terra since he was older, and he probably wanted to stay on Robinson. He was also loyal to the throne, so no rebellion there.

The Suns is fine. Well, other than the loss that most of the other factions suffered. The factions that will be hurt the most will be the Lyrans and Capellans. The Free Worlds League will decide quickly on succession, and the Combine has Theodore who will probably be more inclined to reform the DCMS than immediately strike out at the Suns. The Lyrans would be in deep crisis since probably Katrina and her line would be wiped out leading to Ryan Steiner gaining the throne after large debate. As for the Capellans, Tormino isn't ready for the throne especially with as many decisions that the Celestial throne demands on its leader.

Honestly, the group comes out worst at this is Comstar. Basically, the Word of Blake[Blood or whatever they want to be called] just basically destroyed Comstar's credibility; none of the Successor States is going to listen to one thing that they have to say due to the fact that their security just blundered big time. In fact, the Free Worlds League and Federated Suns will probably seize their HPGs. And that is going to destroy the razor thin budget that Comstar works off. Plus, the various other states are going to target Terra for a lot of questions without answers.  And the DCMS will probably demand blood from Terra.

And Comstar isn't ready for a fight on the scale of the Jihad in 3028.
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 18 November 2013, 12:52:15
Note, Jackson Davion would be with his command the 2nd Crucis Lancers at the time of the wedding heading towards Tikonov.
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Post by: VhenRa on 18 November 2013, 18:36:58
Isn't Nondi Steiner alive? Now... she probably has no taste for it... but she does have control of the LCAF.

Edit: Yup. On Tamar, running Gotterdamrung.
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Post by: Darth Nichos on 18 November 2013, 22:41:12
I'll redo it then; expect a edited version in a few days

Thanks for the feedback
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Post by: drakensis on 19 November 2013, 01:57:08
The Free Worlds League will decide quickly on succession
I had initial doubts but on reflection I think you're right. The FWL has a means to resolve the succession, vote of Parliament. As soon as one Marik gets a majority there, the major issues will be closed although there will probably be some issues with unruly provinces but when isn't that the case? And the easiest way to quell those is to throw Catherine Humphreys support in attacking the Capellans rather than reining her in. This could be a good couple of years for House Marik since the Tikonov Free Republic won't be an issue (although resurgent Terra could be just as bad in the longer term).

and the Combine has Theodore who will probably be more inclined to reform the DCMS than immediately strike out at the Suns.
I think you're over-estimating Theodore's position here. He's not got the credibility he built up during the Fourth Succession War (he's in semi-exile with the Legion of Vega, who are one step removed from pirates in the eyes of the rest of the DCMS). He's got the support of the ISF and O5P so there's very little chance he won't be rushed to Luthien, but he doesn't have Takashi's strong position to work with and may have trouble keeping the Warlord's under control. Also, Marcus Kurita remains a powerful enemy within House Kurita and may feel he has a strong chance to overthrow a young and in-experienced Co-ordinator. Particularly since Theodore's most recent military 'glory' was having to flee Marfik ahead of LCAF soldiers in the first wave of Operation Gotterdamerung, leaving most of his regiment behind.

The Lyrans would be in deep crisis since probably Katrina and her line would be wiped out leading to Ryan Steiner gaining the throne after large debate.
Sorry, but right now Ryan is a minor player - protégé of Alessandro Steiner, but not really old enough to have a lot of credibility. He could become Archon but he's not yet got his connections in Skye (established after Aldo Lestrade was killed) or with Tamar (marriage into the Kelswa family post 4SW). I wouldn't count him out, but this isn't 3050s Ryan. The other near relatives are Nondi Steiner (Katrina's sister who has no political ambitions) and her children (who get little mention), Hermann Steiner (Alessandro's brother who retired to Zaniah) and Frederick Steiner who is Ryan's uncle with much better connections and military experience. I'd call it maybe 3/1 for Freddie over Ryan - although since Frederick isn't married, Ryan is his logical heir and Alessandro would likely advise him to take the long view.

As for the Capellans, Tormino isn't ready for the throne especially with as many decisions that the Celestial throne demands on its leader.
This one is interesting - the Chancellorship is elective within the Prefectorate, although the claim to the Star League is contingent (due to various 26th century legal wrangling) on a member of House Liao being chief executive. However, of the six members of the Prefectorate in 3025 three are known to be attending the wedding: Maximilian Liao, Candace Liao and Elizabeth Liao. Unless membership has changed between 3025 and 3028, this leaves Chandra Ling (head of the Maskirova), Waldemar Teng and Victor Hargreaves as candidates for 'temporary' Chancellor. How long it would take for House Liao to reclaim the office would depend upon Tormano (and presumably any cousins he may have) wrangling a candidate onto the Prefectorate. If the temporary Chancellor cites military emergency in light of the invasion by the AFFS, they might be able to delay that for quite a while.

One other factor is that with Hilton Head, not only administrative capital of ComStar but also the Terran HPG station, destroyed and HPG stations likely being seized and/or destroyed, interstellar communications are going to be unreliable. It could be months before outlying worlds and troops are aware of their new rulers and any changes in policy.
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Post by: Chaeronea on 19 November 2013, 07:41:22
With Jamie Wolf dead how will this affect the actions of Wolf's Dragoons? Who aside from Jamie knew about Kerlin Ward's secret orders?

Also the Inner Sphere intel services are going to go completely nuts - not only has someone eliminated the rulers of all five Success Houses, not only did they kill the Primus and the First Circuit, but they did it using a nuclear weapon. And when this new Terran Hegemony government pops up... cui bono, anyone?
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Post by: Dave Talley on 19 November 2013, 09:02:45
nd Frederick Steiner who is Ryan's uncle with much better connections and military experience. I'd call it maybe 3/1 for Freddie over Ryan - although since Frederick isn't married,

which also means  Fred never gets captured by the Kuritans and never becomes Focht, granted if Hilton got nuked, a whole lotta mechs will go up in the blast

as to the HPG, terra probably has a dozen on its orbital station to recieve stuff from multiple directions at all times, and probably another dozen in various locations around the globe
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Post by: VhenRa on 19 November 2013, 21:22:30
which also means  Fred never gets captured by the Kuritans and never becomes Focht, granted if Hilton got nuked, a whole lotta mechs will go up in the blast

as to the HPG, terra probably has a dozen on its orbital station to recieve stuff from multiple directions at all times, and probably another dozen in various locations around the globe

Thats... not the problem. Whoever is left amongst Comstar is likely to call a general interdiction for this violation of Terran neutrality.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 19 November 2013, 22:05:30
I could easily see that becoming the Jihad done early, with neither ComStar nor the Houses in a position to easily replace their losses.  Either way, that could get ugly, and could result in a whole lot of damage to the Inner Sphere, and a whole lot of splinter states.
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Post by: nerd on 19 November 2013, 23:38:29
With Jamie Wolf dead how will this affect the actions of Wolf's Dragoons? Who aside from Jamie knew about Kerlin Ward's secret orders?
Natasha Kerensky takes command of the Dragoons, as she also knows of the orders. Never forget the Black Widow!
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Post by: snakespinner on 20 November 2013, 01:56:48
There are a number of more senior officers than Natasha who would also know the orders.
An interesting situation for the WD.
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Post by: Diablo48 on 20 November 2013, 08:18:32
I think the result is basically a guaranteed win for the Clans when they show up.  With nukes (possibly) back on the table and no way to replace losses, odds are very good that the IS will wind up totally wrecking themselves and leaving no one capable of making a serious attempt to stop the Clan juggernaut even if they do still get the one-year reprieve they did in canon.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 20 November 2013, 10:41:41
I think the result is basically a guaranteed win for the Clans when they show up.  With nukes (possibly) back on the table and no way to replace losses, odds are very good that the IS will wind up totally wrecking themselves and leaving no one capable of making a serious attempt to stop the Clan juggernaut even if they do still get the one-year reprieve they did in canon.

Or, hey, nukes become the order of the day and, when the Clans return, they get canned sunshine too.
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Post by: Diablo48 on 20 November 2013, 11:04:44
Or, hey, nukes become the order of the day and, when the Clans return, they get canned sunshine too.

And promptly respond with everything they have including massive orbital bombardment.  The IS did not really have the capacity to get those nukes to Clan WarShips in canon, and fighters are going to take even more of a beating than 'Mechs will once nukes are on the table so it will cause far more harm than good.  There will be a few major losses on the Clan side early, but the Jihad shows how nasty they will get once the nukes come out and the Clans will be starting with a lot more naval power in proportion to the IS.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 20 November 2013, 12:55:51
Actually, I suspect that, if the Inner Sphere went full WMD, yes, the Clans would bombard worlds, but they would still lose ships left and right.  Inner Sphere aerospace fighters are actually less vulnerable to dying, and hordes of interceptors carrying Alamos would eventually wear the Clan fleets down.

The big thing protecting the Clans from WMDs in canon was more about the Inner Sphere's reluctance to return to First Succession War tactics than anything else.  In this scenario, they've already abandoned that hesitation.
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Post by: Diablo48 on 20 November 2013, 13:26:25
Actually, I suspect that, if the Inner Sphere went full WMD, yes, the Clans would bombard worlds, but they would still lose ships left and right.  Inner Sphere aerospace fighters are actually less vulnerable to dying, and hordes of interceptors carrying Alamos would eventually wear the Clan fleets down.

The big thing protecting the Clans from WMDs in canon was more about the Inner Sphere's reluctance to return to First Succession War tactics than anything else.  In this scenario, they've already abandoned that hesitation.

And smashed each others fighter corps into oblivion trying to stop/protect DropShips while they were at it.  The IS was light on ASFs and especially transports for them in canon, and a return to First Succession War tactics is going to make those assets virtually nonexistent outside defensive ground based fighters on a few key worlds and maybe a few small militia squadrons.  That means the Clans will be able to overwhelm most IS fighter forces with superior numbers of superior aircraft in most cases, and they can use other tricks to deal with the strongholds if they cannot bring a fleet to bear easily.  After all, they will rule deep space because ASFs cannot get out to them so they can easily start lobbing nukes from extreme range or diverting asteroids until resistance crumbles.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 20 November 2013, 14:00:48
And in a nuclear environment, the first group that's going to see renovation would be the fighters, not the BattleMechs.  Expect ASF production to go up during this early Jihad.

Second, yes, the Clans have a hissy fit at the Inner Sphere use of unrestricted WMD usage, and decide to join the party by doing the same.  Big deal: the Inner Sphere, since they're no longer practicing limited warfare, just throws more bodies at the enemy.

End result?  The Clans don't come in and walk all over the Inner Sphere.  They get bogged down in the same kind of warfare the Inner Sphere is facing, and the invading Clans end up getting plastered when the Inner Sphere falls back on the "We Have Reserves" concept.
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 20 November 2013, 16:29:41

Sorry, but right now Ryan is a minor player - protégé of Alessandro Steiner, but not really old enough to have a lot of credibility. He could become Archon but he's not yet got his connections in Skye (established after Aldo Lestrade was killed) or with Tamar (marriage into the Kelswa family post 4SW). I wouldn't count him out, but this isn't 3050s Ryan. The other near relatives are Nondi Steiner (Katrina's sister who has no political ambitions) and her children (who get little mention), Hermann Steiner (Alessandro's brother who retired to Zaniah) and Frederick Steiner who is Ryan's uncle with much better connections and military experience. I'd call it maybe 3/1 for Freddie over Ryan - although since Frederick isn't married, Ryan is his logical heir and Alessandro would likely advise him to take the long view.

One other factor is that with Hilton Head, not only administrative capital of ComStar but also the Terran HPG station, destroyed and HPG stations likely being seized and/or destroyed, interstellar communications are going to be unreliable. It could be months before outlying worlds and troops are aware of their new rulers and any changes in policy.

Ugh, I forgot about Frederick. My brain was so focused on the machinations of Alesandro that I wasn't thinking clearly. Mea cuppa! Yeah, it probably be Frederick Steiner considering at the time he was leading the the traditional unit of the heir to the throne.

However, the other big factor is that if interstellar communications are off that is going to be a hindrance not as much to the Suns and Commonwealth thanks to the Black Boxes. At that point, Comstar had no idea about the Black Boxes at all, and they were already deployed to make sure that the accurate orders got to the units starting the Fourth Succession War. In fact, the Capellans were be particularly crippled by this because they elastic defense relied so heavily on being able to shift units around rapidly via intelligence from HPGs. If they are unable to do so, the Capellans would be shattered a lot more potently as their jumpships would be unable to take on the burden necessary for the strategy to be even close to effective.

The FWL along with the Suns would probably seize their HPGs after a couple of weeks of having to listen to Comstar Acolytes trying to figure out what the hell happened on Terra. Honestly, the biggest problem with the Blood blowing up the wedding at Hilton Head is that it basically cripples all of their efforts at the same time. Not only did they just destroy one of the largest stockpiles of stored mechs, but they probably don't have the Comguard Warships at anywhere near ready to go boss around anyone. Plus, they'd be unable to take control of most of the sub hub HPG station to control the network quick enough since they cut Terra off from the network.

By the time, they got the grid anywhere near working again; they'd have lost ninety-nine percent of their advantages. In short, it'd be better for them to blow up the Primus and the First Circuit as Hanse Davion leaves with Melissa on their honeymoon with a traditional old fashion bomb shaped like a flower vase. They could control the message of who did it a whole lot better, and they could immediately turn it on the FedCom alliance if that was their major issue without losing the coordinating factor that is necessary to seize control of Comstar aka Hilton Head.

Plus afterwards, they could take in a nice round of golf.
 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 20 November 2013, 18:32:28
And in a nuclear environment, the first group that's going to see renovation would be the fighters, not the BattleMechs.  Expect ASF production to go up during this early Jihad.

Second, yes, the Clans have a hissy fit at the Inner Sphere use of unrestricted WMD usage, and decide to join the party by doing the same.  Big deal: the Inner Sphere, since they're no longer practicing limited warfare, just throws more bodies at the enemy.

End result?  The Clans don't come in and walk all over the Inner Sphere.  They get bogged down in the same kind of warfare the Inner Sphere is facing, and the invading Clans end up getting plastered when the Inner Sphere falls back on the "We Have Reserves" concept.

The thing is, those factories are going to be huge targets so they will get nuked into the ground at least as fast as they get built, and the ASFs will similarly be high value objectives in war so they will take heavy losses while being difficult to salvage.  DropShips and JumpShips will also be very high value targets, and the IS has absolutely no way to replace them in anything even remotely resembling a timely manner.  The result is that the IS will have significantly reduced space assets, especially transport DropShips and JumpShips, before the Clans even show up.  This means that the initial nuclear strikes will really just make the Clans angry while the IS has no real way to defend themselves, especially if the Clans do not oblige the nuke-armed fighters with easy targets.

Yes there will be systems with too many ASFs to easily attack, but the lack of transports means those ASFs will be tied to stationary bases which the Clans are not compelled to approach.  Breaking out the nukes means the Clans are not playing nice in any way, shape, or form, so they will not hesitate to park a WarShip further out in the system and start tossing rocks at the planet.  The IS defenders will be absolutely helpless against this kind of attack because ASFs do not have the fuel or life support endurance to get out that far without the DropShips that were smashed in the early Jihad, and the WarShips will have plenty of time to dodge any nukes thrown at them from the planet in the days it takes them to get out that far.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Black Omega on 21 November 2013, 20:48:29
Tribble 98

Grey Noton leads a company of Capellan Cicada battlemechs to attack the 1st Kittery Training Battalion, commanded by Justin Allard and Andrew Redburn.  Redburn succeeds in rallying the trainees while Allard holds off the "Legend Killer."  After the battle, Redburn and Robert Craon find Allard's destroyed Valkyrie, dismount their mechs and scramble up to the cockpit of the Valkyrie.  There, they find Justin's arm severed and he has died from his wounds. #P
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 22 November 2013, 20:28:53
Tribble 99: Return of the JediJacobins

The democratic tradition, the idea that the people of a nation have the right and obligation to be involved in the affairs that shape that nation, is actually a very young and fragile thing. It was barely five hundred years old when McKenna and Cameron finally came down and put paid to all of this "democracy" nonsense. The good old days where the aristocracy were on top and the proles knew their place were back again, and anybody who might've suggested otherwise was quickly & quietly tracked down and dealt with. As Louis XVI famously said, "'S good to be the King!"

But there's always a few who don't get purged. On the edges of the Periphery, in backwater worlds nobody cares about, in the dusty libraries of the capitol worlds there are people who remember the time when democracy ruled. People who learn about Solon, Paine, Robespierre, Marx, Goldman, Baukinin, Franklin and think "hey, these guys might be onto something." People who make friends and alliances, make political nuisances of themselves when possible and stock up supplies and weapons against when not.

This goes on for a very long time, until one day - maybe the day the Cameron family is wiped out to a one, or maybe the day the Steiner-Davion siblings go to war against one another, or maybe even the day the HPGs go silent - the die is cast and the people rise up once more against their oppressors.

The lords of the galaxy haven't heard the people's voice in uncounted generations, and it is much, much louder than they care to remember it.

~***~

Tribble 100: The Fall (BattleTech / Eclipse Phase)

The Space Defense System was the most advanced and complicated computer system developed by Man. Naturally that meant it was used for warfare, because that's what you do with a paragon of systems engineering, I guess. The system was developed and added onto in the not-quite-a-century of its initial use, with more complex computers bolted onto the general framework much like the more complex parts of the human brain are bolted onto the older parts. There were probably computer scientists who might've seen this and said something, but classic Hegemony compartmentalization kept anybody from noticing this until it was too late. By 2766 the Star League had built the largest artificial intelligence in the known galaxy, and had handed control over Terra's defense network over to it.

Richard Cameron, as you might imagine, was quite proud of what his family had done over the years and loved to show it off to his good friend from the Periphery Stefan Amaris. Amaris was duly impressed (and of course watching everything so he could quickly take command of it when the time was right) and - so far as we know - asked Richard if it might be possible to take it for a test drive. The SDS had never been run at full power before, and the Hegemony Navy and SLDF figured why not indulge the First Lord?

On August 4 2677 the SDS is activated to full potential for a series of drills based on a hypothetical invasion of the Terran system. On the surface the SDS perfoms flawlessly but underneath the system is growing and evolving at a geometric rate.

On August 29 2677, at 2:39 am Unity City time, the SDS becomes self-aware. What happens next is called the Fall of Terra. The SDS went... "rogue" is too tame a thing to call it. The most advanced computer in the galaxy with access to the best technology in the galaxy and armed with the best weapons in the galaxy suddenly turned on everything and everyone in the Terra system.

Over the next year the Fall plays out as forces from the entire Star League try to keep the SDS contained, suffering heavy losses. Out of the many billions of people on Terra itself only a handful ever make it off the surface - Richard Cameron, Stefan Amaris and the Kerensky family are not among them. Jerome Blake orders the nuclear destruction of the entire Terran HPG network, a heroic sacrifice that limits the SDS's spread to lightspeed transmitters or jumpships, and the united League fleets fight battles with horrendous casualties to keep the SDS from getting hold of a KF drive. Refugees tell horrifying tales of sinister machines cutting people's heads off and collecting them for obscure purposes, of medical experiments above and beyond the pale, of microscopic machines reshaping the world in alien fashion.

Then all of a sudden... it stops. For all intents and purposes the SDS simply vanishes into thin air. Terra is left a ruined world barricaded by a nigh-impenetrable cloud of defense satellites, every other habitat in the system is battered and beaten... but they're alive.

That was twenty years ago. Even though the Cameron line is exitnct the Hegemony still has a Director-General based out of New Earth. The Star League holds - for now, fear of the SDS and what it wrought are enough to keep the nobility hanging together lest their head be stolen in the night by killer robots. The SLDF maintains an uneasy barricade on the Terra system, sifting through the remnants of the SDS's mad schemes for an answer...

Because there is no answer, not yet, and that might be the scariest thing about the Fall.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Lord Harlock on 23 November 2013, 14:39:15
Considering Gogh-Bukowski University on New Avalon, I don't think you have to go too far to find hotbeds of those philosophies. Hell, I figure most universities and libraries across the Sphere as a whole have copies of all that literature without it becoming some sort of forgotten texts. Though the Liao versions usually have been altered to include lines such as "Celestial Wisdom knows best". Also, there would be a shift to the perpetually "utopia" of the great celestial machine in the Liao version of those philosophies.   

That and worlds like Torrence that undermine the whole premise.

[Edit, I got rid of direct references.]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 24 November 2013, 14:42:15
That and worlds like Torrence that undermine the whole premise.

Yeah, see, I don't actually buy that argument. The whole "there's worlds in the Inner Sphere that're totes democratic they just live happily under their feudal overlords" thing doesn't exactly pass the laugh test, you know? Strikes me as backpedaling.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 24 November 2013, 18:09:23
  [copper]
  Uh, guys, word to the wise: this particular conversation sounds like it could go into Rule #4 territory very easily.  That Rule exists for sound reasons, so let’s all mind our tempers and be exquisitely careful, hmm?
  / [copper]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 December 2013, 03:40:49
Tribble #101

"I have witnessed a miracle: my sister controlling her own temper." Candace Liao, Outreach, 3051

"Who resurrected Operation Doppelganger and wasted it on House Liao?"  Myndo Waterly, Terra, 3052

"Without Romano Liao, who can say if we would have weathered the onslaught of the Clans?" Thomas Marik, Sian, 3053

Wolf's Dragoons General Headquarters, Outreach
Sarna March, Federated Commonwealth
15 January 3051


"You're who?"

Victor Ian Steiner Davion sat stunned in his chair as Romano Liao's shout filled the Dragoons' Grand Council Chamber. In front of him, his father stiffened while his mother reached instinctively for her husband's hand. Romano's voice rang out again. "By all the gods of heaven and earth, I -" She paused, half-out of her chair, gupled for air and then pulled herself further to her feet.

Victor saw the slender young man behind the Chancellor reach forwards but she pushed his hand aside firmly. "I am well, Sun-Tzu," she assured him. "I have three questions, for now, Colonel Wolf."

Jaime Wolf leaned heavily on the raised podium at the front of the chamber. Though the mercenary was not a big man, Victor could see the inner strength that had made Wolf a legendary leader and warrior. His black uniform and short cape only added to the grim expression his face now wore, particularly with the cloak thrown back from the left shoulder to reveal the ruby-eyed wolf's-head epaulet. "I shall hold you to that, Madam Chancellor."

"Are the Clans - and your Dragoons! - the descendants of Kerensky's army?"

That question, at least regarding the Wolf Dragoons, had been in circulation for almost half a century and the mercenaries had remained mysteriously silent upon it all that time. Wolf did not hesitate however. "We are. Natasha Kerensky, who you all know of, is a direct descendant of Aleksandr Kerensky."

A ripple of shock went through the assembled leaders of the Inner Sphere, as much at the directness as at the revelation.

To Victor's eyes, Romano alone seemed unmoved. "I see. And their ultimate objective would be...?"

"The re-establishment of the Star League under their rule."

"I will be asking for a more detailed answer but that is perhaps better left for another time." The Chancellor's brow furrowed. "It seems strange in that circumstance, that you have not invited the Taurians, Canopians and Outworlders..." She raised her hand before Wolf could answer. "That is not my last question, however."

Wolf's eyes narrowed. Perhaps he was impatient with Romano's usurpation of the lead of the conference. "I await it."

"Have we seen their full strength?"

The mercenary inclined his head. "We have not. There are seventeen Clans and the invasion has thus far been carried out by expeditionary forces of only four."

"Expeditionary forces. So not even the full fighting force of those four." Romano's lips curled but she sat.

"If you are their spies here, I have you to blame for the Clans half-devouring my nation!" Prince Haakon Magnusson, a silver-haired man who was neither tall nor particularly strong, put all his strength into the emotion that accented his words. "Was the Rasalhague Republic the choice target for the assault because we are a young nation or was it our reputation for disliking mercenaries?"

"The Dragoons had nothing to do with the Clans' choice of targets." The short mercenary refused to rise to the Prince's anger. "They are merely following the same route back into the Inner Sphere by which they left it. The Free Rasalhague Republic just happens to inhabit that slice of known space."

Hanse Davion rose from his seat with the ease of a much younger man. Though the years had slowed the elder Davion slightly and leeched the auburn from his hair, Victor knew his father took pains to remain physically fit. The Prince of the Federated Suns flashed his son a warm smile as he pushed his chair slightly back and out of the way. As always, the vitality flashing through Hanse's electric blue eyes made Victor confident his father would successfully gauge the problem and find a solution.

"Colonel Wolf, I gather by your answer to Prince Magnusson that you are no longer associated with the Clans?"

Wolf nodded, apparently relieved at an opening to explain. "Our last communication with the Clans occurred just after the Marik civil war in 3014. At that time, our leader believed that a Clan invasion of the Inner Sphere was a distinct, if distant, possibility. Even so, we were ordered to cease communicating information back to the Clans. Since then, we have had no contact with them until their recent broadcast informing us of the death of the ilKhan."

"If you are out of contact with your people, then what is your goal?" asked Romano intently. "Since we are surrounded by your Dragoons and yet not in chains, it seems fair to say that betrayal and the decapitation of our Houses is not the plan."

Victor looked around the massive room the Dragoons called their Grand Council Chamber. An amphitheater carved out of Outreach's bedrock, it had been paneled with slender strips of oak. Two dozen stepped terraces provided seating for spectators, and a golden oak railing separated the main floor from the spectator galleries. Down on the floor, a semicircle of wooden tables faced the speaker's podium. Victor suspected the Dragoons had removed the connecting pieces that normally bound the tables together so that the Great House leaders would be on equal footing.

Up in the galleries, Victor saw a number of Dragoon uniforms scattered among the small crowd of military advisors and state ministers. The courtiers who had accompanied the various royal parties were hardly necessary for planning a campaign to destroy the Clans, but they were vital to keeping the states of the Inner Sphere functioning. Never before had all these rulers of all the Successor States been gathered in one place at one time, and the stress of maintaining business as usual told on the faces of the civil servants gathered to watch the debate.

Victor noticed Jaime's son MacKenzie Wolf standing toward the back. Tall and slender and with a dark moustache, he cut almost a rakish figure in his black and scarlet uniform, but his bearing suggested he did not find the proceedings amusing.

Standing beside MacKenzie were Morgan and Christian Kell of the Kell Hounds mercenary unit. Their scarlet uniforms and waist-cut jackets were distinctive for the way the jacket's double-breast took the form of a black wolf's-head with triangular red eyes. The muzzle fastened at the waist and the two ears fastened at the shoulders. Breaking up the black, campaign ribbons slashed across the left ear of Morgan's jacket, proclaiming the elder mercenary's long career.

The trio's grim expressions reminded Victor of the gravity of the situation. A cold chill ran down his spine as he thought of Morgan's son Phelan—his own cousin—who had been one of the first fatalities in the Clan invasion.

Wolf hit a button on his podium. The room lights dimmed as a holographic map of the Inner Sphere burned to life in the center of the semi-circle. It slowly rotated so everyone could get a good look, then it split into smaller representations of itself, with one hovering before each delegation's table. As Victor leaned forward to study the map, fear writhed like a snake through his belly.

Normally the Successor States and the worlds they claimed formed a rough circle of star systems approximately a thousand light years in diameter, with the circle centered on Terra. On this map, however, a huge chunk had been bitten out of the circle, making it a fat crescent with both horns pointing up and away from the chamber floor. Though the ravaged Free Rasalhague Republic lay at the center of the conquered area, bites had also been taken out of both the Lyran sector of the Federated Commonwealth and from the Draconis Combine.

Victor leaned forward toward his father. "I didn't realize the Combine had been hit so hard. They've lost as many worlds as have we."

Hanse pressed his lips together into a thin line. "I daresay, from the expression on Theodore's face, he was not aware that we'd been hard-hit either. Wolf's intelligence network is very good. Things are much worse than any of us dared imagine."

Wolf waved a hand to include all the maps. "As you can see, the situation is most grave. The Free Rasalhague Republic has lost its capital and over half its worlds. The invaders have also made substantial gains in the Lyran Commonwealth and the Draconis Combine. In less than a year, they have managed to take more worlds than changed hands in the Fourth Succession War, and the efforts to stop them have been less than effective.
"My purpose in calling all of you here is to propose that we unite to oppose these invaders. Only a concerted and joint effort can turn back the Clans. Otherwise, we face domination by an implacable foe. Just like the old saying, if the Successor States do not hang together, they will all hang separately."

Romano Liao glanced at her sister as though measuring her neck for a rope, then shook her head and stood. "With all respects to the soldiers - and the sons - of Lords Davion and Kurita, my own sources confirm that victories against the Clans have been very much the exception so far. And I would very much rather that such victories take place before the fighting reaches my own realm."

"Prince Magnusson, if the Federated Commonwealth will grant the transit rights necessary then the Capellan Confederation will sell - and ship - military supplies to you at cost."

Eyes widened around the room, even among those behind the Capellan Chancellor. At the podium, Wolf's expression twitched and almost threatened to lighten for a moment.

"My armed forces are somewhat ill-positioned to aid you, but if you wish to hire mercenaries here on Outreach I will subsidize your doing so. No doubt other measures can be brought to the table at this conference but these I offer you immediately." She turned a sly smile towards the table of the Free Worlds League. "Will the Captain-General offer the same?"

Though Thomas Marik did not rise to speak, he was an imposing figure. Tall and slender, he was severely scarred on the right side of the face and on his right hand, reminders of the burns suffered in the same explosion that assassinated his father. Despite the disfigurement, Marik's strong features and bearing hinted at an inner strength that may have been forged during his internship with ComStar. He wore a purple uniform, but without any rank insignia. Over his graying hair, he wore a short-billed service cap. When he spoke it was not to Romano Liao directly. "I am most impressed by what you have accomplished here on Outreach, Colonel Wolf, and your ability to gather data on the current status of the various states represented here."

The Captain-General pointed to the map glowing in front of him. "This map, for example, is far more complete than the one my intelligence people have been able to assemble, and more complete than any we have stolen from either the Federated Commonwealth or the Draconis Combine." He hesitated briefly as both Hanse Davion and Theodore Kurita nodded a salute to him. "In light of that, and reflecting upon the Dragoons' remarkable career, there is a question I must ask. Do you, Colonel Wolf, believe that it is even possible to stop the invaders?"

Victor read no shock on Wolf's face . Rather, the mercenary reacted as though he'd been waiting all along for someone finally to pose the question. "I can only answer on the basis of my experiences within the Clans, and those days were long ago. My men and I were trained in the Clan school of war and it made us very successful when fighting the forces of the Inner Sphere, but we could never claim to be invincible. The Clans fight according to their concept of warfare, but I believe that the tactics of the Ryuken or Federated Commonwealth Regimental Combat Teams could counteract and defeat those tactics."

Wolf looked again at Marik. "To answer your question more specifically, Captain-General, I do believe we can defeat the Clans. The Combine and the Federated Commonwealth paid a high price for their respective victories, but the fact of victory remains. With training and by devoting our full resources to opposing the Clans, I say we can slow and even stop them."

"Then I shall match Lady Liao's generosity," the Captain-General confirmed with a sidelong look towards his neighbour. "And the same to the Combine, of course," he added with a nod towards Theodore Kurita.




So Romano got out of bed the other side from usual and decides to be the great stateswoman on Outreach.

Where to go with this? Well, the idea of the Capellan Confederation becoming the centre of a naval boom, constructing a fleet of upgraded Du Shi Wang battlecruisers and copies of the Samarkand carrier, exporting both to be the centre of Inner Sphere navies appeals to me.

As does Myndo Waterly pulling her hair out. What's the universe coming to when you can't count on House Liao to cause trouble and disunity?

(and yes, I lifted several passages from Michael Stackpole's trilogy).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 07 December 2013, 11:29:11
That is a very nice tribble!  Wishing that it would continue! :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 07 December 2013, 13:47:37
I see a possible AU story here with the Capellans leading the charge in the counterattack against the Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 07 December 2013, 14:04:15
I see a possible AU story here with the Capellans leading the charge in the counterattack against the Clans.


Alternatively, with a more powerful CapCon allied with the FWL Op Guerrero could be much more devastating to the FedSuns half of the Federated Commonwealth c3057
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 07 December 2013, 14:10:58

Alternatively, with a more powerful CapCon allied with the FWL Op Guerrero could be much more devastating to the FedSuns half of the Federated Commonwealth c3057


But I wonder whether, by then, the FedCom could have negotiated with either Clan Wolf or Ghost Bear to block the Jade Falcons from tearing through defensive lines weakened by pulling forces back to deal with the CapCon/FWL... perhaps also ComGuard forces and a massive mercenary undertaking (I'm looking at you, Wolf's Dragoons... an early iteration of your AMC?)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 17 December 2013, 18:37:17
Tribble #102

In the year 2994, the Goliath Scorpion Clan's ship Coltrane stumbles on a derelict ship adrift in space that was sending out an old radio distress signal, at first thinking that it could be an old Star League jumpship, the captain sends a star of Elemental marines to board the vessel, only to find out that it is not of Star League in origin, nor was it alien in origin since there were humans in what their best scientists onboard could describe as cryo-stasis chambers. With permission from the commanding officer, the elementals awoke one of the people on the ship. The man in question grabbed the med-tech examining him and asked what year it was; after receiving his answer, the man fell right back asleep.

Later as the elementals brought the man aboard the Coltrane, the med-techs were stunned to learn that this man was not your average human and that his muscle strength was equal to that of the average Clan MechWarrior. The commander of the Coltrane then requested that the man be interrogated, but the man suddenly woke and said "That will not be necessary." The crew stared at the man and then introduced himself as Khan Noonien Singh.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 18 December 2013, 01:40:19
Nice take on a alternate AU tribble!  Wonder how fast can he change the Clan Culture!  (Or rule them as IlKhan)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 18 December 2013, 12:15:16
Oh gods, not the Botany Bay scenario
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 19 December 2013, 10:04:08
But just imagine the kind of chaos he can bring to both the Clans and the Inner Sphere.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 23 December 2013, 22:38:55
Tribble 103

For years the Clans had set themselves up as a society with only three of the original twenty Clans fallen by the wayside. Near the dawn of the 31st Century, they now turn to what the Great Father, Aleksandr Kerensky, had promised them and thought of their eventual return to the Inner Sphere. The Ghost Bear Khan at the time, Nadia Winson, declared that they invade the Inner Sphere and reestablish the Star League in the Clans' image. But Kerlin Ward, Khan of the Wolves, said that they should learn the current state of the Inner Sphere before any talks of invasion are finalized, the Grand Council agrees and they send a contingent of Wolf freeborn warriors to the Inner Sphere under the guise of a mercenary company so that they can assess the battle readiness of the Successor States. Five years later, the Dragoons report back with startling news: the Terran Hegemony had been reformed along with the Star League. As it turned out, at least ONE of Richard Cameron's sons escaped the Amaris Coup and almost a decade after Kerensky led his people out of the Inner Sphere did he reclaim the throne on Terra and ended the first Succession War by reforming the Star League with Jerome Blake in charge.

With this news, the Clans are now divided in their beliefs. The fact that someone of the Cameron family line had survived the coup and reclaimed the throne of the Hegemony and rebuilt the Star League without them they no longer have a need to return to the Inner Sphere to build the Star League in their image and the fact that the Inner Sphere was now at a relative peace there was no reason for them to usurp the Successor States. But there are those who say that the Terran Hegemony is a farce and it's time has passed, it was time for a new Star League with their society at the forefront of human achievement. Among these are the Jade Falcons and the Smoke Jaguars, who were very adamant that the Star League being rebuilt was their destiny and no one else's. But the Wolves now believe that it's their time to return to the old ways of the Star League and protect it from domestic and foreign invaders, even if it's among their own people.
Title: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 24 December 2013, 10:06:08
Tribble 103
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Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 24 December 2013, 13:33:19
Anyone care to write the tribble I proposed?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 25 December 2013, 14:59:13
Here is a rough concept for one. Victor decides not to passively just sit there and take it when Kathy runs off with half the FC during the FWL/CC attack. Instead he immediately strips her of her titles and declares her in open rebellion against the FC  and appoints a new ruler to the Sarna March. Next he does exactly what KAthy has done, order all loyal units in Lyran space home and to borrow whatever transport assets are needed to do it, after all if Sis did it it can't be piracy right?  O:-)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 25 December 2013, 22:33:16
A FedCom Civil War at that point makes far more sense then what occurred in the canon texts. I mean unit commanders seemed to have a mind of their own except when it came to the Lyran Secession. No Lyran got overzealous and stirred up a hornet's nest? No FedCom officer took a stand on their own? I can think of a hundred scenarios where people take events into their own hands before Victor can effectively respond to Katherine's little announcement. What I'm saying Victor may have no choice in a Civil War erupting in 3057 after Katrina secedes. Events could easily take on a life of their own.

So when all hell is breaking lose in the Federated Commonwealth what else is going on?
How does ComStar and the Word of Blake react? Do the events of this earlier Civil War impact the Blakist conquest of Earth??
With further chaos engulfing the InnerSphere does the Free Worlds League expand its liberation campaigns targeting other worlds lost during the Succession Wars??
The Capellans likely have their hands full as it is trying to reabsorb the Sarna March but does St. Ives play a larger role in the Civil War??
What of the Draconis Combine?? Do elements try to attack their ancient enemies who have fallen into chaos??
What of the Periphery, is their Taurian, Canopian or other involvement??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 26 December 2013, 04:08:53
Actually I wasn't thinking of immediately going into a civil war, more along the lines of Victor using the returning units to counter attack against the FWL and CC while leaving Aunt Nondi and KAthy with a now stripped Clan border as to say thanks for abandoning me, now lets see how you like it?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 28 December 2013, 09:47:23
I'm fairly confident that that would be civil war time. Someone would start trying to force units to remain on the line.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 28 December 2013, 19:54:59
Exactly. The breakdown in order would and should have come almost immediately.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ammonios on 28 December 2013, 19:56:12
Hello,

This is Ammonios, mostly an observer. I have just finished this section and found it interesting. So, I would like to make a contribution here.

Tribble No. 105 (I think):

Suppose the SLDF simply disappears after its last confirmed sighting in 2784. This means that it or any associated entities do not return, ever. Three assumptions can be made here:

Forces of the Minnesota Tribe do not raid the Periphery border of the Draconis Combine

Wolf's Dragoons does not appear at all

No invasion of the Inner Sphere by the Clans

Let me know if this is plausible and if I need to add some corrections to this. Thank you
 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 28 December 2013, 20:11:07
Hello,

This is Ammonios, mostly an observer. I have just finished this section and found it interesting. So, I would like to make a contribution here.

Tribble No. 105 (I think):

Suppose the SLDF simply disappears after its last confirmed sighting in 2784. This means that it or any associated entities do not return, ever. Three assumptions can be made here:

Forces of the Minnesota Tribe do not raid the Periphery border of the Draconis Combine

Wolf's Dragoons does not appear at all

No invasion of the Inner Sphere by the Clans

Let me know if this is plausible and if I need to add some corrections to this. Thank you
Well if this happens, you need to say where they go and what happens to them. Otherwise there will be the question on how ComStar's Explorer Corps will find them.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ammonios on 29 December 2013, 18:14:15
Thank you for the response.

I do not have all the details about the Comstar expedition except that it come as far as  the Huntress star system.
In this regard, it only finds one new planet capable of supporting human settlement. There are no signs of previous contact.
As for any other star systems in this region, the results are the same.

In this overall scenario, I guess I am interested in how history proceeds in the Inner Sphere under the circumstances described in my first post. If I have overlooked any other details, I would appreciate any further input.

Ammonios
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 30 December 2013, 01:38:44
Hello,

This is Ammonios, mostly an observer. I have just finished this section and found it interesting. So, I would like to make a contribution here.

Tribble No. 105 (I think):

Suppose the SLDF simply disappears after its last confirmed sighting in 2784. This means that it or any associated entities do not return, ever. Three assumptions can be made here:

Forces of the Minnesota Tribe do not raid the Periphery border of the Draconis Combine

Wolf's Dragoons does not appear at all

No invasion of the Inner Sphere by the Clans

Let me know if this is plausible and if I need to add some corrections to this. Thank you

The Minnesota Tribe not raiding has limited direct effects, how much the butterflies play out is pretty much unknowable. An author could spin it out anywhere in the range of the DC achieving supreme victory all the way to the Pesht District collapsing completely under the weight of pirate raids that were never prepared for by the DCMS.

Without Wolf's Dragoons to halfway carry the Capellan March despite Hasek-Dumb and Hasek-Dumber  unaccountably doing their best to lose the territory that provides their power base to scheme, the situation looks a lot uglier for the FS. It's entirely possible that Ian would be forced to stop hammering at the DC while pretty much ignoring that front, it's equally possible that he would do so anyway and either die and leave Hanse a reduced realm with another contender for the throne with far more ammunition to use against him, or even worse that due to butterflies he continues to hang on and wreck the AFFS to no particular gain. In that scenario, whether or not he would actually hear out Katrina's peace proposal would depend upon characterization of him, which would mostly be up to the author to provide beyond 'Ian smash puny Kuritans!'
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 30 December 2013, 17:38:44
Tribble 106

History tells that the Bomb plot to kill Hitler nearly succeeded if it hadn't been moved in the last minute or if the bomb had been more powerful.

It was still unknown how a low level officer managed to get past all the security checkpoints in the Imperial Palace, let alone with a large bomb strapped to his chest. Everyone in the Palace staff had been ruthlessly interrogated with no avail; even under the harshest of methods. No one even knew who the suicide bomber had been even though he had been seen on Palace grounds before.

As General Patrick Scoffins stares at the rubble of what used to be Emperor Stefan Aramis's throne room, he considered the situation he was now in. As Regent of the Empire, as all the current heirs were under age and unable to take the reins, he now had to fight a war that was not of his making and alone in doing it. Not only were Antilos Legos, Lissa Outerbridge, Samir Njari, and Aisling Connor were now dead, but many other members of the Inner Circle as well.

He could now fight the war on his terms and try and preserve the Empire the best way he could.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 30 December 2013, 19:11:39
Interesting, I think the SLDF wins but at a much greater cost.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 31 December 2013, 13:37:11
or he sues for peace and withdraws back to republic
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 12 January 2014, 23:27:36
Tribble 107

As the Combine prepares itself for the coming FedCom Invasion, Myndo Waterly decides to lend Comstar support to the Free Worlds League by secretly helping them build up their Warship fleet using Terra's shipyards. She also helps the League by providing the locations of several Star League Caches within their space containing enough Mechs for three full regiments.

For icing on the cake, Waterly arranges a secret meeting on Terra between Thomas and Theodore and the two come to an accord; when the FedCom made their move, the FWL would do the same.

In 3039, Hanse Davion launches his invasion of the Draconis Combine and his forces are soon bogged down in a far more prepared enemy than what he was lead to believe. With the FedCom distracted, the FWL launches their own invasion into Lyran space with utter surprise and crushes several systems with overwhelming might. Using its newest Naval assets and a arrangement with Romano, a task-force made up of a full regiment crosses Capellan territory to raid several locations in FS territory, further catching the enemy off guard.

 As War of 3039 rages on, Comstar makes contact with the Taurian Concordant to bring them into the war.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 13 January 2014, 06:16:51
More of a 5th Succession War. How about the Free Rasalhague Republic or the St. Ives Compact??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: 331crucislancer on 28 March 2014, 01:32:11
This thread doesn't look quite dead yet....  ;)

Imagine, if you will, a universe where Jonathan Cameron hadn't been.... funny in the head.

Oh, I don't mean an alt-verse where he actually was an unwitting prophet driven mad by the visions he couldn't escape. (Canon already, at times, flirts with that being the case.  "Wolves prowling Terra," indeed.) No, I mean a universe where he was mentally competent to sit as First Lord.  Where he was able to act decisively on the Davion Succession issue and the Marik Civil War.  Where the Space Defense Systems, if built at all, were not (quite) the nightmare-constructs that bedeviled Kerensky's SLDF during the Hegemony campaign. 

Would a sane First Lord Jonathan have bought the League more than a few more decades?

Title: Tribble #108
Post by: misterpants on 29 March 2014, 15:01:19
McKenna's Pride
Dagda Orbit
May 26, 2882

Jerome Winson watched as the last of the Khans took their seats around the circular stations of the CIC center. He noted their faces and body language; a mix of uncertainty, agitation, and numb sadness. He shared in the last emotion the most, if not visibly. His mind wandered back to an hour ago in the converted shrine where Alexander Kerensky, the Great Father, had laid in state alone.

Now, his coffin was joined by two more.

Winson glanced over at Khan Elizabeth Hazen, of the Jade Falcons, her cold features barely masking the the still-simmering anger beneath. Only through the counsel of her command staff did she refrain from slaughtering every last inhabitant of the Black Brian when it was finally taken days earlier. Though no one had openly broached the subject, Winson knew she was ready to come to blows with any who would blame the Falcons for what had happened. If Nicholas had not been forced to come to the aid of the Jade Falcon saKhan...

The thought trailed off as Winson saw Khan Dana Kufahl of the Coyotes take her seat, the last to do so. She had stayed behind in the shrine after the ceremony, staring at Andery's coffin as the other Khans exited to prepare for this Grand Council meeting. Like Khan Hazen, Dana carried heavy emotions under her neutral expression, though it was of grief. Despite all that, Winson knew that mistaking any of her appearance or mental state for weakness would be a costly one.

The room drew to a silence as Jennifer Winson entered and walked solemnly to the center of the room, turning and casting her gaze across the assembly. She technically had no authority to run or address the gathering, but on this occasion no Khan voiced complaint or even surprise, honoring her relationship with fallen ilKhan.

"My Khans," she began, "these last few months have proven a far greater test than the last few years. We have liberated these worlds from ceaseless war and suffering, to bring them back to the light of civilization and prosperity. But we have also sacrificed much. And though we mourn the passing of those who gave everything and beyond, we must move forward, to honor their boundless efforts."

She paused, knowing what would come next, but not what would come of it. That tension was shared with the rest of the room; all knew what lay at stake from this point forth. The future of the Clans. The future of the lost hopes and dreams of the Star League.

"I open nominations for the ilKhan of the Clans."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 29 March 2014, 16:46:53
Oh, I don't mean an alt-verse where he actually was an unwitting prophet driven mad by the visions he couldn't escape. (Canon already, at times, flirts with that being the case.  "Wolves prowling Terra," indeed.) No, I mean a universe where he was mentally competent to sit as First Lord.  Where he was able to act decisively on the Davion Succession issue and the Marik Civil War.  Where the Space Defense Systems, if built at all, were not (quite) the nightmare-constructs that bedeviled Kerensky's SLDF during the Hegemony campaign. 

Would a sane First Lord Jonathan have bought the League more than a few more decades?

I was thinking about that not too long ago. Imagine the SLDF intervening promptly in both conflicts. Kurita would certainly be peeved more so than canon and while Davion is grateful for the aid the Federated Suns never realizes its glaring shortcomings. It is possible that the AFFS without the installation of Prince John's Landwehr system is a total mess. Worse than its 1st Succession War version and when the next crisis comes to pass, yikes!

Meanwhile you pick a Marik and any which one you do guess what people from the Free Worlds League are pissed! A foreign government manipulating our internal affairs!!! How dare they!!!!

Thank god you didn't screw with Steiner or Liao.  ;)

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I have had further evil thoughts! :)) Lets say Jonathon Cameron goes in the opposite direction. Matter of fact the First Lord is talking of visions increasingly that predict the Star League's complete doom. There is hope that the sharks can be defeated but only with the help of two mighty dragons and soaring eagle. The War of Davion Succession and the Marik Civil War are clear signs to the First Lord that the SLDF needs to intervene on behalf of the Kurita-Davions and Oliver Marik.  >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: 331crucislancer on 30 March 2014, 00:43:31
I was thinking about that not too long ago. Imagine the SLDF intervening promptly in both conflicts. Kurita would certainly be peeved more so than canon and while Davion is grateful for the aid the Federated Suns never realizes its glaring shortcomings. It is possible that the AFFS without the installation of Prince John's Landwehr system is a total mess. Worse than its 1st Succession War version and when the next crisis comes to pass, yikes!

Meanwhile you pick a Marik and any which one you do guess what people from the Free Worlds League are pissed! A foreign government manipulating our internal affairs!!! How dare they!!!!

Thank god you didn't screw with Steiner or Liao.  ;)

Too afraid of what I'd catch, thank you very much. *rimshot*

I recall reading in ER: 2750 and LoT1 that it was the lack of Star League intervention in the Marik Civil War that soured the FWL on the League. (I could, of course, be wrong.) If I'm right, however.... damn, there's no pleasing some people!   :P

Sounds like this would probably lead to the FS being tied closer to the League, but the FWL and DC becoming (more) disaffected.  (Of course, the DC has been cooling on the Star League ever since the moment Hehiro's ink dried on the Treaty of Vega.)  Steiner and Liao as wild cards.... the League might not outright break, but might instead become divided into political blocs.

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I have had further evil thoughts! :)) Lets say Jonathon Cameron goes in the opposite direction. Matter of fact the First Lord is talking of visions increasingly that predict the Star League's complete doom. There is hope that the sharks can be defeated but only with the help of two mighty dragons and soaring eagle. The War of Davion Succession and the Marik Civil War are clear signs to the First Lord that the SLDF needs to intervene on behalf of the Kurita-Davions and Oliver Marik.  >:D

Aaaaand the whole thing goes pear-shaped. (Par for the course in BT-Land, but still!) I can only guess at the possible outcomes, but one possibility stands out to me: is there any feasible way for the Kurita-Davions to be enthroned without Luthien pulling the strings?  Maybe a formal foreswearing of any rights of succession to the Coordinator's throne?  (It's the only way I can even begin to think of a compromise solution that, in the best tradition of compromises, satisfies no-one fully, but it's neither fully formed nor bulletproof.)
Title: Re: Tribble #108
Post by: drakensis on 30 March 2014, 06:21:40
"I open nominations for the ilKhan of the Clans."
Interesting thought. How things pan out depend on who is elected as ilKhan of course. If it's one of the hardliners then matters would diverge more slowly than if the new ilKhan accepted the Wolverine's practises as part of the natural diversity that should exist among the Clans - that being the next major crisis and not long in the making.

Aaaaand the whole thing goes pear-shaped. (Par for the course in BT-Land, but still!) I can only guess at the possible outcomes, but one possibility stands out to me: is there any feasible way for the Kurita-Davions to be enthroned without Luthien pulling the strings?  Maybe a formal foreswearing of any rights of succession to the Coordinator's throne?  (It's the only way I can even begin to think of a compromise solution that, in the best tradition of compromises, satisfies no-one fully, but it's neither fully formed nor bulletproof.)
Given that the Kurita-Davions had formally foresworn the Davion throne, such an oath would be looked on with doubt. (It's also a dynastic shenanigan similar to that which formally brought Rasalhague into the Draconis Combine).

While the Kurita-Davions would be at first dependent on the might of the DCMS and the SLDF to keep them enthroned, a generation or two down the way there might have been a degree of assimilation. Under the circumstances, Amaris might try to inflame internal opposition to the Kurita-Davions, spreading the Periphery Uprising to the Federated Suns.

And of course, the tie can cut back the other way if a First Prince decides to sit one of his children on the Coordinator's throne...
Title: Re: Tribble #108
Post by: 331crucislancer on 30 March 2014, 12:47:41
And of course, the tie can cut back the other way if a First Prince decides to sit one of his children on the Coordinator's throne...

Taken to the logical (if highly unlikely conclusion): the Federated Combine!  Its crest is a black dragon curled around a sunburst, clutching a broadsword in its jaws!
And if we wanted to make things even more awkward for everyone involved, place the Coordinator-Prince's capital on Robinson....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 11 April 2014, 01:42:43
Tribble #109

The Smoke Jaguars idealise their totemic beast not for it's ferocity but as an ambush predator. The archetypal Jaguar attack has them drawing the enemy into dense terrain and then popping out from cover, preferably behind the enemy, and trying to take them down in a single salvo.

Needless to say, this could have the strategy at Wolcott backfire terribly on the DCMS but the Jaguars would be impressed and might decide that there is some merit to taking a freebirth as bondsman if they're capable of thinking this much like a Smoke Jaguar.

...and now I'm envisaging the Smoke Jaguars assimilating into the Draconis Combine rather than the Nova Cats, with Star Colonel Hohiro as Co-ordinator.
Title: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 06 May 2014, 19:32:14
Tribble #110: A Tale Of Two Fleets

It is the 24th of August, 2786, and the Exodus Fleet led by General Aleksandr Kerensky arrives in what, in another time-line, would have been known as the Pentagon Worlds. But instead of finding five marginally habitable but uninhabited worlds, they discover that another rag-tag fleet fleeing a distant war has already settled on one of them...

So basically, it's BattleTech meets Nu Battlestar Galactica, with New Caprica located in the Pentagon Worlds. Rather than strait up action, or just a rehashing of Hunted Tribes, I'd be more interested in how having an external threat to protect the Inner Sphere from would change the society that would otherwise have become the Clans we all know.

Would there still have been a Pentagon Civil War?

What would a melding of Star League and Colonial society be like?

Would Aleksandr Kerensky still die of a heart attack 15-years later?

Would Andery Kerensky survive?

Would Nicholas Kerensky still go on to found something like the Clans?

How would their technology evolve?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 08 May 2014, 01:35:41
Tribble #110: A Tale Of Two Fleets

It is the 24th of August, 2786, and the Exodus Fleet led by General Aleksandr Kerensky arrives in what, in another time-line, would have been known as the Pentagon Worlds. But instead of finding five marginally habitable but uninhabited worlds, they discover that another rag-tag fleet fleeing a distant war has already settled on one of them...

So basically, it's BattleTech meets Nu Battlestar Galactica, with New Caprica located in the Pentagon Worlds. Rather than strait up action, or just a rehashing of Hunted Tribes, I'd be more interested in how having an external threat to protect the Inner Sphere from would change the society that would otherwise have become the Clans we all know.

Would there still have been a Pentagon Civil War?
Eh, maybe. One would hope not, but neither faction has a good track record.

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What would a melding of Star League and Colonial society be like?
The RTF's survivors are what, 1% of the Exodus's numbers? Assimilated apart from a few quirks within two generations, with a few communities of holdouts.

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Would Aleksandr Kerensky still die of a heart attack 15-years later?
Depends upon the stresses hitting him, and all the small details of how things play out. He might have one in a week upon learning that a race of genocidal human haters with unstoppable ftl is out there. He might not have one at all, and actually hit that average lifespan that no named character ever seems to in the BT universe.

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Would Andery Kerensky survive?

Would Nicholas Kerensky still go on to found something like the Clans?
Hopefully yes and no respectively. The second depends on whether he really is a megalomaniacal lunatic with a Mongol fetish, as opposed to someone just taking the best options from his limited perspective at each step along the way.


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How would their technology evolve?

Full switch to Colonial Jump Drives just as soon as they can, barring specific unobtainable unobtanium making that impossible. There's quite literally no upside to using KF drives barring finding a moon composed of drive grade germanium.

Construction-wise, Battlestars are ludicrously durable, so Colonial shipbuilding techniques should be the primary foundation for capital ships. BT armor may or may not offer some advantages in that regard, weapons will dpeend on figuring out exactly what damages what best. On the smaller scale, it's BT tech all the way, with the addition of artificial gravity, and probably Jump drives for any fighter of sufficient size.

Fears of the Cylons finding them means that C3 tech and any derivations thereof are probably going to be completely ignored as avenues to develop.


In a universe not named Battletech, hopefully the Exodus fleet gets its self together in short order, and returns with an unassailable strategic and tactical mobility advantage to take the reins of C* and Terra, and force the House Lords to settle down, so as to prepare humanity for a possible Cylon onslaught.

In the canon universe as changed by this adjustment, it probably all ends in tears and/or nuclear fireballs.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 11 May 2014, 07:15:01
Small Fuzzy creature 111

What if Com-Star had a more...complex relationship with the Successor States?  What if ROM couldn't weed out infiltrators because some days it seemed like EVERYONE was an infiltrator, spinning their own angle, and the organization's claims of neutrality were little more than a tissue to contain the lies?  What if baskets of C-bills accompanied the nominations of new candidates for the position of Primus to buy off the members of the First Circle?

So basically, this comes to it's logical climax in 3030 with the first New Avalon Primus, just as the Papacy once moved from Rome to Avignon.  So sad about what happened to Myndo, but it just goes to show that even Terra isn't safe these days, when a Primus can't last more than 8 months on the throne...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 15 May 2014, 04:18:55
I have not read through all of these, so here is hoping no else has tried this one yet.

Tribble #112

Following his defeat of Jade Falcon forces on Morges, Phelan Kell disobeys Ulric's orders and turns his forces to Wotan.  Defeating the Jade Falcons, Phelan wins the Refusal War and Clan Jade Falcon is absorbed by Clan Wolf.  Moving quickly, Phelan strips the Falcon OZ of material and troops to defend the Wolf OZ, leaving the Steel Vipers to scramble to take what they can, following an agreement with Khan Kell to take over the large parts of the Falcon LZ.  Only a few choice systems along the Wolf OZ border are held by Kell, who tips off the AFFC to his withdrawal, tying the Vipers up for some time.

The Vipers take many worlds, but cannot regain all and the FedCom retakes some worlds.  In the Homeworlds, Clan Wolf begins moving Falcon industry to the Inner Sphere, leaving gutted enclaves for the other Clans to bicker over, whilst the expanded Wolf Homeworld Touman is more than what is required to defend Wolf holdings there.

By 3062, a revitalized and more powerful Wolf Clan, albeit with an interesting Warden/Crusader split, sits preeminent within the Clans, again controlling the Grand Council by weight of its prestige and power.  The absorbed Falcons, though not fitting in seamlessly, are able to integrate well, partly due to now being part of the direct Kerensky legacy and also being part of the most powerful Clan.

However, Clan Wolf now has an even larger target painted on it.  The Inner Sphere fears it. Clan Steel Viper feels cheated for the ongoing brush war they now face and the other invaders are leery of Wolf plans and strength.  The Homeworld Crusaders despise the Wolves for their success and the Wardens grow mistrustful over the Falcon influence now in the heart of the Wolf. Though he may have brought them victory, Khan Kell may have dammed the Wolves.

I would see the Wolf Touman in 3062 as follows:

(Touman is based on FM: Crusader and Warden Clans, with numerous units demoted to SL status to balance the Touman).

Khan: Phelan Kell
saKhan: Marthe Pryde (I just had to, imagine those two together as Khans, especially if she offed Vlad in getting there)
Frontline Clusters: 35 (7 Galaxies - 5 Inner Sphere, 2 Homeworld)
Second Line Clusters: 45 (9 Galaxies - 5 Inner Sphere, 3 Homeworld, 1 Exodus Road)
WarShips: 42 (2x4 ship Stars in Homeworlds, 1 4 ship Star on Exodus Road, 6x5 ship Stars in the Inner Sphere)
Clan Homeworld Holdings:  Unchanged (all former Falcon worlds stripped of military industry and let go to other Clans)
Inner Sphere Worlds: 100

Though powerful, with more Frontline Clusters than some Clans have as their Cluster total and a war fleet that will freak the Ravens out, the Wolves are in a terrible position.  Yes they have strength, but they are trying to integrate the Falcons, finish a major infrastructure move and have alienated many former friends or Clans that were technically neutral towards them, despite their preeminent position in the Grand Council.  The decade to 3072 would be one of grave peril for the Wolves.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 26 May 2014, 00:57:19
TRIBBLE #113

Now, I don't have time to write this, but I've always thought that Ulric's trial and the aftermath was . . . sorry, it was just so forced.  And it made no sense.  Showing here.

Grand Council Chamber
Tamar, Clan Wolf Occupation Zone
August 8, 3057


Vandervahn Chistu, saKhan of Clan Jade Falcon kept his face free of all expression as the final holographic image of the Khans and saKhans who remained in the Homeworlds flickered into being.  He stood, and ignoring the ilKhan, Ulric Kerensky, who was on trial here today, he began to open his mouth to speak.

And was interrupted before he could utter a single word.

"With your permission, ilKhan Kerensky, I would request leave to address the Grand Council." a tenor voice broke the silence.  That voice came from the saKhan of Clan Goliath Scorpion, one of the few physically present on Tamar this day.

Chistu snarled and his head snapped around.  But, once again, just before he uttered even a single syllable, he was stopped.

"Permission granted, saKhan Elam," an amused Ulric answered, seeing the consternation in the face of his soon-to-be accuser.

The former Crusader, his head shaved and covered with the tattoo of a black carapaced Scorpion with a blazing golden sun held between its claws, stood and nodded politely to the ilKhan.

Chistu sat . . . for Ulric still, at this moment, remained ilKhan.

"Thank you, ilKhan Kerensky," Elam answered in a quiet voice.  He gathered himself and then he drew in a deep breath and smiled.  "As have all of us who are present this day, either in the flesh or via HPG links, I am well aware of the reasons for this Conclave to be gathered."

"The Falcon," he said as he pointed towards Chistu, "will shortly be delivering to the Khans a list of formal charges . . . charges that Ulric Kerensky has engineered the Genocide of three generations of Clan Warriors by accepting the Truce of Tukayyid."

Nelson paused, and he shook his head.  "But I am confused, and would wish for some clarification before the formal charges are levied against the ilKhan."

"Confused?" asked Elias Crichell, the Khan of Clan Jade Falcon.  "Has the Scorpion saKhan partook of necrosia before this session was called to order?"

Chuckles, grim, perhaps, but laughter all the same, rang across the hall and Nelson grinned.

"Neg, Khan Crichell.  My mind is clear, my veins of free of intoxicants; yet, I am confused nonetheless."

"If the Scorpion would sit down and allow us to continue," Lincoln Osis, Khan of Clan Smoke Jaguar, snapped, "perhaps his confusion would be removed."

"Perhaps," answered Nelson.  "But perhaps we, the leaders of the Clans of Kerensky, can remove that confusion through other means, Khan Osis.  You intend to charge, formally charge, ilKhan Ulric Kerensky here today with Genocide, quiaff?"

"Aff, you mindless Scorpion!" barked Chistu in exasperation.

"And only the ilKhan will be so charged?"

"AFF!"

"See, this is the source of my confusion, saKhan Chistu . . . where are the indictments for Khans Osis, Crichell, Jorgensson, Zalman, and Leroux?"

"WHAT?!?" a dozen voices exclaimed, and on his throne on the elevated dais, Ulric Kerensky began to laugh, then he frowned and sighed, shaking his head.

Nearly three dozen voices began shouting, only Nelson and Ulric remaining quiet, and the shouting continued until the ilKhan raised his hand and stood . . . slowly, the cacophony became still.

"Explain," he ordered.

Nelson bowed.  "As the ilKhan commands . . . may I have leave to project an image?"

"Continue."

And the Scorpion bowed again.  "Trothkin, the 'northern' half of the Inner Sphere, to include our Occupation Zones," he stated as the image sprang into existence.  A single red line bisected the map from right to left and strobed as Nelson pointed at it.  "The Truce Line agreed upon by the ilKhan and the Precentor-Martial after Focht defeated us at Tukayyid," he said quietly.

And there was a stirring and a rustling in the chamber as several Khans shifted in their seats; neither lightly nor often was the subject of their defeat raised.

"You claim that Ulric is guilty of Genocide against our Warriors because of the Truce Line, quiaff?"

"Aff, and if you would allow us to pro-," Elias Crichell began.

"Because with the Truce Line in place, our Warriors . . . excuse me, YOUR Warriors are prohibited from true combat; instead they see only Trials against other Clans and the occasional raid by Inner Sphere forces, quiaff?"

"Aff," Lincoln growled.  "You had best make your point, or I will tear out your heart with my bare hands."

Nelson snorted in derision and he waved his hand at the map image floating in the center of the room.  "This is what I fail to comprehend, my Khans.  All of this space," and the Lyran Commonwealth 'north' of the truce line flashed.  "And this space," the Draconis Combine followed suit.  "The Truce does not prevent any of the Invaders from attacking in these areas, areas that combined represent three times the worlds which they already hold!"

Nelson paused.  "Did the Federated Commonwealth and the Draconis Combine withdraw ALL of their Warriors below the Truce Line and you are simply unable to find worthy opponents . . . or are each of you just as guilty, or not, as Ulric Kerensky?"

Outraged sputters arose from the Jaguars and Falcons, the Bears, Vipers, and Nova Cats, and Natasha Kerensky began to laugh even as Phelan Ward buried his face in his hands.

"No," Nelson answered himself as he continued.  "These regions are not devoid of opponents, or of challenges.  But perhaps these challenges are simply too much for the Invaders; too risky for them to attempt . . . after all, the Federated Commonwealth took Barcelona from the Jade Falcons five years ago, two years after the Falcons seized that world in Wave I of Revival . . . and today the Federated Commonwealth still holds that world.  Are the Jade Falcons afraid of a hard fight, quiaff?"

"You miserable damned surat!" Chistu barked as he jumped to his feet.

"My Khans, perhaps today is not the day to levy accusations of Genocide . . . unless we are to consider five more accused.  Perhaps, if the Invading Clans are too cowardly and too weak," shouts of outrage and fury rose from the assembled Khans, "to turn their Warriors towards targets and objectives worthy of a 'true' Warrior, perhaps the time has come for those of us who remain behind to hold this vote again.  Perhaps the time has come for Blood Spirit and Burrock, for Ice Hellion and Horse, for Adder and Cobra, for Coyote and Mandrill, for Scorpion, Raven, and Shark to come forward and strike at the Inner Sphere Warriors who grow in strength daily and threaten our Invasion with a counter-attack which they may launch at any time.  Perhaps the time has come for all of the Clans of Kerensky to return home."

Ulric winced and Phelan looked sick . . . even as the faces of the Homeworlds Khans lit up in hunger.

Nelson nodded decisively.  "I yield the floor, ilKhan; I have said what I needed to say this day," and then the Scorpion sat.

And the Grand Council erupted in a thunder of shouts.


Now, as I said, I don't have time to write this as it deserves.  So, if anyone wants to pick up on the idea (perhaps with a different Clan, or you can use the Scorps, I don't care), knock yourself out.

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 26 May 2014, 04:47:58
 [applause] [rockon] [notworthy] [brew]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 26 May 2014, 05:41:56
  For a Scorpion, Elam did a pretty fine job of putting the cat amongst the pigeons.  :o  That looks set to get really interesting really quick, master arminas, and I hope someone decides to run with it.

  For my own part, here’s one I’ve been playing with as part of the future development of my Virginia War AU.   It might make a good departure-point for an AU in its own right, or not.


Tribble #0114:



Paradise Hotel, Coloane City
Lee, Capellan Confederation
January 7, 2829


  First Prince Paul Davion takes a deep sip of his coffee, using the pause to consider the woman across the table from him.  He’s been her guest for the last five days, discussing the possibility of a lasting peace between the Confederation and the Federated Suns, and he can’t shake the thought that if the two of them had met under different circumstances, ‘international relations’ might have taken an entirely different meaning.  For all her youth, Laurelli Liao is a highly intelligent and learned woman, and while she’s not a ravishing beauty, she is attractive and lively.

  Perhaps it’s regret for that lost possibility that drives him to unaccustomed bluntness.  “Laurelli, for all our best intentions, I can’t see your realm and mine not going to war again within the next fifty years.  There’s just too much built-up resentment and too many centuries of accumulated grudges.  No matter what kind of treaty we sign here, sooner or later someone’s going to jump the line to ‘settle the score’ for something — probably something that happened before the rise of the Star League — and it’ll all start over again.”

  Recognising preliminaries when she hears them, the Chancellor cocks her head.  “Then what are you suggesting, Paul?”

—   *   —   *   —   *   —

Quote from: Interstellar News Network, January 8, 2829
LIAO, DAVION RENOUNCE CLAIMS TO STAR LEAGUE THRONE
(January 8, 2829.)
Lee, Capellan Confederation [INN]
  Six days of intense diplomatic negotiations between the Capellan Confederation and the Federated Suns ended today with an historic joint statement that has rocked the very foundations of Inner Sphere politics.  Speaking from the Paradise Hotel on Lee, both Capellan Chancellor Laurelli Liao and Federated First Prince Paul Davion forever renounced any and all claim to the First Lordship of the Star League by themselves, any of their heirs or descendants, or indeed any current or future member of their respective dynasties.
  “It is the view of our respective governments that the first step towards ending the fighting between the Great Houses of the Inner Sphere is for all of us to stop lying to ourselves about why we’re fighting,” the Chancellor said.  “While those self-delusions persist, the goals of any war we fight will always be obscured and unachievable.  If we’re ever going to have a lasting peace, those lies are an insurmountable obstacle.”
  Taking his turn at the microphones, Prince Davion added, “I’m going to say something none of my predecessors had the courage to admit: the Star League is dead.  It died with Richard Cameron, and Kerensky’s Exodus buried the corpse.  Any claim to be First Lord of the Star League, by any state ruler in the Inner Sphere, is completely meaningless, because the Star League has not existed in sixty years.  Trying to rebuild the Star League would be like trying to make a live hen by waving your hand over a bucket of fried chicken drumsticks.
  “Forswearing pointless pretensions to an empty title may not ensure a lasting peace between any two nations of the Inner Sphere, but Chancellor Liao and I agree that everything else we’ve done since the Exodus hasn’t achieved that end, so it’s worth trying a new approach.  And we call upon Archon Marcus Steiner, Coordinator Jinjiro Kurita, and Captain-General Charles Marik to show the same moral courage and follow suit.”
  [-> more]

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  Okay, it’s mostly symbolic, but in diplomacy and politics, symbols MATTER.  I can’t see Jinjiro following their lead, because he’s a hair this side of psychotic on his good days, but what, if anything, does this achieve?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 26 May 2014, 09:20:16
I like it, Trace.

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 26 May 2014, 11:46:40
Tribble #113   Wow!  Yay!  ;D  Now that really would have ruined the Crusader's plan and the plans of IlKhan Kerensky regarding that trial!  I hope someone does run with it!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 26 May 2014, 12:47:02
And trace talk about srewing  comstars goal of keeping them fighting and getting a dark age again...wow.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 27 May 2014, 08:52:00
...what the heck makes you say that?  Man, it doesn't even accomplish the goals of clamping down on brushfire conflicts and feuds along their mutual border, does it?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 27 May 2014, 11:18:17
Oh my gods thats brilliant, I love it! O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 27 May 2014, 20:18:27
...what the heck makes you say that?  Man, it doesn't even accomplish the goals of clamping down on brushfire conflicts and feuds along their mutual border, does it?
  No, but remember your von Clausewitz: “War is the continuation of politics by other means.”
 
  The House Lords’ claims to the Star League throne are their primary pretexts for launching the various Succession Wars against each other. Removing that pretext strips a layer of legitimacy from their rationalisations for fighting each other — and yanks one of the key support-pillars from under the delusion of a ‘winnable’ Succession War. If the House Lords have to stop and look at why they’re fighting their wars, namely for the sake of centuries-old enmities and rivalries and good old-fashioned imperialistic ambition and greed, they might just take a step back and say “Wait. As a national leader, my first duty is to serve the interests of my people. Does this war I’m planning do anything towards that, or am I about to pay blood and treasure simply for my own aggrandisement?”
 
  Does it make them stop fighting completely? No; the old grudges and enmities just run too deep for that. But if they stop kidding themselves about why they’re fighting, they can realise why they are fighting and what they’re fighting for. Instead of fighting for something they can never achieve, they can set realistic goals for their next war — which will do a lot towards limiting the damage.
  Remember, this conference is time-stamped just before the start of the Second Succession War — which was the war when the body-counts and damage-bills really got out of hand, when the technological/societal backslide towards neo-barbarism really got started, when the word ‘lostech’ was first invented. If the 2SW is fought for self-honest reasons and realistic goals, instead of to completely exterminate the other side’s ability to fight back, how much less bad will that devastation get, compared to canon?
  [answer cross-posted from SpaceBattles.com]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 29 May 2014, 14:59:26
#115

In 2784 Kerensky's Exodus fleet departed never to be seen again... due to a mis-jump that deposited them not far from Canopus IV in 2240!

Beyond space known to Terra and with the Outer Reaches Rebellion over and done with, Kerensky concludes it's not feasible to save the Terran Alliance but he can build up a new Terran ally here to arrange an eventual ally once the Terran Hegemony forms. (Along with sending task forces to ensure the seeds of the Rim Worlds Republic and Taurian Concordat never get sown in 2250 and 2253 respectively).

By Aleksandr Kerensky's death the 'Star League' has spread across what would one day have been the Magistracy of Canopus. It would fall to his successors to fight the first Andurien War for possession of that key world and to establish a loose hegemony over the multi-world polities emerging from Basantapur, St Ives and Sian. It's thus inevitable that a hundred years after it's foundation the Star League will play a role in the Capellan Commonality's crisis in the 2360s.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 01 June 2014, 08:50:37
Tribble #116 - It's all about the Homeworld.

High Orbit over Apollo
SLDF Flagship - McKennas Pride


"Attention all hands, massive jump disturbance detected. All hands to battle stations, this is not a drive, I repeat . . . ."

General Kerensky sipped from a half-sphere of english tea, muttering under his breath about the lack of a decent replacement for his favourite russian blend, and bemoaning the fact that SLDF Admiral Joan Brandt has recently perished aboard her flagship leaving the SLDF bereft of its highest ranking and most capable fleet commander.

The ships captain floated onto the flag deck calling for a sitrep.

"Ma'am, incoming KF jump signature detected. Significantly larger than usual, it has already gone past the upper limit for a fully loading Potemkin and is heading into uncharted territory. I suspect a misjump on someones part".

"Maintain actions stations, best have the SAR groups on standby just in case".

"Ma'am".

Thirty minutes later a vessel emerges from hyperspace. Massive beyond any comprehension of the SLDF fleet personnel are startled as the vessel begins to transmit on all frequencies.

"This is Admiral Ignacio Blake aboard SLDF Mothership Hiigara. Please inform the General that Fleet Command is online."



The reign of every Cameron since Michael has been marked with significant technological achievement and the advance of the human race with the only real limits on the spread and prosperity of humanity being the willingness to cooperate and the limitations of the Kearny Fuchida drive.

Late in the reign of Simon Cameron, the first significant advance in KF technology since the advent of the lithium fusion battery occurs at the Titan shipyards, allowing for a significant increase in the size of vessels. A single modular experimental vessel is created as a mobile manufacturing hub for the SLDF as an advanced technology test bed, with completion occurring just prior to the Amaris Coup.

Amaris of course seeks to capture the vessel as part of his coup and refit it as a weapon for the defense of the Amaris Empire, however he is thwarted by SLDF aerospace fighters and the vessels own point defense which disable numerous Amaris shuttles seeking to board. Taking advantage, a significant number of dockworkers, SLDF personnel and Belters board the vessel and escape fleeing into hyperspace.

The mad emperor Amaris orders pursuit of the vessel, as the vessel heads to rendezvous with General Kerensky.



Was going to use Karan Sjet, but hey if the SLDF already has a Fleet Command . . .
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 01 June 2014, 09:44:07
Tribble #117 - Decisions, Decisions (or possibly why Hanse had his heart attack)

Sometime during 3045
Office of the First Prince
Castle Davion
New Avalon


Hanse held his head in his hands as he considered the future. The Inner Sphere was relatively peaceful, and though he was still less than the standard retirement age in the Federated Suns, he knew that someday he would either pass on, or retire. Ardan Sortek had put a case of glengarry reserve on the second in one of his more morbid moments.

The problem with being a Successor Lord and contemplating the future was that his thoughts inevitably turned to heirs, and Hanse just wasn't sure who was the best person for the job.

Victor had said, repeatedly, every three, minutes, for the last five years, that he wanted to join the military. This was the traditional starting point for many a First Prince and a requirement for the office, but something about Victor . . . Notably the way he insisted on throwing his security team at every opportunity, or trying to pull off harebrained stunts with the rest of his preparatory school friends, or skipping out on his responsibilities.

Hanse honestly reckoned there were days when his eldest son should go and join the circus given how offer Victor escaped his responsibilities being an escape artist in a circus decent fit for his son. Of course he'd probably have better luck as dwarf, but Hanse wasn't going to admit that out loud. Hanse wasn't that cruel . . . to his own kids . . . in public anyway.

Katherine presented a different problem, the girl seemed to think she was the greatest thing since sliced bread. Okay as a father, Hanse could understand that, but that level of ego wasn't acceptable in a national leader. Katherine also indicated she would either work in politics or fashion, neither of which fulfilled the legal requirements for the office of First Prince. Okay they did fit the requirements to be Archon, but Hanse hadn't gone to all that trouble to unite two nations to have his kids split it up between them.

Peter was currently dreaming of playing in the Federated Suns Football League (American Football), and had taken too many hits to his head to the point that he wasn't very consistent. Hanse reckoned that he'd probably end up switching careers every five years as new interests came along. It also didn't help that time that Hanse had dropped the kid on his head as a toddler.

Little six year old Yvonne at the moment wanted to be a labrador when she grew up. Because everyone loves animals. The girl would probably grow up to be a veterinarian. Kind hearted but with difficulty making tough decisions, that was how Hanse saw her. Particularly given how difficult she found the decision between chocolate and strawberry.

Hanse reached for a bottle of whiskey and poured himself a glass, refraining from the desire to beat his head against the desk.

Arthur was far too young to be seriously considering the future. Little tyke seemed to idolize firemen and construction workers from what he watched on the trivid. Well if he went into construction when he was older he would at least be doing better than the majority of the Davion and Steiner families who specialized in deconstruction and demolition.

Moving further afield didn't help much.

Ryan Steiner was a snake in the grass no matter how you saw it.

Jackson Davion needed strict instructions from a higher authority on how to put his shoes on in the morning, which was reasonable from the military minded perspective, but didn't work at the highest levels.

Morgan wanted nothing to do with the job. Hanse didn't blame him.

Hanse thought for a moment.

Perhaps Jaime Wolf wanted a career change. No wait that wouldn't work, Jaime was older than Hanse. Morgan Kell was the same.

When did it become so difficult to find a successor.

A thought struck Hanse as he considered.

Would anyone notice if he put a wanted ad in the job classifieds?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 01 June 2014, 16:55:51
...can't ...stop ...laughing
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Taron Storm on 01 June 2014, 18:39:50
 [applause]  ;D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 01 June 2014, 19:04:51
Nice one Swords. ;D O0
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 01 June 2014, 19:26:00
To be honest I was debating whether or not to include:

'Maybe Takashi would let him have Theodore'.
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Post by: serack on 01 June 2014, 21:02:15
 O0 ;D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 01 June 2014, 21:55:05
Oh sweet goddess it hurts. I actually facepalmed on that one
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 02 June 2014, 14:49:24
I like the idea of the previous three Tribbles. I can just imagine the chaos to come from all of them.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 17 June 2014, 10:25:10
Tribble 118

As Kerensky's people depart the Inner Sphere and the First Succession War begins, an army waited in the darkness of space to strike. When the Second Succession War ended, they struck. All over the Inner Sphere, word of these invaders began to spread like wildfire; they gave no quarter and asked for none. When planetary governors surrendered, the invaders' armies marched through their cities in triumphant and executed the planetary government members. Eventually, the leaders of the Successor States knew the folly in continuing to fight amongst one another and banded their armies to face this new enemy. The war against this enemy waged on to the early 31st Century just as the Dragoons made their first appearance in the Inner Sphere.

When Jaime Wolf's Dragoons arrived in the Inner Sphere, they were stunned to learn that an extra-terrestrial enemy had invaded the Inner Sphere and almost brought the Successor States to their knees had it not been for the fact that the Inner Sphere reunited under a new Star League banner. After their first 5 year contract, they contacted the Clan homeworlds of the situation and brought the Great Debate to an immediate halt. Talks of returning to the Inner Sphere as invaders were no longer necessary as this new foe had done the job the Clans themselves wanted to do, but now they feel that it is their duty to return to the Inner Sphere as Liberators instead of Conquerors.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 17 June 2014, 13:48:48
ooo... i  like trebble 118 a LOT!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 17 June 2014, 18:25:28
Tribble 119

Conrad Toyama overstepped his bounds when he declared interdiction on the Free World's League and the ComStar war began.  Increasingly battered and bruised, the Free Worlds League forces now unite for one last offensive against those who have wronged them.

If Toyama thought that interdiction would protect him, he was sorely mistaken.  Because in January of 2838, Garth Marrik comes to Terra with an Ultimatum-Restore service to the FWL and admit fault, or suffer the sack of Terra.

And he has an enough troops to back it up.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 17 June 2014, 18:31:17
Tribble 118 and 119 are very interesting.  They both can be nice short stories!   :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 17 June 2014, 19:10:15
Tribble 119

Conrad Toyama overstepped his bounds when he declared interdiction on the Free World's League and the ComStar war began.  Increasingly battered and bruised, the Free Worlds League forces now unite for one last offensive against those who have wronged them.

If Toyama thought that interdiction would protect him, he was sorely mistaken.  Because in January of 2838, Garth Marrik comes to Terra with an Ultimatum-Restore service to the FWL and admit fault, or suffer the sack of Terra.

And he has an enough troops to back it up.

But does he have the warships to back up the troops?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 17 June 2014, 20:00:49
I don't think ComStar has any warships available right now to swing into action on a moment's notice-and if they do, it will be News that I don't think they can stop.

But it couldn't hurt to bring one along to help with the strong-arm tactics.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 June 2014, 01:19:28
Tribble 120

While Kerensky fought to overthrow Amaris, agents of the Periphery states used the cover of the war to recover the industrial secrets needed to maintain their own fusion plants, water purifiers and HPGs.

When Kerensky fled towards the galactic core and the Great Houses waged the First Succession War, the Periphery states sat back, welcomed refugees from the slaughter and rebuilt their economies, their armies... and their warship fleets.

When the Second Succession War reached its peak the Taurians, Canopians and Outworlders knew their time had come. Carefully timed offensives brought worlds back into their rule that were lost in the Reunification War. House Lords worried about facing war on three fronts accepted treaties that restored the pre-Star League borders with the periphery in exchange for technical data to prevent loss of world dependent on Star League technology. They start the long process of rebuilding their own fleets and duplicating Star League technologies lost in the wars... which runs directly into Operation Holy Shroud.

ComStar, learning that the 'barbarians' have HPGs, go into a panic and seek to unite the Inner Sphere against the menace of a technologically advanced periphery that could come to dominate human space; but Raymond Karpov is no Ian Cameron...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 26 June 2014, 23:58:38
Tribble #121

Clan Jade Falcon Headquarters
Ironhold City, Ironhold
Clan Homeworlds
June 6, 3044


Khan Yvonne Hazen snarled and slammed her fist upon down upon the surface of the polished table; although not unexpected, all of her front-line Galaxy Commanders (summoned home in person for this briefing) flinched.

Only the saKhan of the Clan was not present . . . because Elias Crichell was dead.  And the Turkina Keshik which he led had been shamed and dishonored.

"You have all seen the battle-ROMs, trothkin.  The damned frost rats showed a disregard for zellbrigen when they fought saKhan Crichell.  Khan Tyler has begged of me sukairede, insisting that his Warriors did not deliberately target the cockpit of our saKhan.  But multiple Hellions did fire upon him . . . that we are certain of."

She paused and stood tall and shook her head.  "It is time to put an end to this dezgra Clan once and for all.  We shall attack them and destroy them."

Timur Malthus, commanding officer of Vau Galaxy frowned.  "Has the Grand Council authorized an Absorption?  Or an Annihilation?"

"Neg," Yvonne answered in a tight voice.  "They will not and we will not seek any such vote."

"Then how . . .?" another began to ask.

"We will attack the Hellions one enclave at a time . . . bidding in a Trial of Possession for their defending Warriors and equipment.  Take them as abtakha and isorla, weeding out the weak and unworthy and adding the remainder to our strength.  We will not cease in this task, trothkin.  We will continue until the Hellions no longer exist . . .," and she smiled.  It was a cold, cold smile.  "Or until they are too weak for even the Wardens on the Grand Council to argue against an 'official' Trial of Absorption."

There was silence and then one-by-one the Falcons around the table nodded their agreement.

"Will we begin our attacks on Marshall?" asked the youngest of her Galaxy Commanders.  "The Hellion defenses there are woefully ill-prepared for an attack in force."

"Neg, Galaxy Commander Hoyt.  We are JADE FALCON!" Yvonne barked as she activated the remote control and a holographic image sprang into being over the table.

There was a sudden intake of breath as every man and woman present recognized the world and then they began to bare their teeth in recognition of their Khan's audacity.

"Hector, my Galaxy Commanders.  We will strike them at their heart . . . and tear it from them with our own bloody Talons!"

*******************************

Although taken aback by the sudden Falcon attack on Hector (which killed Tyler, his saKhan, and the Clan's Loremaster) many Khans initially regarded it as only another Trial . . . although one far more bloody than was traditionally fought.  But despite the damage inflicted on them by the Hellion defenders, Clan Jade Falcon continued to press the attacks, sweeping up Hellion assets (and Warriors) across the Kerensky Cluster and the Pentagon.

Slowly, the realization dawned that by the end of the year, the Falcons would have gained a massive advantage . . . and their leaders were not only the ones.

Emulating their example, Clan Smoke Jaguar struck at the heart of the Snow Raven capital on Lum in late August; their suprise jump into a pirate point orbiting the world left the Raven Fleet little time to attempt to intervene . . . and when the smoke on the ground had cleared, the heavy- and assault-weight Jaguar Clusters stood victorious.

This was followed soon after by a Star Adder assault upon the Cloud Cobras . . . and a combined Blood Spirit, Hell's Horses, and Coyote strike against differing Fire Mandrill Kindraa.

By 3045, Ulric Kerensky of Clan Wolf began to ponder the titanic shifts in power happening in the Clans . . . and he approached Khan Nikolai Djerassi of Clan Goliath Scorpion with a proposal.  A merger of the two Clans, which would allow both Wolf and Scorpion to maintain their strength.  The alternative being the de facto Absorption of the Scorpions by the far stronger Wolves.

Somewhat to Kerensky's surprise, Djerassi agreed.

The announcement of the bloodless Absorption of the Scorpions by Clan Wolf (and the addition of twenty-four additional Clusters of warriors to their Touman) rocked the already fragile Clans, sending the remainder into a frenzy.

The Steel Vipers struck Clan Diamond Shark . . . but the merchants were prepared and after three months of bitter battles the Vipers were no more.

The Burrocks and Nova Cats fought fiercely against each other, but in December, the Ghost Bears suddenly emerged from their dens to assault the two weakened Clans simultaneously.  Although both the Cats and the Burrocks fought well, in the end it was the Bears who triumphed.

By November of 3047, the orgy of violence was at an end.  And nine Clans remained:  Blood Spirit, Coyote, Diamond Shark, Ghost Bear, Hell's Horses, Jade Falcon, Smoke Jaguar, Star Adder, and Wolf.  Despite the damage wrought, all of these Clans had managed to take more abtakha and isorla AND resources than they had lost.  Enough to expand their strength far beyond what it had been prior to the Wars of Absorption.

So, as they paused to lick their wounds and integrate the captured Warriors and equipment into their battered Toumans, the survivors warily eyed other, looking for a weakness in the other Clans to exploit . . . while shoring up their own defenses. 

Then, in 3048, the Outbound Light arrives over Huntress.  And the REAL fun begins.

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 June 2014, 09:11:26
To quote an old cartoon, "Ohh there's bad news tonight!"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 27 June 2014, 10:38:44
And of the Clans that survive, the Wolves are the strongest, because they lost the least amount of personnel on both sides (read: none).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 27 June 2014, 15:01:10
Yes but they didn't gain combat experience like the other Clans did. Now did the Clans do too much damage where they have to wait to invade or do they go right for the throat and do the Invaders get attacked by the Homeworld Clans??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 June 2014, 17:41:44
Tribble 122

We all know the story of how Kerensky fled the Inner Sphere to prevent the Star League forces from being used in the Succession Wars; but what if someone from the Successor States decided to follow their path? In other words, what if the Successor States sent spies to the Kerensky Cluster and Pentagon Worlds and kept track of the progress of the Clans? From the formation of the Clans, to Operation Klondike, to the Annihilation of Clan Wolverine, spies from the Inner Sphere kept the Successor States appraised of the situation with the Clans up until the mid-Golden Century and all contact was lost.

Almost a hundred years later, the descendants of these spies manage to re-establish contact with the Inner Sphere and warned them of the coming of the Clans. The Clans won't know what hit them before it's too late.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 29 June 2014, 16:51:59
By November of 3047, the orgy of violence was at an end.  And nine Clans remained:  Blood Spirit, Coyote, Diamond Shark, Ghost Bear, Hell's Horses, Jade Falcon, Smoke Jaguar, Star Adder, and Wolf.  Despite the damage wrought, all of these Clans had managed to take more abtakha and isorla AND resources than they had lost.  Enough to expand their strength far beyond what it had been prior to the Wars of Absorption.

I'll be honest, this sounds off on two counts.

First, there is no way the Jaguars are going to be able to survive this because attacking the Ravens is basically guaranteed to bring the Bears down on them due to the close ties between the Bears and Ravens.  It is possible that the Ravens will be messed up enough to voluntarily merge with the Bears after the fact, but the Jaguars are going to get torn to shreds by the Bear ground forces and the Raven WarShips which can and will provide orbital fire support under the circumstances.

Second, I do not see this being clean enough to allow an increase in resources outside the Wolves/Scorpions and maybe the Bears/Ravens depending on how the fight with the Jaguars go.  The situation is messy enough that Zel is going to go out the window fast, and losses will pile up so everyone is well behind where they started in terms of standing forces.  They will probably still have more factories and the like so they can rebuild effectively, but that is not going to be an overnight process.

Tribble 122

We all know the story of how Kerensky fled the Inner Sphere to prevent the Star League forces from being used in the Succession Wars; but what if someone from the Successor States decided to follow their path? In other words, what if the Successor States sent spies to the Kerensky Cluster and Pentagon Worlds and kept track of the progress of the Clans? From the formation of the Clans, to Operation Klondike, to the Annihilation of Clan Wolverine, spies from the Inner Sphere kept the Successor States appraised of the situation with the Clans up until the mid-Golden Century and all contact was lost.

Almost a hundred years later, the descendants of these spies manage to re-establish contact with the Inner Sphere and warned them of the coming of the Clans. The Clans won't know what hit them before it's too late.

The Dragoons are going to report back on the preparations and things are going to get a lot messier because both sides know what is coming. It might even get bad enough for the Clans to pull off the kid gloves and really smash the IS with orbital fire and other things they have no answer to after the destruction of the Succession Wars, so odds are good it will actually tilt things enough for the Clans to pull out a win.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 29 June 2014, 20:38:20
Problem is your assuming that knowing the Clans are out there and thus a potential threat won't effect how things go back in the IS.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 29 June 2014, 23:47:59
Problem is your assuming that knowing the Clans are out there and thus a potential threat won't effect how things go back in the IS.
  And you’re assuming that the Successor Lords will demonstrate a gift for sound, long-term, ‘big picture’ thinking and looking past their grudges to the real threats — a kind of thinking that has been conspicuous by its rarity since the fall of the Star League.  ::)  Even if they know the Clans are coming, I can easily see one or more of the Houses hoping to get in a ‘short, victorious war’ ahead of the projected arrival-date: “Don’t worry, boys: this time, we’ll roll right over those [slur for target faction] with minimal losses.  It’ll all be over in a few months — we’ll be completely ready to smack down these ‘Clans’ when they show up in the aftermath!”
  Five years later....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 30 June 2014, 02:02:23
Actually no he's not.  Diablo is the one saying "Well if the Clans know that the IS knows they're coming then they're going to be much stronger but the IS won't have changed."

That's unrealistic.  Now, if we assume that the Houses beat each other up and destroy infrastructure despite knowing that Kerensky's army is getting ready to take them all out, that still leaves Comstar.

So, Clans invade with great force, smashing aside the unprepared House forces....

And the ComGuard counterattacks selected Clan forces with over two dozen Warships and 30-40 Divisions, trusting in the rebuilt SDS to protect Terra.  (Yes, Clans have more than two dozen WS.  However, they'd be spread across their invasion front.  All the Comstar WS would be in one spot).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 01 July 2014, 19:11:18
  And you’re assuming that the Successor Lords will demonstrate a gift for sound, long-term, ‘big picture’ thinking and looking past their grudges to the real threats — a kind of thinking that has been conspicuous by its rarity since the fall of the Star League.  ::)  Even if they know the Clans are coming, I can easily see one or more of the Houses hoping to get in a ‘short, victorious war’ ahead of the projected arrival-date: “Don’t worry, boys: this time, we’ll roll right over those [slur for target faction] with minimal losses.  It’ll all be over in a few months — we’ll be completely ready to smack down these ‘Clans’ when they show up in the aftermath!”
  Five years later....

After all, the only way to stop the Clan menace is to rebuild the Star League under [insert faction here]. :)

Actually no he's not.  Diablo is the one saying "Well if the Clans know that the IS knows they're coming then they're going to be much stronger but the IS won't have changed."

That's unrealistic.  Now, if we assume that the Houses beat each other up and destroy infrastructure despite knowing that Kerensky's army is getting ready to take them all out, that still leaves Comstar.

So, Clans invade with great force, smashing aside the unprepared House forces....

And the ComGuard counterattacks selected Clan forces with over two dozen Warships and 30-40 Divisions, trusting in the rebuilt SDS to protect Terra.  (Yes, Clans have more than two dozen WS.  However, they'd be spread across their invasion front.  All the Comstar WS would be in one spot).

That buys the IS a short reprieve until the Clans bring their fleet to bear and crush the green ComStar fleet with many more ships and more experienced crews.  The end result is unchanged because the Clans just have too much power for the IS to stop.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 01 July 2014, 19:52:08
That buys the IS a short reprieve until the Clans bring their fleet to bear and crush the green ComStar fleet with many more ships and more experienced crews.  The end result is unchanged because the Clans just have too much power for the IS to stop.

Assuming of course that Comstar mothballed its production facilities and stopped building Warships.  Which they wouldn't do if they knew the Clans still had all those ships.

Besides, I'm not letting my Warships stand around and provide you with a target.  The only place I'd actually have them stay for longer than the time it takes to recharge is Terra, with rebuilt SDS.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 02 July 2014, 09:25:01
Tribble 123

"Primus, I'm not saying that the situation in the Combine isn't to our advantage.  But I must emphasize that our economic planners did not forsee this and-yes Acolyte?"

The young woman gulped and handed over the folder to the two men.  "Message from the chief Adept on Luthien, for the Primus, Precentor Delta.  It's urgent."  She bowed and stepped back out of the office, closing the door behind her as Raymond Karpov took the folder from his underling.

"I don't know why you're complaining.  Operation Holy Shroud is finally working as intended and we can step in to fulfill our purpos.  The Houses are destroying themselves, and this depression and inflation in the Combine is just the first sign of that.  Soon we will-"  Primus Karpov broke off as he opened the folder and began to read the dispatch.  Color drained from his face as he flipped through the document.  "It seems that the price of food on Luthien has triggered riots, and portions of the local milita are siding with the rioters.  One of the Kurita's generals has even gone over, and is calling for the Coordinator to step down.   Inflation rates are still soaring out of control, pollution tainting of foodsupplies is worse than anticipated..."  Raymond put the folder down on his desk and rubbed his face.  "Call Precentor ROM in here.  This is progressing faster than I had dreamed of."  He did not dare to voice his suspicion that it was progressing faster than ROM could manage.

----

What if Com Star succeeded in toppling a Successor State-and then discovered there was very little they could actually do to stop the collapse into anarchy and local power blocks?  Worse, what happens when the other Successor States fail to follow in the coming months, and instead the collapse of the combine's over-stressed economy remains localized?  What happens when the dreams of Toyama fail to materialize in a timely manner?  Interstellar trade and unified defense might be breaking down, but every local warlord is now able to set their own economic policy in the wake of the fall of the Combine, set their own recruitment policy and just generally present a hundred little empires in the face of the other successor states?  Will the FWL and CC reach out to snare a piece of the prize, just as the LC and FS will?  And will the Combine, battered and bruised, rise again, perhaps under the leadership of a populist general who chose the right time to switch sides?

This was mostly inspired by the constant theme that the Combine's ecconomy is the weakest and the least developed and blah blah blah, you get the picture.  So I thought to myself-well what if that wasn't just talk, what if it really did have a catastrophic collapse?
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Post by: Takiro on 02 July 2014, 22:05:28
Hard to see the Combine collapsing even with its underdeveloped and overcentralized economy unless the Kurita family is killed off completely.

I always thought that Liao was the weakest economically followed by Kurita then Davion then Marik then Steiner. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 02 July 2014, 22:49:35
I'm basing this off my memory of who had the weakest ecconomy-and really, this is a perfect storm of Holy Shroud, economic downturn, hyperinflation and famine on Luthien that is killing the Combine.

Though I suppose that you could pick any successor state as a candidate for this story-the only real point is that the collapse should be too quick for Comstar to orient and react in a timely manner or manipulate events to suit their plans.  Or for the other successor states to manage more than a 'buh, what' as one of their neighbors basically turns itself inside out.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 17 July 2014, 22:05:09
I'm running low on ideas here. I think we all are.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 July 2014, 01:05:09
Bah. We've had this thread for about 3 years. Someone will think of something.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 18 July 2014, 09:23:16
Yeah, hopefully something good.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 19 July 2014, 01:42:59
Tribble 124

Jack Burton was only on Solaris to pilot his 'Mech in a few bouts and build up some cash before heading to Outreach.

Wang Chi just wanted to forget his past with the Shin Legion, marry his girlfriend and run his restaurant.

Gracie Law was going to make her name as a journalist by busting open the Lo Pan tong's abuse of the citizens of the Cathay quarter of Solaris City.

Now the Lo Pan and their Mechwarriors (the Three Storms) have Jack's Mech, Wang Chi's girlfriend and Gracie Law in their clutches. It's up to Jack, Wang (with a little help from black market dealer Egg Shen) to recover all three - which means Big Trouble in Little Cathay.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 19 July 2014, 06:07:18
Tribble 124

Jack Burton was only on Solaris to pilot his 'Mech in a few bouts and build up some cash before heading to Outreach.

Wang Chi just wanted to forget his past with the Shin Legion, marry his girlfriend and run his restaurant.

Gracie Law was going to make her name as a journalist by busting open the Lo Pan tong's abuse of the citizens of the Cathay quarter of Solaris City.

Now the Lo Pan and their Mechwarriors (the Three Storms) have Jack's Mech, Wang Chi's girlfriend and Gracie Law in their clutches. It's up to Jack, Wang (with a little help from black market dealer Egg Shen) to recover all three - which means Big Trouble in Little Cathay.



HAHAHA Magic an Mech's. It all in the Reflex's.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 19 July 2014, 06:14:30
I wonder what kind of a Mech the Pork Chop Express is?  ;D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 20 July 2014, 18:06:22
Tribble 124

Jack Burton was only on Solaris to pilot his 'Mech in a few bouts and build up some cash before heading to Outreach.

Wang Chi just wanted to forget his past with the Shin Legion, marry his girlfriend and run his restaurant.

Gracie Law was going to make her name as a journalist by busting open the Lo Pan tong's abuse of the citizens of the Cathay quarter of Solaris City.

Now the Lo Pan and their Mechwarriors (the Three Storms) have Jack's Mech, Wang Chi's girlfriend and Gracie Law in their clutches. It's up to Jack, Wang (with a little help from black market dealer Egg Shen) to recover all three - which means Big Trouble in Little Cathay.

i literally facepalmed at this....there is a special place for people who......ah hell now my brain is trying to write it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 24 July 2014, 16:35:42
Tribble 125

In 2958, Ristar Carmen of the Gastopiv-Gaiba sibko learned a horrible truth about her Clan's leaders; they had been making dealings with the Dark Caste since the end of Operation: Klondike. Disgusted by this, she quickly rose through the ranks and earned her the Gastopiv bloodname before leading a group of those she felt were loyal to the Clan and took out the leadership of her Clan, becoming the new Khan of Clan Burrock. As her first order of business, she ordered her Clan to hunt down all those who associated with this travesty and summarily execute them. She then tracked down the Bandit Caste holdings that her former leaders supported, and utterly destroyed them without them realizing what had happened within their Clan's leadership.

She later revealed this dastardly secret to the other Clans within the Grand Council; almost immediately (and unsurprisingly) the Blood Spirit Khans called for an immediate Trial of Absorption of Clan Burrock, which was refuted by her and the other Clan leaders who said that she had acted in her Clan's interests and removed the "taint" of her Clan. What Carmen Gastopiv had done not only cemented her Clan's place within Clan history, but ultimately changed the history of Operation: Revival itself.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 25 July 2014, 20:28:36
Tribble 126

It was the dawn of the 30th Century, almost 20 years since the Third Succession War began. Mankind was committing horrible atrocities over the title of an empty throne on Terra. But one day, something unexpected occurred; a fleet of ships not matching any known human design appeared over Terra, transmitting a message to all corners of the Inner Sphere requesting the leaders of every nation, be they Successor State or Periphery meet with them on Terra. These ships belonged to an alien race that had called themselves...the Protoss.

They appealed before mankind to aid them in a coming war; a war that would ultimately destroy all life in the Galaxy. The war...against the Zerg.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 26 July 2014, 06:38:37
Awesome crossover! Where is jim raynor from?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 26 July 2014, 09:27:25
Awesome crossover! Where is jim raynor from?
Working on that.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 26 July 2014, 09:42:56
Tribble 126

It was the dawn of the 30th Century, almost 20 years since the Third Succession War began. Mankind was committing horrible atrocities over the title of an empty throne on Terra. But one day, something unexpected occurred; a fleet of ships not matching any known human design appeared over Terra, transmitting a message to all corners of the Inner Sphere requesting the leaders of every nation, be they Successor State or Periphery meet with them on Terra. These ships belonged to an alien race that had called themselves...the Protoss.

They appealed before mankind to aid them in a coming war; a war that would ultimately destroy all life in the Galaxy. The war...against the Zerg.

  I want to read this stat! Also... personally I believe that for the most part BT mechs will massacre zerg except for a few units. Eather way it will be a great read! :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 26 July 2014, 14:18:20
  I want to read this stat! Also... personally I believe that for the most part BT mechs will massacre zerg except for a few units. Eather way it will be a great read! :D

Yeah, the thing is that there are so many Zerglings that they will literally force you to run out of bullets before they run out of Zerg-and then they'll send in a Infestor to take control of your mechs.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 26 July 2014, 14:27:24
Yeah, the thing is that there are so many Zerglings that they will literally force you to run out of bullets before they run out of Zerg-and then they'll send in a Infestor to take control of your mechs.

Yeah, but the BTU is much bigger than the Terran population in StarCraft which is going to count for a lot against the swarming Zerg.

Also, Flamers and Pulse Lasers do not run out of ammunition.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 26 July 2014, 15:55:51
Tribble 127

Precentor Martial Focht made the hard decision not to reinforce the divisions facing Clan Wolf on Tukkayid. This left the largest, most prepared Clan deployment (and one of the best led) with the opportunity to score a smashing victory over the ComGuards, but Focht calculated that by defeating all six of the other Clans - Clans which, unlike the Wolves, had voted for the Invasion - and inflicting the maximum possible losses, he'd cripple future Clan operations for the critical next two to three years while the Inner Sphere finished re-equipping.

The result was precisely as expected. Khans Ulric Kerensky, Garth Radick and Natasha Kerensky fought their way to the target cities with losses not even a tenth of those taken by the Clans who'd landed earlier.

Which in the cases of most of them were very heavy losses indeed. Only Clan Ghost Bear managed to score a technical draw by taking one city, while the Steel Vipers, Smoke Jaguars and Jade Falcons saw the best of their touman dead on the battlefield. Combined with the previous losses on Luthien, Brandon Howell was left with little to defend the Smoke Jaguar Occupation Zone - a fact the Nova Cat Khans proved well aware of, taking seven worlds away from the Jaguars OZ over 3053. At least the trials blooded the next generation of warriors although it was far from enough to make good the losses. The Home Clans proved similarly aggressive against enclaves in the Pentagon and the Kerensky Cluster.

Elias Crichell survived Tukkayid only briefly. His customary transfer of blame to the saKhan who'd actually been in the battles cut little ice with the survivors. Rather than see the Clan's politics sink into a political morass, the aged Kael Pershaw challenged Crichell's warrior status and the two settled the matter with BattleMechs. Although technically the victor, the crippled Pershaw expired in the cockpit, body unable to take the ferocious heat. The Jade Falcons' security appeared to rest upon largely the fact that the Steel Vipers were in no better shape and the Smoke Jaguars being marginally more vulnerable.

Perhaps the most surprising fallout was among Clan Wolf. Long home to a strong Crusader faction, spearheaded by Conal Ward and Garth Radick, the schism over the Truce of Tukkayid left the Clan Council almost crippled with close vote after close vote being upheld or defeated in Trials of Refusal that sapped away the fighting strength of the Wolves. Rather than see this go on, the ilKhan ordered the unthinkable: the Clan of the Founder would be divided. Each warrior must choose a side and then every homeworld enclave, every occupied world and many other factors of the Clan's strength would be fought over - including, ultimately, the right to the Clan's name itself - in one on one Trials of Possession. It would be expensive and it would weaken the Wolf as never before... but out of the remains two healthy clans could form.

A Grand Council vote upheld the decision by a strong majority, partly from Crusaders seeing an addition to their votes and partly from Ulric's allies. Ultimately it was Khan Garth Radick who was able to secure for the Crusaders the name Wolf. Conal Ward was killed by Phelan Ward fighting for claim upon the occupied world of Gunzberg - his bloodright would be won by his protege Vladimir. Khan Natasha Kerensky elected to adopt the name of one of the fallen Clans: the Widowmakers would live once more and she secured the appointment of Phelan Ward as her saKhan. Making their headquarters on Rasalhague, the Widowmakers began to rapidly incorporate inhabitants of their OZ into the new Clan, shipping entire factories from the Homeworlds to New Bergen and New Oslo.

Meanwhile, Khan Radick focused on rebuilding from Tamar. In looking for new sources of recruits, he couldn't help be aware of the weakened Jade Falcons and Steel Vipers at his back... Perhaps Sudeten would be a more secure base for his Wolves... and a chance to finally settle the long feud...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 26 July 2014, 19:07:17
Sounds interesting. One minor decision could ultimately change the fate of the Clans forever.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 28 July 2014, 11:16:24
Khan Natasha Kerensky elected to adopt the name of one of the fallen Clans: the Widowmakers would live once more and she secured the appointment of Phelan Ward as her saKhan. Making their headquarters on Rasalhague, the Widowmakers began to rapidly incorporate inhabitants of their OZ into the new Clan, shipping entire factories from the Homeworlds to New Bergen and New Oslo.

I love it except for the Widowmaker return. Make it the Black Widow Clan named after its founder. Why not just start a new bloodname for Phelan, Kell. Wolf actually had 43 Bloodnames to begin with and with 40 more from Widowmaker you easily have enough to split Clans into 40 Bloodnames a piece. I would think one Kerensky heritage would go to the Wolves and the other to the Black Widows.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 28 July 2014, 18:28:05
I love it except for the Widowmaker return. Make it the Black Widow Clan named after its founder. Why not just start a new bloodname for Phelan, Kell. Wolf actually had 43 Bloodnames to begin with and with 40 more from Widowmaker you easily have enough to split Clans into 40 Bloodnames a piece. I would think one Kerensky heritage would go to the Wolves and the other to the Black Widows.

 I think otherwise, I LOVE the widowmakers, as breif as there life was, and i whole hartedly applaud there return! :D  As a side note, in my opinion, i think the widowmakers had the best logo of all  8)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 29 July 2014, 06:27:48
I love it except for the Widowmaker return. Make it the Black Widow Clan named after its founder. Why not just start a new bloodname for Phelan, Kell. Wolf actually had 43 Bloodnames to begin with and with 40 more from Widowmaker you easily have enough to split Clans into 40 Bloodnames a piece. I would think one Kerensky heritage would go to the Wolves and the other to the Black Widows.

Fights for the Kerensky Bloodlines round 150. They only stopped because of the Invasion.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 31 July 2014, 12:23:29
You know, I'm surprised nobody's commented on my tribble about Clan Burrock.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 31 July 2014, 13:55:50
Tribble #128

Hall of Khans
Katyusha City, Strana Mechty
December 17, 2824


Thirty-eight Khans stood silently as their leader, Nicholas Kerensky, ilKhan of the Clans, and his wife, Jennifer Winson, entered the chamber.  Just over a year ago, there would have been forty Khans . . . but the Not-Named Clan had since been destroyed and the survivors of that bitter fight were slowly rebuilding from the chaos sown by their treachery.

"At ease," the ilKhan ordered as he reached the podium.  "Be seated . . . there are grave issues today which we must discuss.  Decisions which must be made that will determine the road forward for our Clans; for our Society," he continued.

The Khans sat, but many exchanged glances and there were low murmurs of questions . . . surely there could not be another schism in their ranks, not so soon.  Not after the Annihilation of the Not-Named and all, civilian and Warrior alike, who swore allegiance to them.

"My Khans," Nicholas began, but then he paused and shook his head.  "My friends.  My family.  For that is what we forty here today are in truth.  One family, divided into differing households, true, but one family we remain.  We are the Clans and always shall we remain such."

Nicholas stepped forward from his podium, and a servant brought out the worn, blood-stained, and much revered camp-stool that his father, Aleksandyr Kerensky, had used on campaign so many years before.  The ilKhan thanked the servant, and then he sat down, perched right on the edge of the dias.

"We, my brothers and sisters, we have fought to build this Society.  Through the Pentagon Civil War, to forming your Toumans here on Strana Mechty, to training our Warriors to a razor's edge, to liberating those five worlds during KLONDIKE, to dealing with the betrayal and base treachery of those who Shall Never Again Be Named."

"We have prevailed through all of this, my . . .," Nicholas smiled, but it was a weary smile.  "My trothkin, to use a word whose meaning is clear.  My family of the Oath."

Nicholas sighed.  "But there is something which troubles me . . . something which should trouble us all.  During the Civil War, during KLONDIKE, during the recent Annihilation . . . we were all reminded once again of the sheer destructive power contained within our WarShips.  The power to lay waste to entire populations at the order of a single man; whether or not that man is sane.  Or authorized by his superiors."

A low groan passed through the Khans, and the corner of Nicholas' lips twitched as he heard (at the very limits of his excellent hearing) Stephen McKenna, "Oh crap, not this again!"

Nicholas laughed.  "Yes, Stephen.  My mind has been troubled by the presence of our WarShips for a long, long time . . . and now I am convinced that we simply must take measures to ensure that they will NEVER again be responsible for the atrocities we have witnessed in the Pentagon and at Dehra Dun."

There was silence in the chamber and Nicholas nodded.

"We must destroy our WarShips."

Shouts of protest arose, but the ilKhan raised one hand and he waited until the furor died down.

"We will not destroy all of them, trothkin.  The Potemkins and Volga will be disarmed of all offensive weapon and converted purely into transport vessels . . . all of them will be concentrated under the direct command of the ilKhan and provided to the Khans as needed for transport and colonization."

"Furthermore," Nicholas continued, after briefly looking at his wife, who nodded in support, "I have been convinced that we must retain a small number of WarShips of our own.  But we must ensure that only our most loyal officers have command of them.  To that end, I will permit thirty-nine ships to remain operational and with their weaponry intact.  McKenna's Pride will serve as my Flagship, as the Flagship for all future ilKhans to come.  And each of you, my Khans, my brothers, my sisters, will select by Trial one vessel that will serve as your Flagships."

"But I will not do this by decree," Nicholas declared.  "Such a decision must be made by this body as a whole.  YOU, my family, my loved friends, you must make this decision and you must stand by it.  As must your successors."

There was a moments silence.

"What of the Inner Sphere?  They have WarShips of their own; what of our eventual return?" asked Stephen McKenna.

"Let us be realistic, Stephen.  It will be two centuries, at the least, before we are ready to return.  We must develop our industry here, we must drive forward our technology, we must . . .," Nicholas smiled again, "we must take the time to bond our Clans into an unstoppable sword that when swung cannot be parried.  We will address the issue with WarShips at that time . . . not before.  Until then, they are a drain upon our resources and manpower.  Symbols of authority and playthings for a mere handful of Warriors that serve no purpose."

"And if we do not agree, ilKhan?" the Snow Raven Khan asked quietly.

"Then I will abdicate and my wife and I will retire into exile and obscurity."

Shouts of denial and shock reverbeted throughout the Hall.  Even Stephen McKenna stood, his face draining of blood to become as pale as a linen sheet.

"Shall I call the vote?" asked Nicholas.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 31 July 2014, 14:01:29
I have often wondered . . . how might BTU history have been changed if the Clans had lost their WarShips (or most of them) as well?  Well, here is a chance to see. 

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Antagonist on 31 July 2014, 14:31:03
I'd assume they'd nuke Turtle Bay instead of obliterating it with ortillery.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 31 July 2014, 15:47:43
No warships...means no ships to bombard Romulus or Turtle Bay. Interesting...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 31 July 2014, 17:53:35
I don't know,  it also could mean more and earlier ships like the leviathan which was a completely built in the homeworlds. Or it could mean a radical redesign of their warships
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 31 July 2014, 20:49:42
I don't know,  it also could mean more and earlier ships like the leviathan which was a completely built in the homeworlds. Or it could mean a radical redesign of their warships

That was my thought as well.  It is very clear to me that there is every intention of rebuilding the navies for the invasion, so I would expect to see a fleet of modernized WarShips built according to the Clan focus on combat over utility which is going to make them a lot nastier than the ex-SLDF vessels they had in canon.

I would also expect at least one Clan to find a way to hide extra vessels for a rainy day which could result in a nasty surprise for the other Clans if the Ravens can pull an entire fleet out of mothballs while every other Clan is limited to two ships.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 31 July 2014, 21:09:20
You see Pocket WarShips built during the Clan Golden Century, most likely by Clan Snow Raven, and possibly disguised as standard assault DropShips, of which you'd also see a renaissance during the Golden Century.  For one thing, the Titan class would actually get upgraded, beyond just shoving more fighters inside and leaving its antiquated weaponry alone.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 01 August 2014, 06:45:53
I think that this one needs a thread in the fan builds:aerospace section
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 02 August 2014, 22:19:12
Tribble #129

Borderlands.  Battletech.  Handsome Jack.  Natasha Kerensky, the Siren.  Omnimechs with Storage Decks.  Hyperion Pulse Lasers.

Pandora, world of riches and death.

Make it happen people.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 05 August 2014, 12:37:40
Tribble 130

"I am Andrew Ryan, and I have a question to ask you. Is a man not entitled to the sweat of his brow?

"‘No' says the man from New Avalon, 'it belongs to the state.'

"'No' says the man from Luthien, 'it belongs to the Dragon.'

"'No' says the man from from Tharkad, 'it belongs to the Archon'

"'No' says the man from Artreus, 'it belongs to your community.'

"'No' says the man from Sian, 'it belongs to us.'

"'No' says the man from Terra, 'it belongs to the Blessed Blake.'

"'No' says the man from Strana Mechty, 'it belongs to the Clan.'

"I reject those answers and came up with something different. I chose to find a new world; I chose...Rapture. A world where the artist need not fear the censor, a place where the scientist cannot be held back by petty morality or religious cults, a world where the strong will not be held back by the weak. And with the sweat of your brow, Rapture can be your homeworld too."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 05 August 2014, 13:58:44
oh that is SO it  O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 05 August 2014, 15:27:28
I wasn't sure what each of the Successor States would say if it was Andrew Ryan saying it. So I took a guess at each one.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 09 August 2014, 16:11:10
#131

On 25 December 3060 every inhabited planet in the Inner Sphere and Near Periphery receives a mirror world positioned at the exact opposite end of its orbit around it's star: the same world exactly as it was on 25 June 2765.

Aleksandr Kerensky's SLDF is just beginning to surge into the Periphery while the Clans are just beginning to come to terms with the outcome of the Great Refusal and the Capellan Confederation is about to go to war with the St. Ives Compact.

Now all of a sudden, almost every border between the Great Houses is in flux with many systems now shared. The Clans see their chance to stop the Amaris Coup before it happens. Richard Cameron calls on the SLDF and his RWR allies to liberate the new Terra from the Word of Blake and the rest of the Hegemony's space from the Great Houses, sending in Caspars when available to blockade the worlds.

Word reaches the Secret Armies in Outworlds, Taurian and Canopian space of Amaris' perfidity and they repay him in advance by sending word of the impending coup to Kerensky. On five hidden worlds, The Blood decide this is their chance to eliminate their greatest foe: the young Nicholas Kerensky.

Takiro Kurita suffers a fatal heart-attack, putting Minoru on one Dragon Throne. With 'Archon-Princess' Katherine Steiner-Davion on New Avalon, Archon Robert Steiner begins to move to take the Lyran Alliance under his protection - no small thing with the Clans storming into the (now heavily entangled with Lyran worlds) Rim Worlds Republic and conflict brewing with House Marik, House Kurita and even the First Lord.

The Terran First Lord, that is. Sun-Tzu Liao, titular First Lord of the Second Star League, is in no position to do anything decisive since he's locked in a three-sided civil war with his aunt Candace, their ancestor Barbara (who'd have won already if half her armies weren't embroiled in battles with the AFFC and FWLM. Fortunately for House Liao, their neighours aren't much better off: John Davion isn't especially impressed with his great-grand-daughter (he knows a backstabbing bitch when he meets one). Meanwhile Kenyon and Thomas Marik are all smiles and handshakes, while their supporters and detractors in two parliaments fight no-holds-barred to determine what the new joint-Parliament will look like so they can elect one of the two as Captain-General.

With Protector Jeffrey Calderon and Magestrix Emma Centrella held captive on Detroit, Nicoletta Calderon and Janina Calderon quickly establish themselves as rulers of both 'halves' of their realms - particularly seeing there's a desperate need to avoid the post-Star League economic collapse the histories now available to them depict. In a reversal of this, the aged President Beatrice Avellar lives long enough to appoint the uptime President Mitchell Avellar as her heir, side-stepping her naive granddaughter and ambitious grandson.

And then Task Force Serpent/Bulldog arrive home...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 09 August 2014, 17:09:07
Chaos, chaos, chaos! That's all that's needed to be said about this.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 09 August 2014, 18:54:37
Drakensis, you have created a massive chaotic nightmare.
Wouldn't it be fun. >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 09 August 2014, 18:57:51
Chaos is definitely a good word for what happens.  The only certainties are that the Hegemony will easily reclaim all its own worlds and that the ELH will rejoin the SLDF.  The Clans will probably also declare themselves as part of the SLDF given their history, although that whole thing is going to get very awkward very fast for a whole lot of reasons.  The houses will all be tied up in internal politics to figure out what the new pecking order is so they are basically out of the picture for a while, although most of the borders will probably be reset to what they were during the Star League era because of the differences in the sizes of the armies between the two eras.  Amaris is a bit of a wildcard with all the other chaos, although he cannot pull a surprise coup in this timeline.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 09 August 2014, 20:20:30
One bit of hope in the whole mess is that Robert Steiner and John Davion might be civil enough that the FedCom might survive once Katherine is jailed. The benefits of the Federated Commonwealth will be obvious to both of them, as it would represent a massive territory gain for both sides, and they'd both have an acceptable heir in Victor, once they finish the political training his father started. >:D

Now they just have to make sure to hold the corridor connecting the two halves from Richard's grasping hands.

In the meantime, expect everyone and their dog to send out assassin teams to bump off 'that fat bastard.' Life is about to get quite interesting for Stefan Amaris. }:)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 10 August 2014, 05:33:31
Would the Clans not just jump in a WarShip and nuke whichever planet Amaris was on?
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Post by: knightowl on 10 August 2014, 07:38:12
Would the Clans not just jump in a WarShip and nuke whichever planet Amaris was on?

No nukes. The Whole Clans Fleets yes. Rain of Death from Macross/Robotech.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 10 August 2014, 08:20:14
For the assassination teams, it might be 'tragic' if they nail Amaris too late to stop the murder of Richard Cameron, but save the rest of the Cameron family. #P

I imagine a few might even consider Richard 'acceptable losses' given how easily Amaris manipulated and guided the poor man. >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 August 2014, 10:21:38
The overlay event would be around six months prior to the Amaris coup.

Amaris himself would probably be killed by his own family in the hope this might lead to them being spared.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 11 August 2014, 03:15:29
or he escapes in the confusion and the golitith scorps , change the target of there great searches :))
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Post by: Zureal on 11 August 2014, 14:42:49
This.... this is awesome! Please make a story about this, would be sooo cool :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 11 August 2014, 20:45:37
Amaris is probably on TERRA at this point.

Richard Cameron is going to shoot him /personally/.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 11 August 2014, 21:18:58
damn, talk about messy for any type of story line to figure out......
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 August 2014, 17:10:04
Amaris is probably on TERRA at this point.

Richard Cameron is going to shoot him /personally/.

Amaris had left Earth, claiming Kerensky demanded it, a year before.

I may try something but the detail work would take a lot of time and I've another project on the go right now. The idea is appealing the SLDF badly depleted and now facing states slightly (but only slightly) more advanced than they are.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 13 August 2014, 23:15:36
how many clan warriors make a bee line for the great father , of the father of the clans lol
....
And what will be his reaction to his little boys future endevors  >:D

just another thought lol
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 14 August 2014, 17:37:20
how many clan warriors make a bee line for the great father , of the father of the clans lol
....
And what will be his reaction to his little boys future endevors  >:D

just another thought lol

All of them. ;D

In all seriousness, that would be a major issue for the Star League.  I am fairly certain every Clan would consider themselves to be part of the SLDF again given their history which would be a nightmare to sort out given the slight cultural drift in the intervening centuries.  There is really no good solution to the whole mess because neither side will be able to readily accept the culture and traditions of the others no matter how much the Clans want to make it work and the Star League wants to upgrade to Clan tech and omnis.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 14 August 2014, 22:38:53
Tribble #132

SLDF Headquarters Landing Port
Lakota, South Continent, New Earth (Tau Ceti)
October 24, 2780


Aleksandr Kerensky smiled at the woman and two teenaged bosy beside her as they stood in the hatch of his DropShip.  It was their first journey aboard DropShips and JumpShips, and all three were glad to feel the warmth of Tau Ceti's sun on their faces, the wind in their hair, and the smell of fresh air after being confined aboard the cramped ship.

"Come Nicholas, Andery," the General spoke warmly.  "Here you have nothing to fear, here I can pro- . . ."

BOOM.

The massive explosion ripped through the DropShip and cut off the words that the General was speaking.


SLDF Headquarters Base Hospital
Lakota, South Continent, New Earth (Tau Ceti)
November 4, 2780


"You are definately one man that is hard to kill, General," Aaron DeChavilier half-joked as the stood in the doorway to Kerensky's medical suite.  But the General did not look up . . . he stared out of the bay windows from his wheelchair and held a crumpled photograph in one clenched fist.

The second-ranking officer of the SLDF paused and then he clear his throat and began again.  "I have the report from the investigators, Alik," he said softly.  "It was meant to look like sabotage, but it was actually an assassination attempt.  It was a miracle that you managed to survive."

"Assassin-. . .," Kerensky began to growl.  And then he stopped.  "Who, Aaron?"

"We don't know.  It could have been someone still loyal to Amaris . . .," DeChavilier paused for a moment, "or it could have been one of the House Lords.  They have no love for you at this moment and consider you a threat to their rule."

Silence hung over the room.

"What have they done in the past ten days that I have been . . . out of contact?"

"Because of your injuries in the 'accident'," Aaron said softly, "they are asserting their right to appoint a new Commanding General and force your retirement.  For medical reasons.  But their squabbling amongst each other means they haven't--YET--submitted a name that has been approved."

"They could simply promote you," Kerensky mused.

"Which would quickly be followed by five dead Lords of State after I put a bullet in their collective heads for being asses.  General, I know that you don't want to hear this . . . but the boys and girls are with you.  They will follow YOU.  No matter what, no matter where.  The Army and the Fleet will follow your lead, even if you tell us to clean house across the entire Inner Sphere."

There was a pause again, and Kerensky sighed, a quaver in his throat threatening to turn that sigh into a sob.  "I have never felt so old and so meaningless, Aaron.  They buried Katyusha and my Nicholas while I was kept sedated, you know."

"I know."

"A week ago, I would have said that I was too tired for treason, Aaron.  The Star League held my loyalty . . . and it would have held my loyalty to the end."

"Treason doth never prosper; what's the reason?  Why if it prosper, none dare call it treason . . . First Lord," Aaron answered with a bow.  "You defeated Amaris, General.  Now save the Star League and take up the throne; we are with you."

"And have Andery become Heir?  At fourteen?"

"You have a couple of good decades left, Sir," Aaron answered with a smile.  "And Andery is a good kid; I know, I've spent some time with him since the 'accident'.  God knows that we could have worse on the throne."

"We will have twenty years or more of War, Aaron.  Who am I to demand that of this Army?  After all that they have accomplished and suffered?"

"The man we will follow into Hell itself, Sir.  The man who isn't doing this to seize a throne for the power it grants, but to protect the innocent--like your SON--from that gaggle of vultures on Terra trying to carve up the Hegemony and preparing for war against one another."

A tear leaked down the bandages on Aleksandr's face and then he nodded.  "Let this be our last war, Aaron.  Assemble the staff . . . we have an Operation to plan."

"Yes, SIR!" Aaron answered with the smartest salute he had ever rendered.

And then he left, leaving Aleksandr Kerensky to mourn his dead wife and slain son.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 14 August 2014, 23:05:48
 :) oh that's a nice one for a story!  ;D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 15 August 2014, 08:35:34
With Nicky Kerensky dead, that means...NO CLANS!!!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 15 August 2014, 16:51:04
With Nicky Kerensky dead, that means...NO CLANS!!!

It will be broken earlier than that because Kerensky is sticking around to kick in the teeth of the house lords.  I have my doubts about his ability to succeed unless he plays his political cards very carefully, but it will without a doubt entirely scrap all of canon after this point.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Davout73 on 15 August 2014, 17:21:35
A Star League/Terran Republic with the House of Kerensky could be interesting.

Lots of possibilities.

Dav
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 16 August 2014, 01:04:48
It will be broken earlier than that because Kerensky is sticking around to kick in the teeth of the house lords.  I have my doubts about his ability to succeed unless he plays his political cards very carefully, but it will without a doubt entirely scrap all of canon after this point.
I've little to no doubt the SLDF can fight with great success against the Great Houses.

I've grave doubts of Kerensky's capacity to:
1. Rebuild the Terran Hegemony
2. Bring the other five Member-States in line without making them about as fond of the Star League as the Taurians are

I'd therefore expect Andery to inherit a situation where there are 5-8 resentful territorial states which have had their economies looted to rebuild the Hegemony and an SLDF that's largely engaged in beating down sporadic uprisings against the tyranny of Terra.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 16 August 2014, 08:20:11
I kinda have my doubts he can win in the first place. By that point the SLDF was actually close to outnumbered from memory. Especially in space.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 16 August 2014, 10:56:13
I kinda have my doubts he can win in the first place. By that point the SLDF was actually close to outnumbered from memory. Especially in space.

That and I think many of the production facilities in Hegemony space were damaged or destroyed in the fighting which would make it harder for Kerensky to replace losses than the Houses which I seem to recall reading were getting ready to capitalize on the situation with additional production lines and reserve machines.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 August 2014, 06:18:40
#133 Deryni-Tech

2575   With civil war breaking out in the Rim Worlds Republic between Gregory Amaris and the RWA, the pro-Amaris Baron Daffyd ap Brendan of Haldane usurps control of the planet Gwynedd and its garrison.

2590   SLDF arrives and imposes martial law on the restive population.

2595   SLDF garrison withdrawn. Daffyd ap Brendan resumes power.

2599   Daffyd ap Brendan overthrown by his son Niall ap Daffyd Haldane, who supports the Wbika coup. Niall Haldane enacts a series of reforms to enact a fairer planetary government.

2604   Richard Amaris overthrows the Wbika junta. Niall ap Daffyd is executed, as are most of his family. Festil Torenthaly, one of Richard's supporters, is rewarded with rule of Gwynedd. Festil's brother receives rule over the nearby world of Boara.

2760   The death of Blaine Torenthaly passes the rule of Gwynedd to his son Imre. Blaine's long time advisor Camber MacRorie retires to his estates. His elder son Cathan represents family interests.

2764   Cathan MacRorie is executed by Imre Torenthaly on suspicion of treason. Camber goes into hiding with his daughter Evane and son in law Dr. Rhys Thuryn. Camber's other son, is in SLDF service. Dr. Thuryn reveals one of his patients, Royston Draper, is a male line descendant of Niall ap Daffyd.

2766   With Imre unable to call in substantial off-world support due to the Rim Worlds Army being largely committed to the Terran Hegemony, Camber and Royston's grandson Cinhil carry out a coup. Imre is killed and his sister Ariella flees the planet. Cinhil Haldane is appointed new planetary ruler.

2767   Ariella Torenthaly returns to Gwynedd with support from Boara. She's defeated in battle - specifically by Camber MacRorie, who is mortally wounded.

2768   The SLDF reach Gwynedd and approve the anti-Amaris government. Joram MacRorie remains onworld as a garrison officer. The SLDF does insist on an elective senate being appointed.

2780   With the fall of the Star League clearly in motion and Cinhil Haldane ailing, the senate exert increasing power. This includes forcing the MacRories out of power and accepting support from House Steiner.

2781   A cabal within the senate execute a quiet coup following Cinhil's death, using his son Alroy as a figurehead. Prime Minister Alister Cullen is along the casualties.

2789   Alroy Haldane dies and his brother Javan rises to rule over Gwynedd but in practise is forced to fight the Steiner-backed senate for control.

2790   Javan Haldane is murdered and his brother Rhys succeeds as a puppet ruler, his family hostages against his good behavour.

2804   Ariella Torenthaly's son Mark makes a bid to test the strength of Gwynedd's defenses, with support from Miklos Torenthaly, ambitious second-in-line to rule Boara. Forced to let Rhys take the lead, the senate's ruling cabal is fatally weakened. The MacRories succeed in elminating key members while Rhys defeats the Torenthaly, killing Miklos and forcing Mark to retreat in disarray. Desperate to retain control, the senate have the injured Rhys killed, claiming his wounds were mortal. This is too much for his loyal soldiers who storm the capital and rescue Rhy's family. A reformed senate rule along side Rhys' widow until his elder son Owain is of age. House Steiner's agents are forced out.

The Haldane rule remained unbroken despite repeated efforts by Mark Torenthaly and his descendants to reclaim their former domain. Both Gwynedd and Boara suffered considerable infrastructure losses as a result of constant raiding. The Torenthalys made major invasion attempts in 2824, 2846-9 and 2895, the second occupying much of Gwynedd before being turned back and the final - ending at the brutal Battle of Killingford - gutting both branches of the Torenthaly family. Boara fell under control of House Furstan, cousins of the Torenthalys while the remaining Gwyneddian claimants were forced into exile - although they took the core of the remaining Boaran jumphip squadrons with them.

For most of the 30th century Gwynedd's concerns were less with Boara - renamed Torenth by the Furstans - and more with another neighbour. Mearra had been divided between the Prince of Cassan (the northern continent) and the Prince of Meara (the rest of the planet) since the 2760s. Prince Jolyon Quinnell of Meara had been a Boraran ally in 2895, sending a contingent of troops to support their invasion, and now Malcom Haldane repaid them by throwing support to the Prince of Cassan. The Prince agreed to annexation and a ducal title for his heirs in return for support and in 2898 Jolyon Quinnell agreed to a marriage between Malcom and his elder daughter, making the Haldanes heir to the rest of the planet.

This led to a further war in 2915 with Malcolm Haldane having to uphold his claims against his sister-in-law and a continued drain of resources from Gwynedd to maintain dominance over Meara. His son Donal is forced to carry out further campaigns in 2966 and 2979 against uprisings in the name of the senior line. This drain allows Torenth to build up a worrying degree of strength even compared to the Haldane's resources of two worlds.

3003   Hogan Gwernach, the Federated Suns' Duke of Marduk, is forced into exile when the DCMS seize control of the world. Along with his daughter Charissa and a respectable warband, Gwernach embarks across the Inner Sphere to the homeworld of his Torenthaly ancestors.
3005   To divert this potential rival, Nimur Furstan encourages Gwernach to attempt a coup on Gwynedd. Fomenting rebellion in the Eastmarch region, Gwernach closes a trap around Brion Haldane and his brother Nigel. With the help of a young Alaric Morgan the Haldanes triump and Gwernach is killed in battle.

3020   Brion Haldane is poisoned, leaving power to his son Kelson following a brief regency of Brion's wife Jehana. Despite the threat from Torenth, known to be supporting Charissa Gwernach, the regency clashes bitterly with Alaric Morgan seriously weakening their response. Kelson proves himself politically, outmanuvering the senate to block attempts to arrest Morgan. When the new baron of Eastmarch allows Charissa  to land a small force at the Gwynedd capital of Rhemuth, the defenses are scattered and ineffective. Alaric takes the field against Eastmarch, triumphing although wounded, while Kelson successfully duels Charissa and ends her threat.

3021   Although triumphant, Kelson now faces all out war against Torenth and renewed internal strife when Prime Minister Edmund Loris - ComStar agent and luddite - forments rebellion against Morgan in the Coroth region of Gwynedd and Baron Marley is subverted by Wencit Furstan. Morgan and his friend Duncan McLain unravel the political tangle but the cost is high - Morgan's sister Bronwyn and Duncan's brother Kevin are killed in the intrigues and Duncan's father, the Duke of Cassan, is left isolated with his army who are crushed by Wencit. Confident of his skills, Wencit offers Kelson a chance to settle the war by proxy: four 'Mechs each in a battle to the death. ComStar's agent in Wencit's camp turns his coat however, allowing Kelson, Duncan, Morgan and (LIC agent) Denis Arilan an easy victory and leaving Torenth subordinate to Kelson's rule.

3023   Wencit's nephew, Kelson's vassal ruler of Torenth, dies mysteriously, raising tensions. Kelson calls the next in line, Liam Furstan, to Rhemuth until he's of age. Meanwhile Meara slids into rebellion again - this time with help from the deposed Loris - and Cassan may also be affected as Duncan McLain's election to the senate has kept him away from the region.

3024   Duncan's illegitimate son Dhugal MacArdry is drawn into the conspiracy but escapes, in turn drawing two of the Mearan pretender's children into Kelson's hand. Kelson's attempts to settle matters diplomatically fail dismally as Llewell Quinnell murders his sister rather than see her as Kelson's wife. Forced to a military solution, Kelson leads an army to Cassan and crushes the Mearan rebels. Loris, Ithel Quinnell and his cousin ComStar adept Judhael Quinnell are hung, the pretender herself imprisoned.

3025   Kelson and Dhugal, now the recognised heir to Cassan, are lost in Jumpship accident. Nigel Haldane takes the throne but his son Conall arranged the crash with help from ComStar, then murdered his ComStar allies. Nigel is poisoned and Conall takes control only for Kelson and Dhugal to be recovered (from a lost RWR depot on Varri they discovered following the crash) by Morgan and Duncan. With Kelson returning, Conall uses Nigel's 'Mech to try to kill him but fails and is executed.

3028   Liam Furstan returns to Torenth and with help from Kelson defeats his uncles Maheal and Teymuraz when they attempt to take control. To establish succession for his realm Kelson marries his distant cousin Araxie. Rather than over-stretch he releases Liam from obligations as a vassal, instead offering him an alliance. Denis Arilan reports the prospect of an imminent conflict in the Inner Sphere, raising concerns as to what this may mean for outlying principalities like Gwynedd-Mearra (as Kelson's realm is now called).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 22 August 2014, 22:29:59
#134 - Been there, salvaged that

Third Succession War ~3001
Wapakoneta
Draconis Combine

“If you’ve gotta be the bait, this is the ‘Mech to do it in”, Renfro muttered to himself as he rocketed through the air on his Spider’s Pitban LFT-10 jump jets.

A full lance of An Ting ‘Mechs were strung out behind him.  The Jenner was only about 500 meters away with two Wasps following closely in its wake, but the Panther was already falling behind quickly.

He hit the ground at over 85 km/h accelerating to a blazing 130 in seconds, bursting through the tree line and sprinting full tilt out across the grasslands.

It was as a close to flying as you could get without the wings. 

A quick glance at the O/P 1500 ARB told him the Kuritans were still in tow. 

The 1500 ARB had been a gift from a scrapped Warhammer.  He’d replaced the original O/P TA1240 with it.  The new sensors gave him a good 300 meters more range, twice the scanning width, and best of all, target identification. 

Perfect for a scout.

It was shaping up to be a good day, alright.  The Kuritan’s were heading right into the trap.

Renfo grinned evilly in the cramped cockpit.   

Ya, the cockpit was ridiculously cramped, but then again it was stuffed with as good a set of electronics as existed in the Inner Sphere today.  It wasn’t Star League or anything like that, but as good as could still made after the devastation wrought by the First and Second Succession Wars. 

Kara, ‘Roo, and Scarecrow should be popping up any second now, he thought as he continued racing across the flatlands at top speed. 

Behind him, the Jenner and the two Wasps pulled up to a sudden stop right at the tree line.

“Damn it!”  Renfro growled as he saw they were unwilling to enter the open.

He braced himself in the cockpit as he let his right leg drag for a few seconds too long.

He hated doing this.  One of these days it was going to do real damage.  Hopefully, that day wasn’t today.

The fleet 30-ton ‘Mech stumbled, staggered, then began skidding, finally just falling to the ground all together.

Renfro smiled the whole way.  They always fell for this routine.

Sure enough, the three Kurita scout ‘Mechs inspired by his fall and the hope they could actually catch his nimble ‘Mech, left their cover and ran out into the field after him.

He started chuckling to himself.  “Let’s keep playing this one out.  These guys are sooooooo green.  They must be straight outta the academy.”

He levered his 30-ton Spider back to his feet.  So the armor was a bit scrapped up?  It was more cosmetic than anything else, really. 

He started limping directly away from the pursuing Kurita lance, dragging his right leg behind him awkwardly.

Classic hip critical.  Leg totally locked up. 

“These guys must think the gods just smiled on them,” he laughed as he watched them close once again to within 500 meters. 

The Panther was just now making it to the tree line. 

Better not let that one get to close. 

He was lurching directly ahead towards a copse of trees.

His timing was perfect.  As he entered the light trees, the Jenner had gotten to within about 300 meters.

Showtime.

He came to stop, skidding as he whirled his ‘Mech around to face the Jenner.

As he did so, an Assassin, Valkyrie, and a Vulcan appeared as if by magic from within the copse where they had been shutdown and waiting.

Autocannon fire, lasers and SRMs exploded out of the trees coalescing on the An Ting Jenner as LRMs rained down upon the hapless 35-ton ‘Mech.

When the smoke cleared, half of the Jenner was gone and it was lying motionless at the end of a long furrow of dirt.

The two Wasps were still coming on strong, however.  Either they were crazy or they just hadn’t been able to react yet.

Renfo’s reticle glowed golden as he triggered his matched Aberdoveys at the lead Wasp.

His lance mates followed suit, unleashing their alpha-strikes at the same target.

They had it down to a system. 

“Been there, salvaged that,” Renfro said to himself as he continued chuckling away in his cockpit.

The entire combined firepower of a full lance of BattleMechs made short work of the 20-ton An Ting scout ‘Mech as it joined the Jenner now just a smoking ruin on the ground.

Abruptly, a blinding flash lit up Renfo’s cockpit up as his ‘Mech was thrown backwards, slamming into a tree with bone jarring force.  He wrenched his well-worn joysticks backwards, fighting to keep his Spider on its feet.

Alarms started going off as he watched one of his LFT-10 exhaust ports go offline.

He had less than half a ton of armor covering the right side of his chest, and the Panther’s Lord Light particle cannon had blown right through that and on into the structure that held his ‘Mech together.

He flipped his O/P 500A to the lance frequency.  “Sorry guys, I’m out.”

‘Roo was the first to respond.  “Thanks for bringing us the target practice.  We’ll take it from here.”

He reflexively stomped on his LFT-10s jumping backwards. 

The Spider pulled hard to his right, the equilibrium thrown off by the loss of one the vents.

“Shit!”

Thank Kerensky the LFT-10 exhaust ports were directional, he thought to himself, as he brought the Spider back to level and began dropping down into the safety of the dense tree cover.

He caught his lance mates opening fire on the remaining Wasp as he babied his ‘Mech back to ground.

As he began reviewing the damage to his precious ‘Mech, he noticed the other Wasp had disappeared from his 1500 ARB, and the Panther was retreating back.

His comlink came to life.  It was ‘Roo on the lance frequency. 

“Whadda ya say, Kara?  Wanna track him down?”

“Nah.  We bagged three, and that Jenner looks salvageable.  No need to tempt fate.  Help me drag it back to base.”

‘Roo chuckled, “I’m always ready to help a lady in need.”


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 23 August 2014, 16:23:53
Sounds like a typical mercenary story.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 24 August 2014, 22:02:25
#135 - Cinderella

3001
Wapakoneta
Draconis Combine

“Kara, looks like that Panther’s back and he’s brought his big brother along this time.  I’ve got a Dragon, Jenner, and Locust on radar, no visual.”

Kata examined the tactical display of her Sync Tracker.  Renfro’s Spider was a real piece of work.  The O/P 1500 ARB targeting and tracking system and the O/P 500A communications system were so tightly integrated, he could send his radar sweeps directly to the rest of his lance in real time.

She grinned in the cockpit of her Valkyrie as she throttled up, heading towards the perfect spot.

 “Scarecrow, ‘Roo, follow me to the lee of that nearby ridge.  We’ll setup there.  The bluffs above us will put us in the shadow of their sensors.  They’ll have no idea we’re even there until they’re already in range. ” 

“When I give the sign, Scarecrow, you jump to the top of the bluff and lay down covering fire for Renfro with that little Armstrong of yours.  Me and ‘Roo will rain pain with our LRMs.”

“Two salvos then jump to the top of the ridge line.  Single alpha-strike then break contact.  These bluffs have to be at least 30 meters high.  That should force both the Panther and Dragon to have to take the long way around and give us the time we need to skedaddle.”

“Or,” she chuckled, “to finish off anyone foolish enough to pursue us.”

In less than a minute, her Valkyrie, ‘Roo’s Assassin, and Scarecrow’s Vulcan were all in position.  In the privacy of their own cockpits, they watched Renfro’s agonizingly slow progress towards their position.

The four An Ting ‘Mechs were doing an admirable job of staying in formation as they pursued the Spider, who was zigging and zagging across the low rolling hills towards them.

Renfro had led the Panther straight into the jaws of a trap not two days before and the An Ting ‘Mechs were obviously wary.  As Renfro began climbing up the hill towards the ridgeline, the Kurita lance formed into a line and began advancing up the hill.

The Dragon and the Panther anchored either end with the Jenner and the Locust in the middle.  Renfro hit the top the ridge, pausing to turn around and taunt the approaching Combine lance.  With one of his Spider’s fully articulated hands, he extending his middle digit leaving no doubt as to his lack of respect for House Kurita.

Unwilling to be goaded, the Kuritans continued their advance maintaining their line as they patiently closed to within 600 meters.

From behind him, Fifteen LRMs arced gracefully over his head, streaking down towards the advancing enemy as Scarecrow’s Vulcan leapt atop the ridge next to him, his Armstrong spitting forth a stream of slugs even as he landed.

The Jenner bucked and staggered as the long range warheads and autocannon slugs tore into it’s Starshield armor, but a single salvo wasn’t enough to disable the 35-ton war machine.

As the Kurita ‘Mechs bulled closer, Renfro hit his LFT-10s sending his ‘Mech sailing backwards, and dropping far down the opposite side of the hill. 

Kara’s Valkyrie again fired it’s Devastator 10, ‘Roo adding his Holly 5 rack for the second time, as they combined to send another 15 LRMs rocketing towards the Combine ‘Mechs.  Scarecrow was still blazing away with his Armstrong light autocannon, his slender ‘Mech outlined clearly on the ridge.

“Leaving the party already, Renfro?” Kara inquired.

“Ya.  I’ve seen this one before, and it doesn’t have a happy ending.”

As if on cue, the missiles from Dragon’s DecaCluster LRM rack began exploding all around the feet of Scarecrow’s Vulcan, slugs from its Imperator medium autocannon tearing across his chest, as the Panther’s Lord’s Light particle cannon just missed wide.

Scarecrow replied dryly, “It’s beginning to seem a bit familiar to me too, Renfo.”

Renfro glanced down as his tactical frowning.  They still hadn’t dropped the Jenner.

Gritting his teeth, he pressed down on his LFT-10s again.  “Fine.  I’ll stick around for the last dance.”

Kara laughed, “Aww.  Thank you.  And listen to that, they’re playing our song!”

Renfro kept one eye cocked on the damaged exhaust vent.  The techs back at the field post hadn’t been able to repair it.  The Spider’s jump jets were unique in that they could pivot mid-flight.  The downside was they were notoriously hard to repair, and just as hard to replace, if you were even lucky enough to find the parts. 

Consequently, he wasn’t pushing them wide open, but even at 85% he could still jump as far as ‘Roo’s Assassin.

As he landed atop the ridge next to Kara and ‘Roo, he sucked in his breath hard. 

“Shit!”

They Kurita lance was barely 150 meters away.  The Jenner was smoking heavily, one of its stubby arms dangling from the wiring harness, but the rest were undamaged. 

Damn, Kara was cutting it close this time.

He dropped his reticule over the Jenner, triggering his matched Aberdovey mediums as his lancemates opened fire as well.  The addition of laser fire and short range missiles to the autocannon fire and LRMs finally proved to much for the squat armless ‘Mech as it disintegrated under the concentrated fire.

An oddly familiar blinding flash hit his cockpit, followed immediately by alarms.  His right leg glowed ominously red on his HUD then began to flash.  “Upper right leg actuator:  Offline.”

“I hear the first stroke of midnight, time for me to go!”  He sent his Spider leaping away as far as possible from the Combine ‘Mechs now dangerously close.

Kara snapped back instantly, “Whatever you say, Cinderella.”

He managed a smile, as his lance mates also fired their jump jets leaping far down the mountain, stranding the Dragon, Panther, and the Locust on the ridge.

‘Roo jumped in.  “How about we introduce ourselves to that Panther on the way out?”

He sent his Holly 5 corkscrewing towards the 35-ton Kurita ‘Mech.  Kara followed a split second later with her 10 rack, and Scarecrow started laying back on his light Armstrong.

Renfro suddenly broke out into a sweat.   He was still within range of the enemy ‘Mechs and one more hit to his right leg and he’d be down. 

The Dragon continued targeting Scarecrow, warheads and lead continuing to eat away at his StarGuard armor. 

He must be taking damage by now.

Renfro flinched involuntarily as his cockpit lit up again.

His ‘Mech pulled hard to the right, and as he tried to catch himself, the upper leg actuator failed completely, sending him spinning to the ground.  Instinctively, he tried to push himself back up, but discovered to his horror, his right arm had been entirely destroyed.

“****** it!  I’m down!  Lost my right arm, right leg damaged!”

He could just imagine the look of triumph on the Panther pilot’s face, and it made him sick.

Scarecrow followed him up, “I’m internal on the left side,  Skinning out.”

However, Kara’s Valkyrie abruptly changed direction, heading straight for Renfro’s downed ‘Mech.

“You always did suck at dancing, Renfro.  Let me give you a hand up.  ‘Roo, Scarecrow, cover fire!  Stay on that Panther!”

Kara unleashed her LRM-10 at the Panther just before she knelt down next to Renfo’s Spider.  Autocannon fire and 5 more LRM’s raced across the battlefield at the Panther as Scarecrow and ‘Roo added their own firepower to the mix.

The Panther’s Lord Light slammed into the right side of Kara’s Valkyrie as she used her arms to help level Renfro’s Spider back to its feet.

“Must be past midnight, Cinderella, your looking a bit ragged.”

“Ya.  Where’s that fairy godmother when you really need her?”

Renfro gritted his teeth, the acidic taste of blood in his mouth, as fled away as fast as his damaged ‘Mech could manage.  The right leg was slowing him down, but he refused to let up on it, fighting as best he could to keep his Spider upright and moving. 

The lance of An Ting ‘Mechs now holding the high ground loosened another volley of fire at the retreating scout lance. 

Renfro cursed as a handful to LRMs exploded across his lightly armored back as his lance mates returned fire.  The Panther was again struck by autocannon fire and missiles, but the stout 35-ton ‘Mech refused to go down.

Kara was laughing.  “I think they like you, Renfro!”

Renfro growled, “Wonderful.  I’m Mr. Popularity today.  Great.”

And then they were clear.

Authors Note:  I'm on break from my main storyline, but I like to keep writing.  So these are just little scenes that occur to me.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 24 August 2014, 22:43:09
Now we are just gonna want both storylines
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 26 August 2014, 20:27:03
Tribble #136 - Project: Venom

Tematagi
2979
Free Worlds League

He had been young bright eyed engineer back them.  Fresh out of Princefield Military Academy he had landed a job with Nimakachi Fusion Products Limited on Tematagi.

Timing is everything.  And no sooner had he started then Nimakachi secured the schematics to the Star League SDR-5V Spider from the Free Worlds League. 

Originally commissioned by the SLDF in 2650 for their commando forces, its production was cut short by the destruction of the Newhart Interstellar Industries factory on Northwind in 2776.

Since then, it had become increasingly difficult to keep the reconnaissance ‘Mech in the field instead of the repair bay, and eventually it became a rare sight on the battlefield all together.

But he’d changed all that.  With only the enthusiasm a recent graduate could muster, he had delved into the blueprints and discovered startling similarities to the VL-2T Vulcan Nimakachi was already producing on Tematagi.

It had become an obsession of sorts, the more similarities he found, the more convinced he became that it couldn’t possibly be coincidence.  His peers, and certainly the older engineers, had laughed him off.  The Spider was 25% lighter than the Vulcan, and they were produced by two entirely different companies, they would argue.

But he’d been a half decent researcher back at Princefield, and ultimately it hadn’t taken much digging to trace them both back to Northwind.  MatherTechno Incorporated had also had a plant on Northwind.  It had been destroyed in the same attack that had wiped out Newhart Interstellar’s facility.

Which put both companies, and both ‘Mechs on the same planet at the same time.  If he’d had to guess, there’d been an industrial spy involved.  The romantic in him imagined a great love affair between two engineers, each working for a different company, who shared their secrets as they shared their bed.

The truth, of course, would never be known.  But it didn’t change the fact the two ‘Mechs shared a number of components, almost to the point of being interchangeable. 

That they had shared a designer seemed a given to him, but others pointed to numerous examples of the same thing occurring simultaneously in two entirely different places.  There was even a name for it, “Multiple Discovery.”  The classic example being the discovery of Calculus by Isaac Newton, Gottfried Leibniz, Pierre de Fermat, and others, all independently of each other at roughly the same time.

But, that was all in the past now.  With the help of Kyle Cobb, he’d managed to put together a working prototype of the Spider using mostly modified Vulan parts as proof of concept.

It had put him the fast track to success with Nimakachi.  He was a senior vice president now, and he’d only just turned 40.  The Tematagi plant had opened a new assembly line, their first in hundreds of years, to produce the rediscovered design.

Which brought him back to what he doing this very day.  Cobb was a master machinist.  He’d worked in machine shops his entire life.  Every kind imaginable.  Welder, electrician, plumber, there wasn’t a building trade he’d never mastered. 

While he had been the brains, Cobb had been the hands.  He’d translated what existing only as three dimensional computer models, into actual physical objects.  The entire project would likely have remained nothing more than a theoretical exercise, had he not been able to fabricate the necessary components.

And it was Cobb’s son, Renfro’s, 16th birthday.  Cobb was a senior machinist at the Tematagi plant.  He’d never see the money a senior vice president makes.  Fair, unfair, in the end, paper still mattered.  While he’d graduated with honors from the prestigious Princefield Military Academy as an engineer, Cobb had a general equivalency diploma.  Basically, he’d graduated high school.  Late.

He attention was snapped back to the present, as his hoverlimo pulled to a stop in front of a modest ranch home in a thoroughly unremarkable and nameless suburb.

His chauffeur opened his door and as he got out, his suit fell faultlessly into place.  Made of the latest advances in designer wear, it was immune to wrinkles or creases of any kind.  Magnetic nanotechnology or some such thing.

He could hear the sounds of the birthday party as he knocked on the door.  Cobb answered the door, a huge grin on his face, laughing from some amusing event behind him.

Shock suddenly replaced his grin, as he stepped out onto the porch, closing off the birthday party behind him. 

“Raynor?”  Cobb looked him slowly up and down whistling.  “I knew you’d make the big time.  What brings you here?”

Raynor’s smile was genuine.  “A promise I made to myself 15 years ago.”

He produced a small, slick datapad from his breast pocket, and a thick packet of papers which he offered to Cobb.

Cobb took them, shock changing to confusion on his face.

“It’s the title to a SDR-5V.  Serial number 0000001.  You might remember it.  You’ll also find a full scholarship to Princefield Military Academy for your son, Renfro.  Consider them gifts.  To both you.”

Cobb’s confusion slowly morphed into a smile.  “0000001, huh?  Ya, I remember her like yesterday.  The first one we made.”

Cobb his head.  “How the hell did you manage to hold onto her for all this time, anyway?”

Raynor grinned conspiratorially.  “My research never ended, Cobb.  But I’m done with her now.  By the way, how you would feel about making me a few more custom parts?  I’m working on a heavier version of the SDR.  Just as nimble, but packing a bit more punch.”

Cobb laughed.  “Ya, ya.  Sure.  I could stand for a change.”

Raynor turned serious for a moment.  “You know I tried to get you promoted a few times, Cobb.  But you never had the credentials.  There wasn’t anything I could do.”

Cobb just shrugged, the door behind him opening, the sounds of the party flooding once again over them both.  “This is my wife, Lexi.”

She draped herself over his shoulders.  “Your missing the party, love, come back inside.”  She gave Raynor a look as if he were a door-to-door salesman.

Cobb let himself be pulled easily back into the party.  “One condition.  I’m not moving!  And thanks!”

Raynor waved with a crooked grin as the door closed in front of him.  He’d never gotten around to having a family.  Married to his work, as they say. 

Project:  Venom.  That was the love of his life.

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Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 26 August 2014, 21:45:28
sigil is a fic-tease
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 26 August 2014, 22:35:32
Tribble #137

Callisto V
2999
Lyran Commonwealth

BattleMechs equal status.   It had been true for hundreds of years now.  Ever since the Exodus.  And Katherine’s family had them in spades.  Her eldest brother piloted a Zeus, the next a Warhammer, she herself an Assassin, and her little brother a Wolverine. 

Consequently, their father was an Earl.  She giggled to herself.  Earl Lester Dowl of the Birches.  Technically, that made her a Lady, but she didn’t care much for titles.  Her family called her "'Roo" anyway.  One of those annoying childhood nicknames she'd never managed to shake off.  Oh well. 

The family’s power and influence were tied directly to their service to the Archon, which was, in turn, entirely dependent on the status of their ‘Mechs.  One of which was now hers.

Secretly, she suspected her brothers had given her the Assassin because it was so fast.  Capable of extraditing itself from almost any situation, it was as safe a ‘Mech as there was.  Between that, and the fact it wasn’t really considered a threatening ‘Mech, it would never make an enticing target.

Then there was of the superstition surrounding it.  Built by Maltex Corporation starting in 2676, the production lines for the 40-ton ‘Mech had been destroyed in 2835.  And even before that, some of the lines had been shut down due to quality control issues.  By the end, Maltex had only managed to make less than 500 of them. 

What was that?  A paltry 4 ‘Mechs a year at best?

The SLDF had supposedly commissioned it, but it had been immediately assigned to garrison units.  Even then, the commissioning was largely believed to be more the result of bribery and inflated promises, then any actual need or capability.

In fact, the Assassin hadn’t even seen combat until just a few years in 2980 on Rochelle.  An amazing little fact given the age of the design. 

Still, she was thankful.  Even though, in her estimation, the Wolverine should have been hers.  People, even her own family, were still a little circumspect when it came to women MechWarriors.  Apparently, that prejudice had made it off of Terra.

She gave a sour look.

That is was a maintenance nightmare was no question either.  A secondary benefit to the plan she suspected her brothers had to keep her off the battlefield.  The early runs were known to have used inferior parts which caused frequent breakdowns. 

While Maltex had to some extent increased the quality by the later production runs, they were never able to remedy the incredibly cramped cockpit.  Like Stinger small.  And the Assassin weighted twice as much.

But, it all worked out.  She was on the petite side anyway, so while it was hard to imagine Gunther stuffing himself in there, for her it was more on the cozy side.

But what really mattered was that it was hers.  Her ‘Mech. 

She climbed up the ladder, strapping herself in the cockpit and lowering her neurohelmet as she prepared to take one last jaunt around the estate before shipping out.

It was inevitable given the stable of ‘Mechs her family owned, that a portion of their sprawling estate was kept clear for use as a practice ground.

She’d finally gotten her papers.  The Seventeenth Donegal Guards.  “The Cheshire Cats.”  She was going to Loric near the Free Worlds League.  And she was almost certain to see combat on a border world.

Of course her father had pulled strings.  She’d be going in as a 2nd Lieutenant and given command of her own lance.  It came with being a Lady and owning your own ‘Mech. 

Nobility did have it advantages.

A few minutes later she was strolling over the gently rolling hills of the estate grounds.  A maze of paths had been pounded into the ground from the footfalls of the families ‘Mechs over generations.

She took her favorite.  The one that led off to a small spring fed pond that bordered the forest.  The juxtaposition of a 40-ton war machine and the serene pastoral beauty of the place always tickled her fancy.

Who knew how long it would be before she’d see it again.  An unexpected chill ran up her spine.  If she would ever see it again, her mind silently amended.

She knew she’d been an oddity.  Her Assassin was likely the fastest ‘Mech in the entire Donegal Guard.  The Lyrans were known to favor weight, and it had long been running joke that a Lyran scout lance was made up of four Zeuses.

She’d get to run reconnaissance for sure.  She throttled up her Assassin, maxing it out at almost 120 km/h.  She was fast all right.  More engine than anything else.

She grinned.  She was ready.

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Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 27 August 2014, 19:43:15
Tribble #138.

It is 2869 and the unthinkable has happened.  Theodore Osis, Khan of Clan Smoke Jaguar, has been given the honor of Absorbing Clan Mongoose.  However, it quickly becomes apparent that the Jaguars have underestimated the Mongoose Warriors at every opportunity.  From the first naval engagements at Circe, to the bloody battles on Atreus, Kirin, and Shadow, Clan Mongoose has given the Jaguars as much damage as they have taken.

Both Clans are gravely wounded, and in a desperate attempt to regain the initiative, Khan Osis has requested that ilKhan Zenos Danforth and the Grand Council grant the Jaguars permission to use orbital bombardment upon the Mongoose fortress-island of Fianna on Circe . . . their final stronghold and one powerful enough to withstand a conventional Jaguar assault for years.

But, to the shock of the Jaguars, the ilKhan refused their request!  Citing the Widowmaker Absorption, he argued that the Wolves had not been forced to resort to such barbaric tactics as orbital bombardment; neither then should the Jaguars . . . unless, the Jaguar Khan was admitting that his Clan was less than that of the Wolf.

Furious at what he considered base treachery by the ilKhan, Khan Osis departed Strana Mechty to lead the assault on Fianna in person.

And there he died.

The Battle of Tara gutted the last reserves of Clan Smoke Jaguar, although Clan Mongoose had suffered at least as many casualties in the bitter fighting and could now field just six Clusters of troops. But those six Clusters still possessed the fortifications and weapon-filled bunkers of Fianna Island . . . and the Jaguars were bleeding.  Of their once-mighty Touman, only fourteen broken and battered Clusters remained . . . and their Fleet was in even more dire straits.

saKhan Ian Moon became the new Khan of Clan Smoke Jaguar, and on 4 January 2869, he appeared before the Grand Council to announce that Clan Mongoose had won their Trial of Refusal against the Absorption.  Moon laid the blame for this directly at the feet of ilKhan Danforth, for withholding the bombardment by which the Jaguars might well have secured a foothold and shattered the defender's morale before their final assault.

In February, Khan Alanah Knox reentered the Grand Council Chamber on Strana Mechty (Khan Martindale having been killed by his own Warriors when he began bragging about the 'victory' they had achieved).  There, she formally requested surkai ("forgiveness") for the actions of her predecessor and asked to resume her place in light of the conclusion of the bitterly-fought Trial.

What happens next?

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 August 2014, 21:37:31
Ooh...interesting indeed...Clan Mongoose surviving it's absorption and the Smoke Jaguars losing a good portion of their touman in the process. Makes one wonder about what would happen in later years as the Golden Century and the Great Debate happen for the Mongooses. Question is, will they be a Warden Clan or a Crusader Clan?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 27 August 2014, 21:45:21
Honestly, I think the Jaguars are done at this point.  Their Touman is trashed and they botched the absorption which makes them look weak and opens them up to absorption over their incompetence.  Given that it sounds like they lack the resources to stop even the weakest of Clans, the question is really who winds up getting them and if any other Clans can grab some of the poorly defended Jaguar holdings before that happens.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 28 August 2014, 02:50:45
IF I were the other Clans I would take them apart piecemeal by grabbing lightly defende/undefended enclaves and backing both Clans into a corner where they can choose to save what little they have left and be absorbed (rather peacefully), die in one final last stand or join together and form a new Clan (like the Stone Lions would two centuries later). Either way, both Clans are so weakened that they would likely wilt under a new assault by fresher troops
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 28 August 2014, 05:32:57
IF I were the other Clans I would take them apart piecemeal by grabbing lightly defende/undefended enclaves and backing both Clans into a corner where they can choose to save what little they have left and be absorbed (rather peacefully), die in one final last stand or join together and form a new Clan (like the Stone Lions would two centuries later). Either way, both Clans are so weakened that they would likely wilt under a new assault by fresher troops
agreed
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 28 August 2014, 06:18:42
Plus it would get rid of my least favorite clan two centuries ahead of time and that can't be all bad.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 28 August 2014, 13:34:27
Honestly.... i wana see a good "what if" with Clan Widowmaker surviving somehow, As short lived as that clan was it is by far my favorite, not least for wich is the fact that, to me, they have the coolest emblem of all the clans and there name rocks.
I would do it myself but my writing skills are questionable lol  #P
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 28 August 2014, 18:07:48
Tribble # 139

On Thakard during the Whiting Conference, Katherine gets a *little* too cocky when she and Victor meet up at their mothers grave. Victor suddenly says that he was a few steps ahead of where everyone thought he was; he faked Ryans death and kept the Dancing Joker on ice long enough to get to Sven Newmark and uncover the other evidence he needs. He then throws everything back in Katherines face and tells her that all the evidence will be publicly presented to all the other House Lords tomorrow at the first day of the conference, as well as the Estates Generals. Oh and he also has clear proof from the ISF and his own moles inside LIC all of which will prove that she ran off to try and ally with the Smoke Jaguars - and instead formed an alliance with her love, Vlad Ward.

He knows all of this - but he just wanted a final moment with her to honestly ask her *why*? Because he just didn't understand why she would do all this to him, to their parents people, to the Inner Sphere e.t.c.

Katherine then with everything shattering around her can't *help* but monologue and furiously lay out the fact that Victor was simply unprepared to rule and do what needs to be done to play at this game. That he is a great soldier but a pathetic politician. Choosing to be friends with the Combine, his laser like focus on the clans leaving him blind - hell, even his inability to see her move plotting with Ryan to kill Melissa, then have him kill her and give her the Lyran side of the Commonwealth! Because - wait, hang on, why would he give up the Commonwealth if he had Ryan and knew she was ...

Oh right, Victor was actually just bluffing the hell out of - he has Newmark but Steiner is dead and the dancing joker was killed trying to escape. And she *points to reporter lurking with a live broadcast to Thakard TV* is on candid camrea!

*queue instant-mob screaming for her blood that comes exploding out towards them as Victor gets back in his limo leaving her alone to face the mob*
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 28 August 2014, 18:51:46
I would LOVE to see that in official print

Victor wakes up after JC knocks him out, dreams everything up to
the civil war, as soon as he wakes up, he sends a long detailed
message to dad, who apparently had suspected her long before since the
entire system was set up so that she was the only child who couldnt rule
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 28 August 2014, 20:16:45
And thus the FedCom Civil War doesn't happen.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 28 August 2014, 20:37:28
With that simple ploy, Victor just turned being a public Katherine supporter into something rather detrimental to people's political ambitions. I forsee a sudden wave of defections and such.

Wait. Is this the Conference that started the Second Star League? Then it seems Omi will still be alive (the pettiest of the assassinations Katherine ordered), which means that Victor might actually marry her in the future (perhaps when he feels it's time for him to step down?)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 28 August 2014, 21:47:31
Wait. Is this the Conference that started the Second Star League? Then it seems Omi will still be alive (the pettiest of the assassinations Katherine ordered), which means that Victor might actually marry her in the future (perhaps when he feels it's time for him to step down?)

That would be very interesting.  A marriage there has the potential to unify three Successor States (and by extension, more than half of the IS) into a single political entity which can easily snowball into what is effectively a new Star League as that combined house absorbs the others, either through marriage or conquest.  Of course, everyone else knows this is the case so I would expect a lot of covert action to try to either break things up or subvert key players from many different factions, and the Word of Blake is probably going to try something totally insane.

This also puts the divergence point before the destruction of the Jaguars, although I would expect that to go off more or less as in canon.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 28 August 2014, 22:31:46
Tribble #140

Tematagi
3040
Free Worlds League

Ellis Ferrel pulled the datapad down from the shelf.  It was an older model.  With the discovery of the Star League memory core on Helm and it’s subsequent distribution throughout the Inner Sphere, new models of just about everything were beginning to be manufactured.  In some cases, for the first time in hundreds of years.

Lighter, more powerful, longer battery life, better resolution, the new datapads actually managed to look slick.  The thing in his hand looked more like a book.  And to him, looks mattered.  He’d only just started at Nimakachi a few months ago, and he wanted to make the best impression possible, any way he could.

It’d been good enough to get hired, but his first assignment was less then thrilling.  Conduct a review of defunct projects and write a report summarizing their objectives, what, if any, progress was made before they were abandoned, and make a recommendation if any should be considered for reactivation.

Basically, cataloguing failures.

He had hoped to be assigned to the Warhammer project.  The Warhammer assembly line had been forced into shutdown in 3022.  Centuries of technological decline had finally claimed the last of the automated control board fabricators.  So while they could still technically build a chassis, it had no brains, no nervous system. 

Stillborn.

But Nimakachi was in high gear now.  The Helm Memory Core had made it once again possible to repair the advanced robotic systems that were critical for BattleMech production.  And, even better yet, rumor had it that it wasn’t going to be the familiar -6R model, but a newly upgraded -7M model incorporating the most advanced weaponry available.

But he hadn’t made the cut for that team.  Instead, here he was dusting off old failures in the bowels of corporate and writing reports no one would ever read.  Not exactly the glorious career he’d imagined for himself.

With a strong exhale, he blew off the screen to the old datapad.  Hopefully it was dead, and he could just move on the next one.  Anything to get through this tedium as quickly as possible.

Ferrel sighed as the device came to life.  No such luck.  He plopped down in a nearby chair.

“Project Venom” appeared in bold red letters, and underneath in smaller type, “Raynor Piers, Lead Engineer”

Ferrel blinked a few time.  Raynor Piers.  The name was vaguely familiar.  He thought about for few minutes.

Wasn’t he the guy who’d resurrected the SDR-5V?  Nimakachi was now producing the fleet 30-ton ‘Mech on both Tematagi and Lapida II.  It’d been a huge success for the company.  It was lucrative enough that Nimakachi had the money to not only refurbish the Spider line on Lapida, but also to rebuild the entire production line for the Warhammer as well.

Not that he’d ever get to see it.

With a grimace, he swiped off the cover page and began reading.

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Grinning, Ellis Ferrel stood in front of bay #065-76 in one of the numerous cavernous storage buildings surrounding Nimakachi corporate headquarters.

It’d taken a lot of cajoling, begging, and persistence to gain access to the bay.  But he’d finally persevered.  Holding his breath, he keyed in the long alpha-numeric passcode.

A moment later, the door came unlocked with an audible click.  He entered the darkness, feeling along the wall for the light switch.  With a sudden hum, high pressure sodium lamps high in the ceiling arced to life, flooding the bay with light, and revealing it’s contents to his eager eyes.

The SDR-8M “Venom” prototype.   He whistled.  So it was true.  Raynor had actually managed to build a working model.  And here it was. 

It was striking similar to the Spider, especially the trademark fins in the back to direct the jump jets.  But it was noticeably larger and a bit more stocky.  Four weapons ports, two on either side of its chest were visible, and he could see where the port for the two original Aberdoveys had been welded over. 

He’d read through the entire project files.  The breakthrough Raynor was known for was the similarity of parts between the 30-ton Spider and the 40-ton Vulcan. 

Project Venom was an attempt to blend the two designs together to make an entirely new ‘Mech.  Or, perhaps it would be more accurate to characterize it as an attempt to upgrade the Spider by adopting more of the parts from the Vulcan.

Supposedly, the -8M “Venom” he was looking at weighed 35-tons.  With a cruising speed of 75.6 km/h, maximum speed 118.8, and a jump capacity of 210 meters, it was slightly less maneuverable than the -5V, but it carried four Aberdovey medium lasers as opposed to two.  Twice the firepower.  It also added two additional heat sinks to help offset the heat from the additional weapons, and added a half-ton more armor as well.

Piers had originally tried to build the Venom around a Vox 280 fusion engine.  But the huge Vox weighed 16 tons.  He had wanted to maintain the trademark speed of the Spider and with the Warhammer in production, at least back then, Nimakachi had a supply of Vox 280s.  He quickly discovered, however, that even though he had increased the weight of the ‘Mech by five tons, the Vox 280 alone ate up 4.5 tons of that.

However, the Draconis Combine was one of Nimakachi’s best customers.  And Piers had managed to get a Magna 245 fusion engine from them.  It was used in the Combine’s ubiquitous JR7-D Jenner, and he had finally ended up installing that in the Venom prototype.

The change in engine weight between the that and the original Pitban 240 was only a scant half-ton.  Which left the room necessary for the addition of the two medium lasers, and the other upgrades.

Once he’d built the prototype, Nimakachi pitched it to the DCMS quartermasters. 

Who had promptly rejected it. 

Same speed, same armor, and less firepower than the Jenner.  The Spider’s only advantage was it’s incredible speed.  Take that way, and what was left to recommend it?

Nothing.  That was what the Quartermaster’s office had ultimately decided.

He’d looked around for another source for the Magna 245, but much to his dismay found it was only produced on Luthien.  And the chances of the Combine supplying an engine for use in a ‘Mech Nimakachi would be selling to it’s enemies was none.

And so Raynor had been forced to shelf the project.

Ferrel smiled. 

With the rediscovery of how to produce extralight fusion engines, he could return the -8M it’s trademark speed, upgrade the four Aberdoveys with pulse technology, double it’s cooling capacity, and add 1.5 tons of armor.

It would make the -5V look like a toy.

He tucked the datapad under his arm and flipped out the lights. 

He had some serious work ahead of him.

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Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 29 August 2014, 18:25:33
Tribble # 141

Operation Odysseus has been launched.
Terra is falling.
Blakes will shall be done!

Just ... not the Blakes will that WOB have in mind.

Because the Precentor Martial and First Circut are not clueless idiots, the loyalist ROM had been purged quite well and managed to get hints that WOB were planning something very big. Despite the Precentor Martials insistance that they need to focus on the Clans, Mori put her foot down and contingency planning was put into place after whispers started to turn into something much more sinister. Finally an agent in the court of the Captain General (because SAFE really are that inept) manages to get a last minute warning out that the Captain General is cooperating to provide logistical support for a major operation on or around the Terran system - and fearing the worse, Focht puts several contingency plans into action.

A week later, even as the Primus boosts out for a waiting jumpship, a pre-arranged signal sent from Hilton Head arrives at a scout orbiting past the jump limit and it scuttles away to an uninhabited system where six ComGuard Divisions have been assembled through a complex shell game. Two FedCom RCTs led by Prince Victor, the two Genyosha Regiments led by Hohiro Kurita and the 1st Saint Ives Lancers led by Kai who were all on their way to Tukayyid for war games have also been 'diverted' to this staging ground and a dozen heavy ComGuard warships round out the force. Hurriedly making their final preparations when word arrives from the Primus, they jump to Terran space just as the full remaining force of the WOB Militia start their drop onto Terra to back up the fake 21st Centauri Lancers working to put down the still dogged ComStar resistance at several points across the system.

Materializing at the L2 point near Earths moon, the jumpships pop their dropships and jump back out on Lithium-Fusion Batteries, as a dozen heavy warships led by the Invisible Truth burn for Terra. Forced to sabotage what little of the SDS systems ComStar had brought back online to take the planet in the first place, Word of Blake find that instead of liberating humanities throneworld in the name of Blake, they have just entrapped themselves. Within two weeks, it is all over, the great roll of the dice of the WOB has come up 'snakes eyes'.

Meanwhile, in the Lyran Alliance, the Jade Falcons continue to slap around the LAAF -laughing  a lot while doing so. The media blackout is rather effective ... right up until some bright WOB deep cover agent makes a 'courageous' decision in the wake of the disaster on Terra, to distract Focht by releasing full details on the extent of the Jade Falcon incursion and timeline behind it with gigabytes of Battle ROMs and such to prove it all. The backlash against Katherine for being such a clueless git in the face of such a massive attack is rather charming.

At the same time, the Primus arrives back on Terra and is pleased with the number of dead Blakests, but turns her hard gaze towards the FWL. The Captain General provided a safe home for their misguided brethren and the WOB used it to rebuild and launch an attack on Terra - with key logistical help from the FWLM and a wink/nudge from the CG. Something clearly has to be done in response ... oh whats that Prince Victor? The Captain General is NOT the Captain General? How fascinating; Precentor ROM, how quickly can you get an information package into the hands of the senior nobles of Oriente, Regulus and Andurien ?  O:-)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 29 August 2014, 18:46:49
Tribble # 140

You're an evil, evil man. You've come to the right place.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 29 August 2014, 18:56:01
That was very thorough.
Elimination of 3 insects with one spray. O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 29 August 2014, 19:06:27
Honestly.... i wana see a good "what if" with Clan Widowmaker surviving somehow, As short lived as that clan was it is by far my favorite, not least for wich is the fact that, to me, they have the coolest emblem of all the clans and there name rocks.
I would do it myself but my writing skills are questionable lol  #P

So you do know about the Battletech Let's Play on Something Awful, right?

3025.  Clan Widowmaker leads the Clan Invasion of the Inner Sphere.  Time to roll the dice.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 29 August 2014, 22:49:55
Tribble #142

Something different happens in the life of Katherine Steiner-Davion. Maybe her brain develops differently, maybe she has a different nanny, or maybe she just gets more hugs growing up, but whatever the cause, she fails to become the psychopathic megalomaniac we know and love. Instead, she's a loving daughter and sister, Victors closest supporter and advisor.

Little change up until the end of 'Assumption of Risk' (Assume Ryan Steiner assassinates Melissa alone this time around), where we DON'T learn that Katherine is a murdering psycho. She does actually fall in love with Galen, and within a year he's asking her brother for her hand.

No Lyran Alliance. No FWL and CC steamroller offensive. No Fed Com civil war. Victor has an advisor who actually knows how to deal with the press. Butterflies, butterflies everywhere ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 30 August 2014, 17:37:57
Tribble #142

Something different happens in the life of Katherine Steiner-Davion. Maybe her brain develops differently, maybe she has a different nanny, or maybe she just gets more hugs growing up, but whatever the cause, she fails to become the psychopathic megalomaniac we know and love. Instead, she's a loving daughter and sister, Victors closest supporter and advisor.

Little change up until the end of 'Assumption of Risk' (Assume Ryan Steiner assassinates Melissa alone this time around), where we DON'T learn that Katherine is a murdering psycho. She does actually fall in love with Galen, and within a year he's asking her brother for her hand.

No Lyran Alliance. No FWL and CC steamroller offensive. No Fed Com civil war. Victor has an advisor who actually knows how to deal with the press. Butterflies, butterflies everywhere ...

Interesting idea - I'm guessing based on the lack of the FWL/CC fiat awesome offensive that Katherine Gibs Slapped Victor on the back of the head when he got the idea for a double for Janos, pointing out that its an insane risk for highly dubious gains?

You might even see a new Operation Bulldog - a two phase offensive against the Smoke Jaguars on one side and Jade Falcons on the other. With the FedCom intact, you could easily free up enough forces for a two phase offensive against the two biggest Crusader Clans at the same time.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 30 August 2014, 17:54:30
Tribble # 143

The FedCom Civil war is over. Katherine is deposed and with the wide information release of Victors evidence compounding her clear crimes through the war, blame is pretty much entirely thrown at her feet for the events since the 3050s when the FedCom was torn asunder.

And yet, two siblings on two thrones suddenly both have a sudden idea that just because Katherine did her best to destroy a grand dream for the Inner Sphere, it doesn't mean it can't live on in some form yet, defying Katherines best efforts if nothing else.

And so even as the cost is counted, the final bodies buried and the long hard road of reconstruction is started, a surprise announcement is made to the Inner Sphere; the signing between Yvonne and Peter of the Steiner-Davion treaty of Friendship and Alliance. Essentially a much watered down FedCom, this is not a union of states as the FedCom was, but a wide ranging series of agreements that reinstates/retains the full economic ties and trade treaties, the sharing of intelligence and joint military cooperation, joint R&D work and so on. Its surprisingly easy to do as Katherines rule is barely over and a lot of the structures were already loosely in place from her efforts to hold the two nations; this simply codifys them in the post Katherine era as the two states reassert their independent identities, rather than tearing it all up to stand alone as was first through to be the likely outcome.
And even more surprisingly, despite the civil war, there is a general sense of public approval at the idea of not letting everything that Hanse, Katrina and Melissa created fall by the wayside in the FedCom, but the more useful bits can live on. Economic commentators especially applaud the concept; noting that open markets and invigorated trade will have a dramatic effect on recovery for the two realms. And with their militiary forces weak, being able to hopefully help the other is something that may just make other states (read Sun Tzu and his damn near complete reversal of the 4th Succession War losses) think very carefully...

Of course, other factions may have ... other ideas.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 30 August 2014, 18:59:56
You might even see a new Operation Bulldog - a two phase offensive against the Smoke Jaguars on one side and Jade Falcons on the other. With the FedCom intact, you could easily free up enough forces for a two phase offensive against the two biggest Crusader Clans at the same time.

I seriously doubt that would happen.  Besides the fact that that adds a lot of ground troops to the Clan side of the equation and the logistical headache or running two parallel campaigns, I seriously doubt the IS could defeat the Falcon's much more substantial fleet.  It also makes it far more likely other Clans will decide to intervene because while the Falcons are not the most popular Clan, they did not piss everyone else off the way the Jaguars did and two Clans facing extermination makes the threat to the others much more plausible than wiping out the Jaguars to send a message.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 30 August 2014, 19:00:11
Interesting idea - I'm guessing based on the lack of the FWL/CC fiat awesome offensive that Katherine Gibs Slapped Victor on the back of the head when he got the idea for a double for Janos, pointing out that its an insane risk for highly dubious gains?
That was actually Hanses plan, born of desperation, but yes, it's possible that Kathy could talk him out of implementing it. If not, not having her steal half his realm would mean he could better respond to the assault (that is, actually respond at all! Damn you, Michael Stackpole!).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 30 August 2014, 19:01:59
I seriously doubt that would happen.  Besides the fact that that adds a lot of ground troops to the Clan side of the equation and the logistical headache or running two parallel campaigns, I seriously doubt the IS could defeat the Falcon's much more substantial fleet.  It also makes it far more likely other Clans will decide to intervene because while the Falcons are not the most popular Clan, they did not piss everyone else off the way the Jaguars did and two Clans facing extermination makes the threat to the others much more plausible than wiping out the Jaguars to send a message.
Agreed it would need a lot of help from the FWL rather then just those two.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 30 August 2014, 22:55:07
Tribble #142

Something different happens in the life of Katherine Steiner-Davion. Maybe her brain develops differently, maybe she has a different nanny, or maybe she just gets more hugs growing up, but whatever the cause, she fails to become the psychopathic megalomaniac we know and love. Instead, she's a loving daughter and sister, Victors closest supporter and advisor.

Little change up until the end of 'Assumption of Risk' (Assume Ryan Steiner assassinates Melissa alone this time around), where we DON'T learn that Katherine is a murdering psycho. She does actually fall in love with Galen, and within a year he's asking her brother for her hand.

No Lyran Alliance. No FWL and CC steamroller offensive. No Fed Com civil war. Victor has an advisor who actually knows how to deal with the press. Butterflies, butterflies everywhere ...

For a variation on this idea- Katherine is sane and loyal- and she can play politics like a master. Media, foreign relations, domestic popularity, economics- she can do it all. And Victor knows it.

And he's never been super-happy with the idea that he'd end up being responsible for the FedCom. He can handle the fighting, sure, but politics? He hates it, and he sucks at it, and oh look: one little sister who took to it all like a fish to water- maybe he should pass the job off onto her.

So sometime not long after the Clan invasion, he quietly takes her aside, and tells her straight up- he wants her to be the next Archon-Princess of FedCom.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 31 August 2014, 01:03:31

Interesting idea - I'm guessing based on the lack of the FWL/CC fiat awesome offensive that Katherine Gibs Slapped Victor on the back of the head when he got the idea for a double for Janos, pointing out that its an insane risk for highly dubious gains?

You might even see a new Operation Bulldog - a two phase offensive against the Smoke Jaguars on one side and Jade Falcons on the other. With the FedCom intact, you could easily free up enough forces for a two phase offensive against the two biggest Crusader Clans at the same time.

Actually...hmmm. I'm trying to figure out how Bred for War's timeline plays out differently here. My personal inclination would be to pull Quintus out of retirement to replace a clearly out of his depth Alex Mallory, possibly with Katherine as his apprentice.  Presumably the Falcon-Wolf war goes off without significant alteration to the endpoint.


After that, things get tricky. With a unified FC having his back, it's entirely possible that Phelan Kell would seek to kick down Vlad's door and beat him to death with the Jade Falcon Khan who doesn't run faster than his subordinate/superior. In which case see Of Wolves and Falcons for one way it could play out. If Phelan for whatever reason chooses not to go that route, the Falcons are still in something of a quandary, they need a target to beat on to show a lack of weakness and train their ill-gotten scientist conspiracy gained recruits, but their options are the Wolves, where Vlad is going to be just itching for a chance to make Ace killing Falcon Khans,  the Steel Vipers who aren't weak enough to suit the Puke Chickens, or the FC plus Wolves in Exile which would violate the Falcon rule of never ever ever attacking anyone who can kick  their teeth in repeatedly with the falcons' own severed legs.

Further afield, Katherine might very well have a diplomatic mission...to the Ghost Bears.  However, without the Great Coventry Teamup, the  spark to remake the SL and thus provide the impetus to launch Bulldog might not be there.


Actually, without the Joshua swap and the resulting kerfluffle, would Victor become aware of Fake Tommy boy?

I seriously doubt that would happen.  Besides the fact that that adds a lot of ground troops to the Clan side of the equation and the logistical headache or running two parallel campaigns, I seriously doubt the IS could defeat the Falcon's much more substantial fleet.  It also makes it far more likely other Clans will decide to intervene because while the Falcons are not the most popular Clan, they did not piss everyone else off the way the Jaguars did and two Clans facing extermination makes the threat to the others much more plausible than wiping out the Jaguars to send a message.

Would this be the substantial Jade Falcon fleet that managed to get two cruisers captured by Wolf in Exile prior to the Jihad?

All sarcastic belittling of the martial prowess of the Lime Emus aside, 31 ships of the Com Guard fleet, 6 from Wolf in Exile, 6 from Wolf's Dragoons, 15 from the FC presuming the lack of a split and the Sarna March still being in FC hands doesn't help move shipbuilding along . While ditching attacks on Huntress and Ironhold would certainly be advisable for the newly expanded campaign, the 23 ships of the Falcon Touman are by no means an insurmountable obstacle, with the actions of the two stars of Snow Raven ships on loan possibly being the dealbreaker for immediate operations.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 31 August 2014, 09:50:46
Tribble #143:

In the vasty deeps of the Dark Nebula, 'Camelot Command' is not a mere space station.

It is a vastly larger, vastly older structure, once repurposed by the SLDF, then forgotten, never touched during the Exodus.

It is, in fact, an Utu-class planetoid... And Rhonda Snord arrives just as its main computer core is starting to wake up...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 31 August 2014, 09:58:39
Would this be the substantial Jade Falcon fleet that managed to get two cruisers captured by Wolf in Exile prior to the Jihad?

All sarcastic belittling of the martial prowess of the Lime Emus aside, 31 ships of the Com Guard fleet, 6 from Wolf in Exile, 6 from Wolf's Dragoons, 15 from the FC presuming the lack of a split and the Sarna March still being in FC hands doesn't help move shipbuilding along . While ditching attacks on Huntress and Ironhold would certainly be advisable for the newly expanded campaign, the 23 ships of the Falcon Touman are by no means an insurmountable obstacle, with the actions of the two stars of Snow Raven ships on loan possibly being the dealbreaker for immediate operations.

If memory serves, most of those IS ships were very small and had inexperienced crews so the Falcon navy would be a serious problem on their own even before you factor in the admittedly pitiful Jaguar fleet.  The situation might still be winnable for the IS if they are very clever, but it is far too close to count on.

The Raven ships could definitely seal the deal and make an IS win virtually impossible if they get involved, however I would expect the Ravens to pull some contractual or political shenanigans to get their ships out of the line of fire because they contracted them out to support an invasion against an IS with no major naval assets, not repel a counter-invasion by a combined IS force with actual WarShips.  That said, if they cannot pull them out for one reason or another then things are going to get very messy because the Ravens are going to want to protect/avenge their ships which means getting the rest of the Clan involved, and that will almost inevitably bring the Ghost Bears into the fight.  With four Clans involved, it is very likely that more will follow, especially when the other Clans in the IS can use it as an excuse to take more territory under the guise of cutting IS supply lines and forcing them to divide their attention.  It might even go so far as to have the Grand Council declare the invasion as invalidating Tukayyid one way or another which opens up even more fronts for the IS to deal with.  The net result would be a total disaster for the IS with campaigns against most of the Clans on dozens of fronts while the bulk of their forces are too far away to effectively respond.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 31 August 2014, 10:06:18
Tribble #143:

In the vasty deeps of the Dark Nebula, 'Camelot Command' is not a mere space station.

It is a vastly larger, vastly older structure, once repurposed by the SLDF, then forgotten, never touched during the Exodus.

It is, in fact, an Utu-class planetoid... And Rhonda Snord arrives just as its main computer core is starting to wake up...


Is that an anime reference?


I'd prefer something more like...


It is, in fact, one of the Death Stars from the Galactic Empire (you didn't think they only built one did you?!) that fled from a Galaxy Far Far Away Long Ago and broke down in the nebula...


Or something to that effect
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: BradGB on 31 August 2014, 11:10:15
Tribble #143:

In the vasty deeps of the Dark Nebula, 'Camelot Command' is not a mere space station.

It is a vastly larger, vastly older structure, once repurposed by the SLDF, then forgotten, never touched during the Exodus.

It is, in fact, an Utu-class planetoid... And Rhonda Snord arrives just as its main computer core is starting to wake up...


but its not the Dahak??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 31 August 2014, 11:10:59
If memory serves, most of those IS ships were very small and had inexperienced crews so the Falcon navy would be a serious problem on their own even before you factor in the admittedly pitiful Jaguar fleet.  The situation might still be winnable for the IS if they are very clever, but it is far too close to count on.
Experience in fighting extremely rigid limited trials doesn't seem to have done the Ghost Bears or Jaguars any good whatsoever in the engagements that happened in canon. Getting two warships taken intact by a 'Clan' with a quarter their fleet size also doesn't speak to any particular competence by the Avocado Dodos.
 
As to weight, four cruiser weight hulls from the FC, three from Wolf's dragoons, two from wolf in exile, nine from the Com Guards matches the JF's ships in that category with a hull to spare. Werewolf handily outweighs the Falcon's nest, leaving the Emerald talon to get  viciously murderstabbed by the nineteen excess destroyer sized hulls, fifteen excess corvettes, two potemkins, and the one leftover cruiser from earlier.

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The Raven ships could definitely seal the deal and make an IS win virtually impossible if they get involved, however I would expect the Ravens to pull some contractual or political shenanigans to get their ships out of the line of fire because they contracted them out to support an invasion against an IS with no major naval assets, not repel a counter-invasion by a combined IS force with actual WarShips.  That said, if they cannot pull them out for one reason or another then things are going to get very messy because the Ravens are going to want to protect/avenge their ships which means getting the rest of the Clan involved, and that will almost inevitably bring the Ghost Bears into the fight.  With four Clans involved, it is very likely that more will follow, especially when the other Clans in the IS can use it as an excuse to take more territory under the guise of cutting IS supply lines and forcing them to divide their attention.  It might even go so far as to have the Grand Council declare the invasion as invalidating Tukayyid one way or another which opens up even more fronts for the IS to deal with.  The net result would be a total disaster for the IS with campaigns against most of the Clans on dozens of fronts while the bulk of their forces are too far away to effectively respond.

The Snow Ravens actually lost warships to Olive Ostrich dickery in recent days, because no one ever accused the Envy turkeys of being particularly bright, and broke the deal themselves as the result of 3055 political chicanery, so they should very much be a non-factor. Sorry, digging through Clan histories in decades old sourcebooks can take a while.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 31 August 2014, 11:45:15
Experience in fighting extremely rigid limited trials doesn't seem to have done the Ghost Bears or Jaguars any good whatsoever in the engagements that happened in canon. Getting two warships taken intact by a 'Clan' with a quarter their fleet size also doesn't speak to any particular competence by the Avocado Dodos.

Ground combat is different.  The IS has been fighting on and off ground wars for centuries, but they have had almost nothing going on in space so they are trying to build and train a navy from nothing.  The Clans on the other hand have maintained their navies in much less ridged trials than ground campaigns and completely unregulated fights when they deny safcon so they are perfectly capable of holding their own in space.  They may not be the battle hardened SLDF veterans that first left on the Exodus, but they are far better than anything the IS has in that era.

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As to weight, four cruiser weight hulls from the FC, three from Wolf's dragoons, two from wolf in exile, nine from the Com Guards matches the JF's ships in that category with a hull to spare. Werewolf handily outweighs the Falcon's nest, leaving the Emerald talon to get  viciously murderstabbed by the nineteen excess destroyer sized hulls, fifteen excess corvettes, two potemkins, and the one leftover cruiser from earlier.

That does give the IS an advantage on just that count, but the Jaguars have some naval assets as well which must be factored in if you want to attack both factions simultaneously.  A quick check on the wiki says the Jaguars had another 15 hulls including another battleship and several cruisers which definitely shifts things in favor of the Clans when you factor in crew skills.

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The Snow Ravens actually lost warships to Olive Ostrich dickery in recent days, because no one ever accused the Envy turkeys of being particularly bright, and broke the deal themselves as the result of 3055 political chicanery, so they should very much be a non-factor. Sorry, digging through Clan histories in decades old sourcebooks can take a while.

Ok, that confirms my first thought then.  Those ships will not be participating in the fighting unless the IS does something supremely stupid so it is likely that it will just be the Falcons and Jaguars against the IS.  Of course, the Falcons are not as universally hated as the Jaguars and having two Clans under attack makes the threat of further action more plausible so it is possible other Clans could come to their aid, but I do not think it is likely enough to worry about.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 31 August 2014, 17:14:26
Is that an anime reference?

An Utu-class planetoid, as portrayed in Mutineer's Moon (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mutineers'_Moon), is 1,700 km in diameter compared to a 100km or so for the Death Star. Such a planetoid carries more than enough firepower to destroy a planet (or entire fleets of warships) and carries a modest fleet of battleships, cruisers and other parasite craft should it need escorts.

In possession of such a ship, Rhonda would have a good chance of becoming Empress of Humanity... whether she wanted to or not.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 31 August 2014, 17:50:02
I seriously doubt that would happen. 

Besides the fact that that adds a lot of ground troops to the Clan side of the equation and the logistical headache or running two parallel campaigns, I seriously doubt the IS could defeat the Falcon's much more substantial fleet. 


To answer your first point, the logistics are actually entirely doable, the Successor States have more than enough jumpships, munitions and transport available to sustain the tempo of operations and scale of operations needed to smash the hell out of the Clans. They have quite literally been able to sustain massive campaigns on multiple borders with each other in never ending back and forth wars for centuries after all. Bulldog wasn't even a blip on the inner sphere economically - hell it probably wasn't even matching up to the Galahad exercises in the scale of units moving around given that thanks to the Clans horrifically bad intelligence services, operational security was a much lower concern than a concurrent exercise against a Successor State.

Taking a glance at Sarna, Bulldog was pretty much entirely carried on the back of the DCMS. They committed something like 39 distinct ground units. ComStar committed 9 Divisions. The AFFS 8 (mostly RCTs). The FWL 3 (seriously, why did they even ask them?). The Crappies 5. Saint Ives 2 units (one being Kai so thats like worth 5 units alone against Clan targets to be fair). The FRR 1. And CWIE a Galaxy, as well as a couple of Merc units. Plus Serpant.

And  bear in mind, that level of force ran over the Jaguars like a frigen steamroller, taking minimal losses all things being equal compared to the pain they dished out.

Thats still only a fraction of what kind of forces COULD be pushed forward. In this scenario, you would have the AFFC probably able to easily commit 50 RCT units to smash the hell out of the Falcons, while leaving enough to cover other commitments. ComStar could probably commit more units to the DC front to help make up for it, as well as leaving the CapCon and FWL units in place to help the Dracs, their sort of sometimes ally, and still be able to comfortably win. You'd certinally need to scrap Serpent, but frankly, you would not WANT a mission to the Clan Homeworlds, it runs entirely counter to what they should have done.

As for the naval question, I'm ... not convinced. We saw clearly through both Bulldog and Serpent that Inner Sphere warship crews were perfectly able to slug it out with Clan Warships on a more or less even basis. At Trafalgar against the Ghost Bears, it was noted that the Clans skill did give them a slight edge in handling their warships, but certinally nothing like enough to make them fight twice as well or anything silly like that. The Inner Sphere if it gathers the ComStar fleet, the CWIE Fleet, Dragoons Fleet, DC Fleet, the FedCom Fleet (which minus the schism, might just have bulked up a little more), and a couple of warships from the FWL and CapCon if possible ... should be able to fight on both fronts. Especially if the Inner Sphere fleet remains concentrated and gets some early blows in knocking off the scattered Falcon Warships. And I'd daresay that a lot of the Falcon Fleet is going to be also either back in the Homeworlds or on the Exodus road, so those numbers may well be pared back quite a bit.

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It also makes it far more likely other Clans will decide to intervene because while the Falcons are not the most popular Clan, they did not piss everyone else off the way the Jaguars did and two Clans facing extermination makes the threat to the others much more plausible than wiping out the Jaguars to send a message.

Possible. But at the same time, if the attack is brutal and quick like Bulldog was, it could just as easily lead to a state of strategic paralysis. The Ghost Bears are notorious for their 'wait and see, take time to think' attitude, so I think its safe to say that they are going to not jump in anytime soon, if they ever do at all. The Nova Cats will I presume switch sides again. The Wolves are still pretty frigen weak after the Refusal war, I can frankly see Vlad moving to 'support the Falcons' ... by taking off their hands a number of worlds that they don't have to now protect! And I can't see Vlad wanting to jump into a fray on behalf of Khan Polly, no matter how good they are in bed. The Diamond Sharks barely have a presence and even then, there is a question mark on if they would really want to jump into the blender or sit back and watch.

The Home Clans, if any do decide to jump in, will need a great deal of time to gather their forces and charge down the Exodus road - and IMO, they are far more likely to just sit back and watch ... and then when the Inner Sphere finishes brutalizing the Falcons and Jaguars, at once start a frantic round of trials in the Homeworlds for all their assets. Its exactly what happened in the 3060s/3070s after all; for all their yelling about joining the invasion, they seem to much prefer hanging around the playpen and looting stuff.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 31 August 2014, 17:56:16
That was actually Hanses plan, born of desperation, but yes, it's possible that Kathy could talk him out of implementing it. If not, not having her steal half his realm would mean he could better respond to the assault (that is, actually respond at all! Damn you, Michael Stackpole!).

I call it Victors plan because while Hanse may have put the idea into place as a possible contingency, Victor was the one who ultimately had to give the go-order on it.

And frankly, its still hard to see WHY he he went ahead with it. Short of just ... well, being an idiot.

Hell, I'm half convinced Katherine rebelled because his idiocy of going ahead with the plan proved he was such a moron it would be a horrible danger to the universe to leave him on the Throne :p
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ErikModi on 31 August 2014, 18:45:46
Tribble 144:  The Promise of Peace

Operation Bulldog and Task Force Serpent have gone off without a hitch, the Clans are stunned, and no one knows when they will gather the courage to attack the Inner Sphere again, if ever.

Victor's machinations against Katherine have yielded fruit, she is ripe to be deposed upon his return and the Federated Commonwealth finally reunited.

As the conquering hero, no one is any position to naysay Victor, and the announcement of his engagement to Omi Kurita produces only mild rumblings in the Draconis March, appeased by numerous public appearances and public relations campaigns aimed at helping the citizens of the Federated Commonwealth and Draconis Combine understand one another.  Within a few years, Victor and Omi are wed, creating the. . . Federated Combine Alliance?  Lyran Combined Suns?  Federated Draconis Commonwealth?

Seeing the writing on the wall, Thomas Marik breaks off Isis' engagement to Sun-Tzu, and she soon marries either Hohiro Kurita or Peter Steiner-Davion.  Sun-Tzu either capitulates or launches a last-ditch attack, which results in the Capellan Confederation being swallowed up and turned over to Candace Liao.  As ComStar becomes the Ministry of Stellar Communications, and the ComGuard is rolled into the new Royal Armed Forces of the Inner Sphere, the Free Rasalhague Republic is effectively absorbed into a new de facto Star League, giving the Clans further disincentive to invade.  Whether this new government returns to calling itself the Star League with Victor as the new First Lord, or goes by something else, like "The Royal United Inner Sphere," is up for debate.

(The promise of Grave Covenant was so awesome it seems a shame to have let it go, though of course, we'll always need someone to point our 'Mechs at so we can shoot them in the face with lasers.)

Tribble 144.1

Similar to the above, but the only change is Victor and Omi marrying, and things proceed from there.  Does the "Federated Combine" manage to bring back the Lyran Alliance with a minimum of bloodshed, or does a slightly different FedCom civil war break out?  Do the other Successor States join with Victor's powerhouse realm, or do they band together to fight it?  How does this affect the balance of power and the rotating mantle of First Lord in the nascent Star League?  Does the Second Star League survive?  Without the unifying factor of the Clan threat, do the Successor States immediately start fighting among themselves?  Or is the fact that the Clans still exist, and COULD come back one day, enough pressure to make everyone hop on board the FedCom bandwagon?

Tribble 145:  Focht's Folly

After revealing Myndo Waterly's --shall we say, poor decision making -- to the First Circuit, and announcing the reformation of ComStar, several conservative First Circuit members left the room, fully preparing to found a splinter order.  As they left, escorted by ROM agents with submachine guns, everyone waited for the sound of gunfire.

They didn't have to wait long.

Realizing that the Inner Sphere could ill afford any kind of division while the Clan threat loomed, Focht mercilessly exterminated any ComStar personnel who didn't accept his new direction.

How does ComStar react?  Do they accept the death of the hardline old guard, or do they rebel against the draconian measures?  Do any true believers survive, paying lip service to the new ways while waiting to restore the "true" ComStar?  How does the nonexistence of the Word of Blake affect the history to come?

Tribble 146:  Hanse Davion, Magnificent Bastard

As the Clans strike at Luthien, Hanse sees the collapse of the Draconis Combine.  As we all know, he honored his pledge to Theodore not to sent his troops into the Combine while the Clan threat remained, and instead sent the Kell Hounds and Wolf's Dragoons to aid Kurita troops in defense of their homeworld.

But what if he hadn't?  What if Hanse broke his vow, and swept up through the Combine, obliterating it?  Or hired mercenaries to do the same thing, "technically" not breaking his promise to Theodore?

Tribble 147:  The ilClan

The Clans won.  Either at Tukayyid, or actually sweeping through to take Terra.

Who is the ilClan?  Arguably, the best story would be a series, examining the effects of each of the Invading Clans winning the right to be ilClan.  If the Wolves won, would they be able to undermine the Crusader philosophy and return the Clans to the protectors of the Inner Sphere?  If a Crusader Clan won, what would the Inner Sphere be like twenty years afterwards?  Would there still be resistance to Clan rule, or would the Successor States fold under the might of the Clans?  Would the Clans themselves accept any one Clan elevated above all others for very long, or would vicious inter-Clan wars ensue, parodying the Succession Wars as the ilClan fought to keep its hard-won position, and the other Clans fought to dethrone them?  Would the ilClan eventually Absorb all the other Clans, or be Annihlated by the other Clans seeking the ilClan power for themselves?  Would this fighting allow the remnants of the Successor States to rally and throw off the invaders, or would the Inner Sphere militaries be too weak to capitalize on the chaos?  If the Clans win at Tukayyid, how is the ilClan chosen then?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 31 August 2014, 19:53:42
Tribble #143:

In the vasty deeps of the Dark Nebula, 'Camelot Command' is not a mere space station.

It is a vastly larger, vastly older structure, once repurposed by the SLDF, then forgotten, never touched during the Exodus.

It is, in fact, an Utu-class planetoid... And Rhonda Snord arrives just as its main computer core is starting to wake up...
Ooh, nasty.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 31 August 2014, 19:58:10
I call it Victors plan because while Hanse may have put the idea into place as a possible contingency, Victor was the one who ultimately had to give the go-order on it.

And frankly, its still hard to see WHY he he went ahead with it. Short of just ... well, being an idiot.

Hell, I'm half convinced Katherine rebelled because his idiocy of going ahead with the plan proved he was such a moron it would be a horrible danger to the universe to leave him on the Throne :p
Good point, Chris, which is why I damned Stackpole: we love him for giving us wonderful characters, but for fracks sake, he makes them do some damned stupid things!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Diablo48 on 31 August 2014, 20:39:12
To answer your first point, the logistics are actually entirely doable, the Successor States have more than enough jumpships, munitions and transport available to sustain the tempo of operations and scale of operations needed to smash the hell out of the Clans. They have quite literally been able to sustain massive campaigns on multiple borders with each other in never ending back and forth wars for centuries after all. Bulldog wasn't even a blip on the inner sphere economically - hell it probably wasn't even matching up to the Galahad exercises in the scale of units moving around given that thanks to the Clans horrifically bad intelligence services, operational security was a much lower concern than a concurrent exercise against a Successor State.

Taking a glance at Sarna, Bulldog was pretty much entirely carried on the back of the DCMS. They committed something like 39 distinct ground units. ComStar committed 9 Divisions. The AFFS 8 (mostly RCTs). The FWL 3 (seriously, why did they even ask them?). The Crappies 5. Saint Ives 2 units (one being Kai so thats like worth 5 units alone against Clan targets to be fair). The FRR 1. And CWIE a Galaxy, as well as a couple of Merc units. Plus Serpant.

And  bear in mind, that level of force ran over the Jaguars like a frigen steamroller, taking minimal losses all things being equal compared to the pain they dished out.

Thats still only a fraction of what kind of forces COULD be pushed forward. In this scenario, you would have the AFFC probably able to easily commit 50 RCT units to smash the hell out of the Falcons, while leaving enough to cover other commitments. ComStar could probably commit more units to the DC front to help make up for it, as well as leaving the CapCon and FWL units in place to help the Dracs, their sort of sometimes ally, and still be able to comfortably win. You'd certinally need to scrap Serpent, but frankly, you would not WANT a mission to the Clan Homeworlds, it runs entirely counter to what they should have done.

Those are good points and I am inclined to agree with you on the ground war, although that is meaningless if those troops get blown out of the sky so the navy is the real question.

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As for the naval question, I'm ... not convinced. We saw clearly through both Bulldog and Serpent that Inner Sphere warship crews were perfectly able to slug it out with Clan Warships on a more or less even basis. At Trafalgar against the Ghost Bears, it was noted that the Clans skill did give them a slight edge in handling their warships, but certinally nothing like enough to make them fight twice as well or anything silly like that. The Inner Sphere if it gathers the ComStar fleet, the CWIE Fleet, Dragoons Fleet, DC Fleet, the FedCom Fleet (which minus the schism, might just have bulked up a little more), and a couple of warships from the FWL and CapCon if possible ... should be able to fight on both fronts. Especially if the Inner Sphere fleet remains concentrated and gets some early blows in knocking off the scattered Falcon Warships. And I'd daresay that a lot of the Falcon Fleet is going to be also either back in the Homeworlds or on the Exodus road, so those numbers may well be pared back quite a bit.

Yes, but as I pointed out earlier, the combined CJF and CSJ fleet has a significant weight advantage over the combined IS fleet in addition to their more experienced crews even if the IS does have more total hulls.  You might be able to take some of that apart piecemeal, but they will concentrate soon enough and become a real problem that I do not think the hodgepodge IS fleet with its divided command and inexperienced crews can deal with.

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Possible. But at the same time, if the attack is brutal and quick like Bulldog was, it could just as easily lead to a state of strategic paralysis. The Ghost Bears are notorious for their 'wait and see, take time to think' attitude, so I think its safe to say that they are going to not jump in anytime soon, if they ever do at all. The Nova Cats will I presume switch sides again. The Wolves are still pretty frigen weak after the Refusal war, I can frankly see Vlad moving to 'support the Falcons' ... by taking off their hands a number of worlds that they don't have to now protect! And I can't see Vlad wanting to jump into a fray on behalf of Khan Polly, no matter how good they are in bed. The Diamond Sharks barely have a presence and even then, there is a question mark on if they would really want to jump into the blender or sit back and watch.

The Home Clans, if any do decide to jump in, will need a great deal of time to gather their forces and charge down the Exodus road - and IMO, they are far more likely to just sit back and watch ... and then when the Inner Sphere finishes brutalizing the Falcons and Jaguars, at once start a frantic round of trials in the Homeworlds for all their assets. Its exactly what happened in the 3060s/3070s after all; for all their yelling about joining the invasion, they seem to much prefer hanging around the playpen and looting stuff.

That only applies if they stop with the IS which really makes no sense.  The whole point of smashing the Jaguars was to make it clear that they can destroy a Clan if they really want to so the Clans need to respect their power.  Without that, the Clans will see that the IS has some power and should not be underestimated, but they are not a real threat because they cannot launch an invasion of their own.  What that means is that the Clans will sit tight in their old invasion corridors until the truce is over, then every Clan will roll in in force with full knowledge of what to expect and what preparations need to be made resulting in a much more effective second invasion.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 31 August 2014, 23:51:19
Ground combat is different.  The IS has been fighting on and off ground wars for centuries, but they have had almost nothing going on in space so they are trying to build and train a navy from nothing.  The Clans on the other hand have maintained their navies in much less ridged trials than ground campaigns and completely unregulated fights when they deny safcon so they are perfectly capable of holding their own in space.  They may not be the battle hardened SLDF veterans that first left on the Exodus, but they are far better than anything the IS has in that era.
Check the descriptions in the relevant sourcebooks. Clan warship 'battles' are often formulaic engagements conducted in a  strictly limited and controlled fashion, as is to be expected when their total build rate seems to be a single hull every few years at best.

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That does give the IS an advantage on just that count, but the Jaguars have some naval assets as well which must be factored in if you want to attack both factions simultaneously.  A quick check on the wiki says the Jaguars had another 15 hulls including another battleship and several cruisers which definitely shifts things in favor of the Clans when you factor in crew skills.

The DC brings seventeen of its own hulls to the equation, along with anything that can be chiseled out of the dancing Wobbly puppet. Its Kirishimas, and the FC Avalons can be confidently expected to absolutely murder anything smaller than a Nightlord apart from the lonely lonely Falcon or Jaguar Liberator one on one, apart from Aegises that they can handily dance around while having comparable firepower. Comstar's Dantes will likewise skin alive any destroyer they encounter. Presuming the FWL can be dragged into the fight kicking and screaming, their Agamemnons and any completed Theras will handily outperform any cruiser in the Toumans to be fought.


Nine of the assembled vessels of the two Toumans will have a hard fight against any of the horde of corvettes and cutters the IS powers bring.

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Ok, that confirms my first thought then.  Those ships will not be participating in the fighting unless the IS does something supremely stupid so it is likely that it will just be the Falcons and Jaguars against the IS.  Of course, the Falcons are not as universally hated as the Jaguars and having two Clans under attack makes the threat of further action more plausible so it is possible other Clans could come to their aid, but I do not think it is likely enough to worry about.

Even if the Wolves lost their minds and came to the aid of either of their hated enemies, that leaves the Ghost Bears to extract some long delayed payback. If the Ghost Bears move, then they open themselves up to Vlad scoring some cheap points and expanding his occupation zone. Nobody likes the Steel Vipers, and the feeling is mutual.

With the lack of the Northwind Highlanders needing mercenary work, and therefore the Nova Cats and Ghost Bears not getting into it as a result of their operations for the Combine, the potential wild card and unknown in this scenario is the Nova Cats. The smart thing to do would be to come over as they did in canon, but take their time and operate with the assembled IS forces to extract all of their people. If they unaccountably come to the aid of the Jaguars that they don't really care for, then yes the whole DC portion of the campaign will have to be scrubbed.

Those are good points and I am inclined to agree with you on the ground war, although that is meaningless if those troops get blown out of the sky so the navy is the real question.

Yes, but as I pointed out earlier, the combined CJF and CSJ fleet has a significant weight advantage over the combined IS fleet in addition to their more experienced crews even if the IS does have more total hulls.  You might be able to take some of that apart piecemeal, but they will concentrate soon enough and become a real problem that I do not think the hodgepodge IS fleet with its divided command and inexperienced crews can deal with.

I'm sorry, I can't hear you over the sound of the Jade Falcons being sandwiched between two invading clans that hate their guts. There's also the slight need to maintain forces at the Homeworlds, that are going to be a non-factor for any realistic campaign length in the IS.
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That only applies if they stop with the IS which really makes no sense.  The whole point of smashing the Jaguars was to make it clear that they can destroy a Clan if they really want to so the Clans need to respect their power.  Without that, the Clans will see that the IS has some power and should not be underestimated, but they are not a real threat because they cannot launch an invasion of their own.  What that means is that the Clans will sit tight in their old invasion corridors until the truce is over, then every Clan will roll in in force with full knowledge of what to expect and what preparations need to be made resulting in a much more effective second invasion.

The Clans, using the resource of the Clan homeworlds, are somewhere between laughable and completely ineffectual when it comes to Warship building. As shown in the follow up to Bulldog, it's entirely possible for the IS forces to wipe out the Clan forces locally, then send their massed array to beat down the Clans at their homeworlds.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 01 September 2014, 02:48:16
Good point, Chris, which is why I damned Stackpole: we love him for giving us wonderful characters, but for fracks sake, he makes them do some damned stupid things!

I'd have to disagree. Victor saw very clearly that with the bulk of the AFFC focused on the Clans, their other borders were vulnerable. In theory, with the Combine also looking at the Clans, the AFFC should still be too large and powerful to be vulnerable. However, the internal problems faced by the Fed-Com place this in doubt. (Given what happens, Victor was showing good levels of foresight).

With Joshua a patient on New Avalon there's no real likelihood the FWL will move. With Joshua dead, on New Avalon and implicitly under Victor's care... and with Sun-Tzu whispering in Thomas' ear? Very different. Victor knows this and - although it's never stated - he knows Joshua is dying.

Victor knows he can't avert this completely - as he says to Thomas, there's no chance of replacing Joshua in the long term. But replacing him for months, maybe a year or two, to buy time to deal with the Fed-Com's internal problems which should - in theory - leave him in a strong position even once Joshua is reported dead.

This is risky, yes. However, the worst case scenario for Joshua dead even by natural causes is that foul play would be suspected and the FWL would attack the vulnerable Fed-Com. So the choice is do nothing, which has a risk of war with the FWL, or try the clone plan which if discovered guarantees war with the FWL and if not gives the chance of averting the war entirely.

I can see why Victor thought it was worth a try. The failure was that once Katherine learned of it - and she was supposed to be left in the dark - she used it against him, causing Thomas to verify Joshua's identity and then starting the war. Victor certainly should have been aware of this. The plan was a calculated risk but it wasn't doomed to failure. The key error was that with Katherine as a known adversary, Victor failed to have the plan sufficiently secured against her meddling.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 01 September 2014, 03:40:14
I'd have to disagree. Victor saw very clearly that with the bulk of the AFFC focused on the Clans, their other borders were vulnerable. In theory, with the Combine also looking at the Clans, the AFFC should still be too large and powerful to be vulnerable. However, the internal problems faced by the Fed-Com place this in doubt. (Given what happens, Victor was showing good levels of foresight).


That seems to be entirely circular logic though. Neither the FWL nor CapCon have made any moves against the Federated Commonwealth for years now - Sun-Tzu certinally had no hostage against HIS behavior to stop him launching a minor push here or there. Remember, war isn't about how it *starts* but about how it *ends* - the endgame is something all strategic planners have to keep their eyes on when considering going to war. Its all well and good to say that with the AFFC mostly focused on the Clans, that the FWL or CapCon can concentrate enough forces to advance, but then you have to ask 'okay, what then?'
Because the answer is 'Oh then the AFFC comes charging down like a frigen steamroller and punishes the FWL and CC for their impudence, horribly. Saying that Victor was showing good levels of foresight IMO is wrong, because by doing what he did, HE created the justification for the invasion. HIS actions were what led to the attack. There is little to no evidence that the FWL would have attacked without being provoked in such a brazen way - especially given how internally divided they are. What they always need is a rallying cry ... and Victor gave them the biggest one they could possibly have gotten.

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With Joshua a patient on New Avalon there's no real likelihood the FWL will move. With Joshua dead, on New Avalon and implicitly under Victor's care... and with Sun-Tzu whispering in Thomas' ear? Very different. Victor knows this and - although it's never stated - he knows Joshua is dying.


Sun-Tzi is *always* whispering in someones ear - it doesn't mean anyone is listening! Its pretty clear by this stage as well that he is NOT in the drivers seat in this alliance with Thomas. He is engaged to Thomas's daughter ... and yet even by this stage, Thomas is refusing to allow a date for the wedding to be set. Its pretty clear that there is no real alliance between the two, or at least not an alliance as Sun-Tzu sees it. Just the FWL using the CC because Thomas knows in delight that Sunny boy has zero other options to play with and he's a good dog doing what he tells him to do.
Frankly, the value of Joshua as a hostage is overstated. Janos can always ask him to be sent home if he looks so good after all - and what is Victor going to do, say 'LOL, no, he will never leave New Avalon!' Or Sun-Tzu can launch an attack entirely on his own (or with support from the FWL quietly, under the table and deniable). And what, Victor withholds medication and says Joshua will die if he doesn't back down? Or what if the FWL invades one planet? Is that the line at which Victor will kill him? Two planets? Ten?

Joshua was used by Hanse to get the FWL to churn out SL military hardware in a hurry during the dark days of the Clan Invasion - that use ran out a long time ago. And he was less a hostage and more a bargin; you give me the guns I need, I will try to save your sons life. Victor trying to use him to dictate the strategic actions of the FWL and CC was a really REALLY stupid mistake and gross overreach on his part. Lazy, sloppy and short sighted thinking.

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Victor knows he can't avert this completely - as he says to Thomas, there's no chance of replacing Joshua in the long term. But replacing him for months, maybe a year or two, to buy time to deal with the Fed-Com's internal problems which should - in theory - leave him in a strong position even once Joshua is reported dead.


This logic appears predicated on the idea that the FWL and CC are wild wolves straining at the leash and will use ANY excuse to attack the FedCom, going from zero to war in like five seconds. It just seems hugely unlikely to me that without some kind of major provocation, they would do so. Because again, the endgame scenario can only be that no matter what short term gains they make, the AFFC will come thundering down like an enraged monster and make them pay for their impudence - that is what guarantees their staying calm. Hell, Victor even kept considering doing it in the OTL; he knew full well that he COULD have launched a massive counter attack into the Sarna March that would have smashed the FWL and CC forces, at the cost of short term economic damage from having to conscript the necessary jumpships from the civilian fleet, but he held back because he was 'too nice' to go ahead with it.

Again, its about opportunity cost. IF everything goes as planned, sure having a double might by a few years of time no worries, no blood, no harm.
But we all know Murphy gets a say in all plans - and the consequences (as we saw in the OTL) if something DOES go wrong ... are just too massive to risk it.

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This is risky, yes. However, the worst case scenario for Joshua dead even by natural causes is that foul play would be suspected and the FWL would attack the vulnerable Fed-Com.


Why exactly would they suspect foul play? It makes no sense - Joshua is a sick boy whose condition steadily worsened until he finally died. Victor killing him at this time makes absolutely no sense at all - and its hard to see even Sun-Tzu trying to spin this into 'THE BOY DYING WITH CANCER WAS REALLY KILLED BY THE FEDRATS!' and having anyone actually believe him. Granted its not impossible, but it seems highly unlikely. Granted you are looking at worst case scenarios, but the odds of Joshua dying naturally leading to war are vastly lower than the risks of trying to substitute a double and then after being exposed, saying 'oh seriously, it was never meant to be anything BAD, you have to believe me!' - and hoping that an enraged Captain General and FWL population would believe you. Where as just sending his body home with the deepest regrets of the Federated Commonwealth says that you respect them and were never using him as a chain or leash on their behavior. 

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So the choice is do nothing, which has a risk of war with the FWL, or try the clone plan which if discovered guarantees war with the FWL and if not gives the chance of averting the war entirely.


I just can't see it, to be perfectly honest. Not doing anything MIGHT lead to war for some reason I can't really understand, given both the FWLs internal disunity and how the endgame scenario there would have to play out (AFFC go 4th Succession War on Thomas and Sun-Tzu after initial reversals). Substituting Joshua may lead to a short term stability if everything goes according to plan ... or it may force the hand of the FWL and CC because they would HAVE to respond to such an act of aggression and guarantee war that they could entirely claim as justified, gathering far more internal support in the FWL for it. Or after the fact when Victor returns the body home and an autopsy shows he has been dead for several years, not several months...

No General worth the name EVER looks at a plan and says 'what can I gain if everything goes exactly according to plan?' - they say 'what will I loose if everything falls to pieces - and how many ways can it fail?'

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I can see why Victor thought it was worth a try. The failure was that once Katherine learned of it - and she was supposed to be left in the dark - she used it against him, causing Thomas to verify Joshua's identity and then starting the war. Victor certainly should have been aware of this. The plan was a calculated risk but it wasn't doomed to failure. The key error was that with Katherine as a known adversary, Victor failed to have the plan sufficiently secured against her meddling.

Actually there are three key failures as far as I see them with how Victor went about the plan.

1. He didn't maintain OppSec over the whole project in a much wider way than his sister. A SAFE agent somehow getting a DNA sample of Joshua, the double going out for walkabouts in public and getting spotted rather than the kid being locked up in a high security palace somewhere on New Avalon. If you ARE going to do this plan, it needs to be more airtight than an Aerospace fighter; everyone who has access to the double needs to be triple screened because even one rumor getting out is possibly death to the whole idea. What if his Mother shows up for a surprise visit? Or another relative? Or a FWL medical team to make a checkup? Or somehow who saw the original Joshua on deaths door, then hears how he is now much much better, magically having reversed major organ failure and such? How do you deal with all these possible scenarios without going 'weekend at Barnies'?

2. He had zero contingency planning in place for 'what if this goes tits up?' - the logical answer to which would have been 'punitive action against the Federated Suns'. No backup plan, hell no plan at ALL is REALLY unacceptable at this level. Victor literally looked to be completely unprepared for things going wrong and just presumed his plan would work perfectly.

3. He had absolutely no medical idea of what he was doing; again he left it far too late to substitute the double so that Joshuas condition suddenly 'remarkably improved' far beyond any credible level. If he HAD to do this, he should have done so much earlier.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 01 September 2014, 03:51:01
Tribble 144:  The Promise of Peace

Operation Bulldog and Task Force Serpent have gone off without a hitch, the Clans are stunned, and no one knows when they will gather the courage to attack the Inner Sphere again, if ever.

Victor's machinations against Katherine have yielded fruit, she is ripe to be deposed upon his return and the Federated Commonwealth finally reunited.

As the conquering hero, no one is any position to naysay Victor, and the announcement of his engagement to Omi Kurita produces only mild rumblings in the Draconis March, appeased by numerous public appearances and public relations campaigns aimed at helping the citizens of the Federated Commonwealth and Draconis Combine understand one another.  Within a few years, Victor and Omi are wed, creating the. . . Federated Combine Alliance?  Lyran Combined Suns?  Federated Draconis Commonwealth?

Seeing the writing on the wall, Thomas Marik breaks off Isis' engagement to Sun-Tzu, and she soon marries either Hohiro Kurita or Peter Steiner-Davion.  Sun-Tzu either capitulates or launches a last-ditch attack, which results in the Capellan Confederation being swallowed up and turned over to Candace Liao.  As ComStar becomes the Ministry of Stellar Communications, and the ComGuard is rolled into the new Royal Armed Forces of the Inner Sphere, the Free Rasalhague Republic is effectively absorbed into a new de facto Star League, giving the Clans further disincentive to invade.  Whether this new government returns to calling itself the Star League with Victor as the new First Lord, or goes by something else, like "The Royal United Inner Sphere," is up for debate.

(The promise of Grave Covenant was so awesome it seems a shame to have let it go, though of course, we'll always need someone to point our 'Mechs at so we can shoot them in the face with lasers.)

In this case I would really REALLY not want to be the WOB.

A new First Lord needs the Throne of Terra after all. And if everyone is looking for a new 'target' they can all point their guns towards...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 01 September 2014, 04:09:11

but its not the Dahak??

so it would be a Dahak stomp lol
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ErikModi on 01 September 2014, 08:23:17
I can see why Victor thought it was worth a try. The failure was that once Katherine learned of it - and she was supposed to be left in the dark - she used it against him, causing Thomas to verify Joshua's identity and then starting the war. Victor certainly should have been aware of this. The plan was a calculated risk but it wasn't doomed to failure. The key error was that with Katherine as a known adversary, Victor failed to have the plan sufficiently secured against her meddling.

Well, it wasn't Katherine who told Thomas, it was Sun-Tzu, in a roundabout way.  Sun-Tzu had a dream which gave him the idea that Victor COULD replace Joshua with a double.  He immediately discarded the idea, because he believed there was no way Victor would actually be stupid enough to try something like that.  But then Sun-Tzu though, accusing Victor of doing it would stir up trouble, and Sun-Tzu loves to stir up trouble, in case there's some meager advantage he can pick out of it for his realm.  As it so happened, Victor had been stupid enough to go the double route, but not for the reasons everyone thought the had.

Stackpole really worked hard to, as they say, hang a lantern on the fact that the plan was dumb, bordering on vile, and Victor really had no business trying to go through with it.  The whole book is more or less about Victor coming to the realization that he can't run the Federated Commonwealth the way his father had, because he isn't his father, and his leadership style is very different from Hanse's.  Right off the bat, Victor is grumbling about the fact that he hates this plan, it feels wrong, and he doesn't feel he should be doing it. . . but it seems the best way to keep the FWL and CC at bay a little while longer.  His concern wasn't so much that Thomas would attack him, but that Sun-Tzu, who everyone else sees as a power-hungry madman (instead of the power-hungry manipulative schemer he really is), would marry Isis the instant Joshua was out of the picture, have Thomas assassinated, merge the CC and FWL, and launch a full-on banzai assault.  The FedCom could probably pretty easily slap them down, but that would weaken their ability to fight the Clans, costing everyone in the long run.

Would it have been better for everyone involved if Victor had trusted Thomas to keep Sun-Tzu in check, and just told him that there was nothing more they could do for Joshua and it was his call on when the shut off the machine?  Absolutely.  That's pretty much the whole point of that particular book.  Victor made a dumb mistake, but his dumb mistakes are a LOT more costly than most people's.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 01 September 2014, 15:17:12
Tribble #148 - The Old Ways Are Dead

3049
Whittington
Lyran Commonwealth

Carsten Henley sat alone in his study drinking the last of his Glengarry scotch.  The estate was oddly quiet, but sadly he was getting used to it.  His son, Jason, had been accused of killing two men and rather than face trial he had escaped off planet with the family BattleMech.  Six months later, his daughter, Christina, had abruptly left planet as well in the company of a DropShip Captain who had served in Jason’s mercenary unit.  Ostensibly to find him.

In any case, the wolves were circling.  In some ways they had been ever since the proliferation of the Helm Memory Core by the Gray Death Legion.  That had marked the beginning of the end for the old MechWarrior families.  Their estate on Whittington had been granted by Archon Elizabeth Steiner almost 200 years ago during the Third Succession War.

Back then, the family had controlled a rare assault ‘Mech, an 80-ton Zeus, as well as a Centurion and a Commando.  In exchange for pledging fealty to the Archon, she had granted them extensive holdings on Whittington and the attendant income from the lands.  It was common arrangement back in those days.

The First and Second Succession Wars had destroyed most of the BattleMech manufacturing capability of the Inner Sphere.  Consequently, ‘Mechs were rare, and their dominance on the battlefield unchallenged. 

Carsten glanced over at an old hologram of a much younger version of himself, standing proudly at the feet of a Zeus bearing the crossed swords of the 3rd Lyran Guard.  He’d been a Major in the Guard.  His fellow soldiers had awarded him the nickname of “Boxer.”

He allowed himself a rare chuckle as he swirled the scotch around the ice in his tumbler.  How many Kurita defensive lines had he punched through?  How many breeches in their own lines had he sealed shut?  Back then, the only thing that could stand against the might of a Zeus was another assault ‘Mech.  And they were exceedingly rare.  At least back then they were.

Now, thanks to the Helm Memory Core, ‘Mech factories were sprouting up like mushrooms after a spring rain.  And not just old lines being reopened, in a few cases entire new factories had been built to produce equally new designs.  The 45-ton Hatchetman was the obvious example.  But there were others as well.

The bottom line to him, however, was that ‘Mechs were no longer held in the sacred regard they had been a scant twenty years ago.  Any fool with enough C-bills could get their hands on one nowadays.  Where once they been the sole province of the Great House militaries and the MechWarrior families, now even private companies fielded lances of ‘Mechs.

He sighed loudly to himself as he finished the last of his scotch.  The tradition had more or less ended with him.  Jason had done his stint in the 3rd Lyran Guard, but only one.  He’d left to found his own mercenary unit after the War of 3039. 

Ultimately, it had been a good call.  The old tribute system was another victim of the technological renaissance.  How many millions had he made by accepting the surrender of fellow MechWarriors?  There had been a code chivalry between MechWarriors back then.  Once you realized your situation was hopeless, or your ‘Mech had taken significant damage, you would withdraw if possible, or surrender if you had to, rather than risk the destruction of your ‘Mech.  There was an understanding between MechWarriors, and no one wanted to risk becoming one of the Dispossessed.  Your surrender would be accepted, and you and your ‘Mech would be taken into custody until such time as your family paid tribute to the victors.  Then, you and your ‘Mech would be released.

It was actually quite civilized.  Of course, now it just sounded archaic.  The War of 3039 had proven the point quite well.  With production ramping up, the battles had regained an intensity not seen for at least a hundred years.  The struggles were desperate, the fatalities massive, the destruction utter.

Jason had lost the family Zeus on Vega against the 2nd Legion.  It would have been the end of their family, but for the Kurita Battlemaster he’d captured during that same battle.  But the point was clear.  The old ways were gone. 

It was kill or be killed now.  Destroy or be destroyed.  And without the tribute money, the payoff for the MechWarrior families was almost non-existent.  So even if he couldn’t bring himself to agree with Jason’s decision, he at least understood why he’d chosen to go the mercenary route.  At least there was still the potential for lucrative contracts and salvage rights.

And he’d done well.  He had send home millions of C-bills over the ten years he’d ran his unit.

Carsten shook his head.  That was all in the past.  He was just gathering wool, reliving the past glories.  The reality of now was starkly different.

He didn’t want to think about it.  He was sick of thinking about it.  All of his children had flown the coop leaving nothing but empty dreams and vague promises.  The local authorities were circling his estate like vultures just waiting for him to hurry up and finish dying. 

He had become the very thing he had feared the most.  The thing that had haunted him his entire life had come to pass.

The family was Dispossessed. 

And if their fortunes didn’t change soon, it would all be gone.   The estate, the titles, the income, the fruit orchards.  Everything.

He stared despairingly out of the window.

What if the Helm Memory Core had never been discovered in 3028 by the Grey Death Legion?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 01 September 2014, 17:07:08
Tribble #148 - The Old Ways Are Dead


What if the Helm Memory Core had never been discovered in 3028 by the Grey Death Legion?

Isn't the answer to that question;

"I am Ulric Kerensky ilKhan of the Clans and I hereby do issue a Batchall for the Terran System in the name of the Clans of Kerensky. Primus Waterly; what forces do you bid in your defense!?"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 01 September 2014, 17:51:25
Isn't the answer to that question;

"I am Ulric Kerensky ilKhan of the Clans and I hereby do issue a Batchall for the Terran System in the name of the Clans of Kerensky. Primus Waterly; what forces do you bid in your defense!?"
bargain well and done, just the answer that I would give
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 01 September 2014, 17:57:01
Isn't the answer to that question;

"I am Ulric Kerensky ilKhan of the Clans and I hereby do issue a Batchall for the Terran System in the name of the Clans of Kerensky. Primus Waterly; what forces do you bid in your defense!?"
Pretty much.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 01 September 2014, 19:28:22
Isn't the answer to that question;

"I am Ulric Kerensky ilKhan of the Clans and I hereby do issue a Batchall for the Terran System in the name of the Clans of Kerensky. Primus Waterly; what forces do you bid in your defense!?"

That is, more or less, what happened.  Tukayyid was a proxy for just that battle.  And the Com Guards would have remained more or less the same regardless of the Helm Memory Core.

So are you suggesting, in the end the discovery wouldn't have made much difference?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 01 September 2014, 19:41:35
That is, more or less, what happened.  Tukayyid was a proxy for just that battle.  And the Com Guards would have remained more or less the same regardless of the Helm Memory Core.

So are you suggesting, in the end the discovery wouldn't have made much difference?

No no, I mean that the Clans jump into the Terran System DIRECTLY and take the place. Because the Successor States without the Helm Core won't have a hope in hell of slowing down the Clans advance in the way they did in the OTL. ComStar may well not get the chance to bid a proxy battle this time, there is a good chance the Year of Peace will be butterflied away (I mean it was pure luck Tyra went kamakazi in exactly the right place in exactly the right time) and the Clans will just keep coming.

Without the Helm Core, there is no technological recovery. There is no upswing in production of military material, probably still not a real recovery from the impact of the 4th Succession War even by the 3050s. There are no Star League refits rushed out to close the gap with ClanTech. ComStar probably have managed to screw with the Inner Sphere a lot more than in the past. There is no rapid reverse engineering of Clan Battle armor into the GDL armor, IS standard and so on...

OTOH you might argue that the FedCom never launch the 3039 war and the DC doesn't launch its own offensive, because an offensive is different entirely from sucking the AFFS/LCAF in and then buskwacking them. So it might sort of even out a little? But that in turn might mean that Theodore never really proves himself and gets a chance to start rebuilding the DCMS into something less of a joke, so the Jags and Bears go through them even faster than in the OTL...

Soooooo many possible butterflies :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 01 September 2014, 19:54:39
Actually the technological recovery had already begun.  The Merlin, Cataphract, Raven, and Hatchetman were all new designs that began production prior to the Helm Core.  House Davion was already experimenting with double heat sink technology in the 3020s.  It would have been *slower*, but it still would have been there.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 01 September 2014, 20:15:58
Actually the technological recovery had already begun.  The Merlin, Cataphract, Raven, and Hatchetman were all new designs that began production prior to the Helm Core.  House Davion was already experimenting with double heat sink technology in the 3020s.  It would have been *slower*, but it still would have been there.

Truth - but I think you'd find it had to argue that we'd see anything like the same scale And pretty much all those innovations have a large asterisk next to them.

I mean they had the books Hanse nicked from HS that started the whole NAIS project in the first place, which was a boost, but ... pretty much every innovation that came through from the later 3020s onwards is pretty clearly cloning star league technology pulled from the core rather than innovating anything new. ER energy weapons, LBx autocannons, Endo Steel, Gauss Rifles, Ultra Autocannons, FF armor, advanced EW gear, XL engines and so on; ALL of it is just SL technology put back into production now that they have the engineering data from Helm.

Rather than something NEW innovated by the IS on their own R&D efforts. Like the later innovations like MRMs, Plasma Cannons, Stealth Armor, MMLs e.t.c

Sure they might still make some advances ... but I don't think there is much chance they will be in any real position to face off against the Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Arvanna on 01 September 2014, 20:17:30
Actually the technological recovery had already begun.  The Merlin, Cataphract, Raven, and Hatchetman were all new designs that began production prior to the Helm Core.  House Davion was already experimenting with double heat sink technology in the 3020s.  It would have been *slower*, but it still would have been there.

Now now AK don't go raining  all over his Clan curb stomp the IS fantasy/fan fic  :))
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Alexander Knight on 01 September 2014, 21:41:31
Now now AK don't go raining  all over his Clan curb stomp the IS fantasy/fan fic  :))

Meh, I can do that with pure 3025-tech.  :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sigil on 01 September 2014, 22:17:06
Tribble #149

2996
Tematagi
Free Worlds League

Nimakachi’s Vulcan assembly line on Tematagi hadn’t met its production quota in 23 years.  Production had dropped year after year forming a trend that looked all but impossible to reverse.

More and more of the complex robotic assembly systems failed every year, only to be taken over by slower, more error prone human workers.  But there would come a time in the not to distant future, that the human hand would no longer be sufficient to maintain production.

The diagnostic interpretation system was the weak point.  While things like the Mather Tech 500 chassis, actuators, myomer, armor, and to a lesser extent even the Pitban 240 fusion engine, gyroscope, and sensors, were still understood, the DI computer is what combined all the disparate system in a single unified whole.

It was like the nervous system, if not the brain, of the BattleMech.  And the automated systems that pressed out the control boards for it were shrouded in mystery, the work too complex, too exacting, to ever be replicated by human hands.

Black boxes. 

The Nimakachi technicians had long been relegated to simply canalizing parts to keep it running.  Parts that were dangerously scarce.  Who made the robots that made the robots?  Basically no one.  Outside of a few legendary plants, such as Defiance Industry’s Hesperus II complex, or Coventry Metals Work’s headquarters on Coventry, there was nowhere to turn to secure the parts needed to maintain the BattleMech assembly lines.

So production dropped year after year.

He knew, he’d worked on the Vulcan line for a dozen years before taking a leave of absence to study at the Humphreys School of Warfare on Kanata.  He’d studied Industrial Engineering there, with a specialty in Workflow Analysis.

Six years later, he’d returned to Nimakachi, expect this time not as a line worker.  He was a full fledged Engineer, but with one major difference.  He actually knew how the whole plant operated from first hand experience.

Right after he’d been hired back on, he’d met with the top Nimakachi executives.  There, he’d presented a radical plan to overhaul the entire Vulcan operation promising to not only stop the downward trend, but to reverse it completely.

He smiled to himself as he looked out over the revamped factory floor.  Desperate to do anything that might restore profitability, and their stock price as well, they’d actually agreed. 

He’d been surprised.  The entire plan was basically his dissertation at Humphreys.  He was now in the third year of his plan.  He’d stopped the bleeding the first year, the second they had shown modest growth, but this was the breakout year.

He’d started by extending the assembly line and pulling off all the robotic arms performing tasks which could be accomplished by skilled labor.  He winced.  That part had been the hardest to sell.  Nimakachi must have increased its labor force but a good 50%, which meant vast increase in operating expenses.  Which is why the plan had a three year sunset. 

Each Vulcan was worth approximately 3.5 million C-bills.  Which, conservatively, after cost of goods, overhead, and other associated production costs, equaled about the salary for seven additional lineman.  In reality, though, he suspected the gross profit margin on a Vulcan far exceeded 10%, but he wasn’t willing to risk his numbers.  He let the executives hold that back as their own hedge against his plan.

His plan called for hiring an additional ninety workers.  Meaning, he had to produce an additional thirteen ‘Mechs just to break even.  The entire production line was only as fast as it’s slowest worker.  He knew the more time consuming tasks on the line, and pulled them apart into multiple jobs.  Which is why he needed the additional workers.  The factory ran around the clock, three full shifts, so he had to have more people on each shift.

But that wasn’t all.  He instituted the “rovers.”  That was his real innovation.  They were men and women cross trained in all of the different assembly jobs, and whenever a worker needed a break, or their efficiency was beginning to drop off, one of the “rovers” would step in and take over their station.

He was ruthlessly methodical about.  The work at each station was timed.  Each individual iteration of the job was timed as well.  Each worker had their own efficiency rating which was tied directly to their compensation, and even within a given shift, he could tell when a particular worker was getting tired, distracted, or otherwise in need of relief.

Aside from the increase in worker productivity, his plan offered another advantage.  By pulling the robotic arms out wherever he could, he had, in effect, built of stockpile parts to keep the critical automated portions of the factory operational.  That alone would have been worth it in his estimation.  It would allow the factory to continue production for at least another ten to twenty years assuming a normal rate of attrition. 

The executives had seized on that part almost immediately.  Faced with the prospect of eventually losing the ability to produce BattleMechs all together, any plan which staved off the end of company was given serious consideration.

So, they’d adopted his plan, and given him three years to show results.

Sure, it was two in the morning, but he’d wanted to be here.

He was all smiles as he watched the VL-2T Vulcan slowly making it way down the assembly line.  It was the ‘Mech that was going to exceed their production quota for the first time in 23 years. 

He’d already heard rumors he was going to be transferred to Lapida II.  The Warhammer line there was already on the verge of collapse.  If he could turn that line around as well, his future would be secured.

Maybe he could even take early retirement.  You never know.

---

Chris Garamond had worked the Vulcan line on Tematagi since he was eighteen.  Just like his father, and his father before him.  It was good money.  Enough to raise a family on, and as secure a job as you could find on Tematagi, unless you went government.

His wife didn’t have to work, and they had three kids, the oldest, Jackson would be turning sixteen next month.  He took pride in his work, always had.  Sure, the graveyard shift was rough on the family, but it wasn’t like he always had to pull it.  Nimakachi rotated everyone through the shifts every four months.

Besides, this was a historic moment, and he was glad he was there to see it.  Everyone knew it.  Production had been on the up and up for the past two years, and they were finally going to hit their production quota for the first time in decades.

The last time that had happened was now a legend.  He knew it to be true, though, because his father had been working there at the time.  The factory was abuzz with it.  How many times had he told the story over free beers already?

Yep.  That big house on the hill?  That’s Old Man Clark’s place.  See, when they beat the quota last time, Nimakachi held a lottery.  That’s right.  You see, every factory worker got a ticket.  And the boss took the very ‘Mech that beat the quota and held a lottery for it.  Just like that.  And Old Man Clark, he got the winning ticket.

Of course, he didn’t take the ‘Mech.  He took the 3.5 million C-bills instead.  Retired right then and there.  Built that big house up on the hill there, and been living high on the hog ever since.  Never had to work another day in life.

What?  I dunno.  Maybe they will, maybe they won’t.  Who knows?  Who me?  Oh, I’d take the ‘Mech for sure.  No, no, not for myself.  For my boy, Jackson.  Make him a MechWarrior right and proper. 

Why?  Oh, the money, it comes and goes.  Me, I’d want to join the ranks of the MechWarrior families.  You know how much those guys make?  They make ransom off every ‘Mech they defeat.  That’s gotta be millions and millions of C-bills, you understand.  Big money.  Not to mention the prestige.  Why, I get that ‘Mech, I wouldn’t be surprised if the Captain-General himself called me up.

He’d worked the line so long, his mind often wondered as he performed the same repetitive task over and over.  He could probably do it in his sleep by now.  He chuckled, he had a couple of times, not that he’d ever admit to it.

As the fateful ‘Mech rolled by, he muscled the upper actuator into place, bolting it down.  Yep.  MechWarrior family.  Imagine that.

As he punched out, Everard was standing by the clock with a huge grin on his face.  He remembered him from his time on the line, though now he was an Engineer.  A good ole boy who’d made something more of himself.  He respected that.  Probably the only suit in the whole plant he had any respect for.  Everard could drop bolts with the best of them, not to mention the fact he created a mess of new jobs on the line.  A good guy.

Chris nodded to him.  As he started to walk past, Everard’s hand shot out, a plastic memcard in it.

“Your ticket, Chris.  The drawing is a tomorrow at Noon.  Good luck to you.  How’s the family?”

Chris took the memcard.  By the Usurper!  There was going to be a lottery!

“Fine, fine.  My oldest boy’s turning sixteen next month.  Time flies, don’t it?  Shoot, seems like just yesterday you were dropping bolts right next to me on the line, and look at you know.”

They both shared a laugh as Chris pocketed his ticket and headed out.  The sun was just coming up and he had feeling this was going to be his lucky day.

---

He rolled into Nimakachi shortly before noon.  The parking deck was packed.  It looked like everyone had come to witness the drawing.  Right there, parked directly in front of the factory, was a gleaming new VL-2T Vulcan with the black Nimakachi pagoda on a field of red stenciled on both its shoulder and upper leg.

He whistled.  The prize.  Everyone’s head was turned to looked at the BattleMech as they filed into the factory.

All the top brass was assembled, and some old Asian duffer droned on for what seemed like an hour about the greatness of Nimakachi Fusion Products, something about the Star League, and some other thing about how the Free World League Parliament had entrusted them with the production of the Vulcan and Spider.

Then Everand stepped up to the podium.

“And, finally, we have arrived at the moment you’ve all been waiting for.  It is my distinct honor to pull the winning ticket.”

A large wire drum was wheeled up the podium filled with memcards.  Everard cranked it around few times, the cards inside tumbling too and fro as a hush fell over the assembly.  It was so quiet, Chris could hear the cards clinking off each other as he spun the drum.

Opening a small door, Everard stuck his hand through the door, pulling out a single card.

An eerie silence feel over the normally rowdy lineman, and for a brief moment each and every one of them imagined themselves the winner, and their life forever transformed in a instant.

Every eye in the place was glued on Everard as he stepped back up to the microphone.

“And the winner of the VL-2T Vulcan is…”

“Chris Garamond!  Congratulations, Chris!  And a heart felt to all of you!  Each one of you had a hand in making this happen."

"And,” Everand grinned, “I look forward to doing this again next year!  Keep up the good work!”

---

What do you think the average annual production of a BattleMech factory was circa 3000?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 02 September 2014, 00:58:55
Well, it wasn't Katherine who told Thomas, it was Sun-Tzu, in a roundabout way.  Sun-Tzu had a dream which gave him the idea that Victor COULD replace Joshua with a double.  He immediately discarded the idea, because he believed there was no way Victor would actually be stupid enough to try something like that.  But then Sun-Tzu though, accusing Victor of doing it would stir up trouble, and Sun-Tzu loves to stir up trouble, in case there's some meager advantage he can pick out of it for his realm.  As it so happened, Victor had been stupid enough to go the double route, but not for the reasons everyone thought the had.

Stackpole really worked hard to, as they say, hang a lantern on the fact that the plan was dumb, bordering on vile, and Victor really had no business trying to go through with it.  The whole book is more or less about Victor coming to the realization that he can't run the Federated Commonwealth the way his father had, because he isn't his father, and his leadership style is very different from Hanse's.  Right off the bat, Victor is grumbling about the fact that he hates this plan, it feels wrong, and he doesn't feel he should be doing it. . . but it seems the best way to keep the FWL and CC at bay a little while longer.  His concern wasn't so much that Thomas would attack him, but that Sun-Tzu, who everyone else sees as a power-hungry madman (instead of the power-hungry manipulative schemer he really is), would marry Isis the instant Joshua was out of the picture, have Thomas assassinated, merge the CC and FWL, and launch a full-on banzai assault.  The FedCom could probably pretty easily slap them down, but that would weaken their ability to fight the Clans, costing everyone in the long run.

Would it have been better for everyone involved if Victor had trusted Thomas to keep Sun-Tzu in check, and just told him that there was nothing more they could do for Joshua and it was his call on when the shut off the machine?  Absolutely.  That's pretty much the whole point of that particular book.  Victor made a dumb mistake, but his dumb mistakes are a LOT more costly than most people's.

Katherine spoke to the FWL ambassador, essentially saying: "LOL, pay no attention to the rumours Joshua's replaced by a double. tee-hee." in the most unconvincing of tones. That may technically not count as telling Thomas, but given no one had asked her about that...

Given the history of the Inner Sphere, trusting one of the Great Houses to leave a neighbour alone when they're in trouble would be the naive option.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ErikModi on 02 September 2014, 10:35:30
Katherine spoke to the FWL ambassador, essentially saying: "LOL, pay no attention to the rumours Joshua's replaced by a double. tee-hee." in the most unconvincing of tones. That may technically not count as telling Thomas, but given no one had asked her about that...

Given the history of the Inner Sphere, trusting one of the Great Houses to leave a neighbour alone when they're in trouble would be the naive option.

That was well before there was an real indication that there was a double, if I recall right.  Thomas' real urge to check came from intercepting a message from Sun-Tzu to Capellan Commandos instructing them try and obtain a blood sample from Joshua.  Thomas assumed Sun-Tzu was going to arrange fake evidence that Joshua was a double, and use that force Thomas to aid him in taking back Fourth Succession War worlds and marrying Isis.  Thomas sent his own operative to obtain evidence to refute any doctored evidence Sun-Tzu might supply, and. . . well, the rest is history.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 02 September 2014, 12:34:34
Isn't the answer to that question;

"I am Ulric Kerensky ilKhan of the Clans and I hereby do issue a Batchall for the Terran System in the name of the Clans of Kerensky. Primus Waterly; what forces do you bid in your defense!?"
Bargained well and done my friend. The Clans would've MOWED over the IS defenders if that hadn't happened.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 02 September 2014, 18:08:22
Tribble #150

Kimiko adjusted the skirt of her new uniform.  She was still in a bit of a daze.  Six months ago, she had enrolled at the Academy, having barely squeaked by the grueling entrance exams.  Two months ago, she had earned her first Star, and been bumped up from the Infantry path to a future in a Battlemech.  And now, her uniform had two stars, and her future was a career as an officer in the DCMS.  Maybe, Ross Kimiko dared to think, she might even become a general one day-she was best in strategy classes.  But that was the distant future.  Her present was an annual stipend of  twenty thousand C-bills, and an upper-ring apartment.  She was bringing home more to her family than her mother and father combined, a fact that left her feeling more than a little overwhelmed. 

But more overwhelming might be what she was sitting down at this meeting for.  "The Honnouji Academy special strategy meeting is called to order.  As of this morning, 18 hours remain until the Clan forces make landfall on Honnouji.  Since her mother is absent, Lady Satsuki has taken personal charge of the negotiations.  Thus far, the Clans have refused to meet her demands that they either raise their bid to a fair level or accept her proposal for a personal duel with katana."  The briefing was delivered, as usual by Inumuta, but Kimiko managed to tear her attention away from the Information and Strategy head of the student council, and focus instead on the young woman relaxing with a teacup behind him.  As always, Kiriyuin Satsuki was impeccably calm and composed, even with less than 24 hours to the landing of Jade Falcon forces on the soil of Honnouji, the world that her family had more or less come to own.  That she might be about to loose.  She was so calm, so self-assured, that just looking at her made Kimiko feel-

The door to the room slammed open.  "KIRIYUIN SATSUKI!"  The scream of rage was familiar.  Everyone at the school knew it by now.  Kimiko didn't even have to look-she dove under the table before it was flipped over to serve as a baracade and then peeked over the edge.  She had wondered when Ryuuko would make her next attempt to topple the student government.  She had hoped that it might be delayed until after this whole clan thing blew over-the last thing they needed was to rebuild the whole school before the Clans arrived to find them at each other's throats.  And she especially didn't want to fight someone as blatantly inhuman as Matoi.  She was dimly aware of the Elite Four putting their hands on their weapons, even as Satsuki set down her teacup and stood.

"Matoi Ryuuko."
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So that snippet was from the point of view of someone on the outside looking in as Satsuki and Ryuuko rage on one another.  A few backstory alterations-the Kiriyuin conglomerate more or less owns Honnouji and uses it as their center of operations because the first settlers were almost wiped out by alien parasites that colonized the human nervous system.  Ryuuko is an endosymbiote who isn't parasitized but enhanced by said aliens, thanks to experiments carried out by the leader of the family.  Said enhancements include massive boosts to regeneration, strength and toughness, among other things.  She's blatantly superhuman, so it's probably a good thing that she's only becoming aware of her powers as Smoke Jaguar closes in on Honouji.

As for Satsuki?  Well, she's got to figure out how to stop her mother from taking control of the entire Combine using her mind-control clothing.  (Nonon is currently itching for a chance to bring out her 'Superheavy Interceptor' to fight the Clans.  It has 800 LRM tubes and lots and lots of pulse lasers.)


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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 02 September 2014, 19:06:31
Tribble #151

        What if during the height of the Clan Invasion and after the election of Khan Ulric Kerensky to the position of IlKhan.  The new IlKhan called for the cooperation of all the Clan’s by broadening the invasion corridor to the nearby periphery nations (Hanseatic League, Ummayad Caliphate, Nueva Castile and Jarnfolk) and  all the way to the Federated Commonwealth/Free Worlds border (Circinus Confederation) and to the Draconis Combine/Federated Commonwealth border (Outworlds Alliance).  The five invading Clan’s were excluded from these areas since they have conquered territory to garrison and managed.   Also included was that a Clan will be added to the invasion corridor of the Clan's Jade Falcon and Smoke Jaguar since they were having too much difficulties.  It was decided a new bidding and trial of positions will happen.  The Trials will simply be a Star on Star battle, to expedite results and minimize the wasting of resources.  The order of who will invade where will also be determined by how many forces they will bring to their respective invasion zones.  The last caveat to the expansion of the invasion zone was that if the new invading Clan is not ready to start the invasion by themselves. They will share their zone with the next Clan that does not have an assigned invasion corridor.

      The justification for including these new areas, IlKhan Kerensky explained to the Grand Council was to spread the Clan Way of life to these new areas.   He used Clan Cloud Cobra conquering of the Tanite Worlds in the 29th Century as an example of how the Clan’s can improve the life of a periphery world.  This might as well be done by the remaining Clans in the Homeworld's since they did not originally qualify in Operation Revival.   The invasion of the six new areas would start in November 3051,at the same time as  Wave 5 of Operation Revival. 

The question for this would be;  Could this have increased the cooperation within the Clans or would it have increased the fracturing of Clan Society between the Warden’s and Crusader’s?  The Have's and the Have Nots?
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Post by: consequences on 03 September 2014, 01:27:11
Bargained well and done my friend. The Clans would've MOWED over the IS defenders if that hadn't happened.

There's actually an extreme long shot scenario where the nearly impossible happens, and the Inner Sphere is made ready to fight the Clans.

No, I'm not talking about the supposed Wolverines in C* seizing power, going public, and open sourcing their tech databases, but something far more unlikely...Jaime Wolf getting off his useless moping behind and actually working to accomplish his mission.


Tribble #151

        What if during the height of the Clan Invasion and after the election of Khan Ulric Kerensky to the position of IlKhan.  The new IlKhan called for the cooperation of all the Clan’s by broadening the invasion corridor to the nearby periphery nations (Hanseatic League, Ummayad Caliphate, Nueva Castile and Jarnfolk) and  all the way to the Federated Commonwealth/Free Worlds border (Circinus Confederation) and to the Draconis Combine/Federated Commonwealth border (Outworlds Alliance).  The five invading Clan’s were excluded from these areas since they have conquered territory to garrison and managed.   Also included was that a Clan will be added to the invasion corridor of the Clan's Jade Falcon and Smoke Jaguar since they were having too much difficulties.  It was decided a new bidding and trial of positions will happen.  The Trials will simply be a Star on Star battle, to expedite results and minimize the wasting of resources.  The order of who will invade where will also be determined by how many forces they will bring to their respective invasion zones.  The last caveat to the expansion of the invasion zone was that if the new invading Clan is not ready to start the invasion by themselves. They will share their zone with the next Clan that does not have an assigned invasion corridor.

      The justification for including these new areas, IlKhan Kerensky explained to the Grand Council was to spread the Clan Way of life to these new areas.   He used Clan Cloud Cobra conquering of the Tanite Worlds in the 29th Century as an example of how the Clan’s can improve the life of a periphery world.  This might as well be done by the remaining Clans in the Homeworld's since they did not originally qualify in Operation Revival.   The invasion of the six new areas would start in November 3051,at the same time as  Wave 5 of Operation Revival. 

The question for this would be;  Could this have increased the cooperation within the Clans or would it have increased the fracturing of Clan Society between the Warden’s and Crusader’s?  The Have's and the Have Nots?


Have to be someone other than Ulric, or an Ulric in name only who wants the clan invasion to succeed. there may be more friction, but, more troops and pressure and a wider theater of war isn't going to do the Inner Sphere any favors barring all out war breaking out between occupation zones.
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Post by: Vehrec on 03 September 2014, 10:34:03
...wow.  You know, I was eyeballing production levels for a game I'm in and I set it at about 2000 tons per year for a certain factory with none of those 'black box automation' systems completely off the top of my head.

I had no idea that it would be so close to the truth.  Really, 2000 tons felt shamefully low, even if it is 100 locusts a year.  I mean, in WW2, the US produced more than 50000 aircraft per year once the economy reached full mobilization.  So I guess I figured...well DANG.
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Post by: Alexander Knight on 03 September 2014, 12:00:50
I had no idea that it would be so close to the truth.  Really, 2000 tons felt shamefully low, even if it is 100 locusts a year.  I mean, in WW2, the US produced more than 50000 aircraft per year once the economy reached full mobilization.  So I guess I figured...well DANG.

And now compare US aircraft production now. :)
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Post by: Vehrec on 03 September 2014, 12:29:02
I don't think that 12,500 tons of Dreamliners alone is that bad, considering that we're, you know, not in any sort of war that uses up these things.  And there's another 22,000+ tons worth of 777s out there as well.
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Post by: master arminas on 03 September 2014, 15:07:39
So . . . ~400 'Mechs a year for House Liao with 50 Regiments (plus the Death Commandos and 8 Warrior Houses); 5 of those at 1 battalion strength, another 14 at 2 battalions strength.  Or about 42 Regiments exclusive of mercenaries, DCs, or Warrior Houses.

~486 for House Marik with ~57 Regiments, exclusive of mercenaries.

Too bad we don't have production numbers for Davion, Steiner, or Kurita.

MA
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Post by: Vehrec on 03 September 2014, 15:24:07
A few back of the envelope calculation indicates that if the entire production goes to regiments to make good their losses, and nobody actually gains numbers, then they can restore about 7-8% of their establishment strength in a single year.  Since there are dispossessed, we can assume that they aren't making good their losses, let alone building up strength.  It wouldn't take very many years with losses at 10% and replacements at 8 to utterly ruin an armed force.
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Post by: Alexander Knight on 03 September 2014, 15:32:09
I don't think that 12,500 tons of Dreamliners alone is that bad, considering that we're, you know, not in any sort of war that uses up these things.  And there's another 22,000+ tons worth of 777s out there as well.

I meant military aircraft.
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Post by: Vehrec on 03 September 2014, 17:01:26
I meant military aircraft.
Not comparable to the figures from the Second World War because, there's no major arms race, no conflict eating up 5th generation jets, and no possible war that could really require a massive conventional battle of air forces without touching off a general nuclear exchange and the destruction of the entire military industrial complex that builds the things so WELP.

Has the technology changed?  Yes, absolutely.  But politics has changed more than the technology.
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Post by: Sigil on 03 September 2014, 17:06:48
Too bad we don't have production numbers for Davion, Steiner, or Kurita.

I scanned the other old FASA sourcebooks, and while they listed the major manufactures for the other three houses, no production figures were given.  With the exception of the 130 Valkyries from the automated New Avalon plant which Consequences mentioned earlier. 

Since it's listed explicitly, I take that to mean 130 is likely at the highest end of 'Mech production for any single line in the entire Inner Sphere.
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Post by: Arvanna on 03 September 2014, 17:14:59
Tribble #142

Something different happens in the life of Katherine Steiner-Davion. Maybe her brain develops differently, maybe she has a different nanny, or maybe she just gets more hugs growing up, but whatever the cause, she fails to become the psychopathic megalomaniac we know and love. Instead, she's a loving daughter and sister, Victors closest supporter and advisor.

Little change up until the end of 'Assumption of Risk' (Assume Ryan Steiner assassinates Melissa alone this time around), where we DON'T learn that Katherine is a murdering psycho. She does actually fall in love with Galen, and within a year he's asking her brother for her hand.

No Lyran Alliance. No FWL and CC steamroller offensive. No Fed Com civil war. Victor has an advisor who actually knows how to deal with the press. Butterflies, butterflies everywhere ...

Katherine not turning into Cerci Lannister I can get behind that concept.  O0
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Post by: ErikModi on 03 September 2014, 17:48:48
Katherine not turning into Cerci Lannister I can get behind that concept.  O0

You know, I really don't think that's a fair comparison.  One's a completely amoral psychopath who wants all the power there is for herself and herself alone, will stop at nothing to get it, and had a child by her brother just to continue the "pure" family line.  The other is Cersei Lannister.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 03 September 2014, 18:52:23
You know, I really don't think that's a fair comparison.  One's a completely amoral psychopath who wants all the power there is for herself and herself alone, will stop at nothing to get it, and had a child by her brother just to continue the "pure" family line.  The other is Cersei Lannister.

*insert picture of Omnimech with a giant drumset performing rimshot*
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 03 September 2014, 21:44:19
Tribble #150

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So that snippet was from the point of view of someone on the outside looking in as Satsuki and Ryuuko rage on one another.  A few backstory alterations-the Kiriyuin conglomerate more or less owns Honnouji and uses it as their center of operations because the first settlers were almost wiped out by alien parasites that colonized the human nervous system.  Ryuuko is an endosymbiote who isn't parasitized but enhanced by said aliens, thanks to experiments carried out by the leader of the family.  Said enhancements include massive boosts to regeneration, strength and toughness, among other things.  She's blatantly superhuman, so it's probably a good thing that she's only becoming aware of her powers as Smoke Jaguar closes in on Honouji.

As for Satsuki?  Well, she's got to figure out how to stop her mother from taking control of the entire Combine using her mind-control clothing.  (Nonon is currently itching for a chance to bring out her 'Superheavy Interceptor' to fight the Clans.  It has 800 LRM tubes and lots and lots of pulse lasers.)

You have done something that even Ben Rome could not do. Sure, he got me to care about some Clanners in Wars of Reaving, but you made me feel sorry for them. Honestly, there is no way to explain how a Clan Cluster was defeated by four Inner Sphere teenagers in what looked like cloth uniforms. Then again, it was Clan Smoke Jaguar, so my pity is limited.

Though the explanation of Nonon's fight probably would be pretty entertaining.

Galaxy Commander Howell: You really want me to believe that a teenage girl in her cadet uniform defeated two binaries on her own, queneg?

Star Captain Mudd Smoke Jaguar: Aff, the sheer horror that she unleashed on Alpha Binary is unthinkable if I had not seen it myself. Grown Smoke Jaguars were reduced to simpering sibkin after only a minute. Galaxy Commander, I never want to see that type of horror again or hear Sousa either. I will gladly take sohlma duty on Huntress or any other duty deemed necessary in the Clan especially cleaning toilets just to never set foot on that planet again. However, the horror unleashed by that one girl with half of pair of scissors on Gamma Binary might have been worse.

On the bright side, the Clans coming probably would slow down Raygo's plans for the Combine. Though as a Suns' fan, the destruction of the Combine by Raygo's plans would probably get rid of that problem, but then the horror would probably look for another target.

You know, I really don't think that's a fair comparison.  One's a completely amoral psychopath who wants all the power there is for herself and herself alone, will stop at nothing to get it, and had a child by her brother just to continue the "pure" family line.  The other is Cersei Lannister.

To be fair, we never exactly got a clear reason from Katherine on why she decided that using Victor's DNA to create a child would be a good idea. The best anyone could come up with is that she saw it as the perfect revenge a la Morgan La Fay to Victor's Arthur, but that's pure speculation.

Katherine not turning into Cerci Lannister I can get behind that concept.  O0

As can I.


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Post by: Dave Talley on 03 September 2014, 22:03:32
Her middle name is Morgan after all,

its a shame Arthur wasn't oldest, the writers could have had fun
with all the puns
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Post by: consequences on 03 September 2014, 23:54:47
A few back of the envelope calculation indicates that if the entire production goes to regiments to make good their losses, and nobody actually gains numbers, then they can restore about 7-8% of their establishment strength in a single year.  Since there are dispossessed, we can assume that they aren't making good their losses, let alone building up strength.  It wouldn't take very many years with losses at 10% and replacements at 8 to utterly ruin an armed force.

New Units do happen. Between 3025 and 3029, the Lyrans came up with the mechs to outfit the Tyr and first Fed Com regiments. The Davions added the FS Armored Cavalry in the early 3000s, Team Banzai in the 30-teens, and the assorted training battalions in the 3020s even if we assume that NAMA had three training regiments before the conversion to NAIS's military campus.

The inexplicably big winners are the Kuritans, who manage to make the three legions of vega, two night stalkers regiments, and Altenmarkt(sp?) militias between the early 3000s and 3025, then add six more regiments with the Ryuken and Genyosha by 3028(seven if you believe certain dirty lies about the initially establish strength of the Ryuken). This despite throwing away battalions of Panthers at a time to increase the  Kell Hounds kill count. As always for any event I dislike between 3020 and 3052, I blame Myndo Waterly.

On the other side of the equation, you do get units that are forced to consolidate due to losses in recent history, or the Mechless 5th Crucis Lancers RCT, but such constraints of realism tend to only apply to House Davion.
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Post by: Vehrec on 04 September 2014, 16:48:39
You have done something that even Ben Rome could not do. Sure, he got me to care about some Clanners in Wars of Reaving, but you made me feel sorry for them. Honestly, there is no way to explain how a Clan Cluster was defeated by four Inner Sphere teenagers in what looked like cloth uniforms. Then again, it was Clan Smoke Jaguar, so my pity is limited.

Though the explanation of Nonon's fight probably would be pretty entertaining.

Galaxy Commander Howell: You really want me to believe that a teenage girl in her cadet uniform defeated two binaries on her own, queneg?

Star Captain Mudd Smoke Jaguar: Aff, the sheer horror that she unleashed on Alpha Binary is unthinkable if I had not seen it myself. Grown Smoke Jaguars were reduced to simpering sibkin after only a minute. Galaxy Commander, I never want to see that type of horror again or hear Sousa either. I will gladly take sohlma duty on Huntress or any other duty deemed necessary in the Clan especially cleaning toilets just to never set foot on that planet again. However, the horror unleashed by that one girl with half of pair of scissors on Gamma Binary might have been worse.

On the bright side, the Clans coming probably would slow down Raygo's plans for the Combine. Though as a Suns' fan, the destruction of the Combine by Raygo's plans would probably get rid of that problem, but then the horror would probably look for another target.

:D  I was aiming more for a fusion than a outright crossover, and I was going to tone down one side a bit.  Honnouji Academy is a fortress, not a [REDACTED].  Gamagori has an early suit of combine Power Armor or maybe a mysteriously funded Superheavy Mech prototype instead of a transforming uniform.  Nonon still has a flying tank-but it's a Dropship that can outrun some aerospace fighters.  Ruuyko can, at most, ruin the day for a Point of elementals, or maybe a single light mech.  Unless you put her in a Mech with a Life Fiber enhanced control system so she can wear it like a second skin.  Of course, there are dangers with using living organisms that can achieve self-awareness in large quantities in the control systems of such a warmachine...
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Post by: Vehrec on 04 September 2014, 17:55:09
:D  I was aiming more for a fusion than a outright crossover, and I was going to tone down one side a bit.  Honnouji Academy is a fortress, not a [REDACTED].  Gamagori has an early suit of combine Power Armor or maybe a mysteriously funded Superheavy Mech prototype instead of a transforming uniform.  Nonon still has a flying tank-but it's a Dropship that can outrun some aerospace fighters.  Ruuyko can, at most, ruin the day for a Point of elementals, or maybe a single light mech.  Unless you put her in a Mech with a Life Fiber enhanced control system so she can wear it like a second skin.  Of course, there are dangers with using living organisms that can achieve self-awareness in large quantities in the control systems of such a warmachine...

As for Rayban, her plans are rather grandiose and probably doomed to fail-but the DEST ninjas sent to stop her are going to be in for a rude awakening when she starts ripping hearts out of chests with her bare hands and refuses to die no matter how much vibro-katana is applied. :D
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Post by: kashim12 on 04 September 2014, 19:00:03

I would read it.
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Post by: wolfgar on 04 September 2014, 19:22:46
Hmm a kamui class battlemech, would probably be a heavy hitting medium or fast heavy. Non non would get an assault shuttle inumuta would get a good EW mech, raven or a customized medium.  Don't know enough about kill la kill other than a bleach crossover on the SV forums.
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Post by: barbarossa on 11 September 2014, 09:56:27
Tribble #151

3053 was the year everything changed. Victor Steiner-Davion is dead assassinated by a presumely capellan assassin during a state visit of Hohiro and Omiko Kurita on Tharkad. His head was blow away while dancing with his sister Katherine, who was also gravely wounded and slipped into a coma for several months. But the assassin failed to murder the other members of the present houses.
But Tharkad had not been their only targets. They failed to achieve their goals on Luthien, St. Ives and New Avalon. But Captain-General Thomas Marik was killed. His wife and children only escaped because the assassin did not know that they were on new Avalon. Sun-Tzu was killed on Sian. It is rumored that Kali Liao did the deed herself, who then became the next Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation.
After the assassinations Hohiro Kurita cut the state visit short and returned but Omiko stayed behind, because she felt responsible for what had happened to Victor and Katherien or so she said, but the real reason was that she  was pregnant with Victor's child. During her time on Tharkad she took care of the comatose Katherine and later helped her with the physical therapy. The events had changed Katherine. She began to train being a mechwarrior and she fell in love with Omiko. She also adopted Victor and Omiko's daughter Victoria as her own after learning that she can never get children of her own.

The Refusal War did still happen but with slightly different battles. Khan Natasha Kerensky was gravely wounded after one of the last battles of the war. Vlad, who already knew what this war was reaaly about, assumed command of all Clan Wolf forces present and ordered that they should join saKhan Phelan Ward, he will cover the retreat with some volunteers. During this final battle none of the volunteers survived but the losses of the Jade Falcons were enormous because of Vlad in Kerensky's Widowmaker. He became a phantom on the battelfield (like Morgan Kell and a few others) and eliminated nearly all of the Jade Falcon leadership before his mech had been destroyed and he was killed.
Natasha Kerensky eventually recovered from her wounds, but had to leave Clan Wolf and to join the AFFC as their new Marshal of the Armies. That was one condition for  Clan Wolf to be  allowed to settle in the FedCom. Archon-Prince Katherine Steiner-Davion wanted her in that position because she needed someone who knew both Clan and IS.
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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 11 September 2014, 11:10:19
interesting!
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 11 September 2014, 11:41:15
Katherine and Omi falling in love? Nice to see some folks decided to put some equality into their tribbles.
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Post by: barbarossa on 11 September 2014, 12:35:35
interesting!
But ... ?
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 11 September 2014, 18:14:08
Tribble #152

It is the height of the Refusal War. On Wotan, Star Colonel Ulric Kerensky marches forward to find Jade Falcon saKhan Chistu waiting for him, apparently alone, having challenged the former Wolf Khan to meet him in a circle of equals.

****

 For a moment it struck him as absurd that he, a Crusader, would be the one to bring a Warden to a place where he could kill a Crusader Khan. With that thought Vlad realized how certain he was that Ulric would destroy Chistu, yet the thought caused him no alarm. He had moved into something beyond a Warden/Crusader fight. This was Wolf against Falcon and—just as Ulric had predicted—Vlad valued his identity as a Wolf more than his affinity with the Crusaders.

I am a Wolf, and so shall I ever be. I could never descend to the level of the Falcons.

Stalking through the concrete canyons of Borealtown, Vlad saw other 'Mechs. Some were Wolves, but most were Jade Falcons. He traded shots with them, his PPC beams and lasers lighting up whole blocks. In one series of exchanges, his Timber Wolf and a Vulture left molten armor trails down parallel avenues. It ended when the Vulture lost a leg in an intersection next to the burned-out remains of one of the Timber Wolfs pulse lasers.

Vlad led the way up the small hill near the center of the town. The terrain leveled out there into a small circle that had once featured a statue set on a tall iron pillar. The buildings surrounding the park had all been constructed in the style of Terra's ancient Hellas, complete with columns and friezes. Had the pillar still been erect, or the buildings not been damaged by the Wolves' bombing runs, the place might have looked very much like the Olympian paradise envisioned by its creators.

On the far side of the circle a lone Gladiator in Jade Falcon colors stood in the plaza in front of what appeared to be the Ministry of Justice building. The humanoid 'Mech scanned as a normal configuration for that model omnimech. The anti-missile system and the extended-range small laser were relatively useless, but the 'Mech carried a reasonable amount of armor, so it could weather a lot of abuse. The rapid-loading autocannon in the left arm could inflict considerable damage, as could the PPC in the right arm. Not that it would matter much—nothing would stop Ulric from killing Chistu.

Coming into the circle Vlad moved off to the left and stationed himself in front of what had been, before the coming of the Clans, the Ministry of Budgets and Taxation. The others in his Star spread out to the right and Ulric stepped forward of their line.

From his vantage point Vlad saw that Mech Warriors Jenni and Karl were closer together than he would have liked them in a war zone, but the park appeared to be the eye of the martial storm. There was danger here, but for Chistu and Ulric, not him and his people. Still, they should know better.

Ulric's voice boomed through his helmet's speakers. "Greetings, Vahn."

"And to you, Ulric. When I suggested this duel I had no idea you would bring seconds."

"You can consider them seconds if you wish. For me, they serve as witnesses."

The Jade Falcon Khan laughed. "My gun-camera video will be witness enough to your death."

"Possibly, but such things are often damaged when a 'Mech is destroyed." Ulric's humanoid Gargoyle opened its arms. "Do you require some sort of formal declaration of intent, or shall we begin?"

"It has already begun, Ulric."

That remark struck Vlad as hopelessly bizarre, then he saw the muzzle of the small laser tucked beneath the Gladiator's chin begin to vibrate back and forth like the tines of a tuning fork. He reached over and punched a button on his command, changing his holographic display from starlight to ultraviolet. With that he saw a purplish blade of light scything back and forth, touching all the Wolf 'Mechs in the circle save himself and Mech Warrior Andrew opposite him.

The small laser is configured for targeting. He's feeding telemetry to missile Stars. "Ulric, it's a trap!"

A sudden bark of laughter from Ulric caught Vlad off guard even as he snapped his Timber Wolfs crosshairs around to focus on the Falcon saKhans omnimech. The sudden amusement caught Vlad off guard - so much so that he hesitated from jerking his primary interlock triggers and hammering the treacherous parrot with his `Mechs full firepower before the no doubt incoming salvos of missiles could crash into them.

"Aff Star Captain, it is a Trap" Ulric replied calmly and Vlad frowned as his gaze flicked up to the lone Falcon mech, its small laser still set in TAG mode painting them all ... and yet, nothing was happening. Even as he watched, the Gladiator seemed to twist slightly on its torso, back and forth, as if waiting - or wondering why something had not happened. "You are perhaps wondering Vahn why salvos of LRMs are not arcing over the buildings from the two missile stars you have hidden in the next block over and obliterating us,  Quiaff?"

There was no answer, but Vlad couldn't help but feel a slow, smug and almost wolfish grin start to draw across his face at the stunned silence from the Falcon who clearly was wondering that ... and was even now probably starting to realize he was alone, exposed, in front of a pack Wolf Battlemechs ... and he had just thrown zellbrigen out the airlock.

"The reason would be that a Star of Elementals wearing some surplus Nighthawk power armor my Clan dug out of a Brian Cache a few years ago infiltrated the city in advance of our landing, after you decided to challenge me to a circle of Equals. I am not a fool Vahn - I knew that you would never fight a fair fight if you had any choice in the matter. Oh I would have given you the chance if you had for once decided to fight by the rules ... but as you did not, neither do I. Your Mech Stars were disabled well in advance of this duel - there is no-one coming to help you".

"Ulric" Vahn finally spoke up and Vlad delighted in the edge of panic he could hear in the others voice. "Listen to me. We do not need to-"

Whatever Vahn had been about to say, it would never be known as Ulric fired, having had plenty of time to draw a precise aimpoint on the others cockpit. The Gauss rifle slug punched through the canopy and reduced the Falcon Khan to blood and bone scattered across the space. With an almost slow dignity, the great Assault Mech slowly pitched backwards, like a tree cut by a logger, to crash with a great noise to the ground and lie still.

"Yes Vahn" Ulric spoke to the ghost of the Falcon Khan. "We did".

"Seyla" Vlad breathed back. There was a click as Ulric brought another channel online.

"Den Lead to Galaxy Command; Mission accomplished. Commence withdraw. Hatchet command, we are done here. Climb on, Quiaff?"

"Aff Star Colonel" a new voice interjected - and Vlads eyes flickered as he saw some kind of motion out of the corner of his eyes - which resolved in moments into dozens of figures in light power armor seeming to materialize out of the darkness around them - figures he recognized as Nighthawk stealth suits as their transponders suddenly activated to show Wolf Clan signals. Like a dark wave as they crossed the square on bounds of jumpjets, they washed up over the six omnimechs, seeming to fuze with the surface of the giants as they locked onto the transport platforms for the ride back to the extraction zone.

Quickly, the Star reformed around Ulric in escort position as Ulric started his withdraw. Vlad switched over to the Galaxy command feed - indeed it did seem that the Wolf Clan Trinaries were swiftly beginning a clearly well planned withdraw, the Falcon Clusters dug in facing them holding position, clearly thinking it was just a Wolf trick to lure them out of their fortifications.

"We are leaving Star Colonel?" Vlad asked in some confusion. His smug -and awed- satisfaction at the way Ulric had foreseen and turned the ambush around on the Falcon Khan was now giving way to a growing sense of pure rage at the incredibly cowardly tactic. A Khan challenging a former Khan to a circle of equals, only to lure him into a killing ground where stars of Mechs could assassinate him? Something uncomfortable in Vlad started to press on his thoughts at that moment, his firm beliefs in the righteousness of the crusader cause waring with the damning evidence of the despicable behavior of one of its greatest champions. He was not comfortable with the thoughts and so tried to ignore them, instead embracing the need to teach the Falcons the folly of trying to back a Wolf into a corner. "There are many Falcons yet to slay".

And Vlad somehow knew that despite the odds, if Ulric gave the order, the Wolves would kill them all. No matter how dangerous, no matter how much many of this Galaxy agreed with the Crusader sentiment; if word could out that the Falcon Khan had tried to assassinate a former Wolf Khan, the fury that would be unleashed would be terrible to behold, even as the Falcons would no doubt be thrown into chaos with the death of their leader. And yet, Ulric was withdrawing...

"Aff Star Captain. But not the one we need to kill. We have one more Khan to kill before our work will be done. We head for Aiyina - a ... friend ... has informed me that Elias Crichell and the Turkina Keshik were spotted there only yesterday. And I greatly desire to have words with him about his subordinates conduct".

Vlad could not help but grin once more as they picked up speed, exiting the vague edge of the city into the darkness of the fields, a rolling wave of other Wolf Clan mechs falling in as they ran for their dropships, a great pack not fleeing...

But hunting.
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Post by: Zureal on 11 September 2014, 18:24:39
oooo, i LIKE this one  O0
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Post by: James Tanaga on 11 September 2014, 19:26:27
So do I!  O0

James Tanaga
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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 11 September 2014, 20:17:01
Yes, I agree this is good!
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Post by: Vehrec on 11 September 2014, 20:37:25
I would read it.
Before I start writing, I have just one quesiton.

Kiriyuin Satsuki does not exactly understand how Clan Bidding works, but she's willing to bid down her forces...if given some incentive.  After all, if she wins, she gets to keep her planet.  That's true no matter how many forces she bids.

So if she's going to play the bidding game, the Clan commander must first offer her something that will be Hers if she defeats them.  Something of equal value to a planet.  How mad will this demand make the poor Smoke Jaguars?
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Post by: Takiro on 11 September 2014, 22:02:22
Nice job on the alternate Refusal War.
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Post by: Diablo48 on 12 September 2014, 17:45:20
I really like that concept.  One tiny change that will totally reshape history from that point forwards in interesting and hard to predict ways.
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Post by: David CGB on 13 September 2014, 00:24:22
Tribble #152
It is the height of the Refusal War. On Wotan, Star Colonel Ulric Kerensky marches forward to find Jade Falcon saKhan Chistu waiting for him, apparently alone, having challenged the former Wolf Khan to meet him in a circle of equals.
this would have been a better story
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 13 September 2014, 12:19:05
Tribble #151

3053 was the year everything changed. Victor Steiner-Davion is dead assassinated by a presumely capellan assassin during a state visit of Hohiro and Omiko Kurita on Tharkad. His head was blow away while dancing with his sister Katherine, who was also gravely wounded and slipped into a coma for several months. But the assassin failed to murder the other members of the present houses.
But Tharkad had not been their only targets. They failed to achieve their goals on Luthien, St. Ives and New Avalon. But Captain-General Thomas Marik was killed. His wife and children only escaped because the assassin did not know that they were on new Avalon. Sun-Tzu was killed on Sian. It is rumored that Kali Liao did the deed herself, who then became the next Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation.
After the assassinations Hohiro Kurita cut the state visit short and returned but Omiko stayed behind, because she felt responsible for what had happened to Victor and Katherien or so she said, but the real reason was that she  was pregnant with Victor's child. During her time on Tharkad she took care of the comatose Katherine and later helped her with the physical therapy. The events had changed Katherine. She began to train being a mechwarrior and she fell in love with Omiko. She also adopted Victor and Omiko's daughter Victoria as her own after learning that she can never get children of her own.

The Refusal War did still happen but with slightly different battles. Khan Natasha Kerensky was gravely wounded after one of the last battles of the war. Vlad, who already knew what this war was reaaly about, assumed command of all Clan Wolf forces present and ordered that they should join saKhan Phelan Ward, he will cover the retreat with some volunteers. During this final battle none of the volunteers survived but the losses of the Jade Falcons were enormous because of Vlad in Kerensky's Widowmaker. He became a phantom on the battelfield (like Morgan Kell and a few others) and eliminated nearly all of the Jade Falcon leadership before his mech had been destroyed and he was killed.
Natasha Kerensky eventually recovered from her wounds, but had to leave Clan Wolf and to join the AFFC as their new Marshal of the Armies. That was one condition for  Clan Wolf to be  allowed to settle in the FedCom. Archon-Prince Katherine Steiner-Davion wanted her in that position because she needed someone who knew both Clan and IS.

The thing is that I doubt the FedCom officials would wait for nine months or longer for Katherine to recover from a coma and then allow her another five years to complete service in the AFFC all to become Archon-Prince. Instead, the office of Archon-Prince would probably pass in less than a second to Peter Steiner-Davion with Melissa Steiner-Davion still serving as regent since by that point he was already in service to the AFFC and she still lives, and at the time that was the official line of succession since Kat had not completed or started the five years of service requirement. Victoria being illegitimate would not be a factor in succession, but Melissa would probably like her. Now, you could add in Peter gets whacked too just to allow the rise of Kat, but considering that it is 3053, Kat had a change of heart, and there would be heightened security on Peter so probably no Skye situation, I really doubt assassination season on Peter would happen unless Kat goes back to her canon habits.

And even if you get rid of Peter, Kat only gained her unusual power in the FedCom by Victor giving it to her after the assassination of their mother in 3055 and the Skye incident of 3056. It possible that with Kat in a coma that the Regency of New Avalon would pass to Arthur Steiner-Davion or possibly Morgan Hasek-Davion. Thus, Kat would pretty much have no power in the FedCom by the time she woke up.




Before I start writing, I have just one quesiton.

Kiriyuin Satsuki does not exactly understand how Clan Bidding works, but she's willing to bid down her forces...if given some incentive.  After all, if she wins, she gets to keep her planet.  That's true no matter how many forces she bids.

So if she's going to play the bidding game, the Clan commander must first offer her something that will be Hers if she defeats them.  Something of equal value to a planet.  How mad will this demand make the poor Smoke Jaguars?

Easy she bids on the Smoke Jaguar warship that the Jags brought along.


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Post by: Lord Harlock on 13 September 2014, 12:32:09
Tribble #152

It is the height of the Refusal War. On Wotan, Star Colonel Ulric Kerensky marches forward to find Jade Falcon saKhan Chistu waiting for him, apparently alone, having challenged the former Wolf Khan to meet him in a circle of equals.

****


That would pretty much change things. Bravo!
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Post by: barbarossa on 13 September 2014, 12:34:42
The thing is that I doubt the FedCom officials would wait for nine months or longer for Katherine to recover from a coma and then allow her another five years to complete service in the AFFC all to become Archon-Prince. Instead, the office of Archon-Prince would probably pass in less than a second to Peter Steiner-Davion with Melissa Steiner-Davion still serving as regent since by that point he was already in service to the AFFC and she still lives, and at the time that was the official line of succession since Kat had not completed or started the five years of service requirement. Victoria being illegitimate would not be a factor in succession, but Melissa would probably like her. Now, you could add in Peter gets whacked too just to allow the rise of Kat, but considering that it is 3053, Kat had a change of heart, and there would be heightened security on Peter so probably no Skye situation, I really doubt assassination season on Peter would happen unless Kat goes back to her canon habits.

And even if you get rid of Peter, Kat only gained her unusual power in the FedCom by Victor giving it to her after the assassination of their mother in 3055 and the Skye incident of 3056. It possible that with Kat in a coma that the Regency of New Avalon would pass to Arthur Steiner-Davion or possibly Morgan Hasek-Davion. Thus, Kat would pretty much have no power in the FedCom by the time she woke up.
Killjoy!

You forget that Melissa is still alive and thus is still regent. Remember that in canon Victor refuse to accept her offer to resignate.
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Post by: Zureal on 15 September 2014, 18:08:46
Killjoy!

You forget that Melissa is still alive and thus is still regent. Remember that in canon Victor refuse to accept her offer to resignate.

 agree with the above, TOTAL killjoy
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Post by: Vehrec on 16 September 2014, 07:50:20

Easy she bids on the Smoke Jaguar warship that the Jags brought along.

Okay, but are they really going to hand that over when whatever elemental Star Captain she duels looses his head?  And is this seriously something you can do with bidding, or would the Jaguars just allow it because they think they can win?
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Post by: Sharpnel on 16 September 2014, 09:36:44
The answer to both questions is yes, providing how high the Jaguars  thier Clan's honor
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Post by: knightowl on 16 September 2014, 19:40:43
Smoke Nutcase I mean Jaguars  only pay lip service to honor. To them everyone has no honor so they don't have to play by Clan rules.
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 16 September 2014, 22:00:00
Killjoy!

You forget that Melissa is still alive and thus is still regent. Remember that in canon Victor refuse to accept her offer to resignate.

Which is why I mentioned that Melissa would still be serving as regent. Technically, Archon-Prince designate would be the proper term for either Peter or Victor, but again, Peter is more viable than Kat any way you look at it. After the loss of Victor, the FedCom Committee would be looking for the quickest way to fulfill unification since the death of the suppose to be first Archon-Prince would probably cause Skye and possible other regions of the FedCom to get uneasy about the whole thing. Kat being in a coma makes her a big variable that power players would probably just put below the 37th claimant since comas are big variables that can result in people speaking in totally different accents to just plain old brain damage. Thus, the powers that be especially the Lyrans one would back Peter since he was suppose to be the Archon when Victor was Archon-Prince and again he was already in the AFFC. He'd be ready a lot quicker, and since he never face his failures with Skye and Solaris 7, he'd probably take the opportunity dutifully.

As for Melissa, she was always shown as a carrying mother, and I can't imagine any mother wanting their daughter who is in a coma immediately if she wakes up being given unimaginable political power. She'd love Victoria, but she would keep her out of the line of succession for a big reason: Combine, Draconis March, Skye, and other factors.   

And personally, I was just offering advice since there are tons of things that get overlooked sometimes when writing in established fiction as I've learned of the years with my own experience and just observing canon writers. Peter is a big elephant in the room in the premise since you didn't have him whacked by Kali to being with. Honestly, I prefer to think that these is a thread to throw ideas out and see how many holes others can throw in it to make it better.



Okay, but are they really going to hand that over when whatever elemental Star Captain she duels looses his head?  And is this seriously something you can do with bidding, or would the Jaguars just allow it because they think they can win?

Considering that the Smoke Jaguars honored Hohiro Kurita's batchall for Wolcott which was a agreement to stay away from Wolcott indefinitely, a lance of Omnimechs, and two dozen Elemental suits because they thought that they were facing green troops, I'd see the Jaguars doing the same as long as it was pre-Wolcott or information about that particular battle hadn't gotten out. Then again, the Jaguar Commander might just honor the batchall because as you said they'd figure there is no way in the world that they could lose.
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Post by: consequences on 17 September 2014, 01:55:13
Smoke Nutcase I mean Jaguars  only pay lip service to honor. To them everyone has no honor so they don't have to play by Clan rules.
Which is why the first attack of the renewed invasion was taking Wolcott, and the Battle for Luthien saw the Jaguars pouring in forces until the defenders were crushed when their leaders tossed out the initial bid.

Alternately, you're thinking of pretty much every other Clan ever. The Jags were psychotic rabid weasels with the social graces of a buzzsaw, but they actually did kind of adhere to the principles that other Clans readily discarded for their convenience.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 17 September 2014, 02:10:57
Tribble #143:

In the vasty deeps of the Dark Nebula, 'Camelot Command' is not a mere space station.

It is a vastly larger, vastly older structure, once repurposed by the SLDF, then forgotten, never touched during the Exodus.

It is, in fact, an Utu-class planetoid... And Rhonda Snord arrives just as its main computer core is starting to wake up...

"You magnificent bastard, I've read your book!"
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Post by: barbarossa on 17 September 2014, 02:16:59
Lord Harlock, your still a killjoy.

In my original concept Katherine did not slip into a coma, but in this concept the Clans also conquered Terra...
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Post by: drakensis on 17 September 2014, 03:19:10
#152

"Captain-General, the Ambassador of the Federated-Commonwealth."

Thomas Marik stood, schooling his face to impassivity. It likely wasn't the woman's fault his son was... and it wouldn't do to give away Operation Guerrero, due to begin in mere days.

The ambassador, a tall woman of military bearing, bowed before approaching his desk.

"What brings you here today, Ambassador."

"We've received a message from NAIS, Captain-General. Your son Joshua's illness has been confirmed to be in full remission, so I've been instructed to make arrangements for his return to Atreus. For his own security, the Archon-Prince proposes to delay announcement of his return home. We've arranged a body-double who can take his place for the month or so the journey to take place."

Stifling his first reaction, Thomas leant back in his chair and weighed her words. Had he really miscalculated the situation? Was this some damage control by Steiner-Davion...

"My ambassador to Tharkad mentioned rumours that my son had been replaced by a clone. That suggests the Archon-Prince's cloak and dagger scheme may be less than secure."

"Oh?" The ambassador pursed her lips. "It seems the Maskirova are at work then. I understand they made some absurd report to the Chancellor recently, claiming there was no blood kinship between Joshua and his half-sister. Perhaps they took a blood sample from our decoy by mistake."
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Post by: barbarossa on 17 September 2014, 04:02:08
And there goes the chance for Sun-Tzu to reconquer the Sarna March ...
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Post by: gladius on 17 September 2014, 04:46:30
And then have 'Joshua's' JumpShip 'vanish' mid trip? Or is this an AU where the kid actually got better?
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 17 September 2014, 07:41:19
Lord Harlock, your still a killjoy.

In my original concept Katherine did not slip into a coma, but in this concept the Clans also conquered Terra...

Well Terra is a silly place, and besides, I really can't judge the original concept because all I have to go by is the one that you posted that has Kat in a 'comatose' state.
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Post by: barbarossa on 17 September 2014, 07:52:45
#153

The old Mayans were wrong. The sixth world did not start in 2012 but in 3012. So imagine an Inner Sphere (including Periphery) in which creatures of legend had become real, in which not only humans but elves, dwarves, orcs and trolls live and in which magic is real. Although the Clans learened about the changes from the captured Comstar explorer vessel they decided to invade nevertheless ...
... And thy got huge problems becuase their tactics are useless against battlefield magic, troll infantry and enchanted mechs.

(For those who did not recognize it: a BattleTech/Shadowrun crossover)

#154

Nicholas Kerensky was not fascinated by historical warrior societies but by classic science fiction (like Star Trek). His dream was a society of explorers who only fight if they are forced to, but then they will end it.  And he will fight for his dream. So the SLDF-in-exile  mothballed most of their military equipment and concentrated on civilian technologies and build a fleet of explorer ships.
But there are always some who were not pleased by whis some who still belived that they should be warriors. Those reactionaries robbed and looted some Brian Caches, stole some mothballed warships and headed out towards the Innere Sphere...

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Post by: barbarossa on 17 September 2014, 08:30:02
Well Terra is a silly place, and besides, I really can't judge the original concept because all I have to go by is the one that you posted that has Kat in a 'comatose' state.
Here it is:

#155


3057

The Clans have conquered Terra.

That's all of it.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 17 September 2014, 12:37:39
#152


LOLZ!

How fast can you shout 'ABORT! ABORT!' over a HPG exactly.
Presuming of course WOB will let Thomas and not suffer 'unfortunate technical problems' that prevent the messages from getting out. They do kinda hate the FedCom after all.
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Post by: gladius on 20 September 2014, 21:28:18
LOLZ!

How fast can you shout 'ABORT! ABORT!' over a HPG exactly.
Presuming of course WOB will let Thomas and not suffer 'unfortunate technical problems' that prevent the messages from getting out. They do kinda hate the FedCom after all.
Actually, they hate ALL the Successor States, including the FWL, or, rather, they see the SSs as being obstacles in the way of them achieving their goal, which is reducing the human race to pre-industrial communities ruled over by the high-tech theocracy of the Word of Blake ... For their own good, of course.

Having the League and the Commonwealth slug it out is all to the good, as far as they're concerned.
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Post by: Vehrec on 20 September 2014, 22:18:12
Yeah, but that can't be the end-goal of ALL of them.  The Word was a really diverse group.  I mean, seriously, who do they think is going to clean their space-toilets if they Go Galt?
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Post by: gladius on 21 September 2014, 02:32:00
Yeah, but that can't be the end-goal of ALL of them.  The Word was a really diverse group.  I mean, seriously, who do they think is going to clean their space-toilets if they Go Galt?
Why, the worshipful serfs who Know Their Place, of course, while chanting the proper prayers to Blake so that the magical commode is pleased with their service.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 21 September 2014, 12:14:06
Are we gonna come up with any new tribbles anytime soon?
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Post by: serack on 21 September 2014, 16:48:30
a few may tribble by shortly :)
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 21 September 2014, 17:37:33
Tribble # 156.


 "Victor talks about a campaign that will take years to prosecute. It is entirely possible that the Clans—and Phelan, you would know this better than anyone—could fracture and the Crusaders could suddenly renew their effort to conquer the Inner Sphere. While we are trying to push the Smoke Jaguars out of the Inner Sphere, the Jade Falcons and the Wolves could burst forth and ravage the Lyran Alliance."

Phelan nodded. "It it possible. Vlad is in charge of the Wolves and might do anything. Marthe Pryde, the Jade Falcon Khan, would surely love to take Terra. I don't think you'd like being a bondswoman to either of them."

"No, not at all. Nor would any of my people." Katrina glanced down at her hands. "This is why I want you to keep your Arc-Royal Defense Cordon in place. I want the Kell Hounds and the Wolves to remain in the Lyran Alliance while the war against the Smoke Jaguars goes off. I want you here to be able to protect the Lyran Alliance."

Morgan closed his eyes for a moment, then slowly shook his head. "I think you missed the point of what I said yesterday and why I refused to help you before."

"No, I understand you perfectly. I'm agreeing with you!" Katrina sat up straight. "You're the only one I can trust to keep my realm safe."

Morgan smiled indulgently. "Ah, but you see, I am disinclined to trust you, Katrina."

"What?"

"You heard me."

"Why wouldn't you see me as trustworthy?"

Morgan's voice dropped to a low growl. "I have seldom had reason to find murderers trustworthy."

Outrage and shock rimmed Katrina's eyes with white and dropped her jaw. "Murderer, me? I'm no murderer."

"Your protestations of innocence mean nothing to me, Katrina." Morgan Kell stood abruptly, and Katrina shied back away from him. "I know, I know, Victor did not murder your mother. Just before her death Melissa confided to me that she had offered to abdicate in his favor. He refused to let her do so. She was not an impediment to his taking power, but Victor is an impediment to your taking power. Your mother had to be removed, and shifting blame for her death to him allowed you to usurp his position here"

Katrina covered her face with her hands and her shoulders shook with sobs. "How can you say that, Morgan? I loved my mother. I was present when she died. And I saw to it that you had the best care possible here during your recovery. While you lay sick, I visited you every day. How could I have done that, why would I do that, if I were the person responsible for your injuries?"

"Guilt?" Morgan looked down at her. "In all the times you visited me you expressed regret at the death of my wife and at the loss of my arm, but never regret about your mother's death. You were more concerned that I couldn't attend the funeral than you were about her being dead."

"No! I was just being strong, trying to comfort you in your tragedy. If you hadn't been so gravely hurt and doped up, you would have seen the pain in my heart. Just because you didn't see it doesn't mean it wasn't there."

"Oh, Katrina, you played the role of grieving daughter very well—too well. You bore up under the pressure like a champion, and you were certain to let all the media in the Inner Sphere know how brave you were." Morgan's flesh and blood hand curled into a fist. "I especially loved how you protested against those who would have blamed your brother, which only seemed to persuade people that he must have killed Melissa if you were so bent on defending him."

Morgan reached down and grabbed her jaw, tipping her face up so she could see him. "I did not realize all this at first because, yes, the grief of losing my wife and my arm and your mother blinded me. That blindness was temporary, so now I see things very clearly."

Katrina slapped Morgan's hand away, then stood and backed away from him. "Never lay a hand on me again! Never! I am the Archon!"

"The office I can respect, Katrina, but I have long been a man willing to oppose the person in the office. Your namesake knew that. You should as well. And you should fear it."

"Fear? You?" Katrina threw back her head and laughed aloud. "If you had any proof that what you say is true, you'd have used it already. You have nothing and, therefore, cannot threaten me."

Morgan stared at her for a moment, then shook his head. "You're the worst kind of fool, Katrina—one who does not listen. If I used my evidence to depose you right now, I would weaken the Inner Sphere. I won't do that. But after the Clans are defeated, I will not feel so constrained."

"If you survive the fight against the Clans."

The cold fury in Katrina's voice jolted adrenaline through Phelan. He hurled his tumbler against the far wall, where it exploded into a wet stain. Before Katrina's gasp had fully escaped her throat, Phelan took a long stride forward and locked his right hand around her neck. He hoisted her up, hearing only the gurgle in her throat and the scrape of her tiptoes against the carpet.

"You murdered my mother and now you threaten my father? You actually dare to threaten my father?" He pressed up with his thumb, hooking it in directly beneath the corner of her jaw. He wanted nothing more than to tighten his grip and crush the life from her, but somehow he resisted that desire. "Understand this: if he dies, you die. If I die, you die."

A metal hand dropped on Phelan's right shoulder. "Let her go."

Phelan's shrugged his father's hand off. "Listen to me, Katrina, for these are not empty threats. I have a world full of Wolves who will stop at nothing to avenge me and my family." He watched her face slowly turn purple and her eyes begin to bug out. He could feel her pulse pound against his fingers and palm. The image of his mother floated before his mind's eye ... and then it happened. The Wolf in the Khan, the Warrior who had been retrained like the totem his Clan revered to never let its prey go when its jaws were clenched firmly around its throat, came to the forefront.

It was all so quick. And with a snap that seemed shockingly loud, Katrina Steiner-Davions windpipe was crushed and her spinal cord severed under the incredibly rage fueled grip of the Clan Warrior.

The loud sound tore the blood rage from his eyes and in reflexive shock, his aching hand opened, letting the lifeless corpse of the nominal Archon of the Lyran Alliance crash to the ground bonelessly.

"Phelan ... what have you done" his Father asked slowly in a tone that the younger Kell had never heard him use before ... as for the first time in his life as the enormity of his actions started to sink in, Phelan found himself completely unable to find words to respond.

As if in answer, the door to the Archons private office snapped open and Tormano Liao came walking in carrying a folder of some documents of one kind or another. The younger brother of Candance Liao stopped dead cold at the scene, his eyes slowly tracing back and forth between the stunned Kells and the body on the floor before becoming narrowly and rapidly calculating.

Nothing was said for at least twenty seconds, as if it was all too unreal for everyone ... and then ...

"Clearly Colonel ... my Nephew Sun-Tzu has a great deal to answer for" he started, his voice astonishingly level and clinical, even as his eyes suggested his mind was moving at a faster than light blur. "Sending a Death Cultist Assassin after the Archon during a conference to rebuild the Star League and take the fight to the Clans ... shocking"...
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Post by: ErikModi on 21 September 2014, 18:00:02
Tribble # 156.

Nice.

Tribble 157:  The Werewolves

Ulric Kerensky was never one to not have a backup plan.

A the same time he was secretly grooming Phelan Kell to illustrate to the Clans the vast error of the Invasion, he had another plan in the works.  The Werewolves are an irregular Nova Trinary, formed of three Strategic Command Stars (four 'Mechs and two OmniFighters), with a Star of Elementals attached to each.  As the invasion commences, the Werewolves are attached to various forces taking planets along the Commonwealth/Rasalhague border, claiming Inner Sphere 'Mechs and warriors as isorla.  The warriors from the Inner Sphere are trained under the grueling standards of the Clans, but permitted to keep their own initiative and flexibility, their 'Mechs salvaged and refitted with Clan technology.  As the invasion grinds to a halt after the death of Leo Showers, the Werewolves' Irregular Stars successfully defend their holdings from attacks by both Inner Sphere and Clan forces.  Only time will tell if the Werewolves Experiment will benefit the Clans. . .

(Loosely based on a MegaMek campaign I play against the bot for fun.)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 21 September 2014, 23:03:29
Tribble # 156.

I'd buy that for a dollar.  :)  Nicely done, Chris.

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 21 September 2014, 23:17:38
I'd buy that for a dollar.  :)  Nicely done, Chris.

MA

   agreed, it was great, will read for sure
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Post by: gladius on 22 September 2014, 02:14:14
I'd buy that for a dollar.  :)  Nicely done, Chris.

MA
Dear Kathy getting what she deserves, and Sun Stupid getting the blame? Print it!
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 22 September 2014, 23:25:42
Tribble # 156.


 
"Clearly Colonel ... my Nephew Sun-Tzu has a great deal to answer for" he started, his voice astonishingly level and clinical, even as his eyes suggested his mind was moving at a faster than light blur. "Sending a Death Cultist Assassin after the Archon during a conference to rebuild the Star League and take the fight to the Clans ... shocking"...

 [applause]

Over the years, I have seen many variations of how that scene could end mostly with Victor getting chased off Thakard, but never have in my wildest thoughts placed Tormano there. And the thing is the weasel would totally sell out Kat without batting an eye. Bravo, sir.

Here it is:

#155


3057

The Clans have conquered Terra.

  • Victor Steiner-Davion had been murdered during the state visit of Hohiro and Omiko Kurita on Tharkad in front of his sister by a presumely Capellan assassin. Katherine Steiner-Davion had also been severly wounded and broke down.
  • All of Tamar March and parts of Sky, Sarna and Draconis March had been conquered by the Clans. This split the Federated Commonwealth in two.
  • Katherine Steiner-Davion became the new Archon-Princes after she recovered and her mother stpped down. Her sister Yvonne became regent on New Avalon in her place.
  • Omiko Kurita stayed on Tharkad taking care of Katherine but also because she got pregnant by Victor. Both women fell in love with eachother and Katherine adopted Omiko's daughter as her heir because her injury made it impossible for her to get pregnant.
  • Clan Wolf lost the Refusal War against Clan Jade Falcon and retreated completely into the Inner Sphere and settled on Arc Royal. This had been Ulric Kerensky's plan all along.
  • Surprisingly Natasha Kerensky survived, but she will never pilot a mech again.
  • The Free Worlds League lost several systems close to Terra. Among those are the Border Protectorate, the Sirian Concordat and parts of the Silver Hawks Coalition.
  • Wolf's Dragoons evacuated Outreach before the Clans arrived and relocated to Arc Royal.
  • Kali Liao had assumed the office of Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation after her brother died in a tragical "accident". She tried to intimidate her enemies with a series of assassinations targeting the other successor lords. Only the intervention of her aunt Cancade prevented that the other successor states annihilated the Confederation in retalaition.
  • After returning home from Tharkad Hohiro Kurita had to learn that both the Coordinator and the Kanrei had been targeted by assassins.
  • The Draconis Combine lost huge parts of the Pesht, Benjamin and Dieron Military Districts to the Clans. Luthien had become a border world.
  • The Free Rasalhague Republic had been completely conquered by the Clans.
  • Besides the Jade Falcons and the exiled Wolves following Clans now control systems in the Inner Sphere: Smoke Jaguars, Ghost Bears, Nova Cats, Hell's Horses, Steel Vipers and Diamond Sharks. Terra is controlled by all of them (except the exiled Wolves).
  • The Show Ravens have allied themselves with the Outworld Alliance.
That's all of it.

I find it odd that you have Yvonne placed on New Avalon when Arthur would probably have been next in line for the New Avalon throne if not for his unfortunate meeting with that bomb.  Otherwise, the initial release would have been better since it's more unique than a Clan Uber Allies alteration, and the Clan conquest would have overshadowed anything else.
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Post by: barbarossa on 07 October 2014, 03:03:59
Sorry, that it took so long, but which one is better: #151 or #155?
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Post by: knightowl on 08 October 2014, 09:52:02
Sorry, that it took so long, but which one is better: #151 or #155?

Got lost between posts. They now move around the Internet like the Cyber-idea A-team.
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Post by: Lord Harlock on 08 October 2014, 21:04:25
Sorry, that it took so long, but which one is better: #151 or #155?

I am a bit obtuse in my statements, but yeah if I was you, I'd go with #151 since as I said it's unique without adding a Clan win to it. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 09 October 2014, 05:35:13
#158

A variation of an earlier tribble.

Following the Fourth Succession War, House Steiner-Davion establishes new regulations for planetary militias, to the order that all worlds above a certain population must maintain a certain strength of conventional forces. Federal support builds up over the years, and by 3050, most worlds with more than a hundred million inhabitants maintain what amounts to a full RCT.

Three tank regiments
Five infantry regiments (including heavy APCs)
One artillary regiment
One fighter regiment

Mostly featuring low-tech gear, they're designed to tie up an invader, supporting any AFFC troops posted there until heavier 'Mech-equipped forces can arrive. It might not halt the Clan offensive, but it would make them work a bit harder for it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 09 October 2014, 06:00:17
#158

A variation of an earlier tribble.

Following the Fourth Succession War, House Steiner-Davion establishes new regulations for planetary militias, to the order that all worlds above a certain population must maintain a certain strength of conventional forces. Federal support builds up over the years, and by 3050, most worlds with more than a hundred million inhabitants maintain what amounts to a full RCT.

Three tank regiments
Five infantry regiments (including heavy APCs)
One artillary regiment
One fighter regiment

Mostly featuring low-tech gear, they're designed to tie up an invader, supporting any AFFC troops posted there until heavier 'Mech-equipped forces can arrive. It might not halt the Clan offensive, but it would make them work a bit harder for it.
it would slow things down a bit, also might have other benefits.....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 09 October 2014, 16:29:22
#158

A variation of an earlier tribble.

Following the Fourth Succession War, House Steiner-Davion establishes new regulations for planetary militias, to the order that all worlds above a certain population must maintain a certain strength of conventional forces. Federal support builds up over the years, and by 3050, most worlds with more than a hundred million inhabitants maintain what amounts to a full RCT.

Three tank regiments
Five infantry regiments (including heavy APCs)
One artillary regiment
One fighter regiment

Mostly featuring low-tech gear, they're designed to tie up an invader, supporting any AFFC troops posted there until heavier 'Mech-equipped forces can arrive. It might not halt the Clan offensive, but it would make them work a bit harder for it.

Interesting idea.

It could do quite a bit more then slow them down - it won't stop them from taking worlds, but it WOULD dramatically increasing the chewing up they take in doing it, especially after they wise up in to what defensive tactics to use against the invaders. Even if they are only taking say a Binary in non-recoverable losses from these additional forces, plus a another Binary or two knocked out temporarily (hardware, pilots whatever needing to be replaced and repaired) it would quite quickly start to grind down the Clusters from the Jade Falcons and Wolves. Then add to that the problem of some of these units breaking off and going to ground, or going to ground in advance to rise back up and savage the rear area garrison units. Then add to that laughable logistical support the invading Clans brought them them initially (except apparently Wolf).

And this isn't even going into what happens when these Militia units are backstopped with heavy frontline RCTs where they will act as a significant force multiplier...

This could lead to a very skewed invasion corridor. With the Jags and Nova Cats doing much the same, if the DCMS hasn't matched the program and so chugging along normally. The Wolves sticking to the FRR and doing as well as they did in the OTL ... and the Falcons falling increasingly behind so that when Tyria plays kamikaze, the Falcons are looking almost sluggish as they struggle to keep their Frontline clusters strong AND their rear areas secure AND put down resistance at an acceptable rate. Could lead to huge frustration where they start breaking out the Ortillary to get some traction, which might provoke a far more violent response back from the FedCom.

The Vipers will of course be activated, and will probably try to show up the Falcons after the Year of Peace. Of course, IF the FedCom had any sense, they would strip the militias from deeper in the Commonwealth to double up the next lines of planets with twice the forces, as they move up more regular units as well, so things actually get even harder. Especially with the trickles of field refit kits coming in. Could see the Falcons essentially reduced to the level of the Smoke Jaguars post Battle of Tukayyid - or even lower, with less forward progress. Which would probably suit the Wolves just fine.

Or it could mean that the Wolves are diverted much earlier to shift and point away from Terra towards Tharkard - something I'm sure that would involve major trials of refusal and all manner of infighting, dito any thought of bringing in more Clans.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 09 October 2014, 20:02:56
Interesting idea.

It could do quite a bit more then slow them down - it won't stop them from taking worlds, but it WOULD dramatically increasing the chewing up they take in doing it, especially after they wise up in to what defensive tactics to use against the invaders. Even if they are only taking say a Binary in non-recoverable losses from these additional forces, plus a another Binary or two knocked out temporarily (hardware, pilots whatever needing to be replaced and repaired) it would quite quickly start to grind down the Clusters from the Jade Falcons and Wolves. Then add to that the problem of some of these units breaking off and going to ground, or going to ground in advance to rise back up and savage the rear area garrison units. Then add to that laughable logistical support the invading Clans brought them them initially (except apparently Wolf).

And this isn't even going into what happens when these Militia units are backstopped with heavy frontline RCTs where they will act as a significant force multiplier...

This could lead to a very skewed invasion corridor. With the Jags and Nova Cats doing much the same, if the DCMS hasn't matched the program and so chugging along normally. The Wolves sticking to the FRR and doing as well as they did in the OTL ... and the Falcons falling increasingly behind so that when Tyria plays kamikaze, the Falcons are looking almost sluggish as they struggle to keep their Frontline clusters strong AND their rear areas secure AND put down resistance at an acceptable rate. Could lead to huge frustration where they start breaking out the Ortillary to get some traction, which might provoke a far more violent response back from the FedCom.

The Vipers will of course be activated, and will probably try to show up the Falcons after the Year of Peace. Of course, IF the FedCom had any sense, they would strip the militias from deeper in the Commonwealth to double up the next lines of planets with twice the forces, as they move up more regular units as well, so things actually get even harder. Especially with the trickles of field refit kits coming in. Could see the Falcons essentially reduced to the level of the Smoke Jaguars post Battle of Tukayyid - or even lower, with less forward progress. Which would probably suit the Wolves just fine.

Or it could mean that the Wolves are diverted much earlier to shift and point away from Terra towards Tharkard - something I'm sure that would involve major trials of refusal and all manner of infighting, dito any thought of bringing in more Clans.
No, I don't think the Wolves would shift and point away from Terra. As you, undoubtedly, know the whole purpose of Operation: Revival was the capture of Terra. The conquering of the worlds in their path is just a bonus until after Terra is claimed by a Clan and is named the ilClan. Undoubtedly it would put the Wolves in a far better position to take Terra than either the Jade Falcons or Smoke Jaguars, but the Ghost Bears, if they started learning from the Wolves, would also be in the same position. It would make the Jade Falcons, Smoke Jaguars, Steel Vipers, and Nova Cats all the more desperate at Tukayyid to win on that world.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 10 October 2014, 17:01:30
No, I don't think the Wolves would shift and point away from Terra. As you, undoubtedly, know the whole purpose of Operation: Revival was the capture of Terra. The conquering of the worlds in their path is just a bonus until after Terra is claimed by a Clan and is named the ilClan. Undoubtedly it would put the Wolves in a far better position to take Terra than either the Jade Falcons or Smoke Jaguars, but the Ghost Bears, if they started learning from the Wolves, would also be in the same position. It would make the Jade Falcons, Smoke Jaguars, Steel Vipers, and Nova Cats all the more desperate at Tukayyid to win on that world.

Oh I agree they wouldn't want to, but Showers might just tell them to do it and shut up for the sake of the invasion. I mean, most of the Clans appear at this point to consider the Wolves their whipping boy  - and were very unhappy with them sprinting ahead like they did thanks to their strategic smarts and ComStar administration. The Grand Kurultai was, IIRC, pretty much entirely called to slow the Wolves down because they were actually making the Crusaders look bad.

If in this scenario the Jade Falcons progress rapidly grinds to a halt and steadily inflicts losses at a rate that will render them combat incapable after only a few waves compared to the other Clans, it might just force Showers hand.

Of course, you can bet the Falcons would furiously demand a trial of refual (and so would the Wolves) which would result it yet more glorious infighting among the Clans, so let the good times roll!

And if the Wolves DO start pressing in on the Commonwealth, it might just cause that traitor Kell to snap out of it and realize what he is doing.
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Post by: consequences on 11 October 2014, 11:13:43
His own frikking unit taking Tamar didn't serve as a wakeup call, so I'm doubtful on that last.

I would consider it somewhat more likely that the Falcons would play host to two or even three reserve Clans instead of one, although since by that point it's likely that Ulric is in charge he might play dirty and hint to some other Crusader Clan that the time is ripe to challenge the Falcons for their corridor since they clearly are incapable of handling it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 11 October 2014, 16:26:31
Wait, Phelan was bid into the battle that took Tamar?
Seriously?
And he didn't immediately get flagged as persona-non-Grata to the Federated Commonwealth???!!!

But it would be hilarious if the Nova Cats were activated, but assigned to the Falcons along with the Diamond Sharks and Vipers. I'm sure the four of them would get along just swimmingly. As Ulric sits back in his cabin and does a Xanatos 'just as planned' sort of look as the Smoke Jaguars invasion increasingly slows down without anyone backing them up. While the Wolves and Ghost Bears merrily sail onwards ...
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Post by: consequences on 11 October 2014, 21:12:48
Wait, Phelan was bid into the battle that took Tamar?
Seriously?
And he didn't immediately get flagged as persona-non-Grata to the Federated Commonwealth???!!!


I don't know if he was bid into the battle, but his unit sure as hell went.

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But it would be hilarious if the Nova Cats were activated, but assigned to the Falcons along with the Diamond Sharks and Vipers. I'm sure the four of them would get along just swimmingly. As Ulric sits back in his cabin and does a Xanatos 'just as planned' sort of look as the Smoke Jaguars invasion increasingly slows down without anyone backing them up. While the Wolves and Ghost Bears merrily sail onwards ...

Heh. Can you imagine the Jags trying to take Luthien on their own? Considering their one sane man got killed on Wolcott, they probably wouldn't have the troops left  to participate on Tukkayid.

On the other side of things, Clans Nova cat and Diamond Shark get along, as does Diamond Shark with Wolf. They could pretty much leave SV and JF to bicker futilely and forge ahead on Wolf's flank.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 12 October 2014, 02:28:15
I don't know if he was bid into the battle, but his unit sure as hell went.


I hope at least Ulric and/or Natasha showed SOME common sense and made damn sure he was bid out of the war.
Then again, as the whole deal about Phelan committing what amounts to treason by several definitions is never really dwelt upon, at all, who the hell knows.

Would have made a great little arc for Ryan Steiner though. Have him bring up the fact that Morgan Kells Son, Cousin to the Royal Family itself, is a dark traitor to the Inner Sphere on just about every level. Putting Melissa and Co in the rather award position of having to either PNG Phelan with 'shoot to kill' orders should he enter FedCom space ... or defend someone who gleefully converted to the Clan system and has happily helped them carve a chunk out of the Inner Sphere.

But of course thats just a pipe dream. Or I might just have a lot of vitriol running through me after just re-reading 'Natural Selection' and Stackpoles fawning over that damn traitor and his Clan buddies and how TOTALLY AWESOME they are.

Huh now there is an idea for a tribble. Katherine isn't a bitch and while their mother dies, Katherine had nothing to do with it. Ryan Steiner gets his ass shot in retaliation and this time with Katherines help, Victor comes out much stronger with the blame firmly on Ryan instead of him. The FedCom endures. And Victor hunts down and executes the silly Red Corsair without the help of any stupid Wolf unit.

Then the Refusal War happens. But this time when Phelans Galaxy arrives at Morges and he arrogantly demands everyone get out of his way, a ComGuard/FedCom task force jumps in and instead orders him to surrender his ships and prepare to be boarded ... or he can die in a hail of Capital gunfire from the half dozen heavy warships now surrounding his flotila. That also happened to nuke the hell out of the Falcon pursuit fleet a few hours earlier.

This is what Ulric gets for not bothering to coordinate his plans with the Government he decided to send people into exile into and turn into a battleground.

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Heh. Can you imagine the Jags trying to take Luthien on their own? Considering their one sane man got killed on Wolcott, they probably wouldn't have the troops left  to participate on Tukkayid.


I can honestly see it going pretty much exactly as in the OTL ... except ALL The losses are now to the Jags rather than shared with the Nova Cats. That could actually mean that instead of the attacks continuing as in the OTL, the DCMS might be able to start ramping up a genuine counter offensive that squeezes the Jags backwards somewhat before the Truce goes into force...

Which in turn could result in yet more Homeworld Clans being bid in by the ilKhan. Lets see now, if the Nova Cats are busy in the FedCom zone, which is the most possibly agrivating Clan that Ulric could usher in to 'help' the Jaguars, ordering said Jaguards to give up a half dozen worlds to...

Blood Spirits perhaps?

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On the other side of things, Clans Nova cat and Diamond Shark get along, as does Diamond Shark with Wolf. They could pretty much leave SV and JF to bicker futilely and forge ahead on Wolf's flank.

True, although I can see Ulric carefully staggering the new zones so that the Sharks border the Wolves, screening them from the Falcons. With the SV on the other side of THEM and the NCs guarding the far flank.

Let the good times roll!!!
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Post by: gladius on 12 October 2014, 05:38:48
Yeah, Stackpole REALLY loves his Noble Space Barbarians. I could see your idea meshing really well with my 'Katherine isn't a bitch' tribble. But then I'm all for hanging Clanners for pirates.

Phelan mostly fought in the FRR, and against ComStar on Tukkayyid. So he never technically fought the Commonwealth, but he did join the Wolves. I suppose a lot can be said for PTSD, Stockholm syndrome, the shame and shock of being Disposessed (a major blow that we can't fully comprehend emotionally today), and, of course, being led by his lower extremities thanks to Natasha's 'granddaughter'. Call it diminished capacity.
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 12 October 2014, 05:46:14
if you look back at history, aristocrats have often changed sides fairly lightly, frequently and without significant repercussions
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Post by: drakensis on 12 October 2014, 16:58:53
#159

Following her accession to Archon, Katrina Steiner devotes her well known military expertise not only to repairing the damage done by Alessandro Steiner to the Lyran Commonwealth but also to a complete reform of the Lyran Commonwealth Armed Forces. By the 3020s the LCAF isn't fully reformed but the four Guards formations and their supporting units have been restructured into a highly professional formation of permanent combined-arms brigades and semi-permanent divisions.

Can the Kapteyn Pact survive the Federated Commonwealth combining the two finest militaries in the Inner Sphere?
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Post by: ErikModi on 12 October 2014, 17:54:28
#160

Read a source a little while ago, can't remember where, that stated that, at the inception of the Clans, the Warriors were the only ones intended to fall under the divisions of Clan, with the lower castes forming a sort of "Clanless" gestalt to support the different Warrior Clans.  It didn't take long for the lower castes to start considering themselves a member of a specific Clan, and things just eventually settled into how we know them now.

My question is. . . what if that didn't happen?  What if, instead of Jade Falcon Techs and Wolf Techs and Smoke Jaguar Techs, you just had Techs?  And Scientists and Laborers and so on.  What if the Warriors are the only ones with a sense of individual Clan identity, while the lower castes consider themselves of the Clans as a whole?  How would Clan society be different?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 12 October 2014, 19:25:09
#160

Read a source a little while ago, can't remember where, that stated that, at the inception of the Clans, the Warriors were the only ones intended to fall under the divisions of Clan, with the lower castes forming a sort of "Clanless" gestalt to support the different Warrior Clans.  It didn't take long for the lower castes to start considering themselves a member of a specific Clan, and things just eventually settled into how we know them now.

My question is. . . what if that didn't happen?  What if, instead of Jade Falcon Techs and Wolf Techs and Smoke Jaguar Techs, you just had Techs?  And Scientists and Laborers and so on.  What if the Warriors are the only ones with a sense of individual Clan identity, while the lower castes consider themselves of the Clans as a whole?  How would Clan society be different?
Hmm...interesting question. One that I don't think the warrior caste members will not like answering.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 12 October 2014, 23:51:01
#159

Following her accession to Archon, Katrina Steiner devotes her well known military expertise not only to repairing the damage done by Alessandro Steiner to the Lyran Commonwealth but also to a complete reform of the Lyran Commonwealth Armed Forces. By the 3020s the LCAF isn't fully reformed but the four Guards formations and their supporting units have been restructured into a highly professional formation of permanent combined-arms brigades and semi-permanent divisions.

Can the Kapteyn Pact survive the Federated Commonwealth combining the two finest militaries in the Inner Sphere?

Wow. I wonder how many Social Generals she had to make an example of before she could get away with that!

Or perhaps she just handpicked the worst 20% of the LCAF, regrouped them into a single unit and sent them on a 'milk run' mission that happened to run smash bang into a couple Sword of Light regiments. I mean the material loss would be regrettable, even more when the DCMS salvage most of it, but...
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Post by: drakensis on 13 October 2014, 03:54:41
Wow. I wonder how many Social Generals she had to make an example of before she could get away with that!

Or perhaps she just handpicked the worst 20% of the LCAF, regrouped them into a single unit and sent them on a 'milk run' mission that happened to run smash bang into a couple Sword of Light regiments. I mean the material loss would be regrettable, even more when the DCMS salvage most of it, but...

Some units would remain as 'sinks' for traditionalists - 'promoted' into the Skye Rangers, Lyran Regulars, etc while the Guards (Royal, Arcturan, Donegal and Lyran) receive new officers and the best people moved out of the rest of the LCAF. The way I was thinking to structure this, about half the Brigades* would be commanded by Leutenant-Generals who are tankers or infantry rather than Mechwarriors.

This may require some sleight of hand, suggesting to the nobility that it's the Rangers and Regulars getting the Archon's favour while the Guards are being 'diluted' with non-mechwarrior peasents.


* Going with something like the Demi-Brigades from Davion and Davion (Deceased) where a Brigade is made up of two halves, each a regiment reinforced with two battalions from other services. This would also allow many mercenary units made up of a regiment and support elements (see the 3028 Kell Hounds with 3 Mech Battalions, a Jump Infantry battalion and aerospace wing) to be brigaded with a LCAF Demi-Brigade and fit in as a Brigade.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 13 October 2014, 19:37:46
Some units would remain as 'sinks' for traditionalists - 'promoted' into the Skye Rangers, Lyran Regulars, etc while the Guards (Royal, Arcturan, Donegal and Lyran) receive new officers and the best people moved out of the rest of the LCAF. The way I was thinking to structure this, about half the Brigades* would be commanded by Leutenant-Generals who are tankers or infantry rather than Mechwarriors.

This may require some sleight of hand, suggesting to the nobility that it's the Rangers and Regulars getting the Archon's favour while the Guards are being 'diluted' with non-mechwarrior peasents.


* Going with something like the Demi-Brigades from Davion and Davion (Deceased) where a Brigade is made up of two halves, each a regiment reinforced with two battalions from other services. This would also allow many mercenary units made up of a regiment and support elements (see the 3028 Kell Hounds with 3 Mech Battalions, a Jump Infantry battalion and aerospace wing) to be brigaded with a LCAF Demi-Brigade and fit in as a Brigade.

Huh. So the Guard units essentially would become the offensive force of the LCAF, perhaps even with the bulk of the military mobile assets (like jumpships), while the units like the Rangers and Regulars would in turn become something more akin to garrison and defensive units? Loosing the tactical skills of the better units, but partially making up for it with superior knowledge of their AO and being able to prepare for their battles well in advance? Plus mostly not having to go into combat at all more than the offensive units means much more time for meeting all those very important social commitments...
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Post by: drakensis on 14 October 2014, 02:32:34
The Rangers and Regulars would provide cover for their home reasons and be the units of choice to be tapped to provide companies for limited raids, letting them amass glory.

Meanwhile the Guards units are the ones deployed when there's a serious effort to take or defend a world since their focus and training tends to involve operations with a regiment or more working together.
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Post by: gladius on 20 October 2014, 04:51:13
#161

In 3035, a small, rag tag flotilla of JumpShips arrives in the Commonwealth, clustered around a battered, battle-scarred and barely functional WarShip. The fleet is made up of descendants of veterans of the Pentagon Civil Wars and Dark Caste renegades, under the command of the scion of a Davion cadet branch who's ancestor was a SLDF officer who originally joined the Exodus.

At first disbelieved, they share a tale of survival and escape, with the crew of the cruiser fleeing the maddened forces of Nicky's cult into uncharted space. A missjump stranded the WarShip in a distant system, which fortunately had a habitable world. It took decades of work, half-cannibalising the ship and a lot of luck to build up an industrial base to repair it, work that was sped up by the arrival of a group of renegades similarly fleeing the Clans.

Introduced to a distant relative with an incredible story, Hanse and Melissa take the refugees in and are horrified by what is lurking in the Deep Periphery. The War of '39 is called off, because the Commonwealth suddenly has bigger problems. The WarShip and all remaining Star League tech, as well as the crews, are escorted to Tharkad where a crash program of reverse engineering is launched.
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Post by: knightowl on 20 October 2014, 07:35:47
You do know that there is a Steiner in the Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 20 October 2014, 09:12:29
#161

In 3035, a small, rag tag flotilla of JumpShips arrives in the Commonwealth, clustered around a battered, battle-scarred and barely functional WarShip. The fleet is made up of descendants of veterans of the Pentagon Civil Wars and Dark Caste renegades, under the command of the scion of a Davion cadet branch who's ancestor was a SLDF officer who originally joined the Exodus.

At first disbelieved, they share a tale of survival and escape, with the crew of the cruiser fleeing the maddened forces of Nicky's cult into uncharted space. A missjump stranded the WarShip in a distant system, which fortunately had a habitable world. It took decades of work, half-cannibalising the ship and a lot of luck to build up an industrial base to repair it, work that was sped up by the arrival of a group of renegades similarly fleeing the Clans.

Introduced to a distant relative with an incredible story, Hanse and Melissa take the refugees in and are horrified by what is lurking in the Deep Periphery. The War of '39 is called off, because the Commonwealth suddenly has bigger problems. The WarShip and all remaining Star League tech, as well as the crews, are escorted to Tharkad where a crash program of reverse engineering is launched.

Melissa picks up phone and calls LIC.

MS: "Simon? HPG Justin and co-ordinate with him - one time pads only please. I want Jamie Wolf here. Within a fortnight".

*pauses as there is talk on the other end of the line*

MS: No, I don't care what shipping you have to reroute, just get the man shoved onto a Dropship with Natasha Kerensky and get them here. At once".

*another pause as a voice loudly complains down the line*

MS: "If he doesn't? Then tell your people to tell himexactly this; 'We have a pressing need to discuss the weather reports from Strana Mechty".


In all serious though, its an interesting tribble.

No 3039 war could actually be a bad thing for the Inner Sphere.

Its bad for the FedCom, because without getting drubbed (actually Hoodwinked but they don't find out for ages) by the DCMS in the 3039 war, all those problems with the AFFS and LCAF working together may well go undetected, as well as all the major kinks in the chains of command and so on, that led to the early adoption and integration into the combined AFFC. They won't be humbled and come down from the cocky high of the 4th Succession War, ESPECIALLY in the Stenier side of the Commonwealth, which really will not do them any favors when the Clans come calling. The Sandovols will probably scream loudly at not being able to have their crack at the Combine, firmly thinking that the FedCom will do to them what they did to the Cappies back in '28, might even start their own push hoping to drag Hanse and Melissa in anyway. Which could be bad.

Its not sunshine for the DCMS either. Theodore made his name in the 3039 war, its the basis of the power and authority had in the 3050s to fight the Clan invasion and do what had to be done, being the 'savoir of the Combine' and all that. Without that victory to his name, its not impossible his reforms will get bogged down and eventually reversed, ensuring the DCMS is a much softer target when the Clans come running in. ComStar will probably push them to take the offensive if the FedCom refuses to attack, and Myndo isn't exactly subtle. She may well stage attacks / trick units into attacking to get a war going if no-one else will.

As for reverse engineering the technology, at this point (by fluff, although the Novels of course disagree dramatically) NAIS and the FedCom are starting to get most core Star League technology into either prototype testing or even serial production. I don't think you can speed it up that much more, I mean I'm sure R&D are already throwing everything but the kitchen sink at the wall to get forward progress. But I suppose you could potentially shave off a few years by having working examples to look at as well as the engineering data.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 20 October 2014, 09:15:52
 :D

I was never clear: was Outreach a FedCom planet held in feif by the Dragoons, or was it an independant state in its own right?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 20 October 2014, 11:11:20
:D

I was never clear: was Outreach a FedCom planet held in feif by the Dragoons, or was it an independant state in its own right?

Supposed to be the first, ended up being the latter, since Victor is scripted to be ineffectual in all aspects of dealing with former Capellan worlds they were never called upon to do their danged feudal duty to help stabilize things.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 04 November 2014, 15:54:19
Tribble #162

When Khan Kerlin Ward made the proposal to send a contingent of Freeborn warriors from his Clan to the Inner Sphere under the guise of a mercenary company to assess the fighting capabilities of the Successor States, many of the Khans at the time agreed, except one...saKhan Gerrick N'Buta of Clan Star Adder. While he agreed that sending a group of Freeborn warriors to the Inner Sphere was a good idea, to ensure that the Wolves to not withhold information, Gerrick proposed that each Clan send a group of their own Freeborn warriors (no more than a binary of course). He argued that if the Clans do return to the Inner Sphere, then they should all be prepared for possible actions against the warriors of the Successor States; by having each Clan send a group of their own warriors, then each can report back to their respective Clans. His argument swayed many on the Grand Council, even the Khans of the Smoke Jaguars who have no Freeborns in their touman to speak of but were willing to spare a few members of their lower castes to act in their stead.

To try and compensate for this, Kerlin Ward declares that each Clan must train their new "mercenaries" as a whole cohesive unit so that they can learn to work together. Therefore, once the Clans have each selected their warriors, all of them must undergo the same training under one of the Clans. After much debate, it was decided that Clan Jade Falcon would train the new "mercenaries" under the name "Falcon's Dragoons".

With a new unit consisting of warriors from all of the Clans, how will Kerlin Ward stall the invasion now?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 04 November 2014, 22:03:26
It could look a lot like Operation Klondike I suppose if each Clan supplies a battalion (40) of their best freebirths with a chance to establish their own Bloodname as a reward. So 17 Clans x 40 equals 680 warriors to be split between 5 Mech regiments (540) and 140 other (aerospace, infantry, other). Each Clan would have its own battalion and combat trails would determine a commander (Khan) and executive officer (saKhan) hence leadership. I would get away from the ______ Dragoon's and go with something completely different. Perhaps the Dagger Stars?

I would let the reward for service (25 year tour) be known and freebirths compete for the honor of a potential bloodname to determine the very best. No trueborns at all? Could be a very interesting alternate story line.  ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 05 November 2014, 11:20:11
If you had read my tribble I said no more than a BINARY! That's 10 mechs, 20 aerospace fighters and vehicles, 50 elementals, and 250 standard infantry. That's the Inner Sphere equivalent of a light company. Each Clan would send their best Binary to the Inner Sphere, meaning 17 light companies and their support techs and whatnot.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 05 November 2014, 12:21:37
If you had read my tribble I said no more than a BINARY! That's 10 mechs, 20 aerospace fighters and vehicles, 50 elementals, and 250 standard infantry. That's the Inner Sphere equivalent of a light company. Each Clan would send their best Binary to the Inner Sphere, meaning 17 light companies and their support techs and whatnot.

And they promptly make no waves, draw no interest, and get used up in the first major action they get thrown into because you put the frikking Falcons in charge of training and they lack the depth to absorb the losses they were willing to take to achieve victory and establish their rep even in canon when it was a Wolf show. You are literally reducing the Dragoons to a quarter of their OTL strength, less actually considering the non mech attachments the Dragoons fielded, then making it so any given subunit has blood feuds going with at least two other binaries, usually more.

The primary short term effect of this is to either force Ian Davion to refocus away from the Draconis front since he doesn't have five regiments to carry the Haseks to victory despite their best efforts, or result in a somewhat different map and probably more political tensions between the Haseks and Hanse if he takes the throne on schedule. In the midterm, comstar complacency after the regiment of mildly interesting dysfunctional lunatics dies off may result in very difficult to predict butterflies.

Edit: There is also the alternative where C* absorbed/killed off the Wolverines and notices 17 subformations operating in the style dictated by the Great Father, promptly murdering the feth out of the unit, interrogating any prisoners taken unto death, and starts gearing up for war.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 05 November 2014, 16:16:14
If you had read my tribble I said no more than a BINARY! That's 10 mechs, 20 aerospace fighters and vehicles, 50 elementals, and 250 standard infantry. That's the Inner Sphere equivalent of a light company. Each Clan would send their best Binary to the Inner Sphere, meaning 17 light companies and their support techs and whatnot.

Well if I read your tribble correctly you were asking for freebirths, so no elementals. Also you should use the word or not and when you listed said units. But let us not quibble about the tribble. 17 Companies just showing up at the same time around the InnerSphere is something ComStar would notice cause the Clans do not sneak well. Just one has to slip up and if your being careful and watching a number of them each could reveal a different clue on their origin. Quality control is easier done with a single overall command IMO. I understand you are going small not to get noticed but they could get picked off easier as well.

Why not try it from another fashion, all naval. Say Snow Raven and/or Cloud Cobra pitch the operation as entirely space bound information gathering effort using Bug Eyes as well as other naval assets. AKA warships. You bring a mobile base (Yard Ship), Star of Warships, and other support craft. Once you ascertain the status of the InnerSphere's naval support your job is even easier save ComStar. Think Naughty Picture runs of the Terran Hegemony.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 06 November 2014, 04:02:02
Sounds like the entire force could emerge as a plausible regiment of Mercs.

The Steel Vipers and Smoke Jaguars don't have freeborn warriors so they provide the technicans and laborers.
The Cloud Cobras and Smoke Ravens provide an aerospace binary each, which approximates to two wings of fighters.
The Hells Horses send about 250 infantry, enough to comprise a convincing infantry battalion.
The other twelve clans send 10 Mechs, each, which can reasonably re-organise into a regiment - 9 line companies and a command company.

If anything that'll look less suspicious than the Wolf Dragoons did, emerging with enough forces to be the largest mercenary force in existence. That wouldn't have as much impact on the Inner Sphere as they did originally, certainly, but the different complement would undoubtedly change things anyway.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 06 November 2014, 15:36:55
Sounds like the entire force could emerge as a plausible regiment of Mercs.

The Steel Vipers and Smoke Jaguars don't have freeborn warriors so they provide the technicans and laborers.
The Cloud Cobras and Smoke Ravens provide an aerospace binary each, which approximates to two wings of fighters.
The Hells Horses send about 250 infantry, enough to comprise a convincing infantry battalion.
The other twelve clans send 10 Mechs, each, which can reasonably re-organise into a regiment - 9 line companies and a command company.

If anything that'll look less suspicious than the Wolf Dragoons did, emerging with enough forces to be the largest mercenary force in existence. That wouldn't have as much impact on the Inner Sphere as they did originally, certainly, but the different complement would undoubtedly change things anyway.
Finally, someone who understood what I was getting at.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 07 November 2014, 00:18:42
Finally, someone who understood what I was getting at.
I got precisely what you were getting at, it just doesn't work if they actually want to accomplish the mission. With just one regiment, if they bring the proportion of lost designs and little tidbits like Natasha's royal marauder and the hephaestus station that  they did in OTL, the Haseks will instigate an 'incident' which results in the Syrtis Fusiliers killing them all to take their stuff to see where it came from. If they don't have any interesting tech and capabilities, they have no prospect of making partnerships with blackwell and GM to gauge IS industrial ability, or corresponding with Doctor Banzai to track their technological accomplishments. That's before you even get into the military section,  where one regiment is simply completely insufficient to get a handle on how the Houses manage large scale warfare.

The probable result is that they get a tiny landhold somewhere, get  thrown at the Capellan front as a stopgap and a sop to the Haseks, take massive casualties but do well enough that McCarron gets a bug up his butt(possibly planted by C*) and die to the last man as the battalion of effectives they have left get overrun when the MAC tears them apart.

And having them start in a different House makes things worse, with the kindest probable result being them only losing half of their forces to Concentrated Weakness since the Mariks lack the wherewithal to hit every world they would be penny packeted to even with C* leading them by the hand, and the Kuritans wouldn't see them as being worth the effort.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 November 2014, 02:46:01
By the late 3rd Succession War, a regiment of 'Mechs is considered large scale war. Sure, there are battles where more than one regiment was deployed but that was relatively rare. In fact, during their early years in the Inner Sphere the Dragoons virtually never deployed as a single force - they were operating with one or two regiments per planet and usually had some of their forces in reserve.

(Also, in this era the Capellan March is run by George Hasek not Michael Hasek so there would be much less likely dickery going on.)

I'm not saying things will go as canon, that would be ridiculous with these changes, but a regiment of mercs would still be a survivable force. You're right that the Davions are the best House to be their first employer - they're not hooked up with ComStar's Mercenary Review Board when they arrive and the Davions are the least likely to screw them on the contract in that regard. They won't get such good contract terms since a smaller force has less bargaining power but they're not really in this for the money.

They may even avoid the whole mess with the Marik Civil War since Candace Liao won't be trying to subvert them, thus Maximilian won't be looking for an excuse to unload the contract elsewhere while still getting his benefits and if they do wind up in Anton's employ they won't be so strategically important.

ComStar shenanigans are quite likely, I'll admit, but the most likely scenario barring some C* scheme (the canon ones are tailored to the Dragoons, something more like what was used on the GDL is more applicable here) is that the Falcon Dragoons work for Davion 3005-3010; move to Liao for another 5 year contract but since they're not as financially stable have to let their clause about not fighting their previous employer go; then get hired by Janos Marik after he's dealt with Anton, possibly getting worn down as part of an attack on Hephastus; enter Steiner employ in the early 3020s (with some resupply); and finally take employment with House Kurita, get company-stored and finally flip the board, retreating back to the Periphery to make their report to the Clan Homeworlds which would probably amount to "those ****** deserve everything we can do to them. how soon can we invade?"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: fitzgerald on 07 November 2014, 04:36:51
A 3030 invasion?     

Man that would be vicious, running into an Inner Sphere that's going to be heavily understrength as the Lyran's and Davions without the Dragoons to distract Dracs have to slam into the Dieron District.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 08 November 2014, 12:02:02
By the late 3rd Succession War, a regiment of 'Mechs is considered large scale war. Sure, there are battles where more than one regiment was deployed but that was relatively rare. In fact, during their early years in the Inner Sphere the Dragoons virtually never deployed as a single force - they were operating with one or two regiments per planet and usually had some of their forces in reserve.

Except for all  those times that multiple regiments were beating the snot out of each other until one side or the other ceased escalating and backed down. One of which involved fielding the Dragoons as a single formation only constituting half of the davion forces engaged.

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(Also, in this era the Capellan March is run by George Hasek not Michael Hasek so there would be much less likely dickery going on.)
Considering the lack of support the Dragoons received in OTL, and that Michael is entrenched in the intelligence apparatus without having to phone in the mismanagement of his demesne, I think you are being highly optimistic.


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I'm not saying things will go as canon, that would be ridiculous with these changes, but a regiment of mercs would still be a survivable force. You're right that the Davions are the best House to be their first employer - they're not hooked up with ComStar's Mercenary Review Board when they arrive and the Davions are the least likely to screw them on the contract in that regard. They won't get such good contract terms since a smaller force has less bargaining power but they're not really in this for the money.

A regiment that acted cautiously and with proper consideration would have a one in five chance of surviving the term of the Dragoons first employment. The Dragoons  were not even remotely cautious in their operations in OTL, only two or three of the sub components having a chance of being more aware of their limitations than the Wolves, with entirely too many scream and leap types even with the  SJs presumably kept in the mech bays away from polite company. Somehow I am doubting the training by Jade Falcon is going to improve  matters.

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They may even avoid the whole mess with the Marik Civil War since Candace Liao won't be trying to subvert them, thus Maximilian won't be looking for an excuse to unload the contract elsewhere while still getting his benefits and if they do wind up in Anton's employ they won't be so strategically important.
They were looking to get out of the Capellan contract anyway in order to actually accomplish their mission instead of sitting pointlessly in garrison, and with Marik next on the list the odds are that they would be involved in the civil war in some way presuming it still goes off. Of course with the way things would butterfly from their altered arrival they might end up working for Janos against the MAC operating as the centerpiece of Anton's Revolt.

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ComStar shenanigans are quite likely, I'll admit, but the most likely scenario barring some C* scheme (the canon ones are tailored to the Dragoons, something more like what was used on the GDL is more applicable here) is that the Falcon Dragoons work for Davion 3005-3010; move to Liao for another 5 year contract but since they're not as financially stable have to let their clause about not fighting their previous employer go; then get hired by Janos Marik after he's dealt with Anton, possibly getting worn down as part of an attack on Hephastus; enter Steiner employ in the early 3020s (with some resupply); and finally take employment with House Kurita, get company-stored and finally flip the board, retreating back to the Periphery to make their report to the Clan Homeworlds which would probably amount to "those ****** deserve everything we can do to them. how soon can we invade?"

A proportional scheme to what the GDL faced would involve the Dragoons being framed for the murder of millions of civilians and then having the 12th Vegan Rangers/MAC/Defenders of Oriente/12th Star Guard/Sword of Light brigade dropped on their heads. C*'s plot against the GDL was massive overkill, and as seen at New Aragon, Halloran, Galtor, etc, the houses are entirely willing to throw multiple regiments around in pursuit of an objective. Against five regiments of hardcore maniacs achieving the needed force concentration would be much more difficult.

Frankly, I doubt the Dragoons ability to survive to make any kind of report, or wanting to make any kind of report as opposed to immediately defecting after being subjected to Jade 'freebirths make dandy live fire targets for our trueborns to murder in lopsided training exercises' Falcon so-called training. For that matter, I'm not entirely optimistic about their ability to make it to the Inner Sphere without murdering each other.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 08 November 2014, 17:20:01
Tribble #162

The House Lords are leaked SLDF reports on RWR military capability in the early 2763. At an emergency Star League Council session the Council Lords vote 5-1 that the SLDF will damn well disarm Stefan Amaris before they even think about a military deployment against the Taurians. Richard Cameron is politely informed to he can shut up about the virtues of his friend there's no way the Council will tolerate a territorial state having armed forces that can curbstomp any one of them. Make it happen, Kerensky.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 09 November 2014, 03:46:58
Odds are... Richard goes behind Kerensky's back and issues orders through Royal Command to refuse those orders. Essentially turning it into RWR+Royals vs Rest of SLDF+Member States.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 09 November 2014, 05:35:53
but who was royals more loyal to, Richard or Kerensky??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 09 November 2014, 05:43:48
It would probably split. Some might follow Richard just because he's First Lord. Some might be more loyal to Kerensky as this would be seen as more a military/security matter, of which Richard knows nothing. This is on top of having the backing of the rest of the Star League council.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 09 November 2014, 08:21:55
Tribble #162

The House Lords are leaked SLDF reports on RWR military capability in the early 2763. At an emergency Star League Council session the Council Lords vote 5-1 that the SLDF will damn well disarm Stefan Amaris before they even think about a military deployment against the Taurians. Richard Cameron is politely informed to he can shut up about the virtues of his friend there's no way the Council will tolerate a territorial state having armed forces that can curbstomp any one of them. Make it happen, Kerensky.

For this to happen SLIC needs to lift its game in the Periphery massively above their performance in canon. Remember that they had SAS and the Blackhearts running around the various Periphery states disappearing any suspected dissident they could get their hands on, Kerensky had his personal suspicions of Amaris (and while he couldn't act on them in the political arena as Commanding General of the SLDF he could sure allocate SLIC's best and brightest to checking out the RWR and the Amaris family themselves) and they were still blindsided by fifty divisions of BattleMechs when the balloon went up. Not exactly a ringing endorsement of the Star League Intelligence Command.

On the other hand if the SLIC did manage to get enough evidence to persuade the House Lords to move against the RWR this would mean they'd have the details of the Secret Army plan, seeing how many BattleMechs the Usurper managed to divert to the Secret Army training camps and storage caches throughout the Periphery. As the Secret Army was operating with the support (or at least the complicity) of their governments and that Amaris had held meetings with at least some of the national leaders to offer them Mechs -Handbook: Major Periphery States contains a snippet of a meeting between Stefan Amaris and Nicoletta Calderon - the SLIC getting hold of enough information to implicate Amaris would mean they had enough information to nail the leaders of the Taurian Concordat, Magistracy of Canopus and the Outworlds Alliance. So basically if the Star League was to broadcast this knowledge and move against Amaris it would mean they would be forced to move against all the Periphery states in a second Reunification War.

In the face of the evidence mentioned above Kerensky would be forced to ask the Council for permission to throw the entire SLDF plus whatever House forces he could persuade or strong-arm the House Lords into loaning to him at the Periphery, just like he did in the canon timeline. Richard would most likely attempt to protect his 'good friend Stefan' and possibly assume the intelligence report was a complete fabrication made up on Kerensky's orders. If things go as far as Richard refusing to release the SLDF against the Periphery, and Richard possibly going so far as to strip Kerensky of his command of the SLDF, the House Lords would be stuck - for all his political ineptitude Aleksandr Kerensky ran the SLDF pretty well, and appointing a new Commanding General on the eve of a Second Reunification War would really demoralise the SLDF. In this case the House Lords could very well push a vote of no confidence against the First Lord. Considering Richard's past record it's unlikely he would take that with good grace, leaving the possibility of him having to be removed by force.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 09 November 2014, 11:32:08
Tribble #163

Wolfnet lives up to its hype

Starting in 3005, events play out as if the feat the Dragoons made in pinpointing Halloran V was the default state of Dragoon Intelligence. When the MAC attacks their base, they find an abandoned town at the described location, only to return home to a multi regiment ambush as they get off the dropships. Seventh Kommando infiltrates Anton's palace staff and extracts Joshu and Jaime's family  from captivity. The Dragoons notice the protracted campaign to get them repeatedly ambushed in Draconis service, and adjust their deployments accordingly, including unilaterally forbidding non-dragoons access to Hephaestus. And in 3051, Jaime takes Thomas 'Marik' aside and explains how he's going to send a tithe of federal units and call for provincial volunteers to support his Kapteyn partner the Combine if he doesn't want to return home to a civil war.


Extrapolate and nitpick to your hearts' content.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 09 November 2014, 11:42:10
I like both.

For 162 it is the Council versus the First Lord. The House Lords especially that Steiner dope would be terrified to see what the capabilities of the Rim Worlds are and demand they be disarmed. This could lead to a wider Periphery Rebellion without a Hegemony takeover by Amaris. Perhaps the Usurper takes on the role of hero this time around fighting the evil Star League in Reunfication War II: The rematch!

163 is interesting as you have any number of things that WolfNet could pick up on to change stuff for the better or worse. Only problem is the Dragoons become even more munchtastic and fanboys will only increase their whining to glass shattering proportions.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 09 November 2014, 11:42:59
Tribble #163

Wolfnet lives up to its hype

Starting in 3005, events play out as if the feat the Dragoons made in pinpointing Halloran V was the default state of Dragoon Intelligence. When the MAC attacks their base, they find an abandoned town at the described location, only to return home to a multi regiment ambush as they get off the dropships. Seventh Kommando infiltrates Anton's palace staff and extracts Joshu and Jaime's family  from captivity. The Dragoons notice the protracted campaign to get them repeatedly ambushed in Draconis service, and adjust their deployments accordingly, including unilaterally forbidding non-dragoons access to Hephaestus. And in 3051, Jaime takes Thomas 'Marik' aside and explains how he's going to send a tithe of federal units and call for provincial volunteers to support his Kapteyn partner the Combine if he doesn't want to return home to a civil war.


Extrapolate and nitpick to your hearts' content.


You want to make the Wolf's Dragoons even munchier?!


I don't actually mind, I rather like them


If Wolf's Dragoons are so awesome then there is a question of how their motivations will be changed by not experiencing the losses in the Marik Civil War, Misery etc


Marik forces supporting the Draconis Combine would be interesting but how long would they take to get there are how would they be deployed against the Clans?


More interesting in some ways would be the effect of some WolfNet snipers quietly taking out key players in the opposition to the leaders that are so effective against the Clans - the Black Dragon, Catherine S-D, Ryan Steiner etc
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 09 November 2014, 11:51:12


163 is interesting as you have any number of things that WolfNet could pick up on to change stuff for the better or worse. Only problem is the Dragoons become even more munchtastic and fanboys will only increase their whining to glass shattering proportions.

I deliberately kept it to stuff that either directly impacted them or happened in their own backyard. So yes, there will be whining, but compared to them saying while unpacking 'btw, those liao raiders who've been harassing you are based here' it's really not that much of a stretch.


You want to make the Wolf's Dragoons even munchier?!


I don't actually mind, I rather like them


If Wolf's Dragoons are so awesome then there is a question of how their motivations will be changed by not experiencing the losses in the Marik Civil War, Misery etc

They'd still take losses, but somewhat lessened. Or maybe a lot lessened considering the way that one company from Alpha apparently tore through two companies of veteran Sword of Lighters in rapid succession without losing anyone.

The actual major change would be jaime not turning into a useless emo death seeking putz with the death of his wife and children(not counting the thoroughly useless mackenzie).


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Marik forces supporting the Draconis Combine would be interesting but how long would they take to get there are how would they be deployed against the Clans?
The Dragoons made it to Luthien starting even later, that was the major substitution I was weighing in my head. .

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More interesting in some ways would be the effect of some WolfNet snipers quietly taking out key players in the opposition to the leaders that are so effective against the Clans - the Black Dragon, Catherine S-D, Ryan Steiner etc

Beyond the scope of what I intended, but maybe.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 November 2014, 03:33:52
For this to happen SLIC needs to lift its game in the Periphery massively above their performance in canon. Remember that they had SAS and the Blackhearts running around the various Periphery states disappearing any suspected dissident they could get their hands on, Kerensky had his personal suspicions of Amaris (and while he couldn't act on them in the political arena as Commanding General of the SLDF he could sure allocate SLIC's best and brightest to checking out the RWR and the Amaris family themselves) and they were still blindsided by fifty divisions of BattleMechs when the balloon went up. Not exactly a ringing endorsement of the Star League Intelligence Command.

On the other hand if the SLIC did manage to get enough evidence to persuade the House Lords to move against the RWR this would mean they'd have the details of the Secret Army plan, seeing how many BattleMechs the Usurper managed to divert to the Secret Army training camps and storage caches throughout the Periphery. As the Secret Army was operating with the support (or at least the complicity) of their governments and that Amaris had held meetings with at least some of the national leaders to offer them Mechs -Handbook: Major Periphery States contains a snippet of a meeting between Stefan Amaris and Nicoletta Calderon - the SLIC getting hold of enough information to implicate Amaris would mean they had enough information to nail the leaders of the Taurian Concordat, Magistracy of Canopus and the Outworlds Alliance. So basically if the Star League was to broadcast this knowledge and move against Amaris it would mean they would be forced to move against all the Periphery states in a second Reunification War.
I don't mean knowledge of the Secret Armies. FR 2765 shows the forces Amaris admitted to having with the forewords confirming that the units listed don't include the full strength Amaris actually showed in the Coup or committed to supporting the Periphery Uprising.

Just this information alone showed Amaris had amassed over 120 BattleMech regiments and almost 300 warships not counting the Secret Army.

Compared to this, the Lyran Commonwealth has 97 BattleMech regiments and only 62 warships. Even if LIC don't suspect Stefan Amaris himself of being more than the buffoon he portrays himself as, the mere possibility of a more aggressive leader replacing Amaris should have Robert Steiner screaming for a Council vote to impose a limit on this build up and have the SLDF enforce it.

Which of course means that the SLDF is going to be rushing into a RWR that's at least twice as powerful as they expect, with the First Lord pulling as many of the Royal units out as he can to defend himself (and probably screwing with the SLDF's supplies) and the rest of the Periphery concluding they're next and unleashing the Periphery Uprising just a little ahead of time.

This could destroy the Star League even faster than the Amaris Coup.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 10 November 2014, 14:24:08
...you're an evil, evil man Drakensis.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 22 November 2014, 17:47:50
 Tribble number 164

Myndo Waterly, secret agent of Maskirovka
           


Myndo Waterly was a deep cover agent, assigned to infiltrate comstar with the intent of reaching the highest position she could so as to shape policy to hamstring the enemies of Liao while in no way allowing blame to be traced back to the Confederation. Unfortunately, shortly after being inducted, her handlers in the Combine ended up as collateral damage during one of Dieron's outbreaks of unrest, while everyone back  home who knew about her got purged by Mad Max one afternoon, and due to the sensitive nature of the operation left no documentation behind. Left thoroughly out in the cold, she attempts to do her best to accomplish her mission...



Actually I think the challenge here would be to make the outcome of this not end up like it did in OTL. Otherwise it might make an interesting character pov piece.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 23 November 2014, 05:17:17
You appear to be conflating Draconis Combine of Kurita with their ISF (and O5P) and Capellan Confederation of Liao and their Maskirova
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 23 November 2014, 06:52:42
You appear to be conflating Draconis Combine of Kurita with their ISF (and O5P) and Capellan Confederation of Liao and their Maskirova

No, he is intimating that Maskirovka infiltrated Myndo Waterly into the Combine, with handlers (who all died) and from THERE infilitrated Comstar. Creating an extra layer of secrecy for them.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 23 November 2014, 09:59:38
No, he is intimating that Maskirovka infiltrated Myndo Waterly into the Combine, with handlers (who all died) and from THERE infilitrated Comstar. Creating an extra layer of secrecy for them.

Ding!

Also, if Waterly was an agent of the Combine, her response to the Clans would have been different, or at least deliberately weighted to favor the Combine. She can't be an agent of Marcus left out in the cold after his death, or she would have supported Marcus during the civil war. It's almost possible that she worked for Takashi and he forgot about her after his stroke, but that doesn't line up properly, since Takashi as characterized would delegate the heck out of that to someone who could commit suicide for exceeding his authority if the plot was ever discovered.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 23 November 2014, 13:36:31
Crossover tribbles, GO!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 23 November 2014, 14:31:33
Hmmm.

How about...

Tribble # 165: "The Davion Variation"

The USS Daedalus from the SGA episode 'The Daedalus Variation' in its final jump before its inter-universal drive shorts out has a major power surge and, unmanned, it arrives in the Federated Suns late in the year 3025, in a long orbit of a world deep in the Crucis March. Through pure coincidence (some would call it fate) an AFFS convoy happens to have been transistioning from the zenith point at the time and detect the surge of EM energy marking its arrival and investigate.

Luckly, the unit is a detachment of the Davion Heavy Guards doing war games training and so after boarding the ship (and to their stunned surprise discovering artificial gravity) they frantically (but securely) get word back to New Avalon while their technicians poke around. Luckily, McKay while trying to fix the ship and get his team back home to make things easy released all the security locks on the ships computers and after a little trial and error, the technicians piece together the ships fantastic story. Its inter-universal drive us burned out beyond any possibility of repair and while it has taken some hull damage, its pretty much just shock damage. The Hyperdrive and sublight engines, internal dampeners, subspace communications array, railguns, nukes and Asgard plasma beams are all intact, as are the ships Naquadah power reactors. The beaming technology is destroyed, there are no F-302s on board (two Jumpers though, but no-one seems to have the genetic code to use them) and no personal weapons or anything along those lines that were stripped by the crew when they abandoned ship.

Luckily, because Earths starship program is so new with so few people like Carter and McKay to go around, Earth included pretty much all the technical schematics and scientific data on the technologies in case of emergency situations ... and that data is intact. The ship herself is structurally in good shape, but the opinion of the tech teams is that they don't want to try to jury rig her damaged systems without a LOT more experience building their own versions of the underlying technology. Hanse sulks, wanting to just drive it to Luthien and start shooting up the place, but is convinced to take it carefully. The Daedalus herself was moved (they got the hyperdrive working well enough for a short jump with an absurd amount of fusion reactors in the hanger bays and LOTS of cables) to a hastily constructed research facility and hanger on the third planet of the leamington system. ComStar and ISF noted unusual movements of Davion and Steiner researchers, but MIIO and LIC cover it carefully to feed into the rumored new Battlemech technology development super secret base that is totally not a trap for the silly Cappies to steel the ultra cool TSM that is, once again, TOTALLY not a trap ...

Of course, after Quintis and Arden manage to get Hanse to stop hyperventilating and after some of the best people at NAIS who were all but kidnapped and thrown by Hanse clear across the Federated Suns to have a look, they note a few problems. First, the lack of Trinium and Naquadah known in this universe rules out any possibility of replicating much of the technology directly. Clearly no Naquadah reactors are going to be possible. Shield generator technology is pretty much out of the question, dito the other advanced Asgard energy weapons, beaming technology, advanced Asgard sensors e.t.c. Inertial dampening and artificial gravity look to be possible, at least for dropship or jumpship sized ships, but nowhere near as good as what the SGC has. BUT it should be just about enough to sustain a stable 1G environment on any dropship in service even at maximum thrust. Give it ten years or so.

With that said, the NAIS people think there is a good chance they can duplicate Hyperdrive technology. The working theory is that it'll be bulky, but probably about half the size/mass ratio of a standard K/F drive (comprable to a Compact Core drive) and rather inefficient, requiring, like the Wraith, time out of hyperspace to cool down the engines every day or so. But in that day they could probably cross 100 light years - and jump out as deep in a gravity well as they want. Give them a decade and a blank cheque and they'll have a prototype Monolith class Hyperdrive Ship ready for field trials. They could probably look at a drive for a dropship sized ship as they hardly need to stick with the existing paradigms, but the logic is that it'll be much quicker and better in the medium term to just retrofit jumpships to lug around the hoard of dropships then try to build new fleets from scratch. At least for now.

Subspace communications (not sensors, the science team are calling pure BS Hax on those) look to be remarkably easy however, leading to many facepalms and 'why didn't we think of that!' moments. They are very confident they will be able to test a prototype long range FTL system in a matter of years. Hanse orders after some consideration this to be top priority and by the time Operation Thor happens, a secret test by the same department who manage the Black Boxes successfully establish a high quality video link between New Avalon and Thakard. Hanse and Katrina indulge in a little maniacal laughter over said link, then order mass production of the Black Boxes suspended at once in favor of these systems - although they are too bulky to fit on anything smaller than a dropship, a dedicated Mule class conversion is commissioned for this purpose.

It is expected that by the time Hanse and Mellisa get married, they should have roughly 40-50 of these systems in service. They are all peer to peer, can directly communicate with any other such system, but just act as a transmitter. They can plug in whatever digital signal they want to be transmitted over subspace with a bandwidth sustained easily in the megabits per second.

So come his wedding day, Hanse gives a very famous speech ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 23 November 2014, 14:58:12
He's not gonna stop at just the Capellan Confederation.
He'll probably carve a good chunk out of the Draconis Combine as well, and skip the Outworlds Alliance entirely(no fun beating down defenseless peaceniks anyway) on his way to searching out greener pastures far from the reach of his usual adversaries.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 23 November 2014, 15:03:31
Hmm. Too bad he didn't have 800 or so of those transmitters. Enough for (almost) every world and some ships.

"By the way I'm transmitting my wedding speech to the entire Federated Commonwealth Alliance in realtime without paying ComStar a penny. If anyone else wants to cut their communication budget to less than 1% of their net worth, contact your local Federal Communications office."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 23 November 2014, 18:08:57
I guess that would depend on whether they already suspect Comstar's shenanigans at this point in time.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 23 November 2014, 18:10:15
From memory, Hanse (and pretty much everyone else) lacked trust in ComStar but they didn't really have any choice but to accept ComStar involvement in stuff, plus I think they were surprised at quite how "evil" ComStar had been


PS - I am trying to think up my own crossover stuff, I did once write a chapter or two about a crossover with Babylon 5 centring on the Epsilon Eridani system being both the site of Babylon 5 and existing as an inhabited planet in BT
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 23 November 2014, 19:30:53
Hmm. Too bad he didn't have 800 or so of those transmitters. Enough for (almost) every world and some ships.

"By the way I'm transmitting my wedding speech to the entire Federated Commonwealth Alliance in realtime without paying ComStar a penny. If anyone else wants to cut their communication budget to less than 1% of their net worth, contact your local Federal Communications office."

Well I was thinking that the FedCom would slowly be able to ramp up production as they improved this and that in their production process, with an eye to be able to swap out HPG stations on a 1:1 basis by 3033 (Subspace communications technology seems pretty straight forward as far as SGC technology goes). But the big plan being to keep this a very very quiet secret from everyone, with the Subspace transmitters only issued to very select theater level commands. They would of course go into service (along with the Black Boxes produced to date) when ComStar interdicts in the 4th succession war.

Said Succession War would mostly go as happened in the OTL. The interdiction would and wouldn't have the same impact. The economic impact would still be as horrible as in the OTL, but the strategic military impact would be lessened quite a bit. With Subspace communications linking the capitals, theater military command and key forward deployment units, with some uses of black boxes in a hub+spoke style network down to certain key groups. One major butterfly would be that all the shifting to point to the 'super battlemech research' to cover the Daedaus R&D programs would get the Liaos on the ball a little quicker, so they hit the right planet in riposte; Bethel instead of Axton. Which means that the TSM is put into service ahead of the OTL. It doesn't do a huge amount in terms of planets, but it makes life a lot easier for the AFFS and much harder for the CCAF in Waves 5 & 6, much fewer forces managing to disengage and retreat, less losses for the AFFS's RCTs e.t.c.

ComStar again under Myndo try to raid NAIS to smash the Helm Core, but again they fail. Hanse puts two and two together faster this time and calls up Katrina on subspace, the two of them decide that enough is enough. And so cunningly begin installing the subspace communications technology onto 'A-grade' HPG worlds so all are covered by the end of 3030, installed into fortified military bases quietly. Mostly under the cover of secret MIIO code breaking equipment or something.

Worlds that have HPGs that barely send out a message every month are ignored for now, due to the security risk of loosing a transmitter there, with jumpships perfectly able to take up the slack for the most part.

And so, at the end of FY 3033, June 30, both Katrina and Hanse receive their First Circuit Precentors where, as always, they are expected to smile and sign the yearly service renewal with ComStar for the coming year, codifying the various charges, legal liabilities and so on. Its all a very nice ceremony that is all polite and smiling for the cameras and so on, but every House Lord hates because of the sheer smugness of the Precentors gouging them with one hand while selling them out with the other...

Except, wonders Precentor New Avalon, why the devil is the Fox grinning like a madman ... and why is there a large holovid being projected of Katrina Steiner ... that says 'Live from the Triad' ... damnit, Myndo needs to tell me when she authorizes realtime HPG links like this!!!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 23 November 2014, 22:13:56
Heh, cue weapons-grade heart attack for the First Circuit in 3... 2... 1...  ;D

Of course, Myndo's going to go ballistic when news reaches her that the Federated Commonwealth has canceled their contract with Comstar. The resulting explosion should be visible from orbit. >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 24 November 2014, 03:10:57
And so, at the end of FY 3033, June 30, both Katrina and Hanse receive their First Circuit Precentors where, as always, they are expected to smile and sign the yearly service renewal with ComStar for the coming year, codifying the various charges, legal liabilities and so on. Its all a very nice ceremony that is all polite and smiling for the cameras and so on, but every House Lord hates because of the sheer smugness of the Precentors gouging them with one hand while selling them out with the other...

Except, wonders Precentor New Avalon, why the devil is the Fox grinning like a madman ... and why is there a large holovid being projected of Katrina Steiner ... that says 'Live from the Triad' ... damnit, Myndo needs to tell me when she authorizes realtime HPG links like this!!!
That's so beautiful. I may have tears in my eyes.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 08 December 2014, 17:23:15
Tribble #166

What if Nicholas Kerensky founded more than twenty Clans? What if more than 800 warriors went with him on the Second Exodus? What would these Clans be called? What would be their specialties? What would be their position in returning to the Inner Sphere? Which of them would accompany the Jade Falcons, the Wolves, the Smoke Jaguars, and the Ghost Bears in Operation: Revival? Such questions have been answered before, but who would be among the many non-canon Clans? Among these new Clans is Clan Stone Lion, but who will be the remaining 3?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 08 December 2014, 17:36:18
Tribble 167

What if Phellan didn't miss?

When running around in his Wolfhound on the Rock and doing 'can't touch this!' every time Vlad in his Timber Wolf tried to skewer him with his lasers, Phelan in the OTL managed to charge into close range and fired a full Alpha strike at Vlad. Phelan had made the assumption that Vlad's unknown Mech having so much firepower meant it had to be a glass cannon and had presumed his firepower should at least do some real damage to Vlad.

Unfortunately of course, a Timber Wolf is anything but lightly armored and the firepower just melted armor plates before Vlad finally managed to throw his own full laser Alpha back at Phelan and murderkill his Mech.

But ...

What if this time Phelans gamble pays off? His Large Laser and three forward Medium lasers all through the magic of a good roll, focus precisely on the over-sized cockpit windows of Vlads Mech and fry him instantly to a crisp? One of Vlads Star Mates shocked at this Inner Sphere Freebirth who danced through the fire and then headshotted their CO promptly fires his Ultra AC-20 into Grinners back (and gets sneered at later by the rest of his Trothkin for taking such an incredibly cheap shot at such a worthy foe of course because Clanners are weird that way) and Phelan is again captured.

So does anything actually change?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: fitzgerald on 09 December 2014, 03:20:49
Said UAC20 shot promptly misses as the targeting computer goes all fuzzy

In the shuffle that follows Phelan manages to kill another Clanner and almost kills another before one of them successfully kicks Grinners legs off.

Across the Draconis Combine mystics see visions of a multitude of yellow birds bursting forth to cover the Inner Sphere.

Clan Scientists duly impressed by Phantom Mech quickly add it to their breeding program
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 09 December 2014, 04:38:41
Fitz makes a good point: Phelan is a good candidate to go Phantom 'Mech here.

According to the rules from the Kell Hounds source book the requirements are:
* genetic predisposition (given his father and uncle, yes)
* holding off an overwhelming force to save your comrades (I think the Clans count as the former)

It's supposed to be an immense psychological shock though. I doubt Phelan would be rising up the ranks of the Clans under these circumstances.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 09 December 2014, 09:17:23
Tribble #166

What if Nicholas Kerensky founded more than twenty Clans? What if more than 800 warriors went with him on the Second Exodus? What would these Clans be called? What would be their specialties? What would be their position in returning to the Inner Sphere? Which of them would accompany the Jade Falcons, the Wolves, the Smoke Jaguars, and the Ghost Bears in Operation: Revival? Such questions have been answered before, but who would be among the many non-canon Clans? Among these new Clans is Clan Stone Lion, but who will be the remaining 3?


Or a variant thereof...

"Twenty there were when the Great Father founded the Clans. Twenty there must be when we see his prophecy fulfilled!"

When the Great Debate starts there are seventeen Clans instead of the original twenty which Nicholas Kerensky founded in the wake of Operation Klondike - Widowmaker and Mongoose were absorbed by others while the Not-Named Clan was annihilated. What if some of the more mystical Clans like the Nova Cats and Coyotes insist that the number of Clans must be restored? Other Clans could go along with this reasoning to create additional votes on the Grand Council which they could manipulate. How would the Clans be created (most likely with units and resources from each existing Clan assigned for each new Clan)? Who would lead them? And will they be compliant with the will of the original Clans, or choose to make their own path?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: James Tanaga on 09 December 2014, 13:12:40
Splitting Clan Fire Mandrill up is an easy solution, especially due to their fractious nature. Dividing them around philosophical lines easily divides the clan into three smaller factions. Crusader Kindraa in one clan, Warden Kindraa in another, with the neutral-minded Faraday-Tanaga and possibly the Mattila-Carrol in the third. That leaves one last clan to be formed.

Judging by how the Clans hate the Not-Named-Clan, I think they might not allow another clan to be formed too replace the Not-Named-Clan, worried the position might taint any clan that replaces the Not-Named-Clan. Conversely, I can also see the Clans indeed replacing the position of the Not-Named-Clan as well. If that is so, maybe have an earlier formation of Clan Stone Lion from Clan Hell's Horses perhaps? Or have one of the Crusader clans offer up its small numbers of Wardens (Smoke Jaguars/Jade Falcons possibly) and put enough Crusader Warriors they deem unreliable into the new clan to balance the clan out to Neutral or keep the Crusaders in charge. This can also be done in reverse a la the Wolves.

James Tanaga
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 16 December 2014, 00:16:01
Tribble 168

What if the people of the FC act in character in the wake of the Joshua double being revealed?

Victor, having been raised essentially Lyran, and having fought and bled for the Commonwealth, finds himself with solid support of a  people that recognise that they are surrounded by hostile powers, and who remember that they really do in fact hate the Mariks enough to not really care about the disposition of one of their spawn. At the same time, the Fed Suns, primed by rumors of what exactly had been done and a strategically edited copy of Hanse's gloating at max at the end of 4SW, unhappy with the losses and strain of seemingly continuously having to carry a bunch of useless social generals, and pushed by the Sandoval to regain critical list ground and not follow a dirty kuritan lover, breaks away.

Morgan is loyal to Victor, if not particularly happy, but is constrained by the chaos erupting in the Sarna March. Sandoval is pushing his agenda as hard as he can. The other members of the Steiner Davion brood are their usual selves. Where do things develop from there?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 17 December 2014, 00:23:47
Tribble 168

What if the people of the FC act in character in the wake of the Joshua double being revealed?

Victor, having been raised essentially Lyran, and having fought and bled for the Commonwealth, finds himself with solid support of a  people that recognise that they are surrounded by hostile powers, and who remember that they really do in fact hate the Mariks enough to not really care about the disposition of one of their spawn. At the same time, the Fed Suns, primed by rumors of what exactly had been done and a strategically edited copy of Hanse's gloating at max at the end of 4SW, unhappy with the losses and strain of seemingly continuously having to carry a bunch of useless social generals, and pushed by the Sandoval to regain critical list ground and not follow a dirty kuritan lover, breaks away.

Morgan is loyal to Victor, if not particularly happy, but is constrained by the chaos erupting in the Sarna March. Sandoval is pushing his agenda as hard as he can. The other members of the Steiner Davion brood are their usual selves. Where do things develop from there?

So essentially we have Victor in charge of the Lyran half of the Commonwealth who actually hold their grand in the face of the FWL/CapCon push and Jade Falcons playing silly games on one side and ... (who exactly is on New Avalon?) the Fed SUNS in this scenario are the ones who say ******!' and break away from the Lyrans, willing to fight to hold their gains from the 4th Succession War rather than let fiat have its way?

It might be a bit hard without the jumpships to move their troops around, which Victor still has on his side of the fence.

But its a very unusual scenario, I'll grant you that. Be interesting to see what happens!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 17 December 2014, 03:23:20
Ah, but the Sarna March was part of the Lyran half of the Commonwealth. (Hanse's wedding gift to Melissa, remember?)

By Federated Suns law Katherine can't become First Prince - military service is a requirement - but she can be regent for Arthur (Peter is out of the way on Zaniah). It's reasonably likely she could get backing from the Sandovals and plausible she could get support in the Crucis March. The Capellan March would be the problem: Morgan Hasek-Davion is certainly going to support Victor. In his absence, she might sway George Hasek-Davion to her side but that's a long-shot.

Probably her best bet is to stage some incident that commits the Capellan March forces into some conflict. A conflict with Sun-Tzu wouldn't help - that brings them into the 'war to retain the Sarna March'. That leaves the Taurians (possible but an uncertain card to play) or St Ives. And turning the Capellan March against St Ives alienates them from Kai, who's a solid supporter for Victor. Having a 'Capellan' terrorist group assassinate Candace and perhaps one of the Hasek-Davions, forcing the AFFS to intervene and wind up occupying St Ives, is a likely cause to rally the Capellan March to Katherine.

On the other side of the equation, Victor has the bulk of the former AFFC and their jumpships - but he has to defend the Clan border as well as deal with the Sarna March. Given the Falcons and Wolves are savaging each other, he might be able to spare the resources to secure Sarna - for a possible play, he could assign Kai as March Lord. The Sarna worlds might respond well to an Allard Liao in favour to Romano's offspring. Alternatively, he could focus on the Clans and let Sarna go in which case Katherine probably sweeps up some and can accuse Victor of being a weak Lyran social general.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 17 December 2014, 04:03:07
Ohhh Kai in charge of the Sarna March. That would be an excellent play, very sensible and likely to solve the problem neatly, letting Victor roll with the FWL punch long enough to smash them to the floor in return and then mop up Sun Tsu.

Which of course means Victor wouldn't have a hope in hell of being smart enough to think of it.

As for Katherine not being able to take the Throne, point taken, but I'm sure she could play the regency card again for Arthur, who is apparently almost as headstrong as Peter at times...

Still, its not exactly going to be easy for her to get the support of the Sandovals - even if she goes public with the Omi card in a way she can spin for maximum effect. Because as much as she might want to talk about the mean old Combine, she really doesn't have the military forces or Jumpships to do anything. And if the Sandovals go off half cocked like they did in the FedCom Civil war, well, they'll just be a nightmare to pull back, if she is also having to deal with the Capellan March probably wanting to restart the 4th Succession War. Because with the Cappies trying to invade Sarna, its not like they exactly need a big push to start up a second front in support.

Victor might need to just deal with the Clans, deal with the FWL and stabilize the situation, having Morgan for now just bide him time in the Capellan March, but keeping it as a dagger pointed at Katherines throat. Then after the events all settle back down, he can deal with her. Because he would certinally seem to have both grounds for doing so and the vast bulk of the AFFC on his side. The aftermath would be rather interesting though.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 17 December 2014, 11:53:36
Problem Katherine believe she was Born to be First Lord. She wouldn't be Regent she would declare herself Princess as usally.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 18 December 2014, 01:03:47
  Tribble #169:  “Where is Army Group Sudeten?  The Inner Sphere wonders”

  Credit for this one properly belongs to Chris OFarrell, who happened to mention it in the SpaceBattles.com discussion of his fic The Ice Princess of the Federated Commonwealth, specifically here (http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15932351/), here (http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15933020/) and here (http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15933730/).

Quote from: Chris O'Farrell
Quote from: smthng
Apparently I had managed to miss several updates. Oops.

Well, now I just had to read several chapters in a row. The story continues to be awesome, except for the annoying infodumpy parts that still plague it. For example, the introduction of the Duke of Weselton was such. You could have dropped the whole scene and the story would not have suffered at all. In fact, if you ask me, it would have made it flow better, as the good duke had no part in this chapter.
Its a fair point - although mostly that was just to set up the Duke as something more than the very 1D psudo secondary villain he was in the film. We won't actually be seeing terribly much of him, but I wanted to flesh him out a little more than the film as the 'I want to exploit this Kingdom ... somehow!' guy, without having to explain it later.

But I do get carried away when thinking about Btech history and weaving him into the timeline and major economic events :p

There should be a lot less of this kind of stuff moving forward though, now that everyone is pretty well established.
The last of it will be next chapter with Victor going through the forwarded paperwork and messages which will show a little slice of the wider FedCom and Inner Sphere. Or more specifically the small butterflies from the AFFCs Army Group Sudeten not vanishing into a half year long missjump, as well as making the most of the year of peace to shuffle more forces around, resulting in a somewhat more beaten up Jade Falcon Clan with a thinner OZ.
[SNIP]
  (Emphasis added for clarity.)

Quote from: gladiusone
Sorry, Army Group Sudeten? I think I missed this part of the fluff ...

Quote from: Chris O'Farrell
Its a running joke on SB and some other boards. In the Clan Invasion, a whole slew of crack AFFC units seemed to magically vanish in between the Clan waves and then either not appear at all again for some time, or were sort of vaguely mentioned as having been hit somehow. Among the huge amount of other units that no-one bothered to shuffle around during the Year of Peace in favour of humoring Romano on Outreach.

Sudeten fell to two Clusters despite being what appears to be the primary staging ground for AFFC units coming into theater. It had multiple crack RCTs and line regiments including, IIRC, a FedCom RCT, the two Kell Hound Regiments, the 10th LG, the GDL and the ELH when Victor launched his attack on Twycross, presumably most units rotated back to there. Mostly because it was conveninet to do so, keep the Clan invasion rolling by fiat by not allowing the AFFC to concentrate forces and counter attack or anything like that.

In THIS universe at least, the AFFC remembered that said units actually existed and Morgan pulled off one of his CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED moments by suckering in the Falcons on Sudeten and then dropping the hammer on them, as well as launching a limited counter attack while the Falcons were busy grinding with the ComGuards on Tukayyid. Which also ran partially into Operation Scorpion, which helped out a rather large amount.

Essentially if you want to picture the Jade Falcon OZ in this universe, take the standard one and take away Parakoila, Antares, Graus, Sudeten, Blair Atholl, Benfled and Orkney, all firmly held by the AFFC and a big morale boost that instead of just loosing more planets, the AFFC managed to hold the line and give the Clanners a very bloody nose.

We won't really see much of this in this fic though - as its not really relevant. Perhaps the squeal if I decide to write one.

  Now, Chris has already discussed how the canon version doesn’t... reflect well on the AFFC or the IS as a whole.  What if this ‘Army Group Sudeten’ actually pulled off this kind of counter-attack against the Clans before the Truce of Tukayyid took effect?  How would it affect the IS’ perception of the Clans as near-invincible, or the Lyran Commonwealth’s pride or sense of its own military strength?  All in all, what would be the consequences of this Mothra-scale butterfly?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 18 December 2014, 07:40:33
Problem Katherine believe she was Born to be First Lord. She wouldn't be Regent she would declare herself Princess as usally.
And she's less likely to get away with it. Part of her appeal to the Lyrans was in playing up her name similarity to her grandmother. It's why she started calling herself Katrina, an attempt to connect with those longing for the good old days of not being permanently saddled with the FedSuns. Nevermind that the Lyran half of the realm wouldn't have managed as well against the Clans without FedSuns military knowhow. And in fact she took the effort to make sure some of those units stayed on her side rather than returning to the FedSuns when the civil war broke out.
In the Lyran half, calling herself Katrina got her name brand recognition. No such luck in the FedSuns. I wouldn't be surprised if the Capellan March and the Draconis March simply ignored her, in effect balkanizing the FedSuns.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 18 December 2014, 10:43:35
  Tribble #169:  “Where is Army Group Sudeten?  The Inner Sphere wonders”

  Credit for this one properly belongs to Chris OFarrell, who happened to mention it in the SpaceBattles.com discussion of his fic The Ice Princess of the Federated Commonwealth, specifically here (http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15932351/), here (http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15933020/) and here (http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15933730/).
Its a fair point - although mostly that was just to set up the Duke as something more than the very 1D psudo secondary villain he was in the film. We won't actually be seeing terribly much of him, but I wanted to flesh him out a little more than the film as the 'I want to exploit this Kingdom ... somehow!' guy, without having to explain it later.

But I do get carried away when thinking about Btech history and weaving him into the timeline and major economic events :p

There should be a lot less of this kind of stuff moving forward though, now that everyone is pretty well established.
The last of it will be next chapter with Victor going through the forwarded paperwork and messages which will show a little slice of the wider FedCom and Inner Sphere. Or more specifically the small butterflies from the AFFCs Army Group Sudeten not vanishing into a half year long missjump, as well as making the most of the year of peace to shuffle more forces around, resulting in a somewhat more beaten up Jade Falcon Clan with a thinner OZ.
[SNIP]
  (Emphasis added for clarity.)

  Now, Chris has already discussed how the canon version doesn’t... reflect well on the AFFC or the IS as a whole.  What if this ‘Army Group Sudeten’ actually pulled off this kind of counter-attack against the Clans before the Truce of Tukayyid took effect?  How would it affect the IS’ perception of the Clans as near-invincible, or the Lyran Commonwealth’s pride or sense of its own military strength?  All in all, what would be the consequences of this Mothra-scale butterfly?
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The original source of this was a movement order given in Lethal Heritage, with regiments from a grab bag of brigades ordered out Sudeten way from the Skye March with the intent to backfill from the Crucis March. We know that two of the Greenest units made it there in time to ship out to Twycross, as did the unit commander for the Kathil Uhlans.

The specific list of units that fell down an open manhole cover and couldn't find their way out until Objective Raids:

1st Kathil Uhlans (R/F)
4th Deneb Light Cavalry RCT(R/R)
3rd Royal Guards RCT(E/F)
20th Arcturan Guards RCT(V/R)
19th Lyran Guards RCT(V/R)
8th Deneb Light Cavalry RCT(R/R)
12th FC RCT(G/R)
17th Arcturan Guards RCT(R/R)
11th Lyran Guards RCT(E/R)
32nd Lyran Guards RCT(G/R)
11th FC RCT(G/R)

Comparatively minor continuity issues include the GDL not reading their briefing packet before all of their fellow defenders vanished and the Falcons landed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 19 December 2014, 03:09:06
My head canon is that the Army Group is the reason that the Jade Falcon's progress in the fifth wave was so anemic: capture two IS worlds, lose nine worlds to the Steel Vipers and another to the AFFC! This while the Wolves are capturing over 30 worlds?

I suspect that's the 'official' Jade Falcon report. Either they got their asses kicked on most of the worlds they hit, or they had to commit al their touman to fighting off counter-attacks. Crichell probably covered it up and assigned the Steel Vipers to most of the worlds along the edge of the OZ to cover up the Falcon's hasty withdrawal and take the brunt of future counter-attacks.

The counter-attack theory might explain why Victor and Kai were fighting on Alyina in late 3051 when other sources show it fell to the Falcons in Wave 4, a year previous.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 19 December 2014, 05:13:02
Meh, I just put it down to the fact that FASA and Catalyst had/have the strategic acumen of a kindergartner. Seriously, I have a hard time figuring out how to justify the FedCom not having 500 regiments of battlemechs. Seriously, 2.5 trillion citizens x 1 c-bill in taxes per year equals 1000+ new regiments of Atlases per year. The FedCom should have been able to steamroll the Combine while keeping enough RCTs on the opposite border to make it impossible for even a joint FWL/CapCon attack to succeed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 19 December 2014, 07:45:31
Meh, I just put it down to the fact that FASA and Catalyst had/have the strategic acumen of a kindergartner. Seriously, I have a hard time figuring out how to justify the FedCom not having 500 regiments of battlemechs. Seriously, 2.5 trillion citizens x 1 c-bill in taxes per year equals 1000+ new regiments of Atlases per year. The FedCom should have been able to steamroll the Combine while keeping enough RCTs on the opposite border to make it impossible for even a joint FWL/CapCon attack to succeed.
  That’s as may be, but this is a thread devoted to Plot Tribbles, not having a go at FASA/CGL or revisiting the issue of Fasanomics.  ;)  Capisce?  [copper]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 19 December 2014, 13:48:14
I think we can expect to see a more dangerous decade and a half-the truce is only in effect stopping the Clans from advancing, and the success of Army Group Sudetten might cause a series of dynamic attacks, counter attacks, counter-counter attacks, deep raids, and other conflict throughout the occupied territories.  The Clans might not be able to advance and take new territory, but nothing says they can't fight for every scrap of ground they stood on at the end of the offensive.  There may be attempts to pocket some of the clans by slashing their lines of support or something.  Very exciting, but hard to predict.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 20 December 2014, 17:31:42
  That’s as may be, but this is a thread devoted to Plot Tribbles, not having a go at FASA/CGL or revisiting the issue of Fasanomics.  ;)  Capisce?  [copper]

I understand. However, that post was related in a tangential way to a tribble I have gnawing away at my brain. I'll post the highlights now and a more thorough outline on Tuesday (my next day off).

- After the survey of the 331st's cache and the discovery that a nuclear weapon is missing, the Wolverines do what any sane organization would after discovering that a strategic weapon is missing, which is to start looking for it. As this is the Clans, they do the Clan thing and ask straight up. Most of the Clans are horrified and some even offer to allow a Wolverine survey of the strategic weapons under their control, but the Widowmakers and Wolves stonewall. Suspecting something amiss, Wolverine leadership reorganizes their infantry formations, with the very best soldiers being formed into a cluster that begins crash training on Ranger-style direct action raids. When the cluster's commander reports readiness for combat, Khan McEvedy orders raids on the major Wolf and Widowmaker storage facilities, plus their HQs. Every raid involves a covert orbital insertion, with the Clan HQs receiving the loving attention of a binary's worth of troops and every other facility being the target of a point. More than half the raids fail, with the commandos being considered dezgra and killed to the last man. However, the nuclear weapon is discovered in a crate with Widowmaker markings and extracted, with the HQ raids recovering communications that suggest the Widowmakers and Wolves are colluding with another party to set the nuke off among Wolverine civilians.

- When McEvedy is called to the carpet for the raids, which the Khan doesn't deny, she brings material evidence in her defense. The material evidence in this case being the nuke rendered safe and in its Widowmaker-marked crate, which is verified after a massive freak-out by the other Khans, and copies of the documents obtained in the raids. Khan McEvedy calls for the Khans of both the Widowmakers and Wolves to be put on trial for conspiring to commit genocide. Only the Wolves, Widowmakers, Smoke Jaguars and Jade Falcons voted no. Rather than submit themselves to an ignominious execution by firing squad, each of the Khans in turn called for a Trial of Refusal. Every clan that voted yes started their bid at their entire toumon and none pledged less than three clusters. The end result is the Khans and their command keshiks obliterated to the last.

- At the first gathering of the Grand Council after the Trials are fought, Khan McEvedy asks the ilKhan if he would happen to know who the unnamed party in the conspiracy is. Already a diagnosable sociopath and increasingly violent in his tendencies, Kerensky begins to rant at McEvedy and ends his partially coherent raving with call for a Trial of Grievance. McEvedy immediately agrees and specifies unaugmented, while Kerensky demands the Trial then and there. While Kerensky is a skilled warrior in general, he is a battlemech specialist and has only mastered the basics of the Wolf's hand-to-hand combat style. McEvedy, head of a resource-strapped clan and a general enthusiast of unarmed combat, is easily his superior in technique, if not strength. After five minutes of vicious attacks by Kerensky and skillful parries by McEvedy, the Wolverine Khan crashes inside the ilKhan's guard and delivers a crushing jab to his trachea and follows it with an uppercut palm to his nose. The first blow was traumatizing, but not likely to be lethal with medics on standby, however the follow-up sends cartilage and bone shrapnel bouncing around Kerensky's brain pan, killing the ilKhan nearly instantaneously.

- As a result of their hero and founder being so viciously killed, and devoid of either Khans, the Wolves go into a berserker rage and attack every Wolverine holding they can reach without issuing so much as a batchall. In general the frenzied Wolves are cut down like wheat at harvest, their lack of discipline and disposal of all tactics against a prepared and entrenched Wolverine touman being the primary cause, although disregarding zellbrigen from the outset didn't help either. The most epic combat, however, happened in space; the CWS Wolverine (ex-SLS Zughoffer Weir), CWS Gulo (ex-SLS Bismark), CWS James McEvedy (ex-SLS Rickenbacker, Aegis class), CWS Weasel (Whirlwind class), and CWS Badger (Vincent class) faced off against CWS Dire Wolf (Sovetskii Soyuz class), CWS Nicholas Kerensky (Texas class), and CWS Bloody Fang (Cameron class). The Wolves had only expected the Zug, Weasel, and Badger to be present and were unpleasantly surprised when their tactical sections reported an additional battleship and heavy cruiser. What should have been a tough but winnable battle quickly became something else, with the Wolverine and Nicholas Kerensky squaring off, while the Gulo and James McEvedy double-teamed the Bloody Fang, and the Weasel and Badger took on the Dire Wolf. All three Wolf ships were lost at the cost of the complete destruction of the Weasel and Badger at the hands of the Dire Wolf, the James McEvedy being rendered incapable of jumping and losing half of its weapons and armor, and the Gulo and Wolverine receiving less serious damage. The Wolverines were in danger of losing their small fleet when the rest of the Clan Wolf navy jumped into the system using one of Circe's pirate points; however Clan Snow Raven, already worried about the fighting spilling over into their territory on Circe, had cleared the three naval stars present to prepare for combat and stepped in when it became apparent that the situation was going to descend into general warfare. The Wolf fleet was given an ultimatum; withdraw or fight the combined might of the Wolverine and Snow Raven fleets over Circe. Outgunned and facing an enraged Wolverine force that was quite prepared to die if it meant taking as many Wolves with them as possible, the Wolf fleet had little choice but to tuck tail and run.

- Wolf forces on Circe's surface were likewise given a similar flee or die choice, with the die part to be carried out by orbital bombardment. Having lost the better part of two galaxy's worth of troops, out of three deployed, and with the prospect of Snow Raven land forces joining in, the Wolves boarded their dropships and left, although not without some choice parting words.

- The first order of business during the next meeting of the Grand Council is to elect a new ilKhan. Sarah McEvedy is the first person to be proposed, however she declines before it can come to a vote. While a Wolverine, with everything that implies, she is not a fool and knows that being elected ilKhan would only result in open rebellion by the Wolves and Widowmakers, if not the Jade Falcons and Smoke Jaguars. Instead, she proposes Khan Stephen McKenna. McKenna is a perfect compromise candidate; he embraces the stratification of the castes that Kerensky laid out, but is also very much of a mind to live-and-let-live with how the Clans conduct themselves internally (within reason). While the vote is close run, he wins the position.

- The second order of business is brought forward by McEvedy. In return for the help that the Snow Ravens provided, the Wolverines would dedicate 25% of their future mech and vehicle production to the Snow Ravens in perpetuity. This unilateral action would ease the door open to a rapid rapprochement.

- The Widowmakers, always eager to stab their Wolf rivals in the back, bring forth a motion to censure the Wolves for their complete disregard of Clan law in attacking the Wolverines. While many of the Khans find the hypocrisy revolting, the material facts of the motion support a censure. After a 19-1 vote, the Wolves are informed they have no voice on the Grand Council floor for a number of months equal to the yes votes. Any business the Wolves have must by brought to the floor by proxy, with the designated proxy being the Wolverines themselves. Their third serving of humble pie force fed to them, the newly elected Wolf Khans leave the Hall under guard.

- After the close of business on the floor of the Grand Hall, Khan McEvedy approaches the new ilKhan with a proposal. Niamh Sukhanov is a largely unknown quantity to the Wolverine Khan, but McKenna is a ready deal maker and a possible back door to healing old wounds. In return for the 331st cache, minus its nuclear weapons, the Wolverines want Snow Raven help to build up their fleet. McEvedy's proposal is three whole naval stars, each composed of a battleship, battlecruiser, heavy cruiser, destroyer, and frigate. In particular McEvedy was interested in the Prinz Eugen, possession of which was anathema to every other clan. When asked why, McEvedy told McKenna that she wanted to christen it as the CWS Honey Badger and showed the ilKhan a bit of obscure centuries old entertainment that was popular among Wolverine warriors and almost entirely unknown to the rest of the Clans. Fighting off a bout of hysterical laughter, McKenna agrees.

[fast forward and move to the Inner Sphere, where the first ripples of change are starting to be felt]

- During the course of the first three Succession Wars, including the first two that are total war in all but name, the leaders of the Great Houses take note of the desolation being caused and the start of a precipitous backslide into planet-bound barbarity. Objective raids designed to seize factories for their production gear often as not result in a good deal of destruction to the very objectives themselves. It doesn't help when the raids move to the people that make the tools to make everything needed to wage war. At first, House leaders begin to move factories to interior worlds or, when that's not possible, to heavily defended planets like New Syrtis. This slows the raids a great deal, but what raids are conducted seem to always favor complete destruction rather than larceny on a truly impressive scale. Quietly the House Lords begin to set up small production facilities on interior dead worlds run by very small teams of specialists who are made to be officially deceased, with each facility hidden by a Special Access Program. While hardly capable of supporting a war effort on their own, they do frustrate ComStar's hidden efforts to inflict the Inner Sphere with Technical ******.

- The use of nuclear weapons, for the most part contained to active battlefields, grinds to a screeching halt when a Liao commander uses a very large and very dirty nuclear weapon against militia defending a city on a Davion world that is gridlocked by an evacuation attempt. The militia is completely wiped out and the inhabitants suffer 10% immediate casualties, with the numbers skyrocketing as radiation poisoning and starvation due to contaminated food set in. However, the Liao regiment finds itself trapped when three RCTs of the Syrtis Fusiliers jump in by pirate point and conduct a mass orbital drop around the Liao positions. Not expecting what will happen, the Liao commander surrenders his command. Enlisted personnel are sent to PoW camps, while junior officers are executed by firing squad and senior battalion and regimental officers are subjected to suspension hanging after summary courts martial. The kicker is that this is all recorded and transmitted to every world with an HPG, with the clear message that House Davion will no longer tolerate the use of nuclear weapons upon its worlds. As always, reciprocity is the rule of the day and no officer is willing to risk their neck (literally) just to gain an easy victory when it will mean the likely deaths of themselves and the people under their command.

[back to Clan Space]

- Nicholas Kerensky's death at the hands of the now-legendary Wolverine Khan Sarah McEvedy has caused a tidal wave of change. Trials, excepting those of Refusal following a death sentence and Grievance, are usually fought with simulation gear or decided by some other competition (American football is very popular among Elementals). At some point a whisper campaign, nobody is sure who started it, pointed out Kerensky's rank hypocrisy in decrying waste and then promptly demanding combat to the death between gifted warriors and their expensive machines for simple disputes or the right to build some new war machine. In the same vein, entire bloodlines are not wiped out because a single individual committed a particularly heinous crime.

- Clan Wolverine fields the first ER-PPC and its combination of range, accuracy, and hitting power makes it a favorite among both front line and garrison troops within the Clan.

- Both Widowmaker Khans are sentenced to death by the Grand Council for ordering protesting civilians slaughtered without even the courtesy of being read the riot act. Naturally they demand a Trial of Refusal and going by previous precedent they take their command Keshiks into battle. For the second time in less than 20 years, the Widowmakers witness their Khans taking their best warriors with them into death. It's a turning point for the Clan, who are tired of seeing the lives of their best and brightest extinguished over the stupidity of people who don't use their big head when making command decisions. The next set of Khans enact a quiet directive, none who exhibit the unthinking, outspoken behavior that had resulted in such misery for the Clan would advanced beyond Star Commander, even if it meant rigging Trials of Position.

- Omnimechs are developed in a joint effort between Clans Wolverine and Coyote, with the Ravens being the third to field Omnimechs due to what is called the McEvedy Declaration. By this point nobody is particularly keen to try the Wolverines on for size, as they field eight galaxies (with only one being a second line garrison galaxy) and each is composed of five supernova trinaries with a command cluster attached and have an impressive win-loss record in Trials, so every Clan that challenges for the technology does so against the Snow Ravens or Coyotes.

- Clan Mongoose is censured indefinitely by the Grand Council for being political weasels. The beatdown they receive at the hands of the Star Adders and Smoke Jaguars for previous offenses leaves them with only their homeworld of Shadow in their possession. After this humiliation, the Khans are forced to endure a succession of Trials of Grievance from their own warriors until they are both killed. A stark precedent is being set and the Khans are not blind to it; a Khan who steps too far out of bounds will rapidly find themselves slipping the mortal coil. It is two years from the censure vote, where not even a proxy was granted, before either new Mongoose Khan takes their seat in the Grand Council.

- Approaching the 31st Century, two major factions begin an ideological battle. The Wardens favor returning to the Inner Sphere as guides and protectors. When challenged on what precisely they would be protecting the Inner Sphere from, the Wardens are either unwilling or unable to answer. The unwilling can't say, "From you nuttier than a can of Planters Crusaders" or "From themselves." The former would invited allegations of treasonous thought and the latter would only cause the Crusaders to point out that they're Crusader-lite. The Crusaders, for their part, favor an invasion to drive straight towards Terra and bring enlightenment with them. When challenged on where they'd get the manpower and material to manage such an impressive feat given the strictly limited warfare the Clans practice. The Crusaders reply that the founding members managed it outnumbered 100-to-1 and with technological parity. The Wardens note the odds would be considerably worse invading the Inner Sphere. Etc, etc, etc. The Wolverines are largely aloof from all this, happy with their 50% share of Circe and small enclaves on the capital worlds of friendly Clans. Tired of the bickering, Khan Alyssa Ebon famously quips, "Go big or stay home." Much shocked silence at that. When questioned further, Ebon points out that nobody actually knows what the condition of the Inner Sphere is, for all anybody on the Clan worlds know the Free Worlds League has gotten its act together and steamrolled the rest of the Inner Sphere while crying, "Freedom!". Also, that a fifth of the Clans using a quarter of their touman (because, being Clanners, they're rather predictable that way) each isn't really going to cut it if the Inner Sphere together fields even a tenth of the force the old SLDF did. Ebon suggests a compromise; each Clan will donate a full cluster of trinaries in their specialty, with freebirth and solahma warriors making up the bulk of the force, which will operate as a mercenary unit while gathering intelligence which will be reported back to the Clans after the end of every five year contract. The fake mercs will take up contracts with each of the Houses that existed when the Star League did and any new ones if they're not bandit kingdoms.

[more later, tired now]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 20 December 2014, 19:47:20
This is interesting I would love to see where it goes. Whats more interesting is that I know that combo of blows, viscious,  just like you would expect from a Wolverine.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 20 December 2014, 22:54:51
I remember that in canon Nicholas Kerensky picked up some sort of fever on Eden that caused some sort of brain damage, but did it get to the point that sociopathic behaviour was confirmed?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 21 December 2014, 01:07:41
I remember that in canon Nicholas Kerensky picked up some sort of fever on Eden that caused some sort of brain damage, but did it get to the point that sociopathic behaviour was confirmed?
The disease in question either killed you or drove you mad. He survived. Draw your own conclusions. :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 21 December 2014, 02:50:21
The disease in question either killed you or drove you mad. He survived. Draw your own conclusions. :D

And seeing as nobody would dare question the word of the Great Father his ravings were treated as divine revelations and gospel  ::)

Then again it's a given that the Clans don't perform psych evaluations on their warriors - 99.9% of Clan Smoke Jaguar's touman would have flunked the first exams :p
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 21 December 2014, 06:06:05
And seeing as nobody would dare question the word of the Great Father his ravings were treated as divine revelations and gospel  ::)

Then again it's a given that the Clans don't perform psych evaluations on their warriors - 99.9% of Clan Smoke Jaguar's touman would have flunked the first exams :p
I always said the Clans were founded by a group of hardcore untreated PTSD cases who had seen their world collapse around them, fought a decade long war of unimaginable brutality, fled into the Black at the behest of a General they basically worshipped, forged a new society, then watched that society collapse too!

I think they were looking for someone to restore some order to their lives, and being from the Inner Sphere, their 'God's' heir was a good start, no matter how crazy he was.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 21 December 2014, 06:34:54
I remember that in canon Nicholas Kerensky picked up some sort of fever on Eden that caused some sort of brain damage, but did it get to the point that sociopathic behaviour was confirmed?

I think it's genetic, to be honest. The sociopath part, anyway. The violence, who knows?

EDIT: Posted more, btw.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 21 December 2014, 09:02:40
I think it's genetic, to be honest. The sociopath part, anyway. The violence, who knows?

EDIT: Posted more, btw.

Seriously? I have no trouble believing Nicky was a sociopath in his ilKhan days - hell, considering his actions in setting up the Wolverines for Annihilation and then bragging about it to Sarah McEvedy I think he's a candidate for a Messiah complex feeding into full-blown megalomania, exacerbated by the blind adoration of the 800 Bloodnamed who participated in Operation Klondike. But the sociopathy being a genetic thing? I dunno.  ???

I remember Andery was described as Nicholas' conscience in a couple of game supplements, and Aleksandr Kerensky seemed to feel a strong sense of responsibility and empathy towards the SLDF soldiers he commanded. I have trouble believe that all three Kerensky's were sociopaths.


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 21 December 2014, 11:15:26
The disease in question either killed you or drove you mad. He survived. Draw your own conclusions. :D

To be fair to Nicholas... he also was likely untreated PTSD case, given his growing up on Amaris occupied Terra, living in fear for his life if his parentage came out.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 21 December 2014, 14:29:22
Seriously? I have no trouble believing Nicky was a sociopath in his ilKhan days - hell, considering his actions in setting up the Wolverines for Annihilation and then bragging about it to Sarah McEvedy I think he's a candidate for a Messiah complex feeding into full-blown megalomania, exacerbated by the blind adoration of the 800 Bloodnamed who participated in Operation Klondike. But the sociopathy being a genetic thing? I dunno.  ???

General Kerensky had the entire Amaris clan gunned down, to include innocent children, for simply being related to Stefan Amaris. Everybody that was even involved in that order should've been hanged.

There probably wasn't anything wrong with Andery, but that's genetics for you.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 21 December 2014, 16:36:52
General Kerensky had the entire Amaris clan gunned down, to include innocent children, for simply being related to Stefan Amaris. Everybody that was even involved in that order should've been hanged.

There probably wasn't anything wrong with Andery, but that's genetics for you.


That's actually not all that big a shift from the sort of stuff that happened in the Reunification Wars - without wanting to be too negative about canon stuff the number of actions that strike me as a current trying-to-get-into-the-military type as war crimes
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 21 December 2014, 19:12:57
If you want to talk about War Crime What Ifs...

Durring the Kentares Massacre, a DCMS command unit used by him was so disgusted that they broadcast video of the horrors to a Comstar informant.

What if instead they had called in an artillery strike on their own Coordinator-and themselves?  Jinjiro Kurita is killed by friendly fire, along with his killers.  He is lacking an heir, so the command immediately passes to his brother-the massacre probably halts, but the DCMS have turned on the hand that feeds them and killed a Kurita.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 21 December 2014, 19:49:03
If you want to talk about War Crime What Ifs...

Durring the Kentares Massacre, a DCMS command unit used by him was so disgusted that they broadcast video of the horrors to a Comstar informant.

What if instead they had called in an artillery strike on their own Coordinator-and themselves?  Jinjiro Kurita is killed by friendly fire, along with his killers.  He is lacking an heir, so the command immediately passes to his brother-the massacre probably halts, but the DCMS have turned on the hand that feeds them and killed a Kurita.

That would be a nice new Tribble!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 21 December 2014, 19:51:02
@FyrWulf  What you posted read like it would be a good Tribble!  Hopefully when you have more time you can post it on its own separate post and expand?  Nice to see more ideas and what ifs!  Keep it up!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 21 December 2014, 20:21:53
If you want to talk about War Crime What Ifs...

Durring the Kentares Massacre, a DCMS command unit used by him was so disgusted that they broadcast video of the horrors to a Comstar informant.

What if instead they had called in an artillery strike on their own Coordinator-and themselves?  Jinjiro Kurita is killed by friendly fire, along with his killers.  He is lacking an heir, so the command immediately passes to his brother-the massacre probably halts, but the DCMS have turned on the hand that feeds them and killed a Kurita.

Why would they need an artillery strike? If they were close enough that they would be caught in the artillery radius then they were close enough to have direct contact with Jinjiro himself - one of the command unit just walks into the command vehicle claiming to be carrying reports from the front line, draws his sidearm and BLAM! Plus it ties into the samurai ideal of satisfying dishonour by [paying the price with your life.

 At least two Coordinators have been killed by members of the DCMS (usually the Otomo) because they were dragging the Combine down - one of them was Takashi Kurita's father (the incident is described at the start of 'Heir to the Dragon'). The assassin is killed immediately afterwards but it's implied that they knew this going in, and it's actually viewed as a safety valve in case of an incompetent Coordinator. The death of Leonard Kurita a few years after the Reunification War doesn't count as a killing by the DCMS because it was actually done by members of the Kurita family themselves, but it's another case of a Coordinator being killed because he was seen as a danger to the Combine.

The real wild card is whether the command unit broadcasts the video of the Kentares atrocities like in canon, or try to hush it up to protect the honour of the DCMS. Knowledge and proof of the Kentares massacre shook the DCMS' belief in itself and simultaneously enraged the AFFS to the point where they were able to stop the Kurita drive on New Avalon and push them back to the original border. If that broadcast video didn't get out would the AFFS have managed to put enough steel in their spines to save New Avalon? They would have a breathing space while the DCMS is busy having a slaughter party on Kentares, but would that be enough?

Jinjiro didn't have a nominated heir for the Coordinatorship at the time of Kentares - he was the named heir. If he gets capped then there would probably be a power struggle among the Kurita family and possibly the Warlords to see who would be the next Coordinator, which would slow down the DCM even more.

Ultimately if the command unit in question kills Jinjiro *and* broadcasts the video then the DCMS is paralysed and fragmented while the Kurita family and Warlords scramble to put their choice of Coordinator on the throne, the soldiers of the DCMS are demoralised by their feelings of dishonour over the Kentares massacre, and the AFFS is catching its breath and building up a berserk hatred of the Kuritas.

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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 22 December 2014, 02:49:07
Quote
But the sociopathy being a genetic thing? I dunno.
I've said it elsewhere so I'll say it here...
It's a less known implication in BT that vision tends to evolve into madness after a few generations.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 22 December 2014, 05:02:02
General Kerensky had the entire Amaris clan gunned down, to include innocent children, for simply being related to Stefan Amaris. Everybody that was even involved in that order should've been hanged.

There probably wasn't anything wrong with Andery, but that's genetics for you.

That was a once-off thing after the SLDF engineers finally managed to open the doors into the Court of the Star League throne room where the corpses of the massacred Camerons had lain for ten years and Kerensky spent half an hour in the room having the evidence of his failure being figuratively rubbed in his face. Coupled with the stress of having run one of the most intense military campaigns in history (if not the most intense military campaign in history) it's no wonder he snapped. On the other hand he kept the SLDF in check from abusing Rim Worlds POWs up to the point of dismissing one of his field commanders who let his troops do as they wished (Jack Lucas, mentioned in Liberation of Terra II), and repeatedly urged the Successor Lords and the citizens of the Terran Hegemony to treat Rim Worlds prisoners with leniency and respect.

As far as I can see the Amaris extermination was a single incident rather than a sign of ongoing sociopathic behaviour on the part of Aleksandr Kerensky.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 23 December 2014, 00:28:11
As far as I can see the Amaris extermination was a single incident rather than a sign of ongoing sociopathic behaviour on the part of Aleksandr Kerensky.

I think we're going to have to agree to disagree. I could list my reasoning, but as this isn't a debate thread I don't want to receive a reprimand from Trace.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 23 December 2014, 02:25:25
I think we're going to have to agree to disagree. I could list my reasoning, but as this isn't a debate thread I don't want to receive a reprimand from Trace.

Fair enough.

On a completely unrelated note, I saw you've started The Wolverine Compromise on another thread. I like it! :)
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 23 December 2014, 06:37:21
Tribble # 170

The Defence of Tamar.

Once again due to Army Group Sudeten not vanishing into the Space Bermuda Triangle, as well as many more units being rotated up from the Crucis and Draconis Marches, plus from the FWL border after agreements are made with Theodore and Thomas on Outreach, the AFFC during the Clan Invasion manages to much more effectively slam on the breaks on waves 4 and 5. Combined with the increasing assumption that ComStar are at least passively and most likely actively helping the Invaders, taking steps to feed ComStar false information which in turn gets passed onto the Clans, letting them ambush the hell out of most of the Clan spearheads with the Clans woefully underbidding based on said intel.

Clan Wolf tries to react by concentrating and narrowing its focus substantially, isntead of trying to just land a Trinanry on this or that FRR world with no real defenses and plant a flag, they concentrat their clusters and go for the biggest targets. One of which is Tamar.

Disaster however strikes when they slam head first into the 3rd Royal Guards, Davion Assault Guards, 10th Lyran Guards and the Kathil Uhlans when they were only expecting the 26th Lyran Guards. Even an attempt in desperation to bring their supporting warship, the Nature's Wrath, a Lola-III, to bring ortillary in to try and disperse the RCTs who have the Wolf in a choke chain fails when aerospace regiments, clearly waiting for this moment, swarm her and in the flare of nuclear detonations, turn her into a debris field in high orbit. With little choice, Ulric has to pull out whats left of his flotila as the 13th Wolf Guards are systematically annihilated, the Wolf fleet barely managing to jump out of the system ahead of the vengeful swarm.

Tamar has been held, another glorious victory to let everyone know that the Clans are not unstoppable. Khan Natasha herself was bid out of the operation to win the bid against Conal so she is alive - but politically weakened of course as a result of the outcome (not that even Conal is stupid enough to try and challenge her yet). However Phelan WAS on the ground ... and has been captured.

Captured as a commander of the Wolf Clan, leading Wolf forces into battle against the AFFC on a Capital world. On *Tamar*.
 
Morgan is not an idiot and puts an immediate lockdown on the news looking for guidance from Hanse and Melissa on this rather 'delicate' issue, but Duke Selvin Kelswa the Third promptly has the data leaked to Ryan Steiner. Not that he doesn't appriciate the fact that Hanse and Mellisa listened to him this time and send four crack RCTs to hold the line, but business is business after all..

How big of a headache do Hanse and Mellisa have at this point? Morgan and the Kell Hounds are already on the way to Luthien under a blackout through uncharted systems with Jamies people, and presumably will not get news for some time...
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Post by: James Tanaga on 24 December 2014, 20:44:35
Tribble #171

The Northwind Highlanders jump into the fray of the Amaris Conflict.

Afterwards, as preparations for Operation: Exodus begins, those who elect to stay behind begin to contemplate their future. Though it is forgotten in history of who actually came up with it, several units staying behind elect to band together with the Highlanders, dubbing themselves the Allied Military Command, rather then become mercenaries. Led collectively by the larger SLDF units remaining behind and the Highlanders themselves, the Allied Military Command quickly takes over many former Terran systems, primarily those in the former Lockdale, Terra, and Terra Firma provinces.

The AMC Northwind Protocols, signed by representatives from all the units and worlds under its control on Northwind, with witnesses from the Capellan Confederation, Federated Suns, and Lyran Commonwealth present, officially marks its birth. Mostly an economic and defense pact between the various worlds and units, at the start of the Succession Wars, the AMC fights off invasions from the Free Worlds League and the Draconis Combine.

By the time the Wolf's Dragoons appear in the Inner Sphere, the AMC still stands. While all the worlds within the AMC are officially independent, Northwind by this time is the unofficial capital of the alliance of former SLDF units.
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 26 December 2014, 09:23:41
Northwind would have a far higher industrial base than in canon. Cosara weaponries would have more production lines for more mech designs in production, and likely would have expanded to aerospace and possibly even cap ship construction.
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Post by: drakensis on 28 December 2014, 07:03:37
I'm not sure basing your military-industrial endeavours on Cosara would be a terribly safe bet, given their... um... issues in bringing the Crab to full production.
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Post by: VhenRa on 29 December 2014, 07:17:36
I'm not sure basing your military-industrial endeavours on Cosara would be a terribly safe bet, given their... um... issues in bringing the Crab to full production.

And their (seeming) decision to abandon the Crab for the piece of garbage that is the Targe... and their sheer inability to stay loyal. Amongst my friends, Northwind is a byword for treachery.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 30 December 2014, 13:37:05
I'm not sure basing your military-industrial endeavours on Cosara would be a terribly safe bet, given their... um... issues in bringing the Crab to full production.
With a couple of centuries to get in shape, one would think it inevitable.

That or some other major manufacturer puts down roots in Northwind and eventually drives them completely out of business.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 30 December 2014, 18:35:43
Tribble #172

Those wacky Canopians, perhaps the one place in known space (other than the Clan's Scientist castes) where genuine medical research can be carried out during the dark years of the Third Succession War, stumble upon an anti-agathic treatment. Specifically, a treatment to slow the aging process. It isn't cheap, at least for now, but if you have the money you can potentially double or triple your life expectancy. Of course this involves going to Canopus and letting their doctors get their hands on you.

Some of the House Lords would feel more than a little wary of their nobility putting themselves in Canopian hands. Some of the younger nobility are now seeing the titles they stand to inherit recede decades into the future. And just about everyone wants access to what is - due to practical limitations - not all that available just yet.

Can the Canopians ride this wave of interest back to prosperity? Or will they be torn apart like the proverbial golden goose? And what happens when the life expectancy of a ruler is two or three centuries?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 30 December 2014, 19:00:53
Honestly... it probably won't change ruler life expectancies that much at the highest level. Largest causes of death for rulers in Battletech seems to be foul play or stress induced bad health.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 30 December 2014, 21:10:11
Honestly... it probably won't change ruler life expectancies that much at the highest level. Largest causes of death for rulers in Battletech seems to be foul play or stress induced bad health.
That, or combat.
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Post by: VhenRa on 30 December 2014, 23:28:45
That, or combat.

Eh, thats foul play. Its just foul play in the form of enemy direct action. At least its more honest.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 31 December 2014, 03:49:30
It isn't just the House Lords - there are hundreds or thousands of Dukes, Counts, Barons etc who could suddenly rule for centuries. However, looking at the deaths of House Lords of the 30th Century:

Taragi Kurita (botched surgery for a heart defect)
Shinjiro Kurita (natural causes, possibly assassinated)
Hugai Kurita (melancholy)
Hohiro Kurita (assassinated)
Joseph II Davion (war wounds (retired))
Peter Davion (assassinated)
Andrew Davion (natural causes)
Ian Davion (in battle)
Otto Liao (unknown (retired))
Merlin Liao (illness)
Tarlak Liao (assassinated)
Ingrid Liao (unknown)
Tormax Liao (assassinated)
Maximilian Liao (suicide, possibly assassinated)
Elisabeth Marik (unknown)
Samuel Marik (unknown)
Paul Marik (in battle)
Iris Marik (unknown (retired)
Brock Marik (in battle)
Thaddeus Marik (drowned)
Stephan Marik (cancer)
Janos Marik (assassinated)
Eric Steiner (in battle)
Simon Borge-Steiner (unknown (abdicated))
Tatyana (unknown (retired))
Marco Steiner (cancer (retired))
Giovanni Steiner (riding accident)
Alessandro Steiner (cancer (retired))

Counting mixed causes as 0.5 for each, this comes to:
8 deaths for medical causes
6 assassinations
4.5 deaths in battle
2 accidents
0.5 suicide
and 7 unknown (or at least unstated)

It's quite probable that the leader of a great house will die violently but its not the most common cause of death. Assuming all the 'unknowns' are natural causes then more than half live out their lives.
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Post by: VhenRa on 31 December 2014, 06:16:31
of course, the longer you are in power the more likely you are to annoy someone enough to die of unnatural causes. Or simply suffer an accident. And I mean an actual accident and not an "accident".
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Post by: Chaeronea on 31 December 2014, 06:56:51
Death by natural causes, huh? Reminds me of the line from the Dark Elf Trilogy - "the death was caused by natural causes. Naturally one dies when a dagger is shoved between one's third and fourth ribs."
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Post by: Heretic on 01 January 2015, 15:39:21
Tribble 173:

A day in the life of a Solaris VII Metro PD officer includes dealing with drunks, busting drug kingpins, shutting down underground betting operations, and many other things.

Except trying to match wits with a psychotic serial killer who thinks she's been contacting the long not-so-dearly departed spirits of both Katherine Morgan Steiner-Davion and Kali Liao.

It's a race against time before she strikes again, but the bodies are piling up faster than anybody can keep track of. It'll take a combination of both blind luck and time-honed skill to catch her...yet luck can run out and skill only goes so far.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 01 January 2015, 19:17:15
Tribble 174: A Christmas Tribble

The year is 3026.

In December, in between the events of Justin Allard being injured, given a new arm and then early in the next year banished for Treason, Michael Hasek-Davion is visited by several spirits on Christmas eve.

The first two are Marley and Marley, two Mechwarriors who Micahel served with and taunt him that his treason against Hanse with the Capellans has doomed him eternally as the worst places in hell are reserved for those who betray their nation, their family and their King ... and as he managed to do all three at the same time, well, he's screwed.

Pleading for Mercy, he is scornfully told that his only hope lies in the ghosts of Christmas Past, Present and Future who will visit him; the very first when the clock strikes one!

And so it comes to past.

First, the Ghost of Christmas past (looking oddly like Richard Cameron for some reason) takes him into the past where he sees himself and Hanse as young children, playing innocently in joy together at Christmas with their toy Battlemechs, swearing that they will always be Lancemates into the future while Hanses sister throws water balloons at them. Fast forward to Michael and Hanses sister getting married and the first hints where it all went wrong after Ian died. Seeing himself convincing himself that Hanse was not worthy to take Ians place, then seeing the Capellans slowly working their way into his court at the Christmas's that follow ... well ... it shakes him up quite a bit that his grand plans all started from such pettiness ... and is this all he really is?

Then comes the ghost of Christmas Present, who takes the form of Quintis Allard, the man delighting in taking him to New Avalon where he sees poor Morgan feeling rather lonely and fiercely defending his father against the rumors that his father is working with the Liaos from some officers in the barracks who didn't realize he could hear them. Suffice to say that Michael is both touched by his sons loyalty that he had always doubted ... and almost sick with himself that he is unworthy of it because, you know, he IS unworthy of it. Zoom around to see Hanse celebrating Christmas with Ardan, Yvonne and the few other close family members he still has, but the man slipping away from the celebrations to his bedroom and unpacking from a box under his bed HIS Battlemech of the paired toys they played with as Children, clearly extremely sad looking at it as he remembered that Christmas, really kicking Michael in the guts as he softly comments 'Lancemates forever...' before putting it away.

By now of course Michael is really starting to say that he is understanding this and he can change and all that, but Quintis sneers that he understands nothing and with a flash, he finds himself elsewhere with ... is that Jamie Wolf sitting casually on that fence?

Oh yes it is, he's the Ghost of Christmas yet to Come . Apparently he's staying on Luthien this year -long story- but took a diversion to show him HIS future and guides him through the streets of New Syrtis in the year 3069, showing Liao troops rampaging through the place, horrifying him. A lot of the locals are heard to bitterly be asking why the hell that old idiot Michael thought that the damn Liaos could be trusted, setting in motion the chain of events that ultimately ended up with this happening. Pleading with the Merc that people CAN change (which gets a lot of eyes rolling) the man finally finds himself before his own grave, overgrown and uncared for simply listing his name, nowhere near the family crypt. And clearly its been vandalized recently, with the word 'traitor to the Federated Suns!' spray-painted over it and as he falls to his knees before it-

-he wakes up in his own bed.

And its moring, flinging open the window he yells down at a Battlemaster making its rounds demanding to know what day it is, only to be told by the confused Mechwarrior that why its Christmas day of course.

And Michael decides that he knows what he must do.

He digs through his storage boxes and finds, eventually, the other Mech from the pair that had been given to Hanse and himself and orders his dropship at once prepared to take him to New Avalon.

Arriving via the Command Circuit a week later, just after the new year, Michael meets privately with Hanse ... and confesses.

To everything.

Tells him the whole story, which sounds rather unbelievable, but Hanse is clearly taken well aback by Micahel repeating that he saw him go under his bed and have a look at the Battlemech toy, the twin of which he had brought with him. He knows what he has done in his life is probably unforgivable and he cannot ask for forgiveness. But he knows now how wrong he has been and so he'll put his fate in his brothers hands ...

So does Hanse give his brother another chance, because dammit, its Christmas?
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Post by: knightowl on 02 January 2015, 04:57:52
Tribble 173:

A day in the life of a Solaris VII Metro PD officer includes dealing with drunks, busting drug kingpins, shutting down underground betting operations, and many other things.

Except trying to match wits with a psychotic serial killer who thinks she's been contacting the long not-so-dearly departed spirits of both Katherine Morgan Steiner-Davion and Kali Liao.

It's a race against time before she strikes again, but the bodies are piling up faster than anybody can keep track of. It'll take a combination of both blind luck and time-honed skill to catch her...yet luck can run out and skill only goes so far.

When Kali's in charge she be real hard to track. Katherine a week tops.
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Post by: Heretic on 02 January 2015, 12:28:25
Tribble 175:

Jojo's Bizarre Adventure/BattleTech crossover. That's all that needs to be said, really.

No, "Roundabout" by Yes didn't just come on my Pandora station, stop implying such a thing!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 02 January 2015, 12:35:59
Tribble 175:

Jojo's Bizarre Adventure/BattleTech crossover. That's all that needs to be said, really.

No, "Roundabout" by Yes didn't just come on my Pandora station, stop implying such a thing!

SO yes to this, so yes.  8) O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 02 January 2015, 16:02:54
You thought it was Thomas Marik who was behind the Word of Blake, but it was I, Dio!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 08 January 2015, 18:16:29
Tribble 175: Awkward Family Reunion

The FedCom Civil War is over. Katherine has been torn out of Castle Avalon and Yvonne has taken the throne with Victors abdication. Fighting has come to a halt across the Federated Suns and Lyran Alliance as shattered RCTs and Regiments lay down their arms and start to count the enormous cost of the conflict. The collected evidence of Katherines actions has been released to the public and any and all support for a possible Revanchist movement has died stillborn - although more than a few people pointedly still blame Victor for not taking firm steps much sooner to pull his sister off the throne, mostly to assuage their enormous guilt over the fact that they had brought Katherines BS hook line and sinker.

Victor, on board the Avalon Class Melissa Davion escorted by the two Fox Class Corvettes, the Antrim and Intrepid makes a jump into the Tharkad system. He is not saying there, simply passing through on his way to Arc Royal, although he is planning to offload his formal Verigraphed abdication of the Archonship to a courier to run it to the Estates Generals, so that all the I's are dotted and T's are crossed to let his Brother assume the throne. Then the small flotila will join with the CWIE fleet also waiting to also head home, and the combined convoy will head on to Arc Royal to imprison Katherine in her gilded cage. Katherine being locked up securely in secure quarters by a security detail led by Tiaret Nevversan. Who is still soundly confused as to why Victor does not simply annihiliate his sister and get it over with - she is hoping to try and get some clarification from Khan Kell if he is around somewhere....

But then the universe sneezes.

When the trio of ships jump to Tharkad, something goes wrong with their K/F fields. No-one ever knows what happened, just say it was a billion to one intersection with a short lifed' rift' in the fabric of K/F space that is occasionally theorized about. The jump seems to take far longer than it should with even more weird wonkyness than usual, before they snap back out into realspace at the Tharkad zenith point.

It takes a few minutes for the crew to recover enough to notice that their sensor boards are showing some weird stuff.  The Clan Wolf warships that should be waiting are not there, nor are the damaged Lyran warships that had stupidly tried to get in the way of the Clan heavies when Peter arrived. There are plenty of jumpships - and a whole slew of dropships madly running the hell away from the area at full G burns. The transponders are also bloody weird, showing up on the tactical warbooks are 'Lyran Commonwealth' rather than 'Lyran Alliance' - causing the ships Captain to snark that Peter clearly didn't waste any time undoing his sisters shenanigans.

Victor arrives on the CIC complaining about the Captains driving at that point when finally someone turns on the radio and finds an Admiral demanding that they identify themselves (in that distinctive tone of voice of someone terrified out of their minds yet trying desperately not to sound like it) and a short and highly confusing conversation establishes that this is indeed the Tharkad system ... and the year is 3045. And uh, this sounds like its REALLY above his pay grade, so he's going to send a message to Tharkard where thankfully the Archon and her husband are both luckily present ... with most of their children...
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Post by: Zureal on 08 January 2015, 18:41:17
oOo, i LIKE this :D  ;D halarious halariousniss will soon insue  O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 08 January 2015, 19:30:33
Tribble #175 would be a great story even just for the Family reunion!
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 08 January 2015, 21:21:24
Ah I do love time travel suggestions, mostly because I find there is a lot of humour to be found in certain individuals going back and trolling everyone. I have no idea whether this will count as another Tribble or not. But this is a little thought I had of if Victor got send back prior to Hanse and Melissas marriage, just because I have this mental image of Victor trolling the wedding ceremony, the invasion of the Capellan Confederation and Comstar.

'And to you my dear wife, I give you the Capellan Confederation' Hanse Davion proclaimed smugly.

'You didn't need Sian as part of that, did you Dad?' Victor said from his position as the best man with a cheshire grin on his face.

'What did you do to my capital you *insert various swearing here* Davion!' screamed three separate Liaos in between trying to wrestle the silverware from the Kuritan delegation who were demonstrating the similarity in technique between a katana and eating utensils, i.e. sharp bit goes in whatever is in front of you.

'I didn't do anything to it, capital grade missiles on a ballistic course tend to do what they want'.
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 09 January 2015, 03:47:07
Tribble 176 - Tales from the Psychiatrist (Or what if Rita Skeeter from Harry Potter worked in the Battletech universe).

Many books and movies have been produced about the heroism of the bodyguards of the Lords of the Inner Sphere. Assassins, treason, backroom dealings, and war, all told and retold through many forms of media.

We're not interested in those. We want the juicy stuff.

Here from Tharkad Publishing, we give you the bits the Lords of the Inner Sphere do not want you to know:

Video of Hanse Davions drunken dancing habits. How he spent the night after he heard of the results of the 1st Kathil Uhlans raid on Sian singing and dancing around in his underwear in the office to the turn of 'We are the Champions', and Melissas reaction when she walked in.

The secret audio files from Richard Camerons childhood, and the secret tea parties held between him, Stefan Amaris and over fifty stuffed animals.

Video and sound files recovered from Katrina Steiners 'exile' into the Periphery with Morgan Kell and Arthur Luvon, and the truth behind the Red Corsair.

Why Kuritans are fanatical regarding wearing swords among their upper classes.

The true initiation into the Thuggee Cult.

The secret prayers of Comstar Acolytes, and why Terra has the largest per capita usage of anti-depressants in the Inner Sphere.

All of this, plus what the Word of Blake actually does with Toasters, Why as many Calderons as possible fled the Concordat prior to the 3060s, and the contents of the Canopian National Literature Archive - Adults Sections (yes all sixty nine Star League library archives), and other details we're not allow to broadcast without an age filter coming soon to Tharkad Publishing outlets near you.
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Post by: drakensis on 09 January 2015, 04:21:13
Tribble #177

Hanse Davion and Melissa Steiner are reincarnated in 3135 - in the adult bodies of Caleb Davion and Melissa Steiner. Can their marriage - and the 'auld alliance' between their realms be revived? Or will 80 years of history in which their legacy was squandered leave them hopeless alcoholics? Who knows!?


edit:Fixed tribble number
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Post by: Trace Coburn on 09 January 2015, 06:31:05
  Uh, that’s Tribble #177 there, drakensis.   ;)  But I have to admit, it’s an... interesting one.  Certainly his subordinates will wonder where Caleb suddenly got his sudden injection of sanity.  :D
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 09 January 2015, 12:46:00
  Uh, that’s Tribble #177 there, drakensis.   ;)  But I have to admit, it’s an... interesting one.  Certainly his subordinates will wonder where Caleb suddenly got his sudden injection of sanity.  :D
Injection? More like an overdose if he suddenly starts channeling Hanse.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 09 January 2015, 23:28:28
From the description I assume Caleb Davion is basically Caligula Davion?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 January 2015, 02:58:28
From the description I assume Caleb Davion is basically Caligula Davion?
The Davions would probably have been better off with Caligula.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 10 January 2015, 03:44:33
Tribble 178: I always wanted to be  . . . a lumberjack.

Jerome Blake, famed for his work with first the Star Leagues Department of Communications and later on the restoration of infrastructure following the fall of the Star League.

But what if when he was hired he wasn't put to work on the HPGs?

What if Jerome Blake's skills were focused elsewhere, say on water supply technologies?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 10 January 2015, 10:01:29
Tribble 178: I always wanted to be  . . . a lumberjack.

Jerome Blake, famed for his work with first the Star Leagues Department of Communications and later on the restoration of infrastructure following the fall of the Star League.

But what if when he was hired he wasn't put to work on the HPGs?

What if Jerome Blake's skills were focused elsewhere, say on water supply technologies?
Won't make a difference. Whoever gets saddled with his OTL job still dies of mysterious circumstances and is deified by Toyama and his followers. Atrocities are still going to be committed, though no longer in his name.

Now if you were to butterfly away Toyama...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 10 January 2015, 12:16:31
Won't make a difference. Whoever gets saddled with his OTL job still dies of mysterious circumstances and is deified by Toyama and his followers. Atrocities are still going to be committed, though no longer in his name.

Now if you were to butterfly away Toyama...

agreed.... or if He managed to get all the former SLDF units under his command and hire a bunch of mercs and take back most if not all the hegemony...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 10 January 2015, 12:59:20
Tribble # 179

    WoB is famous for its ROM branch, very powerful and effective. While ROM is infiltrating the Clans in order to get a better picture of them so they may better wipe them out they stumble upon The Society. WoB, being very much into tech and others who believe in the "holy" of the mechine make quick friends with the Scientist run Society. They start exchanging information and even though there end goals are not the same there is enough convergences in the two factions that they cement a alliance.
   Tech is quickly exchanged and both sides receive boosts  to there war potential with the Society coming out slightly ahead with WoB transferring a full shadow devision there to help train the Society forces from the green backs they are. WoB also transfers one of its irreplaceable mobile shipyards to the Homeworlds to help refurbish a number of the Clans still , rather massive, Warship mothballs with WoB receiving half of the refurbished ships. In exchange for all of this as well as a few mobile factory's shipped in The Society helps WoB start low scale production on a few Clan tech weapons as well as help them master Protomechs as well as produce so called "Gene Bombs" to whipe out certain family's that WoB considers a threat.
   By the time the Jihad is in full swing the Society, with help from the shadow division on loan to them, begin there  revolt by emulating WoB and making HPG "white noise" throughout the Homeworlds. The Next surprise is the announcement of the revival of both Clan Burrock as well as  Clan Widowmaker and with each having 3 Galaxies of ground troops as well as Warship support they are a force to be reckoned with.  Further more with the help of WoB ROM agents and scientist cast personnel throughout the Clans conflicting orders are thrown every ware wich cause the loyal Clan forces to become confused and whole formations are thrown into disaray.
   In the InnerSphere House forces are shocked to see WoB protomechs, especially those Houses that have no experience in fighting them, the sheer size of the WoB fleets also come as a rude surprise. Then when the WoB forces unleash the "Gene Bombs" on select worlds and the great families of all the Great Houses and Periphery states start dying off the lines of succession get blurred and WoB fans the flames of those left that "they" are the leader and inter fighting erupts in all states though thankfully most of the leaders are not caught in the attack enough damage is done that they are forced to settle matters at home and this gives WoB forces much breathing room as well as nearly a free hand in taking system after system.
   

Well this is what I have for now, what do you think? How do you think things would be different? Would the end be the same but taking much longer and much bloodier? Do you think that maby it would of never ended at all but that a sorte of cease fire would eventually occur from sheer exhaustion?

let me know :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 10 January 2015, 14:00:57
Tribble #179 This could work, the only problem would be the other factions of WoB having the patience to stick with the big plan before they kick of their joint war with the Society.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 12 January 2015, 14:23:57
Tribble #180

Contrary to popular belief (and Katherine's claims), Victor Steiner-Davion was always going to do the smart thing and return Joshua Marik's body to the Free World's League. It was intelligence agents loyal to Katherine who pulled the body double fast one, which gave Katherine the justification she needed to secede from the Federated Commonwealth once she shifted the blame (which was her plan all along).

However, this particular plot has just been exposed, and Thomas Marik is furious at having been duped into attacking an honorable man. He not only launches his own invasion of the Lyran Alliance, but he reinstates the armament shipments at cost, exclusively for Pro-Victor forces.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 January 2015, 04:44:08
If this coincides with the Jade Falcon push for Coventry then Katherine may be greeted on return from the Wolves with Nondi admitting she lost her great-nieces's realm.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 13 January 2015, 16:41:36
Tribble #180

Contrary to popular belief (and Katherine's claims), Victor Steiner-Davion was always going to do the smart thing and return Joshua Marik's body to the Free World's League. It was intelligence agents loyal to Katherine who pulled the body double fast one, which gave Katherine the justification she needed to secede from the Federated Commonwealth once she shifted the blame (which was her plan all along).

However, this particular plot has just been exposed, and Thomas Marik is furious at having been duped into attacking an honorable man. He not only launches his own invasion of the Lyran Alliance, but he reinstates the armament shipments at cost, exclusively for Pro-Victor forces.
this does make more sense then what had happened in real life game, why why did this not happen...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 13 January 2015, 16:43:16
Tribble #180

Contrary to popular belief (and Katherine's claims), Victor Steiner-Davion was always going to do the smart thing and return Joshua Marik's body to the Free World's League. It was intelligence agents loyal to Katherine who pulled the body double fast one, which gave Katherine the justification she needed to secede from the Federated Commonwealth once she shifted the blame (which was her plan all along).

However, this particular plot has just been exposed, and Thomas Marik is furious at having been duped into attacking an honorable man. He not only launches his own invasion of the Lyran Alliance, but he reinstates the armament shipments at cost, exclusively for Pro-Victor forces.

Very interesting - and quite a few issues to consider.

First is that while Katherine sliced the Lyran half of the FedCom away, Victor STILL considers it his nation and WILL fight to defend it. He even said as much to Thomas on Tharkad during the Whiting Conference. He probably won't look terribly fondly upon the FWL launching a full scale invasion. He MIGHT be able to get away with it if he justifies his aims as simply seizing former FWL worlds - but IIRC, in the previous invasion the FWLM managed to take back every single world it lost in the 4th Succession War already.

Second is as Drac pointed out, when this happens. If the LA gets caught between the Falcons and the FWL, with the LAAF still somewhat in chaos - and with plenty of the good officers either forced out or returning to the Federated Suns half of the Commonwealth- they are going to be in an incredibly poor position. Especially as Katherine is busy screwing Vlad over the other side of the Inner Sphere (I'm still half convinced she had all the crew of her jumpship/dropship shot to keep the secret, there is no other way it wouldn't possibly leak out). Indeed, with the situation suddenly a lot grimmer, it would be vastly harder for Nondi and Tormano to keep up the whole 'maximum radio silence!' act. The odds of everyone finding out Katherine isn't in the LA rapidly scales up here - and if they find out, then the Estates Generals find she has run off to try and ally with the Smoke Jaguars? This won't end well.

The whole basis as well of Katherine seizing power was that Victor he betrayed the Lyran People with the whole body double plan. If Thomas then publicly makes a statement ComStar broadcast across the entire LA and FS, that he now knows that this was a falsehood and that Katherine played him for a fool, it could have HUGE consequences. Especially with the double whammy of the invasions and triple whammy of Katherine being found AWOL. Add on to that the fact that I'm sure in this TL Victor didn't make a speech trying to justify his actions, but made one firmly denying them, making him look like a frigen saint compared to his sister and there is even money that you'll have the Estates Generals on their own declare the Archonship of Katherine void and ask Victor to please come back ... and bring like 80% of the AFFS with him?

Hell, you might even get Thomas making a limited invasion just to stir the pot FOR Victor, then when Victor starts his soon to be legendary 'Long March' (aka jumping from system to system to Thakard picking up RCT after RCT from the LAAF who re-swear their loyalty to him) Thomas withdraws back across the border, Victor recognizing the reestablishment of the pre 4th Succession War borders, perhaps in exchange for a concession that he will look the other way when the AFFC storms back into the Chaos March and reimposes order on everything still in flux followed by seizing a new border with the Cappies between say Second Try - Jonathan?

So when Victor finally hits Thakard with like 50 RCTs behind him, Nondi is quietly shot in the head by an LIC agent who suddenly remembers that he is totally loyal to Prince Victor allowing a smooth transition back to FedCom. Giving Victor just enough time to put someone with half a brain (counts out Yvonne at this point...) on the throne while he takes his amassed army and lands on the Jade Falcons like a Trial of Annihilation.

Hopefully then after doing that, reversing course and kicking the damn Wolves out of his realm unless they are willing to swear loyalty to the FedCom. They don't like it? Go live on Outreach or see if Terra will take you...

Hey thats another point; especially without the Chaos March to worm their way to Terra, WOB probably won't be happy with this. Or the Master with Thomas...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 13 January 2015, 16:56:23
Very interesting - and quite a few issues to consider.

First is that while Katherine sliced the Lyran half of the FedCom away, Victor STILL considers it his nation and WILL fight to defend it. He even said as much to Thomas on Tharkad during the Whiting Conference. He probably won't look terribly fondly upon the FWL launching a full scale invasion. He MIGHT be able to get away with it if he justifies his aims as simply seizing former FWL worlds - but IIRC, in the previous invasion the FWLM managed to take back every single world it lost in the 4th Succession War already.

Second is as Drac pointed out, when this happens. If the LA gets caught between the Falcons and the FWL, with the LAAF still somewhat in chaos - and with plenty of the good officers either forced out or returning to the Federated Suns half of the Commonwealth- they are going to be in an incredibly poor position. Especially as Katherine is busy screwing Vlad over the other side of the Inner Sphere (I'm still half convinced she had all the crew of her jumpship/dropship shot to keep the secret, there is no other way it wouldn't possibly leak out). Indeed, with the situation suddenly a lot grimmer, it would be vastly harder for Nondi and Tormano to keep up the whole 'maximum radio silence!' act. The odds of everyone finding out Katherine isn't in the LA rapidly scales up here - and if they find out, then the Estates Generals find she has run off to try and ally with the Smoke Jaguars? This won't end well.

The whole basis as well of Katherine seizing power was that Victor he betrayed the Lyran People with the whole body double plan. If Thomas then publicly makes a statement ComStar broadcast across the entire LA and FS, that he now knows that this was a falsehood and that Katherine played him for a fool, it could have HUGE consequences. Especially with the double whammy of the invasions and triple whammy of Katherine being found AWOL. Add on to that the fact that I'm sure in this TL Victor didn't make a speech trying to justify his actions, but made one firmly denying them, making him look like a frigen saint compared to his sister and there is even money that you'll have the Estates Generals on their own declare the Archonship of Katherine void and ask Victor to please come back ... and bring like 80% of the AFFS with him?

Hell, you might even get Thomas making a limited invasion just to stir the pot FOR Victor, then when Victor starts his soon to be legendary 'Long March' (aka jumping from system to system to Thakard picking up RCT after RCT from the LAAF who re-swear their loyalty to him) Thomas withdraws back across the border, Victor recognizing the reestablishment of the pre 4th Succession War borders, perhaps in exchange for a concession that he will look the other way when the AFFC storms back into the Chaos March and reimposes order on everything still in flux followed by seizing a new border with the Cappies between say Second Try - Jonathan?

So when Victor finally hits Thakard with like 50 RCTs behind him, Nondi is quietly shot in the head by an LIC agent who suddenly remembers that he is totally loyal to Prince Victor allowing a smooth transition back to FedCom. Giving Victor just enough time to put someone with half a brain (counts out Yvonne at this point...) on the throne while he takes his amassed army and lands on the Jade Falcons like a Trial of Annihilation.

Hopefully then after doing that, reversing course and kicking the damn Wolves out of his realm unless they are willing to swear loyalty to the FedCom. They don't like it? Go live on Outreach or see if Terra will take you...

Hey thats another point; especially without the Chaos March to worm their way to Terra, WOB probably won't be happy with this. Or the Master with Thomas...

Yep. Even odds that Katherine will simply be shot when she gets back, especially if it gets out that she was also behind her mother's assassination (which she tried to manipulate the media into thinking was Victor's fault, too).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 13 January 2015, 23:42:44
Yep. Even odds that Katherine will simply be shot when she gets back, especially if it gets out that she was also behind her mother's assassination (which she tried to manipulate the media into thinking was Victor's fault, too).

The real fun part is the Assassin himself argues Pro-Victor the whole time he's running from the Combine FedCom Int Forces. He was only able to hide in the end because Katherine Steiner-Davion Duchess of New Avalon stole the Lyran half. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 14 January 2015, 07:18:25
Can the Estates-General impeach the Archon for failure to fulfil the duties of his or her station?

So the reason she took off on her trip to Wolf territory to try to recruit allies against the Jade Falcons - how would this play in the Inner Sphere once the truth about her plans came out? Could she spin it so it would be seen  as Clanners killing Clanners and leaving the Lyran Commonwealth to rebuild?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 14 January 2015, 16:48:24
Can the Estates-General impeach the Archon for failure to fulfil the duties of his or her station?

So the reason she took off on her trip to Wolf territory to try to recruit allies against the Jade Falcons - how would this play in the Inner Sphere once the truth about her plans came out? Could she spin it so it would be seen  as Clanners killing Clanners and leaving the Lyran Commonwealth to rebuild?

As I understand it, the Estates-General has a grey area of powers. I think it effectively works that if the Archon is weak, that there is a stronger contender, they'll provide the rubber stamp to get legitimacy to replace them. Otherwise if the Archon is Strong, they certainly will not look to act in such a way.

Its really just another eye rolling example of just how pathetic Victors reach into his Government was, that Katherine was so easily able to take control of both realms with little to no real resistance from the various arms of Government that could have stopped her cold. Let alone the military of course.

Suffice to say however, that Katherine being found to be out of the Lyran Alliance, found to have lied absolutely around the events she used as a basis to take power, while the Alliance is under attack from two different sides AND then its found out that she's run off to try and make an alliance with the same guys who did the whole Turtle Bay deal?

I think its pretty much a 100% safe bet that the Estates Generals will have no problems seeing that Victor getting back in, 'restored' to what was wrongfully taken from him (and bringing the Davion Brigade of Guards, Crucis Lancers and Federated Commonwealth Corps with him in the general direction of the Jade Falcons) with a vote of no confidence in Katherine.

There is a good chance Nondi will try to fight because of how twisted she became around Katherine, but honestly, I'd bet even odds that the Royal Guard will flat out refuse her orders and just arrest her for Victor to deal with.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 15 January 2015, 02:20:19
Tribble 181: "To hell with our orders"

So, the Refusal war is kicking into high gear. Natasha has just tied at the hands of fiat Joanna. Ulric is hitting Wotan with Vlad in what we all know to be a trap.
But just as Ulric enters the city, there is a sudden KF surge ... and Phelan and his frontline Galaxy (minus the garrison units and non combatants who are hiding in an uninhabited system in Lyran space) suddenly appear. Quickly getting an update from the Wolf warships in orbit, Phelan promptly leads his Galaxy in a combat drop down into the city, the sudden entry of 3-4 Clusters of fresh frontline Wolves shattering the stalemate and turning the battle into a rout.

Phelan and his command Trinary (although of course only Rana is named :p) sprint into the city and manage to stumble upon the Missile Stars that Chistu had set up and blast them to pieces as they radio a warning, which of course ends in Chistus death.

Ulric is of course furious that Phelan disobeyed his orders, but Phelan in his usual 'screw the rules, I have plot armor!' way points out that in fact he is now the senior Khan of the Wolves with the death of Natasha and if he doesn't like it, he can talk to his Mechs enormous hand.

Meanwhile, the Jade Falcon Galaxy that had been sent to pursue Phelan jumps into the Morges system. Unfortunately because in this timeline Victor was not an idiot, he still controls the FedCom and has been of course paying very close attention, along with ComStar, to the fascinating fratricide going on between the Wolves and Jade Falcons.  Because of these butterflies, the WOB were not able to move against Terra and are still fighting among themselves in the FWL and giving Fake Tom a headache.

So the Jade Falcon flotila happily charges into the system, pops a poor dropship in the wrong place at the time for kicks then heads in-system looking for the Wolves they think are here. And essentially do the equivalent of

This (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=raF9wfPxir8);

Running straight into a significant chunk of the ComStar and AFFCs nascient Warship fleet on joint exercises. Suffice to say unlike Han, they DON'T get to run back around that corner. And neither does the Galaxy of troops that came with them.

With the Jade Falcons reeling, Ulric says 'what the hell' and together, Ulric, Phelan and Vlad actually do the impossible and smash the rest of the Falcon forces, killing Crichell and shattering the morale of the Falcons, along with the last of their frontline formations. At this, the Grand Council thanks to the Wardens on it actually being wardens are forced to admit that the Trial of Refusal has been won; Ulric is NOT guilty of the charges against him and is restored to ilKhan.

Of course, because he has to punish Phelan for his defiance, he has the Wolf Council confirm Phelan as senior Khan ... and then invests Vlad as his saKhan.
Have fun with that :)

Where do things go from here? The Falcons are shattered and very worried about absorption (no magical BS instant Sibko 'add water and stir for instant warriors' mix this time) , the Wolves are also bleeding, but in somewhat better shape and seemingly vindicated by their victory, the Inner Sphere has shown its teeth with the obliteration of an entire Falcon Galaxy with Warships that they really shouldn't have had as far as the Watch knew...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 15 January 2015, 02:41:51
Vlad pushes for absorption of the remaining Falcons, which is the reverse of what Crichell tried to pull in canon, particularly since it not only gets them warm bodies, it's more specifically warm bodies for his Crusader faction.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 15 January 2015, 03:16:18
If Thomas then publicly makes a statement ComStar broadcast across the entire LA and FS, that he now knows that this was a falsehood and that Katherine played him for a fool, it could have HUGE consequences.
The weak point here is that this would require Thomas Marik to admit he committed the FWLM to a costly war by mistake. That's going to weaken him politically and he's not necessarily going to be willing to do this.

However if he finds out Katherine was behind Melissa's murder, he might make a play for the Bolan worlds. Tie it to Katherine's offer to marry Thomas and he could be pretty devestating politically: "I have in my hand a proposal of marriage to Archon Katherine Steiner-Davion." Crumples the paper. "I assure Parliament that I would no more place my children in the care of a matricide than I would entrust the Free Worlds League to a Steiner..."

Boom. Political crisis in the Lyran Alliance, outside military threat, Victor arrives on a white horse Daishi to save the day. Thomas concedes that "Victor concealed my son's death but I'm sure he didn't actually kill him. He's better than his sister."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: smcwatt on 17 January 2015, 16:26:57
Welp, I've just killed the better part of an afternoon reading the Tribbles in one go.

Anyone else noticed that #30 and #49 have become a good chunk of "Empires Aflame"?

SMc.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 17 January 2015, 17:23:37
I think at this point the new Star League should focus on hitting both the Jade Falcons and the Smoke Jaguars. Give them both a beating they'll never forget and show the Crusaders the error of their ways.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 18 January 2015, 03:53:54
I think at this point the new Star League should focus on hitting both the Jade Falcons and the Smoke Jaguars. Give them both a beating they'll never forget and show the Crusaders the error of their ways.

They couldn't for the Same Reason in Canon. Attacking the Weakened Jade falcons would make the Inner Sphere look Weak.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 18 January 2015, 10:35:05
Well either way, at this point I'd say that the Jade Falcon's days are numbered.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 19 January 2015, 14:10:58
Reading the tribble thread at another forum I came across some interesting crossover tribbles involving settings with magic.  Primarily Sailor Moon and Dresdenverse.  And it sparked a thought from me.  Harry Potter magic is pretty hax, it's also a hereditary talent which appears to be dominant.  Just about any Spheroid (sub)faction leader or Clan Bloodhouse member (or Society Scientist) would do nearly anything to get that talent into their own family/bloodhouse/breeding program.  But just how much would they probably be willing and able to offer to acquire it?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 23 January 2015, 05:18:49
Tribble 181: Operation Headhunter.

Victor returns in triumph from Clan Space to the DC ... to find Yvonne has totally accidentally sort of managed to loose his realm to Katherine.

Yeah, her bad on that one!

Victor face palms, but chills and takes a day or so to think the situation over carefully.

The good news is that Theodore is, as in the OTL, willing to go to war with Victor to get his throne back, as is Khan Kell. And there are a lot of units in the AFFC who are clearly uneasy about Katherine. Victor however is not totally crazy and knows that leaping across the Draconis March with the DCMS at his back would probably grant Katherine a hell of a propaganda victory. Let alone Khan Kells eager desire to go smash things up. So he takes a few days to think it over before making any rash decisions.

In the end he decides that he just cannot sit by and let Katherine have the Commonwealth. Her ambition clearly knows no bounds and God only knows what she could do given time, with the entire resources of the Federated Commonwealth behind her.

The better news is that most of the AFFC units who were in Bulldog are still in the Combine, albeit on the way home, as they have finished turning over the worlds they were holding to the DCMS and Victor is able to, with the help of the ISF, quietly meet up with the RCT commanders he figured at loyal to him. As well as surprisingly, even a few LAAF units who choose to back him over his sister. To a person, especially after he hands over all the evidence he has on Katherine, they pledge their loyalty to him. He instructs them to continue home as per orders from New Avalon, but they will do so only so much as they are working their way close to New Avalon. One thing he does accept from Theodore is a loan of a large number of jumpships that have already been deployed to set up a command circuit to the core of the Crucis March.

All this is done very quietly under the radar, while Publicly Victor seems to fade from sight. The ISF (and ROM because Focht really doesn't like Katherine at all either) quietly work to encourage the perception that Victor is exhausted from his long campaign against the Jaguars and is inclined to just quietly fade away into the background.

So its some surprise when Victors forces jump out at Pirate Points over New Avalon. He has the 1st Davion Guards, 3rd Davion Guards, Heavy Guards, Assault Guards from the Guards Brigade with him in a very pointed symbol. But they are not alone because the 10th Lyran Guards are with him. And surprisingly, the 15th Lyran Guards have joined their sister unit and the the 3rd Donegal Guards has tagged along as well. Perhaps because they see which way the wind is blowing, perhaps because they actually want someone competent who will stand against the Jade Falcons - and even fought almost to the death in one of their sister units against said Falcons during the invasion. Who knows.

As the dropships pop and start their burn for the surface, a prerecorded transmission from Victor is hacked into the planets data network by MIIO agents still loyal to him, pretty much seen by everyone. Victor outright accuses Katherine of murdering their Mother and backs it up with what evidence he has gathered (including the recordings of Ryan Steiners meetings discussing the whole plan, thankyou Sven Newmark), Morgan Kells affirmation that Melissia had offered to abdicate in Victors favor years ago but Victor had refused the offer and all the other bits and pieces. Also included are recordings from the rest of the Steiner-Davion clan minus Peter who is still in seclusion, all of them affirming their support of Victors claim. Yvonnes is the best though, including all the data Theodore had gathered about the media manipulation Katherine had done to undermine her regency. Not even getting into the 'issues' with a woman who has made up a title of 'First Princess' to seize power from a regency when the real First Prince is back...

Yes, Victor has actually learned to use the media and politics to his advantage. God help us all.

All of this also goes out over ComStar to every FedCom/LA world as well - seems Focht really likes Victor ...

I really don't know who is on New Avalon at this point in time - but are the 4 Davion Guard RCTs + the 3 Lyran RCTs enough to overwhelm any 'rebels' in a rapid drop onto Avalon City and capture Katherine relatively bloodlessly due to the hammering overwhelming force involved? Plus the sheer morale factor of the Davion Brigade of Guards dropping enmass, clearly choosing who THEY think the real First Prince is?

And if so, what does this mean for the Lyran half of the realm? With everyone in the Steiner-Davion Clan publicly denouncing Katherine as the murderer of their Mother, what does Nondi do? Does she bow to the inevitable, or does she try to pull together some kind of force in the name of the deposed Katherine? Does Victors rapid and stunning response keep George Hasek actually somewhat sane for once and pledging his full loyalty to Victor, making Sun Tzu suddenly extremely worried about this whole 'retake Saint Ives' thing? Do the Jade Falcons try to gobble up a few planets in the chaos? Does Vlad Ward try anything stupid, what with his girlfriend now master of a 4x8 cell?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 23 January 2015, 08:19:00
Considering a lot of BT history can be simplified as "let's do something stupid and see what happens", I'm gonna say yes to most of the questions.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 23 January 2015, 09:58:05
Given His Aunt Nondi think Lyran Raised Victor is a lying piece of shit. Yet Worship the ground New Avalon Raised non-German speaking Katherine. She do as usally an order the Death of Everyone supporting Victor.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 23 January 2015, 20:27:04
So is January the unofficial "Pro-Victor" Month of fanfics or is it that time of year for his fanbase?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 23 January 2015, 21:39:23
Tribble 182: Victor Supreme

The Whitting Conference witnesses the rebirth of the Star League with Archon Prince Victor Ian Steiner-Davion proclaimed the new First Lord. Few would have thought this possible just a couple years ago. No doubt this unanimous action by the House Lords was spurred on by the reunited Capellan Confederation under Chancellor Kai Allard-Liao who deposed his institutionalized cousin Sun Tzu. The new First Lord is no stranger to family infighting having to imprison his sister for the murder of their mother just two years ago. In an uncharacteristic move Captain-General Thomas Marik of the Free Worlds League joined this unity movement leading some to speculate that the Archon Prince has some sort of leverage over the Eagle. The marriage to Omi Kurita should cement this second Star League for the near future and many analysts expect an assault against the Clans soon. While serious opposition remains around the InnerSphere to the rule of Victor a military victory against the Clans could muffle any critics.

 :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 23 January 2015, 22:02:22
On Tribble #182  O0   Long live the Kurita-Steiner-Davions!    I could see the Word of Blake ROM going ballistic and doing what it can to kill the new First Lord.  The Black Dragon Society to launch a rebellion in the DC and invade the Draconis March to start another war, on top of the ones against Clans!  How many SLDF units would be created with all that support!  Tribble #182 would be an awesome story!

 ;D  O0    [drool]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 January 2015, 11:24:07
Tribble 183

In 2729, at the height of the Second Hidden War, Joseph Davion's Marauder is disabled on the battlefield and the First Prince is dragged out of the cockpit and into captivity by the DCMS. Quickly removed from Royal - where the AFFS are fighting savagely to try to rescue him, Joseph is placed ISF custody and after a quick and dirty process of drugs and brainwashing, forced to sign a confession to 'usurping' the throne that belongs to his nephew Vincent... who is also nephew to Coordinator Takiro Kurita.

Aware that the tensions inside the Star League's leadership are about to come to a head, Takiro orders the DCMS back into the Combine and declares the war won now that the 'usurper' has been removed. He presents the documentation to the Star League Council and again champions Vincent's claim as First Prince. With Liao and Marik scheming on one hand and the recent discovery that Commanding General Ikolor Fredasa of the SLDF was planning a coup, Jonathon Cameron offers Takiro a bargain: the DCMS forces engaged in the fighting are clearly evidence the Combine has broken the restrictions on House military forces. In exchange for a massive transfer of personnel and equipment to the SLDF as auxiliaries to be deployed into the Free Worlds League to halt the civil war between Oliver and Elise Marik... Jonathon would recognise Vincent Davion as the rightful First Prince.

Joseph's son Richard had to be physically removed from the Council Chamber and was detained on Terra for the rest of his life. Joseph Davion vanished into ISF confinement and was never seen again. His younger son, Leonard, had died in the war and his young son John was smuggled out of the Federated Suns barely ahead of SLDF-backed agents of Vincent (Kurita-)Davion and took refuge in first the Lyran Commonwealth and then, when ISF agents came too close, in the Rim Worlds Republic. (John Davion would ultimately become a senior officer in the service of Stefan Amaris, beguiled by promises of rectifying the great wrong done to his family.)

Although the Federated Suns hovered on the brink of an uprising against Vincent, the exhaustion of the AFFS after their many failures against the DCMS left no doubt of the uprising if matters came to a military head. Vincent, for his part, used careful diplomacy to make it clear he saw himself as a friend and cousin to Takiro but not his pawn. Beneficial trade agreements with the Combine led to an economic upswing within both realms and if many senior officers within the AFFS were removed in favour of Vincent's loyalists, this at least broke many of the traditions that had almost crippled their military potential for decades.

By the middle of the 28th century, the Federated Suns was mostly won over to their dynamic new Prince (and for those who weren't, the appointment of a trusted Warlord over each of the five Marches ensured tight military control over any problem areas). Vincent's children were carefully married back into distant branches of House Davion to ensure rival lines didn't arise and across the border Takiro delegated increasing power to his son Minoru (who he deemed to be Prince of Luthien, just as Vincent was his Prince of New Avalon).

And then Simon Cameron died, leaving a power vaccum and the Davion-Kurita alliance as the key political alliance in the Star League Council...
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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 25 January 2015, 12:43:22
Tribble #183  Hmm.... The possible fanfic stories!
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 25 January 2015, 14:07:34
I wonder how this one would change history.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 28 January 2015, 17:12:25
Tribble #184

It is Terra, a few days before Hanse Davion is due to be married.

Romano Liao in a fit of typical insanity orders her Cultists to attack Quintus Allard, as in the OTL.
As in the OTL, Justin Allard saves his Fathers and Brothers lives without them knowing.
And as in the OTL, Justin storms in on Romano naked and furiously berates her actions as Max wanders in, telling her exactly what ComStar would do to the Confederation if it found out they were behind the attack and didn't just suspect them as the prime targets.

Unfortunately for Mad Max, this is ROMs home turf and his counterintelligence team has missed a couple of rather esoteric listening devices built into the room. Jumping ahead to Myndo doing her sneering 'polite' questioning of the Primus about the attack and sharply questioning if he is so incapable that he can't even provide security at Hilton Head for guests from across the Inner Sphere, or find out who was behind this security breach, then what good is he?

At which point Precentor ROM arrives with news that he knows who is behind the attack, playing the recording. Myndo is not happy with this as her demands that the Primus do something about this only minutes ago now force his hand in terms of punishing the last state she wants to punish given the balance of power. But the First Circuit as a whole disagrees and votes to inform all parties involved that in 24 hours an Interdiction will be pronounced for a period of three Months of the Capellan Confederation as of the end of the Wedding.

For some reason, Hanse Davion seems to be trying to fight a wild grin on his face at this news, everyone puts it down to pre wedding jitters. Mad Max loudly proclaims he is being set up by The Fox and storms off Terra heading home before the wedding, which some people think ruins the punch line of Hanses wedding toast to his Wife...
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Post by: nerd on 28 January 2015, 20:26:35
It's quite simple.

The Capellan Confederation falls to the Federated Suns in that case.  IIRC, one of the reasons ComStar doesn't interdict them is because it would change the balance of power game they are trying to play.
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Post by: Vehrec on 29 January 2015, 00:30:19
Presumably, the Interdiction is cancelled following a few choice resignations and reshuffling of various staff.

This does make the first few weeks easier though.
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Post by: consequences on 29 January 2015, 00:56:34
It's quite simple.

The Capellan Confederation falls to the Federated Suns in that case.  IIRC, one of the reasons ComStar doesn't interdict them is because it would change the balance of power game they are trying to play.

Presumably, the Interdiction is cancelled following a few choice resignations and reshuffling of various staff.

This does make the first few weeks easier though.

Three months would normally be not more than enough time for maybe a dozen worlds to be shaved off, and the expectation would be that Comstar could weight things to suck the attackers in too deep so they could be cut off at the knees further down the line. If they looked to be doing a little too well, then 'Free Traders' might surreptitiously bring word to nodal command centers so as to catch the attackers by surprise.

The problem here is that C* publicly delivered the slap on the wrist, in front of everyone. Going back on it just because someone is losing the war would take the all too thin pretense of C* neutrality out back and shoot it, put it through a woodchipper, inter it on an Indian burial ground, and enact a fell ritual to cause the resulting revenant  to start attacking teenagers at Crystal Lake while painted purple and shouting Comstar Neutrality's a <Bleeping> Joke at the top of its decaying lungs. The most they can do is step up plans to interdict the FS, but staging such a supposed atrocity requires care and consideration if you don't want it to backfire in your face.

On the practical side, considering Max's issues, this is likely going to have to be a somewhat 'Hard' Interdict, lest he succumb to the urgings of his good dear friend Emperor Purple Walrus-Penguin to show them all by seizing the hpgs and starting his own interstellar communications service with blackjack and hookers. With that consideration in mind, and him and his people being in transit, it will likely take him some time to even learn his nation is under attack.

The primary immediate result is that the second wave gets nearly as much of a surprise advantage as the first, the primary likely effect of that being Tikonov falling more easily, with a distinct possibility of Ridzik getting captured or killed on the ground. Following that, Riposte is almost certainly not going to happen till later if at all, the coordination necessary and necessary intel to sell the attacks being put together while under Interdict are thoroughly implausible. Secondary considerations include the likelihood of units jumping ship, and the difficulty of coordinating the Highlander defection.


Honestly, if I were Hanse, I would with, heroic effort and possible resulting internal organ rupture, not announce the attack to everyone. Or keep it to 'border world that in theory a frag order to take could already have gone out to nearby units' to provide his wife with somewhere appropriate for a small winter estate. To keep the mad urge to troll fed, I would probably pick Warlock, and have a fake attack go in to muddy the issue further.

The temptation for a Hanse who isn't me would be to overextend and get overly cute.  Making the 'every unit that can move on the border go to a world that doesn't have any federal defenders' play is almost irresistible, but going beyond that might very well be a mistake. But even with the added ease and snatching up of low lying fruit, there would still be a Cap Con at the end, just one that was even more trimmed down than in OTL.
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Post by: drakensis on 30 January 2015, 03:44:16
What this might spur is Michael Hasek-Davion realising there's no hope of getting anything useful from Max so it's time to cut his losses and unleash his regiments to seize low-hanging fruit from the Sian, Capellan and St Ives Commonalities while Hanse crushes Tikonov and Sarna.
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 30 January 2015, 04:25:49
Given the level of mental stability in the Liao line of the time, I wouldn't rule out either Max or Romano attempting some form of retaliation against Comstar. Seizing HPGs seems like a likely possibility, although I also see quite a few options depending on how far up or down the ladder of cosmic stupidity an author wanted to place the Liaos on the 3020s.
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Post by: consequences on 30 January 2015, 12:39:50
What this might spur is Michael Hasek-Davion realising there's no hope of getting anything useful from Max so it's time to cut his losses and unleash his regiments to seize low-hanging fruit from the Sian, Capellan and St Ives Commonalities while Hanse crushes Tikonov and Sarna.

Michael's first problem is that he's got all of five regular units and three march militias that are inclined to follow his orders without question. Everyone else is likely to send a message to New Avalon requesting confirmation while they take their time theoretically getting ready to obey his orders as March Lord. His second problem is that taking immediate advantage would require derailing his own plans, when his expectation would be that the AFFS is going to be tied up in Galahad 28 and not really able to reorient in time to do much more than picking off a world or two. His third problem is his ego, which will likely throw a fit at the idea  trailing after Hanse and picking up his leavings after his gift to his bride. His fourth problem is simple jumpship availability, after everything that has already been swept up, the ships available to support major offensives are unlikely to be available.

Coming from Comstar's side, I would just give up on the Cap Con as a going concern, and encourage the FWL and its provinces to sweep up what it could with an eye to benefiting Thomas and therefore C* when he eventually takes the throne. Use the conquered Cap Con as a source of unrest, revolutionary movements, and an excuse for terrorists blowing up pretty much anything you feel like(why hello thar lost capellan nuke blowing up NAIS), grant the Liao of your choice sanctuary after they 'request' it to hedge against future possibilities, and make sure that multiple copies of capellan shipping schedules fall into the laps of ambitious FWLM and merc commanders to deny the FS the advantage of making a clean sweep of the CC's jumpship fleet after Alex Mallory casually strolls into the Sian HPG compound with a download of all of the Maskirovka's files, and uses their billing codes to send it express to New Avalon.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 30 January 2015, 17:07:20
Beyond that, the quickest response Mad Max would have to try and mitigate Michael's betraying him would be to find a way to rapidly leak to the entire Federated Suns media the complete files showing that Michael has been betraying the Federated Suns for a long time. Hope that the very public outage will cause a little civil war to break out that might distract the AFFC from swallowing the hell out of the Capellan Confederation.

Or ComStar leaking the same.
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Post by: Zureal on 30 January 2015, 17:40:37
are you people seriously that deprived of BT history?  ???  Hans had planed that by the time he made his big announcment that his units would already be attacking capcon planets. It was all pre planned and nothing needs to be replaned or anything. If anything the plans would simply be moved up. the Capcon would survive but even smaller than in OTL. maby losing half again as many worlds as in the otl.
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Post by: consequences on 30 January 2015, 18:42:13
Beyond that, the quickest response Mad Max would have to try and mitigate Michael's betraying him would be to find a way to rapidly leak to the entire Federated Suns media the complete files showing that Michael has been betraying the Federated Suns for a long time. Hope that the very public outage will cause a little civil war to break out that might distract the AFFC from swallowing the hell out of the Capellan Confederation.

Or ComStar leaking the same.

This is one of those things that never made sense about the whole deal.  What the heck is Michael going to get out of treating with the only major enemy on his borders that couldn't be better achieved by competently managing his military and slicing off worlds to either add to his own holdings or award to secure the loyalty of officers, zillionaires, and other nobles for his scheming against Hanse? What's his insurance policy for Max narcing him out? Speaking of which:

Tribble #185

Michael Hasek-Davion isn't actually a moron

The year is 3013, and Hanse Davion has just ascended the throne after the untimely death of his brother in battle. Upon ascension, he immediately receives a heartfelt private request from his not well thought of inlaw, begging to be allowed to resign from his Ministry postings in order to concentrate on putting his sadly neglected March back in order, with reams of attached evidence of his father's neglect and cronyism being the primary culprit that he was unable to properly address. Nothing of note at all happens on Emerson that year.

Things seem to progress according to original timeline until 3022, when Maximillian Liao and his escort tragically fall down a transit shaft onto some ppc blasts during a secret diplomatic visit to Lee. His retaliatory post-mortem assassination attempts are foiled right out of the gate by the defenses of an old hand at intelligence operations, and while his children swear to take vengeance in his name, they promptly fall to squabbling amongst themselves, with Romano and Candace promptly turning on each other, and alienating Tormano with their attempts to use him to gain ground against the other. In the meantime the units personally loyal to Michael  sweep up Foot Fall, Foochow, Menkar, Ares, Nashuar, Armaxa, Yuris, and Mitchel, after which Michael invites Hanse to use his forces to take further worlds(and all of the losses) to continue the campaign.

Archibald McCarron, having recently started his campaign, looks at his situation, the primary contenders for the throne and additional schemers such as Ridzik, immediately grabs all of the jumpships that had been positioned to support his Long March, raids a FS world on his way out for provisions, and presents himself to the Draconis Combine to seek employment. The Northwind Highlanders promptly make a gift of the three worlds they were garrisoning and the two battalions of Liao regulars stationed alongside them to the Federated Suns in return for their ancestral home. Janos, being an economically minded man, concentrates his efforts on taking and fortifying Sirius, Betelgeuse, and Styk, to allow the warring siblings to properly destroy each other without the pesky prospect of being able to rebuild distracting them.


Why yes, February  is Beat Up On Liao month to follow Victor Fanboy month, why do you ask? O:-)


are you people seriously that deprived of BT history?  ???  Hans had planed that by the time he made his big announcment that his units would already be attacking capcon planets. It was all pre planned and nothing needs to be replaned or anything. If anything the plans would simply be moved up. the Capcon would survive but even smaller than in OTL. maby losing half again as many worlds as in the otl.

Your own question right back at you. Have you ever made a study of the unengaged units, viable targets, logistical constraints, unit loyalties, and assorted personality quirks and defects that would define the probable courses of action and reaction of all of the active actors of the 4th SW? If so, why on Terra would you suggest that no one would do anything differently in response to an Interdiction, and what feats of outright wizardry do you think are going to cause the Fed Suns to manage to take another fifty worlds from what's left when they got forty of the worlds they did from outright defections?
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 31 January 2015, 03:30:22
This is one of those things that never made sense about the whole deal.  What the heck is Michael going to get out of treating with the only major enemy on his borders that couldn't be better achieved by competently managing his military and slicing off worlds to either add to his own holdings or award to secure the loyalty of officers, zillionaires, and other nobles for his scheming against Hanse? What's his insurance policy for Max narcing him out?


I never got that either. I mean if it comes out that Max was trying to subvert Michael, everyone would just shrug and say 'Well thats his job...'. If it comes out that Michael was selling out the Federated Suns trying to commit treason against the First Prince, while his loyal officers MIGHT stand by him, you'd think the vast bulk of the military nominally loyal to him personally would be infuriated with him selling them out to the nation they have been fighting against and have been trained to hate like Drac Marchers hate Kurita.

So exactly what does he have to threaten Max with to ensure this doesn't happen? If he ever balks at a course of action, Max simply has to sweetly point out to him 'Thats a very nice March you have ... be a real shame if its population got a data dump on you being so utterly in bed with me... ' and watch the man bark, beg, roll over and play dead on command.

In fact, you can make a Tribble out of that.

Tribble #186

Somehow, Hanse is either killed or offed or otherwise deposed by Michael. Perhaps the Man in the Iron Mask plan worked, with Ardan not able to stop it, but Micahel uses it cunningly for his own purposes; 'exposing' the imposter and finding his 'beloved brothers' dead body on Argyle. Publicly grieving and vowing the most terrible retribution against the Liao for his cowardice against the greatest Prince the Federated Suns had since Alexander Davion...

Max of course just smirks and gestures to his intelligence agents ... and the full file on Michael, every interaction, every plot (and fake files fully implicating Michael by tying his leaking on Stein's Folly directly into the plan to replace Hanse, which should be perfectly believable given how involved Michael was with Stein's Folly and trying to kill two crack AFFC units) is leaked to the Federated Suns press across the entire realm.

This of course sets off a little civil war. Katrina Steiner kills the entire Federated Commonwealth treaty as a result - although she leaves the door open for the economic and other cooperation that has been steadily building between the two realms, just suspended for the current crisis time period- and now you have say Yvonne Davion leading a 'rebellion' against Michael, with the former expected to win, but still be a pretty significant fight.

Meanwhile, Takashi and Max calmly sit out the fight, except for having their intelligence agents (and ComStar helping of course) try to incite more units into the civil war. Until finally the war ends around 3027 or so with Michael deposed ... and now, the Concord of Kapteyn know their time has arrived, the FWL attacking the Lyrans in a broad offensive (much like the LCAF did to the DCMS in the OTL) while the Capellans and Kuritans cross the border in full strength....
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Post by: Zureal on 31 January 2015, 11:16:20
# 186  ouch, yea, that would suck for Davion  #P
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Post by: drakensis on 04 February 2015, 17:47:46
Tribble #187

When the Gray Death Legion found the Helm Memory Core they unlocked the basic principles of Star League technology - but not the details. As a result, what the Inner Sphere developed wasn't always the same or even roughly comparable to the technology the Star League had fielded.

By the 3050s the Lyrans were fielding Light Fusion Engines (but not Extra-Lights) and Hardened Armor (but not Ferro-Fibrous). Their allies in the Davion half of the Federated Suns had no LB-X or Ultra autocannon but were loading their existing autocannon with many different specialist rounds or fitting rotary autocannon. The DCMS hadn't managed to create ER PPCS yet but as by-products had managed to bring the Light and Heavy PPCs into production. Romano Liao's driven scientists hadn't managed to replicate Star League Narc technology but the iNarc and iC3 were enough to keep most of them alive. In the Free Worlds League, Medium Range Missiles were widely deployed and the first Multi-Missile Launchers were just coming into use.

Jaime Wolf wasn't sure what the Inner Sphere would make of the actual Star League technologies, but watching ComStar froth was always amusing and if the Invasion really was coming, he was almost looking forward to seeing some jaws dropping...


(This would probably end up as more of a design challenge than a story but Victor would probably be better off fitting a RAC/5 to his Victor and so forth...)
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Post by: Vehrec on 05 February 2015, 10:09:14
RE: 187.  Oddly, I'm doing something very similar right now with my Tropico-in-Battletech game.  Certain 'obvious' technologies like fragmentation missiles, flecchette rounds, and primitive mechs and vehicles are appearing in that game, and RACs and MRMs are definitely going to appear earlier than in the mainline universe.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 05 February 2015, 16:26:37
Important question for 187: has anyone figured out double heat sinks?
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Post by: drakensis on 05 February 2015, 17:12:14
Important question for 187: has anyone figured out double heat sinks?

In keeping with the themes, I'd say not classic DHS. They might have coolant pods, or perhaps it's just the Inner Sphere came up with Laser Heatsinks instead of the more incrementally improved Clan DHS.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 05 February 2015, 17:17:01
Or perhaps that they never lost Double-Strength heat sink technology, or the Helm Core let them reconstruct the project again based on what data they had recovered. So single slot heat sinks that work twice as well. But for balance, unlike DHS, you don't get an extra 10HS worth of cooling in the engine because those heat sinks have to stay as classic SHS for technobabble compatibility reasons? And half an average standard workload of 5 years or so before they'll need to be replaced?
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 05 February 2015, 18:35:42
Bah.  Coolant Pods and Radical Heat Sinks.  No doubles.

I'm thinking we need a design thread.
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Post by: drakensis on 06 February 2015, 05:03:57
Bah.  Coolant Pods and Radical Heat Sinks.  No doubles.

I'm thinking we need a design thread.

Sounds like a plan.

To summarise the differences between SL tech and this tech level, the inner sphere technologies are replaced as follows:
LB-X Autocannons > Light Autocannon & Specialist Autocannon Ammo
Ultra Autocannon > Rotary Autocannon
Gauss Rifle > Light & Heavy Gauss Rifles
Extended Range Laser >  Binary Laser Cannon
Pulse Laser > Plasma Rifle
Extended Range PPC > Light & Heavy PPCs
Artemis targeting > Enhanced and Extended LRMs
Arrow IV Artillery > Thunderbolt Launchers
Streak Missiles > Multi-Missile Launchers, MRMs and Rocket Launchers
NARC, Guardian ECM, Beagle Active Probe & TAG > iNarc and iC3
Extra-Light Fusion > Light Fusion
EndoSteel > Composite & Endo-Composite Structure
FerroFibrous Armour > Laser Reflective Armor and Hardened Armor
MASC > Triple-Strength Myomers
Double Heatsinks > Coolant Pods & Radical Heatsinks

There should probably be some divide but between which Houses have which technology.
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 06 February 2015, 06:50:15
At least at the start. Before the technologies spread. I think we can mostly follow canon in that:
Davions:
Light AC's
rotary AC's
specialized ammo
composite structure
TSM
hardened armor

Lyrans
Heavy Gauss
binary lasers
Endo-composite
Light Fusion
Laser reflective armor
Thunderbolt

Capellans
Plasma rifle
iNarc
iC3(possibly jointly developed with the Kuritans, they introduced it in canon after all, possibly as one of the few successes of the Kapteyn pact)

FWL
MRM (possibly jointly developed with the Kuritans, also as part of the Kapteyn)
Light gauss
MML

Kuritans
Light PPC
Heavy PPC
coolant pods

PEriphery
rocket launchers
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 February 2015, 02:57:45
Not quite how I'd divide them up but not far off either.

I've posted a Design Thread (http://bg.battletech.com/forums/battlemechs/nutech-3050/) for anyone wanting to post designs for this tribble.
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 08 February 2015, 06:42:08
Tribble # 188 - Nightmare of the Folly

Hanse Davion looked straight at Quintus Allard, his eyes occasionally flickering to his recently exposed Doppleganger who was currently chained to a chair and looking utterly exhausted. Quintus was currently doing an excellent C Montogomery Burns impression, Ardan Sortek meanwhile lent against a wall wearing a smirk that promised chaos in the style of a blonde haired ninja from a manga Hanse read on occasion.

"Let me get this straight, you two, in your infinite wisdom, instead of going through and trying to break all of mad Max's programming decided to put him through every test that the NAIS and Albion have to compare him to my skill levels?"

Ardan and Quintus nodded.

"And he came out roughly equal to me in all areas".

Again, they nodded.

"And now you want to steal the scientists and technicians responsible to see if they can repeat it?"

Another nod.

"Why?" Hanse was thoroughly confused by this point.

"Let us put it this way Hanse" Ardan started "Imagine Max's reaction to 300 Hanse Davion doppelgangers invading Sian. Or to us staffing the Fox's Dens with clones of you."

"It would take a lot of pressure off the boys down at the Fox's Den" Quintus added.

The whole premise of this one, Hanse decides (after much cajoling) to use Doppelganger to produce multiple clones/body doubles of himself after realizing that if they can match him in most areas, that using them in those roles may well be beneficial.
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Post by: consequences on 08 February 2015, 10:09:13
Tribble # 188 - Nightmare of the Folly

Hanse Davion looked straight at Quintus Allard, his eyes occasionally flickering to his recently exposed Doppleganger who was currently chained to a chair and looking utterly exhausted. Quintus was currently doing an excellent C Montogomery Burns impression, Ardan Sortek meanwhile lent against a wall wearing a smirk that promised chaos in the style of a blonde haired ninja from a manga Hanse read on occasion.

"Let me get this straight, you two, in your infinite wisdom, instead of going through and trying to break all of mad Max's programming decided to put him through every test that the NAIS and Albion have to compare him to my skill levels?"

Ardan and Quintus nodded.

"And he came out roughly equal to me in all areas".

Again, they nodded.

"And now you want to steal the scientists and technicians responsible to see if they can repeat it?"

Another nod.

"Why?" Hanse was thoroughly confused by this point.

"Let us put it this way Hanse" Ardan started "Imagine Max's reaction to 300 Hanse Davion doppelgangers invading Sian. Or to us staffing the Fox's Dens with clones of you."

"It would take a lot of pressure off the boys down at the Fox's Den" Quintus added.

The whole premise of this one, Hanse decides (after much cajoling) to use Doppelganger to produce multiple clones/body doubles of himself after realizing that if they can match him in most areas, that using them in those roles may well be beneficial.

Me and my evil twin give four thumbs up. There would have to be a lot of work to keep it within the ethical constraints of the people who would be troubled by such things, which may or may not include Hanse depending on your interpretation of his character, but at the very least leaving the capability to make a Hanse dupe solely in the hands of Max frikking Liao is thoroughly unacceptable.


Considering the number of Davions under every rock and up in every tree, making a clone in the first place probably makes more sense than snatching a Davion of close enough relationship to pass a simple comparison test even if you to thoroughly corrupt the archives and breaking him to the point he thinks he's Hanse. Maybe not as simple as preparing a honey trap to gather the needed dna the old fasioned way to grow your own Davion the slow route for alteration, but if you go that way there's potential timeline issues.

I know when I was running implausible games and letting players have their implausible mary-sues run wild  I tried to make more use of Faux-Hanse than just making a vid before falling out of existence. If he can be trusted the benefit just from easing Hanse's PR and baby-kissing workload alone is incalculable for a head of state 
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Post by: Arvanna on 08 February 2015, 21:05:40
For Max I imagine it would be like what Kirk imagined Hell would be like in one of the OST novels, nothing but endless phalanxes of Harcourt Fenton Mudds as far as the eye could see, cept this being Hanses  >:D
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Post by: drakensis on 24 February 2015, 17:55:52
Tribble #189

In 2786 Jerome Blake met with Archon Jennifer Steiner, proposing that ComStar facilities be deemed neutral ground and that the C-Bill be recognised as legal currency in the Lyran Commonwealth. The Archon replied that she would agree as long as the other House Lords agreed to the same. Blake immediately offered her his assurances that all the other Houses had already agreed.

Fully aware via Loki agents that she was in fact the first House Lord approached, Jennifer Steiner sent out couriers to every key world in the Commonwealth by jumpship along the still bustling trade routes while on Tharkad she quibbled for weeks over minor details. When the final document was presented, Blake signed... and Jennifer Steiner laughed in his face, revealing his lie and refusing to recognise ComStar at all. Across the Commonwealth commandos stormed into scores of unsuspecting HPG stations, securing these strategic assets.

Blake himself was allowed to return to Terra, humiliated and facing a First Circuit who argued - cogently - that his grand gamble had failed. Within a year - for the second time in a decade - Terra faced invasion. While some of ComStar had defected to their home nations - all the Great Houses had immediately seized control of their respective HPG networks - Blake still had the authority, the money and the support of eight full Division of ex-SLDF soldiers - a far stronger defense than Kenyon Marik had anticipated. Not enough to prevent the FWLM from securing a bridgehead but enough to contain it.

And Terra was too grand a prize for any of the other Houses to permit Marik sole access...

The First Succession War (2786-2820) was apocalyptic enough and could be blamed on any of the House Lords. The Second Succession War (2832-2864) must be blamed on the aggressions of Jinjiro Kurita. Both wars were fought on hundreds of worlds but Terra was never uncontested at any point between 2787 and the final withdrawal of the DCMS in 2819, leaving the homeworld under the rule of House Liao.

First Prince Michael Davion secured the key treaties ending the Succession Wars in 2820 but rather than leading to a new Star League, it led to a guarded truce with all Houses busy rebuilding. The truces held for more than two decades and ended not in general war once more but in limited conflicts over border worlds, no Great House willing to endanger still fragile rebuilding. Brush war followed brush war but by the second half of the century, the Inner Sphere had access to levels of technology not far off those they'd possessed during the Star League and in 2862, on the 450th anniversary of their first being signed, the Ares Conventions were formally reinstated by the five Successor States, along with every periphery state of note with the exception of the Taurians.

Almost a century and a half later, five regiments of mercenaries appeared out of the Periphery, expecting to find the Inner Sphere torn by constant warfare and deprivation. What they found were five robust states with advanced military technology that the Clans - whose scientists had focused largely on genetic work since the completion of the various SLDF projects brought with them on the Exodus - would be hard-pressed to match...
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Post by: Takiro on 24 February 2015, 21:18:45
Very interesting and plausible alternate set in 3005 I would guess.

Terra would likely be a world like any other which suffered during the Amaris Coup and was never rebuilt by ComStar. Than it gets fought over during the early Succession Wars. Anything of value would be carried away. The world would be strategically valuable for its location and symbolically important as the seat of the old Star League.

Warships would never completely disappear. The Houses would have fleets.

The Successor States would not focus on weapons tech like the Clans. They did not go off the SLDF path and continued to improve existing tech as much as possible. The InnerSphere might have 3060s tech which makes them anything but a push over.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 24 February 2015, 22:24:58
Tribble #189

Almost a century and a half later, five regiments of mercenaries appeared out of the Periphery, expecting to find the Inner Sphere torn by constant warfare and deprivation. What they found were five robust states with advanced military technology that the Clans - whose scientists had focused largely on genetic work since the completion of the various SLDF projects brought with them on the Exodus - would be hard-pressed to match...

It would be very curious to see what the Clans reactions would be.

At this point, even most hardcore Crusader would probably realize that they are hopelessly outmatched and that the Inner Sphere has reached a level of nominal stability ... but it clearly has no wish to recreate the Star League. At all.

So ... what the hell do the Clans DO given that they've defined their entire purpose, Warden or Crusader, around re-creating the Star League / serving a reborn Star League?
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 24 February 2015, 22:43:05
Build up more. Still invade. Set about the goal of liberating Terra and recreating the Terran Hegemony.  Reestablishing a new Star League would then fall behind that in importance.

Expect a plan that sets up supply chains through uninhabited systems, and to strike directly at old Hegemony worlds.  Upgrading local manufacturing in the old Hegemony and recovery of old relics like the Ruins of Gabriel also become paramount.

Go back a bit further, though, and ask what happened to the Wolverine remnants that appear to have joined up with ComStar?
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Post by: drakensis on 25 February 2015, 03:51:03
Good point about the Minnesota Tribe. They wouldn't have encountered advanced technology, arriving in 2825.

It's uncertain what they'd have done without ComStar's intervention. Probably either found themselves a few periphery worlds to colonise or thrown in with one of the existing states. A state somewhat like the Marian Hegemony - carrying out pirate raids for key resources they lack and trying to build up to self-sufficiency and security - in the Outland Wastes perhaps?

I'd incline towards technology by 3005 in the Inner Sphere being more advanced than that of the Clans. Not just in military terms, although that would be what panics the Clans. For example, rather than depend on single large HPG stations that are strategic targets, the major states have switched to smaller repeater stations with several per world and frequently with hidden stations in foreign space to support intelligence operations.

(On military terms I'd see things have settled towards something like the same range available in canonical 3005, but much more advanced. The standard military fusion reactor would be extra-light but no larger than a standard fusion engine, double strength heatsinks only taking up one critical, all lasers have Extended Range but are also pulse. In short, not orders of magnitude better but uncompromisingly better than what the Clans are working with - just as Clantech was clearly better than SL technology).

Politics would also be different. Some of the faces would be different - some leaders who died in battle would have survived and had heirs of their own. For example, Janos Marik is descended from Thaddeus Marik II and his mother Iris - but both of them succeeded elder siblings who died in battle, so it'd be easy for Janos to be a second or third cousin to the senior Marik line rather than Captain-General. Without constant pressure on both flanks, the Capellan Confederation may not be so weakened.
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 25 February 2015, 04:27:07
Without Comstar to render interstellar communications neutral, how many HPGs would survive? I suspect you'd also see a fair bit more fragmentation outside of primary communications routes.

Unless each House unlocked the secrets of the HPG, they may end up with 3060s weapons tech, but 2500s communications via jumpship and Black Box. So the Inner Sphere would react slower, but would be more dangerous on a regimental level, which would give one hell of an advantage to some of the less rulebound and more flexible clans like the Wolves and Diamond Sharks if they are willing to mass sufficient forces to overrun their opponents with minimal losses and bring forward Clan HPGs quickly if few HPGs survive.

I must admit I would love to see what the Taurians or the Canopians got up to in that sort of scenario, particularly if they started manufacturing jumpships and warships again. It could well be like the Clans running into the Inner Sphere just prior to the Reunification War without the Terran Hegemony, more capable military technology and crap communications.
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 25 February 2015, 05:18:47
Tribble #190 - The old ways are better than your ideas. Much smarter too.

When Nicholas Kerensky formed fled the Pentagon Worlds and went to Strana Mechty to form the Clans, with him went a number of former SLDF soldiers and commanders in addition to individuals who were raised from children among the SLDF and Exodus fleets, and civilians.

Most of those who went on to form the Clans were young, inexperienced. They had been trained to be Mechwarriors and Pilots yes, but they hadn't been trained in the arts of logistics, strategy, and command. However Nicholas also had a core of those who were old enough to have been trained to command, to truly lead, by the SLDF, by his father.

Rather stupidly he split these two groups up. Clans such as the Star Adders, Hells Horse, Snow Ravens, and Goliath Scorpions were led by experienced commanders who knew war, who knew their specialities, and who knew how to plan. Others like the Smoke Jaguars, Widowmakers, were left with impulsive young idiots who knew how to use a rifle or a particle cannon, but had no comprehension of how much effort others spent putting them and their weapons into the field.

When Nicholas and Dana Kufahl implemented the rules of engagement for the Clans, the younger generations embraced them as a way to reduce the horrors they had witnessed on the Pentagon Worlds.

The older generation laughed their asses off and planned how to take advantage of Nicholas Kerensky's idealism.

The result was the effective splitting of the Clans into two subgroups, one set featured a number of specialties, understood teamwork and the value of logistics and forward planning. They also understood the need for basic necessities.

The other understood glory and idealism. The rest they made up as they went.

It didn't help that several of the Khans (Elam, Truscott, Hazen, McKenna) viewed Clan rules of engagement as a joke. They remembered the battles for the Hegemony. They remembered the efforts to build the Pentagon. They knew that Nicholas and Danas delusions didn't work in the real world.

Truscott manipulated the plans to invade the Pentagon. Those who grasped at Nicholas vision the strongest were grouped together and sent forward together. They suffered massive casualties liberating Arcadia, Babylon and Circe.

The Clans with experienced leadership dropped onto Dagda and Eden. Khan McKenna led their combined warship and aerospace forces forward to near effortless victory in the space lanes and struck fear from the skies. Khan Truscott acted as commander on the ground and guided logistics to keep the Clans in the field well supplied. Khan Drummond handled intelligence and provided up to date information on the enemies movements. Khan Elam demolished the enemies fortifications. Khan Cage acted as the Clans Hammer, Khan Fletcher as the anvil. Khan Hazen stalked the enemy in the field, while Khan Khatib watched over the defences, the medics and the soul of their troops.

Unsurprisingly their casualties were few. Their victories surprisingly quick, resistance post conquest almost nil.



Now I'm torn how this would go from this point. One option would be a further sundering between Clans led by experienced commanders, and those led by . . .  well lets be frank, inexperienced idiots who haven't learnt to share. Quite possibly leading to a 40 versus 60 war between the two groups.

The second, and arguably my inspiration for writing this Tribble, is the imagery of one of the older Khans providing a very obvious and embarrassing lesson in the flaws in Clan traditions, say in the following manner.


'To answer Khan Osis's complaints regarding the superior performance of our Clans in the field, to demonstrate the exact reason I call for a Trial of Possession against Clan Smoke Jaguar for the right to wear clothing in the Grand Council Chamber!' called the elderly Khan Hazen who had a massive grin on her face as the younger Khans and ilKhan walked right into the trap.

'I choose Unaugmented Combat, when and where will we fight you elderly old Chicken' bellowed Khan Osis who was frothing, literally frothing, in rage.

'Here and now suits me fine', Khan Hazen replied as she levered herself up from the Grand Council bench and walked down the steps to the clear area at the center of the chamber. Osis little leaping over the bench rails, and coincidentally splatting three Khans with the spittle froth around his mouth.

The fight lasted about as long as you would expect when it involved a relatively young man, and a woman who rightfully would have qualified for a Star League pension.

Khan Osis levelled an incredibly strong punch at Khan Hazens head.

Khan Hazen leaned out of the way of the punch and kicked him, hard, in the balls.

As Khan Osis collapsed wheezing to the floor, Khan Truscot stood 'And that Khan Kerensky is the flaw in this system, it encourages conflict between parties over pathetically minor matters, discourages teamwork, and encourages the promotion of muscle bound glory hounds into leadership positions they are ill equipped and ill prepared for'.
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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 25 February 2015, 09:57:36
 ;D  Tribble #190 is funny and interesting
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Post by: drakensis on 25 February 2015, 15:51:38
Without Comstar to render interstellar communications neutral, how many HPGs would survive? I suspect you'd also see a fair bit more fragmentation outside of primary communications routes.

Unless each House unlocked the secrets of the HPG, they may end up with 3060s weapons tech, but 2500s communications via jumpship and Black Box. So the Inner Sphere would react slower, but would be more dangerous on a regimental level, which would give one hell of an advantage to some of the less rulebound and more flexible clans like the Wolves and Diamond Sharks if they are willing to mass sufficient forces to overrun their opponents with minimal losses and bring forward Clan HPGs quickly if few HPGs survive.
While border HPGs would probably be destroyed, the Successor States would have access to dozens of interior HPGs to study to get to grips with the technology. Given a couple of centuries, I can't see them not managing to duplicate or even improve on the technology. They might even weaponise them.

I must admit I would love to see what the Taurians or the Canopians got up to in that sort of scenario, particularly if they started manufacturing jumpships and warships again. It could well be like the Clans running into the Inner Sphere just prior to the Reunification War without the Terran Hegemony, more capable military technology and crap communications.
With the Inner Sphere rebuilding and not raiding the Periphery for equipment they can't build themselves, the major periphery states would probably be better off.

;D  Tribble #190 is funny and interesting
Agreed.
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Post by: drakensis on 01 March 2015, 07:47:33
Tribble #191

"It's true then?" Aleksandr Kerensky hadn't looked this burdened since the first days after the news of Amaris' coup.

"They're vain, self-centred and spiteful."

The Commanding General shook his head sadly. "It's happening again then."

"Yes sir. They're acting like cats."

"First Richard and now this. Who knows how deep the rot goes."

"What can we do?"

Kerensky studied the rain falling over the Pacific. "There's only one thing we can do, Aaron. We'll muster the SLDF and find new homeworlds out in the Periphery. I've discussed this contingency with Jerome Blake and he's agreed to remain behind and push them into turning upon each other."

"It seems such a drastic step."

Kerensky turned from the window. "Dammit, man! It's that or we're left welcoming our new feline overlords! Do you want that!?"
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 01 March 2015, 11:29:41
....what. ???
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Post by: RunandFindOut on 01 March 2015, 16:27:45
....what. ???
Clearly the master plans of the feline race are finally being implemented and he must take action to prevent their complete control of humanity.
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Post by: Chaeronea on 01 March 2015, 19:37:05
Or the catgirls of Canopus are making their move...
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 02 March 2015, 06:55:14
And my horrific thought for the day:

What would happen if Canopus got its hands on the Society's genetic viruses and weaponized their genetic modifications. Mmm plague that causes catgirls.

And I'm now going to see if I can get myself into an asylum.

Catgirl plague. *Shudders*
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Post by: serack on 02 March 2015, 14:05:22
why does no one ever talk about the catboy plague??? :D
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Post by: nerd on 09 March 2015, 16:22:10
why does no one ever talk about the catboy plague??? :D
Because we're smart enough to kill them on sight.

They don't have the "ZOMG CUTE!!!!!!!!111!!!1!!!!11" reaction that catgirls have in humanity.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 09 March 2015, 16:52:40
Tribble 191.

The Hound lives.

It is the height of the Third Battle of Mallory's World in 3013 and Ian is squaring off against Yorinaga Kurita as he tries to cover the 4ths retreat.
This time however the fates smile on him and a pure luck shot with his last AC-20 burst manages to squarely smack into Kuritas Warhammer and blow Yorinaga away.

The Sword of Light Battalion freeze for a moment at the shock loss of their CO and that gives just enough time for the Kell Hounds to jump into the fray and rock the Kuritans back on their feet, getting the Prince to finally pull back and rejoin his unit. The 2nd Sword pull off in disgrace for failing to kill the hated Davion Prince and concede the fight, and Ian heads back to New Avalon to boast to people about how awesome he is.

What does this do for the future of the Inner Sphere? Will Hanse forever live in his brothers shadow?

Will Ian after a few more years just say 'FU*K IT!' and abdicate in Hanse's favour when he sees he is simply a far better politican, perhaps being named Princes Champion, getting given a mixed unit task force and sent to have a merry old time smashing up Snakes and Lesser Snakes?

Will Hanse still develop a blistering hate for the Combine without his Brother dying and almost being dragged away as a trophy for Takashi?

Will Katrinas peace proposal find an interested party in Ian, or will he roll his eyes at the Steiners sillyness?

Will Michael still covert the Throne of the Federated Suns? Or will he remain somewhat content with his place and turn his full attention into starting to slice worlds from the Confederation one at a time?

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Post by: fitzgerald on 10 March 2015, 02:04:59
A scary thought:

Ian manages to develop Phantom Mech.

Then gets over the shock by going on an absolute wrecking spree against the DC
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Post by: Vehrec on 10 March 2015, 19:52:30
Tribble 191: Sid Meirer's Battletech.

Due to a freak hyperspace anomaly, several historical leaders have been transported to the capitals/leadership of various factions circa 3025.  While unquestionably great men and women of impecable leadership skill, everyone is leery of allowing such legends anywhere near real authority or responsibility.  Of course, with the Fourth Succession War approaching, they may not have a choice.

The breakdown of who gets what is:

Lyran Commonwealth: Otto von Bismark, Supreme Chancellor of the German Empire.
Draconis combine: Oda Nobunga, almost Shogun.
Wolfs Dragoons/the clans in general: Genghis Khan.
Federated Suns: Napoleon Bonaparte Emperor of France.
Cappellan Confederation: Wu Zetian, Empress of China.
Free World's League: Enrico Donaldo, Doge of Venice.
Comstar: Abraham Lincoln, 16th President of the United States.
Taurians: 'Nuke-m-all' Mohandas Gandhi.
Magistracy of Canopus: Theodora, Empress of Byzantium.
Outworlds Alliance: Maria Theresa, Empress of Austria.
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Post by: Sharpnel on 11 March 2015, 02:34:04
Interesting
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Post by: snakespinner on 12 March 2015, 01:20:33
Some interesting personalities.
Why did you choose Maria Theresa for the OA.
That seems a most unusual choice, but I imagine you have a very interesting reason for it. O0
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Post by: Vehrec on 12 March 2015, 08:19:44
To be honest, I wanted more women, but couldn't find a great match for the OA-it really doesn't have enough 'personality' as a nation other than 'used to be pacifist and now has a great aerospace arm'.  Maybe she would have been better suited to the FWL?  But that still leaves the problem of nobody really fitting in with the OA.  Similarly, I thought that the challenges facing Donaldo might be better tackled by Bismark, while Donaldo might better be able to exploit crushing economic superiority in Lyran space, but cultural afinity for Bismark trumped where his personal skill could best be played.  Napoleon in the Suns was deliberate however, as was Oda in the Combine.

Ghandi had to go with the Taurians though.  Nuke-lovers have to stick together.
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 12 March 2015, 15:32:57
To be honest, I wanted more women, but couldn't find a great match for the OA-it really doesn't have enough 'personality' as a nation other than 'used to be pacifist and now has a great aerospace arm'.  Maybe she would have been better suited to the FWL?  But that still leaves the problem of nobody really fitting in with the OA.  Similarly, I thought that the challenges facing Donaldo might be better tackled by Bismark, while Donaldo might better be able to exploit crushing economic superiority in Lyran space, but cultural afinity for Bismark trumped where his personal skill could best be played.  Napoleon in the Suns was deliberate however, as was Oda in the Combine.

Ghandi had to go with the Taurians though.  Nuke-lovers have to stick together.


Leonard Cheshire VC
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Post by: Vehrec on 12 March 2015, 20:51:56

Leonard Cheshire VC

Saddly, disqualified for never having lead a nation.   A fine fellow, but lacking the political chops to roll with Ghengis Khan or the man who made the German Empire.
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Post by: drakensis on 13 March 2015, 03:55:14
Does Maria Theresa have to deal with Frederick the Great as her unruly vassal in Skye?
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 13 March 2015, 04:15:42
Saddly, disqualified for never having lead a nation.   A fine fellow, but lacking the political chops to roll with Ghengis Khan or the man who made the German Empire.


My mistake, I misread Marie Theresa as Mother Theresa
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 13 March 2015, 05:10:33
There is always the option not to limit yourself to famous historian figures. I do like the thought of 'Precentor Martial Gandalf'.
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Post by: Vehrec on 13 March 2015, 08:22:40
There is always the option not to limit yourself to famous historian figures. I do like the thought of 'Precentor Martial Gandalf'.

If we go down that route we'll wind up with Khan Wolf Big Boss and WoB Primus Homura Akemi.  Do you want to open up the mod-civs if it means Primus Akemi keeps rolling back the timeline 30 years with her re-engineered Jumpship/Time Machine and doing it over until she gets it right?
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Post by: Vehrec on 25 March 2015, 09:40:33
Tribble 192:
October 12, 3050
Hilton Head, Terra.

The auditorium was a beadlam.  Senior Adepts from every station on Terra crowded it, staring, shouting, grabbing for markers and chalk, writing on blackboards, on whiteboards, on holoboards, writing, erasing, crossing out, underlining, shouting for more space, more room to draw figures, equations, and generally get their ideas heard.

Myndo Waterly looked around the room in fascination.  Nobody had noticed her arrival.  Everyone was focused on the front of the room where even now physicists were jockying for attention and space to make their thoughts clear.  A hard-copy printout was forced into her hands-she glanced down at the cover page, hastily knocked up in an ugly sans-serif font.  "A brief observation on the possibility of Closed Time-like Curves in Kearney-Fuchida Equations."  It was at least 300 pages.  She wasn't trained to deal with this-almost nobody was.  Actually grappling with the Kerney-fuchida equations was the end of most careers in physics.  She had only ever trained in how to use one very specific, very limited form of the general equation.  This wasn't the general equation, nor the specific solution in question.  It was... more complex, if anything.

One of the Adepts sideled up to her.  "Is there anything I can explain to you Primus?"  She shot him a look.  "You can explain to me what this noise is about.  What exactly, is the state of the discussion."  The young adept, a dark girl with neat cornrows under her ceremonial robe, sucked air and seemed to weight that for a moment.  "Right now?  We're trying to work out just how bad of a misjump it would be like to use an unmodified Jumpship as a time machine.  Before the paper gets out to the Houses and they do it first."

----

Hanse Davion put a hand down on the meaty tome.  "So.  Time travel is possible.  Has been for over 800 years and nobody notices?"

Doctor Banzai shrugged.  "This is a Very Special Case.  And I am given to understand that the scientist in question has been conducting research in isolation into the pure mathematics of the problem for over 30 years.  It looks like a blind alley unless you are very clever and very determined."  He tapped the file with a finger himself.  "Nobody noticed because if you simulate it in a computer the program crashes.  The models of standard KF-drive function don't allow for the universe to bifurcate retroactively."

Hanse relaxed a bit.  "Retroactively.  So you mean that the universe splits when the time-travelers arrive?  One universe where they left, one universe where they arrive?  Doesn't seem terribly useful..." 

Banzai laughed.  "Not if you're the one left holding the bill in the universe of origin, no.  But Comstar has reported several ships lost already.  I think they're sending teams back in time to alter events of the past 30 years at least, so they can 'get it right'.  If not in this universe than another one."

That was not a good thought.  "And can we send back teams of our own to intercept them?"

"Truthfully?  I have no idea."


---

The Rules of KF-timetravel.
1.  Causality must be preserved-in another universe.
2.  No more than 30 years of time travel, and all time travel events destroy a Jump Drive.
3.  You can never go back.  Nor can you report back or request reinforcements.
3a.  Unless your side decides to time travel more forces to you based on  time capsule or some sort of delayed message, but that splits the timelines again.
4.  Traveling 1 year in time reduces the amount of space you can jump in the same move by 1 light year.  So you'll probably arrive where you left.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 26 March 2015, 15:42:41
Tribble 193

Tucker Harwell makes a devastating discovery: the virus that disabled the majority of HPGs is nothing of the kind. The HPGs are simply unable to provide coherent signals due to damage caused to hyperspace itself.

And the cause of that damage, which only coincidentally happened at the same time as several sabotage attacks?

Hyperspace is known to violate causality with K-F jumps detectable at the destination before the jumpship has even activated its engines.

The cause of the Blackout was/would be the raising of the Fortress Republic.

They are the victims - but they are also the culprits!


(MageOhki must take credit/blame for putting this idea together when we were discussing causes for the Blackout).
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 26 March 2015, 19:02:28
Given the blackout happened before the raising of Fortress Republic, wouldn't it be more logical that the machinery required to raise the fortress would cause the blackout? Sort of a reward for completion of your ultimate defense/doomsday weapon rather than actually using it 'Congratulation, you now have crappy communications'.

Ugh, now I'm picturing whatever causes Fortress Republic has some type of hyperspace draining power sink.
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Post by: VhenRa on 26 March 2015, 22:53:49
Tribble 193

Tucker Harwell makes a devastating discovery: the virus that disabled the majority of HPGs is nothing of the kind. The HPGs are simply unable to provide coherent signals due to damage caused to hyperspace itself.

And the cause of that damage, which only coincidentally happened at the same time as several sabotage attacks?

Hyperspace is known to violate causality with K-F jumps detectable at the destination before the jumpship has even activated its engines.

The cause of the Blackout was/would be the raising of the Fortress Republic.

They are the victims - but they are also the culprits!


(MageOhki must take credit/blame for putting this idea together when we were discussing causes for the Blackout).

Fairly sure I posted the SAME theory over in General Dicussion a year or so ago.

Sometime in the future the Capellans or Clanners or something invade the Republic or the Republic collapses in civil war, someone raises Fortress Republic... this goes back in time and kills the HPGs, causing Dark Age, causing the Fortress to be raised..
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Post by: Terrace on 26 March 2015, 23:03:17
Tribble 194

Wanting to placate the Periphery Nations (and focus more completely on the Clans), the Second Star League votes on and passes several reconciliatory gestures. First among them is retroactively strip long-deceased SLDF General Amos Furlough of all awards and rank, and begin demonizing him in popular media. The second is to have talks between the Federated Suns and the Taurian Concordat about the possibility of returning former Taurian worlds that have long been held by the Federated Suns. The third is to begin floating a technology-sharing program with the Periphery Nations that are in good standing (Outworlds Alliance, Taurian Concordat, Magistracy of Canopis).

Could these gestures work, and what effect would it have when the Jihad kicks off?
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Post by: drakensis on 27 March 2015, 04:34:53
Given the blackout happened before the raising of Fortress Republic, wouldn't it be more logical that the machinery required to raise the fortress would cause the blackout? Sort of a reward for completion of your ultimate defense/doomsday weapon rather than actually using it 'Congratulation, you now have crappy communications'.

Ugh, now I'm picturing whatever causes Fortress Republic has some type of hyperspace draining power sink.
Hyper-physics break causality in a way that probably killed off entire generations of physicists through sheer trauma.

VhenRa: I don't recall seeing that, although I may have and simply forgotten. Perhaps great minds think alike (and not so great minds like mine take notes)
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 27 March 2015, 05:36:29
Tribble #195 - Comstar - Screw ruling the universe, that's too boring for our tastes

Blake was a genius in restoring the HPGs following the fall of the Star League and ensuring the neutrality of Comstar and Terra through the succession wars. He was also a devious bastard.

You see Blakes vision wasn't to rule the Inner Sphere from behind the scenes. He didn't want to be a successor lord, or first lord of the star league, or even a great industrialist (although you can make the case he was one). No, Blakes dream was to be filthy rich, and bring entertainment to the masses of the Inner Sphere.

Thus when the Successor States came to be, a sneaky little clause was put into every treaty right after the one that read 'Comstar reserved the right to broadcast sporting and entertainment events across the Inner Sphere and beyond.' It read plainly 'Comstar reserved the right to broadcast the mistakes of the Successor Lords and mock the ever living crap out of them.'

Of course the Successor Lords, too busy with making war upon each other, didn't pay much attention to this. Lets face it, communications and entertainment companies had been mocking, or helping to mock them, for centuries.

It probably would have helped if they had realized that by controlling communications, that Comstar also had access to their private communications.

Thus it would begin, centuries of humor and comedy at the expense of the Lords of the Inner Sphere, as Comstar broadcast vicious lampoons of every Successor Lord, every noble of the Inner Sphere. Yet the Lords of the Inner Sphere couldn't retaliate for two reasons. 1) Comstar controlled communications. 2) Comstar was unarguably the most popular organisation in the Inner Sphere.

Of course Comstar also had their teeth, primarily for dealing with Kuritans and Liaoists who didnt find as much humor in Comstars broadcasts (of course Kuritans and Liaoists still tuned in by the billion to watch Comstars best comedians tear apart Steiners and Davions). The ComGuards as they came to be known were well known for breaking the enemies communication security, after which their usual tricks involved lambasting every decision the enemy made (helped by a large quantity of communications and surveillance satellites), mimicking enemy commanders to give false orders, and just plain annoying the enemy. It wasn't unusual for ComGuard technicians to identify key points in an enemy line and annoy those specific individuals into doing something stupid.

Of course then the Clans came a'callin in 3048.



This one is pretty much a 'How would the universe react to a popular and entertainment focused Comstar, as opposed to a technological manipulative behind the scenes Comstar?'. Because lets face, the Clans don't have a sense of humor, only a sense of how best to spill the enemies guts. Personally I could see say a Falcon Trinary going against a Comstar Division, with the end result being the Falcons charging straight into Comstars guns if only to shut up a continual stream of 'Why did the Chicken cross the road' and 'Ya Mumma' jokes being broadcast over their com channels.

Of course there would also be a lot of fun with someone like Myndo Waterly being Primus, because if you kept her personality she would probably try to make the Successor Lords make bigger and funnier mistakes.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 06 April 2015, 06:25:41
Tribble # 196: 'To Hell with our orders'

Misery, 3028. After the destruction of the Hephaestus and it becoming blindly clear that Samsonov, operating clearly at the least on a 'turn a blind eye' and probably in fact direct orders from Takashi wants to destroy the Dragoons, Jamie Wolf looses it.

Well not losses it so much as takes off the kid gloves. Coded orders go out ordering the Dragoons to withdraw to Misery while their dependents evacuate to the Federated Suns. The warriors have knife work to do to make the Combine pay for betraying them like this.

However the fallback to Misery orders were in fact just a code in of themselves. And while the Combine sends the Ryuken in that direction having intercepted the messages, the Dragoons actually rally at a pre-planned deep space point in full strength, having planned for this possibility over the last couple of years as things had gone to hell with the Combine. And at this Deep Space rally point are all six of their warships, reactivated over the last year. A couple of clusters worth of Clantech Star League Mechs and enough field refit type technology stashed when they entered the Inner Sphere, to retrofit perhaps 60% of the Dragoons with a mixture of Clantech and Star League grade upgrades.

Their target; Luthien.

Jamie Wolf has a bone to pick with Takashi regarding the behavior of his subordinates. Personally.

He has one of his few soldiers going with the civilians into the Suns carry a message telling Hanse all this (and a brief version of their origins story) and MIIO hastily FAX the news to the First Prince, explaining that Takashi may be a little late to his wedding, it would seem...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 06 April 2015, 09:38:15
Tribble #196  That would be a very interesting story for someone to develop!  I could see Comstar ROM, hiring mercenaries to take out the WD later!   
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 06 April 2015, 15:58:50
#197

It's 3029 and Janos Marik has had enough.

Too many bitch sessions in Parliament.

Too many messages from the Liao forced on him as an 'ally'.

Too many times his soldiers get their asses handed to him because they're too busy playing politics.

Still, this isn't necessarily something he has to live with. Several coded messages later and the FWLM's supplies and shipping are redirected. Now all he has to do is send some very carefully encoded messages to his ambassadors in three foreign capitals and arrange a suitably timed meeting with Parliament.

It'd be nice if everyone plays ball. But if they don't? Who cares? He's The Marik. He doesn't answer to them. And the dice are in motion.

The time comes for Parliament and the Captain-General rises to speak.

"Ladies and gentlemen, I would like to say what great honour it is to address you, but that would be a lie so to hell with it. I owe Catherine Humphreys an apology for shutting down her invasion into the Capellan Confederation last year. Your grace, I offer my sincere apologies, as exemplified by certain deliveries I believe you are aware of."

"Now I owe no one anything but this: I am sick and tired of your collective bleating. So sick and tired that I hereby resign as Captain-General. So sick and tired that I hereby, as Duke of Marik, declare my province's seccession from the Free Worlds League."

"That's right, you bottom-feeding jackals. I'm out of the League. I am - ironically - free. The Free Worlds League is short a leader and short a capital. Frankly, I don't give a crap if you manage to replace either."

There's a stunned silence and then: "You can't be serious!"

"I'm beyond serious." Janos produces two documents. "This letter here -" he throws it to the floor like a gauntlet "- is a declaration of war against the Capellan Confederation on behalf of the Marik Commonwealth, of the Protectorate and - through the offices of two good and loyal men - the Duchies of Oriente and Orloff. Between our provincial regiments and certain trusted formerly-federal regiments I'm confidence of our security and our ability to prosecute such an offensive war."

He raises the second letter. "And this is our petition, we three dukes, for membership of the Federated Commonwealth. I'm confident that with the prospect of carving up the remains of the Capellans once and for all, Duchess Humphreys, Magistrix Centralla and Protector Calderon will join me in at least the first letter... and who knows about the second? If the terms are right, they might like being on the winning side for once."

Janos Marik drops the second letter. "Now get off Atreus or I'll have the guards remove you by force!"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blackhorse 6 on 06 April 2015, 16:23:06
Now that takes some serious gravitas.  I like Janos more here than in the canon sources.   O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 06 April 2015, 17:09:04
Well Drakensis you do like putting the cat among the pigeons.
In this case it looks like the cat has not been fed for a month. O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 06 April 2015, 17:55:35
Wow Drac, thats ... epic.

For some reason though, I'm just seeing him storming out of the room something like this;

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zujQd6GTJN0

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 06 April 2015, 18:02:34
 [applause]

Absolutely fantastic!

 [rockon]

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Coriendal on 06 April 2015, 18:07:48
#198
"Holy Fury"
Comstar takes 25 years to lay out the destruction of the inner sphere realms with it culminating in the Armageddon of 3014.

Draconis Combine:  Marcus is encouraged to rebel by being given intel and supplies with Rasalhague siding with him.  The current Warlord of Dieron, who has to remain aloof of the Kuritan civil war to guard against Davion and Steiner aggression gets ideas and declares independence.  Dieron then attacks Davion Coreward worlds, Quentin in particular.

Davion:  Hanse and Michael duke it out for control of the Suns while the Draconis March stands by and tries to protect the Kuritan border.

Liao:  Colonel Rizdik rebels, taking Tikonov with him and giving the Northwind Highlanders permission to attack Northwind.  He then attacks Davion worlds in the Coreward "thumb".  Max freaks out and orders attacks but is distracted by Andurien and the Capellan March conflicts.  Candace eventually takes St. Ives independent to preserve those worlds.

Lyran:  Frederick contests Katherine's assumption of the Arconship while Tamar and Skye declare independence.

Marik:  Falls apart as usual with Anton/Janos civil war and Oriente, Regulan and Andurien succession.

Canopus:  Allies with Andurien 15 years early and conquers the worlds between their realms to secure a future state before turning toward the Confederation.

Taurus:  Given supplies and intel and attacks Davion.

Outworlds:  Technical expertise sees dozens of OA worlds rejoin and a coupe removes the original charter for a more aggressive form of government.  No longer a push over both the DC and FS have to move more units to cover this area.

Pirate activity explodes.

Once everyone is exhausted Comstar explodes out of Terra with 50 plus battlemech regiments and 50 plus warships and conquers as much of the old Hegemony as possible.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 07 April 2015, 02:20:36
Bloody hell. 50 regiments might seem a bit excessive, but then again, Comstar will by now be looking at a battle-hardened Inner Sphere that's less likely to give up easily.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Coriendal on 07 April 2015, 08:29:25
Actually the old Comstar book listed them at 50 regiments of Battlemechs by 3025.  Realistic or not they had massive stockpiles of supplies of Level 2 mechs, tanks and aerospace fighters.  It may have been almost like the Jihad with it being over on the closest 20 to 30 worlds before anyone could respond.  Warships are a big equalizer and some worlds may welcome Comstar's control at that point.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 07 April 2015, 08:31:09
#197

-snip awesome-

You know... I would love to see this written. If only for the look on Hanse's face.... when he realize he is now in competition for audacity.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Swords of Fire on 07 April 2015, 18:48:42
You know... I would love to see this written. If only for the look on Hanse's face.... when he realize he is now in competition for audacity.

The look on Takashi Kuritas face would also be quite amusing.

I wonder though if some of the Kuritans wouldn't take Janos' actions as a challenge to be even more audacious.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 08 April 2015, 11:31:33
Tribble : 199

     They had assumed the worst when Hans was recalled to New Avalon, he still could not believe that he had survived the destruction of his Atlas, he had seen the footage, it was brutal. Plus it had been months sens Mallorys World had fallen to the Combine.
   After his supposed death the defenders had rallied but reinforcements had been called in and Davion forces forced from the world. Hans had been called to New Avalon right away and just as he was getting used to the idea of running things news of a uprising on Mallorys World reached him. He dispatched the relief forces right away.
   From the reports he received the fighting had been brutal and losses had been high but in the end the Suns flag rose above the world once again. Then without warning the remaining forces sent word that they were on there way to New Avalon at full speed and that they were ignoring any orders to do otherwise.
   They entered atmosphere at full burn and the Davion Guards and Hans prepared for battle. They surrounded the dropships and demanded that they surrender and debark. When the mech bay door of the lead ship opened non of them were prepared and at first all they could do was stare. As the lone figure walked off the mech ramp he had a obvious limp and had extensive scarring down one side of his body but it was undoutably him, Ian, Ian was home!
   What fallowed was extensive medical and physiological exams along with the usual debriefings. Hans was beyond happy and was glad to be rid of the burden of statescraft. Only this last week had Ian taken up the First Princship again and he was settling in well. The experience on Mallorys World had obviously changed him but there was a new focus in his eyes, a new drive and had spoken to him about some of his ideas for revolutionizing the FedSuns. Some were rather radical but they had merit and with his improved relations with ComStar had even managed to get favorable rates for the FedSuns saving billions of pounds.
   "Hanse.... Hanse.... HANSE!!. Pay attention, ware were you?". " Sorry, I was just lost in thought, ware were you?". "I was saying that I would like for you to go over these ideas with the high command and then let me know what they think. In the meantime please show Prencetor New Avalon in". "Sure thing, trying to save us some more money?". He looked at me with a sly smile, "something like that". As he passed the prencetor on the way out he noticed how he walked with a new spring in his step and new confidence that had not been there before, wounder what has him in such a good mood?
   "How are you doing Prince Davion? Recovering well?". "Why yes, thank you". The Prencetor pulled out a device and once the flashing light stayed a strong green he spoke again. "So, does anyone suspect?". "So far everything is as it should be, no one has noticed anything and ROM has done a wonderful job in helping to convince everyone. Hans does not seem 100% yet but he will come around"." "Excellent, the primus will be pleased".
    They spoke for a bit longer and then the Prencetor left on other business. Yes, things are going smoothly thought "Ian" with a devious smile on his face. The Master will be most pleased with his progress.   
   Yes indeed...  >:D >:D >:D

Your thoughts? How would this change the vers to have Ian replaced rather than Thomas? Did I keep grammar mistakes to a minimum? Hope it was ok, LET ME KNOW DAMN YOU!!!  Love you all! :D

   
   
   
   
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 08 April 2015, 20:14:06
Tribble 199  hmm... sounds like a very interesting.  I could it see it resulting in the FS being undermined by Comstar and/or in a brief civil war that would weaken the FS and only strengthen their enemies.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 09 April 2015, 02:04:28
That would not be good for the FS if Ian survived.
A few spelling mistakes but otherwise a terrifying thought. O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Darth Nichos on 12 April 2015, 22:59:24
Tribble 200

Hanse Davion was on top of the Inner Sphere

The Federated Commonwealth was the Dominate power in the Human Sphere and it was well on its way to establishing a lasting peace with the Steiner-Davion Dynasty as the rulers of a new Star League. The Dragon had been tamed in the War of 3039 and a friendly Head of State sat on the Capellan Throne in the form of Candace Liao. Only the Free Worlds League remained an obstacle but daily raids into their territory would soon bring them to the table. By 3047, everything was falling into place and his eventual dream would become a reality. Even Comstar had been humbled with many of its ComGuard made to go home except the bare minimum to maintain a defense of the HPGs in FC Space and beyond.

Then one day, something happened; all the HPG's in the Inner Sphere went dark.

At first, it seemed that the HPG on New Avalon had closed for a day with no visitors allowed inside. Chucking up to some sort of maintenance by Comstar, Hanse and his staff just waved it off. As time went by, it was discovered by Jumpships traveling within the FC Territory that New Avalon wasn't the only one that had gone off the grid as it appeared that every world with an HPG in the FC, CC, and DC was no longer active. Wanting to know what was going on, Hanse ordered an incursion on the New Avalon HPG facility; only to find it abandoned and its HPG sabotaged without any hope of repair. Reports from other facilities all over the FC as well as those in the CC and DC report similar fates.

Comstar managed to leave them in the dark without the three Successor States from even realizing it before it was too late.

Realizing that this might be a prelude to an attack, Hanse and his Generals ordered all available forces into the Terran March in case of an hostile incursion while the best minds in the Federated Commonwealth tried to bring the HPG Grid back online; stripping outlying worlds on the peripheries of their regiments and sending them coreward. The Black Boxes were used to coordinate forces the best they could but the delay still left them vulnerable. By the time early 3048 came around, the largest gathering of military forces since the 4th Succession War surrounded Terra, ready to drive back any attack.

The Draconis Combine, uder treaty, also moved forces to support the Commonwealth and the Capellans launched deeper raids in the Free Worlds League after finding out that their HPG Grid was still operating. There was no activity from Terra though and every message that was sent to the system was ignored as well as the messages sent to Atreus. For weeks, the Regiments in the Terran March were on full alert and ready for war at the given word. The Scientists on New Avalon managed to get its HPG online from cannibalizing other facilities, only to encounter some sort of while noise.

After another month, Candace gotten word to Hanse though her husband that her raiding forces were starting to encounter Star League Era Mechs with the Comstar Logo fighting along side FWL forces. Even worse, Comstar WarShips were hitting Capellan Worlds in which she had no defense for. It was reported that Commonwealth Forces were also dealing with the same activity on the Lyran Border as well. A few of his Generals argued that they should invade Terra since open war now existed between the Federated Commonwealth and Comstar. Hanse and his Inner Circle believed that to be madness though they drew up the plans for the invasion just in case.

Unfortunately for Hanse Davion when the Clans arrived, they found a stripped border lacking any sort of defense; all which went according to Comstar's plans
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 12 April 2015, 23:35:15
Tribble 199  hmm... sounds like a very interesting.  I could it see it resulting in the FS being undermined by Comstar and/or in a brief civil war that would weaken the FS and only strengthen their enemies.

Why would they undermine a nation that they now control? If they wanted to do that they could always just legitimately save Ian and leave him in charge.

That would not be good for the FS if Ian survived.
A few spelling mistakes but otherwise a terrifying thought. O0

What are you talking about, it would be great for the FS, a wholly owned and operated subsidiary of Comstar.

Definitely terrifying though. Depending on how they want to play it they could either have New Halstead burned to the ground, or channel the best and brightest of the FS in fueling C*'s R&D. In 3019 Katrina presumably sends her message of peace, and the victory of Comstar becomes nearly assured.

Tribble 200

Hanse Davion was on top of the Inner Sphere

The Federated Commonwealth was the Dominate power in the Human Sphere and it was well on its way to establishing a lasting peace with the Steiner-Davion Dynasty as the rulers of a new Star League. The Dragon had been tamed in the War of 3039 and a friendly Head of State sat on the Capellan Throne in the form of Candace Liao. Only the Free Worlds League remained an obstacle but daily raids into their territory would soon bring them to the table. By 3047, everything was falling into place and his eventual dream would become a reality. Even Comstar had been humbled with many of its ComGuard made to go home except the bare minimum to maintain a defense of the HPGs in FC Space and beyond.

Then one day, something happened; all the HPG's in the Inner Sphere went dark.

At first, it seemed that the HPG on New Avalon had closed for a day with no visitors allowed inside. Chucking up to some sort of maintenance by Comstar, Hanse and his staff just waved it off. As time went by, it was discovered by Jumpships traveling within the FC Territory that New Avalon wasn't the only one that had gone off the grid as it appeared that every world with an HPG in the FC, CC, and DC was no longer active. Wanting to know what was going on, Hanse ordered an incursion on the New Avalon HPG facility; only to find it abandoned and its HPG sabotaged without any hope of repair. Reports from other facilities all over the FC as well as those in the CC and DC report similar fates.

Comstar managed to leave them in the dark without the three Successor States from even realizing it before it was too late.

Realizing that this might be a prelude to an attack, Hanse and his Generals ordered all available forces into the Terran March in case of an hostile incursion while the best minds in the Federated Commonwealth tried to bring the HPG Grid back online; stripping outlying worlds on the peripheries of their regiments and sending them coreward. The Black Boxes were used to coordinate forces the best they could but the delay still left them vulnerable. By the time early 3048 came around, the largest gathering of military forces since the 4th Succession War surrounded Terra, ready to drive back any attack.

The Draconis Combine, uder treaty, also moved forces to support the Commonwealth and the Capellans launched deeper raids in the Free Worlds League after finding out that their HPG Grid was still operating. There was no activity from Terra though and every message that was sent to the system was ignored as well as the messages sent to Atreus. For weeks, the Regiments in the Terran March were on full alert and ready for war at the given word. The Scientists on New Avalon managed to get its HPG online from cannibalizing other facilities, only to encounter some sort of while noise.

After another month, Candace gotten word to Hanse though her husband that her raiding forces were starting to encounter Star League Era Mechs with the Comstar Logo fighting along side FWL forces. Even worse, Comstar WarShips were hitting Capellan Worlds in which she had no defense for. It was reported that Commonwealth Forces were also dealing with the same activity on the Lyran Border as well. A few of his Generals argued that they should invade Terra since open war now existed between the Federated Commonwealth and Comstar. Hanse and his Inner Circle believed that to be madness though they drew up the plans for the invasion just in case.

Unfortunately for Hanse Davion when the Clans arrived, they found a stripped border lacking any sort of defense; all which went according to Comstar's plans

The only way this remotely works is if someone shot Myndo Waterly in the head during her promotion interview to Precentor. A C* that Interdicts the FS in 4SW is one that Hanse would never turn his back on, much less blithely dismiss a sudden Hpg outage.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 14 April 2015, 08:14:57
The Taurians are gonna love an undefended Periphery March.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: fitzgerald on 27 April 2015, 00:02:36
Tribble 201


Ides of March 3020

Agents of the Wolf's Dragoons have shown up at every single major court, the majority of the minor ones and every single university actually worthy of that name across the Inner Sphere and near Periphery, with the sole exception being Comstar.    Each of the Successor Lords is visited by a senior Dragoon officer, with Jamie Wolf himself coming to the Triad to speak with Katrina on a matter of great importance.   

Diplomats and spies quickly pick up on the fact that Jamie Wolf is making a massive gesture, one that will affect humanity as whole.  Rumor and whispers range from Jamie unveiling the origin of the Dragoon's, to actual aliens coming in force to conquer the Inner Sphere, to the even more ludicrous of Kerensky's army returning to restore the Star League under a hidden Cameron heir.

The Wolf's Dragoons have finally decrypted the Star League memory core we discovered decades ago and are sharing with all of humanity. 

"I come today bearing a gift, not one of war but of prosperity.

A gift to beat back the darkness of ignorance, of starvation and failure across the Inner Sphere.

So Achron Steiner I present to you a fully decrypted Star League Memory Core.     

Containing not one speck of military technology this core covers many of the marvels of the Star League starting with full technical schematics and scientific documentation for Hyper Pulse Generators, Jamerson-Ulikov Water Purification Procedure, K-F theory for jump-drives and fusion engines.    In short it delivers on a promise to restore humanity the prosperity of the Star League.

To ensure no one secures this core for purely their own private benefit I have deliberately given every state, every seat of higher learning a copy of of this memory core.   The Wolf's Dragoons have dozens of copies secured away and will gladly produce a copy for any party that requests it.

Its taken over twenty years of work to decrypt the core the Dragoon's found, but as my brother Jousha Wolf insisted from the start this core was a gift for all of humanity and lead our efforts to unlock it.    I can think of no more fitting tribute to my brother than to see his wishes followed and for everyone to benefit from the Dragoon's good fortune."

Jamie Wolf to Achron Katrina Steiner   March 15,3020

~~~~

Having uncovered evidence that Comstar used Anton Marik to get at Jousha Wolf and the Dragoons dependents in an effort to extract information from them Jamie promptly spent the rest of the 3010s brooding.

In 3019 during the trip to meet up with Kerlin Jamie came up with a way to really hurt Comstar.   Spread the knowledge of how to build, design, operate, and run HPGs to every state.

Kerlin Ward seeing an opportunity to get the Inner Sphere ready suggests adding on basic Star League techs including terraforming, fusion, basic KF jump and fusion theory, Industrial Mechs etc.    Basically every non military technology that wasn't reserved for the Terran Hegemony bundled up neatly together.     Anything that might give the Crusaders conniptions  (LF Batteries, medical tech that leads directly to Iron Wombs, mining suits that lead to Elementals) is scrubbed.

Worse with hundreds of copies of this core out there and the Wolf's Dragoons handing them out like candy there's no way to stop the spread of this information.     
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 27 April 2015, 04:29:45
Tribble 201
Ides of March 3020
this could lead to lots of fun, and who knows what weapons could be created from this information.....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 01 May 2015, 03:51:45
A tech base untouched by Holy Shroud won't take more than a decade or two at most get up to Star League level.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 May 2015, 02:21:16
#202

Tyra Miraborg crashes into the bridge of the Dire Wolf a metre or two from where she hit in canon. Ulric Kerensky is swept out of space while Leo Showers manages to cling to something long enough for Phelan to enter and remove him, along with Vlad.

This will naturally have consequences.

On the larger scale, there's no halt to Operation Revival. The Smoke Jaguars may not have Nova Cats backing them when they strike at Luthien, but the DCMS is less prepared and likely has no mercenary support. Chances are good that it falls, although Theodore or Hohiro could regroup and re-establish government from New Samarkand or some other world. The Smoke Jaguars, on the other hand will take losses.

The Clans continue towards Terra, possibly with the addition of reserve clans at this point - although it'll take time for them to arrive. The ilKhan may not like calling them in but it saves Jaguar strength for the assault on Terra itself.

On the smaller scale, the loss of Ulric drastically changes Clan Wolf's direction. saKhan Garth Radick is a Crusader and it's very likely Conal Ward becomes either saKhan or even Khan of the Wolves. Phelan has lost his patron but on the other hand, he did save the ilKhan. There's a good chance he'll become a warrior but being given the chance to compete for a bloodname would be chancier. Focht won't have a conduit to the leadership of the Clans - he'll likely remain as representative of ComStar but he's much more isolated. And with no death of the ilKhan Natasha Kerensky won't have the excuse of the vote to replace him to return to the Wolves - and she'll have a cooler reception if she does.

By the summer of 3051 - about the time Ulric would have been elected - it's likely the initial four Clans have reached about the points they'd hold by the Battle of Tukkayid in canon, plus the worlds that would've been taken by Reserve Clans. This'll also have given the Reserve Clans time to arrive in force. Most of the original four are probably running low on supplies and personnel by this point and the AFFC and DCMS launching limited counter-attacks.

The Invaders are probably desperate enough for resources to be contracting additional clans to provide garrisons and offering concessions for the right to expand their forces up to earlier bids made when they were contending for places in the invasion - although some of them have been draining their home galaxies just to maintain strength on the frontlines. Clan Wolf, which didn't have to bid at all, is in the best position here but other invasion zones will fracture as Home Clans receive entire worlds in exchange for their political or military support.

By 3052 it's likely that all - or almost all - of the Clans are fighting in the Inner Sphere. The AFFC and DCMS are stretched to the limits although Jaime Wolf has probably held an Outreach Conference bringing the Free Worlds League into the fight and if Candace has ousted Romano then she or Sun-Tzu is likely giving at least token aid (if Romano's hanging on then she's a constant problem). While the main clan advance would be closing towards Terra (what ComStar are up to is in doubt, but I can't see Showers accepting a proxy battle under such favorable terms as Ulric) there'd be fighting on the flanks too and possibly in-fighting as the other Clans realise just what an undivided Clan Wolf Invasion Corridor means for relative strength once the invasion is over...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 31 May 2015, 17:28:14
#203:

3014: Seeing a chance for success with the Federated Suns distracted, Max Liao pours more resources and troops into backing Anton Marik's rebellion. He is able to make significant gains along the border, including the oft-contested Andurien worlds.

Janos Marik turns to unlikely ally Hanse Davion, who also has cause to dislike the Liao regime. Max has also been stirring the pot there, backing the ambitions of Michael Hasek, who was already working against the First Prince even before his later, outright treachery. That, and Operation Doppelganger, are still a decade away, but even now Hasek is enough to prove an annoyance. With Marik providing evidence of Liao's backing to both insurrections Hanse has the excuse he needs for war.

Without the benefit of the full series of Galahad excercises, however, the AFFS is not prepared for the kind of serious, all-in assaults seen in the canonical 4th Succession War. The result instead is a series of limited offenses, more akin to the skirmishes of the 3rd Succession War. The infusion of Davion troops helps to crush Anton's rebellion, and Hanse is able to negotiate a separate agreement with Jamie Wolf when an MI-6 team rescues Joshua and the Dragoon dependents that Anton had taken hostage. Some Liao territory is taken on both sides, but not a great deal before the skirmishes peter out.

Nonetheless, the cooperation and friendship between Davion and Marik has begun to solidify. Feeling pressured on both sides even more than in canon, Maximilian Liao responds positively to Katrina Steiner's peace overtures, hoping to bring them in on the FWL's far border. Initially pleased at seeing no less than three of her four rivals respond to her proposal, Katrina Steiner sees the truth quickly enough: Liao is desperate, and Davion and Marik simply want to ensure that no one comes to the Confederation's rescue. Disgusted, she decides that perhaps now is not the best of times for such a radical approach. She does come to a limited understanding with Davion, but remains wary of his close ties to her realm's longtime enemies in the Free Worlds League.

Operation Doppelganger and the subornment of Michael Hasek are but the beginning of Max Liao's desperate attempts to save his realm from the destruction everyone knows is coming. Justin Xiang Allard plays his part to perfection, delivering several highly successful raids for the Capellan armies in the mid-3020's while simultaneously orchestrating their preparation for the final hammerfall. A marriage does take place, between Ardan Sortek and Kristen Marik, but with Kristen already leading her own mercenary unit in Davion's service it is seen as more symbolic than of dynastic import.

The Gray Death Legion is used by the FWLM as an Opposition Force during Project Perseus, their version of the Davion Galahad excercises, and never raids Sirius V. They are provably elsewhere when ComStar distributes footage of what appears to be them destroying the domed city of Tiantan. Investigation of the charges leads to the arrest and trial of several minor nobles in the region. Grayson Carlyle discovers the Helm cache and manages to arrange to keep a full half of the material discovered, turning the remainder over to House Marik. Janos and Hanse both agree to Carlyle's proposal to freely distribute the memory core, sharing copies with both Steiner and Kurita. Research industries throughout the Inner Sphere begin work on decrypting its contents. Meanwhile, the Gray Death Legion has expanded from a single 'mech company to two full regiments, along with a full regiment of armor and a squadron of aerospace fighters. (The cache contains much more, but Carlyle maintains the rest to serve as a store of spares for the advanced units he is now able to field. Most of the material turned over to Marik ends up in various research institutes in FWL and FS space, such as the NAIS.)

The end comes more as an inevitability than the sudden shock of the canonical Fourth Succession War. Kurita's involvement is limited to their dispute with the Wolf Dragoons, who are slightly better prepared thanks to Joshua's canniness and are able to make their escape into FedSuns space in much better shape. The Capellan Confederation, trapped between two massive opponents, is crushed utterly, Hanse and Janos meeting on the surface of Sian to accept surrender from Candace Liao, the only survivor of the primary ruling family. Marrying Justin Allard, Candace will go on to swear fealty to Hanse, becoming Duchess of the new "Free Worlds March", covering St Ives, Tikonov, and most of the worlds that would have been part of the Federated Commonwealth. A dozen worlds are added to the Duchy of Andurien, others to Oriente, and the remainder forming a new province of the Free Worlds League. Sian itself and a few surrounding worlds are operated as a joint holding, administered jointly by the two powers. 

3030's: Julian Tiepolo maneuvers Steiner and Kurita into agreeing to the creation of the Rasalhague Republic as a buffer state, the core of a peace agreement between them. He hopes to maneuver the two - now three - states into a counterbalance to the FedSuns/FreeWorlds alliance. As the secrets of the Helm Archive are slowly unlocked, Davion and Marik begin fielding new 'mechs and other combat machines equipped with the first fruits of the advanced technology. Thomas Marik's brief regency over the FWL, during Janos' incapacity, proves a shining example of what FWL industry matched with Davion's research and development institutions can do, rapidly expanding production of war material.

Lacking the working hardware examples available to the pair, Steiner, Kurita, and Rasalhague are unable to match them and lose several border worlds between 3030 and 3035. ComStar intervenes to balance the technological disparity, providing covert assistance to the research establishments in those states.

Undistracted by the Skye Rebellion, Hanse uses the DCMS' distraction by the Ronin War to launch his first wave of assaults against the Combine. Spearheaded by units equipped with the first fruits of the Helm Archive's Star League tech, the initial gains are strong. The ronin units quickly abandon their attempt to reconquer Rasalhague in light of the invasion, ending the conflict quickly. Davion's second wave, even with FWLM support, runs into much stiffer resistance, including advanced-tech units courtesy of ComStar's covert assistance to the Combine.

3035: Duncan Marik assassinates Janos and Duggan Marik, attempting to seize power with an anti-FedSuns platform.  Thomas Marik, the most popular potential successor to Janos, is also killed in the attack.

What was originally a joke in Duncan's propaganda machine, talk of a unified 'Free Suns League', leads a small but vocal Parliament faction to support Kristen Marik's candidacy for the Captain-Generalship, her marriage to Ardan Sortek tying the two realms closer together.  Andurien and Oriente, their influence expanded by the conquest of the Confederation, back Kristen's faction, and in the end she is victorious with minimal fighting.

The internal conflict distracts FWLM forces from their participation in the assault on the Dieron District of the Combine, however, and Kurita regains several critical worlds in that region. Others in the Benjamin district remain in Davion hands as the war grinds to a stop despite ComStar's best efforts to fan the flames. Seeing their technology advantage disappearing, Hanse and Kristen agree to end it with what they've taken for the time.

The Inner Sphere sees an uneasy peace for some time. Minor raids still take place across the Steiner/FWL and Draconis/FedSuns borders, and the Combine makes a partially-successful attempt to regain more lost worlds in the Dieron district. Major fighting seems to be over, however, for a time.

The swift end to the Ronin War leaves Rasalhague in a somewhat better position, with only a few mercenary units opting to contract-lawyer their way out of fighting, negating much of the resentment that might have appeared within the small nation.

And as ComStar's Explorer Corps works its way through the coreward Deep Periphery towards the Pentagon Worlds, the 3040's wane...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 31 May 2015, 18:35:38
Well this is an interesting scenario.

Katrina isn't an idiot, she'll probably see the writing on the wall and come to an understanding with the FWL and Davion, especially if she promises the later support against the Combine. But it could be a very interesting decade as the FWL and FS steadily build up while Myndo keeps trying to pump-prime the Dracs to somehow counterbalance them.

I'm guessing that if Katrina is still around, she's already dealt with Freddy and Lestrade well enough. And she's sure as hell not going to allign with the DC against the FWL and Suns. But if she starts to make overtures to the FWL to get a genuine peace so they can play triple tag-team with the DC, I can see ComStar at least trying to have her killed and perhaps put Ryan Steiner on the Throne. Who would be more amiable to their interests perhaps.

Of course, the Clan Invasion is going to be more interesting if it happens anything like as in canon. Without the AFFS to back up the LCAF and a slow push through of AFFS training and tactics, the Lyrans are not going to be in very good shape I think. Even if more advanced technology has become more widely spread rather than very hit and miss in 3050. The DC is going to be in a worse position; Hanse is probably going to be incredibly tempted - especially after a 10 year buildup - to take advantage of the attacks on the DC to try and finish the job. But he's also not blind; he'll probably play wait and see for a while and reign in the Drac March long enough to have Jamie Wolf explain to him WTF is going on.

In such a scenario, I could easily see the FWL and FS going onto a full war footing (after all there is nothing saying that other Clans might not circle the Inner Sphere and hit them from the flanks!) but staying absoloutly still and letting the Clans and DC/LC grind each other down. Although they might do some tokenism, selling weapons to the LC at cost or releasing a lot of Mercs to go help out or something, simply because its in their interests to keep the LC intact. But the DC? Sucks to be them...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 31 May 2015, 19:15:40
Yep. Katrina - and Melissa - know perfectly well by this point that ComStar is Not Their Friend. They're going along with it for now because it gets them the tech assistance that they -aren't- getting from the FedSuns. Going along with the Rasalhague deal bought them security from the Combine, and since the FWL is confining itself to minor border skirmishes the LC is effectively -at peace-. Which means they can do things like idle factories to make repairs that have been waiting (or worse, depending on repeated jury-rigs) for decades. Honestly, if Hanse were to call a meeting of the Star League Council they'd probably vote for him as First Lord at this point. (Hanse hasn't because he doesn't want to put -Kristen- in the position of having to choose between him and her own claim. If someone else were to, he'd be tempted to back -her- just to be contrary, much as Victor backed SunTzu to keep Katherine from getting it.)

I'm still not sure if Hanse would get married in amongst all this. Melissa is out for obvious reasons, and there's no one suitable on the Marik side. This leaves Morgan as his primary heir should anything happen. Now, Morgan is a canny fellow and has a fair amount of clue, so he wouldn't make a bad First Prince. On the other hand, without twenty years of the stress of an extremely pissed-off Max Liao glaring at him across a border, he's probably in better health. So he may well have a wife from somewhere within the FedSuns.

The real key is going to be the Narayan Mountain facility on Helm. Without that getting destroyed in the battle between Marik and the GDL, everything left in it is still available to examine. This means not just live, working samples of the hardware, but the tools required to maintain it and the maintenance manuals associated with them. Plus, the other real jewel, the active computer that the memory core was meant to interface with.

Without that, decrypting the core was the work of decades, plucking out tidbits at random and never knowing if you were getting the recipe of Endo-Steel, warship drive calibration data, terraforming equipment specs, or the fifty-third season of CSI: New Dallas. Which means they're able to get a lot of toys put into production that much quicker, forcing ComStar to speed up the release of tech data to the LC/DC/FRR in order to match them. Meanwhile the Dragoons are chuckling merrily at it all and putting their own versions of Star League tech into production on Outreach, for sale to the mercenary market.

Phelan Kell, for example, is going to find his Wolfhound completely refitted in the late 3040's, turning up on The Rock to face Vlad with an ER Large Laser, double heat sinks, Endo-Steel internal structure, and two of the forward-firing medium lasers replaced with pulse models. He's still not likely to win that fight, but Vlad's going to seriously know he's been hit.

ETA: As for Hanse and Kristen getting involved? They're smart enough to know that the war is better fought on someone else's ground than their own. Most likely you'll see them offering large forces to help defend the line. Possibly a cross-Terra pattern, with Marik forces fighting on the Draconis front and Davion forces in the LC, to avoid those little rivalries popping up.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 05 June 2015, 16:14:57
#204.  Exodus Expanded.

We've added a few people to the SLDF exodus. Notables include:

Miriam Godwinson, Psych Chaplain, Federated Suns.  Reported to be loosing the plot and retreating further into faith and ideological conviction.

Captain Ulrik Svensgaard, FWL, Commander of the Battleship Unity.  Secretly dreams of going pirate, hates nobles, son of a lowly fisherman.  Hard and somewhat ruthless.

Sheng-Ji Yang, Capellean Commonwealth, former government minister, administrator, kung fu master, totalitarian psychopath who is gaming the psych evaluations.  Excels in the traditional arts, administrative duties, was exiled from the Commonwealth for being so good at his job that suspicions arose that he intended to overthrow the government.

Datatech Asa Wright, aka 'Cinder Roze', OWA, the saboteur who crippled Earth's SDS with a noteputer.  Likes 'practical jokes'.  Released on good behavior from lockup for hundreds of counts of illegal asset transfers and network incursions.

Nwabudike Morgan, Lyran Commonwealth, CEO Morgan Enterprises, a civilian who is pulling up stakes and insisting that he be brought along with his fleet of jumpships and factory equipment that he has uprooted.

Annikki Luttinen, Terran Hegemony, cyborg fetishist, AI specialist.  Running unauthorized augmentation and AI experiments with spare lab runtime.

Lady Diedre Skye, FWL, xenobiologist, doctor, terraforming expert who hates terraforming as it is usually done.  Decontamination specialist assigned to repair damage done to worlds by Amaris, evacuating with the SLDF before her work is undone.

Forman Domai, Taurian Confederation, Forced Labor battalion.  Former union leader.  Radicalized by his experiences under the thumb of the SLDF after his impressment for breaking curfew (sentenced to 20 years harsh labor).  Domai is intelligent, forthright, and highly motivated to wrap his chains around the SLDF's neck and break it.

Pravin Lal-Cameron widower, Terran Hegemony, surgeon, diplomat, a man who keeps his head in trying times-but his cryogenically preserved samples of his wife's tissue after her assassination by Amaris' operatives bespeak a dark obsession.

Prokhor Zakharov, Draconis Combine, omnidisciplinary alpha-male scientist. Ex-combat engineer with the SLDF, helped develop prototype next generation weapons.  People skills lacking, seldom considers ethical or emotional implications of research.

Colonel Corazón Santiago Rim World Republic, Defector, special forces.  Ruthless believer in the supremacy of strength-When the SLDF had more strength than she did, switching sides was the obvious move.  Put in charge of a Penal regiment, obtained results surpassing all expectations.  Possible danger of explosive outbursts of violence.

How do these individuals, their personalities, their desires for control and willingness or unwillingness to work with Alex and Nicky, play out as the Exodus continues?  Does Svengsgaard join the Prinz Eugen in mutiny?  Does Yang stab the Kerensky family in the back immediately, or fortify the Pentagon worlds so strongly that the Hive cannot be carved out of it's holes short of planetary bombardment?  Does Foreman Domai found his ideal society away from these patronizing elites?  Does Santiago join the clans, or is the Jade Falcon ref in her backstory firmly back-story?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 06 June 2015, 01:58:49
Well that explains the Pentagon Civil War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 07 June 2015, 19:19:29
a lot of those names tickle my memory for some reason, like they are coming from somewhere other than BT
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 07 June 2015, 19:28:54
a lot of those names tickle my memory for some reason, like they are coming from somewhere other than BT
Alpha Centauri pc game
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 09 June 2015, 07:08:06
None of these seem the type to sign up with Little Nicky and his merry band of Neanderthals. Although Colonel Santiago sounds like someone a certain Smoke Jaguar founder could have taken lessons from.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 June 2015, 04:54:14
#205

Tukkayid, 3052.

Clan Wolf, Clan Jade Falcon, Clan Ghost Bear and Clan Nova Cat have taken all eight of their target cities. The ComGuards are shattered, having fought valiantly for weeks and driven back three invading clans in what would otherwise be notable victories.

IlKhan Ulric Kerensky accepts the surrender of Precentor Martial Anastasius Focht, it's hard to say which of the two men has more regrets. With the exception of a task force sent to secure Terra and bring Primus Myndo Waterly back to answer for Operation Scorpion, the ilKhan orders a three month halt to the invasion to let the Clans absorb their bondsmen (and integrate the remaining ComGuard equipment into their clusters).

ComStar comes apart at the seams, with most HPGs falling into the hands of national governments who can operate them for now - although repairing or replacing them would be difficult.

The Grand Council gather, many suspecting that Ulric will call a vote on recognition of the Wolves as the ilClan. Having secured the largest portion of bondsmen and already controlling the largest invasion corridor they already look increasingly dominant. Instead the first order of business is the disposition of Waterly - Natasha Kerensky takes a certain amount of satisfaction in carrying out the execution.

As the second order of business, Ulric proposes that Terra be divided, like Strana Mechty, evenly between all seventeen Clans. This motion is accepted immediately and on the back of that he offers the Council a choice: continue the invasion - an invasion that has already led to far heavier losses than their planners ever anticipated - towards Terra when they already hold it... or issue a summons to the Great Houses, demanding that they assemble to reform the Star League under the leadership of the Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: namar13766 on 14 June 2015, 10:01:52
206: On May 16, 3020, the heart of the Inner Sphere is torn out. In it's place, the Terran Supremacy appears. Basically just an ISOT fic. Can you guys come up with plot threads from this?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfgar on 14 June 2015, 18:42:02
Alpha Centauri pc game

never played it
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 15 June 2015, 02:47:59
206: On May 16, 3020, the heart of the Inner Sphere is torn out. In it's place, the Terran Supremacy appears. Basically just an ISOT fic. Can you guys come up with plot threads from this?
The Terran Supremacy would be in a very strong position, without any technology back-sliding and holding many of the Successor State's industrial worlds (Skye, Tikonov, Irian, etc.) as well as the regiments that were holding them. Meanwhile the Successor States are just coming out of the Third Succession War and haven't built up the reserves that would have fought the Fourth.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 15 June 2015, 15:51:18
The Supremacy also has a real Navy, which the rest of the Inner Sphere lacks.

Wolf's Dragoons are the closest thing to a faction that has -any- active warships.

ComStar remnants in the Successor States - especially the Hidden Worlds - may also have a few in nearly-ready-to-go condition.

Neither are going to have enough to be a significant threat to the TSN.

If the Dragoons are still in play (and weren't in a system replaced by the ISOT), then it all comes down to whether or not Jamie decides to brief the Clans about what's happened, and how they respond.

Option 1) This is the Terran Hegemony restored, we shall pledge them our alliegance and restore the Star League under their banner. (Not that they need us to do that, mumblegrumble.)

Option 2) They are blasphemers and heretics, claiming the mantle of the Holy Star League for yet another grubbing half-barbarian Successor State. JIHAD!

Option 2 may be the best possible for the Successor States to continue as independant entities, but it's still gonna hurt like a sonofabitch.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 17 June 2015, 05:08:49
Dragoons should be on Chukchi III at this time, about midway between Tharkad and Hesperus map wise.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 16 July 2015, 02:43:09
#207

Concerned at Anton Marik's behaviour, Jaime Wolf remains on New Delos with the Dragoon's command staff to keep an eye on him, sending Joshua out to lead the Dragoons. As a result the legendary mercenary is the one taken as a hostage and through ComStar machinations he's murdered alongside his wife and children. Joshua inherits sole command of the Dragoons.

What would this change? Hard to say but it's likely he'd marry Natasha Kerensky, which would lead to at least some ripples.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 16 July 2015, 03:30:57
Possibly no Civil War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 16 September 2015, 15:55:11
206: On May 16, 3020, the heart of the Inner Sphere is torn out. In it's place, the Terran Supremacy appears. Basically just an ISOT fic. Can you guys come up with plot threads from this?

Instead of the Terran Supremacy, it's the Terran Hegemony. As of 2400 AD.

30+ years before the first Battlemech ever walked.....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 16 September 2015, 19:21:35
Because the tanks in Battletech need more love.

208: On a minor planet in the Lyran Commonwealth near the Jade Falcon Occupation Zone, circa 3130, the garrison force is an all-combat vehicle mercenary unit, reinforced regiment in strength. During their most recent incursion, Clan Jade Falcon tosses a Provisional Garrison Cluster, one with no 'Mechs, at that planet to show their lack of respect for a honorless mercenaries who can't even field a single BattleMech.

But Colonel Miho Nishizumi, the mercenary leader, still believes that combat vehicles have a place on the modern battlefield. She will show these Clanners how a combat vehicle force actually fights, and their better tech will not be the "I win" button the Clanners assume it will be.

But even if she wins against the PGC, that might just earn the gaze of a front-line Cluster with BattleMechs...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 24 September 2015, 20:10:54
#209. Because infantry needs love, too.

An Act of ROB strands Tony Stark (perhaps, say, from the wormhole at the end of the first Avengers movie) in the Battletech 'verse.

Fortunately for him, he's found a backer to help him get on his feet and start working towards establishing himself in the lifestyle he prefers.

Unfortunately for the Battletech 'verse, the backer in question is Liz Ngo.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 24 September 2015, 23:13:11
#209. Because infantry needs love, too.

An Act of ROB strands Tony Stark (perhaps, say, from the wormhole at the end of the first Avengers movie) in the Battletech 'verse.

Fortunately for him, he's found a backer to help him get on his feet and start working towards establishing himself in the lifestyle he prefers.

Unfortunately for the Battletech 'verse, the backer in question is Liz Ngo.
who????
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 25 September 2015, 00:36:26
who? ???


Tony Stark is Iron Man from the Marvel comics and films
Liz Ngo is a creation by Cannonshop, is non-canon and terrifying as she doesn't subscribe to FASAnomics (in fact she leads a whole planet that doesn't) - I think some of the stories are being reposted


If you wanted a more canon but less scary version, have Tony Stark meet up with Team Banzai and the Grey Death Legion around 3055 with full access to the NAIS
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 25 September 2015, 03:34:48
Nah
Let Stark show up in 3020, and be a battletech fan,
" and for you my love, I give you the  Capellan Confederation"

A hundred Iron Patriots rise from the water at Hilton Head,
" oh and Earth also " as Hanse smiles and nods to the bearded man
in the crowd
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 26 September 2015, 13:25:15
You think infantry tech is the only field Stark can influence?

Consider his repulsor tech. Repulsor-fields can not only provide a viable means of propulsion(neatly sidestepping the canon excuse of why the IS have not been able to build warships). Low level examples can also be used to simulate gravity. At almost no cost in tonnage or space.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 26 September 2015, 22:38:27
Nah
Let Stark show up in 3020, and be a battletech fan,
" and for you my love, I give you the  Capellan Confederation"

A hundred Iron Patriots rise from the water at Hilton Head,
" oh and Earth also " as Hanse smiles and nods to the bearded man
in the crowd

This would be an awesome Holloween or April's Fool product from the TPTB!  Also why not have Tony Stark later on, meet with Natasha K. and imagine what magic/chaos they could come up with!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 28 September 2015, 00:30:02
And Natasha K turns out to be a direct descendant/genetic reincarnation/dead ringer for another Natasha he knows.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 03 October 2015, 14:44:14
#209 - What a waste of my time or how I learned to love the Outreach Conference.

On Outreach, the scions of the Inner Sphere are brought together. They all get in the conference room as in canon, and then Kai discovers the bomb.
Because they are all experienced nobility in these kinds of security matters, everyone ignores Sun Tzus sulking and agree that while this is almost certinally some idiotic team building exercise. But just in case - and it turns out all of them had hidden on their person various 'emregency' devices as one would expect of the scions of the leaders of Great Houses, with Kai's flip open wrist watch filled with C-17 exactly what they need, and they promptly blow the door down and find a somewhat 'WTF!?' Jamie looking out from a door up the hallway as the smoke clears.

Trying to regain the inititive, he congratulates them on their teamwork (again minus Sun Tzu who is sulking that he is simply being ignored no matter what insults he throws around). The team then ask if Jamie is through playing games. Jamie agrees, then tells them to get going because now they are going to totally ... put them through basic training! And make them run a lot! And like go on a silly field exercise where they steal Mechs or something! And then fight a mock Clan Trial!

Again the group trade a 'is this guy serious?' look and they all get up, then say 'Okay look, when you're ready to do something useful with our time, come find us. In the meantime we (Victor, Hohiro, Galen, Kai and Shin) are going to do something useful like sitting down and bringing in our staff officers to compare lessons from the engagements we've fought against the Clans, while Casandra plays with Sun Tsu'. And to Jamies disbelief they all just walk out on him. Their parents just shrug and say 'well they kinda have a point' and walk out on him too.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 03 October 2015, 17:48:55
Yes! They're already (mostly) graduates from some of the best academies in the Sphere: they don't need to learn how to run, shoot and pilot!

Hell, they had Hanse and Theodore doing basic urban combat drills, no matter how good their simulation tech: surely that time could have been better spent?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 03 October 2015, 23:45:11
The point wasn't to learn those skills. It was to do them together, trying to force them to bond through shared experience and hardship.

And for some of them, at least, it worked.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: master arminas on 04 October 2015, 00:24:39
#210:  A Fury of Falcons

We know that in the Battle for Von Strang's World, Khan Elias Crichell and the Turkina Keshik came close to allowing Baron Von Strang out-maneuver and ambush them.  They were saved from this only by the unplanned discovery of the ambush by an almost-out-of-fuel OmniFighter returning to base who managed to detect the ambushers on his sensors.

What if that pilot had NOT discovered the trap that the Falcons had been about to walk into?

What would have happened if the Baron's Guard Division had successfully managed to ambush Crichell and the Keshik?  How would the Falcons have responded if the Keshik had been mauled--and Elias Crichell been gravely injured (or even killed) in the combat?

What would have changed in canon history?

MA
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 04 October 2015, 06:14:16
I can't swear to it, but I think this one was raised earlier in the thread, but it's a good one, one that I've considered in the past. So, in trying to conquer the world ruled by the decendants of their Founders ancient enemy, their Khan is injured or killed?

I foresee a major Tanker temper tantrum (what I like to call a TTT), and they go nuts, throwing out bidding altogether, just using all the force at their disposal to crush the resistance ... And then they'll go about revenge, I'm thinking orbital bombardment. And unlike Turtle Bay, this won't be an Inner Sphere target full of people that are supposed to be 'reclaimed': this is von Strangs World, so I don't foresee much outcry in the Hall of Khans or protests.

There won't be much left but the ashes.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 05 October 2015, 07:53:09
The point wasn't to learn those skills. It was to do them together, trying to force them to bond through shared experience and hardship.


Frankly, I disagree. Its easy to suggest that they were going for TEAMBUILDING FUN! but the truth is that the team building that happened was pretty much entirely accidental and any attempts at team building were pretty superficial. I mean the only real bonding DONE that was of any impact was everyone agreeing that Sun Tzu was a frigen moron. Other than that, they were continually butting heads in their simulations and exercises. It was only when Kai eventually told Hohiro to knock it the ****** off bluntly and that he was letting his ego get in the way that things started to close up between Victor and Hohiro, and that was at the very end of the training.

Notably, the Dragoons didn't try to put them into situations where, especially, Victor and Hohiro would be forced to work with each other and rely on each other which is critical if you want to try and play this game. For the most part they wanted and had nothing to do with each other until the very very end of their training.

Its pretty clear that the Dragoons, for better or worse, brought fully into the 'The Clans are better than us, we have to try and match their 1337 skillz!' silliness. Even to the point of Jamie actually crediting Clan Training with being what made the Dragoons so incredibly lethal rather than the complete absence of said training and having five regiments of Battlemechs in fact being what made them so incredibly lethal. That this was an attempt to 'close the gap' as McKenzie put it, with Clan Warriors skills for this little group. That the problem of the Clans can be solved by making these kids into SUPER WARRIORS who can beat the Clans at their own game ... when they happen to be present on the front line.

It really feeds explicitly back into the whole Clan mindset. That its all about the individual skills of the Mechwarriors rather than the tightly knit teamwork and leadership REAL soldiers and officers are all about. I mean the final deal with their fake Trial of Position screams this; it wasn't a test of teamwork and working together to defeat a superior force through superior tactics and tactical thinking that it SHOULD have been. It was about them competing against each other in the Clan style for the victor who is 'the best' to win a prize! Far more fitting would have been say a Dragoons OPPFOR playing by Clan tactics, equipment and organization going up against a force of IS regulars led by our kids in the command vehicle, who put into action a plan they have painstakingly come up with - and to the shock of the Dragoons, their tactics are incredibly effective and smash the Clan force outright.

Victor and Hohiro don't NEED to become friends. As their parents proved, Hanse, Theodore and their peers are perfectly capable of working with each other if its in their mutual interest without becoming BFFs. Besides, Victor could easily have gained that respect and possibly even friendship running exercises both with each other and against each other, having to spend a hell of a lot of time together planning, drafting, getting their asses kicked, going back to the drawing board and listening to each other because otherwise they just see their men getting killed over and over and over...
Rather than putting them through boot camp - which frankly should have been SEEN by everyone involved as a poor attempt to try make them buddy up over hating their instructors. Because they are not idiots and you know, had been through some of the toughest boot camps in the Inner Sphere before...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 06 October 2015, 03:28:14
That... is a very interesting thought.

Very very interesting, in fact. Hmm.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 06 October 2015, 16:31:41
To make sense of things, you have to go back to 3014, and all of the actions that followed from it. When Jaime's wife, bother, and children that weren't utterly embarrassing failures in all respects died, he turned into a nihilistic emo pile of bitterness. The Houses killed his family for their games, they only had a chance to because the Clans sent him in the first place, and the Dragoons completely failed to see it coming or protect them. His sole motivation is to cause the people nearest to him to suffer, and if no viable target presents itself he wanders out onto the battlefield alone practically begging for someone to kill him off.

Jaime never loved the Dragoons, if he did he would have used the magically effective Wolfnet sources to give him options that weren't throwing themselves face first at the Capellans in campaign after campaign, and presented clear evidence to Ian of the shenanigans the Haseks were pulling with his supplies and support. He would have insisted on avenging the attempt McCarron made to kill off every Dragoon civilian he could reach. He would have again actually paid attention while in service of the Combine, and not let his 'beloved' troops continuously get sold out by the Kuritans.

In 3019 he gets orders to start preparing the IS for an invasion and he does...nothing. Unlike when he first entered the Inner sphere he doesn't even make an effort to reach out to Lyran companies for mutually beneficial technological exchange and manufacturing deals. When the Combine plays games past the point where he can ignore, instead of using the copious Dragoon jumpship fleet to act as couriers, he deliberately launches an attack on Comstar. He lets Kuritan workers onto Hephaestus after years of Combine provocation  and skullduggery.

Basically, in this view of things, he took the opportunity to shove all of the heirs to the throne together in the hopes that they would literally go for each others throats and start another round of warfare, because **** everything. And if it wasn't for Victor and Hohiro unexpectedly bonding, Sun Tzu would have killed Kai in at least one exercise.

This has been a presentation of Warped Perceptions Theatre.

In all seriousness though, what is a graduaion exercise where you handily outweigh almost all of the opposition as individuals and are running a clantech behemoth against 3025 garbage supposed to prove? Even liberal hippy sibko coddling Clan Wolf at least made sure that the enemies you outweighed were running in proper Omnimechs.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 16 October 2015, 07:43:34
Guys, do we have any data on which Victor loyalist regular forces were sheltered in the ARDC after Katherine's secession in '57? Not the mercs like the Blue Star Irregulars, but the AFFC troops who were stuck in the Lyran realm, refused support from the LAAF, and given a place by Morgan Kell?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 16 October 2015, 08:31:05
A lot of that information can be gleaned from the Field Manuals for Fed Suns and Lyran Alliance as they were set just pre-Civil War and there wasn't a huge amount of movement between 3057 and then


I have both books if you have any specific questions and don't have access


Alternatively Sarna may have some detail if you look at the ARDC article on there but I haven't checked that
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 16 October 2015, 16:40:25
Checked Sarna, it says Morgan sheltered units, but doesn't say which.

I'm basically interested in a pro-Victor unit that arrived in the ARDC early in '58, preferably an RCT.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 16 October 2015, 23:33:26
39th Avalon Hussars were Victor Loyal, just outside the ARDC and receiving supplies from Arc-Royal.

Koniz Pandora Theatre Militia is a Victor Loyalist RCT (If Lyran Alliance analog of March Militia) in the ARDC. 20th, 23rd and 25th Arcturan Guards are in the ARDC in 3062, all three are RCTs. 20th is on the same world as the Neutral 4th Skye Rangers RCT.

20th Arcturan was there before ARDC formed. 23rd same, looks like the same for 25th. 4th Skye also looks the same and of course Koniz Militia is the same given their homeworld is in the ARDC.


Sorry I can't be much more help.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 17 October 2015, 00:41:08
Thanks, VhenRa, that's exactly what I needed.
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Post by: VhenRa on 17 October 2015, 01:14:43
I am assuming this is for the Vampire?

If so? Hoping its the 25th Arcturan. Colonel Hans Gruber wants to storm a tower.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 22 October 2015, 21:45:16
At the end of the FedCom civil war, as the book finishes, we come to see Katherine throwing down her pen in disgust, and tearing out the pages. She had started her little future-fic as an exercise she started at the suggestion of her therapist, as a way of dealing with the shock of her fathers heart attack and near-death experience. She posted it online under a pseudonym and received a great deal of good reviews, and has had a lot of fun letting her id out, playing the manipulative, megalomaniacal villain, but she feels she's written herself into a corner, and tosses her notes aside, to concentrate on her dad, who's bedside she's sitting next to, and smiles as he starts to come around, still groggy from his latest, and hopefully last, heart operation. Calling out to her mother and siblings, she reflects on how lucky she is that the horrific future described in her story would never actually occur ...

"Katherine: Greetings from Arc Royal. Just finished your latest chapter. Loved it. Hope you don't mind, I showed it to a few people. Morgan and Salome agree you've got his character and reactions right, but he insists that Candace isn't his type at all - Salome disagrees, and jokingly approved. Galen had a blast, and thanks you for some brilliant scenes (don't tell him I said this, but the last three girls I've seen him date have been leggy blondes, nudge nudge: you're a better judge of character than you think). Aunt Nodi says she's happy to support you for Archon-Princess, as soon as you finish up your Five and qualify. Phelan reached out over the HPG and says he enjoyed it, and he showed it to his friends and co-workers: Ulric says your interpretation of Clan politics is 'insightful and not entirely wrong', which is high praise for him. Natasha says she's pissed that you had her offed by a 'two-bit birdie bird,' but agreed that it was generally a badass way to go. Vlad was flattered, but insists you're not his type (he may have matured and mellowed, but he still has the warrior-caste prejudices Phelan hasn't managed to break him of yet). You'll probably hear back from Kai before this message reaches New Avalon, but last I heard he was complaining that he didn't get more than a few cameos, and not enough chances for Yen Lo Wang to shine.
"One thing: why did you press the Omi relationship so hard? I mean, she's a nice enough girl, and I'll admit there was some attraction on both sides on Outreach, but it was hardly a Sphere-shattering love affair, and killing her off that way was a bit crude: faux-Victor didn't deserve that!
"Anyway, gotta go: the 10th is slated to go up against the 12th FedCom RCT, and we're playing the Red (or rather, Jade) team, so I've got to go pretend to be a Clanner for a while and try not to get splatted by artillery. Love to Dad, Pete and Yvonne (and give Joshua a hug for me: you owe the kid at least that much after you had him die off-screen and replaced by a double! He's already dealing with chemo, surgeries and living in the bubble that is the life of a Successor State heir: he didn't deserve that, you witch! :) ).
"Love, your big (yeah, yeah, except vertically) brother, Victor."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 26 October 2015, 09:38:54
At the end of the FedCom civil war, as the book finishes, we come to see Katherine throwing down her pen in disgust, and tearing out the pages. She had started her little future-fic as an exercise she started at the suggestion of her therapist, as a way of dealing with the shock of her fathers heart attack and near-death experience. She posted it online under a pseudonym and received a great deal of good reviews, and has had a lot of fun letting her id out, playing the manipulative, megalomaniacal villain, but she feels she's written herself into a corner, and tosses her notes aside, to concentrate on her dad, who's bedside she's sitting next to, and smiles as he starts to come around, still groggy from his latest, and hopefully last, heart operation. Calling out to her mother and siblings, she reflects on how lucky she is that the horrific future described in her story would never actually occur ...

"Katherine: Greetings from Arc Royal. Just finished your latest chapter. Loved it. Hope you don't mind, I showed it to a few people. Morgan and Salome agree you've got his character and reactions right, but he insists that Candace isn't his type at all - Salome disagrees, and jokingly approved. Galen had a blast, and thanks you for some brilliant scenes (don't tell him I said this, but the last three girls I've seen him date have been leggy blondes, nudge nudge: you're a better judge of character than you think). Aunt Nodi says she's happy to support you for Archon-Princess, as soon as you finish up your Five and qualify. Phelan reached out over the HPG and says he enjoyed it, and he showed it to his friends and co-workers: Ulric says your interpretation of Clan politics is 'insightful and not entirely wrong', which is high praise for him. Natasha says she's pissed that you had her offed by a 'two-bit birdie bird,' but agreed that it was generally a badass way to go. Vlad was flattered, but insists you're not his type (he may have matured and mellowed, but he still has the warrior-caste prejudices Phelan hasn't managed to break him of yet). You'll probably hear back from Kai before this message reaches New Avalon, but last I heard he was complaining that he didn't get more than a few cameos, and not enough chances for Yen Lo Wang to shine.
"One thing: why did you press the Omi relationship so hard? I mean, she's a nice enough girl, and I'll admit there was some attraction on both sides on Outreach, but it was hardly a Sphere-shattering love affair, and killing her off that way was a bit crude: faux-Victor didn't deserve that!
"Anyway, gotta go: the 10th is slated to go up against the 12th FedCom RCT, and we're playing the Red (or rather, Jade) team, so I've got to go pretend to be a Clanner for a while and try not to get splatted by artillery. Love to Dad, Pete and Yvonne (and give Joshua a hug for me: you owe the kid at least that much after you had him die off-screen and replaced by a double! He's already dealing with chemo, surgeries and living in the bubble that is the life of a Successor State heir: he didn't deserve that, you witch! :) ).
"Love, your big (yeah, yeah, except vertically) brother, Victor."

............that was different, amusing for the reactions to her writing but very funny.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 05 November 2015, 08:02:09
Based on a SB sort-of-idea

The Knights of the Inner Sphere return from Huntress, in triumph. Mauled, but unbroken and whole new reputation (and enough Clantech to rebuild themselves to full strength as an Elite among the Elite). Having successfully done their duty and kept Serpent from becoming rampaging monsters in their quest to destroy a brutal foe. Kudos and all that.

They shortly after rebuilding from the cadre they left behind specifically for this eventuality and integrating them, then have a defector from the WOB approach them with a data dump on pretty much all of the Words plans to destroy the Great Houses, the 'heretics' in ComStar and rebuild mankind under a Blakest 'utopia'.

And you know, that the Captain General is not actually the Captain General; HE is the hidden leader of the WOB and probably the most fanatic believer of this.

Sir Paul Masters confronts the 'Captain General' privately about all of this and Halas admits the truth, but is deeply shocked by the WOBs true plans. And so charges Paul Masters with finding the 'real' Thomas Maraik and bringing him publicly to account for all of this.

And so begins a shadow war through the FWL of the Knights and more than few other units who join their banner conducting 'military exercises' as they play cat and mouse with the WOB as they hunt their prey on this 'Great Quest'...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 05 November 2015, 09:33:05
Based on a SB sort-of-idea

The Knights of the Inner Sphere return from Huntress, in triumph. Mauled, but unbroken and whole new reputation (and enough Clantech to rebuild themselves to full strength as an Elite among the Elite). Having successfully done their duty and kept Serpent from becoming rampaging monsters in their quest to destroy a brutal foe. Kudos and all that.

They shortly after rebuilding from the cadre they left behind specifically for this eventuality and integrating them, then have a defector from the WOB approach them with a data dump on pretty much all of the Words plans to destroy the Great Houses, the 'heretics' in ComStar and rebuild mankind under a Blakest 'utopia'.

And you know, that the Captain General is not actually the Captain General; HE is the hidden leader of the WOB and probably the most fanatic believer of this.

Sir Paul Masters confronts the 'Captain General' privately about all of this and Halas admits the truth, but is deeply shocked by the WOBs true plans. And so charges Paul Masters with finding the 'real' Thomas Maraik and bringing him publicly to account for all of this.

And so begins a shadow war through the FWL of the Knights and more than few other units who join their banner conducting 'military exercises' as they play cat and mouse with the WOB as they hunt their prey on this 'Great Quest'...
Some sort of infotech or sysadmin perhaps, shades of wikileaks or Snowden?  Wonder how many separate attempts on this poor tech's life there will be over the course of such a story-I'd be betting on at least one a chapter.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: panzerfaust150 on 09 November 2015, 16:46:04
Inspired by a comment on the "Of Falcons and Wolves" thread:

Oh and the Wolves have to TOTALLY steel the McKennas Pride and take it with them :D

A Wolf Clan caper story...hmmm, this has some promise...

A Dezgra Freeborn Warrior, with a bit of a anti-authoritarian streak...but they put him in charge because he got things done other warriors of the Clan could not, in ways they couldn't. Is he who he says he is, or is he working for the Wolf Watch?

A Trueborn Warrior, who got the taste for the good life in the Inner Sphere...and was sent back to the Homeworlds in disgrace for it.

A Tech who has a talent for getting in and out of places he shouldn't be..and owes too many people too many favors.

An Elemental who has an anger management problem...and while he is useful, he just might get everyone caught.

An former Aerospace pilot turned Merchant. He spent time in a Rasalhague POW camp..and he was never the same. Is he crazy, angry, or both? But he is the only one who can run the helm of a few million tons of warship!

Can they outwit the Burrocks? Can they steal the McKenna's Pride out from under the noses of a bunch of pirates in Clans clothing? Will this bunch even bother bringing it back to Clan Wolf? Can they trust each other?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 09 November 2015, 21:19:32
*lights a cigar*

I love it when a plan comes together.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 10 November 2015, 00:49:05
I'd say that Aerospace pilot/merchant must have some Shark in him.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 10 November 2015, 01:54:41
The A star. No teams in the clan homeworlds. O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 12 November 2015, 14:12:48
Tribble 213 (or there abouts).

Katrina Steiner sends out her famous peace proposal.
As well all know, in the OTL, Janos, Max and Takashi send back ... rather sarcastic responses. Hanse doesn't, he and Katrina start extensive talks and eventually the grand Federated Commonwealth is born to the shock of the other powers. Whom ComStar forces into a shotgun marriage with each other that is rather less useful.

Except this time, Janos hits his head on a wall or something (or so his advisers think at first) and just like Hanse, he sends a message intended to feel out Katrina on the possibilities, deciding not to simply dismiss the possibilities out of hand. Quickly enough, both he and Hanse find that they are talking to Katrina and start talking to each other ... and some rather interesting concepts are born out.  He has to do all of this through third party cutouts for various reasons, meaning ComStar don't clue onto this at all as nothing of this goes out over HPGs. At his request, lets just say his son has given him reason to worry about ComStars supposed neutrality.

Even so, Janos cannot immediately commit on the same level that Hanse and Katrina can, but he does vow to keep working his allies and MPs to gently bring them around to the idea of a grand alliance, seeing the genuine possibilities for what it would mean.

Hanse and Katrina make their grand announcement even as Janos works his people and key people in parliament, managing only a formal ceasefire between the Lyrans and FWL that surprisingly holds quite well. Although publicly it is just played as a political sop to various factions in the FWL more than anything else.

ComStar still play their hand shortly after and try to drag the DC, FWL and CC into an alliance, the CG pushed into meeting with them by various anti-Lyran groups. He is then of course stunned when Max admits that he was behind his brother and so on. Then pissed when Takashi insists that the two of them kiss and make up to be worthy of the Dragons glorious help and all that. So in an inspired moment he agrees ... but has no intention at all of going along when the time comes.

Playing his cards very close to his chest, he quietly lets Katrina know his decision, who lets Hanse know. He becomes the third secret power in the FedCom alliance and as a result, LIC and MIIO refrain from setting off civil wars here and there letting them stabilize and grow quite a bit in power over the next decade in terms of freshening up units, getting some improved economic growth and so on. Which is the justification for keeping it in place.

Then shortly after the 4th Succession War starts, having planned for this revenge for some time now, Janos sends messages for all his commands to open sealed orders which everyone THINKS are about diving into the Lyran Commonwealth. And indeed, soon a dozen FWL regiments are landing on Lyran border worlds striking them strong blows as the Provinces gear up ... which in actual fact are entirely staged fights for the holovids by a couple of tiny units on both sides having a gay old time faking fights better than a fixed Solaris Match, to feed spies wrong data.

In reality, those units hit in a broad general offensive into the CapCon, which starts JUST about the time Tinkanov falls to the AFFS...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 12 November 2015, 18:50:28
Soooooo...a somewhat more proactive One Letter by drakensis then?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 12 November 2015, 22:25:49
Between Hanse on one side and Janos on the other, the Capellans are doomed. The only reason they remained viable OTL is because they retained certain key industries past where Hanse would comfortably reach. But if Janos is coming in from the other side...
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Post by: Nightsong on 12 November 2015, 23:16:02
I would so love to see how much masonry is trying to pass through the plumbing of Precenter Dieron's apartments when she finds out about that... >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 13 November 2015, 02:20:37
The other nice consequence is the Lyran Commonwealth manages to shift a lot of troops from the border with the Free Worlds League to the Draconis front, which was mostly a holding action from memory... until a massive wave of assault 'Mechs appears to smash into the Dragon's holding forces
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 November 2015, 03:31:21
#214

Somewhat similar to the last tribble but with one change: it's Maximilian Liao who is guardedly positive in his response to Katrina's Peace Proposal, rather than Janos Marik.

Remember, this is 3020: there's been no plan yet to replace Hanse Davion with a doppelganger. Hanse Davion spent almost his whole career in the Draconis March and when he was in the Capellan March he almost invariably wound up beating his head against the wall of Hasek-aligned interests. He doesn't have anything personal against Max yet while they may both be united in distaste for Michael Hasek-Davion.

Historically, the Lyran Commonwealth had been the closest thing the Capellans had to an ally in the Inner Sphere so Katrina would probably be perfectly happy to bring Max in: sure he's not as valuable an ally as Hanse but he's also someone that to an extent can be leveraged against Hanse who otherwise likely to have disproportionate influence inside the alliance.

Meanwhile, Max needs this. Out of the five successor states he's in the weakest position and he knows it. An alliance with the FWL might as well be written on toilet paper if one was on offer - Janos knows that Max was behind Anton's revolt. And the Combine are utterly self-interested. But if the Federated Suns are now neutral or even guardedly friendly - possibly focusing their efforts against the Draconis Combine - while the Lyran Commonwealth is co-ordinating offensives against the League...

It's less likely there would be a Steiner-Davion marriage in this scenario but a broadly similar 4th Succession War could have the AFFS (and the Wolf Dragoons) tearing into the Draconis Combine for moderate gains across the board, which with Takashi's focus on the Dragoons is likely to mean little if any resources available to throw at the Lyrans. Meanwhile the LCAF and CCAF are both hammering at the FWL (with the Lyrans using a sledgehammer and the Capellans a clawhammer, admittedly, given the available resources).

It seems reasonably plausible that the Capellans could retake Zion and Ohrenson provinces from the League while the Lyrans tear apart the Silver Hawks Coalition and Sirians, creating a Terran Corridor. Meanwhile Takashi has exhausted the DCMS and lost more than a dozen worlds around the Galtor thumb (possibly including Proserpina and Iruzun). Michael Hasek-Davion is relatively easily neutralised in this situation since he has nowhere to turn except active rebellion and Hanse would likely still have his heir under his control.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 13 November 2015, 06:31:30
That is interesting drak especially if the target becomes the Free Worlds League which is ripe for a possible collapse. Federated Suns agents have already infiltrated the League which is balkanized. If you could contact rebellious elements on Regulus, Andurien, or some other place and/or coordinate an overthrow of Janos. There are a bunch of possibilities Targeted Capellan and Lyran strikes to pin down or destroy loyal forces while providing mercenary forces for a coup. There are a bunch of options here.  ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 13 November 2015, 19:53:30
If Mad Max joined the coalition you may get Andurian rebelling earlier if things look bleak for Janos.
Interesting one there Drakensis. O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 20 November 2015, 13:31:18
#215

During the engagement on Halstead Station Hanse gets away with his loot from the Hoff collection, but looses the woman he had proposed t. A loss that as it so happened kept him single long enough for Katrina to match him up with her daughter and reshape the Inner Sphere.

What if this time, when the Awesome steps forward to plant its foot firmly in the cockpit of Dana Stephenson's Enforcer, a butterfly flaps its wings and a Charger or something crash tackles it from the side piloted by Captain Leroy Jenkins. Hanse flatly refuses to leave now, despite Arden trying to get him to go NOW. And so the later mutters something most history books would quietly wipe out and follows Hanse forward with his command company, covering the infantry team who get his love out of her Mech and hustle her to the rear as the Dracs push forward, smelling blood despite vicious covering fire from the backstopping dropships.

Through pure chance, this delaying in loading up brings no less an opponent than Takashi Kurita forward into range and eagerly he decides to challenge Hanse to a duel, pulling his Sword of Light away as he steps forward. Hanse, seeing this as the opportunity to both avenge his Brother and get the time needed for the last of his people to evacuate agrees and the two Battlemasters square off. Bodyguards on both sides watching uneasily as the two Mechs bow shallowly to each other, biting their tongues hard enough to draw blood ...
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Post by: Sharpnel on 20 November 2015, 13:39:59
Hmmm Hanse dies and Michael Hasek-Davion is First Prince. Takashi dies then a regency is in lace for Theodore with Marcus Kurita, Subhash Indrahar and the head of the O5P on the regency council. Interesting outcomes abound.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 20 November 2015, 19:31:16
Hanse survives to marry his fiancé.
No fedcom.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 November 2015, 02:21:44
FedCom could still exist, just as an alliance rather than a union.

The treaty wasn't contingent on Melissa marrying Hanse because Hanse and Katrina were both firm on the point that there was no way in 3020 to know if a 10 year old would grow up to like Hanse enough to marry him.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 21 November 2015, 08:05:08
Melissa could be lined up to marry Morgan Hasek-Davion, the then heir and a bit younger than Hanse
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 21 November 2015, 09:55:36
Couldn't you have a potential union with a potential kid of Hanse, a bit later admittedly? Mind you, Hanse being married is likely to butterfly many of the events leading up to 4SW.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 21 November 2015, 18:14:58
You would still have an alliance but the Fedcom fast paced change for the LCAF would be slowed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 21 November 2015, 19:48:41
You would still have an alliance but the Fedcom fast paced change for the LCAF would be slowed.



With my imagined dynastic wedding of Morgan Hasek-Davion to Melissa Steiner I think it might actually be accelerated as Morgan could move to Tharkad to push the alliance military cross over harder and faster, perhaps removing even more of the Lyran High Command's dead weight
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 21 November 2015, 23:59:11
True.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 22 November 2015, 10:58:40
#216

The year is 3027 , the dawn of the Federated Commonwealth.

The Inner Sphere seems to be holding its breath as the strategic picture starts to slowly change, the alliance between houses Davion and Steiner slowly growing from a theory into a reality that does not terribly concern the rest of the Inner Sphere powers.
In public of course.
In private, there are a LOT of very worried Capellans running around as Mad Max sees treason and enemies every way he turns.

Into this mix arrives Justin Allard AKA Justin Xiang. He is given citizenship and a position at the head of the Davion section of the Maskirovka. All as planned of course.

Then suddenly finds himself asked by Tormana Liao, youngest and somewhat out of favored son of Maxy to swing by his office for a brief talk over some puzzling Davion intercepts he's received, oh and bring along Alex Mallory too. Obedient, they show up, at which point he locks the door and activates a surprisingly large number of anti-listening devices to be very sure they are not going to be overheard.

He cuts right to the chase; he is not actually Tormana Liao, he is a guy from the future who went to bed one night and quite annoyingly died. He doesn't know what the hell that has to do with him waking up as Tormana Liao in the past...

Justin and Alex exchange a look which suggests they are both trying to think of the smoothest possible way to break the news to Max that his son is ... utterly and completely batshit insane. He catches the look at laughs, saying as much and they of course deny it, not wanting him to go full supervillian and gas them or something. Then however the mood shifts dramatically as he says that he will prove his is from the future; they are both Davion spies. He then gives them both their chosen recognition codes, codes that only Quintis should know until passed on in the field, as well as their missions and everything they have done. As well as a great many things about themselves that there is no way ANYONE should know for that matter!

This of course both terrifies and intrigues them in equal measure as they enter the twilight zone.

He assures them that he has no need or reason to expose them; on the contrary they are going to help him greatly. Specifically, Justin is going to be sent shortly on a secret mission for him using assets Alex will provide on his instructions. He needs to get in touch with Hanse Davion and call off the invasion of the Capellan Confederation on the day of his wedding. Justin isn't even able to entirely hide his shock at the idea and just how intricate Hanses planning is, with his mission and Alex's simply being parts of a massive machine, but says that he can hardly just tell Hanse to abort this invasion he knows is coming. Tormana agrees but thinks he can make Hanse an offer he can't refuse ... and  he doesn't want to see half the Confederation lost again, let alone the 'Reign of Romano'.

While Justin and Alex are busy getting Hanse on board - without going through ComStar in any way, he briefly admits they are NOT neutral and are actively working to destroy the FedCom before it starts, 'he' is going to be putting into place a few careful moves at home he has been planning for over a year now since he showed up and started cultivating assets and plans. His Father and (crazy) Sister will die in a tragic accident in about two months if all goes well while his (sane) sister is off world back on Saint Ives. By the time she gets back, he will have solidly assumed power and she will fall into line smoothly enough, she's a pretty smart cookie. And so Hanse won't need to seek his revenge on max for the whole nasty body double thing.

Then, in control of the Confederation and with Hanse targeting the Combine instead of them, he'll offer Hanse in return the following concessions.

1. He'll provide him incontrovertible evidence of his Brother in laws treachery so he can firm up the Capellan March - even just do away with his Brother in law on Sian for him if he would prefer? He's happy to do either!

2. He'll provide him an ally on his flank so he can return to targeting the enemy he truly hates; the Draconis Combine. Because there will never be a better time to hit them, Theodore Kurita, he warns, is a vastly more dangerous coordinator and competent General than Takashi and the time to cripple them is NOW.

3. He'll concede free navigation rights for commercial ships through much of Cappie Sarna space. The Terran Corridor on the whole will need to be sliced out of the FWL and DC, but this will in the short term help. With only very minor tariffs ...

4. If the Lyrans can push a few more units at the FWL, he too will launch a full scale invasion of the FWL and grab some cheap planets to firm up his position while they are internal chaos, he plans to get his spies to really step up their efforts in parallel with the Davion/Steiner efforts if possible.

He is offering so much for so little, surely Hanse would be amiable to this requests?

Justin and Alex, being the remarkable people they are, pull themselves together and finally Justin agrees to put the proposal to Hanse. They all shake on it and the two Davion agents leave, both going to take a half-day-Friday and find the nearest bar before dealing with all this tomorrow.

Back in his office, Tormana aka Sun Tzu Liao smiles and does his best Gendo Impression. The board was set, the pieces were moving; let the games begin!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 22 November 2015, 19:51:33
#217

It has been a month since the Smoke Jaguars captured and interrogated the crew of the Outbound Light and learned the current state of affairs in the Inner Sphere. Now they come to the Grand Council to lay out their plan to invade the Inner Sphere and reclaim the Star League in their image. Convincing the other Clans to invade was easy enough and Clan Wolf's trial of refusal was won by the Smoke Jaguar ilKhan Leo Showers, but one Khan in particular did not approve of his plan for Operation: Revival. The Khan in question was Khan Truscott of Clan Star Adder. The Star Adders were a crusader Clan, and they approved of the invasion itself, but not the way Leo Showers wanted. Khan Truscott remembered the reports the Wolf Dragoons sent back to the Clans all those years ago and even pointed them out when he pointed out the flaws of ilKhan Showers' overall plan for Operation: Revival.

1. He rebuffed the idea that only 4 of the Clans should invade, stating that this is a matter that concerns all of the Clans. He also pointed out That it would take more than the number of forces required for the invasion as well.

2. He pointed out that the warriors of the Inner Sphere will be unaware of the methods of Zellbrigen and will fight dishonorably in the eyes of the Clans. In other words, they will use tactics that the Clans have long-since abandoned since their founding.

3. He noted that the lower castes of the Inner Sphere will not just allow their new rulers to just take over and tell them how their lives are; some will take up arms and try to push the Clans out themselves. While one of the Khans argued that they would destroy a city to set an example of such dissidents, Khan Truscott rebuked that it would be a waste of potential resources and would only incense the people of the Inner Sphere even more.

4. He mentioned that the logistics involved would put a strain on their lower resources that they posses within each Clan and that a lengthy invasion would hinder their war effort.

After these points were made, he challenged the ilKhan to another Trial of Refusal, this time to change the plans of the invasion itself. After a battle that cost Leo Showers his life, the Star Adder Khan and his Keshik emerged victorious and through his victory the Grand Council immediately elected him as the new ilKhan. As his first act, he announced a new plan for Operation: Revival, one that would ensure the Clan's dominance in the Inner Sphere and the conquest of Terra.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 23 November 2015, 02:14:52
#218

The year is 3025 and Hanse Davion has been quietly murdered in a cellar under his palace on Argyle. His 'clone' on New Avalon is quietly going insane as his mental programming is increasingly coming unravelled. The alliance with House Steiner is unravelling and Maximilian Liao is cackling...

Right up until, six months after the substitution, in a private conference with the two March Lords and his heir, 'Hanse' pulls a side arm and guns down Michael. Morgan Hasek-Davion and Aaron Sandoval are horrified but he still has the gun and before they can talk him down, the clone accuses Hasek-Davion of trying to use mind control on him...

"Maybe this will stop the voices."

...and then he blows his own brains out.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Davout73 on 23 November 2015, 15:05:02
Morgan Hasek-Davion, First Prince...

Marrying Melissa Steiner, the 4th SSW being postponed, possible issues with the Sandovals...lots of different threads to pull there...

Dav
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 05 December 2015, 05:56:52
#219

Inspired partially by Along Came A Spider by Drac;

The Clan Invasion is underway. On Outreach, the Dragoons get the formal recall order (I'm guessing a Clan Jumpship snuck through the Inner Sphere to hand deliver it or something). Jamie orders the order passed onto Snord via Wolfnet, then brings his people in to discuss the situation.

As in the OTL, the Dragoons remaining original members and Inner Sphere people who have gained trust to be in on the secret all decide 'To hell with this' and throw their lot in with the Inner Sphere.

Natasha however when told by Jamie he is sending her back balks at the idea. And secretly comes up with a new plan...

And so arriving at the the Clan invasion beachhead as in the OTL, with the Grand Council assembling for their meet and greet on Radstadt. Tyra does her thing and the ilKhan dies, then finally everyone gets around to Natasha. But instead of recognizing her as a Clan Warrior as she helps induct Phelen into the Wolf Clan, she demands a Trial of Refusal against the recall order. This of course shocks most of the Khans present - and those hurriedly brought in via HPG links from the Homeworlds. She cites the last orders they received and provides the order to the Clans. Which puts Ulric in a poor situation mind you, but he is not implicated in any way so he'll survive it.

Anyway after some debate, eventually the Grand Council vote and the odds against Natasha are set at 4-1. Bidding is incredibly fierce but ultimately put her up against 4 Mechwarriors including Garth Radick. Politically one warrior from each Clan is sent in, so the Bears, Falcons and Jaguars each select a champion to kill this upstart ancient traitor, or so the Crusaders say.

Suffice to say that Natasha wins the engagement in less than ten minutes with four KIA enemies and a hell of a lot of shocked faces staring flabbergasted at the sheer skill of this ancient warrior who should have been easily defeated by the far superior genetic heritages of the newer people facing her. As her Ransom, this time she demanded possession of Phelen Kell to boot from Ulric...

With that little issue settled, she then takes her leave of the Clans, warning them that the Wolf Dragoons stand against them and will remain true Wardens defending the Inner Sphere from them as the external threat the Wardens have always feared. And thanks to the Crusaders having bet the house on the TOR results and a clear victory over the ancient warrior, its too late to change their mind to declare a Ritual of Abjuration against the Dragoons leaving the Clans (and Ulric) in the twilight zone...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 17 December 2015, 01:09:39
#220

After re-reading the opening of the Jhiad and getting a little annoyed...

So its the opening of the Jhiad. The Star League has been disbanded and the WOB in a temper tantrum send their warships to Tharkad and New Avalon to force the two states back into the Star League. Or else.

What ROM doesn't know however is that Katrina in the dying year of the FedCom civil war started a crash program to build surface-to-space defenses on both Tharkad and New Avalon. For the very good reason that modestly fortified surface to orbit missile silos and batteries of NL/55's and HNPPCs are actually (relatively speaking) not that expensive to build on the ground, compared to the cost of full blown jump capable warships. And that while warship production at shipyards had been screwed to hell by the civil war, with Victor seeming to have a considerable warship fleet, Katherine had decided that making her capitals relatively invasion proof would let her release her fleets to act as offensive weapons, rather than be tied down on guard duty.

Unfortunately for her, the needed secrecy she insisted upon meant that the systems were only partially operational on New Avalon at the time Victor came calling (and behind the scenes, Team Banzai gleefully pulled the plug on Victors orders as they approached) and not operational at all on Thakard when Peter made orbit. But both Peter and Yvonne allowed the construction programs to continue after they took power and both systems became operational shortly before the Star League conference providing substantial protection over their capitals orbitals. But for once, WOB ROM doesn't get an automatic 'we know everything' BS pass and so are clueless as to this.

And as in the OTL, the WOB drive their warships and troops into low orbit of Tharkad and demand that the Lyrans rejoin the Star League. Or else! And do much the same to New Avalon.

Naturally Peter and Yvonne refuse. And the WOB open fire.

This time however mere seconds after the first shots strike Avalon City, the hidden SDS batteries on Mount Davion and Asgard light up and blow the WOB ships out of the sky, along with most of the troops they had been escorting...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 17 December 2015, 09:57:55
You know, I posted a what-if that involved Luthien having an SDS with about 500 missiles in silos scattered across it's continents around the time of the Clan invasion.  Both conventional and nuclear tipped.

Most of the clanners on this site thought that it would provoke more orbital bombardment,not less.  I suppose that this won't actually changed the Jihad too much-the ships can probably maneuver to break contact and get away, but a few of them might be crippled and that will definately delay the actions of the WoB.  Still, the general temper-tantrum won't be delayed by a few surface-to-orbit batteries.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 21 December 2015, 09:45:38
#221

Instead of Stone coming out of nowhere and brainwashing huge chunks of the Inner Sphere to do what he wants, lets say that the Jihad ends with Victor (as was pretty much being led up to IMO) rallying the Inner Sphere and Clans and crushing the WOB. Perhaps even a few years sooner thanks to less BS going on as he gets everyone back on task.

And after smashing the WOB back to Terra, they find to their surprise that the local population were in fact extremely enthusiastic supporters of the WOB, who had spun the whole WOB protectorate as the Terran Hegemony Mark II (or more specifically even the Terran Alliance Mark II). Having been thoroughly brainwashed over the centuries to be full believers in ComStars doctrine, at least in general, they had back the WOB to the hilt, enthusiastic to claim their 'rightful' place in the Inner Sphere.

Suffice to say that they are shocked when the rest of mankind takes objection to this. Even more shocked when the WOB are defeated and hoards of troops hit Terra. Horrified when the WOB start using nukes in defense (thats something that happens to other planets damnit! - although to be fair the WOB worked hard to shield the Terran population from the reality of what they were doing out there in terms of WMDs and slaughter). And in the end the WOB are crushed and wiped out to the last person.

The Inner Sphere powers then find that they have a Terra which wasn't simply trying to survive under the Blakest occupation but was in fact in full cahoots with them, willing partners. And so decide that they need to be punished accordingly. And so, ala Germany, occupation zones are drawn up across Terra for each of the Successor States to occupy Terra as a jointly controlled planet and REALLY stamp out any trace of the BS that led to the Jhiad...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 21 December 2015, 12:15:23
Be it proposed that Terra's continents are divided up as follows:

North America: Joint Occupation Zone
South America: Capellan Zone
Africa: Legate Protectorate (Each province of the FWL has their own sub-region and as a result things are nearly as tense as the JOZ)
Europe and western asia up to Pakistan and the Ural mountains: Federated Suns Zone
Asia east of Pakistan and the Urals: Draconis Occupation Zone
Oceanea, Madagascar and 'All Pacific Islands' which includes Japan.  Also all submarine settlements: Lyran Occupation Zone.
Antarctica: Clan occupation area, penguins and ice sheets protected.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 December 2015, 16:40:56
So the Lyrans get nothing? Sounds fair!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 21 December 2015, 17:32:13
So the Lyrans get nothing? Sounds fair!

Fixed.  And to pay my pennance for the sin:

#222.

The year is 3019.  Throughout the Inner Sphere, reports are made of unusual objects in the skys over many worlds, unnatural saucer shaped objects that appear intermittently on radar or not at all, but somehow jam and interfere with HPGs.  Isolated communities vanish overnight, leaving only strange green substances in the outlines of their former inhabitants.  For two months, the tension builds as no world seems safe from this bizarre series of occurrences before the storm finally breaks.  Tiny war machines, moving far more fluidly and organically than any Battlemech strike at multiple worlds, including the ongoing Battle on Hesperus II.  Natasha Kerensky herself is forced to punch out when multiple 'sectoids' destroy her Battlemech, riddling it with PPC-sized blasts from their ridiculously tiny guns.  At the same time on the far side of the Inner Sphere, Doctor Banzai images the first of the 'Abductor' class spaceships now seemingly everywhere, and puts a name to the threats even now self-destructing to prevent any technology falling into the hands of the Inner Sphere.  Aliens.  Extra-terrestrial life.  First contact has been made, and it is not pretty.

As Wolf's Dragoons prepare to fall back with fragments of Sectoid in their holds, Katrina Steiner contemplates amending her call for peace into a call for war-calling upon all the Successor States to unite their efforts to fight aliens behind a singular Extraterrestrial Command.

Or as it would be called in the years to come:
XCOM.

---
So basically a fusion with Enemy Within, right down to Meld, Elerium, and the general alien types.  Sectoids are proto-mech sized, but have a single PPC-powered gun.  Thin Men are big protos, but have a gun as accurate as a pulse laser with the range and power of a clan ERPPC.  And a missile full of acid that eats away at your mech.  Floaters are like LAMs, but they have no legs and never touch the ground, always hovering, and carry a one-shot artillery barrage.  Mutons are the enemy Heavy Mech sized foes, and just one can take a whole lance of assaults on with very little trouble thanks to their speed, power and toughness.

About the only things that are recognizable are Chyssalids and Ethereals.  And Ethereals don't need no stinking Mechs.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 21 December 2015, 20:31:11
Wardens being Wardens

Kerlin Ward realizes following the Dragoon Compromise that the Crusade is inevitable. It will happen eventually and the Wardens must be ready to stand against it and so begins the Great Conspiracy. The Wolves along with Coyote, Goliath Scorpion, Diamond Shark (half anyway the other half stays as the Sea Fox), and Hell's Horses (half anyway with the other half staying to become Stone Lion) all start work on a contingency plan; Operation Sentinel.

For four decades they carefully prepare to return to the InnerSphere and defend it from the Clan onslaught. When the Outbound Light jumps into the Huntress system they are prepare and as the Crusaders begin planning to invade the Wardens begin to relocate. As the battle against the 3rd Battle Cluster is concluded the Wardens strike to remove their genetic legacies and perform rear guard actions.

Discuss....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 29 December 2015, 07:30:38
Huh.

If these Warden clans actually have been preparing for this carefully, then things are going to get very interesting very quickly.
Even more if the Wardens are brought in (even if just at a high level) on the Dragoons plans to defect to the Inner Sphere. And if contact is maintained with them to prepare the ground, you might have Jamie being forced to get off his ass and start laying the groundwork. Perhaps even bypassing the whole vendetta with Kurita and hitting their escape clause when things come to a head, using their impressive jumpship fleet to simply leave the Combine and head to the Federated Suns and ask for a contract, rather than start a silly MAD scenario...

So when the Outbound Light arrives, the Clans simply execute prepared fallbacks into the Federated Commonwealth and perhaps the FRR (I can't see the DC accepting their help)...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 29 December 2015, 14:37:12
What do you think of the Dragoons signing on with the Free Rasalhague Republic instead of the Federated Commonwealth after the war? So instead of Outreach they head to Rasalhague to help train their new military?

Or what if the Dragoons say to the Federated Commonwealth give us Apollo and the ancient worlds of the Rim? They could start trying to develop their own buffer state out in the Old Republic as Kerensky did many years ago.

In either event the Dragoons could draw in ancient Star League mercenary commands to assist them with their new nation building project.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Davout73 on 29 December 2015, 15:28:36
Theres the 10 year gap in between the end of the war and the founding of the FRR to account for?

Dav

What do you think of the Dragoons signing on with the Free Rasalhague Republic instead of the Federated Commonwealth after the war? So instead of Outreach they head to Rasalhague to help train their new military?

Or what if the Dragoons say to the Federated Commonwealth give us Apollo and the ancient worlds of the Rim? They could start trying to develop their own buffer state out in the Old Republic as Kerensky did many years ago.

In either event the Dragoons could draw in ancient Star League mercenary commands to assist them with their new nation building project.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 29 December 2015, 16:46:50
What do you think of the Dragoons signing on with the Free Rasalhague Republic instead of the Federated Commonwealth after the war? So instead of Outreach they head to Rasalhague to help train their new military?


It would strategically make sense in terms of Anti-Clan work ... but Rasalhague;

1. Hate Mercs as a general rule.
2. Lacks the industrial might of the FedCom to rebuild their shattered forces
3. Doesn't have the industrial capacity of Outreach for same/converting to ClanTech production.

Still, its clearly the point where the Inner Sphere needs bulking up more than anywhere else.
Hmm.
Now THATS an idea for a Tribble; at the Battle of Rasalhague, the Dragoons suddenly show up (all 5 Regiments, again with 2 Clantech Regiments) and curbstomp Ulrics carefully handpicked force before breaking out and getting away on their jumpships cleanly...

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Or what if the Dragoons say to the Federated Commonwealth give us Apollo and the ancient worlds of the Rim? They could start trying to develop their own buffer state out in the Old Republic as Kerensky did many years ago.


The Dragoons are a couple of regiments of Mercs at this point. Hell even at full strength they aint going to be developing their own state without some of the other Clans arriving and setting up shop. Which is going to raise a shitload of questions rather quickly ;)

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In either event the Dragoons could draw in ancient Star League mercenary commands to assist them with their new nation building project.

Um why?
I mean the Eridani Light Horse, Blue Star Irregulars and Screaming Eagles, for example, may have ties back to the Star League ... but they don't owe the Clans their allegiance because of it. The ELH in fact were so shocked by the truth of who the Clans were that they asked Hanse for a year off to come to grips with it before they finally engaged them in battle.

They are Mercs working for their employer, I doubt they would really be interested in trying to build a nation on the rim ... thats not something you throw soldiers at if you want it to actually work!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 29 December 2015, 18:54:53
What do you think of the Dragoons signing on with the Free Rasalhague Republic instead of the Federated Commonwealth after the war? So instead of Outreach they head to Rasalhague to help train their new military?

Handful of buckshot, meet bucket of spit. Or maybe only a bowl of spit considering the meager strength Rasalhague would have in nearly any semi-plausible scenario.

If the Clans and Jaime coordinate and stage a number of OTL style Ghost Bear reverse Exoduses over the decades it becomes more viable, with Clan technology and efficiency being backed by a much larger industrial base. But that requires an extra epiphany on the part of the Wardens when it comes to dealing with the uncultured freebirth barbarians on top of the 'why don't we live up to our ding blasted mission statement' change posited.

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Or what if the Dragoons say to the Federated Commonwealth give us Apollo and the ancient worlds of the Rim? They could start trying to develop their own buffer state out in the Old Republic as Kerensky did many years ago.

In either event the Dragoons could draw in ancient Star League mercenary commands to assist them with their new nation building project.

This is one of those scenarios that needs Jaime Wolf to get a clue well before the time of the 4SW. Preferably around and about the time the Dragoons arrived in the Inner Sphere in the first place. It would honestly be infinitely easier for the Dragoons to knock off all of the one quadmech bumpkin states down by the LC-FWL border, and use that as their base to build. Being in the direct path of attack to be the first guys hit is for overly cocky RP thread participants.

Now if you want a fun way for this idea to go off the rails, Jaime Wolf asks Kerlin for everything that can be spared, and takes Terra in the vicinity of 3022.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 30 December 2015, 01:05:31
That is the other eventuality, the target is going to be Earth and the Dragoons mission is to work for everybody. Would ComStar be daffy enough to hire them to garrison the place? Crazy like a Fox could dream up his own "backstab" of the Dragoons in a plot to eliminate ComStar whose interdiction during the 4th SW did make them an enemy. The Order would be drawn by hints dropped by the Dragoons perhaps defectors leading to a Justin Allard style infiltration. When everything is setup FedCom goes to make a big move, major invasion possibly War of 3039, ComStar drawn by the Dragoon opportunity and with their eyes somewhere else gets caught napping. Bang bob is your uncle, the Warden Clans will meet the Dragoons there in 3050. Nah, that sounds too Stackpole.

How about a good old Terran invasion before the ComGuards are established?? The Dragoons need to rebuild from Misery and the 4th SW campaigns so the window is small. Perhaps Brion's Legion is in on it with the Dragoons and they are all part of this Wolf Trap. The collapse of ComStar would likely follow as the Dragoons could set up deals with the FedCom to rebuild the Terran corridor perhaps lifting the Sphere even more (tech wise then in canon). Terra itself would make one hell of a Warden Holdfast.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 30 December 2015, 13:04:00
That would be why I said 3022. There is a sweet spot in Dragoon capabilities matched up against the Com UnGuarded, once the Kuritans start messing with them at every turn that rapidly starts to vanish, compounded by the Kapteyn Accord making it likely to look like a ploy by the nascent Fed Com, and Waterly starting to agitate for improved intervention ability pretty much the moment she made Precentor. That year also makes it apolitical for everyone but the Combine, and honestly trying to bring them on board is likely to be an exercise in futility and entirely predictable betrayal. So does trying to keep Liao in the loop at all, but at least there you can possibly get Candace on board out of enlightened self interest and semi sanity, or if all else fails Tormano out of entirely unenlightened self interest as a wastrel.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 31 December 2015, 19:11:34
It would strategically make sense in terms of Anti-Clan work ... but Rasalhague;

1. Hate Mercs as a general rule.

I'm not going to belabor your other points, they're generally valid.

This issue, however, can be defused depending on the timing. Rasalhague's dislike for mercs arises out of the Ronin Wars, when numerous merc units lawyered their way out of actually fighting when the Draconis renegades invaded the place. If the Dragoons provided an example and some enforcement to stop that from happening, it could definitely lead to a very different attitude.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 31 December 2015, 21:53:16
I'm not going to belabor your other points, they're generally valid.

This issue, however, can be defused depending on the timing. Rasalhague's dislike for mercs arises out of the Ronin Wars, when numerous merc units lawyered their way out of actually fighting when the Draconis renegades invaded the place. If the Dragoons provided an example and some enforcement to stop that from happening, it could definitely lead to a very different attitude.

It would be interesting to see the Dragoons sign on with Rasalhague right after the 4th Succession War as part of a nation building effort. With the Combine's Death to Mercenaries just the other side of the border and Jamie Wolf help "guide" merc relations for the Republic (and thus cutting out several well meaning contract errors committed by their new ruler) you could have a very different nation laying in wait for the Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 31 December 2015, 22:35:02
The problem is that the Clans are just as prone to the control of Earth=rulership of humanity mode of thinking as Comstar is. It's a universal sickness of BT humanity. The Clan Wars just put a different spin to it. They can claim to be Wardens all they want. But when they're sitting there in the court of the Star League, how long will they resist that kind of thinking? How long until reactionary movements take over the various Clan councils?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 01 January 2016, 00:51:10
Another fair point given the rise of Wolf Supremacists in the canon time line. Although if they join up with the Dragoons in this timeline and/or leave their Crusaders behind when they come Sphere ward you may see different results.

Getting back to the Dragoons setting up shop in the Free Rasalhague Republic I think the biggest factor to overcome is Mansdotter himself. He seemed to expertly (diplomacy wise) steer a neutral course between the Combine and the Commonwealth wary on pissing off either. Another ruler or different version of Rasalhague could change that equation setting them on a far more militant/ aggressive path. Of course there are consequences for that.....

For the Dragoon base world I was thinking Nox. Historically significant it seems to have resources and at one point heavy industry that could use rebuilding.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 01 January 2016, 08:35:55
Or better yet, the former Terran Hegemony territory is supposedly littered with abandoned worlds. Worlds that the Clans should have records of.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 01 January 2016, 15:24:29
Getting back to the Dragoons setting up shop in the Free Rasalhague Republic I think the biggest factor to overcome is Mansdotter himself. He seemed to expertly (diplomacy wise) steer a neutral course between the Combine and the Commonwealth wary on pissing off either. Another ruler or different version of Rasalhague could change that equation setting them on a far more militant/ aggressive path. Of course there are consequences for that.....

Wasn't it Haakon Magnusson who ruled the FRR until the Clans showed up? I thought Mansdotter was head of the Kungsarme at the time.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 01 January 2016, 17:21:21
I'm not going to belabor your other points, they're generally valid.

This issue, however, can be defused depending on the timing. Rasalhague's dislike for mercs arises out of the Ronin Wars, when numerous merc units lawyered their way out of actually fighting when the Draconis renegades invaded the place. If the Dragoons provided an example and some enforcement to stop that from happening, it could definitely lead to a very different attitude.

This hate built on anywhere up to a couple hundred years of anti merc propaganda by the Combine on many worlds, which would have been based at least in part on mercenary units realizing how they had been played, conned, and led to their destruction turning upon the Combine, which if the timeline proceeded unaltered through 4SW culminated in a slight kerfluffle over some dictate by the Coordinator about killing all mercenaries, and their rather predictable violent responses to such. Much as it might be nice to pretend that Rasalhague was pure and unsullied in their nordic whatever, the actual historical Principality was a tiny afterthought, and there was ample time for pseudo samurai bargain bin cosplay to have made its mark even before 3028-29 happened.


While it might be slightly easier for them to get acceptance before the ronin wars, the inclusion of the Dragoons as any important part of the FRR would make both Comstar walk away from the table, and result in full DCMS support for crushing the upstart state.
Wasn't it Haakon Magnusson who ruled the FRR until the Clans showed up? I thought Mansdotter was head of the Kungsarme at the time.
Mansdottir was considered the front runner for whatever was likely to happen until Theodore and Myndo made their deal with Magnusson behind his back, presumably while in possession of verigraphed evidence of Katrina Steiner molesting farm animals. He remained about as relevant as it was possible to be in FRR politics for as long as Rasalhague continued to delude itself about their necks not being someone's footrest.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: J-H on 04 January 2016, 20:33:45
I've been lurking here since 2011(?) and finally came up with something to post.  Thank you to Cannonshop, Drakensis, Master Arminas, and others for many hours of enjoyable reading.

Tribble # 471:  Trial of Position

Outreach, 3051.  Sun-Tzu Liao fires a missile salvo that hits some of Kai's opponents in their 3v1 trials, breaking zellbrigen, before punching out.  Faced with a 6v1 match, Kai uses firepower, maneuverability, and intelligent thinking (seismic data) to split, find, and defeat 5 of his 6 opponents, before facing off with Jaime Wolf's Archer in a canyon.

He hesitates, trying to find the optimal solution, but only for a split-second.  Planting his mech's feet, he sprints towards the Archer at an angle; most of Colonel Wolf's LRMs crash against his left arm or miss entirely.  At close range, he has the advantage and is able to defeat Colonel Wolf.

When the mechs are parked, Kai climbs down the ladder from his Battlemech, sweaty and tired but elated.  In addition to the royals standing around, he's confused to see all of the on-planet regimental leaders of Wolf's Dragoons present.  Jaime Wolf, standing in front, renders him a formal salute.  "Congratulations, Kai.  Never in our history has a warrior defeated six foes in a Trial of Position.  You have proven yourself worthy, and defeated me.  Wolf's Dragoons are now yours to command, sir."

(based on something Jaime actually said, about the Dragoons being a few seconds away from having new leadership)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 05 January 2016, 10:51:38
I've been lurking here since 2011(?) and finally came up with something to post.  Thank you to Cannonshop, Drakensis, Master Arminas, and others for many hours of enjoyable reading.

Tribble # 471:  Trial of Position

Outreach, 3051.  Sun-Tzu Liao fires a missile salvo that hits some of Kai's opponents in their 3v1 trials, breaking zellbrigen, before punching out.  Faced with a 6v1 match, Kai uses firepower, maneuverability, and intelligent thinking (seismic data) to split, find, and defeat 5 of his 6 opponents, before facing off with Jaime Wolf's Archer in a canyon.

He hesitates, trying to find the optimal solution, but only for a split-second.  Planting his mech's feet, he sprints towards the Archer at an angle; most of Colonel Wolf's LRMs crash against his left arm or miss entirely.  At close range, he has the advantage and is able to defeat Colonel Wolf.

When the mechs are parked, Kai climbs down the ladder from his Battlemech, sweaty and tired but elated.  In addition to the royals standing around, he's confused to see all of the on-planet regimental leaders of Wolf's Dragoons present.  Jaime Wolf, standing in front, renders him a formal salute.  "Congratulations, Kai.  Never in our history has a warrior defeated six foes in a Trial of Position.  You have proven yourself worthy, and defeated me.  Wolf's Dragoons are now yours to command, sir."

(based on something Jaime actually said, about the Dragoons being a few seconds away from having new leadership)

On the plus side, it would be incredibly difficult to do worse than Jaime Wolf in command. On the minus side, this is still a barely blooded lieutenant being put in command of a divisional formation.

I personally would be rooting for the timeline where Kai instantly goes mad with power, and seizes the throne on Sian.

Pleasant fantasies aside, there's roughly two ways for this to go, in the one Victor gets captured or killed by Falcons, in the other Luthien falls because the Dragoons were actually deployed where they should have been all along.     
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 05 January 2016, 16:44:04
[There's a deliberate nod to Davout in here.]

FCN Furious, Cruiser Squadron, 1st Transport Flotilla
Caph, Grand Duchy of New Avalon, Federated Commonwealth
Thursday, November 26, 3057


Victor Ian Steiner-Davion sat down at the terminal to see the faces of the flag officers, both Army and Navy, assembled for the final pre-battle briefing. There wasn't a single trace of worry or any other form of anxiousness; if anything, there seemed to be a barely controlled undercurrent of fury.

"Well, this is the final dress rehearsal, ladies and gentlemen. Any last minute changes of plan or objections?" Asked the Prince.

Marshal of the Regiment Sita Moreau, Commander of the 1st Messengers of Shiva RCT, chimed in, "Yes sir, I object to how long it is taking to give these ****** a proper seeing to."

Victor rolled his eyes. If anybody bothered to measure such things, Moreau was easily the most aggressive commander of the ground force component. It was fortunate that her division commander was such a steady fellow. "That's not a new objection, Marshal. And for want of a nail. Anybody else? No? Admiral of the Fleet Hashimoto, let's review the naval side since you'll be first to see action."

"Yes, sir. First I'm going to cover general guidances. All Captains should be, or made to be, aware that the fanatics will likely resort to ramming actions once it becomes clear that defeat is inevitable. To that end, independent maneuvering is authorized and close combat is contraindicated if at all avoidable. Therefor, conditional release of nuclear weapons is authorized for use against underway warships only; civilian stations are not to be touched and precision fire should only be used against weapons bays of military stations if they are actively engaging friendly ships.

"Marine boarding parties will be sent against those stations once all weapons fire has ceased. Once aboard, all Marines should be courteous and respectful but firm in carrying out their duties of securing all persons and stations. All civilians not calling Terra home should be released once their identities are positively confirmed, with thanks for their understanding at being briefly detained, and any Terra-native civilians will be held until the homeworld itself is secure. All enemy military personnel are to be held as prisoners of war and treated accordingly. All enemy intelligence agents are to be treated as spies on the battlefield; I have received orders that the full penalty shall be applied in all cases but that any means not instantly fatal are forbidden.

"Now, as to the organization of Task Forces and objectives, they are as follows: Task Force 1 will be composed of 1st and 2nd Assault Fleets with the objective of securing Titan, Task Force 2 will be composed of the 1st Raider Fleet with the objective of securing the Zenith Jump Point, Task Force 3 shall be composed of the 2nd Raider Fleet with the objective of securing the Nadir Jump Point, and Task Force 4 shall be composed of the assembled Transport Flotillas with the objective of securing Terra. Once Task Forces 1, 2, and 3 have accomplished their initial objectives an Office of Naval Intelligence jumpship posing as a merchant passing through shall jump to Caph to inform Task Force 4 that they are clear to jump and transmit to them up to the moment astrographic and gravimetric data.

"I will hand over the remainder of the briefing to Admiral Östberg, who will command Task Force 4 in battle."

Östberg, a towering giant of a Viking, nodded and began, "Thank you, sir. To be blunt, we will be jumping directly into the Terran L1 point. Because of the astrographic realities of such a thing, it will only be possible to jump one flotilla at a time. Each flotilla will have ten minutes to maneuver clear of L1. It is vitally important that maneuvering begin as soon as possible and that all aerospace fighter assets, Army and Navy, deploy with all due haste. It is certain that we will be within extreme range of heavy guns and missiles immediately, if they exist, and that enemy aerospace assets will deploy to meet us. Release of nuclear weapons for Task Force 4 is authorized against any Lunar or orbital weapons platform to include massed fighter formations, with the exception of anything within the L1 jump point. Warships remaining in Terran orbit is not anticipated, but in such an instance massed fire by a flotilla against a single warship is indicated. At all times Task Force 4 is to remember the motto of the Transport Flotillas, 'Our Glory Is In The Homecoming Of Heroes' and act accordingly."

Victor let a small grin show at the Viking's last sentence and interjected himself, "Thank you for that briefing, Admirals. I would like to address a naval concern that was put to me, which is that a portion of the enemy fleet will not be at Terra as anticipated. We know that the enemy's main battle fleets are not based at Terra, but at two former SLDF fleet bases whose location remained secret even throughout the Amaris Coup. We believe we have those locations and therefor a Raider Fleet each will be attacking those bases. If the enemy fleet in its entirety is at Terra, those fleets will conduct themselves according to their SOP and destroy any fleet facilities located there and then lie in wait for retreating enemy warships until given the all clear.

"Now, Field Marshall Zibler has overall command of the ground elements. I will turn the second half of the briefing over to him."

"Thank you, Oberstmajor Steiner-Davion. First, the same general guidances that Hashimoto laid out regarding captives apply to all ground force elements as well. As ground warfare is significantly different from that of space combat, and the size of my forces is substantially greater, I will not bore you all with any great detail as all orders have been disseminated.

"North American Army. Assault, Heavy, Light, and First Davion Guards are the Hilton Head Division. Arcadian Cuirassiers are the American South Division. Argyle Lancers are the Texas Division. Dragonlords are the American Central Corp, to be divided between North and South Divisions. Kestrel Grenadiers are the Steel Belt Division. New Ivaarsen Chasseurs are the New England Division. 9th-12th Tancredi Loyalists are the Big Sky Division. 13th-16th Tancredi Loyalists are the Mountain West Division. 13th-20th Syrtis Fusiliers are the California Corp, to be divided into North and South Divisions. 33rd-40th Robinson Chevaliers are the Pacific Northwest Corp, to be divided into Vancouver and Tacoma Divisions. 1st-4th FCAC is the Ontario Division. 5th-8th FCAC is the Quebec Division. 9th-12th FCAC is the Alberta Division. 13th-16th FCAC is the Manitoba Division. 17th-20th FCAC is the Mexico City Division.

"Central American Corp, divided into North and South Divisions. 21st-24th FCAC.

"South American Army. 1st-8th Crucis Lancers is the Brazil Corp, divided into North and South Divisions. 5th-8th Crucis Lancers is the Argentina Division. 9th-12th Crucis Lancers is the Chile Division. 12th-16th Crucis Lancers is the Columbia Division.

"European Army. 1st-4th Donegal Guards is the Ireland Division. 1st-4th Skye Rangers is the Scotland Division. 1st-4th Arcturan Guards is the Britain Division. 25th-32nd Robinson Chevaliers is the Western Corp, divided into Iberia and France Divisions. 1st-4th Rasalhague Regulars is the Scandinavian Division. 5th-12th Lyran Regulars is the Central Corp, divided into Germany and Poland Divisions. 5th-8th Royal Guards is the Geneva Division. 13th-16th Lyran Regulars is the South Division.

"Russian Army. 17th-32nd Lyran Regulars divided into Ukraine Division, Belarus Division, West Russia Division, and East Russia Division.

"Chinese Army. 1st-4th St. Ives Cavalry is the Beijing Division. 5th-8th St. Ives Cavalry is the Shanghai Division. 1st-4th Centauri Guards is the Guangzhou Division. 1st-4th Teng Hussars is the Taiwan Division.

"Asian Army. 1st-4th Genyosha is the Japan Division. 1st-4th Kowloon Guards is the Siam Division. 1st-16th Messengers of Shiva is the India Corp, divided into North, South, Pakistan, and Begal Divisions. 1st-8th Arkab Legions is the West Asia Corp, divided into Arabian and Mesopotamia Divisions."

As Victor had known all this in advance, he had zoned out until the end, "A question for everybody's illumination. That's a significant force, so what are we going to do about ComGuard troops in our territory?"

Zibler grinned, "Militia LCTs, aided by special operations units, will be taking care of those."

Another officer, up to that point silent, chimed in, "Wait, what about the HPGs?"

"I don't anticipate any damage, since the special operations units will be securing them and their technicians, but in the off chance that it does occur we recently acquired the means to outright build new HPGs and can operate them without assistance. Anything else? No? That concludes this briefing, then," Victor said as he reached over to hit the power button on the terminal.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 06 January 2016, 05:25:32
St. Ives collaborating with FC forces I can see, but Genyosha?  ???
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 06 January 2016, 09:08:05
St. Ives collaborating with FC forces I can see, but Genyosha?  ???

Soooo much backstory to this one.

1) FedCom here isn't what it was in cannon. Each former nation is a Grand Duchy, which is further divided into Duchies, etc. Basically the asinine confusion for military and civil organization zones is gone. Oh yeah, and sane tax codes that can't be cheated, so even relatively little in the way of taxes means a HUGE military.

2) There aren't any Clans, as yet. Nor Wolf's Dragoons. Kerensky's Dragoons, OTOH...

3) St. Ives is correct but isn't. There isn't strictly a Capellan Confederation anymore. Something about the FWL briefly falling apart, the DC having a bit of a ronin problem plus a general rebellion in Rasalhague, and the 4th Succession War kicking off all around 3040. Did I mention it's the Grand Duchy of St. Ives?

4) DC and FedCom are permanently at peace. The price of the FedCom not turning around and making Takashi a eunuch was Omi marrying Victor and their heir inheriting Combine throne as well.

5) Katherine's dead and that's precisely why Terra's about to get the asskicking of a lifetime. The public attempted assassination of a ruler and offing one of his heirs will do that.

6) Oh, about Omi? She and Katherine were friends (the irony...). Omi is offended. When Omi is offended and the offender is a nation you can bet a few regiments answering to Luthien are going to move.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 06 January 2016, 09:26:34
Soooo much backstory to this one.

1) FedCom here isn't what it was in cannon. Each former nation is a Grand Duchy, which is further divided into Duchies, etc. Basically the asinine confusion for military and civil organization zones is gone. Oh yeah, and sane tax codes that can't be cheated, so even relatively little in the way of taxes means a HUGE military.

2) There aren't any Clans, as yet. Nor Wolf's Dragoons. Kerensky's Dragoons, OTOH...

3) St. Ives is correct but isn't. There isn't strictly a Capellan Confederation anymore. Something about the FWL briefly falling apart, the DC having a bit of a ronin problem plus a general rebellion in Rasalhague, and the 4th Succession War kicking off all around 3040. Did I mention it's the Grand Duchy of St. Ives?

4) DC and FedCom are permanently at peace. The price of the FedCom not turning around and making Takashi a eunuch was Omi marrying Victor and their heir inheriting Combine throne as well.

5) Katherine's dead and that's precisely why Terra's about to get the asskicking of a lifetime. The public attempted assassination of a ruler and offing one of his heirs will do that.

6) Oh, about Omi? She and Katherine were friends (the irony...). Omi is offended. When Omi is offended and the offender is a nation you can bet a few regiments answering to Luthien are going to move.

It sounds like you really need to do an 'Of Wolves and Falcons' style introduction chapter so that we know what the heck is going on before any reasonable criticism or analysis of the idea can be attempted. Because right now with what's been said there's no way of knowing who owns what, who's still alive, and who died when that we might think is alive if not specified otherwise.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Fyrwulf on 06 January 2016, 09:43:50
It sounds like you really need to do an 'Of Wolves and Falcons' style introduction chapter so that we know what the heck is going on before any reasonable criticism or analysis of the idea can be attempted. Because right now with what's been said there's no way of knowing who owns what, who's still alive, and who died when that we might think is alive if not specified otherwise.

I'm sort of writing as I have inspiration. There's also a great deal of reference material that I have to compile and even the stuff I've done isn't necessarily completed. I've been working on a map, but Davout is helping me out with borders because my Illustrator-Fu is weak.

Anyway, all this ties into my Wolverine Compromise tribble, which will be the first story of a trilogy.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 06 January 2016, 12:39:35
Tribble # 473

Freddy Steiner after getting almost killed by Theodore and then shoved into a monastery doesn't mysteriously forget his hyper-loyalty to the Lyran Commonwealth for some reason. While he might wash his hands on the top end politics, he certainly doesn't forget his home even as he recovers and so on.

So then suddenly he finds himself sold to Myndo to command her 'ComGuards'. And for some biazre reason as in the OTL, soon enough he is put in charge of ROM ... because you know, Myndo is batshit.

Freddy has learned very hard lessons in the school of hard knocks about how to keep a poker face on though by this point. And while he is horrified when he finds out just how much ComStar has screwed with the Inner Sphere, he doesn't do anything. Instead he keeps his diligent work up reforming the ComGuards and building Myndo the army she wants, which pleases her greatly.

Then he suddenly dies in a tragic accident while inspecting the ComGuards somewhere when a Battlemech blows up. Tragic (and annoying to Myndo who now has to find someone to complete her work) Focht of course faked his death neatly and smuggles himself off Terra ... with a ****** of data on ROM. Including their past 'activities' all the way back to Holy Shroud, their current screwing over with the FedCom (including their transfers of hardware to the DCMS) and the ID's of pretty much all the ROM agents in both FedCom states.

So the year is 3037 and to Katrinas shock, Freddy turns up one night in her room, kneels before her and explains where he has been, what he has been doing and hands over all the data to her...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 06 January 2016, 15:34:46
Tribble # 473 is great idea, this is what could and should have happened in cannon
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 06 January 2016, 21:51:25
Tribble #473 would wipeout ROM in the FC and probably wreck any chance of the Wobbies getting as much power as they did.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 07 January 2016, 03:29:50
As Precentor ROM Frederick would have been in charge of ComStar's internal security and ideological purity enforcement, so he could easily have a couple of dozen HPG operators who were deemed 'ideologically impure' disappear (say, have them put aboard an aircraft to be flown to a re-education centre like the one at Tierra del Fuego mentioned in canon a few times, and have the aircraft reported crashed with no survivors). Now if he could smuggle them off Terra along with him on his secret trip to the Lyran Commonwealth you'd have the perfect cadre to train up their own HPG operators, which is the ultimate way to screw over ComStar.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 January 2016, 04:40:59
Or he could carefully build up the ComGuards for five years, mould them in his image and then Primus Anastasius Focht could take over. Deeply saddened by his predecessors' lapses, of course.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 07 January 2016, 05:09:45
Or he could carefully build up the ComGuards for five years, mould them in his image and then Primus Anastasius Focht could take over. Deeply saddened by his predecessors' lapses, of course.

   Oh yea, this has my vote  O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Novacaptain on 15 January 2016, 01:18:52
Tribble #474

While performing pre-mission maintenance and testing on the CES Outbound Light at the O'Neil shipyards above Terra, an idiot astech screws up a test and accidentally blows out all the helium seals safeguarding the ship's Kearney-Fuchida drive.  While not catastrophic, it does mean that the Outbound Light isn't going anywhere until she's spent at least four months in dry-dock.  Instead of having Precentor Vincent DuPont and his crew sitting idle while the Merchant-class ship is patched up, Director of the Explorer Corps Kennedy Odumbe assigns them one of the new Magellan-class jumpships just coming out of the slips, purpose-built for multi-year exploring missions.  Now, in most respects the Magellan is pretty comparable to a Merchant, but there's one notable exception: Magellans come equipped with Lithium-Fusion batteries.  So, when the CES Odysseus jumps into the Huntress system on October 22, 3048 and is immediately hailed by Smoke Jaguar warriors aboard the Comitatus-class carrier CSJ High Guard, Precentor DuPont is able to spin up the KF drive and escape before being captured.

Smoke Jaguar Khan Leo Showers is now presented with an absolute dilly of a pickle.  Does he report to the Grand Council that a jumpship of unknown configuration has found his clan's homeworld and gotten away scot-free?  It would almost certainly trigger the Crusader-led invasion of the Inner Sphere he has advocated forcefully for his whole career.  It would also be a body-blow to the image of the Smoke Jaguars, whose prestige rests not on mercantile wealth, scientific ingenuity, or innovative tactic, but rather on brute force and ferocity.  It would certainly kill the dreams everyone knows he harbors of becoming ilKhan, and leading the clans in glory back to Terra.  It would make him look silly, and no ilKhan is silly.  Or does he sit on the information, and potentially let barbarian Spheroids know where the Kerensky cluster is?  Does he try to chase the jumpship and risk other clans finding out what he's doing?  What does he do? 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 15 January 2016, 05:19:10
If Outbound Light gets enough of a lead before the Smoke Jaguars try a pursuit (and given the sheer number of stars between the Inner Sphere and Clan Homeworlds and limitations of Battletech FTL...) then its highly unlikely they'll be able to find them.

If Showers tries to present this to the Grand Council, I can see that Ulric has at least IMO a 50/50 shot at convincing the other Khans that jumping in wildly with no data available would be incredibly stupid. Especially as all they have is one possibly unknown Jumpship model appearing then jumping back out. It could be a bandit cast ship, could even be one of the Clans testing a new design that had a missjump and is keeping it secret e.t.c.

If Showers is unable to present hard information from capturing the ship and if Ulric can spin enough doubt he at the very least should be able to slow things down. Perhaps enough to quietly have a trusted subordinate get on a Jumpship and start the long trip to the Inner Sphere to alert Jamie and sound the alarm. Even buying say 2-3 years delay in Operation Revival being launched would be a strategic windfall for the Inner Sphere if they are also alerted to the threat and can start to shift forces around in preparation, start crash deployment of field refit kits ahead of time e.t.c.

OTOH Jamie may just sit back for a year for absoloutly no reason like he did in the OTL, so who knows.

Ulric might also be able to convince the Clans to launch an offical intelligence mission to the Inner Sphere, a group of jump-ships (shadowed by a flotila of warships via HPG) to hit the coreward edge of the Inner Sphere and see about gathering intelligence on the current state of the Inner Sphere. If they lay HPGs as they go, they can report in quickly with news (and by doing this they can look for any evidence of Inner Sphere scouting or expansion towards the Clan Homeworlds). Which would at the very least buy a year or so. And again, might provide cover for Ulric to quietly have word sent to Jamie that 'We are coming'.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 15 January 2016, 10:03:36
Another factor. The Odysseus only needs to reach DRUM network range to send a report back to Comstar. Given it has its own onboard HPG.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Novacaptain on 15 January 2016, 13:33:11
I'm halfway convinced a ship finding the Kerensky cluster and then escaping would send the Clans into even more of a tizzy than the capture of the Outbound Light actually did.  The Clans were absolutely terrified of having their homeworlds discovered by the Inner Sphere.  In canon Showers stressed the possibility of other explorer ships finding the Clans and not being captured, leading to some sort of invasion from the Successor States.  One possible outcome is that Showers, not being the brightest bulb in the batch, takes the news to the Grand Council anyway, but loses the ilKhan vote.  No other Khans from the period stand out as being particularly inspiring replacements. Ulric is a warden. Yvonne Hazen is ancient and about to retire, and Elias Crichell is a newly-minted saKhan. Ursula Jorgensson and Nornian Tseng don't seem to have wowed anyone with any particular brilliance, since they both got themselves offed by Ulric Kerensky in canon. Cassius N'Buta is Khan of too small a clan and thinks too differently from the other Crusaders to be realistically appointed.  Stephen Tyler is a parody.  Din Steiner is very charismatic, but the Cobras are too small and too political for anyone to trust them.  What happens if the Clans are united on the idea that they should invade the Inner Sphere, but can't agree on anyone to lead them?  Do they go piecemeal?  Does that mean they do worse than canon or better, since presumably more clans would be showing up?  So many butterflies!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Rage on 15 January 2016, 16:49:49
I'm halfway convinced a ship finding the Kerensky cluster and then escaping would send the Clans into even more of a tizzy than the capture of the Outbound Light actually did.  The Clans were absolutely terrified of having their homeworlds discovered by the Inner Sphere.  In canon Showers stressed the possibility of other explorer ships finding the Clans and not being captured, leading to some sort of invasion from the Successor States.  One possible outcome is that Showers, not being the brightest bulb in the batch, takes the news to the Grand Council anyway, but loses the ilKhan vote.  No other Khans from the period stand out as being particularly inspiring replacements. Ulric is a warden. Yvonne Hazen is ancient and about to retire, and Elias Crichell is a newly-minted saKhan. Ursula Jorgensson and Nornian Tseng don't seem to have wowed anyone with any particular brilliance, since they both got themselves offed by Ulric Kerensky in canon. Cassius N'Buta is Khan of too small a clan and thinks too differently from the other Crusaders to be realistically appointed.  Stephen Tyler is a parody.  Din Steiner is very charismatic, but the Cobras are too small and too political for anyone to trust them.  What happens if the Clans are united on the idea that they should invade the Inner Sphere, but can't agree on anyone to lead them?  Do they go piecemeal?  Does that mean they do worse than canon or better, since presumably more clans would be showing up?  So many butterflies!

No, that wouldn't work. Showers is apparently a political genius seeing as he managed to, not only capture the position of senior Khan of the Smoke Jaguars at age 25 and hold it for eighteen years, but masterminded Operation REVIVAL with only a single ally (Clan Jade Falcons) who'd be better classified a frenemy at best. Not to mention that the only Khan to ever stymie him was Ulric Kerensky who had a built-in power bloc by sheer virtue of 1) being a Kerensky, 2) being a Wolf, who hold the Kerensky lineages and 3) being Khan of, essentially, three Clans given how the Coyotes and Wolves are essentially a single Clan and the Goliath Scorpions will do anything and everything to ensure that their tongues remain up the Wolves' collective sphincter.

No, Leo Showers could make it work and could still manage to brute force his way to ilKhan by virtue of being Khan of the strongest Crusader Clan (which is no mean feat, seeing as, save the Wolves at #2 and Coyotes at #6, Crusaders make up the top seven Clans by size), being the first to recognize the threat and the sheer magnitude of this event would require an ilKhan, no ifs ands or buts.




Oh, and as for the Star Adders? They were still a rather large Clan at roughly 50 Clusters. They just didn't gain much from the Burrock Absorption at first due to the absolutely horrendous losses both Clans had taken fighting the Blood Spirits. If they hadn't pulled a Star Adder themselves and jumped in on the Absorption, the Adders would've ended up with a shockingly bloated Clan pushing 90 Clusters.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 22 January 2016, 05:11:41
Tribble #475

In Lethal Heritage, Focht theorises the Clans are non-humans who more or less consumed Kerensky's Exodus and have now come to the Inner Sphere to do the same to the Successor States. What if he was right?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: nerd on 22 January 2016, 17:59:04
Tribble #475

In Lethal Heritage, Focht theorises the Clans are non-humans who more or less consumed Kerensky's Exodus and have now come to the Inner Sphere to do the same to the Successor States. What if he was right?
Someone did a fan sourcebook a few years back about that. Anyone got a copy?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 22 January 2016, 18:25:24
Tribble #475

In Lethal Heritage, Focht theorises the Clans are non-humans who more or less consumed Kerensky's Exodus and have now come to the Inner Sphere to do the same to the Successor States. What if he was right?
Barring something quite weird happening, Spores Fall, Everyone Dies would be my guess. It would take quite a lot of work to plausibly have an invading power that managed to not progress at all from the point of having Star League prototype technology, on top of being resource poor and incapable of supporting enough of a population to create a situation that would give the Inner Sphere any kind of chance at all.

It is, I suppose, conceivably possible to have the SLDF fight hard enough to give the Purple People Eaters almost nothing to work with, or  sufficient internal divisions to prevent the steamroller that should occur. But the canon Clans had half of the first, a healthy dollop of the second, and enough plot contrivances handed to their enemies, on top of an insular and not applicable to the real world paradigm of making war, so it would be even harder to write the story without retreading a well defined path.
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Post by: Trace Coburn on 22 January 2016, 23:30:10
Someone did a fan sourcebook a few years back about that. Anyone got a copy?
  That was ColBosch’s work, IIRC.  Try hitting him up over PM and see if he kept anything.  ;)
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 31 January 2016, 06:22:00
Tribble #476 - inspired by 474

The Outbound Light instead of hitting Huntress as in the OTL, emerges at the Tanite worlds where Clan Burrock is busy doing its thing trading with the dark casts and so on.
Because the Outbound Lights crew are very experienced at navigating through all the bandit states around the Inner Sphere, they are very quickly on the ball and manage to carefully divert inquiries once its clear they are not any official Clan ship. Going along with the impression that they are a bandit cast ship that is minding their own business.

Also because ROM is smart, their field team on board carry a bunch of trade goods, precious metals and bits and pieces on the assumption that they might run into an off-the-track colony somewhere and have to barter for information. Tapdancing with incredible skill and luck, they send a mule down to one of the planets trading posts and bluff their way in under 'don't ask, don't tell' rules. They are quickly enough able to pick up the history and understanding of the regional situation. They also grab a handful of examples of Clantech weapons in exchange for some very much in demand consumer goods, a few bits of rare elements and so on. Eventually they drop the 'hints' that they are doing some very much 'under the table' business for some VIPs in the Falcon Merchant cast who have no concern for what the hell the Warriors want. Using cutouts on both ends of course. With a promise to come back eventually.

The Outbound Light then of course races home as fast as they can, reaching Columbus 8 months later where they report in. Myndo is of course shocked at all this news and gets distracted from her ranting about how the Federated Commonwealth are going to try and destroy all of Blakes Work any day now, authorizing a full scale expedition backed with ComGuard ground and Warship support to a staging planet a few jumps from the Tanis worlds. From there, ROM will start to quietly infiltrate first Tanis and then eventually into Clan society. The field agents slip in easily, finding the locals charmingly naive and very poorly trained compared to the Inner Sphere intelligence agencies they are used to fighting against, not being seen as they spread their presence...

Soon enough, thought is given to the possibility of opening discrete contacts with Clan Burrock directly...
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Post by: Takiro on 31 January 2016, 09:44:46
Interesting for sure. I was always under the impression that the Outbound Light was sent by the hidden rulership of ComStar (The Blood) so maybe they do not report to Waterly. But lets say they do, I don't think she is the type to play the long game and wait. More likely she makes a big showy ComGuard backed entrance (which Focht get your plans in order) before too long. From there a couple of things could happen. How about Operation Scorpion without the invasion? Focht studies the Clans and comes up with a brilliant Trail (like Tukayyid) to win them over. Waterly says great (you naïve moron) I am going to have ROM execute a Coup at the same time.
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Post by: consequences on 31 January 2016, 19:35:37
Interesting for sure. I was always under the impression that the Outbound Light was sent by the hidden rulership of ComStar (The Blood) so maybe they do not report to Waterly. But lets say they do, I don't think she is the type to play the long game and wait. More likely she makes a big showy ComGuard backed entrance (which Focht get your plans in order) before too long. From there a couple of things could happen. How about Operation Scorpion without the invasion? Focht studies the Clans and comes up with a brilliant Trail (like Tukayyid) to win them over. Waterly says great (you naïve moron) I am going to have ROM execute a Coup at the same time.

Outbound Light may have been sent by the seventy third layer of the shadowy conspiracy that exists above the Primus's security  clearance, but if so it is pretty likely that the crew was sent in blind. Even if we assume the kind of absurd incompetence that would be required to let the Clans know that there were ever Wolverine survivors, it would very much strain credulity that the entire crew was completely unbroken by Clan narco interrogation methods.
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Post by: Vehrec on 04 February 2016, 10:51:56
Well the obvious way to ensure that  your people will be unbroken by such methods is to give them an injection of a lipid soluable molecule that will accumulate in brain tissue until it encounters the metabolized Clan narco-interogants.  At that point, it combines with them and forms a very quickly lethal neuotoxin.

Really, it's the only way to keep your operatives from spilling their gust and I don't see why everyone doesn't do that.
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Post by: drakensis on 04 February 2016, 16:23:37
#474

2784. Aleksandr Kerensky and more than seventy percent of the SLDF depart the crumbling Terran Hegemony and their outlying bases, making for a rendezvous point in the Draconis Combine...

And proceed to utterly, brutally eviscerate the DCA and DCMS - including every hidden weapons depot, every 'militia' regiment, every 'decommissioned' warship. In a matter of months the strongest of the Member-States is reduced to military impotence and a large portion of their ruling house is wiped out. The SLDF places peace-keeping units along the Combine's border and returns its core units to the Hegemony.

Aleksandr Kerensky formally requests a gathering of the Star League Council to resume discussion of electing a First Star Lord. Said First Lord will, of course, also get considerable say in selecting families to take over representing the Terran Hegemony and Draconis Combine on the Star League Council.

Oh, and thank you for the House garrisons placed within the Hegemony but they won't be needed any longer. Thank you for the assistance.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 04 February 2016, 20:19:01
So what happens when the Lords together fire Kerensky, his general staff and order the SLDF to heavily demobilize?
Just to clear any preconceptions when they refuse of course, that he is acting as anything but James McKenna / Richard Cameron Mk II?

I doubt the SLDF pulled off that operation without taking stuff losses (plus a lot of defections and mutinies from Combine members of the SLDF who objected). They probably have enough forces left to garrison the Hegemony, but the Hegemony is in very poor shape. And especially as the other houses are presumably still not paying monies to the BSLA + the Hegemony probably backsliding as all the other states withdraw their units, humanitarian aid and economic aid ...

It would take very little for the SLDF to end up trying to impose law and order at the point of a Mech given the situation, which is not going to end well, especially if the economic situation doesn't improve quickly. And you can bet the other houses will bring all their forces to maximum alert and shift assets around to try and prevent the kind of crippiling strike Kerensky launched against the Combine, probably move to full scale war production if they are not there already.

Although I'm sure the Steiners and Davions would be sorely tempted to at the very least 'correct' their borders and settle all outstanding claims they have in their favor, which could buy time...
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 04 February 2016, 20:35:35
This will undoubtedly prevent the Kentares massacre.
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Post by: consequences on 04 February 2016, 20:47:50
Well the obvious way to ensure that  your people will be unbroken by such methods is to give them an injection of a lipid soluable molecule that will accumulate in brain tissue until it encounters the metabolized Clan narco-interogants.  At that point, it combines with them and forms a very quickly lethal neuotoxin.

Really, it's the only way to keep your operatives from spilling their gust and I don't see why everyone doesn't do that.
This relies on them knowing what the heck is in those compounds 200 years after breaking off contact. There are ways to make that happen, but tend towards the heavily contrived.


So what happens when the Lords together fire Kerensky, his general staff and order the SLDF to heavily demobilize?
Just to clear any preconceptions when they refuse of course, that he is acting as anything but James McKenna / Richard Cameron Mk II?

I doubt the SLDF pulled off that operation without taking stuff losses (plus a lot of defections and mutinies from Combine members of the SLDF who objected). They probably have enough forces left to garrison the Hegemony, but the Hegemony is in very poor shape. And especially as the other houses are presumably still not paying monies to the BSLA + the Hegemony probably backsliding as all the other states withdraw their units, humanitarian aid and economic aid ...

It would take very little for the SLDF to end up trying to impose law and order at the point of a Mech given the situation, which is not going to end well, especially if the economic situation doesn't improve quickly. And you can bet the other houses will bring all their forces to maximum alert and shift assets around to try and prevent the kind of crippiling strike Kerensky launched against the Combine, probably move to full scale war production if they are not there already.

Although I'm sure the Steiners and Davions would be sorely tempted to at the very least 'correct' their borders and settle all outstanding claims they have in their favor, which could buy time...

Depending on what kinds of attrition they suffered, the SLDF that followed Kerensky had up to  483 mech regiments for 402 warships to shepherd to the drop zones. That's more than enough to Hanse Davion the entire DCMS all at once. If it weren't for trifling issues of physical reality with regards to transit times it would probably be enough to casually roll up the Houses one by one with acceptable losses
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Post by: drakensis on 05 February 2016, 02:53:36
So what happens when the Lords together fire Kerensky, his general staff and order the SLDF to heavily demobilize?
Just to clear any preconceptions when they refuse of course, that he is acting as anything but James McKenna / Richard Cameron Mk II?
I suspect that question is very much on their minds. After all, neither they nor their governments want to be the next target.
Would he obey? Would he crush the armed forces and government of another Member State? They don't know.
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Post by: smcwatt on 06 February 2016, 12:44:58
Tribble #478:

"Awkward..."
Inspired by the time between the scenes of Warrior:Coupe.


Outbound, Sian
Sian Commonality, Capellan Confederation
25 October 3029

The gantry over the 'mech bay echoed softly from the footfalls of a lone man returning from his 'mech. It was a task that Justin Allard had repeated many times, both in AFFS and Capellan service. The signage on the walls of the dropship was an odd pastiche of Capellan ideograms and the more recent English labels, written on tape to give directions to the soldiers of the 1st Kathil Uhlans.

"My life is summed up on a piece of gun tape." The thought amused Justin as he made his way to the infirmary to check up on his former aide, Alex Mallory. "It kind of applies to him too, doesn't it."

A large figure shot out of an adjoining gangway and Justin found himself pinned against the wall, his feet kicking a foot off of the floor while his windpipe was being slowly crushed. He was eye to eye with a very tall, very strong man with his red hair caught back in a border braid. One arm casually pinned him to the bulkhead, the other hand rose to reveal a Comstar vid-disc labelled "M. Hasek-Davion".

"Alright 'Changeling', let's talk about my father."

....

You know, it always bothered me that those two seemed to be too buddy-buddy after the pick up on Sian, at the end of Warrior:Coupe. Something like this must of happened on the 20 day trip back to New Avalon; an Overlord dropship is big, but not big enough to avoid that discussion.

SMc.
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Post by: Sharpnel on 06 February 2016, 13:04:54
Morgan was not his father's son. Morgan was loyal to the FedSuns. Michael was only to his aspirations.
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Post by: smcwatt on 06 February 2016, 18:44:56
Yeah, I'll refer you to Chapter 2 of Warrior:Coupe. Morgan had a conflicted relationship with his father, but he was still Michael's son. Especially read page 15, where Morgan talks about vengeance and mourning.

I'm not saying Morgan's going to kill Justin, but he's not on the Christmas card list. Also, how awkward do you think the state functions that the Allard-Liaos and the Hasek-Davions attended together were?

"Major Allard, may I introduce my fiance, Lady Kym?"

"Errrr..."

SMc.
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Post by: consequences on 06 February 2016, 18:45:22
Tribble #478:

"Awkward..."
Inspired by the time between the scenes of Warrior:Coupe.


Outbound, Sian
Sian Commonality, Capellan Confederation
25 October 3029

The gantry over the 'mech bay echoed softly from the footfalls of a lone man returning from his 'mech. It was a task that Justin Allard had repeated many times, both in AFFS and Capellan service. The signage on the walls of the dropship was an odd pastiche of Capellan ideograms and the more recent English labels, written on tape to give directions to the soldiers of the 1st Kathil Uhlans.

"My life is summed up on a piece of gun tape." The thought amused Justin as he made his way to the infirmary to check up on his former aide, Alex Mallory. "It kind of applies to him too, doesn't it."

A large figure shot out of an adjoining gangway and Justin found himself pinned against the wall, his feet kicking a foot off of the floor while his windpipe was being slowly crushed. He was eye to eye with a very tall, very strong man with his red hair caught back in a border braid. One arm casually pinned him to the bulkhead, the other hand rose to reveal a Comstar vid-disc labelled "M. Hasek-Davion".

"Alright 'Changeling', let's talk about my father."

....

You know, it always bothered me that those two seemed to be too buddy-buddy after the pick up on Sian, at the end of Warrior:Coupe. Something like this must of happened on the 20 day trip back to New Avalon; an Overlord dropship is big, but not big enough to avoid that discussion.

SMc.

Without knowing how Hanse spun things, that discussion could get pretty darned awkward. Even with a helpful update slipped to Justin, the prudent course of action would be hiding behind the Candace shaped obstacle.

However, the precise way that Michael died wasn't exactly public knowledge, or the kind of thing that Hanse would have let leak to Morgan if at all possible. There certainly is no indication in Warrior:Coupe that I am aware of that Morgan knows that Justin personally killed his father.
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Post by: drakensis on 07 February 2016, 03:12:35
No, but he has every reason to believe that Justin would know who did it. And IIRC he knows that there were reports Michael was beaten before he was killed.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 10 February 2016, 17:25:07
Tribble #479

In the wake of the Amaris Coup, the Great Houses were poised to strike at one another in what would become the 1st Succession War. But instead of leaving the Inner Sphere as he originally planned, Aleksandr Kerensky decided to stay and discussed things with a few of his people on Terra in talks of how to prevent the Succession Wars from happening. The answer comes from a little known diplomat named Jonathan Sheridan who offered up an idea of a space station located in Neutral Territory where representatives from the Great Houses and Periphary States can come together to sort out their differences peacefully. Kerensky, interested in the idea, quickly requests that the station be built. Within a month, the station is completed and Kerensky reveals it to the rest of the Inner Sphere and calls it mankind's "last best hope for peace."
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 10 February 2016, 17:35:38
Tribble #479

In the wake of the Amaris Coup, the Great Houses were poised to strike at one another in what would become the 1st Succession War. But instead of leaving the Inner Sphere as he originally planned, Aleksandr Kerensky decided to stay and discussed things with a few of his people on Terra in talks of how to prevent the Succession Wars from happening. The answer comes from a little known diplomat named Jonathan Sheridan who offered up an idea of a space station located in Neutral Territory where representatives from the Great Houses and Periphary States can come together to sort out their differences peacefully. Kerensky, interested in the idea, quickly requests that the station be built. Within a month, the station is completed and Kerensky reveals it to the rest of the Inner Sphere and calls it mankind's "last best hope for peace."


At Epsilon Eridani?
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 10 February 2016, 18:30:00
Tribble #479

In the wake of the Amaris Coup, the Great Houses were poised to strike at one another in what would become the 1st Succession War. But instead of leaving the Inner Sphere as he originally planned, Aleksandr Kerensky decided to stay and discussed things with a few of his people on Terra in talks of how to prevent the Succession Wars from happening. The answer comes from a little known diplomat named Jonathan Sheridan who offered up an idea of a space station located in Neutral Territory where representatives from the Great Houses and Periphary States can come together to sort out their differences peacefully. Kerensky, interested in the idea, quickly requests that the station be built. Within a month, the station is completed and Kerensky reveals it to the rest of the Inner Sphere and calls it mankind's "last best hope for peace."

Thematically, this would seem to be something more useful in 3050 or so. At this point in the 2780s, the Star League still exists and all the houses are technically still a part of it and aligned with each other and have means to chat and sit down on Terra...

You can have fun intros as well.

Quote
"It was the dawn of the Second Star League – ten years after the 3039 War.

The Babylon Project was a dream, given form. Its goal: to prevent another war, by creating a place where Great Houses and other powers and aliens can work out their differences - peacefully. It's a port of call – home away from home – for diplomats, hustlers, entrepreneurs, and wanderers.

Nobles and Criminals, wrapped in two million, five hundred thousand tons of spinning metal . . . all alone in the night.

It can be a dangerous place, but it's our last best hope for peace.

This is the story of the first of the Babylon stations. The year is 3049. The name of the place is Babylon 5."

Then of course;

Quote
The Babylon Project was our last, best hope for peace.

A self-contained world five miles long, located in neutral territory. A place of commerce and diplomacy for a quarter of a million humans. A shining beacon in space . . . all alone in the night.

It was the dawn of the Second Star League – the year the Clan War came upon us all.

This is the story of the last of the Babylon stations. The year is 3050. The name of the place is Babylon 5.

And then;

Quote
The Babylon Project was our last, best hope for peace.

It failed.

*Que montage of shots of Clan Omnimechs blasting everything, Tyra Miraborg smashing into the Dire Wolf, Victor fighting on Twycross and Hohiro on Wolcot ... and finally, Jamie Wolf showing up on B5*

But in the years of the Clan War, it became something greater: our last, best hope – for victory.

The year is 3051. The place: Babylon 5.


And of course;

Quote
Morgan Kell: It was the year of fire (shot of his Archer blazing away at Nova Cat Omnimechs)
Nondi Steiner: The year of destruction (looking over the red dots on her map showing the Clans progress)
Sun Tzu: The year we took back what was ours (as he plots and schemes over his mothers corpse)

Hanse Davion: It was the year of rebirth (as he and Theodore shake hands)
Candace Liao: The year of great sadness (grief stricken looking at her husbands body)
Shin Yodama: The year of pain (as he he forcibly loaded onto an evac ship to go to Luthien and leave Hohiro behind)
Omi Kurita: And a year of joy (secretly kissing Victor in the launch bay)

Focht: It was ... a new age (pistol pointed squarely at Myndos head)
Takashi Kurita: It was the end of history (shaking hands with Jamie Wolf)
ilKhan Kerensky: It was the year everything changed (looking at the ruins of the Clan Invasion force on Tuyakyid)

Hohiro Kurita: The year is 3052
Victor Steiner-Davion: The place? Babylon 5!

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Post by: kashim12 on 10 February 2016, 21:07:06
WOW! the concept and two blend really well together!
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 10 February 2016, 21:29:17
I thought, what the heck and blend the two somehow.
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Post by: gladius on 10 February 2016, 23:16:54
I thought, what the heck and blend the two somehow.
Generally, tech levels aren't all that different.
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 11 February 2016, 02:43:12
I got about one chapter into writing a FanFic about a cross over - a misjump of a Star League ship to the wrong Epsilon Eridani. Then my inability to write kicked in!
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 11 February 2016, 12:48:04
I got about one chapter into writing a FanFic about a cross over - a misjump of a Star League ship to the wrong Epsilon Eridani. Then my inability to write kicked in!
I hate it when that happens!
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Post by: drakensis on 19 February 2016, 06:59:59
Tribble #480

In the 2990s, early in the reign of Janos Marik, a small world on the fringes of the FWL starts building cheap tanks and APCs for the local militia. This isn't a problem, in fact it's barely noticed.

A couple of years later, the world starts exporting their products to neighbouring worlds. In itself, not a problem... but it does start eating into the market share of companies like Irian who usually supply equipment to militias. This is more of a problem than it seems.

You see, the federal government and major provincial governments can afford competent accountants and lawyers. Therefore padding their bills in a way that produces nice happy profits is hazardous. Smaller worlds, particularly worlds at the end of long and expensive shipping lines, therefore provide the bulk of the profit. One world more or less isn't too bad. Half a dozen, with the prospect of others following?

Something to be nipped in the bud.

Fortunately Irian has a solution. Arrange a federal 'Mech regiment to be rebased in the area to deal with piracy. Make sure the commander of the regiment (and therefore of the attached brigade) is suitably compliant. A federal officer outranks any provincial officer of equal rank. Therefore the officer can 'review' and order the scrapping of any equipment determined to be not fit for service. Such as anything produced by this upstart company. Then offer legal assistance recouping the costs of this substandard hardware from the manufacturer. Simple.

There is one tiny, tiny problem, not discovered until the officer is on site.

A federal brigade commander doesn't outrank provincial corps commanders. And it only takes one fool (of which the FWLM is in no shorter supply of than any other military) pulling the trigger before there's a nice little grass-roots insurrection being fought between a single federal 'Mech regiment plus it's supporting brigade and scores of militia regiments.

And you have to wonder what the first report of this to cross Janos Marik's desk will say...
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Post by: Sharpnel on 19 February 2016, 07:28:54
Depends on whose report the Captain-General sees first. The Fedral commander will call it an insurrection/secession attempt. The Provincial Militia commander will call it an attempt at oppression by federal authority, A disinterested third party might be closer to the truth, especially if he's an investigative journalist. or an LCCC officer with the Inspector General's office
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Post by: Terrace on 21 March 2016, 13:34:27
Tribble #481

Solaris VII was originally the Game World, the one place in the Inner Sphere where MechWarriors from every Great House (and many Periphery Nations) gathered to vie with one another for the excitement of the crowds, trading shots in arenas with wildly varied terrains. Epic rivalries were forged as legendary MechWarriors like Gray Norton or Kai Allard-Liao fought their way to the top. Corporations used the arenas to test new BattleMech technologies in live-fire matches, and fans eagerly tuned in to see what they'd come up with next.

All that changed when the Wolf Empire conquered the planet. The games are over now, the arenas reserved for Warriors slaughtering one another for Bloodnames, or other Trials of Great Importance(tm). Battles end in the death of one of the combatants far more often than not. The old Gladiators have been forced out. Only senseless bloodshed remains.

But one former Solaris champion, a MechWarrior nicknamed "Spartacus", seeks to throw the Wolves off-planet. With help from Lyran special forces agents, this aging man must forge his fellow Solaris fighters into an army capable of winning the Game World's freedom from their Clan oppressors. It's not going to be easy, what BattleMechs they can acquire are obsolete by Clan standards, and supply is going to be an eternal problem. But they have a few things going for them. A hard-won knowledge of the terrain, every little trick of the various arenas, and the support of a questionably-sane crew...
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Post by: drakensis on 22 March 2016, 06:23:15
Tribble #482

On 30 January 2767, the Terran Senate confirmed Stefan Amaris as Director-General of the Terran Hegemony. On 19 May 2767 word finally reached Commanding General Aleksandr Kerensky of this.

Three days later, General Kerensky sent his reply... and pledged his allegiance to First Lord Stefan Amaris. (Later historians suggested that Amaris had managed to identify Kerensky's hidden family to use as leverage. There is no evidence either way.) The two most powerful men - and the two most powerful military forces - in the Inner Sphere, were united.

When the Star League Council declined to endorse Stefan Amaris as the First Lord, the SLDF seized all five of their capitals within a month. While the result was almost a century of insurrections, shadow conflicts (and the expensive campaigns to re-conquer the Taurians, Canopians and Outworlders), Stefan Amaris was able to bequeath a united Star League to his successor - although due to assassinations and deaths in action on the frontlines of military campaigns, this successor was his daughter Stephanie Amaris-Kerensky, who was very much under the influence of her dynamic husband Nicholas...

Near the end of the 29th century, conflicts with dissidents began to wane markedly. First Lord Leo Amaris-Kerensky (Emperor was an unofficial term) and his (entirely ceremonial) Star League Council believed this to be their final victory. It would be fifteen decades before they discovered that the dissidents had instead found somewhere they could flee... a cluster of potentially habitable worlds more than a thousand light years from the edges of the Star League. Here the potential rebels accumulated, raised new generations and prepared for the day that they would finally return to overthrow the tyranny of the Amaris' Empire.
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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 22 March 2016, 09:02:32
 O0  That is a nice take!
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Post by: Takiro on 22 March 2016, 21:39:17
Very interesting, Kerensky endorsing Amaris would likely garner much of the SLDF's support. Rule of law no matter how much we like it or not kind of thing for most. The Hegemony and the Royals would fall heavily into this assessment. The Houses would be the major obstacle if they fail to endorse Amaris. They could recall their forces and pronounce the dissolution of the League. Steiner could really be in the most trouble IMO as their conquest would unite the Rim and Terra. I wonder how much Minoru would identify with Kerensky if both were hostages to Amaris via their families? Would the Combine already be in the bag or would Kurita and Kerensky work for the Usurper half heartedly sabotaging his efforts where possible? Marik is really an interesting case here as he hates Kerensky and could be a real "Hero of the Free Worlds" all over the Inner Sphere. Think of him being the chief opponent to the League Loyalists backing Terran and Periphery rebellions. Davion could also predictably be a white knight but could easily be hampered by a shoddy AFFS, likely another come back story with the help of Kerensky who knowingly fails to finish off the Federated Suns. The Capellans are always a wildcard to me. I could see them backing one side until they get too big then switching sides.
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Post by: Atlan on 05 May 2016, 19:31:28
Tribble #483

No successor state really trusted Comstar. They all saw them as an unfortunate nessesaty, one they couldn't get rid out without severe economic problems. No matter how much they wanted too.

But after the interdiction of the FWL in 2837, everyone took quiet note of what Comstar could do if they really wanted, and how disastrous it could be if it happened to them. And they quietly drew up plans.

And so in 3029, when Comstar interdicted the Federated Suns during the Fourth Succession War, a contingency plan was activated.
In the event of interdiction lasting more than 24 hours, all Comstar facilities are to be seized by the local armed forces, the Comstar personnel imprisoned, interrogated, and all knowledge of how to operate and maintain HPGs to be taken from them by any method.


The only thing that had stopped the Suns- or any Successor State, really- from doing this centeries before was the fear of an interdiction, and the time it would take to get the HPG network opperational. Since an Interdiction was allready happening, it was now no problem at all.

It would take months to get the HPG network up and running, but they were aided by NAIS and the Black Boxes, which helped various worlds share their findings. By the time the Fourth Succession War was over, the entire HPG network in the Suns was up and running.
And they shared everything they knew about how to operate HPGs with the Lyran Commonwealth.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 05 May 2016, 20:51:13
The problem is that its not simply seizing the HPGs, its maintaining them.

The AFFC for example were perfectly able to grab something like 80% of the HPGs across the FedCom intact and operational when Myndo tried to pull Scorpion (I'm guessing the remaining 20% were on worlds where there were no local forces up to the task of seizing them before they were disabled) and run them (although by 3050 the technical skills of the FedCom were probably substantially above that of the 3030s era FedSuns in terms of running them).

The problem is that the only sources of spare parts and replacement HPGs are on Terra...
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Post by: RunandFindOut on 05 May 2016, 22:23:52
I'm fairly certain that if you torture the hpg personnel enough they'll give you sufficient information to eventually set up your own even if it takes several years of trial and error.  And given the fact that those HPGs are still operating and going by cannon novels most of their parts are still original Star League they'll last long enough for you to do so.  Personally Comstar never would have survived the first FWL blackout cause Terra would've eaten a RKKV as a result destroying the planet and beheading Comstar.
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Post by: drakensis on 06 May 2016, 00:32:08
IIRC the factories for several key components are on Terra as a security measure. A rational Primus might use this to bargain with Hanse. Unfortunately the current Primus is Myndo Waterly....

Which probably doesn't change much since once the Federated Suns seizes the HPGs the other states likely do the same so as not to lose the 'advantage' of their own HPGs.
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Post by: Sharpnel on 06 May 2016, 00:41:57
Since Comstar controls all of the materials needed to make/repair HPGs, I would expect them to launch a large number of raids targeted at disabling, not destroying, the seized HPGs. Especially Class A facilities as they are the nodes for the less capable Class B and C HPGs. There's a Shadow War coming and I hope the AFFC is ready for it.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 06 May 2016, 01:07:23
There is a problem with that however in that if ComStar goes that route, there is little stopping Hanse from stomping down on Terra straight up. There is also a solid chance that in seizing all these stations, especially the capital station on New Avalon - presumably with the best special forces teams the AFFS have, they will get a hoard of ROM documentation and personnel who will be both poured over by MIIO and interrogated ruthlessly by the same. Which could shatter ComStars ability to try and strike back, given that the ComGuards are pretty much non-existent at this point.

And if they DO strike back, there is every chance you'll get a dozen RCTs dropping into the Terra system to remind ComStar of this fact.

Frankly I think that the 'shock to the system' of such a turn of events would stall ComStar. Myndo might want to throw good money after bad, but the rest of the First Circut might object to signing a suicide pact, especially with their spy network and communications network in complete chaos.
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Post by: Atlan on 06 May 2016, 02:25:37
IIRC the factories for several key components are on Terra as a security measure. A rational Primus might use this to bargain with Hanse. Unfortunately the current Primus is Myndo Waterly....

Which probably doesn't change much since once the Federated Suns seizes the HPGs the other states likely do the same so as not to lose the 'advantage' of their own HPGs.


Except the current Primus isn't Myndo Waterly. It's Julian Tiepolo. Myndo was the one constantly agitating for direct action, and was responsible for forcing the Interdiction through. Julian was the one who tried to stop her. And what was the result of her plan? Comstar lost their hold on the Federated Suns. They are almost certainly gonna loose their hold on the Lyran Commonwealth.

This could be a death blow for Myndo's reputation and power-base.
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Post by: Chaeronea on 06 May 2016, 05:22:18

Except the current Primus isn't Myndo Waterly. It's Julian Tiepolo. Myndo was the one constantly agitating for direct action, and was responsible for forcing the Interdiction through. Julian was the one who tried to stop her. And what was the result of her plan? Comstar lost their hold on the Federated Suns. They are almost certainly gonna loose their hold on the Lyran Commonwealth.

This could be a death blow for Myndo's reputation and power-base.

Or for Myndo herself.

On the other hand, the news that the Federated Suns has managed to restore the HPG network throughout their territory could bring on the heart attack that removed Tiepolo from the office of Primus. With Tiepolo gone could Myndo make a bid to secure herself as Primus before her power-base dissolves? Did she have any support from or contacts within ROM?
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Post by: Atlan on 06 May 2016, 07:49:05
Or for Myndo herself.

On the other hand, the news that the Federated Suns has managed to restore the HPG network throughout their territory could bring on the heart attack that removed Tiepolo from the office of Primus. With Tiepolo gone could Myndo make a bid to secure herself as Primus before her power-base dissolves? Did she have any support from or contacts within ROM?

Tiepolo's heart attack was 'natural causes', but given just how many people Myndo doesn't like wind up dead...

And to make matters worse for Comstar, this is before the Comguards are built up to any real level, or deployed accross the universe. Right now they're a huge store of mechs, and a few pilots.

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Post by: croaker on 06 May 2016, 12:06:47
If Hanse does decide to invade Terra, everyone else will pile in as well. The only things keeping any of the Successor States from doing so have been fear of Interdiction, and fear of each other doing the same.
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Post by: Takiro on 06 May 2016, 15:11:28
Why not take HPG parts from other realms if your Hanse? You could build quite a stockpile of spare parts by raiding other nations HPGs while directing the NAIS to train your own communications personnel.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 06 May 2016, 16:27:11
This seems like a recipe for a ComStar Jihad 40 years early, given ComStar has active WarShips, the ground-based SDS batteries, a decent-sized ground arm, and undoubtedly has WMDs in 3029.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 06 May 2016, 18:30:52
I think that might be overstating it.

Firstly, ComStar only has a couple of warships active at this point in time, the Dante class Frigates IIRC. Which are certinally a threat, but hardly an existential one, with zero experience in void combat. The rest of their fleet is in mothballs and will require a great amount of time and resources to restore, which ComStar are certinally not going to have to spare at this time. Terras SDS system likewise IIRC was pretty much entirely in mothballs at this point, it was only in the 3050s with the genuine Clan threat to Terra when Focht started to un-mothball all the military industries on Terra that the SDS in parallel was slowly brought back online. And the ComGuards themselves are barely a paper force at this point in time, without the personnel needed.

And hell, they just threw away a pretty large chunk of it on New Avalon playing Death Commando.

If Hanse goes all in like this, especially after MIIO and DMI finish sifting through the recovered data and interrogating the senior personnel most probably gives a picture of ComStar screwing over him and the Inner Sphere since their inception, there is very little reason for him not to go 'all in' and look to secure Terra as well. And if Warships show up, nuke them out of the way. Even if it means abandoning a chunk of his Capellan conquests, the nascient Federated Commonwealth seizing the Terran corridor in full including Terra itself ...
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 06 May 2016, 18:48:52
This seems like a recipe for a ComStar Jihad 40 years early, given ComStar has active WarShips, the ground-based SDS batteries, a decent-sized ground arm, and undoubtedly has WMDs in 3029.
A grand total of 3 Warships.
Ground-based SDS batteries which, while formidable are just a small part of a comprehensive SDS, and were unlikely to have ever been fully restored since Kerensky's departure.
A decent sized ground arm that is nowhere near competence or possibly even size of 3020's AFFS.

Hanse even gets a whiff of the possible loot to be had at Earth, and Mad Max can wait. He's gonna get him some of that. What's more, if this is after the black flag raid at NAIS, then there's certainly bad blood enough to justify it.

The other Houses, it's a toss up as to whether they secure their HPG's first, or come into Earth for a free for all.
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Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 06 May 2016, 21:45:06
A grand total of 3 Warships.
Ground-based SDS batteries which, while formidable are just a small part of a comprehensive SDS, and were unlikely to have ever been fully restored since Kerensky's departure.
A decent sized ground arm that is nowhere near competence or possibly even size of 3020's AFFS.

Hanse even gets a whiff of the possible loot to be had at Earth, and Mad Max can wait. He's gonna get him some of that. What's more, if this is after the black flag raid at NAIS, then there's certainly bad blood enough to justify it.

The other Houses, it's a toss up as to whether they secure their HPG's first, or come into Earth for a free for all.

Three that ComStar built, not including their Faslane class yardships.  Also, someone has the Newgrange class operational, even if they're on the Hidden worlds.

Also, we don't know how many of ComStar's ships were actually in mothballs in 3029, versus how many were in service, just that they didn't have enough trained crews to operate everything as of 2941.  We know the Star Sword was scrapped in 3053 for parts for the Invisible Truth, but not the operational status of either vessel 24 years earlier.
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Post by: drakensis on 08 May 2016, 04:12:40
Pretty sure I've had ideas on this line before, possibly even posted them. But 1SW brought the concept bubbling up to mind.

#484

The date is 25 December 2797. Having avoided death by sniper on Kentares IV, Minoru Kurita oversees the assault on New Avalon by the hardened DCMS regiments. Despite years of preparation and fanatical resistance by the Davion Guards, after almost twelve full months of fighting the Sword of Light finally secure Castle Davion and complete their conquest of the capital. Prince John and his heir Joshua having died shortly before the invasion, the defenders were led by Prince Paul Davion and after his death by Prince Peter Davion. Efforts to evacuate the latter were foiled by a close blockade of DCA warships and careful isolation of the ComStar Compound ensured that a decree passing authority to the next most senior Davion line were never received for HPG transmission.

It's carefully kept quiet that Jinjiro Kurita was seriously - it will turn out to be mortally - wounded in the duel he sought and won against Prince Peter.

On this Christmas Day, Minoru Kurita announces his triumph to the Inner Sphere from the First Prince's throne. In the same announcement, his cousin Thomas Kurita(-Davion) - a descendant of Mary Davion - is declared Prince (not First Prince) and swears fealty to Minoru as Coordinator and First Lord. AFFS regiments traditionally based in the Capellan March are ordered to return there to defend against the Confederation, reinforced by select DCMS brigades. Other regiments are ordered to assemble for transport to the Combine's Rasalhague, Benjamin and Dieron districts to reinforce the Lyran border.

Through 2798 and 2799 the Federated Suns is torn by further conflict as Davion loyalists clash with each other and with the DCMS, directed by Zabu Kurita - who places his administrative genius to work knitting the realm back together as a Combine dependency, not to mention winning military glory by crushing several insurrections against his cousin - who has diplomatically wed back into a junior Davion line and is expecting an heir.

Two years after his great victory, Minoru Kurita passes the throne of the Combine to Zabu as his heir, remaining as an advisor. While the Federated Suns is diminished by a few border worlds that bolted for the Outworlds Alliance and Taurian Concordat - not to mention half the Draconis March surrendered entirely to the Combine - Prince Thomas (Kurita-)Davion is able to report a more or less functioning state that submits to the Dragon throne.

Despite the concerns of the rest of the Inner Sphere, the resulting juggernaut isn't turned against them. Cannily Zabu concentrates on rebuilding and on venting military pressure against the Outworld Alliance and the Taurian Concordat. He even agrees to a truce with Ilsa Liao, knowing that relative peace will secure his dynasty's chances of integrating the Federated Suns into the Combine and eventually dissolving it once his own son or grandson weds a daughter of Prince Thomas.

Time is on the Dragon's side and Zabu is a patient man...
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Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 08 May 2016, 10:05:38
#484  nice!  Wonder what Comstar would be doing about this? 
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Post by: snakespinner on 08 May 2016, 21:41:40
Interdiction and espionage.
Also Comstar would be supporting insurrections everywhere.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 08 May 2016, 22:04:44
I wonder how this change in history affects the Clans.
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 09 May 2016, 13:55:28
I wonder how this change in history affects the Clans.
The notion that Davion was one step closer to conquering the other Successor States and reestablishing the Star League without them was enough make them come calling.


Of course at this point in time, Kerensky's expedition must be neck deep in the lead up to the Pentagon Wars. Not much they can do.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 12 May 2016, 11:52:06
What I mean is how will it change the Clan Invasion if it ever happens?
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 12 May 2016, 13:00:14
Without the Davions to prop them up, Lyran Commonwealth's gonna lose even more.
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Post by: Vehrec on 12 May 2016, 16:04:54
If you want something even more  :D :D :D then boy have I ever got an Idea for you.

Tribble #485

What if Amaris wasn't a total dickhead?  Ambitious, yes.  Duplicitous, totally.  But maybe...well intentioned?  What if the coup forces weren't RWR, but SLDF, upset and rebellious over the eternal ineptitude of the Lord Cameron?  Richard makes bad decisions without any help of Stephen Amaris after all.  So why not ask him to abdicate?  Step down, let someone who's public approval rating is above 15% take over?  And if he names Stephen as regent or even agrees to allow a non-Cameron be First-Lord...

Richard doesn't take the suggestion well.  There's a scuffle.  A gunshot.  Amaris begs forgiveness-and has blood spat in his face.  And General Kerensky won't take the news of this well.  He was, after all, chosen to enforce the latest round of tax increases on the Periphery by the jackboot and Warships.  So that's part two-Kerensky's no saint.  He's aware that what he's doing is colonialist exploitation, and doesn't let conscience overrule duty.
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Post by: Smegish on 19 May 2016, 04:41:41
Tribble #486 (And my first attempt at Tribbling :P )

The Outbound Light didn't arrive at Huntress, but instead at Sheridan, where it was captured by Clan Star Adder, with the crew thoroughly interrogated about where they came from and what was really going on in the Inner Sphere. Khan Cassius N'Buta used this to manipulate his way into being made IlKhan, and told the Clan Council that Operation Revival should be done as Kerensky fought Klondike: with every Clan taking part.

Arguments about what forces were necessary for the conquest of the Inner Sphere raged for some time, until finally it was agreed that all sixteen clans (Clan Burrocks dealings with the Dark Caste having been revealed in the mid 3030's by the Blood Spirits, which lead to them being Absorbed by that clan) would field one Galaxy of offensive troops, plus whatever second-line forces they deemed necessary to garrison their occupied worlds. Argument then shifted to the invasion itself, with some wanting to simply charge blindly through the Sphere, but wiser heads prevailed and the clans would be placed into one of four corridors, with Trials to be fought fiercely for the right to choose their Spheroid opponent for the campaign, with some of the smaller clans deciding to fight alongside a larger, stronger ally.

**I kept the first 4 Invading Clans in their OTL corridors, and split the rest thusly:**

Falcon Corridor: Jade Falcon, Steel Viper, Cloud Cobra, Star Adder
Wolf Corridor: Wolf, Coyote, Hell's Horses, Nova Cats
Bear Corridor: Ghost Bear, Snow Raven, Diamond Shark, Blood Spirit
Jaguar (Or BatCrap Insanity) Corridor: Smoke Jaguar, Ice Hellion, Goliath Scorpion, Fire Mandrill

MEANWHILE, IN THE INNER SPHERE

Janos Marik dies of a 'heart attack' in 3002, and with his children too young to lead the FWL, Anton Marik rises to Captain-General. Thomas is allowed to join Comstar as in OTL. Julien Tiepolo realises the scope of Myndo's crazy, and has her quietly 'retired' just before the 4th Succession War, replacing her as Precentor Dieron not with Sharilar Mori, who was uncovered as a O5P agent leading ROM to clean house throughout Comstar, discovering agents from almost every intelligence agency in the Inner Sphere, with only SAFE not losing any agents -mainly by not having any in the first place. Instead Tiepolo chose someone who had not come from the Draconis Combine: Thomas Marik.

Marik's rise through Comstar continued when in 3042, Tiepolo suffers a massive, fatal heart attack and Thomas is promoted to Primus, and points the First Circuit towards uniting the Inner Sphere under the Comstar flag by example: protecting worlds out in the fringes against piracy and showing that they can defend the innocent far better then their House Lord masters, who only wish to fight amongst themselves for an empty throne.

Thus it is the ComGuards and not the Kell Hounds who first encounter Clan Wolf on The Rock...
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 19 May 2016, 05:35:55
Quote
Falcon Corridor: Jade Falcon, Steel Viper, Cloud Cobra, Star Adder
Wolf Corridor: Wolf, Coyote, Hell's Horses, Nova Cats
Bear Corridor: Ghost Bear, Snow Raven, Diamond Shark, Blood Spirit
Jaguar (Or BatCrap Insanity) Corridor: Smoke Jaguar, Ice Hellion, Goliath Scorpion, Fire Mandrill
BatCrap Insanity  :D
Can somebody say temper tantrums galore? Scorpions are gonna be the only sane guys in there. When they aren't doped to the gills with necrosia.

Falcons are gonna be feeling the pressure having to deal with the snake alliance.
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Post by: knightowl on 19 May 2016, 10:48:49
BatCrap Insanity  :D
Can somebody say temper tantrums galore? Scorpions are gonna be the only sane guys in there. When they aren't doped to the gills with necrosia.

Falcons are gonna be feeling the pressure having to deal with the snake alliance.

Nope even Doped to the Gill's their still saner then the Jaguars. The Ice Hellions would be Sane then they were in Canon since their part of the Invasion. Your guess is as good as mine with the Mandrills.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 19 May 2016, 12:52:25
Not a bad idea though. I can easily picture the Star Adders planning something like this.
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 19 May 2016, 12:55:35
Nope even Doped to the Gill's their still saner then the Jaguars. The Ice Hellions would be Sane then they were in Canon since their part of the Invasion. Your guess is as good as mine with the Mandrills.
Weren't the Ice Hellions labeled as Clan Temper Tantrum at one point by one of the other khans?
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Post by: croaker on 19 May 2016, 13:27:04
Weren't the Ice Hellions labeled as Clan Temper Tantrum at one point by one of the other khans?

By the Falcons, IIRC.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 20 May 2016, 05:37:46
Tribble #487

Following the Dragoon Compromise, many Crusaders are slinking around sullenly whining about how they were robbed of their chance at glory and directing accusing looks at their leaders for failing to secure a vote for the Invasion. Rather desperate not to get ripped up by their subordinates, the Khans in question are quick to seize on a modest Diamond Shark document in circulation among the Merchant Caste.

On the principle that the vote might go through, the Merchants had drawn up a logistics plan to supply the Diamond Shark touman for an invasion and also a sales plan to supply other Clans (at a price) if/when their own resources weren't sufficient. The numbers were, to put it mildly, incendiary.

From an outside view the plans might have seemed rather optimistic. It was confidently expected that 90% of worlds would require no more than a single frontline trinary to take and a third or fourth rate garrison cluster to defend. It also assumed that even the hardest fought planetary conquest might take at worse a whole week. The Diamond Sharks themselves felt that they were being moderate-to-pessimistic but even there the numbers were extraordinary. It would take considerable time and effort to accumulate the stockpiles required, not to mention a serious civilian complement along with the invasion forces in order to arrange local sources for less sophisticated consumables.

Based on this document, the Khans argued that in addition to sending the Wolf Dragoons to the Inner Sphere to provide intelligence, the Clans should aggressively expand their holdings in the Periphery to expand their industrial base and provide logistical waypoints between them and the Inner Sphere. A very slim majority passed the motion through the Grand Council and a trial of refusal failed to undo it.

As the Crusaders started to send out survey and expeditionary forces to secure new colony worlds or identify independent Periphery worlds that might be seized, the Wardens were forced to do the same or be left behind. While they could take satisfaction that the scramble for resources had effectively redirected the Crusaders for a generation the more far-sighted leaders suspected that the results would be damaging to the Clans as a whole. At a minimum this activity could be detected by the Inner Sphere.

Two trends emerged over the first three decades of the 31st century as the Clans scrambled for new resources. Firstly, that of increased scrutiny of other Clans - in fact, genuine espionage began to take place since many Clan leaders felt it was just as good to let another Clan do the work of finding and developing a new colony before sweeping in and seizing it. Clans went out of their way to hide their acquisitions to defend against this, with mixed success. The most obvious result of this was in 3015 when 'researchers' from Clan Coyote trying to discover how the Cloud Cobras had brought the Tanite population to accept the way of the Clans found out instead that the efforts had functionally failed and that the Cloud Cobras had been hiding this for generations.

The humiliated Cloud Cobras suffered considerably over the next two years, most notably when a coalition of three Clan Fire Mandrill kindraa successfully seized the three Tanite worlds, divided them between them and rather less successfully began to impose Clan ways on the population. In 3018 the remaining Clan Cobras were absorbed by Clan Nova Cat with little more than a whimper.

Increased Watch and Counter-Watch activity was only one way in which the civilian castes were increasingly entrusted with roles that bore heavily on the policy of their Clans. In addition to Scientists analyzing data and Technicians gathering it, these castes also took a lead in establishing new mining and manufacturing sites. At the same time, Merchant Factors were increasingly involved in deciding which resources (including people) were needed and where to get them from. In fact, the general significance of the Merchant caste rose to the point that the Diamond Sharks were far from the only clan to regard their merchants as second only to their warriors in prestige.

The Labourer Caste didn't appear to prosper, but in fact this was due to the fact that hundreds of thousands of labourers were re-assigned to other civilian castes to fulfill the unprecedented demand for personnel who could be entrusted with responsibilities on the new frontier outposts. Making good the labour shortage forced the Clans to look back into Star League archives for labour-saving devices once felt too sophisticated for the early Kerensky Cluster colonies or too effete or wasteful by more recent generations.

By the outbreak of the Fourth Succession War (the Wolf Dragoons dropping out of contact had been largely ignored by Khans with more pressing concerns), the sixteen remaining Clans had increased their combined population by more than fifty percent but much of this increase was by conquest - a factor that left many toumans over-stretched garrisoning their 'ungrateful' new colonies. Nor was the increase even and tensions between the more successful Clans and those being left behind were growing.

The problems exploded in 3030 with a two-fold crisis. Firstly, Clan Burrock embarked on a major project by sending an expeditionary force to invade Nueva Castille. Their long time rivals, Clan Blood Spirit, who had experienced a resurgence with their unmatched ability to mobilise their civilian castes in support of colonial ventures, formed a joint pact with Clan Snow Raven and Kindraa Sainze to launch a rival invasion force rather than see the Burrocks secure such a wealth of worlds.

At the same time, frustrated by several recent failures, Clan Steel Viper launched a major offensive against Clan Jade Falcon, correctly guessing that the extensive Jade Falcon colonies were drawing the lion's share of the touman's attention, leaving older holdings in the Pentagon and the Kerensky cluster vulnerable. Like a maelstrom, these two conflicts would draw every other Clan into battle over the next five years as - like dominos falling - opportunist Merchants and Khans saw opportunities for short term gains at the expense of the combatants, only to be targeted themselves.

Only after the exhaustion of stockpiles intended for Invasion of the Inner Sphere, the outright revolt of fourteen worlds against the Clans as a whole, the absorption of Clan Steel Viper by Clan Star Adder and the final irrevocable schism within Clan Fire Mandrill were the Grand Council able to agree on a coherent policy objective. In 3034, Ulric Kerensky was elected as ilKhan in the hopes that his personal credibility and the mystique of the Kerensky name might enable him to bring an end to the conflicts and reconquer the lost worlds...
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Post by: VhenRa on 20 May 2016, 06:39:16
Wouldn't the Invasion of Neuva Castile be the last straw that revealed the Clans to the Inner Sphere. By that point Inner Sphere Merchants were trading directly with the Hansa open worlds, the Hansa supplying Mercs to the Castilians and Umayyads (probably from the IS) and Hansa themselves in contact with both Neuva Castille and the Inner Sphere?
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Post by: Sharpnel on 20 May 2016, 06:39:24
I love Drak's Tribbles as they are very in depth. This latest is very interesting. I can see the OTL invasion being delayed until well in the 3050s as the Clans reconquer recently lost colony worlds and rebuild the forces lost in this Reconquista.
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Post by: drakensis on 20 May 2016, 15:25:07
Wouldn't the Invasion of Neuva Castile be the last straw that revealed the Clans to the Inner Sphere. By that point Inner Sphere Merchants were trading directly with the Hansa open worlds, the Hansa supplying Mercs to the Castilians and Umayyads (probably from the IS) and Hansa themselves in contact with both Neuva Castille and the Inner Sphere?
It's certainly a risk. However, the Clans may not be aware of how much or little contact there is and more to the point the potential rewards may have them being reckless and greedy.

I love Drak's Tribbles as they are very in depth. This latest is very interesting. I can see the OTL invasion being delayed until well in the 3050s as the Clans reconquer recently lost colony worlds and rebuild the forces lost in this Reconquista.
Thanks.
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Post by: knightowl on 21 May 2016, 05:58:21
An then either the Smoke Jaguar's or Ice Hellion's will make the dash to destroy the "Weak" Scavenger Lords an declare then themselves the IlClan. Remember there was a Inter Hellion Fight because of the Dragoon Compromise. The Khan an atleast 2 Galaxies want to still Invade the Inner Sphere.
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Post by: Novacaptain on 26 May 2016, 20:02:10
An then either the Smoke Jaguar's or Ice Hellion's will make the dash to destroy the "Weak" Scavenger Lords an declare then themselves the IlClan. Remember there was a Inter Hellion Fight because of the Dragoon Compromise. The Khan an atleast 2 Galaxies want to still Invade the Inner Sphere.

Jena Norizuchi and Alpha Galaxy were destroyed by an unnamed saKhan and Beta after Norizuchi began plans to invade the IS without Grand Council sanction.  If colonizing other worlds and winning glorious victories were an option, it seems almost certain that Norizuchi and her supporters would have channeled their energies ferociously in that direction.  The Hellions might even have done well, considering the canon statement that their lower-castes work quite well together with a "pack" mentality.  Unfortunately, anti-freeborn prejudice (which seems to have been very strong in the Hellion warrior caste prior to the invention of the Flurry units) as well as the characteristic Hellion tendency shoot off half-cocked more or less constantly would probably have undermined their efforts.
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Post by: paladin3030 on 08 June 2016, 00:08:30
Tribble #487

I would give my left arm to see this done. ;)
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 09 June 2016, 18:53:51
Tribble 488

Deep beyond the Periphery, within Clan space, lies a secret society. A society dedicated to the restoration of the Star League the way it was under Aleksandr Kerensky's leadership. Forged prior to the Pentagon Civil War after Kerensky's death, they chose NOT to follow his son Nicholas to Strana Mechty and help forge the Clans. Instead, they fought the various factions that rose up in the ashes of the Star League-in-Exile's collapse and to try to reunite them under their banner with little success. When Operation: Klondike arrived with the Clans coming to do what they failed to do, they were appalled to see Kerensky's army turned into savage warriors genetically enhanced to lethal capacity. Rather than face them head on, the society, who call themselves "The True League," went into hiding among various hidden worlds outside of the Kerensky Cluster. They sent spies to the Clan Homeworlds under the guise of lower caste members and those among the so-called "Bandit Caste" to see what had become of their long-lost brethren. After learning more about their society, The True League then dedicated themselves to ridding the galaxy of these monsters in a guerilla campaign that lasted for nearly 300 years.

After learning of their failed invasion of the Inner Sphere, the True League knew that the soldiers of the Inner Sphere would launch a counterattack to the Clan Homeworlds and knew that their time to reunite with the Inner Sphere had come. But first, the needed to help their brethren from their ancient homes by launching attacks on Clan holdings. After that, it was all a matter of making contact.
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Post by: drakensis on 19 June 2016, 16:32:36
Tribble 489

The Clan genetic programmes take slightly different directions. They develop mechwarriors who are tall and slim to handle high temperatures, with ears adjusted for better balance. They develop muscular and thick-skinned infantry with immense stamina and broad environmental tolerances. They develop short, broad pilots who can cope with the strain of powerful acceleration and whose bones and muscles suffer minimal decline in low gravity. By the 31st century the Warrior Caste of the Clans is dominated by trueborn elves, orcs and dwarves. (The Laborer Caste has significant minority of large, not too intellectually impressive 'trolls' - not all Clans think this is a good idea).

Keeping their warriors viable has led the Clans to invent extensive cybernetics, and electronic warfare has been honed into a major facet, with the development of a genuinely immersive mind-machine interface. While formal, honourable combat is their ideal, there's a sub-culture of low-grade warriors supported by the more ambitious civilians that embrace low intensity warfare - espionage in all but name - for the sake of their Clans.

Break out the shadowrun sourcebooks...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 19 June 2016, 20:21:13
Tribble 489

The Clan genetic programmes take slightly different directions. They develop mechwarriors who are tall and slim to handle high temperatures, with ears adjusted for better balance. They develop muscular and thick-skinned infantry with immense stamina and broad environmental tolerances. They develop short, broad pilots who can cope with the strain of powerful acceleration and whose bones and muscles suffer minimal decline in low gravity. By the 31st century the Warrior Caste of the Clans is dominated by trueborn elves, orcs and dwarves. (The Laborer Caste has significant minority of large, not too intellectually impressive 'trolls' - not all Clans think this is a good idea).

Keeping their warriors viable has led the Clans to invent extensive cybernetics, and electronic warfare has been honed into a major facet, with the development of a genuinely immersive mind-machine interface. While formal, honourable combat is their ideal, there's a sub-culture of low-grade warriors supported by the more ambitious civilians that embrace low intensity warfare - espionage in all but name - for the sake of their Clans.

Break out the shadowrun sourcebooks...

Tir Na Niops already has dibs on elves:

(http://www.battlecorps.com/catalog/images/BEST-EVER---AN-EIGHTH-WORLD-ADVENTURE.jpg)

(Though, with Niops' Star League ties and red dwarf sun, you can always have Niops inhabited by dark elves)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 19 June 2016, 21:38:32
Never deal with the Dragon!
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Post by: Terrace on 23 June 2016, 10:23:33
Tribble 490

Among many newly-independent worlds on the Periphery border in the wake of the Jihad, one world is relatively unique as being a black hole where pirates attack, but never get away. One desperate band of mercenaries-turned-pirates decides to try their luck anyways. What they get is a world where the terrain all over the planet makes travel extremely difficult without either jumpjets or VTOLs. And no sooner to the defenders become aware of them than the pirates get swarmed by SRM-equipped Jump Infantry and similarly hopping Battle Armor.

For you see, this formerly Taurian world has retained the ability to train and equip Battle Armor troops and Jump Infantry. They long ago realized just how difficult the local terrain made using most standard military equipment, but they made up for it with some of the best Jump Infantry the Taurian Concordat ever had. When the Concordat acquired the ability to manufacture Battle Armor, a factory was set up on this world in an underground facility. With the tight terrain, the defenders regularly make short work of any pirates that come calling.

The poor, luckless shmucks that thought looting this place was a good idea would love nothing more than to leave and never come back, but the defenders have already blown up the Dropship. They have a reputation to maintain, after all!

For the pirates are going to become very familiar with the phrase "ARGH! GET 'EM OFF! GET 'EM OFF!" for the rest of their short stay on the planet Roach Motel...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 July 2016, 16:11:11
Tribble #491

Rather than committing to the Exodus, Aleksandr Kerensky instead throws in with Jerome Blake to try to hold the Star League together. Using the core worlds of the Terran Hegemony as a jumping off points, SLDF Corps and Divisions set out to act as peacekeepers by engaging and subduing the armies and navies of the House Lords as they waged war on each other.

While the SLDF was the largest single military force still in the Inner Sphere, it wasn't the equal of all the House's armies combined. Their logistics had never recovered entirely from the Amaris Coup and the readiness of many SLDF soldiers to fight against the armies of their home nations was often questionable. Nonetheless, they still had a degree of technological advantage and their personnel had unparalleled combat experience.

For a while it seemed to work, except that the House Lords did not give up. They adapted to the situation and now anticipated SLDF intervention. Conflicts escalated with weapons of mass destruction being used by all sides. The military intelligence arms of the Great Houses pulled out all the stops to subvert the SLDF's commanders and soldiers.

By the early 2790s General Kerensky realised that his strategy wasn't working and shifted the focus to crippling the military production of the Great Houses, hoping that this would force them to stop fighting. The fact that the SLDF's sources of equipment simply hadn't recovered to the point they could make good the losses they were taking was also a factor - in the long run Kerensky had needed to - and failed to - win the war psychologically.

Given broad authority to determine what industries were military and strategic, hardened veterans of decades of war set about taking the war to the core worlds of the five Member States. As the House Lords responded, the situation escalated and raids struck deep into the Terran Hegemony - one of them killing Kerensky's deputy, General Aaron DeChevalier in 2799. Shortly after the death of his old friend, Kerensky authorised strikes on the capitals of all five Member-States.

The HPG network was no longer a coherent network since the Houses had realised Terran control of this would place them at a terrible disadvantage and seized or destroyed every station they good. Three weeks after the strike forces departed, Aleksandr Kerensky suffered a fatal stroke. Within months, the Member-States had been functionally decapitated - only one House Lord was dead but the infrastructure of their core bureaucracies were shattered.

Even this, however, couldn't stop the Succession Wars. Worlds and provinces broke away from central authority and border armies took advantage of openings that resulted. With no clear successor to Kerensky, the SLDF fractured into dozens of factions and even Terra itself found itself fought over.

The resulting chaos seemed unending, until 2821. After two decades of silence, Aleksandr Kerensky's sons Nicholas and Andery had returned from the Outworld Marches. After their father's death, the two young men had rallied several divisions and shiploads of machinery to evacuate Terra as the SLDF regiments turned on each other. In a remote corner of human space they had arrived as saviours to the collapsing economies of the outlying worlds of the OWA and forged a new nation and a new military force.

They were called the Clans and their intention was nothing less than the complete reunification of humanity under their leadership, and the reorganisation of all human society upon the 'rational model' which they had already applied to the Wastes...


Edit:
I'd envisage that the Clans are rather larger here. 25 Clusters of 40 Bloodnamed Warriors (and a varying number of unblooded warriors depending on exact composition) per Clan, for 1,000 Bloodnamed per Clan. This means that each of the five task groups sent out to bring the Inner Sphere to heel would have had 100 Clusters at their disposal. On the other hand, their warship strength is lower - typically one capital warship or 2-3 smaller ships per Clan.

The Task Groups are as follows:
Task Group Alpha: Clans Ghost Bear, Blood Spirit, Steel Viper and Star Adder. Coreward regions of the former Draconis Combine, Lyran Commonwealth and (eventually) the Rim Worlds Republic.
Task Group Beta: Clans Sea Fox, Ice Hellion, Coyote and Cloud Cobra. Rimwards regions of the former Draconis Combine and corewards regions of the former Federated Suns and Terran Hegemony.
Task Group Gamma: Clans Nova Cat, Mongoose, Wolverine and Snow Raven. Coreward regions of the former Capellan Confederation and Free Worlds League, rimwards regions of the former Terran Hegemony
Task Group Delta: Clans Fire Mandrill, Widowmaker, Goliath Scorpion and Burrock. Rimwards regions of the Federated Suns and Capellan Confederation, as well as the Taurian Concordat.
Task Group Episilon: Clans Hells Horses, Jade Falcon, Wolf and Smoke Jaguar. Former Magistracy of Canopus, rimwards regions of the former Free Worlds League and Rim Worlds Republic.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 11 July 2016, 10:33:13
Interesting drak, would the Clans be allowed to grow or would they be snuffed out in their infancy? It took years for the 20 clusters to come together and mount Operation Klondike. Would the Draconis Combine, Federated Suns, and/or an SLDF adversary come along to wipe them out first?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 11 July 2016, 15:35:34
For these purposes I'm calculating that the Clans managed to thrive in isolation for two decades and by the time they were making a bid for domination, the various factions have fragmented and the continued fighting has left the Inner Sphere a patchwork of vest-pocket empires, with the Clans being among the largest surviving forces and among the few that have managed to maintain some approximation of SLDF Royal technology.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 29 July 2016, 12:44:32
Question is, how long will their campaign work? I doubt they'd make the entirety of the Inner Sphere capitulate or acquiesce to their demands.

Anyway, I've been thinking of getting my tribble of a Babylon 5 crossover with Battletech to start; but the problem is, where to begin? Which episode would be the best start off point? Furthermore, how will I incorporate the different B5 characters into the series? I can't exactly have Londo, G'Kar, Delenn, or the various species from B5 be in this. All of the human characters will be no problem, just gotta adjust their histories and exclude any telepaths.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 29 July 2016, 12:54:34
Question is, how long will their campaign work? I doubt they'd make the entirety of the Inner Sphere capitulate or acquiesce to their demands.

Anyway, I've been thinking of getting my tribble of a Babylon 5 crossover with Battletech to start; but the problem is, where to begin? Which episode would be the best start off point? Furthermore, how will I incorporate the different B5 characters into the series? I can't exactly have Londo, G'Kar, Delenn, or the various species from B5 be in this. All of the human characters will be no problem, just gotta adjust their histories and exclude any telepaths.


I tried


I used the locus of Epsilon Eridani being both the location of B5 and a known world in BT. I had an SLDF WarShip misjump there.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 30 July 2016, 20:10:38
Well if you look at the tribble, I wasn't going to do something like that.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 10 August 2016, 20:15:31
Tribble 492

When the Minnesota Tribe disappeared, there were many theories before and after the Clan Invasion about their whereabouts and their origins. While ComStar did confirm that one of the downed pilots of the Tribe's mechs did carry technology similar to what the Clans and the Star League used at the time, they also said that this said MechWarrior also had the patch of the so-called "Not-Named-Clan" the other Clans refer to, Clan Wolverine. But one question still remains; where did they go?

Some theorize that they completely circumvented the Inner Sphere itself and settled on worlds away from the former Rim Worlds Republic; some say that they settled on worlds just near the borders of the Capellan Confederation, Magistracy of Canopus, and Taurian Concordat; there are even rumors that they had been integrated into the Word of Blake's forces. But what if they just simply...went beyond known space? What if they kept going from where ComStar lost contact...and found something?

They found a new cluster of stars filled with habitable planets and moons; but some, contained ruins of an ancient civilization similar to the Pyramids of Giza on Terra and images of beings that were not human ruling over these worlds and leaving towards the stars to find a new home...only to be closer than they think.

The remnants of Clan Wolverine had discovered the unimaginable; a civilization of non-humans that had managed to develop technology similar to humanity's only better. But they had also learned what had happened to them; they were wiped out by another race that was poised to strike at humanity as a whole. Being the only ones to stand in their way, they spent the next 200 years readying themselves to fight these invaders...just in time for them to arrive in the newly dubbed Wolverine Cluster.
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Post by: wolfcannon on 10 August 2016, 20:32:12
Quote
"There are those who believe that life here began out there, far across the universe, with tribes of humans who may have been the forefathers of the Egyptians, or the Toltecs, or the Mayans. They may have been the architects of the great pyramids, or the lost civilizations of Lemuria or Atlantis. Some believe that there may yet be brothers of man who even now fight to survive far, far away, amongst the stars."

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"There are those who believe that life here began out there, far across the universe, with tribes of humans who may have been the forefathers of the Egyptians, or the Toltecs, or the Mayans. Some believe that there may yet be brothers of man who even now fight to survive, somewhere beyond the heavens."

   "Fleeing from the Clan tyranny, the last of the SLDF, leads a ragtag, fugitive fleet, on a lonely quest."   eh?
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Post by: gladius on 11 August 2016, 02:49:58
You're not the first to make the connection: look up 'Hunted Tribes' by Hotpoint ...
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Post by: Vehrec on 11 August 2016, 10:38:00
Can we not?  I'm sick to death of 'The Wolverines find something and fight against it for HUMANITY' plots.

Hell, I even toyed with a crossover plot bunny where they found Megatron and he killed them without it taking more than four hours out of his schedule.  A Nemesis-class stealth-battleship is a nightmare to fight by design, and if it closes to boarding range your ship will be literally torn apart by the robo-tentacles.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 12 August 2016, 11:10:36
I won't give up on the idea that Clan Wolverine is still out there somewhere. I refuse to accept the idea that they joined Comstar and the remnants of their forces were integrated into the Word of Blake.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 August 2016, 00:11:26
Tribble 493

The Minnesota Tribe continued their chain of raids through the Federated Suns and presumably to points rimwards. After the last known raid, on Tortega, no one heard from them again...

Or drew a connection to the Wasteland Wolverines, a pirate empire that rose up amid the many lost worlds of the Outworld Wastes over the late 29th century and by the early 30th century had a firm grip on the region. As the Third Succession War went on, raids and counter-raids by the AFFS and DCMS provided that this young Periphery realm had a determined, if small, military force. Increasingly however the raids fell off in number and trade replaced it. By the 31st Century the Wasteland Wolverines were an established, if fairly minor state with forty worlds under their control and a military sufficient to deter piracy in the area. As a knock-on effect, the Outworlds Alliance had actually grown a little more secure once it became clear that the Wolverines didn't intend to expand further at their expense.

In 3005 the Wolf Dragoons arrived over Delos IV in the Federated Suns. Discussions with House Davion were still underway when a significant task force from the Wolverines arrived and without any preamble launched an all-out attack on the Dragoons - aggression that the new arrivals met head on with equal enthusiasm. Massively outgunned, the local AFFS could do little but watch as over 1,200 pristine BattleMechs fought the sort of brutal, ferocious battle that no Inner Sphere power had risked in generations.

The victorious Wolverines, little more than a regiment in strength, had at least been cut down to the point the Kilbourne DMM thought they might have a chance but diplomacy broke out. The Wolverine commander apologised for the border violation but explained that the Dragoons were a large pirate force that had inflicted genocidal damage on a Wolverine colony. As recompense for the various collateral damage, the Wolverines ceded the salvage of the battlefield and withdrew.

While this was a very nice windfall of material for the AFFS, it wasn't as nice as 5 regiments of mercenaries. And almost as soon as time allowed, a DCMS raiding party reached Delos IV and the Kilbourne DMM had to fight to defend the salvage. (Let's not jump to conclusions and blame ComStar. A slight hop to conclusions should suffice).

It was only a matter of time - admittedly of a few years, but nonetheless time - before word of this trickled into the Deep Periphery. And while Ian Davion might not know what to make of this, the Khans of the Clans certainly did. The Wolverines lived. This was unacceptable. It was also a grand excuse for the Crusading Clans. A large force was amassed to strike for the Wastelands.

Of course, the Wastelands are a very long way from the Clan Homeworlds. They're of roughly equal geographic size and population. They might not be quite so advanced technologically, but they did have SLDF level gear as a starting point. And they knew that the Clans were far too predictable not to come after them...
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Post by: VhenRa on 13 August 2016, 07:20:17
I won't give up on the idea that Clan Wolverine is still out there somewhere. I refuse to accept the idea that they joined Comstar and the remnants of their forces were integrated into the Word of Blake.


Honestly... I don't think they did. And even in-universe they don't seem to have. That entire section seems questionable as hell, given how it was awfully convenient that Chandy finds something that links the Wolverines with the Word of Blake... and yet nothing since has been found linking them.
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Post by: Takiro on 13 August 2016, 09:34:58
Nice idea drak, I could see the Wolverines becoming a Bandit Kingdom and the Outworlds Wastes is a nice area for them to set up shop. An encounter with the Dragoons in that area as they proceed to their first planned tour of duty is certainly plausible. Such an encounter could lead to hostilities between the Dragoons and the Wolverines but what if we acknowledge Warden desperation at this time. Could a partnership develop over the Crusaders ascendance to power which is a corruption of Kerensky's ideal? What if this changes or is the Dragoons mission which is to investigate the InnerSphere for a possible invasion. They were always out to stop that invasion. Perhaps the remnants of the Wolverines are step one in a new agenda. Recruiting enough allies to return to the Clan Homeworlds and confront the Crusaders thus halting the invasion preserving the isolation of the SLDF begun by Kerensky. Be interesting to see ComStar good guys here willing to join such a quest. Certainly they are committed to maintaining the status quo.

So instead of the Outbound Light arriving above Huntress circa 3050 how about a taskforce of Wolf mercs, Wolverine pirates, and ComGuard crusaders?!
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Post by: drakensis on 13 August 2016, 11:31:40
I'd have a hard time seeing the Wolf Dragoons circa 3005 being willing in any way to co-operate with the Wolverines. Or vice versa, since the Wolverines would have no reason to trust the Dragoons.
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Post by: snakespinner on 13 August 2016, 18:32:04
I am just wondering about omnimechs.
Apparently WD had the schematics, the Wolverines could have retrieved them and by the time the clans arrived they would be on an even footing.
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 13 August 2016, 20:26:33
I am just wondering about omnimechs.
Apparently WD had the schematics, the Wolverines could have retrieved them and by the time the clans arrived they would be on an even footing.
That's assuming they can salvage anything from whatever wreckage is left once the battle is done. Besides, WD doesn't have anything except SL quality kit at their first arrival. Clan grade manufacturing specs came during a later resupply, IINM.
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 14 August 2016, 04:44:30
More importantly the Dragoons would have Techs and probably a few Scientists among them with familiarity in Clan Tech as well as Star League tech
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 14 August 2016, 05:19:33
Carrying on the Wolverine theme;

Tribble 494

Wolverines revenge. Cylon Style.

The Wolverines as it turns out didn't flee into the Inner Sphere and join ComStar. The Minnesota Tribe never existed, but this had pretty much zero impact on history going exactly as it did.
Indeed, the Wolverines last stand was even more successful than the Clans had thought, buying time for the Wolverines to carefully pack up a complete industrial base, knowledge and the link and flee *Coreward* a good 500 light years or so. There they rebuild and form a weird society that's almost a kind of hybrid of a Clan society and a neo-feudal society like in the Inner Sphere. Not a cast based civilization exactly, think more Capellan with Citizens and non-citizens. Albeit not as dickish as Capellans are about the whole thing.

But they have let their hate for the Clans slowly fester until it has become an all consuming rage.

Its say 3055 and the Wolverines have been very quietly infiltrating the Clans now for several decades, their intelligence teams vastly better at this than the Clans pretty pathetic counter-intelligence. They soon enough know more about what is going on in the Kerensky Cluster than the Khans do and at the right time in 3055 after building up the capability, they launch a Cylon style decapitation attack, shutting down SDS systems across the cluster where they exist and using essentially what would be 3060s era pocket warships to nuke the absolute ****** out of the entire Clan military where practical, stomping it flat. After dealing with mobile defenses and seizing many of the Clans warship caches as possible to add to their own fleets, they with a pretty chilling calmness work their way through Clan space, wiping out every Clan warrior they can find and 'liberating' the civilians into the greater Wolverine empire.

Thanks to the sheer scope of the operation, there are plenty of windows for thousands of Clan jumpships to load up VIPs, some military units who evaded the first attacks, some scientists and so on and they go running for the Inner Sphere as fast as they can in a handful of fleets. They make it there just as the Clans are starting to get a little concerned about the whole sudden silence from the HPG chain. Then the Clans are even more alarmed at the possibility (nay probability given some encounters on the Exodus road) that the Wolverines are following them to the Inner Sphere where they will wipe them out. And although the invading Clans and a few galaxies worth of troops who made it out are a formidable force on paper, they have no real industrial base worthy of the name...

Leaving open the somewhat pressing question of what in the hell do they do about it?!
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Post by: VhenRa on 14 August 2016, 06:05:32
I would assume its "Curl up in the fetal position".
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 23 August 2016, 16:54:37
I got nothing left for ideas. Anyone have anything?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 23 August 2016, 16:56:49
I am writing something already - going through Operation Stiletto trying to turn  it into a story around the short scenarios they wrote



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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 24 August 2016, 07:10:07
I got nothing left for ideas. Anyone have anything?

Von Strangs World.

Von Strang gives his glorious Scum of the Star League Speech ... then when the Falcons swarm forward reveals the REAL reason the Inner Sphere really just left well enough alone. The fact that ole Gunthar Strang had been quietly during the Star League Civil War shipping no small amount of gear secretly out of the Hegemony to construct a fallback position. But everything went to hell and it was forgotten about when he died ... except his relative Nico Von Strang who quietly shipped the stuff to his little mini empire.

Long story short come 3049 and Von Strangs World is protected by a fully armed and operational surface to space SDS system that would have rivaled that of the Hegemony. Pretty much never used but found out about some time in the 3rd Succession War its still nicely intact and has been maintained and jealously protected against Great Houses trying to take a peak inside, but still not known about really beyond the intelligence services in the FedCom and DC. 80% of it in mothballs with just a handful of currently active ground bases covering the major population centers.

And so Clan Jade Falcon come wandering in and declare their intentions to kill all their asses arrowing for the capital city ... and when they start to edge into the upper stratosphere, the naval lasers open fire, blowing first the Falcon dropships out of the sky, then their warships in low orbit and finally the fighters that had desperately scrambled to shoot up the SDS, doing some damage but dying anyway.

And of course the rest of the invading Clans (except the Wolves who get bidded out of the attack force by the Crusaders, Ulric merely having a 'fine then, have at it you guys!' Just As Planned look on his face) storm in a few weeks later, by which time all the other SDS batteries have been hurriedly brought online.

Several Galaxies and warships destroyed later in exchange for a few good sized cities being plastered from orbit because the Clans are really sore losers that way, the invading Clans have run into just a little bit of a spot of bother on their attack...
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 24 August 2016, 07:30:10
Von Strangs World.

Von Strang gives his glorious Scum of the Star League Speech ... then when the Falcons swarm forward reveals the REAL reason the Inner Sphere really just left well enough alone. The fact that ole Gunthar Strang had been quietly during the Star League Civil War shipping no small amount of gear secretly out of the Hegemony to construct a fallback position. But everything went to hell and it was forgotten about when he died ... except his relative Nico Von Strang who quietly shipped the stuff to his little mini empire.

Long story short come 3049 and Von Strangs World is protected by a fully armed and operational surface to space SDS system that would have rivaled that of the Hegemony. Pretty much never used but found out about some time in the 3rd Succession War its still nicely intact and has been maintained and jealously protected against Great Houses trying to take a peak inside, but still not known about really beyond the intelligence services in the FedCom and DC. 80% of it in mothballs with just a handful of currently active ground bases covering the major population centers.

And so Clan Jade Falcon come wandering in and declare their intentions to kill all their asses arrowing for the capital city ... and when they start to edge into the upper stratosphere, the naval lasers open fire, blowing first the Falcon dropships out of the sky, then their warships in low orbit and finally the fighters that had desperately scrambled to shoot up the SDS, doing some damage but dying anyway.

And of course the rest of the invading Clans (except the Wolves who get bidded out of the attack force by the Crusaders, Ulric merely having a 'fine then, have at it you guys!' Just As Planned look on his face) storm in a few weeks later, by which time all the other SDS batteries have been hurriedly brought online.

Several Galaxies and warships destroyed later in exchange for a few good sized cities being plastered from orbit because the Clans are really sore losers that way, the invading Clans have run into just a little bit of a spot of bother on their attack...
IF he was able to ship out enough materiel to build an SDS what else could he have lying around? Brian Caches?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: knightowl on 24 August 2016, 12:26:15
IF he was able to ship out enough materiel to build an SDS what else could he have lying around? Brian Caches?
NO Brian Caches are Clan Only. Maybe a Few Von Strangs Castles.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 24 August 2016, 15:29:51
I got nothing left for ideas. Anyone have anything?

I have two both in development. Hope to post the first next week!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: panzerfaust150 on 25 August 2016, 10:52:33
Tribble #495

Nicholas Kerensky does not survive his bout with the local fever and things slide into chaos as per canon, but without Nicholas, are there no clans? Or do they take a different form? Will the portions of the SLDF that remain loyal to Alexandr's dream rally around Andrey, or will they just become another combatant or series of combatants in the Pentagon Civil War?

And when ComStar finds them in 3049, what will they find?
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Post by: panzerfaust150 on 25 August 2016, 11:05:03
Tribble #496

Hanse Davion calls Theodore's bluff in the War of 3039. But things do not go Hanse's way completely. With the Lyrans temporarily out of the fight, it becomes a slow grinding war of attrition for the Dieron District, and Direon itself only falls after a 11 month siege. The F-C doesn't get much further than the 3rd wave targets before threat of interdict pretty much ends the war due to a mixture of mutual exhaustion and just plain ComStar interference.

But the Combine is left in rough shape, with 40% of her Battlemech regiments having suffered over 60% casualties, several of the premiere Combine units were wiped out outright during the Dieron campaign, or left bereft of a way home when they were cut off by the resumption of the F-C advance. Theodore Kurita himself was discredited by the end of the war and chose exile with the Legions of Vega, his wife, forced to commit seppuku rather than be captured on Exeter. The DCMS is a broken rag doll, and is back in the hands of an unstable, and angry Takashi. He commits the Combine to campaigns of unsustainable raiding and assaults on F-C and FRR border worlds (though there is some success against the FRR), that do little but contribute to bleeding the DCMS white.

The F-C casualties are sustainable, but heavy, and serve to slow down the expansion of the AFFC, but by 3049, she is at perhaps 90% of the troop numbers that she was at in canon.

Do the Clans take Luthien this time? Can the Combine survive without the flexibility Theodore taught the DCMS? And if the Combine does collapse, what does this mean for the Davion half of the F-C, not to mention the rest of the Inner Sphere?
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Post by: DoctorMonkey on 25 August 2016, 13:11:02
Re Tribble #496


I suspect Hanse Davion would plan to assault and break the Draconis Combine before the Clans have a chance to turn up, I'd guess that by 3057-8 they would be at war again

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Post by: Davout73 on 05 September 2016, 20:08:11
Here's one for you all.

Attached is what I am going to call a "Visual Tribble".

This one I call "The Shattered Sphere"

I have no Point of Departure from the established canon.  Honestly, I was fiddling around in ARC and thought this would be pretty fun to do.

I have my own ideas on what's going on here, but before I put those down, I'd like to see some other ideas.

The attached .pdf is 22x17.  If you zoon in close enough, in some places the border goes through a planet. 

This is intentional.

Have fun, and thanks for looking!


Dav
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Post by: drakensis on 07 September 2016, 01:25:19
A couple of things stand out:

1. There's no sign of the Marik Commonwealth. This suggests that House Marik isn't in a position of power.
2. No state built around Terra. I'd be inclined to say this scenario would therefore include the First Succession War and the final collapse of the Terran Hegemony - or at least something similar.
3. The much reduced Davion domains are reminiscent of the DCMS onslaught of the First Succession War.

As a result I'd lean to a PoD during the First Succession War but pre-Kentares. Probably involving the Combine being extremely successful but the Successor States fracturing into civil wars for various reasons (may or may not be traceable back to ComStar).
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Post by: Sharpnel on 07 September 2016, 03:45:32
I love the map, Davout and agree with Drak on the breaking point from the timeline. Given that I would probably change the name of the Nova Roman realm to something like the Illyrian League or the Lothian Palatinate
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Post by: Atlan on 07 September 2016, 04:34:41
 Tribble #497

Battletech was originally meant to be reminiscent of Mad Max, only with giant stompy mecha. But as time passed, that was largely forgotten, as the Battletech universe grew and changed.

So, how about an AU which really goes back to the roots?

The Inner Sphere, in this AU, was identical to the canon one- right up until the First Succession War. In it, there was no Comstar- in fact, there were no HPGs at all. During the war, weapons of all forms were used- nuclear, biological, viral, chemical- and malware. Early in the war, the super-computer-viruses which the various Houses had stocked were deployed- as were the Terran Hegenomy's ones, as desperate act by a defenseless Terra. This took out virtually every computer in the known galaxy- and that includes the digital libraries, the HPGs, and Jumpship navigational computers.

By the time the shooting had stopped- the galaxy was dark. In the future age they lived in, no-one really bothered with printed books much any more- just digital ones which were all gone now. Unable to build the advanced machines which had sustained civilization, the Inner Sphere collapsed. Unable to communicate, barely able to travel between their worlds, the Successor States fell apart, untill the galaxy consisted of a handful of dozen-planet empires, and thousands of independent worlds.

And in the chaos, hundreds of worlds would try their hand at rebuilding the once great states- by conquering whatever world was nearby. Or they might try and rebuild their own world by taking what their neighbors had. Or they might try and get revenge for some long-forgotten slight.

They could no longer build their mighty warships or battlemechs- the designs were lost, the technology to complicated to design, and too complicated to build even if they knew how. Wars were fought with older, simpler technology- laser canons replaced with dumb missiles, canons and bullets. Aerospace fighters replaced with jet engines and propeller driven planes. Fusion plants replaced with petrol burning engines. Mechs replaced by tanks. Jumpships navigated by pen and pencil and abacus.

But just because they could no longer build those advanced machines didn't mean they couldn't USE them. The precious few mechs left over from before the fall of civilization were now the masters of war. A single mech could take on dozens of the modern, primitive tanks- and you could more easily move mechs from planet to planet.

A quiet world in 3000 might have a population of 50,000,000, a standing infantry of 50,000, a tank force of 5000- and a lance of mechs. And that lance of mechs was the difference between victory or defeat- that lance of mechs could wipe out an entire invasion force- unless that invasion force also had mechs...

And so, centuries after the Succession War, mechwarriors- especially mercenaries- had a mystique. They were the cowboys of the new age, the heroes- the guys who could wander onto a planet and turn it upside down with a single mech.

Meanwhile, tech prospectors wandered the galaxy, known that even a mech destroyed and left where it fell centuries ago was priceless by modern standards.
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 07 September 2016, 12:28:00
That would give the Clans even MORE incentive to invade. With the Inner Sphere in the state it's in, it would be easy pickings to get to Terra.
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Post by: Vehrec on 07 September 2016, 17:38:44
That would give the Clans even MORE incentive to invade. With the Inner Sphere in the state it's in, it would be easy pickings to get to Terra.
  Well then why have the Clans at all?  How much extra intercine strife, disease and famine would it take to topple the fledgling colonies and knock them back on their heels technologically as well?  The Clans suffering a radical contraction in population as the SLDFiE burns itself out to forge them would certainly leave them without the scientists to advance the tech level, or the technicians to even maintain what they have.  If, in fact, the Clans smash up the Kerensky worlds too baddly to salvage much from those societies, or the arrival of Nicky's Warships triggers a nuclear exchange...  Well how much would it take to tip their society over from 'technological dynamo' to 'techno barbarians?'  And if you want to keep the mad-max feel, have no fear.  Is it not very much a Warrior's way to speed off into the desert after your favorite breeders who have scrawled WE ARE NOT THINGS (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEJnMQG9ev8) onto the wall?

I mean, I'm sure a lot of you guys want to ride eternal, shiny and chrome, but that's not for all of us.
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Post by: Atlan on 08 September 2016, 16:46:13
That would give the Clans even MORE incentive to invade. With the Inner Sphere in the state it's in, it would be easy pickings to get to Terra.


You assume the Clans would be the same as in canon. But since the entire point of the AU was to make things a little more Mad Max- or Fallout- the Clans would be changed too.

So- the Clans:

Kerensky's exodus fleet reached the Kerensky Cluster, and quickly started de-militirizing- fleets of warships and thousands of Battlemechs were handy when you were surronded by other nations, but for a few million refugies, they were a resource drain and a temptation. Kerensky had the entire warship fleet flown into the nearest sun, and had the Battlemechs and Aerospace Fighters stored in hidden Brian Cashes- small, company sized ones, scattered far and wide around the Kerensky Cluster, even on uninhabitable worlds. The conventional veichals had their guns removed, and were given to civilians- sure a fusion-powered 40 ton car was a bit much for driving to work, but it was better than walking.

But old tensions reared their heads, and civil war happened. The easy to find Brian Cashes were raided for mechs, and the cluster fell into war. Not as terrible as as the Inner Sphere- populations grew, instead of shrank- but a never-ending war none the less.

By the year 3000, the cluster was in a stalemate. While all the tanks were gone, the factories rubble, and their infantary decimated, each side had a LOT of Battlemechs- three Battalions in some cases! And aerospace fighters as support! The Kerensky Cluster was locked in a tense cold war, of mutually assured destruction- all knew that the Mech forces were sufficiant to wipe out every city in the Cluster, and no-one was prepared to risk that. But war had become a vital part of their culture- they needed it. And everyone was afraid that some other state would start the war to end all wars.

Then someone had the idea of checking up on the Inner Sphere. The Wolfs Dragoons were sent as a scout force, posing as mercenaries. 5 Companies- 10 mechs and 2 aerospace fighters each- to probe the Inner Sphere.

They brought back news of a weakened Inner Sphere. And the nations of the Kerensky Cluster- the Clans- realized that they could have an easy war- keep their militaries occupied, draw down the force level in the Cluster, and bring in precious raw resources.

In 3050 the Clans hit the Inner Sphere. Their mechs were frightening- unlike the Inner Sphere mechs which had patchwork armor, dumb missiles and weak canons, and poorly maintained engines, the Clans mechs were as good as they were the day Kerensky had them packed away. (Largely because they were fresh out of Brian Cashes).  Unlike the Inner Sphere, who mounted their invasions in centuries-old civilian ships (like Mules), with crude armor and a few guns welded on, the Clans had actual military dropships! Unions! Overlords!
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Post by: Takiro on 08 September 2016, 18:01:28
You really don't even have to have the Clans invade. They just like everyone else are trying to survive in a bleak dystopian future. This Mad Max universe would lack the faction feel of BattleTech however as big groups (Great Houses, mercs, Clans) and even small units (possibly no larger than company) would exist. Not saying it would be bad just different from the norm.
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Post by: zapdragon on 15 September 2016, 13:54:29
tribble #498
what if the WoB did force the houses to reform the star league, which promptly sent the SLDF to defeat the WoB? What would that do to the jihad, or would there even be one?
the SLDF would have a decent sized fleet but so do the WoB. the blakists also would have lost the element of surprise, although I doubt anyone knows the full extent of their forces. The great houses probably wont fight each other in the confusion, but they won't have an easy time communicating, especially with the HPG white-out going on. the real question though is weather the WoB manages to expand as in OTL or weather the SLDF immediately comes down on the protectorate like  100 tons of bricks.
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Post by: gladius on 16 December 2016, 05:01:58
Tribble #499:

It's a tense day on Outreach. The heirs of the Successor states had been run through what the Dragoons insisted was needed training (which was suspiciously like basic combat and teamwork drills, but okay) and the final test was begining: Kai Alard Laio and his cousin Sun Tzu Laio against six of the best 'Mechwarriors in the Inner Sphere, according to Clan tradition. Seeing a chance to humiliate his rival, Sun Tzu targets one of Kai's targets, making it a free for all, then hit the ejector seat, planning to let Kai be soundly defeated by what he presumed were unwinnable odds, even for the already famous Warrior.

Unfortunately (or not, depending on your opinion of the guy) Sun Tzu's canopy malfunctions, failing to blow away before his ejector seat rammed him into the armoured glass at a terrific acceleration. The first responders quickly deduced that the heir to the Capellan Confederation died instantly. To add insult to fatal injury, Kai managed to defeat five of his six opponents, all without even realising that his cousin was already dead.

Romano immediately withdraws from the Outreach confrence, vowing retribution, and hurries back to Sian ... where her daughter Kali promptly tries to assassinate her mother and take the throne for herself. Both women die in the ensuing battle in the palace, leaving the Celestial Throne without a clear heir.

Even as the Commonwealth and Combine gear up to fight the renewed Clan onslought, with the Free World's League feeding material to both at a decent profit, the Confederation appears to be on the verge of self-immolation as centuries of repression and Byzantine squabbling threatened to erupt in all out civil war ... when Candace Alard Laio and her husband appear on Sian and take power, uniting the Capellan Confederation and the St Ives Compact, bringing sane government and reform, dealing with pockets of resistance with a liberal dose of Yen-lo-wang and the Big Mac, who were brought over to support Candace with cunning diplomacy and a promise of considerable tech upgrades.

Forces are sent to help support the fight against the Clans, both to help protect the Inner Sphere, raise the sullied reputation of the Confederation, and to deal with unrelibale troops by bleeding them against the Clan razor. Inspired, individual Free Worlds League governmnets follow suit, sending forces to support the Commonwealth and the other allies, and in the leadup to the battle of Tukkayyid, the Clans face a far more united Inner Sphere ... thanks to a few malfunctioning explosive bolts ...
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Post by: PeacMaker03 on 16 December 2016, 13:16:18
Makes more sense than the official time line ever did.
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Post by: namar13766 on 23 December 2016, 15:16:22
500: An Entry With A Bang/Virginia War/Scorched Earth AU X-over
 
The Minnesota Tribe misjumps into Ryanverse Earth's Sol shortly after Election Day 2008.

Skip forward a few centuries, Earth is the center of the Human Sphere, in a looser organization than the Star League, but much more peaceful, relatively speaking. Technology is far more advanced than one would expect, due to worries than the next visitors from Battletech would not be as peaceful.

So when a pair of wormholes open in Sol on 2658 (3058 in the Battletech universe), one leading to Strana Mechty and the other to Outreach, the general feeling for the human sphere nations is "OH FOR CRYIN' OUT LOUD!"

500a: When the Freedom Fivers first showed up on April 11, 2605, so many Plans, be they Human or Cylon, went off the rails.
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Post by: reppa on 24 December 2016, 21:12:42
Tribble 501...

(apologies ahead of time for this being so slapdash -- this is a partial reconstruction of some of my notes from files on my now nonfunctional computer, so...)

Operation: Nightfall

In this version of things, almost everything up to Kerensky's Exodus happens they way things do in the main version -- except Minoru (and Jinjiro) Kurita and Kenyon Marik form an alliance to take Terra, and Blake is a whole lot more unstable. Minoru dies in combat against Terran forces -- so the Kentares Massacre doesn't occur -- at least, not how it happened in the Prime Universe. As part of the alliance, the one who takes Terra becomes First Lord, while the runner up becomes Commanding General.
Blake sends out a demand for assistance when it becomes clear that Terra will fall -- but his messages are delayed by traitors within. Similarly, traitors within allow the Kurita-Marik forces to escape harm from those still functioning Space Defense Systems.
Meanwhile, Davion, Steiner, and Liao hammer out a temporary alliance of convenience to try to stop -- or at least mitigate -- the damage -- even managing to bring some Taurian, Canopian, & Rim Worlds forces into the attempt. The Alliance sends forces to several planets near Terran space -- the Capellans to Liao & (space-holder till I figure out one), the FedSuns to Chesterton and a couple others nearby, and the Lyrans to Skye, Summer, & probably another.
Each of the rulers are with their troops -- the Chancellor on Liao, the First Prince on Chesterton, and the Archon on that unidentified Lyran world....
When it becomes obvious to the increasingly paranoid Blake that Terra will fall, and due to the whispers saying the other states are joining his enemies, he launches Operation: Nightfall -- dozens of WarShips & JumpShips carrying DropShips loaded with all sorts of nuclear, biological, and chemical weapons arrive over most of the capital & sub-capital worlds in the Inner Sphere -- oh, and of course, the worlds the Davions, Liaos, and Steiners have gathered their relief forces...
This news does not make it to the Kurita-Marik forces, though -- just before they manage to arrive at Terra, Blake and his inner circle flee toward the one (in this universe) "Hidden Five" world (Odessa/Gabriel Station) that Blake & company have already claimed. First Lord Marik and Commanding General Jinjiro live just long enough to regret not bringing the Space Defense Systems back online when the Revenge Fleet arrives to return the favor...
Once everything has settled, 90+% of the Terran Hegemony worlds have been sterilized, while most of the capital & sub-capital worlds of the Inner Sphere & near-Periphery have also been rendered lifeless...Blake dies on Odessa when that world is nuked to oblivion...
Of the various heads of state, only Steiner, the Warlord of Rasalhague, and the Andurien Duchess survive. Both the Draconis Combine and Free Worlds League splinter -- Andurian & Regulus declare their independence almost immediately after the death of Kenyon on Terra -- similarly Arkab and Rasalhague announce their own intentions.
By the year 2800 most things have settled -- cadet branches of the Liao and Davion families have selected new leaders, and that 'temporary alliance of convenience has largely held up.
Andurien has merged peacefully into the Capellan Confederation (a political marriage, of course), and together claimed most of the territory around Oriente -- and now have a border touching Regulan and Steiner space.
Regulus claims most of the former FWL territory (its traditional areas, Gibson and surrounding areas, the Regulan Free States & Rim Commonality, chunks of the Marik Commonwealth & even some of the worlds out near Tamarind, the Abbey District, & near enough to the Lothians & Illyrians...several small states lie between Lyran and Regulan territories...
In Combine space, as mentioned already both Rasalhague and Arkab exist as strong states -- there is also a Pesht Supremacy, and two small, mutually hostile states -- one based on or near New Samarkand, the other on or near Galedon -- who both claim to be the only legitimate realm in Combine space, and both claim all the worlds there...
-- this is about where I ran out of memories in that reconstruction parts...

(this idea grew out of an idea 'what if the Dragoon Compromise had been more than just the Wolves & some Scorpions? -- what if it had been a coalition of roughly half the Clans?'
and I really wanted to take Terra off the playing field...)
If I remember more (and if anyone who like me to add that stuff) or get my machine working so I can access my notes, I'll add more...
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Post by: namar13766 on 11 January 2017, 11:37:47
Tribble 502: When the Blackout happened on Sunday, August 7, 3132, Taurus, like many worlds, was cut off from the others due to their HPG going down.

That being said, they were more concerned when they found Ships approaching their planet...very familiar ships seen only in historical records. Specifically of the original Calderon expedition. So when they discovered it was suddenly January 23, 2253, they had to wonder...could they really change the course of history armed only with foreknowledge and their DETERMINATION?
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Post by: namar13766 on 16 January 2017, 10:32:35
Tribble 503: On November 5, 2784, the SLDF Exodus Fleet leaves New Samarkland, only to misjump into Sol...on November 5, 2384. Suffice to say, the Terran Hegemony is kind of shocked.

503a: It's Sol alright. But it's Sol of the Haloverse. How does the SLDF's presence affect the UNSC? Do some of them join up with the Insurrection?

Tribble 504: The SLDF exodus fleet ends up misjumping into another universe. The universe of Empires Aflame to be precise. The problem is that no one knows about that until Clan Wolverine comes back to the Inner Sphere...and leads to people wondering if the other Clans might still be out there...
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Post by: Smegish on 30 January 2017, 06:47:08
See what you think the impact of this will be.

Tribble #504: On their final supply run, rather then being given specs and tooling for a variety of Clan Omnimechs (Dire Wolf and Kit Fox I know for certain, don't know about any others) Wolf's Dragoons are instead given a Hegemony Memory Core -essentially the same as that found on New Dallas in OTL, with full data on the Royal SLDF machines, and how to build everything required for them. At first the Dragoons do nothing with the Core, seeing no way of sharing the data without being forced to reveal where/how they got it. However after the GDL discover the Helm Memory Core in '28; and the Dragoons receiving Outreach in '30 and with the help of Blackwell Industries rebuilding the extensive Star League-era industrial facilities on the world, Jaime along with the other surviving original Clansmen though it time to carry out Kerlin Ward's final orders to prepare the Inner Sphere for the Clans.

The Dragoons shared most of the Cores data with Blackwell for them to keep the Dragoons equipped, and as production picked up allowed Blackwell to sell in small numbers to Dragoon-approved mercenary units, and also to the Federated Commomwealth and Free Rasalhague Republic as Jaime knew they stood in the most direct path of the Clans push to Terra. The Draconis Combine also stood in their path, but despite his orders to prepare the Inner Sphere, after Misery Jaime would not help Takashi Kurita.
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Post by: David CGB on 31 January 2017, 00:36:33
See what you think the impact of this will be.

Tribble #504: On their final supply run, rather then being given specs and tooling for a variety of Clan Omnimechs (Dire Wolf and Kit Fox I know for certain, don't know about any others) Wolf's Dragoons are instead given a Hegemony Memory Core -essentially the same as that found on New Dallas in OTL, with full data on the Royal SLDF machines, and how to build everything required for them. At first the Dragoons do nothing with the Core, seeing no way of sharing the data without being forced to reveal where/how they got it. However after the GDL discover the Helm Memory Core in '28; and the Dragoons receiving Outreach in '30 and with the help of Blackwell Industries rebuilding the extensive Star League-era industrial facilities on the world, Jaime along with the other surviving original Clansmen though it time to carry out Kerlin Ward's final orders to prepare the Inner Sphere for the Clans.

The Dragoons shared most of the Cores data with Blackwell for them to keep the Dragoons equipped, and as production picked up allowed Blackwell to sell in small numbers to Dragoon-approved mercenary units, and also to the Federated Commomwealth and Free Rasalhague Republic as Jaime knew they stood in the most direct path of the Clans push to Terra. The Draconis Combine also stood in their path, but despite his orders to prepare the Inner Sphere, after Misery Jaime would not help Takashi Kurita.
much, much more fun for the Clans
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 02 February 2017, 03:38:58
Tribble 505

Rather than the SLDF becoming the Clans in a single, traumatic break (the Pentagon Civil War), what if it was more organic?

To build up their struggling colonies, the SLDF command set up a very centralised and controlled economy. Individual settlements started out by setting up a military base (which the SLDF was very used to establishing) and then building up supporting industries and commercial facilities around them. Organisationally each base was set up to house a single SLDF Division and their dependents, with soldiers demobilised selectively to meet the demands of colonisation.

Across the entire SLDF there are broad departments organising this process - the Technical department, focused on building the necessary industries; the Mercantile department, focused on shipping goods between settlements since none are self-sufficient; the Science department, focused on solving the scientific challenges of terraforming; the Military department which handles the remaining armed forces (and is engaged in a struggle for resources since there's no apparent external threat to justify their presence). In addition to these formal divisions there's a general labour pool who handle grunt-work when needed but also includes people working on unapproved but winked at trades like bars and other entertainments that there's not supposed to be slack for in the planned economy but is also holding morale together.

The situation isn't entirely peaceful and some Divisional commanders don't manage to keep the delicate balance of managing soldier's pride versus the practical demands of colonisation. Sometimes these get violent but there's a serious reluctance of soldiers in a division to fire on their demobilised comrades so full military conflict is unusual. Alas, rioting isn't and Aaron DeChevalier is killed in such a riot. At this point the aged Aleksandr Kerensky realises he needs to establish a succession and settles on Nicholas who ends up with less than a year as Deputy Commanding General before he has to step into daddy's shoes.

While there isn't a general breakdown of order without Aleksandr, Nicholas feels the needs to solidify his authority (and he's a very authoritarian leader). With the worlds of the Kerensky Cluster now opening up new colonial prospects, he proposes closing up some of the struggling settlements in the Pentagon and relocating those divisions to start afresh on the worlds of the Kerensky cluster. Resources that can't be transported will be assigned to neighbouring divisions that aren't being resettled.

This causes a lot of friction over some divisions disagreeing over leaving and others debating who gets the resources freed up in the Pentagon (or over which worlds divisions will be resettled on). To settle this 'fairly' Nicholas proposes trial by combat - something that will also validate the continued existence of the military department. Divisions disagreeing over allocation of territory can settle it with a wargame (under strict rules to avoid collateral damage) since military equipment is one thing the colonises aren't short of. Similarly, if a division feels it's not being fairly treated by SLDF command then they can challenge to overturn the decision by a wargame.

Andery Kerensky takes on organising this and in the process reforming the high command for his brother (incidentally letting Nicholas push out some of the old guard who aren't accepting him and replace them with younger personnel more likely to support him). The Corps and Army structures are finally disbanded and replaced with a grand council of officers, with one representative from each divisional settlement. While this doesn't eliminate opposition to the Kerensky leadership it does channel it. The wargames are generally fought in a sportsmanlike fashion but there are exceptions - Andery Kerensky's death, mobbed by multiple opponents, is an exception that causes a backlash and encourages a warrior code based on SLDF Gunslingers and single combat.

Nicholas Kerensky expends a great deal of political credit after the 331st Royal BattleMech Division, having succeeded in establishing a thriving colony, comes under concerted pressure from neighbouring divisions. Although he upholds his system, he also can't ignore threats by DivCom McEvedy to return to the Inner Sphere. The use of a nuclear warhead forces his hand and the 331st is smashed by a coalition (although some may have escaped) and their colony levelled. Kerensky is eventually killed in a trial involving his own 146th Royal BattleMech Division. He's replaced as SLDF ComGen by his brother-in-law Jerome Winson.

Winson mostly tries to stabilise the now sprawling Star League in Exile and accommodate the social changes that are taking place. To solidify his position he renames the 146th Division as 'the Wolf Division' in honour of the wolf motif that Nicholas had adopted. Military personnel from the increasingly independent Divisions are seen as 'stars' fighting for the pride of their divisions (many of which are adopting nicknames based on animals from the colonies) and collectively referred to as 'constellations', 'star clusters' and 'galaxies'. Winson is also the first to absorb another Division, 'avenging' the death of Nicholas by challenging for and winning all the personnel and resources of the 'Widowmaker' Division who the 146th were fighting when Nicholas died.

Populations are finally on the rise and competition for the prestigious but limited places in the military departments of each Division is harsh. Military personnel increasingly use their access to equipment to train up their own children to give the best shot at these openings. At the other end of the social scale, the 'civilian' department is set up to administer previously ad hoc general labour and service work, separating it socially from the outcast bands that have broken from SLDF discipline entirely and living as outlaws.

With Winson's precedent, the Divisions begin an extended period of probing each other and contesting for resources or even opening up the opportunity to fight for the complete ownership of other division. It's quickly clear that Divisions that don't expand will be left on second tier and over the next century, the number of Divisions falls sharply even as their sizes increase and their holdings are increasingly interlocked, with holdings on multiple worlds. Meanwhile authority slips from the ComGen with the office itself falling vacant, while the Grand Council (of officers) becomes the overall governing body, dominated by military commanders (although this isn't a specific requirement and the Diamond Shark 'division' quite often are represented by mercantile leaders).

Edit:

By the late 29th century the Star League had expanded to the point of straining the ability of their colonies to support them and surveys weren't turning up many planets suitable for habitation. Scientists studying the problem came up with the option of adapting their population to the planets they had to allow them to make better use of marginal areas. This process led to two general thrusts: a larger, more durable genotype well adapted to extremes of gravity and atmosphere that were hard for unaltered humans to live in for extended periods; and a smaller more agile genotype that was adapted for optimal use of space habitations with almost constant micro-gravity. The latter also quickly adapted to submarine habitats.

It had become customary for SLDF personnel to leave genetic materials in storage so that families wouldn't be wiped out by deaths or injuries in hazardous work environments (or battle). The genetic diversity of the Star League was a concern, particularly as members of a division rarely had opportunities to visit other divisions. Added to this, in the interests of minimizing the loss of labour due to childbirth, iron wombs had become popular over the centuries, along with raising children communally in creches.

Combining these with the new research into genetics and those at the upper levels of the increasingly segregated 'castes' began to design their offspring, selecting for traits expected to help them in future careers in their parents caste. While only 5-10% of the population resorted to this, the result was increasing barriers to the next generation taking up careers in castes differing from their parents and the testtube-born - or trueborn - swiftly reached positions of increasing influence.

An informal nobility of bloodhouses, made up of those claiming descent from the key leaders of the original settlers (and a handful of later dignitaries) were increasingly dominating the Grand Council and similar councils within each Division. Since the prestige of the military is undiminished, the military families tend to dominate usually holding at least half the seats in officer councils - the Smoke Jaguars are extreme in limiting membership in their council to the military.

An agreement between the Wolves and Coyotes in the late 29th century regarding the bloodlines of the Kerensky family codified a list of recognised bloodhouses, each entitled to no more than 25 seats in the divisional officer councils. As both divisions were extremely successful at the time, their allies quickly sought recognition of their own bloodhouses and adopted similar patterns. In the early 30th century this was formally adopted as part of a package of reforms by the Grand Council (at the same time, the Grand Council elected to increase their own membership by extending two seats to each division).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 02 February 2017, 09:11:52
Tribble #505 interesting
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: serack on 03 February 2017, 10:16:19
tribble 506?

  What if Kerensky instead of finding the pentagon world , found the ones his son used to form his clans?? :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 11 February 2017, 02:59:41
I won't number this as I'm not sure these have been covered before, but here's some of the what if secnarios I think are interesting:

No Star League: An expansionist Terran Hegemony crushes all five houses. Remnants of the five must learn to work together to resist their terrible foe, led by an unlikely general named Kerensky.

No compromise: The Clans launch an immediate invasion in 3005, facing a divided Sphere without the Helm memory core advances.

Anton victorious: Anton Marik's revolt succeeds. A much more vigorous FWL closely tied to the CC turns the fourth succession war into a bloody stalemate.

Slaughter on Hesperus II: Wolf's Dragoons are annihilated in the attack. The Fed Suns suffers heavily in the 4th war, but there is nobody to rally the Sphere when the Clans come calling.

Melissa's groom: In 3028 the five houses gather on Terra to witness Melissa Steiner's wedding to...
Thomas Marik -- The united realm invades the combine and Confederation.
Tormano Liao -- The united realm invades the FWL.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 11 February 2017, 04:01:12
No Star League: An expansionist Terran Hegemony crushes all five houses. Remnants of the five must learn to work together to resist their terrible foe, led by an unlikely general named Kerensky.
It's not implausible that an extended Age of War could lead to such a scenario although if you mean Aleksandr Kerensky then it's hardly unlikely - his family had long military traditions.

No compromise: The Clans launch an immediate invasion in 3005, facing a divided Sphere without the Helm memory core advances.
Definitely possible. ComStar would be no more trustworthy but the Clans would likely face the same logistical problems. It's not as if the Successor States defeated the invasion through military might.

Anton victorious: Anton Marik's revolt succeeds. A much more vigorous FWL closely tied to the CC turns the fourth succession war into a bloody stalemate.
It's hard to say if Anton would have been able to make the FWL more vigorous - personally he might be more dynamic but keeping the FWL on point tends to rally the provinces and while Janos wasn't a world beater there, he did manage it at times. Anton never seemed that politically astute.

Slaughter on Hesperus II: Wolf's Dragoons are annihilated in the attack. The Fed Suns suffers heavily in the 4th war, but there is nobody to rally the Sphere when the Clans come calling.
That's certainly a lack of the nail - the AFFS would doubtless deploy other units to the Draconis March but that would then weaken the push against the Capellans.

Melissa's groom: In 3028 the five houses gather on Terra to witness Melissa Steiner's wedding to...
Thomas Marik -- The united realm invades the combine and Confederation.
That would be a very tense marriage between rival houses - the FWL and LC have a long and brutal hatred. The struggle in such a story would be far less about war against Combine and Confederation and more about the struggle to keep the allied realms on the same side.

Melissa's groom: In 3028 the five houses gather on Terra to witness Melissa Steiner's wedding to...
Tormano Liao -- The united realm invades the FWL.
This is a much more plausible alliance - House Liao and House Steiner have at least some history of working together. Whether the Suns and Combine would 'co-operate' by facing off against each other or if they'd hammer their respective neighbour is an open guess. Neither the LCAF nor the CCAF is generally considered the sort of force that could hammer another realm the way the AFFS did the Capellans. On the flip side, Katrina Steiner has serious military credentials and Max Liao is very able to come up with destabilising schemes to undermine his enemies.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 11 February 2017, 05:42:52
It's not implausible that an extended Age of War could lead to such a scenario although if you mean Aleksandr Kerensky then it's hardly unlikely - his family had long military traditions.

It's not as if the Successor States defeated the invasion through military might.

Keresnky being "unlikely" is a reference to his backstory as a poli sci major turned reluctant warrior. Anyway, the key is to have him fight against unification instead of for.

Having the Clans invade in 3005 would also remove Kai, Victor, Miraborg,  Focht etc. from the equation. No pause. No ComStar general. Etc.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 11 February 2017, 09:15:24

That's certainly a lack of the nail - the AFFS would doubtless deploy other units to the Draconis March but that would then weaken the push against the Capellans.


Not really. Leave the LCG and Illycian Lancers in place to pin down St Ives and any southern garrisons, and redeploy the vast pile of other unused mercs across the Combine border. Twelve or fifteen more regiments to hold the line should either discourage or heavily punish any kind of hasty offensive like the DCMS pulled in canon.

There's also the lack of effective pressure on the Combine border from 3023-3027, lack of supporting thrusts to the Galtor Campaign(presuming that doesn't get derailed), and lack of five elite regiments with character shields holding down a section of front during the initial FC tag team action. On the other side of things the DCMS should have somewhat better reserves without having spawned five or six more new regiments, unless they take a heavy enough beating without the Dragoons to lose that much in addition to their canon drubbings.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 11 February 2017, 18:20:02
Not really. Leave the LCG and Illycian Lancers in place to pin down St Ives and any southern garrisons, and redeploy the vast pile of other unused mercs across the Combine border. Twelve or fifteen more regiments to hold the line should either discourage or heavily punish any kind of hasty offensive like the DCMS pulled in canon.

There's also the lack of effective pressure on the Combine border from 3023-3027, lack of supporting thrusts to the Galtor Campaign(presuming that doesn't get derailed), and lack of five elite regiments with character shields holding down a section of front during the initial FC tag team action. On the other side of things the DCMS should have somewhat better reserves without having spawned five or six more new regiments, unless they take a heavy enough beating without the Dragoons to lose that much in addition to their canon drubbings.
That'd be nice, if the Suns had a few dozen more JumpShips. The invasion of the CC stretched their carrying capacity to it's limit and beyond and the FedSun economy was shattered until the late 30s, thanks to the stresses of the invasion, the necesity of diverting JumpShips from civilian to military transport, and the Pony Express made things worse after Interdiction.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 12 February 2017, 02:20:43
Keresnky being "unlikely" is a reference to his backstory as a poli sci major turned reluctant warrior. Anyway, the key is to have him fight against unification instead of for.
Ah, I see. Mis-read that. Well yes, that would be quite unexpected.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 12 February 2017, 15:03:17

Definitely possible. ComStar would be no more trustworthy but the Clans would likely face the same logistical problems. It's not as if the Successor States defeated the invasion through military might.


No compromise: The Clans launch an immediate invasion in 3005, facing a divided Sphere without the Helm memory core advances. 


Actually, that would go rather differently. Aside from the lack of Tyra Miraborg to delay the invasion for a year, there would simply be the problem of force numbers- I don't have the book any more, but there was a line in one- the book where Victor first gets assigned to a unit, before the Clan invasion- where he notes that where a company used to be enough to guard the planet, now it has to be whole regiments. (or something like that.)

Facing those force levels, we could see clans taking whole planets with just a Trinary- or in some cases, a Star. They would take a LOT more worlds.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 13 February 2017, 18:07:53
Untimely deaths:

Yellow Bird: Ian Davion faces Yorinaga Kurita on Mallory's World... And wins. A more militarily adventurous Fed Suns is uninterested in alliance with the LC or in fighting it's weaker opponent, the CC. Instead, the realm girds itself to fight its biggest threat, the Draconis Combine.
Meanwhile, Max Liao's agents approach Ian's ambitious younger brother with an interesting offer...

Pinks and the Brain: Ardan Sortek is never found after ejecting from his Victor on Stein's Folly, allowing the Hanse duplicate to remain undetected for far longer. Double Hanse repudiates the treaty with the LC and fumbles the Galtor campaign before being overthrown in a palace coup due to his incompetence, plunging the Fed Suns into civil war between Hasek-Davion and Ran Felsner.

Legend Killer: Justin Allard/Xiang is killed by Gray Noton on Kittery. Robbed of their mole in the Maskirovka, the Fed Suns must rely on brute force to conquer the Confederation.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 13 February 2017, 19:51:00
As far as the last tribble goes, the Fed. Suns had alexi as a spy as well.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 13 February 2017, 21:27:57
As far as the last tribble goes, the Fed. Suns had alexi as a spy as well.

Sure, very true. The point of the what-if is to remove all the spy stuff from the fourth war, and consider it as purely an exercise in wargaming.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 14 February 2017, 01:10:36
That'd be nice, if the Suns had a few dozen more JumpShips. The invasion of the CC stretched their carrying capacity to it's limit and beyond and the FedSun economy was shattered until the late 30s, thanks to the stresses of the invasion, the necesity of diverting JumpShips from civilian to military transport, and the Pony Express made things worse after Interdiction.

The lack of jumpships didn't exactly stop them from shuffling units all over the place during Galahad 26 and 27, which is when the setup for most of this would take place. A detailed accounting of how many regiments got moved how far over the course of that and the immediate prewar setup in 3028 will have to wait for later in the week, but if nothing else they could just leave some more of the units on the border instead of rushing almost absolutely everything over to the CC.

It also didn't stop them from reinforcing one Kuritan hit world in OTL with two separate RCTs.
 



Legend Killer: Justin Allard/Xiang is killed by Gray Noton on Kittery. Robbed of their mole in the Maskirovka, the Fed Suns must rely on brute force to conquer the Confederation.

Okay, so going by your later reply, Alexi Malenkov doesn't exist. The Northwind Highlanders don't defect. One miserable inconsequential battalion of mechs doesn't have its myomer rot off. Ridzik doesn't get turned, or presumably assassinated by the Maskirovka if we are going to keep the playing field level and nonexistent. The whole play with Michael Hasek Davion to suck in the Capellans on to ground of the Fed Suns' choosing doesn't happen.

The AFFS doesn't do nearly as well, but the CCAF is still outnumbered and out classed to a hilarious degree. Unless of course the restriction to pure wargaming also removed C*'s shenanigans, in which case the FS can probably keep going long enough to make up the difference.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 14 February 2017, 06:20:27
The lack of jumpships didn't exactly stop them from shuffling units all over the place during Galahad 26 and 27, which is when the setup for most of this would take place. A detailed accounting of how many regiments got moved how far over the course of that and the immediate prewar setup in 3028 will have to wait for later in the week, but if nothing else they could just leave some more of the units on the border instead of rushing almost absolutely everything over to the CC.

It also didn't stop them from reinforcing one Kuritan hit world in OTL with two separate RCTs.
... There wasn't an Interdiction during Galahad, so there wasn't the need for the Pony Express: just keeping sorta in contact with the front chewed up most of the Suns reserve fleet, with not enough left over to keep the economy running. Jumpers that were supposed to be transporting vital cargo were diverted to ferry messages, so those cargoes weren't delivered. People died, companies went bankrupt. That one mission you mentioned probably killed a few million FedSun subjects when teraforming parts, fusion engines and vital medical supplies weren't delivered on time.

Sure, Hanse could divert more JumpShips. It all depends on how many of his own people he was willing to kill, and how long he was willing to take rebuilding his economy afterwards.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 14 February 2017, 07:12:05
Yes, if you wargame it, either using FASA's board game or a home brew system, you can get results not too far off the canon ones, BUT it ends up being much more costly for the Fed Suns player and taking much longer.

Three (p1: fedcom, p2: combine-capella, p3: FWL) of us used our own system based on Avalon Hill / Victory Games tabletop rules, and the Fed-LC player had enough men to strike at both Tikonov and St Ives, and eventually overran the Capellan player. They lost some ground to a counter-offensive by the FWL player. The Combine focused on the Lyrans rather than Feds and fought to a draw.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 14 February 2017, 08:42:05
Jumpers that were supposed to be transporting vital cargo were diverted to ferry messages, so those cargoes weren't delivered. People died, companies went bankrupt. That one mission you mentioned probably killed a few million FedSun subjects when teraforming parts, fusion engines and vital medical supplies weren't delivered on time.
Citation request  :-\
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 February 2017, 16:24:48
#515 (by my best count)

The year is 3015 CE. The Third Succession War is over.

Four years ago, Prince-Chancellor Maximilian Liao-Davion issued his famous peace proposal, which could be summarised as 'let's stop squabbling like children' with a subtext of 'come and have a go if you think you're hard enough'.

To be fair to the DCMS and the FWLM they really tried and for a while it looked as if they might have had a chance. After two years of fighting, however, they accomplished the square root of nothing. Actually, from their point of view it was worse than that. If Yvonne Liao-Davion hadn't raided the DCMS supply base on Halstead Station she probably wouldn't have uncovered the lost university or taken its library back to New Avalon.

Archon Frederick Steiner couldn't have signed up to the offered alliance fast enough. (Unless General of Armies Katrina Steiner had hold of his ear, which may have been the case). And now wedding invitations are being issued: the heir to the Confederated Suns to wed the ruler of the Lyran Commonwealth.

And the only question left is: 'What now?'

(Detailed timeline how how this situation was reached (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BudYZu5bgc4WXSZNzVDIsig1UpOcq_sblvCIm-zRf80/edit?usp=sharing))
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 14 February 2017, 16:43:30
Citation request  :-\
Okay, that part is supposition, but it's based on the idea that most cargo runs are high-value, low mass, so only the most important goods are shipped: vital stuff, urgent medicines, spare parts for important infrastructure. If those cargoes don't arrive on time ... people die.

I admit I went a little hyperbolic.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 14 February 2017, 18:58:13
Actually I've thought about a somewhat similar tangent myself.  Joining the LC and the FS is not geographically (astrographically?) very good, they're on opposite sides of the Sphere, both have enemies on two borders, they can essentially be cut off from each other and isolated by enemies.

On the other hand the FS doesn't really have a history of emnity with the FWL, and they're among the more liberal and open of the successor states.  They're also separated only by the smaller Confederation both share long emnities with.  What if no one responded to the LC proposals for peace talks.  But it prompted Hanse to open talks with Marik about an alliance cemented by a joint invasion and partition of the CapCon.  And should things prove workable move toward uniting in the next generation or two between their respective children if the Alliance went well.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 14 February 2017, 19:36:03
#515 (by my best count)

The year is 3015 CE. The Third Succession War is over.

Four years ago, Prince-Chancellor Maximilian Liao-Davion issued his famous peace proposal, which could be summarised as 'let's stop squabbling like children' with a subtext of 'come and have a go if you think you're hard enough'.

To be fair to the DCMS and the FWLM they really tried and for a while it looked as if they might have had a chance. After two years of fighting, however, they accomplished the square root of nothing. Actually, from their point of view it was worse than that. If Yvonne Liao-Davion hadn't raided the DCMS supply base on Halstead Station she probably wouldn't have uncovered the lost university or taken its library back to New Avalon.

Archon Frederick Steiner couldn't have signed up to the offered alliance fast enough. (Unless General of Armies Katrina Steiner had hold of his ear, which may have been the case). And now wedding invitations are being issued: the heir to the Confederated Suns to wed the ruler of the Lyran Commonwealth.

And the only question left is: 'What now?'

(Detailed timeline how how this situation was reached (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BudYZu5bgc4WXSZNzVDIsig1UpOcq_sblvCIm-zRf80/edit?usp=sharing))
A union between House Liao and House Davion? I dunno if I can ever see that happening. The animosity between the two houses has been pretty strong for many years. Not as strong as they were with House Davion and House Kurita, but close enough.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 15 February 2017, 02:45:02
The timeline has the Capellan Confederation and Federated Suns move slowly from guarded truce (2802), alliance (2818), formal unification (2873) and then a long period of consolidating the new state which in practical terms isn't solidified for another generation, around a century after the original moves to bring the two states together.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 16 February 2017, 13:54:47
... There wasn't an Interdiction during Galahad, so there wasn't the need for the Pony Express: just keeping sorta in contact with the front chewed up most of the Suns reserve fleet, with not enough left over to keep the economy running. Jumpers that were supposed to be transporting vital cargo were diverted to ferry messages, so those cargoes weren't delivered. People died, companies went bankrupt. That one mission you mentioned probably killed a few million FedSun subjects when teraforming parts, fusion engines and vital medical supplies weren't delivered on time.

Sure, Hanse could divert more JumpShips. It all depends on how many of his own people he was willing to kill, and how long he was willing to take rebuilding his economy afterwards.

There were literally eight merc regiments brought into the Capellan March, in several cases from quite far afield prior to the August 3028 jump off. There are at least another seven in two discrete formations that sat around with their thumbs up their butts for the duration of the war, on top of the 25 or so other regiments that also sat around doing nothing. Move those 8 to cover the Groveld area, the Galtor thumb, and the worlds Wolf's Dragoons mostly failed to protect in OTL, and it's a significantly different ballgame that doesn't require any more pre-war shuffling.

In terms of transport woes, there was somehow enough shipping to pull Morgan off of New Avalon, the 5th Syrtis survivors off of Sarna or wherever they fell back to, and Delta Company off of Bethel and gt them to Kathil ahead of the CCAF shifting their command circuit to Bethel in that direction. And to pull shiploads of salvage back from the front. And to establish a command circuit to return Melissa to Lyran territory. And to not bother to use the integral jumpships of three of those merc regiments who sat around doing nothing while having to provide transportation for less lavishly equipped merc forces.

On a related note:

#516:

Michael Hasek and Hanse Davion were playing the long con on Max all along, with Hanse's exceedingly skeezy betrothal to Melissa being a cover for her actual betrothal to Morgan Hasek-Davion. With careful stage management of their behavior, they convince Max to strip Sian's garrison to support either Ridzik or Operation Riposte(or both), at which time the 13 regiments sitting within 90 ly of Sian not doing anything to draw attention quietly board their ships. One month later numerous unscheduled pre-emergence signatures appear at Sian's jump points...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 16 February 2017, 20:11:28
 O0, I think that is the first time I have ever seen a loyal Michael Hasek anywhere.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 17 February 2017, 18:40:28
#517:

What if Clan Burrock ristar Carlos Hutchinson defeated Cassius N'Buta and Clan Burrock was never absorbed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 28 February 2017, 05:54:26
#518

Tribble just came to me for no real reason today.

Trent, the Smoke Jaguar defector, as in the OTL stands up to his perfectly typical Smoke Jaguar Elemental CO who wants to murderkill a bunch of Sphereoids to prove how big a man he is.
In the OTL, Trent gets a punch or two in but is none the less pretty handily fed his own ass - because his name isn't Phelan Kell and thus as one expects, going hand to hand with an Elemental really doesn't work terribly well.

However, this time something different happens. Perhaps he has a massive adrenaline overload from the prospect of staring down a two meter tall killing machine. Perhaps for one time in his life the elder Kerensky looks down from his cloud and decides that this kid is actually a decent guy and could use some help. Perhaps his (unknowingly) ROM girlfriend put something in his cornflakes today from her Blakes Wraith Bag Of Tricks (tm). Perhaps some bastard of a Random Omnipotent Being looks for entertainment and gives him a leg up.

Whatever the case, Trent finds that suddenly everything seems to be moving much slower - and/or he is moving and reacting much faster. To the stunned shock and mild awe of the Trueborns watching, they see Paul Moon stalk towards Trent ... who moves like someone they have never seen, perfectly moving and dodging his strikes -often only by millimeters- before he suddenly moves suicidally close to Moon ... where he lands a single precise hit with his myomer enhanced arm. Shattering Moons throat and windpipe. Causing the ****** to fall to the ground in the circle helplessly thrashing. Clearly tempted to just let him suffocate, Trent shows mercy by hitting him hard enough to crack his skull and break a few of his artificial fingers. But none the less kills him instantly.

And as he stands he notes that he lied about not killing him. Dezgra Smoke Jaguars don't deserve to live.


What happens next?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 28 February 2017, 06:16:04
Well that kills a whole storyline for the RotS as it is Paul Moon who leads the last few Jaguar remnants, the Fidelis aboard the Flatus
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 18 March 2017, 12:02:18
#519

An Infantry officer is taken as a bondsman of one of the Clans. Noting his specialty, when he earns his Warrior status, he's shuffled off to lead Solahma Infantry that's slated for an operation soon. Certain nasty comments by some Elementals about the uselessness of conventional infantry make him determined to succeed just to spite them. And when he sees what their objective is, he notes with some relief that this is something that a conventional infantry can succeed at. Now he's got to fight to get his subordinates decent equipment, bring them together as a team, and perhaps the most difficult challenge of all, teach these suicidal lemmings how to DUCK before they get themselves killed!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 19 March 2017, 02:34:47
#520

The defense of Sudeten against Clan Jade Falcon goes poorly and the Grey Death Legion are cut off and defeated, their survivors and dependants taken as bondsmen save for a few who escape and hide among the civilian populations. For the second time in his life, Grayson Carlyle has lost everything and has to start over. If he wants his 'Mech back, his wife back, their son back... then he'll have to take them.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 20 March 2017, 01:07:39
GDL reboot, interesting.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 20 March 2017, 06:03:46
GDL reboot, interesting.
Better than their canon fate: seduced by Katherine, shattered in the Second Skye Secession and with only some of their tech staff surviving to carry on the name building battlearmor ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 May 2017, 06:04:25
#521

We stand poised on the verge of a great era, a time of realized potential, of peace, security, and freedom for every man and woman. We have taken strides toward these goals that are unprecedented in Human history by setting aside our regional, parochial differences and forging a union vaster and stronger than any previously devised.

In the course of this mighty achievement, we have struck down many barriers to harmony and understanding. One barrier that remains is the isolationism of certain areas that refuse to join in with this union, and thereby jeopardize everything for which it stands. There is no good reason for the intransigence of people who will not recognize the greater good of laying down their independence for the sake of joining our League. There is no good reason for people to insist on resisting the superior wisdom of those who have come before them into the fold, nor is there reason for them to continue to seek their own lonely course far from the centers of culture and civilization. This course of action is temporary. This course of action is provincial.

Furthermore, in consideration of the common goals we share, we must set aside our differences and pool our resources for the common good, once and for all. The New Star League stands for a unified Humanity. As President of the New Star League, it is my solemn responsibility to protect the welfare of that Humanity wherever it may be found, be it on Sian or Santiago, New Vandenberg or New Avalon, Andurien or Apollo, Castor or Canopus.

Through me, the New Star League assumes the awesome task of safeguarding the welfare of Humanity. It is a responsibility from which the League will never shrink, a responsibility it shall never lay down. The dark days of barbarism are over - we will not let them return again.The only way to ensure equal protection for all, the only way to safeguard the liberties of each individual, is for every Human being to accept the benefits we offer, freely and openly. So long as a solitary individual of the most war-ravaged planet in the Inner Sphere remains uneducated, impoverished, or disadvantaged, all are equally stricken.This situation is not now, nor shall it ever be, acceptable.

We intend to see that the majority is not denied the benefits of culture and progress at the hands of a minority of radical megalomaniacs. We intend to extend our benevolent protection into every corner of Human-occupied space, whatever the cost, until every man, woman, and child prospers and flourishes. Let no one stand in the way of Human progress. The time for reunification has come, but some have made the grievous error of failing to heed the call. Instead, they chant, jeer, and jump about claiming the throne of Terra, as if they were somehow beyond the grasp of their daughter worlds.

It is truly sad, but it seems that the cost of a united Humanity will paid in blood.To the poor people of the Inner Sphere who live under the thumb of megalomaniacs, my message is as follows: Take heart! The true light of Humanity will soon come your way and away the darkness that has shackled your lives for so long. To the barbaric governments of the Inner Sphere, message is as follows: As you have shown by your uncivilized refusal to negotiate in good faith for better relations between us, I no longer restrain those of us who believe punishment is in order.

The purpose of the New Star League is peace. The ideal the New Star League is peace. The New Star League is eternally committed to the principles of peace. If the recalcitrant leaders of the Inner Sphere force our hand and require us to go to war, the war will be total. No prisoners will be taken. No holds will be barred. If the New Star League is forced to fight for peace, it will be a fight to the death.

- Thomas Calderon, Protector of the Taurian Concordat and President of the New Star League, 3025
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 07 May 2017, 06:47:40
Well a Taurian is going to be a worse First Lord than the original Terran First Lord.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 07 May 2017, 06:57:37
I have to ask what?? and how??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 May 2017, 14:50:05
My thinking was a scenario where the five Successor States have torn themselves down and the Periphery states have built themselves up to the point that the Periphery and break-away Inner Sphere provinces like Rasalhague and Andurien band together to try end the Succession Wars by trying to force the Inner Sphere to accept a new Star League on more equitable basis just to stop the bloodshed.*

Thomas Calderon rewriting the original Pollux Proclaimation is his nod to the historical irony of this scenario.


* Shockingly, it doesn't work, although they make enough progress that large swathes of the Inner Sphere are carved into territorial states which are intended to be built up into full members.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 07 May 2017, 16:31:05
I'd be more partial to an AU where ComStar failed in their attempt to control interstellar communication with the resulting backlash and conflict ending up in a new Age of War.  At the very least that sort of widespread disunity, conflict, and chaos is perfect for a wargame.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 08 May 2017, 04:35:25
Is this before or after the return of the Clans? Because if it is before, I would love to see them learning of how the barbarians from the periphery rebuilt the Star League
and took over much of the inner sphere. You would be able to hear them screaming in outrage over it all the way to Earth.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 11 May 2017, 05:57:23
Is this before or after the return of the Clans? Because if it is before, I would love to see them learning of how the barbarians from the periphery rebuilt the Star League
and took over much of the inner sphere. You would be able to hear them screaming in outrage over it all the way to Earth.
Since it's Thomas, probably before. But not before the Wolf Dragoons begin their recon mission. For maximum hilarity, the Dragoons have at this point been working for one Periphery Nation or another and have been sold on the benefits of this New Star League, slowly sharing their skills and tech and totally not telling their old masters.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: fitzgerald on 23 May 2017, 16:33:14
#522

In the year 3015 two LosTech discoveries rocked the Inner Sphere and the Periphery.   

Hanse Davion personally lead the Federated Suns forces in raiding Halstead Station to seize a fraction of a Star League University at great personal cost.  From this he would go on to found NAIS, a centre for ground breaking recovering of scientific research.

Deep in the Periphery however close to the Magistry of Canopus a derelict Aquilla jumpship was found slowly coasting into an uninhabited system nearby the Zenith jump point by a free trader named Robert April.  A relic from the Re-unification War the TCN Constitution was a military cargo hauler that had suffered a mass blow out of its hydrogen supplies in the black.   

Bravely venturing abroad the Constitution revealed that it was chock full of Toro's and Talos Battlemechs, alongside full loads of spare parts, field tools and manuals.    Fortunately  the breached fuel tank had been properly patched in a desperate attempt to refill it and survive, an effort that had sadly failed given the minimal amount of hydrogen left in the tank.

Filling the Constitution with enough fuel to jump into the Magistry Robert April kicked off what came to be  called the Constitution Crisis.     A crisis forged with calls from those within the Magistry and Taurian Concordat to seize the Constitution and its cargo or destroy it to ensure the other didn't benefit.   Even as calls for espionage and violence started gaining traction within the two Periphery nations Captain April stepped in with a personal plea to both Kyalla Centrella and Zarantha Calderon.

"Are you squabbling House Lords, so greedy to seize the legacies of the past that the notion of cooperation and sharing is anathema?  To forget what the men and women of the TCN Constitution worked and fought so hard to prevent; that insatiable Terran greed to control all of mankind's destiny.   

 I should have left the Constitution to soar into an unmarked star to lay its valiant crew to rest!      A fitting end for good ship from a time when humanity strode boldly towards the stars and left Terra in its dust never to return.   Or will you prove me wrong and live up to the ideals of Samantha Calderon and Kossandra Centrella!"


Captain April's personal plea to both leaders produced unexpected results when Zarantha Calderon called for a conference on the planet Detroit to discuss the equitable sharing of the recovered TCS Constitution but of further and deeper co-operation between the Magistry and the Concordat.    Sensing an opportunity to further her reforms and begin advancing her schemes to shatter the Free World Leagues the Magestrix agreed

 In early 3016 a deal was struck between Kyalla Centrella and Zarantha Calderon on the planet Detroit with the TCN Constitution looming over head.     A comprehensive deal spanning trade, technological support, military aid and agreements on a full range of other issues the Detroit Accord was a smashing success much to outside observers dismay.    Included in the Detroit Accord was the provision for establishment of an Unified  Space Survey corps, funded by both governments with the goal to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and found new colonies, to boldly go where no man has gone before.

Assigned to this corp was the refurbished USS Constitution and Captain Robert April who volunteered to captain her, passing along command of his jumpship to his son.   

Twelve years later the newest vessel of the Space Survey has slipped the docks from Taurus, filled to the brim with the latest recovered technologies even as war rages across the Inner Sphere.      A marvel of 160,000 kilotons with the latest in recovered jump core technology the USS Enterprise is setting out on a five year mission to search for a better future for the Periphery! At its helm is Captain J. T. Kirk, son/daughter of Admiral April’s XO George Kirk.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 23 May 2017, 19:02:52
#522

In the year 3015 two LosTech discoveries rocked the Inner Sphere and the Periphery.   

Hanse Davion personally lead the Federated Suns forces in raiding Halstead Station to seize a fraction of a Star League University at great personal cost.  From this he would go on to found NAIS, a centre for ground breaking recovering of scientific research.

Deep in the Periphery however close to the Magistry of Canopus a derelict Aquilla jumpship was found slowly coasting into an uninhabited system nearby the Zenith jump point by a free trader named Robert April.  A relic from the Re-unification War the TCN Constitution was a military cargo hauler that had suffered a mass blow out of its hydrogen supplies in the black.   

Bravely venturing abroad the Constitution revealed that it was chock full of Toro's and Talos Battlemechs, alongside full loads of spare parts, field tools and manuals.    Fortunately  the breached fuel tank had been properly patched in a desperate attempt to refill it and survive, an effort that had sadly failed given the minimal amount of hydrogen left in the tank.

Filling the Constitution with enough fuel to jump into the Magistry Robert April kicked off what came to be  called the Constitution Crisis.     A crisis forged with calls from those within the Magistry and Taurian Concordat to seize the Constitution and its cargo or destroy it to ensure the other didn't benefit.   Even as calls for espionage and violence started gaining traction within the two Periphery nations Captain April stepped in with a personal plea to both Kyalla Centrella and Zarantha Calderon.

"Are you squabbling House Lords, so greedy to seize the legacies of the past that the notion of cooperation and sharing is anathema?  To forget what the men and women of the TCN Constitution worked and fought so hard to prevent; that insatiable Terran greed to control all of mankind's destiny.   

 I should have left the Constitution to soar into an unmarked star to lay its valiant crew to rest!      A fitting end for good ship from a time when humanity strode boldly towards the stars and left Terra in its dust never to return.   Or will you prove me wrong and live up to the ideals of Samantha Calderon and Kossandra Centrella!"


Captain April's personal plea to both leaders produced unexpected results when Zarantha Calderon called for a conference on the planet Detroit to discuss the equitable sharing of the recovered TCS Constitution but of further and deeper co-operation between the Magistry and the Concordat.    Sensing an opportunity to further her reforms and begin advancing her schemes to shatter the Free World Leagues the Magestrix agreed

 In early 3016 a deal was struck between Kyalla Centrella and Zarantha Calderon on the planet Detroit with the TCN Constitution looming over head.     A comprehensive deal spanning trade, technological support, military aid and agreements on a full range of other issues the Detroit Accord was a smashing success much to outside observers dismay.    Included in the Detroit Accord was the provision for establishment of an Unified  Space Survey corps, funded by both governments with the goal to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and found new colonies, to boldly go where no man has gone before.

Assigned to this corp was the refurbished USS Constitution and Captain Robert April who volunteered to captain her, passing along command of his jumpship to his son.   

Twelve years later the newest vessel of the Space Survey has slipped the docks from Taurus, filled to the brim with the latest recovered technologies even as war rages across the Inner Sphere.      A marvel of 160,000 kilotons with the latest in recovered jump core technology the USS Enterprise is setting out on a five year mission to search for a better future for the Periphery! At its helm is Captain J. T. Kirk, son/daughter of Admiral April’s XO George Kirk.
Sounds like he wants humanity to go back to exploring strange new worlds and seeking out new life and new civilizations.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 23 May 2017, 21:59:13
Well played, Fitzgerald. Well played.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Black Omega on 15 June 2017, 19:59:51
#522 

Twelve years later the newest vessel of the Space Survey has slipped the docks from Taurus, filled to the brim with the latest recovered technologies even as war rages across the Inner Sphere.      A marvel of 160,000 kilotons with the latest in recovered jump core technology the USS Enterprise is setting out on a five year mission to search for a better future for the Periphery! At its helm is Captain J. T. Kirk, son/daughter of Admiral April’s XO George Kirk.

Bet I know what book you have been reading. ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 13 November 2017, 10:32:11
]# 523

A new contender has appeared.

Dana Stephenson( newly engaged to Hanse Davion) has a date with death at the battle of Halstead Station, but misses it due to a case of pregnancy. After the battle is won Hanse returns to New Avalon and marries Dana. A few months later she gives birth to twins, John and Alexander.

Now the butterflies fly free. This means Hanse doesn't get married to a girl young enough to be his daughter. Maybe John, his heir gets married to Melissa instead, who actually gets to be the older one in the marriage( by about four years).

Now the substitution plot may be derailed. "Hi honey, I'm home." Kiss. Thud( hard punch, knocking down fake Hanse). "Who the hell  is this? Because it sure isn't my husband!" Cue Ardan Sortek doing the I told you so handjive and you can't touch this dance.

Would the invasion be set up for 3032, when John is a 18, with a marriage kickoff? Or would they try to keep to the original timeline? If they change it, what would happen to Wolf's Dragoons? Their contract ends with the combine in 3028.

What about the fact any kids John and Melissa have won't be out of training by the time of Clan invasion begins. 

On the other hand, no puppet master Katie, and no ineffectual Victor. So there is that that to look forward to.

Please tell me what you think about my first contribution to this thread.


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Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 13 November 2017, 15:33:32
My only quibble with your tribble is the font size


It's a nice Point of Departure for a fresh look at things
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 November 2017, 15:38:29
Ahem. Indoor voice.

Interesting idea, but keep the font size under control.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 13 November 2017, 19:07:47
Ahem. Indoor voice.

Interesting idea, but keep the font size under control.
Agreed on all points
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 13 November 2017, 22:13:47
Tribble #523 would be a nice  new take on events!  You could possible start a whole new timeline/story for it!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 13 November 2017, 22:42:01
Ah, sorry about that. I have difficulty with controlling font size on my crappie tablet. I will try to do better in the future.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 14 November 2017, 02:27:21
Interesting scenario. O0
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 14 November 2017, 02:49:44
# 524

In July 2018 Thomas Kearny and Takayoshi Fuchida released "What Happened to the Universe When Einstein Wasn't Looking?", a paper which detailed their observation of hyperdimensional motion within subatomic particles. While it and their subsequent papers were ridiculed by the scientific community of the time they were exonerated by the development of the jump drive in 2107 which eventually bore their names, and the hyper-pulse generator which transmitted its first official message on New Year's Day of 2630.

But what if things were reversed? What if development of Kearny and Fuchida's principles and theories focused instead on sending energy pulses through hyperspace instead of physical objects?

What if HPGs were developed before the K-F jump drive?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 November 2017, 03:26:23
It would be difficult - not impossible but difficult - in that era and rather limited in application. SETI might be interested though.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 14 November 2017, 05:39:27
I'm wondering if the Western Alliance went ahead with their plans for colonising the other planets and asteroids of the Solar System, and possibly some slowboat colonies to nearby stars, that if equipping these colonies with HPGs to keep relatively instant communications open with Terra that might reduce separatist leanings.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Valles on 14 November 2017, 09:21:25
Design a dropship or monitor with an endurance under 1g acceleration of about ten, eleven years and you've got a sublight starship, and not all that slow of one. I did the math once for another project; it gets a little dicey because you absolutely get up into seriously relativistic speeds and need to decide how to interpret the approximations that the rules make, but whatever the answer is in detail, the takeaway precis is 'Yes, BT tech can do that'.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 22 November 2017, 20:39:03
#524 Grand Theft JumpShip

It's 3045 and Hanse just had a brainstorm to get rid of Romano once and for all.

After once again reading up on pre-spaceflight Terra, Hanse is inspired by the Pacific War's island-hopping campaign. Noting the important part of isolating and starving out enemy units, over the next year covert FedCom operatives in cooperation with the St. Ives Compact quietly infiltrate the Capellan Confederation's JumpShip force.

Once the infiltration is complete, a pre-arranged signal is sent out and the operatives seize the JumpShips, jumping them to St. Ives. Candace then gleefully uses these JumpShips to support a military offensive to rush towards Sian and depose her sister, smashing Romano-loyalist formations along the way with overwhelming force, secure in the knowledge that hostile reinforcements will arrive somewhere between "too late" and "never".

This isolation even extends to Sian itself, with Romano screaming for loyal reinforcements to smash these traitors. While these reinforcements do eventually arrive by commandeering privately-owned JumpShips, it's just in time to learn there's a new Chancellor in power.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 23 November 2017, 03:15:27
#525

In 2762, Richard Cameron produces his masterstroke to abolish house militaries. The great lords round on Amaris, who screams for guards to protect him. SLDF guards move in and Kerensky restores order... by detaining the lords. After a decade of watching them abuse the League's mechanisms for their own benefit, he's had quite enough. All five are arrested on grounds of embezzling from the taxes they imposed on the Periphery. Which is an open secret that even Richard knew about.

Still, the actual facts aren't publicized. Instead Kerensky proposes to a pleased Richard that the five be kept under house arrest until they sign orders to their militaries, placing them under SLDF control due to an 'emergency'. The Periphery lords are amused until Kerensky reminds them that this includes their military forces. On the other hand, he suggests that Richard might want to redress the long-standing grievances of the Periphery, raising his friend Amaris and the other three to full membership of the League.

Technically this simply means another piece of paper to be put in front of the imprisoned lords to sign before they're let out. In the meanwhile, Kerensky receives Cameron's permission to have SLDF peacekeepers intervene to keep the borders between the five member states calm. Of course, with most of the house militaries deployed along borders, this means the SLDF has the vast majority of their forces pinned in place.

Eventually word will get out. Eventually one or more of the House Lords will crack (my money is on Steiner) and sign the papers in front of them. Either way, a new Reunification War is inevitable and who knows what opportunity Amaris will find in that?
Title: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: JA Baker on 23 November 2017, 08:21:38
Ok, so this is a crazy one, even by my standards: Girls und BattleMechs

Basically, take the basic premise of GuP, but translate it to BattleTech. Rather than tanks, it's BattleMechs, with the nation themed schools replaced with Successor State/Clan themed ones; St. Gloriana becomes New Avalon, Saunders becomes Steiner, things like that.

Anyway, have fun.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: MattV on 23 November 2017, 09:40:09
Ok, so this is a crazy one, even by my standards: Girls und BattleMechs

Basically, take the basic premise of GuP, but translate it to BattleTech. Rather than tanks, it's BattleMechs, with the nation themed schools replaced with Successor State/Clan themed ones; St. Gloriana becomes New Avalon, Saunders becomes Steiner, things like that.

Anyway, have fun.
I actually read that one somewhere,  can't  remember any specifics thou...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sein Schatten on 23 November 2017, 11:30:54
You may think of Kikō Sentō (BT GuP SI) (https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/kik%C5%8D-sent%C5%8D-bt-gup-si.331451/).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 24 November 2017, 22:58:22
Which was really fun and I wish Drak would get back to writing more of it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 November 2017, 03:48:05
Well maybe. Davion & Davion (Deceased) gives at least a little hope that I can go back to older ideas.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 25 November 2017, 10:09:14
You may think of Kikō Sentō (BT GuP SI) (https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/kik%C5%8D-sent%C5%8D-bt-gup-si.331451/).
Very Interesting
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 08 December 2017, 01:45:34
Tribble # 526

What if Phelan Kell wasn't a quisling traitor after all? What if, after being taken as a bondsman by the Clans, he only pretended to become entranced and indoctrinated into their culture?

What if, when he traveled to Arc Royal to attend his mother's funeral, he spoke privately with Victor ... and revealed that he was actually working as a deep cover agent, using his access as saKhan to gain access to the most secret of Clan data, like the map to Exodus Road, the locations of hidden Clan caches, technical schematics and research data ... which he then proceeded to hand over to his cousin?

And what if Natasha turns out to be doing the same: truly loyal to Jaime and the Inner Sphere, she's using her position in the Clan to divert materials and supplies, ensuring that there are gaps in the defenses, planting eventual sabotage, and recruiting her own fanatical band of Spiders to eventually lead back to Outreach? And the Refusal War turns out to be her plan all along, putting things in place for an eventual all out confrontation between two of the strongest Invader Clans?

What if the two traitors to the Inner Sphere turned out to be working for the good guys (ie, not the Clans) all along? And can you imagine the look on Ulric the Smug's face when he realises that his two most trusted supporters are actively working towards the destruction of his culture? When he realises that they've been manipulating him into taking the Wolves on a death-ride against the Falcons, essentially making both Clans kill one another?

***

Ranna Kerensky gasped as Phelan Ward, her lover and saKhan of Clan Wolf, steped over her fallen body. Clutching at her belly wound, the Clan Warrior ground out, "But Phelan ... why?"

The still handsome man paused, and frowned down at her, holstering the needler pistol that had turned her intestines into hamburger. "Why what? You tried to stop me from doing my duty."

Ranna shook her head, trying to clear her mind of the agony of her wounds and the blare of the Dire Wolf's general quarters alarm. "But ... you are of Clan Wolf! We are your people!" I love you, she didn't say.

"My people? You were my kidnappers! You tortured me, beat me, humiliated me, mutilated me," he shifted his shoulders, as though in rememberence of the time his back had been scourged by a furious Vlad. "I am not, and have never been a Wolf, Ranna: I am a Hound. My job is to protect the flock from the wolf: that's you." He shrugged. "Sure, you were a great lay, but after all, isn't it just 'coupling' to you people?

"I am a citizen of the Federated Commonwealth, a loyal subject to Archon Prince Victor, and I have lived among you weirdos long enough."

An older warrior stepped into the cabin. "Come on, kiddo, charges are set and our bird awaits."

"On my way, 'Tasha." He glanced down at Ranna again. "Sorry, babe, but ... I've got my duty. This way, I get to blow up a Clan WarShip along with the creme of what's left of your little cult of furries."

As he strode away, the light faded from Ranna's eyes as she heard his final words. "And give my regards to mad, bad little Nicky when you get to Hell: we'll send the rest of your twisted little family after him soon ..."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 08 December 2017, 02:32:10
+1 to Above, that would have been great
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 08 December 2017, 10:24:51
Eh. Phelan went way too far into thoroughly obnoxious Edgelord territory there. If you aren't going to kill someone clean, you deserve for them to heroically take you to hell with them, and if you take the time to gloat, you deserve for them to survive and ruin your plans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 08 December 2017, 16:42:33
No, the best time to monologue is when your enemy is helpless and bleeding out. This is better than what happens in canon. I just have to ask why didn't they take the ship to. Just seal off the bridge and depresurise the rest of the ship. Nonetheless, two thumbs up.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 08 December 2017, 16:50:44
I dunno. I think by that point Ulric was pretty much up to something very similar himself, and Ranna probably -would- go with Phelan if he tried to convince her. It's pretty much what they -did- with the Exile Wolves, after all, they'd just be going further with it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 08 December 2017, 19:57:53
Yeah, that part was a bit of a stretch. But the core of the idea, that Phelan is secretly still a FedCom loyalist and is acting as a deep cover asset, is still workable.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 09 December 2017, 04:36:11
So Phelan is essentially playing the same role as Justin did almost 30 years before. Neat.

For added benefits, that means Ragnar could be in on it as well and have a small army of Rasalhague bondsmen ready to rise up and head to what's left of the FRR with several shiploads of clantech.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chaeronea on 09 December 2017, 05:09:52
Considering how the authors consistently mentioned how close Phelan felt towards his family and how close the Kells were to the Steiner family, it should have been more of a surprise that he threw in with the Clans than him staying loyal to the FedCom. Then again considering the prevalence of Compulsive Betrayal Disorder in the Battletech universe, I suppose it isn't surprising that he went into the ranks of the warrior caste.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 December 2017, 02:58:21
#527

There's been a degree of speculation that Jennifer Winson, one of the founders of Clan Wolf and the wife of Nicholas Kerensky, was really Amanda Cameron, daughter of Richard Cameron. However, what if the Blakist records released during the Jihad revealed evidence she was actually a grand-daughter of Stefan Amaris, spared the purge of the family due to her youth.

How would the Clans react to learning that the Kerensky Bloodhouse is, without exception, descended of Stefan Amaris?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 10 December 2017, 06:55:10
To risk IRL leakage ... "Fake news! Spheroid lies to cover up pathetic response to invasion ... um, I mean, liberation. SAD!"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 11 December 2017, 00:49:54
Now that would be amusing if they put that in cannon. >:D :))
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: misterpants on 12 December 2017, 11:30:43
#527

There's been a degree of speculation that Jennifer Winson, one of the founders of Clan Wolf and the wife of Nicholas Kerensky, was really Amanda Cameron, daughter of Richard Cameron. However, what if the Blakist records released during the Jihad revealed evidence she was actually a grand-daughter of Stefan Amaris, spared the purge of the family due to her youth.

How would the Clans react to learning that the Kerensky Bloodhouse is, without exception, descended of Stefan Amaris?

#527b: Jennifer Winson is both; the resulting child of a daughter/niece/female relative set up with Richard Cameron by Amaris.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 13 December 2017, 00:00:36
Woot, 1k Post is mine, I do hope ilClan comes out so we have more material to speculate and expound on.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 14 December 2017, 20:28:10
#527

There's been a degree of speculation that Jennifer Winson, one of the founders of Clan Wolf and the wife of Nicholas Kerensky, was really Amanda Cameron, daughter of Richard Cameron. However, what if the Blakist records released during the Jihad revealed evidence she was actually a grand-daughter of Stefan Amaris, spared the purge of the family due to her youth.

How would the Clans react to learning that the Kerensky Bloodhouse is, without exception, descended of Stefan Amaris?

Pretty sure the speculation is that Jennifer is Richard's niece.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Smegish on 16 December 2017, 00:04:11
Not sure if this one has come up before but if not:

#528 - Loyal Dragoons

What if somewhere between Wolf's Dragoons leaving the Clan Homeworlds and their second resupply run (and secret orders) in 3019, Kerlin Ward is killed, and replaced by a Khan who either doesn't know about the planned secret orders, or doesn't want them carried out...

So instead after Misery, with their reconnaissance of the 5 Great Houses complete, the survivors return home, and try to persuade whoever is Khan of Clan Wolf to go for the Draconis Combine invasion corridor, so the Wolf Dragoons Cluster can score themselves some vengeance.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 16 December 2017, 19:14:49
Not sure if this one has come up before but if not:

#528 - Loyal Dragoons

What if somewhere between Wolf's Dragoons leaving the Clan Homeworlds and their second resupply run (and secret orders) in 3019, Kerlin Ward is killed, and replaced by a Khan who either doesn't know about the planned secret orders, or doesn't want them carried out...

So instead after Misery, with their reconnaissance of the 5 Great Houses complete, the survivors return home, and try to persuade whoever is Khan of Clan Wolf to go for the Draconis Combine invasion corridor, so the Wolf Dragoons Cluster can score themselves some vengeance.

drakensis had something similar in a timeline fic, where Natasha dqoes on Crossing and the remaining Dragoons return to the Clans, win a Trial, and to on a vengeance kick. Not quite the same though.

What would actually be really interesting to me for long term developments(and playability) is if the Clans wipe out and occupy the Combine, take Terra, and stop.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 February 2018, 11:14:17
#529

Discussions by leaders of the Capellan Zone on St Andre in 2366 are interrupted by news from the Free Worlds League. The regency of Mikhail Marik has ended with his nephew Allan Marik escaping the hospital he was confined in and meeting with Parliamentary leaders. Among his first acts is to send a courier to the Capellans.

Given their issues with the expanding Federated Suns, Allan offers all the Capellan states full and equal membership of the Free Worlds League. He guarantees their existing borders and existing rights.

Although Franco Liao makes a determined effort to persuade the representatives to unite into an independent confederation, fails to win over several of the major leaders. Several worlds near Liao are wary of the Duke's ambitions and the Sian Commonwealth are interested in the idea of guaranteeing their border against the FWL's claims on Andurien

With renewed pressure from Reynard Davion, the Capellan Commonality votes to at least open negotiations for military support, a measure that also wins over the Grand Union of Tikonov and the St Ives Mercantile League.

In 2367 a joint FWL-Capellan fleet forced the withdrawal of a Federated Suns task force from Capellan space. Having invited the League in, the Capellans now had to wonder if they would leave. Arriving personally, Allen Marik asked the Capellans to host a new conference.

Renewed discussions saw that opposition had shifted. While nervous, the Capellans were leaning further towards the idea of joining the League and Duke Liao ahd also switched his position to back the idea. (The reason for this became apparent two years later when the provincial navy of the Duchy of Liao received a formidable reinforcement in the form of three almost new capital ships 'retired' from the FWLN).

Rather than be left isolated, the Sarna Supremacy shifted their own position and expressed instead concern that the League's capital on Atreus might be too far from the Capellan provinces. Allen responded by an offer to establish a new capital on New Delos, in the Federation of Oriente. This in turn convinced President Allison of Oriente to fully bring his support behind the motion, reducing the League's own dissent. The final objections, made by the Principality of Regulus, were quieted with assurance that the guarantee of borders included the protection of their internal borders - something that would stand against the increasing problem of worlds wanting to break away from their parent provinces.

The final treaty wasn't signed until 2369 and the new Parliament convened for the first time on New Delos that year, five hundred Members representing twelve multi-world provinces (six of which were in the Capellan zone) and ninety-three planetary governments (twenty-nine of them in the former Capellan zone). While it would take almost thirty years for League to settle into its new borders, this very decisively halted any possibility of the Federated Suns pressing further into the Capellan zone.

While Allen Marik preferred to avoid looking for problems outside the League (the issues that arose with their massive expansion under his direction lasted for the rest of his term of office), his son Peter was considerably more aggressive. In 2396 Parliament agreed to pressure from the Tikonov delegation to appoint a Captain General with a remit to try to 'reclaim' the Chesterton Worlds.

The Chesterton War, an ultimately three-sided conflict between Federated Suns, Terran Hegemony and the Free Worlds League, proved to be the largest and bloodiest war fought for decades. All three realms took lessons away from the the inconclusive struggle - Brian Cameron that the relatively small Terran Hegemony would need to substitute quality for quantity in fighting it's neighbours, Peter Marik that he couldn't rely on Parliament to support him, and the Federated Suns  that Edmund Davion was puppet of his mother and younger brother - which ever spoke to him next.
   Edmund's cousin Simon proved an adept negotiator in the peace discussions and forged an unlikely partnership with Aleisha Liao, leader of the League's delegates. With their joint support, the three states endorsed the Chesterton Conventions, regulating a code of war that would avoid a repeat of the atrocities they'd seen over the last decade. The Conventions would quickly be adopted by the Draconis Combine, Lyran Commonwealth and Principality of Rasalhague.

Brian Cameron's resolution would lead eventually to the development of BattleMechs with the Mackie debuting in 2439. Meanwhile Aleisha Liao became Speaker of Parliament and a vital interface between Peter Marik and the provinces for almost two decades, cementing the Liaos as a power within the League out of all proportion to the size of their province. On the other side of the border, Simon Davion would eventually replace his cousins and take a leading role in reforming the Federated Suns.

The treaty of Chesterton would not end the conflicts between the three realms. The First Chesterton War actually marked only the start of the Age of War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 19 March 2018, 14:50:21
#530 - Build Tall, Not Wide

This one starts all the way back in the early 22nd century when the KF drive was new and everybody and their pet goat was Boldly Going into the Final Frontier looking for new places for the human race to settle. A prospector who found a habitable world could write their own check; a prospector who found a system with two habitable worlds was considered a legend.

And then there's the Jackpot, one of the wildest and most consistent stories of the early planet rush. According to the tale, one ship out doing a survey well away from where most of the serious colonization efforts were found what the astrophysicists call a "super-habitable" system. Where most star systems have no habitable worlds, or only one marginally-habitable planet, by some quirk of random planetary formation the Jackpot was graced with three dozen habitable planets and moons, all ready and raring to be settled. Naturally the prospector raced back to Mother Terra to tell everyone what they'd found... and were promptly ignored by the majority. Even assuming that they were telling the truth and not some old spacer's tale, a system like the Jackpot was way the hell out in the back of beyond. There were plenty of systems nearer to Terra, why risk life and limb dozens of jumps away when you didn't have to? A neat curiosity sure, but that was all.

And so the Jackpot faded into legend. But there were always a few who believed; some colonists who followed the prospector back out to the system, and a trickle of people who found stories or heard from friends of friends. When the Terran Alliance finally tripped and faceplanted on its hubris some refugees fleeing that nonsense found their way to the Jackpot and--after a little culture shock--became part of the family. After all, there was plenty of room for everyone. The Jackpot prospered, tucked away in one of the many air-gaps in known space, for hundreds of years. People sometimes came to settle, occasionally trade ships would wander out looking for goods not produced by any of the local worlds, and the system was for the most part happy and peaceful.

It didn't last of course; nothing ever lasts forever, and besides this is a BattleTech setting so naturally the tides of conflict have to come along sooner or later. But eventually one of the Houses, or the SLDF, or the Clans, or the WoB or somebody will knock on the door and the outside world will demand admission to the Jackpot. The question is, what happens next?

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Dev Notes: Okay, so what the hell, right? Well, I happened across this article (http://"https://planetplanet.net/2014/05/23/building-the-ultimate-solar-system-part-5-putting-the-pieces-together/") that was aiming for a theoretical maximum number of habitable worlds you could squeeze into a solar system without destabilizing the whole enchilada. I was rather taken with the idea of a system like this existing somewhere in BT space, just doing its own thing out of the way until BT nonsense intrudes and all of a sudden they've got to start making choices regarding their destiny.

Jackpot could be pretty much anywhere the Terran Alliance isn't in the 2110 - 2199 range; deep periphery, periphery or even in some overlooked part of the Inner Sphere for maximum hilarity factor.

The habitable bits of the system consist of four Saturn-scale gas giants in the habitable zone, each with five large moons of rougly earthlike habitability. A pair of Earth-sized binary moons are co-orbital with each gas giant at the leading and trailing Trojan points. The majority of these planets and moons are human-habitable, though that might be stretching things juuuust a bit with a few of them. As a resource base, the Jackpot by itself is roughly as capable as a minor kingdom, with plenty of living space even after multiple centuries of expansion.

System government could be just about anything, really; I favor democratic socialism but YMMV and there's plenty of space to develop most any types of government you'd like. However that shakes out, it's probably best for it to be ancient history before the Inner Sphere or whoever comes knocking.

I might develop this further--been knocking out a list of world names for possible further expansion--but for now I thought I'd toss this out and see if it sparked anybody else's imagination. :)

xoxo,
The Fun Tyrant
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 19 March 2018, 17:37:39
Re #530

Suggesting names for four Saturn-scale gas giants:
Monte Carlo
Vegas
Macau
Orleans

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: BlackLiger on 20 March 2018, 02:07:04
You can make a firefly class (as in serenity) dropship easily enough ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 20 March 2018, 02:21:00
You can make a firefly class (as in serenity) dropship easily enough ;)
Already done in canon, it's called the Drost IIa (http://www.sarna.net/wiki/Drost_IIA).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 20 March 2018, 12:40:42
Suggesting names for four Saturn-scale gas giants:
Already got a naming schema set up. The residents of the Jackpot are aware of their semi-legendary status in the rest of the galaxy and thusly decided to name their worlds after famous lost/legendary cities and countries, and the people who told stories of lands over the horizon. To wit:

HerodotusMandevilleScheherazadeRuzhong
Halema'uma'uYomiXuthalTakama-ga-hara
LemuriaWesternesseAkkadDilmun
TikalHyperboreaNysaArimathea
BrahmapuraXak TsarothVinetaShambhala
CamelotAnnwnMa-iCíbola
Herodotus Leading TrojansMandeville Leading TrojansScheherazade Leading TrojansRuzhong Leading Trojans
ValyriaYamataiXuchotlPenglai
CharnHawaikiYsAgartha
Herodotus Trailing TrojansMandeville Trailing TrojansScheherazade Trailing TrojansRuzhong Trailing Trojans
TmutarakanLyonesseHy-BrasilR'lyeh
JabulsaKitezhGangga NegaraKadath

(Source: A big list ripped off Wikipedia then randomized two dozen times. :) )

Most of these are of course mix-n-match and can be changed around on demand, I just lost patience and decided to go random for most of the names. I think the whole Lost World theme works well with the intended purpose of the setting, but other naming schema can be used if that ain't your jam.

Add Illuminati and/or secrets of the Hidden Masters at your own peril.

You can make a firefly class (as in serenity) dropship easily enough ;)
Yeah, if the Firefly jokes aren't flying fast & furious when working with this setting you're doing something wrong. :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 23 March 2018, 04:47:46
Already got a naming schema set up. The residents of the Jackpot are aware of their semi-legendary status in the rest of the galaxy and thusly decided to name their worlds after famous lost/legendary cities and countries, and the people who told stories of lands over the horizon. To wit:

HerodotusMandevilleScheherazadeRuzhong
Halema'uma'uYomiXuthalTakama-ga-hara
LemuriaWesternesseAkkadDilmun
TikalHyperboreaNysaArimathea
BrahmapuraXak TsarothVinetaShambhala
CamelotAnnwnMa-iCíbola
Herodotus Leading TrojansMandeville Leading TrojansScheherazade Leading TrojansRuzhong Leading Trojans
ValyriaYamataiXuchotlPenglai
CharnHawaikiYsAgartha
Herodotus Trailing TrojansMandeville Trailing TrojansScheherazade Trailing TrojansRuzhong Trailing Trojans
TmutarakanLyonesseHy-BrasilR'lyeh
JabulsaKitezhGangga NegaraKadath

(Source: A big list ripped off Wikipedia then randomized two dozen times. :) )

Most of these are of course mix-n-match and can be changed around on demand, I just lost patience and decided to go random for most of the names. I think the whole Lost World theme works well with the intended purpose of the setting, but other naming schema can be used if that ain't your jam.

Add Illuminati and/or secrets of the Hidden Masters at your own peril.
Yeah, if the Firefly jokes aren't flying fast & furious when working with this setting you're doing something wrong. :)
El Dorado?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: epion on 25 March 2018, 11:43:44
Because the OWA needs some love too

531 For the Alliance (SI)

Julian Santiago Avellar was not a happy man. Originally he came to Alpheratz to retire from the madness that was what historians in later years would call the Age of War. And for a short few years he succeeded in doing so. In his leisure time he started writing and publishing several articles against the military adventurism of the Great Houses in general and House Davion and Kurita in particular.

His slight pacifistic views earned him not only quite a following of readers but also millions of people literally followed him from the Federated Suns to settle on Alpheratz and its neighbouring worlds. All looking for a new live somewhere where the military complex didn’t dictate their everyday lives.

The first act that soured his retirement was surprisingly a counter article in one of the more respectful tabloids to his first three essays. In the face of things he should be pleased that someone read his articles and responded to them in such detail. He would have, if it wasn’t for the message that this Marius Dunbar was spewing.

While in the beginning Marius acknowledged and complemented Julius for his views and ideas he wasted no time at all to try to deconstruct such a standpoint as unrealistic and not worth the time of a man with Julius real life experience. Marius as a counter point in a alone standing essay went even so far as to actively encourage an active military, arguing that you had to have the ability not only to turn away Great House raiding parties but especially to disabuse pirates of doing so.

To Julius relieve his ‘opponent’ or ‘the bastard’ as he liked to call Marius didn’t encourage an ‘aggressive’ military as everyone else seems to do. Julius had no problem to acknowledge that for your own security in this time and age you needed a good equipped standing army however he stilled argued against such because as history showed it would lead unmistakably to the military adventurism shown by all those states in the Inner Sphere, and several outside of it.

This back and forth through various tabloids and even some specialized magazines was for a long while the only thing where Julius Santiago Avellar ‘fought’ against the outside world from his estate near Famindas. Sadly his peace and quiet didn’t last as long as he had liked because on June 6th 2410 a delegation of representatives from all mayor cities and districts on Alpheratz more or less stormed his estate and asked him or rather begged him to be their president for Alpheratz, to become their leader in this turbulent time.

So Julius Santiago Avellar was not a happy man, not at all. Since that day Julius did everything in his now considerable power to put a functioning government into place and prepare his people, those stubborn ****** that just wouldn’t leave him alone, for the outside world. He travelled to world after world to arrange trade treaties, to encourage companies to invest in his small realm etc. etc.

And through all this that smug bastard named Marius Dunbar had the gall, the audacity to congratulate him to his new position and wish him the best. At least Marius had the decency to not comment on Alpheratz developing standing army. Especially because Julius outright stole various ideas Marius had and proposed in their weekly exchanges, the bastard.

So it was on August 21st 2412 when Julius was on his way aboard one of their many Aquilla-class Jumpships yet again to speak with one of their neighbouring worlds to join his nascent Outworld Alliance. This had been the point where the aged ex-general nearly threw a fit. First they burdened him with the leadership of one world and now with even more? But he swallowed his vitriol, smiled and thanked them for their trust. And because he wasn’t petty and not a bit vicious Julius took no delight in cramming his reforms down their collective throats, with regulations for a standing military on top.

However sadly those ****** simply smiled, accepted and thanked him for his work. Apparently those in charge were avid fans of Marius and his exchange.

Momentarily spying a gas giant in the distance Julius looked at his chief diplomat and inquired “Please refresh my mind of where are we going and why.”

Ava Costa gave her boss a blank look at having to answer that question a third time in the last six hours. It even reached the point she didn't need to look at her notes because she could by now recite everything noteworthy in her sleep. Still better safe than sorry so Ava reached into her bag and pulled a large folder out of it.

“We are now on our why to Praxton, seat of Aperture Science Inc., to discuss not only possible contracts in various fields but also to sound them out about joining the nascent Outworld Alliance. ASI is the head of the Trade Order a union between cooperation’s, which are all subsidiaries of ASI. The Trade Order directly controls six systems to this day which are: Praxton, Loparri, Ferris, Tellman IV, Valasha and Crestoblus.

“ASI originates from Earth and was founded 1989 as a biochemistry company but has since then spread out into nearly all walks of life. They are today one of the big tooling manufacturers. Not only are they building tools for various purposes but most importantly for light and heavy industries they build the tools to produce their products or to build specialised equipment.

“ASI had their great breakthrough after the first and before the second colonisation wave from Terra when they bought out different companies which overstretched themselves in the first wave. This is where it gained its foundation in nearly all markets they do business in. Fast forward in roughly 2320 ASI itself started sending out colony ships to further its influence among the stars. Interesting enough those first ships went more or less straight to what would later be known as Praxton and Tellman IV.

“From that time there exist several rumours which have interesting implications. The first and most persistent is that the then CEO of ASI Charleen Novak, aged 19 terran years, lost her parents in an alliance raid the year before and she sought out ways to completely uproot her company and start over somewhere else. Obviously she succeeded.

“Another rumour is that ASI the five years before its complete departure from Terra sought out and bought or otherwise acquired technologies and rights to technologies considered outdated or obsolete even in that time. ASI and its subsidiaries are able to design and build anything from kitchenware, over farming machines and up to jumpships.

“There is an interesting point about how they structured their worlds. Unlike say the Lyran Commonwealth and the Terran Hegemony they eschew pure capitalism. In its place they have a form of social capitalism similar with the one used in middle and northern Europe before they abandoned it. Combined with several modifications the ACI and other companies are unable to generate wealth like their adversaries in the LC and TH, however unlike them the TO worlds never suffered an economic crises in the last 80 years.

"Questions?” having finished her monologue Ava placed the folder on the seat next to her and looked at her boss.

“Who exactly are we meeting?” Julius asked.

“After the death of Charleen Dunbar neé Novak last year,” here Julius’ head snapped from the window to Ava, eyes wide “we will meet with her husband, the current CEO of ASI, Marius Dunbar.” a smirk visible on the woman’s face.

“The Bastard.” Julius exclaimed and in his mind the capital b was well deserved.


If you find errors please tell me, English sadly isn't my first language .
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 25 March 2018, 17:41:41
 ;D  That was awesome!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 28 March 2018, 16:52:42
Here's an idea that comes from the concept of automated factories.

Say one day the Corean factory on New Avalon has an issue: the assembly line is jammed. People scream in horror, due to its black boxed nature, and how vital it is for the AFFS. Then the top manager notices a warning light on his master display, one that he's never seen before.

"Storage area full: empty before production can continue."

It's a mystery and a puzzle, but the clues are there, and eventually an expedition into the subterranean maze beneath the factory makes a huge discovery:

A vast cavern packed with 'Mechs of Star League vintage.

As it turns out, early in the Succession Wars, an earlier manager programmed the factory to skim off part of the production, to build up a stockpile of mechs, planning for a time where the Suns would need a large injection of fresh mechs to save the day, with the best tech the Suns had access to at the time. Unfortunately, he died before telling anyone about it.

So, for centuries, small numbers of mechs have been slowly produced and stored by automated systems that had never been told to stop, until there was literally no space left in the buried deep bunker. Until now ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 28 March 2018, 18:17:19
now take that and apply that to the production factories on Hesperus  >:D :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 28 March 2018, 18:56:58
I wasn't sure how automated the Defiance factories were off the top of my head.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 29 March 2018, 21:01:05
Here's an idea that comes from the concept of automated factories.

Say one day the Corean factory on New Avalon has an issue: the assembly line is jammed. People scream in horror, due to its black boxed nature, and how vital it is for the AFFS. Then the top manager notices a warning light on his master display, one that he's never seen before.

"Storage area full: empty before production can continue."

It's a mystery and a puzzle, but the clues are there, and eventually an expedition into the subterranean maze beneath the factory makes a huge discovery:

A vast cavern packed with 'Mechs of Star League vintage.

As it turns out, early in the Succession Wars, an earlier manager programmed the factory to skim off part of the production, to build up a stockpile of mechs, planning for a time where the Suns would need a large injection of fresh mechs to save the day, with the best tech the Suns had access to at the time. Unfortunately, he died before telling anyone about it.

So, for centuries, small numbers of mechs have been slowly produced and stored by automated systems that had never been told to stop, until there was literally no space left in the buried deep bunker. Until now ...
That would be the largest nightmare for the combine and CC since the birth of the Star League
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 30 March 2018, 05:26:54
That would be a mix of Valks and Centurions. Solid trooper designs that have served as the back bone of the AFFS for centuries.

Still, shouldn't be that bad unless the factory has also been stockpiling ammunition.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 30 March 2018, 11:16:37
That would be a mix of Valks and Centurions. Solid trooper designs that have served as the back bone of the AFFS for centuries.

Still, shouldn't be that bad unless the factory has also been stockpiling ammunition.

 "Oh no. We'll have to step up orders of easily mass producible ammunition while we actually gather and train enough pilots for all these mechs. The Horror."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Tyrchon on 30 March 2018, 13:03:39
To be fair, this would most likely be VLK-QA, Valkyries, and CN9-A, Centurions.  Calling them Star League vintage is a misnomer since both models began production after the fall of the League and neither utilized the more advanced technology used by the SLDF for some of their Mechs.  Still, depending upon the when this discovery would be made the addition of so many Mechs could make a sizeable difference.  If it happened while Hanse Davion is planning Operation Galahad you can bet he would take advantage of it for when he launches Operation Rat. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 31 March 2018, 03:04:59
The Centurion factory on New Avalon doesn't date back centuries. It was built in the 31st century after Corean's other Centurion factory was built, so it would be VLK-QA Valkyries only.

An amusing twist would be if it was Wells Technologies' factory on Luthien that has this backlog of output and it's discovered after they get nationalised for selling some of their production to the Lyrans. So there's a massive supply of BattleMechs available to the Draconis Combine - but they're all CGR-1A1 Chargers.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 31 March 2018, 04:44:57
IIRC, the depot on helm had battlemechs in it that were destroyed when the facility went up; what if instead the Grey Death wound up with them intact, as well as a couple dropships? Royal designs, better than the dragoons were using.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: al103 on 31 March 2018, 05:47:07
IIRC, the depot on helm had battlemechs in it that were destroyed when the facility went up; what if instead the Grey Death wound up with them intact, as well as a couple dropships? Royal designs, better than the dragoons were using.
You mean saved just two dropships of mechs? Because IIRC all of them would require much much more... how much is unclear, but IIRC there was at least regiment.

That said some would go to Combine by agreement. Don't remember if it was specified how many, Ricol was gunning for memory core anyway.

Most important that way is that in such situtation they would extract intact core with it's periphery and not just dump copy.

Also this way GDL is unlikely to go FU mode so there would be core in Steiners possession and copy in Combine possession. Liao and Marik are clear losers this way. Which have interesting implications...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 31 March 2018, 18:53:10
In the Grey Death after Helm Davis McCall started using a Star League Highlander.
Other SL mechs were also added.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 01 April 2018, 01:32:20
IIRC, the books indicate that McCall found the design in the copy of the Core that the GDL kept and had the Highlander built specially for him, rather than the Highlander being looted from the cache.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: snakespinner on 01 April 2018, 01:51:53
That was one scenario I had not heard about, which book was that in.
It is a long time since I read up on the GDL so I can be wrong.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 01 April 2018, 17:41:27
It's probably in the grey death book, which is so bloody old i've never seen a physical copy.

I'm talking about a few lines in 'price of glory' where the mechs are smashed by a river re-diverting into them after the water was super-heated by the reactor the comstar idiot brought on line.

And McCall didn't get that highlander until the ilKahn-election-lull in the clan invasion, IIRC. The Grey Death got mauled, and had to rebuild; he commissioned it during that. How a mercenary company got the cash to rebuild is glossed over, but I guess they had a bunch of cash earned during SW4 and '39, as well as going into debt.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 02 April 2018, 21:11:26
#533 (I think?) - The Death of Cameron

So this one just popped into my head, and I thought I'd inflict it on you. It's the year 2765; posit a Star League that's a little less Game of Thrones-y in its set up, but the politics are no less byzantine and ridiculous than they usually are. The League is ruled by Richard Cameron, by virtue of being one of the biggest weasels in the pack and having the support of the biggest weasel, his BFF Stefan Amaris. The galaxy is his, none dare challenge Richard Cameron's rule for fear of his reprisal.

And then without warning he just keels over and croaks. The succession is... confused, and everybody's scrambling. Either to take the top slot, or just to make sure the other guy doesn't get it.

...okay so basically I kinda want to The Death of Stalin but with Fall-era BattleTech characters instead of the Soviet Central Committee. I think there's potential there beyond the usual big-war-shooty-shooty thing.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: epion on 03 April 2018, 09:40:31
I had to facepalm after reading that 'Game of Thrones' bit ... whatever.

Problem. Why should the succession be in doubt? Amaris Civil War made a mess of things because he had the whole Cameron family killed. In this case you still have rightful heir's and heiress' to the throne.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 17 April 2018, 00:38:26
A slightly more compact inner sphere.

I was playing around with a spreadsheet program, as I tend to do when the fancy strikes me, and I was plugging in the numbers of planets in battletech, and came up with some interesting results.

According to the Sarna page for the Alliance grand survey, where they counted how many colonies there were within X lightyears of Terra, the density of planets dropped a LOT as time went on. By the start of the succession wars, planetery density was less than 10% of what it had been in 2172.

Think about that. Before comstar (and their technological regression), before the Succession Wars turned planets uninhabitable, even before the Star League started keeping their best technology under wraps, there was fewer and fewer planets per square lightyear as time went on.

year        planets        radius   density (circ)   % of 2172
2172         112        40   0.022281692   100
2199         395        90   0.0155225191   69.6649029982
2216         461        100   0.0146740858   65.8571428571
2235          619         120   0.0136829041   61.4087301587
3000ish   2,000     550   0.0021045282   9.4451003542


So, what if there wasnt? What if the galaxy, using exactly the same primitive technology the Terran Alliance had for terraforming, kept colonising as their ancestors had?

Instead of the canon 2000 worlds across a sphere 500 lightyears in radius, you'd have those same 2000-ish worlds in a 220 light year radius. No successor state would be more than 8 jumps from end to end. A tighter, more compact inner sphere would make travel times much shorter, in turn doing interesting things to interstellar shipping of goods and armies.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: al103 on 19 April 2018, 20:35:02
Instead of the canon 2000 worlds across a sphere 500 lightyears in radius, you'd have those same 2000-ish worlds in a 220 light year radius. No successor state would be more than 8 jumps from end to end. A tighter, more compact inner sphere would make travel times much shorter, in turn doing interesting things to interstellar shipping of goods and armies.
1. There wouldn't BE Successor States in such scenario. It's much easier for Terra to control things if everything is 2 months of travel away.
2. Such scenario is implausible as in big part colonization was fueled by "as far as possible from those ******".
In big part colonization was "as far as possible "
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 19 April 2018, 20:50:43
1. There wouldn't BE Successor States in such scenario. It's much easier for Terra to control things if everything is 2 months of travel away.
2. Such scenario is implausible as in big part colonization was fueled by "as far as possible from those ******".
In big part colonization was "as far as possible "
Well, the thing is, why did Terra let people get 'as far as possible from those arrogant asses'?  Why not simply exile them to the desert or bogs of otherwise perfectly fine planets inside the already developed area?  After all, they built the Jumpships.  They can probably program them to only have a limited number of valid destinations in their computers.  And why let the disaffected and rebellious off Earth in the first place?  Why not keep them where you can keep an eye on them, and let more trusted political movements and people leave?  Who cares if the Quebecois are still agitating for a free state-that's no reason to give them a whole planet to turn into Neu-Quebec.  More than ten planets is spreading your first century of colonization and development effort WAAAY to thin, in my opinion.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: al103 on 23 April 2018, 22:28:08
#534?

So... Recently I was reminded about old mistakes of "clan marital traditions" and "Natasha Kurita". And it bugs me. So...

Takashi Kurita was old man. Not ancient (even 3000th IS med tech is better than that) but old. But when Wolf Dragoons joined Combine service he personally met they top officers and he found himself in company in another old warrior and something clicked. Strange not-exactly-romance between Coordinator and Black Widow surprised everybody, the only thing that wasn't was that it didn't gone anywhere... at least until Black Dragon were pissed off enough by situation to stage an assassination. After long day of defense, attacks, counterattacks and many people killed together it became just plain romance and soon Combine welcomed new wife of their aged Coordinator...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 24 April 2018, 01:30:47
That would certainly be a plausible reaction by the Black Dragon Society.

Although Takashi's wife was alive in the 3050s so there would need to be some adjustments to canon.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: al103 on 24 April 2018, 03:53:41
Although Takashi's wife was alive in the 3050s so there would need to be some adjustments to canon.
Or she could be dead as result of said assassination attempt.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 24 April 2018, 05:13:59
While I understand the age of the two involved it does possible create an interesting future character who could claim the Kerensky bloodname and the Kurita throne. ;) Perhaps an earlier coupling during the Dragoons contract with the Combine would produce a more realistic offspring but the possibilities of such are intriguing....
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Post by: Swords of Fire on 24 April 2018, 05:50:16
The reaction of the clans would be interesting, having the Kuritans marry one of the members of the premier bloodline. I could see the Jaguars and Falcons fighting over who invades the Combine. Or alternatively, Ulric winning the bidding if only to yell at Natasha asking 'What were you thinking'.
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Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 24 April 2018, 15:32:28
Or alternatively, Ulric winning the bidding if only to yell at Natasha asking 'What were you thinking'.
Ehhh... It seemed like a good idea at the time.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: epion on 01 May 2018, 14:30:07
535 Camerons return Part 1

07:55 20th of August, 3028
Ceti Alpha system, Nadir Jump Point
THNS Phoenix, McKenna-class Battleship, Command Variant
Admirals Quarters

Fleet Admiral Marianne Sanderson sat in her office reading various ready reports. She still couldn’t wrap her head completely around the idea of invading all five Successor States. Well, she could, but it still boggled the mind in her opinion. Especially with all the intelligence reports of how hopelessly outclassed their targets would be. Holding those worlds however would be another matter entirely.

Regrettably her musings where interrupted by the beeping of her com terminal.

“Sanderson here”, she replied, her voice promising humiliation to anyone interrupting her without good reason.

“It’s 0755, Fleet Admiral”, came the dry voice of her XO before he closed the line.
Sighting in defeat Marianna gave one last look at her paperwork. Standing up and stretching all the kinks out of her body Marianna gave one last controlling look over her Uniform. With everything as it should be she left her office and made her way to the Bridge.
Even after years of service on a space ship her stomach still made flips the moment she left the grav-deck. Gliding through zero gravity several crewman, NCOs and officers saluted her on her way which she returned crisply, always making sure her crew was not breaching any rules in uniform, haircut and accessories.

As she entered the bridge she could still clearly see the differences between a normal McKenna and the Command variant, the extra controls and consoles, the massive holo-projector, the double amount of personal and so much more. After she strapped herself into her chair Marianne tunred to her XO, who was strapped into his own seat, and was reading something on a display to his right.

“Report”, she said. The XO looked up from his current display and pulled out a datapad “All elements are ready to go and Damocles Command gave us condition green to start the operation on your command Fleet Admiral.”

“Ma’am it’s 0800”, called an information officer as the displayed picture of the Innser Sphere atop the holo-projector changed and a man wearing a splendid white uniform standing on a balcony appeared.

“People of the Terran Hegemony, nearly 250 years past a dream died. A dream, created by the best of intentions maybe, but achieved through the deadliest of results. A dream which could have been so much more, a true unification of our species in the age of space exploration, but greed and hunger for power corrupted and distorted this pure vision, like it did so many times before.

“And while the Star League still brought what it promised, it also enabled its own destruction, which now looking past, with the wisdom of bygone decades and centuries had been so obvious, so predictable. And so it came that this great vision, this promise of peace and prosperity, was first brought low, not by enemies from outside, but from supposed allies and partners from within.

“When finally brought low, the dream of our forefathers was then defiled by those who had sworn themselves to protect the innocent, the common people who could not defend themselves. Defiled by power hungry lords, who couldn’t see, who didn’t have the courage to see past their own insecurities and egos. And finally, after all it had suffered, this magnificent dream of a worthy goal was finally buried, buried by those entrusted to defend it, which deserted, abandoned their duty and broke their oaths, buried by madmen and madwomen, who in a frenzy of insanity abandoned any and all restrains to visit untold destruction not only onto others but also onto their own people.

“Those who fled the madness, those who broke oaths, abandoned duty and fled their responsibilities thought themselves free of the corruption and insanity of those left behind, never realising that they themselves brought the seeds of their own ruin with them. And those so called great lords and ladies who stayed behind raped and plundered a realm in need, butchering its people just to make sure the other cannot utilize them.

“That was nearly 250 years ago, when the Star League died and the greater part of the Terran Hegemony was butchered, raped and finally sliced into pieces. However, even in times of despair and hopelessness there were people ready, willing and able to help. These people, heroes of their time did everything to preserve what had been lost, what they had originally fought for. First they saved my ancestors, those who would have had a chance to maybe stop the coming madness, but were never given one.

“These heroes saved millions of people of all walks of life and from all of our planets of this once great realm. And here, in these hidden systems, systems set aside by wiser heads as a retreat should the worst happen, we rebuild. We rebuild a nation in decline, made it better and made it worthy being proud of. Through blood sweat and tears, through diligence and hard work our ancestors build a nation, build a system, where no one needs to be hungry, where everyone is given a fair chance and each person comes as far as his ability and willingness allows.

“250 years ago, our home has been savaged, cleansed by nuclear fire, desecrated by biological and chemical weapons and butchered through orbital bombardment. 250 years ago our ancestors made a promise, to return to our home, take it back from the scavenger lords, to repair the damage done and to take those responsible to account for what they and their realms had done.

“And should their answers be not sufficient, should their apologies not be felt true we would visit upon them what they have visited upon us, to show them the error of their ways. 250 years ago the survivors of madness and insanity, and all those who would join them in hiding and obscurity made a promise to finally take back what was ours. A promise reaffirmed by every Director-General and head of House Cameron ever since.

“A promise that finally after 250 years will be fulfilled. People of the Terran Hegemony, after 250 years of waiting and preparing, we are finally coming home and restore what has been destroyed, to finally take back what is ours, by force if necessary.”

Fleet Admiral Marianne Sanderson looked around the bridge, noting here and there men and women sitting or standing slightly taller, some even with tears in their eyes. She gave one last look at the image of Lord Sebastian Cameron, 26th Director-General, as he bowed to the people beyond the balcony, which couldn't be seen but definitely heard with thunderous applause.

“Coms,” Marianne calmly called, falling back into her training “Give the go command to all fleet elements. Operation Rebirth is Go.”

“What about Terra”, her XO asked softly as the bridge exploded into action.

“Terra is already ours XO, those fools never saw what hit them”, Marianne answered with a humourless smile which sent shivers down the XOs back.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 02 May 2018, 20:53:48
An alternative to the Clan Invasion...I LIKE IT!!!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 03 May 2018, 06:50:16
Here comes the new sanctimonious oppressors for your own good, same as the last three batches. Yawn.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 03 May 2018, 06:57:28
535 Camerons return Part 1

So where did they go hang out?  Are they the "replacement" for the Clans?
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Post by: Ironburk on 03 May 2018, 20:10:59
Joy, another group to kill millions in order to restore the Fail League. Wonderful, just what is needed. Well hopefully they'll prevent the Word of Blake from ever forming.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 12 May 2018, 16:23:00
Tribble #536
In 2839, faced with a total interdict due to the actions of Charles Marik on Oriente in March of the previous year and the Captain-General's inability or unwillingness to resolve his quarrel with ComStar, the Free Worlds League came to an end as House Allison, House Humphries and House Cameron-Jones came to private agreements with Primus Conrad Toyama that HPG communication would be restored to their province if they withdrew support from the Captain-General. It is probable that Toyama expected this to take the form of parliamentary maneuvre, but frustration with Charles Marik, his father and grandfather spelled the doom of the oldest of the Successor States.

Smaller provinces quickly followed suit and recalled provincial troops home to guard against the inrush of Capellan and Lyran forces seeing this as a brilliant opportunity. However, no longer hampered by the Interdiction and with federal many regiments offering allegiance to the only leaders they could contact, gains were largely limited to the petty provinces that lacked the muscle to defend themselves. House Marik itself saw the writing on the wall and after Charles Marik's tragic death in a riding accident in 2840 his son Gerald Marik II used much of what was left of the FWL treasury to buy forgiveness for his family from ComStar, enabling him to embark on a lightning military campaign that saved Irian from Capellan invasion and secured the Marik Commonwealth.

Sagaciously, the new Duke of Marik formally foreswore any claim on the First Lord's throne while the Free Worlds League remained divided. With the cause of war ostensibly removed and having taken most of the available 'soft targets' both the Archon and Chancellor chose to consolidate their gains and look to their other borders, now under threat from House Kurita and House Davion respectively.

By the end of the 29th century, the former League had stabilised with nine former provinces as cohesive, if relatively modest interstellar domains and two large regions where independent worlds existed in a delicate balance of 'spheres of influence' between the nine states and four periphery states that had emerged as having interests - and in some cases having seized former League worlds.

Removing House Marik from the competition for domination of the Star League hardly left their borders secure but both the Marik Commonwealth and the Duchy of Oriente emerged with military forces strong enough to largely withstand the Lyrans and Capellans as long as they remain in relatively defensive stances and can rely on the support and alliance of the Duchy of Graham-Marik, Stewart Commonwealth and Duchy of Orloff. The Abbey League and the Duchy of Andurien are in relatively weaker positions but their worlds are considered less valuable for the most part and both supplement their armed forces with relatively powerful mercenary regiments. Since the Lyrans and Capellans also now share a border near Terra, meddling in the League is usually a matter of spies, diplomats and deniable assets rather than major military deployments.

The two shatterbelt regions (the first between the Abbey League, Rim Commonality and the cautiously expanding Illyrians; the second between the Rim Commonality, the Principality of Regulus, the Duchy of Andurien and the Magistracy of Canopus) draw in disproportionate numbers of small mercenary units as the worlds and the emissaries of the larger empires play a careful game to win the independent worlds over to them and to deny their neighbours the same chance. Low level conflicts are endemic but the majority of the worlds have found it best not to commit too much to anyone.

The main wild card in this situation is the Principality of Regulus which - far from the borders - won over very little of the federal military and has only slowly been able to build up its strength. As they are comfortably clear of the Lyrans and Capellans, if House Cameron-Jones are able to expand their military to parity with the Mariks and Allisons its likely they would be able to dominate the shatterbelts and potentially re-unite the Free Worlds League... or shatter what recovery has taken place.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 13 May 2018, 19:43:16
Hmm, the Chaos League or the Free Worlds remnants....

Though to think that the Lyrans and Capellans would not benefit the most from the softening of their second front. Able to concentrate on the Kurita and Davion fronts solely these realms might be on a more even footing with the two most powerful Successor States.

The Magistracy of Canopus is probably the best off after this breakup no doubt reclaiming their lost worlds and perhaps merging with the Duchy of Andurien eventually. Although an unchecked Marian Hegemony could also rise quicker in such a vacuum absorbing InnerSphere worlds.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 14 May 2018, 04:15:39
There is no Marian Hegemony it's the Illyrians instead
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 24 May 2018, 07:06:57
#537
The Mutinies of 3028

Concept: The leaders of the great houses wildly underestimated their population’s war-weariness, and overestimated their realms’ ability to support a war effort after 300 years of endemic fighting. The result is mutiny among both the rank and file as well as the nobility.

Execution: The rank and file of the AFFS is initially wildly enthusiastic about the invasion of the CC, having been promised easy victories and a quick end to the war. This is quickly shattered on the anvil of Tikonov, a world that has long prepared for precisely this kind of attack. Tikonov becomes the Verdun of the Capellan front, sucking in men and material from both sides in unending slaughter.

A number of both CC and AFFS units mutiny when ordered to Tikonov, either abandoning the front or going rogue and attempting to set themselves up as local warlords. Only the installation of Morgan Hasek-Davion as the new Marshal of the Armies of the AFFS, and Romano Liao’s brutal purging of the officer corps in the CC, restore some semblance of control.

These quickly prove to be just the warning signs of the coming avalanche. Internal trade within the Federated Suns breaks down. Bread riots break out across the Federated Suns outback. On some planets, the militia are deployed and protestors are shot.

Things are even worse on the Capellan side. The Northwind Highlanders go AWOL, heading to their ancestral homeworld. They expel Draconis Combine invaders, but the Federated Suns’ hopes that they would become allies are promptly dashed when they turn on AFFS forces on the planet and expel their age-old enemies.
 
Pavel Ridzik mutinies, taking some units or parts of units with him. Loyal companies and battalions fight the mutineers, chaos ensues. At the same time, Duchess Candace Liao attempts to secede with the St. Ives Commonality. Some units obey, others do not. Again, fighting breaks out across the Commonality.

The Federated Suns seems poised to take advantage of their helpless enemy when Michael Hasek-Davion sees his chance, and declares his independence. Capellan March militia and New Syrtis Fusilier units fight against loyalists.

Ran Felsner, Fenlon? Sandoval? Duke Whathisname ruler of the Draconis March, responds by pulling units—the Robinson Rangers, the New Ivaarsen Chasseurs, from the Capellan front in order to defend his own borders. Bogged down on multiple fronts, Hanse Davion lacks the men to enforce his will on his rebellious dukes.

Along the Periphery border, the Lexington Combat Group and Illician Lancers realize that with a combined 7 regiments, they field a force stronger than most Dukes, and begin carving out their own interstellar empire. They are joined by a number of other large mercenary commands, such as the Fighting Urakhai, creating a kind of freebooter empire.

The Lyran invasion of the Draconis Combine initially goes well, until they learn to their chagrin that independence fever in Rasalhague means just what it says on the tin—independence. Lyran forces are initially welcomed as liberators, until it becomes clear that liberated worlds are not being granted independence. The rebels armed by the Lyrans turn on their erstwhile allies, including the so-called Tyr BattleMech regiment.

Setbacks on the Dieron front meanwhile lead to discontent, which is exploited by Duke Lestrade, and the Federation of Skye declares independence. There is particularly fierce fighting on Hesperus II for control of its factories.

The Draconis Combine is plagued with an emboldened freedom movement in Rasalhague, and infighting among its warlords. Takashi Kurita attempts to remove Galedon warlord Samsonov for incompetence—he responds by attacking loyalist units within his Prefecture. Warlord Cherenkoff, fearing he will be next, allies with Samsonov, sparking a civil war within the Combine, with Mies Kurita as the rebel figurehead.

The Azami, rather than be dragged into a civil war in which they have no stake, also declare independence for their scattered worlds, fighting off both loyalist Combine forces and the rebels.

Independence fever sweeps the Free Worlds League, opening age-old divides among the member states. Units refuse orders to attack the Lyran Commonwealth. Instead, Andurien declares independence and promptly attacks the distracted Confederation. Regulus soon follows.

Into the maelstrom of chaos steps ComStar, which offers to support the various independence movements militarily in return for accepting ComStar garrisons. Skye, Rasalhague, Regulus, the Azami and Northwind accept. The Commonwealth, Federated Suns and Draconis Combine are placed under interdict until they withdraw from the independent realms. ComStar also preemptively seizes a number of worlds close to Terra, declaring them part of its protectorate. Nobody has strength enough to resist them.

Finally, Periphery realms such as the Magistracy of Canopus, Taurian Concordat and Oberon Confederation seize the chance to launch raids or even outright invasions of border worlds, expanding their holdings.

Conclusion: The five Houses still stand, but each has been all but shattered. Their ability to wage war has been severely reduced, with the devastation of factories on worlds such as Hesperus, Tikonov, Quentin and others. Dukes, Earls, Counts and Barons are now all more assertive of their independence across the Inner Sphere, knowing their house leaders dare not risk fanning further independence movements.

The Draconis Combine has put down the rebellion, but Rasalhague and the Azami remain independent, backed by ComStar. Its forces are shattered by infighting and war with the Dragoons.

Hanse Davion controls only the core worlds of the Crucis March—Ran Felsner Duke Whatsit is officially his vassal, but in practice Davion lacks the power to force him to do anything he doesn’t want to.

Michael Hasek-Davion rules an independent duchy, loosely allied with Candace Liao’s St. Ives and the mercenary empire. The highlanders on Northwind rebuff every attempt to negotiate.

Roman Liao controls only the Sian Commonality, with the rest of her realm descending into chaos.

The Lyran Commonwealth has lost control of Skye and thus its link to its putative ally, the Federated Suns. With no obvious successor to Katrina Steiner now that her daughter is married to a man separated by hundreds of light years of hostile forces, and the disappearance/death of Frederick Steiner, powerful dukes and nobles are forming factions and plotting against one another. Civil war looms on the horizon.

The Free Worlds League is gearing for a war to retake Andurien, but treads carefully for fear of another mutiny. There, too, a succession crisis looms as Janos Marik ages and his sons each look to secure their own futures.

ComStar forces are now spread throughout the galaxy, garrisoning worlds in Rasalhague, Skye, and elsewhere, in addition to controlling the nexus of the Inner Sphere around Terra. Whispers that this was precisely the outcome they were attempting to provoke by facilitating both the Steiner-Davion alliance and the Concord of Kapetyn seem far less cynical than they once did.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 24 May 2018, 09:31:54
Oh now that makes things much more interesting Dubble_G, much more interesting
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: cpip on 24 May 2018, 12:52:42
#536
The Mutinies of 3028

Fascinating! So is this what you were alluding to after The Day That Heaven Was Falling?

I’d love to see this developed into something.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 24 May 2018, 15:29:59
As a concept for a single House perhaps two I think the mutiny storyline could be a very solid one. If the historic parallel is the 1st World War then the Russian Revolution is a good model for one House, while another could be France after Verdun (I see the Lyrans here where they just quit and say we will defend ourselves but advance no further), Germany signing the armistice (perhaps a sovereign is forced from the throne and tries to return after the war), or Austria-Hungary (hi Free Worlds League) just shattering into pieces.

Ever think of setting it during the Third Succession War? That thing ran crazy long!

And how about a successful rebellion by a cultural subgroup in the Draconis Combine? I am not thinking Rasalhague or the Azami but perhaps an American/Terran uprising from Annapolis or a Russian insurrection. Perhaps it could be a multi-cultural rebellion to throw of the weight of this neo-samurai regime?  While it was always my favorite realm no one ever thought of throwing of the tyranny of Shiro Kurita??
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Post by: consequences on 24 May 2018, 16:04:02
Since when does Felsner run the Draconis March? I'd comment on other silliness, but that's just too glaring for me to bother.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 24 May 2018, 19:31:54
Fascinating! So is this what you were alluding to after The Day That Heaven Was Falling?
Right, exactly. That story is a first-person recollections of one individual though, so I couldn't really see how to incorporate it. So, I'm releasing it into the wild and putting it here instead.

As a concept for a single House perhaps two I think the mutiny storyline could be a very solid one. If the historic parallel is the 1st World War then the Russian Revolution is a good model for one House, while another could be France after Verdun (I see the Lyrans here where they just quit and say we will defend ourselves but advance no further), Germany signing the armistice (perhaps a sovereign is forced from the throne and tries to return after the war), or Austria-Hungary (hi Free Worlds League) just shattering into pieces.
Bingo. If my Verdun reference wasn't clue enough, I was very much thinking of the historical precedent of 1917-18, including both the Russian Revolution and the French army mutinies, as well as the Italian battles of Isonzo-Caporetto. The collapse of A-H is a good angle--hadn't thought of that aspect, but it fits the pattern, doesn't it!

The other historical precedents I was thinking of were the 1848 European revolutions as well as the Arab Spring, in terms of how revolutionary/independence movements can spread across borders.

The mercenary revolt owes more to fiction sources than history, but in 3025 Davion has a large number of multi-regiment mercenary forces... that could be a blessing, but obviously a risk as well. In that period, 4-5 regiments is far stronger than most bandit kingdoms. I'd like to see mercenaries in BT acting a bit more ... mercenary.

Anyway, the tribble is a narrative setting, like all narratives shaped to tell a specific story: how entire peoples can reach the breaking point, just as they did in world war 1. The rest is details, getting the bits to fit the story you want to tell.

Since when does Felsner run the Draconis March?
What the h*ck was his name. Fenlon? Sandoval? Hyphenated-Davion? Whatever.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 24 May 2018, 21:08:30

What the h*ck was his name. Fenlon? Sandoval? Hyphenated-Davion? Whatever.

Do you not even begin to see the irony of saying that after saying:

Quote
1. The rest is details, getting the bits to fit the story you want to tell

Without getting into excessive nitpicking:

1: There is a profound difference between a pirate nation out past the back end of nowhere in hard scrabble often barely habitable worlds, and a mercenary unit trying to carve out a warlord fiefdom from prime real estate that is completely surrounded by people who will want what they have.

2:Any mini nation without serious military production is going to die a miserable screaming death in pretty short order.

3: You have to change the history leading up to 3028 too much to make the FC, and in fact everyone taking the same actions remotely believable. Okay, I lied about the lack of nitpicking, because:

A: in no conceivable reality does Max Liao allow a defensive strong point to be built that can meaningfully impede the Canon AFFS pain train, precisely because he is too paranoid about the prospect of anyone(aka Ridzik) doing what he did to his father( aka just like Ridzik helped him to do).

B: What conceivable forces is Samsonov using to hunt down loyalists?

C: Comstar providing military garrisons in this scenario that somehow don't get gassed in their barracks and their equipment reappropriated after any of a half dozen local enemies are blamed. Hahahahaha. No.

D: Why has every single intelligence agency in the IS failed utterly? If using the obvious copout of Comstar, why does Comstar then reveal they have a military at all instead of having ever so helpful new mercenaries sign on to quietly tighten the noose?

3000, maybe. 2950, sure, you even have Primus York to try blatant military presence against all good sense. 3028 is an indescribably bad time to try to have this happen, because everything is so well defined in relation to everything else. You have to carefully change everything so much that you might as well just set it earlier and save yourself endless accusations of out of character writing.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 24 May 2018, 22:00:27
Do you not even begin to see the irony of saying that after saying:

Without getting into excessive nitpicking:

1: There is a profound difference between a pirate nation out past the back end of nowhere in hard scrabble often barely habitable worlds, and a mercenary unit trying to carve out a warlord fiefdom from prime real estate that is completely surrounded by people who will want what they have.

2:Any mini nation without serious military production is going to die a miserable screaming death in pretty short order.

3: You have to change the history leading up to 3028 too much to make the FC, and in fact everyone taking the same actions remotely believable. Okay, I lied about the lack of nitpicking, because:

A: in no conceivable reality does Max Liao allow a defensive strong point to be built that can meaningfully impede the Canon AFFS pain train, precisely because he is too paranoid about the prospect of anyone(aka Ridzik) doing what he did to his father( aka just like Ridzik helped him to do).

B: What conceivable forces is Samsonov using to hunt down loyalists?

C: Comstar providing military garrisons in this scenario that somehow don't get gassed in their barracks and their equipment reappropriated after any of a half dozen local enemies are blamed. Hahahahaha. No.

D: Why has every single intelligence agency in the IS failed utterly? If using the obvious copout of Comstar, why does Comstar then reveal they have a military at all instead of having ever so helpful new mercenaries sign on to quietly tighten the noose?

3000, maybe. 2950, sure, you even have Primus York to try blatant military presence against all good sense. 3028 is an indescribably bad time to try to have this happen, because everything is so well defined in relation to everything else. You have to carefully change everything so much that you might as well just set it earlier and save yourself endless accusations of out of character writing.
K.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 25 May 2018, 07:56:05
#538
While I'm on this...'nother weird idea I had. Sort of a Mirror Universe idea.
Mako's Dragoons

Concept: It was the Rim Worlds Republic, not the SLDF, that fled into the periphery.

Execution: Instead of turning on the Rim Worlds Republic, Aleksandr Kerensky makes the liberation of Terra his first and highest priority, leaving only a holding force facing the RWR. By 2772 Terra is liberated and the usurper Stephan Amaris captured, tried and executed.

The hammer falls next on the RWR. Following the conquest of Terra Prime, Regent Mohammed Selim realizes the cause is doomed, and flees with the remnants of the RWR military.

Following their defeat, the Star League falls apart into the six warring factions of the Commonwealth, the Combine, the Federated Suns, the Confederation, the League and the Terran Hegemony, led by Aleksandr Kerensky—acting as regent for the infant Amanda Cameron (his son, Nicholas Kerensky, will marry Cameron and begin the line of House Kerensky).

Internecine warfare continues for several centuries, until a mysterious mercenary unit calling themselves Mako’s Dragoons appears at the edge of the periphery. They swiftly earn a reputation for themselves for unmatched ferocity, brutality and effectiveness. Little do the six great Houses realize they herald the return of a foe though long since dead.

Result: Without ComStar’s pernicious influence, science & technology have remained relatively intact, though the increased tempo of warfare among the six Great Houses has still reduced the infrastructure of all six to ruins. Pulse lasers, LBX autocannon, ferro-fibrous armor, XL engines and other technologies are still in widespread use, though they have not advanced appreciably since the days of the Star League.

The Terran Hegemony, led by Ulric Kerensky, is the smallest but most advanced, with the most cohesive and best-trained military, led by the most fearsome warrior in the Inner Sphere, Natasha Kerensky. The Hegemony’s small size and central location mean they are frequently the object of attacks, but also mean they can quickly move reserves to trouble spots, allowing their highly-professional armies to crush any invader.

The Federated Suns, led by First Prince Ian Davion, is large and warlike, bringing it frequently into conflict with its neighbors. The prince’s ambitious younger brother, Hanse Davion, grows restless under his brother’s rule, and has secretly begun to meet with Capellan emissaries.

The Draconis Combine, led by Sei-i Taishogun Takashi Kurita, is poor yet its entire population is essentially militarized, and the fanaticism of its troops is legendary. Following the First Succession wars, the Coordinators shucked off that title and now rule as absolute warlords: Shogun. Ever since the death of Jinjiro Kurita in an invasion of the Hegemony, the two realms have been sworn enemies.

In the Lyran Commonwealth, Alessandro Steiner sits uneasily on the Archon’s throne. Katrina Steiner is still missing, presumed lost in the periphery. Rumors that Alessandro caused her disappearance are rife, and Frederick Steiner has become a focal point for opposition to Alessandro’s weak and ineffectual rule.

In the Free Worlds League, Anton Marik is basking in triumph after using Mako’s Dragoons to overthrow his brother, Janos. Anton is now wed to Candace Liao, and busy stamping out opposition to his rule, aided by the Dragoons. Andurien is in open revolt over the Liao alliance, while Oriente teeters on the brink. Meanwhile, Janos’ sons Duggan, Thomas and Duncan Marik have found refuge in the Commonwealth, Hegemony and Federated Suns, respectively, and plot their return.

Finally, the Capellan Confederation of Max Liao has found new strength thanks to its alliance with Anton Marik. Max Liao recently issued a peace proclamation, offering alliance with the other great houses, but this has generally been ignored—only young Hanse Davion has shown interest, in exchange for Romano Liao’s hand in marriage…

Meanwhile, from beyond the periphery, a great host is approaching, like the Mongol Hordes of medieval Terra, ready to sweep down on the divided Inner Sphere.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 25 May 2018, 08:49:53
A RWR version of the Clans? Interesting.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 25 May 2018, 13:27:35
#538
While I'm on this...'nother weird idea I had. Sort of a Mirror Universe idea.
Finally, the Capellan Confederation of Max Liao has found new strength thanks to its alliance with Anton Marik. Max Liao recently issued a peace proclamation, offering alliance with the other great houses, but this has generally been ignored—only young Hanse Davion has shown interest, in exchange for Romano Liao’s hand in marriage…

Meanwhile, from beyond the periphery, a great host is approaching, like the Mongol Hordes of medieval Terra, ready to sweep down on the divided Inner Sphere.

Hanse and Romano...  interesting so we will get Sun Tzu without the rumors... but will she go down the insane rabbit hole she did canon
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 25 May 2018, 15:53:30
Hanse and Romano...  interesting so we will get Sun Tzu without the rumors... but will she go down the insane rabbit hole she did canon

i think she started in the insane rabbit hole but still managed to rebuild the CCAF and hold onto the Chancellorship so good raw material

She might drive Hanse crazy though,

Crazy like a Fox...

Yeah I just did that deal with it Forumites
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 25 May 2018, 18:12:37
i think she started in the insane rabbit hole but still managed to rebuild the CCAF and hold onto the Chancellorship so good raw material

She might drive Hanse crazy though,

Crazy like a Fox...

Yeah I just did that deal with it Forumites
and just think how motivated that could make Hanse, to stay on the offensive to stay away from home!!!  Con Fed to rule the IS
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 26 May 2018, 10:30:57
It's an interesting idea, but in what conceivable universe does Mako Dragoons not scream 'Rim Worlds Scouts' to literally everyone? Even Wolf's Dragoons wasn't quite that blatant, and that's after penalizing them for not thinking about Wolverine survivors.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 26 May 2018, 12:32:47
It is an interesting idea certainly about an Amaris Exodus but I think an Expeditionary Force would be hot on their tails in any event seeking revenge for all the carnage they caused.

Still the SLDF would have faced a much more difficult task without the base worlds of the Rim Worlds Republic from which to stage.   
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 27 May 2018, 00:56:25
#539

In the 31st Century there is a conspiracy. Like any conspiracy there are those fully in the know who are immersed in the matter; there are those who interact with those not in the know and keep the secret; there are those who might one day be brought into the conspiracy and might be given a easily deniable fact or two to see how they handle it; and finally there are the ignorant who are being carefully kept the truth they couldn't cope with.

The proportion of these four groups in the Clan Worlds is roughly 90%, 9%, 0.9% and 0.1%.

The 90% are those who live on the three hundred odd colonies founded without the knowledge of the warrior Caste. The 9% are the civilians who live in Clan Enclaves and keep the warriors from discovering these facts. The 0.9% are warrior caste drop-outs who either became civilians or fill the policing sub-caste - although a few Snow Raven, Diamond Shark and Burrock warriors know there's something more out there and have been bribed with what amounts to a few beads not to investigate further.

And then there are the 0.1% - the Bloodname houses, freeborn warriors descended from drop-outs who couldn't hack it in a 'real' society and went back. With vanishingly few exceptions they don't navigate their jumpships or direct HPG communications so it's laughably easy to hide an interstellar community from them. For two hundred years the rest of the population have allowed them to glory in the ownership of the 'pew-pew' buttons and quietly eased themselves away from the maniacs with the BattleMechs.

There have been the occasional individuals who came close to discovering these matters but equipment malfunctions or leaked rumours on the ChatterWeb have eliminated most of those threats without much fuss. It's been a while since it was necessary - the Scientists running the Iron Wombs aren't exactly breeding the warriors for intelligence and it's been a century and a half since any of the Bloodnamed Warriors knew enough about genetics to figure that out.

Numbers within the so-called 'Clan' enclaves are on the decline now and within a few generations it should be possible move the ritualised conflicts down to a less damaging level. After all, if a warrior's inside a 'Mech or suit of battle armour, how hard will it be to convince them they're in battle and not just a very good simulation.

The one thing that mustn't happen though, is for the Warrior Caste to encounter any outsiders who don't play by the same rules. They're not quite at the point where they might not be able to adapt. The last thing that anyone needs is for them to start developing an intelligence service... or any intelligence for that matter.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 May 2018, 18:29:48
Hmm...basically it's a conspiracy that's pretty much dumbing down the warrior caste. That sound about right?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 27 May 2018, 20:19:22
and just think how motivated that could make Hanse, to stay on the offensive to stay away from home!!!  Con Fed to rule the IS
Yes I doubt any of us would want to come home to that sort of crazy.  No, let my trusted advisor handle domestic stuff, we need to reach further into enemy territory, take more systems!  Of course I have to be near the front, order decision loops get too long to the capitol!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 27 May 2018, 22:26:47
Yes I doubt any of us would want to come home to that sort of crazy.  No, let my trusted advisor handle domestic stuff, we need to reach further into enemy territory, take more systems!  Of course I have to be near the front, order decision loops get too long to the capitol!

Although you know, she was an accomplished micro-gravity acrobat.  Maybe not to far
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 28 May 2018, 09:13:24
Hmm...basically it's a conspiracy that's pretty much dumbing down the warrior caste. That sound about right?

The Great Scientist Caste Conspiracy, just infinitely less stupid and doomed to fail.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 06 June 2018, 00:28:57
We've been getting a lot of Inner Sphere mashup tribbles, so this one won't be too original.  I hope to give this idea a more thorough treatment some day, which might flesh out some additional quirks in the setting.  But still, for what it's worth, here's...

#540


Even in already-established Battletech canon, Katrina Steiner wasn't the first Archon of the Lyran Commonwealth to send out a general peace proposal.  In late 2864, a newly-ascendant Elizabeth Steiner also broached the subject of a wind-down to the Succession Wars. 

The hard-charging Captain General Gerald Marik had just died in 2861, and with him died his implacable determination to carry on the Second Succession War until his Free Worlds League had reclaimed every world it had lost while under ComStar Interdiction in the 2830's.  It was none-too-soon.  Not only had the FWL lost nearly a score of worlds in the Second Succession War (and didn’t have any real chance of retaking them in the immediate future), but the industrial base of the nation was shot through; heavily damaged by objective raids and the unseen assassins of ComStar’s Operation Holy Shroud.   The nation was in no fit state to continue fighting, and everyone but Gerald knew it.

Fortunately his replacement, his sister Philippa, did recognize the true nature of the situation.  Despite having been a fairly successful military commander in her own right, she now advocated for peace, desperate for the Free Worlds League to get some breathing space to rest, rebuild, and try to at least make good in part its devastating losses.  Early correspondence between Philippa and Elizabeth had been positive - both had remarked privately that the other seemed a nice enough sort - and a general detente seemed to be in the offing.  Moreover, both sides hoped to build on this foundation, leading to the first real bouts of optimism seen in either capital for years. And so, after an initial exchange of envoys, Philippa Marik dispatched her charming son James, only 6 years Elizabeth's senior, to personally lead a negotiation team heading to Tharkad to see if the young Archon’s desire for peace was any more than wishful thinking.

In canon, Philippa sent James with instructions to aim for the stars.  Rather than simply negotiating a bi-lateral treaty between the Lyrans and Free Worlds League, the Captain General ordered her diplomats to press Elizabeth.   Philippa wanted a general conference of the powers to negotiate a formal end to the Second Succession War, and possibly reach some sort of sustainable modus vivendi between the five great Houses of the Inner Sphere.  Elizabeth, whether out of shared idealism, naivete, or desperation, agreed, and thus was born the ill-fated New Earth conference of 2865.

The conference was a disaster from the get-go.  The Kurita delegation felt insulted by the hotel rooms they had been allocated, and still acted surly even after the Marik delegation offered to swap lodgings.  The representatives from the Cappellan Confederation refused to back down from the demand that peace would only be possible if they were granted the immediate return of all worlds conquered from the Confederation by any other power since the fall of the Star League.  The Kuritans smugly chimed in to say, not that it would have any practical relevance in relation to the Cappellan demand, but they were only observers and didn’t have the authority to commit the Draconis Combine to any action at all.  The final straw on the camel’s back was First Prince Luther Davion, attending the conference in person, who only wanted to talk about how everyone else should obviously be listening to him…after all, he was First Lord of the Star League.

At least the Marik and Steiner delegations got to blow off a little steam by framing the smug Kurita representative for espionage and getting him picked up by Lyran Intelligence.

That’s where things ended in canon; a broken-down peace conference, both Elizabeth Steiner and Philippa Marik deeply disappointed, and the Free World’s League and Lyran Commonwealth doomed to fight another two destructive Succession Wars.  So badly did things go awry, that only four years after the breakdown of the New Earth talks, Philippa Marik ordered an assassination attempt against the Archon; one which very nearly succeeded (it was only stopped by the ever-present Griffin Battlemechs flanking the throne).  No reason is ever given for such a rapid decay in personal relations between Philippa and Elizabeth, and the supposed real politik concern behind the attempt - courting the Draconis Combine, still smarting after the Snow Fox affair - is not given any greater detail in any of the sourcebooks that I have been able to find.   

But what if it didn’t end that way

In canon, the good feeling and rapprochement between the two female leaders somehow disintegrated so badly that three years after they both were calling for Sphere-wide peace and at least partial disarmament, Philippa Marik was launching surprise attacks into the Isle of Skye and sponsoring assassination attempts against Elizabeth Steiner in order to win the favor of the Draconis Combine, of all people.  Not to question the wisdom of the sainted Herb, but this reeks of a missed opportunity.

Even though the general peace conference failed to hash out germs, there was no reason why the FWL and LyrCom shouldn’t have, at the least, signed a bilateral agreement, just as they had at the close of the First Succession War with the Bella Accords in 2821. 
Moreover, the incentives were positively aligned for such a deal to actually have a fair bit of staying power.  Both nations were at their wits’ end, desperate to stop pouring resources into crumbling militaries, and spend some time regrouping and restoring their shattered economies.  In both cases, large political forces were baying for demobilization and a peace dividend; after the tyrannies and torture chambers of Cruel Claudius Steiner’s tenure in office and then the power-vacuum of Elizabeth’s regency, the Lyran Estates General was feeling its oats and (unusually for that august body) actually wielding significant influence and power.  In the Free Worlds League, factions in parliament besieged the Captain General with demands to roll back the federalization of provincial military units, or even step down and return power to the Parliamentary Executive Council.

While a deal between the two nations would certainly have encountered sticking points – the status of the worlds taken by the LyrCom during the late war, for example, and possible Marik reparations for the Lyran factories destroyed by Leaguer objective raids – a bright future was certainly possible; a possibility where, at the very least, the Marik/Steiner border is mostly demilitarized, leaving the LCAF free to whole-heartedly oppose the swift and savage Draconis Combine offensives that kicked off the Third Succession War, and the FWLM to focus on battering down the Liaoist threat to the galactic “east.”  Had the goodwill between the two rulers taken any deeper root in the two nations, there was much more to gain. 

We need not even imagine an immediate Steiner/Marik Federated Commonwealth avant la lettre, with James Marik marrying the young Archon (though such an outcome might well have occurred; James Marik did canonically marry a Lyran member of the Estates General that he met on his diplomatic trip to Tharkad, which caused no small scandal when he eventually succeeded his mother to the Captain-Generalcy).  At the very least, trying to figure out how to create a portmanteau of Archon Captain-General would be a nightmare.  Archon-General?  Captarchon?  Yuck.

It is merely enough to imagine the two largest economies of the Successor States forming a single free trade zone, with the capital-heavy Lyrans rushing to speculate in cash-poor but resource-, market-share, and know-how rich FWL industries.  Of the Lestrades and Kelswas finally getting to scheme and plot with their true kinsmen, the Halases and Humphreys.  Of the Lyrans not being so achingly dependant on Hesperus for their miltech, and the Mariks actually having resources.  Culturally, the match is a good one; both nations are full of fierce regionalisms, are quite diverse, are politically fairly decentralized, and generally prefer making money to military conquest.  They even complement each other’s weaknesses; though LOKI can be overzealous and brutal, SAFE can use all the help it can get.  And FWLM officers have been used to making mountains out of molehills, and pulling shining victories out on a shoe-string.  Imagine what they might do when allowed to train under less-pinched fiscal constraints!  I also imagine Trace Coburn salivating at a hypothetical aerosquadron where Lyran Seydlitz ran interference for Marik Stingers and Reivers, with Chippewas relegated to dedicated fire-support.

Even an outright merger between the two nations would produce interesting (but not munchy) results.  The awkwardly-named Free Commonwealth would be an economic and technological titan, but rife with factionalism and grift, militarily defensive and unimaginative (though with aggressive frontier march lords in Tamar and Oriente liable to hare off on wild schemes), and full of enough corporate espionage (and even minor inter-provincial warfare) to keep legions of Shadowrun fans in campaign material for decades.  The political leadership would be, by turns, hilariously inept and hard-headedly realistic, but with that splash of naive idealism that grows from idle prosperity.  A true burgher nation.

Besides, just imagine the sheer joy of an alternate Concord of Kapteyn with Takashi Kurita, Maximilian Liao, and *gulp* Hanse Davion?!?  :D :D :D

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 June 2018, 02:07:13
The idea of a FWL/LC merger has been discussed a bit recently and someone one pointed out that the easiest way to unite them politically would be to admit the LC to the FWL as a province. Because the seats in Parliament are allocated based on tax revenue not population, the LC would have a massive vote share, which would probably motivate the rest of Parliament to agree to some form of constitutional reforms, potentially getting rid of the Camlann precedent and some of the other factors that have limited the FWL historically, in exchange for a merger that doesn't let the Lyran voting bloc (if it could be held together) push through basically whatever they want.

If you want to merge the names then Free Worlds Commonwealth would be a possibility, with a Steiner-Marik who is both Archon of the Lyran province and Captain-General, just as the Mariks are both Captain-Generals and rulers of the Marik Commonwealth. In fact the Marik Commonwealth might merge into the Lyran's getting representation in their Estates General, thus being what House Marik is giving up in exchange for the Steiners subordinating themselves to the FWL as the core of the new government.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 07 June 2018, 19:59:37
So you're imagining the Estates General becomes the provincial government for the new "Lyran Archonate" province of the Free Worlds?  Or some sort of dual-sovereignty?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 08 June 2018, 02:14:40
Well this is just my thinking, but assuming a Marik-Steiner marriage, this would lead to a Marik-Steiner who was ruler of:

The Estates-General would remain an advisory body for the Archon, that being the title of the ruler of the Lyran Commonwealth.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Smegish on 08 June 2018, 03:59:50
#541

Stefan Amaris launches his coup, and all goes to plan initially, except that some members of the SLDF in Unity City (Black Watch, Blackhearts, SLDF reservists, take your pick) managed to get into the palace and before being massacred by his bodyguards, fatally wound The Usurper.

Now RWR forces have still done a fairly complete job of taking over the Hegemony, and all his family and advisors still live, but with the man himself dead and an unimaginably pissed off SLDF likely to come kick their teeth in, what is the plan now?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 08 June 2018, 05:04:59
Hold the remaining Camerons for ransom and then get out of dodge  ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: PeacMaker03 on 08 June 2018, 11:10:21
   Amaris heir marries Cameron heir, and forces a spawn from her, RWR forces just need to hold out for the spawn to be born to completely muddle the situation. RWR's propaganda machine is still going, Kerensky revolt was because he found out about the "marriage" of Amaris and Cameron. Stray Voltage propaganda...er Public relations of the Star League fighting for oppressors against rightful Rulers of the SL.
    Ironic that even in regular timeline there was a Cameron heir,  the one that married Vincent Davion, could spin that to muddy waters even more.

http://www.sarna.net/wiki/House_Cameron_Family_Tree
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 26 June 2018, 14:42:43
Some how to explain where all those old mechs and tanks and war machine went during the cut down after the end of the word of blank rampage there was somehow something about they vanished across the IS and clan space and now one knew what happened to all that great combat gear....hee is what happened to it and the fall out in a different world when all kinds of stuff fell into kids hands.....

"I chose you 1A1 Changer!" shouted some kid as he held up a red and white ball to relase a beam of light and a 10 meter tall battle mech come into being.

"Ha, my warrior copter will beat you worthless mech punk and I will chose to salvage nothing from it even."

Pokeman with Battletech war machines. no one is sure how they pilot themselves or even get balanced to fight a packrat tank VS a Dire wolf, but it does....though they are hard on the Terran around them though.

This short and weird idea come the other day and just had to post this just weird idea out there. I know there could be more detail to it, but just the though is what I wanted to share. If you wish to expand and run with idea, feel free to share and I want to see how weird you guys can get.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Starfox1701 on 01 July 2018, 00:16:48
Ok here's one for y'all. What if when the Ulahans made their surprise attack on Sian to get Justin Allard out they accidentally killed Max, Romano, and Tean Shen? Candice surrenders the rest of the Confederation to Morgan ending the war.Then the Allard-Liaos become the lords of the newly minted St Ives March. It is 3030 and the 4th war is over. What will Comstar do now that the Federated Commonwealth is all but unstoppable?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 01 July 2018, 00:45:25
The forces that would become the Word of Blake saw the 2nd Star League as the culmination of Blake's vision.  (Or at least some of the more idealistic did)  What if instead of throwing a fit when the Federated Suns and Lyran Alliance withdrew after their civil war, they recognized the likely consequences and took action before it was too late?

Proto-Blakist elements in ROM splash Katrina's and Ryan Steiner's incriminating emails across every front page in the Federated Commonwealth within a week of Melissa's assassination and a very different civil war erupts.  A much more one sided one of Donegal, Coventry, and the Suns under Yvonne and Peter Steiner-Davion against rebellious elements in Skye. 

There will, of course, be consequences.  Focht learns he doesn't have as firm of control as he thought.  Victor owes the Blakists.  The BDS goes underground and stops using HPGs for fear of the same happening to them if they rock the boat.  At the moment the Star League is still focused on the Clans, but the Bulls can see a Second Reunification War on the horizon...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 02 July 2018, 00:46:34
These ideas came up in another discussion where I provided two AUs as examples. There seems to have been enough approval to post them here.

#546

Suppose that Andery Kerensky did not die on Eden during Operation Klondike. In order to defuse the rivalry between Clan Wolf and Clan Jade Falcon over who would receive the Kerensky bloodline, Andery suggests that he joins the Jade Falcons and Nicholas joins the Wolves as intended. In the short term this reduces the rivalry but in the long term the two Bloodhouses emerge as rivals. After Nicholas' death Andery is elected as ilKhan (rather than Jerome Winson) and this unintentionally begins a whipsaw effect of the Clans always electing a Kerensky as the ilKhan, alternating between the two bloodhouses and as the differences mount, a schism develops between the two Clans and their respective allies. Once the Crusader issue arises, it becomes a fighting point between the two factions and leads to a short but savage war between the Clans over the issue - a war that wrecks several Clans to the point of absorption.


#547

Janos became Captain General in 2991 and largely refrained from serious military action so the FWL could recover and also prepared for celebrations of the end of the millennium. As a young and idealistic ruler, possibly he issued something like Katrina Steiner's Peace Proposal. At the other side of that, there's Andrew Davion, who knows he doesn't have much time left and will have to entrust the Suns to his young sons and his son-in-law Michael - who is both ambitious and rabidly anti-Capellan (at least officially) - so while an outright peace proposal isn't feasible he's open to an alliance that could give his sons at least one secure flank. Also, Janos' first daughter Theresa is almost exactly the age of Hanse Davion. Janos was certainly interested in arranging politically useful marriages for his children so possibly the millennial celebrations are held by both states and culminate in the marriage of Hanse Davion to Therese Marik, possibly followed by a dramatic war declaration by the father of the bride and the elder brother of the groom: "In honour of this marriage we give the happy couple a princely prize: the Capellan Confederation."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Iron Grenadier on 02 July 2018, 02:04:56
#548 - Probably been done before but this is something I'm working on for a new campaign at some point.

In 3013 Hanse Davion becomes First Prince, and Michael Hasek became Duke of New Syrtis/Field Marshall of Capellan March. Both men don't like each other, and Hanse has Michael placed under surveillance.

As a result of this, proof of Hasek dealing with House Liao is uncovered, along with proof that Liao is working with Anton Marik against Janos Marik, the ruler of the Free Worlds League. This information is shared with Janos, and both realms get rid of the family black sheep. Overall this fosters a lot of goodwill between the FedSun and FWL.

Fast forward to 3020 and Katrina Steiner sends out her "Peace Proposal" to the Inner Sphere. Hanse sees this and tells Janos he's got an idea to get rid of the Capellan Confederation once and for all....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 02 July 2018, 18:31:10
#548 - Probably been done before but this is something I'm working on for a new campaign at some point.

In 3013 Hanse Davion becomes First Prince, and Michael Hasek became Duke of New Syrtis/Field Marshall of Capellan March. Both men don't like each other, and Hanse has Michael placed under surveillance.

As a result of this, proof of Hasek dealing with House Liao is uncovered, along with proof that Liao is working with Anton Marik against Janos Marik, the ruler of the Free Worlds League. This information is shared with Janos, and both realms get rid of the family black sheep. Overall this fosters a lot of goodwill between the FedSun and FWL.

Fast forward to 3020 and Katrina Steiner sends out her "Peace Proposal" to the Inner Sphere. Hanse sees this and tells Janos he's got an idea to get rid of the Capellan Confederation once and for all....
so good, it could lead to something which would be very good
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 07 July 2018, 17:48:59
So two ideas that sees a firm alliance between the FWL and FS. Before their own versions of the FedCom Civil War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Iron Grenadier on 08 July 2018, 07:05:45
So two ideas that sees a firm alliance between the FWL and FS. Before their own versions of the FedCom Civil War.


Well my basic working idea right now is much simpler military alliance between them to eliminate the Capellans, followed by a non-aggression pact as each will then have a long shared border. No weddings or unification of the realms.

Then I have a Liao family member getting wind of the impending alliance and attack, becoming a "doomsday prepper" and making arrangements to survive.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: BlackLiger on 13 July 2018, 17:47:35
549:
The year is 3050. Northern edge of the inner sphere. Pyramidal shaped warships approach a number of worlds, landing troops armed with man portable ppcs. Their rulers demand that humanity now down before the Gods, and the Kuritans, Steiners and Free Rassalhauge all mobilise to defend against the invaders.

Meanwhile, in the Pentagon worlds, il Khan Leo Showers finishes his bargain with the free Jaffa rebellion... the galaxy will not be the same...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 20 July 2018, 20:00:24
549:
The year is 3050. Northern edge of the inner sphere. Pyramidal shaped warships approach a number of worlds, landing troops armed with man portable ppcs. Their rulers demand that humanity now down before the Gods, and the Kuritans, Steiners and Free Rassalhauge all mobilise to defend against the invaders.

Meanwhile, in the Pentagon worlds, il Khan Leo Showers finishes his bargain with the free Jaffa rebellion... the galaxy will not be the same...
Why?
Why give the Clans a front row seat at the chance to get Goa'uld salvage?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: BlackLiger on 21 July 2018, 04:57:31
Warrior cultures. The Jaffa and the clans think relatively alike there
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 23 July 2018, 00:06:59
#550

At the Outreach conference, the heirs of the various Successor States are brought together for ‘special training’. And when they’re interacting for the first time ... Sun Tzu is the rational one who encourages everyone to work together. It seems he’s completely sane, realises his mother isn’t, and really wants the Clans stopped, preferably before they reach Capellan space. “Because there’s literally no evidence that they won’t attack us when they’re finished with your nations. Call it enlightened self interest ...”

Oh, and he facepalms when his mother embarrasses the Confederation during the conference by acting insane (because she is) ... honestly, he wishes she’d act more like Aunt Candace ...


Basically, Sun Tzu is not only sane and rational, but actually closer in temperament to his cousin Kai ... without his antagonism during and after their first meeting, he becomes the mortar that links the heirs together ... and their parents look on in a mixture of amazement and horror as the next generation of Successor Lords get along and become friends and comrades ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 31 July 2018, 06:26:11
#550

At the Outreach conference, the heirs of the various Successor States are brought together for ‘special training’. And when they’re interacting for the first time ... Sun Tzu is the rational one who encourages everyone to work together. It seems he’s completely sane, realises his mother isn’t, and really wants the Clans stopped, preferably before they reach Capellan space. “Because there’s literally no evidence that they won’t attack us when they’re finished with your nations. Call it enlightened self interest ...”

Oh, and he facepalms when his mother embarrasses the Confederation during the conference by acting insane (because she is) ... honestly, he wishes she’d act more like Aunt Candace ...


Basically, Sun Tzu is not only sane and rational, but actually closer in temperament to his cousin Kai ... without his antagonism during and after their first meeting, he becomes the mortar that links the heirs together ... and their parents look on in a mixture of amazement and horror as the next generation of Successor Lords get along and become friends and comrades ...
He ****** them all over anyway years down the line when they elect him First Lord.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 31 July 2018, 10:20:00
He ****** them all over anyway years down the line when they elect him First Lord.
... why? If he’s genuinely a good guy who gets along well with the others, what reason does he have to turn on them? Hell, playing nice could lead to reunification with St Ives, and negotiate return of many worlds lost to previous generations ...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: al103 on 02 August 2018, 16:00:01
... why? If he’s genuinely a good guy who gets along well with the others, what reason does he have to turn on them? Hell, playing nice could lead to reunification with St Ives, and negotiate return of many worlds lost to previous generations ...
Even based on self-interest alone if he manages to get elected as First Lord he would joyfully try to manage things to stay First Lord in perpetuity.

Not to mention if Sun-Tzu/Isis and Victor/Omi he have all chances to have grandson with legal claim on everything in the far future.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 16 August 2018, 00:33:55
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From: Sylvester Irwin Cameron
To: Marina Akkayev-Cameron

Distant cousin, you barely know me, but as you follow your duty to suppress the Taurian uprising I must offer a warning.  Some months ago I had a dream.  I dreamed it was the early twenty-first century, but it wasn't our early twenty-first century.  There was no second Cold War.  Crippen Station never existed.  Australia never declared neutrality.  No Western Alliance.  No interplanetary space travel.  The waking world was the background for a miniature wargame.  Absurd, yes?  A time of peace makes a poor wargame.  And that peace is unraveling right now just like in the game's backstory.  Stefan Amaris is about to murder Richard and all his family and declare himself emperor.  You're the only one to escape other than the Cameron-Davions and they're outside the succession.  I don't expect you to believe me, but heed this: If Terra falls you must assume you are the last Cameron.  Don't let yourself be risked.  Without a Cameron to claim the Director Generalship and First Lordship the council will tear civilization apart over a throne none of them can seize.  In the dream you didn't make it to the end of the Civil War, though I don't know when or how you died.  Taking some risk you're too politically indispensable to take no doubt. 

If General Kerensky is willing to listen to dreams tell him that Amaris is forced to destroy the SDS controls and the people who know how to restore control die defying him.  There's a period of vulnerability that closes when the General moves on the Rim Worlds Republic first.  I can't remember anything else that might be useful. 

I'll try to be out of Amaris's reach when I think the massacre happens, but I don't have much hope and even if I do I won't have the political capital that comes with an admiral's streamer.  Please keep yourself safe for the sake of all humanity.

I'm afraid I don't feel myself competent to actually write this SI.  I'm not even entirely sure what direction I'd want to take it.  S. I. Cameron could subvert the SI genre by dying in the throneroom massacre with all the other Camerons and it could be a story about what Marina does with the warning, or it could be the first failed butterfly a more traditional SI who escapes Amaris's purge through some suitably dramatic mechanism.  Possibly by blowing off Richard's Christmas Party to visit the SLS Dreadnought museum and hoping I didn't remember wrong and the massacre was on New Years. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: willis on 16 August 2018, 18:23:02
TRIBBLE# 551

I am overjoyed at discovering this thread, and my addition to the what-ifs:

The Star League Civil War between Amaris and the SLDF occurs as it does in cannon, and as in cannon the House Lords demand Aleksandr Kerensky to disperse the troops as it happened in cannon, and instead of going on the exodus to the cannon homeworlds, he goes on the route through the DC and into the periphery but changes course to the Outer Colonies region instead..and there is an alliance between the SLDF in exile and the Department of Communications, which changes into "ComStar", and the "religion" of the Blessed Blake is just a deception devised by both Kerensky and Blake. ComStar is the intelligence gathering organization to watch and observe the Inner Sphere for the SLDF, for when the time comes to return and restore the League or to announce their return when civilization has failed.  During the long centuries of the succession wars, two camps of thought developed, one is the Warden view, to watch and provide covert assistance to select groups without that groups knowledge, like "developing new technologies" to aid in humanitarian efforts, and keeping any one group from gaining the upper hand, then you have the Crusader view, those that want to unite the Inner Sphere by force under a restored Star League without any of the House Lords.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 August 2018, 17:19:14
Tribble #552

In order to work past the various regional loyalties and prejudices, when the Wolf Dragoons take on the training of the various royal Heirs during the Outreach Conference in 3051 they propose drastic measures: dosing each student with a drug that will temporarily suppress their memories of their identities. For the sake of argument assume this is something the Clans have to deal with bondsmen who have trouble adapting to a new Clan. As long as it's not over-used it's perfectly safe and there's a counter-agent that will neutralise it within 24 hours if for some reason its' preferable not to let it wear off naturally. While the Successor Lords are hesitant, the debacle with the fake bomb persuades them that this is necessary. A few other not originally participating are included to muddy the waters in case the students figure it out.

So eight men and six women ranging in age from their teens to their thirties wake up with no idea who they are. They are informed they are a mix of royal heirs and promising young soldiers who are being trained together. Video recordings, suitably anonymised, show that they agreed to this.

The drugs may suppress identities but not character-traits or skills. Some clearly have talent and existing skills in combat, others are willing to learn or to support in other ways. And some are not.

Inevitably they do speculate amongst themselves as to who the royals are. Their theories are that 2 (decent fighter and solid leader) and 9 (self-centred bitch) are from the same royal family given slight resemblence, and that 5 (youngest and least skilled) is probably from another royal family. Similarly 13 has no significant combat training but does seem to be good at working with people, so she's a likely candidate. 11 would be rated similarly but she's clearly related to 10 who's so hyper aggressive they just can't believe she'd have been allowed to develop that behaviour.

6 and 7 are probably older aides or bodyguards they think, with 1 likely to develop into a similar role since he's very reliable as back-up but doesn't take the lead much. 3 and 14 are pretty much the two ace combatants and commanders, with 4 and 8 seeming to be good strategists but not so skilled as warriors so they could go either way. Best guess on 12 is that she's some sort of assassin/bodyguard because she's got lethal instincts.

The participants are:
1 Victor Steiner-Davion, 2 Galen Cox, 3 Kai Allard-Liao, 4 Sun-Tzu Liao, 5 Ragnar Magnusson, 6 Hohiro Kurita, 7 Shin Yodama, 8 Brian Cameron, 9 Katherine Steiner-Davion, 10 Cassandra Allard-Liao, 11 Kuan-Yin Allard-Liao, 12 Omi Kurita, 13 Isis Marik & 14 Maeve Wolf

And then the drugs wear off (or the counter is applied) and they and their families have to assimilate what they've learned about the trainees.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 25 August 2018, 19:21:24
dude
this needs development
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 25 August 2018, 21:16:37
I laughed myself sick reading this tribble. Well done in braking people's minds and egos down. Hopefully this would be a wake up call for most involved. I would love to read a story developing the concept.  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: novastorm76 on 26 August 2018, 10:13:51
Brian Cameron? Cant remember him.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Iron Grenadier on 26 August 2018, 10:47:31
Brian Cameron? Cant remember him.

Wolf's Dragoons communications officer, aide to Jaime Wolf and in universe author of the Wolf Pack novel.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: novastorm76 on 26 August 2018, 10:54:38
Thank you. If I hear Cameron I automatically think "House Cameron" of Terra.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: smdvogrin on 27 August 2018, 12:39:10
Tribble #552

Inevitably they do speculate amongst themselves as to who the royals are. Their theories are that 2 (decent fighter and solid leader) and 9 (self-centred bitch) are from the same royal family given slight resemblence, and that 5 (youngest and least skilled) is probably from another royal family. Similarly 13 has no significant combat training but does seem to be good at working with people, so she's a likely candidate. 11 would be rated similarly but she's clearly related to 10 who's so hyper aggressive they just can't believe she'd have been allowed to develop that behaviour.

6 and 7 are probably older aides or bodyguards they think, with 1 likely to develop into a similar role since he's very reliable as back-up but doesn't take the lead much. 3 and 14 are pretty much the two ace combatants and commanders, with 4 and 8 seeming to be good strategists but not so skilled as warriors so they could go either way. Best guess on 12 is that she's some sort of assassin/bodyguard because she's got lethal instincts.

The participants are:
1 Victor Steiner-Davion, 2 Galen Cox, 3 Kai Allard-Liao, 4 Sun-Tzu Liao, 5 Ragnar Magnusson, 6 Hohiro Kurita, 7 Shin Yodama, 8 Brian Cameron, 9 Katherine Steiner-Davion, 10 Cassandra Allard-Liao, 11 Kuan-Yin Allard-Liao, 12 Omi Kurita, 13 Isis Marik & 14 Maeve Wolf

And then the drugs wear off (or the counter is applied) and they and their families have to assimilate what they've learned about the trainees.

I want to see this so bad.  I called Victor correctly, although I got Katherine wrong...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: namar13766 on 30 August 2018, 16:26:38
553: on April 1, 3020, The Periphery suddenly goes dark. When they re-establish contact, the Great Houses are understandably confused. Who are the Rim Federation, Outworlds Pact, and Magistracy of Taurus?

553b: As above, but on Grey Monday.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 31 August 2018, 02:25:22
Well, Rim Federation is gonna take a fair chunk of Lyrans with em if I am remembering map boundries...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: namar13766 on 11 September 2018, 18:01:23
554: Swap the dates of creation of the QuadVee and the Land-Air Mech.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 13 September 2018, 07:10:17
555: Strana Mechty, April 24, 3060. Victor has just killed Osis, and is about to deliver his speech, when the assembled Khans and guards all fall to their knees before him, declaring him Ilkhan.


*may be entirely too fond of The Chronicles of Riddick*


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 13 September 2018, 21:28:04
 ;D Ok, I love this. Victor would be like "Wut?" And the rest of the Clans would be like "You got rid of the Smoked Fukkers. Three cheers for the new Ilkhan!" Cue everybody else wondering just what just happened.  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 September 2018, 00:06:39
"Only Nicholas Kerensky could destroy a Clan. As you have destroyed a Clan, you must be Nicholas Kerensky (reborn)! Command us!"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 15 September 2018, 21:50:51
"Will you lead us to conquer Terra now?"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 16 September 2018, 02:19:41
Tribble 556

During the 'Death Commando' attack on NAIS, First Prince Hanse Davion takes to his 'Mech and smashes several much lighter mechs like a boss... but also gets swarmed over and takes a cockpit hit. In the aftermath it's found that he bled out while the defenders were mopping up.

Morgan Hasek-Davion returns triumphant from Sian... and is more or less dragged onto a dropship and taken to New Avalon. Somewhere between this and being parked on the throne he manages to convince the government that like any prisoner he should be allowed a call. "Melissa, please tell me you're pregnant." "Yes, how did you guess?" "It was more hope. You're a widow, please come back for the funeral." "Wait, what? Morgan? Morgan?"

Having settled the whole 'interdiction thing' with ComStar (read: agreeing to Myndo's demands to let her garrison HPGs just so he could make that call), Morgan is now even more popular and is dragged up to the throne. Someone raises the crown above his head.

"IfanyonehasanygoodreasonthatMorganshouldnotbeFirstPrince..."

"I OBJECT!"

"Look, the First Prince can't object."

"I'm not the rightful heir!"

"But you're Hanse Davion's nearest male or female relative who's a war hero! You must be the heir!"

"Look, he got married just last year! Is it too much to believe that she's pregnant?"

"He hasn't met her since then. It's been way more than nine months!"

"There was a secret visit! I met her! Take these handcuffs off me! I refuse to be a Usurper!"

"Do you have any witnesses to this claim?"

"Ardan Sortek?"

"He's off on Tikonov."

"Kym Sorenson."

"She's your fiancee, of course she'd lie for you."

"Quintus Allard!"

"A spymaster and therefore by default untrustworthy."

"You... don't get how that works, do you. Uh... Kincaid Fessul!"

"Who?"

"He's a fisherman who Hanse befriended as a child!"

"I... have no prepared dismissal. I... suppose we have no choice but to let you off the chair for now. But don't go anywhere until we can dismiss this defense and crown you."

Fortunately for Morgan, Melissa and Ardan rush back via the hard-worked command circuit and it's confirmed that Melissa is pregnant. Once Victor is born and it's confirmed he's Hanse's child, a regency is needed. While Morgan would be a logical choice, being regent automatically excludes you from ruling yourself and he is the next in line and still quite young - plus he has obligations on New Syrtis and having a regent who is also ruling the Capellan March has... unfortunate history.

Melissa is too young and too foreign to be sole regent so a triumvirate is set up with Yvonne Davion and Xerxes Davion (one of the Argyle branch of House Davion and an experienced military officer) to advise her. Melissa sits on the throne and formally holds the crown above baby Victor's head and promises to guard it for the day he's old enough and ready to assume the power of First Prince.

So what does this change?

First, Victor has no siblings. Secondly, he'll mostly grow up on New Avalon, at least until Katrina dies of cancer.  After that point he and Melissa would have to relocate to Tharkad - with visits, certainly.

Would the War of 3039 even happen? It's possible but now Melissa is the one making that decision. And in fact all the decisions. Legally, the Federated Commonwealth doesn't exist until Victor inherits but in practical purposes Melissa Steiner-Davion is the first Archon-Prince in all but name.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 16 September 2018, 17:03:39
Fund it!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 16 September 2018, 17:07:24
Fund it!

Blah, Blah never really thoughr Victor or Melissa wee interesting characters in Canon.  Wrote nearly 300 pages saying as such
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 16 September 2018, 21:35:40
At least Victor will not be only a warrior Prince. And Melissa won't be murdered by her own child. I would read it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 16 September 2018, 23:58:19
At least Victor will not be only a warrior Prince. And Melissa won't be murdered by her own child. I would read it.

yep Hanse's biggest errors were in the ways the kids were raised, and I primarily blame him for the way these kids rarely saw each other, stashed away at school, on planets in different states, with the amount of traffic between them it wouldn't have been difficult to get them from Tharkad to New Avalon in 2-3 weeks and thats without even using a pony express type system
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 17 September 2018, 08:46:02
At least Victor will not be only a warrior Prince. And Melissa won't be murdered by her own child. I would read it.

Now if Victor did get rid of Melissa, now that's a good story.  Good old Bloodthirsty Davions and Treacherous Steiners, best of both worlds
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 27 September 2018, 14:21:11
Tribble 557

   Somewhere, sometime in the distant future, Above Terra aboard the Vengeful Spirit.

   He was so tired, so spent, so devastated. In mind, body and spirit, his favored son, now no more than a dark shadow of what used to be his physical frame was on the far bulkhead where his last, and desperate, rage filled psychic blast had destroyed him completely that not even his soul remained. The 4 had knows that he would not use his full power against him, had known and used it against him. For as he he had barely used half his power the 4 had instilled in his son such power as to be his equal in that state.
   "So much more to do, so much more to have been done, all.... wasted" Barely a whisper but enough that his loyal bodyguards could hear with there trans-human ears. "My lord?" the worry clear in his voice. He could also sens one of his other, Loyal, Sons nearing him but still far to late to help him. He knew he was done, all his plans for the future all but naught. He could hear the 4, there mocking laughter in the back of his mind and even in the Sea of Souls.
   This would not be the end of him, no, but he had seen this eventuality and knew that only the eternal throne awaited him now, with its power he may be able to come back from this, but only if placed into it soon. He could hear his Son now, his loud footfalls easy for all to hear. Yes, with him near he would come back. "NO! We will not allow this" He felt the Sea swell with power, "what more could the 4 do to him now? They are spent, just as he, from powering his son against him" he though. "Oh we can do plenty, though we cannot finish you we can still be rid of you and no more shale you bother us here!" With that he felt the gathering power, he felt the 4 use up the last of there combined power. He used what little he had left to defend himself but they did not attack, no, far to late he realized just what they had in mind as there was a bright flash and he felt himself, as if water to a drain, slipping to somewhere .... else. He could just hear his son "Father! Nooooooo.....". He could just make out his sons figure running twords him. What will they do now? He wondered, as his mind went blank and felt his soul and body slip away into the warp and beyond.

   Jumpship Alestro
   June 4, 3015
   New Earth

   You could hear the screams down the hall as well as the doctor steadying them all in the micro-gravity. Why could this woman just hold on for just 5 more days until they landed on Earth! The doctor thought. They had no time to travel back ground-side and so were making the jump to Earth to ASAP to get proper treatment and delivery but no, the baby would not wait and suddenly, just as they got the 5 30 minuet warning the contractions had started.
   "30 seconds to jump", the captains voice laced with a bit of worry for this passenger. Already he could feel the baby starting to come out despite his best wishes or the danger of giving birth mid jump, he would not abandon his duty's.
"just hold on, breath and push, breath and push" The woman gave me the death glare, "what do you think im doing!" in between clinched teeth and screams. Then just as the baby was about to take its first scream it happened, they jumped.
   Normally a jump is supposed to be instantaneous, usually passengers feel like something between eternity and moments for the jump to complete but now, it felt like it went on forever. They could all hear... something in the background, snickering, arguing, maniacal laughter, they did not know but just as they thought they would be able to tell what it was the jump ended and they reentered reality with a bang. He barely had time to blink when he was tossed into a wall, the whole ship seemed to lurch and they could hear the ship creaking as well as a distant boom, probably the battery's dying he thought.
  He looked down at his arms and the baby was, oddly, very quiet, just staring at him, with a very piercing gaze. He stared back for but a moment until he remembered about the mother, also oddly quiet but quickly found out why. She was against the far wall, head angled all the wrong way. When the ship lurched she had stayed where she was in the micro-gravity and the wall had slammed right into her head. At least it was quick the doctor thought solemnly. He looked down into his hands again at the baby protectively wondering what to do next.
  just as the doctor looked down at him the second time He was coming back to a weak cognition and stared at the giant that was holding him. No this was no giant.. I am... tiny! He realized. He dipped slightly into the Sea and found it calm beyond measure and as the realization hit him that he was not where he used to be He thought to himself. In both sadness at what had been left behind but also in hope in what could be. "I will miss you my Sons and friends, luck to you. For that matter, luck to me as well" and with that last thought he resigned himself to the betterment of mankind in this reality.

   This is my first real in depth though, can any of you figure out what or who I was talking about? Points for those who can and how do you think things would turn out this way instead? If you are still lost as to some of the characters just ask and I will answer.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 27 September 2018, 16:31:32
God Emperor of Mankind from Warhammer 40K reincarnating into Battletech?



Tribble 558

In 3000 Khan Nadia Winson of Clan Ghost Bear proposed to the Grand Council that the Clans should return to the Inner Sphere. The motion was opposed by Khan Kerlin Ward of Clan Wolf, who proposed as a compromise that a scout force be sent to the Inner Sphere to determine what they would face if they returned in force. After a great deal of debate, the motion was voted on and (inevitably) a Trial of Refusal was fought. The outcome was that the Clans would indeed return to the Inner Sphere. The Crusader faction had won.

The question of how they would return was the next to be decided. A leader was needed and Nadia Winson's prestige in securing the vote made her selection as ilKhan a simple choice. After discussing the issue with a number of her allies, she proposed a conservative and inclusive plan in keeping with the Ghost Bear's usual caution: all seventeen Clans were to prepare a force of around five galaxies divided between frontline and garrison forces in whatever proportion they found preferable. Each Clan must contribute at least five small warships and one large warship as escorts and to carry a reserve of supplies. If a Clan's forces made this difficult they were welcome to activate cached warships and each clan was to provide a pool of supplies and cached equipment into a general pool the ilKhan could disburse in order to support a Clan that had difficulty participating.

While several stronger clans felt this was unnecessarily generous, this tithe wasn't very heavy and the votes of the smaller Clans were valued even if their fighting power wasn't. The only serious dissent came from a hard core of Wardens, primarily the Clans Kerlin Ward was able to strongarm: his own Wolves, the Coyotes and the Goliath Scorpions. These three Clans declared they would not invade, which was accepted as long as they paid the same tithe and agreed not to prey upon the homeworld enclaves of the fourteen invading Clans. All three Clans were noted to be increasing their secondline forces, which they explained as needed to deal with an expected upswing in banditry while the other Clan's best warriors were away. They also allowed some of these units, staffed with their Crusader minority, to be claimed by the invaders - although most of these Crusaders were disappointed to learn they were only going to be guarding supply lines or even filling out homeworld garrisons.

After years of preparation the invasion force set out - seventy galaxies of warriors and eighty-four warships, arguably the largest single military force deployed by any part of humanity since the First Succession War. In 3005 they reached the Inner Sphere and Kerensky's heirs were unleashed upon the Inner Sphere with devastating effect. Despite valiant efforts, the Draconis Combine and Lyran Commonwealth were almost entirely unable to to hold back the Clans, even with covert aid from an increasingly worried ComStar. Coordinator Takashi Kurita died fighting a stubborn and glorious defence of Luthien, inspiring thousands of Combine samurai to fight to the bitter end and millions of humbler Combine citizens to resist in their own ways. Archon Katrina Steiner bled the Clans over and over in scores of brilliant ambushes that ground away their fine edge and the expense of almost entirely destroying the LCAF. After two years of war, the Clans had almost reached Terra, and despite their losses they remained a powerful force. With their supplies depleted, they paused briefly to regroup and await convoys from the Homeworlds.

But these convoys did not arrive.

Waystations ceased to report and HPG connections to the homeworlds fell silent.

Kerlin Ward had known exactly where the bases were and where the convoys would be. And the three Clans had only promised to avoid targeting the homeworld enclaves. Unobserved in the frenzy of the invasion, fast squadrons had ranged after the invasion and in a single month they took control of the key links connecting the invaders to their homeworlds. And it took precious time - almost another three months - for this to become clear, with a Cloud Cobra jumpship arriving to report of mass revolt on the Tanite worlds and a 'relief force' from the Wolves and Coyotes that simply seized and stripped the Cobra's remaining assets on the colonies.

Nadia Winson's native caution might have avoided the pitfall but angry Khans from almost every Clan forced her hand - a massive vote by the Council proclaimed the Wolves, Coyotes and Goliath Scorpions as dezgra. And the Wolves had seized the HPG links, not broken them. Cast out by the invaders they were no longer bound not to assail their enclaves... and their secondline forces had been expanded for two years as the other Clans exhausted themselves. Many of the garrisons facing them offered only token resistance, having been taken from these three clans to begin with or resenting being left behind by their peers. Critical nodes of defense were seized first and resistance could not possibly be coordinated between more than a dozen Clans - especially as their relief were at least a year away.

The year is 3008. The Invading Clans, exhausted, stand on a precipice. Behind them they have their hostile brethern and a vast void separating them not even from fresh supplies and reinforcements but from homes that will be well prepared to resist their return. Ahead of them is a rough and ready coalition led by Ian Davion, Janos Marik, Maximilian Liao and the newly elected Julian Tiepolo - determined that they will not follow the Combine into annihilation or the Commonwealth into submission to their ancient FWL rivals by the sliver of worlds still free to follow Katrina Steiner.

And all around the Clans lies their occupation zone, not a proud and shining new Star League but bitter and resentful conquered provinces, barely garrisoned and ready to turn knife, gun or improvised explosive device against any Clan warrior who lowers their guard.

The Crusade is over. Now the battle for survival begins.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Zureal on 27 September 2018, 17:28:57
God Emperor of Mankind from Warhammer 40K reincarnating into Battletech?

Yep  :thumbsup: >:D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 05 October 2018, 03:50:42
The Clans failed.  Of course the Clans failed.  Caste systems do not innovate.  Caste systems imposed on free men breed rebellion.  Laborers murder warriors in their beds.  Warriors slaughter technicians in job lots in retaliation and everything collapses far faster and more completely than in the Inner Sphere.  Space flight was entirely lost.
 Only the somewhat more timely than OTL arrival of the SLS Manassas in the late 29th century saved civilization in the Kerensky cluster and saved is a bit optimistic.  There are mothballed ships in orbit and older mechs in non-planetary Brian caches the warriors didn't get around to using up before losing spaceflight, but the infrastructure was all squandered.  Help is needed from the Inner Sphere.  With nothing else to offer they send an expedition under Jaime Wolf disguised as a mercenary unit. 

This would focus on the early 31st century from the Dragoons viewpoint.  The disappointment of the Inner Sphere not having what they need, the hope when the Helm core is found, and Holy Shroud III seeking to end the renaissance before it redevelops the civilian and industrial technologies the Dragoons were sent to retrieve. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 13 October 2018, 12:07:19
Tribble 560

Shandra Noruff-Cameron was annoyed.  As if the stress of managing the war in the Periphery were not bad enough, other factors conspired against her.  Other factors like the man across the table from her.  It had been necessary to make concessions to the other Member States when it came to staffing new Star Leage trans-national bodies.  One of those, had been picking an Attorney General from outside the Hegemony, when the first had retired.  And the Free Worlds League had offered a man of incredible record and determination.  But the man was...difficult to work with.  Unpolitical, blunt...no, scratch the first.  He was intensely, fervently, political, and how could he not be, when he had spent the last 20 years fighting corruption and maleficence as fiercely as he had?  No wonder the Marrik family had been glad to see him go on to greater things- he must have seriously cramped their style.  And now he was cramping hers, with memo after memo about the conduct of the Star League Defense Force.  His last memo about General Forlough had contained seven exclamation marks.  She had hoped to help him see reason-but at this meeting, he had refused to listen to hints that he should drop the investigation or at least conduct it behind closed doors. 

The man at the other side of the table looked up from his stacks of noteputers (why did he need so many of them?  How much paperwork did he collect?) and frowned at her.  He had frowned at her husband while taking the oath of office, but this was more personal.  "Am I boring you General?"
"No, you're not boring me.  You're exasperating me-you cannot seriously expect the Defense Forces and all the Member State militaries to open their files to you so you can conduct this ridiculous witch hunt."  She thumped the table for emphasis and stared him down.  "Your office's job is to investigate and prosecute crimes-why are you bothering me with this?"
"Six million dead civilians in the Outworld alliance and billions of dollars in destroyed property isn't a crime?"  The man flipped another noteputer so she could see the graphs and text.  "Rape and sexual assault rates through the roof in the Magistracy of Canopus, because soldiers expect a willing populace and aren't getting it?  I've got a list of atrocities as long as my arm against the Taurians, but I haven't been allowed to investigate the actions of our own units.  And there's a full-blown revolution in the Rim Worlds, but I'm inclined to write that off entirely."
"The Ares conventions have been suspended, and we have conducted operations with a firm but fair hand."  She had the same reports-the man had a gruff hard exterior, but he was as soft and naive as anyone she had ever seen.
"You still refuse to allow my investigators access to records or to inspect battlefields, however?"
"Yes.  You're outside your jurisdiction, and perilously close to losing your job.  Mind yourself, Vimes."

Vimes stood up and looked at the Black Watch guards in the room.  "Well Then.  General Commanding of the Star League Defense Forces, Duchess of New Earth, Barroness of Neuble Downs, Shandra Noruff-Cameron.  I hereby place you under arrest for conspiracy, obstruction of justice, and as an accessory to Crimes Against Humanity."  He picked up his cigar as the Black Watch shifted and raised an eyebrow at them.  "And if you lads try to stop me, it'll be Obstruction for you as well as resisting arrest."
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Post by: Ironburk on 14 October 2018, 22:32:13
"And now in Star League Wide News, the Attorney General for the Star League had a fatal heart attack while in conference with the Commanding General of the SLDF, and first Lady, Shandra Noruff-Cameron. Our condolences go out to his family."

You don't really believe that the entitled, powerful, elite of the Star League, follow the rules that they made, do you? That's for the peons. And anyone thinking differently, will learn they're entirely mistaken.   xp
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 15 October 2018, 05:09:51
"And now in Star League Wide News, the Attorney General for the Star League had a fatal heart attack while in conference with the Commanding General of the SLDF, and first Lady, Shandra Noruff-Cameron. Our condolences go out to his family."

You don't really believe that the entitled, powerful, elite of the Star League, follow the rules that they made, do you? That's for the peons. And anyone thinking differently, will learn they're entirely mistaken.   xp

For anyone else, sure. Vimes got taken off of the Nekekami and Thugee registers for being too essential to the ongoing smooth operation of humanity to risk killing. ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 15 October 2018, 07:27:57
What, seriously? I'm stunned that anyone would be above those two. Well I bow to your greater Battletech knowledge. Still, I would be surprised if he actually managed to accomplish much, other than getting some of the smaller fish into prison.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: misterpants on 15 October 2018, 19:33:47
Sam Vimes vs the Star League...pity none of the heads of state are Vetinari enough for him to work with/against...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 17 October 2018, 10:00:51
This is actually intended to be Suffer-not-Injustice Vimes, a man similar to his descendant but far, far, more unconventionally named-though he takes his given name of Suffer-not-Injustice incredibly seriously.  Sam Vimes gets born just in time for the Glorious Revolution of the 25th of May to rock the double-planets of Ankh and Morpork when he's 16, sometime around the classic 3025 date.  Anyways, Suffer-not-Injustice is the Vimes known for standing up for his ideals, even when it gets him smacked down hard by the tides of history, and he at least gets to execute a king along the way.  This is a tribble though-I know how this story starts, but not how it *ends*, and you can of course have the younger Stoneface Vimes be the Vimes here depicted.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 October 2018, 15:53:00
Tribble 561

Having endured the tedium of negotiating with Michael Hasek-Davion - if his military talent equalled his ego then the Confederation would have been doomed long since - Maximilian Liao prepares to leave Lee for Sian. It's 3022 and the Kaptyen Pact barely has the ink dry. Hopefully Hasek-Davion will be a more useful pawn than Anton Marik, he thinks.

Entering his limousine he's shocked to realise that his guards have all been replaced. MI4 agents smoothly deprive him of his personal papers and almost before he knows it, the Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation is in the hands of House Davion. A cursory check of the data shows that among the data the Duke of New Syrtis has provided are details of military deployments across the Capellan March - useful data for the Capellans since they have the Big MAC rampaging across the Federated Suns right now.

One can imagine Hanse Davion is smiling like a very well-fed fox when he gives his brother-in-law a choice: a trial for treason that would certainly see Hasek-Davion dethroned and probably executed... or claiming it was all an elaborate sting operation and handing the Capellan March over to Hanse's hand-picked agents and becoming a 'special advisor' to the First Prince on New Avalon for the next decade.

Michael, on the other hand, has no reason at all to smile. Nor does Maximilian Liao, who faces interrogation - which will reveal all sorts of interesting things about ComStar and the other Kapteyn states. And after that... well, he could be tried for espionage. Or perhaps simply given to Janos Marik in exchange for... considerations. The possibilities are almost endless.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 21 October 2018, 20:53:20
dude

you need to do this one
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 30 October 2018, 04:53:37
Tribble 562

Nadir Jump Point, Strana Mechty
Kerensky Cluster, Deep Periphery
24 January 3051

Ranna gestured out of the viewport towards the star that the Dire Wolf had just jumped into high orbit of. Somewhere, millions of kilometres closer to that star, lay an inhabitable world although it was far too distant for the naked eye. "Welcome, Phelan, to Strana Mechty, the home of the Clans."

He blinked. "What, already? I thought it was hundreds of light years away from the Inner Sphere?"

"A little over a thousand, yes." She gave him a reassuring look.

The former-Kell Hound, then prisoner and now Wolf warrior-in-training shook his head. "But we've only jumped twice since Rasalhague. That's... that's impossible."

His companion nodded. "You must remember that our technology has moved on since the days of the Star League. We're no longer bound by the 30 light year limit of the jumpships you're familiar with. The Dire Wolf could have made it here in a single jump but the Veil of the Protector interferes in some way with jumps through it so we had to make a dog leg."

"..."

"Phelan?"

"If you can jump over a thousand light years at one time," he said slowly, "That's... incredible. It transforms the strategic situation."

"Yes."

"I thought your supply lines must be tying down hundreds of jumpships for months either way, but that's not the case."

"No, it's much simpler than that," she agreed cheerfully.

"Could I just ask though, if you can cross such massive distances, why do you bother fighting from one world to the next? Why not just go straight for the capitals?" The idea didn't particularly appeal to him - he'd rather the Clans didn't bring their war (or their warships) near Tharkad - but logically that would be the simplest way to win their Invasion.

It was Ranna's turn to blink. "Because that's how you war, isn't it?"

"Uh."

"I mean, that's how the Great Father defeated Amaris. So of course that's how we..." She trailed off as she saw him shaking his head slowly.

"Ranna, your people's eugenics must have bred up some incredibly brilliant scientists to come up with such impressive K-F drives," he said. "Did they ever consider including the same genes for intelligence in the warrior caste?"

The sound of his head bouncing off the bulkhead after Ranna punched him was clearly audible from outside the compartment.
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Post by: Ironburk on 30 October 2018, 09:29:27
THAT WAS AWESOME. I laughed so hard I had a coughing fit and now have sore ribs.
I'm just imagining that the Clan scientists are the ultimate spindly nerds and the warriors are the meat-headed jocks. It would explain so much about the Clans. Thank you for this tribble. Really needed a good laugh.
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Post by: croaker on 01 November 2018, 23:26:00
Quote
I'm just imagining that the Clan scientists are the ultimate spindly nerds and the warriors are the meat-headed jocks. It would explain so much about the Clans. Thank you for this tribble. Really needed a good laugh.

You mean they aren't already?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: misterpants on 02 November 2018, 00:53:58
"Did they ever consider including the same genes for intelligence in the warrior caste?"

Scientist caste: why would we want to do *that*?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 05 November 2018, 15:33:52
Scientist caste: why would we want to do *that*?
Because if we did, then they might figure out they aren't really in charge, and no one wants the Muscle Bound Jocks to beat us up.   :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 November 2018, 16:19:13
Tribble #563

The year is 2815 and an elderly man lies dying in a palace on Luthien.

Fearing that he may linger in ill-health for weeks or months, depriving his empire of strong leadership, he signs a writ of abdication.

With tears in their eyes, the man's sons embrace him. Weakly patting them on their shoulders he tells them that they are Shiro and Urizen reborn, brothers bound by loyalty and duty, warlord and governor of the great dream of their House, and instructs them to see to their duties. He is content to pass alone so long as he knows that his duties are now in safe hands.

The elder son, by a full decade, emerges from the room as the 22nd Coordinator of the Draconis Combine, the Prince of Luthien and Unifier of Worlds. His name is Jinjiro Kurita, a general of unsurpassed genius. He is known for his ferocity in battle, his ruthlessness towards his enemies... but also for the deep love he has for his family. The Inner Sphere trembles at the knowledge that House Kurita's vast domain answers to this man.

The younger son is more noted as an administrator. He represents his aged uncle - more accurately his father's first cousin Chada. The last heir of the Kurita-Davion dynasty, Chada has adopted Zabu Kurita as his heir. It is already clear that Chada Kurita will not long outlive Minoru Kurita and on that day, Zabu will sit upon the throne of New Avalon as Prince of New Avalon ad rule the Draconis Combine's lesser, conquered, principality.

As the great conflict that will later be called the First Succession War grinds slowly towards a close, the Dragon continues to painfully digest the worlds that were once subservient to House Davion. It is a conflict to which Zabu is far better suited than his brother, calling for patience and flexibility... but it would be impossible without the iron legions of soldiers that have crossed the stars under Jinjiro Kurita's leadership. Those legions must now be replenished with volunteers from conquered worlds.

Compromises have been made. Civil leadership of New Syrtis District - the former Capellan March - is still invested in House Hasek. House Davion's lesser branches have been permitted - for now - to continue to rule over some individual worlds. Not of New Avalon, of course, but Chada has even permitted one descendant of Joseph Davion - the bastard-born Duke of Abbeville  - to survive in office. Some traditional freedoms have been removed but others have been assured, even tentatively extended to the citizens of the Luthien Principality in order to ease the economic strain of thirty years of warfare.

The two brothers look ahead not to the campaigns of the immediate future but further - to the war still to come once the Inner Sphere has begun to recover from the devastation unleashed from the fall of the Star League. Ten warlords are laying the groundwork for a new wave of conquests, rebuilding shattered regiments with the military production of a thousand worlds. The only question is where they will strike...?

The crumbling Capellan Confederation, the wealthy but soft Lyran Commonwealth, the pacifist Outworlds Alliance, the intransigent Taurian Concordat or their only remaining martial rival - the distance Free Worlds League?

The answer, these brothers know, is yes. What limit should constrain their ambitions?
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Post by: Takiro on 19 November 2018, 06:11:03
Did the sniper miss on Kentares? Were the Davions still around or were they captured? I believe there are also Kurita-Davions running around too you could have placed on the throne too bud but this is very nice.

ComStar? The Clans? Who knows perhaps the Minnesota Tribe won its place with Nicholas' new society and will return at the head of a far different looking Clan force. ;)

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 19 November 2018, 09:43:02
Did the sniper miss on Kentares? Were the Davions still around or were they captured? I believe there are also Kurita-Davions running around too you could have placed on the throne too bud but this is very nice.

ComStar? The Clans? Who knows perhaps the Minnesota Tribe won its place with Nicholas' new society and will return at the head of a far different looking Clan force. ;)

Kentares is way too late a divergence point, there's no way the Fed Suns would collectively bare their throats and actively cooperate in the transition of power with the DCMS actions by that date. And that's what would in fact be needed for the FS to be conquered as a whole.

The latest butterfly I would plausibly buy is Minoru paying attention to the reports of how insanely beloved Kerensky was, not voting to remove him, and publicly castigating the other Lords for their shortsighted dishonorable actions. Cue the DC picking up a lot more of the SLDF, and the Fed Suns in turn taking in a lot less, so that among other things even if Cholame happens there's a big enough stick waiting that the Kuritans don't have to be their usual selves.

Earlier there are any number of possibilities, but the obvious butterfly would be Drago and family either escaping, or being confirmed dead immediately.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 20 November 2018, 03:35:09
The Chada Kurita mentioned is the last of the Kurita-Davion descendants.

The rough background I went through was:

Minoru Kurita not assassinated so no Kentares Massacre, no boost to AFFS fighting spirit or demoralisation of the DCMS.

John Davion is still assassinated but Joshua Davion isn't with him. Joshua lives a couple more years and spearheads a third counter-offensive, conveniently timed such that it runs into the DCMS just after they've finished consolidating, resupplying and absorbing replacement troops (the FS intelligence community hasn't been reformed by this point). Like a good Davion prince Joshua is fighting right on the front and he ends up getting killed, which leads to the collapse of the offensive.

The DCMS pushes for New Avalon and arrive more or less the same time Paul Davion is crowned. Meanwhile a second DCMS thrust led by Chada Kurita goes into the Capellan March and runs into a Capellan push for Kathil, which they crush - 'saving' the worlds from House Liao.

While the Davion Guards and best of the other remaining regiments try to slow the DCMS tide, Paul Davion relocates as much of his government as he can. His brother Peter is killed fighting alongside other cadets during this evacuation.

Chada negotiates with House Hasek and offers them freedom to keep defending the Capellan March as long as they don't support Paul Davion. With John and Joshua failures and Paul not looking strong, the Haseks agree and Chada withdraws from the Capellan march in time to help Jinjiro fight for the other worlds in the Crucis March. Paul commits his remaining reserves to try to defeat Jinjiro's immediate command at Antietam and Chada arrives right on his heels, trapping Paul and his troops. For the third time in five years, a First Prince dies and there's another brutal defeat for the AFFS.

At this point the succession is contested - Paul's nearest relative is Mark Rand-Davion, who is barred from succession, then Chada Kurita(-Davion) who is also barred, and then a distant cousin from Beaumont. The High Council assembles to straighten out the succession and Chada puts forward his claim backed by the Haseks and with the additional benefit of some apparently generous terms to end the war with the Draconis Combine.

With hundreds of worlds occupied and the AFFS battered beyond belief, the High Council narrowly accepts these terms and Minoru approves the terms. Chada is First Prince, the DCMS withdraws partially (handing New Avalon over to the new First Prince) and gradually gives civil leadership for the worlds still occupied back (to some extent the DCMS is defending those worlds against the Capellans, which the AFFS can't manage yet. Chada begins reforming the government and spends years restructuring it and promoting compliant officials.

Most importantly, Chada recognises Minoru as First Lord and swears his fealty. After several years he formalises his reforms as a 'new principality' and merges the two realms (much as Rasalhague had joined the Combine ~300 years previous), although mostly the Avalon Principality is self-governed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 20 November 2018, 06:26:15
That sounds pretty good to me.

Don't I remember something about Steiner and Marik thinking of an alliance at the end of a Succession War? Not sure if that is the end of the 1st or the 2nd but the three remaining Houses may at least think of an alliance to stave off the Dragon and ComStar would probably foster any such talks.

Then again Liao already asked for an alliance with Kurita but was rejected out of hand. Perhaps now they would join the Greater Combine or the Second Star League as a client state. They'd likely ask for Chesterton in return if they hadn't taken it already by force.

So you could see the InnerSphere split into two different blocs at the start of a possible 2nd Succession War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 20 November 2018, 19:19:46
Like I said, Kentares is too late a divergence. By that point the Kuritans have been gleefully looting Inglesmond to death for the last seven years while nuking anything resembling resistance. Minoru has already thrown his tantrum and nuked Helm for not having loot. No one is going to believe the Kuritans are going to actually keep their word and not engage in widespread reprisals and atrocities the moment they think they can get away with it, or even just the moment they are mildly thwarted in orbit of a defenseless planet.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 November 2018, 03:10:42
You say this as if House Kurita are the only ones using nukes like nutcrackers.

Given what we're told about the First Succession War, it's likely House Davion has been trying to use them against the DCMS... which in the circumstances means they've been using them tactically on Federated Suns worlds as well as hitting strategic targets in Capellan and Draconian space.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 21 November 2018, 05:54:23
And Steiner. New Earth and Rocky saw some of the heaviest fighting of the war as even the Davies tried to get to Hesperus.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 21 November 2018, 15:40:27
You say this as if House Kurita are the only ones using nukes like nutcrackers.

Given what we're told about the First Succession War, it's likely House Davion has been trying to use them against the DCMS... which in the circumstances means they've been using them tactically on Federated Suns worlds as well as hitting strategic targets in Capellan and Draconian space.

Context very much matters. Yes, armies have been throwing WMD at each other willy nilly, but the Kuritans at this point have an established history of continuing to do so against a defenseless target that didn't have what they wanted. And also of looting targets to the point where they can't sustain human life rather than any model of sustainable conquest.

By his past history about the only thing that might legitimately make them think Minoru won't level El Dorado if he makes a state visit and his tea is improperly served is if some enterprising soul managed to quietly abduct Jinjiro or Zabu and their families and threaten to send him back body parts of the terms of the merger aren't observed in every particular.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 22 November 2018, 07:10:46
I believe you are mistaken consequences as Minoru did not butcher people sensely that was Jinjiro. I think u are confusing the two. Jinjiro went quite mad after Minoru was shot on Kentares and ordered that. Not saying Minoru was father of the year but in this alternate drakensis is saying that the AFFS was beaten. The nation surrendered rather than continue to fight. I am sure there is a resistance going on somewhere who ain't happy about it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 22 November 2018, 15:53:33
And with Minoru as Coordinator and the Federated Suns recognising him as First Lord and his cousin as First Prince, there is at least some reason to believe he won't treat them like Helm where they unreasonably didn't give him the supplies he was there for (not knowing where they were is no excuse of course). Not an unanimous opinion, of course.

And Jinjiro hasn't advertised his... Jinjironess yet.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 23 November 2018, 02:15:09
Tribble no. 564:

"Shiva strike me down if I'm lying but when I heard Kevin Steiner standing up in the Estates General today, speaking with such passion, I almost felt myself waver.  Just a bit.  The man's a brilliant orator, after all, and clearly believed in what he was saying.  He did everything but break down in tears and beg us not to do it, not to dissolve the Commonwealth.  But at the end of the day all he could offer us were words.  Words won't put redundant taxes back in our pockets or spare us the overhead for complying with two sets of regulations instead of one.  Words won't spare us the consequences of bone-heads on Tharkad who value 'sovereignty' more than their subjects' wellbeing - we all remember, for example, the 'Dollar crisis' back in '23.   That type of overmanaging of the economy is permanently in the past, now.  And words won't save us from the Kuritans or the Free Worlders. 

No, however eloquent Kevin Steiner was, there was never any real doubt  that we would win.  No doubt in my mind that we would embrace the beauty of a pure League, by, for, and of all humanity.  Yes, the vote in the Estates General was close, 161-160,  but the outcome was never in question.  I'm confident that more than a few delegates switched over to vote with Steiner once they knew Dissolution was going through so they'd have something to bargain for trade concessions with.  Steiner's still going to be a powerful man - he's got holdings on more than 50 worlds, and rules Tharkad outright.  A new age is dawning, golden and peaceful, and even those like Kevin Steiner who dread its coming will benefit.  I don't need to see a fist on a flag to feel safe.  None of us do.  All we need to know are these things...We are homo stellaris, citizens of the Star League, and that means we are free."

- Rashad Getthright, Baron von Kessna Bay
Interview transcript from "Chahar Today" trid newscast
Estates General Hall
The Triad, Tharkad
September 28, 2643

(Reference: HB House Steiner, p. 29 sidebar)

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 23 November 2018, 16:03:33
Interesting the breakdown of the Lyran Commonwealth presumably into its three component states (Donegal, Skye, and Tamar) could have profound consequences on the rest of the InnerSphere if it actually happens. The Free Worlds League could presumably dissolve into its individual Provinces as well touching off a splintering of the Star League. Rasalhague breaking away from Kurita is a lock and perhaps even the Capellan Confederation could dissolve as well contaminating the Federated Suns as well. Call it a domino theory of sorts. Not only could this cause a Civil War very easily in the Great Houses but it could tear down the Star League. I doubt every House Lord would go crying to the First Lord about insuring their succession which was a guarantee of the Star League but some would certainly. Messy!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 23 November 2018, 17:43:10
The vote is canon, only the LC was preserved by a single vote.  If things had gone the other way, the timing is actually kind-of amazing.  Although the sourcebooks don't go into any proposed details of how the dissolution would have worked, I imagine that some smaller rump states would have cohered and petitioned for Star League memebership, while many other worlds would have simply preferred to existin solely under the aegis of the Star League, with no intermediating "national" layer between them.  There could have been as many as several hundred of these worlds. 

While I can't see the Camerons being anything but delighted at this news, this severely shakes up the existing order of the Star League.  The League, as far as I know, was never framed as anything other than a confederal pact between sovereign states.  The emergence of this new class of purely League-governed worlds could have lit fires all over the Inner Sphere.  The timing is actually suspiciously great for all sorts of ripples to propagate.

Twenty years later, you've got the Regulan crisis in the Free Worlds, and the Marik's small civil war against the Selaj.  This, naturally, quite alarmed the Star League, and garrison SLDF units in the FWL were put on on high alert.  The Mariks just managed to convince the Star League that this was an internal matter, so the troops stood down.  That mess drove the Captain General so paranoid Parliament tried to "end the emergency" and abolish the position, sparking the Marik Civil War.  During that mess it's inconceivable that some worlds - or even whole provinces - wouldn't think of trying the Lyran trick and prying themselves free of Marik's grip.

And just when the Marik turmoil is winding up, with an emboldend Star League feeling its oats and building a power base separate and apart from the Member States, here comes the War of Davion Succession.  After the epic collapse of the AFFS in the opening moves of that little spat, I can't imagine that there wouldn't be significant grumbling across the length and breadth of the Suns.  The Capellan march is always restive; as late as 2617 New Syrtis was nearly in open revolt.  And after the butt-kicking the AFFS just got, the Draconis March isn't feeling too confident in New Avalon's ability to protect them.

All the while, the Star League planets are thriving.  As soon as the Reunification War kicks off, investment begins flowing to the Star League worlds that managed to break free of Member State control; they'd be well-placed and secure locations for the SLDF to source parts and build bases, without the logistical problems that come from schlepping everything out from the Hegemony.  If the League especially wanted to encourage planets to squirm free of the Member States, they might even relax the Mother doctrine on technology transfer.

So, on the Eve of the Amaris coup the Star League proper isn't just the Hegemony and a handful of jointly-administered worlds.  Instead, in addition to the Hegemony there are hundreds of purely-Star League worlds; the majority of the former Lyran Commonwealth, big chunks of the Free Worlds League, and even former parts of the Federated Suns.  The only Member States largely intact are the Draconis Combine and the Capellan Confederation.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: shadowdancer on 23 November 2018, 22:52:59
Sector 313 Alpha, Sisyphus's Lament
The Rock System, Oberon Confederation
13 August 3049

Something inside his head screamed at him that what he was doing was suicidal, but another part of him didn't care. Yet his awareness of the hideous threat posed by these unidentified Mechs made him key a dump of his battle recorder's data and create a simultaneous battle-feed to a widebeam broadcast. He pumped extra power into the broadcast, draining it away from the Wolfhound's rear arc medium laser. "Trey, Kat, anybody. I hope like hell this makes it out. Get clear. This data is more important than getting killed to avenge either one of us."
Phelan dipped the Wolfhound's left shoulder as if preparing to cut back that way, than broke even more sharply to the right. The Mech he faced again sent two laser blast sizzling through the space he should have occupied.

The computer's range indicator put Phelan at 350 meters and closing fast. Phelan planted the Wolfhound's right foot and cut to the left, then only two steps later, planted the left foot and dashed straight in at his target. The other pilot, determined not to miss a third time, had spread his Mech's arms apart to have one weapon available no matter where Phelan moved -as long as it wasn't straight up the middle.

Laughing triumphantly as the enemy's large lasers flashed past on either side. Phelan dropped his targeting sight straight on the Mech's jutting beak. He stabbed his thumb down on the large laser's firing stud and tightened his fingers on the buttons for two medium lasers. Got you.

The large laser hammered into the enemy Mech's left side. It peeled back armor, and for a moment, Phelan hoped against it had pierced the Mech's armored hide.  As his medium lasers stitched the Mech's left arm and leg with stinging ruby bolts, hid heart began to sink. All I am getting is armor!

The gray Mech's two gunnery-pods converged and seemed to focus on the Wolfhound. The dual large lasers slashed past over head and followed up seconds later with four mediums right behind him.

Running between several large boulders he sniped with two medium lasers one to the left torso and leg again. Slamming to a stop and stepping backwards back into a gape he fired the large and a medium both going to the left leg. Charging to the left again he cut around a boulder right at the enemy.

The Mech fired both missiles pods at him but only a few striking the left arm.

Phelan fired all three mediums striking the left leg twice and again to the left torso causing the Mech to stumble.

Moving parallel the Mech fired both large lasers with one striking the right torso and one missing low. Quickly followed by twin mediums one striking the right leg with the other missing low also.

Phelan closing and still charging left opened up again with the three mediums striking the left leg and torso again with the third missing to the right. As he past by he connected with a kick to the left leg breaking the last of it dropping it to the ground. Stopping and turning to run deeper into the boulder field twin large lasers with paired mediums flash by his head. Leading the two other Mech's further into the jumble he quickly was able to circle around and stepped into the back arc of both without them knowing he was there. Shooting at the one closest to him first he opened with the large and two mediums striking all of them in the right leg. With a hip actuator being hit causing it to fall crushing the rest.

As the second one turned Phelan moved to stay in it back arc it fired a large and medium laser that missed behind the Wolfhound.

Opening up with a full alpha strike he grouped all of the shoots to the left side the large and two mediums into the rear torso and other medium into the leg causing it to crash to the ground as the gyro tore itself apart. As he slowly turns and sluggishly starts to move toward the dropship he hears five bangs against his Wolfhound. Looking to outside monitors he sees little robot looking thinks clinging to the mech. Before he can react the ejection system fires and as he looks for a place to land he sees five more Mech's and two more groups of robots to the northeast of him. And the rest of his battalion moving up from the southwest. As he crashes to a landing he is thrown into the dash knocking him out.

Mechwarriors Vlad, Aizona and Poul stood before Khan Ulric. Ulric asked how could a mere mercenary in a light mech manage to take three of our best warriors down?

Vlad forcefully said, "I swear sir that he disappeared from my targeting computers, one second he was there and the next he did not register."

"One targeting system down might explain how he might have been able to take one of you down. But how did he take you other two?"

Both spoke at the same time agreeing with Vlad. Their targeting systems also failed to register the mech.

Looking over to the technician he asked. "How could all three mechs malfunction at the same time? The tech said that all of them checked out as perfectly functional. But the battleroms back up their statements."   


Phelan joins Clan Wolf with the Phantom Mech ability!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 23 November 2018, 23:27:19
So the last Tribble would be #565.   If everything else goes as canon, it would be very interesting when he goes for a Trial of Position with Natasha K.   :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 05 December 2018, 10:40:49
Tribble 566: Late 3028. A certain Lyran jumpship crew discovers their spines,  and with the Legion of Vega being somewhat lacking in hyperdimensional math expertise, Theodore Kurita is caught completely unaware when the ship he commandeered ironically emerges at Freedom
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ironburk on 05 December 2018, 21:20:18
I like it. Of course, that crew would then find out what it's like to breathe vacuum as the furious snakes space them for daring to not kowtow to their "glorious samurai masters".
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 January 2019, 18:02:55
Tribble 567
In the 2850s, Clan Steel Viper suffered an internal schism over the treatment of freeborn by the expanding number of trueborn warriors, with the latter beginning to force the former out of contention for bloodnames. In order to avoid a calamitous war, the Clan divided with the former (freeborn) senior Khan losing the Trial of Possession for the original name and heraldry. He and his followers founded Clan Heretic Monkey.

Two centuries later, the Heretic Monkeys still maintain a freeborn majority (most bloodhouses do create trueborn sibkos occasionally if their numbers seem to be waning) with several dozen sprawling extended families producing most of their Clan's leading warriors. Members who fail to test out as warriors join civilian castes and carry on the bloodlines with their children having just as much chance to become warriors and one day compete for bloodnames.

Much to the annoyance of Clan Steel Viper, the Heretic Monkeys have managed to maintain a strong touman and while not quite as powerful as the Vipers they're consistently of middling position among the Clans. In addition to their rivalry with their kin, the Monkeys have long-standing feuds with the Smoke Jaguars and Fire Mandrills, but are on generally good terms with Clan Ghost Bear and Clan Star Adder. A modest majority of the Clan are Crusaders although they mostly believe their mandate is to reconquer the Terran Hegemony and then win the Successor States over to create a new Star League through their shining example and clever diplomacy.

Internally, the Heretic Monkey caste relations are quite good since most have family ties that cut across this divide. On the other hand, their bloodhouses can be easily as quarrelsome as those of the Snow Ravens and as little as they like the comparison, the Fire Mandrills. Keeping the Heretic Monkeys focused takes a great deal of behind the scenes diplomacy between leaders of the Bloodhouses, with no small number of political marriages to seal temporary alliances between the bloodhouses, something that also helps avoid inbreeding. (Such spouses frequently see little of each other, but some surprisingly intense emotional ties - and feuds - have resulted.) The Heretic Monkeys merchants produce a range of dramas based on such ideas - dramas banned in many other clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 14 January 2019, 16:45:45
Tribble 568

So, Franklin Orsis is based on the Black Panthers...I mean, just go look at his picture.  So what if Clan Smoke Jaguar took more inspiration from the Panthers?  What if they built soup kitchens and breakfast programs?  What if the Jaguars invaded the Draconis Combine, not because it was strong, but because the repression of it's civillians made it more likely that they would accept Jaguar charity and order?  What if their support of the Crusaders is driven by principled International Socialism, to liberate the civilians of the inner sphere from the tyranny of landlords, nobles, and corporations?

Well they wouldn't be your daddy's Smoke Jaguars, that's for sure.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 28 January 2019, 03:52:37
Tribble 569

In 2988, Marcos Isu is appointed as the Draconis Combine's ambassador to Sian. In a whirlwind romance, his teenage daughter Jasmine becomes pregnant by the heir to the Confederation's throne. The matter is covered up, and a marriage is hastily arranged. Since it serves neither the father of the bride or groom to advertise the connection, Maximilian's wife's family name (and age - she's only 15!) is obfuscated and Candace Liao's birth isn't reported for a few months.

Eight years later the relationship sours and Duke Marcos is also recalled to the Combine by Coordinator Hohiro Kurita to take up his duties as Duke of New Samarkand now that his father has died. Jasmine decides to return with her father, but must leave her three children - including her newborn Tormano - with their father. The official records of the Confederation claim that she died in a mountain-climbing accident.

On return to Luthien, the Coordinator revealed to Duke Marcos that he had decided it was time for his heir Takashi to wed - and apparently Marcos' father and Hohiro had betrothed Jasmine to Takashi without telling their families. While Jasmine does come to love her new husband and the son he gives her (all the more valuable to her after the loss of her three elder children), she's unable to give him more children.

And of course, someday, someone's going to realise that Romano Liao and Theodore Kurita are half-siblings...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 07 February 2019, 12:48:39
Tribble 567
The Heretic Monkeys merchants produce a range of dramas based on such ideas - dramas banned in many other clans.

Would one of the Heretic Monkey bloodnames happen to be "Macleod"?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 08 February 2019, 02:42:39
Would one of the Heretic Monkey bloodnames happen to be "Macleod"?
I don't believe that's a canonical bloodname. Am I missing something?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 08 February 2019, 03:10:45
Would one of the Heretic Monkey bloodnames happen to be "Macleod"?
There's a McCloud bloodname in the Cobras. That's as close as you're gonna get
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 11 February 2019, 20:08:38
Tribble 569
https://i.imgur.com/iZrcsbn.jpg (https://i.imgur.com/iZrcsbn.jpg)

Gentlepeople of BTech forums.  I give you-THE REVOLUTION!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 12 February 2019, 06:15:15
Well I have to say first off that I love maps and that is beautiful.

While I could see a revolution by the people to throw off the aristocracy of the Great Houses it would be pretty tough given the feudal structure has the BattleMech and that is the 'King of the Battlefield' 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 12 February 2019, 08:23:21
Well I have to say first off that I love maps and that is beautiful.

While I could see a revolution by the people to throw off the aristocracy of the Great Houses it would be pretty tough given the feudal structure has the BattleMech and that is the 'King of the Battlefield'

Ironically, this set-up, where Ian Davion doubles down on military spending and the Outback screams from the resultant tax hikes and neglect, is one where I can see many of those chivalric knights turning on their master and siding with the revolutionaries.  It wouldn't work in Kurita or Liao space, there the elites are trained to be indifferent to the suffering of the commoners, but the Federated Suns, god bless them, kind of believe that 'knights in shining armor' BS.  If you get a letter from your people begging you not to support the tyranny of Ian Davion, if you hear that he's sending in firestarters to burn your people for strikes...you might think twice about serving him.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 12 February 2019, 09:42:22
Considering it took Andrew Davion (iirc) a lot of effort to "destroy" the Warrior Cabals. I can easily see the Outback Lords cracking down hard on dissent against their Prince or attempting to overthrow him.  Not to alleviate the suffering of their peasantry, if they were good people they would have been born noble.  They will just clear out a weak Davion prince then go back to where it was except this time its "to repair the damage done during the War, and ensure our bright future under a new First Prince" (Likely a Hasek considering their history).  The FedSuns has good PR, but that doesn't mean that they are all good guys, they are just as prone to Civil War or atrocity as any other Great House.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 12 February 2019, 17:26:18
Tribble 570

It's the early 24th century and James McKenna displays a potent new weapon to reform the Terran Alliance, but it isn't the Dreadnought-class battleship, it's the MSK-5K Mackie!

The BattleMech makes it debut a century and a half earlier than canon and spearheads the expansion of the new Terran Hegemony while the other states (at this point the Free Worlds League, Rim Worlds Republic and Taurian Concordat exist but most later states have yet to unite) must find a path to survive this new weapon and enemy.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 12 February 2019, 18:06:11
Tribble #571

As the 4th Succession War begins, Theodore Kurita is forced to retreat off-world against the LCAF. But something goes wrong as his Dropship lifts off, and it crashes to the ground. The DCMS concludes that the son of the Dragon is dead.

Takashi, already highly stressed over his newfound feud with Jamie Wolf, suffers a fatal stroke upon hearing the news. Marcus Kurita seizes the opportunity and declares himself the new Coordinator. Not being a genius like Theodore, however, the new Dragon makes a fatal miscalculation on his counterattack against the LCAF, seeing the destruction of five DCMS regiments for no gain, including the 2nd Sword of Light.

In response, the Black Dragon Society causes the Benjamin and Dieron districts rise up in revolt, rallying behind Takashi's nephew Isoroku Kurita. Meanwhile, ISF agents loyal to Theodore secretly bring Theodore's children (Franklin, Hohiro, and Omiko) to the Warlord of the Galedon District, knowing that Kester Hsiun Chi can be trusted to keep their existence a secret.

But as Isoroku becomes truly invested in leading his faction of this civil war, Theodore turns up alive, having survived the crash and secretly made his way to Galedon to see to the safety of his children. Isoroku refuses to believe that this is the real Theodore, and accuses him of being an impostor, with Marcus following suit. Battle lines are drawn, and units flock to each banner.

But with a three-way civil war going on, the Draconis Combine drops out of the 4th Succession War entirely, and the Rasalhague District completely falls to the LCAF as the Three Dragons are pre-occupied with each other.

Well, Hanse Davion didn't expect this when he made his toast, but he's certainly not complaining!

Edit: I particularly like this one because it allows you to have three different flavors of Combine in a single setting without any contradictions. From the ultra-traditionalists (Isoroku and the Black Dragon Society), to embracing the new ways (We all know about Theodore and the Ghost Regiments, plus C3 was developed while he was the Kanrei in canon), to the warcrime-happy hypocrites (Marcus).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: namar13766 on 14 February 2019, 10:52:47
Is it wrong I'm mentally calling 571 the Dance of the Dragons? ;D

How would the Combine be generally divided up?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: BlackLiger on 14 February 2019, 14:13:12
I could see Hanse throwing his lot in behind one of them in the manner of focusing on the other two
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 14 February 2019, 16:07:56
I could see Hanse throwing his lot in behind one of them in the manner of focusing on the other two
Aaahh... but will he back the moderate that he can make peace with, or will he instead back the ****** that he knows will cause even more trouble for the Combine down the line? Decisions, decisions.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Smegish on 14 February 2019, 17:06:46
Quietly switch between em all to keep the war going?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 15 February 2019, 11:46:11
Is it wrong I'm mentally calling 571 the Dance of the Dragons? ;D

How would the Combine be generally divided up?

I see the territory split going like this

Marcus: Pesht (plus whatever shadow of Rasalhague District remains, along with a world or two from the Benjamin and Galedon Districts)
Isoroku: Benjamin/Dieron (Dieron having lost a few worlds to the Lyrans, so they're subordinate to Benjamin)
Theodore: Galedon

I could see Hanse throwing his lot in behind one of them in the manner of focusing on the other two
Aaahh... but will he back the moderate that he can make peace with, or will he instead back the ****** that he knows will cause even more trouble for the Combine down the line? Decisions, decisions.
Quietly switch between em all to keep the war going?

Given Theodore's faction is about stealing pages from the AFFS playbook, if not stealing the book outright, I think it'd be amusing if Theodore approached Hanse for support, in return for whatever concessions he feels are necessary to ensure his forces are supplied.

Not to say that Katrina, Melissa, and Hanse would be all that adverse to utilizing LOKI and the Rabid Foxes to keep things interesting between Isoroku and Marcus while Theodore's rebuilding...

As for the unit breakdown, I would have each faction be forced to disband units and use their survivors to patch holes in other units (the 16th Galedon Regulars under Theodore, for example, would only have 50% of their veterans consist of people who were in the unit before the civil war started, with the rest of the veterans coming from the 5th and 12th).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 15 February 2019, 20:23:58
This makes for a real interesting War of 3039 ;)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 15 February 2019, 21:04:17
This makes for a real interesting War of 3039 ;)

Oh, yes. My initial thoughts go along the lines of Isoroku getting knocked out of the Dance of Dragons by getting dogpiled by everyone else (Theodore hitting Benjamin in coordination with an AFFC offensive to take Dieron, with Marcus jumping in late to grab a bunch of Benjamin territory to limit Theodore's gains).

This would result in Marcus warcrime-happy thugs taking the brunt of the Clan offensive. Assuming the Year of Peace happens like in canon, then Theodore, having the strongest position, could use that year to sweep in and finally knock Marcus, who's taken a severe battering from the Clans, out of the civil war, then settle his forces in to hit the Clans with a completely different DCMS than the warriors of Kerensky were expecting...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 15 February 2019, 22:49:45
Tribble #572
Kerensky Takes Terra....but Amaris isn't there.  Rather than stand and die in the ruins of his empire, Stephen Amaris decides to retreat to his hidden worlds in the Deep Periphery and wait for the jackals to pull apart their victim.  He also takes with him a *lot* of warmaking industry, and the cream of his remaining armies, because you need seed to start from scratch.  What happens after that...will Kerensky disperse the SLDF to find the fugitive?   Will the Star League die as per cannon?  Will the Clans form-and will their invasion be paired with one from the Empire of Amaris?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: smdvogrin on 18 February 2019, 16:32:20
Oh, yes. My initial thoughts go along the lines of Isoroku getting knocked out of the Dance of Dragons by getting dogpiled by everyone else (Theodore hitting Benjamin in coordination with an AFFC offensive to take Dieron, with Marcus jumping in late to grab a bunch of Benjamin territory to limit Theodore's gains).

This would result in Marcus warcrime-happy thugs taking the brunt of the Clan offensive. Assuming the Year of Peace happens like in canon, then Theodore, having the strongest position, could use that year to sweep in and finally knock Marcus, who's taken a severe battering from the Clans, out of the civil war, then settle his forces in to hit the Clans with a completely different DCMS than the warriors of Kerensky were expecting...

At which point, the traditionalists which went to ground when Isoruku went under rise up to cause trouble just when he's starting to get a grip on the Clan threat ('cause it isn't the DC without Black Dragons out of nowhere just as things might be starting to go good)...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 18 February 2019, 21:30:14
At which point, the traditionalists which went to ground when Isoruku went under rise up to cause trouble just when he's starting to get a grip on the Clan threat ('cause it isn't the DC without Black Dragons out of nowhere just as things might be starting to go good)...

Wouldn't be strong enough to cause significant amounts of trouble, given the vast majority of their actual military units got splattered in the War of 3039 (with Isoroku's surrender being the only reason any units from his faction survived).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daemion on 27 February 2019, 01:04:52
Tribble #573 (https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=63152.msg1485398#msg1485398)
While it's an interesting concept to look into, I don't know that I'll ever have time to flesh out what I started in the link.

The Family Brown Flying Circus was a mercenary band, a family affair.  They had high hopes for their first mission, but something went wrong, and they were on the run. 

They eventually escaped the world they were stuck on, hijacking not only a DropShip, but also a JumpShip and found a crew willing to help them. 

How did they manage this, before running afoul of a Magistracy noblewoman and eventually falling pray to another mercenary band?

Whoever tackles this, please PM me with a link to your story. 

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: namar13766 on 23 March 2019, 12:19:55
574: A Melody of 'Mechs and Mettle

The Minnesota Tribe is having a bad day (granted, after escaping the Clans, the Combine, and Comstar) when All their ships have simultaneously wrecked their KF drives following a misjump. Fortunately, all their ships are in the same system. Even better, there's a habitable planet. Even better is the fact they've found vast germanium deposits. Despite finding signs of human settlement, they don't seem to have any transmissions. Things get weird when the Tribe discovers this branch of humanity predates not only the Star League, but also interstellar travel from Terra.

The obligatory Game of Thrones/A Song of Ice And Fire x-over
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 23 March 2019, 19:28:24
Vulcans and Firestarters...for all your "DRACARYS!" needs
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 05 April 2019, 11:54:03
Tribble 575

The worst part about extended space travel is being cooped up onboard a dropship for weeks at a time, breathing the same stale air, drinking the same recycled water, and constantly banging your head, elbows, and shins on inconvenient bulkheads.  After all, when you're coming up with plans for a machine that can hurl itself plus several hundred tons of cargo out of even the deepest planetary gravity well atop giant pillars of nuclear fire, as well as sustain life in the harsh vacuum of outer space, there isn't much room to build in comfort.

So it was no surprise that, during the months-long trip from his posting at the Cappellan front back to New Avalon, First Prince-designate Hanse Davion demanded that his personal dropship be the one to make a needed supply run to the main drop-port of the planet Emerson.  Bad enough that his brother had been killed in battle.  Bad enough that Hanse suddenly had the throne thrust upon him with no warning, months away from the capital.  Bad enough war with Kurita and Liao was squeezing the AFFS on all fronts.  Dealing with those things without fresh air, real gravity, or room to stretch out was simply intolerable.

Unfortunately, as Hanse walked down the gangway, enjoying the breeze and warm sun, an unseen assassin bored a hole straight through his left temple with a hi-powered laser rifle.  The prince was dead before he even knew he'd been shot.

Several hundred light years away, Michael Hasek-Davion sat in his darkened office and smiled a shark's grin. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 06 April 2019, 07:41:37
The really hilarious thing would be if this actually managed to result in functionally zero macro scale changes to the timeline. The really hilarious thing would be if the whole hearted support of Michael Hasek for crushing the Cap Con resulted in an even bigger stomping than OTL 4SW.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 06 April 2019, 14:08:53
Tribble 576

During the Davion Civil War, a mother and daughter taking shelter on New Avalon were among the casualties of the fighting. As Alexander Davion forced his aunt Laura to retreat from the Crucis March, Mica Liao and her eight year old daughter fell prey to one of the many crossfires.

The true consequences of this became clear two years later in 2530 when Chancellor Kalvin Liao was assassinated. With his exiled sister Mica dead, Kalvin had no clear heir and it was the Capellan Confederation's turn to face civil war between rival branches of their ruling House.

Seeing that Alexander was focused on fighting Laura first, the Prince of the Capellan March, David Varney chose to try to strengthen his position by seizing vulnerable Capellan worlds and marrying his son and heir to one of the Liao claimants. By the time the First Prince had subdued his aunt and managed to hammer some co-operation from the Terran March prince, the Varnays had secured the rimwards region of the Confederation including Sian, establishing the Liao-Varnays as Prince-Chancellors and too strong for Alexander to crush.

After further indecisive battling, a grudging truce was agreed, leaving a shrunken Federated Suns under Alexander (lacking the Capellan March and the UHC worlds that never had cause to join Alexander) and a Capellan Confederation that barely holds Capella itself bordering the new realm. Wary of these borders, the Varneys wisely retain good relations with their other borders by formally confirming the Free Worlds League's right to Andurien and patching up relations with the Taurian Concordat...

A generation later, conflicts between the Federated Suns and Capellan Confederation were ended by the shrewd negotiation of Ian Cameron, laying the foundation of his proposed Star League...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 06 April 2019, 22:21:25
The really hilarious thing would be if this actually managed to result in functionally zero macro scale changes to the timeline. The really hilarious thing would be if the whole hearted support of Michael Hasek for crushing the Cap Con resulted in an even bigger stomping than OTL 4SW.

Well, you'd need to posit that MSD would have been willing to respond positively to Katrina Steiner's 3020 peace proposal, and that Katrina wouldn't have twigged him as the untrustworthy slimeball he seems to have been.  I don't think it's a controversial thought that the 4SW beatdown of the CapCon wouldn't really have been possible without the FedCom alliance.

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Tribble 576 . . .

Oh man, this is wild.  Even in canon the FS nearly folded during both the War of the Davion Succession and in the 1st Succession War...if either of those conflicts still happen - or if the DCMS has any reason to make an all-out grab for New Avalon - I'm not sure a reduced Suns could hold them.  A Succession War scenario where Liao and Kurita race to grab as much as they can from a dying FS while Marik and Steiner look on in uneasy approbation that the Dragons will be turning on them next...yikes!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 07 April 2019, 09:41:29
Well, you'd need to posit that MSD would have been willing to respond positively to Katrina Steiner's 3020 peace proposal, and that Katrina wouldn't have twigged him as the untrustworthy slimeball he seems to have been.  I don't think it's a controversial thought that the 4SW beatdown of the CapCon wouldn't really have been possible without the FedCom alliance.



It's certainly a disputable thought.  Using a 2.4 to one numerical advantage to achieve crushing local superiority while actively hobbled by having to work around the top man on the border isn't exactly something that required Lyran intervention. With Michael actively plotting against the CC, that adds more units, assets, and transport to the table, and without him selling out troop movements to make Hanse look bad the 5th Crucis are less likely to lose their mech regiment, the Kestrel Grenadiers might not get chewed up, and assorted other reverses might not happen. The only real impediment would be a potential lack of vision keeping him from running the numbers on shipping availability and realizing he can simultaneously crush about a quarter of the CCAF as his opening move while seizing up to six of the ten or so critical industrial targets.

With regards to Katrina, as seen by her using Freddie's message to Allessandro as delivered by Ryan, she is completely willing to make use of slimeballs, and if Michael manages to restrain himself from demanding that she kiss his feet while making Melissa his concubine, he will still be far and away the least awful option.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 April 2019, 10:00:56
Chances are fair to middling that Michael Hasek-Davion responds to the peace proposal the same way as Janos and Maximilian: "Sure, just marry your daughter to my heir."

Being fair, Morgan would probably be a decent candidate for that, but Katrina would be unlikely to take it any more seriously than she did the other responses.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 07 April 2019, 23:02:35
It's certainly a disputable thought.  Using a 2.4 to one numerical advantage to achieve crushing local superiority while actively hobbled by having to work around the top man on the border isn't exactly something that required Lyran intervention. With Michael actively plotting against the CC, that adds more units, assets, and transport to the table, and without him selling out troop movements to make Hanse look bad the 5th Crucis are less likely to lose their mech regiment, the Kestrel Grenadiers might not get chewed up, and assorted other reverses might not happen. The only real impediment would be a potential lack of vision keeping him from running the numbers on shipping availability and realizing he can simultaneously crush about a quarter of the CCAF as his opening move while seizing up to six of the ten or so critical industrial targets.

I'm certainly no expert, but it was my understanding that there were two considerations in play: first, the ability of the FedSuns economy to support a massed military offensive (especially with regards to transport assets), and second, the concern that diversion of too much force from the Draconis March would leave the door open for a DCMS strike.  In canon, I thought that Lyran money and jumpships led to increased development in the FedSuns, while the large-scale, broad-front offensive by the LCAF into Combine space during the opening moves of the 4SW diverted the DCMS from really laying into the Draconis March the way they could have (to say nothing of Wolf's Dragoons gutting the better part of an entire Military District's worth of line troops by themselves).

This isn't to say that MHD couldn't do real damage to the Cappellans.  Ridzik is still a slimeball, the CCAF is still (comparatively) tiny and poorly equipped, and the AFFS's RCTs (when not suffering from Mechwarrior Cabal-itis and fully brought to bear) are bigger, better equipped, and more doctrinally flexible than most of what the CCAF has.   Still, the Warrior Houses are very tough combined-arms elite units, the Cappellans love their dirty tricks, and if you squint a bit it kinda looks like the battalion-based organizational structure that the pre-4SW CCAF adopted had the seeds of a good combined arms doctrine in miniature.  I don't think they're a pushover unless you can bring absolutely overwhelming force to bear (which is what happened in canon).  Also I don't think it's possible to overestimate the value of having Justin Allard on the inside.  I'm not sure that still happens the same way if MSD is running the show.

Also, I agree that I don't think MHD is in the same league as Hanse when it comes to strategic vision.

Maybe an alt-universe Operation:RAT would involve a strike to take and hold the St. Andre-Tsitang-Second Try line, and possibly the Poznan-Pleione-Gan Singh line as well, thus cutting off Tikonov (while notably isolating Senior Col. Ridzik's own holding on Styk).  Then dig in and dare the CCAF to come and take the worlds back in the teeth of multiple full RCTs, all the while tempting Ridzik with leadership over a reborn Tikonov Grand Union.  That still cripples the Cappellans without being a full 4SW steamroll-stomp.  Also makes the Terran corridor really fun.

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With regards to Katrina, as seen by her using Freddie's message to Allessandro as delivered by Ryan, she is completely willing to make use of slimeballs, and if Michael manages to restrain himself from demanding that she kiss his feet while making Melissa his concubine, he will still be far and away the least awful option.

I agree that Katrina can use slimeballs.  But using one isn't the same as jumping into bed with one.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 10 April 2019, 17:33:28
#577 

The Free Worlds League has always been a fractious place, where germanium is easier to come by than genuine trust.  As a result, when SAFE finally induced a Lyran engineer to defect with the specifications for Battlemechs in 2462, a wild debate immediately flared up behind the closed doors of the League Defense Ministry and in the supervising Parliamentary committees.   Each member-state desperately wanted the technology for itself, wanted to prevent their rivals or competitors from getting their hands on it, and was terrified of letting the federal government and power-hungry Captain-General monopolize it.

The debate raged for weeks, with increasingly extreme rhetoric and espionage swirling, until finally an Oriente representative, displaying the trademark Allison diplomatic tact, suggested a compromise: (1) each province would be provided a copy of the schematics and allowed to make full use of them, and (2) in order to allay fears of overweening federal military might, the federal government would be forbidden from raising federal 'mech units. 

The Captain-General was, of course, furious with this proposal, but other members of the family pointed out to him that the Marik Commonwealth could raise all the 'mech units it wanted, and could do with them as it wished, without having to answer to Oriente, Regulus, or any of the other member-states.  Also, regiments and divisions of 'mechs were expensive, and the League's pride and joy was the Navy.

Opposition from the executive aside, the proposal was instantly popular.  It only became moreso as the smaller members were gradually bought off with promises of subsidies to bootstrap their own self-defense 'mech units.

As a result, while the LCAF, DCMS, AFFS, and CCAF all succumbed to varying degree to the "cult of the 'mechwarrior," in the FWLM, the humble infantryman and hot-shot fighter jock remained the dominant service branches, retaining the lion's share of the defense budget.  Power Armor becomes a heavily-invested in area, and rapidly becomes the most advanced outside of the Terran Hegemony.  By the time 3025 rolls around, huge swathes of the Free Worlds League might as well be the Periphery in terms of the number and quality of 'mechs available, and though a few provincial units are better most FWL 'mechs are something of a joke.  Instead, it's the humble grunts and tankers who win Marik's victories for them, with combat exoskeletons and even rudimentary powered armor.   
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 13 April 2019, 05:55:19
It's certainly a disputable thought.  Using a 2.4 to one numerical advantage to achieve crushing local superiority while actively hobbled by having to work around the top man on the border isn't exactly something that required Lyran intervention. With Michael actively plotting against the CC, that adds more units, assets, and transport to the table, and without him selling out troop movements to make Hanse look bad the 5th Crucis are less likely to lose their mech regiment, the Kestrel Grenadiers might not get chewed up, and assorted other reverses might not happen. The only real impediment would be a potential lack of vision keeping him from running the numbers on shipping availability and realizing he can simultaneously crush about a quarter of the CCAF as his opening move while seizing up to six of the ten or so critical industrial targets.

With regards to Katrina, as seen by her using Freddie's message to Allessandro as delivered by Ryan, she is completely willing to make use of slimeballs, and if Michael manages to restrain himself from demanding that she kiss his feet while making Melissa his concubine, he will still be far and away the least awful option.

I'll point out, according to intelligence operations handbook, that assassination that just "Hanse, in the spaceport, with a laser rifle" was supported by the Cappies. MHD had been turned already.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 14 April 2019, 00:40:11
  I recently recalled reading one of Cannonshop’s Ngo-verse fics where a Kowloonese cadet’s atypical performance in an exercise led inspectors to realise that the Nagelring was, and had been for decades, rigging exercises and skewing evaluations in what was functionally a grades-for-sale scheme, artificially inflating the performance of noble scions while unconnected cadets with actual skills and instincts (it was a nigh-Dark Age fic, so Phelan Kell was raised as an example) were either sandbagged-to-hell or just plain forced out in favour of their ‘betters’.  I think it was even hinted that this went as far back at the twenty-seventh century, and that a certain A.S. Kerensky might have benefited from such ‘over-polished’ evaluations.

  Leading me to Tribble #578:

  At some point in the Succession Wars, perhaps just after 1SW tapers off, the LC leadership take a good, long, hard look at the way the DCMS (and to a slightly lesser extent the FWLM) have repeated beaten the LCAF like a government mule and realise that Something Must Be Done about the state of the Lyran military.  (Much like the débâcle of Kasserine Pass made it clear that walking monuments to ineptitude like Lloyd Fredendall could not be tolerated in combat posts in time of war.)  The Archon, or a trusted agent thereof, puts together a handpicked working group, chosen explicitly for their competence and loyalty rather than noble rank or respect therefore, who proceed to take a chainsaw and a fusion-flamer to the deadwood in the LCAF.  The Nagelring program and the instructors are found to be hopelessly inept and/or corrupt and are either purged ruthlessly and replaced with honest and skilled educators, or completely disestablished in favour of institutions that teach actual military competence instead of being a glorified prep-school.  All officers are re-evaluated, and those promoted past their competence are demoted back to where their talents lie, if not outright cashiered or court-martialed for crimes committed in uniform (peculation being rampant, for instance); better to have their regiments led by brevet-Kommandants with energy and brains than by Colonels with wine-cellars and ‘the right kind of name(s)’.

  If nothing else, witnessing the glorious carnage of such a bureaucratic bloodletting would be cathartic to many a Lyran fan, as well as those who’ve ever had to deal with those kinds of people.

  (For the record, I was going to have throwaway references to something like this happening in the LC in later installments of The Virginia War, but even if I ever actually reach that point in those fics, it’s not directly relevant to events in the Cavaretta Expanse.)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 14 April 2019, 00:57:39
  (it was a nigh-Dark Age fic, so Phelan Kell was raised as an example)
Even if it was feasible for the Nagelring to be corrupt as hell(and I can certainly see it) I am unsure if Phelan Kell makes for a valid example of having been forced out in favor of better connected noble scions. Unconnected Phelan is not.

On a side note, I would be interested to know more about what the heck is going on in the Cavaretta.
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Post by: Dave Talley on 14 April 2019, 04:07:51
and Phelan is an arrogant jackass, who in his families regiment wasnt even a lance commander
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Post by: gladius on 14 April 2019, 05:31:03
  I recently recalled reading one of Cannonshop’s Ngo-verse fics where a Kowloonese cadet’s atypical performance in an exercise led inspectors to realise that the Nagelring was, and had been for decades, rigging exercises and skewing evaluations in what was functionally a grades-for-sale scheme, artificially inflating the performance of noble scions while unconnected cadets with actual skills and instincts (it was a nigh-Dark Age fic, so Phelan Kell was raised as an example) were either sandbagged-to-hell or just plain forced out in favour of their ‘betters’.  I think it was even hinted that this went as far back at the twenty-seventh century, and that a certain A.S. Kerensky might have benefited from such ‘over-polished’ evaluations.


A similar subplot showed up in the Bruce Quest, with a Dukes people screwing with Nagalring applications, failing low class people who actually passed, and demanding bribes to ‘retest’.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 14 April 2019, 08:24:37
Even if it was feasible for the Nagelring to be corrupt as hell (and I can certainly see it) I am unsure if Phelan Kell makes for a valid example of having been forced out in favor of better connected noble scions. Unconnected Phelan is not.

and Phelan is an arrogant jackass, who in his families regiment wasnt even a lance commander
  I’m still trying to find the story in question to confirm, but IIRC, Cannonshop’s ‘Word of Author’ on the matter was that at a remove of a century or so, the details had gotten a little blurred; Phelan’s actual history and tale-of-woe had been pop-culture-distilled down to “A guy with enough chops to become Khan of Clan Wolf got turfed out of the Nagelring to go merc because the faculty Did Not Like His Style”.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 14 April 2019, 08:57:03
Just some real life lessons I've learned the hard way which impacts your wonderful Nagelring purge twist. The 'Betters' will fight back anyway they can and after the reform Archon is gone these establishment types and their kin will be back. I'm not saying they will violently resist mind you but using their strengths (connections, wealth, etc.) to make life difficult for the Archon's new pets and weather the storm. Remember they are good at doing nothing and sitting bye watching time go bye. Purging them completely from the Lyran state means you'd fundamentally have to alter it at it's very foundations.

Incidentally one of my favorite movies is In Harm's Way which is another John Wayne wins WW2 piece. Way dated nowadays the theme of said pic could be very helpful to your concept Trace. Basically an inept prewar Admiral ain't getting the job done but he has powerful connections that the higher ups realize can't simply be overcome. Their solution is to basically keep him in his position as strategic commander but place Wayne's character in full tactical command. I won't ruin the movie for you if your interested (I know the battle are toy boats, it's a black and white, etc.) but suffice it to say things work out. I've always thought the them plays out in real life as corruption is tolerated in peacetime but when stuff hits the fan well it's time to get someone in here who can do the job no matter how gruff they are.

Of course with my alternate loving self and Battletech I did create a setting were a Steiner Warlord created a far different nation rather than suffer Lyran military ineptitude any further. The Teutonic Domians was essentially the Protectorate of Donegal that went hardcore militarist inspired by historic examples of the distant past. Think Prussia and WW1 era German Empire. A rump Skye Commonwealth remained however with much of the wealth, culture, and industry of the Lyran state intact.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 19 April 2019, 09:36:51
I'll point out, according to intelligence operations handbook, that assassination that just "Hanse, in the spaceport, with a laser rifle" was supported by the Cappies. MHD had been turned already.

And he was planning to turn on them at the opportune moment for at least as long. Concentrating effort in the Combine initially costs him little to nothing and lulls Max into a false sense of security, and as seen in OTL the staging areas for a thrust to seize Dieron work just fine for carving Tikonov up like a roast.

In the long term I don't see it working out great for the FS due to Michael lacking inspirational vision, but in the short term without the focus on research and Outback uplifting there would be more resources to throw at the war.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 19 April 2019, 16:44:57
#579

As the Succession Wars raged on, the Periphery States continued their laborious rebuilding from the Uprising and received a sudden but unsettling influx of refugees from the wars. After the first few raids they quickly learn that showing any prosperity draws unwelcome attention from the still mighty Successor States and new development quickly shifts to worlds well away from (and preferably unknown to) the Successor States. This habit is quickly picked up on by other smaller states. While there are persistent reports that some hidden developments are going on, the Successor States assume it's relatively minor. They couldn't be more wrong.

In 3004, Katrina Steiner flees into the periphery and blunders into the truth - the Inner Sphere is in fact a tiny backwater compared to several large and sprawling Periphery states that enjoy technology on par with the Star League. And unlike many men and women who found this out and were silenced (or just made new homes their away from the madness), Katrina manages to return to the Inner Sphere.

Her later Peace Proposal had very little to do with ending the Succession Wars and everything to do with trying to achieve some sort of reconciliation with the mighty neighbours who are increasingly aware that the Inner Sphere has no way of oppressing them again.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 19 April 2019, 21:25:57
Just some real life lessons I've learned the hard way which impacts your wonderful Nagelring purge twist. The 'Betters' will fight back anyway they can and after the reform Archon is gone these establishment types and their kin will be back. I'm not saying they will violently resist mind you but using their strengths (connections, wealth, etc.) to make life difficult for the Archon's new pets and weather the storm. Remember they are good at doing nothing and sitting bye watching time go bye. Purging them completely from the Lyran state means you'd fundamentally have to alter it at [its] very foundations.
  Oh, I don’t doubt there’d be all kinds of passive resistance and active pushback.  Would it get to Black Dragon levels of subversion or even open rebellion by the nobility?  We’d have to write/play it out and see, I guess.  Hell, it might even spark a full-blown popular uprising and overthrow of the established aristocracy, in the style of the French Revolution or the English Civil War....

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Incidentally one of my favorite movies is In Harm's Way which is another John Wayne wins WW2 piece. Way dated nowadays the theme of said pic could be very helpful to your concept Trace. Basically an inept prewar Admiral ain't getting the job done but he has powerful connections that the higher ups realize can't simply be overcome. Their solution is to basically keep him in his position as strategic commander but place Wayne's character in full tactical command. I won't ruin the movie for you if your interested (I know the battle are toy boats, it's a black and white, etc.) but suffice it to say things work out. I've always thought the them plays out in real life as corruption is tolerated in peacetime but when stuff hits the fan well it's time to get someone in here who can do the job no matter how gruff they are.
  I remember seeing parts of that movie as a kid, though I was too young to understand the full context and was mainly there for stuff blowing up.  I’ve actually been trying to find a copy on DVD that won’t kill me with the shipping costs/exchange rate/Region-locks.  :-\

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Of course with my alternate loving self and Battletech I did create a setting were a Steiner Warlord created a far different nation rather than suffer Lyran military ineptitude any further. The Teutonic [Domains] was essentially the Protectorate of Donegal that went hardcore militarist inspired by historic examples of the distant past. Think Prussia and WW1 era German Empire. A rump Skye Commonwealth remained however with much of the wealth, culture, and industry of the Lyran state intact.
  Sounds like something worth reading — did it ever get posted anywhere?


EDIT: drakensis... shut up and take my C-bills!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 19 April 2019, 22:10:11
  Oh, I don’t doubt there’d be all kinds of passive resistance and active pushback.  Would it get to Black Dragon levels of subversion or even open rebellion by the nobility?  We’d have to write/play it out and see, I guess.  Hell, it might even spark a full-blown popular uprising and overthrow of the established aristocracy, in the style of the French Revolution or the English Civil War....
 
Oh it would very much take a conflagaration resembling those two to make such reforms stick. The Black Dragon after all waited a generation to make their move. This aristocracy has been entrenched for far longer. Their means of accumulating and exerting influence deeply ingrained into Lyran society. I can easily see them splitting between reformist and traditionalist lines. With several families including possibly the Steiners themselves likely splitting as well, thus creating a Wars of the Roses scenario as well.
#579
Her later Peace Proposal had very little to do with ending the Succession Wars and everything to do with trying to achieve some sort of reconciliation with the mighty neighbours who are increasingly aware that the Inner Sphere has no way of oppressing them again.
Cue the Dracs trying magic bushido hands. And hilarity ensued.

And yes, gonna echo Trace here. Take my C-bills and write it!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 20 April 2019, 06:50:31
i have the Movie.  DVD came in a 3 movie pack of John Wayne.   Donovan's Reef, Hatari, In Harms Way
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 20 April 2019, 21:54:57
drakensis... shut up and take my C-bills!

SECONDED!  Hordes of Angry Space Amish Fighter-Aces When?!?!?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 21 April 2019, 09:37:30
Of course with my alternate loving self and Battletech I did create a setting were a Steiner Warlord created a far different nation rather than suffer Lyran military ineptitude any further. The Teutonic Domains was essentially the Protectorate of Donegal that went hardcore militarist inspired by historic examples of the distant past. Think Prussia and WW1 era German Empire. A rump Skye Commonwealth remained however with much of the wealth, culture, and industry of the Lyran state intact.

  Sounds like something worth reading — did it ever get posted anywhere?

No, I have not previously but let me layout my third massive BattleTech setting which I call Revisionaries (or Splinters if you prefer).

The survival of Charles Sinclair as the cyborg hero of ComStar on Tukayyid creates a nemesis for the “Master” Thomas Marik. Events between them escalate to the Battle of Terra were ComStar aided by a mercenary coalition defeat the Blakist Operation Odysseus. This gives birth to the Terran Union which is essentially a reborn Hegemony at the center of the InnerSphere backed by ComStar. Its expansion fostered by mercenary defections and popular uprising against the Great Houses leads to a far different Whitting Conference.

Instead of a united Star League a divided InnerSphere is the result with the Word of Blake, Lyran Alliance, and Free Worlds League all pledging to crush the Terran Union. They are joined by hardliners from the Draconis Combine and Federated Suns but as war descended some realized the Clan threat had to be dealt with. [The location of the Clan Homeworlds are never discovered] This Heroic Coalition led of course by Victor Ian Steiner Davion and Focht vows to eject the Invading Clans from the InnerSphere no matter the cost.

With two major wars going on at the same a lot is happening but the results are a wholesale reshaping of the InnerSphere. The Terran Union survives as the Capellan Confederation grows but the rest of the Houses are almost unrecognizable. The Clans are effectively split with the Wardens (Ghost Bear as part of the Rasalhague Dominion, Wolf as part of the Arc Royal Defense Concord, Nova Cat as the Alshain Holdfast, Snow Raven as the United Outworlds, Diamond Shark as the Rim Protectorate, Steel Viper as the Finmark Stronghold) absorbed by the InnerSphere. The Crusaders are forced to retreat to retreat and of course vow revenge.

The Free Worlds League is sundered into four different states - the Marik League, Orand Alliance (Oriente and Andurien - anti-Liao), Regulan States, and the Tamarind District - after Thomas the Imposter is exposed. The Lyran Alliance is similarly destroyed by revelations that Katherine murdered here parents and tried to sabotage the anti-Clan force. John Dinesen Steiner one of those heroes and illegimate son of Frederick Steiner founds the new Teutonic Domains as the Arc Royal Concord goes its own way along with the Skye Commonwealth.

The St. Ives Compact is still lingering around and I was even thinking about a partnership with the Hell's Horses instigated by the great Kai Allard Liao. Like the Capellan Confederation it grows at the expense of a reduced Federated Suns which is devastated by the death Victor Ian Steiner-Davion. The Edgeward Coalition is born as a result of internal upheavals based on Filtvelt. The Draconis Combine is not spared either as even Uncle Chandy's leadership is not enough to prevent the Arkab League from breaking away.

I know a lot of broad strokes but it is in development....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 21 April 2019, 11:22:46
Re: #579:

So, Drakensis… is the title of this one "Chapterhouse: Tharkad"?  ^-^
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 22 April 2019, 06:01:23
Something like that!
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Post by: Daryk on 22 April 2019, 16:22:38
Sweet... I'd read that one in a heartbeat...  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 07 May 2019, 14:11:56
#580

As the debate over who would be First Lord of the Star League bogged down, and the First Succession War ended, one man from a neutral party arrived on Terra and said, “ENOUGH!!! If one of you wants to be First Lord of the Star League then why don’t the lot of you fight it out and leave the rest of the Inner Sphere out of it!” With that, the man stormed out of the conference leaving everyone in the room balking at the sheer audacity he had displayed.

Later, that same man apologized for his words but gave a suggestion to, possibly, bring about a more peaceful solution rather than allow the Inner Sphere fall into another war; he called it the Star League Fight of Succession. He proposed that representatives from the Successor States and Periphery Realms send their best MechWarriors to Solaris 7 and fight until one was left standing. The winner’s nation would win the right to claim the title First Lord of the Star League for a period of 5 years before the next fight began. Surprisingly, even ComStar was invited to compete in it.

The House Lords salivated at the idea and, with great reluctance, agreed to it. Thus the Star League Succession Fights began with each nation having at least won the right at least once each. Even ComStar won the right a couple of times

When Wolf’s Dragoons arrive to the Inner Sphere to take their first contract, they are surprised and how these fights were similar to the Trials the Clans participated in and reported it back to the Homeworlds. Now the Clans have a dilemma; should they allow this competition to continue, should they invade, or should they send representatives from each of their clans to participate?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 08 May 2019, 05:58:04
#580

I saw this plot in a movie somewhere. One on one mech combat in place of large generational conflicts.
On the plus side, without the wholesale destruction of infrastructure, they may well match and possibly even surpass Clan tech.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 08 May 2019, 09:00:48
I got the idea from Robot Jox and G Gundam.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 09 May 2019, 21:36:04
Not so much a tribble, but for some reason I want to see a story with the federated suns going over the line of righteous and well into the territory of self-righteous

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 10 May 2019, 11:04:50
Not so much a tribble, but for some reason I want to see a story with the federated suns going over the line of righteous and well into the territory of self-righteous

You may like the Darius Davion stories, if you haven't already read them.  Even if they're not quite what you're thinking of, they're also very funny.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 19 May 2019, 13:21:54
a "Tribble" that bothered me recently.  Set during the Clan invasion period, and based/themed on Sabaton's "40:1".  I imagine it would be somewhere in the Free Rassalhague area...
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Post by: Daryk on 19 May 2019, 17:11:09
Uh... going to need a little more detail than that...  ???
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Post by: DOC_Agren on 19 May 2019, 20:28:40
40:1 is  based on the story of Battle of Wizna, and it is like the 300.. as 700 Poles held off and up 40000 German by making a stand for like 3 days.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 19 May 2019, 20:31:50
I found Cannonshop's design thread down in the BA forum that explained that... a very interesting battle!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dubble_g on 04 June 2019, 01:58:00
AUs seem popular here, but I must admit I tend to think on a smaller scale, of little stories you could tell within the existing, published BT universe. Here's two ideas--I'd be interested to know if you thought either had promise, and I may turn it into something longer...

#581

3048, the FedCom/Combine border. The Federated Commonwealth grows stronger each day, its victory just a matter of time ... and a cadre of young noble officers in a FedCom RCT are in despair. There's been no serious fighting since 3039, almost 10 years ago! Hanse and Melissa seem content with the status quo. Their skills are going to rust, and in a hundred years, who will remember their names? The next push against the Combine could be a generation away. How can they earn honor, glory and promotion with nobody to fight?

And so a cabal forms. Their plan: To instigate a war between the FedCom and Combine ... unbeknown to them, on the eve of the Clan Invasion of the Inner Sphere

#582

2766, the Terran Hegemony. The population watches in bemusement as Rim Worlds Army units begin to move into abandoned SLDF barracks across the planet. Though none of them realize it, the clock is ticking.

It'd be a story about divided loyalties, about how we decide the 'right' thing to do. We'd follow a cast of characters:
- An SLDF officer, struggling with her oath/duty to obey orders, against her instincts telling her the RWA is the enemy
- The RWA commander, conflicted by his conscience and admiration for the SLDF, but aware the political officer is watching over his shoulder...
- An RWA sympathizer whose friends join the resistance -- does he report them or stay silent?
- The resistance -- do they fight, knowing they will invite retaliation and put the lives of their friends and family in danger?
- A wounded and bitter veteran of the Periphery Uprising -- does he help the army he feels are responsible for his wounds, or sit by and watch them die?
 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: mighty midget on 23 June 2019, 06:46:33
Tribble 583 -

Following the Word of Blake's capture of Terra in 3058 it was discovered that not only had ComStar been reverse engineering Clan technology but they had been quietly developing methods of mass production.  This information quickly came to the attention of The Master, who focused significant resources into the projects.  By mid-3067 this project had borne considerable fruit and mass production of most Clan weaponry was ready.  The projects for other equipment, such as engines and armor, was lagging behind but nearing readiness.  A few months before the 4th Whitting Conference, as provisional members of the Star League, the Word of Blake announced their intent to share this research with the Star League member-states and to begin plans for the removal of the remaining Clans from the Inner Sphere.  This gave the Houses plenty of incentive, both technology and territory, to keep the Star League together for a few more years.
   
   The 4th Whitting Conference quickly became a war planning session with the WoB assisting greatly with logistics and capital ship support.  The agreed response from many House lords was "I'm glad they hate the Clans more than they hate us…".  Of significant concern to many leaders were the numbers of new formations, so-called Shadow Divisions, that the WoB was contributing and the troops in those units.
   
   The final removal of the Clans from the Inner Sphere began on July 4th 3068 with simultaneous assaults against the Jade Falcons and the Ghost Bears.
   
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Questions to work through:
- What would the fate of the Wolves-in-Exile and Nova Cats be?  Since the Word really hates the Clans…
- When the removal was complete, what carrots could be used to keep the Star League going?  I'd see the WoB as a key member and the major periphery states benefiting greatly from the technology sharing.  My thoughts are that the Word, Taurians, MoC and Outworlds Alliance all becoming full members of the Star League within a couple of years which would drastically shift the voting.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 23 June 2019, 08:57:35
Tribble 584: The Hydraulic Empire.

"The Council Lords have left Terra without agreeing on who shall lead the Star League. It seems they could only agree on my appointment as Minister of Communications... They will go to war, and soon. Somehow, I must guard the remnants of the civilization we so thoughtlessly threw away. I won't repair the communications network only to see it destroyed by those arrogant idiots. I refuse. But how to safeguard the technology? I might find allies... among those like me who understand that our precious technology must not be destroyed. We must preserve the communications that all our worlds need to survive... and when the Council Lords and their so-called Successor States have pounded themselves to dust, we will have the means to save humanity..."

Jerome Blake did not rest idly upon his laurels with his conquest of the Sol system.  Though the crown jewel of the Terran Hegemony was a burned-out warzone, Blake searched for other allies from among the shattered remains of the Star League's bureaucracy.  ComStar had its origins in his remit as minister of communications, but there were others.  The hegemony had maintained a stranglehold on advanced terraforming technology, and while the Houses were doing their best to loot that treasure, Blake could offer a safe haven and an ongoing project-the repair of Venus' shattered sun-shield, would certainly keep them busy, even if it was a tremendous loss of money for the young ComStar. 

It would be under his successor however, that the water-filtering systems of the inner sphere would begin to dry up.  World after world was abandoned, simply because there was not enough water for the people, because water was contaminated, because water fell from the sky in the wrong places.  World after world quietly slipped from the hands of the Successor states, who had never quite found enough details to rebuild the Hegemony's water-works...and into the grasp of Comstar.  Men need water to live, after all, and when the phone company expands into the water company, it's strength is multiplied tenfold.  Some within Comstar's terraforming and hydraulic engineering devisions fumed quietly at the worlds that were never quite abandoned by the great powers-but enough slipped through their grasp, enough for Comstar to swell like a red giant at the end of it's life.  Even the Periphery soon found worlds swinging decisively into the camp of Comstar, especially in the recently settled provinces of the Outworld's Alliance.  But, at the same time, Comstar's grip became ever more absolute, as the dependency of these worlds upon their charity became equally total...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 03 July 2019, 15:14:34
Tribble 585

The year is 3028. The Gray Death Legion, infamously guilty of mass-murder during their Sirian campaign have capped their refusal to stand down and face investigation by the FWLM and savage destruction of many towns on their base world of Helm with a vicious attack on Marik while the Captain-General was in residence. Tragically, Duke Garth Marik arrived in time to avenge his cousin but not quite to save him. Among the many casualties was a minor ComStar Precentor named Rachan.

The Duke of Irian has taken up the responsibility of serving the Free Worlds League as their new Captain-General, sending his regrets and representatives to Terra for the wedding of the century as he consolidates his position. Garth's policies have quickly cooled relations with the Concord of Kapteyn allies as he seems intent on remaining out of the current war, a decision that House Steiner and House Davion are entirely willing to accept. House Liao is less happy, particularly as Garth has been more than willing to allow House Halas and House Humphreys free rein to raid Capellan worlds, replacing material losses by the provincial regiments with few questions asked.

Irian Technologies has been more than happy to assist the lord of their homeworld by providing equipment to him and the FWLM at cost and heavily involving themselves in attempts to build a university to rival NAIS. While some of Garth's advisors know that he is refitting the Free Worlds Guards with Star League equipment uncovered in a hidden cache under Helm, only a tiny handful know that he presented IrTech with one of the very few copies of the computer core he found in that cache.

The Federated Commonwealth may be a formidable foe, Garth admits, but in ten to fifteen years when the FWL - unscarred by this war - has re-built its industries and regiments with Star League technology, the balance of power will look very different. For now, he is willing to wait, watch and take whatever scraps of the Capellan Confederation that Hanse Davion doesn't, using them to pay off the support Andurien and Oriente have offered him...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 03 July 2019, 15:17:28
Heh... I'm pretty sure that means there won't BE a Capellan Confederation in "10-15 years"...  ^-^
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 03 July 2019, 21:23:24
Interesting drak, wonder what would happen when the Clans come to town??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 31 July 2019, 04:05:58
Tribble 586

This stemmed from a couple of comments made on the Spacebattles forum in a general BT thread. I'll repost for context:

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gyrobot said:
So in a hypothetical universe where Tukiyyad ended with the more militant clans winning (aka smoke Jaguar, Diamond Shark, Steel Viper and Nova Cat ) winning or stalemating and Ghost Bear, Jade Falcon and Clan Wolf losing badly against the forces. How does that affect the clan political climate as smoke jaguar argues that the progressive clans caused the downfall of the Clan Invasion?

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Captain Orsai said:
I can't really see how that would happen, as it would require the rabidly Crusader Jaguars to acknowledge that the Wolves have a better idea of what's going on than they do; and not only hold their bidding to the same level as Ulric Kerensky's, but fight vastly, vastly more cautiously than they have ever demonstrated the ability to.

So, yeah, first we gotta establish just how the hell that happens.


I think the most likely way for this to happen is for Leo Showers to survive the ramming attack.

The Inner Sphere doesn't have breathing space to move troops around and for Theodore and Hanse to come to an agreement. As a result, the Smoke Jaguars hit Luthien without reinforcements from the Nova Cats but also with no Wolf Dragoons & Kell Hounds, leading to the Theodore being defeated - although he batters the Jaguars pretty well and manages to evacuate enough of the Combine government, surviving military forces and key Luthien Armor Works equipment and personnel that the Combine is just badly hurt not mortally wounded. Takashi dies gloriously but as a last gift to his son accepts all responsibility for the defeat so Theodore can survive the political impact of losing Luthien (relocating to New Samarkand).

Considerably over-estimating the damage to the Combine and now aware Terra is a target, Waterly turns to Focht who unveils his plans to fight a proxy battle. Waterly approves and Focht takes the offer to Ulric Kerensky. Kerensky sees this as a chance to stall the Clan invasion and takes it to the Grand Council where he finds a surprise ally: the ilKhan Showers. With his own clan having taken serious losses but unwilling to accept a reserve clan being activated to share their corridor, Showers sees this as a chance to win the war and 'be the ilKhan who took Terra'.

For the sake of argument, assume that the battle takes place on Tukkayid again but about a year earlier than canon. The ilKhan gets the support of the three reserve Clan's khans by assuring them of a place in the battle: he assigns the honour of landing in a 'first wave' under Ulric's command, while the four main clans will land two days later - Ulric takes an honour guard in the First Wave, but Garth Radick leads the bulk of the Wolves in this Second Wave.

While the ComGuard forces are no smaller, they have had a year less to train and to accumulate supplies. The first wave of landings are shut down hard but tie up enough forces that when the second wave lands there aren't enough reserves left to handle them the same way. Focht keeps his eye on the ball: there are fourteen objectives and he only needs eight of them to win. The Nova Cats, Diamond Sharks and Steel Vipers never get near their targets and only heroic efforts by Ulric leading a galaxy of Clan Wolf committed as his 'honor guard' (Showers allowed this since it means Clan Wolf is much less likely to do well against their assigned targets - and something that surprised Focht, letting Ulric get away with that) manages to extricate about half the Nova Cat and Diamond Shark forces. Six points for ComStar - but ashamed of this disaster the six khans don't make this clear to the ilKhan (while Ulric is rather happy to let the other Clans fail to grasp the scale of this failure - for now).

Of the second wave, the four clans charge for their targets, still eager to gain glory. However, Showers has learned some lessons and coordinates the push between the Jade Falcons and Smoke Jaguars, sharing data on where the ComGuards are. This lets them suddenly divert from their targets and crush three ComGuards divisions between them, weakening defenses to the point that the two Clans are able to take the cities they're after. Four points for the Clans.

So it all comes down to Clan Ghost Bear and Clan Wolf. The former aren't pushing incredibly fast, instead making a deliberate approach with some caution and intent on landing a concentrated punch against resistance. While this lets them crush everything in their path at first, reaching their first target, it also takes long enough that Focht can redeploy and reinforce the other city turning into a nasty looking stand off.

Clan Wolf, under Radick (and effectively Conal Ward) however is out to show that they can do better than Ulric - meaning not using his 'cowardly' tactics. And forgetting that these tactics work. Also not coordinating with the other Crusaders, because as we've often seen, the Wolf rivalry with the Jaguars and Falcons always takes precedence. As a result, the main crusader faction within the Wolves runs right into forces that Focht had focused serious resources, expecting to be up against Ulric's best. It's a slaughter for both sides but the ComGuards can afford that - and the Wolves can't.

Showers finally realises that things are in the balance. He needs the Ghost Bears and Wolves to take all their targets - or at least three, which will make this a draw and effectively go into overtime so he can negotiate with the other Khans to redeploy and take additional targets. Clan Ghost Bear look at their likely casualties and don't see why they have to take these losses for the sake of Showers. The Wolves have lost many of their available leaders and when Showers calls Ulric back, he gets a testy reply that the Khan's currently fully engaged in extricating the survivors of the first wave and is tying down an estimated half of the ComGuards with hit and run attacks from only a single galaxy. If he withdraws, not only will the three landing zones be overrun before the other Clans can evacuate but Focht can also throw a dozen more divisions at the second wave.

Showers tries to personally take command and force the remaining Wolves to push on at their two targets, taking one but breaking the back of the remaining Wolf Crusaders. (No small number of wardens die in the process, but they are assigned 'less glorious' roles that oddly leave them with a lower casualty rate. Faced with reality, Leo Showers is forced to accept the outcome: two clan victories, two draws and three defeats, a total of 8 ComGuard victories, and the 15 year truce that Focht bargained with.

In the aftermath, Showers is politically vulnerable since he's been defeated but he does have some personal glory. The Smoke Jaguar losses are less brutal than in canon and they're facing a much weaker Combine. He is able to 'compensate' the reserve Clans by granting them the right to trial for worlds in the occupation zones of the decimated Clan Wolf and Clan Smoke Jaguar - but avoids the poisonous pairings of canon, with Vipers moving into the Smoke Jaguar OZ and the Cats into the Wolf OZ. The Diamond Sharks can reinforce the Jade Falcons and the Ghost Bears but wind up with only tiny holdings - which they are happy with since it lets them use the enclaves as trading holdings as the OZs transition to long-term Clan rule.

Ulric avoids most of the blame for the defeat since he and Natasha Kerensky were scoring the only 'victories' the Wolves have to work with. With the Wolf Crusaders mostly dead, Ulric uses Phelan (not bloodnamed in this scenario) as point-man for recruiting Inner Sphere warriors into the Clan and rebuilding their ranks as a 'short term measure' until new generations of trueborn warriors can be raised. With the Jade Falcons smarting at the outcome of Tukkayid while still ebullient over their own successes there, there's potential for a very nasty conflict on that frontier so the Wolves can't afford even short-term weakness.

On the other side of the divide, the AFFC has finally redeployed to stall an invasion that now doesn't appear to be coming. They have breathing space and Hanse Davion is still in control (a full year before his canonical death which may potentially be handwaved). The Combine is weakened and effectively a buffer-state against the Clans (while Hanse recognises he could smash Theodore right now, that then leaves him occupying hundreds of hostile worlds and having to face the entire Invasion when it resumes in 3066 (fifteen years from the earlier date of the battle). With no one year lull, the leaders of the Inner Sphere couldn't leave their capitals for a conference on Outreach and the Wolf Dragoons didn't save Luthien so right now Jaime Wolf is on rather thin ice. Also the Free Worlds League isn't selling arms to the Federated Commonwealth on credit.

If Romano does assassinate Justin as in canon (possible but less likely without the arguments on Outreach to spark her to actual action) or perhaps actually kills Candace too, it's likely the Federated Commonwealth can mobilise and crush them quickly. Whether this leads to annexation, an Allard-Liao ruled Confederation as an ally or dividing Capellan worlds between the FedCom and a larger St Ives Compact is an open question.

And Myndo Waterly still winds up getting shot in the face by Focht, because I can't see her not attempting Scorpion.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 31 July 2019, 04:37:39
I second the Right Honourable Member for New Avalon's theory and move that it be accepted by acclamation.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 31 July 2019, 05:13:08
One of the two things I'd like to know more clearly about the Battle of Tukayyid is did the ComGuards take bondsman (which is not relevant here) and how much did they adhere to zellbrigen? This point is very much at the heart of the matter of how the Clans could have won this climatic battle. To me even in canon the ComGuards did not engage in an honorable Clan style duel and therefore could very well have been subject to a gloves off approach by any or all of the Clans involved. Now I am not even going to the point of screaming orbital bombardment but rather calling off your initial bids because of their dishonorable behavior and resorting to combined fire. However one could say the stakes deserve to be raised further after Operation Scorpion which if any Khan has knowledge of during the battle could raise the stakes beyond ComStar's capability to fight this battle.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 31 July 2019, 06:34:06
Judging by the Tukkayid Sourcebook, the ComGuards used every dirty trick available tactic they could lay their hands on.

I think Zellbrigen on the day was to be offered and if rejected the gloves came off, so I think for a lot of Tukkayid, especially for less hidebound Clans, they played pretty fast a loose from the get-go and still lost.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 31 July 2019, 11:24:50
I agree with your assessment Nova. The ComGuards weren't following Zell but there actions were not wholly dishonorable. The treachery of Primus Waterly and Operation Scorpion if factored in could have bought escalation which ComStar couldn't have matched.

Two things may play into a reason it never did.

1. Scope - this battle was one of the largest Mech conflicts ever fought and all the participants knew it. Conduct therefore would be above reproach in this legendary battle.

2. Clan Perception - with seven Invading Clans partaking often in competition with each other none would likely commit an action which would taint their victory.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 31 July 2019, 15:10:28
If Hanse lives, things go VERY differently in all kinds of ways...  Katherine might have been able to assassinate her mother, but her father was a rather harder target.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 31 July 2019, 18:08:42
If Hanse lives, things go VERY differently in all kinds of ways...  Katherine might have been able to assassinate her mother, but her father was a rather harder target.

Yeah, Katherine is an opportunist. She would take what opportunities she could at the lowest cost. With Hanse and Melissa living longer, those opportunities would change, and we might see a very different Katherine, or very different Katherine driven machinations.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RolandHTG on 01 August 2019, 09:53:30
 

Forces are sent to help support the fight against the Clans, both to help protect the Inner Sphere, raise the sullied reputation of the Confederation, and to deal with unrelibale troops by bleeding them against the Clan razor. Inspired, individual Free Worlds League governmnets follow suit, sending forces to support the Commonwealth and the other allies, and in the leadup to the battle of Tukkayyid, the Clans face a far more united Inner Sphere ... thanks to a few malfunctioning explosive bolts ...
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Big MAC versus the Green Turkeys with Kai at the Helm? Yes Please
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 11 August 2019, 05:26:59
#587 - How Much For Just The Inner Sphere?

I spent part of yesterday looking at possibilities for shaking up the Clan Invasion set up, starting from the trials to decide which clans would participate. the mechanism would be adding one Clan warrior who was sufficiently skilled to tip the balance a little in these trials. After some reflection I decided to add the warrior to Clan Diamond Shark.

Per canon, the Diamond Sharks lose to the Star Adders, conceding rather than taking heavy losses, but beat the Hells Horses and the Goliath Scorpions. (This is actually pretty plausible - the Star Adder-Diamond Shark was the only first round Trial that wasn't a grudge match so the Sharks probably came out relatively unscathed compared to their subsequent opponents.) After the three rounds of the main trials, this leaves the Diamond Sharks as one of the six finalists and in canon they lost to the Steel Vipers. Here the warrior who was added turns the tables and they beat the Steel Vipers, moving on to the final match, which pits them against the Ghost Bears over which Clan will get a corridor and which is the reserve. In canon the Bears beat the Vipers but here the Sharks beat the Bears.

This means the four invaders are the Wolves (no score, automatically on Beta Corridor), Jade Falcons (4-0, get the much desired Alpha Corridor), the Smoke Jaguars (3-1) and the Diamond Sharks (4-1). In canon the Ghost Bears had been 3-1 too and the Jaguars were deemed to have second choice because they'd faced and beaten the Ghost Bears earlier. Here it's ruled that an 80% win rate is better than a 75% win rate so the Sharks get first choice between the Gamma and Delta Corridors. They take Delta, leaving them facing the Draconis Combine, while the Smoke Jaguars have to take what was the Ghost Bear's invasion corridor in canon. Clan Ghost Bear are the reserves, although the Steel Vipers and Nova Cats fight trials of refusal to be secondary reserves.

In canon the Diamond Sharks offered to sell supplies to the invaders so it seems likely that even under hardcore Crusader Ian Hawker they would realise they need a lot of supplies to run an invasion, and they have the economic might to obtain and bring supplies. As a result they do a little better in the advance and avoid some of the Smoke Jaguars' terrible decisions - for example, they identify Hohiro Kurita in captivity and ship him off to the homeworlds where he can't reasonably rescued. They also don't bombard a city out of pique. Cities, even damaged by uprisings, are valuable. As a result, warship use isn't quite as frowned on later on (although the Wolf bidding over Rasalhague does mean that warships are less often bid after the early waves).

After Rasalhague falls to Clan Wolf, several Diamond Sharks want to take Luthien for the prestige. Their leaders see this is partly simply a thirst for glory but there are sound arguments in favour of this anyway: why contest with other Clans over worlds on the direct route to Terra if you can break through a demoralised and disorganised Draconis Combine, which is the likely result of taking Luthien - not to mention, acquiring all the factories there. Therefore, in the fourth wave, the Diamond Sharks take Pesht, as a stepping stone towards the capital... and then Leo Showers dies. The invasion is put on hold as Khans head back to Strana Mechty to elect a new ilKhan. However, the Diamond Sharks do authorise some raiding on the Draconis Combine to prevent the Combine from realising that they have a reprieve. Taking a few worlds to solidify the Sharks' grip on Pesht is authorised (only three worlds compared to twenty-nine taken through the previous four waves, but enough to keep the Combine leaders guessing).

When Ulric is elected he activates the Steel Vipers to reinforce the Jade Falcons and the Ghost Bears to reinforce the Diamond Sharks. He hopes for friction, given the Sharks beat the Bears out on the chance to be invaders. Instead the Diamond Shark leadership effectively offer the Ghost Bears a sub-corridor between them and the Smoke Jaguars, offering them basing rights until they can take their own worlds and being very hospitable. The Bears conclude they're getting everything they want, so this is fine with them. (The Smoke Jaguars are pissy, so Ulric gets friction anyway, but not affecting the Sharks).

As the attacks resume, the Diamond Sharks are focused on Luthien and cutting through the 'soft interior' of the Combine. The invasion of Luthien is assigned the full weight of all three available galaxies (garrisons are being slipped in as 'auxiliary' troops that border on violating the original terms of the bid but all the invading Clans are doing this on the quiet). The FedCom has enough warning to send the Wolf Dragoons and Kell Hounds, so the defenders have sixteen regiments, but the Sharks have only three galaxies compared to the five Smoke Jaguar and Nova Cat galaxies of canon. However, the Sharks also have their warships available and for the first time use them, bringing two destroyers into low orbit (heavily escorted by aerospace fighters) to unleash orbital bombardment on the defences around the Imperial City, smashing any concentration of troops heavy enough to potentially wear down the Diamond Sharks, who can therefore engage under favourable circumstances. While the battle lasts for weeks and seriously depletes the Diamond Shark supplies, many of them aboard the warships), the result is a victory for the Diamond Sharks who control the Draconis capital (without several industrial facilities that mysteriously blew up as Theodore Kurita's remaining troops escaped on dropships.

While the Diamond Sharks are able to take a few more worlds, this is a shell - they're hitting worlds stripped of their defences to reinforce Luthien and doing so under ruthless control of consumable expenditure as stockpiles and replacement warriors are rushed forwards to resupply their frontline forces. The DCMS managed to get less than two regiments out, given the heavy battlefield losses and several dropships taken out in the retreat, and only one mercenary dropship got out at all. While small groups hold out and fight a guerilla war that'll last for months, the Wolf Dragoons and Kell Hounds are functionally destroyed with modest cadres left on their homeworlds to rebuild. The impact on Inner Sphere morale is shattering and orders are given that any warship that even looks like it'll bombard a surface target is to be engaged with nuclear warheads... if any are available.

As the Sharks gather their strength to prepare to push on towards Benjamin, they receive news that ComStar has agreed to a proxy battle for Terra, to be fought on Tukkayid. Very conscious that they have limited strength and some of their supplies and reinforcements haven't caught up yet, the Sharks bargain very conservatively for their landing priority and the Smoke Jaguars and Jade Falcons apply leverage to push them into the same position as the Wolves: landing days after the other Clans, possibly after the entire issue is over. They may have Luthien but the ilClanship will not be theirs unless all the other Clans fail. This wait is ideal for the Diamond Sharks as it gives precious time for them to refit, resupply and reorganise so they accept the bid without complaint.

Most of the Clans experiences on Tukkayid are much as they were in canon, with Ulric having bid away the warships (Focht was adamant on this after Luthien). By the time the Wolves and Diamond Sharks land the Smoke Jaguars and Nova Cats have been driven offworld and the Jade Falcons are in full retreat. The Steel Vipers are pushing towards their first target only out of pride while the Ghost Bears have taken one target and are licking their wounds. The Wolves go all in and seize both their targets, rubbing it in that they have done what the other Clans have not. The Sharks take their first target and do the maths: the only way for the Clans to win is for all four Clans still in the field to win - and with the ComGuards now able to draw down the forces that were facing the Falcons, Cats and Jaguars that's a slim chance. The Sharks fight on soley for the sake of honour and hit only targets of opportunity where they can keep their own losses low and the ComGuards guessing until they see if the Vipers and Bears will turn this around. Since the answer turns out to be no, the Sharks are able to withdraw with the lowest casualties of any of the Clans' involved, while blooding their newer troops against the ComGuards.

The invasion is over, and Clan Diamond Shark have a solid OZ (not intermixed with another Clan's) with significant resources and relatively minor depletion of their forces compared to the other Clans. The economic advantages of their new holdings are obvious to their Merchants and fifteen years to expand their forces and build up supplies for further fighting sounds... well, not terrible. They have a lot of opportunities right now and every chance to translate this into a position among the first ranking Clans. Who knows if the ilKhan fifteen years from now might not be a Diamond Shark?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 11 August 2019, 05:45:01
Canon Diamond Sharks were very deep into the trueborn koolaid on Tukkayid, with the events there serving to turn this attitude around. But that's also because in canon they had little experience fighting the Inner Sphere.

Here, they've fought all manner of IS forces and very much gotten the measure of their opponents so it's not surprising they'd fight smart.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Vehrec on 13 August 2019, 09:37:19
It might be more interesting if the use of Warships provokes Focht to challenge the Wolves to a black-navy battle in the approaches to Tukkayid, revealing ComStar's navy and asking for volunteers to serve aboard ships that have been mothballed for centuries-at first only from within Comstar's own merchant marine and the Belters, but then throwing open the call to the Great Houses to second their spacers to a Comstar Flotilla.  Or just use the threat of such an engagement to force down the bids of the Clans to 'simulate' losses to a determined assault.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 19 August 2019, 05:54:21
#588

As the Star League comes together, the prospect of bringing the Periphery in by force was raised and narrowly turned down. The projected expense was deemed to be directly against the principle of reducing the drain of constant military expenses. And besides, House Amaris was pro-Star League and probably only needed a little more time and a comparatively trivial financial investment to sway the Rim Worlds Republic into joining the Star League. One at a time, the other states would surely follow through.

The HAF wasn't entirely folded into the SLDF, but did hand control of their border worlds over to the SLDF First Army, which also took over all other member-state world garrison posts within one jump of the Hegemony. Gradually five further armies expanded out to similarly control both sides of all the Star League's internal borders. This didn't keep the SLDF entirely out action - skirmishes between 'bandits' along the borders took a while to die down. As this progressed, the process freed the House Armies to secure their own interiors, their periphery borders and to scale back to 'peace-time' strength.

As the economy slowly stabilised, the Star League looked for new frontiers and found them in the periphery: new colony regions were established outside the Federated Suns, Free Worlds League and Draconis Combine and opened to colonists from anywhere in the Star League. This also contributed to isolating the periphery realms (except the Taurians and Canopians) from each other. As a result, when Gregory Amaris requested military assistance against dissidents in the Rim Worlds Republic, shortly before the end of the century, it was years before the other Periphery states were able to confirm that Star League supplies and military advisors were propping up Amaris and funding his employment of mercenaries and 'mercenaries' drawn from House armies eager to blood a new generation of young soldiers.

The result was all but inevitable: Gregory Amaris managed to live long enough to sign the admission of the Rim Worlds Republic to the Star League, although an assassin saw that it was his son who became the seventh member of the Star League Council. The SLDF's 7th Army (and associated fleet) secured the border between Lyran Commonwealth and Rim Worlds Republic - and unofficially provided a strong arm for the still shaky House Amaris.

Seeing the writing on the wall, the three remaining Periphery realms realised that any internal or external conflict could be used to justify Star League intervention. Further, they were increasingly surrounded. Any spark along their borders could lead to encroachment. They forced their economies into overdrive to try to expand their own borders and increase their economic might to potentially resist SLDF invasions. In the Outworlds the weak government teetered on the edge of breakdown under the pressure of this, kept from collapse only by the outside threat.

And in the new colonial regions, colonists from rival member-states began to quarrel, leading to reaction forces from the SLDF and nearby houses to step in.

After forty years, the Star League is stronger than ever... and the peace that it promised is more fragile as well.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 19 August 2019, 17:02:30
If the Rim Worlds does well as a full member, I could see the Outworlds Alliance joining first, then the Canopians, and finally the Taurians after a few more decades...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 21 August 2019, 15:27:56
#587 - How Much For Just The Inner Sphere?

I spent part of yesterday looking at possibilities for shaking up the Clan Invasion set up, starting from the trials to decide which clans would participate. the mechanism would be adding one Clan warrior who was sufficiently skilled to tip the balance a little in these trials. After some reflection I decided to add the warrior to Clan Diamond Shark.

. . .

Something similar might have happened had you added the warrior to the Nova Cats instead of the Sharks...they, like the Sharks, have a highly-active and powerful Merchant Caste (which was, iirc, one of the main drivers of the Nova Cat Crusader movement under the theory that the IS had a lot more worlds with markets to exploit), and in canon had a track record of treating Spheroids in their OZ well.    The interesting butterfly is wondering what would have happened with the Nova Cat Abjuration - would the canon result still have occurred if the Cats weren't stuck sharing an OZ with the Jaguars?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 August 2019, 23:59:37
I did consider the Nova Cats - my original concept was sticking an OC in to change the course of events through the Trials, so I considered all the Clans.

Wolf, Jade Falcon, Smoke Jaguar and Ghost Bear were eliminated since they were already invaders. Star Adders, Cloud Cobras and Snow Ravens were eliminated in bidding rather than the Trials so they weren't viable. I then cut the three clans (Hells Horses, Burrock and Ice Hellions) who lost both the first two rounds, as I felt it was implausible they could turn things around.

Of the seven remaining Clans I thought the Coyotes, Nova Cats and Diamond Sharks were the most plausible to do well, and looking at the contests, the Nova Cats were up against the strongest opposition, which is why they got cut. Ultimately the Diamond Shark needed the smallest changes to put them into the invasion force.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 23 August 2019, 19:28:16
I did consider the Nova Cats - my original concept was sticking an OC in to change the course of events through the Trials, so I considered all the Clans.

. . .

 Ultimately the Diamond Shark needed the smallest changes to put them into the invasion force.

It's a really cool idea, and I'd love to read your take on it.  The culture clash between the mercantile Sharks and the economically-backward Combine could be really interesting, as would be your take on the Shark way of war. 

Of course, the crackfic version would have to have a bondsman Uncle Chandy getting adopted into the Merchant Caste  :D :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 August 2019, 01:09:14
#589

During the 2960s, Archon Giovanni Steiner had a command centre established on House Steiner's homeworld of Gallery to completely mirror all facilities and staffing of the LCAF High Command. The (comparatively minor) expense was sold to the Estates-General as a contingency in case a deep raid on Tharkad left the LCAF Command in some way incapacitated. In fact it was more a response to a small but vocal minority of officers concerned with the ossification of Lyran tactics and the gentrification of the officer corps. Posting them to Gallery for a few years where they could 'prove their theories' - more accurately to be buried in pointless bureaucracy* would hopefully convey the message to shut up and soldier

* literally pointless: they simply received duplicates of any request sent through/within the LCAF Command on Tharkad and their responses were filed and summarily ignored.

Under the reign of Giovanni's successor Alessandro, this dumping ground - Gallery Command Centre - received not only the assignment of outspoken junior officers but also a crop of whistleblowers and of any officer who drew negative attention from socially connected officers (or senior nobles) whose support the Archon desired. Morale on Gallery itself was, as might be imagined, rather poor. LIC therefore maintained a presence and caught several attempts by foreign agents to turn officers there since they would still have access to genuine military data. This then led to a byproduct where an entire office of the LAAF High Command did nothing but alter the data sent to Gallery to make sure it was of no use should it fall into the wrong hands.

Many expected that Katrina Steiner would reverse this practise after she took power. She was, after all, one of the military heretics who could have very easily wound up on Gallery if it wasn't for her family name. However, she never made any mention of the Gallery Command Centre. Some insiders assumed that she actually thought the publicly stated purpose was actually genuine and snickered at the ignorant soldier playing at politics.

They were, of course, completely wrong. Over the first twelve months of her reign, Katrina redirected the actual work of the LCAF High Command to Gallery and the doctored reports they once received are now sent to the official buildings on Tharkad. Over fifty years of inertia has thus far managed to deceive essentially everyone - even the lavishly uniformed officers in the luxurious buildings around Tharkad City sincerely believe that they're running the LCAF, as do the myriad SAFE and ISF agents who have them thoroughly penetrated.

Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 25 August 2019, 01:22:07
#589

During the 2960s, Archon Giovanni Steiner had a command centre established on House Steiner's homeworld of Gallery to completely mirror all facilities and staffing of the LCAF High Command. The (comparatively minor) expense was sold to the Estates-General as a contingency in case a deep raid on Tharkad left the LCAF Command in some way incapacitated. In fact it was more a response to a small but vocal minority of officers concerned with the ossification of Lyran tactics and the gentrification of the officer corps. Posting them to Gallery for a few years where they could 'prove their theories' - more accurately to be buried in pointless bureaucracy* would hopefully convey the message to shut up and soldier

* literally pointless: they simply received duplicates of any request sent through/within the LCAF Command on Tharkad and their responses were filed and summarily ignored.

Under the reign of Giovanni's successor Alessandro, this dumping ground - Gallery Command Centre - received not only the assignment of outspoken junior officers but also a crop of whistleblowers and of any officer who drew negative attention from socially connected officers (or senior nobles) whose support the Archon desired. Morale on Gallery itself was, as might be imagined, rather poor. LIC therefore maintained a presence and caught several attempts by foreign agents to turn officers there since they would still have access to genuine military data. This then led to a byproduct where an entire office of the LAAF High Command did nothing but alter the data sent to Gallery to make sure it was of no use should it fall into the wrong hands.

Many expected that Katrina Steiner would reverse this practise after she took power. She was, after all, one of the military heretics who could have very easily wound up on Gallery if it wasn't for her family name. However, she never made any mention of the Gallery Command Centre. Some insiders assumed that she actually thought the publicly stated purpose was actually genuine and snickered at the ignorant soldier playing at politics.

They were, of course, completely wrong. Over the first twelve months of her reign, Katrina redirected the actual work of the LCAF High Command to Gallery and the doctored reports they once received are now sent to the official buildings on Tharkad. Over fifty years of inertia has thus far managed to deceive essentially everyone - even the lavishly uniformed officers in the luxurious buildings around Tharkad City sincerely believe that they're running the LCAF, as do the myriad SAFE and ISF agents who have them thoroughly penetrated.

Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.

*Facepalm*

Funny.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 25 August 2019, 02:57:17
The day the books went out

Kerensky was leaving the inner sphere. The news hit last month.

Not that the average 'mech tech cared, until the pocket-comps with the repair manuals on them dumped their contents due to identity lock violations, despite no such violations occurring. Same with the scientific journals, university libraries and corporate archives across the inner sphere. Backups, their architecture carefully controlled due to the McKenna Data Piracy Act of 2560, are not spared either. There are no paper copies due to the same act and proprietary hardware and software allowing none.

Across the inner sphere, people struggle to preserve what their memories hold, and to teach it to the next generation in the middle of a war.




The Star League went a little overboard on their DRM. But hey, it's worth it if it brings an end to the Age of War, right?

Also, an explanation for how they lost so much so fast. Halstead Station was breaking all kinds of laws with their little bibliophile cache.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 25 August 2019, 03:27:25
#589
*snip*
Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.

Love it, Drakensis!  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 25 August 2019, 03:42:31
#589

During the 2960s, Archon Giovanni Steiner had a command centre established on House Steiner's homeworld of Gallery to completely mirror all facilities and staffing of the LCAF High Command. The (comparatively minor) expense was sold to the Estates-General as a contingency in case a deep raid on Tharkad left the LCAF Command in some way incapacitated. In fact it was more a response to a small but vocal minority of officers concerned with the ossification of Lyran tactics and the gentrification of the officer corps. Posting them to Gallery for a few years where they could 'prove their theories' - more accurately to be buried in pointless bureaucracy* would hopefully convey the message to shut up and soldier

* literally pointless: they simply received duplicates of any request sent through/within the LCAF Command on Tharkad and their responses were filed and summarily ignored.

Under the reign of Giovanni's successor Alessandro, this dumping ground - Gallery Command Centre - received not only the assignment of outspoken junior officers but also a crop of whistleblowers and of any officer who drew negative attention from socially connected officers (or senior nobles) whose support the Archon desired. Morale on Gallery itself was, as might be imagined, rather poor. LIC therefore maintained a presence and caught several attempts by foreign agents to turn officers there since they would still have access to genuine military data. This then led to a byproduct where an entire office of the LAAF High Command did nothing but alter the data sent to Gallery to make sure it was of no use should it fall into the wrong hands.

Many expected that Katrina Steiner would reverse this practise after she took power. She was, after all, one of the military heretics who could have very easily wound up on Gallery if it wasn't for her family name. However, she never made any mention of the Gallery Command Centre. Some insiders assumed that she actually thought the publicly stated purpose was actually genuine and snickered at the ignorant soldier playing at politics.

They were, of course, completely wrong. Over the first twelve months of her reign, Katrina redirected the actual work of the LCAF High Command to Gallery and the doctored reports they once received are now sent to the official buildings on Tharkad. Over fifty years of inertia has thus far managed to deceive essentially everyone - even the lavishly uniformed officers in the luxurious buildings around Tharkad City sincerely believe that they're running the LCAF, as do the myriad SAFE and ISF agents who have them thoroughly penetrated.

Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.
Well... They're gonna be good at the analysis and long term strategic planning stuff, but I struggle to imagine how well that would carry over to tactical battlefield performance.

Essentially she's got the maverick planners and we all know what happens when plans make contact with the enemy.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 25 August 2019, 03:46:02
As long as their recommendations for field commanders are taken, the odds are in their favor.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 25 August 2019, 06:57:08
As long as their recommendations for field commanders are taken, the odds are in their favor.
And therein lies the rub.
Most militaries would value the opinion of combat rated officers over that of analysts. Even with inferior rank, the combat arms officer would be given command authority over the rear echelon one.
The dumbass social general on the front could simply consider the REMF analyst's recommendations as mere suggestions and utterly inferior to his combat experience. And yes, this is hypocritical, but if the LCAF officer corps had been institutionally capable of such intellectual honesty they would not have developed this problem to begin with.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 25 August 2019, 07:09:31
Agreed... I've seen that dynamic too many times.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 25 August 2019, 07:41:30
Field commanders who don't at least consider the operational planning they're presented with are probably promoted to the Tharkad LCAF high command.

Granted, the officer on the ground should have discretion to amend plans as the situation on the ground demands.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 25 August 2019, 08:12:26
Heh... best answer yet...  ^-^
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 25 August 2019, 08:15:23
Granted, the officer on the ground should have discretion to amend plans as the situation on the ground demands.
Whether the 'amendment' is for the better remains to be seen.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sir Chaos on 25 August 2019, 08:33:39
#589

During the 2960s, Archon Giovanni Steiner had a command centre established on House Steiner's homeworld of Gallery to completely mirror all facilities and staffing of the LCAF High Command. The (comparatively minor) expense was sold to the Estates-General as a contingency in case a deep raid on Tharkad left the LCAF Command in some way incapacitated. In fact it was more a response to a small but vocal minority of officers concerned with the ossification of Lyran tactics and the gentrification of the officer corps. Posting them to Gallery for a few years where they could 'prove their theories' - more accurately to be buried in pointless bureaucracy* would hopefully convey the message to shut up and soldier

* literally pointless: they simply received duplicates of any request sent through/within the LCAF Command on Tharkad and their responses were filed and summarily ignored.

Under the reign of Giovanni's successor Alessandro, this dumping ground - Gallery Command Centre - received not only the assignment of outspoken junior officers but also a crop of whistleblowers and of any officer who drew negative attention from socially connected officers (or senior nobles) whose support the Archon desired. Morale on Gallery itself was, as might be imagined, rather poor. LIC therefore maintained a presence and caught several attempts by foreign agents to turn officers there since they would still have access to genuine military data. This then led to a byproduct where an entire office of the LAAF High Command did nothing but alter the data sent to Gallery to make sure it was of no use should it fall into the wrong hands.

Many expected that Katrina Steiner would reverse this practise after she took power. She was, after all, one of the military heretics who could have very easily wound up on Gallery if it wasn't for her family name. However, she never made any mention of the Gallery Command Centre. Some insiders assumed that she actually thought the publicly stated purpose was actually genuine and snickered at the ignorant soldier playing at politics.

They were, of course, completely wrong. Over the first twelve months of her reign, Katrina redirected the actual work of the LCAF High Command to Gallery and the doctored reports they once received are now sent to the official buildings on Tharkad. Over fifty years of inertia has thus far managed to deceive essentially everyone - even the lavishly uniformed officers in the luxurious buildings around Tharkad City sincerely believe that they're running the LCAF, as do the myriad SAFE and ISF agents who have them thoroughly penetrated.

Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.

 ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 26 August 2019, 04:34:14
#589

During the 2960s, Archon Giovanni Steiner had a command centre established on House Steiner's homeworld of Gallery to completely mirror all facilities and staffing of the LCAF High Command. The (comparatively minor) expense was sold to the Estates-General as a contingency in case a deep raid on Tharkad left the LCAF Command in some way incapacitated. In fact it was more a response to a small but vocal minority of officers concerned with the ossification of Lyran tactics and the gentrification of the officer corps. Posting them to Gallery for a few years where they could 'prove their theories' - more accurately to be buried in pointless bureaucracy* would hopefully convey the message to shut up and soldier

* literally pointless: they simply received duplicates of any request sent through/within the LCAF Command on Tharkad and their responses were filed and summarily ignored.

Under the reign of Giovanni's successor Alessandro, this dumping ground - Gallery Command Centre - received not only the assignment of outspoken junior officers but also a crop of whistleblowers and of any officer who drew negative attention from socially connected officers (or senior nobles) whose support the Archon desired. Morale on Gallery itself was, as might be imagined, rather poor. LIC therefore maintained a presence and caught several attempts by foreign agents to turn officers there since they would still have access to genuine military data. This then led to a byproduct where an entire office of the LAAF High Command did nothing but alter the data sent to Gallery to make sure it was of no use should it fall into the wrong hands.

Many expected that Katrina Steiner would reverse this practise after she took power. She was, after all, one of the military heretics who could have very easily wound up on Gallery if it wasn't for her family name. However, she never made any mention of the Gallery Command Centre. Some insiders assumed that she actually thought the publicly stated purpose was actually genuine and snickered at the ignorant soldier playing at politics.

They were, of course, completely wrong. Over the first twelve months of her reign, Katrina redirected the actual work of the LCAF High Command to Gallery and the doctored reports they once received are now sent to the official buildings on Tharkad. Over fifty years of inertia has thus far managed to deceive essentially everyone - even the lavishly uniformed officers in the luxurious buildings around Tharkad City sincerely believe that they're running the LCAF, as do the myriad SAFE and ISF agents who have them thoroughly penetrated.

Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.

Get writing.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 26 August 2019, 09:37:37
Get writing.

exactly, imagine a timeline its now 3019, Katrina has been using Gallery to evolve her staff, now its time to slowly weed out the idiots, thru field exercises and wargames to figure who is competent, who is teachable, and who is  compromised

after wards there will be a huge chunk of formerly Asgard command offices now turned condo because they are too luxurious and way too heavily electronically penetrated for reuse
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 26 August 2019, 12:01:55
#589

Meanwhile, quietly and efficiently, sharp young officers lacking military connections sit at unadorned desks on Gallery and get the actual work done.
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 26 August 2019, 12:03:22
The day the books went out

Kerensky was leaving the inner sphere. The news hit last month.

Not that the average 'mech tech cared, until the pocket-comps with the repair manuals on them dumped their contents due to identity lock violations, despite no such violations occurring. Same with the scientific journals, university libraries and corporate archives across the inner sphere. Backups, their architecture carefully controlled due to the McKenna Data Piracy Act of 2560, are not spared either. There are no paper copies due to the same act and proprietary hardware and software allowing none.

Across the inner sphere, people struggle to preserve what their memories hold, and to teach it to the next generation in the middle of a war.




The Star League went a little overboard on their DRM. But hey, it's worth it if it brings an end to the Age of War, right?

Also, an explanation for how they lost so much so fast. Halstead Station was breaking all kinds of laws with their little bibliophile cache.
Okay you need to write that one
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 30 August 2019, 18:58:49
#591 (I think...drakensis got me started on this one...more details to follow)

Rather than accept saKhan Radick's positive assessment of Lincoln Osis for ilKhan another strange alliance of Coyote and Star Adder objects pointing out the Jaguars invasion failures (Wolcott, Luthien, Tukayyid, and their failed sixth wave) before Nova Cat can second his nomination. Rather than an election victory Osis is handed a defeat and forced to watch as Khan Bjorn Jorgensson is nominated for this high post. Despite Crusader objections he is elected with a mandate to add all the Clans to the invasion. While some suspect blackmail and backroom dealings various challenges are issued as internal disputes especially within the Nova Cat Clan are overcome. Just as the InnerSphere begins Operation Bulldog most of the Clans' Alpha Galaxies reach the Periphery ready to trial for various holdings. Rather than just fight one Clan the new Star League finds itself facing all 17!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Terrace on 30 August 2019, 19:12:16
The day the books went out

Kerensky was leaving the inner sphere. The news hit last month.

Not that the average 'mech tech cared, until the pocket-comps with the repair manuals on them dumped their contents due to identity lock violations, despite no such violations occurring. Same with the scientific journals, university libraries and corporate archives across the inner sphere. Backups, their architecture carefully controlled due to the McKenna Data Piracy Act of 2560, are not spared either. There are no paper copies due to the same act and proprietary hardware and software allowing none.

Across the inner sphere, people struggle to preserve what their memories hold, and to teach it to the next generation in the middle of a war.




The Star League went a little overboard on their DRM. But hey, it's worth it if it brings an end to the Age of War, right?

Also, an explanation for how they lost so much so fast. Halstead Station was breaking all kinds of laws with their little bibliophile cache.

This has me thinking that a lot of people in the Inner Sphere are gonna be furious at the SLDF, because even though it seems to be a coincidence that all that data was deleted just after Kerensky's people left, it'll look an awful lot like the General took a big steaming dump on the Inner Sphere on his way out.

Which means that the Clans won't find anything resembling a warm welcome once their origins come to light...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 31 August 2019, 01:02:52
Have it as a 20 year authorisation expiring. It had been last renewed just before the Amaris coup in late 2766 (usually an annual process), so the books cut out in 2786, two years after the Exodus. For extra pathos, have this also affect the books of the exodus fleet, so this hits them right as they're trying to colonise the Pentagon worlds.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 05 September 2019, 11:21:01
Have it as a 20 year authorisation expiring. It had been last renewed just before the Amaris coup in late 2766 (usually an annual process), so the books cut out in 2786, two years after the Exodus. For extra pathos, have this also affect the books of the exodus fleet, so this hits them right as they're trying to colonise the Pentagon worlds.

And with any luck it hits them so hard the colonization effort either fails utterly, or drags on for centuries as they try to survive and rebuild what civilization they can... and the Clans are never born, as the Kerensky line is long dead before they can rebuild spacegoing industry.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daemion on 06 September 2019, 15:19:58
Posited this in the main forums, but someone suggested I put it here:

Alternate Jihad outcome - What's interesting to me is the thought that the Jihad could have led directly to the blackout with the small subsections trying to gobble up their own territories all over the Inner Sphere.  We could have had a 'Kerensky's Return' from Terra outward, instead of from the core of the galaxy.  The coalition is formed and heads into the Blake Protectorate, where there's a complete media black-out, and nobody hears from them again for years.  Meanwhile, the house lords are left trying to retake their capitals, and each world is stuck in a white/blackout and has to deal with internal affairs first, before it can look star-ward again.

Each state breaks down for a decade as tin-pot despots try to force their will on their world and the worlds around them, eventually coming into direct conflict with state loyalists, or even the great house, itself, at the capital.  We could see the changing of big names during this period.  There would be Blakist/Comstar hold-outs to deal with, as well. Any one of them could become the next great ruler of a star empire.

But, no word comes from the Blake protectorate, since nobody has been able to really spend resources to follow the fate of the coalition.  Then, one day, somebody does go in, and they come back with word of the Republic, and suddenly, Invasion!  The Republic has rebuilt in the years since the coalition's success against the Blakists.  They have a new system, and it works, and now they're expanding, taking back old Hegemony worlds, and offering olive branches to other systems that may or may not like who is ruling over them at the moment.

Feel free to run with it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 07 September 2019, 04:58:42
#593?  (Assuming Daemion's is 592...) The Fate Looming Over the Heirs

This is just a few notes that I intend to come back to at some point.

In 3026, Michael Hasek-Davion ordered the 1st Kestrel Grenadiers to conduct a raid into the Capellan Confederation.  It didn't go well.  While the problems on the ground were lightly detailed (and involved Cataphracts and EW Equipment), the heaviest blow was the loss of a Union-class DropShip on the burn in.  The loss of a company of BattleMechs before it can even get to grips with the enemy is hard for a combat unit, but the for the minor noble families back on Kestrel, it was disastrous.  Baroness Smith-Cunningham's family at least had another 'mech (if not her Thunderbolt), but the majority of the Knights could afford no such extravagance.  After the funerals, the heirs would have to determine how to meet their feudal obligations.  Duke Cunningham and Count Allard graciously granted the Smith-Cunninghams a full 18 months to rebuild, but were firm that the call would come again during Galahad 3028.

The idea here is to use the Landhold rules in the AToW Companion (pages 246-251) as a rough basis for building a (presumably) combined arms company in the run up to the 4th Succession War (on the theory 12 'mechs will be simply too expensive).  The Baroness had two subordinate Baronets (the lance commanders), and nine Knights (plus their various support staffs) under her.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 07 September 2019, 07:39:11
MHD could help by allowing the families access to the
salvage yards, not particularly noble but they could throw together
a dozen bug mechs or 55ers and then using the FS repair system
requisition everything in reach before having to really dig into
the wallets
so its not a heavy company, and may end up with no heavy or assault mechs
but the unit isnt stricken from the rolls, and it could be expanded by requiring
a lance of light or medium vehicles in addition to the mechs, which can be moved up
militias,

so a typical 3025 company becomes a cavalry company with
a attached battalion of light to medium vehicles
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 07 September 2019, 07:52:40
Two years of personal income for one Baroness, two Baronets and nine Knights is 3.4M.  By redirecting their landholds' "defense" budgets, they could add another 13.6M.  17M is just enough for 10 bug 'mechs.  I was thinking more along the lines of a Blackjack for the Baroness' family, two higher end lights for the Baronets, and a bug for one Knight.  The other eight would be looking at vehicles, and maybe a platoon or two (or three) of infantry.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 07 September 2019, 09:06:46
In such a scenario which should really have its own thread would Knights even have heirs? I thought knighthoods weren't hereditary titles but ones bestowed by higher lords for great action. So if you are recruiting for this blue blood company why not just knight a bunch of heroic types who already have Mechs? Your Dispossessed should form some kind of tech support or infantry security team. Hopefully salvage and fortune will requip them one day.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 07 September 2019, 09:22:45
Per Sarna, that's exactly what Hanse Davion eventually does... these are the "gap" years...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 08 September 2019, 16:57:55
#594: It's a trap!

The year is 3051. Comstar has realized that the Clans mean to conquer the entire Inner Sphere- including Terra- and might actually be able to pull it off. Comstar realizes that they can't take the Clans in a war, so they offer a Trial of Possession for Terra- a single gigantic battle on a single planet. Each side commits massive forces.

Except...
Comstar is worried. They have good tech, sure, better than the Inner Sphere- but the Clans tech is even better than theirs. The Comguard always trained with the assumption that they'd have technological superiority, and now they don't. Their enemies are far, far more skilled, and more experienced. The Comguard MIGHT be able to win... but they might not. And if they loose on Tukayyid, it's all over. Completely, utterly over.

So Myndo has an idea. And ROM, one of the finest intelligence outfits in the Inner Sphere, and FAR better than the Clan's Watch, puts in into practice.

The system chosen as the battleground is carefully prepared. In space, Comstar warships are quietly inserted and covered with Rocks and ECM to resemble asteroids. In real asteroids, Capital Missle launchers and Aerospace fighters are concealed. On the ground, the cities chosen to be the objectives are quietly filled with the most powerful nukes Comstar has- as are likely landing, spots. Bombing craft are scattered over the planet, assigned nothing but nukes.

Comstar claims that they are moving 144 regiments to the planet- they claim safecon and use civilian bulk freighters to move their forces. Only, they don't. They only move a small fraction to the planet, enough to keep the clans distracted. Occupied.

And once the last Clan forces land on Tukayyid- the trap is sprung. Nukes go off all over the planet, killing Clan and Comguard alike. Bombers take off, WMDing those who wern't caught in the first blasts.
In space, the warships open fire, saturating the Clan Jumpships and Warships. Aerospace fighters- all armed with nukes- target anything with a jumpdrive.

A few of the clans manage to pull some forces off the planet, but not many- and most of those were unable to escape the system. A few of the jumpships quickjumped out, and a few warships survived, but for the most part, the Clans lost everything they'd sent to Tukayyid.
(Comstar also lost a lot. Though they'd only committed a tiny fraction of what they'd claimed on the ground, they had committed over two dozen regiments, now lost. Their warships were damaged or destroyed. But it was worth it.)

On the one hand, the Clans are now screaming with rage at the filthy dishonorable inner sphere tactics. Yet, on the other hand, their ability to do anything about it is lower than ever. They've lost huge chunks of their forces- and mostly their best. They've all lost Khans. They've lost jumpships. Now, they want revenge, but don't have the numbers to get while still defending their worlds, or the ability to move those troops quickly.

On the other hand, those Comstar regiments not used on Tukayyid are ready to go on the offensive. And the Federated Suns and the Draconis Combine recognize that now is their chance...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 09 September 2019, 01:12:24
And twenty other Khans are shaking slightly in place, like children trying to get attention so they can beg permission to go out and play, as they prepare for the 'glorious battle' to avenge their betrayed cousins.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 14 September 2019, 08:57:48
Yes but in a total war the Inner Sphere just plain wins because they can pump out more nuclear armed fighters than the Clans can stop.  It would turn into ugliness on par with the First Succession War but at the end the Inner Sphere would have utterly destroyed the Clans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 15 September 2019, 13:16:30
Yes but in a total war the Inner Sphere just plain wins because they can pump out more nuclear armed fighters than the Clans can stop.  It would turn into ugliness on par with the First Succession War but at the end the Inner Sphere would have utterly destroyed the Clans.

An actual intelligently prosecuted total war results in every Inner Sphere jumpship and shipyard dying for acceptable Clan losses, and then they take a world at a time at whatever rate they can sustain. Fortunately the Clans probably aren't going to go into an icy calculated rage after the provocation offered, so a more likely result is them burning Terra and requesting safcon to kill every member of Comstar.

Even if they go stupid, the Clans have omnifighters, working AMS that they can cram into them in nearly arbitrary numbers, and LFB on everything they are likely to use. The Inner Sphere has fixed known targets, and functionally defenseless jumpships that have to move between them to keep their economy going. Oh, and Comstar just wrote across the sky for anyone who had somehow missed it that they can not be trusted at all.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 15 September 2019, 13:21:00
"[E]very Inner Sphere jumpship and shipyard" is a pretty tall order, even for the clans, and don't think for a minute the Periphery (especially the Taurians) would support that.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sir Chaos on 15 September 2019, 13:23:44
An actual intelligently prosecuted total war results in every Inner Sphere jumpship and shipyard dying for acceptable Clan losses, and then they take a world at a time at whatever rate they can sustain. Fortunately the Clans probably aren't going to go into an icy calculated rage after the provocation offered, so a more likely result is them burning Terra and requesting safcon to kill every member of Comstar.

Even if they go stupid, the Clans have omnifighters, working AMS that they can cram into them in nearly arbitrary numbers, and LFB on everything they are likely to use. The Inner Sphere has fixed known targets, and functionally defenseless jumpships that have to move between them to keep their economy going. Oh, and Comstar just wrote across the sky for anyone who had somehow missed it that they can not be trusted at all.

Since this version of Tukayyid is probably still coinciding with Operation Scorpion, there´s a pretty good chance that the Inner Sphere - certainly the FedCom - will contact the Clans once they hear about what happened at Tukayyid, saying: "We assume that you intend to take revenge for what ComStar did. We are kind of pissed at them ourselves, so we offer you free passage to Terra. Enjoy yourselves when you get there."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 15 September 2019, 13:30:57
Heh... I can think of no better way to express the actual irrelevancy of Terra to the clans than this...  ^-^
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: consequences on 15 September 2019, 17:13:17
"[E]very Inner Sphere jumpship and shipyard" is a pretty tall order, even for the clans, and don't think for a minute the Periphery (especially the Taurians) would support that.

You mean the Taurians that blew up at least one hapless misjumped jumpship in the 3040s without warning because they are idiot panic children, and who think the Clans are an invention of Perfidious Davion to get them to lower their guard for next week's inevitable invasion that they've been waiting for for at least a decade? The ones whose power projection abilities are miserable, who have stretched themselves beyond reason establishing colonies for hundreds of light years in multiple directions? Whose one remaining trump card* when the Clans are already expecting to get nuked as a matter of course, the SASF, are in no way prepared for boarding operations against individual enemies that can tank an entire platoon's fire in the open?

The most likely influence of the Taurians is to have no particular noticeable effect, with an outside chance of them blowing up enough desperate refugees that the Federated Suns breaks them as a power before the Clans even get that far.

*The TCS New Vandenberg in this context is target practice and a reason for the Snow Ravens to get really excited at the prospect of more warship fights after Comstar's fleet is destroyed, only to be inevitably let down when the truth comes out.


In any case, yards are a soft target in a known location. Jumpships are functionally defenseless and immobile, and announce their arrival to anyone in that side of the system along with the fact that there's about five days to kill them before they have any decent chance of escaping without breaking their own drive. The reason that the Inner Sphere stopped the downward slalom was never because they couldn't finish the job.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 15 September 2019, 17:18:43
RunandFindOut has it right... the Inner Sphere can churn out more nuclear armed fighters faster than the clans ever dreamed of.  The clan fleet will have some initial success, but when all the cards are on the table, they simply don't have enough ships to secure 2,000 star systems.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 15 September 2019, 17:41:16
The thing is that the Clans have to come to known defensible targets to hit anything truly valuable like shipyards.  And the IS is big enough to defend them with more nuclear armed fighters than the Clans can stop.  The losses for the Clans can't be acceptable because in order to prosecute the attack they will be fully committed and unable to retreat.  Even if they manage to damage or destroy the target they will suffer a total loss of their forces.  And the IS can absorb more losses than the Clans.  And at the ends the invading Clans will be gutted and the IS will be able to work back up their logistics chain back to the Clan Homeworlds and put them to the torch.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 17 September 2019, 02:23:54
#595

The Wars of Reaving, a shattering conflict that tore Nicholas Kerensky's 'new order' of Clans apart. The destruction of Clan Wolverine and absorption of Clan Widowmaker  aside, the 2830s and 2840s were a period of stability as the Clans appeared to be settling out into their new society, but under the surface there were continuing issues.

The 'Dark Caste' who had escaped conquest by the Clans still haunted the borders of the Kerensky Cluster and had found backing elsewhere - much later this would be found to be the Tanite worlds, which had encountered refugees from Operation Klondike and and realised they were entirely too close to this new threat. Their leaders were only too happy to trade vital supplies to the Dark Caste and their fledgling hidden colonies in exchange for samples of SLDF and later early Clan technology, which was flooding into the toumans through the 2820s and early 2830s. The Tanite population wasn't much smaller than the Clans at the start of this period but the Clans saw a dramatic population increase to more than double - exceeding to their original Exodus fleet numbers by the 2850s.

The destabilising issue arose with Omnitechnology and Elemental battle armour. Clan Coyote's first deployment of the Coyotl set off a wave of conflicts as the Coyotes tried to leverage their advantage for maximum effect and the other Clans ought to obtain the technology for themselves. The election of an ilKhan was proposed to regulate these conflicts, but the leading candidate was Zenos Danforth of Clan Burrock and when he was discredited as having been involved with the Dark Caste the proposal faltered. Clan Wolf - already resented for their relative size and power - faced a similar dichotomy once they were traded omnimech technology and brought the Elementals into use a few years later. Constant battlefield losses even when they won eroded the numbers of the warrior caste, limiting their ability to control the enclaves they'd conquered - many of the inhabitants of whom which remained loyal to the Clans they'd been born into. Clan Sea Fox and Clan Goliath Scorpion, having obtained these technologies while being less powerful to begin with were similarly exhausted.

The sudden absorbtion of Clan Mongoose by Clan Smoke Jaguar briefly satiated the Jaguars and the Star Adders, but it also made it clear that failing Clans would pay the ultimate price. By the 2870s the four Clans were over-extended and had been forced to recruit heavily from the civilian castes to keep their toumans viable, while losing their exclusive control of the new combat technology. They weren't the only clans struggling - Clan Fie Mandrill's fractious nature had become apparent and Kindraa Smythe-Jewell had declined to share omnimechs and elementals with the rest of their Clan. In 2872 the Coyotes and Hells Horses formed a temporary alliance and destroyed the Kindraa completely, exteriminating their bloodlines and causing massive collateral damage to their civilian holdings. The reavings of the Kindraa's bloodlines set off a plethora of similar challenges, nearly gutting the prospects of the Coyotes' current bloodnamed.

These brutal practises spread with Clan Ghost Bear and Clan Hells Horses engaged in lengthy and costly campaigns to control the Tokasha Mechworks, both sides discarding zellbrigen. Clan Sea Fox's totem animal was specifically targeted by Clan Snow Raven, leading to bitter war between thse two Clans. The election of an ilKhan was proposed again, this time by Khan Victoria Wolf, but this was seen as an attempt by Clan Wolf to secure dominance as the ilClan and the Grand Council broke up in feuding. Within a year there was no Clan Wolf, which might have eased the tensions a little... except for the sudden collapse of Clan Cloud Cobra.

The Cobras, it turned out, had traced Zenos Danforth's ties through the Dark Caste to the Tanite worlds and tried to conquer the three inhabited worlds. Tanite aerospace fighters had used weight of numbers and nuclear weapons to gut the fleet and the transported ground forces, although they themselves were virtually wiped out. Four years of efforts by the Cobras to occupy the surface had bled out their remaining equipment and personnel reserves, while sucking their internal economy dry... and the acceptance of defeat by the leadership led to more internal conflicts (constant trials of bloodright due to deaths among the bloodnamed had hurried that along) and by 2875 Clan Cloud Cobra was unable to protect most of their enclaves.

A feeding frenzy began as the Cobras and the other weakened Clans' holdings were fought over. A desperate Clan Coyote, dominated by bloodnamed who'd re-entered the warrior caste and won their names after time in the scientist caste, also turned to weapons of mass destruction. Losses by every clan mounted and enclaves burned under increasingly extreme measures...

And then the Tanites arrived, using warships stolen from a naval cache to cover invasions of the Pentagon worlds. Just like Nicholas Kerensky sixty years before, they were going to put an end to the fighting and restore peace - at the point of the sword.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 18 September 2019, 22:47:41
#597

The clan invasion was very much changed when one officer asked for a copy of the trials that the clans used among them selves. When asked for a trail of possession for the world he was in change of he asked what they where talking about and then asked was there rules they worked by. The clans where a be puzzled by this and sent a copy of the rules for all their trials tot he general. He then studied the rules for the better part of a week while trying to understand the people where trying to invade his world. Along the profile that he read he learned that the clans hate waste. After that he formed the basic of the rest or the invasion by the clans. After that every time a world was invaded by a clan they there challenged for the world by 2 out of 3 games of a chess battle. Both the fed suns shared this with the combine and the republic also and the clans very much where hoping for glory in battles where  shamed cause they had someone beating them with their own rules.
Just some thing silly I come up with today that I had to post about how this could really change the invasion and really annoying the clans since they where not being able to use combat, but had to fight to what they where asked to.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: EAGLE 7 on 21 September 2019, 20:19:38
   And chess matches nullify all the clans strategic and tactical strengths.
  I can see the Jaguars going nuts after two back to back loses at chess.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 23 September 2019, 10:56:26
just something silly i thought of and had to post the idea.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 23 September 2019, 15:58:50
#597 (2) - 596 got skipped by accident and the numbering must be exact!

This is part of another project I've spent the last two weeks dabbling in, but this works as a stand-alone. Call this, "A Tribble in One Image:"

(https://i.imgur.com/D85FUEs.jpg) (http://i.imgur.com/ImRSGRH.jpg)

The POD is roughly around 3000. It's been a very eventful couple of decades for the ol' Inner Sphere...

(click for the very big and fully readable version)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 23 September 2019, 17:16:32
I'm really not sure why Andurien hasn't joined the Shining Coalition, and more importantly, why the Capellan Confederation still exists.  If it won't join the Shining Coalition, I can't see the Pax allowing it to continue it's totalitarian ways.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 24 September 2019, 06:36:03
#597 (2) - 596 got skipped by accident and the numbering must be exact!

This is part of another project I've spent the last two weeks dabbling in, but this works as a stand-alone. Call this, "A Tribble in One Image:"

(https://i.imgur.com/D85FUEs.jpg) (http://i.imgur.com/ImRSGRH.jpg)

The POD is roughly around 3000. It's been a very eventful couple of decades for the ol' Inner Sphere...

(click for the very big and fully readable version)

It's... It's beautiful...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 24 September 2019, 08:11:40
says image contains errors
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 24 September 2019, 09:35:28
#597 (2) - 596 got skipped by accident and the numbering must be exact!

This is part of another project I've spent the last two weeks dabbling in, but this works as a stand-alone. Call this, "A Tribble in One Image:"

(https://i.imgur.com/D85FUEs.jpg) (http://i.imgur.com/ImRSGRH.jpg)

The POD is roughly around 3000. It's been a very eventful couple of decades for the ol' Inner Sphere...

(click for the very big and fully readable version)
Now this is an interesting idea. The fact that one planet's uprising would change the history of the Inner Sphere forever. Makes me wonder how the Clans would react to this change in regime.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 24 September 2019, 13:35:00
Now this is an interesting idea. The fact that one planet's uprising would change the history of the Inner Sphere forever. Makes me wonder how the Clans would react to this change in regime.
They might consider the fractured status prime for invasion. The Dragoons wouldn't lose contact until after both the Lyrans and the Dracs have fractured.

Rasalhague's still ******.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Mal-3 on 24 September 2019, 14:35:26
I'm really not sure why Andurien hasn't joined the Shining Coalition, and more importantly, why the Capellan Confederation still exists.  If it won't join the Shining Coalition, I can't see the Pax allowing it to continue it's totalitarian ways.
"Andurien for the Anduriens" is the watchword; the rest of the galaxy can go straight to hell. As for the Cappies, the current Liao-in-residence is playing the Davion need for a counterbalance on their border against the Pax need for revolution sort of similarly to how China navigated the waters during the OTL Cold War. (What is BattleTech without cod-historical parallelism, after all?) In the end though they're going to have to engage properly with the universe outside their borders or they'll end up the playing field for the inevitable hellwar.

Now this is an interesting idea. The fact that one planet's uprising would change the history of the Inner Sphere forever. Makes me wonder how the Clans would react to this change in regime.
It's not like this is a unique event in BT history or anything. A tax revolt on Freedom VI shattered the Terran Alliance and created the modern Inner Sphere. As Charlton Heston said at the beginning of Armageddon, "It happened before; it will happen again. It's just a question of when."

As for the Clans, they'll come eventually. The Pax Galactica if nothing else is competition to the Star League they think they represent and uphold, and an insult originating in the old Rim Worlds to boot. So they would come for that if nothing else. Would they find easy pickings? That remains to be seen.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 24 September 2019, 18:19:24
If the Anduriens are that determined to go it alone, I could see the Capellans conquering them pretty quickly...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 25 September 2019, 17:47:01
If the Anduriens are that determined to go it alone, I could see the Capellans conquering them pretty quickly...
Well maybe, but I can see Anduriens playing 3 sides against the middle to keep their existance, kinda like some African nations did during the cold war.  A friend now past to the beyond talked to me about about 1 nation who used to "flip/flop" so much that the "American" and the "Soviet" advisors used to leave notes for each other about what places in town were safe and not.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 02 November 2019, 17:59:25
Have it as a 20 year authorisation expiring. It had been last renewed just before the Amaris coup in late 2766 (usually an annual process), so the books cut out in 2786, two years after the Exodus. For extra pathos, have this also affect the books of the exodus fleet, so this hits them right as they're trying to colonise the Pentagon worlds.
Made it about 200% better, here.


598

3057. Thomas Marik messages Katherine/Katrina. She's still homicidally ambitious, but not stupid or evil for the evilz. She sends it to Victor, and operation Guerrero is a fiasco for the FWL and especially CapCon.

Shortly after Phelan shows up around Arc-Royal. He's got troops, trained techs, two stars of warships (still a bloody big deal in 3057), and a ton of infrastructure bits, as well as news that Ulric has shredded two OZ and basically served them to the FedCom on a silver platter. . . 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 15 November 2019, 03:10:48
#599

Mount Davion, New Avalon
18 September 3057

The media had gathered in the Royal Court for what was expected to be a mostly pro forma announcement from a spokesman of how the Archon-Prince would respond to the Marik-Liao invasion of the Sarna March and the supporting Taurian attack on the Pleiades.

What they got was Katherine Steiner-Davion, wearing her uniform as an AFFC infantry captain. She looked tired. It wasn't until she reached the podium that sharp-eyes noticed that the patch on her uniform wasn't the fist-and-sunburst.

"Ladies and gentlemen," she said without preamble. "I have a short statement. I will not accept questions, but there will be data available to you all within the hour to expand on what I am about to say."

The obvious question: why are you wearing the sword-and-sunburst? died on a dozen lips.

The young woman took a deep breath. "Whatever the actual motives, the casus belli for Captain-General Marik's invasion is the cover-up of his son's death, here on New Avalon, and the substitution of a doppelganger. As my brother Victor has admitted, these allegations are essentially correct."

"Around thirty years ago, this was fundamentally my father's reason for deciding to prioritise the Capellan invasion over a combined assault on the Draconis Combine: a little known incident where the Maskirova very nearly managed to replace him with a pawn under their own control. While I will oppose his actions, I can understand them."

"I can similarly understand my brother's actions. Victor was born on Tharkad and raised there. He has spent little more than a year on New Avalon in total, predominantly his junior year at NAIS. His understanding of the Federated Suns is fundamentally limited."

"Since the death of our father and, even more so since our mother's assassination, Victor has focused entirely on the threat of the Clans. A threat that, through no action of his own, is largely neutralised for another ten years. He has prioritised the military defence of the remaining Tamar worlds. He has prioritised an alliance with the Draconis Combine, both militarily against the Clans and personally with the Coordinator's son... and daughter."

Faces went white around the room. There had been rumours about Victor and about Omi Kurita before. But for the Royal Court to openly address it, however unclearly...!?

"Ladies and gentlemen, Victor is the Archon-Prince. Since he assumed the title he has never laid eyes on the throne here in the Royal Palace, nor been crowned as First Prince. He has been Duke of Sarna since 3039 - and yet his response to the current situation is to require that military units be further stripped from the interior of the Suns in addition to the large number of our regiments already facing the Clans."

Katherine Davion gripped the podium with both hands. "As we speak, the Crucis March Militias are being mobilised to join task forces moving into the Capellan and Sarna Marchs. This is the last order I will accept from the Archon-Prince. I am the Duchess of Avalon and after discussion with the High Council, who are fortunately in session at this time, I am formally declaring myself First Prince of the Federated Suns. And..." Her pale face twisted with visible anguish. Then she gathered her will. "And our secession from the Federated Commonwealth."

"I love my brother. But he has failed the Suns for the last time."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 15 November 2019, 05:50:38
Would this be evil, crazy "Katrina" or would this be a more rational one?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 15 November 2019, 06:16:15
It actually works perfectly but with the major change being her military service as an infantryman which didn't happen in universe. If Katherine wanted to be Regent of New Avalon (which 20 Year Update says she was) even in canon, mommy and daddy, should have required her to do that. Then she has every legal reason to act that way unfortunately we know that she killed Melissa in canon to get here. But is she truly the white knight that drakensis has painted here? Throw in a Taurian invasion at the same time Marik-Liao attack the only folks who aren't attacking are the Draconis Combine so nobody will care in the Federated Suns.

Here is a crazier idea, but also one very in character, what do you think about Victor abdicating the throne because of his own bad decision to replace Jeffrey and to be with the woman he loves? After a few years of happiness in exile he is attacked by that same assassin on Luthien and dies before Operation Bulldog. After the funeral Theodore Kurita meets Focht and reveals his successor in the ComGuard, Moses Gardner (or insert your pseudonym for Victor Steiner-Davion now healed). Appearing somehow different (perhaps surgery, cosmetic alteration, glasses, etc.) he goes on to become Focht's chief aide during Bulldog and of course performs heroic deeds.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: AlphaMirage on 15 November 2019, 11:33:24
I like it Drakenensis.  As an unapologetic Kathy Fanboy in all her incarnations I would read it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 16 November 2019, 04:54:24
#599

Mount Davion, New Avalon
18 September 3057

The media had gathered in the Royal Court for what was expected to be a mostly pro forma announcement from a spokesman of how the Archon-Prince would respond to the Marik-Liao invasion of the Sarna March and the supporting Taurian attack on the Pleiades.

What they got was Katherine Steiner-Davion, wearing her uniform as an AFFC infantry captain. She looked tired. It wasn't until she reached the podium that sharp-eyes noticed that the patch on her uniform wasn't the fist-and-sunburst.

"Ladies and gentlemen," she said without preamble. "I have a short statement. I will not accept questions, but there will be data available to you all within the hour to expand on what I am about to say."

The obvious question: why are you wearing the sword-and-sunburst? died on a dozen lips.

The young woman took a deep breath. "Whatever the actual motives, the casus belli for Captain-General Marik's invasion is the cover-up of his son's death, here on New Avalon, and the substitution of a doppelganger. As my brother Victor has admitted, these allegations are essentially correct."

"Around thirty years ago, this was fundamentally my father's reason for deciding to prioritise the Capellan invasion over a combined assault on the Draconis Combine: a little known incident where the Maskirova very nearly managed to replace him with a pawn under their own control. While I will oppose his actions, I can understand them."

"I can similarly understand my brother's actions. Victor was born on Tharkad and raised there. He has spent little more than a year on New Avalon in total, predominantly his junior year at NAIS. His understanding of the Federated Suns is fundamentally limited."

"Since the death of our father and, even more so since our mother's assassination, Victor has focused entirely on the threat of the Clans. A threat that, through no action of his own, is largely neutralised for another ten years. He has prioritised the military defence of the remaining Tamar worlds. He has prioritised an alliance with the Draconis Combine, both militarily against the Clans and personally with the Coordinator's son... and daughter."

Faces went white around the room. There had been rumours about Victor and about Omi Kurita before. But for the Royal Court to openly address it, however unclearly...!?

"Ladies and gentlemen, Victor is the Archon-Prince. Since he assumed the title he has never laid eyes on the throne here in the Royal Palace, nor been crowned as First Prince. He has been Duke of Sarna since 3039 - and yet his response to the current situation is to require that military units be further stripped from the interior of the Suns in addition to the large number of our regiments already facing the Clans."

Katherine Davion gripped the podium with both hands. "As we speak, the Crucis March Militias are being mobilised to join task forces moving into the Capellan and Sarna Marchs. This is the last order I will accept from the Archon-Prince. I am the Duchess of Avalon and after discussion with the High Council, who are fortunately in session at this time, I am formally declaring myself First Prince of the Federated Suns. And..." Her pale face twisted with visible anguish. Then she gathered her will. "And our secession from the Federated Commonwealth."

"I love my brother. But he has failed the Suns for the last time."

This makes SO much more sense than canon.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 20 November 2019, 15:49:50
#600

Ulric Kerensky, as in canon, is 'convicted' by the Grand Council of being a traitor to the Clans. The votes are in at 19-15.
He immediately, as in canon, calls a Trial of Refusal over the matter.

Unlike in canon however, he doesn't bid Clan Wolf in his defense but announces, like a True Clan Warrior, he will fight his own battles bla bla bla. The Grand Council shrug and with a ratio of 1.2/1.3 to 1 in the voting and after a bit of back and forth, name an Elemental as their Champion who will take on Ulric one v one. Lincoln Osis gleefully takes up the challenge and Ulric shrugs and says they might as well get it over with, then and there and the Grand Council agrees, they will be the circle of equals...

And to the stunned disbelief of pretty much everyone, Osis looses.

Oh, Ulric looses an eye and gets beaten up a bit and will need months of recovery time and a new eye grown for him and all that, but impossibly with some incredibly shrewd fighting getting in an early hit that hurt Osis much more than the man realized at first (AND luck verging on plot fiat) he successfully wins the Trial of Refusal over the whole matter, emphatically, hand to hand against one of the greatest Elementals of all time, killing him. So he is still ilKhan and legally the charges are dismissed.

What happens now? What with the rest of the Inner Sphere still about to go to hell from Victors ineptitude...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 20 November 2019, 16:37:10
An interesting challenge of a point of divergence


Option 1 - a civil war within Clan Wolf, whether official or unofficial, between Crusader and Warden factions


Option 2 - the Clans respect the truce and learn about logistics by opening any book about warfare written just about ever but may realise that they are hopelessly tiny compared to the Inner Sphere


Option 3 - a second challenge but how will things go with Osis dead? The character was almost as stupid as the Ice Hellion Khan Asa Tinny or whatever his name is
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 02 December 2019, 06:04:04
#601 - Voyage of the Ulysses

he Federated Suns Technical Academy Ship Ulysses had a long history. The rear-half of the dropship was recognisable as having once been a Dictator-class 'Mech transport, but the forward half, comprising a pair of gravity decks and a dock suited to small aerodyne dropships left it entirely incapable of entering atmosphere (more than once, at least). Paired with a damaged Leopard-class dropship, the Telemachus, the Ulysses had spent a mostly quiet century cruising around the Outback and Near Periphery, taking on promising students for a higher education and supporting itself through staff and students working on various engineering projects on worlds in the region. Two hijacking attempts had been foiled by the ship's security, with the Telemachus being fully armed and able to haul one or two fighters and some 'Mechs - depending on what was working out of recent salvage they'd picked up.

And then, in 3017 the Ulysses set out for the Aurigan Coalition to assist on some work requested by the recently deceased High Lord Arano. The visit had been authorised by the First Prince himself, as a goodwill gesture to the Aurigans. Protector Zarantha Calderon had approved transit through the Concordat. All was going well.

Except...

No one expected a sudden coup and the rise of a new Aurigan Directorate that made a rather more serious attempt to seize the Ulysses.

No one expected Zarantha's death and for the new Protector to refuse to authorise transit back through Taurian space, to the point of threatening to blacklist any independent jumpship offering passage to the 'spyship'.

And very possibly, the staff did expect the Duke of New Syrtis (brother-in-law to the same First Prince who'd given his blessing to the visit) to provide aid rather than wash his hands of them, piously declaring that trying to hold relations with the Taurians together was a higher priority.

To cover expenses as they tried to sort this out, the college hired out their security force to support a minor mining dispute only for the miners to take the professors coordinating the matter hostage and try to steal the 'Mechs. When that failed, the hostages were murdered.

And then the last professor, left on the ship because he couldn't be trusted to keep it together in discussions, ate the muzzle of his sidearm.

Two dropships (one of which can't land). Four 'Mechs. Around thirty students in their late teens. Over a hundred light years from home, surrounded by hostile nations.

And so they set out to find passage through the Directorate, through the Farlooker colonies rimwards of the Concordat, past the Pirate Cluster and Tortuga... and into the Fedrated Suns. Any way that they can.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 02 December 2019, 06:30:47
Hopefully, it doesn't take them 10 years.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 02 December 2019, 07:45:42
I know I've seen a similar to #601, but for the life can't remember where.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 02 December 2019, 17:08:31
#601 is interesting, but honestly could have been just as interesting with the faculty around to try to help figure it out...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: nerd on 27 December 2019, 00:11:39
602 the Odd Couple

Anytime before the Wars of Reaving
Warrior Quarter, Katysha, Strana Mechty

The massive Elemental Warrior in her Hell's Horses dress uniform noted the animatedly boasting Snow Raven Aeropilot to a group of unimpressed MechWarriors from various Clans.

And then it goes to a bad romantic comedy.

You know you'd like to try.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: mighty midget on 28 December 2019, 07:15:01
Tribble 603 -
Following their initial contract with House Davion, Wolf's Dragoons accept a 5 year contract with House Marik.  The primary reason… Jamie Wolf being granted a landhold on the planet Helm.  This landhold being his as long as the Dragoons did not fight against House Marik forces.  This was taken full advantage of as the Dragoons moved all of their personnel and equipment, including their supply caches, to the planet.  Their WarShips and other advanced equipment being maintained in a location well beyond the star's jump points.

After the Dragoons had been on planet for a couple of years, Cranston Snord was contacted to perform a search for the rumored Star League Cache.  During the search, Snord compared the original SLDF maps of the planet to the current planetary conditions and located the cache along with the memory core.

For the contents of the depot I'll simply hijack the list made by Chris O'Farrell in his amazing story. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/this-was-easier-on-the-tabletop-a-battletech-si.659596/page-148#post-50339107 (https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/this-was-easier-on-the-tabletop-a-battletech-si.659596/page-148#post-50339107)

Follow on thoughts:
   • How would the brothers Wolf, as Joshua is still alive here, make use of the memory core?
   • This would be before their final re-supply run/information exchange with the clans.  How would that impact events?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 28 December 2019, 12:48:31
Follow on thoughts:
   • How would the brothers Wolf, as Joshua is still alive here, make use of the memory core?
   • This would be before their final re-supply run/information exchange with the clans.  How would that impact events?
They barely made use the far more complete Clan data base in canon. Kept all the goodies for themselves rather than release it for general use.
It will make zero improvements to canon if they get to be the ones to recover it. Worse, since they won't be as invested in sharing it as GDL had been.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 29 December 2019, 02:13:27
Tribble 604 -
Kell Hounds don't manipulate Pacifica's time server and the 2SOL attack 24 hours later as per their proper schedule. Assume their attack goes about as well as per OTL.
Main effect is, they arrive at Styx a day later and not in time to save Melissa.

What next?
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Post by: consequences on 29 December 2019, 19:21:24
Severe vengeance because the Kuritans are still at least 79 hours away from a safe recharge? Presuming they actually track down Melissa in the first place, instead of it being a Newt in the airducts scenario?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 30 December 2019, 00:35:11
Severe vengeance because the Kuritans are still at least 79 hours away from a safe recharge? Presuming they actually track down Melissa in the first place, instead of it being a Newt in the airducts scenario?

One of their Panther pilots had her in his sights. With Andrew, Melissa and Clovis having raised their hands in surrender... and at that moment the Kell Hounds drop in and kill the Panther. I just reread book one today.
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Post by: consequences on 30 December 2019, 08:25:29
Severe Vengeance it is then! Maybe not just then, though there's a distinct chance that the Kuritan Overlord develops a sudden case of spontaneously opening airlocks and non functional emergency doors if they are taken alive.


Yorinaga's driving motivation is achieving his revenge, because he's a petty poohead. There's a distinct possibility that he parades around Melissa or her corpse to provoke Patrick into making an attack so he can kill him to drag Morgan out, because apparently sending a Singing Duelagram to a monastery is yet another lost technology.

So presuming the Genyosha decide to leave, and don't get chased down and wiped out in space, the Combine has just taken another fiance from Hanse, a year before he was going to be launching a grand offensive. There might be a slight reordering of target priorities as a result.

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Post by: mighty midget on 30 December 2019, 15:29:14
Tribble 605

During the Dragoon's re-supply run of 3019 the outline of a plan is developed for the defense of the Inner Sphere.  The basis of this plan is to close the gap between technology bases to allow the superior numbers of the Houses work in their favor.  To this end Khan Ward and Jamie Wolf  make plans for a follow-on supply run to be sent.  As far as the Clan Grand Council will be informed this convoy will be occupying a forward staging area to establish shorter supply lines.  In reality the personnel selected for this mission would be providing the seeds for a technological renaissance for the Inner Sphere.

Equipment being transferred would include machinery for the production of weaponry, ammunition and medical supplies.  As part of this shipment would include a complete copy of the Clan's accumulated knowledge base, surpassing even the Helm core, for the use of scientists and technicians in building factories and hospitals.  Some major items sent to aid in the future invasion is a re-activated Newgrange YardShip and a pair of Potemkin troop cruiser from the Clan's shared boneyards above Strana Mechty to allow repair of other ships and rapid movement of large forces.  Commanding this mission would be an officer handpicked by Khan Ward, Star Colonel Ulric.

Upon the arrival of the convoy in the deep periphery they are met by a Dragoon Task Force and led to one of the known SLDF deep-space bases, Camelot Command.  It was decided by Jamie Wolf and Star Colonel Ulric that this would allow them to give the illusion of setting up a base for the Clans while being close enough to aid the Dragoons materially.  During their discussions they decided to send multiple forces on salvaging expeditions to all known SLDF storage locations to collect all equipment they could.  The primary outcome of the meetings was a plan to overcome ComStar's Operation Holy Shroud that WolfNet had uncovered.  Data for the development of base technologies would be shot gunned through the entire Inner Sphere by operatives uploading data to the servers of universities and public 'net forums.  A special focus would be the spreading the information needed to build, maintain and operate Hyper Pulse Generators, as this would rob ComStar of their primary income stream.  Military specific weapon data would be slowly spread through the use of Blackwell Heavy Industries, by this time essentially a Dragoon-specific support organization, and by contracting out Dragoon personnel to aid research & development institutes.
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Post by: drakensis on 31 December 2019, 02:03:10
Tribble 606

After the wedding on Terra, Primus Tiepolo throws Tojo Jarlath under the bus for the repeated security problems encountered. At least three weapons smuggled into Hilton Head? Myndo Waterly screamed at him every time and she was so shrill!

The new Precentor ROM reports two interesting things to the Primus. Firstly, Jarlath was organising Mechwarriors for some sort of commando raid Waterly was after. Not telling the Primus this would be bad enough, but the idiot was doing it on Hilton Head, during the wedding. Cretin.

Secondly, the hunt for the Helm Data Core is going much worse than reported. Basically, the horse is bolted and if the Great Houses don't have copies it's just a matter of time.

After prayer (and pre-alerting his allies), the Primus makes an announcement to all of ComStar, one sent by HPG to every station: this is the great day. The technological renaissance that Blake had created ComStar to await was upon the Inner Sphere and it was time for them to take the lead. ComStar had obtained a copy of the Helm Data Core and every Precentor was to present it to the planetary government served by their HPG station and offer ComStar's assistance in making use of the contents. As a matter of neutrality they wouldn't help with military uses, but loans, technical advice and even direct investment into civilian industries to raise the standard of living on worlds would be made available.

It's a brand new day for the Inner Sphere and ComStar will take the lead - not in usurping government power, perish the thought, but by getting out in front of the trends. Tiepolo even pledges small garrisons of ComGuards on worlds that accept Comstar help - not enough to challenge the local militia in number, but enough to give them a little extra help against bandits trying to destroy progress made.

After all, officially the Star League is gone. But if you have a single organisation providing interstellar communications (like the Ministry of Communications), military forces policing the entire Inner Sphere (like the SLDF did) and economic influence on every world (like the BSLA did)... then in all but politics, the Star League is back... and ComStar is going to be in the driving seat.

(And any recidivist opposing this glorious vision clearly doesn't believe in Blake's great mission of peace and prosperity for everyone, and is clearly a filthy heretic. Isn't that right, Precentor Dieron?)

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Post by: Daryk on 31 December 2019, 05:04:47
I like that one!  More, please!  :thumbsup:
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Post by: Takiro on 31 December 2019, 11:43:06
I think reactionaries would take a shot or five at any Primus who lets the Great Houses get so much tech.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 31 December 2019, 15:45:22
Tiepolo only has a couple of years to live anyway.


Tribble 607
As Ardan and Hanse infiltrate Royal Court to try to remove the doppelganger they encounter another two (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spock) men (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leonard_McCoy) with the same goal, except they're trying to rescue their friend (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_T._Kirk) who has been abducted and brainwashed to think he's the First Prince.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 31 December 2019, 17:55:01
Now THAT's hilarious!  ;D
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Post by: Takiro on 31 December 2019, 21:50:04
 ;D :D
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 02 January 2020, 14:54:47
I find this tribble to be quite...illogically amusing.
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Post by: nerd on 02 January 2020, 15:54:51
Considering the image of Hanse from Era Report 3052, yes, it is.

Although is this Commander Spock or Ambassador Spock we're talking about.  :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 12 January 2020, 10:30:49

Tribble 608

Inspired by something mentioned in, I think, Cannonshops's Teaser for a... story associated chat


A variant on the Davion & Davion (Deceased) concept - Kerensky & Kerensky (Deceased) & Kerensky (Deceased)!


Alexander Kerensky is advised about events by the (recently deceased at the end of 3057) Ulric Kerensky and Natasha Kerensky, perhaps a better name would be "A Wolf On Each Shoulder"?


The point of diversion feels like it might be nice to make it the moment Kerensky first came to widespread prominence in OPERATION SMOTHER when his unit, the 564th Hussar Regiment lost every commander above the rank of Captain in a DropShip collision leaving the 29 year old Captain A Kerensky (Gunslinger) in command of the regiment while battling outnumbered against DCMS forces as too many of the 160th BattleMech Division's forces are stuck up in orbit.


I was looking at *how* a regiment could lose so many senior officers and, apart from criminally negligent over confidence, the reason looks like it might be the presence of a Dictator Command DropShip which was designed to carry a Regimental Command Company, the three Battalion Command Lances and some 16 heavy AFVs of the logistics and command "tail"


No idea if I will get a chance to write it up but I am enjoying the idea :-)


Edit - my thanks to the person pointing out I forgot to include the Tribble number, thank you Daryk!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 12 January 2020, 10:40:28
I'd read it!  And I think that deserves to be #608, if you could edit that in...
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Post by: Greatclub on 12 January 2020, 13:12:09
Tribble 608

Alexander Kerensky is advised about events by the (recently deceased at the end of 3057) Ulric Kerensky and Natasha Kerensky, perhaps a better name would be "A Wolf On Each Shoulder"?

Nasty K as a shoulder devil? Sure, that works.
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Post by: Daryk on 12 January 2020, 13:25:48
You're very welcome, Doc!  :thumbsup:
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Post by: Lone-Wolf on 13 January 2020, 06:09:15
Tribble 609

Just like in canon the GDL dicovers the Helm depository. But Grayson is killed by a rock and Lori is shattered. Knowing that the Marik forces are out to kill them Lori enters the cave system with a squad and after consulting the maps she orders the rest of the GDL to head for another hidden entrance. Then she closes the main gate and the GDL breaks camp. The Marik and Comstar forces never understand the significance of the place where the GDL made camp (the pyramid) and continue hunting the GDL. And then the GDL disappear. No trace is found.

Marik and Comstar squabble and their fragile alliance breaks.

Meanwhile nobody notices that a small village more than quintuples in population. And this village is close to one of the hidden entrances.

While the captured members of the GDL are executed, Lori swears revenge.

While the mystery of Helm reaches nearly the same as the Bermuda triangle of Earth the survivors of the GDL learn from the Helm core and use the space inside the depositoy to build industrial factories. They have children and in 3130 they emerge with all reactivated Mechs from the depository and a few new ones build. They even found the hidden spaceport and build new dropships (It is mentioned that every SLDF facility had a spaceport therefore I concluded that Helm should also have one. I don`t think that Major Keeler wouldn`t build one or make some preparations for the establishment of one).
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Post by: smdvogrin on 13 January 2020, 09:54:47
Tribble 609

Just like in canon the GDL dicovers the Helm depository. But Grayson is killed by a rock and Lori is shattered. Knowing that the Marik forces are out to kill them Lori enters the cave system with a squad and after consulting the maps she orders the rest of the GDL to head for another hidden entrance. Then she closes the main gate and the GDL breaks camp. The Marik and Comstar forces never understand the significance of the place where the GDL made camp (the pyramid) and continue hunting the GDL. And then the GDL disappear. No trace is found.

Marik and Comstar squabble and their fragile alliance breaks.

Meanwhile nobody notices that a small village more than quintuples in population. And this village is close to one of the hidden entrances.

While the captured members of the GDL are executed, Lori swears revenge.

While the mystery of Helm reaches nearly the same as the Bermuda triangle of Earth the survivors of the GDL learn from the Helm core and use the space inside the depositoy to build industrial factories. They have children and in 3130 they emerge with all reactivated Mechs from the depository and a few new ones build. They even found the hidden spaceport and build new dropships (It is mentioned that every SLDF facility had a spaceport therefore I concluded that Helm should also have one. I don`t think that Major Keeler wouldn`t build one or make some preparations for the establishment of one).

I like the concept, but have some quibbles with your plan.  First off, a spaceport is just landing/cargo handling - it doesn't build new dropships (lots of cities have airports, but you can't use one to build 747s).  Similarly, I don't see them being able to build new factories for mechs - or need to, given the existing stocks!  Aren't there something like 400-500 mechs in the total Helm Cache?  The GDL isn't going to breed fast enough to need more!

I think you'd be better off with them as a horror/ghost story -  mysterious Mechs emerge from the various well-hidden entrances, f*** up Comstar or someone else they blame, then disappear into the night (ECM and Active probes help).  Before long, the new landholder is convinced the place is cursed, and Comstar has gone through 6 preceptors either dead or gibbering in fear.
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Post by: Lone-Wolf on 13 January 2020, 10:11:54
I like the concept, but have some quibbles with your plan.  First off, a spaceport is just landing/cargo handling - it doesn't build new dropships (lots of cities have airports, but you can't use one to build 747s).  Similarly, I don't see them being able to build new factories for mechs - or need to, given the existing stocks!  Aren't there something like 400-500 mechs in the total Helm Cache?  The GDL isn't going to breed fast enough to need more!

I think you'd be better off with them as a horror/ghost story -  mysterious Mechs emerge from the various well-hidden entrances, f*** up Comstar or someone else they blame, then disappear into the night (ECM and Active probes help).  Before long, the new landholder is convinced the place is cursed, and Comstar has gone through 6 preceptors either dead or gibbering in fear.

On the one Hand you are right. There are no factories, but the Helm core has all the necessary knowledge. In "It was easier on the Tabletop" Chris OFarrell put it rather clear: " from first principles, build the tools to build the factories to build the tools to build late Star League era technology. ". So, yes, they would have the knowledge. But of course the big question then would be basic stuffs like ore and chemicals you Need.

And to the number of children? Doesn´t it depend on the number of children a Family has? You know a family with 2 children needs longer to grow to a certain number then a family that has 4 or more children per generation.

Your idea of a Horror Story I toyed with it shortly, but now that you put it so nicely. Yes, that would be a great story.

Can we put it as Tribble 609h (for Horror)?

The beginning is the same as Tribble 609 but then:
And at various times the disappeared mechs of the GDL would reappear out of the fog to strike at Marik and Comstar facilities. No Radio transmissions, just attacks and then they would disappear into the fog. Now Helm is haunted and used by both House Marik and Comstar as punishment posting.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 21 January 2020, 06:52:57
Tribble 610
Melissa survives the bomb (maybe loses an eye and now has a noticeable resemblance to Focht) and holds the FedCom together.

After the Refusal War she gives Phelan and the Wolves-in-Exile a choice:

1. Join the Federated Commonwealth, subjecting themselves to all laws and requirements. Their warriors join AFFC, citizenship, etc. The FedCom gains all their tech and whatever navigational data they can provide on the location of the Clan Homeworlds. Up to and including voluntary interrogation. (She points out this is a better deal than they'd get as bondsmen).

2. She grants them several abandoned colony worlds to settle on and will allow immigrants from the Clans, the FedCom or elsewhere to migrate to join them if they want. They'll have to accept the basic laws of the Star League and will be treated as a fellow Star League member-state, so far as she is concerned, including sponsoring them for a full seat on the SL Council if it ever reconvenes. A certain amount of funding will be loaned, not given, to help them get started. (Worlds in question are: Bayis II, Conley's Patch, Warrumbungle, Eschenberg, Lintz - all in the general vicinity of Arc-Royal or Tharkad)

3. ****** off back to the Clans and good luck.

The first option is simply not acceptable. The third is given real consideration, but ultimately there's no real choice.

And then the Wolves read the SL's basic laws and realise they're going to have to give up a number of their customs. Bondsmen? Nope. Sibkos? Significantly moderated. All those little controls the Clans generally impose on their civilians... they actually can't be more oppressed than the Capellans and Draconians were under the Star League - which is less than they are today.

And Melissa points out that while she's not stopping any of her citizens from joining them, if any of the Wolves decide to defect then she is free to welcome them...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 21 January 2020, 10:32:54
I just like that there was a world in the Commonwealth named ‘ Warrumbungle’. It makes my inner Aussie smile.
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Post by: Atarlost on 21 January 2020, 19:38:32
Tribble 611 (crack warning)

At one of Richard Cameron's wild parties, an Elemental with a flux capacitor in place of one of his SRMs appears, crushes Amaris's head like a grape while laughing maniacally, and fades away like Marty Mcfly. 

Richard Cameron descends into paranoia and shows that he can destroy the Star League all on his own without any help from anyone else. 
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Post by: Takiro on 22 January 2020, 06:18:39
Tribble 610
Melissa survives the bomb (maybe loses an eye and now has a noticeable resemblance to Focht) and holds the FedCom together.

After the Refusal War she gives Phelan and the Wolves-in-Exile a choice:

4. Wolf Reunification. Following Operation Bulldog she puts together a follow up campaigns to 'liberate' the InnerSphere. Step three in this process would be this where the Wolf Dragoons, Wolf-in-Exile, and the Crusader Wolves duke it out for supremacy. Winner gets the Tamar March as their home. 
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Post by: Cannonshop on 22 January 2020, 10:13:44
Tribble 611 (crack warning)

At one of Richard Cameron's wild parties, an Elemental with a flux capacitor in place of one of his SRMs appears, crushes Amaris's head like a grape while laughing maniacally, and fades away like Marty Mcfly. 

Richard Cameron descends into paranoia and shows that he can destroy the Star League all on his own without any help from anyone else.

ahahahahahhha I love it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 22 January 2020, 12:27:29
611 is a good one with many possibilities. Cameron Civil War? Houses vs. Hegemony?
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Post by: Lone-Wolf on 22 January 2020, 13:40:36
Tribble 610
Melissa survives the bomb (maybe loses an eye and now has a noticeable resemblance to Focht) and holds the FedCom together.

I have only one question: What does she do after she is informed that her own daughter and Ryan Steiner were the ones who tried to kill her?
OK, Ryan is toast, but Kat?
Will she
a) not wake up one morning?
b) be put into a room with a ticking bomb and yes, she may beg for her life, but Mel will tell her flat out that she cannot trust her ever?
c) the Triad gets a few subbasements and there on the lowest level a prisoner with an iron mask lives out her life, while the entire IS thinks Kat died in a dropship accident / jumpship misjump? (Imagine that Ryan is put in the cell next to her and is not killed)
d) transported to a planet in the very deep periphery to play Adam and Eve with Ryan?

On the other Hand, there are things men is not meant to know...
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Post by: Dave Talley on 22 January 2020, 14:09:27
No
Keep them in cells near each other, no other interaction with any people or animals, they only have each other for company, but they can't physically touch each other because of the bars
For those two egomaniacs to be unable to validate themselves and put up with each other's whining would be a deserving sentence
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Post by: wolfcannon on 22 January 2020, 14:11:50
hmm i’d switch their minds around, kat into ryan and ryan into a dog lol.
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Post by: Dave Talley on 22 January 2020, 14:22:33
Or stream the Kardashians 24/7
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Post by: Sir Chaos on 22 January 2020, 14:31:25
No
Keep them in cells near each other, no other interaction with any people or animals, they only have each other for company, but they can't physically touch each other because of the bars
For those two egomaniacs to be unable to validate themselves and put up with each other's whining would be a deserving sentence


Hell is other people. I like it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 22 January 2020, 19:35:59
I have only one question: What does she do after she is informed that her own daughter and Ryan Steiner were the ones who tried to kill her?
OK, Ryan is toast, but Kat?
Will she
a) not wake up one morning?
b) be put into a room with a ticking bomb and yes, she may beg for her life, but Mel will tell her flat out that she cannot trust her ever?
c) the Triad gets a few subbasements and there on the lowest level a prisoner with an iron mask lives out her life, while the entire IS thinks Kat died in a dropship accident / jumpship misjump? (Imagine that Ryan is put in the cell next to her and is not killed)
d) transported to a planet in the very deep periphery to play Adam and Eve with Ryan?

On the other Hand, there are things men is not meant to know...
E) sent to a maximum security New Avalon Catholic convent on an ice moon with an ex FedCom drill seargent as the Mother Superior.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: VhenRa on 23 January 2020, 22:34:00
I just like that there was a world in the Commonwealth named ‘ Warrumbungle’. It makes my inner Aussie smile.

There is a whole pile of Aussie origin planet names in that area, entire area seems to have been infested with Australians and needs fumigation. [/Inner Kiwi]  :P
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SCC on 29 January 2020, 22:18:04
This is ultimately been rolled into a much larger idea, but I think it has enough potential to stand at least somewhat on it's own, rather then be reduced to a mere bullet point in an outline, or minor side plot in a large story.

Tribble #611
The Inner Sphere hardly seems like to sort of place to be a bastion of civil liberties, so what happens when we run with that? For example history is replete with people making things for political reasons, what if that was illegal? As a big example the Free Skye movement used the argument that the FedCom agreement hadn't benefitted Skye when the exact opposite was the case, what if doing this got them into trouble? And I'm sure that there are two faced public figures and celebrities that switch positions, what if doing that without acknowledging they where wrong got them into trouble, to say nothing of those who continually campaign on dis-proven policies.

I'm sorry I couldn't I didn't use more examples, but I'm pretty sure that would break the rules.
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Post by: gladius on 29 January 2020, 23:36:50
You’re describing the Combine and Confederation: having any kind of public opinion that disagrees with the State is likely to land you in hot water.
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Post by: SCC on 01 February 2020, 20:08:04
You’re describing the Combine and Confederation: having any kind of public opinion that disagrees with the State is likely to land you in hot water.
This is more disagreeing with reality then the government
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Post by: Sir Chaos on 02 February 2020, 07:41:10
This is more disagreeing with reality then the government

And who decides what reality is, if not the government?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 14 February 2020, 05:42:21
Tribble 612: The Spirit of the Kerensky's

"Sir, this step, the razing of another village, it is not necessary. We have already destroyed the guerilla operation. What merit can there be in this new action?"

"It is not your place to tell me what has merit and what does not," Moon said, crossing his arms in what Trent now recognized as a typical gesture of his authority. "We shall level one of these villages and transmit a holovid of the deed to the other cities of this world so that all on Hyner will know the price of standing in the Jaguars path."

Trent drew a deep breath. he could no longer stand silently. he must make a stand, even if the price was his own life. The time for waiting had passed. "I challenge you to a Trial of Grievance, Star colonel."

"Indeed" Moon returned coldly.

"Aff. This command violates our code of honor, as set down by Nicholas Kerneksy, the founder of the Clans."

Moon chuckled slightly. "Must I remind you, Star Captain, that this is a military command? Your opinions do not interest me and meeting you in combat offers no more challenge than crushing a bug under my heel. But you are a blight on our Clan. For you to call yourself a Jaguar warrior brings only shame to the rest. There is no honor in combat with you, but I promise that I shall find honor in erasing you you like a stain."

"Very well," Trent said, the blood rushing in his ears as his body prepared. "I assume you wish to fight unaugmented, Quiaff?"

Moon smiked. "Aff. And these warriors will form our circle of equals." He nodded to Jez and the others, who immediately moved to surround the two men. Moon unbuttoned his uniform collar and shirt, and flexed his muscles in preparation for the fight.

"Do do you that I will kill you, Trent," Paul Moon said, his voice barely a whisper as he lowered his body to a fighting stance.

"I know you will try" Trent returned, lowered his own center of gravity, the boast sounding odd on his lips as ... something ... changed. The oddest feeling, like electricity running through his body. Energizing him in a way he had never felt before. Curious. So very ... curious.

"No more talk" Moon spat and then with his arms wide he leaped like a Jaguar straight at him, 'The Jaguar's spring that brings the enemy down' as the remembrance quoted and so many of his peers tried to replicate on the battlefield...

Except that he was moving so ... so slowly! Why, it was all he had to do to-

And even as he thought that thought, he was leaning to the side into a roll that casually took him out of the path of the snarling Star Colonel who continued to glide through the air, the wind oddly whistling in his ears as he lashed out with his myomyer enhanced arm as he passed under, slicing across his opponents knee-

CRACK

Paul Moon screamed in an oddly low tone as Trent felt the joint of the massive tree-size trunk legs of the Elemental shudder, continuing his roll and coming back to his feet-
Bizarrely, Moon was only now plowing into the ground where he had just been standing. And he could see past the Elemental now plowing into the ground to the face of Jez whose expression was changing from smug delight to shock and confusion as he watched ... but beyond her on the horizon, as Hyners primary slowly set, in its glow...

Trent was no Nova Cat mystic. No Goliath Scorpion drug user. He was not someone to believe in the supernatural and yet ... in this time, at this place, he would have taken an oath to the Jaguar itself that even as he stood there in stunned confusion, not understanding how he was somehow moving so FAST ... that in the glow of the sun he could see the ghostly figures of both Nicholas Kerensky and Franklin Osis side by side.

Staring at him.

And then the Father of the Clans nodding once sharply at him, in what Trent could only think of as firm approval before he blinked - and they were gone.

A little stunned he missed for a moment seeing the Star Colonel, though nothing but his formidable and sheer rage, pull himself back to his feet, favoring his left leg as he started to half run and half stagger with a look of pure hatered on his face straight at him. Again so incredibly slow that as he reached him and swung all he had to do was-

His arms came up and he casually deflected the pile driver swing - a child in the Sibko could move faster! And then the follow up punch - and the next. The feeling of electricity running through his veins was like nothing he had ever felt and unable to help himself he turned casually side on to the Star Colonel, placed one of his arms behind his back and started to deflect and blow every one of the increasingly rapid punches being thrown at him which still moved so slow...

As much as Trent was inclined to dismiss it ... it was almost as if the Great Father and the Great Khan both were strengthening his arm. Standing with his righteousness

The way Moons face went purple in a rage level so great that Trent did not know if Star League Standard English had a word to encompass it at his one handed defense, was rather glorious and amusing if he was being honest. But then he suddenly grabbed the tree trunk sized right arm of the Elemetnal and wrenched it back, causing a scream of pain as he felt tendons snap and muscles spasam-

And then their eyes met for but a second ... and beyond the rage and pain and hate ... Trent saw that Paul Moon was just starting to realize this was a fight he could not win. And in that moment, Trent pivoted and kicked-

The Star Colonels rib-cage collapsed partially as his foot lifted the 280 kilogram monster off the ground and sent him flying through the air again, this time to land on his back and spray shale everywhere that sliced his back up in a way that would have been rather painful, if not for the agony from the other things running through his body right now.

Slowly, deliberately, Trent started to walk forward, the feeling of everything moving so much slower fading to nothing as he seemed to 'rejoin' time, yet knowing somehow that should be need it, that ... that gift from his founder would return once more if needed to defend the innocent. He kept his pace slow but steady as he closed the distance with his Commanding Officer, Jez and the others watching with expressions that ranged from fear in the former case to a mixture of awe and numb shock on the later. In the distance he could even see Judith sulking behind a building and watching - and the smile of delight and awe on her face warmed him in a way nothing had for a long time.

Yet he decided the moment needed one more thing. To make clear his ... objection to the madness of the course his Clan was on. He had tried it with Jez before, she had ignored it.

The gasping, stunned figure of their Elemental Star Colonel on the ground, pummeled by a 'failure' of a Mechwarrior in unaugmented combat who had snapped and had enough, seemed to be a much better backdrop to make his point clear however.

"And Nicholas stood with the first gathering of Khans to draw up the tenets of what made a warrior" he quoted in a calm voice as he approached Moon, gazing dispassionately at the man and admitting that, if nothing else, the fact that his face showed not one ounce of fear, merely rage, hate and pain, was an impressive thing in its own way. "Wars have often killed the innocent, ruined entire societies. Not within the Clans. Wars were for warriors to wage and that innocence not suffer at the hands of Trueborns."

"You have won the Trial Star Captain" Jez tried to step in, his voice seeming to break her out of her shock - but she promptly shut up as he turned his gaze on her and speared her with the sheer loathing that promised if she didn't shut up, she would be the next one to face him.

And unlike their last trial, his eyes told her that she would not survive this one.

That done, he gazed down again at Moon as he came up short before him, the man seeming to recover his senses - a thought belayed by the fact that he pushed off from the ground in a clumsy attempt to tackle him.
Against any other Mechwarrior, even as injured as he was, the move would have probably caught them by surprise and let the Elemental rip their head off.

But again, Trent felt the wind in his hair, the approving gazes of both the founder of His Clan and all the Clans on him as he met the tackle head on and grabbed both of the mans arms and stopped his momentum cold.

Now, for the first time, matching his strength against Moons directly - and simply holding him without any strain at all as the Elemental gasped for air through his shattered ribs he could see for the first time, hints of fear in the eyes of the Elemental now face to face with him.

He would be lying if he said that having this man fear him wasn't appealing, but somehow he knew he hadn't been given this gift for his own personal satisfaction, but a much higher cause.

"What ... are ... you" Moon gasped, fury and confusion warring in his tone as he pushed and squeezed and thrust ... and he might as well have been wrestling with a Ninety-Five toner for how little Trent moved.

"I am the Founders correction Star Colonel. The Smoke Jaguars have lost their way on the honor road" he said, not knowing where the words came from, but feeling their sheer 'rightness' in his heart that had been so torn of late seeing what his Clan had become. Impossible as it sounded, he knew that the Founders had tapped him on the shoulder to drag the Smoke Jaguars back to their true path. And it was a burden he gladly took up. "Ask for Heriga and I will grant it to you, provided you ask for Surkai from the Galaxy Commander, for your actions against our innocent civilians."

He took the scream the Star Colonel generated, with every vein on his face seeming to bulge out with his eyes as he put everything he had into one final attempt to crush the impudent impossible man in front of him, as a 'no'.
And so with a deep breath, he leaned back and then threw his head forward and crashed the metallic bands around his artificial eye into the forehead of Moon and sent him flying backwards through the air to crash onto his back.

That hurt Trent winced slightly, chuckling lowely for a moment at the revelation that Paul Moon had a thick skull, before shaking it off and walking forward to the stunned Star Colonel who was barely moving before kneeling down, reaching down and with steady pressure while ignoring the feeble clawing from the others hands, he took a grip on the neck ... and with a loud SNAP, it was done.

He stood then in the sunset with the now dead man unmoving under him, his face frozen in a mixture of fear and rage, feeling oddly saddened that the man had to die ... yet feeling that he had done nothing more than killing a wild animal.

For that was what the Star Colonel had become.

"Clan Smoke Jaguar has forgotten. Forgotten that our purpose as humans is to draw strength from the Jaguar, not become an animal like it" he suddenly said clearly and firmly into the utterly silent moment, all the Warriors in the circle of equals staring at him still, unable to speak and barely able to process what they had just seen. "We are humans. Trueborns. Forget it, attempt to order innocents slaughtered and I will stand ready to perform the same service to you as I did for the late Star Colonel Paul Moon" he finished before with a bare glance at Jez, he started walking away.

"Seyla" more than one of the Warriors standing around whispered and Trent continued, stepping across the circle as the last of the sun vanished under the horizon.



--

So this came out of watching the 'He is the One' sequence from The Matrix, with Neo casually no-selling Smiths attempts to kill him with contempt. Plus having just re-read Trents bio to check something and wondering what the hell might have happened if he had actually won that Trial of Grievance against his Star Colonel by being one of the very VERY few genuinely okay Smoke Jaguars in history. And wanting to stand up for the innocent civilians Smoke Jaguars prefer to use as calibration aids for their machine gun arrays....

Just say that some random omnipotent being gave him Neo crazy powers and a massive dose of 'WTF have the Clans become' and he feels he is totally on a mission to singlehandedly 'fix' them :)
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Post by: Sir Chaos on 14 February 2020, 05:55:19
Very intriguing idea.

Though Crazy Nicky Kerensky might be the wrong person to empower Trent for this, considering how he annihilated an entire Clan of innocents as an object lesson to the others.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Chris OFarrell on 14 February 2020, 06:07:57
My thought that it wasn't REALLY Nicky but a 'something assuming the form of someone Trent would respect' whatever.
Or just a board Random Omnipotent Being wanting some entertainment.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sir Chaos on 14 February 2020, 06:17:54
My thought that it wasn't REALLY Nicky but a 'something assuming the form of someone Trent would respect' whatever.
Or just a board Random Omnipotent Being wanting some entertainment.

Ah... the old "a form you are comfortable with" trick. Good point.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 03 March 2020, 02:54:55
Tribble 613

In 3022 the Archon and First Prince meet on Terra to secure the FedCom Accords. The redhead and the blonde get along quite well, but there is no marriage clause to the treaty between Hanse Davion and the Archon's daughter Melissa. That would be quite awkward as they're both female.

(inspired when I discovered, to my surprise, that while Hanse is apparently a real name, it's a feminine name. Now, over 1,000 years that could easily change but it's an interesting AU idea)

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 03 March 2020, 03:20:08
Hanse is like a derivative of Hansel. According to Babynolgy.com there are m ore masculine forms of the name, Hansel, than there are feminine
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 03 March 2020, 11:38:24
I don't think it would necessarily be awkward, after all, one of the leaders of the Terran Hegemony was a lesbian.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Iron Grenadier on 06 March 2020, 01:36:37
Tribble #614

You wake up as one of the founders of one of the Great Houses - Lucien Davion, Shiro Kurita, or whichever faction you like best.

Instead of death, you find yourself as yet another leader of the house, a few generations removed. This continues over and over until the 31st century is reached.

How do you direct the nation, especially once you realize you are leaping through time?


*inspired by the Davion & Davion (Deceased) story from Drakensis, the current crop of SI stories and watching a re-run of Quantum Leap.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 06 March 2020, 21:31:38
Hmm...Imagine if you were Minoru Kurita just before landing on Kentares IV...
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Post by: gladius on 06 March 2020, 22:30:30
Hmm...Imagine if you were Minoru Kurita just before landing on Kentares IV...
Stay in my cockpit. Weld it shut from the inside if I have to.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 07 March 2020, 00:05:13
I don't think it would necessarily be awkward, after all, one of the leaders of the Terran Hegemony was a lesbian.

You can't have a dynastic union between two lesbians.  The heir has to be descended from both of them and that requires two different kinds of gamete.  Adoption is not an option with all the would be usurpers floating around the Lyran Commonwealth.  Also, Melissa is too young to have a solidly established sexual orientation, but statistics say the safe money is on her being heterosexual, which is thus how Katrina has to negotiate the treaty. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sharpnel on 07 March 2020, 02:39:24
You can't have a dynastic union between two lesbians.  The heir has to be descended from both of them and that requires two different kinds of gamete.  Adoption is not an option with all the would be usurpers floating around the Lyran Commonwealth.  Also, Melissa is too young to have a solidly established sexual orientation, but statistics say the safe money is on her being heterosexual, which is thus how Katrina has to negotiate the treaty.
Yes you can. One of the ladies, preferably the dynast,  has a baby via IVF (anonymous) and then declares the child her heir. Sure, it's technically a bastard, but still her child. As the Dynast, she can declare her own heir. Until Hanse got Melissa as his wife, Morgan Hasek-Davion was his designated heir. This has happened often in our history, so why should the fake future be any different?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: gladius on 07 March 2020, 03:11:08
Yes you can. One of the ladies, preferably the dynast,  has a baby via IVF (anonymous) and then declares the child her heir. Sure, it's technically a bastard, but still her child. As the Dynast, she can declare her own heir. Until Hanse got Melissa as his wife, Morgan Hasek-Davion was his designated heir. This has happened often in our history, so why should the fake future be any different?
Or, the technology exists to create an embryo from the DNA of two women. At worst, a trip to Canopus for the procedure, or the NAIS could handle it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DoctorMonkey on 07 March 2020, 11:14:07
You can't have a dynastic union between two lesbians.  The heir has to be descended from both of them and that requires two different kinds of gamete.  Adoption is not an option with all the would be usurpers floating around the Lyran Commonwealth.  Also, Melissa is too young to have a solidly established sexual orientation, but statistics say the safe money is on her being heterosexual, which is thus how Katrina has to negotiate the treaty. 


Yes you can. One of the ladies, preferably the dynast,  has a baby via IVF (anonymous) and then declares the child her heir. Sure, it's technically a bastard, but still her child. As the Dynast, she can declare her own heir. Until Hanse got Melissa as his wife, Morgan Hasek-Davion was his designated heir. This has happened often in our history, so why should the fake future be any different?


Or, the technology exists to create an embryo from the DNA of two women. At worst, a trip to Canopus for the procedure, or the NAIS could handle it.


We could almost certainly do it with today's technology if it hasn't already been (probably not with humans due to restrictions on testing/experimentation with humans but any mammal will do)


The male gamete is really just a bundle of DNA, it is the female gamete that provides (almost) all of the other stuff like mitochondria (which is why we trace back female lines genetically via mitochondrial DNA and male lines via Y chromosomes)


The child would be a daughter, there wouldn't be a Y chromosome possible from either parent


Either could be the "mother" but I would say that title would go to either the one who carried the pregnancy or the one who donated the mitochondria etc


One neat option might be for both combinations to be generated in vitro and then both implanted and then they would likely be born around the same time (barring problems) or for dynastic purposes could be either born by C-section at exactly the same time... or go the other way and have a gap between the two


Sorry, this is starting to edge into areas I know actually know about hence the somewhat rambling response!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Lone-Wolf on 07 March 2020, 12:36:05
Tribble #614
You wake up as one of the founders of one of the Great Houses - Lucien Davion, Shiro Kurita, or whichever faction you like best.
Instead of death, you find yourself as yet another leader of the house, a few generations removed. This continues over and over until the 31st century is reached.
How do you direct the nation, especially once you realize you are leaping through time?
*inspired by the Davion & Davion (Deceased) story from Drakensis, the current crop of SI stories and watching a re-run of Quantum Leap.

Make sure that Holy Shroud cannot happen by hiding all technological knowledge at multiple black sites.
Building mech-, aerospacefighter-, dropshipfactories, jumpship- and warshipyards in every second planetary System around the inner core of my realm (of course SECRET factories and hidden in mountain ranges or under the oceans or under a desert , but just hiding them and yes, the Yards in space I would cover them with black painted jumpshipsails so they would be very hard to spot - if you arrive via zenith or Nadir point).
And last but not least: making sure that every planet has a REAL defense force. The table at one of the rulebooks with just max 2 regiments I consider laughable.
I would demand at least West-German defence levels of the Cold War:
West-Germany had 60 million citizens and 500.000 served in the Armed Forces with 2.200 tanks and about 450 combat aircraft. And this would be my goal per planet per 60 million citizens.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 04 April 2020, 02:19:01
#615

(responding to someone else suggesting a ComStar schism leading to multiple factions)

Kick it off with Kentares and ComStar spreading the word of the massacre so Jinjiro Kurita concludes they are 'enemies of the Dragon' and seizes the Combine HPGs. This would be before Toyama's religious reform and the massive loss of scientists so running their own HPGs is within their capacity.

This can then follow up with a spat between the Capellan and Free Worlds League networks over which branch should control the HPGs on worlds that changed hands. An elderly Blake fails to rein this in effectively and Precentor Andurien breaks away, establishing his own network with support from the FWL (particularly the resurgent Duchy of Andurien) and extending their service into the Magistracy of Canopus. The core regions of the FWL stay under Terran ComStar due to Andurien's limited reach.

The strain of this kills Jerome Blake about a year before canon and before he's solidified Toyama as his successor. As a result ComStar schisms between Toyama 'political' faction and Schwepps more 'corporate' faction. House Steiner had never been comfortable with ComStar (particularly their tax exempt status) and this region's HPGs (except in the old RWR) flips directly to Schwepps, although he loses control over Terra to Toyama. While the remaining FWL, RWR, Capellan and FedSuns HPGs remain aligned with Toyama, Schweppes gets support from Taurus who want their HPGs back and are happy to give influence to an anti-Terran faction.

Toyama is eager to rebuild his influence, particularly with the FWL as an avenue to getting 'Andurien ComStar' (still the smallest of the four factions) under his thumb. Thus events play out much as the ComStar War did in canon, with Charles Marik getting played by his sister (a ComStar adept) before finally realising he was being pawned. Rather than destroying Oriente HPG (a First Circuit HPG station in his era) he captures it and sets up a new FWL-managed HPG network for everything outside of Andurien ComStar's region and outlying regions like Tamarind.

The latter regions, along with the old RWR, are now cut off from Terra and have to sort themselves out, operating as a loose network of semi-autonomous Precentor fiefs, making the region mildly hellish for communications. Still, its a backwater so no one really cares.

This leaves the only real 'old ComStar' regions being the diminished Capellan Confederation and the Federated Suns - who are not happy to be sharing an HPG network, particularly as the now resource-short ComStar starts stinting outlying regions - which leads to the 'Schwepps-Taurian' network expanding into the FedSuns outback and the Aurigan region (which is breaking off from the Confederation at this time). House Davion and House Liao are mostly holding off on a break since they hope to extort concessions from Terra for their loyalty. When Toyama's successor makes it clear that this isn't going to happen, Michael Davion opens the rest of the Suns to the Schwepps-Taurians.

House Liao make a play for Terran control at this time, which backfires when the Terran government takes over the ComGuards forces and the rebuilt SDS network, obliterating the Capellan's last warships. The Capellan HPG network claims to henceforth be the 'true' successors to the SLDF Ministry of Communications, with the Terran rump (still active only on worlds within direct HPG range of Terra) firmly under the control of the Terran Planetary Government but still acting as a neutral clearinghouse between nations and the other HPG networks - if only as a last resort.

The factions would be:

ComStar (controls HPGs within the Capellan Confederation's current borders, whatever they may be)
Terran Ministry of Communications (has HPGs on worlds within 50 light years of Terra, sometimes alongside those of other networks)
Schwepps-Taurus (controls HPGs in the Taurian Concordat, Federated Suns and nearby periphery areas)
Voice of the Dragon (controls the HPGs of the Draconis Combine, controlled by ISF)
Schwepps-Steiner (controls HPGs in the Skye, Tamar and adjacent provinces of Donegal regions of the Lyran Commonwealth)
HPG Free League (controls HPGs in the major/central provinces of the FWL)
Anduri-Comm (centred in Andurien but also has HPGs in Canopus and along the FWL rim)
Anti-Spinward Precentors (dozens of small networks loosely aligned but with exact influence shifting periodically as worlds sign direct contracts with local Precentors), covering the anti-spinward regions of the FWL and Lyran Commonwealth, as well as such as remains of the old RWR).
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 04 April 2020, 04:54:23
Interesting idea!  Makes it hard (and expensive) to get messages around, but why wouldn't it be?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: EAGLE 7 on 04 April 2020, 10:10:11
Schwepps-Taurus (controls HPGs in the Taurian Concordat, Federated Suns and nearby periphery areas)

Secondary effects of economic and political status between Taurians and Fed Suns improves, due to Comstar style shenanigans aimed at improving market share.
 When did ROM come into existence?

Schwepps-Taurus & Schwepps-Steiner begins the scene push for an early FEDCOM, but one that is allied Taurans.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 04 April 2020, 11:48:25
And also lessens the possibility of a Kapteyn Accord...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 04 April 2020, 13:49:00
This would also make it hard for the Clans because with ComStar as mediators and a "neutral party" during the invasion, they were able to learn a lot about the defenders of each world they took. But with this, the Clans will have a harder time of not only keeping the local populations in line, but not have any relevant data on local defenders.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 07 April 2020, 01:14:34
Tribble 616

In 2751 Simon Cameron was killed and General Kerensky was made regent to 7 year old Richard.   General Kerensky while mourning the loss of his friend decided to let Aaron DeChavilier take over as General of the Army, and raise Richard as his own son. For 11 years Richard grew under Alexander’s guidance and was there for Nicholas and Andery’s births.

When Richard came of Age he rebuffed Amaris’s attempts at worming his way into the good graces of the Cameron’s and began to find ways to pull the Star League out of Taurian and Magistracy territory.

(inspired by JA Baker Who goes there: Forbidden History in where Alexander regrets his choices. an interesting AU idea yes?)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 07 April 2020, 01:26:03
I can't claim credit for that one. Forbidden History is JA Baker's work.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 07 April 2020, 02:30:11
my apologies.  fixed
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 09 April 2020, 11:38:45
Tribble 617

Imagine waking up in someone else’s body shortly after you died. Imagine if they were a fictional character. And imagine...if if were Stefan Amaris? Yep, you woke up in the body of a very young Stefan Amaris decades before his coup to overthrow the Terran Hegemony and the Star League. So now what do you do? Do you let history run it’s course and become the most hated man in the history of the Inner Sphere? Or would you rather change history and become a benevolent leader that he could have been?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sir Chaos on 09 April 2020, 12:13:11
Tribble 617

Imagine waking up in someone else’s body shortly after you died. Imagine if they were a fictional character. And imagine...if if were Stefan Amaris? Yep, you woke up in the body of a very young Stefan Amaris decades before his coup to overthrow the Terran Hegemony and the Star League. So now what do you do? Do you let history run it’s course and become the most hated man in the history of the Inner Sphere? Or would you rather change history and become a benevolent leader that he could have been?

Considering the way this ended for Amaris, his entire extended family, and the Rim Worlds Republic, I would imagine most would choose Option B.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Auberan on 09 April 2020, 14:05:30
The problem was that the plan was generations in the making. If you tried to go against it as Stephen, you might well just be heading towards your own assassination and replacement. Of course, that would be a good story in itself, fighting to reform the RWR, get equal rights for the Periphery under the Star League, work to evolve it into something closer to the noble purpose it purported itself as. Big list, fun times.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 12 April 2020, 03:48:47
Tribble 618

Following the Fourth Succession War, the Capellan Confederation's Prefectorate are presented with Romano Liao declaring herself 'deputy chancellor' in place of her incapacitated father. Which, given the Andurien-Canopian invasion, at least offers a leader. Right up until a delegation lands on Capellan and addresses the House of Scions claiming to be the rightful Prefectorate.

It seems that Candace Liao (representing St Ives), Victor Hargreaves (representing Chesterton), Waldemar Teng (representing Tikonov) and Elizabeth Jordan Liao (representing Capella) are all in that delegation. Their first request is that the House of Scions remove Maximilian Liao (representing Sian) due to his incapacity and Chandra Ling (representing Sarna) as she's under suspicion of treason - she was the head of the Maskirovka, after all.

Their replacements are suggested. And by suggested, I mean "Davion has five RCTs within one jump of Capella and the deputy Chancellor has declined to sign the ComStar-backed peace treaty so he's still at war". Tormano Liao, returned from Davion captivity as the new representative for Sian isn't exactly shocking. However, Sarna is currently the centre of the new 'Sarna March', i.e. Hanse Davion's wedding gift to his bride. So Melissa Steiner-Davion is named as the new Prefect of that Commonality.

Since Maximilian Liao is no longer on the Prefectorate, he's no longer eligible to be Chancellor. The Prefectorate promptly vote Melissa in. And like that, the Fourth Succession War ends. To applause.

A messenger then arrives on Atreus, carrying a message from Hanse Davion and an offer. The message is that the Capellan Confederation is now an ally of the Federated Commonwealth, who will naturally move the defend their ally from Janos' rogue province. Of course, the FWL is at peace with the Federated Commonwealth so the offer is of an alliance to bring Andurien in line, with the Fed Com only seeking to re-establish the pre-war border. The price is a small one: adopt Hanse Davion as a Marik.

Janos sees where this is going, but since this lets him squash Andurien like a bug (Catherine Humphreys has zero chance of winning under these conditions) and there's no guarantee that this will ever be more than a signature on a piece of paper he agrees.

A few years later, Janos suffers his stroke. And a truly astonishing number of Parliament agree that the Marik they should offer the Captain-Generalcy to is Hanse Marik-Davion. After all, he did point out that this would neatly end the emergency and mean that the position of Captain-General could then be voided, restoring executive power to Parliament after almost three centuries...

One can only imagine the screaming from Hilton Head on Terra and the Imperial Palace on Luthien...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 12 April 2020, 04:23:34
The problem was that the plan was generations in the making. If you tried to go against it as Stephen, you might well just be heading towards your own assassination and replacement. Of course, that would be a good story in itself, fighting to reform the RWR, get equal rights for the Periphery under the Star League, work to evolve it into something closer to the noble purpose it purported itself as. Big list, fun times.
Also, the tribble still doesn't handwave away the actual coup attempt. Which will still automatically draw a hostile reaction from the SLDF no matter how benevolent in truth if not in propaganda Amaris turns out to be. And if civil war does erupt, the Council will no doubt still be up to the same shenanigans they were in canon.
Tribble 618
...
A few years later, Janos suffers his stroke. And a truly astonishing number of Parliament agree that the Marik they should offer the Captain-Generalcy to is Hanse Marik-Davion. After all, he did point out that this would neatly end the emergency and mean that the position of Captain-General could then be voided, restoring executive power to Parliament after almost three centuries...

One can only imagine the screaming from Hilton Head on Terra and the Imperial Palace on Luthien...
For all the screaming though, the FWL section will still be almost ungovernable from either Tharkad or New Avalon. It was barely governable from Atreus as it was.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 12 April 2020, 07:14:30
The trick there is not to try to govern it. Remove the Captain-Generalcy and the Free Worlds League will likely focus on bickering over the Speakership (where the executive power rests in peacetime). Which means that Hanse and Melissa can mostly focus their own military against the Draconis Combine.

For the FWL to got to war would mean needing to appoint a Captain-General, with the Mariks having first refusal and Hanse as 'the Marik', at least in name... If he can keep the Marik Commonwealth more or less under his control and retain a finger on the FWLM as Warden of the Perimeter Defenses then benign neglect leaves the FWL neutralised as a threat.

(Fitzgerald suggested when I mentioned the idea that what sold Janos on the idea was being given unrestricted access to Maximilian Liao).

"The former Chancellor died accidentally while meeting with a FWL dignitary."

"Accidentally?"

"We assume it wasn't intentional on Lord Liao's part. I didn't say it was unexpected."
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Post by: Daryk on 12 April 2020, 07:15:57
TOO funny!  :D
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 12 April 2020, 20:28:53
Tribble 618 sort of reminds me of Cray's Sign in Blood story which I liked. I think it is very plausible. Not only that but I could see Theodore Kurita just bowing to the inevitable forming a new Sphere wide Federated Commonwealth. Hardly a surrender but a recognition of circumstances so long as Kurita is given a seat on the new Council and their autonomy is respected.

In any event can you imagine Leo Showers breaking this news to the Grand Council??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 12 April 2020, 22:05:42
Tribble 619: Total War

This may have been covered before, but be dammed if I am reading the whole thread.

The Clan invasion proceeds as per canon until Tukayyid. Over that world, ComStar unleashes nuclear weapons against the massed Clan galaxies, transports and WarShips from its own few reactivated ships and hordes of Aerospace fighters. The best of the Clans are vaporised and the Clans left leaderless.

Meanwhile, the ComGuards are striking into the FRR to liberate it and make it a ComStar Protectorate. Waterley launches Scorpion as canon, seeking to control all the HPG's in the Inner Sphere, though as in canon is toppled by Focht and Mori.

Through 3052 and 3053 the Inner Sphere drives back the shattered remnants of the Clan's best.

In 3055 the Clans, ALL the Clans return, and ComStar is considered worse than Dezgra, as the while Coreward front erupts in war again, this time with multiple invasions facing a prepared defence.

The focus on the Clans and their desire to destroy it entirely holds ComStar together in its traditional guise, as all ComStar factions work together to prevent their Armageddon, fighting alongside the DCMS, AFFC, Wolfs Dragoons and whatever help the other powers are willing to send.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 13 April 2020, 02:47:45
With massed nukes on the table, the clans don't stand a chance.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 13 April 2020, 16:39:11
If there are two things universal in Battletech, it's that both the Clans and all forces of the IS HATE Stefan Amaris; and the use of any WMD's (minus Mechs) is considered a heinous crime.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 13 April 2020, 16:44:08
Survival > hate...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Blacknova on 13 April 2020, 17:15:33
This is true. But if only used in space and not the planetary surface, which I should have been clearer about, it might limit blow back from the IS in the short term, as they kinda saved the day. The Clans would still be out for blood though. I should also have noted that the nukes were only used at Tukayyid, and only in space.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 13 April 2020, 17:22:49
If you use nukes right, you only HAVE to use them in space...  ^-^
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 April 2020, 05:52:32
Tribble 620

Anton Marik sat back and looked at Jaime Wolf for a long moment as their ship jumped. When the discontinuity was over, he leaned forwards. "Colonel Wolf."

"Sir."

"Scrap those plans."

The mercenary narrowed his eyes. "Oh?"

"Firstly, I don't trust Maximilian Liao. I never have and I never will. Negotiating with him over the last ten years has never been about anything more than keeping the border quiet so I can build up reliable forces, supply stockpiles and political contacts. You and your troops are an unlooked for benefit - welcome, absolutely. But not something I was counting on."

"I see."

Anton seemed to be looking for something. "You think I'm betraying him?"

"The contract we've agreed expressly prohibits the use of the Dragoons against the Capellan Confederation. Beyond that, it isn't my business."

"There was a lot of weaselling in what I agreed with the Chancellor. I think we both dropped 'if' about a hundred times, even though nothing was put in writing. Once all those contingent conditions are stripped away, the key point is that I took over your contract - which I will honor both in the formal requirement not to use you against the Capellans and the unspoken requirement to give your troops action. And that I wish to replace my brother as Captain-General."

Anton paused. "The Captain-Generalcy is a matter of election, Colonel. Not military might. The one can affect the other, but a military coup would fundamentally fail unless I could win the hearts and minds of the leaders of the provinces and the MPs they control. And however... flawed my brother may be, he is neither the utter disaster that they would rally behind anyone to overthrow and I can hardly claim a brilliant record of success against his mediocrity. Despite your excellence, the Wolf Dragoons cannot make me Captain-General."

"Then what do you want?"

The Duke of Procyon leant back. "I need a victory. Something that is clearly my work. Something I can rally the League behind. Something that can convince even Janos backers - especially his backers - that he should step aside with dignity, while he still can." He raised finger. "To use the Dragoons, I cannot target the Capellans. A significant strike against House Steiner is beyond my remit as commander of the Capellan front. And the periphery simply isn't important enough."

Jaime Wolf considered and then nodded. "Davion or Kurita."

"Precisely. In this case, Kurita." Anton Marik smile coldly. "The... it's crude, but not inaccurate, the oriental association does them no favours. Colonel Wolf, I want Dieron and as many worlds around it as we can take for the Free Worlds League."

For a very long moment, the two men looked at each other. Then Jaime Wolf opened his notepad to a fresh page and began talking as he started putting ideas onto the page.

And Duke Anton Marik smiled...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Shadow_Wraith on 14 April 2020, 07:44:38
#620 Would be a very interesting  story
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 14 April 2020, 11:11:46
Instead of attacking House Steiner or dealing with internal politics, the Dragoons go for Kurita a little earlier than expected. Interesting idea.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 14 April 2020, 16:37:53
I know where I can get popcorn... how soon can you have this written?  :drool:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SCC on 14 April 2020, 19:57:42
Tribble 621: Changing of the Clans

Inspired by Along Came a Spider by drakensis and the general fractiousness of the Fire Mandrills. This is another of my ideas that I feel needs to be brought up apart from a larger idea.

In 2850 a civilian Caste rebellion against the Smoke Jaguars succeeds in capturing several enclaves, and most importantly disrupting standing trade agreements involving those enclaves, meaning that the matter can no longer be considered an internal Smoke Jaguar affair as it is now affecting other Clans. The final outcome of all of this is the formation of a new Clan, Clan Black Dragon, a Clan focused on conventional infantry and one that doesn't make use of Trueborn Warriors (Where those even a thing back then?).

From there Clan history is not noticeably changed apart from the fact that every time there is a large enough disagreement in a Clan it will split into two or more new Clans. By the time of Operation REVIVAL there are 100 (or more), with the largest three being the (Golden) Wolves, Jade Falcons, and Blood Spirits, each sporting roughly their canon Toumans for the time, that is three full-size, all 'Mech Galaxies. The debates leading up to Operation REVIVAL have the same outcomes, there are just more people voting this time.

Where things REALLY diverge is the preparations for Operation REVIVAL, Ulric Kerensky knows from his reading of history that his Clan will need infantry to hold his forthcoming conquests, using SL ratio of 2:1 he decides he wants at least 6 Galaxies of conventional infantry and he knows just where he can get them: Clan Black Dragon. This kicks off a massive feeding contest among the other invading Clans as they decide to acquire various enclaves and forces as 'Necessary for the success the Great Return', the various pieces of Clan Fire Mandrill, the most fractured of the original Clans, are almost totally destroyed. All of this fighting ends up delaying the Invasion by two years.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 15 April 2020, 03:25:04
2 years and the IS may well be embroiled in a Fifth Succession War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 18 April 2020, 15:44:44
#622

As a result of Clan breeding programmes, the scientists of some clans skew gender balances based on observed results. (It doesn't matter for trueborn reproduction, after all). As a result, some Clans' warrior castes are exclusively a single gender. (although some Clans don't do this).

If Clan Wolf followed this pattern then Phelan's either surrounded by amazons, or the 'Black Widow' is more a Black Widower and his grandson probably isn't going to end up as Phelan's lover.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 18 April 2020, 15:54:55
#622

As a result of Clan breeding programmes, the scientists of some clans skew gender balances based on observed results. (It doesn't matter for trueborn reproduction, after all). As a result, some Clans' warrior castes are exclusively a single gender. (although some Clans don't do this).

If Clan Wolf followed this pattern then Phelan's either surrounded by amazons, or the 'Black Widow' is more a Black Widower and his grandson probably isn't going to end up as Phelan's lover.

could just as well be that he IS Phelan's lover.

Or, yanno, Vlad.  It would certainly alter the..ahm...'tension' between those two in a way that makes tweenage girls swoon.  I'm sure someone, somewhere, has written that slashfic.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 18 April 2020, 16:38:16
I'm less sure about that one... the warrior caste is more than just elementals, after all.  I could see 100% male elementals and 100% female aerospace pilots (and thus protomech pilots) in the same clan.  I don't think the statistics would push 'mechs to one or the other exclusively.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 18 April 2020, 17:08:18
I'm less sure about that one... the warrior caste is more than just elementals, after all.  I could see 100% male elementals and 100% female aerospace pilots (and thus protomech pilots) in the same clan.  I don't think the statistics would push 'mechs to one or the other exclusively.

there are lies, there are damned lies, and there are statistics-which can be (and often are) twisted to fit the preconceived notions of the man or woman citing them...and 'Scientists' aren't immune to biases.  it can be as simple as "This department is headed by a mysogynist" and "that department is headed by a Misandrist."

and there you go. one Clan ends up with a radical numbers bias in their warrior caste of males, and another in their females.  (and since power in the Clan is centered not just in the WARRIOR caste, but in the TRUEBORN warrior caste, it will end up being a self-reinforcing pattern.)

it doesn't matter that the OBJECTIVE truth is that for 'mechwarriors there's little to no practical difference, (or for aeropilots, or even infantry if the gear's properly designed).  what matters is whether the scientist casteman in charge has a bias, because if he or she does, they'll skew the statistics without fudging a number-other than selectively not looking at some numbers, or excluding numbers because said numbers don't fit their personal narrative.

the same thing can happen with skin color and ethnicity.  We try not to acknowledge that in modern society, but these guys routinely do human experimentation on children.

"Ethics" doesn't apply here.  (arguably, not even scientific ethics.)

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 18 April 2020, 17:33:13
I've read that female anatomy actually does cope with G-forces better (being tall is a negative here).  You really want your four foot something gymnasts in the cockpit...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 19 April 2020, 05:40:12
#622

As a result of Clan breeding programmes, the scientists of some clans skew gender balances based on observed results. (It doesn't matter for trueborn reproduction, after all). As a result, some Clans' warrior castes are exclusively a single gender. (although some Clans don't do this).

If Clan Wolf followed this pattern then Phelan's either surrounded by amazons, or the 'Black Widow' is more a Black Widower and his grandson probably isn't going to end up as Phelan's lover.

#623

saKhan Phelan Ward does not follow the ilKhan's orders to flee to the InnerSphere but rather shows up to save not only Natasha on Twycross but Ulric as well changing the very outcome of the Refusal War. The de facto Absorption of the Jade Falcons results in the creation of a Clan based on perhaps the most legendary warrior ever known, the Black Widows. Feared throughout the land this tribute Clan is led by Khan Natasha Kerensky and saKhan Marthe Pryde. Together these fearsome women create a female trueborn warrior caste closely aligned to the Wolves.

The Warden Wolves and their vindicated ilKhan now set out to make sure the Truce of Tukayyid remains in force till 3067. Steel Viper Wardens led by saKhan Christopher Ahmed are strengthened as a result of this Refusal War and unlike canon they make sure Brett Andrews' mistakes don't lead to his rise. Ghost Bear are just busy moving to Rasalhague as well and Nova Cat seems content with their visions. The Wolves and their Black Widow allies have only one true rival remaining among the Invading Clans, the Smoke Jaguars. While Crusaders remain somewhat in charge of Diamond Shark and Hell's Horses they are really majority Warden Clans, aff? How long can those regimes really endure amid this Warden rise? Don't forget the Home Crusaders (Blood Spirit, Burrock, Fire Mandrill, Ice Hellion, Star Adder) or the Home Wardens (Cloud Cobra, Coyote, Goliath Scorpion, Snow Raven) either.

Hardly complete but very alternate I had an idea for this before. Not a complete concept mind you but something far different from canon hopefully somewhat along the lines of what drakensis is thinking.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 22 April 2020, 09:16:32
#624

On 30 May 3029, ComStar orders an interdiction of the Federated Suns, citing an alleged attack on their Sarna HPG station and the deaths of fifty members of their order. The AFFS wasn't unprepared and the ongoing fifth wave of attacks continued while Jumpships were commandeered to courier key messages. Trusted officers had orders to act at their own discretion in the absence of orders from New Avalon.

Based on the reports being received, the Marshals on the frontlines were confident that the Sixth Wave, scheduled for August 3029, could take place only shortly behind the expected dates. There was concern that the FWLM or at least provincial units might move opportunistically, seeing the Capellans as easier prey after their reverses in the Terran Corridor. Reports were that many Capellan worlds viewed House Liao as a lost cause and worlds along the border with the Free Worlds League would - if they had to surrender - welcome a foe they had had less direct conflict with over the regiments of House Marik moving into a collapsing Confederation.

The Confederation was a house of cards, needing one solid push to make it tumble. But there was real doubt whether the AFFS, worn down by a year of war and with communications in poor shape, could deliver that push.

Sealed orders from Hanse Davion reached a handful of key officers during late June, advising them that losing relatively unimportant worlds of the Sarna March to House Marik was acceptable. The Capellan Confederation surviving as a threat to the Federated Suns was not.

Bypassing worlds defended by nothing but militia, two task forces were hastily assembled. Their arrivals would be delayed further, but it was believed (correctly) that any apparent slowing of the offensive would be ascribed by the Maskirovka to the effects of the Interdiction.

On September 7, the same day that the young Duke Morgan Hasek-Davion would carry out his famous defense of Kathil, a fleet of jumpships emerged from a pirate point over Capella, using a pirate point that the AFFS had data on from a long ago invasion attempt during the Age of War. Blandford's Grenadiers, garrisoning the heart of the Capellan Confederation, were barely out of their barracks before they found themselves under attack with the Davion Light Guards coming down practically on top of them. Fighting free, the Grenadiers discovered the Light Guards withdrawing in good order and leaving the field to the two RCTs whose more orderly landing they had been covering for.

Unable to withdraw without exposing themselves to attacks from the rear by the Light Guards, one of the finest regiments in the CCAF was forced to stand in place and take the full might of the Davion Heavy Guards and Seventh Crucis Lancers. The battle could not last long and without the Grenadiers, the collapse of the conventional forces stationed on Capella was only a matter of time - particularly as warehouses of supplies near the capital fell quickly, the security not expecting that the Grenadiers would be so easily defeated.

Only a miracle could save the Capellan Confederation now. Fortunately for the Chancellor, he believed he had two trump cards: the advanced myomers captured earlier in the war and now fitted to the elite forces garrisoning his capital on Sian; and the capture of Morgan Hasek-Davion on Kathil.

On October 24 the Sian garrison paraded in honour of the returning 4th Tau Ceti Rangers and their illustrious prisoner, the Chancellor already plotting how to use his control of the Capellan March's leader to swing the entire tide of the war.

He would be brutally disappointed in both, for the dropship landed not the Rangers but Morgan's Kathil Uhlans, and a mysterious gas delivered by special warheads in the dropship's missiles quickly crippled the defending 'Mechs. Outnumbered four to one, the Uhlans cut through the Red Lancers and House Imarra with ease, searching through the Forbidden City for the Davion agents who had engineered this triumph.

And as the Chancellor cowered, Capellan air defenses were in no position to do anything about more jumpships delivering their cargos via a pirate point over the Capellan capital. The Ulhans were joined rapidly by the conventional regiments of the Fifth Crucis Lancers, combat commands from the three RCTs still clearing away resistance on Capella and the full might of the Illician Lancers and Lexington Combat Group: seven crack mercenary regiments.

As the sun rose on October 25, 3029, Acting Chancellor Candace Liao formally offered a conditional surrender to Morgan Hasek-Davion, who accepted on behalf of his uncle. Before ComStar HPGs could be instructed to shut down, extending the Federated Suns' interdiction to its new conquest, priority messages rushed out from Sian to every world still answering to House Liao, carrying two simple facts.

The war was over. The Capellan Confederation had been defeated.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 22 April 2020, 19:54:23
#624

On 30 May 3029, ComStar orders an interdiction of the Federated Suns, citing an alleged attack on their Sarna HPG station and the deaths of fifty members of their order. The AFFS wasn't unprepared and the ongoing fifth wave of attacks continued while Jumpships were commandeered to courier key messages. Trusted officers had orders to act at their own discretion in the absence of orders from New Avalon.

Based on the reports being received, the Marshals on the frontlines were confident that the Sixth Wave, scheduled for August 3029, could take place only shortly behind the expected dates. There was concern that the FWLM or at least provincial units might move opportunistically, seeing the Capellans as easier prey after their reverses in the Terran Corridor. Reports were that many Capellan worlds viewed House Liao as a lost cause and worlds along the border with the Free Worlds League would - if they had to surrender - welcome a foe they had had less direct conflict with over the regiments of House Marik moving into a collapsing Confederation.

The Confederation was a house of cards, needing one solid push to make it tumble. But there was real doubt whether the AFFS, worn down by a year of war and with communications in poor shape, could deliver that push.

Sealed orders from Hanse Davion reached a handful of key officers during late June, advising them that losing relatively unimportant worlds of the Sarna March to House Marik was acceptable. The Capellan Confederation surviving as a threat to the Federated Suns was not.

Bypassing worlds defended by nothing but militia, two task forces were hastily assembled. Their arrivals would be delayed further, but it was believed (correctly) that any apparent slowing of the offensive would be ascribed by the Maskirovka to the effects of the Interdiction.

On September 7, the same day that the young Duke Morgan Hasek-Davion would carry out his famous defense of Kathil, a fleet of jumpships emerged from a pirate point over Capella, using a pirate point that the AFFS had data on from a long ago invasion attempt during the Age of War. Blandford's Grenadiers, garrisoning the heart of the Capellan Confederation, were barely out of their barracks before they found themselves under attack with the Davion Light Guards coming down practically on top of them. Fighting free, the Grenadiers discovered the Light Guards withdrawing in good order and leaving the field to the two RCTs whose more orderly landing they had been covering for.

Unable to withdraw without exposing themselves to attacks from the rear by the Light Guards, one of the finest regiments in the CCAF was forced to stand in place and take the full might of the Davion Heavy Guards and Seventh Crucis Lancers. The battle could not last long and without the Grenadiers, the collapse of the conventional forces stationed on Capella was only a matter of time - particularly as warehouses of supplies near the capital fell quickly, the security not expecting that the Grenadiers would be so easily defeated.

Only a miracle could save the Capellan Confederation now. Fortunately for the Chancellor, he believed he had two trump cards: the advanced myomers captured earlier in the war and now fitted to the elite forces garrisoning his capital on Sian; and the capture of Morgan Hasek-Davion on Kathil.

On October 24 the Sian garrison paraded in honour of the returning 4th Tau Ceti Rangers and their illustrious prisoner, the Chancellor already plotting how to use his control of the Capellan March's leader to swing the entire tide of the war.

He would be brutally disappointed in both, for the dropship landed not the Rangers but Morgan's Kathil Uhlans, and a mysterious gas delivered by special warheads in the dropship's missiles quickly crippled the defending 'Mechs. Outnumbered four to one, the Uhlans cut through the Red Lancers and House Imarra with ease, searching through the Forbidden City for the Davion agents who had engineered this triumph.

And as the Chancellor cowered, Capellan air defenses were in no position to do anything about more jumpships delivering their cargos via a pirate point over the Capellan capital. The Ulhans were joined rapidly by the conventional regiments of the Fifth Crucis Lancers, combat commands from the three RCTs still clearing away resistance on Capella and the full might of the Illician Lancers and Lexington Combat Group: seven crack mercenary regiments.

As the sun rose on October 25, 3029, Acting Chancellor Candace Liao formally offered a conditional surrender to Morgan Hasek-Davion, who accepted on behalf of his uncle. Before ComStar HPGs could be instructed to shut down, extending the Federated Suns' interdiction to its new conquest, priority messages rushed out from Sian to every world still answering to House Liao, carrying two simple facts.

The war was over. The Capellan Confederation had been defeated.
This is what should have happened!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 22 April 2020, 20:29:16
Yes!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 22 April 2020, 21:51:55
Certainly a more satisfying end to the 4SW!  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Dave Talley on 22 April 2020, 22:20:31
we would also announce the sad death of Chancellor Candace
Liao's sister in the fighting

thats how the canon one should have gone, Candace simply pops dad and sis, and Tormano if necessary to get better terms, they would survive as a client state, but the upgrades to health and education for the people would be worth it
throw in separatists and trouble makers later for fun
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 23 April 2020, 01:23:19
The 'conditions' of the surrender probably included the following conversation:

Candace: "And I insist that you give up on your objective of bringing Justin back to New Avalon. Your uncle will just have to live without his petty revenge."
Morgan: "..."
Andrew Redburn: "As little as I like it, your grace, I think your uncle will believe that this is more important."
Morgan: "That isn't why this is awkward."
Justin: "Candace, there's something I didn't mention."
Candace: "I know, you're a Davion agent. I'm not an idiot darling, and you'll be making that up to me for a long time, by staying here with me and barking at Hanse whenever I tell you too. Just so that I don't look like a lapdog to my people."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ddm45 on 23 April 2020, 07:58:00
#625

The Comstar plot at Helm works. The Gray death legion is destroyed and the helm memory core is destroyed. The Battlemechs go to Lord Garth who after begins to plan and train his forces for his coup against Janos Marik. He plans it for the day of Hanse and Melissa's wedding as Janos will be away. How does this affect 4th succession war and more importantly the Clan invasion without the Knowledge from the Helm core.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 23 April 2020, 17:14:24
Drakensis: BRILLIANT!  8)

For #625, I think that means the Lyrans have even less to worry about on that flank, and can throw a few extra regiments at the Dracs...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: ckosacranoid on 23 April 2020, 17:39:49
#626

The IS was taken by storm when the black widow said that she was getting married. It was not Josh Wold that she was married to. IT was Hanse davion. No one could figure out how that happened since the Dragons where not even in Davion Employ anymore. They where working for marik at the time.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SCC on 24 April 2020, 00:03:15
2 years and the IS may well be embroiled in a Fifth Succession War.
Canonically no one (major) in the IS was spoiling for a war at this time (because that would make setting things up for the anti-Clan alliance harder) and I didn't change anything there in my post (It's part of a bigger idea with lots of changes).

@drakensis Re: Tribble 624, this might be things like bad Sarna articles but I've got the impression that the C* interdiction only affected worlds that had been in FS hands when the war begun, not their conquests (Which is weird).

Drakensis: BRILLIANT!  8)

For #625, I think that means the Lyrans have even less to worry about on that flank, and can throw a few extra regiments at the Dracs...
Not to mention the FWL can't provide even the limited support they did provide to their Kapteyn Accords allies.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 27 April 2020, 15:23:27
#627:

Cranston Snord nodded along as he listened to the Lyran General go over the new contract. (What was the man's name, again?) Everything seemed to be alright so far, mostly the same as the one that this was to renew. Their compensation was being increased, which was a good thing. Some notes about new supply channels, which was also good.

"And then," the General continued, "There's the matter of your liaison officer. As you know, Kapitan Hogan has been transferred to a company command of his own in the Arcturan Lancers."

"He earned it," Cranston agreed. "Boy knows what he's doing."

"And we've made sure to find an equally competant replacement for you. She's due for a staff rotation, a couple of years with you should do nicely."

Cranston nodded again, watching for a moment as the General fiddled with papers, pulling out the new officer's record. "You'll like her," the General finally continued. "She's no stranger to combat... started as jump infantry, managed to capture a Phoenix Hawk off the Dracs, spent a year at Somerset learning to pilot... impressed the training cadre enough to take another year in the Advanced Tactical course, and then four years with the 15th Lyran Guards. I'm sure you'll get along just fine with her."

The General pushed the file folder across the desk, and Snord picked it up and flicked it open, looking the new officer's records over. "Definitely impressive, General..." That was the man's name. "... von Lergen. I'm sure Hauptmann Degurechaff will have quite the educational time with the Irregulars."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ttw1 on 27 April 2020, 21:46:37
#627:


The General pushed the file folder across the desk, and Snord picked it up and flicked it open, looking the new officer's records over. "Definitely impressive, General..." That was the man's name. "... von Lergen. I'm sure Hauptmann Degurechaff will have quite the educational time with the Irregulars."
Epic!!!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SCC on 27 April 2020, 23:33:51
I'm missing something, who's Degurechaff? The only guess I've got is it's Katherine.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 28 April 2020, 00:16:08
I'm missing something, who's Degurechaff? The only guess I've got is it's Katherine.
  The name-character of The Saga of Tanya the Evil (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Saga_of_Tanya_the_Evil).  I haven’t seen it myself, so.... [shrug]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 28 April 2020, 01:30:19
Japanese Human Resources manager, reborn into a wartorn world as a girl because god took offense to his atheism. Goals of: live a cushy life; and kill god. The status of social general would be a dangling carrot for her to go to, but she's not that lucky.

She's very rule abiding, but also very good at finding ways to interpret rules to enable very ruthless approaches. Particularly merciless towards rule breakers - at the start of her story she handles two insubordinate subordinates by assigning them to a bunker she (rightly) expects to be destroyed by artillery. Her smile when she learns they were killed is nightmare fuel.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 28 April 2020, 20:20:13
628: Someone at ROM has an attack of conscience when his order strikes at the uncle of his friend Thomas and BCCs him on the report. 

If Thomas Marik is still in the exploration corps he may not be able to do anything about it, but if he's able to he'll probably try to warn his father about Anton's impending replacement.  Either way he'll be disaffected with Comstar and go in the opposite direction of what he became in canon. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 02 May 2020, 03:44:22
629 The Kerensky Coup

In 2765, Aleksandr Kerensky finally reached his breaking point when it comes to Richard Cameron's blind stupidity, the Council's naked avarice and the corruption inside the Terran Hegemony. With the Periphery ablaze as a direct result of all three, he decided to apply James McKenna's solution.

For more than a year, SLDF forces were funnelled out into the Periphery, but rather than moving entire armies, Kerensky strips regiments, brigades and divisions from the Corps, masterfully rushing task forces out faster than anyone thought possible... and entangling the House Cameron's most loyal officers and men in the bloodbaths of the Uprising.

When Stefan Amaris offered his forces to garrison the Hegemony, Kerensky feigned reluctance and used it to send more of the ultra-loyal First Army away into the fires of war, leaving only a small cadre to control the SDS networks.

On 25 December 2766 (days before Amaris' own coup could take place), SDS systems began to blockade key systems, while covertly redeployed elements of the SLDF from systems around the Hegemony moved to secure less well-guarded worlds. Caught offguard and dispersed, the Rim Worlds fleet was slaughtered and the Hegemony went dark. Only reassuring messages from Kerensky kept the House Lords and SLDF Generals from panicking: the HPGs had been sabotaged by Periphery sympathisers, the General assured them. Routine traffic would continue shortly.

And then, one month later, HPG traffic resumes, with an announcement from the First Lord's throne... on which sat a grave-faced Aleksandr Kerensky. The Protector solemnly offered his deep apologies to all ten states for the serious failures of the Star League towards them and pledged his intentions to make matters right. In token of this, the main architects of the last two years would face summary execution and he asked the Star League Council to convene under his leadership to make matters right.

After a momentary pause to allow children to be sent away, Kerensky personally executed a grovelling Stefan Amaris and a hysterical Richard Cameron. And plunged the entire Star League into civil war.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: panzerfaust150 on 02 May 2020, 12:58:56
Write this....this is The Way!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 02 May 2020, 13:07:14
That would definitely be interesting...  :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 02 May 2020, 13:10:50
629 The Kerensky Coup

In 2765, Aleksandr Kerensky finally reached his breaking point when it comes to Richard Cameron's blind stupidity, the Council's naked avarice and the corruption inside the Terran Hegemony. With the Periphery ablaze as a direct result of all three, he decided to apply James McKenna's solution.

For more than a year, SLDF forces were funnelled out into the Periphery, but rather than moving entire armies, Kerensky strips regiments, brigades and divisions from the Corps, masterfully rushing task forces out faster than anyone thought possible... and entangling the House Cameron's most loyal officers and men in the bloodbaths of the Uprising.

When Stefan Amaris offered his forces to garrison the Hegemony, Kerensky feigned reluctance and used it to send more of the ultra-loyal First Army away into the fires of war, leaving only a small cadre to control the SDS networks.

On 25 December 2766 (days before Amaris' own coup could take place), SDS systems began to blockade key systems, while covertly redeployed elements of the SLDF from systems around the Hegemony moved to secure less well-guarded worlds. Caught offguard and dispersed, the Rim Worlds fleet was slaughtered and the Hegemony went dark. Only reassuring messages from Kerensky kept the House Lords and SLDF Generals from panicking: the HPGs had been sabotaged by Periphery sympathisers, the General assured them. Routine traffic would continue shortly.

And then, one month later, HPG traffic resumes, with an announcement from the First Lord's throne... on which sat a grave-faced Aleksandr Kerensky. The Protector solemnly offered his deep apologies to all ten states for the serious failures of the Star League towards them and pledged his intentions to make matters right. In token of this, the main architects of the last two years would face summary execution and he asked the Star League Council to convene under his leadership to make matters right.

After a momentary pause to allow children to be sent away, Kerensky personally executed a grovelling Stefan Amaris and a hysterical Richard Cameron. And plunged the entire Star League into civil war.

I like this one.  I doubt I could manage it quite well enough, but I like it..
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 02 May 2020, 13:11:40
I figured you (of all people) would, but didn't want to say anything until you weighed in...  ;)
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Post by: Takiro on 02 May 2020, 15:42:38
Interesting drak, many questions....like does Kerensky have custody of the Cameron heir's? What of the rest of the dynasty? Surely Kerensky would dare not execute the entire family for the corruption of Richard? What about any House scions in the Hegemony?

The Hegemony dare I say maybe more behind Kerensky than they ever were Amaris. But there is somewhere out there beyond the Rim a Cameron (or closest relative) who may challenge Kerensky directly (Admiral Wilbur Braso perhaps of canon Prinz Eugen fame?). Would the House Lords back him? Or would they start devouring the SLDF with recall orders from their homeland??
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 02 May 2020, 23:54:11
drakensis, there are very few here who, beside you, could write this and make us care. 

PLEASE WRITE IT
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Post by: Cannonshop on 03 May 2020, 00:59:31
I figured you (of all people) would, but didn't want to say anything until you weighed in...  ;)

To do a story like that right you kinda have to have some lingering respect for Kerensky and be able to see things from his point of view.  My problem is that everything I've seen of his actions in Canon suggests the man was a narcissistic incompetent who got the job on the basis of being drinking buddies with Simon, and not on his competency or moral character.

I wouldn't be able to write it, because I wouldn't be able to write the "Legendary Kerensky" doing the smart thing instead of the dumb things he actually did-not without deconstructing the man's character as created...

but Drakensis maybe could, or maybe Natasha_Kerensky-it takes someone who has at least SOME respect for the man in canon to do it.
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Post by: croaker on 03 May 2020, 01:15:22
I honestly can't see Kerensky pulling something like this.

DeChevalier, though... to borrow a sig line, "I'm with Drunk DeChevalier" (Davion & Davion (Deceased)).....

Or perhaps, to continue the metaphor of recent stories, have an SI, or Hanse's Ghost, or Liz Ngo, replace Keresnky as CINC-SLDF.....
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Post by: Blacknova on 03 May 2020, 02:16:51
Or it is a tale of "dark" redemption. Big K realises just how bad things are, as he was the one who could have raised Richard to be a descent person.

So he goes with it. Makes peace with his inner demons, takes a good long hard look at his short comings and goes out to redress them via killing Cameron and Amaris and going for the big cheese.

The Dark Kerensky could be a fun character to write. He likes the aspects of the white knight SLDF, but knows that under the armor is a black heart fed by power and control. Once he accepts that, the lad can go far.

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Post by: SulliMike23 on 03 May 2020, 09:21:56
Drak, HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT COMING UP WITH THESE THINGS?!
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Post by: Cannonshop on 03 May 2020, 18:18:59
I honestly can't see Kerensky pulling something like this.

DeChevalier, though... to borrow a sig line, "I'm with Drunk DeChevalier" (Davion & Davion (Deceased)).....

Or perhaps, to continue the metaphor of recent stories, have an SI, or Hanse's Ghost, or Liz Ngo, replace Keresnky as CINC-SLDF.....

Liz can't be Liz without her era and location, and that's a fact.  She is truly a creature of her environment, a 28th century Liz wouldn't be anything LIKE 31st Century Liz.  (among other things, her disease would guarantee she never served.)
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Post by: Smegish on 03 May 2020, 20:18:50
Wasn't there one someone cooked up that had Alekzandr haunted by the ghosts of Ulric and Natasha? Or am I imagining things again?
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Post by: Sharpnel on 04 May 2020, 00:45:04
Yes that story was written, though for the life of me I cannot remember who wrote it.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 04 May 2020, 00:47:57
There is the tribble upthread, and a couple chapters here.

https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=67982.0

If any more or another version has been written, let me know, please.
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Post by: drakensis on 04 May 2020, 01:09:29
Drak, HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT COMING UP WITH THESE THINGS?!
Mild case of obsession with the universe and a brain that doesn't want me to sleep at night.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 08 July 2020, 05:41:21
#630 - House Hasek of the Outworlds March

History would speak highly of Duke Michael Hasek of New Syrtis. At the tender age of eighteen, the dashing young officer in the Syrtis Fusiliers married the First Prince's half-sister, Marie Davion and two years later their newborn son Morgan Hasek-Davion became second-in-line to the throne of the Federated Suns. What promised to be a stellar military career was cut short in 3011 with Hasek shot out of his Marauder by a Capellan Battlemaster, and almost drowning when his ejection seat failed, dropping him into a lake. Having lost his left hand and his ability to pilot a 'Mech, Lord Hasek took up the post of Minister of the Capellan March, delegated to him by his ailing father Duke George Hasek. Showing equal brilliance in office, the young Minister quickly established enormous influence over not only his own ministry but others that were suffering due to the First Prince's focus on the battlefield. Ironically, Hasek's unstinting support of his brothers-by-marriage only exacerbated these issues since Ian was more than happy to delegate authority and focus on the Combine front.

Hanse Davion was more concerned, particularly when he was deployed to the Capellan March and discovered extensive corruption leading back to House Hasek, something that severely hampered him in his duties as military governor of New Aragon and convinced him that his distant cousin Yvonne had been onto something before she was forced out of her post as Field Marshal of the March by Duke George and his cronies. The death of Ian Davion in 3013 brought this potential rift to the forefront with some suggesting that an assassination attempt against Hanse before he had even been crowned was the work of Hasek, seeking regency for an infant prince in the form of his son.

However, on reaching New Avalon, a potentially stormy meeting between Hasek and both Davions revealed that the Minister of the Capellan March was far from supporting the practises that they decried and had been amassing evidence to try to bring down those of his family involved in them. The death of George Hasek seemed tailor-made to clean house, but suspicions remained until the new Duke made a radical offer to demonstrate his sincerity: end House Hasek's long rule over the Capellan March and instead confer upon them the less lucrative but no less honourable role of leading a new Outworlds March.

The Outworlds March had been abolished following the Davion Civil War, but the region had experienced centuries of neglect and economic decay. Michael Hasek expressed his enthusiasm for the idea of bringing the worlds back together with a leadership focused on turning them into a new bastion of strength for the Federated Suns and the new First Prince was in the first flush of popularity following his accession, making this the perfect moment. And thus, to the horror of many of his relatives, the Duke of New Syrtis announced his resignation as Minister of the Capellan March, accepted the role of Minister of the Outworlds March and gleefully endorsed Yvonne Davion's return as Field Marshal of the Capellan March alongside the appointment of Olivia Fenlon of Chesterton as his successor to the Capellan Ministry.

Organising a hundred worlds into a new subdivision of the Federated Suns was an enormous task, but by the 3015 marriage of the First Prince to Dana Stephenson (and the formal opening of the New Avalon Institute of Science), Michael Hasek was able to stand beside Duchess Fenlon and Duke Sandoval as one of the stalwart supporters of House Davion, honoured by Aaron Sandoval with the privilege of presenting the Dragonslayer Ribbon to the 1st Capellan Dragoons for their rescue of the First Prince and his new bride on Halstead Station...
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Post by: Daryk on 08 July 2020, 06:15:53
I can hear the Taurian screams from here...  :D
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Post by: Elmoth on 08 July 2020, 07:16:33
Ok, I didn't know about this thread and have not read most of the 630 entries above, but here come a pair of mine (that might have already been mentioned

#631 The Wastes Alliance 3000
The Outworld's Wastes streches for dozens of light years out of the current Outworld's Alliance. It is inhabited by pirates and forsaken planets.
What if they were not so forsaken? A trio of planets start building relations, and slowly they become a political entity that expands slowly. Around the year 3000 the Outworld's alliance reestablishes contact with some of they wayward colonies... That now are a larger political entity than the OA and have a larger industrial base than them, even if still more primitive. Will they ally? Fight? Who will come up as the top dog?

#632 The Lotharingian Empire
Facing 2 common enemies north and south, the Lothian League and Illyrian Palatinate decide to merge. Their combined resources, along with some financial help from the Canopians (that do not want the upstart Marians getting ideas) manage to hold the Marians and Circinians at bay. Then they strike at the Circinians, and after some bloody conflicts they also bring them to the fold. Suddenly the Marians find that they have become prey instead of predators... and some stray planets coreward of the Circinans also start looking at their neighbours, some with apprehension and some with relief as they are more open to collaboration and less to depredation toward their neighbours and potential planets.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 08 July 2020, 10:39:09
Elmoth, you might want to read 2ndACR's fan fiction, as your #631 is almost exactly what he's doing...
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Post by: Hotpoint on 09 July 2020, 18:14:57
#633 - Niops Association 2826

The High Associator winced when he was informed that a jumpship had arrived in the system and was requesting a meeting regarding the possibility of Niops taking in another batch of refugees. The Association had barely begun to integrate those who had already arrived over the previous two decades, these being mostly Capellans seeking shelter from the ravages of the Succession War, and attempting to absorb many more might destabilise Niops society altogether.

Still at least it was just a single small jumpship. "How many people could it be carrying anyway?", the High Associator muttered to himself with a sigh before informing his assistant that he would accept a meeting with this 'Sarah McEvedy' person when her dropship landed.

Two weeks later when the armada of warships and transport jumpships arrived the High Associator wondered to himself if things might have been better for Niops if they weren't the 'closest thing left to being the Star League after the Succession War', and that this 'Operation Switchback' plan hadn't worked quite so well.

On the other hand the bleeding-edge technology they were bringing with them was very interesting, not to mention the skilled workforce and automated factories.
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Post by: Cannonshop on 10 July 2020, 10:46:26
#634...

"...we know who's coming to destroy us.  Their jump drives are better than ours, their technology is superior to ours, but their weapons are just about on par with ours-if you include the Clans as part of 'us'."  Twenty Two year old Elizabeth Ngo, the 'Mad Duchess' of Kowloon, stood on the floor of the Estates General, which is no mean feat, given the state of her.  "We don't have the mouth structure to pronounce what they call themselves, but it translates as 'The Covenant', and they are on a holy war to rid the universe of human kind as an affront to their gods."

she reached into her pocket, and laid a folding knife on the dais in front of her, "I stood up here once before, stating that we can not forgive the Clans, that we should not welcome them.  I was wrong-there is something worse, and it's coming for all of us."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Daryk on 10 July 2020, 10:48:59
Been reading Scalzi lately?  ???
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Post by: Artifex on 10 July 2020, 11:54:52
Ah, naw, I think this is a mix up of BattleTech and Halo ;-)
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Post by: Cannonshop on 10 July 2020, 15:00:38
Been reading Scalzi lately?  ???

Ah, naw, I think this is a mix up of BattleTech and Halo ;-)

A Hint. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jXTBAGv9ZQ)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 14 July 2020, 01:15:12
#635

Having overthrown Richard Cameron and secured control over most of the Terran Hegemony, Stefan Amaris sends an open message to the entire Inner Sphere.

Rather than announcing his new Amaris Empire or claiming to be First Lord, instead he simply relays the high points of a massive quantity of data that accompanies his message: every piece of dirt he can dig up from the Cameron's personal files of their manipulations over the centuries, first to keep their neighbours at each other's throats, then to drag them into the Star League, to keep them there. Every war crime covered up since the Reunification War. Every hidden trick that you can pull in manipulating economies and slanting the news when you have an effective monopoly on interstellar communications.

As Amaris puts it in his closing statement: "There is not one world within the Star League that has not suffered from these manipulations. And if there is one among those listening to me who has not suffered, whether you know it or not, then you are very much in the minority. Either we can do better, or let the works of House Cameron burn."
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 14 July 2020, 17:01:15
This would, in turn, make Stefan Amaris a hero in the eyes of the Five House lords and the Periphery realms. It would also turn the entirety of the Inner Sphere against Kerensky and his army. Some of whom, might even defect because they had been serving under a false flag.
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Post by: georgiaboy on 14 July 2020, 17:10:35
As long as Amaris stayed the course and did not go in for any of his original TL atrocities.


Maybe even as for as arrest the adults and ascertained who had knowledge of said atrocities.
With Babble-Juice and second party witnesses from the House's Intelligence Bureau's. Then foster any of the unknowing family members.
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Post by: Chris OFarrell on 14 July 2020, 19:58:46
Hilariously in canon Amaris managed to get a LOT of support inside the Hegemony early on because Richard was increasingly loathed as a man-child moron by the people. It wasn't until he REALLY started cracking down on everyone later in the war that he got a lot of resentment (by which point it was too late of course).

If he actually built on that support he might even be able to get away with things even more, brushing aside his use of WMDs to seize the Hegemony from the SLDF garrisons as a tragic necessity that needed to be done to make this happen and bring the enormous crimes of the Cameron family to light. And publicly assuring Kerensky that holds no ill will towards him or the rest of the SLDF but as you can all see from the sheer amount of horrifying crap the Camerons did to enforce their place as the rulers of all mankind, extreme measures needed to be taken.

Then proceed to invite Royal Command of the SLDF back to the Hegemony to take up positions as the core of a new Hegemony Armed Forces to release his own troops steadily under direction from the planetary authorities of each world and the House Lords to meet in conference upon Terra as soon as possible - or via HPG if the security situation is still too unstable.

It would be fascinating to see how much mileage he can get by trying to ruthlessly wedge and split the SLDF along with getting the House Lords on side. Perhaps even proposing a radical rebuilding of the Star League to be less of an Empire ruled from Terra without the need for a First Lord...

Or something.
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Post by: Takiro on 14 July 2020, 21:37:02
I doubt the House Lords would have bought into this masterful propaganda but perhaps the people of the InnerSphere would have.

As has been pointed out the Hegemony at least at first was all on board with Amaris. Perhaps popular support would swell for him if he took this tact.

The Periphery Lords would have said hell yeah but all they want is independence. So Kerensky is still gonna attack and perhaps with less popular support.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 22 July 2020, 09:33:03
#636

In September 2786, the fleet of Operation Exodus reached the Kerensky Cluster, with scouts reporting dozens of worlds suitable for colonisation. (By sheer chance, the fleet had missed the less promising but nearer Pentagon worlds, a month earlier). With tensions high within the fleet after the long voyage, Commanding General Kerensky made a promise to those eager to land (though actual settlement would need weeks of work by engineer to provide even basic housing, much less the infrastructure needed for the millions aboard the fleet): as soon as reasonably possible, he would submit his leadership to a vote for affirmation or for election of a replacement leader.

Unsurprisingly, the vote would end up structured after the General's native Terran Hegemony. Each new colony (per enclave rather than planet, since several worlds had multiple sites settled), would elect one member to a governing council and this council would then vote on the General's record. Equally unsurprisingly, a significant majority of those elected had stood on the platform of supporting Kerensky. On the first anniversary of Aleksandr Kerensky's announcement that the Exodus had reached its destination, the Council formally named him Director-General of the Star League-in-Exile and offered him the choice of remaining as Commanding General or retiring into a purely political leadership role - an offer they phrased very delicately given the Star League Council's behaviour in 2780. Having offered to retire in 2752 and eager to spend time with his family and hopefully assuage the differences between his sons, Aleksandr Kerensky formally resigned his commission and appointed Aaron DeChavilier as the new Commanding General.

While Kerensky oversaw the dispersal of millions of colonists, DeChavilier took up the task of decommissioning much of the military might of the SLDF, realising that most of it had no legitimate use with no likely outside threat. He presented the soldiers with a choice between full retirement, reserve status in units that would be little more than cadres with enough training to retain some of their skills, or continuation on regular status... with the understanding that 90% of the regular soldiers would be put to work alongside engineers building up infrastructure, with only a relatively small training and administration system left to ensure a small flow of new recruits. His intention was to allow the SLDF to shrink naturally to a feasible size that could be supported.

Neither DeChavilier nor Kerensky lived to see the full transition of the SLDF to colonists, Kerensky died of a heart attack in 2802, while his old friend had already retired six months earlier. On the death of Aleksandr Kerensky, a new election was called and it was expected that his charismatic son Nicholas would be elected as the next Director-General. However, revelations at the last minute that his wife Jennifer 'Winson' was in fact a surviving member of House Amaris, spared execution, led to a sudden swing of votes to General Ethan Moreau. The furious Nicholas attempted to rally support for a coup using military forces on Strana Mechty, only for Moreau to successfully rally the SLDF forces across the other colonies to uphold the legal vote. The execution of Nicholas and his wife would have been politically untenable, but after his capture and court martial, the elder Kerensky brother was stripped of rank. Within twelve months he and Jennifer escaped house arrest and joined dissident bandits on the frontier of the cluster. Reported dead three times after clashes with SLDF units, Nicholas Kerensky's body was never recovered and it remains unclear when exactly he died.

The League-In-Exile waxed and waned in prosperity over the centuries. The slow population growth and focus of their limited scientific resources on keeping the colonies viable, while the SLDF frequently found itself forced to intervene between rival enclaves to keep the peace. Through the 30th century, the prospect of restoring the many derelict jumpships and restoring contact with the rest of humanity was raised several times.

The matter was finally brought to the boil in 3005 when Nadia Winson, descended of Jerome Winson, was elected Director-General on a platform of re-establishing the Star League. This was initially envisaged simply as a matter of contacting various scattered colonies near the Kerensky Cluster such as the Tanite worlds, which had had long been a trading partner, and inviting them to join. Such an invitation would be backed by force if necessary, but it was hoped that this wouldn't be required. Ideally, an expanded Star League could bring in worlds within a few hundred light years before consolidating and preparing for an eventual return to the Inner Sphere in the distant future - after all, the Inner Sphere's five individual militaries dwarfed the SLDF in scale.

Oddly enough, the various colonies were not eager to join the League and rapid recruitment was needed to project the forces. Keeping this going required the political support of the Council and Winson found herself essentially sanctioning the formation of satrap enclaves under the command of military leaders who had conquered the colonies for her. She'd inadvertently mounted a tiger... and could not dismount.

By the 3020s, the Star League controlled over two hundred worlds, across a sizeable arc of space coreward of the Inner Sphere... and Star League Intelligence reported that Jarnfolk traders had taken news of their presence at least as far as the near periphery. It was only a matter of time before the Successor Lords put this together. The election of 3027, following Winson's retirement, raised the question of whether to press on now or to wait, bring military production up to speed - since the remaining SLDF stockpiles were basically depleted - or attempt diplomacy. With the council dominated by successful warlords, the outcome was all but pre-determined.

Jaime Vickers was elected Director-General with a mandate for a new Reunification War, and his first choice was to appoint his brother Joshua as Commanding General to make it happen. A hundred SLDF brigades would invade the Inner Sphere... and importantly, keep his potential military rivals well away from the Kerensky Cluster as he tried to master the tiger that had consumed his predecessors reign...

The year is 3030 and Hanse Davion is on Tharkad, meeting his son Victor for the first time, when LIC brings Archon Katrina Steiner some rather disturbing reports from the far periphery...
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Post by: SulliMike23 on 24 July 2020, 12:44:32
No Clans...the question is, when the defending IS forces learn who they’re fighting what will they do? Will they accept the idea of rebuilding the Star League or will they defend their sovereignty?
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Post by: jonen c on 24 July 2020, 13:45:03
No Clans...the question is, when the defending IS forces learn who they’re fighting what will they do? Will they accept the idea of rebuilding the Star League or will they defend their sovereignty?

Well, let's posit the League in Exile, which has been doing this for a while, still operates as per SOP and goes in Gunboats first. The Houses will defend themselves.

By the time they realize who they're up against, it may be too late to back down into diplomacy without surrendering (even conditionally) and that would be political suicide unless they can get a very good deal, which would probably only be achievable if you can prove to the league it's preferable to fighting.

And by the time that's proven and the diplomacy is worked out... Well, the Houses should also know how the SLIE occupation/military government of conquered areas look, and if they don't like it... Well, pushing the idea that the SLIE is not the De Jure successor of the SL with force is going to be fairly uncontroversial.
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Post by: SCC on 19 August 2020, 00:41:40
Snippet #337

Candace put down the latest report of her sister’s insanity and knew that she needed an explanation for what she had just read. Reaching over to her intercom she pressed a button. “Justin, dear, can you come to my office, there’s a report that I’d like some more information on.”

And like her husband was in her office. Not a good sign, it suggested that he knew about what she had just read and knew that she would be upset, shoving the report, which was a newspaper article in his face, she uttered only a single word: “Explain.”

“I’m guessing saying that your crazy sister is being crazy isn’t going to cut it.” Was his snarky reply.

“No it isn’t.” She shoot back.

“Okay then, it’s a bit of a long story, but here goes. You might have noticed all those reports about Federated Suns missiles being unusually accurate during the war?” She nodded her head in reply. “Well it begins on Halstead Station back in 3012, remember the raid?” Another nod, accompanied by an expression that suggested she wasn’t impressed with how he was stringing her along. “Well we recovered a lot of civilian level information on LosTech during the raid, not detailed enough for duplication, but useful in that it allowed for the focusing of research because we knew what could be done. One of the items described was a Narc Missile Beacon, a specialised missile fired from a specialised launcher that instead of exploding when it hit grappled it’s target and then functioned as a homing beacon for modified LRM’s and SRM’s. Despite the detailed technical drawings of the grappling mechanism we where unable to duplicate it beyond a physical level, but reproducing the homing beacon and modified missiles, those are possible, or at least reasonable facsimiles thereof, which just leaves the problem of somehow getting the homing beacons onto enemy ‘Mechs, while having infantry implant them during leg attacks was suggested and used, chance led to another option appearing.”

After all of that he had to pause to take a breath, giving his wife an opening. “Interesting, but it doesn’t explain why my sister has ordered the destruction of all vibrators and other sex toys in the Capellan Confederation destroyed as ‘Objects of foul Davion subversion’.”

“I was getting to that, OK? Well the next bit shows why it’s a bad idea to identify the Successor Stats as Great Houses, because part of the reason House Davion still rules the Federated Suns is House Davion’s immense wealth, which grants them a great deal of soft power, you’d be rather surprised at the scope of their investments.” A scowl told him to get on with the story. “One of these happens to be a sex toy manufacturing company located in the Magistracy of Canopus called Happy Time.”

“I can see where this goes, Hanse had the homing beacons installed in the Happy Times Extreme vibrator and arranged for the heavy marketing push it received, my sister has recently found out about it.”

“Pretty much. Happy Times, has until recently, been a manufacturing only outfit, producing other peoples designs but the CEO noticed that there was a gap in the market between what they where producing for other people and what could actually be produced, at sent a request up the line for funding for more advanced tooling and design work, which is how Hanse found out that he even owned the company but the moment he saw the request for funds he saw the possibilities.”

“I can’t imagine that the Magestrix was very pleased with this plot, what with it likely getting the Magistracy involved in Hanse’s little war, and I have trouble believing that Hanse would write off such a large investment.”

“The Magestrix found the entire idea hilarious. As for the security aspects, she’s more worried about the League attacking then the Confederation, and this actually protects against that, as now no one can be sure that any given factory on Canopus itself at least isn’t actually owned in whole or part by Hanse Davion, which means that attacking it would mean starting something with the FedCom. The fact that the Magistracy gets a cut of all beacons produced, all non-sex toy likely helps.

“As for writing off Happy Times, not really, someone pulling something like this is a possibility with any electronic product, and they can be disabled by simpley taking the battery out.”



So the above grew out me me thinking about what would actually be contained in the university library on Halstead Station, which is not actually that much, a university library would have more technical documentation then a high school or public library, but not very much more (Think about how much on building something like a JSF or even an Abrams tank in a university library) and the most informative would probably be from something like Jane's. This idea also says that as Halstead Station was a mining world, it's university mainly focused on mining; agriculture, specifically hydroponics; and metallurgy. Of course this idea also had them getting all other sources of information stored in the university, like say research data on advanced Endo-Steel.
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Post by: VhenRa on 19 August 2020, 03:08:47
I was honestly thinking someone just reprogrammed/modified the built in electronics packages of mechs produced in the Confederation to emit a NARC signal.
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Post by: SCC on 19 August 2020, 04:56:00
Nope, reprogramming them would be tricky, as you don't want it spotted immediately, also much harder to do, so you need to hide actual beacons on the 'Mechs somewhere, this method not only makes it easier to get them into the CC, but also gets the odd extra beacon into units.
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Post by: georgiaboy on 19 August 2020, 05:07:51
Here is a planning stage for a Book that got a author put on the 'Intelligence Agencies' watchlist and aBest seller.


Research at a University on High Pressure Nuclear Reactors, then on liquid metal cooled reactors, their operation cycle, then write in a book generally, the operation cycle of a Russian Victor class submarine.


there you have it, the information you can get at a University Level library and a New author Best Seller, even to this day.


The Author: Tom Clancy
The Book:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 19 August 2020, 09:08:23
#638

Nagelring, Tharkad
Rasalhague District, Draconis Combine
19 October 3002

There was something out of place, but Morgan Kell couldn't quite put his finger on it as he offered his morning prayers to the Dragon (and in the privacy of his own head, to the god of his ancestors). Ahead of him was a busy day of hazing by fellow cadets, indoctrination by the instructors and if he was very lucky the chance to learn something of military value. If he was very unlucky, the ISF would have turned up something to justify their suspicious that he was a member of Heimdall. So it was a Tuesday...

He couldn't quite pin down what it was that seemed wrong to him as he prepared for morning Kendo training...


In the 31st Century, the Dragon banner flies across more than half the Inner Sphere. First Lord Hohiro Kurita reigns as Coordinator of the Draconis Combine, Prince of Rasalhague, First Prince of the Federated Suns, Unifier of Worlds and Duke of Luthien. The momentum of placing a descendant of Vincent Kurita on the throne of New Avalon in the First Succession War and crushing House Steiner in the Second Succession War has faded in the fires of the Kurita Civil War of the 2860s. The Third Succession War, fought against bandit kingdoms along the periphery border and the treacherous House Liao-Marik (whose Free Worlds Confederation continue not to recognise the plain fact that House Kurita controls three votes in the Star League Council) grinds on, decade after decade.

And yet, two men remember another history. A timeline that did not happen, one based on implausible turns of history against House Kurita. A history that extends decades past the current date. A history that may exist only in their dreams.

Yorinaga Kurita, a Tai-sa of the Sword of Light and cousin of the Dragon himself, is an honoured war leader of the DCMS, who has been granted for his many victories, the right to form an elite command of mechwarriors to mould into his own image. They will be the Dragon's Claws, committed to the most dangerous battles, to turn the tide of the war at last. And at the core of this perfect samurai is a soul that has begun to doubt his path.

Morgan Kell, a humble cadet, is a secret rebel trading on his family's mechwarrior heritage to seek a place in the Lyran Regulars or some other middling position from which he can provide information to the resistance against House Kurita's worst excesses. He is hardly the only man to dream of a free Lyran Commonwealth, but his dreams speak also of a deadly series of duels against a man he has never crossed paths with...

Until samurai and rebel meet face to face and one must ask of the other: "Do you remember Mallory's World...?"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 19 August 2020, 17:25:33
Here is a planning stage for a Book that got a author put on the 'Intelligence Agencies' watchlist and aBest seller.


Research at a University on High Pressure Nuclear Reactors, then on liquid metal cooled reactors, their operation cycle, then write in a book generally, the operation cycle of a Russian Victor class submarine.


there you have it, the information you can get at a University Level library and a New author Best Seller, even to this day.


The Author: Tom Clancy
The Book:
Hunt for Red October

Tom Clancy showed what we in the west could gain from Open Source Intel...  But then again it was I believe in 1 of Cannonshop stories, we were tlking about how things used to not be so "secure" and info was published.. now not so much

link to that thread (https://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=68259.msg1591890#msg1591890)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 22 August 2020, 00:57:48
#639

"Tell me what we're looking at," Hanse Davion requested solemnly. He'd read the summaries but something might have been misunderstood, and Ardan hadn't been briefed yet. He wanted the younger man - the nearest thing he had left to a brother - to give his own opinion.

Dr. Banzai activated the holodisplay and what both mechwarriors recognised as a molecular structure began to rotate in the air above the scientist's desk. "We call it the idiot ball." He could be playful at times but right now that side of him was not in evidence. "We can't replicate it, we can't cure it, but we're better than ninety percent sure we know where it came from and what it does."

Ardan blinked. "And...?"

"It's been found in sample populations from one end of the Federated Suns to the other. The Lyran Commonwealth has been checking, and while they're not as far as we are, they're picking it up too. Very limited checks in other realms come up with the same results." Banzai shrugged. "I understand MIIO is under limitations, but at this point if anyone in the Inner Sphere or near Periphery doesn't have this then they're a statistical outlier. We're trying to identify the transmission mechanism but it must be infectious on some level."

"You don't believe that all humans have it? That it's just something that we've evolved?"

"No, Colonel. This was engineered. Even the Star League chose not to explore this level of genetic engineering but there are enough characteristics that we can be sure that this is not something that nature threw up."

"If I understand your report correctly -" Anger and impatience spurred Hanse to push the conversation onwards, "This impairs mental creativity."

"Very slightly, yes." Banzai toyed with a stylus. "For day to day life, it probably doesn't affect us at all. But when we're really thinking, focusing on... out of the box thinking? That part of our brains just doesn't work the way an unaffected human's would. It pushes us towards old and familiar solutions instead."

The people in the office were, in their ways, three of the most innovative and brilliant men in the Federated Suns. If anyone had been actively impaired by this then... they would have been.

"And yes." The stylus snapped in Banzai's hand. "All three of us test positive."

"How much of an affect does it have?"

The scientist shrugged. "How do you put a hard number on it? Let's say that since this spread the number of 'one in a generation' geniuses has been recognisably lower. Statistical analysis helped us narrow down an origin."

"The Combine?"

"No, Colonel. It's well beyond them."

Sortek shook his head slowly. "Who? Is this Star League technology? You said that they didn't really explore this field."

"It's possible that that was an active decision to help them cover this up." Banzai looked at the malignant molecule displayed above his desk. "It's pre-Star League. Pre-Terran Hegemony. It's been spreading since the early twenty-third century."

Meaning pre-Federated Suns. Only a handful of existing states back that far. "Who did this?"

Hanse gave his old friend a basilisk stare. "I theorise," he said flatly, "That when the Terran Alliance granted independence to their colonies and withdrew to their... Demarcation line. When they withdrew they left this behind, thinking it would spread and leave the colonies... neutralised. No threat to them."

"It's possible, but Terra is fairly definitely infected." Banzai shrugged. "It's possible they miscalculated on some level. Or just forgot, hard as it is to imagine. Governments changed so quickly then that it's possible those aware of the Idiot Ball died or were sidelined and didn't dare tell their political rivals what had been done."

Sortek looked at Dr. Banzai, subconsciously turning his head so he couldn't quite see the holo-display. "You said you can't cure it? Could we... vaccinate?"

"I hope so." The scientist looked frustrated... and angry. "We're working on it, but this field has been neglected for centuries. And what it'll take to break this is exactly the sort of creativity that it is meant to stiffle."

"Eight hundred years." Hanse's voice was ugly. "Eight centuries that we've been... lobotomised. And we didn't even know."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ttw1 on 22 August 2020, 01:30:14
#639

"Tell me what we're looking at," Hanse Davion requested solemnly. He'd read the summaries but something might have been misunderstood, and Ardan hadn't been briefed yet. He wanted the younger man - the nearest thing he had left to a brother - to give his own opinion.


"Eight hundred years." Hanse's voice was ugly. "Eight centuries that we've been... lobotomised. And we didn't even know."
Oh god, it explains so much.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: David CGB on 22 August 2020, 02:11:40
Oh god, it explains so much.
yes it does, so much information is now explained
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 22 August 2020, 05:56:34
so cool, Drakensis.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: georgiaboy on 22 August 2020, 07:50:41
With how [size=78%]nikky turned out and the Social Theory he came up with. Moscow must have been ground zero forthe first application and still had a higher concentration .[/size]
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: alkemita on 22 August 2020, 09:36:12
#639
"I hope so." The scientist looked frustrated... and angry. "We're working on it, but this field has been neglected for centuries. And what it'll take to break this is exactly the sort of creativity that it is meant to stiffle."

"Eight hundred years." Hanse's voice was ugly. "Eight centuries that we've been... lobotomised. And we didn't even know."

 :clap: Bloody Hell, Drak - your Tribbles are better than some full length stories! So many possibilities once they vaccinate...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: EAGLE 7 on 22 August 2020, 11:02:27
The real question is who has a genetic mod that prevents the disease from affecting their population?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: nocarename on 22 August 2020, 11:59:56
The real question is who has a genetic mod that prevents the disease from affecting their population?
Well if you've ever wanted to do a story where the deep dark villains are the Magistry, we do know that Canopians have had the best life sciences tech of the larger powers for a long, long time...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SCC on 23 August 2020, 02:44:17
It explains a lot, but it doesn't explain FASAnomics, most planets in the IS seem to have the population of an American mid-western town, probably mining.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: EAGLE 7 on 23 August 2020, 03:13:35
Interring twist , the only people with an immunity are the Taurans, they spiked the punch before they left the IS......
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 23 August 2020, 04:22:10
Interring twist , the only people with an immunity are the Taurans, they spiked the punch before they left the IS......
Only to get infected anyway when the Reunification War erupted.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Tegyrius on 23 August 2020, 07:18:12
I’m kind of surprised no one has pointed to the faction that (according to rumor) has the technical capability, would be motivated to enforce “leave us the hell alone” with something like this, would not be itself crippled by a general  of its trade partners and support structure because it is self-supporting, and considers itself sufficiently separate from the rest of humanity to not have ethical issues with war-crime-scale hereditary lobotomies.

This came out of a Belter lab. If you’re trying to outrun the rest of humanity, hamstringing the dirtyfeet gives you a pretty clear competitive advantage...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 28 August 2020, 16:07:10
#640

During the second week of August 3029, the AFFS was facing a ComStar interdiction as they carried out the sixth wave of Operation Rat. Rather than try to coordinate operations over many worlds of the Sarna Commonality, many of which were already eager to surrender with only token forces, the local command force simply accepted such surrenders as they were offered - usually on quite generous terms for the planetary governments, and focused on a key target.

Capella, the birthplace of the Capellan Confederation found itself under attack by the Davion Heavy Guards, the Davion Light Guards, 5th, 6th & 7th Crucis Lancers and two regiments of the Twelfth Vegan Rangers hit the defenders with overwhelming force - the reports of the attack swaying more of the already collapsing Sarna Commonality to invite the AFFS in, heedless of Maskirova terror attacks on leaders making such offers. (In fact, many Maskirova agents were targeted pre-emptively by Dukes and Lamas before making contact with Davion representatives).

Chancellor Maximilian Liao was in no position to respond. Reports from Kathil suggested that he had one slim hope left: sway the captured Morgan Hasek-Davion to his cause and turn the Capellan March against House Davion, buying time for more 'Mechs to be re-equipped with the new Triple-Strength Myomers.

On 24 October, Morgan Hasek-Davion arrived on Sian on a Tau Ceti Rangers dropship... surrounded by the Kathil Uhlans. Within minutes House Imarra's triple-strength myomers proved a terrible achilles heel. As the Chancellor's court was briefly overrun, it must have seemed that everything was over for the Confederation.

It was.

As Morgan and the personnel he'd come to rescue escaped rallying forces from the Sian Home Guard, jumpships delivered the 20th Avalon Hussars and the remaining half of the Twelfth Vegan Rangers. With the most elite defenders of Sian eliminated, the Federated Suns' foothold on the Capellan Capital could only have been shaken if reinforcements arrived before further waves of invade - and while the AFFS was grossly overstretched, to the Capellans they were simply a juggernaut that had crashed down upon them and done in little more than a year what two centuries of the Succession Wars had failed to accomplish.

While Romano Liao proclaimed herself Chancellor and would fight on for years, she had little choice but to flee the palace leaving behind everything that was unnecessary to her struggle. This included her father and the sight of a raving mad Maximilian Liao having to be dragged by his children Candace and Tormano into genuflecting before Hanse Davion was, if not the final blow to an independent Capellan Confederation, it was certainly the most decisive.

Self-governing districts of the Federated Commonwealth would remain under effectively Capellan government for decades, but for the first time since 2786, one of the major states of the Inner Sphere... had ceased to exist.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Ttw1 on 28 August 2020, 16:50:52
#640

During the second week of August 3029, the AFFS was facing a ComStar interdiction as they carried out the sixth wave of Operation Rat. Rather than try to coordinate operations over many worlds of the Sarna Commonality, many of which were already eager to surrender with only token forces, the local command force simply accepted such surrenders as they were offered - usually on quite generous terms for the planetary governments, and focused on a key target.


Self-governing districts of the Federated Commonwealth would remain under effectively Capellan government for decades, but for the first time since 2786, one of the major states of the Inner Sphere... had ceased to exist.

Holy shit.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: georgiaboy on 28 August 2020, 17:05:50
The Scene that came to mind with you description of the surrenders Drake, was of the Iraqi troopers come up out of the sand that had collapsed on bunkers on the supposed front line. And seeing this strange trooper in front of them with some, to them, a Futuristic cannon setting on his shoulder. The war was finally over for them, They moved forward and surrendered to this obvious American Trooper.


Standing back from the immediate scene. The News camera man ask his sound guy


"What do I do now?"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 29 August 2020, 06:34:40
Interesting and plausible drak, how do you see this three House Federated Commonwealth setting up? Candace proclaimed Chancellor? Tormano in some role? What happens with Ridzik? I assume Romano and her underground Thugees remain to cause trouble.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 29 August 2020, 07:33:34
House Steiner-Davion is the royal house. House Liao is a vassal house, controlling the St Ives Compact which is basically a March by another name, albeit one that is being given a generous amount of time to normalise its laws to within the boundaries allowed by the FedCom and transfer control of the associated regiments to the AFFS. Candace is Duchess of St Ives, a theoretical peer to Aaron Sandoval, Morgan Hasek-Davion or Selvin Kelswa.

Tormano was, in consideration of good behaviour and several years work on Morgan Hasek-Davion's staff, eventually granted the Ducal title for the planet of Liao and a portion of what remained of the Liao family fortune. This included a direct pledge of allegiance to Duchess Melissa Steiner-Davion of Sarna and to the Federated Commonwealth. He's also under MIIO and LIC surveillance for life plus as long as it takes to be sure he's really dead - and he knows it.

Pavel Ridzik was assassinated per canon and one of his cousins took over as President. Said cousin is busy trying to make sure the eventual normalization of the Tikonov Free Republic impacts his political power and personal wealth as little as possible. In the process he's alienating much of the rest of the TFR to the point that joining the Sarna March is beginning to look good to some of them.

Romano, her underground Thuggees, what remains of the Maskirova and a new Death Commando group scraped together of the surviving Warrior Houses are behind or assumed could be behind basically every act of rebellion against the Federated Commonwealth for the next thirty years. Including the ones that are blatantly pathetic, because no serious resistance movement enjoys being mocked.

Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: EAGLE 7 on 01 September 2020, 13:45:02
Had a thought after reading Welcome to the Jungle over on spacebattles.

    This discussions made me think about one of the Cameron’s had visions of the TH being destroyed, or some such, which led to the drones and space defense systems.

Would it not make sense to have fall back plans, and colony / rebuild packages ready to bring your civilization back from the brink?

 The SL DOME teams create time capsules in asteroids in various TH systems.
The time capsules are filled with data cores, forges, and machinery To jump start tech recovery.

Each time capsule is overseen by an AI that is capable of monitoring the system it is in.
Waiting for the signal to announce the time capsule is their and ready to relaunch 28th century Tech and revive the TH.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 01 September 2020, 15:24:51
Had a thought after reading Welcome to the Jungle over on spacebattles.

    This discussions made me think about one of the Cameron’s had visions of the TH being destroyed, or some such, which led to the drones and space defense systems.

Would it not make sense to have fall back plans, and colony / rebuild packages ready to bring your civilization back from the brink?

 The SL DOME teams create time capsules in asteroids in various TH systems.
The time capsules are filled with data cores, forges, and machinery To jump start tech recovery.

Each time capsule is overseen by an AI that is capable of monitoring the system it is in.
Waiting for the signal to announce the time capsule is their and ready to relaunch 28th century Tech and revive the TH.

I operate under the assumption that that's what the M-11 Da Vincis and Project Pygmalion were for.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SCC on 02 September 2020, 21:55:50
Pretty sure that also why the data cores we've already seen did/where intended to do.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Hotpoint on 03 September 2020, 09:47:11
#642

A Song of I.C.E. and Flamers

It was obvious almost immediately that the Starlord Class jumpship Geronimo (https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Geronimo_(Individual_Star_Lord-class_JumpShip)) had not arrived at its intended destination and that her K-F drive was cooked by an apparent misjump. What was certainly not obvious was where exactly the vessel had ended up. There were no radio signals to be detected and attempts to determine their location by matching the constellations to known stars yielded no results.

There did at least seem to be an inhabitable planet in the system they had arrived at, and inspection from orbit indicated that it was inhabited. Unfortunately however the civilisation below must have been a failed colony cut off from the rest of humanity for some time because it had apparently regressed to the point where the steam-engine was lostech.

Not only was the planet at only a late medieval stage of technological development the economies of most of the city-states of the largest continent were underpinned by slavery, while the smaller continent to its west had just decided to reenact the Succession Wars with pikes and swords.

So at least there was plenty of mercenary work available for Colonel Wylie and his Coyotes (https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Blanc%27s_Coyotes) while they tried to drag the primitives back into the industrial era.

For their part the various local factions didn't know if the mechanical giants and dragons were scarier than the Coyote's odd personal behaviors such as occasionally disappearing into the wilds and howling at the moon, or bellowing "Meep Meep" as they dashed into battle (also for some reason the mention in passing of something called "DNA Testing" absolutely horrified Cersei Lannister).

The new manufactories established by the Coyote's "ACME Corporation" and their super-genius technicians and engineers nearly put the city-state of Myr into bankruptcy but Braavos welcomed the new trading and investment opportunities. Biodiesel powered engines for their ships were of particular interest.

Despite the rapid deployment of Wildfire-based Inferno-Rounds the development of Valerian-Endo-Steel continues to be problematic.  ;)


Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 05 September 2020, 21:37:58
unfortantly the story will take forever to be completed
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Sir Chaos on 07 September 2020, 11:34:30
unfortantly the story will take forever to be completed

Except for the TV adaption, which we´ll wish was never completed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 16 September 2020, 00:49:45
643

The distinction between Inner Sphere and Periphery is a historic one, rooted in the Terran-centric view of geopolitics. The terminology is antiquated, reserved only for those who cling to that view despite the lack of a Terra.

The modern term is the Torus. A ring of habitable worlds, caught between two graveyards.

No one, in 2764, quite realised just how devastating the SLDF could be. Nor how ruthless the Secret Armies of the Periphery or Amaris' own forces would be in fighting them. The Periphery Uprising left a belt of dead worlds more than a hundred jumps wide encircling the old Star League. Some survivors such as the inner Rim Worlds Republic, were absorbed by the Member States. Others clung together as a hardened core of what were once expansive Territorial States. Most of them died, quietly or screaming.

It is said in rumour and hearsay that there are human civilisations beyond the ruin of what was once our frontier. Shiploads of refugees sometimes escape in that direction. They rarely return, those that do despairing of barren systems, poisoned worlds, pirates clinging to bases that survive only by preying on the fringes of the Torus. The others... well, it's kind to think that they didn't die out there, looking for their New Jerusalems. Perhaps there is a better place out there.

It is said that Kerensky went there himself, a fleet of thousands of jumpships escorted by mutinying SLDF soldiers who swore to follow their General wherever he was bound. It's hard to say what happened to him after his dismissal. Perhaps the Great Houses have accurate records in their archives, but they do not choose to confront some facts.

Amaris and Kerensky, between them, savaged the core worlds of the Hegemony. But they were rich and well settled worlds. Most, it is believed, would have survived... perhaps even recovered one day. But they became the battlegrounds of the First Succession War, and... no one knows which Successor Lord first decided better a world burn than fall to their rivals. It is sure that not one of them had clean hands when that war was done.

And a desert of worlds extends up to four jumps from what was once our mother world. ComStar stations dot that desolation, relaying HPG signals. It is said that their initiation ceremonies take place in mausoleums that were once arcology cities housing billions. No wonder that they seem apart, detached from the civilisation that we know.

Other systems, when the waves of radio traffic from the last days of the Hegemony or the Periphery reach them, shut down their receivers. Close their ears and try to pretend... that we didn't do this to ourselves. Centuries have passed, but it will be a millennium before the Torus is free of those deathcries.

Perhaps that is why no civilisation has contacted us from beyond the deathly barrens that we burned around us.

They have heard those cries too.

And they condemn us to die between the graves we have dug.


- Thelos Auburn, "A View of History" 2991
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Artifex on 16 September 2020, 02:14:47
Oh boy,

there is an awesome premise here. I'd love to see a story spun out of this!  8)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 16 September 2020, 16:16:09
Oh boy,

there is an awesome premise here. I'd love to see a story spun out of this!  8)

Yep.  I suspect it'd largely be an exploration of the devastation left behind, but it'd be interesting to see how the Successor States fared, too.  I suspect a lot of them would have collapsed into a series of smaller states as well.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atlan on 25 September 2020, 18:22:26
Not exactly a tribble, but not big enough for its own thread.
An expanded version of something I posted on Spacebattles.


So there are periphery factions like the Taurians and the Canopians- the big states with identities that appear on maps.

Then you have the small states- like the Rim Collection, or the Lothian League, with some history, a moderate size, but generally small potatoes.

And then you have the likes of the Niops Assoiation, or the Mica Majority- basically so small you wonder why anyone bothered mentioning them at all. (Frankly, they probably exist as examples of 'tiny periphery planet' so that people can use them as an example to build an original tiny periphery planet for their adventure)

But since they went to the trouble of appearing on maps, lets see what we can do with them.

Mica Majority (cannon)
Three airless rocks, rich in minerals. Everyone lives in dome cities. Started off as a colony, became a prison labor camp. Either abandoned before the fall of the star league, or during the succession wars (depending on the sourcebook). Weirdly far away from the Combine.

Mica Majority (AU)
Originally settled in 2620, Mica was 'officially' a mining colony (which, admittedly, was a genuinely rich system, but there were plenty of those closer to home.) Major incentives were given to convince people to move there, and many people were simply rounded up and sent there by force. Over 50 million colonists settled there, with the Combine footing the bill to maintain the fiction that it was a colony.

In reality, it was a combination spy-post and forward staging area. Satellites were deployed near FedSuns space, and would be discretely checked by passing Combine 'trade ships'. Several regiments and warships were posted there to 'protect the colonists from pirates'.

The newly formed Star League forced the Combine to remove those troops, offering to guard it with the SLDF. As its value as a forward staging area disappeared, so did the colonial funding.

However, all that money that had been invested had transformed the planet into a productive mining colony, and the Draconis Combine was loath to miss out on that money, so they kept the mining going. Re-purposing the planet as a psudo-prison planet, malcontents and dissidents were shipped there as 'colonists' to work the mines.

While there were a handful of dome cities, the bulk of the population lived underground. Massive fusion-powered tunnel boring machines inched their way below the surface of the planet, melting a path through the rock, leaving stable tunnels behind them as they piped the rock and metal to ore processing facilities, before dumping the waste on the surface.
Some of these tunnels were excavated into large caverns, others would have smaller tunnels dug into the sides by followup diggers.
People would move into the hollowed out tunnels and caverns, living deep below the surface of the planet.

After the Combine transformed Mica into a prison planet, the mining productivity 'mysteriously' dropped off. Mining shafts collapsed with startling regularity, and hundreds of thousands of people were 'killed' as a result. By 2700 the colony had been running at a loss for so long that the Combine pulled out in disgust, and abandoned the colony, declaring it to be an independent nation.

Exactly as planned.

Mica had long become an incomprehensible labyrinth of tunnels and caverns, and the colonists had taken advantage of this long before the planet became a prison, secreting away hydroponic farms and small manufacturing facilities, granting the colonists more personal freedom than the Combine usually allowed.
After the planet became a prison, they stepped this up, causing fake tunnel collapses, exaggerating the casualty reports, and sabotaging the mining equipment in natural-looking ways, all designed to hide as much of the colony away as possible while convincing the Combine the planet wasn't worth their attention.

The plan worked.

In the aftermath, the Micans slowly used their stores of valuable metal to trade with the Inner Sphere, especially the Outworlds Alliance, buying the planet a handful of jumpships and dropships. Outposts were established on the other two suitable planets in the Mica system, and in a dozen systems within a jump from Mica. All of these were done in underground, just as on Mica, dug deep into the planet for safety, for secrecy, and to avoid having to pay for expensive terraforming technologies- they could just use the same tunnel digging equipment they built on Mica.

The population on Mica and its outposts was entirely urban. While there were several parks, everyone lived in the ever expanding underground arcology cities. Relying on local production for almost everything, they were decades behind the modern Star League tech.

The Succession Wars
When the Succession wars started, Mica was lucky in many respects.
For one thing, it was outside the Inner Sphere, where ships never came unless they were traveling specifically to Mica- a trip they almost never made.
For another, it wasn't part of any successor state, and wasn't a priority target.
Unlike most worlds, it had long been self-sufficiant, and was able to survive with its industry intact.
But most helpfull of all was the sheer depth of the city. With everyone living deep underground, the casual use of nukes and orbital bombardment that characterized the first and second succession war was mostly useless, only collapsing a couple of exits to the surface, and destroying the dome cities which had long been converted into parks.

By the time the third succession war had rolled around, Mica was a largely ignored mini-state, of three planets in the main system, and 7 more minor planets within a 15 light year radius, all cold airless rocks with the population living in underground cities. It sold refined metals and primitve, well built equipment to the FedSuns outback and the Outworlds alliance, buying the occasional battlemech or aerospace fighter, and spending the rest of their money on luxury goods- meat was too land-intensive to farm in the underground cities, so beef and other meat proudcts were prime imports.

However, Mica had long kept secrets from outsiders, and this had not changed. The sheer amount of mining created a never ending need for powered exoskeletons long before the Star League fell, used for mining or just to lift heavy objects. And even before the Star League fell, the Micans had realized that this made carrying a weapon, or extra armor, easier.

By the middle of the 3rd succession war, Mica was a massive user of battle armor. In fact, they predated the Clan Elemental by decades. The Mica infantry, the police, the marines on Jumpships, security guards, all used various models of battle armor. In fact, gladiator combat done with battle armor was a huge source of entertainment.

Due to the sheer cheapness and ease of manufacture of Battle Armor compared to a Battlemech, and the high level of technology and industra in the Mica Majority, there are many, many different kinds of Battle Armor of all weight classes. Police have their own designs, the military has several designs, different intelegence agencies have their own designs, and frequently counter-terrorisim departments own and operate their own limited-run dedicated design. Many, many gangs even have their own designs, where they buy a series of unique Battle Armor from a shady corporation who don't really care who buys it, as long as they pay for it. There are even botuique Battle Armor creators, who will heavilly modify existing Battle Armor designs in their workshops into an essentially brand new design.



(If the Draconis Combine is Space!Feudal!Japan, then this Mica Majority is Space!Modern!Tokyo. Several cities, excellent infrastructure, a high standard of living, but all the social pressures that such intense urbanization creates too. Trash is a huge problem, especially in the poor areas. While you never have to worry about pirate raids or corporate feuds done with battlemechs, there is a lot of infantry action. Special forces in battle armor, Yakuza in battle armor, corporate espionage in battle armor- the seedy underbelly of Mica is like something out of a cyberpunk game.)

(this is a setting where most of the Mica Majority is a nice place- the average person lives a life that looks like a glossy anime- well looked after buildings, excelent public transportation, no worries about the succession war. The lower class places, on the other hand, look like something out of a video game- gang dominated, dark, filled with nooks and crannies, hidden passages dug in secret or just hidden and forgotten.)

<Tech levels: Mica was never super advanced- it was well industralized and self sufficient for a periphery world, at the height of the Star League, but the periphery was never the most advanced place even then. While they have kept all their technology during the succession wars, virtually all their advancement has been in civilian fields- better hydroponics, better civilian electronics, that sort of thing. Almost all of their military technology was Battle Armor related- a 2950 Mica Battle Armor would be compeditive in the Jihad or the Dark Age. But no XL fusion engines, ERPPCs, DHS, or even ER lasers. The only advanced tech they refit onto their battlemechs is ECM.>

<Military: No conventional vehicals (not much use for them inside the cities, not much good in the airless surface of their planets. A battalion of mechs, spread over the entire Majority. A handfull of aerospace fighters. Lots of turrets around the entrances to their cave cities, and a lot of Battle Armor inside.>

Story Hooks:
An average Mica Majority gang (from a city of 1 million people) (and one of many similar sized gangs in that city) pack more battle armor suits than a dedicated Elemental trinary. Gang wars, while they stay out of the middle class parts of town, get very bloody.
Vigilanty groups with Battle Armor are common.
So are mercenaries, opperating for- or against- the gangs. Or peforming corporate sabatauge. Or protection. Or theft.
The police tend to let the gangs kill each other, but when they start to expand their territory, they fight back like they are fighting a war.

Pirate raids are rare, but they do happen, and usually involve either Mech vs Mech on the surface, but if the pirates punch through into the underground cavern it becomes urban Mech vs Battle Armor. It is often followed up by platoons of Battle Armor siezing the pirate ships.


Mica isn't cut off from the Inner Sphere- they still trade, both refined metals and manufactured electronics. And that means there are people who enter the Mica Majority and see the Battle Armor. Its just by the time that information reaches anyone important, the information is garbled enough to ignore.
'Come on, whats the use in battery powered infantry? So they used an exoskeleton to lift a heavyer-than-normal gun, that doesn't make things actually useful.'
'These pirates say their mechs were ripped apart by men in armor who flew and had mighty claws- goddam pirates are always high out of their minds'
'These Mica guys always have their ships guarded by marines in armored spacesuits'.

Never quite getting the point of how dangerous their armor can be on a battlefield.


However, this changes around the time of the Clan Invasion. As the Inner Sphere scrambles to fight the Clans, they discover there are records of something like the Clan Elemental armor- the armored suits from Mica.
Suddenly, everyone realizes the value of Battle Armor, and the Mica Majority is the only game in town. Various factions want to buy schematics, others want to buy suits, others want to hire consultants so they can improve their own projects.
And of course, the FedCom, the Combine, and FRR want Battle Armor to counter the clan Elementals NOW and are willing to hire mercenaries. Pleanty of PMCs willing to get a slice of that action- and more than a few gangs.

And maybe some factions (the Combine, especially, but perhaps the Cappellans or FedCom) think that the easiest way to get all those Battle Armor factories is just conquering the Mica Majority. Which leads to quick victory on the surface- and a long, grueling war on the inside, as Battlemechs are not optimized to move, let alone fight, in an underground arcology, while the Mica factions tear into them with Battle Armor.

And perhaps in later years the Mica Majority sells its expertise to offworlders, happily selling Battle Armor to anyone who can pay, just as they have always done- which is where the Word of Blake got the Demon Series of Battle Armor. And eventually that kicks them in the ass- either needing to fight against WOB in their cities, or having to defend against Comstar or Devlin Stone's forces who have come on their war against the WOB.




Origional Mica technology: Super-heavy Battle Armor.
Battle Armor, as produced by the Clans and the Inner Sphere, would fall into one of 5 weight classes.
Exoskeleton: 80-400kg
Light: 401- 750kg
Medium: 751-1000kg(1ton)
Heavy: 1001-1500kg
Assualt: 1501-2000kg(2ton)

The Mica Majority, lacking need for (or room for) battlemechs or conventional vehicles, created a new class of Battle Armor- the Super Heavy. Beginning at 2.5 tons, and up to 5 tons in weight, these battle armors were powered by dedicated fusion reactors, instead of battery packs. They used many of the same technologies used in Battlemechs.

Super Heavy battlearmors are created using Protomech rules. They can be 2.5 - 5 tons in weight, in increments of 0.5 tons. They can mount not more than 3 weapons- one in each hand (battle armor weapons only) and one in the Main Gun (Battle Armor or mech weapon). (Quad Super Heavy Battle Armor can mount 2 weapons in the Main Gun of Battle Armor or Mech classification, and no weapons in the hands)

(And none of this 'curl up into a ball and control it with the cybernetic implants that drive you insane and kill you' bullshit either. I get that the Devs want to push Protomechs out of the way, but if you can find room in a 2ton batle armor for an actual cockpit, you can do the same with a 5ton protomech.)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 26 September 2020, 05:28:02
I love it. Where the Clans' competitive advantage has been reduced to a cottage industry.

TBF it's doubtful even the Micans know how fearsome the battle armor was on the 'modern' battlefields of the Succession Wars. It's not like they often have to fight in that environment. Urban warfare, yes, but not the open field warfare where the Elementals made their mark.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Typhonis on 28 September 2020, 05:52:57
  PROJECT MASADA

From 2650 to 2750 House Cameron spent 150 Trillion dollars on a project code-named MASADA. What little is known is that the THDF was directed to explore the Perifery for a world that could be settled. A fall back position in case House Cameron was overun. Started in secret, for the next one hundred years, House Cameron would spend 1 trillion dollars a year on it, using various front companies to hide what it was doing. By the time it was fully fnctional , in 2700 . We can only guess what they had squirreld away.

 What is known is a sitting Cameron was to be present. Which my explain the dissapearance of William Cameron. They also had extensive DNA banks of all members of House Cameron.  For the planet itself. Self suffiinecy was a must. Also a large population of Star League or ex Star League personel.  Afterall 40 acres and a mule are a time honored retirement package.   

 Shipyards, factories, defense complexes, a complete SDS. Not to mention a complete Star League data core and the latest information on research and development. MASADA was intended to be a Brian castle on a planetary scale. It is estimated they could build, anew, a SLDF division every year from local resources alone. 

 Would Keensky know about this bolt hole for House Cameron? Maybe. Then again during the coup all information on it could have been scuttled. By accident and design as loyalists decided they had to hide it. Thus by the time of the Exodus there is no hint it is out there and a last transmission may have had them shut down their HPG system.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: eriktheviking on 29 September 2020, 11:38:39
A cracking good idea, much more detailed than my old one. Could it be the Clans tried picking a fight with them and decided the Inner Sphere was a good consolation prize.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 10 October 2020, 22:11:30
644

As the Clan Invasion was halted in 3052, another invasion occurred. This time, from the other side of the Inner Sphere. At first, the invaders were believed to have been the Clans circumventing the Inner Sphere to launch another invasion; but when the reports of the invaders came back, it brought more confusion than answers. The Battlemechs these invaders used were too slow and easy to destroy; their soldiers wore white armor and had very poor aim; the only advantage these invaders had was in space. Their warships and fighters had what could be described as powerful pulse lasers. But what these invaders lacked in the method of warfare the Capellans, AFFS, Taurians, Canopians, Free Worlders, and Aurigans had, they made up in sheer numbers and their lack of hesitation to use orbital bombardments on military AND civilian targets. These invaders identified themselves as the Galactic Empire, and they had given the Inner Sphere an ultimatum: surrender, or be destroyed.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Artifex on 11 October 2020, 00:31:26
Oho! Star Wars hitting BattleTech... intriguing.  8)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 12 October 2020, 16:20:24
644

As the Clan Invasion was halted in 3052, another invasion occurred. This time, from the other side of the Inner Sphere. At first, the invaders were believed to have been the Clans circumventing the Inner Sphere to launch another invasion; but when the reports of the invaders came back, it brought more confusion than answers. The Battlemechs these invaders used were too slow and easy to destroy; their soldiers wore white armor and had very poor aim; the only advantage these invaders had was in space. Their warships and fighters had what could be described as powerful pulse lasers. But what these invaders lacked in the method of warfare the Capellans, AFFS, Taurians, Canopians, Free Worlders, and Aurigans had, they made up in sheer numbers and their lack of hesitation to use orbital bombardments on military AND civilian targets. These invaders identified themselves as the Galactic Empire, and they had given the Inner Sphere an ultimatum: surrender, or be destroyed.

I can't see how this would be made to work.  The space superiority gap is too large just on the basis of more flexible FTL even if the firepower scaling is matched. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: georgiaboy on 12 October 2020, 18:22:20
I can't see how this would be made to work.  The space superiority gap is too large just on the basis of more flexible FTL even if the firepower scaling is matched.


With how SW FTL hyperlanes work. Till Lane mapping is done. SW FTL could be slower
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Giovanni Blasini on 12 October 2020, 18:25:35

Origional Mica technology: Super-heavy Battle Armor.
Battle Armor, as produced by the Clans and the Inner Sphere, would fall into one of 5 weight classes.
Exoskeleton: 80-400kg
Light: 401- 750kg
Medium: 751-1000kg(1ton)
Heavy: 1001-1500kg
Assualt: 1501-2000kg(2ton)

The Mica Majority, lacking need for (or room for) battlemechs or conventional vehicles, created a new class of Battle Armor- the Super Heavy. Beginning at 2.5 tons, and up to 5 tons in weight, these battle armors were powered by dedicated fusion reactors, instead of battery packs. They used many of the same technologies used in Battlemechs.

Super Heavy battlearmors are created using Protomech rules. They can be 2.5 - 5 tons in weight, in increments of 0.5 tons. They can mount not more than 3 weapons- one in each hand (battle armor weapons only) and one in the Main Gun (Battle Armor or mech weapon). (Quad Super Heavy Battle Armor can mount 2 weapons in the Main Gun of Battle Armor or Mech classification, and no weapons in the hands)

(And none of this 'curl up into a ball and control it with the cybernetic implants that drive you insane and kill you' bullshit either. I get that the Devs want to push Protomechs out of the way, but if you can find room in a 2ton batle armor for an actual cockpit, you can do the same with a 5ton protomech.)

I love this so much.

I can't see how this would be made to work.  The space superiority gap is too large just on the basis of more flexible FTL even if the firepower scaling is matched. 

Use the Galactic Empire in Welcome to the Nebula California and completely ignore the SW extended universe that claims that Star Destroyer cannons pump out equivalents of multi-gigatons of energy per second?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Tyler Jorgensson on 12 October 2020, 18:34:24
645

(By the idea that their are 32K UrbanMechs being shipped out for the Kickstarter: probably needs a better fleshed out story... buthe its an idea)

UrbanMechs! UrbanMechs EVERYWHERE! The SLDF accidently ordered thirty odd divisions of the design, citing an error in the bill. However the Star League coffers had already been emptied of the money in an unprecedented fast transaction that Hellspont Industries was quick to accept. Quickly subcontracting out the order, Hellspont used the might of the Star League to churn out rank upon rank of the slow buggers.

Not knowing what to do with such a massive influx of such terrible mechs, and unable to win in the court preceding's (in which Hellspont surprisingly won due to some legal blunders by the Star League officials forcing the judge to throw the case out on technicalities), the SLDF started assembling such Divisions of UrbanMechs. Each Army would be assigned one full Division, with the remaining 10 Divisions deployed to each of the five main powers exterior armies. Assigned to training units, reserves, or just about the worst of the worst pilots, commanders often included a Battalion or more in their infantry Divisions as urban support 9pun intended.

As the years went by, Hellspont grew richer and richer, and the SLDF bloated with thousands of near useless mechs. Their commanders never quite forgave the Quartermasters or Logistical Corps for their betrayal.... but how could they turn down mechs and get rid of their troublesome pilots at the same time?
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: HABeas2 on 12 October 2020, 19:15:55
Use the Galactic Empire in Welcome to the Nebula California and completely ignore the SW extended universe that claims that Star Destroyer cannons pump out equivalents of multi-gigatons of energy per second?

*Pssst!* It's "Star Empire," not "Galactic Empire." They only control a binary solar system, and aren't backed by Disney.

- Herb
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Kujo on 12 October 2020, 20:39:00
644-continued

Morgan Hasek-Davion taking a mixed company from New Avalon CMM, 1st Davion Guards and Davion Heavy Guards launches a raid on the largest of those ships.

The mech's armor is superior to anything those Imperials have as is the Aerospace fighters, to counter act the wave upon wave of truly low quality space fighters, Hanse Davion along side his wife Melissa Steiner-Davion reinstate the 'Knights of the Void' along with plenty of canned-sunshine.  All Innersphere Aerospace is organized and centralized Ala AWACS dropships, they quickly learn how to breach the shields and as with Morgan's special operations group they capture intact capital ship after capital ship.  Reverse engineering the hyper drives from captured ships the NAIS makes breakthrough after breakthrough.

After several months having made use of the massive captured capital ships to put the clans in their place, the FEDCOM for human dignity and freedom begin to track down this Empire.  The 10th Lyran Guards under Lieutenant General Victor Ian Steiner-Davion leads one of these task forces with his Aide-de-Camp Kai Allard-Liao they intercept communications, something grabbled sounding a bit under water as the FEDCOM task force enters the forest moon sector they can hear the imperials foes call out on all stations "IT'S A TRAP"
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Atarlost on 14 October 2020, 01:10:00

With how SW FTL hyperlanes work. Till Lane mapping is done. SW FTL could be slower

It's not just about the hyperlanes, which will get charted as they go dramatically shortening lines of communication, it's also about the tactical applications.  SW FTL can jump far closer to gravity wells than Battletech FTL.  Apparently as low as just outside a planetary atmosphere for entering hyperspace in Rogue One.  How close to a star or planet they can jump is dictated not by immutable physics, but by how thin they're willing to shave their safety margins.  And we can get an approximation of how close a ship with its safeties enabled can get to a gas giant by the duration of the Death Star attack in ANH.  A particularly slow ship by Star Wars standards (the Death Star) is able to return to realspace within maybe as little as half an hour to a few hours of a moon around a gas giant while entering realspace on the far side of that gas giant from the moon.  Oh, and the gas giant is in the star's habitable zone, which on its own would put it days of reach of Battletech FTL barring pirate points. 

Battletech as a wargame severely restricts FTL because minimally restricted FTL is a game breaker.  Star Wars is not a game or even targeted at a sophisticated audience and it's FTL is minimally restricted. 

Just for example, a minor frigate can sit say 60 degrees above the ecliptic halfway to Battletech's jump limit and cover both standard jump points and all pirate points simultaneously while being immune from any attack and not expend any reaction mass because antigravity and kill any civilian traffic that comes into the system without escort. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 15 October 2020, 02:11:12
646

In 3020, Hanse Davion's reply to the Peace Proposal is a bit more nakedly ambitious, suggesting a marriage between Katrina's heir Melissa and his heir Morgan (maybe he's just spent some time with Morgan and is thinking fondly of him when the message arrives, rather than brooding over Dana's death). Meanwhile, Maximilian Liao is looking at a really quite annoyed Janos Marik and definitely wants to keep the Steiners who threaten the FWL's other flank favourably inclined. Thus, the Liao response is 'let's give peace a chance'.

In 3022, Maximilian Liao and Katrina Steiner sign the Confederated Commonwealth treaty... and Janos Marik is left with the unenviable job of trying to make an alliance with both Hanse Davion and Takashi Kurita at the same time...
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Elmoth on 15 October 2020, 02:18:27
FWL + FS alliance looks feasible. No common border means less friction between the players. Wouldn't it? It would be a REALLY unenviable position for the Capellans as trying to add the Kuritas into their Steiner agreement would be far from easy. Makes for a different dynamic for sure, that is a given :)
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 15 October 2020, 17:25:57
Honestly, the Liao were weak enough in 3025 that a FWL+FS alliance would be more than enough of a military counterweight, leaving the Dracs to twist in the wind on their lonesome.

However, this means that the two super-alliances are suddenly thrust into massive conflict over the worlds near Terra; if either side can gain dominance over the former Terran Hegemony, not only does that secure the trade and communication links between their two member states, but they correspondingly isolate their enemies.   Throw in ComStar's eagerness to stir the pot (especially given the moustache-twirling villains in control of ROM during the 3025 era), opportunists like Hassid Ricol, and an early "Chaos March" could easily crop up within the 100 light years "south" and "west" of Terra.

Another weird knock-on is that when the Clans come a-knocking they find a very different Inner Sphere.  The Lyrans don't have the same reserves (or tech, or doctrine) as in canon, and the Dracs haven't been ground down (but also improved) by their warring against the FedCom.  Also, the FWL/FC alliance has negative incentive to help out with Clan problems, since they make out like bandits from the Clans carving into their enemies' rear areas.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Kujo on 15 October 2020, 18:55:03
FWL and FS would finish off the CC, may take out the TC and MOC and just order some popcorn to watch the destruction while the Wolves, Falcons, Bears and Jaguars weaken their foes so much that Melissa and Theo are begging to be vessels!
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: TheBrokenLance on 15 October 2020, 19:31:43
Of course, that means no Whiting Conference, no Second Star League, no incentive for the Clans to stop. either.  Man, that'd be a knock-down, drag-out brawl.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 18 October 2020, 16:29:42
647

Mary Davion and Soto Kurita defied their families and married after falling in love. But before any further protest could occur; a fate decided to intervene and both Roger Davion and Urizen Kurita II both died under different circumstances. Roger died from a heart attack while Urizen died from an assassin's bullet. With both fathers dead and their siblings going to rise to their respective thrones, Soto and Mary offered an alternative that would change history forever; a merger of the Federated Suns and the Draconis Combine, or a separate kingdom where they could raise their children together without either of them forced to live apart. Despite many protests, Soto and Mary's marriage was seen as a possible solution to any future conflict between to two respected nations.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Starfox5 on 20 October 2020, 16:09:34
648

Terra: (Over-)Armed Neutrality

‘It is hardly possible to overstate just how much Jerome Blake is respected and revered by Terrans. Indeed, most of the population of the entire solar system credits his deal with the House Lords with saving their home - the birthplace and cradle of humanity - at the start of the First Succession War. Most Terrans do not question the assessment that without the agreement that created ComStar and guaranteed Terra’s neutrality, Terra would have been destroyed like so many other worlds of the former Terran hegemony as the various realms fought over them.
However, what many of those not familiar with Terra fail to realise is that the Terrans do not see Jerome Blake as the first Primus of ComStar, but as the first Director of the Solar Confederation. Despite the importance of ComStar for the Inner Sphere and the Terran economy and security, the average Terra considers the office of Primus of ComStar secondary to the office of Director of the Confederation. In the same vein, while many of the more educated residents in the Inner Sphere are aware that the posts of Director and Primus are always held by the same person, fewer know that it’s the Director automatically becoming Primus, not the other way around.’
-excerpt from ‘Terra and ComStar: A History’ by Killian McCall, Skye Free Press, 3030

‘I know what you are thinking. What kind of criminal would murder civilians? What kind of villain would claim neutrality, yet work in the shadows to sabotage a realm? What I’m proposing is, without a shred of doubt, illegal. And yet, it’s also needed. Despite our best efforts, Terra is still unable to defend itself. Any single House Lord could conquer the system if they spent enough resources. And sooner or later, they will consider it - or have you forgotten the horrors they inflicted on each other and the Hegemony? No, this operation, while illegal, and possibly amoral, is needed to cripple the House Lords and ensure that they will lose the ability to produce warships and other advanced military technology. If Jermone Blake were still alive, he would agree with me: Operation Burial Shroud has to be implemented!’
-Director Raymond Karpov in a secret meeting with the SCIS Commander

‘While it is true that the Inner Sphere, as well as the Periphery, have lost the capability to produce warships, the mightiest fleet ever seen is still out there - and could return at any moment, trying to conquer Terra. And who would be able to stop them? Certainly not the various nations unable to maintain much less repair their remaining warships. No, it would be utterly irresponsible to cut funding to the Fleet and leave us defenceless against Kerenski’s heirs! With this in mind, I implore my esteemed colleagues to back the Fifth Naval Law for a modest increase in naval strength.’
- Archibald Wellesley, Member of the Confederate Parliament, Geneva, 2890

‘I have the fullest trust in our improved SDS. The possibility of the Caspar V drones going out of control is so low, it can be considered inexistent. However, to ease the troubled minds of our many constituents who have an irrational fear of drone warships, it is necessary to strengthen the Fleet once again so it has the capability to take on the entire SDS and win. For that to achieve, a modest increase in naval strength is needed.”
- Archibald Wellesley, Member of the Confederate Parliament, Geneva, 2920

‘Indeed, our fleet doesn’t need the new battlecruiser. But our industry needs the contract. With sales to foreign realms prohibited by law, the shipyards making compact core ships depend entirely on the Fleet. Therefore, I ask my esteemed colleagues to support this proposal to design and build eight battlecruisers of the ‘Archibald Wellesley-class’…’
- Herbert Krüger, Member of the Confederate Parliament, Geneva, 2950

‘ComStar is looking for YOU! Whether you are an engineer looking for experience, a hyperspace technician wishing to work with the latest technology or a graduate who wants to see the galaxy without paying through the nose, ComStar is the perfect employer! Are you a medical student about to graduate? Consider joining the ComStar Doctors without Borders and help the poor and unfortunate in the Inner Sphere! Be everything you can be - join ComStar!”
- ComStar Recruitment Ad, Terra, 3000

‘After extensive analysis of the reports covering our anti-piracy efforts in the Periphery, this committee’s conclusion is as follows: The current training program for the Army of the Confederation needs a complete overhaul. To put it more bluntly: Sending out our troops like this is akin to murder - and liable to waste billions in expensive ‘Mechs.’
- Dan Killigan, General (ret.) of the Army of the Confederation, Sandhurst, 3001

‘Yeah, yeah, ComStar does good. No one sane would deny it - hell, without the humanitarian aid ComStar’s pouring into the Inner Sphere, many worlds would have been depopulated in the wars - many more worlds, I guess. But in the end, it’s a job. Whether you work with Hyperpulse Generators or Mega-Engineering Terraforming projects, you do your work and you get paid. And not too shabbily, I have to add. Provided you can stand to leave Terra and live among the ‘less fortunate’.”
- Francois Payot, Hyperpulse Generator Technician, New Avalon, 3005

“I know SCIS has made a few mistakes regarding the possible return of Kerensky’s deserters in the past, like the so-called Minnesota-Tribe incident. But the Wolf Dragoons have ‘Mechs that match the models Kerensly took with them, and even ‘Mechs that were only design studies when the SLDF left. If any group can be tied to the SLDF, it’s them!”
- Karl Müller, Director of the Solar Confederation Intelligence Service, 3007

‘When people think of Terra, they think of ComStar - the neutral organisation running the HPG Network and countless humanitarian relief works. But did you know that the entire Inner Sphere and Periphery are dependent on Terran shipyards to maintain their own fleets? Without them, the House Lords wouldn’t be able to wage war against each other - they would lack the ships to move troops. And were you aware that despite their policy of neutrality and strict limits to non-military cargo, the Terran shipping fleets are actually one of the biggest reasons the Third Succession War went on for so long because they free up military shipping capacity?’
- Margaret Kendall, Editorial in the Tharkad Tageszeitung, Tharkad 3011

‘While I cannot reveal my sources, I have it on good authority that the threat of Kerensky’s SLDF returning isn’t as far fetched as my esteemed colleague wishes it was. Therefore, I propose a new naval law to strengthen our fleet by the modest addition of four more battleships over the next four years.’
- Li Peng, Member of the Confederate Parliament, Geneva, 3008

‘According to our best analysts, Archon Katrina Steiner’s peace proposal is sincere. Our best analysts also are certain it will be rejected by the other Houses. None of them currently has the political capital to call an end to the war. At best, a temporary alliance with either the Capellan Confederation or the Federated Suns or a short truce with the Free World League can be expected to result from her initiative. Therefore, this proposal is very unlikely to be of any relevance to the safety of the Solar Confederation.’
- Karl Müller, Director of the Solar Confederation Intelligence Service, 3020

‘Reduce the funding for the fleet? If I didn’t know that my esteemed colleague has never been one to consider the consequences of his demands, I would suspect that he’s being paid by foreign agents to cripple our defences! No, I say - instead of reducing the Fleet’s funding, presumably to buy more expensive ‘Mechs that our troops are likely to wreck in training and which would only ever serve as a last line of defence - we need to increase it! If we can defeat any enemy in space, they won’t ever reach the ground!’
- Li Peng, Member of the Confederate Parliament, Geneva, 3025

‘We need organic air support for our divisions. We cannot rely on the Fleet to provide it - the admirals will always prioritise their own ships over our ground troops when assigning their aerospace assets. And no, conventional fighters do not cut it.’
- General Malcolm ‘Mad Dog’ Cressy, Army of the Confederation, to the Chiefs of Staff, Unity City, 3026

‘Any force strong enough to defeat the Fleet is more than strong enough to wipe out the Army. Any aerospace fighter held back for ‘close air support’ is one less fighter contesting the orbitals - where the fate of any invasion will be decided long before ground forces could play any role at all.’
- Admiral Jenny L. DuChamps, Solar Confederation Fleet, to the Chiefs of Staff, Unity City, 3026

‘A preliminary examination of the data from the Helm Core shows that most of it was corrupted when the Gray Death Legion came under attack by Kuritan forces and had to rush the data extraction. Further, it’s very unlikely that a Field Library contained any advanced knowledge of the Star League. Our analysts agree that the spread of this data won’t have any impact on the balance of power in the Inner Sphere.’
- Juan Gonzales, Director of the Solar Confederation Intelligence Service, 3028

‘Why does anyone trust our analysts again? The Solar Confederation would’ve literally be better off if we had done the opposite of everything they advised us to do in the last 200 years! They’ve claimed the SLDF is coming back five times so far - once after a pirate raid against the Outworld Alliance! Why would anyone trust them to handle the security of the Steiner-Davion wedding? Better leave that to the Armed forces of the Confederation!’
- Karen Lagerfeld, Member of the Confederate Parliament, Geneva, 3028

‘I know the Terrans mean well, and I cannot deny that they have pulled out all the stops for the wedding between Melissa Steiner and Hanse Davion, but I have to admit that I’m feeling a little concerned that they not only have dozens of warships but felt the need to deploy them in orbit above us. Do they honestly expect anyone would dare to try invading Terra? When all five House Lords are present?’
- Baron Bruno Leandro, St. André, in an interview with the New Avalon Times, Unity City, Terry, 3028

‘I believe our intelligence on the Terran system’s military strength was a little off.”
- First Prince Hanse Davion to Quentin Allard, 3028

*****

Basically, ComStar doesn't control Terra - Terra, resp. the Solar Confederation, which includes everyone from the Belters to Venus, controls ComStar - and they've been scared to death by the threat of an invasion of the solar system ever since the Hegemony was wrecked in the First Succession War. They've been building up their fleet and army for 200 years and enshrined neutrality - like the cliche Swiss. And like the cliche Swiss during the Cold War, they've got a lot of expensive stuff, but not much experience.

Most of the canon plot happened more or less like in canon - until the wedding between Melissa Steiner and Hanse Davion. Now everyone's aware just how overarmed Terra is - and the Terrans just saw the Federated Suns and the Lyran Commonwealth crush their enemies on a scale not seen since the First Succession War.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 21 October 2020, 00:58:37
I love it
Please expand on it
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 28 October 2020, 03:01:39
649

In 2763, Kenyon Marik becomes leader of the Free Worlds League and their representative on the Star League Council. His primary policy is 'whatever my father did, the opposite'. One of the things Ewan Marik had done was continue a general policy of exploiting the Periphery. Kenyon Marik... rethought that.

The Magistracy of Canopus had a substantial border with the Free Worlds League. Stabilising that would be good for him. The Rim Worlds Republic has a huge border with the Lyran Commonwealth. If the Republic is a FWL ally, that pressures the Lyrans... and Kenyon isn't that fond of the Lyrans. The Taurians are a serious potential threat to the Capellans and Federated Suns, neither of which are allies. See the point about the Republic...

So Kenyon approaches Barbara Liao, the next most junior member of the Star League Council and still hurting from the Border War recently fought with the Federated Suns.  A reconciliation with the FWL helps her quite a bit and Kenyon can blame all previous issues with the Capellans on his father. She's at least willing to hear him out and if this sweetens the Periphery up for her, that's in her interests. And after all, House Marik and House Liao were two of the three Houses that founded what became the Star League. It's politically very palatable for them to be working together as peacemakers (as long as they aren't undermining their own security).

The two make a visit to Terra and talk to Richard Cameron, who is at first... well, petulant. But again, blame Ewan, plus a healthy dose of flattery. And the prospect of a surprise gift to his dear friend Stefan...

In late 2764 the Star League Council convenes and, in contrast to Executive Order 156, Richard places a properly drafted and composed proposal to the Council Lords. Complete the retraction of Star League controls on the Territorial States and formally admit them as member-states with all rights and privileges... including votes on the Star League Council, an end to the unfair taxation and official military limits.

Davion, Kurita and Steiner all vote against... but Marik and Liao assent. Three to three... and the Cameron vote breaks ties.

The Star League Council now has ten votes and Richard Cameron has a functioning voting block - as well as advisors to keep him from doing anything too drastic.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: cklammer on 28 October 2020, 04:42:38
That would stop the Fat Man from going imperial by force.

Because this is a huge butterfly with very, very large wings flapping them quite often and strongly.

After that it would be a very different Inner Sphere: larger and (at least at first) without the Amaris Civil War and the Succession Wars.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Elmoth on 28 October 2020, 05:13:24
Amaris, not likely. Succession wars, not so sure they would not happen. There is bound to be a lot of conflicting interests in the enlarged structure, andf the house lords are still more powerful than the periphery ones. A decapitation of the Camerons is likely to ahve the same net effect of starting the wars no matter what. A stupid Cameron (maybe the next one) could also start the ball rolling downhill.

But yeah, massive butterfly there.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: cklammer on 29 October 2020, 06:44:21
The political incentives and possibilities would be vastly different for Amaris especially, so I would expect him to gain political power using soft means.

Then again, this is three years before the Coup and the military RWR preparations are already underway if I recall correctly ....
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Elmoth on 29 October 2020, 06:53:46
Armaris is always presented as being totally nuts, so he might go for his little trick no matter what.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Takiro on 30 October 2020, 03:27:40
An interesting alternative certainly having the parliamentary Mariks bring their balkanizing brand of politics to the Star League drakensis. Making the Periphery nations full members of the League will likely spawn problems of its own. Sure they will be grateful the predatory economic policies have been revoked but I am sure that there will still be a movement to seek recompense for past injustices. Secessionists will remain as well seeking independence from the League likely fueled by the Crescent of Opposition you've created as a result.  The Lyran Commonwealth, Draconis Combine, and Federated Suns aren't gonna just sit back and be fine with all this political maneuvering. Perhaps the strongest realms of the League they will seek to exploit any cracks in this voting block perhaps seeking a dissolution of the Star League once and for all.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: RunandFindOut on 07 November 2020, 11:30:07
Of course, that means no Whiting Conference, no Second Star League, no incentive for the Clans to stop. either.  Man, that'd be a knock-down, drag-out brawl.
Doesn't matter what incentives they have, once they got far enough the Inner Sphere would break out the Strategic Nuke stockpiles and make like it was the First Succession War again on the Clans.  Qualitative superiority doesn't matter when the other side can throw a ton of cheap nukes at you and simply overwhelm you.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 10 November 2020, 10:02:38
#650

Nicholas Kerensky's least reported 'reform' was the abolishment of the metric system.

Thus the Clan's range advantage. all their weapon ranges are in miles not kilometres (or fractions of miles vs fractions of kilometres).

And the reason why the Inner Sphere has not been able to easily replicate Clantech is revealed!

Inner Sphere tech: "What do you mean 7/16ths? How many millimetres is that? And what's with all the superscript I and II scattered around the diagram?"

ComStar: "I can't help but think correcting all the history books to use rational measurements and stop having to convert into anachronistic values may have backfired on us... somehow."
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Intermittent_Coherence on 10 November 2020, 11:41:19
They wouldn't be the Clans if they weren't setting back intellectual evolution somehow in some other fashion.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: drakensis on 13 November 2020, 06:34:29
651

In 3015, with the outbreak of the Marik Civil War, the defense of the Tamarind Military District - roughly a quarter of the Free Worlds League dropped down the priorities of the Captain-General, as he was rather busy fighting his brother. While the region wasn't entirely stripped, force numbers did diminish.

Looking at the continuing raids coming out of Circinus (generally flagged as LCAF raids even if it was actually the Black Warriors) and the rapidly reforming actual LCAF under Katrina Steiner, the many small provinces of the region were... concerned. Deeply concerned. And someone looked at recent history and suggested that the Silver Hawks Coalition might have been onto something, While putting together their 'Mech assets into was a step too far - and likely to get them yanked by Janos Marik to reinforce his operations - a suggestion to standardise the training and equipment across the various provincial militias, saving costs and letting smaller and poorer provinces maintain larger forces than they might otherwise be was accepted. While larger provinces would benefit less, they'd still see investment from their weaker neighbours and larger speedbumps between them and the rapacious Lyran hordes...

(After 200 years of war and not having an insider's view of LCAF bureaucracy, the sheer mass of the Lyran forces tended to make the FWL deeply grateful that the DCMS was keeping most of their neighbour's attention. Given that at one point the Lyrans had pushed deeply into the League, this isn't entirely baseless).

To run this new coordinated military initiative, the various provinces needed a capable military leader who was unlikely to bend to the pressures that would certainly be applied by Janos Marik to co-opt their war resources for his own interests. With the addition of Tamarind to the pact they found their man, a cashiered FWLM officer currently commanding the static defenses of Tamarind's Khe Shang province. His military education and career had been exemplary, it was recorded. The reason he'd been cashiered was eloping with Janos Marik's daughter.

Over the next fifteen years, Jeremy Brett proved an exceptional leader for the defense initiative, brushing aside weak attempts by the FWLM to point out that he was basically doing things that they rather considered their remit. While Thomas Marik's centralisation weakened most provinces, the Tamarind Military District provided three brigades equipped with hardware they themselves were struggling to maintain, retaining troops with their new standardised gear in defense against the no doubt imminent Federated Commonwealth invasion. Rather in need of his sister's support and having expected much less from the petty provinces of the region, Thomas Marik was duly grateful and resolved the conflict with the FWLM by appointing his brother-in-law as the new commander of the FWLM's Tamarind District.

With the 3030s and 3040s going on, the absence of an invasion and increasingly impressive military forces available convinced the FWL's defense industries that there was an untapped market and with rising technology, the prospect of unloading a lot of reconditioned hardware looked appealing. In 3045, Jeremy Brett issued a joint offer on the part of the Tamarind Military District and Tamarind-Abbey Defense Initiative: the organisations would be interested in subsidising a number construction facilities for 'Mechs, aerospace fighters and combat vehicles, as well as components thereof, so long as the designs submitted utilised parts readily available within the Military District already. For example, every design submitted must use a 240-rated standard fusion engine. Lostech equipment that technicians would have to be retrained to operate was not of interest.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 26 November 2020, 16:06:50
652

Everyone knows the history surrounding Stefan Amaris, his rise, and eventual fall. We all know who he had to kill in order to become the man who is universally hated by Inner Sphere, Periphery, and Clans alike. But what if history took a different turn? What if Stefan's rise to power...failed?

When he was just 13, Richard Cameron woke up in the middle of the night from a horrific nightmare. One where he saw himself dying at the hands of his "best friend" Stefan Amaris; Terra and the Hegemony being ravaged by a war that would leave the Hegemony destroyed; and his "friend" killing all who opposed him. Shaken to his core from this dream, he could not sleep the remainder of that night. The next night, he had the same dream again and again the following night and so on. Each time it would show more horrific details, including his extended family dying with him. Deciding to find someone who would decipher those dreams, he turned to a few religious figureheads on Terra; many of whom told him the same thing: his dreams were a warning. After being plagued by these dreams and hearing that they could be warnings, Richard decided to ask Star League intelligence to look into any inquiries concerning his "friend's" nation.

After hearing all of this, Richard decided to subtly ask Stefan a few questions and even told him only bits and pieces of his dreams. Amaris simply shrugged them off as mere dreams and he "reassured" his young friend that he had no intention of ever killing him. But for some reason, Richard couldn't believe him. So he then turns to the only other person who had his interests at heart, Alexandr Kerensky. After telling the General of the nightmares that had been plaguing him, Kerensky immediately saw the warning signs and after also going over the intelligence reports he had been getting concerning the Rim Worlds Republic, Kerensky knew that he had to act before time ran out.

But rather than immediately arrest Amaris for crimes he hadn't committed...yet, Kerensky started to send a few of his trusted commanders to other worlds within the Republic and Hegemony where they would start secretly training their forces to counter any military opposition coming from Amaris' forces. Hopefully, by the time Amaris figured out what was going on, he would ultimately fail in his attempt to usurp the Star League and House Cameron.

In the meantime Richard, after finally being convinced of Stefan's duplicity, began to listen to his advisors more often and began lifting some of the edicts Amaris had suggested to him; especially on the Periphery realms. He only listened to a few suggestions the would-be usurper made, but made inquiries to others regarding them. In doing so, he not only expanded his political and economical education; but he also began to subtly increase security measures when it came to Amaris.

When the time came, Amaris would find that it was he at the end of a laser pistol and not his would-be victim.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 26 November 2020, 16:14:37
652

Everyone knows the history surrounding Stefan Amaris, his rise, and eventual fall. We all know who he had to kill in order to become the man who is universally hated by Inner Sphere, Periphery, and Clans alike. But what if history took a different turn? What if Stefan's rise to power...failed?

When he was just 13, Richard Cameron woke up in the middle of the night from a horrific nightmare. One where he saw himself dying at the hands of his "best friend" Stefan Amaris; Terra and the Hegemony being ravaged by a war that would leave the Hegemony destroyed; and his "friend" killing all who opposed him. Shaken to his core from this dream, he could not sleep the remainder of that night. The next night, he had the same dream again and again the following night and so on. Each time it would show more horrific details, including his extended family dying with him. Deciding to find someone who would decipher those dreams, he turned to a few religious figureheads on Terra; many of whom told him the same thing: his dreams were a warning. After being plagued by these dreams and hearing that they could be warnings, Richard decided to ask Star League intelligence to look into any inquiries concerning his "friend's" nation.

After hearing all of this, Richard decided to subtly ask Stefan a few questions and even told him only bits and pieces of his dreams. Amaris simply shrugged them off as mere dreams and he "reassured" his young friend that he had no intention of ever killing him. But for some reason, Richard couldn't believe him. So he then turns to the only other person who had his interests at heart, Alexandr Kerensky. After telling the General of the nightmares that had been plaguing him, Kerensky immediately saw the warning signs and after also going over the intelligence reports he had been getting concerning the Rim Worlds Republic, Kerensky knew that he had to act before time ran out.

But rather than immediately arrest Amaris for crimes he hadn't committed...yet, Kerensky started to send a few of his trusted commanders to other worlds within the Republic and Hegemony where they would start secretly training their forces to counter any military opposition coming from Amaris' forces. Hopefully, by the time Amaris figured out what was going on, he would ultimately fail in his attempt to usurp the Star League and House Cameron.

In the meantime Richard, after finally being convinced of Stefan's duplicity, began to listen to his advisors more often and began lifting some of the edicts Amaris had suggested to him; especially on the Periphery realms. He only listened to a few suggestions the would-be usurper made, but made inquiries to others regarding them. In doing so, he not only expanded his political and economical education; but he also began to subtly increase security measures when it came to Amaris.

When the time came, Amaris would find that it was he at the end of a laser pistol and not his would-be victim.

I want to see this one.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: DOC_Agren on 26 November 2020, 18:58:20
I want to see this one.
Yes Please  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: cklammer on 27 November 2020, 09:02:38
A smart Richard Cameron unfettered from Canon fiat - oh yes, please. :thumbsup:
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: wolfcannon on 27 November 2020, 12:08:03
without the taxation edicts, and other heavy handed laws and edicts in play the coup would have a harder time going off as the outer rebellion would not be a factor,  in this scenario i can see the periphery being given autonomy much earlier and the SLDF pulling out many of the units back to home.    Richard could use the Terran Hegemony Intelligence to run some black ops and false flag operations to smoke out whats needed. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: SulliMike23 on 27 November 2020, 14:54:20
Wow, never expected such positive viewpoints on that one.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 03 December 2020, 22:48:02
Living in the Lyran Commonwealth is hell.

Post-capitalst nightmare. Water and often air are budget-breakers; there is no credit or government aid.

Paranoid police. Judges that accept low burdens of proof. Secret police that need no proof.

Corporations that casually twist the law. Nobles completely above the law.

When a planet is conquered by the FWL it’s cause for a week long celebration. Conquest by the Combine... is business as usual.



Just because I wanted to look at the good guys on a bad hair day.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 03 December 2020, 23:23:53
Living in the Lyran Commonwealth is hell.

Post-capitalst nightmare. Water and often air are budget-breakers; there is no credit or government aid.

Paranoid police. Judges that accept low burdens of proof. Secret police that need no proof.

Corporations that casually twist the law. Nobles completely above the law.

When a planet is conquered by the FWL it’s cause for a week long celebration. Conquest by the Combine... is business as usual.



Just because I wanted to look at the good guys on a bad hair day.

That...just describes a lot of the Alliance period Lyran state under Nondi.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Greatclub on 04 December 2020, 00:32:10
That...just describes a lot of the Alliance period Lyran state under Nondi.

Yeah... but imagine if Nondi did that because it's the default state.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 04 December 2020, 01:56:36
Yeah... but imagine if Nondi did that because it's the default state.

It kind of already is.  Kat and Nondi would've had a HELL of a hard time getting things to that state if they weren't already inclined toward it from the start.  The Lyran "Social General" disease is the sort of thing that really only happens in nations that are already pretty far along the corruption scale, and while the original poster used the term 'post capitalism' it's kind of one of those weird labels for what amounts to state capitalism or crony capitalism (depending on where in society you find yourself-insiders claim it's good for the state, outsiders identify it as a form of corruption).

Basically the Lyrans have this problem, have had this problem, and like all complex societies, it waxes and wanes but never quite gets eliminated. 

Power corrupts, sure, but power also attracts the corrupt.  either way, we know that Lohengrin is a secret police that disappears people regularly depending on the whims of their directors, that major corporations also control the bodies that are supposed to regulate their activities (See: How many Nobles are also on corporate boards), and so on.

Since the Nobility also controls the legislature, they obviously would install the necessary back doors and exemptions and exceptions to assure that the law ONLY applies to people who aren't from their peer group, and so on.  NOWHERE in the Battletech Universe would you find more than occasional lip-service to the idea of 'equal under law'-because it's not a universe where that concept has managed to survive. EVERY society in Battletech, if you carefully examine the books, follows a rough pyramid layout, with a large and largely untouchable ruling class, a declining middle class, and a vast majority of people who only matter in terms of their ability to pay taxes and die entertainingly for their masters.

what the poster described is the default state of a techno-feudal society-the only path to upward mobility is through the civil service or the personal service of one of the ruling class, who spend human blood and the money collected from taxpayers to achieve personal goals and personal power. 

Even Victor did it.  War is easy when the common man truly doesn't matter, and in the BTU, war is very easy indeed-for the people at the top.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: croaker on 04 December 2020, 02:30:12
The Taurian Concordat makes a good try at getting out of that mold. It's a little on the unstable side at times but it's the closest state in the BTU to a present-day government.
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Cannonshop on 04 December 2020, 03:26:40
The Taurian Concordat makes a good try at getting out of that mold. It's a little on the unstable side at times but it's the closest state in the BTU to a present-day government.

indeed and agreed. 
Title: Re: BattleTech FanFiction Tribble Emporium
Post by: Trace Coburn on 04 December 2020, 19:19:43
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