Hello,
Read the BattleMech entries last night, here are a couple I remember seeing:
P.36, Agrotera entry, "Deployment": "During the Capellan invasion of Cumberland in 3144 a mixed unit of Agroteras and Yinghuchongs... ...the same role as the Yinghuchongs."
versus
PP.30-31, YHC-3E Yinghuochong entry: Yinghuochong appears with this spelling 15 times.
P.30, YHC-3E Yinghuochong entry, "Deployment": "With daytime temperatures exceeding fifty-seven degrees and nights dropping as low as nineteen..." (57oC is scorching, but 19 is a very comfortable ~70oF. I suspect you meant -19oC)
"Zhong-shao Liko Shaiu" profile: "He was promoted to for his actions..." (to a new rank? or should this be removed?)
P.34, RVN-5X Raven II entry, "Deployment": "The Raven’s extra speed and stealth armor help them surprise and eliminate..." ("helped" maintains the tense of anecdote)
P.36, AGT-1A Agrotera entry, "Deployment": "...the Capellans would single out a straggling or otherwise vulnerable heavy or assault ’Mech target it with all four of their PPCs." (bad grammar, meaning unclear)
TSEMP (mentioned a lot in some of the entries) does not have rules, just tonnage, mass, heat, range. Is this an omission?
Steve