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Second Exodus
« on: 10 September 2018, 23:08:11 »
Inglesmond 2788. Novas Brasilia


“But we beat them off!” President Ricardo Chen said. “Our dockyards are fine, and we’re building—”

“It won’t make any difference. Not in the end.” General James Mitchel had fought with General Kerensky. Right now, he was wondering if staying behind had been the right thing to do.

The vision outside of the president’s office windows answered that question. A bustling city, full of people at work and at play, with the marina crowded with private and public vessels.

And unless a God who seemed to be increasingly absent from the universe intervened most of those people would be dead—fast if they were lucky… slow if not.

“The entire sphere has gone mad, Mr. President. If the House Lords can’t have it, they will ensure that nobody else can. And they sure as hell are not going to let us go it alone, because the one thing they can all agree on is that the Hegemony will never rise again. Some of those missiles were targeted on our world, and they were salted nuclear weapons.”

“Our warships?”

“Will be flying with raw crews and again— we have one shipyard, and they know it. It may take a few years, but the Dracs will burn us, and the rest of the House Lords will join in so that they don’t get anything worthwhile. They will not permit a rump Hegemony state to rise up. Not now. It might interfere with them killing each other.”  And I’m not going to tell you where that confirmation came from. Blake might not be able to provide military aid, but it was clear that having to abandon the remainder of the Hegemony to save Terra sat ill with the last ranking officer of the Star League. Letting anyone know just how deep Terra’s penetration into the House Lords coms would be a deadly mistake.

“So what do you suggest?” Ricardo seemed to wilt, staring at the Star League Banner that stood next to the planetary flag. “I’m assuming you aren’t here to suggest we all commit suicide.”

“No. But first I have to ask a question—what do you consider most important. Saving the planet, or saving our people.”

“They’re one in the same, aren’t they?”

“For most of us? Yes. But for some of us…”

Chen wasn’t an idiot. “You want to follow Kerensky.”

“No.” Mitchel said. “Kerensky didn’t leave a map, and by this time… Well. Besides, we don’t have to go that far—I’ve had some… communications with Wynn’s Roost. They’re loyal to the Hegemony and they need resources—they weren’t independent, not really. Our factories…”

“How is that different from here?”

“They’re far away—any House Lord that tried to send a major force to attack them would be exposing their own state. They’re not in the middle of the road, like we are.”

“That is a long way… How many could we save?”

“It depends on what resources we can cobble together and what aid we can get. If we can daisychain a jump ship link—well, as I said, it depends. A few million, in the worst case. Enough to save our culture.”

“That—” Chen frowned. “There is no way the ships we have, even if we packed people in like sardines, could carry that many. Who is helping?”

“Blake.”

“Blake? Why, all he cares about is Terra!”

Not quite. If the House Lords had held off even a few more years… But there was no need for Chen to know about that. “He can’t protect us, not without putting Terra in the firing line, but he’ll provide logistical support. So long as we return it, of course.”

“And what about everyone here?” Chen said. “In the “worst case” what about the oh, 98 percent of the population left behind?”

“Well, sir, if we can’t protect the world from attack, we’ll have to ensure that the people can survive an attack—as well as eliminating anything anyone might want to grab…” Mitchel’s smile was a death’s head. “After all, one advantage of Inglesmond is that we don’t need to continually maintain the planet’s habitability.”

“I’m really not going to like this.”

“No sir, because at best, it’ll mean millions dead. At worst, everyone dies, but Operation Gopher and Scorched Earth are the best hope we have.”

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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #1 on: 10 September 2018, 23:56:56 »

Terra.

Blake frowned at the papers. Shipping charts, lists of jumpships still under his control, casualty lists for the growing conflict.

Casualty lists for the shipyards.

“What do you think of Operation Exodus?”  He finally asked.

“It needs a new name,” one officer muttered. “Keeps getting mixed up with Kerenksy’s runner.”

“Which is a good thing,” Blake said. “We can’t depend on it, but if it confuses us, it might confuse the House intelligence agencies. Now, how many jump ships can we provide for the Exodus.”

“Roughly 200—Maybe up to 300.” Admiral Jennings had been part of the SLDF logistics command. She gestured at the screens. “Average it out six collars per ship, and once we have the chain configured.” Now a network of red lines ran through the inner sphere, Linking Inglsemond and Wynn’s Roost, “We can use it as a circuit. One week charge, and then command circuit a load of dropships through in less than a few days.”

“In efficient,” A combat officer muttered. “We should use all the ships at once. We could transfer far more..”

“No. We couldn’t—we could move 20 times as many dropships—in 20 weeks. More importantly,” Jennings called up other images, dropships being opened up. “If we only need a week to get there, instead of twenty plus weeks, we can fit these ships to carry bays, not long-term quarters. Inglesmond is rigging carrier pods and modified Behemoths—but if we count all 5 routes, we’re talking carrying about 5.5 million people— per trip. Ideally, that could be 5.5 million people every three weeks, more if we get the other 100 ships. Then there’s the fact that Inglesmond has agreed to strip their warships and cargo ships of every weapon, using them to carry people, supplies and their manufacturing plants.”  She shrugged. “Add in the jumpships heading out on thier own, and there will be, and I’d say our main limiting factor is the ability of the Trader’s Domain to take that many people.”

“I know some have asked, what does this give us,” Black said. “But these are citizens of the Hegemony, and you all know what will happen. What has already started to happen. Ideally, the Hegemony military should shield them from this horror. But we cannot do this, and so we will provide this aid—to save our people.”

And reduce the number of jumpships. The life blood of interstellar commerce he had to plan ahead for the day when teh guns fell silent. Hopefully, the ships sent to aid the refugees would miss the fire consuming the Inner Sphere—after all, the Draconis Combine could not follow them, not unless they were willing to denude their other borders.






LTV Shipyards, Inglesmond


The Yards were blazing with activity, small runabouts moving from place to place, repairing damaged ships. The Ground yards handled most of the dropships—these yards were for Jumpships… and Warships. Two of those warships were active, a pair of Samarkand carriers. The small picket ship had been licensed and constructed for the SLDF, and two had been in for refit when the Hegemony collapsed.

A pity that right now, both only had 36 fighters between them.

Normally, trying to build warships, especially with the complete disruption of trade, would have been an exercise of futility but LTV didn’t just have a shipyard—it had a boneyard where older SLDF ships awaited recommissioning or scrapping and by a gift of fate, the Amaris forces had left many of the ships alone, marking them as to far from readiness for use—leaving their hulls for Inglesmond and turning hopeless into nearly hopeless.

That was why Admiral Conner was looking down out of the observation deck at the bays holding the three largest ships—a Monsoon, and two Potemkin class ships.

Technically, those three ships would render the one functioning Avatar almost irrelevant, to say nothing of the Quixote's they were refitting. But the ships had been in the boneyard for decades, and every time an engineer of an inservice ship needed a part, he came to them. After all, the Admiral Jenson was never going to fire its head gauss cannon in anger again—so who would miss a few rings being pulled off. The closet to combat ready was the Emden—if you could count only having it’s laser weapons operational “combat ready.”

And it’s only going to get worse. People on the planet could talk about building ships, but what they were doing was scavenging every ship they couldn’t refit. The yards were full now, but once those ships were gone, and it came to building ships… Well, he somehow doubted they were going to be able to order NAC-40 components from New Dallas anytime soon.

“Admiral Conner? General Mitchel needs to speak with you.”

Angela sighed and nodded, waiting until Mitchel’s face appeared. “Hello, James—what more bad news do you have today?”

“How soon can your ships be made ready for FTL and transport?”

“You mean combat?” God, James can’t be that—

“No, transport. We’re bugging out and taking as many civilians and workers as we can—and at the same time, hopefully ensuring that if they don’t have as much to fight over, at least some of the people we leave behind will survive.”

“Where?” Angela asked.

“Wynn’s Roost.”

“Hell of a long way.”

“That’s what we need.”

“Okay…” Angela closed her eyes for a moment. “The Quixotes are all mobile, at varying levels of combat capability. The Potempkins and Farragut? I can have them jumpcapable within the next week—but not combat capable. We’re talking big ****** in their armor, and half the weapons systems missing, damaged or some combination of the two. Regular jumpships—they’re mostly fine, and we’ve got a short task force—Two Samarkands, One Avatar, and two Riga’s at full capability—not counting fighters and those crews are pretty damned raw.

“It’ll have to be enough—you’re going to be getting movement orders and we’ve got assistance from Blake, but this will be close. Blake dropped off some info—the Dracs are probably coming back within the year, because the Lyrans are intending to “Secure” the world to protect the citizens.

“They want the docks as a jumping off point.”

“Yap.”

“We’re ******.”

“You got that, so as of now, stop anything other than getting the ships ready for refugees and to move—jam ‘em in, anything that the life support can handle. Also, start pulling out the critical components of the shipyard and equipment, but leave the cradles intact.”

“Why—oh, right.”

“Yeah. Don’t want our psychotic friends to wonder where they went, and I’m expecting they’ll be too busy nuking them to land search parties. If not, we can always nuke them ourselves.”

“What about the world—James, we can’t take more than a percent or less…”

“We’ve got every earth moving and mining machine we have digging shelters—outside of the industrial cities. They won’t help direct hits, but the cities are what they’ll be fighting over.”

“Starvation? Bioweapons? Troops?”

“Angela.” James sighed. “We’re not talking about saving all the people. We’re talking about giving them a chance—maybe those murderous bastards will refrain once the cities are burned. Maybe it won’t be worth it to hunt down people in shelters. All I know is that if we try to make a fight of it, we’ll all die. We can always hope that a war on another front will pull their forces away.”

“The president?”

“He’s staying. The first jumpships will be arriving in a few days, and I want them sent off as quickly as possible. Blake cobbled enough together to set up a circuit for the primary transport routes and the other jumpships will be moving more slowly with stuff that doesn’t need life support.”

“Lot of naval officers knew about them-they may not be that secret.”

“No, but the Dracs can’t have their forces everywhere, so we should be safe.”

“Should be. I’m going to be hearing that a lot, aren’t I.”

“Yep, Admiral, yes you are. Godspeed.”

Moments later, the screen was blank, and Angela was starting to give orders. Orders to abandon the world she had chosen for her retirement.

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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #2 on: 11 September 2018, 02:55:04 »
Nice. It's always interesting to see something being done with the Outworld Wastes.
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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #3 on: 11 September 2018, 03:51:12 »
Nice. It's always interesting to see something being done with the Outworld Wastes.
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« Reply #4 on: 11 September 2018, 06:09:39 »
Oooh vas ist das! Off to a good and interesting start!
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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #5 on: 11 September 2018, 07:20:03 »
Wow, this looks pretty interesting, please continue
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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #6 on: 11 September 2018, 09:11:05 »
Good read! Please continue  :thumbsup:

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« Reply #7 on: 11 September 2018, 12:40:32 »
Ping
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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #8 on: 11 September 2018, 13:55:50 »
The Jocasta Cameron educational center was like most major schools on Inglesmond. Transport made getting too and from the school easy, so while it was boarding school, the students were easily able to return home on the weekends, if they wanted to. From 11 to 17, almost 4500 students called the school home.

But not now. Cecelia was 16, and she had been handed off 12 11 year olds as they were put on a bus heading to the north of the center.

“Cecelia, what’s happening? They even took Mr. Muffins!” one of the kids said.

Oh God, not Mr. Muffins. The Cat got into everything. Why couldn’t the school just mandate hamsters only?

Then their bus, the first in the long line of buses holding every student and teacher, crested the ridge and Cecelia’s brain slithered to a halt as she saw the huge bulk of the  dropships, the ground of the plain seared and melted. There were other buses there, and vtols landing and disbursing other people, some students, some looking like they were from the nearby cities.

This is a nature preserve, how can they be landing… Then she thought about the battle earlier that year. We won it, so what was…

“Attention students!” the bus speakers were blaring. “By order of the president, we are evacuating Inglesmond for a temporary period. You will be boarding the Heavy 23 in the following order…”

“We’re going? But what about mom?”

“Are we going to earth?”

“What about vacation?”

“Yay! We’re going to space!”

The kids were talking, some nervous, others excited.

But they were little kids, and most of the proctors had been told to avoid telling them too much about the fire consuming the Hegemony.

Finally, when it was their turn, Cecelia grabbed the sleeve of the rating guiding them. “What about the pets, our luggage, where are we going!” she said.

“Pets are in deep sleep—can’t risk it for people, there’s enough room, you’ll have your clothing provided, and Wynn’s Roost.”

Cecelia had wanted to be a pilot, and she knew astrography. “That’s…that’s over twenty jumps away.”

“Well, it’ll be a long trip—but we’ve got a partial circuit set up. You’re not going to have much fun, not with all those jumps, so make certain everyone has a barf bag. Now get your kids and get them on board.”

Cecelia didn’t say anything, but slowly turned pale. They’re coming back. The Kuritans, and nobody thinks we can protect ourselves. You didn’t evacuate kids if you thought the other side was just going to ask for surrender, or bomb a few factories. Not all the way out to the Periphery.


William watched as the teenager helped shepherd the kids towards the dropship. They had the circuit set up, mostly, and the first group, mostly children and vital workers were leaving tonight. Ten Starlords, millions of people crammed into short-term bays… They’d get more once the shipyards finished with the habitation pods, really 100,000 ton jump capable stations holding nothing but people and cargo.

God knew how long it would hold. According to Scuttlebutt, part of it was Terra calling in every favor they had, but the House Lords were grabbing every ship they had. Things were going to get a lot slower before too long, but that was another reason for the membership of the first lifts— the children of Inglesmond, and the absolutely vital professionals. Even if nobody else got out, it was enough to preserve the memory of their world…

The Klaxon’s sounded, as William turned to start ordering the buses and bystanders back to a safe distance—dropships kicked up one hell of a fuss when they took off.


2789


“Colonel Bradley.”

“Director Blake,” Bradley said. He wasn’t entirely certain why Jerome Blake was contacting him,but well. “Congratulations on your securing of Terra.”

“Yes.” Blake didn’t look overly happy. “The birthplace of mankind must be secured—no matter the cost, and in this case, the cost was high. I have essentially abandoned the rest of the Hegemony. Which is why I’ve contacted you.”

“A regimental combat team can do little about that.”

“More than you think. You’ve heard of Inglesmond’s movements?”

Bradley nodded. He had been surprised that the Draconis Combine was letting them go, but then Inglesmond had moved all of their defenses back to their homeworld, essentially giving up any attempts to protect the rest of the province, while other worlds appeared to be joining in the exodus,with varying degrees of preparation.

Minoru probably assumes they’re not taking the factories with them.

“They’re heading for the Outworld’s Alliance.”

“Yes, the far provinces, but…” Blake hesitated. “The House Lords are going to burn the Inner Sphere down, and before they end, I expect they’ll be looking for any resources they can find, to say nothing of pirates. It’s already as bad as it was during the Reunification War, and I expect it’s going to only get worse.”

“We have an arrangement with Minoru—”

“But not with his son. For that matter, what happens if things get more desperate for either side?  You will not be allowed to remain as you are—unless you leave.”

“To Wynn’s Roost?”

“Yes. They have a military, but they’ll be stretched to the brink—millions of refugees will bring pirates and raiders and that presumes the Houses won’t attack them.”

Bradley had doubts about that. The far provinces of the Outworlds Alliance were far enough away that any serious redeployment of forces would leave the sending power vulnerable to their enemies.

Pirates on the other hand—more than a few nuclear stockpiles had gone missing and pirates wouldn’t care about house retaliation, not out there. But…

“The Kuritan’s might not take it well if we leave.”

“They are already involved in a war with everyone else in the Sphere,” Blake said. “I doubt they’ll want to add Comstar to that list, and in any case, I’ll sweeten the pot for them. Beside, it’s not like you’ll be taking service with their enemies. You’re merely leaving on a 10 year contract to protect HPG units in the Outworlds Alliance and other duties as “the legitimate government of Wynn’s Roost” requests. After that…”

Bradley frowned, thinking.

Then Blake used his ultimate weapon. “Colonel. If there’s anything left of the old Star League, it’s us. You can’t save the Hegemony, and the House Lords killed the Star League. But you can at least save some of the people who aren’t looting the corpse.”

Bradley shook his head. “We’ll have to discuss this, Director. I’ll get back in touch when we have a decision.”

“Don’t wait too long. There’s a limited window of opportunity here.”






Cecelia put the bag up to her mouth again as the ship jumped. Not that she had anything in her belly too throw up. Not any more. The Mammoth had been loaded, and then overloaded, so many people that she could barely move. So many people that some had to be sedated. For a moment, Cecelia had feared that they were being sent to die—that it was some cruel trick, because there was no way the dropship’s life support could continue to maintain them.

But they hadn’t stayed with one jumpship, instead being transferred between jumpships, each one ready to jump. Cecelia had traveled once as a younger child, but those jumps had been slow, and anyone who was feeling uncomfortable had been given drugs.

Now there were no drugs, and “comfort” was a barf bag and a blared jump alarm giving you enough time to get it over your mouth.

“Make it stop!” wailed one of the children. Cecelia awkwardly patted the child on her shoulder, checking to make certain that everyone was strapped to the wall. None of the kids had ever experienced zero-G before and the rating had warned them all—if they were floating away from the wall and the ship went under drive, broken bones would be the least of their worries.

In fact it—discontinuity—Cecelia tried to throw up on a completely empty stomach. God, no more, please…

And evidently, God was listening.

“All hands, all hands. This is the captain. After just over a week and twenty jumps, we’ve arrived at our destination. Welcome to Wynn’s Roost, a literally stinking paradise. We’ll be grounding in about a day, whereupon you’ll all be given shelter. I will have to see if anything broke, because in a week—I get to do twenty jumps back to the Inner Sphere, so if you’re upset about all the barfing, I don’t want to hear it.”






And here we are, scavenging the battlefields. Captain Steven Richards had been part of the SLDF—an engineer to be precise. He helped build the space stations that kept the fleet running, when they weren’t demanding he patch their ships up. And during the Amaris war, he’d patched more than his fair share of ships up—but not all of them. Some were too badly damaged, so they were just stripped for parts and bodies, and left until the SLDF could get back to properly repairing or disposing of them.

But now there wasn’t an SLDF and as part of the Inglesmond defense force, he’d provided all the information to the government, and now had some final orders.

“Repair any ships that can be transportable—but those that can’t, even if they might be repaired, blow them in place.” After all, Richards wasn’t the only man who knew where these ships were located, and even if they didn’t have the time to fix them, a house might. So they had to be destroyed before they could be turned against the people they’d been intended to defend.

Right now, a pair of Volga class transports had jumped out, after work to repair their cores, although most everything else looked wrecked. They’d be years refitting, and in the old days, would simply be scrapped. Another Volga had been stripped of everything else before it had been destroyed. There had been other finds, all of which were in terrible condition—by the end of the Civil War, ships that were merely “half” smashed were simply patched up and put back into combat. A Luxor with the front fifth of the ship blown off, a Potemkin that had suffered multiple internal explosions that had, by a miracle, left its jump core repairable. Several Lolas, the survival of the ship attesting to its rugged construction—most smaller ships had been destroyed, not damaged.

And this.

“It can jump?” Richards asked his aide as he stared at the ravaged form of the Admiral Willis. A McKenna. Or at least what was left of one. Both radiating fins were gone, the gun decks were tangled wreckage, and honestly, Richards wondered if it would ever be usable again, or if they should just put it out of its misery.

“Jump yes. Use a transit drive? Not without a lot of work.” The other engineer gestured at the stress fractures highlighted on the readout. “Fire the guns, even the ones that aren’t destroyed? Not unless you want to fly them off the superstructure. Oh, and the crew? They’ll be in suits the whole time—life system is gone, and we’ll have to live in a jumpship.”

“But it can jump.” Richard stared at his subordinate. “You know Tom and his ideas about never leaving anything behind. I don’t to find out it misjumped and everyone died because he talked himself into thinking things were better than they were.”

“It’ll jump. Parts are going to fall off, but It’ll jump. But… Sir, why are we nuking the other ships? We could always come back later and try to get them working.”

“Because sooner or later the house lords are going to find out about these places. Nuking the ships may piss them off, but they won’t be looking for where destroyed ships went, like the ones we’re taking right now.”

And because they deserve better than to be put in the service of monsters.

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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #9 on: 11 September 2018, 18:30:06 »
Definitely interesting!   More please! 8)

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« Reply #10 on: 11 September 2018, 19:19:30 »
man this is good.  more please

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« Reply #11 on: 11 September 2018, 20:05:54 »
“You did not consult with the Alliance government before accepting these refugees,” David Avellar told Councilwoman Alysa Hebert.

The Wynn’s Roost representative didn’t look overly intimidated. “The Alliance has the organization of a particularly lazy Amoeba.” She sipped from the cup of tea. “If we had put it to a vote, then half the delegates would say no, the other half wouldn’t know what to do, and in some quantum phenomena, yet a third group would appear out of thin air. The government of Wynn’s Roost and some surrounding states have decided to accept a limited number of refugees.”

“Limited? I’ve had reports of warships, and millions of people in transit.”

“Compared to how many are dying in the Inner Sphere Right now? Limited.”

Granted, where the hell are we going to put them… There were tens of millions, maybe hundreds heading out, packed into dropships. Inglesmond had been better planned, but then Comstar had joined in, and well, things were escalating. Wynn’s Roost couldn’t take them all, but some of their neighbors were agreeing as well—not the least because some of those ships were bringing precious, precious, industrial production with them.

Which might just be enough to keep things flying, but even so, they were taking in millions of people and Wynn’s Roost had a population of just over 80 million citizens. There were some concerns about being overwhelmed, but on the other hand, at least they were getting fellow citizens of the Hegemony.

Or former citizens of the Hegemony. Alysa felt an all too familiar pang. Even if she had never expected to go back, to make the Roost her home… The Hegemony had always been there, and now it was gone.

And you’ll be  damn-all help, she thought, staring at the President of the Alliance. She’d been attending the circus that had constituted the Parliament. Some of the representatives wanted to deindustrialize because somehow that would make the bad people go away. They hadn’t even bothered trying to pass anything to do with the collapse of the currency, with some worlds evidently thinking barter would be just hunky-dory.

Right now, as far as Alsya was concerned, the best use for the Sphere-ward parts of the Alliance, was hopefully to give the bloody Kuritan’s something to gobble up.

“Final point. Mercenaries.” Alysa gestured at the map of the Alliance. “There has been some harassment.”

“The Outworld Alliance does not permit the use of Mercenaries. Full Stop.”

“Wynn’s Roost is seeking to employ soldiers under a long-term contract to better stabilize those areas that the Alliance cannot assist with.”

“The Parliament was firm—and you cannot get the votes to overturn that prohibition.”

“Oh for God’s sake, David! I couldn’t get the votes to declare that the sun is shining!” Alysa’s frustration boiled over. “These aren’t regular mercs—half of them are units that decided they didn’t want to get nuked into oblivion. There will be more—God! Anyone with eyes can see what is happening in the Inner Sphere. This isn’t like some little battle, this isn’t even like the Amaris war or the Reunification War—this is worse. They’re burning entire cities just so the other side can’t hold them, and it’s going to get worse.” Alysa grabbed for her tea and took a drink. “And those units are coming out here with their dependents and likely charges of deserting in the face of the enemy—they can’t go back home, and do you know what we call mercenaries who have no funds to repair their ships or feed their dependents? We call them pirates, because they’re not going to sink their dropships in the ocean and take up a peaceful life of selling handmade Omniss furniture. If for no other reason than to keep them from going pirate, we’re hiring them. You can call it enlisting with our militia, or being hired for private security or hell, parade duty, but the harassment needs to stop, or things will escalate.”

“And how far?” David asked. It wasn’t threatening, but curious.

“This stays in the room?”

“Yes.”

“In a few years, the colonies founded by the Hegemony, the citizens coming to our worlds—they may be all that’s left of the Hegemony. So the answer, President Avellar, is as far as we need to escalate.”



“Once we return the jumpships Comstar has loaned to us, we’ll be talking about having approximately 100 hulls—most Merchants and invaders, with a smaller mix of Star Lords and Monoliths.” Admiral Conner frowned as she looked at her audience.

“That’s… We can use that to help keep the rest of the Traders Domain intact, President Richard Wilkins said.

“What about our own world?” One of his councilors muttered. Usually, the government was more of a management service than actual government. The SLDF kept things calm and in that environment, most trade was conducted with the Inner Sphere without going through the nominal capital of the Domain.

“Usually” had left the building before Cameron’s corpse had finished twitching.

“We have at least a partial industrial—”

“We have a complete meltdown. Inflation has been running at nearly 50 percent and it’s only going to get worse. Not to mention that we also have just over 20 million people grounded on world right now—1/5th of our total population.

“We’re building shel—”

“And are we to just become a minority in our own lands?”

“I wasn’t aware that helping fellow Hegemony citizens counted as becoming a minori—” The meeting dissolved into Chaos. Conner looked over to Wilkins, but the president remained silent. Finally, after the argument had settled down, nobody having said anythingt that hadn’t been said many times before, he tapped his hand on the table to gain their attention.

“Right now, those refugees are a major problem, and yes, they are going to stress us, but tell me, Wilma—how many shipments of refined metals have you sent back to the Inner Sphere?”

“You know.”

“I do. None. Half of our factories are dependent on tools from the Inner Sphere, tools that are also coming with the refugees. The refugees are bringing enough drop and jumpships that we can maintain the Domain as an integrated economic body—which we will need to do.” He gestured at the map. “Without the trade from the Inner Sphere, we need to develop9 our own trade, and that means populations large enough to sustain both the markets and the industry. It will be… risky, even with the refugees, even if the largest estimates are true and we take on half a billion or so over the next generation. The other alternative is to lose our industry, lose our population, even as we’re being picked over by scavengers.” He paused. “Admiral Conner—I know it’s not your specialty, but how many ground forces can you bring to protect us?”

“Counting the Light Horse? Between them and the Inglsemond Militia that has come with us, about nine regiments of battlemechs, of mixed quality. We’ve got enough pilot refugees and security forces from Wynn’s Roost to raise maybe two to three more regiments, but I’d suggest not deploying them to any Free Worlds Colonies—they have New Dallas Refugees.”

“This still doesn’t solve the problem of housing all of these people—how are we going house them?”

“We’ll be putting them on other colony worlds for one thing. Renorsal is fairly cool, a bit like Tharkad in that respect, and the DOME did a good deal of seeding—and most importantly, it’s stable. We won’t lose the world if we lose the atmospheric processors.”

“It’s also a world owned by the Federated Suns, whatever the papers say. They’ve got about 2 and a half million people.” Wilma muttered. “What are they doing to say?”

“Not a hell of a lot,” Wilkin’s said. “Most of their managers and high level engineers are gone. From what we’ve heard, their commercial electronics factories are all but shut down and nobody has been paid in a month. They have warehouses full of products, but oh right, the security forces have also decamped. I had some union reps who came here just for the purposes of demanding help from the “Lawful leaders of the province.””

“Did they ask Alpheratz for help?”

“Yes. No word about how much hand crafted furniture they’re going to get.”

There was no humor in the laughter that ran through the room.

“So they’re desperate and we’re going to help them. We need those factories, to say nothing of what we’re going to do with the workmech production line. We may have to skimp on military components for now, but the ability to replace losses may be the difference between survival and destruction.”

“They don’t have any fusion power plant factories—”

“One will be built here. We’re excavating the new sites for it, and most of the gear from Inglesmond is already being set up.”

“And what happens when they’re no longer desperate?” a voice asked.

“They’ll be outnumbered by Hegemony citizens—but really, who would you prefer to go with, the ones who saved you, or the nation and companies that left you to die?” Wilkins glanced at the admiral. And by that time, maybe they’ll be amiable to our decision to declare the founding of a new Hegemony. But first we have to survive.

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« Reply #12 on: 12 September 2018, 00:41:59 »
More interesting than the first exodus.
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« Reply #13 on: 12 September 2018, 06:10:25 »
So we've got millions heading into the Outworlds reaches to put down roots.  Wynn's roost is far enough away and there's a lot of basically unoccupied or abandoned systems there that could be useful.  The Combine is far too busy gut punching the Suns and Lyrans whilst being kneed in the face to do too much about it but its not got the security of distance that Kerensky's lot had.  But instead theres a LOT more useful systems within fairly easy reach.

The hard part will be surviving the next few years intact, but you've got the Outworlds alliance in the way although its no buffer at all considering the Outworlds militia was all but nonexistent and only the AAC was in fighting shape.

Darn interesting stuff and well written, looking forwards to seeing where this goes :)
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« Reply #14 on: 12 September 2018, 07:51:28 »
Great story so far.
Yeah, I agree about the future difficulties. Basically because they bring production lines with them, and that turns them into a suitable target, even if not as massive as a shipyard.

Thebammoubtnof troops also sit some what difficult with me. There seem to be a lot of them. 9 regiments? Wow. That is more than most marches have...

Looking forward to see how this develops!

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« Reply #15 on: 12 September 2018, 19:03:55 »
ohhh modified workmechs……..I love it.  if they can stay in the back ground until the second SW.  they will have a nice force.  when they are not needed for combat, they can be training mechs, and building infrastructure.   

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« Reply #16 on: 13 September 2018, 18:07:16 »
Great story so far. Hope to see it continue!
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« Reply #17 on: 14 September 2018, 07:10:12 »
Time and space... and maybe not enough of either.  Great story so far!
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« Reply #18 on: 14 September 2018, 14:54:35 »
Renorsal, 2790


I can’t believe that it’s not winter, Cecelia thought. Renorsal was a cold world, but at least its air was crisp and clean. When they’d decided to transfer Cecelia’s parents to the new world, she’d been only slightly unhappy. But even so, it was cold. The livable belt was about as cold as the Canadian north on old Terra, and while the temperature was rising—slowly, the world would always be chilly.


But dad’s old job as a community planner, despite his protests that he spent more time working out dog-runs and yard diminsions, had made him a candidate to plan out New London.

The 223rd “New London” in the universe. Cecelia had checked. But right now she was waiting for her interview. Finally, the man came into her room, and Cecelia felt her back stiffen. She’d thought she was going to get talked to by a militia officer—but the man in front of her was wearing the insignia of the Eridani Light Horse.

“We got your test results back and congrats, you qualify.” He said. “But why?”

“Sir?”

“You never once, before you came here, gave any evidence of wanting to join the military. Your parents, well, yes, things are tough now, but hopefully, in a few years time, you’ll be able to live in a nice house, maybe go to college, and do everything you wanted to do in the first place. Nobody’s starving, and the economy is hopefully going to get better. So why?”

“You saw Inglesmond?” Cecelia asked.

“Yeah. Not as many dead as there might have been.”

“But still…” Over a billion. Even without the orbital yards, the Draconis Combine had wanted to make certain that nothing was left for their enemies, and the Free Worlds League and Lyrans had the same desire. By the time their fight had ended, the world was a ruin, many of those who had survived dying in the aftermath.

“So you want vengeance?”

“No.”

“Then what?”

“I want to make certain it doesn’t happen here.”

“Ah,” he said, and leaned forward. “Well, you’ve passed the first test. You wouldn’t believe how many people come in here expecting that we’re going to go on a crusade to avenge their worlds.” He paused. “You have any problems working with people who came from the Houses?”

“No.” If they’re living here, they probably aren’t loyalists…

“Good. We’ve been directed to start putting together units established from refugees and inhabitants of the Traders Domain and any affiliated systems. We can’t break up already existing units, but ultimately, we expect that even they will be mostly made up of locals—but that’s for the future. Your grades are high, your tests say good things, and you might be able to make the grade—but it will be hard, and understand this—there’s every chance that you will end up dead. Still on board?”

“Yes, sir.”

“Sign your life away here,” he said.

Without hesitating (because she might back out), Cecelia did so.

“Congratulations, Trainee. You have four days to say good bye, and then you’re shipping out for training.”





Wynn’s Roost.


“You want to build Toro’s?” The plant manager stared at Mitchel like he’d taken leave of his senses. “Why?”

“One, it’s simple. The Toro’s started out with a lower tech base, so the design has fewer bells and whistles. More reliable, cheaper. Two, it’s a periphery design, and we can use that to differentiate our militia forces from Inner Sphere units. Three, we need to make friends and I’m expecting the Concordat might enjoy having one of their signature mechs back in service.  Since the lines we were building on Inglesmond were type standardized for light and medium frames…”

“Mmph. Well the production line is set up for light and medium mechs…” The manager looked over at the mountain. Trucks were moving in a non-stop stream as the assembly buildings were covered in slabs of ferrocrete, which would then be covered by soil. They couldn’t put every factory under a mountain, but they could certainly make it difficult for anyone without strategic WMDs to destroy one. Even with that, a near miss wouldn’t be enough. You’d have to hit them directly.

“We can start production in…” The manager frowned. “Maybe four months— work will continue, but you’ll get your first mech in six months—as long as we can get the material.”

“You will,” Mitchel said. “In fact, my next stop is our fusion production facility.” And after that, the orbital endosteel and ferro fibrous fabrication centers. But those wouldn’t be for Toro’s. It would be years, if ever, before they could make enough of the advanced materials to refit every mech. For now, they needed quantity. Quantity enough to replace the forces lost fighting pirates. Quantity enough to convince the Dracs and Feddies that there were easier targets for their looting.

Mitchel felt a pang. Many of those “easier targets” would be in the surrounding Outworlds Alliance, and their citizens deserved it no more than those in Trader’s Domain.

He who would defend everything, defends nothing. With that cheery thought, Mitchel turned to go back to his car.

Quality could wait.

The Pirate War

A conflict that largely burned from 2780 to 2825, the Pirate War was not a war— it was a thousand skirmishes against renegade units fleeing the Inner Sphere. In some cases, the Traders Domain (which would not become the Hegemony officially until 2850), solved the problem by the simple expedient of hiring the potential pirates, many of whom were simply attempting to escape a conflict in which death by nuclear or biological horror was becoming an increasingly certain fate.

But other units were fleeing for reasons that made taking them on impossible, such as crimes that were unforgivable even in the context of the succession wars. In other cases, they desired to conquer their own realm, or were simply unwilling to accept an agreement where they were unable to plunder at will. The fact that many of these units had decamped from the Inner Sphere with nuclear or biological weapons made them pose a threat all out of proportion to their size.

Wynns Roost itself was more or less immune to most severe attacks, given that it had a Samarkand Carrier and Potemkin tranport cruiser in orbit at all times, although the 2804 raid saw nearly 7,000 civilians killed when Roger’s Ravagers used a nuclear demolition charge as part of an attempt to blackmail the defenders into allowing them to leave with impunity.

The rest of the Traders Domain endured a grueling era of attacks, sometimes several waves coming in close sequence. With most of the smaller worlds evacuated, in favor of the most habitable worlds, pirate raids were not so much marked by defeats as a slow, grinding rate of loss that forced the military of the domain to scale back their technological advancement restricting their advanced battlemechs and fighters to a few core regiments that were only deployed for vital operations.

Worse, worlds outside of the Domain suffered from pirates who were unwilling to test the Domain—and yet, unless the Traders Domain wished to accept the growth of pirate realms on its borders (or accept Draconis Combine or Outworlds Alliance movement into those borders), it was forced to launch raids, as well as eventually provide military and economic assistance for some of those worlds. Blommestein and Onverwacht were both examples of worlds that received assistance, slowing their slide into technological collapse and incidentally, priming their populations to accept the later offers of Membership in the Hegemony. Indeed, however draining and damaging the Pirate War had been, it had the benefit of priming most members of the other distant provinces of the Outworlds Alliance to accept the offers to join the Hegemony.

The Pirate War, in combination with the total war being waged in teh Inner Sphere, had another impact on the Hegemony—to the present day, all Hegemony defense industries are hardened to face potential aggressors, and are located quite some distance from civilian cities and housing, with rail or air transport being used to move workers to and from their place of employment. Perhaps the best example of this is the Borstein Electronics facility on Wynn’s Roost, a facility which produces nearly 50 percent of all the fusion engines used in vehicles and mechs in the Hegemony—and is, as of 3025, located under a mountain range, in a facility that is little short of an ancient Castle Brian in terms of impregnability.

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« Reply #19 on: 14 September 2018, 18:43:25 »
looking good.

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« Reply #20 on: 15 September 2018, 02:24:13 »
Makes sense to me!

Thanks for sharing
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« Reply #21 on: 15 September 2018, 19:39:15 »
This is a great story, good job.

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« Reply #22 on: 16 September 2018, 03:52:07 »
Great! I looked in Sarna.net and it seems that Wynn's roost is not as successful as pointed here. Nice alternative storyline. I like you wanting to build Toros. It is one of my favourite lightnmechs. Like the good design that.mixes Panther and Valkyrie firepowers in a sensible package.

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« Reply #23 on: 16 September 2018, 04:54:17 »
Darn good update :D
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« Reply #24 on: 16 September 2018, 19:21:05 »
Toro is a good trooper mech about the only change I would look at is dropping the PPC for LL and adding Jump Jets for increased mobility.  But it would be nice to offer as part of trade package to the TC - Toro's

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« Reply #25 on: 16 September 2018, 19:26:21 »
they are going to have walk a fine line were one of the major powers dose not focus enough firepower to turn their planets into glass. 

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« Reply #26 on: 16 September 2018, 19:27:28 »
If you're willing to mod the design, another option would be to drop one of the LRM-5s (and maybe a half ton of armor) for jump jets.  That would match the Kuritan Shadow Hawk for weapons (if not heat sinks).

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« Reply #27 on: 16 September 2018, 21:18:34 »
This reminds me a lot of a story by Truetanker, only it was a colony group escaping from the Rim Worlds Republic as Kerensky was preparing to conquer it before returning to the Hegemony.

I like it so far Korzon, I'm just wondering if you're going to follow the 'formula' - take advantage of Primitive designs (like the Rook) to build up the HAF or exo-skeletons to create a battlearmor.  It's becoming a formula, actually.  Come to think of it, I haven't seen any armor like the Scorpion so far, either.  Enough of those is a major deterrent all by itself.  Just don't forget to use trailers, the extra weight assigned to carry LRM artillery could be cool.
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« Reply #28 on: 17 September 2018, 13:01:01 »
This reminds me a lot of a story by Truetanker, only it was a colony group escaping from the Rim Worlds Republic as Kerensky was preparing to conquer it before returning to the Hegemony.

I like it so far Korzon, I'm just wondering if you're going to follow the 'formula' - take advantage of Primitive designs (like the Rook) to build up the HAF or exo-skeletons to create a battlearmor.  It's becoming a formula, actually.  Come to think of it, I haven't seen any armor like the Scorpion so far, either.  Enough of those is a major deterrent all by itself.  Just don't forget to use trailers, the extra weight assigned to carry LRM artillery could be cool.

No BA, at leat not until the Clan's point the way. While in some ways the hegemony tech base is higher, they have a smaller population basis than most of the IS (500 million-1 billion in the exodus, coupled with generous immigration provisions, plus the arleady existing population still gives them fewer people than most core provinces in the IS. total pop is somewhere in line, by 3130 with the Marian's ), which means that they have to focus on what works, and be very careful where they apportion their R&D.  Much of their focus is on exploring worlds away from the IS, and that's where a lot of money goes in.  they don't have a lot of money to spend on something that, before the clans prove it can be done, looks like a dead end path of development.

Once the Clan War starts and once they ally with the WOB (somewhat different than in canon, note) that changes.

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« Reply #29 on: 17 September 2018, 19:03:58 »
No BA, at leat not until the Clan's point the way. While in some ways the hegemony tech base is higher, they have a smaller population basis than most of the IS (500 million-1 billion in the exodus, coupled with generous immigration provisions, plus the arleady existing population still gives them fewer people than most core provinces in the IS. total pop is somewhere in line, by 3130 with the Marian's ), which means that they have to focus on what works, and be very careful where they apportion their R&D.  Much of their focus is on exploring worlds away from the IS, and that's where a lot of money goes in.  they don't have a lot of money to spend on something that, before the clans prove it can be done, looks like a dead end path of development.

Once the Clan War starts and once they ally with the WOB (somewhat different than in canon, note) that changes.

I just can not wait for more

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« Reply #30 on: 18 September 2018, 10:58:53 »


Once the Clan War starts and once they ally with the WOB (somewhat different than in canon, note) that changes.

Quite a lot different, unless you want a race between the Regulans and Ghost Bears to completely obliterate the Hegemony as the epilogue.
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« Reply #31 on: 18 September 2018, 11:38:04 »
I thinking maybe WOB in this setting might be Comstar hidden Military Arm
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« Reply #32 on: 18 September 2018, 11:50:26 »
I thinking maybe WOB in this setting might be Comstar hidden Military Arm

Or perhaps in this 'verse, the WOB is made of the progressives and reformists, while Comstar consists of the hardliner reactionary conservatives.

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« Reply #33 on: 18 September 2018, 13:15:43 »
Or perhaps in this 'verse, the WOB is made of the progressives and reformists, while Comstar consists of the hardliner reactionary conservatives.

Hmm... what if Myndo Waterly had been properly paranoid enough to take precautions against Focht not wanting anything to do with her plans - precautions that ended with Focht either dead or on the run. I can´t help but think that, in this case, much of the ComGuards would defect, either to go independent or follow Focht depending on if he survived. They would basically go "screw all this mystical toaster cult stuff, our job is to protect the Inner Sphere from the Clans, no matter what that insane woman on Terra says".
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« Reply #34 on: 18 September 2018, 14:09:52 »
As a hint and a spoiler, it's the Word of Blake--  and one of Blakes greatest failures as having to scale back operation SILVER SHIELD to just cover Terra. Also, many of the members of WOB are descendants of refugees from worlds such as New Dallas and Lone Star.
And they *don't* consider the Clans to be their greatest enemy.

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« Reply #35 on: 18 September 2018, 14:49:43 »
As a hint and a spoiler, it's the Word of Blake--  and one of Blakes greatest failures as having to scale back operation SILVER SHIELD to just cover Terra. Also, many of the members of WOB are descendants of refugees from worlds such as New Dallas and Lone Star.
And they *don't* consider the Clans to be their greatest enemy.

Oooh... that sounds promising. Looking forward to reading all about it!
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« Reply #36 on: 18 September 2018, 15:41:21 »
As a hint and a spoiler, it's the Word of Blake--  and one of Blakes greatest failures as having to scale back operation SILVER SHIELD to just cover Terra. Also, many of the members of WOB are descendants of refugees from worlds such as New Dallas and Lone Star.
And they *don't* consider the Clans to be their greatest enemy.
Oh. OOOOOHHHHH.

If this means what I think it means, I will be severely disappointed.

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« Reply #37 on: 19 September 2018, 01:11:15 »
What is it you think it means?

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« Reply #38 on: 19 September 2018, 03:24:59 »
Comstar is not a religion—that is perhaps the single biggest point that many people fail to understand. The mediation exercises, the monologues—those are outward examples of what it is— a Philosophy, one based on reverence for the thing that elevated mankind from the slime—the mind and the technology that rose from it.

The idea that Blake and his successors would try to create some cargo cult style religion was ridiculous from the outset—rather, Comstar used its increasing control over communications and teaching to start to spread the idea that technology was a holy responsibility—whether Christan, Muslim or any other faith, technology was the outward example of the blessings conferred upon mankind—and its misuse thus the highest of sins.

Ironically, many of the House Lords, especially towards the end of the Second Succession War, aided this new philosophy— the cataclysmic conflicts had gained them very little, even the “winners” needing decades to recover from their victories. The free use of WMD’s had not gained victory—merely made the stalemate more costly. Thus, it was not simply technicians that found comstar’s views attractive, but many of the rising military castes, who were able to merge the moral disdain for the butcheries of the past with a quite pragmatic embracing of a doctrine that would make the Battlemech, not the warship or nuclear warhead, the king of the battlefield.



However, within Comstar, there was little love lost for the House Lords. Most of the Comstar membership came from Terra or the ravaged worlds of the former Hegemony, such as Inglesmond (reduced from 6 billion to one billion by 3025), while other refugees from the lifeless worlds of Lone Star or New Dallas found themselves providing the seed population for the hidden worlds— seed populations with every reason to despise the rapacious warlords of the Inner Sphere.

Combined with this was the fact that few leading scions of society became members of comstar. Stripped of their ritual, most people saw them as glorified phone techs, a view that Comstar took pains to embrace. Those who joined Comstar were thus more likely to cvome from the lower socioeconomic levels, where promises of education and employment were very attractive—which led to a growing number of members who came from places where the social order was whatever the local bandit king said it was, or alternatively areas like the Outback where, the House Lord seemed singularly uninterested in his people.



For much of its history, Comstar engaged in a delicate balancing act, always working to prevent anyone from gaining a dominant role, with debates in the First Circuit between the conservatives (keep things as they were), the radicals (encourage conflict, and pick up the pieces), and the progressives (encourage talks in the hope of establishing some successor state to the Star League). A much larger group simply focused on keeping the HPGs running on time.



The WOB:



The WOB was made up of a membership that included many individuals who traced their linage to the dead worlds of the former Hegemony, or those worlds that while still surviving, had seen their glory days vanish in fusion fireballs. For much of its history, the WOB was more of a social club than anything else—New Dallas themed diners and museums provided social gathering spots and rituals of remembrance  allowed for communal mourning, such as the rituals surrounding the “Day of the Last Sunset” for each dead world, said rituals occurring on the anniversary of Comstar listing the world as dead or dying.

A common theme of the WOB was that had Kerensky remained, then SILVER SHIELD could have protected the Hegemony, a position most historians felt was wildly over optimistic. None the less, going to war over it just wasn’t on, so the WOB continued to grow, as children moved into the position of their parents.

The two factors that helped turn the WOB into a true force was the formation of the Federated Commonwealth and the Clan invasion.

The FC was a dreadful blow to the Rosy predictions that mass war was a thing of the past, and the Fourth Succession war came far closer to the mass movements of the Second War than it did the skirmishes of the third. The WOB started to coalesce around a new leadership group that posed the simple question: If it was a choice between using WMD’s and surrendering, what would the Draconis Combine do?  This leadership warned that the FC was a sign that the Inner Sphere was once again moving to large states that were capable of mass warfare, and still dreamed of dominating their fellows—total war was sure to follow, leading to another cycle of decline and fall.

The solution to that would be to establish a new state, under the benevolent leadership of Comstar, powerful enough to prevent the house lords from carrying out their genocidal goals.

Before anything could be done the Clan Invasion started, and the WOB had more pressing concerns.



The Clan Conflict has been discussed elsewhere (no it hasn’t, but I haven’t finished that part yet :) ), but the most important factor is that the vast majority of Comstar’s Soldiers were part of the WOB or at least sympathetic to its cause. While the desperate drive to match the Clan battlemechs and other advanced weapons saw the development of the predecessors of the weapons that would later so change the nature of war.

But the WOB found its mindset hardened by how quickly, the Inner Sphere lords fell back into old patterns—the Truce was not a Treaty and yet there were already raids and counter raids.  The First Whitting Conference gave WOB some hope, but it was quickly disabused as it became plain that there was little interest in a true league, merely a tool to attack the clans.   The calls for the restoration of a state along the old borders of the Hegemony a “Light in these dark times” as the leader known as the master stated in one of his speeches had grown, and the social clubs were starting to look more like revolutionary cells on many former Hegemony worlds.  The FC civil war, coupled with the use of (admittedly tactical) nuclear weapons convinced many that another sphere-wide collapse was near, this time with the Clan’s lurking on the sides. A massive delegation was dispatched to the Fourth Whitting Conference in hopes that a combination of gifts and threats could rebuild the fragmenting league.

That did not work, and the rest, as they say, is history.







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« Reply #39 on: 19 September 2018, 05:44:23 »
Nice!
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« Reply #40 on: 22 September 2018, 02:01:22 »
Immigratio and the Hegemony: The HIS.


The Hegemony, even after the first surge of the exodus, continued to encourage immigration. More people meant more consumers, more workers, a larger, more stable population base.

However, it also brought the risk of ethnic and political conflict to the Hegemony. Ironically, too much immigration would merely import the same stresses tearing the Inner Sphere apart.


The Hegemony Immigration Service, established in 2850 (though other groups had carried out much the same service in previous years) was focused on avoiding these issues. Immigrants were divided into three categories—individuals from former Hegemony worlds, “non affiliated immigrants” or those from states not currently party to the Succession Wars and refugees hailing from the Inner Sphere powers.

The first group was generally granted preference, with a trickle of survivors from worlds as diverse as New Dallas and Lone Star, often second generation survivors, born in refugee camps or on other worlds.  These groups most often fully supported the Hegemony.

The second group was mostly from the Outworlds Alliance or other independent periphery worlds. In many cases, this produced a self-fulfilling prophecy, where the most wealthy fled the pirate raids and collapse of infrastructure, making it harder for the remaining population to support their worlds, forcing them to also leave. Between 2850 and 2925, this process also inflicted a severe “brain drain” on the Outworlds Alliance, as those who were frustrated with the ineffectual government left to find shelter on the raw worlds of the Outworld’s Hegemony.


The last group was the smallest, but bulked largest in the worries of the OH.  Many citizens carried their old hatreds, and ethnic conflict, while never uncontrollable, remained a thorn in the side of the Hegemony.  The 2853 riots, sparked by dueling Draconis Combine and Federated Suns supporters, led to nearly 2,000 dead and millions of C-bills of damage, for example.

In response, the HIS has the right to limit immigration to areas where it may cause “unwarranted social disorder.”  In essence, this means that the HIS tries to ensure that Inner Sphere Immigrants are dispersed, rather than forming tight-knit ethnic groups. On a more positive note, the HIS regularly funds initiatives to ensure that all immigrants see themselves as members of the Outworlds Hegemony first.  Finally, the HIS has the right to inspect private schools and may order changes in curriculum, or outright shut them down should they be found to be teaching “ethnic or nationalist hatred.”  This has resulted in accusations of favoritism, such as when the HIS banned a variety of teaching materials related to the Kentares Massacre from Davion supported private schools, even though similar  materials were openly taught in the public school system. Ultimately however, the HIS has effectively prevented the rise of ethnic conflict within the Hegemony and as such is seen as a valuable part of the government, turning immigrants into loyal Hegemony citizens. 

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Re: Second Exodus
« Reply #41 on: 22 September 2018, 11:50:41 »
nice update.

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« Reply #42 on: 22 September 2018, 18:52:53 »
So is it a manner of how it is presented in the private schools vrs public school system?
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« Reply #43 on: 22 September 2018, 19:16:10 »
I wonder how they will react to when Black December happens back on Earth.  and the general dissatisfaction with ComStar in 2877

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« Reply #44 on: 27 October 2018, 02:00:36 »
2804

Galedon V Defense Command.

“Sho-Sa!”

Sho-sa Karen Wilson frowned as she looked up.  Panic like what was in the voice of her subordinate could be contagious.

“What is it?”

“Unknown ships have jumped in and are proceeding to the recharge station.”

Karen cursed. Galedon was behind the lines, at least as much as any world could be. Evidently the Federated Sun had chosen to pay them a visit.

“Can you ID the ships?”

“Not yet, but by their emergency signitures, they appear to be warships. All of them.”

Suddenly, his panic became much more understandable.

Traders Domain Flagship Horatio Nelson.

Admiral Miles frowned at the big screen. McKenna’s were provided with the best sensors known to man, and it was apparent that they’d kicked over an anthill as they approached the recharge station. At least 40 Aerospace fighters, some small craft, and six dropships were burning towards them and he bet that they had nukes. No warships though.

Their own force was also displayed. The Nelson, the Yamato, another McKenna, a Luxor and a screen of two Samarkand class carriers and a Quixote frigate.

An inconceivable weight of metal.

Or it would be, if the big ships could actually fight. Both Mckenna’s had maybe 8 operational NPPCs, and the Luxor wasn’t much better off. The entire display was just that, a display, masquerading as a “reasonable” counter strike in retaliation for DCMS sponsored raids into the Outworlds Alliance.

“Are we ready to transmit?”

“Yes, sir.”

“To all DCMS forces in the system. Your government has chosen to engage in piracy against the people of the Outworlds Alliance, who the Draconis Combine is officially at peace with. While this constitutes an act of war, the Traders Domain has chosen to deploy one of our fleets with the intent of engaging in a limited act of retaliation. We will destroy the Galadon V recharge station, upon reaching NPPC range from our battleships, and hereby call upon the crew to abandon the station. “

Moments later, Miles turned to his flag captain.

“They backing off, Greg?”

“Would you?  The Dracs have a pretty simple answer to officers who give up without a fight.”

“Yeah, well, we were hoping for it.”  The plot showed both Samarkands launching waves of fighters, their combined wings badly outnumbering the DCMS forces, while the Quixote maneuvered to bring its long range missiles to bear, even as the other dropships, a smattering of Pentagons backed up by larger civilian dropships converted to carry missiles.

In the end, it was the McKennas that brought them victory—not through any of their own act, despite the firing of the operational NPPCs—no, the Draconis pilots, desperate to destroy the capital ships, allowed themselves to be drawn into a deadly gauntlet of escort ships. The last Draconis Combine dropship, a Leopard class dropship converted into an assault craft, died a hundred miles short of the Nelson.

“Are we in range of the recharge station?”

“Yes, sir. Looks like some of the crew is evacuating.”

“Give them thirty more minutes.” Miles wasn’t eager to kill anyone else today.  But at the end of his deadline, the massive nose batteries of the two battleships opened fire, reducing the station to twisted, metal.

“All ships, prepare to jump out.” After all, given how few house fleets have LI battery systems, time to scare them even more.

And that is her report, Coordinator.”

Jinjiro frowned.  “And the battleships?”

“None of our forces were able to get close enough to them to get detailed information—both warships were listed as heavily damaged and abandoned during the Amaris conflict.”

“Likely left behind in a cache by Kerensky.”  Jinjiro frowned. The glory of the Dragon demanded payment in blood for this offense.

But two McKenna’s, combined with the rest of their ships—the blood would not be all from the enemies of the Dragon, and that assumed there were no more ships than he’d seen.

“It could be that the ships are damaged, Coordinator.”

“They were intact enough to have functioning battery systems,” Another adviser retorted.

Jinjiro held up a finger and debate stilled. “For now,” he said. “Beginning a war with a party of unknown strength is not the path of wisdom. We will wait, and when I sit upon the throne of the Star League reformed, we shall have an accounting with these savages. Until then, we will cease direct raids upon worlds of the Outworlds Alliance, although we of course have no control over… Pirates.”

“Yes, Coordinator. The officer in charge has also…”

“She is not to use the garden. I have a greater need of officers than I do apologies.”

“Yes.”



Historical note:



The 2804 raid could have turned into a disaster, especially when one considers that at the time, it made use of the sum total of the currently combat-ready ships of the Traders Domain, to say nothing of the barely space worthy battleships. However, the Draconis Combine already had more than enough enemies, and the limited nature of the retaliation did not force the Coordinator to respond in the way a more severe attack would have. Although it did not end all pirate raids, the decision by the DCMS (and Federated Suns, once they received reports of the attack), to not antagonize a naval power of unknown size, provided the Traders Domain (soon to become the Outworlds Hegemony) with desperately needed breathing space.



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« Reply #45 on: 27 October 2018, 09:35:47 »
Good to see an update for this :) Really good stuff and a risky raid that paid off!
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« Reply #46 on: 02 November 2018, 06:25:07 »
Nice Defensive Raid, and the DC responce was perfect.
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« Reply #47 on: 02 November 2018, 13:35:20 »
Very interesting story.

Possible spoilers below if I'm guessing this right:

Given that the Minnesota Tribe are due to make a sojourn right through that part of space in just over twenty years time (Interstellar Players has them known to have visited the Michtal system in the Traders Domain) might we perhaps see an interesting encounter when another fleet of former SLDF warships appear. The Nelson running into the Zughoffer Weir could be comedy gold with both parties exclaiming "Holy crap! It's a McKenna!"

Regardless I'll be keeping an eye on this one.  :)
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« Reply #48 on: 02 November 2018, 22:46:44 »
Very interesting story.

Possible spoilers below if I'm guessing this right:

Given that the Minnesota Tribe are due to make a sojourn right through that part of space in just over twenty years time (Interstellar Players has them known to have visited the Michtal system in the Traders Domain) might we perhaps see an interesting encounter when another fleet of former SLDF warships appear. The Nelson running into the Zughoffer Weir could be comedy gold with both parties exclaiming "Holy crap! It's a McKenna!"

Regardless I'll be keeping an eye on this one.  :)

I honestly hadn't thought about that.  That being said, I want to resist the danger of having the new faction that gets involved with everything.  Equally, if the Hegemony knew about the Clans, things would be considerably different, quite likely leading to an earlier conflict between the House Lords and the clans, and I can't see the Wolverine's being thrilled at unleashing Succession Wars II, Electric Bugaloo.

That being said...

A major part of this AU is the word of blake desires to reforge the old, Terran Based Hegemony, something that the Wolverine's might very well approve of, so they could still become the core of a WOB force.

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« Reply #49 on: 03 November 2018, 07:19:47 »
I honestly hadn't thought about that.  That being said, I want to resist the danger of having the new faction that gets involved with everything.  Equally, if the Hegemony knew about the Clans, things would be considerably different, quite likely leading to an earlier conflict between the House Lords and the clans, and I can't see the Wolverine's being thrilled at unleashing Succession Wars II, Electric Bugaloo.

That being said...

A major part of this AU is the word of blake desires to reforge the old, Terran Based Hegemony, something that the Wolverine's might very well approve of, so they could still become the core of a WOB force.

Okay. Here's a few ideas for you then just in case you want some (as a spoiler in case you do choose to use them, or maybe some of them).

Finding themselves amidst a bunch of displaced Terran Hegemony people (much like themselves in fact), low on morale and short on supplies the Minnesota Tribe adopt a different approach and decide to "go merc", basing themselves out of the new Outworlds Hegemony. Its just after the First Succession War after all, given what happened to their homeworlds in the Terran Hegemony the Inner Sphere and Periphery looks far less appealing.

They deliberately go out of their way not to reveal their origins (you get a parallel with Wolf's Dragoons, only happening a couple of hundred years earlier) so the Outworlds Alliance remains ignorant of the Clans (expect the rumour mill regarding the Minnesota to be working overtime though, much as it did with the Dragoons). Having the Minnesota around helps keep the Outworlds intact during the Second Succession War (2830 to 2864).

The "Outworlds Alliance" of your story is already known to have at least two McKennas and other warships after the 2804 raid so the Minnesota's own warships aren't going to stand out nearly as much as they would elsewhere. For that matter, if the Outworlds have been maintaining and repairing their own McKennas they should be able to help fix the Zughoffer Weir. This would be another reason for the Minnesota to stick around.

One of the Inner Sphere theories about the Minnesota becomes that they were always affiliated with the Outworlds, and that their attacks in the Draconis Combine (the Minnesota hit four worlds in the Combine but nobody else) were some belated revenge for the Combine attacks on the Outworlds twenty years before (and also as retaliation for the ongoing pirate raids that are rumored to be sponsored from Luthian). As regards their unit patches from the 331st Royal Battlemech Division, many believe that this is a false flag and that the "Minnesota" are actually from a different SLDF unit that didn't go with Aleksandr Kerensky.

Maybe Michtal as their equivalent of Outreach, the future home of Wolf's Dragoons (Michtal doesn't seem to have been very heavily populated given that it disappeared from the maps at some point, although it likely has more people on it in your AU). As long as the Minnesota are providing valuable military service, as well as technical assistance, the Outworlds are willing to allow them their tendancy towards obfuscation when you ask them questions. For the Minnesota's part they keep everyone at arm's length and don't get involved with politics, think less a faction and more a mercenary group affiliated with a faction. Thanks to the introduction of the people they rescued from Richmond to their ranks they are likely to have an ongoing grievance with the Combine however (which makes for yet another parallel with the Dragoon's amusingly).

If you do find you want some more Clan Wolverine flavour, have the Outworlds Hegemony eventually add a "brand new" mech design to their inventory. The Mercury II as a development of the old SLDF Mercury isn't going to look completely out-of-left-field. For that matter the Stag was developed from the Vulcan so those can be readily explained too, although the Pulverizer would be a tad more suspicious perhaps. Good news and bad news. Good news, the Mercury II gives the Outworlds a leg-up on omnitech in the future. Bad news, if the Clans (or just Wolf's Dragoons) ever turn up they're going to wonder where the Outworlds got a prototype of the Coyotl :-p

As regards the Minnesota in the longer term (you'll need to come up with a name for them as mercenaries unless they stick with that) at some point Comstar/Word-Of-Blake hire them (instead of Clinton's Cutthroats) and they suddenly disappear... much like the Cutthroats did in 2870.

The Comstar Explorer Corps wasn't created until 2959 so you don't necessarily need to butterfly away the Outbound Light running into the clans in 3048.


I think that should all fit into your storyline pretty well without causing too much, if any, disruption to the main thrust of your AU (it might even help a bit). If you welcomed the input let me know and I'll throw any other ideas I have in your direction as things progress.

Good luck with the story.  :)
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« Reply #50 on: 11 November 2018, 02:19:18 »
Where are the Assault Battlemechs?

The Outworlds Hegemony currently has no active production line for Assault mechs, a lack that many newspapers often call attention to, speaking in dire terms of the "Battlemech Gap" between the Hegemony and its potential enemies.

However, the simple fact is that the OH military is not interested in using their limited budget to produce the largest mechs in human space. The reason is fairly simple: The Hegemony seldom faces enemies capable of deploying large numbers of assault mechs. Secondly, the slow and cumbersome assault mechs are not in keeping with the highly mobile combat strategies employed by most Hegemony units.

For this reason, the money that would normally go into assault designs is redirected go heavy and medium mech production, providing the Hegemony with flexible, powerful units that have the capability to match any periphery or inner sphere enemy that is likely to attack the Hegemony.

What assault class battlemechs that are used are normally purchased, most often from the Lyran Commonwealth, and are used for static defense purposes, such as the defense units tasked with gaurding industrial or civilian facilities. This leads to further disdain for assault class battlemechs, as those units seldom get a chance to prove their mettle in combat.
 
After the founding of the Terran Republic, the Outworlds Hegemony shifted most of its purchasing activity to their new ally, including the purchase of the new superheavy tripod mechs, but even so, assault and superheavy mechs remain a very small fraction of the Hegemony’s total mech forces.


Protomechs and the Hegemony:

The Hegemony was highly interested in the Clan protomech technology, and eventually shared information with the Word of Blake, which was able to reverse engineer the complex clan-based designs. Unlike the Clans, the Hegemony forces eventually integrated their own protomechs as organic support for infantry units, the smaller protomech designs being more amiable to transport with infantry units, and requiring less of a logistics train.

In addition, protomechs found themselves quite popular (especially the cockpit models, which used less dangerous control mechanisms than the Clan designs) among civil defense teams—a protomech was less damaging to roads than even the smallest mech, and yet maintained the battlemech’s ability to move through rubble. In fact, most civil defense units remained busy during peacetime, with protomech units commonly assigned to assist police, firefighter and disaster relief teams.

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« Reply #51 on: 11 November 2018, 13:04:27 »
A unique take on a (to me) novel usage scenario for ProtoMechs  ;)

 

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