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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #30 on: 13 August 2024, 10:28:57 »
Ahhh....ComStar didn't exist until 2788.  The Star League Communications Network (SLCOMNET) was running the show, they weren't anything like what ComStar would become in later years to come. Hell, Blake wasn't even in-charge of anything back then.

Kentares was in 2796-97.

Given the variations in stories it frankly could be several parties but probably comstar or a Earth First group controlling them. In any case its a incredibly stupid grandstanding that could only hurt Kowloon. Even if they reached Kentares they would probably only die trying or to damaged to return which left Kowloon so weakened it could not protect its own sovereignty. Which in a era where planets surrendered or died meant they were very lucky the Lyrans gave them a sweet heart deal instead of just coming by to cobalt nuke the planet of crazies then move on. And even that sweetheart deal was a bitter pill that crippled and chained them.

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #31 on: 13 August 2024, 21:41:59 »
Does Kaneda loss only his heart and his honor, or does he loss his ship as well?
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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #32 on: 14 August 2024, 03:28:33 »
You'll see... ;)

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #33 on: 14 August 2024, 08:06:26 »
In Our Final Hour…

"Mistake," Anh almost sighed.  He'd recognized the feint, and reacted just the way he ought to…

If that feint were THE feint.

"Torpedoes, engage the Miyamoto Musashi," she ordered.  "Full war loads, rockbreakers."

"Ayeh, Mum.  Torps in the water."

"Mum, we're lit!  TVM from enemy missile guidance!!"

"Well, shit."

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Afterword

The Draconis Combine Admiralty lost the DCS Miyamoto Musashi in an action that would remain classified for the next half century.  One footnote of this, is that this was the final action of the 171st Kowloon Volunteers, most of whom did not survive the battle.  And most of those survivors did not survive internment.

Recently recovered data from wrecks in that system (see: Comstar Historical Society file 177135a/Gamma 211, dated 3047) confirm that the McKenna, one of only three known to have defected to one of the Great Houses in the aftermath of Operation EXODUS, was destroyed by nuclear ordnance fired from the KCS Fatiama, a salvaged Pinto class in service with the short lived "Kowloon Republic" (an entity that ceased to exist as a separate polity in August of 2799).

The Combine lost one of the most talented officers to defect, Admiral Kaneda Toshiro… in terms of historical significance, the DCA was a relatively light force,with fewer Cruisers or Battlecruisers than other successor states at the time.  Admiral (later Tai Sho) Kaneda was one of the most noted and effective SLDF Naval commanders of the Amaris conflict.

His opponent was confirmed to be former SLDF Commander (later, Kowloonese Commodore) Anh Li Cu'ong, whose name appears in records throughout the conflict with Amaris, most notably at Elbar, and as  part of an escorting force during Operation: Liberation in the Sol system.  She is best recorded, however, for her use of kinetic bombardment in Kowloon's final revolt against the Rim Worlds Republic, wherein she planned and executed the use of high speed kinetic impactors to remove Rim Worlds garrisons on her homeworld.
There were and are no remains to return to her world of origin.  Battleroms recovered from wreckage clearly indicate that both flagships in that action were destroyed by nuclear fire.

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #34 on: 14 August 2024, 08:10:44 »
I had hoped that the ground forces component of the fleet might have gotten away but alas it was not to be. And the mutual destruction of both flagships was unexpected, I thought it was going to be drawn out more not that both sides succumbed so suddenly.

A gripping read, thank you.
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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #35 on: 14 August 2024, 08:12:19 »
[out of story]

I kept it short!! Yaaaaayyyy!!!!

there was a perilous risk of bloat, the intent with this one was to actually do a shorter story than is my usual.  I tried to create a context that would make the central conflict feel somewhat meaningful.  It also struck me that in the 1st Succession  War, a lot of units and unit commanders who'd lived, loved and fought beside each other for decades were suddenly on opposing sides in a no-holds-barred bloodbath.

I wanted to show that, to an extent.

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #36 on: 14 August 2024, 08:34:34 »
Very, very good.

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #37 on: 14 August 2024, 09:30:52 »
Good you kept it short.

Yeah, the 1st Succession War would have been a nastier Civil War in many cases as the Aramis War. Many officers trained in the same way, and having known each other.

It felt bitter as all get out.
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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #38 on: 14 August 2024, 17:34:10 »
Glad to see it all posted! :)

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #39 on: 14 August 2024, 19:06:24 »
Cheers

And that was round 1 was, a civil war fought by ex Star League troops against others who they knew.   
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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #40 on: 14 August 2024, 20:07:17 »
nice short story!
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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #41 on: 14 August 2024, 22:23:28 »
Nice ending to the engagement, that McKenna had no real business in the line of fire.
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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #42 on: 15 August 2024, 04:19:48 »
I liked this one. Thank you for posting it!

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #43 on: 15 August 2024, 06:06:28 »
Well done Cannonshop, I liked the short here quite a bit.

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Re: Pennants (a short feature)
« Reply #44 on: 15 August 2024, 20:19:46 »
Congrats
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