Jason Chrisholm Guillotine 3N- This is the units commander who is a young malitia captain.
1) Original Star League GLT-3N
Guillotine was extinct outside ComGuards/WoB Militia (DCMS got some and Clans had some in their PGCs). For Marik Militia GLT-4L, (GLT-4P) or even GLT-5M would be more suitable.
Derek O'neal Ostwar 2M- This Ostwar is an ancient family heirloom mech dating back before the fall of the star league, it has been in the family since, and is crewed by a veteran FWLM soldier units 2nd in command
2) OWR-2M
Ostwar - while possible with the background you described, it's not probable. Fluff says that
Ostwar has not survived the fall of the Star League.
Ostwar was produced for FWLM in relatively short period between 2500s and 2570s too.
Billie "the kid" Williams- Hermes II 2S Piloted by a young malitia recruit the hermes acts as the scout and flanker for this lance.
Good.
Kendra Steele Wolverine 5S- the wolverine is piloted by Chrisholms girlfriend Kendra Steele
3) Wolverine 5S? You meant WVR-6R or TDR-5S?
Vehicle Company
Assault lance Support lance Scout Lance Infantry Support lance 6 Platoons Infantry, SRM/ Conventional
Demolisher Condor Harasser Maxim Supported by (Militarized) Ibex RV's with machine guns/ Jeeps and Technicals
Von Luckner Saracin Harasser Hover APC x 5
VonLuckner Saracin Pegasus 2x Striker light tank
Schreck PPC Carrier Scimitar Pegasus
Partisan
4) I am not sure about that
Partisan. I would say it's not the best idea to use this 3/5 tank with 8/12 hovertanks.
Air support
2x Ripper
2x Hawk Moth Gunships
5)
Ripper - Free Worlds League is the only nation that
did not buy this chopper.
But if it works for you, you can use whatever you wish.