I like it Darrian.
How did you do the laser crystal bulbs on the arms?
Craft beads.
I kicked around for a while trying to figure out a way to do good jeweling that didn't
look like jeweling. I was rooting through my wife's craft supplies when I noticed these and jammed 'em into the weapon ports to see what they looked like. And Lo! They didn't suck! :D
I like the scheme, but perhaps a little good blash wash would punch it up a bit? Just a thought...
Amusingly, I did a black wash the first time I did yellow (a commission for Imperial Fist Space Marines). It turned out awful. Evidently, you want to shade yellow with
brown not black. What looks weird about this MAD is that it's the old Battledroid version - there's not a lot of panel lines to break up the yellow, and so it kind of glares at the eyes. It' a mostly-unavoidable side effect of the scuplt and color scheme, I think. Somebody who actually knows color theory could probably tell you better than it.