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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #120 on: 11 October 2024, 14:06:25 »
In a world where the wolves or the wolves in exile move closer to the inner sphere as part of a ‘hearts and minds’ campaign having victor as the crown prince of the federated suns might be more important - especially if Katherine’s list for power eventually shows itself. 

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #121 on: 11 October 2024, 14:29:07 »
Well... this version of Victor would need to make inroads with the Cloud Cobras in order to establish a path to a SLDF Steiner blood name. I think the opportunity for that is during the voting for a new ilkhan, when Clan Cloud Cobra is made aware of Victor being a new Wolf warrior, when the all the action happens in Strana Mechty...?
I agree.
He will need a LOT of inroads there & the "year" on Strana Mechty will at least allow them to notice him.
He's not going to get have the sort of contact & time that Phelan did, but there is room for the Cobras to at least NOTICE him & be curious about him.
Maybe send over a small delegation after hearing about the Wolf Adoption & perhaps another meeting after he tests out as Star Commander, assuming that whole thing works out similar to Phelan w/ Natasha & letting her have one of the kills.

I think it would be fun to slip in Prometheus into the slot of "Running Wolf?" as Victor's mech & then have him keep it.

I have this scene in my head where instead of Phelan solo dealing w/ Tor, you have Natasha & Victor going down, & in the end she takes of her mask & later orders her "Aide" to do the same.  He had to wonder about Phelan, but, seeing such famous faces like Natasha/Victor in person would make for a very serious shock of just how much the clans are assimilating from the IS.  Natasha doing one of her casual kick her boots up on his desk might be humorous.  Having the Crown Prince of the FC as her puppy along w/ the realization that she returned home makes for some drama.  "My people are coming & there is no stopping them, not from the 'outside' at least."  #wickedsmile.



Victor doesn't need to have a direct connection to Kailen Steiner, other than Kailin's father Paul Steiner, which he does have. Kailin may have been Paul Steiner's illegitimate son, but he still has Steiner blood in him. Therefore, because Kailin was born from Paul Steiner and Victor is a direct descendant of Paul Steiner, he does have legitimate claim to a Bloodname among the Cloud Cobras, if they accept that thinking that is.
I didn't recall the specifics of his link to the bloodname.
The point is, he isn't going to have that direct link to the house leader the way Phelan did to Cyrilla.
Her being impressed by him & lacking any notable progeny of her own & her long friendship with Natasha were all things that worked in Phelan's favor to push to the "head of the line" so to speak.
He will lack all that in relations to the Cobras.




In a world where the wolves or the wolves in exile move closer to the inner sphere as part of a ‘hearts and minds’ campaign having victor as the crown prince of the federated suns might be more important - especially if Katherine’s list for power eventually shows itself. 

That is what popped into my head.
  Instead of "Precentor Martial" as his eventual destination, it might be a combo of Phelan/Ragnar & being a bigger connection to the AFFC nations leading up to FCCW.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #122 on: 11 October 2024, 19:14:33 »
I agree.
He will need a LOT of inroads there & the "year" on Strana Mechty will at least allow them to notice him.
He's not going to get have the sort of contact & time that Phelan did, but there is room for the Cobras to at least NOTICE him & be curious about him.
Maybe send over a small delegation after hearing about the Wolf Adoption & perhaps another meeting after he tests out as Star Commander, assuming that whole thing works out similar to Phelan w/ Natasha & letting her have one of the kills.

I think it would be fun to slip in Prometheus into the slot of "Running Wolf?" as Victor's mech & then have him keep it.

I have this scene in my head where instead of Phelan solo dealing w/ Tor, you have Natasha & Victor going down, & in the end she takes of her mask & later orders her "Aide" to do the same.  He had to wonder about Phelan, but, seeing such famous faces like Natasha/Victor in person would make for a very serious shock of just how much the clans are assimilating from the IS.  Natasha doing one of her casual kick her boots up on his desk might be humorous.  Having the Crown Prince of the FC as her puppy along w/ the realization that she returned home makes for some drama.  "My people are coming & there is no stopping them, not from the 'outside' at least."  #wickedsmile.


I didn't recall the specifics of his link to the bloodname.
The point is, he isn't going to have that direct link to the house leader the way Phelan did to Cyrilla.
Her being impressed by him & lacking any notable progeny of her own & her long friendship with Natasha were all things that worked in Phelan's favor to push to the "head of the line" so to speak.
He will lack all that in relations to the Cobras.




That is what popped into my head.
  Instead of "Precentor Martial" as his eventual destination, it might be a combo of Phelan/Ragnar & being a bigger connection to the AFFC nations leading up to FCCW.

In a world where the fed-com civil war kicks off between who knows what parties, the temptation for victor and the wolves to intervene with another candidate would be enormous, and convert it into a multipolar civil war. 

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #123 on: 11 October 2024, 19:28:48 »
In a world where the fed-com civil war kicks off between who knows what parties, the temptation for victor and the wolves to intervene with another candidate would be enormous, and convert it into a multipolar civil war. 
The interesting thing to me, would be, since Victor is missing, and yet, is announced alive in 3052, IE Before Katie can even graduate the Academy.....  how does the timeline evolve?

Outreach is a bit different so does Sun Tzu still send a video to Hanse possibly triggering his Heart Attack?
Since Katie is on a different (Military) path, does she still have her Mom assassinated?
Once Victor is announced as Alive, is he back in the line of heirs?
Does a war even happen & if so who is where?

But we are probably getting way off topic here.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #124 on: 11 October 2024, 21:09:40 »
These are all fun questions! I don't mind the speculation. Some will be answered, some will not.

That said, the story is going to end when the original trilogy does: right after Tukayyid. And I don't intend to pursue future stories in the same continuity. After I finish up, I might outline some things I thought about for the "future", but plan to leave them unwritten since the writing exercise will have served its purpose (I feel like I've already grown a lot as a writer!).

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #125 on: 12 October 2024, 01:33:29 »
It's at least probable that Victor will meet the head of the Steiner bloodhouse, because that's probably Din Steiner, who is currently Khan of Clan Cloud Cobra. So if Victor gets called in front of the Grand Council, (as Phelan was, to answer accusations that Ulric conspired to cause Leo Showers' death) then he'll be in front of Din Steiner - who canonically wasn't particularly impressed by Operation Revival. (Not opposed as such to an Invasion, but thought it was premature).
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #126 on: 12 October 2024, 10:15:52 »
It's at least probable that Victor will meet the head of the Steiner bloodhouse, because that's probably Din Steiner, who is currently Khan of Clan Cloud Cobra. So if Victor gets called in front of the Grand Council, (as Phelan was, to answer accusations that Ulric conspired to cause Leo Showers' death) then he'll be in front of Din Steiner - 
Agreed.
At the very least, even if Din isn't the head of the Bloodhouse, he's at the least going to inform them of this new person with the Wolves.
Also agreed that it's logical he is called since he was there on the bridge to answer to those issues.
I could see Victor getting the first of those visits after the Grand Council.
Access isn't likely as often or as close as the Phelan/Cyrilla link but it's exposure regardless.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #127 on: 17 October 2024, 15:47:13 »
Intermission
Warrior Testing Ground, Clan Wolf Zone
Strana Mechty, Kerensky Cluster
21 September 3045


“Reactor, online. Sensors, online. Weapons, online. All systems nominal.”

Katya listened to the computer’s neutral voice read out the familiar litany, fidgeting slightly with her safety straps. She looked to her right, directing her gaze at the Dire Wolf that Elvin was piloting today. She saw her sibkin raising a thumbs-up through the glass and returned the gesture with a small smile.

She and Elvin moved their Mechs at the same time, walking them slowly to the field of battle. Before them stood arrayed six ‘Mechs, camouflage blending their outlines into the background and making it difficult for Katya to determine their configurations.

The voice of Star Captain Andrea came over the radio as she spoke the words that would begin the Trial, not quite ritual but not quite mundane, “Katya and Elvin of House Kerensky, this is the time of your testing. Every aspect of your performance will be observed and evaluated. The rating so-generated will determine your duties until your next testing. Defeat no enemies and you will be relegated to status as a Civilian. A single win will secure you a seat in a ‘Mech; two will see you command a Star; defeat three and you will be a Star Captain. Katya, your targets are designated by red triangles on the IFF; Elvin, yours are blue squares.

“Let the testing begin!”

As was customary, the lightest of Katya’s opponents approached her first, a Summoner. The ‘Mech charged directly at her, and as it drew nearer she saw that the configuration was similar to the standard C, a large-bore autocannon and short-range missiles balanced by a pair of what appeared to be medium pulse lasers. Knowing Katya’s reputation as a stalking wolf, her opponent had configured himself for optimal close-range firepower, no doubt hoping to exploit his Falcon design to close quickly and throw her off-balance.

The cadet, however, knew her own reputation and had anticipated her opponents’ actions. She backpedaled as her opponent grew nearer, lashing out with quick shots from her PPCs that missed Mech sprinting towards her. As the Summoner came close enough to bring its autocannon to bear, Katya raised her own twin large-bore autocannons and let loose before her opponent had a chance to fire. The double-shot from her right arm shook nearly all of the armor off of his left torso and put a hole in the left arm; the cluster shell from her left cannon threw shot into the hole and must have damaged the autocannon there because the only fire she got in return was a panicky spread of the missiles and lasers; the latter missed entirely and only two of six missiles hit, barely scratching the armor on her torso.

Katya ceased her backwards motion and shifted to moving forward as she launched another volley from her paired autocannons, this time supplemented by a dozen SRMs and a trio of medium lasers. The already-damaged left torso of the Summoner was ripped away, and a sudden spike in ‘Mech’s heat signature spoke to the engine damage even before the safety system automatically shut the Mech down, the pilot failing to override it.

She glanced at the clock: 42 seconds had passed since the Trial began. There had never been any doubt that she would make Warrior today, but she still took pride in the speed of it.

Her celebrations were cut short by three PPC blasts splashing across her right side, the fourth missing by a margin that provided no comfort. She turned to face the Warhawk, worried. Here was a Warrior who had perhaps known her reputation and decided to take his chances that, her ‘Mech damaged from the first fight, he could beat her at her own game. Or maybe he had simply taken advantage of the foreknowledge that Katya would be piloting a Dire Wolf, and taken a ‘Mech that was usually capable of defeating anything slower than itself.

Katya turned to face the looming ‘Mech, beginning to move sideways to make herself at least a little harder to hit. She considered her options. She did have two ERPPCs of her own, and more than a little armor, but not even her own immense self-confidence could convince her that she could win a long-range duel with a ‘Mech with nearly as much armor and twice the long-range firepower, without even considering that her opponent was likely carrying a targeting computer as well. She shifted her movements and began running straight at the Warhawk; she knew that there was no chance that she would be able to close quickly enough to make use of her crushing advantage in close-range firepower, but in the meantime it would throw her opponent off-balance while she thought, and likely cause him to underestimate her besides.

Some instinct made her jink, and one more bolt of lightning hit, two others passing her by harmlessly. She knew that she could only stand one or two more volleys before it would no longer take a lucky shot for the damage to go internal. I could always keep jinking, she thought to herself half-jokingly, If I pretend that this is actually an Ice Ferret, maybe I can keep from being hit too much…

She fired one of her shoulder-mounted PPCs in return, a lucky shot that landed less than two meters from the narrow cockpit sheltered under the Warhawk’s great “hood”. And she suddenly had her answer. Her opponent had sought to best her at her own game; now she would best him at his. Because while he might have four particle cannons to her two, and likely an advanced targeting computer besides, she was Katya of House Kerensky, genedaughter of Ulric Kerensky and Miriam Truscott. She was the top cadet in the top sibko in Clan Wolf in the past decade. And while her pairing had been arranged to concentrate tactical and strategic ability, she did not lack in the simpler martial skills.

Katya angled her Mech so she was running about thirty degrees to her opponent, and then abruptly stopped just as she knew the capacitors would have finished cycling. Four trails of blue-white lightning passed before her face.

Keeping her feet solidly planted, she twisted slightly on her hips, pointing her upper torso directly at her opponent, who did not quite seem to understand what she was doing, as he kept his own static pose. A Civilian or some Vulture Lord’s pathetic excuse of a soldier might have prayed; Katya simply held her own quiet faith in herself. She centered the crosshairs over the Warhawk’s cockpit, taking her time to line things up just right, the patience she was bred for warring with the knowledge that the capacitors would charge eventually, even if the idiot in her crosshairs never realized that he should move himself.

Finally, things felt right, and she gently squeezed the triggers.

Twin bolts of man-made lightning shot out, almost faster than the eye could track. The Warhawk’s skin danced with sparks, and when they resolved, she saw two great gouges in the armor above the cockpit and directly to its right. Katya gritted her teeth, but stood her ground. She could take only one more hit without risk, but a battle of attrition favored her opponent: only decisive action would bring victory.

This time, when the volley struck her Dire Wolf, all four PPCs hit the completely static target. They ate armor from all over her ‘Mech, though 19 tons of Compound 12B2 Standard stood up to the assault. Her opponent was apparently willing to take her action on face value, and did not move after firing, no doubt expecting to let off another deadly strike, this one likely to go internal.

Once more, Katya aimed carefully at her opponent’s cockpit. Once more, she squeezed, and once more, lightning danced.

And when it cleared, the narrow slot under the hood held a charred and melted hole where once a Warrior had sat. She did not need the icon changing color on her sensor readout to tell her that she had achieved the rank of Star Commander.

Having learned her lesson, she was immediately in motion again, seeking out her next opponent. The final obstacle between her and Trinary command was an Executioner. The configuration seemed to echo a Stormcrow B, a big gun on the right arm balanced by a collection of medium lasers on the left. While it was possible that the big gun was a Gauss Rifle, she doubted it: the Executioner was exceedingly rare in the Wolf touman, and the only reason she could think someone would choose it would be for its quick movement.

By now, her opponent must have realized that Katya had not opted for the expected long-range armament, but his configuration had left little choice but to close, relying on speed and maneuverability to avoid fire while hoping to exploit her weakened armor. She let loose with her particle cannons, her opponent stumbling slightly as nearly two tons of armor shattered and evaporated away in a moment. She followed the strike with her lasers, and all three hit as her opponent charged straight at her. That was another ton and a third, but the Executioner carried more than enough armor to weather the storm and she appeared not to have penetrated anywhere, though her computer said that the left torso was thin.

Her opponent realized that and cut left as he closed in on her, protecting the damaged torso. He was still some 350 meters away, but in a handful of seconds he would be in range for the heavy autocannons they both carried; not long after that and he would be in her rear, the Bearclaw Model 6 Heavy Ultra Autocannon free to rip into the thin armor there, not even two tons distributed across her entire back.

And suddenly the Mech lurched bizarrely, nearly falling as the left leg suddenly locked up in its current position.

His M.A.S.C. had failed! She knew that her opponent’s Mech would not be completely immobilized, but he could no longer advance on her so quickly. In fact, I can almost certainly backpedal faster than he can limp forward. In moments, Katya put out of her mind plans to get a quick shot out before her opponent jumped over her, plans to reverse her arms, plans to twist around, desperate plans to handle an enemy in her most vulnerable quarter.

Instead, with a laugh, she began backpedaling deliberately, particle cannons and medium lasers lashing out. The Executioner limped towards her barely faster than a jogging recruit, occasionally raising an arm to fire a collection of lasers which seldom hit, and an autocannon that never did. When her opponent did finally seem to remember that he had JumpJets, he flew on such a slow and predictable trajectory that she was able to tag him with a PPC in the air. Upon landing, he raised his arms skyward and shut down his engine.

How was that so easy? she wondered to herself. The M.A.S.C. had apparently wrecked his legs, but he should have still been able to jump…and then she realized that the bent position of the one leg and the no-doubt damaged hip or foot of the other would have made quick jumps a risky proposition, and her coward of an opponent had apparently decided to surrender rather than risk falling on his face. Savashri scum. She had more than half a mind to look up what warrior had been in the Mech, but reminded herself that that would violate the convention and tradition: what occurred during a Warrior’s first Trial of Position remained on that field.

Suddenly, her comm cut in, the commander’s override turning it on without her action. “Congratulations, Star Captain Katya,” said Star Captain Andrea, “And congratulations on a quick and clean victory. I look forward to watching your career.”

You sure will! she thought to herself, but over the radio she simply said, “Thank you, Star Captain.”

She took a moment to assess her status: ammo stocks good; armor nearly shot through on her left torso, both arms, and her right leg, but no internal damage. With a wolfish grin, she began to walk over to Elvin’s half of the field. The two sibkin had made the usual deal, that should one take all three opponents and the other fall short, the survivor might make a play for a fourth.

But as she approached, she saw Elvin’s Dire Wolf trading lasers and cluster shells for missiles and Gauss fire with a ragged-looking Warhawk. Elvin’s right leg was blackened and cratered, barely seeming to move, but with his quartet of extended range large lasers, he outranged his opponent, and his light autocannons would match the Gauss Rifle’s range.

Looking closer, she corrected herself: his pair of large lasers, as his left arm was covered in ruin, the muzzles of the lasers there nowhere to be seen.

But while Elvin’s Mech was in somewhat poor condition, his opponent’s was in dire straits. One arm was missing, and sparks flew from that side torso as Elvin’s LB-X autocannon tore into it. At a range of almost 600 meters, half his shots were missing, but those that hit were telling.

Finally, a flash and a detonation marked the destruction of the Warhawk’s second Gauss Rifle. The Mech did not surrender, but all fire ceased. After a moment, Elvin ceased his own fire, and began to approach cautiously: a large missile rack appeared to still be intact. When he was at 300 meters and there was still no fire, he got onto the Trial’s common frequency, “Rangemaster, my third opponent has ceased fire and movement following the destruction of a Gauss Rifle. I believe that he may have suffered debilitating feedback from the detonation. Do you agree, quiaff?”

“Give me a moment, Star Commander Elvin,” said the Rangemaster. Silence followed while the Rangemaster doubtless attempted to raise the Warhawk on comms.

After a full minute, Star Captain Andrea spoke, “Congratulations Elvin; Star Commander Adam is confirmed mission-killed. You are granted the rank of Star Captain.”

Katya waited until Elvin turned to face her, then raised her arm in salute. He returned the gesture.

She tried to remember the last time she had heard of two cadets testing out as Star Captains at the same time and could not. Truly, the Snarling Wolf 25 Sibko would shake the foundations of the Wolf Clan, and perhaps other Clans besides.

She smiled as she walked her Mech in, very slowly so as to pace her sibkin. Lara Ward had already promised her a Trinary in the 279th.

Now she had a Bloodname to win.

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Just some fun Mech combat! Elvin Kerensky shows up as a Star Captain in the Wolf Clan sourcebook. The Wolf sourcebook makes her out to be an excellent Warrior, and I say the same a bit later, so I decided to show instead of just telling. The only really significant thing here I think is making her descended from a crossing with a Star Adder. Blood Legacy mentions the "Kerensky vision", and I decided that the Wolf Scientists might try to do a crossing for strategic ability. Aside from the Wolves, only the Adders and the Ravens seem to care about that, and crossing with a Naval Commander seemed wrong.

I actually made IRL rolls for the Executioner's MASC, so it's only slightly contrived that it failed at a convenient moment. But as they say, it's better to be lucky than to be good.

Next week, Book Two: Wolf!

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #128 on: 23 October 2024, 02:09:36 »
Book Two: Wolf

Chapter 13


WS Dire Wolf, in transit to zenith Jump point
Rasalhague system, Clan Wolf Occupation Zone
15 January 3051


“Kid.”

Victor ignored the call, as he had the previous several times.

“Kid.”

This time, it was accompanied by a thrown sock. Also ignored.

“Your Highness!”

Victor snapped, “Do not call me that!”

Natasha Kerensky gave a smile recognized across the Inner Sphere. “Got your attention, didn’t it?”

With Victor’s new status had come new quarters: after all, a Warrior could not very well sleep in a barracks for bondsmen. Though he had been saddened to be separated from those of the country of his birth, he also felt a guilty relief that he would not have to face their looks every day as the Arcturans tried to understand his assimilation and the Donegals drew on their prince for strength. He wondered if his absence would cause a crisis in confidence among his former fellows, and if the result would be that they broke or that they snapped back, joining with the newer arrivals to retrench their identities as Lyrans and soldiers of the AFFC.

The truth was, of course, that he preferred not to think of them at all. He still loved his home, still remembered growing up on Tharkad, still felt Lyran in some part of himself…but he was a Wolf now, whatever his past. It was simpler that way.

But while he had been relieved to leave his old roommates, he had been less relieved to discover the identity of his new one.

Katya had explained that most Warriors were not assigned private quarters, and further elaborated that there was a distinct paucity of volunteers to share a room with an Inner Sphere barbarian, even one who had allegedly been house-broken. He had been slightly disappointed but not surprised when an invitation to share with Katya had failed to materialize.

That had left him sharing with the other Warrior on board the Dire Wolf of irregular status, who was incidentally also the person least likely to object to rooming with a Spheroid.

And it was not that Natasha Kerensky was a bad roommate, somewhat to Victor’s surprise. A literal lifetime spent in the military had left her unexpectedly neat, and her strange hours were counterbalanced by an ability to move as silently as a stalking cat.

No, the problem was something else.

“You know,” said the object of his ire. “We can’t be traitors if we were Wolves all along. Plus, we never betrayed your father.”

“How can you say that?!” Victor snapped. “Okay, I get it, you did not tell him that you were from the Clans. That is acceptable, the Dragoons are hardly the only mercenary unit in the Inner Sphere that prefer not to discuss their past. But your presence here indicates that the Dragoons still work for the Clans. I do not know if you are spies or have been working to pave the way for the Invasion. Perhaps the Dragoons are even now attacking the Federated Commonwealth from inside!”

“They aren’t,” replied the Black Widow, “Quite the opposite, in fact. Or at least that was the plan.”

She paused for a moment before continuing, “But this is all pretty rich coming from Little Mister Victor Wolf over there. What word do you think people would be using to describe you right now?”

“I have acted in the way I thought best for the people of the Federated Commonwealth,” the abtakha warrior said stiffly. It was mostly true.

“And you find that you can serve Clan Wolf despite that, because being a Wolf and helping the FedCom aren’t opposites, right?” She paused for a moment, but continued in an exasperated tone before he could respond, “Look, kid, I promise you that the Dragoons only ever dealt with your dad in good faith.”


He mulled it over. She had a good point - or at least, he hoped she did. But…

“I have come to learn that Clan Warriors do not lie. The Black Widow, however, has a different reputation,” he responded coolly.

“Hah!” replied Natasha, “I can’t argue that. Still, I don’t know what to say to convince you. Here, how’s this,” her voice took on a steady, almost ritualistic cadence, “I, Natasha Kerensky of House Kerensky of Clan Wolf, hereby swear a rede upon my Bloodname that Jaime Wolf, and all of Wolf’s Dragoons, have only ever been sincere and honest in our dealings with First Prince Hanse Davion and the Federated Commonwealth.” She gave an enormous grin, “How’s that?”

Victor had never heard any Clanner swear on their Bloodname - indeed, he did not remember hearing any Clanner swear an oath of any kind before, as they seemed to consider a Warrior’s ordinary word sufficient in all things. But he knew something of the importance was placed on Bloodnames, and the way she said it certainly sounded serious.

He nodded grudgingly, “Fine. Maybe you dealt with my father in good faith. But why do you care what I think about you, anyway?” After a moment’s thought, he almost interrupted himself, “Wait, before you answer that, what did you mean that the Dragoons are planning to do ‘quite the opposite’?”

The ancient warrior made a zipping motion across her lips, and then mimed locking them. “Can’t tell you; that’s a promise to someone else. But as far as why I care about you…look, kid, you and I are allies here. Maybe our only allies, though I hope not.”

Victor was on his guard; he’d only met Natasha Kerensky a few times, and never spoken to her closely. Still, as he’d said before, she had a reputation. Conspiracy and alliance was not a part of it. “Allies in what, exactly?”

“In stopping this damn idiocy,” she replied, her tone deadly serious. “This Invasion is a Bad Idea with a capital B. I wanna end it, I figure you wanna end it. All of my old friends are probably dead, and while I want to trust this Ulric character, I’ve only known him for all of a week and so far my main takeaway is that he’s a sneaky little weasel, even if he’s on your side.”

The former bondsman wanted to defend his patron, but after a moment’s reflection found that he could not really disagree.

“So that makes the only other Wolf to love the Inner Sphere my best choice,” she concluded.

“Why do you think that the Invasion is a bad idea? From what I can tell, all of the, uh, ‘anti-Crusaders’ seem mostly to disagree with the Crusaders on how to conduct the Invasion, not on the fact of it.”

“I hope that’s not the case, or else what being a Warden means has changed a great deal in the past 50 years. No, I suspect that Ulric and the rest just know that they can’t stop it yet, so they’re trying to do damage control at the moment.

“And as for why it’s a bad idea…” Natasha trailed off, apparently choosing her words with care, “Let’s leave aside the Inner Sphere for a moment. The Invasion is directly bad for the Clans.” She gestured, seeming to physically grope for words, “Clan society is fragile. Brittle. Even not knowing all that much about it, I hope you can see that.”

Victor gave a hesitant nod.

“And there’s more,” she continued. “How many people do you think there are in the Clan Homeworlds?”

The truth was that the new Wolf had no idea, and had never even considered the question.

Natasha grinned wolfishly at his silence, “That’s what I thought. There are 36 worlds in the Kerensky Cluster, and 5 Pentagon worlds. Hell, let’s toss in the 3 Tanite worlds, though they aren’t really a part of the Clans. And these are mostly not very friendly worlds; unless the growth rate has exploded since we left, there’s less than a billion Clanners.”

Victor could not hide his shock.

“That’s right. All of Clan space has less population than the planet of Rasalhague, and probably a dozen other worlds the Wolves have just conquered. There are cities in the Inner Sphere with more people than Strana Mechty, the most-populated planet in the Homeworlds. If I had to guess, I’d say that there’s probably around one Wolf for every hundred Lyrans and Rasalhagues right now in the Wolf OZ. Let’s assume for a moment that the people there accept Wolf rule; Ulric seems committed to ruling with a light hand, so maybe it’ll happen as long as no one tells them about what happened in the Pentagon worlds.

“But the cultural exchange won’t be one way, with Clan Spaniel instilling good Clan values in the Kerenskyless heathens of the Inner Sphere who’ll give up private property, stop using last names, and marry who the Scientists want them to. Even if it only happens as native-born Clanners travel to and from the Inner Sphere, something is going to be getting back to the Homeworlds. And I don’t know if the Clans can survive that.”

Victor was at a loss for words. Most of it was from the torrent of new information, and the implications of it. The former (current?) Dragoon was right: if that was how things stood, it was unlikely that Clan society would be able to survive in the Invasion in the long run. On the other hand, the Combine and Confederation were still around after centuries of contact with freer societies, and what Katya had told him about the Homeworlds didn’t make them seem all that much worse.

But just as shocking was the social analysis coming from a woman who was by all accounts impatient, aggressive, and short-sighted.

Lacking anything to say to the meat of her statement, he instead commented on that. “I am somewhat surprised to hear you talking like this. It certainly is not your reputation.”

Natasha snorted, “Too many conversations with Jaime this past year. I hate this crap. Half the reason I left in the first place was to avoid all of the political BS that came with having a Bloodname and being a Kerensky. No, I’d much rather have a joystick in my hand and someone to kill in front of me.”

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Book Two!

This book should be a little more different from its "source material" than Book One was. So much of Book Two is an infodump about the Clans, most of which I won't be replicating...or will be revisiting in a different way. And obviously all of the House Ward business isn't going to be occurring.

Natasha Kerensky is an interesting character, and Phelan Kell has a lot of familiarity with her, and is basically willing to accept her as his fairy godmother without second thought. Victor knows her in a different context, and is more cognizant of her mixed reputation, plus he takes her presence much more personally.

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #129 on: 23 October 2024, 08:37:15 »
So Victor and Natasha finally have a talk and it's much different than how she talked with Phelan, who knew her longer than Victor had. So now the question is, what will be in store for Victor once they get to Strana Mechty?

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« Reply #130 on: 23 October 2024, 10:22:38 »
HAH! 

I'm not sure why but I love the fact that 20 year old Victor the Prince is rooming with 77 year old Grandma Widowmaker.

The fact that the conversation is casual & he's pissy has more character than solemnly meeting Cyrilla in a military office.

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« Reply #131 on: 23 October 2024, 19:09:51 »
Victor is in for a rough, if not fun ride
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #132 on: 23 October 2024, 19:09:58 »
You learn the unit that was "serving" it's contract with your nation was actually "spying"

Yup, Vics reaction makes sense

Natasha's kind of does too. It's actually funny thinking about the ratios in Clan space with the smaller population sizes the ratio to military forces probably makes more sense than the Inner Sphere does
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #133 on: 23 October 2024, 21:34:01 »
OK, that was great.  Really liked the interactions, and the dialogue flowed well.  Shows how assimilated Victor's become, and how just over it Natasha still is.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #134 on: 23 October 2024, 23:05:26 »
You know, with Victor's inner monologue & feeling uncomfortable with his assimilation, I'd love to see him AND Natasha stop back by the Bondsman quarters.
Or just get an impression because we saw Phelan, & we saw Vic now, but, really, I can't recall much in the way of interaction from Natasha w/ the IS after she left.
How does the average joe take seeing the Black Widow in person, which unlike Victor/Phelan, most will not have ever been face to face with her, and have nothing but magazine covers from the last 45 years to go off of.
Having her bark orders to get them cleaning mechs or something would be funny, which isn't far from the truth IIRC my own Wolf & Spider Graphic Novel.
I wonder if most of the "non-prince/bloodnamed" bondsman ever realize that they are being honored by the clans v/s discarded.
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« Reply #135 on: 30 October 2024, 17:44:47 »
So this thread (and some shelving projects I did in the spring) inspired me to go pull out my Novels that are back on display & re-read the trilogy.

It's been forever & great catching up.

Something I caught that I didn't remember but people always talk about how the IS didn't show Advanced Weaponry in these books till after the Dragoons conference & the Tech Revival was a retcon.

Shin Yodama has a "custom" mech in his 2nd battle it appears.
After losing his basic PhoenixHawk-1 on Turtle Bay he gets another for Wolcot that is packing a Large Pulse & 2 Standard Mediums
No other details but that clearly isn't a 3K model, and the closest it could be is a 3S which they wouldn't have in the DC at that time, or so I'd assume.
Possible field refit of LL+2MG for LPL, IDK.

I should really post that in the Never Seen thread, lol.


Another thing that hit me was that the Clans were supposed to only go back home with the Bloodnamed while leaving most of the Front Line troops behind to garrison the OZ.
BUT, we do see Ranna, Carew, & Vlad travel back to Strana Mechty, so clearly SOME of the Un-Bloods went home.
Not sure why that didn't hit me before.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #136 on: 30 October 2024, 18:11:57 »

Another thing that hit me was that the Clans were supposed to only go back home with the Bloodnamed while leaving most of the Front Line troops behind to garrison the OZ.
BUT, we do see Ranna, Carew, & Vlad travel back to Strana Mechty, so clearly SOME of the Un-Bloods went home.
Not sure why that didn't hit me before.

I believe the intent is that there were many bloodname trials planned due to losses on campaign
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« Reply #137 on: 30 October 2024, 18:41:09 »
I believe the intent is that there were many bloodname trials planned due to losses on campaign

Yeah, maybe it was 25-ish Bloodnamed + 25-ish Aides/Aspirants.
Doesn't account for the whole Grand Melee factor, but, I'd image you didn't have THAT many trials going on.
We know Ward hadn't lost anyone yet.
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Chapter 14

DropShip Lair, zenith Jump Point
Unknown system, Deep Periphery
2 February 3051


The three weeks since Victor’s adoption ceremony had been incredibly busy. To start with, wherever the fleet was going, they were going fast. The Wolves were traveling by command circuit, and Ulric’s DropShip at least was Jumping twice a day most days. Some of the Jumps were not accompanied by the DropShip detaching and re-attaching, which meant that the Clans could somehow store an extra Jump charge; Victor tried to remember if the Star League had had that capability but could not.

And besides that, the adoptee’s education as a Warrior had begun. Evantha Fetladral and Rotheran had apparently taken on an obligation to see him educated in matters relating to ground and sky when they had spoken for him, and both were taking their responsibilities very seriously.

Rotheran, on one of the 279th’s DropShips, was not able to instruct him in person and so entertained herself by assigning him coursework in orbital mechanics and meteorology. He thought longingly of Renny Sanderlin, his old roommate at the Nagelring who had helped him with astrophysics at the Academy.

Evantha Fetladral, however, was a member of the Golden Keshik and traveled on Ulric’s personal Overlord. Which meant daily sparring sessions.

This is not going well, Victor thought as he was slammed to the ground once again. At the Nagelring, he had done quite well in Kampfsport und Selbstverteidigung, taking extra classes in Aikido and other forms intended to help redirect an opponent’s own force to compensate for his smaller stature.

But a hip throw didn’t work all that well against someone three times your weight, and it was very hard to joint-lock someone half again as tall as you. And there was the Elemental’s sheer strength, which allowed her to simply power through even the techniques that Victor had had some success with against all 195 centimeters and 110 kilos of Wilhelm Garrett, the largest cadet in his class. For example, a desperate attempt to break her knee with a direct kick had apparently done more damage to his foot than to her knee.

His only real success in three weeks had come from getting onto her back, a trick he’d managed twice. Of those, he’d almost managed to choke her out once, but she had pulled his leg out of the socket the second time he had tried it.

“Victor, you are well, quiaff?” asked Evantha after he didn’t get up for several moments.

Aff,” he replied with a grunt as he levered himself off the ground and immediately threw his body into a lunge at the larger woman. Maybe if I get inside her guard quick enough, I’ll have half a chance.

As he lunged, he held his right hand in front of him, fist hard and pointed at the solar plexus. His blow hit with the full force of his body behind it, and he heard Evantha’s grunt as the air was knocked out of her lungs. He thought that he may have also heard something pop inside her chest, but that was probably wishful thinking.

However, Victor was sorely mistaken if thought that that was going to grant him victory. His opponent immediately grabbed him in a bear hug and began squeezing him hard to her chest in an act that must have been incredibly painful if he had managed to pop a rib, and would still have been very uncomfortable if he had not.

Without anywhere to tap to indicate surrender, Victor gasped out, “Concede,” despite having almost all of the air forced out of his lungs as he was crushed against Evantha’s chest.

He was immediately released and barely caught himself as he was dropped down. His partner was red in the face and breathing raggedly, but was smiling.

“Well done, Victor Wolf! I did not expect you to attack without preamble, which was my mistake. You have been learning quickly.”

“I have had an excellent teacher,” he replied. After a moment, he added, “Also, pain is a powerful motivator.”

“So it is,” mused Evantha. She then rolled her shoulders back, wincing. “Still, it is also there to teach us our limits. I would continue sparring with you, to show that very few injuries need be debilitating, but I may be called upon to fight a real battle soon, and I do not wish to risk injuring myself further. Shall we go shower, quiaff?”

Victor blushed, but nodded assent. After almost a year, he had become accustomed to the Clan practice of universal coed showers, but still was not entirely comfortable with it. When they had first been taken bondsmen, the Lyrans had attempted to shower in shifts by gender, but highly irregular schedules had quickly ended that; at 0200 or after a 30 hour shift, no one cared about nudity in front of anyone.

Evantha grabbed a towel from a box near the gymnasium’s door and threw it to Victor, who used it to wipe off the worst of his sweat before discarding it as he left the room. As they walked to the showers, the two reminisced about past education they had received in fighting. The infantrywoman evinced great interest in Victor’s description of the multiple different styles the cadets had been exposed to at the Nagelring, and for his part, Victor was horrified by Evantha’s description of 7 year olds regularly being hospitalized during training.

The more he heard about sibko education, the less he liked it. The results were hard to argue with, but he wondered how much of that was the brutal training, and how much was simply the highly selective process, graduating 5% or fewer of each class. There was also the Eugenics Program to consider, and while Victor had been incredibly skeptical about forcing human evolution in a dozen generations, it only took one look at his sparring companion to show the effectiveness of its results.

Later, as Victor stood under the shower, letting the hot water flow over his bruises while staring hard at the floor, he saw an enormous pair of feet walk up to him, accompanied a moment later by several others. Raising his gaze, he was confronted with five Elementals. At their front stood a woman whose left arm and shoulder were covered in horrible burn scars that crawled up her neck and stopped just under her chin. Victor stared at the scars until he realized how rude it was, then switched his gaze to the center of her chest, where he quickly became embarrassed when he realized he was now staring at her breasts.

Desperately, he raised his eyes to fix on the woman’s face to find her looking somber, though with a twinkle in her eye that might have been amusement.

“Greetings, Victor Wolf.”

“Uh, greetings,” he replied, trying to place her.

He was just about to ask how he knew her when she continued, “I suppose you do not recognize me out of my armor. I am Jenno Fetladral, commander of Point Second, Charlie Star, of the Golden Keshik. These are Warriors Alice, Robert, Ali, and Lu.” She indicated each of the four behind her in turn.

“Honored to meet you all,” Victor said, then realized that he was supposed to know them and tried to backtrack, “That is, I am honored to meet you again.”

Jenno smiled slightly. “It is alright that you do not remember us; as I said, we were in armor and you were busy when last you saw us, by the door to the bridge of the Dire Wolf.”

And now the newly-minted Warrior began to panic, for he had been a mere bondsman last month when he had taken command of the Point that stood in front of him.

“We are here to tell you that whatever obligation you may have for your actions there,” she continued, alluding to the highly illegal orders he had issued, “You bear no debt of honor to us.”

The surprise and relief must have shown on his face, because she explained, “What you did was incorrect by the laws of the Clan, but sometimes honor and duty require that you bend the laws slightly. When you arrived, we and the Jaguars were at loggerheads, arguing over how to proceed. It is very unlikely that the situation would have resolved in time to act. You forced us into action and led to the saving of the lives of 8 Warriors and 3 Civilians, not least of them the Khan of Clan Wolf. Our gratitude to you outweighs any insult.” The other four members of the Point nodded agreement.

While Victor struggled to figure out the correct response, she added with a grin, “And besides, you will be of higher rank than us soon enough, quiaff? So your sin is simply a misstep in timing more than anything else.”

Victor suddenly remembered that he was standing by Evantha, who was currently of higher rank than the men and women arrayed in front of him, and was in fact their commanding officer. He looked at her, hoping for some clue as to the correct course of action, but she simply stared back impassively. Then he remembered that she was naked, and he blushed again, any hint of a response he might have been formulating rushing out of his mind.

“Uh, thank you,” he finally stammered out. “I am honored by your forgiveness. Or, uh, your not needing forgiveness?”

Picking up on his discomfort, Jenno took pity on him and said, “No, we thank you for saving our Khan, and our honor with him. One day, I will tell others that my Point were the first Warriors to serve under your command.”

And with that, she nodded at her Star Commander, and the five of them walked to the other side of the shower room.

After they left, he turned to Evantha and asked, “I apologize, but could you explain what just happened?”

“I feel that it was fairly clear,” she responded. “Normally, a bondsman giving commands to a Warrior would be a great insult, and you would owe a debt of honor to the Warrior you had insulted as well as to your bondholder. Jenno’s Point have declared that you hold no such debt to them. As I believe that you have already resolved your debt to Star Captain Kerensky, your only obligation remains to the Smoke Jaguar Elementals.”

Lines appeared between her eyes. “I doubt that that one will be so easy to resolve, especially since I have heard that Point Commander Ezriel was harshly punished for his actions. He will likely seek someone to blame. Were I you, I would redouble my efforts to learn how to fight Elementals; you may need those skills sooner rather than later.”



It was a thoughtful Victor Wolf that encountered Katya Kerensky at the door to his quarters. Though she was a member of the 279th and thus technically quartered aboard the DropShip Golden Bow, her status as the Khan’s protégé meant that she was currently sharing his quarters so as to always be readily at-hand. Which meant that, on occasion, Victor was also sharing the Khan’s quarters, as early on it had been discovered that the Khan’s full-sized bed was much easier to maneuver in - also, in transpired that Ulric Kerensky was far less likely to walk in unannounced than Natasha Kerensky (she and Victor had worked out a system involving tacking a sock to the archway of the door, but the septuagenarian seemed to have difficulty seeing it more often than not).

Unfortunately, Katya’s appearance in a formal uniform suggested that, while Ulric’s quarters lay in the near future, the resulting events would not be especially enjoyable.

Still, Victor greeted his lover with a kiss, which she returned after a moment. For as casually as they consider sex, they are very strange about public displays of affection. It was not the first time he had had such a thought, and it was one of the few contexts where he continued to think of the Clanners in terms of “us and them”.

After he pulled away, Katya said without preamble, “You must come with me.”

“And hello to you, too,” he replied with a smile. When the smile failed to be replicated on his counterpart’s face, he immediately sobered and asked, “I shall change into my dress uniform as well, quiaff?”

Neg,” she said, shaking her head. “It would be good, but speed is more important now.” She beckoned to him, and the two began walking down the corridor.

As they walked, Victor slipped his hand into hers. She blushed as always, but then began to explain by way of distraction.

“You are aware that we are currently on the JumpShip Timber Wolf, quiaff?”

Aff,” Victor responded, “We transferred over this morning.”

“Yes. Well, you should know that we are approaching the Homeworlds, and that the Timber Wolf brought with it a number of important people, with whom the Khan and I have been meeting all morning. We are going now to meet with Cyrilla Ward, who is leader of Bloodhouse Ward.”

“What does it mean for someone to be the leader of a Bloodhouse?” asked Victor, who had been learning about Bloodnames but had not yet heard about their leadership.

“She is the most senior member of the House. Noting also that House Ward are one of the most important Bloodhouses in the Clan, this means that Cyrilla Ward is very influential in the Clan.” She paused, then added, “She is also an ardent Warden.”

“...Which makes her one of Ulric’s most important allies.” finished Victor.

“Precisely.”

“Then why do you look so nervous?”

Katya hesitated, then said, somewhat haltingly, “An important ally is not necessarily a close one. And the Khan’s actions have not necessarily been pleasing to all.”

They were silent for a moment before something occurred to Victor, “Wait, you said that Cyrilla is in charge of House Ward. But Galaxy Commander Conal is a Ward, quiaff?”

Aff,” she agreed, “He is indeed. But while the leader of a Bloodhouse may have great influence over its members, she is not some feudal lord. Every Warrior is permitted to hold their own opinions, so long as they do not harm the Clan.”

“So what does it mean to be leader of a Bloodhouse?”

Katya began to answer, but as they came down the hall, they heard Natasha Kerensky say in a loud voice, “...I’d have long since stopped lying and fighting altogether!” and then two women laughing.

A moment later saw Victor and Katya at an open door that led to a small room holding half a dozen chairs, two of which were occupied by Natasha Kerensky and an elderly but vital-looking woman who was presumably Cyrilla Ward.

As Cyrilla shifted her gaze towards the pair of youngsters, Natasha turned in her chair to look, and waved them in. Victor looked at Katya - it did not seem to be Natasha's room - but the Star Captain entered, and so he followed.

The Black Widow made the introductions. First, she indicated Katya, “Ril, this is Katya Kerensky, Ulric’s pet ristar.”

The object of the statement bristled, until Cyrilla said, “I have had the honor of previously meeting the Star Captain,” which seemed to calm her.

Natasha then went on, “And this is Victor Wolf.” She waved her hand in a vaguely correct direction.

Now, Cyrilla looked very interested, pinning him with a steely blue gaze. “This is…?” she began, drawing the two words out like a question.

Natasha nodded.

“You have caused quite some commotion; let us see if you are worth the trouble. What do you think, child?”

It was clear that she had addressed him, but Victor did not know how to answer. He suppressed his first instinct, of humility, having noticed that the Clanners did not seem to value it very highly. He decided to hedge. “It is not my place to say, House Leader.”

Cyrilla barked a laugh, and looked at her old friend, “And what do you say, Tasha? That is, if it is your place to say.”

“I always say, whether or not it’s my place to,” she replied in a tone that was not quite a joke.

Natasha turned her gaze on Victor, tilting her head like a dog - or a wolf - encountering something new. “He’s a good kid,” she said at length. “Raised well. He was actually one of the first kids to run through our sibkos, though he didn’t stay for the full program.”

“Oh?” asked Cyrilla.

“Yeah. For some reason, folks were a little wary about us taking all of these orphans and educating them. They seemed to be afraid that we were trying to raise an army of child supersoldiers.” She and Cyrilla both laughed before she continued, “So his mom gave him over to us for a bit. It helped smooth some ruffled feathers.”

“His mother is a diplomat?”

“A damn good one. And smart as a whip. But she was a soldier too; she spent a little time commanding a platoon of jump infantry, and then a company. She never saw real combat, but I’ve seen BattleROMs of her planning ambushes and scurrying up a Mech’s legs in exercises. Infantry are shockingly fragile outside of Battle Armor, but I would not have wanted to face Melissa Steiner on the field.”

It was Cyrilla’s turn to look at Victor appraisingly. “And his father?”

“The Fox!” Natasha exclaimed. “How to describe him? Brilliant, crazy, one of the best commanders in the Inner Sphere at every level, and one of the best MechWarriors besides. On top of that, he founded the best technical university in the Inner Sphere and negotiated an alliance that might have ended the Succession Wars in two generations if other events had not interrupted.” Her tone left no doubt as to the other events in question.

After a brief pause, she added, “Oh, and the kid was top of his class at the Nagelring.”

“The Nagelring?” the house leader mused before assuming an expression of intense thought. She turned to Victor and asked him, “Before you were Victor Wolf, you were Victor Steiner, quiaff?”

“Victor Steiner-Davion,” he corrected.

“Your mother was the Steiner.” It was a statement, not a question.

Aff,” he responded, feeling slightly confused.

She looked back at her old friend and spoke slowly, “You know, Ulric has already sent a message along to Homer.”

Natasha looked perplexed, “Homer? Why Hom - “ she cut off mid-sentence, shut her mouth and then laughed, saying, “Ulric, you magnificent bastard.”

She suddenly wore a predatory smile, and asked Cyrilla, “How many people know?”

But before Cyrilla could answer, a polite knock came at the door, and at Cyrilla’s “Come in!”, Khan Ulric Kerensky entered the room.

Cyrilla immediately stood, and Katya stiffened to attention. Victor took his example from her, even though he noticed that Natasha continued to lounge in her seat.

As Ulric waved the others to ease, she said, “Speak of the devil.”

“And he shall appear,” completed the putative Satan. “Should I feel my ears burning?”

“Natasha was admiring your foresight in sending word to Homer,” said Cyrilla as she waved Ulric into one of the chairs. Katya and Victor remained standing.

“Yes,” said the Khan, “I was rather proud of myself for that.”

Victor burned with curiosity. Who is Homer, and why would Ulric contact him? What does that have to do with my parents? Or is it just my mother?

But everyone else in the room seemed to understand what was going on, even Katya: and so he held his tongue.

“So,” said the Khan, giving Cyrilla his full attention,  “What is the situation?”

She heaved a great sigh. “Where to begin?”

“Let us begin with Clan Wolf,” he replied.

“You know as well as I do, I suspect,” she said. “The lion’s share of the Bloodnamed went with you. We were left with the elderly, the dregs, and those who possessed both too much ambition and yet not enough.”

Ulric nodded, but gestured at her to continue, and so she did.

“The Crusaders will try to censure you, but they will fail; after all, have you not led the Wolf to greater success than any other Clan? The Wardens by contrast…many understand why you have acted as you did, myself included. But many are not pleased with the…enthusiasm with which you acted. Also including myself.”

He ignored her statement of disapproval and changed the subject, asking “And the boy?”

Cyrilla shrugged, “What grounds do they have? You cannot Refuse an adoption. The Clan Council may technically oppose making a warrior abtakha, but I doubt if this has been done in the past century or longer.”

“Anything else?”

She shrugged again. “Not really. The minor Houses are clamoring to somehow expand the Invasion, but they have no answer as to how. The new leader of House Radick is a Crusader, but then so was the old one.”

“And the Grand Council?”

“It depends a great deal on who they pick as ilKhan, as you well know.” She paused for a long moment before continuing, “The new lines are not Warden and Crusader, they are those Clans chosen to invade and those left behind. The Adders will submit a proposal to include all Clans when we return, as they did the first time.”

Ulric stroked his chin, “And do you think that it will pass?”

“It is hard to say; the so-called Home Clans are jealous.

“Obviously we would oppose such, alongside the Jaguars, Falcons, and Bears. Activating the reserve Clans would get the Vipers and Cats on-side. The Sharks and Ravens have been profiting from the Invasion as it is, but the Sharks have first priority if the Invasion is expanded, and the Ravens know that they have no chance of being selected for anything less than a full activation of all Clans.”

“So that is 12 votes against any expansion, 2 votes against total expansion, and 2 votes against partial expansion, quiaff?”

Aff, though the Ravens may vote against full expansion as well, if they decide that they would rather pick at our carrion than expend themselves. On the other side, we know that the Adders will vote for a full expansion and will likely oppose a partial expansion. The Spirits will also almost certainly vote against partial expansion but for a full expansion.”

It dawned on Victor that Ulric and Cyrilla were discussing the possibility of not only resuming the Invasion, but expanding it. The thought filled Victor with dread: if four Clans had already wrought so much damage, how much could seventeen do? He wondered if perhaps so many Clans invading would cause them to start tripping over each other more often, given that the frontage against Inner Sphere forces would be so reduced - and how would that work with the strike towards Terra? Would the four Clans that already had extensive Inner Sphere holdings be forced to allow new Clans to stage from them, or even to hand some of them over? If that were the case, would the powers of the Inner Sphere somehow be able to play the Clans against each other?

That last seemed like a hopeless pipe-dream: it was true that Ulric Kerensky had shown on several occasions that Clanners had buttons that could be pushed, but he suspected that even with the advice of Wolf’s Dragoons, it would be some time before anyone in the Inner Sphere understood the Clans well enough to manipulate them - time that they almost certainly did not have. Well, that they presumably did not have; to be honest, Victor had no idea how long it would take the Grand Council to elect a new ilKhan and renew the Invasion.

He knew that he should be paying attention, trying to understand the lay of the land in the Kerensky Cluster, but he could not focus, taking in only the odd snippet, like the fact that the Scorpions might be swayed by some sort of visions or that the Fire Mandrills apparently had their own incredibly complicated process for decision-making that was completely opaque to outsiders.

Three tones sounded, interrupting Victor’s train of thought.

Ulric clapped his hands together and rose, apparently signaling an end to the meeting. Cyrilla Ward rose with him, and Natasha Kerensky joined as well after waiting long enough to make it clear she was standing out of practicality and not respect.

“Let us go to a viewing gallery,” he said, putting actions to words and leading the party through the corridors. As they walked, Victor tried very hard to see if he could determine any major differences between the halls of the JumpShip and of the WarShip he had spent most of the Invasion on, but the only thing he really noticed was the whispers and glances that they left in their wake. Feeling somewhat self-conscious, he tried to watch the watchers, and decided that no one was watching him - rather, it was the Black Widow that held the crew’s attention.

Between this and the reaction at my Adoption ceremony, I guess Natasha Kerensky’s just as famous here as in the Inner Sphere.

The thought initially struck Victor as odd, but upon reflection he realized that there was no valid reason he could think of that she should not be. Certainly, it made sense that a warrior society would raise up exceptional warriors as their celebrities, and Natasha Kerensky was nothing if not an exceptional warrior.

It did, however, raise the question of exactly how much the Dragoons had communicated with the Clan Homeworlds during their time in the Inner Sphere. A comment that Natasha had made to Katya (“I hear that you’re the second-youngest Warrior ever to get a Bloodname. Remember who the first youngest was.”) had led to some gentle inquiries and he had come to understand that Natasha had been a legend in her time before heading off to the Inner Sphere. But that had been half a century before, and given the startling short lives of Clan Warriors it seemed unlikely to him that her fame was built solely on less than a decade’s worth of service a literal lifetime ago.

He filed it away as another topic for Katya to defer to Ulric about, Ulric to deflect away, and Natasha to either lie about or plain refuse to answer, as was so often the case with his questions about the Dragoons.

They arrived at the gallery, and the three grown-ups made meaningless small talk, mostly updating Natasha on major changes since she’d left. Victor kept his attention on the conversation, continuing to learn whatever he could about the Clans and their culture, but most of it was either things he already knew (like the fact that the 328th still did not like their new commander) or things that made absolutely no sense to him (like the fact that the Hellions had managed to anger every single Clan in what Cyrilla described as a “temper tantrum”).

Soon enough, the final tones of imminent Jump sounded, and then the usual something happened and the JumpShip was somewhere else.

A crowded somewhere else, it turned out. From the gallery window, Victor could see a large space station and what looked like well over two dozen JumpShips, making this quite a busy system.

“Welcome,” said Ulric Kerensky, “To the Land of Dreams. Welcome to Strana Mechty.”

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One of the things that most annoyed me about Blood of Kerensky was Phelan going toe-to-toe with Elementals and winning. Anyone who knows anything about personal combat can tell you that in a fight, size matters a lot. I'd put odds on someone Evantha-sized over someone Phelan-sized every time, even if the Elemental wasn't trained from birth in personal combat. For someone normal-sized who had some personal combat training but not a huge amount, it would have been a joke. The size ratios basically work out to an average adult fighting a 10 year old. For Evantha vs Victor, it's more like an 8 year old. Here, Victor gets a lucky shot in...and finds that a lucky shot isn't the same as winning.

Aside from that...

Cyrilla Ward is a very important supporting character, and she serves that purpose here even without the House Ward connection.

Victor sees a bit more of the political situation among the Clans. Now is a very important time in Clan politics, when the factions are completely reorganizing and realigning. It's going to take a bit to get there, but Victor is ultimately going to have much more to say about Clan politics than Phelan did.

As for Homer, well...

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #139 on: 31 October 2024, 23:37:11 »
how much could seventeen do? 

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One of the things that most annoyed me about Blood of Kerensky was Phelan going toe-to-toe with Elementals and winning. Anyone who knows anything about personal combat can tell you that in a fight, size matters a lot. I'd put odds on someone Evantha-sized over someone Phelan-sized every time, even if the Elemental wasn't trained from birth in personal combat. For someone normal-sized who had some personal combat training but not a huge amount, it would have been a joke. The size ratios basically work out to an average adult fighting a 10 year old. For Evantha vs Victor, it's more like an 8 year old. Here, Victor gets a lucky shot in...and finds that a lucky shot isn't the same as winning.

1.  I like a lot of the "behind the scenes" discussions your showing that were not in the original novels, topics that clearly had to happen but we just didn't see them.

2.  Minor point of Order, but, Phelan didn't actually know there were 17 clans.
He only discovers that on Strana Mechty when he's in the grand council the first time & notices 6 empty seats & is shocked by the idea of a society kill off 3 of their own.
Your writing has made me go reread the trilogy & I just read that scene a couple days ago.

3.  Tangent, but, one of the other things I had forgotten.  The entire first book, no one is introduced w/ their bloodname.
The whole time Phelan is a bondsman its Khan Ulric, or Colonel Lara, but no BloodNames mentioned.
Intentionally hiding things like the Kerensky connection.  I'd totally forgotten about that.

4.  Phelan really didn't get into many fights with elementals early on.
I mean, he got very lucky with Evantha on Rasalhague.
The one on the Lacrosse fields that he "laid out" was using a lacrosse stick like a pike, when they guy came barreling to tackle him from behind.
Evantha tossed him around in training sessions for 2 hours a day for weeks on end before he'd finally get lucky & trip her up once in a blue moon.
Morgan Kell is also a bear of a man IIRC.  Tall & well built.  His MW1E RPG stats gave him like a 12/12 in Bod/Str or some high stat IIRC.
So I assume Phelan is decent build even if Natasha refers to him as Lean & Rugged.  Or something like that.   I just reread in the last week.

5.  Glad to see they are reaching out to Homer.  A little heads up & I'm sure the Khans will be watching him closely in the that Grand Council session.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #140 on: 01 November 2024, 02:11:13 »
The Cobras will get a high price for letting the Wolves gain access to one of their bloodnames. It looks like in this one that there is a better than even money chance that at least one other Clan joins then before, not counting the reserve and support clans.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #141 on: 01 November 2024, 10:28:22 »
Looks like Victor WILL get a chance to compete for the Steiner bloodname.

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #142 on: 01 November 2024, 13:23:37 »
The Cobras will get a high price for letting the Wolves gain access to one of their bloodnames.
How do they "set a price"?
Either someone dies or they don't.
All they can try to do is claim that he's NOT related but someone said above that we already know he is.  (I question that)
I would assume that the Cobras have enough history to also know that their Founder is also from the Steiner royal line.
  (So there is a connection but its Uncle from what I can see, not Mother/Father.


1.  The hurdles I saw were was Steiner Bloodname & Steiner Royalty the same line?
 (Apparently it is, someone said it above, though I don't see how, unless he left kids behind, he's not a direct descendant of the Founder, it would have been a many greats half-uncle to him.)

2.  Having someone actually die when the Ward's who were in major combat hadn't lost anyone.

3.  Having someone favor him enough to designate him as their nominee, or at least get the House Leader's attention   (Or he's stuck facing the grand melee)

4.  I don't really consider finding a "Cyrilla-clone" to be very realistic.
   Someone that old who never died in combat, and also didn't have a lot of luck w/ her Sibko's so that none of her offspring were "famous".
   Someone who is VERY supportive of Ulric/Warden mission & is willing to commit suicide & lose her own support on the chance of the new blood winning the name & extending that support to the next generation.


I have not found any instances of #2 happening,  no Steiners among the invader clans.
The Bold Part of #3 is hands down the most likely scenario I can see. 
Individuals might not favor him but Din Steiner being Khan, and possibly House Leader? 
I think that would be enough for one of the extra 6-7 council nominations.
Again assuming they even let a non-descendant participate?


I really think it will come down to a bit of politics.
Do the Cobras "WANT" to add some "new blood" to the Gene Pool? 
Even if he isn't a direct descendant they might decide to make an exception internally just to be able to say that House Royalty is now a member of the Clans.
As a Warden Clan they might think that is a way to oppose the Crusader Agenda, even from the Home Clans.

Assuming the name issue is resolved, for this story, the most logical is to "Insert Name XYZ" of some Steiner that was captured by an invading clan 5-10 years ago & then dies in Wave-5.  Something big........ /cough Luthien-Tukayyid.   

It might affect the timeline a small amount as I mentioned above, but at least it wouldn't be waiting for the chaos of the 60's for him to get a chance at a trial.

The bigger hurdle is any Trial will have to wait till well after Tukayyid to start since if there is a death as Early as Luthien which would match up to Cyrilla's death, they still have no way to keep shuttling him back/forth to the homeworlds nor do I think a homeworlds trial is going to shuttle everyone to the OZ just for VSD to participate.

So the idea of him being crowned SaKhan just hours after Tukayyid ends isn't very likely.
At best you'd be talking bloodnamed w/in a few months but by then there is a new Khan which leaves VSD a Star Commander?

And that is the real catch w/ the swap from Phelan to VSD, some things, just aren't going to match up really, Phelan was "set up to win" by the Author w/ his heritage & who captured him.  VSD doesn't have that same set up.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #143 on: 24 November 2024, 00:18:46 »
Chapter 15

Clan Council Chamber, Hall of the Wolves
Strana Mechty, Kerensky Cluster
5 February 3051


The Wolf Clan Council Chamber reminded Victor of nothing so much as the small theater at Tharkad University dedicated to experimental and avant garde works. It was an amphitheater in the Ancient Greek style, a full circle of seating arrayed around a central stage in several rising tiers. The central area was about 10 meters in diameter and the central two-thirds or so was occupied by a slightly raised platform that slowly rotated to ensure that every audience member could eventually see every angle. Victor thought the setup strange and inefficient, an unlikely show of bizarre vanity considering that an array of cameras and screens ensured that everyone could see everything from every angle regardless…and they could easily just have built an ordinary “one-sided” theater instead. Still, this way made the height of your tier the only matter of position to jockey over, and  ensured that everyone could look the poor fools on the central stage in the eyes.

The bottom 10 tiers were occupied by smallish desks which, Victor had been told, would display each Council member’s vote by way of a colored light on the front. They were also equipped with several methods for the Council members to converse with each other about proceedings and directly ask questions of the presenters in real time without the need for anything as primitive as speaking up. The upper tiers, meant for observers, were boring in contrast, merely holding comfortable-looking seats that would not have been out of place at that same small University theater. The upper levels were completely packed, with people standing in the aisles and against the back walls; the lower levels were mostly full, but had empty seats distributed apparently at random.

The central stage held a small wooden witness box opposite three similar boxes, Ulric and his assistant Khan Garth Radick flanked an unremarkable man in his middle age that Victor had been told was Daniel Vickers, the Clan’s Loremaster; this was a position apparently somewhere between Minister of the Interior and Prince’s Champion.

As he walked up to the central platform, the young Wolf’s eyes sought out Katya among the crowd. Instead, he almost instantly found Natasha Kerensky, sticking out with her red hair and the leather jacket she was wearing over a black shirt emblazoned with her infamous red hourglass. Still, the Black Widow gave him an encouraging smile, and he decided that it would not be wise to pause before ascending.

After Victor stepped onto the platform, a Warrior, young and stony-faced, came to him holding a plaque emblazoned with the Wolf Clan insignia above the Cameron Star of the Star League. One hand on his heart and the other on the plaque, Victor swore, “On the honor of the Wolf Clan to tell the entire truth and not to rest until Justice is done in this matter.” He noted that unlike the oaths he was familiar with before giving testimony, this one omitted a promise not to lie. Presumably such an action would be below the honor of any Warrior, and no oath need be sworn to that effect.

The Loremaster indicated for Victor to take his seat and waited for him to seat himself before beginning, “Victor Wolf, you have sworn to give full and complete testimony in the matter we are discussing.” He gave a smile that Victor took to be encouraging and continued, “Given your status as only newly adopted to our Clan and, indeed, the Clans as a whole, you are invited - encouraged, even! - to ask for clarification about any part of these proceedings you do not fully comprehend. You understand, quiaff?”

Aff,” said Victor.

“Then we will begin discussion. Victor Wolf, be aware that the Clan Council is sitting to discuss the matter of your Adoption into the Clan.” said Daniel Vickers, his voice taking on a formal tone as he spoke, “While it is unusual for the Council to take up such a matter, the circumstances of your adoption are also unusual. Do you have any questions?”

Neg.”

“Very well. Carol?” This last was said to a woman in her early thirties standing beside the Loremaster and Khans.

Pretty - how else? - she wore a Star Colonel’s insignia on her duty uniform. Her red hair partially obscured a headset that Katya had told Victor would allow her to relay questions on behalf of any of the Council members. She gave him a friendly smile, which Victor took to be insincere: he had been briefed before this meeting on which options were likely for his Inquisitor, and this woman was not a friend.

"I am Carol Leroux,” she said, “And I will serve as the Inquisitor in this investigation. Were you a full-fledged warrior, you would have an Advocate, but you are not. You must understand that it is necessary for me to take the position of 'Devil's advocate', asking questions on behalf of all sides, serving only to discover the truth of the matter. In addition to asking my own questions," she paused to touch her headset, "I will relay questions from members of the Council. Please take as much time as you need to answer them."

“Thank you, Star Colonel.”

“You are very welcome. Now, please, Victor Wolf, tell us the name under which you were known before your Adoption into Clan Wolf.”

“Victor Ian Steiner-Davion.”

She opened her mouth to speak and then shut it. She held her hand to her ear - doubtlessly listening to someone on her headset, and her face suddenly took on a surprising intensity as she asked, “Your mother was Melissa Steiner, Archon of the Lyran Commonwealth, quiaff?”

Aff,” Victor responded. My mother again. What is going on? He remembered that the Clans despised the “Vulture Lords” of the Successor States, but this did not seem to be about that.

“Your mother was a direct descendent of Silvia Steiner, who was daughter of Paul Steiner, quiaff?”

Aff,” he responded again after a moment’s consideration of the Steiner family tree. He was growing more confused.

She touched her earpiece again, apparently listening to a follow-up. Whatever it was, she clearly did not like it, since she assumed an air of martyrdom as she stated, “Paul Steiner also had a son Kailen, to whom Silvia was sister.” It was not a question.

Kailen Steiner? Victor knew the name, but couldn’t immediately place it on the family tree. Thinking through it, and knowing where in the tree the man ought to lie, Victor quickly placed him: Paul Steiner’s bastard son, born to an officer on his staff.

But while Victor could not think of anything particularly significant about the man, the Wolves apparently could, and the room erupted into a loud murmur. Victor sought Natasha’s face, and saw her addressing a small crowd around her, looking like a child who had just been promised unlimited ice cream.

The Loremaster shouted, “Silence! We will have order in this room. The Clan Council sits here today, not an assessment for a sibko.” In response, the murmuring stopped immediately.

Carol Leroux looked a bit as though she had bitten into a lemon, but continued her questions, “As his bondsman, what sort of tasks did you perform for Khan Ulric Kerensky?”

“My apologies, Star Colonel,” said Victor, “But I must correct you. I was bondsman to Star Captain Katya Kerensky, not Khan Ulric.”

A flash of annoyance crossed her face. “But the Khan consulted with you extensively?”

“The Khan sometimes asked me questions; I do not think I would say that he consulted with me per se.”

“You were not a close advisor of his, quineg?”
Neg,” said Victor, “I consider my position to have been more that of a researcher. I scoured various materials in order to help the Khan and his officers plan assaults on a few worlds.”

Her eyes widened in what he took to be mock surprise. “So the Khan did not consult with you exclusively before the assault on Rasalhague, quiaff?”

Neg,” said Victor vehemently. “I do not recall meeting with the Khan alone a single time. I met with him only in the company of Star Captain Kerensky, and often Star Colonel Ward or Star Colonel Carns was present as well; occasionally both.”

“These are Lara Ward and Katya Kerensky of the 279th Battle Cluster, and Jera Carns of the 4th Wolf Guard, quiaff?” she clarified.

Victor felt embarrassed - considering how Bloodnames worked, of course referring to officers by their surnames was all but worthless.
“Yes, er, aff,” he responded, somewhat disconcerted by his mistake.

“Thank you,” she said somewhat icily, “I ask that you attempt to be more complete in your answers in the future.”

“Yes, sir. My apologies.”

She shook her head slightly, as if to cast off the apologies, and suddenly changed tack. “Victor Wolf, did you, then a bondsman, not challenge a member of the Warrior Caste to a duel at the Khan’s command?”

Now it was Victor’s turn to shake his head, “I would not say that I performed that action at his command.”

She spoke with obviously feigned casualness, “Then would you mind explaining the events that led to the dezgra challenge?”

Victor had a feeling that he had just been insulted, but did not rise to the bait. “I was accompanying the Khan on an inspection of the world of Rasalhague after its conquest, alongside Lara Ward, my bondholder Katya Kerensky, and several other Warriors. We were approached by a local civilian whose home had been destroyed by the fighting. I believe that he intended to appeal to the Khan for aid, but before he could get very close, a MechWarrior of the Golden Keshik began to assault him.”

Knowing that this question would arise, he had thought long and hard on his explanation, and had come up with something that he thought would serve well.

“I wished to protect the man. And while total honesty compels me to admit that in the moment I thought mostly of the man’s personal welfare, I also had in mind the reputation of Clan Wolf among its newly-conquered civilians, as well as the future value that man might have had to the Clan.”

Carol Leroux flashed him a look that said, And if you expect me to believe that, why don’t you tell me about that JumpShip you have for sale?, but quickly schooled her face to an expression of neutral curiosity. “Please continue.”

“I asked the Khan to put an end to the assault for these reasons, and he responded that it was not his place to decide for any other Warrior how a civilian should address them, but that he invited me to seek a solution if I felt it necessary. As the Clans conveniently have a method to resolve a dispute of opinions, I challenged the Warrior - I believe his name was Vlad - to a Trial of Grievance.”

“So the Khan did not order you to make this challenge, quineg?”

Neg.”

“But he encouraged you to, quiaff?”

Victor swallowed. This was not a question he had been expecting, and he did not really know how to answer. Had Ulric encouraged the action? Not directly. But how had the Khan expected him to act? A challenge to a Trial certainly seemed the most likely way, short of sucker-punching the Warrior.

“Khan Ulric encouraged me to resolve the situation, but gave no detail as to how I might do so. I could not speculate as to what methods the Khan imagined I might use.”

She seemed unhappy with the answer, but proceeded, asking, “Were you aware that, as a bondsman, you had no standing to issue such a challenge?”

Victor equivocated, “I would not say that in that moment I knew for sure, but I certainly should have.” He paused to think before saying, “Though in retrospect, I do not know if I would have acted differently if I had taken the time to consider the matter.”

Carol Leroux looked incredulous, “You say that you may not have known the act to be dishonorable even as you admit that you should have, and then you further explain that you still would have knowingly dishonored yourself and Warrior Vlad if you had known?”

Aff. Well, perhaps.”

“What possible explanation could you have for these actions?”

And now Victor hit with the weapon he had been saving, “Sometimes, the honor of the Clan must lie above the honor of the individual.”

Running his eyes across the audience, Victor saw thoughtful expressions and more than a few nodding heads.

Garth Radick spoke, his soft voice fitting well with innocuous looks. “Excuse me, Loremaster. I do not understand what bearing these questions have on Victor Wolf’s worthiness as a member of our Clan. To be adopted to the Warrior caste, a bondsman must demonstrate that they possess the heart, mind, and soul of a Wolf. I submit that Victor’s research,” he emphasized the word, perhaps to show doubt that that was the extent of the former bondsman’s contribution, “And the victories it brought prove he has the mind of a Wolf. He has shown that he not only understands our ways, but also understands that service to the Clan is paramount to personal honor, and in so doing has shown the soul of a Wolf.”

He clasped his hands together over his slight paunch, “Please, Inquisitor, I beg that you seek the truth of whether or not he possesses the heart of a Wolf.”

Carol Leroux looked taken aback by the interruption, but quickly regained her bearings and said, “My apologies, saKhan, please excuse me.”

She then turned her gaze back to Victor, asking, “This was not the only time that you, then a bondsman, acted as if you were a Warrior, quineg?”

Neg. At the Battle of Radstadt, after the Dire Wolf was rammed, I issued orders to Warriors of the Golden Keshik, and of the ilKhan’s personal guard.”

Shaking her head, Leroux asked, “Given that by this point you must no doubt have learned the inappropriateness of such actions from a bondsman, I must ask why you undertook them regardless?”

Victor had rehearsed this next part, but he forgot his planned words in a sudden burst of anger, “I had to! Everyone was just standing around, shouting at some poor Technician while the Wolves and the Jaguars would not let the others be the first to act. Maybe it is from a lifetime being raised and taught to command, but in that moment I knew that action needed to be taken, and that no one else was going to do it. So yes, I gave commands to the Elementals. I had one open the door and I led them into the broken remains of the bridge, and we saved almost a dozen people, not least of them the Khan!”

All of the anxiety of waiting for the Jaguars to pass judgment came upon him, all of the frustration of being kept in the dark and Ulric’s little games and whatever the hell was going on with his mother, and be practically snarled, “Should you decide that these actions make me unworthy of being a Wolf, or a Warrior, or even that I deserve to be killed, I don’t care and would do everything the same again if given the choice! Actually, that’s a lie: I would have given more orders if it could have saved more lives!”

This outburst was met with a smattering of applause instead of the rebuke that Victor was expecting.

Garth waited for the applause to die down before standing to say, “Can there be any doubt, my trothkin, that this man possesses the heart of a Wolf? Who here would deny him entry to the Warrior Caste of Clan Wolf?”

As the saKhan sat, the Loremaster stood. "I call for the vote on whether or not Victor Wolf should be accorded the rights and duties of a Warrior of the Wolf Clan. As he has already been formally adopted into the Warrior caste, it would require two-thirds of the Clan Council to reject him."

He then smiled, “As you all might expect, the Cobras have expressed great interest in the pup should we reject him, and the Adders are considering whether they should snatch a graduate of the Nagelring from us regardless of how these events proceed. Please cast your votes.”

The minutes that followed were the longest in Victor’s life. He struggled to stop himself from staring around the chamber, trying to estimate the number of white, red, and black lights illuminating. Still, the vote did not take long, and soon enough the Loremaster was announcing, “The motion to deny Victor Wolf membership in the Warrior Caste fails. Congratulations, Victor, on the confirmation of your status. Now all that remains is for you to pass your Trial.”

He then opened the door to his booth, gesturing around him, “Thank you, trothkin, for your time and consideration of this most important of matters. The Council is adjourned.”

As the Wolves began to filter out of the chamber, Victor finally caught sight of Katya, who was fighting traffic to come down the stairs to the stage. Much to his disappointment, however, she did not even glance at him before going straight to Ulric, who was in tight conference with his saKhan and Loremaster.

Instead, Victor was ambushed from behind by Natasha Kerensky’s bearhug and Cyrilla Ward’s more measured verbal congratulations.

As he turned to face them, he saw that despite their celebratory actions, both seemed unexpectedly worried.

“What is the matter? I passed, quiaff?”

“Aff,” said Cyrilla, “But that was never in question.” She pointed at the screen.

Victor looked, 470 Aye, 351 Nay, 179 abstentations. “I do not quite understand,” he said slowly, “I won. And since it would have taken two thirds to kick me out, I seem to have won by a healthy margin, quiaff?”

Aff, Victor, aff,” said Cyrilla, “And that is no mean feat. But this was never about your Adoption.”

Victor nodded, remembering the early part of his interrogation. “This was intended to be an attack on Ulric.”

“It was,” agreed Natasha. “And we were able to spring it, mostly, but still got a couple toes caught. The saKhan was strangely cooperative, and we got Anton Fetladral to feed Leroux some questions that impressed, but they were also somewhat concerning. The nays and the abstentions together could easily see the Crusader agenda passed.”

Victor wanted to ask about what sort of Crusader agenda might be passed, but there were more important issues to discuss. “Concerning questions. Like the ones about my mother’s family.”

“Yes,” she admitted sheepishly, “Like those.”

“Would someone mind finally explaining what the hell is going on with my mother? You have all been mentioning her, and talking around her, and sending messages to Homer about her, whoever he is - “

“Where,” interrupted Cyrilla, somewhat dampening Victor’s head of steam.

“What?”

“Homer is a ‘where’, not a ‘who’,” said the older woman.

Now more curious than angry, Victor took the bait, “And where is Homer, then?”

“In the Kerensky Cluster,” Natasha said with a smirk, before Cyrilla continued for her, “Homer is the capital of Clan Cloud Cobra.”

“The Loremaster mentioned them,” said Victor, “Talking about Clans that might want me.”

“Yes,” confirmed Cyrilla.

“Would you mind telling me why Clan Cloud Cobra might be receiving messages from Ulric about my mother that would cause them to want me?” he asked, getting annoyed again.

“Because,” said Natasha gleefully, “Kailen Steiner joined the SLDF, and then he joined the Exodus. And then he joined the Second Exodus, and became a founding member of Clan Cloud Cobra.”

Victor thought he could see where this was going, but was still a little shocked when she finished, triumphantly, “And by our rules, even though you’re a filthy Spheroid freebirth, that makes you eligible for a Bloodname!”


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As with the Adoption ceremony, it's hard to recast some of these Council scenes in a way that maintains the structure without just replicating Stackpole. Somehow, posting a chapter that says "See Chapter XX of Blood Legacy" seems unsatisfying. I've done a couple now, I hope I did okay. Here, Victor has obviously acted a little differently than Phelan, so that's the difference. Also, while the saKhan is helpful here (he's ostensibly a Crusader), he did the same in BL, so go figure.

The line about other Clans wanting him is straight from BL, though it was different Clans.

For the Star Adders, I had this idea that the "Strategy Clan" would love a graduate of the Nagelring, which academy would have semi-mythical status as the alma mater of Aleksandr Kerensky.

Victor being eligible for the Steiner Bloodname is stretching things more than a little...but it strikes me as not all that much worse than what happened with Phelan. Phelan was descended from a child of Jal Ward; Victor is descended from a sibling of Kailen Steiner, but for the first generation of Bloodnames, siblings were also considered eligible. At least, that's what I remember, and it's too convenient to the plot to be otherwise.

Anyway, it's honestly more a question of politics than strict laws, anyway: if Bloodhouse Steiner decides that Victor is eligible, probably no one is going to object enough to Refuse the decision, and the Keepers are likely to want fresh blood with a proven combat track record.
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #144 on: 24 November 2024, 06:25:17 »
Victor is going to have to learn very fast, it is never what is done that is the issue, it is always who can be blamed.  Great story
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #145 on: 24 November 2024, 09:50:09 »
Well, obviously the Cloud Cobras would want another Steiner to add to their brood and the Star Adders would love a military strategist who graduated from the same Military Academy as Alexandr Kerensky. Question now is, if the Cloud Cobras allow it, will Victor be able to compete for a Steiner bloodname?

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #146 on: 25 November 2024, 01:49:25 »
I like more him proving he's a leader in very VSD ways. He puts the Clans in their place for what happened on Rasalhague and on the Dire Wolf. On both occasions he was a leader in the finest tradition of House Davion leading from the front despite his personal risk (not in battle but still a leaders choice) and then in the council he rams it down their throat (in very Steiner Scout Lance form)

Also VSD shows in this if you let him learn about you he'll find a way to defeat you (his entire storyline). They've let him in he understands them, he's actually now supremely dangerous for the Clans and for the Inner Sphere now
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #147 on: 26 November 2024, 13:49:29 »
He then smiled, “As you all might expect, the Cobras have expressed great interest in the pup should we reject him, and the Adders are considering whether they should snatch a graduate of the Nagelring from us regardless of how these events proceed. Please cast your votes.”

Victor thought he could see where this was going, but was still a little shocked when she finished, triumphantly, “And by our rules, even though you’re a filthy Spheroid freebirth, that makes you eligible for a Bloodname!”

For the Star Adders, I had this idea that the "Strategy Clan" would love a graduate of the Nagelring, which academy would have semi-mythical status as the alma mater of Aleksandr Kerensky.

1.  More Good Story, keep it up.

2.  Another option besides the Adders would have been the Scorpions being a Victor is well a living piece of history as a house lord & academy graduate.

3.  Yeah, he doesn't exactly qualify as a "descendant" but as you say, something like new genes from a Successor House lineage is liable to make a lot of people sit up & think about "bending" the rules a little.  Not to mention the 1st Gen issues.

4.  Natasha as always with the blunt semi-insulting speech, after a bear hug, lol.

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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #148 on: 28 November 2024, 14:35:00 »
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2.  Another option besides the Adders would have been the Scorpions being a Victor is well a living piece of history as a house lord & academy graduate.

Unlikely, given the debt of surkai that the Scorpions feel they owe to the Wolves would make them unlikely to feel themselves able to try and steal a piece of the Wolves' kill (though how deep it runs and exactly how submissive it makes the Scorpions to the Wolves varies by depiction...)
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Re: The Wolf Prince [Victor instead of Phelan]
« Reply #149 on: 05 December 2024, 20:13:50 »
Interlude VI

True to her father’s word, Katherine had found her weeks on Outreach to be incredibly educational.

To begin with, there was the promised continuation of her Academy curriculum, delivered by a series of private tutors. These were mostly Dragoon officers and her father’s staffers, but she also received lessons from Morgan Kell and from her father, and was more than a little surprised when her mother had personal taken charge of Katherine’s infantry tactics modules…as well as most of her physical training (“No one does PT better than the infantry! I’ll show you Mech jockeys how a real soldier moves her ass in the field.”)

But that was the least of it. More important was the education that the Dragoons were offering to all of those assembled: endless lectures on Clan culture, Clan history, Clan tactics, Clan technology. And of course, the exercises that were being delivered to all of the heirs as a group; ostensibly this was to ensure that every nation received equal treatment, but it was obvious that the Dragoons hoped to bind the next generation of the Inner Sphere’s leaders more tightly together.

Though these exercises were largely failing at their ulterior goal, they had provided Katherine with the final, and perhaps most important, component of her education: over the weeks, she had learned that Sun Tzu Liao was probably crazy and was definitely a spoiled brat, that Hohiro Kurita was a stuck-up prig, and that Ragnar Magnusson was essentially a puppy. Her ostensible allies the Allard-Liaos had proven as good as their name and quickly formed a natural power bloc with Katherine - definitely not a clique - and all three had proven themselves steady and reliable, even if Kai needed to take the stick out of his ass a little. And maybe go shirtless more often.

Most importantly of all, she had learned that Isis Marik was a conniving bitch. Oh, sure, Katherine knew that the thick, gorgeous hair the Marik bastard flaunted was an insult aimed at Little Cancer Boy and not at the princess herself, but Isis was shrewd and had quickly started flipping her hair, throwing her braid over her shoulder and, in a stroke of cruel genius, coming to Katherine with a story about running out a special conditioner and asking the princess if she by chance had any.

It was almost enough to make Katherine want to invade Atreus.

But she forced herself to take a breath. She thought back to her Mama’s instruction on marksmanship and forced herself calm. She breathed in and out slowly three times, and then imagined herself out on the field, her Federated Long Rifle in her hands, Isis Marik in her sights. She fed all of her emotion into the fire, and soon enough was ready to go to whatever task lay next.



On the fifth day after arriving at Outreach, Melissa Steiner woke up her slightly-hungover daughter at dawn for the first lesson on infantry skills.

“Everyone needs to know this stuff,” she said. “You’ll hopefully spend all of your time in your nice safe cockpit, but you might get attacked when you’re out of your Mech, you might have to leave to go do some delicate task like killing one guy without taking out the building he’s in, who knows? At the end of the day, it’s humans that fight, and so at the end of the day, humans should know how to fight without several dozen tons of metal and myomer wrapped around them.”

That was the moment when she gestured towards the 15 kilo pack and the Federated Long Rifle lying across it. Katherine was getting ready to tell the unnaturally cheerful 40 year old exactly where she could stick that rifle when she realized that her mother had an identical weapon slung across her shoulder and was wearing a pack that, if anything, seemed larger than Katherine’s own.

The two Steiner women went to the main entrance to their compound, where they found a waiting VTOL that took them half an hour away to a nearby nature park which through a tyrannical abuse of the Archon’s power had been closed to the public that morning. Katherine’s attempts to speak with her mother on the flight were defeated by the latter pretending it was too loud on the vehicle to talk - as though noise-canceling headsets didn’t exist.

Rather than get angry, a somewhat bleary Katherine generously decided to forgive her mother. Maybe in the field, real infantry never got those headsets and Mama’s trying to make the experience authentic. Right. It could be true.

Thankfully, things didn't get too authentic. After landing, Melissa slung her pack onto her back, looked at her daughter, and said, face adopting a radiant smile, “Kat. If I was going to show you real infantry work, we’d set out on a 35 kilometer hike right now. Most of what infantry do is walking around. Sometimes they get shot at, but the most common threat is blisters. Still, I was a cadet once, and that’s no way to get someone excited, so I thought we’d skip ahead to the fun part for now and we can save the forced marches for later.”

Katherine’s relief must have shown clearly on her face, because her mother just laughed and said, “But we will have to hike a little, so don’t celebrate just yet!” and then set off at an Academy-standard pace which was doable, but still faster than Katherine would have wanted at dawn-o’clock after a late-running party. But thankfully they only marched for about 10 minutes before Melissa called a stop under a stand of trees, and Katherine collapsed gratefully against a shady trunk.

Melissa grabbed a bundle out from her pack and walked out, setting up little targets at several distances out, the closest at around 25 meters, and the furthest well past 200.

When she returned, she sat down next to Katherine, taking a long drink from her canteen. When she was done drinking, she offered the canteen to Katherine. Katherine shook her head, and then her mother started, “I know that they taught you how to shoot in Basic, but I’m going to teach you how to shoot well. Not just because it’s a useful skill - though it is - but also because the process of shooting, the skills you learn, can be a powerful form of meditation. Strange as it may sound, I’m always much calmer after a marksmanship session, and I sometimes imagine myself getting ready to fire when I’m angry or stressed.”

With a smile, she added, “Visualizing myself shooting someone in a meeting might also be relaxing for other reasons.”

The Archon stood, then turned to her daughter and held out her hand. Katherine grabbed the offered arm and pulled herself up, then followed her mother as the latter walked towards a fallen tree that stood crosswise to the direction Melissa had set up the targets. Melissa set a bundled cloth on the trunk of the tree.

“Come on, lie down and set up your rifle on this. I’m sure you’ve already learned a decent amount, so take a few shots at the second-closest target; that’s 50 meters and I’ll be able to watch you.”

Her head still a little achy, Katherine did as she was told. She set her left hand holding the forestock of her rifle on the cloth (it turned out to be a Tharkad University t-shirt), and then proceeded to put herself in an appropriate position with her body at an angle to the rifle and legs wide. It took her a moment to figure out what to do with her elbows - they hadn’t done a lot of shooting from supports in Basic - but then she pulled the stock against her shoulder, snugged her cheek against it, flipped off the safety, looked down the iron sights, took a few deep breaths, and squeezed the trigger.

Nothing happened.

Katherine realized that she had neglected to load the rifle and turned to go look for ammunition in her pack.

Before she could get up, though, a smiling Melissa Steiner handed her a full clip, with a, “Don’t sweat it. I can tell you’re not your best this morning, and this mistake is better than the opposite, eh?”

Flushing - from the heat, surely - Katherine looked down range again and loaded her rifle. Shoulder, cheek, safety, sights, trigger, and…BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM.

She safed her gun and turned to her mother, who was pulling up a pair of binoculars to get a look at the target.

“Not bad, Kat, not bad at all. No bad habits. But you’re about 4cm high and 8 to the right; I think you’re anticipating. Try again, but this time, really concentrate on your breathing before each shot. Don’t worry about where you’ll hit, just worry about squeezing the trigger.”

Katherine rolled her eyes internally, but looked down her sights again and squeezed off five more rounds, taking extra care to relax before firing.

She safed her rifle but kept her gaze downrange as her mother said, “Huh, no change. It must have been the Stück Scheisse rifle. I knew I should have grabbed a pair of TKs instead. Sorry for doubting you, Kat; I guess my prejudice against Mech jocks is showing. Here, you adjust your windage while I go put up a fresh target, then when I come back I’ll give you some tips.”

Almost by reflex, Katherine removed her magazine and worked the action as her mother headed downrange.

A little accident now and no one would suspect anything.

Katherine shocked herself with the thought, and immediately opened her hand, releasing the bullet she’d grabbed as it was ejected from the chamber.

What’s wrong with me?

And then, a moment later, Who even thinks about killing their own mother?!

And then, after another moment, Why would I even want to?

The answer to that last one, of course, was obvious: to become Archon. But even then, it would be a few years before she reached her majority, with a regent ruling in her stead if the Estates General decided. And besides, she’d heard her parents talking about both stepping down when Victor was old enough, uniting their realms without having to wait a few more decades until her mother’s death. There was no reason to think that the same logic wouldn’t apply to their new heir-presumptive..

So, what? I was ready to kill my mother in order to succeed her a few years early?

Katherine had always known she was ambitious. In fact, it was one of her favorite things about herself, alongside her savviness and her good looks. But this…this was a glance into her darkest corners that she had not enjoyed.

She jumped as someone firmly placed their hand over the gun’s trigger guard, then added a second hand to gently lift the rifle away.

A very concerned Melissa Steiner looked at her daughter and asked, “Is everything alright, Kätzchen?”.

Katherine blinked. Her mother hadn’t called her that in years. She tried to compose a sentence, but all that came out was, “Wuh?”

“You were staring down between your hands. You didn’t respond when I called your name. What’s wrong, Kat?”

I was idly considering murdering you somehow didn’t seem to roll off the tongue, so she improvised, “I was just thinking about Victor.”

Melissa’s face softened, and she set the rifle down behind her before folding Katherine into a hug and holding her there. As the hug went on uncomfortably long, Katherine realized that the odd vibrations she was feeling were suppressed sobs from her mother.

She froze. Nothing in Katherine’s 18 years had prepared her for holding her mother while she cried about her probably-dead son. After a moment, she hugged back, hard, and said, “I miss him.”

Surprisingly, it wasn’t a lie. Maybe she could afford to be magnanimous now that he was no longer an obstacle.

He could even be an asset, his memory serving as a great flag to rally the people around against the Clans. Maybe, after some time had passed, she could recommend that the 10th Donegal Guard be reconstituted as the Victors.

The two Steiner women stayed together for significantly longer than Katherine would have liked, but eventually the embrace ended. Katherine’s mother kissed her on the cheek and then withdrew, pulling a handkerchief out of a pocket and blotting at her eyes before blowing her nose. Strangely, Katherine was struck in that moment that her mother, aged 40 and having pushed out five children, with no makeup on and a face blotchy from crying, was still a beautiful woman. She surprised herself by thinking, I hope I look half as good when I’m that age.

Melissa tucked the now-soiled cloth into a pocket and said with a forced smile, “This was good timing. We’ll have some real emotional duress to try to relax through, and maybe the meditation from the shooting will help clear my mind by the time we’re done and have to go back to face Romano Liao.”

“Meditation?” asked Katherine.

“Right,” replied her mother with fake brightness, “Let’s not get ahead of ourselves.”

She had Katherine assume a firing position again. Instead of just watching, this time Melissa fussed around her daughter, moving the rifle’s butt a fraction of a centimeter here, adjusting a hand’s position there, dabbing a drop of orange paint on the forward sight.

Katherine fired off five more shots, only to realize with embarrassment that she’d never adjusted the windage in the end. Once that was done, and Melissa was convinced that Katherine’s form was good - or at least, good enough for now - she told her daughter to sight at the hundred-meter target but not to fire.

“The Dracs talk about becoming ‘one with the sword’,” began Melissa. “And it’s bullshit, of course; except that it isn’t. If you want to shoot, to really shoot, to hit a fly at 100 meters, you need to do more than just calm down. Snipers time their shots with their heartbeats, and many take drugs to slow that down and stop all the natural little shakes that affect their hands. But there’s more than that. You must empty your mind completely. Know the target, and know your rifle, and know the bullet, and know yourself, and line them all up in your head so that when you finally squeeze the trigger past the point of no return, the shot hitting your target is no longer a question of luck or chance, but rather an inevitability, sure as the sun rises in the morning.”

She then went on to explain a few different ways to empty your mind. Katherine’s favorite involved visualizing a flame into which you fed all of your thoughts and feelings until only a perfect void remained.

After all that, Katherine managed to put 5 shots within 20 centimeters at 250 meters, twice in a row. Her mother, mostly recovered by this point, smiled and told her, “Good job!”, and for some reason it was the first time that Katherine ever actually listened when she said it.

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More fun with Kathy!

I'm not 100% thrilled with Katherine's internal monologue, but it's good enough and I wasted too much time on it.

Shooting as a form of meditation is actually something that I personally do. The "flame and the void" is a meditation technique stolen from Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time epic fantasy series, though it's also one that I've personally employed when target shooting. Of course, marksmanship isn't really about a mystical connection between shooter, rifle, and target, but meditation helps with concentration and aim and mystical connections are fun.