Author Topic: 2012-03-24 The Nellus Academy Incident, Book 3, Part 5 [Jennifer Brozek]  (Read 4036 times)

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2012-01-27 The Nellus Academy Incident, Book 3, Part 1

“Cadet, you will tell me the truth.”

The ruined DropShip has crash-landed, and the General is seriously injured. The cadets' only hope of survival is to find the hijacker and get word to the jump point.



2012-02-04 The Nellus Academy Incident, Book 3, Part 2

"I don’t know if we’re going to get out of this."

In Part 2 of Book 3, the Nellus Academy cadets must track down the hijacker, who appears to have fled the DropShip…



2012-02-10 The Nellus Academy Incident, Book 3, Part 3

There would be time for grief later.

In part 3, the cadets cope with loss while planning their next move. Their prisoner, however, has other plans.



2012-02-17 The Nellus Academy Incident, Book 3, Part 4

"You know, you’re still very pretty, even with the scar."

Running low on supplies, the cadets discover the reality of their situation and must decide on a risky course of action.



2012-03-24 The Nellus Academy Incident, Book 3, Part 5

"If you want to live, you won't move at all."

Read the exciting conclusion to Book 3 now!

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Oh good, I was looking forward to this.
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Part the second is live

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Would you like a Part 3? Well, you got it!

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for those waiting for Part IV it is now available for your reading pleasure
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I hope you all are enjoying the story. It is completed and turned in through "book five."

Also, please don't hurt me after reading Book 3, Part 5.  ;)

~Jenn

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We won't hury, we'll just bathe you in harsh criticism ;)
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Talked to the editor. Book 3, Part 5 should be up this week. Stuff happened and it got delayed. :\
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Between this and catching up with Weapons Free I'll be busy for a few days.
That's always a good thing.  O0
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Talked to the editor. Book 3, Part 5 should be up this week. Stuff happened and it got delayed. :\
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Still not up yet. I blame Jason and his minion(s).
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I know. I know. Jason has been snowed under. He says it will be up this weekend--Just in time for me to be in Sweden for GothCon as GoH. So, I won't hear how you all respond to Book 3, Part 5 until I get back.

Just remember, there are 10 more episodes after it goes up. :)

I hope you like it. All my first round readers swore at me after reading it.

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I know. I know. Jason has been snowed under. He says it will be up this weekend--Just in time for me to be in Sweden for GothCon as GoH. So, I won't hear how you all respond to Book 3, Part 5 until I get back.

Just remember, there are 10 more episodes after it goes up. :)

I hope you like it. All my first round readers swore at me after reading it.

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The long-awaited Part 5 is live!

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I'm getting an error message that the file is corrupted when I download part 5....   ???


EDIT:  Nevermind, working now!  Maybe it was just my computer.   O0
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Nothing wrong with your computer. There was a problem with the color file, but that has since been rectified.


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I hope you all are enjoying the story. It is completed and turned in through "book five."

Also, please don't hurt me after reading Book 3, Part 5.  ;)

~Jenn
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Joe wasn't there. :)

And the story's not over yet.  >:D