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Pages 8-9, Introduction
Each use of the word "object" in the last sentence of bold text underneath a book title should be "objective" judging from the context.
Page 30, Base Terrain Types - Buildings
"...(see p. 114, of this rulebook and p. 166, TW, respectively..." (Underline mine.)
Possible Solution: Remove the underlined comma. It's causing a comma splice and breaks up the flow of the sentence.
Page 31, Base Terrain Types - Jungle - Chainsaw
"... except that it take three turns instead of two..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Take needs to be "takes".
Page 32, Expanded Movement Costs and Planetary Conditions Tables - Sand
MP Cost is .5. Per the sand rules on page 39 of Tactical Operations, Sand is supposed to have a split MP cost for 'Mechs and vehicles, +1 / +2
Solution: Change MP cost to +1 / +2.
Page 32, Expanded Movement Costs and Planetary Conditions Tables - Water Depth 2-15
The footnote for Rail in the restricted units should be 21.
Page 35, Expanded Movement Costs and Planetary Conditions Tables (cont.) - Roads
Two problems here.
Problem #1: All three road types are marked as adding to the cost of the underlying terrain. Per rules on page 51, they only reduce costs to 1 for certain unit types but do not affect cost for other units. Remove the plus signs for the roads.
Problem #2: The (T/H/I) note for paved roads should be applied to gravel roads per rules text on page 51, TacOps.
Page 35, Expanded Movement Costs and Planetary Conditions Tables (cont.) - Paved
The footnote should be 22, not 3 - this isn't a road but the skidding rules do apply.
Page 46, Fire and Smoke Resolution Sequence Example
"As the building in hexes D and E is not apart of the building in Hex B..."
Solution: Separate the bold word into "a part".
Page 48, Geysers - Terrain
"If this causes the terrain to collapse (such as a building), players resolved that event at the end of the phase in which the geyser erupted."
Solution: Resolved should be "resolve".
Page 57, Searchlights
Not a problem, per se, but some sort of reference to the searchlight construction rules on page 237 of TechManual may be appropriate so people know that BA, support vehicles, and aerospace units are equipped with hand-held searchlights by default.
EDIT: BA do not receive them for free. SVs and aerospace units apparently do.
Page 61, Moderate Gale
Fourth paragraph: "WiGE, VTOl: Apply a +1 modifier to all Piloting Skill Rolls." (Underline mine.) Vehicles make Driving Skill Rolls.
Solution: Change underlined word to Driving.
Page 80, Glancing Blow
Third paragraph, third sentence: "If using the Linking Weapons rule (see p. 74)..."
Solution: The Linking Weapons rule starts on page 85.
Page 81, Missed Shots - Swarm and I-Swarm
"...(see p. 371, respectively)..." Both weapons have their miss rules on page 371 in the same text box.
Solution: Delete the word "respectively".
Page 87, Suppressing Fire
First paragraph, last sentence: "...the Morale rules as well (see p. 21)."
Solution: The Morale rules start on page 211.
Page 93, 'Mech Limbs Example
Second paragraph, second sentence: "...is 2.5 tons [8.5 (total internal structure weight) x .1 = .85 + 1.43 (26 (arm armor) / .9 (to remove the ferro-?brous 1.12 multiplier)) = 23 / 16 (standard armor per ton) = 1.43) = 2.28, rounding to 2.5)."
The final parentheses in the quoted text needs to be a square bracket to match the opening notation. The second parentheses after "1.12 multiplier" needs to be deleted; the proper termination point for that set of calculations is after 1.43.
Page 122, Construction Factor (Expanded) Example
Second paragraph, second sentence: "...customized Zeus (located in Hex H."
Solution: Add a parentheses after the period in this sentence.
Page 122, Construction Factor (Expanded) Example
Picking up after the above correction, the example itself needs to be corrected... somehow. Sniper Artillery Cannons do not damage adjacent hexes under the current rules. Because of that, it should be dealing 20 damage to the target level and 10 damage to the levels above and below it. From that damage, the fourth level won't collapse.
Page 123, Construction Factor (Expanded) Example
Remove the quotation mark at the end of the example.
Page 131, Advanced Building Construction
Image in the bottom left is displacing a single line of text partially into the yellow margin at the bottom of the page. (Confirmed with Foxit Reader 4.3 and Adobe Read 10.1.)
Page 132, Advanced Building Construction
Chart in the left column is pushing a single line of text separate from what's already a short paragraph. (Confirmed with Foxit Reader 4.3 and Adobe Read 10.1.)
Page 137, Environmental Sealing
The first sentence of the first paragraph needs to end the bold formatting after the colon after the word "Construction".
Page 142, Castles Brian Complexes Example
Per developer errata in the first post of this thread, a Gun Emplacement can have up to 1/3 of its CF in weapons tonnage; the first two described emplacements are over that. I'll handle them individually by their hex designations.
Beginning in the left column, last paragraph: "The “E†emplacements were established as Light structures, receiving a CF of 15, an equal amount of armor and six tons of weapons..."
Solution: Either increase the CF to a minimum of 18 and make them Medium structures or decrease the weapons tonnage to five tons.
Continuing in the right-hand column, next sentence: "The “F†emplacements, meanwhile, are Heavy structures, with a CF of 65, 64 armor points and 30 tons of crew-served weapons..."
Solution: Either increase the CF to a minimum of 90 or decrease to 21 tons of weapons.
Page 146, "Bloody Dividends", Exeter Organization Warehouse
Left column, third paragraph, second sentence: "...a towering SC PowerMan LoaderMech..."
Solution: PowerMan should be Powerman per TRO: Vehicle Annex page 206 and Historical: Operation Klondike page 158.
Page 153, Combat - Area Effect Weapons
First paragraph, second sentence: "...a Large Tractor in Hex A has a two Small Trailers..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Remove the underlined word.
Page 154, Charging Rail Vehicles
Fourth paragraph, second sentence: "The standard rules for determining if a the Tractor/Trailer is derailed..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Remove the underlined word.
Page 155, Surfacing Large Naval Vessel Support Vehicles
First paragraph, first sentence: "...use the Submerged/Surfaces rules..."
Solution: Change to "...the Submerged/Surfacing rules...", emphasis added for clarity.
Page 155, Collisions
First paragraph, second sentence: "...damage is equal to the current armor of the location which struck the target, plus that locations current internal structure..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Insert apostrophe as follows: location's
Page 157, 'Mech Mounting (on deck)
Third paragraph, third sentence: "Assign damage normally (see Falling Damage, p. 57, TW)."
Solution: Change page reference to page 68 of Total Warfare.
Page 160, Resolving Sinking
Fifth paragraph, second sentence: "... use the Submerged/Surfaces rules for Mobile Structures..."
Solution: Change to "...the Submerged/Surfacing rules...", emphasis added for clarity.
Page 160, Units Mounted on a Sinking Vessel (on deck) - 'Mechs
Third paragraph, third sentence: "Assign damage normally (see Falling Damage, p. 57, TW)."
Solution: Change page reference to page 68 of Total Warfare.
Page 161, When a Hex of a Sinking Unit is Destroyed - 'Mechs
Left column, first paragraph, first and second sentences and right column, second line: References to Falling Damge, p. 57, TW or Falling Damage to a 'Mech, p. 69, TW.
Solution: Change all three page references to page 68 of Total Warfare.
Page 161, When a Hex of a Sinking Unit is Destroyed - Naval Units
First paragraph, first sentence: "...when it hits the water’s surface (see Falling Damage, p. 57, TW);..."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 68 of Total Warfare.
Page 163, Unit Destruction Example
Right column, third full paragraph, fourth sentence: "Randomly determining the location, the damage is applied to the front armor, leaving it with 54 points of damage." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Replace the word damage with armor.
Page 164, Carrying Units
Right column, first full paragraph, first sentence: "...use the Launching/Recovering Fighters/Small Craft rules (see p. 84, TW);..."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 86 of Total Warfare.
Page 167, Avoiding a Collision (Ground and Water Mobile Structures)
Second to last sentence: "Units moved in this way have expended their movement by walking/cruising)..." There's no open parentheses to close; this may indicate a missing open parentheses somewhere earlier in the sentence. If not, remove the parentheses.
Page 168, Stacking (Ground Mobile Structures)
Second paragraph, first sentence: "The hexes underneath a Ground Mobile Structure are treated as Light Woods for movement restrictions and LOS (see Movement Costs Table, p. 52, and Attack Modifiers Table, p. 116, respectively, TW).
Solution: Change second page reference to page 117 of Total Warfare.
Page 170, Carrying Units - Air Mobile Structures
"(see Launching/Recovering Fighters/Small Craft, p. 84, TW)."
Solution: Change page reference to page 86 of Total Warfare.
Page 173, Accidental Falls From Above
Second paragraph: "In the case of a Mobile Structure falling onto another Mobile Structure, use the size difference as shown in the Submerging/Surfacing rules..."
Solution: Change Submerging/Surfacing to Submerged/Surfacing.
Page 186, Counter-Battery Fire Example
Right column, first full sentence: "The battle itself is taking place on a 12-mapsheet area (4 x 4)..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined text to "...16-mapsheet area..."
Page 190, Boarding Actions (Non-Infantry) Example
Fourth paragraph, last sentence: "As the 18 points exceeds the Bar of 10 only once..."
Solution: The word "Bar" should be in all capitals as it refers to the Barrier Armor Rating.
Page 203, Resolving Infantry vs. Infantry Actions Example
Right column, second paragraph, first sentence: "...+5 (each mounts a burst fire weapon)... (Underline mine.)
Solution: Underlined words should be hyphenated (as they are elsewhere in the example) as "burst-fire".
Same sentence: "...14 ((five standard Clan Elemental battle armor with machine guns; medium weight class = 3 each)... (Underline mine.)
Solution: Underlined number should be 15 (5 * 3).
Page 208, Image Caption
"Word of Blake battle armor sweep for mine fields ahead of an on-coming force." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Underlined word should be "oncoming".
Page 214, Rearming Aerospace Units
First paragraph, third sentence: "...(Large Craft with fighter/Small Craft bays; see Launching/Recovering Small Craft, p. 84, TW;..."
Solution: Change page reference to page 86 of Total Warfare. In addition, insert a close parentheses between "TW" and the semi-colon.
Same sentence: "...(see Flight Deck, p. 312))..."
Solution: Delete second close parentheses. The sentence structure and third page reference suggests there's not supposed to be something enclosed between this close parentheses and the open parentheses in the correction immediately above.
Third paragraph, second sentence: "On a result of 1 through 7..." The referenced 2D6 roll has no possible negative modifiers, meaning that it can never come up with a result of 1.
Solution: Change 1 to 2.
Page 214, Gauss and Plasma Weapons
Last line: "...other reloading attempts for 10 space minutes." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Underlined word should be "turns".
Page 215, Simultaneous Movement Example
Last sentence: "... Movement Record Sheet Sample at the bottom of this page." The sample is at the top of the page.
Solution: Change bottom to top.
Page 215, Movement
First paragraph, last line: "...the contested hex (see Stacking, p. 216)." (Underline mine.) The Stacking rule is on the same page below this text.
Solution: Change the underlined text to " below".
Page 221, Sensor Spotting
Right column, second full paragraph, last line: "...(see p. Initiative Phase, p. 221)."
Solution: Change to: "...(see Initiative Phase, p. 220)."
Page 225, Water Line LOS Example
Left column, second paragraph, last sentence: "The submarine is just with in visual spotting range." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined text to "within".
Page 225, Attacking Across The Water Line
First paragraph: "All physical attacks and weapons..." and "...fully submerged target automatically fails."
Solution: Either change all to any or change fails to fail.
Page 240, Internal Structure/Structural Integrity Values
Right column, full paragraph: "Like Internal Structure points on BattleMechs, WorkMechs, ProtoMechs..." (Undelrine mine.) The proper rules term for a WorkMech is IndustrialMech per usage on Total Warfare pages 20 and 21 or TechManual pages 64-75.
Solution: Replace underlined text with IndustrialMech.
Page 250, Advanced Support Vehicle Minimum Crew Tables
Additional Crew Table, first line: "Communications Equipment (per ton, see p. 213, TM)"
Solution: Change page reference to page 212 of TechManual.
Page 251, Fire-Control Systems:
Last line: "... in order to reduce the crew’s need for all mounted..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change to "crew needs".
Page 254, Step 5: Add Weapons, Ammunition and Other Equipment
Last line before TechManual Items: "...Weapons and Equipment (pp. 201-251, TM, 274-375)." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined page reference to page 249 of TechManual.
Page 254, Space
Last line: "...and in this book (pp. 274-375)."
Solution: Change page reference to pages 404-411 of Tactical Operations.
Page 255, Weapons
First paragraph, first sentence: "...found on pp. 350-352 in TechManual." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined page number to page 349 of TechManual.
Page 256, Fire Control Systems
First sentence: "... to reduce the crew’s need for all mounted weapons."
Solution: Replace underlined text with "crew needs".
Page 257, Cloud Nine Airship Example
Beginning with the last line of the left column: "These quarters will require 2 item slots (75 steerage quarters ÷ 50 quarters per slot = 1.5 slots, round up to 2)." There are only 15 steerage quarters mounted although they take up 75 tons total.
Solution: Change to: "These quarters will require 1 item slot (15 steerage quarters ÷ 50 quarters per slot = 0.3 slots, round up to 1.)"
Page 258, Jormungand Example
First full paragraph, last sentence: "...26 [turrets] 188 [ammo]..."
Solution: Insert a plus sign between [turrets] and 188.
Page 261, Choose Class, Size, And Shape - Skybase Example
Last sentence: "H takes the maximum hex size..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: H should be He.
Page 263, Install Motive System, Freighter Example
Second paragraph, first sentence: "...(168 tons ÷ 20 hexes = 8.2 tons per hex, round up to 8.5)." (Underline mine.) 168/20 = 8.4
Solution: Replace underlined number with 8.4
Page 266, Step 4: Install Weapons, Heat Sinks, and Equipment
Third paragraph, first sentence: "...(see pp. 201-245, TM)." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined page number to 249.
Page 267, Mobile Structure Firing Arcs
Second paragraph, first sentence: "Capital weapons—including capital missile launchers and sub-capital weapons (see p. 343) receive..."
Solution: There should be a dash between the end parentheses and the word receive.
Page 269, Airbase Example
Left column, fourth paragraph, third sentence: "The remaining hex..." The total is correct but the list of items lacks the field kitchen included in the central hex (see second paragraph, first sentence).
Solution: Insert the following text somewhere in the calculation: "(1 Field Kitchen x 3 tons)".
Page 289, Chain Whip Game Rules
Third paragraph, second sentence: "–1 for every weight class (ProtoMech, Light, Medium, Heavy and so forth) the Attacker outweighs the Defender, a –1 to-hit modifier applies to the grapple attack; if the Defender outweighs the Attacker, a +1 modifier applies for each weight class of difference."
Solution: Either remove the -1 at the beginning of the sentence or the underlined phrase; the former would be more consistent with the rest of the sentence.
Page 289, Claw Game Rules
Second paragraph, third sentence: "...wield an improvised club, with an additional +2 to-hit penalty (see pp. 146-147, TW)."
Solution: Change the page reference to pages 145-146 of Total Warfare.
Page 289, Flail Game Rules
First sentence: "The Flail attacks like a hatchet (see pp. 146-147, TW)..."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 146 of Total Warfare.
Page 290, Lance Game Rules
First sentence: "...the Lance attacks as a hatchet (see pp. 146-147, TW)..."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 146 of Total Warfare.
Page 290, Mace Game Rules
First paragraph: "...Hatchet’s To-Hit Location Table (see pp. 146-147, TW)."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 146 of Total Warfare.
Page 291, Shield Game Rules - Passive Defense Mode
Fourth sentence: "...Hatchet’s To-Hit Location Table (see pp. 146-147, TW)."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 146 of Total Warfare.
Page 292, Vibroblade Game Rules
First sentence: "...as a sword (see pp. 146-147, TW)..."
Solution: Change the page reference to page 146 of Total Warfare.
Page 299, CASE II Game Rules
Second sentence: "...such as described on p. 261, TW..."
Solution: Change page reference to page 161 of Total Warfare.
Page 316, Handheld Weapons Game Rule
Fourth and eighth paragraphs are identical word for word.
Solution: Delete one paragraph or the other.
Page 340, Specialized Infantry Fluff
Right column, last sentence: "From minesweepers to bridge builders, demotions to fieldworks; specialized infantry are the true workhorse of any campaign." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined word to "demolitions" and underlined punctuation to a comma.
Page 340, Specialized Infantry Construction Rules
Second paragraph: "...per the standard Conventional Infantry rules (see p. 141, TM)."
Solution: Change page reference to page 145 of TechManual.
Page 341, Demolitions Engineers
Last line: "...any damage from the collapsing structure will (see pp. 177-178, TW)."
Solution: Change page reference to pages 176-177 of Total Warfare.
Page 344, Sub-Capital Missile Game Rules
Second sentence: "Space-based Point defenses (see page 96, SO)..."
Solution: Capitalize the letter D in defenses.
Page 350, VTOL Jet Booster Game Rules
Second sentence: "...avoid a sideslip (see p. 68, TW)."
Solution: Change page reference to pages 67-68 of Total Warfare.
Page 351, Xenoplanetary Condition-Trained (XCT) Troops Game Rules
Fifth paragraph, first line: "Vacuum, Trace, Tainted, or Toxic Atmosphere: XCT troops appropriately..." (Underline mine.) Text lacks bold in the book; this is inconsistent with the third and fourth paragraph.
Solution: Bold the underlined text.
Page 356, Smoke Artillery/Arrow Missiles Game Rules
Second paragraph, third sentence: "...with heavy smoke (see p. 46)..."
Solution: Change page reference to page 47.
Page 357, Thunder (FASCAM) Artillery/Arrow Missiles Game Rules
Second bulleted paragraph, third sentence: "The one except is if..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change the underlined word to exception.
Page 359, Arrow IV Homing Missiles (Air-Launched Version) Game Rules
First paragraph, second sentence: "...their standard launcher-based version (see p. 355)..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change page reference to page 354 of Tactical Operations.
Page 362, Oil Slick Ammo Game Rules
Second paragraph, first sentence: "... to avoid a skid when passing through the hex (see pp. 62-65, TW)." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined page number to page 64 of Total Warfare.
Page 365, EMP Mine Game Rules
Second paragraph, fifth sentence: "...(such as Remote Sensors, C3 Remote Sensors, or Collapsible Command Modules, see pp. 357, 298 and 301, respectively)..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined page reference to page 375 of Tactical Operations.
Page 378, Super-Heavy Vehicles
Second bulleted paragraph, first sentence: "...including, if desired, the Large-sized engines presented on p. 308." Normally, equipment references are to the fluff and games rules, which are on page 307, not the construction rules.
Solution: Change page reference to page 307 of Tactical Operations.
Page 378, Advanced Battle Values
Main header paragraph, first sentence: "...presented in the Tech Manual..."
Solution: Change the book title to TechManual.
Observation: Page references to the Battle Value section in TechManual are inconsistent in style. Most seem to be including the examples but one (Advanced Infantry on page 379, first paragraph, to TM page 309) only goes to the rules themselves. The Satellite (TO 378) and Airship (TO 379) references are incorrect either way and should point to either page 312 or pages 312-314 in TechManual depending on whether you want the examples or not.
Page 379, Mobile Structures
Step 2, last paragraph, second sentence: "Use the mobile structures maximum MP rating." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change the underlined word to structure's.
Step 3, last paragraph, first sentence: "...Gunnery 4 and piloting 5 skill levels." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Capitalize underlined word.
Step 3, last paragraph, second sentence: "...(see Construction a Battle Force, TM p. 314)." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change underlined word to Constructing.
Page 379, Advanced Infantry - Step 2: Calculate Offensive Battle Value
Last paragraph, first sentence: "Use the infantry unit’s fastest movement model..." (Underline mine.)
Solution: Change model to mode.
Page 380, Actuator Enhancement System Example
"A Zeus mounts an AES... the Zeus is computed as if..." (Underline mine.) 'Mech names in examples are normally unitalicized; see the Blue Shield example at the top of the next page for an example.
Solution: Unitalicize both instances of the Zeus in the example text.
Page 385, Aerospace Weapons and Equipment BV Table (Addenum)
Footnote: "Thunder Bomb has a BV equal to seven 20-point minefield of the appropriate type of mine."
Solution: Change underlined word to minefields.
Page 386, Target Acquisition Gear (Expanded)
Last line: "...or Semi-guided Mortar ammunition:-"
Solution: Change end punctuation to a period.
Page 387, Index - A
Active probes: Consolidate the two entries.
Aerospace unit - Grappling: Change page reference to pages 199-200 of Tactical Operations.
Altered energy weapon damage: Change page reference to page 83 of Tactical Operations.
Atmospheric pressure/density: Change first page reference to pages 54-55 of Tactical Operations.
Page 387 - B
BattleMech - jump pack: Change page reference to 292, 293, 380 of Tactical Operations.
BattleMech - mechanical jump booster: Change page reference to 292, 293, 380 of Tactical Operations.
BattleMech - motive systems: Change page reference to 292-293, 295 of Tactical Operations.
BattleMech - partial wing: Change page reference to 292, 293, 295, 380 of Tactical Operations.
BattleMech - taser: Change page reference to 344, 345-346 of Tactical Operations.
Building - classification: Change first page reference to 114-118 of Tactical Operations.
Buildings - artillery hits: Change page reference to 182, 184 of Tactical Operations.
Page 387 - C
CASE II: Delete the reference to page 159; rules on that page mention CASE.
Chain whip: Change page reference to pages 288-289 of Tactical Operations to include fluff and construction rules.
Combat - damage: Change page reference to pages 65-66 of Tactical Operations.
Combat - weapon resolution dice: Change page reference to page 109 of Tactical Operations.
Commanders - double-blind rules: Change page reference to page 222 of Tactical Operations.
Communications equipment - double-blind rules: Change page reference to pages 222-223 of Tactical Operations.
Construction rules - advanced equipment: I'm not sure what this is supposed to be referring to; the page number goes to the building fuel tank construction rules.
Crew - numbers, abilities: Change page reference to page 218 of Tactical Operations.
Crew - support vehicle: Change page reference to page 249-251 of Tactical Operations.
Page 387, D
Damage - piloting skill roles: Change to "piloting skill rolls"; change page reference to page 23 of Tactical Operations.
Deceleration - change page reference page 24 of Tactical Operations.
Page 388, E
ECM suites - double blind rules: Change page reference to pages 223-224 of Tactical Operations.
Equipment - battle values: Change page references to pages 380 of Tactical Operations.
Page 388, F
Forms: Unclear reference; word does not appear on or near page 9 of Tactical Operations.
Page 388, G
Gale (light, moderate, strong): Change page reference to page 61 of Tactical Operations.
Page 388, H
Heat sink - table: Change page reference to page 252 of Tactical Operations.
Hex - conditions, terrain displacement: Change page reference to pages 66-67 of Tactical Operations.
Hitting deck: Change to "Hitting the deck".
Page 388, I
Infantry - squad deployment: Add page reference to page 27 of Tactical Operations; existing reference only refers to the combat rules, not the main squad deployment rules.
Infrared sensors: Change page reference to page 222 of Tactical Operations.
Initiaitve - double blind rules: Change page reference to page 220 of Tactical Operations.
Page 388, J
Jumping - bog down rules: Change page reference to page 63 of Tactical Operations.
Page 388, L
Large naval vessel support vehicle - taking control of: Delete page reference to page 216 of Tactical Operations.
Page 389, L
Laser - insulator: Change second page reference to page 382 of Tactical Operations.
Page 389, M
Machine gun - array: Change page reference to page 103 of Tactical Operations.
Maneuver: Page reference is unclear.
Mass driver - vessel limits table: Second page reference should probably be deleted; if not, it's incorrect and difficult to discern what it's actually supposed to be pointing to.
Missile: Change page reference to page 103 of Tactical Operations.
Mobile structure: Last page reference (143) is unclear as the term does not appear on or near that page; suggested change to page 165 of Tactical Operations to point to the main rules for mobile structures.
Mobile structure - artillery hits: Change page reference to pages 182 and 184 of Tactical Operations.
Mobile structure - movement costs table: Change page reference to page 166 of Tactical Operations.
Mobile structure - underneath: Change page reference to page 169 of Tactical Operations.
Movement - expenditure of points: Unknown page reference.
Movement - phase, double blind rules: Change page reference to pages 220-224 of Tactical Operations.
Page 389, N
Naval - repair facilities: Change page reference to pages 334 and 335 of Tactical Operations. (Distinct pages, not a range, for consistency with other index page descriptions, such as the naval tug adaptor.)
Page 389, P
Physical attacks - opportunity fire: Change page reference to pages 86-87 of Tactical Operations.
Planetary conditions - artillery attacks: First page reference unclear, probably needs to be deleted.
Play sequence: Change page reference to page 220 of Tactical Operations.
Punch attack: Unclear what this reference is referring to.
Page 389, R
Rail support vehicle - weight and: Change page reference to page 237 of Tactical Operations.
Page 389, S
Satellites - double-blind rules: Change page reference to page 223 of Tactical Operations.
Seismic sensors - Change page reference to page 222 of Tactical Operations.
Sensor spotting - Change page reference to pages 221-223 of Tactical Operations.
Page 390, S
Shield: First page reference should be placed under "shielding" or "shielding movement mode" to distinguish from 'Mech shields. Change second page reference to page 89 of Tactical Operations. Add page reference to page 290 of Tactical Operations.
Sinking - rate, large naval vessel: Delete second page reference.
Small craft - grappling: Change page reference to page 199 of Tactical Operations.
Space - dispensers: Should be placed under mine dispensers to avoid confusion.
Spikes: Add a page reference to page 290 of Tactical Operations.
Spotting phase, double-blind rules: Change page reference to pages 220-224 of Tactical Operations.
Stacking: Change page reference to page 215 of Tactical Operations.
Stealth - double-blind rules: Change page reference to pages 223-224 of Tactical Operations.
Structure - record sheet: Second page reference is unclear, possibly to page 133 of Tactical Operations.
Page 390, T
Talons: Add page reference to page 290 of Tactical Operations.
Terrain factor - battlefield wreckage: Unclear reference; maybe it should be moved under terrain?
Page 390, V
Vehicle - crews: Change second page reference to page 218 of Tactical Operations.
Vehicle - fire effects on: Change page reference to pages 44-45 of Tactical Operations.
Page 390, W
Weapon attacks - double-blind rules: Change page reference to page 224 of Tactical Operations.
Weapon attacks - extreme range: Change page reference to page 85 of Tactical Operations.
Weapon attacks - line of sight: Change second page reference to page 85 of Tactical Operations.
Page 406, Variable-Speed Pulse Lasers
All are marked with the AI tag. Per TW page 114, this is implied to mean burst damage, which VSPLs do not deal; this is reinforced by the language on page 221. While it doesn't actually say "This deals burst damage" the strong implication may be confusing so something might need to be reworded somewhere.
Page 320 or 406, Small Extended Range Pulse Laser
Weapon has the AI tag in the chart on page 406 but the rules on page 320 don't mention burst damage from the small ER pulse laser. Since the X-pulse laser rules on page 321 make a specific point of mentioning the burst damage for the small X-pulse laser, this is either a consistency problem that implies the small ER pulse laser doesn't behave the same way or the AI tag on page 406 should be removed.
