P.110, Aftermath
“Colonel Juliette Mejia’s turned victory into defeat...”
Should be Mejia, not Mejia’s
P.116 Touchpoint: Robinson section
“Hai” is italicized, it should not be. Hai would normally be in italics, but since the whole conversation is italicized, ‘hai’ should appear in non-italicized font.
P.116 Attacker (Republic of the Sphere) section
“The Attacker’s force equals 150% of the Defender’s starting force, evenly divided between the three Hastati, the Principes, and the Triari.”
Should be, “The Attacker’s force equals 150% of the Defender’s starting force, evenly divided between the Hastati, the Principes, and the Triari.” The Word ‘three’ was removed.
P.116 Defenders (Draconis Combine) section
“For determining Skill levels, the Eighth are an “A”-rated until with a Veteran skill rating.“
Should be, “For determining Skill levels, the Eighth are an “A”-rated unit with a Veteran skill rating.” Unit instead of until.
P.117 Objectives section
Complete breakthrough! Reads: “The Attacker completes Breakthrough! before the Defender’s remaining forces”
This seems like an incomplete sentence. Not sure what it is trying to say.
P.117 Aftermath section
“Only after careful analysis of the Wolf communications did the Falcons realized Alaric Ward had tricked them.”
Should be, “Only after careful analysis of the Wolf communications did the Falcons realize Alaric Ward had tricked them.” Realize instead of realized.