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A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« on: 12 January 2020, 15:35:55 »
This is a small attempt at a FanFic based on the Tribble I posted earlier

High Speed (downward)
Upper Atmosphere
Royal
Federated Suns
 
SLS Nothe Fort
 
8 November 2729 0745
 
Alek managed to keep his swearing quiet enough that the microphone in his NeuroHelmet would not pick it up, conscious that it would not be ideal leadership for his company to hear him swear, whether it was in English, Russian or French – he could swear fluently in all three and was pretty good in German too. Instead he tightened the straps holding him in place as the Nothe Fort plummeted through the atmosphere from orbit and called out to his company to check in on the internal comms, forcing a smile as he did which he hoped his troops would hear.
 
The ride was bumpy and while the 564th Hussar Regiment had jumped in at an unconventional point, there had still been several hours of high speed transit from the JumpShip to orbit, a brief moment of respite when they arrived in orbit to mount their ‘Mechs, vehicles or assume assault positions for the PBIs – and then they had broken orbit and crossed the atmospheric boundary. The plan was for an initial portion of the Hussars to land, secure the Drop Zone and surrounds, and then the “main force” would land to start the assault proper.
 
Sadly, the 564th, and the whole of the Sirius Division, had spent too much time duelling “ronin” or undertaking exercises and too little time having unexpected changes to plans – while chaos and confusion make for good training for combat, they make it harder to compete in standardised assessment exercises for a unit to look good when reporting “up the chain”. The DCMS Regulars sadly recognised this and had read the same books as those who set the SLDF’s training command. The DCMS had also trained to sow chaos and confusion to anyone trying to follow the SLDF primer too closely.
 
The 3rd Galedon Regulars aerospace fighters attacked the falling DropShips, or at least they tried to. Fortunately, the Sirius Division had thought about this and sent their own fighters to guard the vulnerable DropShips – one squadron flew ahead to look at the ground and shoot up any AAA, the other two were on escort duty. While it made good tactical sense for the two squadrons of fighters to be in a “loose escort” pattern, it meant the ground pounders looking at their vid-feeds on the drop could not see the fighters tying up nearly all of the attackers, but it meant they could see the handful that “leaked through”. The only thing that kept morale up was seeing the DropShips’ own weapons reach out and destroy the leakers.
 
What Kerensky and his comrades could not see was the combined force of 6th/14th Benjamin Regulars aerospace forces striking at the practically unescorted “rear” DropShips still in orbit – with only the two fighters from the Union class ship carrying the third company of Kerensky’s battalion – the Dictator Command and Colossus class DropShips carrying the regimental and battalion HQs and the whole 3rd Battalion were very vulnerable. The Union and their fighters manoeuvred wildly to try to protect the more vulnerable Dictator but the DCMS pilots knew their job and focused their fire on the command ship. The battle raged in a wild maelstrom of muzzle flashes from autocannon, missiles streaking past in clouds and, every so often, a brighter flash when a fighter was destroyed, or a DropShip took a hit.
 
It was never clear whether the attack was a deliberate kamikaze or just an unfortunate clash but the heavy Slayer fighter slammed into the Union DropShip with a huge amount of “delta-V”, the Union was caught mid-twist and lost control, slamming into the Dictator they had been trying to shield. There were no survivors.
 
The Benjamin aerospace forces pulled back having destroyed two out of the three orbiting DropShips and aware that the rest of the 160th BattleMech Division was on their way steadily from the Zenith Jump Point and due in just a few short days. The DCMS force had decided to fight and the SLDF had handed them an opportunity to destroy them piece-meal!
 
Royal, planetary surface
8th November 2729 0800
 
Drop Zone BLUE FIVE was actually scheduled to be the Hussars’ main Drop Zone, the name a legacy of rapidly formulated plans and deemed sufficiently vague, alongside the other Drop Zone codenames for the secondary and forward/flanking positions which were also made up of somewhat random colour-number combinations. SLS Nothe Fort landed at BLUE FIVE and it was only when Kerensky and the others disembarked, and he tried to contact the higher echelons of the force that they discovered their loss.
 
“What do you mean, Sulla-56 is *gone*?!” Kerensky could not keep the shock from his voice, “why are we only hearing this now? Who is in command?”
 
Gone as in gone, the whole ship just blew up! Firefly-247 too. We’ve only just got comms back online here ourselves” came the response from aboard the now-lonely Colossus still in orbit “we can’t make it down either, we need time to repair before we risk hitting atmo. Right now, you’re the senior officer in olive drab Mr Kerensky – find us somewhere safe to put down and finish the mission!”
 
Again, Kerensky managed to keep his swearing sufficiently quiet that the microphone did not catch the stream of Russian, French, German and English. Having taken his moment, Kerensky switched the frequencies on his Orator-5K to include the entire landed task force: “All units, this is Kerensky, the op is a bust! We’ve lost the Sulla and the Firefly, Ada and 3rd Battalion are ok but can’t land for a while. We don’t have a FRAG-PLAN for this, and we’ve lost coordination from above – check in by company and let me know if you landed on-target.”
 
Bravo Company, long time friendly rivals of his own Alpha Company, were the first to check in and Kerensky was pleased to hear they had got down fine and in position between him and the main force of Kurita ‘Mechs. 2nd Battalion had also managed to make it down in reasonable order, their transporting trio of Lion class DropShips depositing the mixed companies along the other main threat axis and on two key pieces of high ground.
 
“Well, at least that’s something,” Kerensky was startled at the voice, not one he recognised and seemingly coming from inside his cockpit rather than over the comms.
 
“Ach,” another voice, “it’s still too easy.” That voice was female. “I could do this with half what he has.”
 
“Shut up, Natasha,” first voice, male, again, “let Alek fight.”
 
Being careful to turn off his comm suite, Kerensky took a moment to assess the larger scale map and where the friendly icons had been placed by the small staff he had backing him up aboard the Nothe Fort, and rather pointedly asked “Who are you? What are you doing in my ‘Mech? And… just what the…”
 
“Now, now,” he was interrupted by the male voice, “no showing swearing, this will be posted on a Family Friendly site rather than 4Chan.”
 
The female voice now cut in, “Really, you’re breaking the Fourth Wall this early? Anyway, Alek, I am Natasha Kerensky – the Black Widow – oh, wait, you won’t have heard of me, anyway, I am… your great great great etc granddaughter. And this is Ulric Kerensky, he’s a generation or two younger than me. You keep your eyes on the tactical displays and don’t worry about what we look like, we can sort all of that after you become a Hero of the Star League and survive this cluster-frag."
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #1 on: 12 January 2020, 15:45:59 »
Interesting start...  :thumbsup:

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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #2 on: 12 January 2020, 15:55:53 »
Interesting start...  :thumbsup:


There are a handful of characters who can break the Fourth Wall in BattleTech, I would say they are The Mandalorian Bounty Hunter, anyone with Phantom 'Mech ability and maybe a few of the other characters thrown in back in the 80s as pop culture references


I'm not sure why I decided to do it but we'll see where it goes
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #3 on: 12 January 2020, 22:31:11 »
 :thumbsup:  A good start so far!  looking forward to more!

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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #4 on: 12 January 2020, 22:43:04 »
Natasha giving him tactical advice well he should make it
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #5 on: 12 January 2020, 23:03:12 »
Fun, great battle description!
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #6 on: 13 January 2020, 00:01:09 »
*ping*

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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #7 on: 13 January 2020, 00:17:19 »
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #8 on: 13 January 2020, 02:22:56 »
This is going to funny as heck.

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« Reply #9 on: 13 January 2020, 02:55:27 »
ping.
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #10 on: 13 January 2020, 05:15:26 »
Thanks all


Sadly nothing more written and I will be away from my laptop for the next 36 hours or so but writing this is a fun distraction from things so I will try to do more
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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #11 on: 13 January 2020, 05:36:06 »
I'd prefer no more 4th wall knocks, they tend to push a story in the direction of crack. 

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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #12 on: 13 January 2020, 05:48:37 »
This sounds very interesting and I sincerely hope you succeed.
You know, I think with Davion & Davion (Deceased) you have a very good example but this also means there will be a lot of expectations.

But frankly I think that the ah, refreshing language of Tasha and the longterm view of Ulric and there knowledge of the future will be interesting to Aleks to say the least.

And I wouldn`t be surprised if Aleks would have an interesting chat with the guys of SLIC to see if they cannot whack Amaris.
And I think that the murder of the nearly last Lord of the Star League (mining accident my ....) can be avoided and whenever Amaris encounters a member of the Cameron family he will always have at least ten sniper rifles aimed at him (It would be hilariously if it where Aleks who whispers that into Amaris ears and tells him he knows of his plan to kill the Cameron line while smiling a political smile.). And I wouldn`t be surprised if at least one or more members of the Cameron family are always somewhere else. Pure accidental of course.

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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder - small story addition
« Reply #13 on: 20 January 2020, 05:14:12 »
Apologies for the delay, here is a smidge more I have managed to write this morning before work


Royal, planetary surface
8th November 2729 0801
 
The first DCMS scouts appeared on Alek’s sensor-fusion scope and HUD – fast moving Locusts and Hermes were the best guesses from the battle computer – and links from overflights by friendly aerospace suggested more forces would soon be on their way.
 
“Hit the scouts hard, put them down – before they can get details back to HQ,” Alek’s order to his lance commanders did not get a response from either Wolf, “Stay frosty everyone, we train for this,” a wider communication to the whole force.
 
“Can the Nothe Fort add to the party?” That was Natasha.
 
“FASCAM minefields on the easiest approaches? Why make life easy for them and if you go beyond the scouts, they won’t know about it but might just think you’ve overshot the scouts.” That was Ulric.
 
Checking his Comm was *off*, Alek concentrated part of his attention on lining up his LRM launcher on Locust and part on replying to the two ghosts, “Do you expect answers or can I concentrate on fighting this whole force?”
 
“You fight, we’ll commentate.”
 
“Thank you, Ulric.” With that, Alek turned his Comm back on, “Nothe Fort, lay FASCAM on the most likely approach routes. Cav, get to overwatch positions and dig in, there’s going to be a lot of them coming so dig deep. ‘Mechs, we have mobility so use it, concentrate fire at your best ranges then pull back so you can cool off and go where you’re needed next.” Alek’s T&T confirmed a lock with the LRM-15 and he fired, almost on reflex and without consciously taking too much attention from his command feed.
 
Alek hung back, only moving at a steady walk away from the Nothe Fort, supported by his Company Sergeant Major in a Black Knight, while Red Lance closed in with their Crabs and P-Hawks and Blue Lance moved off to the right flank, launching volleys of LRMs from their Orions while the Marauders waited for something to pop into line-of-sight for their deadly PPCs. The “rump lance” of his command lance, Black Lance, shifted to the left, nothing yet in range of their Flashmans’ large lasers but moving more swiftly than most would expect such a heavy ‘Mech to be capable of.
 
“You’ve trained your company well,” Ulric noted, “I like how you are overcoming the limitations of a small unit and not wanting to step forward while commanding.”
 
“A bit like Jaime’s use of an Archer,” observed Natasha, “much more sensible than something like Prince Joey D’s Marauder.”
 
While they talked, the LRMs landed on the Locust, the compromise to get the hits had been looser grouping so while one arm, and its associated infantry-killing machine gun, was fairly wrecked, the leg and torso armour held… until a second volley of LRMs from Blue Lead hit, the leg lost all armour and at least some myomer, internal structure and vital actuators, the torso took a battering and the third sub-volley managed a head hit. Barely any interval, not even long enough to fall over, and the third Orion in the company’s LRMs hit and the ‘Mech’s DI computer recognised the inevitable just before the missiles struck and launched the MechWarrior from his dying machine. It was a credit to the professionalism of Alek’s company, and their realisation that one scout ‘Mech kill would hardly change the battle’s outcome, that there was no celebration on the comm net.
 
“All units, activate Wartime Reserve Modes,” that command from Alek raised eyebrows, invisible to him, from Natasha and Ulric, then feral smiles as they realised what this meant – the Star League held back most of the time, it had always been suspected but the details lost to the Inner Sphere and the Clans had long since left such systems permanently turned to *max* that they hadn’t thought that Alek might have entered the fight with his kit in “monkey mode”. To authorise the WaRM, Alek punched in a code to his command computer to unlock the software on each ‘Mech.
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« Reply #14 on: 20 January 2020, 05:59:13 »
I'm definitely interested to see your take on SLDF WARM...  :thumbsup:

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« Reply #15 on: 20 January 2020, 15:57:34 »
I'm definitely interested to see your take on SLDF WARM...  :thumbsup:


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Re: A Wolf On Each Shoulder
« Reply #16 on: 20 January 2020, 16:10:31 »
A nice short update!   I'm looking forward to your next one!

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« Reply #17 on: 20 January 2020, 16:57:40 »
It would explain why Clan pilots get a default skill bonus. They aren't actually all that better, they just know how to turn Nerf Mode off.

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« Reply #18 on: 20 January 2020, 21:27:42 »
So WARM when SL forces allow access to the Extended Ranges their weapons can really shoot on Royal models?
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