Author Topic: Recognition Guide: IlClan (all volumes) (Read 71644 times)

mbear · « **Reply #90 on:** 07 June 2021, 07:53:57 »

Multiple text formatting and spelling issues from multiple volumes.

Volume 1, 1st printing, p. 13, Pack Hunter entry.
Italicize Hermes in first sentence.

Volume 8, 1st printing, p. 8 Rifleman entry, Variants section, third paragraph, first sentence: Rifleman in Rifleman C needs to be italicized.

Volume 9, 1st printing, p. 4 Valkyrie entry, second full paragraph has an opening quotation mark before the word ultimately. This should be removed.

Volume 9, 1st printing, p. 10 Inferno entry, Battle History section, second paragraph, second sentence. Infernos needs to be italicized.

Volume 9, 1st printing, p. 11 Inferno entry. Above Alternate Configuration C configuration, the "Weapons and Ammo", "Location", "Critical", "Tonnage" headings are repeated. Should probably be removed.

Volume 9, 1st printing, p. 13 Executioner entry, first paragraph, last word: "Touman" needs to be italicized and lowercase.

Volume 9, 1st printing, p. 13 Executioner entry, Battle History section, first paragraph, last sentence

Quote

...from the Eighteenth Battle Cluster that held the breech from...

"Breech" is incorrect. Should be "breach"

Quote

...from the Eighteenth Battle Cluster that held the breach from...

Volume 10, 1st printing, p. 6, Battle History, paragraph 2, last sentence:

Quote

Star Captain Mark Radick was glad to claim such a brave warrior as his bondsman.

"Mark" should not be italicized.

Volume 10, 1st printing, p. 10, Crucible entry, Notable 'Mechs and MechWarriors, Star Commander Dimitri Kerensky

Quote

...Kerensky and his Crucible detered several ...

"Detered" is misspelled. Should read "deterred".

Quote

...Kerensky and his Crucible deterred several ...

Deadborder · « **Reply #91 on:** 07 June 2021, 18:35:11 »

Volume 17, pg 4

"Bander’s attempts to emulate a clawed Crusader from Solaris resulted in the finely-tuned CRD-9BR, a speed demon with an XXL engine."

Assuming that this is meant to be a reference to the Crusader Crael, then it's from Antallos, not Solaris. "Crusading" Crael's biography on the next page mentions "He resurfaced, now sporting an eyepatch, on Solaris VII as a color commentator in 3059. Crael could no longer pilot a ’Mech"

Fix: Change "Solaris" to "Antallos"

Empyrus · « **Reply #92 on:** 18 June 2021, 18:02:47 »

RG 18, page 8
Error: Under Variants, first paragraph. "The -7R..." should be -7K as discussed earlier in the paragraph.

Cache · « **Reply #93 on:** 18 June 2021, 20:52:03 »

vol. 18, p. 10

Captain Cassandra Belmont

Should be Cassandra Balmont?

jasonf · « **Reply #94 on:** 22 June 2021, 21:06:41 »

RG 18, page 8

Quote from: Empyrus on 18 June 2021, 18:02:47

RG 18, page 8
Error: Under Variants, first paragraph. "The -7R..." should be -7K as discussed earlier in the paragraph.

In addition to above, factory on Marduk should be Victory Industries, not Kallon. Also, it is not clear what the phrase in italics is meant to convey:

Quote

The -7K was so spectacularly successful that subsequent variants were developed even after the Victory [Industries] factory on Marduk was upgraded to Project Phoenix standards.

1. Is it meant to imply that the WVR-7K remained in production even as the WVR-8K and WVR-8C Phoenix upgrades were produced on Marduk?
--If so, then italics should read something like "it remained in production even after"
2. Or is it meant to imply that the WVR-8C is was a high-priority upgrade of the WVR-7K because of the latter's success?
--If so, then italics could read something like "a subsequent variant was developed from it when" or "it was a top priority for an upgrade when"

Cache · « **Reply #95 on:** 24 June 2021, 17:30:59 »

vol. 16, p. 10

Star Commander Oryan Winters

Should be Oryan Winter? (no 's')

vol. 15, p. 8

MechWarrior Johnny Tessel

Should be Johny Tessel? (one 'n')

GreekFire · « **Reply #96 on:** 24 June 2021, 18:36:16 »

Quote from: Cache on 24 June 2021, 17:30:59

vol. 16, p. 10

Star Commander Oryan Winters

Should be Oryan Winter? (no 's')

Can't speak for the other name issues, but this change was necessary to give the Clan character an actual extant Bloodname.

Kojak · « **Reply #97 on:** 10 August 2021, 13:52:18 »

Volume 5, pg. 4:

"She has already once challenged Star Colonel Isis Bekker-Florala for command of the Fifth Bear Guards"

Isis Bekker-Florala is a Galaxy Commander, not a Star Colonel, and has been in all prior sources. This is confirmed in the ilClan sourcebook (pg. 125), which postdates RG5 in-universe.

GreekFire · « **Reply #98 on:** 28 August 2021, 20:57:22 »

Volume 5, p.10

Replace "Jace Kartwright" with "Jayce Kartwright"

- - -

Volume 5, p.10

Replace "Miles Conz" with "Myles Conz"

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Volume 10, p.10

Replace "Edward "Joe" Brevan" with "Edward "Joe" Bevan"

GreekFire · « **Reply #99 on:** 30 August 2021, 09:26:13 »

Volume 17, p.12

Replace "64 kph cruising" with "54 kph cruising"

GreekFire · « **Reply #100 on:** 30 August 2021, 15:06:30 »

Volume 14, p. 10

Replace "Sebastian Franke" with "Sergej Kharpov"

mbear · « **Reply #101 on:** 01 September 2021, 06:11:59 »

Volume 17, first printing, page 10. Last sentence of first paragraph

Quote

...allows the Bane to compete with OmniMechs of similarly mass.

Similarly should be replaced by "similar"

Quote

...allows the Bane to compete with OmniMechs of similar mass.

NeonWolf · « **Reply #102 on:** 08 September 2021, 12:51:47 »

Vol. 17 pg.12 & pg.16

Crossbow T Variant illegal build
Weight listed for both sets of the 7x SRM 2(I-OS) is 1.75 tons when should be 3.5 tons for each, making this variant 3.5 tons over weight.

Empyrus · « **Reply #103 on:** 08 September 2021, 13:26:39 »

Quote from: NeonWolf on 08 September 2021, 12:51:47

Vol. 17 pg.12 & pg.16

Crossbow T Variant illegal build
Weight listed for both sets of the 7x SRM 2(I-OS) is 1.75 tons when should be 3.5 tons for each, making this variant 3.5 tons over weight.

Not errata, Clan iOS SRM-2s weight .25 tons each, so total of 3.5 tons is correct and it is not overweight. (If you used SSW, it hasn't been updated with correct launcher masses.)

NeonWolf · « **Reply #104 on:** 08 September 2021, 14:44:08 »

Quote from: Empyrus on 08 September 2021, 13:26:39

Not errata, Clan iOS SRM-2s weight .25 tons each, so total of 3.5 tons is correct and it is not overweight. (If you used SSW, it hasn't been updated with correct launcher masses.)

My mistake, thanks. I was indeed using SSW and thought I had the latest data file

Ruger · « **Reply #105 on:** 15 October 2021, 19:25:40 »

Recognition Guide 19
Page 4, Notable ‘Mechs and MechWarriors section; Star Captain Theron entry states “The two Horse ‘Mechs used their speed…”.

The bolded section should be replaced with “Bear”.

Ruger

Wrangler · « **Reply #106 on:** 15 October 2021, 19:46:39 »

Recognition Guide 19
Page 19
Issue: Record sheet on top says BattleMech Record Sheet for the Courgar G, while the rest of entries for this machine say OmniMech
Correction: Unless found to be a Standard BattleMech, the Record Sheet name should read OmniMech Record Sheet.

Scotty · « **Reply #107 on:** 15 October 2021, 20:36:02 »

Recognition Guide Vol 19
Page 7

Issue: SCP-2N Scorpion readout describes the maximum speed as "97 kph, 129 kph with MASC". There is not MASC on this design, it has a Supercharger instead.

Correction: Replace mention of MASC with Supercharger.

Ask Eklund · « **Reply #108 on:** 16 October 2021, 01:40:29 »

Recognition Guide Vol. 19

Pg. 22 and continuing through all Record Sheets for the Rime Otter.

Are the arm actuators correct on all configurations? If nothing else the artwork does not depict hands on the Rime Otter Prime.

GreekFire · « **Reply #109 on:** 18 October 2021, 13:43:23 »

Quote from: Ask Eklund on 16 October 2021, 01:40:29

Recognition Guide Vol. 19

Pg. 22 and continuing through all Record Sheets for the Rime Otter.

Are the arm actuators correct on all configurations? If nothing else the artwork does not depict hands on the Rime Otter Prime.

Dev-level Errata:

Rime Otter Prime record sheet
--Remove lower arm and hand actuators from both the left and right arms.

All other configurations have the correct actuators.

mordel · « **Reply #110 on:** 22 October 2021, 22:01:34 »

Recognition Guide Vol 19 (pg. 15)

Issue: Spider SDR-9M record sheet is listed as Standard. However, VSP lasers never became standard, ad remained advanced.

Correction: Change Rules Level from Standard to Advanced

jymset · « **Reply #111 on:** 23 October 2021, 17:33:59 »

Quote from: mordel on 22 October 2021, 22:01:34

Recognition Guide Vol 19 (pg. 15)

Issue: Spider SDR-9M record sheet is listed as Standard. However, VSP lasers never became standard, ad remained advanced.

Correction: Change Rules Level from Standard to Advanced

Sorry, mordel...

Errata for VSPL's tech advancement to TL.

Xotl · « **Reply #112 on:** 25 October 2021, 21:44:30 »

Volume 14, page 6 (Ostsol):

observers were surprised to see that Clan Sea
Fox recently returned to this classic, after acquired plans
from Kong Interstellar in exchange for

Should be "acquiring"

Kojak · « **Reply #113 on:** 29 October 2021, 19:38:01 »

RecGuide Vol. 20, pg. 10

"Many within his Cluster disparage his lack Rasalhagian roots, and constant trials eventually overcame his fragile Viper."

There should be an "of" between "lack" and "Rasalhagian"

GreekFire · « **Reply #114 on:** 09 November 2021, 22:16:11 »

RecGuide 17, p. 8, Amarok entry.
Variants subsection.

Replace "...along with twelve additional tons..." with "...along with nine and a half additional tons..."

mbear · « **Reply #115 on:** 10 November 2021, 08:50:53 »

RecGuide Volume 20, 1st printing, p. 11, Mastodon alternate configuration D
Left Arm LRM ammo is listed as Ammo (LRM) 8.

Fix:
Change to
Ammo (LRM 15) 8 to match right arm ammo.

RecGuide 20, 1st printing, p. 12.

"The Hellion is a fearsome..."

Hellion needs to be italicized.

Recognition Guide 19, first printing, p 9, Star Commander Adam:
"...Adam was given his own Scorpion and..."

Scorpion needs to be italicized.

Kojak · « **Reply #116 on:** 13 November 2021, 03:56:58 »

RecGuide 21, pg. 8

Notable Pilots, John Sandison Entry

'the mad Alisendar Gryn"

Should be Gyrn, not Gryn

Wrangler · « **Reply #117 on:** 14 November 2021, 14:56:39 »

RecGuide 21, pg. 2

Illustrations: Aaron Harris, Harri Kallio, Chris Lowry, Anthony
Scroggins

Should be Chris Lowrey

GreekFire · « **Reply #118 on:** 15 November 2021, 10:20:10 »

Recognition Guide 17

Crusader CRD-9BR
--Change BV from 1615 to 1653.

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Recognition Guide 21

Kontio
--Change BV from 1875 to 1912.

Chinless · « **Reply #119 on:** 30 November 2021, 10:19:26 »

Dev Level Errata:

Rec Guide 13, p10.

Manufacturer is listed as Wolf Empire and Primary Factory as Kallon Industries (Thermopolis)

Manufacturer should be Kallon Industries, while the Primary Factory should be Thermopolis.