Got a couple here:
P. 44, Shiro Entry, Capabilities: "...umbrella of ordnance that is as effective on airborne targets as as they are to those on the ground." (typo, repeated word)
P. 35, Avalanche Entry, tech base for configuration C (assuming no changes in tech base, X-pulse lasers = Adv. I understand this assumption is likely not true any longer, but better to bring this up just in case.)
Also, in the past TRO entries would provide definitions/translations for names. The names Rokurokubi (long-necked night spirit/demon) and Wendigo (Algonquin cannibal monster) are not defined on their respective entries. I don't know if these are omissions, but I always like these in their respective entries - it gives insight into the design/flavor of the unit.
Thanks!