All errors come from the .pdf edition released 13-07-2012.
p.8, left-hand column, first paragraph
... Initially the Star League forces declined the challenge but Kazutoyo refused to withdraw. For ten days maintained her vigil outside the gates. Eventually, Lieutenant Bradley Grebbers accepted the challenge against his commander’s orders to do so but lasted a little over ten minutes. ...
Missing word, presumably "she".
"For ten days she maintained her vigil outside the gates."
p.8, left-hand column, third paragraph
Pirates claimed more SLDF lives in combat than the ronin did, and for three generations more than ninety percent of the SLDF troopers in the Combine even witnessed a duel.
Missing word - presumably "never", as its absence completely changes the sense of the sentence.
"... for three generations more than ninety percent of the SLDF troopers in the Combine never even witnessed a duel."
p.9, "Business is Business" sidebar
When confronted in the High Council with this information the coordinator did not deny the accusation, saying “business is business” and a fistfight erupted between the coordinator and the Lyran archon.
As formal titles, both 'Coordinator' and 'Archon' should have initial capitalisation.
"... with this information the Coordinator did not deny the accusation, saying “business is business” and a fistfight erupted between the Coordinator and the Lyran Archon."
p.9, "Third Hidden War" section, first paragraph
It’s most visible casualty is the Martial Olympiad, shuttered after the 2736 games, but ...
The apostrophe marks this as a contraction, which is grammatically incorrect.
"Its most visible casualty is the Martial Olympiad, ..."
p.10, right-hand column, "General Ikolor Fredasa" section
Despite his vainglorious nature and willingness to accept credit for the actions of others, Fredasa was thoughtful and intelligent commander, dedicated to the ideals of the Star League, but his loyalty was to the League as a whole rather than to the First Lord.
Missing word, "a".
"... and willingness to accept credit for the actions of others, Fredasa was a thoughtful and intelligent commander, dedicated to the ideals of the Star League, ..."
p.10, right-hand column, "General Rebecca Fetladral" section
... a higher state of operational readiness, both though exercises but also in peacekeeping operations such as separating the combatants ...
Wrong word - should be "through".
"... a higher state of operational readiness, both through exercises but also in peacekeeping operations such as separating the combatants ..."
p.13, left-hand column, "Brigades" paragraph
Because brigades are largely administrative constructs, the SDLF rarely ever deploys brigades independently.
Typo: the correct acronym is "SLDF".
This typo also appears on:
- p.40, "Independent Regiments" section, first paragraph
- p.86, right-hand column, "54th Escort Squadron" section
- p.87, left-hand column, first paragraph
- p.93, right-hand column, "12th Jump Infantry Division" section
- p.94, left-hand column, "Homeport" section
- p.105, right-hand column, first paragraph
- p.108, "Independent Regiments" section, fourth paragraph
- p.146, left-hand column, "Deployment" section
- p.232, "Logistics" section
- p.236, "LXVII Corps" section, second paragraph
