setting aside design choices, such as the lack of collars, there's a few problems:
1. Entering your design into HMA, I'm coming up with it being about 60000t overweight
2. The maximum total armor you can have is 3091 points, but you've assigned a total of 3630 points.
3. You've got too few officers. A 1250000t WarShip requires a minimum of 295 non-gunner personnel, added to which are your 124 gunners (you only need 123, but sticking with 124), giving 419 total. Of those 419, one sixth (round up) should be officers, so you need at least 70 officers, with the remaining 225 non-gunner personnel rated as crew. (HMA incorrectly calculates crew/officer requirements, but the above is according to Strategic Operations page 150)
AeroTech 2 Vessel Technical Readout
OVERWEIGHT
Class/Model/Name: New WarShip
Tech: Clan / 3067
Vessel Type: WarShip
Rules: Level 3, Standard design
Rules Set: AeroTech2
Mass: 1,250,000 tons
K-F Drive System: (Unknown)
Length: 1,040 meters
Sail Diameter: 1,295 meters
Power Plant: Standard
Safe Thrust: 3
Maximum Thrust: 5
Armor Type: Lamellor Ferro-carbide
Armament:
40 ER PPC
1 Medium NPPC
76 NAC/20
38 NAC/30
1 Heavy NPPC
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Class/Model/Name: New WarShip
Mass: 1,250,000 tons
Equipment: Mass
Power Plant, Drive & Control: 225,000.00
Thrust: Safe Thrust: 3
Maximum Thrust: 5
Kearny-Fuchida Hyperdrive: Compact (Integrity = 25) 565,625.00
Jump Sail: (Integrity = 6) 92.00
Structural Integrity: 110 137,500.00
Total Heat Sinks: 4,676 Double 3,961.00
Fuel & Fuel Pumps: 2,958.00
Bridge, Controls, Radar, Computer & Attitude Thrusters: 3,125.00
Fire Control Computers: .00
Armor Type: Lamellor Ferro-carbide (3,630 total armor pts) 3,240.00
Capital Scale Armor Pts
Location: L / R
Fore: 605
Fore-Left/Right: 605/605
Aft-Left/Right: 605/605
Aft: 605
Cargo:
Bay 1: Cargo (1) with 1 door 30,000.00
Grav Decks #1 - 3: (85-meter diameter) 150.00
Life Boats: 34 (7 tons each) 238.00
Crew and Passengers:
70 Officers (73 minimum) 700.00
225 Crew (225 minimum) 1,575.00
124 Gunners (123 minimum) 868.00
Weapons and Equipment Loc SRV MRV LRV ERV Heat Mass
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4 ER PPC Nose 6(60) 6(60) 6(60) -- 60 24.00
4 ER PPC Nose 6(60) 6(60) 6(60) -- 60 24.00
1 Medium NPPC Nose 9 9 9 9 135 1,800.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) Nose 70 70 70 -- 120 5,096.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 100 3,596.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) Nose 70 70 70 -- 120 5,096.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 100 3,596.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) Nose 70 70 70 -- 120 5,096.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 100 3,596.00
2 ER PPC FL/R 3(30) 3(30) 3(30) -- 60 24.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) FL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) FL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) FL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) FL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) FL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) FL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 ER PPC L/RBS 3(30) 3(30) 3(30) -- 60 24.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) L/RBS 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) L/RBS 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) L/RBS 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) L/RBS 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) L/RBS 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) L/RBS 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
4 ER PPC AL/R 6(60) 6(60) 6(60) -- 120 48.00
4 ER PPC AL/R 6(60) 6(60) 6(60) -- 120 48.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) AL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) AL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) AL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) AL/R 70 70 70 -- 240 10,192.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 200 7,192.00
4 ER PPC Aft 6(60) 6(60) 6(60) -- 60 24.00
4 ER PPC Aft 6(60) 6(60) 6(60) -- 60 24.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) Aft 70 70 70 -- 120 5,096.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 100 3,596.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) Aft 70 70 70 -- 120 5,096.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 100 3,596.00
2 NAC/20(240 rounds) Aft 70 70 70 -- 120 5,096.00
1 NAC/30(120 rounds) 100 3,596.00
1 Heavy NPPC Aft 15 15 15 15 225 3,000.00
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TOTALS: Heat: 9,320 1,310,368.00
Tons Left: -60,368.00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 5,390,199,200 C-Bills
Battle Value: 466,082
Cost per BV: 11,564.92
Weapon Value: 255,144 (Ratio = .55)
Damage Factors: SRV = 25,153; MRV = 25,037; LRV = 19,551; ERV = 7,458
Maintenance: Maintenance Point Value (MPV) = 1,107,677
(146,585 Structure, 302,512 Life Support, 658,580 Weapons)
Support Points (SP) = 479,762 (43% of MPV)
BattleForce2: Not applicable