How far ahead were you working? Did the audience reception make you rethink anything you had previously planned?
When you had the unit take the contract in the Rasalhague Dominion, did you factor the Rasalhagian/Ghost Bear antipathy towards mercenaries into the local government deciding not to pay the unit upon completion of the mission?
I'll be honest, I wrote that story in 2019, and I wasn't as knowledgable about the Dominion as I am now. I think I must have gleaned some of this by then... But I think I'd write it a little differently if I wrote that story today.