WHOO! What a story. :) Almost the exact opposite of mine, which I really enjoy. one of the things I -love- about the Battletech universe is there's usually no right or wrong, just different points of view. This story and "Cold collaboration" are almost two sides of a coin proving that. :)
Tight story, also shows rule underneath the falcons (while it might seem strange that so many of us picked them, the early FASA products were very much Wolf and Falcon focused. To be blunt, there's more background data for that very specific era to work with for those Clans)
I really dug this story. very much felt like a unit that'd spent years on the run, and was warring from within whether to go on or surrender. Well done. O0