Has anyone had a chance to read through the two new offerings? I wanted to get some feedback before I finished working on anything else.
I've read through most of your Terran Hegemony Field Manual draft (currently working through the individual units) as well as the St. Ives
Operation Restore Hope. Overall it's some of the best laid out and functional AU work I've read. I greatly enjoy the back story and that the Terran Hegemony has maintained their technology base. The fact that you have them act primarily in alignment with my personal morals is great too.
Suggestions:
- Use software that has a grammar check function to catch some of the homonyms that show up (e.g. "seems" vice seams in the section discussing uniforms) and some other grammatical issues.
- Add a section for technical readout style write-ups for your Lee CV, Lee Blockade Runner & Longstreet dropships along with any other new units you'd wish to add. Having artwork is a nicety but not a necessity.
Overall, very well done and thanks for sharing your brain-sweat with us.
-MM