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2011-11-25 Kurodenkou [Craig A. Reed]
« on: 26 November 2011, 02:02:28 »
Operation BULLDOG provided plenty of honor...

... for everyone involved. But for some warriors of the Eighth Sword of Light, there is much more than combat going on.

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Re: 2011-11-25 Kurodenkou [Craig A. Reed]
« Reply #1 on: 27 November 2011, 18:41:03 »
this was decent story, i enjoyed it quite a bit. However this was yet again another highly predictable story by this author (i pretty much guessed the ending by page 6 or 7 and was for the most part right) and the editing was especially bad in this story. I'd still recommend it though, but it's no Lyran Fire
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Re: 2011-11-25 Kurodenkou [Craig A. Reed]
« Reply #2 on: 30 November 2011, 06:14:26 »
Craig's had another story posted tonite/this morning called 'Thirteen' in case anyone is interested and doesn't want to wait for roosterboy to post the announcement. Pretty good IMO. Set during the days just after the WoB attacked Tharkad around a ad hoc unit of Lyran retirees and a few active soldiers pilot 'Mechs from a rich Baron's private collection (16 Mechs)
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Re: 2011-11-25 Kurodenkou [Craig A. Reed]
« Reply #3 on: 01 December 2011, 01:41:18 »
I enjoyed the story very much.
A decent mech fight and a good setting.  :)
Quote from: Daishi411 on 27 November 2011, 18:41:03
However this was yet again another highly predictable story by this author (i pretty much guessed the ending by page 6 or 7 and was for the most part right) [...]
Maybe a bit predictable I need a few page more), but this time it was not much a problem.
Ltes take a look at 'Thirteen'.
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Re: 2011-11-25 Kurodenkou [Craig A. Reed]
« Reply #4 on: 05 December 2011, 09:58:53 »
 I think this was a good Drac story. I can over look the edit problem with the story. HEY Reed keep them coming O0
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