Author Topic: Handbook: House Kurita (2796) (Read 19074 times)

Dubble_g · « **on:** 22 August 2019, 22:05:50 »

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mikecj · « **Reply #1 on:** 22 August 2019, 23:14:14 »

Nice opening!

cklammer · « **Reply #2 on:** 23 August 2019, 00:44:39 »

Wow - you do like to challenge yourself ... this is a very nice promising opening!

marauder648 · « **Reply #3 on:** 23 August 2019, 05:10:05 »

Wow, a dark start but superbly written!

DOC_Agren · « **Reply #4 on:** 23 August 2019, 15:19:01 »

No we wait to see if he wins the heart or the mind of the child?

Dubble_g · « **Reply #5 on:** 25 August 2019, 19:49:41 »

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Daryk · « **Reply #6 on:** 25 August 2019, 20:18:54 »

Interesting, indeed. I'll need to read that second post tomorrow, though. Too close to bed time for me...

mikecj · « **Reply #7 on:** 25 August 2019, 21:40:51 »

Nicely written; interesting parallel.

Dubble_g · « **Reply #8 on:** 28 August 2019, 20:01:05 »

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Dubble_g · « **Reply #9 on:** 28 August 2019, 20:15:24 »

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mikecj · « **Reply #10 on:** 28 August 2019, 21:15:36 »

a drop of golden sun...

aka nuke 'em.

Dubble_g · « **Reply #11 on:** 29 August 2019, 20:25:14 »

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mikecj · « **Reply #12 on:** 30 August 2019, 15:22:52 »

A bunch of sullen, sulking, teenager-level melodramatic aristocrats furious they’d been denied the toy they wanted, so they were going to destroy everything and then everyone would be sorry.

But Kirkan said nothing.

Kept his face blank.

It was the Combine way.

And if you delete the underlined sentences it's even more true :)

Kidd · « **Reply #13 on:** 31 August 2019, 12:50:19 »

Interesting... not up to speed, but, interesting...

Dubble_g · « **Reply #14 on:** 01 September 2019, 19:23:58 »

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Kidd · « **Reply #15 on:** 01 September 2019, 20:27:48 »

I meant I hadn't yet read all the chapters published.

Now I'm up to speed.

Interesting.

hjmartin70 · « **Reply #16 on:** 02 September 2019, 13:12:53 »

<delurk>
Wow, that was intense...
Well done and thank you.
<lurk>

Dubble_g · « **Reply #17 on:** 02 September 2019, 20:57:55 »

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DOC_Agren · « **Reply #18 on:** 04 September 2019, 19:34:31 »

Kirkan is another well done character

Dubble_g · « **Reply #19 on:** 04 September 2019, 21:09:48 »

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Dubble_g · « **Reply #20 on:** 06 September 2019, 00:43:37 »

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Kidd · « **Reply #21 on:** 06 September 2019, 16:30:08 »

That Davion war movie review is spot-on.

mikecj · « **Reply #22 on:** 06 September 2019, 23:08:28 »

;D ;D ;D ;D ;D :thumbsup:

Dubble_g · « **Reply #23 on:** 08 September 2019, 19:31:29 »

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Dubble_g · « **Reply #24 on:** 10 September 2019, 20:42:26 »

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Dubble_g · « **Reply #25 on:** 12 September 2019, 19:52:16 »

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DOC_Agren · « **Reply #26 on:** 16 September 2019, 19:28:54 »

Kikran is becoming a very interesting guy.

Dubble_g · « **Reply #27 on:** 16 September 2019, 22:45:41 »

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Dubble_g · « **Reply #28 on:** 18 September 2019, 23:12:22 »

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Dubble_g · « **Reply #29 on:** 19 September 2019, 19:41:04 »

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