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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #60 on: 17 November 2019, 12:44:56 »
Good thing I had these squirreled away. Still a massive fan of the 90th and the BTSD universe.

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Hecatoncheires HET-7D-H

Mass: 70 tons
Tech Base: Inner Sphere
Chassis Config: Biped
Rules Level: Tournament Legal
Era: Age of War/Star League
Tech Rating/Era Availability: E/E-F-E-A
Production Year: 2750
Cost: 6,665,303 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,679

Chassis: Unknown Endo-Steel
Power Plant: Unknown 280 Fusion Engine
Walking Speed: 43.2 km/h
Maximum Speed: 64.8 km/h
Jump Jets: None
    Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Unknown Standard Armor w/ CASE
Armament:
    1  ER Large Laser
    2  LRM-15s
    1  SRM-6
    3  Medium Lasers
Manufacturer: Unknown
    Primary Factory: Unknown
Communications System: Unknown
Targeting and Tracking System: Unknown

================================================================================
Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
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Internal Structure: Endo-Steel                   107 points                3.50
    Internal Locations: 3 LT, 3 RT, 4 LA, 2 LL, 2 RL
Engine:             Fusion Engine                280                      16.00
    Walking MP: 4
    Running MP: 6
    Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             10(20)                    0.00
Gyro:               Standard                                               3.00
Cockpit:            Standard                                               3.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA
Armor:              Standard Armor               AV - 217                 14.00
    CASE Locations: 1 RT                                                   0.50

                                                      Internal       Armor     
                                                      Structure      Factor     
                                                Head     3            9         
                                        Center Torso     22           33       
                                 Center Torso (rear)                  11       
                                           L/R Torso     15           22       
                                    L/R Torso (rear)                  8         
                                             L/R Arm     11           22       
                                             L/R Leg     15           30       

================================================================================
Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Medium Laser                                 HD        3         1         1.00
SRM-6                                        CT        4         2         3.00
Medium Laser                                 RT        3         1         1.00
Medium Laser                                 LT        3         1         1.00
2 LRM-15s                                    RA        10        6        14.00
ER Large Laser                               LA        12        2         5.00
@SRM-6 (15)                                  RT        -         1         1.00
@LRM-15 (32)                                 RT        -         4         4.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 16

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      7    Points: 17
4          3       3       2       0      3     1   Structure:  6
Special Abilities: CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA, LRM 1/1/1, IF 1


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Hecatoncheires HET-7E-H

Mass: 70 tons
Tech Base: Inner Sphere
Chassis Config: Biped
Rules Level: Tournament Legal
Era: Age of War/Star League
Tech Rating/Era Availability: E/E-F-E-A
Production Year: 2750
Cost: 6,580,303 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,621

Chassis: Unknown Endo-Steel
Power Plant: Unknown 280 Fusion Engine
Walking Speed: 43.2 km/h
Maximum Speed: 64.8 km/h
Jump Jets: None
    Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Unknown Standard Armor w/ CASE
Armament:
    1  Autocannon/20
    1  ER Large Laser
    1  SRM-6
    3  Medium Lasers
Manufacturer: Unknown
    Primary Factory: Unknown
Communications System: Unknown
Targeting and Tracking System: Unknown

================================================================================
Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Internal Structure: Endo-Steel                   107 points                3.50
    Internal Locations: 3 LT, 3 RT, 4 LA, 2 LL, 2 RL
Engine:             Fusion Engine                280                      16.00
    Walking MP: 4
    Running MP: 6
    Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             10(20)                    0.00
Gyro:               Standard                                               3.00
Cockpit:            Standard                                               3.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA
Armor:              Standard Armor               AV - 217                 14.00
    CASE Locations: 1 RT                                                   0.50

                                                      Internal       Armor     
                                                      Structure      Factor     
                                                Head     3            9         
                                        Center Torso     22           33       
                                 Center Torso (rear)                  11       
                                           L/R Torso     15           22       
                                    L/R Torso (rear)                  8         
                                             L/R Arm     11           22       
                                             L/R Leg     15           30       

================================================================================
Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Medium Laser                                 HD        3         1         1.00
SRM-6                                        CT        4         2         3.00
Medium Laser                                 RT        3         1         1.00
Medium Laser                                 LT        3         1         1.00
Autocannon/20                                RA        7         10       14.00
ER Large Laser                               LA        12        2         5.00
@SRM-6 (15)                                  RT        -         1         1.00
@AC/20 (20)                                  RT        -         4         4.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 12

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      7    Points: 16
4          4       4       1       0      3     1   Structure:  6
Special Abilities: CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA, AC 1/1/0


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Hecatoncheires HET-7F-H

Mass: 70 tons
Tech Base: Inner Sphere
Chassis Config: Biped
Rules Level: Tournament Legal
Era: Age of War/Star League
Tech Rating/Era Availability: E/E-F-E-A
Production Year: 2750
Cost: 6,580,303 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,868

Chassis: Unknown Endo-Steel
Power Plant: Unknown 280 Fusion Engine
Walking Speed: 43.2 km/h
Maximum Speed: 64.8 km/h
Jump Jets: None
    Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Unknown Standard Armor w/ CASE
Armament:
    1  Gauss Rifle
    1  ER Large Laser
    1  SRM-6
    3  Medium Lasers
Manufacturer: Unknown
    Primary Factory: Unknown
Communications System: Unknown
Targeting and Tracking System: Unknown

================================================================================
Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Internal Structure: Endo-Steel                   107 points                3.50
    Internal Locations: 3 LT, 3 RT, 4 LA, 2 LL, 2 RL
Engine:             Fusion Engine                280                      16.00
    Walking MP: 4
    Running MP: 6
    Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             10(20)                    0.00
Gyro:               Standard                                               3.00
Cockpit:            Standard                                               3.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA
Armor:              Standard Armor               AV - 217                 14.00
    CASE Locations: 1 RT                                                   0.50

                                                      Internal       Armor     
                                                      Structure      Factor     
                                                Head     3            9         
                                        Center Torso     22           33       
                                 Center Torso (rear)                  11       
                                           L/R Torso     15           22       
                                    L/R Torso (rear)                  8         
                                             L/R Arm     11           22       
                                             L/R Leg     15           30       

================================================================================
Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Medium Laser                                 HD        3         1         1.00
SRM-6                                        CT        4         2         3.00
Medium Laser                                 RT        3         1         1.00
Medium Laser                                 LT        3         1         1.00
Gauss Rifle                                  RA        1         7        15.00
ER Large Laser                               LA        12        2         5.00
@SRM-6 (15)                                  RT        -         1         1.00
@Gauss Rifle (24)                            RT        -         3         3.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 16

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      7    Points: 19
4          4       4       2       0      3     1   Structure:  6
Special Abilities: CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


Daryk

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #61 on: 17 November 2019, 12:49:03 »
Hmmm... Cannonshop had said it had Ferro-Fibrous armor...

Centurion03

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #62 on: 17 November 2019, 12:55:06 »
Could be, these files are a few years old.

The HET-7E-H doesn't have the available slots for Ferro Fibrous armour though, I'll have to go see if the original threads are still around.  :)

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #63 on: 17 November 2019, 18:57:55 »
I've only seen the Heck D & E converted for MM.  In his main story TRO he only wrote up the E model.  I think he published the D into a discussion thread back in January of 2011.
The D & E had standard armor in the originals.
The H model matches the "rebranded" Heck the 90th HAR and the Terrans rebranded as the "Tiger" in Through A Mirror Darkly Book 3, Those who Break the Unity.  He took it out for a spin onscreen in Ghost of the Dead when Liz Hazen takes one out to face the Wolves on Tamar.

This bunker came from The Smell of the Ashes by Cannonshop, my copy dates to 8 January 2011
SLDF/HAF Temporary Captured War Materials Bunker
Somewhere outside of Vancouver, Terra, Terran Hegemony
15 May, 2781
“So why are we here Mr. Case?   Not that I mind a quick trip to the ass end of nowhere.”  Brigadier General Jimmy Qua asked as the two men walked up to one of the huge prefab hangers.
Jon Case chuckled and punched a key pad on the personnel entryway next to the massive hanger door.
“Patience is a virtue General, watch…”  He hit a stud on the wall and the lights came on in rows.  Standing there were row upon row of monstrous forms.  The nearest had the lean predatory lines of a great raptor from Earth’s past.  Back canted legs, a narrow torso and hunched shoulders spoke of menace.
It was an all too familiar form, that of a HET-7E-H Hecatoncheires.  The very symbol of the Rim Worlds Republic.
“Okay, it’s a Heck, so what?!”  Qua thought he knew but he needed to hear Jon say it.
“So there is a brigade’s worth of captured RimJob metal men here; never used and only dropped once.”  Qua gave Jon a grimace as the man went on.  “On this site you’ve also got enough equipment to outfit  two more brigades of mechanized infantry, older stuff mostly but on par with anything the House Lords have.”
Qua waited silently as Jon rapped his knuckles on the Heck’s shin.
“Sadly this entire depot is going to be the victim of a training error, an entire battalion of guns is going to hit it in three months time.  Tragic isn’t it?”
“Yeah, Jon tragic.” Qua said smiling.  The Coasties’ supply chain was still active… Two months should do it.  Question is would the folks back home use RimJob shit.  Then again we did back in ’69…
As Jimmy Qua thought, Jon lit a cigarette and waited patiently.
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #64 on: 17 November 2019, 19:34:02 »
Hmmmm. Maeve Wolf calling Jaime ‘dad’, references to her ‘mother’ ... methinks there might be some more butterflies. Is she still a gender flipped clone? Who’s ‘mum’?

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #65 on: 17 November 2019, 22:15:55 »
Hmmmm. Maeve Wolf calling Jaime ‘dad’, references to her ‘mother’ ... methinks there might be some more butterflies. Is she still a gender flipped clone? Who’s ‘mum’?

Wolf would NOT be pleased if Comstar tripped to the cloning thing, and that tidbit must've been published in a source I no longer have access to. In this case, even a gender-flipped clone would have had both a mother, and father figure, seeing as wolf's not a fan of turning institutionalized sociopaths on his adopted homeland and there's way too many chances for someone to slip up if the cover story isn't air-tight.
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #66 on: 17 November 2019, 22:34:28 »
Wolf would NOT be pleased if Comstar tripped to the cloning thing, and that tidbit must've been published in a source I no longer have access to. In this case, even a gender-flipped clone would have had both a mother, and father figure, seeing as wolf's not a fan of turning institutionalized sociopaths on his adopted homeland and there's way too many chances for someone to slip up if the cover story isn't air-tight.
It was revealed at the end of Wolfpack that Maeve was a ‘retread’ with the gender reversed. She was raised in a Dragoon sibling company, and in canon (so far as we know) never actually knew her relation to Jaimei: she was just an awesome commander during the Dragoon Civil War, and rose to become the first Dragoon commanding general.

From Sarna:


Maeve Wolf (died January 22, 3073[1]) was a genetic clone of Jaime Wolf, the commander of the legendary Wolf's Dragoons mercenary unit.[2]

Contents [hide]
1 Biography
1.1 Early career
1.2 Dragoon Civil War
1.3 Word of Blake Jihad
1.4 Death
2 Titles and Positions
3 Notes
4 References
5 Bibliography
Biography[edit]

Early career[edit]
Her status as a clone was unknown even to herself and Jaime Wolf, and known only by a select few Dragoon scientists and (later) Brian Cameron.[2] After completing her training, she was initially assigned to Jaime Wolf's Bodyguard Lance[3] and saw action on Morges in 3053.[4] Later, having reached the rank of Captain, she was assigned a command in the Wolf Spider Battalion.[5]

Dragoon Civil War[edit]

Maeve Wolf showing Alpin Wolf corpse
During the Dragoon Civil War in 3054, Maeve was acting commander of the Wolf Spider Battalion, as Major John Clavell was wounded at the time.[6] She joined the conflict on the side of Colonel Jaime Wolf[7], and played a major role when she defeated the upstart Alpin Wolf in single combat.[8] Following the war, she won a Trial of Position unopposed, earning the name 'Wolf' and taking the new position of 'General' within Wolf's Dragoons[9], second in command only to (now Commander) Jaime Wolf. She assisted in the reorganization of the unit[10], and served in that capacity for many years.
« Last Edit: 17 November 2019, 22:36:33 by gladius »

Cannonshop

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #67 on: 17 November 2019, 22:53:11 »
It was revealed at the end of Wolfpack that Maeve was a ‘retread’ with the gender reversed. She was raised in a Dragoon sibling company, and in canon (so far as we know) never actually knew her relation to Jaimei: she was just an awesome commander during the Dragoon Civil War, and rose to become the first Dragoon commanding general.

From Sarna:


Maeve Wolf (died January 22, 3073[1]) was a genetic clone of Jaime Wolf, the commander of the legendary Wolf's Dragoons mercenary unit.[2]

Contents [hide]
1 Biography
1.1 Early career
1.2 Dragoon Civil War
1.3 Word of Blake Jihad
1.4 Death
2 Titles and Positions
3 Notes
4 References
5 Bibliography
Biography[edit]

Early career[edit]
Her status as a clone was unknown even to herself and Jaime Wolf, and known only by a select few Dragoon scientists and (later) Brian Cameron.[2] After completing her training, she was initially assigned to Jaime Wolf's Bodyguard Lance[3] and saw action on Morges in 3053.[4] Later, having reached the rank of Captain, she was assigned a command in the Wolf Spider Battalion.[5]

Dragoon Civil War[edit]

Maeve Wolf showing Alpin Wolf corpse
During the Dragoon Civil War in 3054, Maeve was acting commander of the Wolf Spider Battalion, as Major John Clavell was wounded at the time.[6] She joined the conflict on the side of Colonel Jaime Wolf[7], and played a major role when she defeated the upstart Alpin Wolf in single combat.[8] Following the war, she won a Trial of Position unopposed, earning the name 'Wolf' and taking the new position of 'General' within Wolf's Dragoons[9], second in command only to (now Commander) Jaime Wolf. She assisted in the reorganization of the unit[10], and served in that capacity for many years.

I stand corrected, we will term it a 'cover story' move created with an eye toward deeper involvement in Inner Sphere politics-the claim that Maeve is Wolf's biological daughter and is 'family' falls into Inner Sphere norms and would be unlikely to be investigated further-once intrepid investigators 'discovered' Maeve was Wolf's daughter raised in secret somewhere, or born in secret, they would stop looking, thus preserving the continued work by his people on the breeding programme.

(The genetic relationship would be likely obvious to any observer on the outside-familial resemblance isn't that uncommon and a simple blood test would tell most investigators that they're related.  It is common for the child of a merc unit leader or minor lord, or major lord to 'inherit' the position of leadership, most of the potential clients and peers of the Dragoons would accept this more readily than "She's a clone!" claims.)

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gladius

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #68 on: 17 November 2019, 23:09:25 »
I stand corrected, we will term it a 'cover story' move created with an eye toward deeper involvement in Inner Sphere politics-the claim that Maeve is Wolf's biological daughter and is 'family' falls into Inner Sphere norms and would be unlikely to be investigated further-once intrepid investigators 'discovered' Maeve was Wolf's daughter raised in secret somewhere, or born in secret, they would stop looking, thus preserving the continued work by his people on the breeding programme.

(The genetic relationship would be likely obvious to any observer on the outside-familial resemblance isn't that uncommon and a simple blood test would tell most investigators that they're related.  It is common for the child of a merc unit leader or minor lord, or major lord to 'inherit' the position of leadership, most of the potential clients and peers of the Dragoons would accept this more readily than "She's a clone!" claims.)
Sounds reasonable. And the mother figure is ...?

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #69 on: 18 November 2019, 09:42:46 »
Nha Tranh Best Western Hotel and Conference Center, Kowloon, October 11, 3066...

General Evelyn Mosovich, AFFC/Reserve, 171st Volunteer RCT, stood up to give the presentation.  Her face may not have been the best choice for this, being skull-like with replacement myomers and artificial eyes after being burnt off by an Elemental's small laser on Tamar more than a decade ago, but as Kowloon-the-planet's ranking AFFC officer, there was a feeling that some obligation had to be met for the benefit of the public's safety and comfort.

"...dated material confirmed the find to be from just after the Amaris era, documents located near the bottom after clearing the rubble suggest the site was prepared in a hurry, not surprising given the nature of what was stored there.  Duchess Ngo was kind enough to invite teams from as far away as New Avalon to examine the materials found there.  Approximately one regiment of Rim Worlds produced Hecatonchieres assault 'mechs, the largest single concentration of surviving models since the first succession war.  We've confirmed provenance from the SLDF's capture depot outside Vancouver, dated sometime in 2781.  The equipment was moved here, then buried, and then, for some reason, forgotten for over two hundred years.  additional finds include a number of Terran Hegemony and Rim Worlds produced armored vehicles, based on examinations, there are better than a brigade's worth of machines and weapons stored down there, the sealing order was signed by Planetary President-Elect Marjorie Ngo, dated roughly ten days before Kowloon signed onto the Lyran Commonwealth."

the slide flickered.

"There were some initial mistakes on identification, while actual examples are amazingly rare, there were telltales that suggested Ferro-Fibrous replacement armor had been patched over battle-damaged type 1 Starslab.  Further technical examination of samples pulled from the cavern showed this to be not the case, the corrosion pattern on the initial unit extracted is that of ferro fibrous armor, yes, but the unit itself is clearly an experimental prototype that sacrificed a lot of the design's firepower in a failed attempt to make it faster, the remaining samples in the hole are standard HET-7A-H models with some repairs probably made after capture by SLDF forces on Terra. the majority of these units show severe weathering and corrosion issues from being left in those caves for so long, a small handful were able to be made operational, however, and you can see here-"

[Video image]

"They only required basic depot level maintenance to be brought up to operational standard.  We're not going to be doing that, however-these are museum quality examples of an historically significant design.  Instead, the 'heck brigade' is being restored for display purposes and offered to University and Academy museums throughout the reborn Star League,  you may now ask  your questions."

"Why aren't you going to use them, General?" 

Evelyn's vox buzzed as she answered, "It doesn't meet with Kowloonese doctrine, the design is also centuries out of production and borderline out of date.  as you know, the Kowloon contribution to the National defense relies heavily on standardization of equipment for logistical support, deployable units, and the ability to support our forces in the field by making maximum use of every kilogram of shipping space.  Nobody makes parts for the Hecatonchieres, and tooling up for it would cost just as much as you might imagine a new model of Atlas would cost.  Admittedly, the heck is a better design, but we're sticking to the Enfield/Blackhawk-KU combo with license copies of the Jenner in the recon 'mech role and the excellent, license built Avatar design.  Negotiations for procurement of the Hauptmann class are suspended at this time, frankly, because we don't have the butts to fill the seats, nor a certifiable role in the doctrine of the 171st."

this was a bit of a shock.  AFFC may be the combination of the best elements of the Lyran and Federated Suns militaries, but for a Lyran world to have 'no role' for an assault battlemech?  this idea borders on heresy.

"So your duchess is just giving them away?"

"I don't make policy, I'm just announcing it. next question, Kari?"

Kari Lundberg of DBS stands, "General, with all of the visible investment into medical technologies, education expansions, and military realignment on Kowloon in the last fourteen years, why haven't you gotten your face fixed?"

"It's not broken. do you have a question about the presentation?"

"Will Kowloon be retaining any of the found 'mechs?" the blonde from Donegal was quick on her feet.

"Yes.  One company will be kept for use at Bien Hoa as OPFOR training units and exotic technologies demonstrators, we are also stationing one company at the Dinh Diep Holocaust Memorial as static display, they are to be retrofitted to the model used during the uprising of 2729 that resulted in the destruction by orbital fire of Kowloon's first capital city, and there are several that will remain once we've properly shored the Cavern up, as part of the National Museum of the 171st  here on Kowloon.  We're hoping to trade four of the Hecks to the Gilmour family in exchange for items of the 90th Heavy Assault to complete that museum, it opens to the public in two years time. Next Question?, you in the back?"

a man in tan coveralls with a long coat stands up, "Yes, General, these are artifacts of the war against the Usurper?"

"I said that." Evelyn stated.

"Do you have any others that will be displayed to the public?" he asks.

"Quite a few.  Some have been kept here since the fall of the Rimjobs, mister-"

"Jones, Henry Jones, Scorpion Historical Broadcast company." he said, "Will any of the items be associated to the leading figures of that era?"

"We couldn't get the fat man's head on a spike, if that's what you're wondering." Evelynn's voice was monotone, and her expression was understandably unreadable, "A Goliath Scorpion Media-subcaste on Kowloon? that's darned interesting.  How about you stick around after the presentation and we can talk about what you're seeking?"  she didn't add how you got here but it was in the back of her mind.

***

Coast Guard Station Nha Tranh Spaceport, three hours later...

Elizabeth Ngo wasn't here, but her assistant, Kelli Whyte, was.  "You guys suck at covert operations, Star Colonel." she said, sitting down across from the Goliath Scorpion Seeker in interview room 3A.  "Seriously, but you do have such wonderful toys-that holonet that got you through Customs, for example, is top-shelf stuff, but your fieldcraft sucks.  why are you here?"

"We believe you have a document from The Great Father, the Elbar Declaration." he says easily enough, "We have a...source that says one copy, possibly the last original copy of it, is here on Kowloon...it has...significance."

"You could have called ahead and just asked, it would've saved you months of space travel." she tells him, "not to mention avoiding diplomatic flaps.  before I confirm or deny, I want to know what 'significance' you think it has, and why you think it's here and not on Elbar? and for the record, this interview is with SaKhan Nelson Elam, Clan Goliath Scorpion."

"you're very well informed." he says, "surprisingly well informed."

"We find that knowing who's guesting for dinner is of some use in deciding whether to have the good china out or the paper plates.  Like I told you, you could have...ought to have called ahead before making that journey down the Exodus road."

"Will i be detained? Interrogated?" he asks.

"Star Colonel Elam, we are not presently at war with your Clan, yes, you will be detained for a short time, if my superiors decide to grant your request, it will be granted and transportation back to your homeland will be arranged, if my superiors decide NOT to grant your request, you will be sent home empty-handed.  The detention is because a lot of my people don't make much distinction between Clanners, and I don't want to have to explain why a visiting...person of rank from a nation we are not at war with ended up dead in an alley on my watch.  Liz doesn't like complications that start foreign wars."

"but you are not going to even ask about military intelligence I might possess?"

"Negative, between Loki, Lohengrin, MIIO, Rabid Foxes, SLDFs Intel people, ROM, and our own OCB Foreign Department, we probably know more about your forces and dispositions than you do, and unless you're defecting, there's no reason to pump you for information that would be out-of-date due simply to the time it took you to get here with that half-assed cover-story.  While we're waiting for your request to be processed, would you like to visit some historical sites here on Kowloon?"




"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #70 on: 18 November 2019, 14:20:58 »
Nha Tranh Public Medical Center...

The hospital bed was advanced, designed to be multi-functional, the best that NAIS and AFFC Medical could devise, the electronic monitors could detect an oncoming seizure faster than Liz could recognize the symptoms, and the automatic restraint system could keep her from hurting herself as her body's electrical system went haywire.  The catheterization system kept her free from the danger of soiling her self during a seizure, and whisked away the wastes, while the sheets themselves wicked away sweat and cleansed body odor.

The intravenous delivery system kept her remaining endorphin receptors stocked with the finest painkillers, while still leaving her mostly lucid, and all of it was set up to allow her mostly-free use of her hands, access to a different sort of monitor, and the ability to keep something resembling her dignity in the presence of visitors.

"How are they doing today?" she asked Tamara, Kelli's legal 'wife'-a legal choice made back during independence, when women outnumbered me on Kowloon by nine to one, maintained as a tradition to mark their culture even in the free-wheeling morals of the Lyran Commonwealth era.

Tamara ran a hand down her belly, "Quiet." She said, "Your children are quiet today, Your Grace.  I think the girl is sleeping.  Have you picked names?"

Liz nods, "She will be named Amanda, and her brother will be named for his Uncle, Patrick." she smiled.  "Thank you again.  It didn't save my life, but at least they won't be hurt by what I have to take just to stay lucid.  They are healthy?"

"Both.  the transplant was timely enough to protect them both from chemical damage."  Tamara told her.  "You'll be able to hold them soon, you know."

"I feel like I should have given you more say over them in the contract." Liz notes quietly.

"You're their mother, I'm just...a taxi." Tamara told her, "Kelli and I had given up on having children, you know.  Careers, Not-being-into-men..."

"still, Tama, you had options." Liz noted, "you didn't have to volunteer for...I'm glad you did, but you did not have to do this for me." Liz tracked reports with one eye while they visited.  "a Khan??"

"Oooh, is this a bad time now?" Tamara asked.

"No, it isn't. could you...be kind enough to stay? I may need someone here to check my language." Elizabeth muttered invective under her breath as she read the report.

Then she stopped.  "He wants the Elbar Declaration." she said, "Imagine that. someone is interested in that after centuries!"

She tabbed a code series to ring Kelli's portable.

"Kelli! your wife is visiting!" Liz said it with mock cheer.

"Oh good, I was about to-"

"You were about to arrange for Khan Nelson Elam to visit the Dinh Diep Holocaust museum, and keep him there for several hours while Commodore Li's people prep Spider Moon for a visit by a dignitary, after which, since it won't be prepped until tomorrow, you are to put him up in the best hotel accomodations and arrange for him to use the Comstar array to phone home and tell them he is alive and well so they don't invade us for jailing one of their senior leadership, then you will take him to the University Library, where he will be allowed to see all the books, be sure to explain to him that we're looking for a copy of the Clan Remembrance, and tell him that the document he seeks to examine will be ready to be examined and viewed-tomorrow, and explain that he will want to bring his escorts with him to the viewing."

"Yes mum..."

"And before he leaves Kowloon, I want to see this man in person, if necessary you will bring him to my hospital room, is that understood?"

"Yes mum."

"Good enough.   now, I'm going to have the rest of this call transferred to your wife's phone, and she is to take it out of the room with her to discuss whatever personal things you two need to discuss!"

liz hit the transfer code, as the monitor chimed for an oncoming seizure, then she tried to relax as her restraints engaged.

Tamara's portable toned and she left.

Five seconds later, through the closed privacy door, everyone on this floor could hear elizabeth's screams as her body clenched violently and her mind was washed away on a wave of intolerable agony.

The screams lasted thirty minutes.  at the end of them, she lay like a limp rag, body exhausted and muscles strained, whimpering and waiting for the narcotics to dull the ache to a point she could once again be lucid.

 
"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #71 on: 18 November 2019, 18:21:45 »
Negotiations for procurement of the Hauptmann class are suspended at this time, frankly, because we don't have the butts to fill the seats, nor a certifiable role in the doctrine of the 171st."

this was a bit of a shock.  AFFC may be the combination of the best elements of the Lyran and Federated Suns militaries, but for a Lyran world to have 'no role' for an assault battlemech?  this idea borders on heresy.

We're hoping to trade four of the Hecks to the Gilmour family in exchange for items of the 90th Heavy Assault to complete that museum, it opens to the public in two years time. Next Question?, you in the back?"

"Jones, Henry Jones, Scorpion Historical Broadcast company." he said, "Will any of the items be associated to the leading figures of that era?"

Heresy- there'll be people having heart attacks in the LCAF HQs at Asgard!

Nice call backs to the 90th  :thumbsup:

"Henry Jones" would have a stroke if her knew about Tadeo Amaris' nom de guerre.   ;D
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #72 on: 18 November 2019, 18:30:34 »
Sounds reasonable. And the mother figure is ...?
Natasha??
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #73 on: 18 November 2019, 18:39:56 »
Natasha??
Probably not: that’d run into the Henry VIII problem of getting involved with your dead brother’s ex.

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #74 on: 19 November 2019, 03:58:21 »

Really enjoying this story, so far. Thank you!

That does make me wonder what ever happened to Bruce Gilmour and the 90th... Wonder if we'll ever know.

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Dinh Diep Holocaust Museum

The valley was confined at the junction between two mountain ranges and the headwaters of the Little Mekong river-a river that swells to become Golden Lake some two hundred Kilometers to the North East.  The plant life here is twisted and stunted, and the immediate impression is of rocky terrain with sinkholes, until you get closer.

"The street level is about one hundred meters down."  his guide, a young man wearing a radiation panic-badge on his tan jacket, explained.  "rad levels are actually mostly safe in most of the site.  Once the SLS Belleau Wood realized they'd set off a thermonuclear detonation, the follow-on laser fire was mosty effective at disrupting and destroying the major fallout in the upper atmosphere...at least, that's the working theory.  it took care of the long-term stuff anyway, took gamma levels down to beta and alpha, but nothing is perfect."

up close, the rocks and some of the twisted 'vegetation' resolves into the bones of buildings-girders and re-bar, poking out of millions of tons of tailings that had been shipped in and dumped to contain the worst of it, burying the scorched remains of a city that had once boasted millions of residents, a city burned and destroyed by the Star League on behalf of the Amaris Regime.

By Clan standards, Nelson knew, he was standing on the grave of a war-crime.

Excavation equipment and decontamination gear surrounded a circular pit.  "what is that?" he asked.

"Dig site.  we've recovered books, a few artifacts, done some forensics on the actual strike."  his guide answered, "Some of the lower levels like the public rail terminal are intact, we found quite a collection of things down there, along with the bodies."

Nelson knew this wasn't from the traitor-lords in their civil war.  This was done during the golden age of the Star League.  "People trapped by the bombardment, or later?" he asked.

"Execution style in the upper strata of the dig." his guide says it blandly, "medical exams suggest pulse laser to the base of the skull, mostly civvies, a few kids, Rimjob work.  uppermost tier of the mass grave's mostly rad exposure and signs of overwork, but down in the subways? lots of suffocation cases, the bodies are pretty well preserved. We keep havin' to revise the death toll upward. started at five million people, finding more evidence of more every day. most date between 2729 an' 2755, when the Star League let the Rimjobs handle the cleanup. They used forced labor."

he followed the man down into the uncovered subway.  Work lights showed a mass-transit arrangement that would be familiar to any Homeworld city-dweller, neatly built, of quality materials, the platforms swept clean by the researchers to reveal standard structural elements, posters in frames and blank monitors were arranged everywhere, and a few monorail cars were even parked where they had ceased motion.

an SLDF recruitment poster, visibly faded, in a ferroglass display frame stood inset to the wall, the image was idealized.  It was like a punch to the gut, seeing that and knowing what happened here.

"This incident was...lightly discussed in our histories." Nelson offered, "What do your histories say happened?"

"The Rimjobs lost control during the uprising, and called in the Star League to help put it down, the SLDF sent SLS Belleau Wood, a Potemkin class cruiser with a Division embarked from exercises on Arluna with the Lyrans.  Our folks opposed the landing, demanded a Star League court hear our grievances, and beat them so bad, they called down an orbital strike, only the coordinates they got from their scouts were wrong, instead of hitting a command bunker they hit the municipal power plant, the overpressure from the strike sent the core supercritical, the plant went up like a dirty bomb.  That's the nearest thing we can establish to an objective description, wasted the whole city, hell, got the whole valley in the initial shock and firestorm."

"And then??"

"Then they buried the incident for a decade or so, until a kid named Kerensky showed up with a fact-finding mission.  He wanted to charge Admiral Chivington with numerous violations including using orbom on a civilian population, but by then, the old bastard was retired and Steve Amaris was the young first-lord's very bestest pal, so it was basically forgotten about."  his guide shrugged, "Politics. nobody was even charged with negligence.  The story we got is that the First Lord let funds for the cleanup, but you wouldn't see much of that here.  we know that House Amaris and the Rim Worlds Republic pulled in political prisoners from off-world, along with civilians they didn't like from on-world, and used them as disposable labor burying the site, and moved their admin headquarters to Nha Tranh and their military headquarters to Hue."

despite himself, he asked, "How many do you estimate? rough guess?"

"We've found enough using echo-sounding and excavation to suggest around thirty or forty million, and archaeological remnants suggest most of 'm were from offworld after about 2735 or 36.  They ran a ****** concentration camp here until the late fifties or early sixties.  It wasn't, apparently, interesting enough for the SLDF to become involved, unless they were complicit.  we don't have much info on that, but there's no supporting evidence here that anyone on Terra knew what was going on out here, at least, not at the time."

Elbar makes so much more sense now. 

"Do you maybe want to take a look at our documentation efforts?"  his guide asked, "Maybe you can put some clues together we missed?"

Nelson spent the afternoon looking at survey data, holoimagery, artifacts, and bones.  A scientist-caste, which any of this crew would easily fit, would have a field day with so much raw historical data.  he just felt emptier, and increasingly more horrified by the obviousness of the information.  people had been worked to death, and then killed, here for decades, after a mistake made by the Star League that went un-punished.

Nha Tranh...

Upon his return to the hotel, a book was waiting for him at the desk.  leather-bound and ancient, written with a spidery, precise hand.  Tranh Truk Ngo's war diary from the campaign against the Usuper, it was a copy done using image-transfer but still, contemporary to the Star League's fall.
"You'll want to sleep well tonight, the Archive where the Declaration is housed is ready for your visit in the morning."  a Coast Guard officer in dress uniform explained.

"Thank you."

Nelson didn't rest, he spent much of the night reading his gift, filling in holes in his own information on the various campaigns of the first war to Liberate Terra.  Colonel Ngo's writing was sparse, terse, a soldier's writing, with a touch of poet, but not so much as to make any of it seem glorious.  The primary point he gathered was that Kowloon didn't join the war against the Usurper out of any love for the Star League, they joined out of a sense of hatred and outrage that was bones-deep.  They joined to punish the Rim Worlds not for overthrowing the Camerons, but for crimes committed against their people.

Crimes clearly evident after today.

Coast Guard Naval Air Station Spider Moon, Boojum III, 2 AU from Kowloon itself.

The trip from Nha Tranh to Spider Moon took two full days in a relatively comfortable modified Buccaneer class dropship.  Nelson was not alone now, he had four of his warriors with him, and he was no longer playing civilian, but dressed in his own Clan's dress uniform, a dignitary being shuttled by a neutral nation to a site they rarely showed to outsiders.

the 'Naval Air Station' was visible on approach.  As the dropship landed, he noted the general layout would be (again) achingly familiar to anyone who visited a Snow Raven outpost, or the Ghost Bear asteroid mining facilities.

"what was this before you took it over?" he asks.

"We're not exactly sure, there were bio-research areas and quarantine rooms, but there were also missile silos." Commodore Alicia Li explained, "Most of whatever they were working on was removed before they shut it down, but some of the sections were clearly burned using thermite-plasma flushes, so it was probably dangerous.  the site itself dates from the teens to late twenties."

"YOu put an archive here?"

"No, we put the base here, the Archive is inside the moon." she explains, "You can't fit what we stored down there in that little base."

inside, the color-coding was familiar to anyone who grew up with Brian Caches or SLDF's architecture.  even the path lines, automatic doors, seals, air-locks and patterns were the same.

The paint was fresher, and it was carefully maintained.

"We do Coast Guard officer training in the outer levels for Dirtyfeet, and we have some of the admin functions located here, but it's not a node of control you can just knock out." Li explained, "overcentralized control of defenses is how my ancestors lost Kowloon to the Rimjobs the first time, we decentralized everything after that."

"So a decapitation strike would be worthless." He said approvingly, "very intelligent."

"We try not to be stupid, doesn't always work out, but we do make the attempt." she said with a smile, "What we do have, is a pressure-walk elevator to the place you want to be visiting, and it's secure."

The lower catacombs were mined out of the bedrock of the moon, and they were extensive.  as he followed the Commodore deeper in, he noted names were carved into the walls, with dates.

"What are...what is this?"

"everyone who's died in defense of Kowloon, or under the colors of Kowloon." she told him.  "all the way back to the First war, with the Rimjobs, at least, everyone we could confirm.  Newer entries are further down, we're still adding names, dates, places."

at a point the passage branches, and she leads him down the branch, to a door.

The crest of the 171st, a red brush-stroke resembling a dragon on a gold field, beside it the crest of the 90th Heavy Assault Division, and finally the crest of the Kowloon Coast Guard, an Orca, rampant on a field of blue that fades to a starfleld at the top.

"it's in here." she tells him, "You might want to seal up, we keep it pressurized with neutral gasses to prevent degradation of the records."

He mountd his helmet and sealed it, activating the rebreathers and scrubbers.  "Do you also have records of the 90th?" he asks.

"a few, as many as their gunslinger let us put away, anyhow."  she tells him, "some info on where they went, after the fall-would've been better if they'd come here, but...who knows? when they misjumped, they vanished from the worlds, but that was days after your ancestors left Earth for the last time."

They walked through the airlock, into a vast room, filled with hermetically sealed document casings, digital media on racks, holotapes, crystal readers...a librarian's nightmare or fondest dream.

"Somewhere in here, we've got the original copy of the Kowloon Republic's constitution, the colonial charter, and copies of every treaty we were forced to adopt." her voice was tinny through the output speaker of her own skinsuit.  "You're looking for the Elbar Declaration, we've got two copies, Gilmour gave us his before Colonel Ngo left Earth for home, and we've got the Colonel's original.  I think this is a bad idea, but Liz told me specifically to let you choose which one to see first.  there's also something else she wants you to look at while you're here."

"what is it?" he asks.

"The last conversation between Tranh Truk Ngo and General Aleksandr Kerensky, recorded as it happened, no edits.  Liz must have a plan for letting one of you guys see that, I don't think it's a good idea, but then, I was against this whole thing."

"Why would you oppose it?" he asked.

"because it will bring nothing but trouble."
"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #76 on: 19 November 2019, 10:52:34 »
[out of tale]

for those who 'get' the reference, there is a branch-universe where a misjump put the 90th Heavy Assault division two centuries and change ahead of themselves at Tamar, during the initial Clan invasion (ala "legends" bt with an entire SLDF divsion).  This, then, is the timeline that branched because they didn't do what they did when they didn't misjump-kind of the strand kept going.  Small changes and big changes happened as a result, such as the change that resulted in Victoria instead of Victor, and Karl instead of Katherine.  Someone, somewhere in the woodpile, changed...

the mysterious disappearance of the 90th Heavy Assault, "Kerensky's Sledgehammers" influenced this timeline in lots of subtle and overt ways.  the Gilmour name continued, but with a mysteriously vanished Bruce, there's a "sweety" but it's not his original ride with the Royal combat harness, just a very well maintained Marauder with the original armor.

and in this universe, there are two surviving original copies of Kerensky's general order after Running Deer Mountain on Elbar.

[back to our tale]

En-Route back from Spider Moon...

Nelson Elam held his prize-well, he held the protective, bullet-proof, armoured housing containing it.  but it gave him no real joy.

"Khan?" his escort, a comrade who'd come with him on this quest, Neill, inquired.

"The crusaders." he says.

"What  about them?"

"They were right all along." he looks at his long-time comrade in arms, "they were absolutely right, and absolutely wrong about why they were right.  I feel like I have wasted my career...and worse."

"Worse than wasting your career?"

"our ancestors deserted these people." he says, "everything the Star League was supposed to stand for.  She was right, this knowledge, it is nothing but trouble...for us."

"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."

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« Reply #77 on: 19 November 2019, 11:19:10 »
now im curious to know what was recorded.
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #78 on: 19 November 2019, 11:41:21 »
I seem to remember that Cannonshop put some or all of that recording in one of his stories.  Now, I have to go thru all of my archives to see if I'm right. 

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« Reply #79 on: 19 November 2019, 13:41:14 »
Nha Tranh Medical Center, Friday...

"you knew." SaKhan Nelson Elam of Clan Goliath Scorpion stood in the hospital room.  "you've seen it."

"Now, so have you.  That thing loaded?" Liz asked, "if you're not here to do me a favor, have a seat and we can discuss it. I have the same problem he had, and in a way, you've got the same choices Kerensky had, I'm kinda interested in what you'll do."

he sat down in the indicated chair, "I...I don't know." he confessed.  "I know you've set this as a trap, I know you're planning to use it against us-but I confess I don't understand what, how, or why."

"Why's easy." Liz sighed, "the word 'collaborator', it's about the nastiest insult we have.  I was third in line, not supposed to inherit a goddam thing, and then, Dad went...followed by Blackjack Academy, followed by Patrick, and mom went bonkers."  she tugged at her covers, displaying a gunshot wound, "She shot me in the bathroom, the day she killed herself, the day she found out about my other brother.  He turned Collaborator.  Joined your Jade Falcon colleagues, this is info that is probably going to get out soon, once the offensive to drive them out kicks off."

"And?"

"Had to find a way to hurt them first." she said, "Twist the knife.  I'm not a nice woman, Khan Elam, I do my best for my people, but in the end, I'm petty, cruel, and vain and will burn in hell when I die for the things I have ordered, manipulated, dictated, and carried out with my own hands...but I'm damned if I leave one scrap left of dignity for my enemies when I go.  Truth, Khan Elam, is a weapon, there's a reason your ancestors censored the living shit out their histories, why they censored more than even the Successor Lords did, and I'm willing to make use of that weapon, even if it's a dying bit of spite. When I read about your clan, I knew sooner or later, one of you would show up.  I didn't show Snord that clip, he's gone free agent, it wouldn't have the same impact...but showing you? yeah, I had our agents lay a breadcrumb for you and here you are."

"You can't be certain of what I will do with this." he says.

"I know I gave you a gravedigger's choice, you can perpetuate the lies, or you can uncover the truth." she tells him, "The lies are holding your people back, in their little hot-house utopia, scrabbling for resources in the middle of a ****** bonanza, the raw materials we surveyed in the Clan Homeworlds are rich enough to make anyone envious, but your system automatically squanders them, so you will never develop a fraction of the prosperity we had while the House Lords were pounding each other and everyone around them into rubble.  The truth, on the other hand, now that's a thing, isn't it? You reveal it, and your colleagues on the Grand Council will be at one another's throats for the next six hundred years, or until some elected First Lord leads a modernized, organized, structured and competent SLDF right down your throats.  Which will probably go somewhat better than it did in the Reunification War for the Taurians, since they still remember what that felt like, and have the good sense not to want to provoke that feeling in anyone else."

"you wished for a copy of the Remembrance, for your archives, why?" he asked.

"completion.  It's actually going to be copied to the university too, because I am heartily sick to death of lies...literally sick to death, but figuratively sick of lies.  if you know yourself, and your enemy, you can not be defeated in a thousand battles, the art of war, by a chinese general named Sun Tzu-mad Max named his boy after that historical strategist, and surprisingly, I think it's appropriate, maybe visionary, he's probably the best strategist in human space, though he's not much better as an individual fighter than I am.  Sun Tzu also said 'seek victory, then when victory is achieved, pursue battle'.  this is part of that strategy, and keep it, hide it? whatever, doesn't matter, enough people know you have it.  enough on YOUR side of the border. They'll wonder what it is, and if you destroy it? they'll want to know what you fear so much."

he saw it then, her dirty trick, laid out in the open for him to understand.  "You gave it to me to provoke civil war."

"Yes.  Your way enshrines war, Khan, hell, your people use seventy ton war machines to settle who cut in the lunch-line.  So you'll have to fight no matter what, you just have to choose what you're going to fight for."  she folded her hands, "Will it be the uncomfortable truth, as returned sons to the Star League, or will it be to continue a lie? your choice, you have to make it.  you have to decide what side you're going to be on, you can't sit it out anymore and still be true to your ideals."

"but...the Lords..."

"The Star League is a Nation, not a family, dynasty, or man." Liz told him, "Remember what my ancestor said?  The General deserted the nation over a question of who would be the most eligible target of assassins in human space.  He betrayed all for which they had fought, and suffered.  It wasn't a thing for us, we wanted to be independent, he fouled that promise up, but it could have been excusable, if he'd stayed-you're holding the declaration that could have stopped Kentares, could have prevented three centuries of madness, hell weapons dropped on worlds because the one force that could have checked it, could have stopped it, could have made things stable, abandoned us all for the wounded vanity of an old man."

she coughed, accidentally revealing the Dialysis tubes running into her side.  "I'm far enough along, shooting me would be a blessing." she leveled her eyes at him, "You still have a life, but we serve our people to the end, don't we?  don't you?"

Nelson rubbed his temples.  "I have not chosen yet." he finally said.

"I get that.  I do." she answered.  "you need to decide which course your people are best served by.  I sacrificed the last vestiges of my people's oldest dream to get in position to give you this dilemma.  we will never be independent now, we will always be 'part of the Federated Commonwealth' or 'a Lyran world'...but it's worth it if I can change one course away from disaster for everyone, maybe make an eternal damnation worth the price.  However things go from here, millions will die, but if my move works, it won't be Billions, or Trillions..." her bedside alarm pinged.  "you might want to leave for this part.  countdown's twenty seconds, unless you're going to kill me."

he paused, hesitated.

half a minute later, he wished he had not.  On the video, he had seen the final seizures of Tran Truk Ngo, but the recording did no justice to seeing..and smelling, and hearing it first-hand.  witnessing such agony in another living being, knowing that nothing can be done to stop it.

he remained for the hour, until she collapsed limp in restraints, coated in sweat, and disfigured with dislocated joints and likely broken bones.

"heh...eh...merciless..." she smiled, "ooh you'll..huh...make the..right...choice...ow...."

Medical personnel entered, and set about the task of assessing her injuries and adjusting the devices.  Nelson left while the corpsmen worked.

Later that evening, he boarded ship for the Clan Homeworlds.  he did not leave his prizes behind.
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #80 on: 19 November 2019, 14:19:42 »

Hot dang.

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #81 on: 19 November 2019, 14:23:01 »
February 2, 3067...

Nelson Elam would miss Elizabeth Ngo's funeral by a factor of weeks, but had he been asked, he would have known it was an agonizing death, and said as much.  The final, Terminal phase of Cholmann's syndrome has only one treatment that ends the suffering of a  mind trapped in a body gripped by seizures, where the pain center is overstimulated and the body's own mechanisms prevent shock from protecting the psyche.

Her closest aide, Kelli Whyte, administered the kill shot.  It was the only choice left, the only option.  In so doing, she assumed the directorial role for Ngo Industries.

and Kowloon, for the first time in centuries, had to choose a new head-of-state.  The elections were loud, raucous affairs, angry rhetoric and empty promises abounded, but, in the end, it was the sincerity of a Rancher, a veteran of three wars and the undeclared 'range war' fought against a corrupted regent, who raised his left hand, because he had no right, and accepted the office of President in January.

In February, the Ducal Heirs were born, and there was much rejoicing among Lawyers as the custody case began in earnest.

Patrick, the son, was the first out of the gate.  a large baby, heavy, healthy, born with a shock of dark red hair, clear green eyes, and just a hint of his gene-mother's asian ancestry, was first, and under Salic Law, set to inherit Kowloon barring an act by the Archon Princess.

Amanda, the second born, was underweight, with a caul.  Worries that the second baby would die early were replaced in some circles by concerns that she would live to disrupt the natural order of succession, that she would pose a threat to stability.

Genetics were tested.  Tested by the Coast Guard to verify genetic parentage, tested by Wolf's Dragoons to examine potential, tested by guest doctors from the Exile Wolves, and tested by visiting scientist-doctors from Clan Goliath Scorpion, which had recently declared for the Star League and turned on their neighbours who did not.

The treatments devised by Wolf and Dragoon medics had stopped these two from inheriting the markers for Cholmann's syndrome.  they were both 'clean' of the thing that had bedeviled their family lineage for centuries.  the results from testing for natural potential showed that in Patrick, at least, the 'best genes' had indeed shone through.  The boy would be taller than his father, strong, with the potential for high intelligence and the markers most often associated with being a gifted 'mechwarrior.

However, he would not match the abilities of a Trueborn, at least, not without a considerable amount of effort, he would certainly never exceed what the Breeding Program produced.  Wolf dropped his custody claims as soon as the results were analyzed, though he did offer a small stipend as 'child support' in exchange for some say in how the boy would be raised.

Amanda seemed to get some of the weaker traits.  She would never be tall-never be broad, nor naturally athletic beyond a possible physical flexibility, but intellect markers were good-the girl would be intelligent, but little besides intelligence and perhaps an elfin eurasian mix of features.

Neither would ever know their mother, except from recordings, stories, and rumours.

Behind closed doors, the decisions were batted around.  Which child would, in fact inherit which of the legacies.  argument and discussion persisted, as Liz left no statement for which of her children would inherit what from her vast holdings.



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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #82 on: 19 November 2019, 14:43:44 »
3077, the Great War...

"...what do you want to be when you grow up?"  Her Highness, Victoria Steiner-Davion asked them.

"I want to be a 'mechwarrior, like my Father." Patrick said immediately, "Maybe grow to lead the 1st Royal Guard."

she looked to his sister, Amanda, quietly trying to hide the fact she was reading a book instead of paying attention to the visiting First Lady of the Star League.  "Amanda?"

"Don't know yet." the girl said quietly, "There are so many interesting things i could do, or be...I don't want to choose, especially since I'm only ten."

"You don't want to be like your mother? A Duchess, or Princess?" Victoria prompted.

Amanda bit her lip.  "mom's videos she says she never got to choose." she said, "she had to be what she had to be to do what needed to be done, no choices, she had a time limit.  I don't want to be like that when I grow up.  I don't want to be defined by what I gotta do, I want to do what I like to do...your highness."

"That's a good answer...no, that's a GREAT answer." Victoria said encouragingly.  "What are you reading?"

"um...The Stars of Selous, it's a novel." Amanda answered, "it's great.  I really like the computer, why do we live in the future, but we don't have artificial intelligences like Uncle Smith?"

Victoria leaned forward, "I loved those books when I was a girl, you know.  There were only fourteen of them when I was your age."

"The writer got his jump-math wrong." Amanda noted, "I've seen Auntie Alicia's training manuals, the writer got it almost right, but not quite-is that because it's for kids?"

Victoria laughed, "Those books are supposed to be for adults! No, it's because when they were being written, very few people knew how to calculate jumpship travel, especially people who were not spacers."

"I think I might want to be a Jumpship captain then...if we're making choices right now.  It looks really interesting!" Amanda said, closing the book, "Do you think i could?"

"I think you can be anything you want." Victoria told her, "but you might consider this-you will always be who you are, a noble in line to inherit your family's estates, and duty may come crashing in on you whatever you wish could be otherwise.  but for now...why shouldn't you want to be a Jumpship captain?"

"Not just a Captain, I want to explore." Amanda said it fervently, "I want to see what nobody's seen! go where nobody has gone!!"

"she wants to find the planet of the bird-people from that holovid series." Patrick added with a teasing note of disgust, "Rawwk! rawwk!!" he matched it with a tickle-attack on his smaller sibling, the girl shrieked in surprise and then counter-attacked, the children rolling in a chaos of delighted rowdiness that threatened to ruin their good clothes.

and Victoria wished she could join them.
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #83 on: 19 November 2019, 17:42:21 »
OOT

"the mysterious disappearance of the 90th Heavy Assault, "Kerensky's Sledgehammers" influenced this timeline in lots of subtle and overt ways.  the Gilmour name continued, but with a mysteriously vanished Bruce, there's a "sweety" but it's not his original ride with the Royal combat harness, just a very well maintained Marauder with the original armor."

Gilmour's Marauder was actually nicknamed 'Hussy'.  It would not surprise me that the 90th might have sent some materials home with the 171st to be quietly stockpiled.

It's going to be very interesting what the GS do in the future...

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #84 on: 19 November 2019, 17:53:37 »
Nha Tranh Medical Center, Friday...

Lots of contractions going on there. Not sure if the GS Khan's lapse in speech is intended or not...

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #85 on: 19 November 2019, 20:10:37 »
That was an EXTREMELY good answer from a 10-year old...  ^-^

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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #86 on: 19 November 2019, 20:23:00 »
Nha Tranh Medical Center, Friday...

Lots of contractions going on there. Not sure if the GS Khan's lapse in speech is intended or not...

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a lot of my stuff is banged out 'in the raw' with no editing before hand, and less polish, sorry about that.  Then again, he was just exposed to something on the order of keter level cognitohazard...
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #87 on: 19 November 2019, 21:54:11 »
I like this timeline.  Growing the 90th HA from a regiment to a division- fun!
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #88 on: 20 November 2019, 00:05:05 »
I like this timeline.  Growing the 90th HA from a regiment to a division- fun!

given the scale of their accomplishments, I kind of had to.  if nothing else, the Elbar add-ons and such would 'grow' the Regiment to division scale by the time they hit Terra, though the core of that division would be the 90th Heavy Assault Regiment.  Plus, as I'm working off fan material that is most of ten years or more old, I do make mistakes-even with the stuff I personally wrote, never mind the stuff I'm borrowing from others.

Note about the Clan-side of things;

The Scorpions DID release the material that Liz gave them, in the grand council, in front of the Clan media.  This had some decidedly unhappy effects for stability in the Clan sphere, as it overturned the traditional lines of Crusader and Warden debates, since the "Hidden Hope" doctrine was largely validated, at least, for those interested in original source material, but the character of the exodus itself was, for the first time since the Prinz Eugen incident, called into direct and open question.

needless to say, organizational applecarts were firmly overturned and the bloodnamed were forced to realize they'd been fed lies for generations. People were, obviously, very unhappy and several long standing alliances collapsed over night, while long-standing feuds were shoved into the open to face reconsideration.

This all made Clan Ghost Bear's move to the Inner Sphere, all the more interesting, an interest made abundantly more open by their open courting of the Free Rassalhague Republic and Star League.  In the outcome of the "Ngo documents", Clan Ghost Bear openly sided with the Star League as allies, seeking legitimacy by linking to the FRR, repudiating their ties to the Clans.

They weren't the only ones, though.  Clan Steel Viper's 'questionable' backstory was indirectly confirmed, but rendered somewhat less comforting in light of the documents.  Instead of a hope to return as a superior way, they faced the possibility that the hoped-for-return was an act of contrition for a betrayal.  This did not do good things for their collective morale, and the Clan entered into talks with the Star League legation on Huntress.

The Jade Falcons felt this was confirmation of one, core thing: that their feud with Wolf was justified.  They attacked.  By the time Karl's offensive into the occupied Lyran zones was launched, both clans were so deep at one another's throats that the assault was met with little initial resistance.  SLDF forces in Operation: Jihad met two clans that were, for all intents and purposes, so badly mauled by one another that in many areas of the front, the League counter-invasion was more of a peacekeeping effort.

Disciplinary collapse spread violently among the Clans in the Homeworlds.  Burrock sympathizers and ex-Burrocks holding to the traditions of that clan, chose to finish off the isolationists on York with orbital bombardments as the opening gambit.  The Blood Spirits replied with Thermonuclear weapons and the whole thing just went off the rails from there, only pausing when the ice Hellions let loose with a lightning campaign to 'punish the violators of the Elbar Accord!'  In this, they were joined by elements of Clan Coyote and surprisingly, Hell's Horses.  This move also triggered an internal conflict in Clan Star Adder itself, with some siding with the intervention, and some opposing it.

The various Kindraa of the Fire Mandrills took all this chaos as a great time to try and finish one another off.  There wasn't a whole lot left when the Cloud Cobras came in to try and prevent total annihilation.

The Cloud Cobras experienced a huge theological disagreement, a schism or reformation, depending on one's point of view.  Crusader-leaning Cloisters upped stakes and moved to the Inner Sphere, to "rejoin the Star League and repent". many of the Warden enclaves simply cut off contact with everyone, while a small cadre of moderates remained engaged with "The Secular world" and began discussions with missionaries from the Word of Blake.

ever opportunistic, the Diamond Sharks simply moved to the better market, formally incorporating distribution in the former territorial states of the Star League and selling propaganda along with technology to whomever was willing to buy, including entering into direct competition with Ngo Industries as an industrial toolmaker and logistics firm, but operating out of the Taurian concordat and Magistracy.  The diamond-sharks also sold to other Clans, sometimes supplying both sides in intra-Clan warfare.

Crusader-inclined elements of Clan Snow Raven, moved into the Outworlds Alliance in October of 3079.  The merger was, by all accounts, relatively peaceful. This schism was one that could not be predicted.  the Warden elements began moves to try to stabilize their pockets in the Pentagon and Kerensky cluster, showing the good sense to view this whole situation as an invite, embossed and embellished, for any and every opportunistic enemy to attack the Clans as a whole.

Said attack would begin in 3080, the SLDF under First Lord (Lady) Danai Centrella, finished mopping up the Jade Falcon occupation in March, by July, the collective might of the Star League, now with competently organized logistics and full expeditionary capability, was poised to pacify the Homeworlds and put a final nail in the Clan Threat.

This is, of course, the worst time for shit to happen.  the worst time for the Clans to stop fighting one another, the worst time for the 'scientist conspiracy' to come from the shadows to save their Warrior Brethren, and the worst time for the Word of Blake to suddenly decide they want the visible, as well as subtler, reins of power.

of course, shit happens,and it does so at the absolute worst possible time...
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Re: To Stand before the Archon...
« Reply #89 on: 20 November 2019, 03:06:12 »

Things are about to get a bit... Bumpy.

 

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