A pretty neat design really. Only one point of note: ELRMs have a different BV and cost in Tac Ops than they did back in the THB... You may want to consider updating your editor (or at least updating the weapon files).
I went ahead and built the whole thing again in SSW (more so I could look at it clearly) and came up with 1,335 BV and 8,682,500 CBills.
I forgot that I had already uploaded the newer info and accidently used the old stuff. The corrected stats are below
BattleMech Technical Readout
Custom* Weapons
Type/Model: Uziel UZL-20A
Tech: Inner Sphere / 3132
Config: Biped BattleMech
Rules: Level 3, Standard design
Mass: 50 tons
Chassis: Endo Steel
Power Plant: 250 Magna XL Fusion
Walking Speed: 54.0 km/h
Maximum Speed: 86.4 km/h
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor Type: Ferro-Fibrous
Armament:
2 ELRM-10s*
2 ER Medium Lasers
1 ER Large Laser
Manufacturer: (Unknown)
Location: (Unknown)
Communications System: (Unknown)
Targeting & Tracking System: (Unknown)
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==Overview:==
Maneuverability with good firepower and decent armor, the Uziel is a good
performer in any role.
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Type/Model: Uziel UZL-20A
Mass: 50 tons
Equipment: Crits Mass
Int. Struct.: 83 pts Endo Steel 14 2.50
(Endo Steel Loc: 1 HD, 3 LA, 2 RA, 2 LT, 2 RT, 2 LL, 2 RL)
Engine: 250 XL Fusion 12 6.50
Walking MP: 5
Running MP: 8
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks: 10 Double [20] 0 .00
Gyro: 4 3.00
Cockpit, Life Supt., Sensors: 5 3.00
Actuators: L: Sh+UA R: Sh+UA 12 .00
Armor Factor: 143 pts Ferro-Fibrous 14 8.00
(Armor Crit Loc: 1 LA, 2 RA, 6 LT, 5 RT)
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 16 20
Center Torso (Rear): 6
L/R Side Torso: 12 15/15
L/R Side Torso (Rear): 5/5
L/R Arm: 8 14/14
L/R Leg: 12 20/20
Weapons and Equipment Loc Heat Ammo Crits Mass
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1 ELRM-10* RA 6 36 8 12.00
(Ammo Locations: 2 LA, 2 RA)
1 ELRM-10* LA 6 4 8.00
1 ER Medium Laser RT 5 1 1.00
1 ER Medium Laser LT 5 1 1.00
1 ER Large Laser CT 12 2 5.00
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TOTALS: 34 77 50.00
Crits & Tons Left: 1 .00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 8,892,500 C-Bills
Battle Value 2: 1,335 (old BV = 971)
Cost per BV2: 6,661.05
Weapon Value: 780 / 780 (Ratio = .58 / .58)
Damage Factors: SRDmg = 11; MRDmg = 11; LRDmg = 10
BattleForce2: MP: 5, Armor/Structure: 4/2
Damage PB/M/L: 2/2/1, Overheat: 1
Class: MM; Point Value: 13
I think it would be better to keep the original speed and reduce the armament...
As an alternative, how about fluffing it as a Trebuchet variant? It's the right weight and speed.
Honestly, without severly reducing the loadout, there is no way to bump the speed back up. As for the Trebuchet.....Personally, I don't care for the design. Just my taste. Never cared for it. Would be a good varient though.