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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #60 on: 07 September 2011, 10:57:23 »
And so it begins. Good going so far. Regrading the story itself and supporting documents and maps, I prefer to read the story first, and study the non-story info later.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #61 on: 19 September 2011, 16:52:50 »
Following is the link to the 1st part of the 4th SSW in my alt-universe.  Operation SPIKE deals with the Invasion of the Capellan Confederation.

For the most part, this is complete.  The only thing really lacking are the battle maps, and thats because those take the longest time to do.  Go figure.  Anyways, am working on the FedSuns/Wolfs Dragoons - DC Front, could be a bit before thats up, but wnated to put this out there.  Have a few more snippets in the works as well.

Thanks,

Davout

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20TEST.pdf
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #62 on: 19 September 2011, 23:09:13 »
Enjoyed the write up.
Just wondering, on page 15 you had the AFFS high command pleased with the mercenary nits.
Were you talking about their state of hygiene or a spelling mistake. ;D
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #63 on: 19 September 2011, 23:16:20 »
Should be "units"

Further proof that no writer can be their own editor....

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #64 on: 20 September 2011, 03:39:40 »
Well look on the bright side, there were not that many mistakes for something of that length.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #65 on: 21 September 2011, 13:44:24 »
Awesome story!  Hope you have time to publish more soon (really soon I WANTS MOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!)
SGT Mark McKinnon, Recon Lance McKinnon's Company, 7th Crusis Lancers, Federated Suns



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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #66 on: 01 October 2011, 21:37:07 »
“Operation SPIKE wasn't just a military Operation, it was a political and moral operation as well.  Look at the attacks.  Hit a world that has a garrison, and do so with overwhelming numbers.  And with the exception of Bharat, all the worlds had some sort of significance to the Capellan Confederation, either culturally, militarily, economically, or some combination of those.  Liao, Tikonov, Styk, Tigress, hitting anyone of those worlds would have caused the Chancellor to have a fit.  Take all four of them?  And there was Operation PAVISE.  Either High Command has gotten inside the Capellan Command Council's collective mind or something else is going on.  As it stands, the war is five months old, the AFFS has destroyed or captured nearly 15 regiments worth of Capellan mech regiments, and spooked the rest of the Capellan High command into abandoning worlds they had defended for years.  The AFFS took more planets in the “Third” wave than they did the first two waves, and with barely a shot fired!  The Tikonov Commonality is essentially cut of from the rest of the Confederation, something I thought I''d never live to see.  3029 is looking to be an excellent New Year for the Federated Suns.”

                        Garret Wolsley
                        Pundit, Good Morning New Avalon
                        December 21st, 3028


“ARISE loyal sons of the DRAGON!  Warlord Samsonov has been murdered by agents of the COWARDLY Dragoons!  By their actions on AN TING and MISERY, and now this, the DRAGOONS have shown themselves to be nothing more than RONIN, undeserving of the fate that awaits them.  ARISE loyal warriors, AVENGE your WARLORDS DEATH in the name of the COORDINATOR!”

                        Anonymous Flier posted throughout
                        the Galedon District after the death
                        of Warlord Grieg Samsonov


“Initial reports from AFFS Operations are troubling on several levels.  With one exception, Capellan defenders were outnumbered at least two to one, and in some cases even three or more.  Whatever recent gains made by the CCAF as a fighting force seemed to have been erased, especially when you consider that Davion units such as the 2nd and 5th Crucis Lancers have performed beyond expected results. 
"Equally troubling had been the Capellan Armed Forces performance.  Several of their best units have been destroyed, others savaged, leaving open the intruiging possibility of how they might fare against a Free Worlds Offensive...
“However troubling the reports about the AFFS are, the performance of the LCAF is what concerns us most.  Lyran gains against the Kuritan's are both surprising and troubling for a multitude of reasons, they least of which is what they might do against us.  With the current pause in Operations, it remains to be seen if the LCAF can continue is successes, but for the present moment it appears that the issues that have plagued the LCAF have either been resolved or minimized.

                        Excerpts from a precis prepared by
                        SAFE, February, 3029.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #67 on: 02 October 2011, 00:04:48 »
I can't decide if this or Riding the Dragon are the best story to come out of the new forum. Keep up the good work.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #68 on: 02 October 2011, 19:24:27 »
Excellent revision of the 4th Sw.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #69 on: 24 October 2011, 22:25:52 »
Excerpt:

The Draconis Front

   The enmity between the Federated Suns and Draconis Combine goes back centuries, some of the bloodiest fighting of the Succession Wars has occurred on the ever changing border of these two interstellar states.  In 3012 it became personal on Halstead Station, when First Prince Hanse Davion and Coordinator Takashi Kurita fought in a duel reminiscent of old Terran Middle Age Knights Errant.  Both were injured in the fight, and while both gained a measure of respect for each other, Hanse Davion became convinced that if progress was to be made in uniting the Inner Sphere, the Draconis Combine had to be reduced in strength.   
   The Federated Commonwealth Alliance gave both Prince Davion and Archon Katrina Steiner the answer they were looking for.  Having lost many worlds to House Kurita since the Succession Wars began, the prospect of a two front war against the Combine had great appeal to the Archon and her General Staff.  Their only concern was that the resources the AFFS had set aside for Operation SPIKE may have been put to better use against the Combine, but the First Prince was adamant that SPIKE be a part of any upcoming campaign.  Planning began in earnest on both sides.
   The last campaigns of the Third Succession War gave Davion planners some insight into their opponents thinking.  On Tancredi, Kuritan commanders fought amongst themselves as much as they did their enemies.  This high level infighting amongst Kuritan commanders became even more pronounced on Galtor III, when the Warlords of the Dieron and Benjamin Districts fought amongst each other for the right to take and hold the planet.  When the tide turned against the DCMS forces,  Warlord Dieron, Vassily Cherenkoff, politically outmaneuvered his fellow Warlord behind the scenes and militarily refused to support him in such a way that much of the blame for the failed campaign did not dishonor Warlord Dieron.  This sort of infighting was not only tolerated, but encouraged by the Coordinator, who felt that if his Warlords were spending much of their time fighting each other, the less time they would spend trying to overthrow him.
   YELLOW BIRD was planned as a three wave invasion.  It's primary goal was not just to gain territory, but to destroy the capability of the DCMS to fight.  To that end the AFFS planners came up with a plan that was audacious as it was risky.  Much of that plan was thrown out when a much more personal and deadly war broke out on the Federated Suns Combine border, between the Coordinator and Wolf's Dragoons.

   YELLOW BIRD

   Unlike its Lyran counterpart, YELLOW BIRD was not conceived nor planned as a massive wave attack.  The First Phase was intended as a limited thrust against the Dieron District, to give the appearance that the main thrust of operation was going to be against the Capellan Confederation.  AFFS Planners intended the worlds to be taken as jumping points for the larger, second wave, and hoped that by focusing on the Dieron District early on, the Combine would focus its efforts there as well, which would mean greater success for the planned second and third waves in the Benjamin/Galedon Districts.  In order to ensure the success of the First Phase, the AFFS High Command planed on using overwhelming military power on the planets being targeted.  The second and third phases of YELLOW BIRD were not set in stone, but rather a set of contingency plans based on the results of the first wave.  To many in the AFFS, and their LCAF counterparts, such a plan was madness.  Many felt that the First Prince could not make up his mind on who to attack more, and settled for attacking both enemies  with a divided force. 
   While at face value this looked to be true, the coming months would show what sort of sleight of hand and gamesmanship the leader of the Federated Suns was playing.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #70 on: 24 October 2011, 22:28:48 »
Operation YELLOW BIRD, 1st Wave:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KiiriNoTori%20YELLOW%20BIRD%20Wave%201.pdf

Thanks for reading,

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #71 on: 24 October 2011, 22:32:13 »
There's just enough of the little things wrong with that map the inner geographer in me is grinding his teeth, but I will admit they are fun to make.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #72 on: 25 October 2011, 17:02:56 »
You sir are a confounded tease. Excellent mini update.

I discovered this excellent story the other day andenjoyed it so much I read it all in one sitting to the detriment of my sleep.

Keep up the good work.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #73 on: 26 November 2011, 10:35:48 »
A Couple of YELLOW BIRD Wave One excerpts:

Tannil

   Very few Marshall’s in the AFFS hate the Draconis combine more than Marshal Adderly Verner, commander of the 17th Avalon Hussars.  A native of Mallory’s World, her parents were killed on one of the numerous Kuritan raids on planet while she was still a little girl.  Sent to live with relatives on David, they were killed a few years later in a Kuritan backed terrorist bombing during a soccer event she was playing in.  An Emancipated Minor at 16, she graduated secondary school and was at college on David, where she met Josh Holcomb and fell in love.  Holcomb was also a member of the David Militia, and when the 3rd Proserpina Hussars raided the planet he was killed when his Manticore tank was destroyed. Enough was enough for Adderly, and the day after she buried her boyfriends remains she walked into the AFFS recruitment office and began a curious career that always saw her on the right edge of completely losing control when fighting the Kuritan’s.  While not a gifted mechwarrior, she is a solid pilot and capable gunner, and possesses a quick military mind, until she saw a Kuritan mech on the battlefield and it was “Katie bar the door”.  Her Victor has been rebuilt so many times there are few, if any, original parts on it.  As her climb through the ranks reached higher, her attitude did not soften, but became more focused, her rage against the DCMS a little bit more controlled. Three years ago, after a successful stint as executive officer of the 3rd Crucis Lancers she was promoted to command the 17th Avalon Hussars.
   It was a match made in heaven.  The 17th is famed for its ability to deploy and attack while under fire, and its posting on the Draconis Border has given it plenty of opportunities to display that skill.  The sight of Marshall Verner’s Victor, with it’s light grey paint scheme and dragon skull insignia, has become renowned in the March.
   Tannil was once a Federated Suns Border world, taken during the First Succession War in Coordinator Jinjiro Kurita’s first offensive.  It had always been a goal of the Davion’s to retake the planets lost in the first waves, and although several raids and skirmishes had occurred over the centuries, it wasn’t until YELLOW BIRD that a concerted effort was made on the part of the AFFS.  While politically Tannil was a goal, from a military point of view the vast warehouse complex’s on the planet were also a priority. 
   Defending the planet was the 2nd Arkab Legion, a veteran mech unit  new to the planet but were fairly well equipped and supplied for a long campaign.  The 41st Avalon Hussars landed on Tannils Southern continent, where they faced the Legions 3rd Battalion and several conventional regiments.  The Legion attempted a fighting withdrawal, trying to pull back and meet up with the rest of it’s unit, but Marshall Graham used his aerospace assets effectively, herding the Battalion away from it’s planned crossing point.  3rd Battalion attempted to move through the Koenga Valleys, but were cut off when the LAM company of the 41st flew ahead and established a blocking position.  Unable to fight their way out, the remaining 2 companies of the 3rd Battalion surrendered after a weeks worth of fighting.
   The 17th had a harder time bringing the other two Battalions to battle.  The coastals regions of the planets northern continent were gripped by a series of monsoons, and rather than risk her unit being spread out piecemeal and vulnerable Marshall Verner dropped en mass in the center of the continent and march to the coastal region.  The remaining two battalions were pinned against Tannil’s turbulent seas, but they made a fight of it, striking and retreating in a series of rearguard actions.  On one occasion, a company of mechs broke through the 17th lines, and in conjunction with a Kuritan Infantry Regiment that had been lying in wait, hit the 17ths Headquarters unit during a downpour.  The fighting was bloody and protracted, the Kuritan units were eventually killed or driven off, but not before they had killed the 17ths executive officer.  Marshall Verners Victor had been struck in the head by an autocannon round, and she was knocked unconscious.  The Marshall recovered a few days later, and the march towards the coast began again, but even her closest friends in the nit agreed something was just not right.
   The remaining units of the Arkab Legion had retreated to Kennerly, Tannil’s capital city, but could not lift off due to the monsoons.  While not a heavily fortified city, Kennerly could withstand the 17th until the monsoons stopped and lift off.  Both units began preparations for a siege, but on September 10th, Marshall Verner left the lines of the 17th and marched to the city gates, and challenged any Kuritan mechwarrior to a duel for control of the planet.  The Legions commanding officer, General Cho Sok, marched his Grasshopper out to to meet the Marshall in battle, but was unnerved by a psychological trick Verner used on him.  The dual did not last long, an autocannon shot from Verner early on badly damaged the Grasshoppers leg, then General Sok lost control of his mech on the wet muddy ground and fell, leaving his mech open to a devastating volley of fire from Verner.  Badly wounded, Sok surrendered his unit and the city, but died before he could commit seppuku.
   The remaining legion warriors surrendered, and when the monsoons cleared ten days later Marshall Verner surprised everyone by allowing the remaining Kuritan Mechwarriors to leave with their mechs, almost five companies worth.

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The Yellow Bird of Davion

   It was no coincidence that the AFFS named it’s offensive against the Combine after the tiny creature that the Dragon fears the most, it was indeed a psychological operation, but Marshall Adderly Verner of the 17th Avalon took this image one step further on Tannil.  Marshall Verner’s Victor is a well known mech on the Draconis March, for it sports an image of a dragon skull on it, and the Marshall challenged any Kuritan mechwarrior to a duel for control of the city and planet. When responding to the challenge, Brigadier General Cho Sok marched out and recited his heritage, as was proper custom.  Marshall Adderly responded by dropping her mechs hand, which had been covering her torso, and reciting her lineage.
   Flying above the stylized Dragon skull was a Yellow Bird, but somehow it had been drawn in such a way as to appear defiant, righteous, and or malevolent according to Kuritans who saw it.  When finished reciting her lineage, Marshall Adderly recited hers, uttered her now famous haiku:

I, the Yellow Bird
Come to give the Dragon his
Honorable Death
 
   The duel made the vids, as did the haiku, and the image began proliferating throughout the ranks, unauthorized but not discouraged by the AFFS High Command.  By YELLOW BIRDS third wave, every Davion unit had a stylized image of a Yellow Bird of its own somewhere on it. 
Marshall Verner has never reveled what led her to doing such a thing, and her doctors at SINA have refused any interview requests on her behalf.   
   
   Terrance Woodley, excerpted from a “Concise History of the Fourth Succession War, Volume 1”

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #74 on: 26 November 2011, 12:27:13 »
Very good writing. However, your history of Tannil does not agree with the maps in HB:HD.

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We will be used to subdue the Capellan Confederation. We will be used to bring the Free Worlds League to heel. We will be used to
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-- Elias Crichell

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #75 on: 26 November 2011, 14:50:57 »
Very good writing. However, your history of Tannil does not agree with the maps in HB:HD.

Hrm, I'll doublecheck, but I am using the original house books as primary sources, need to dig up my copy of the updated davion one.

Thanks,

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #76 on: 26 November 2011, 19:05:59 »
That annoying Yellow Bird. It seems to get into the most unusual places.
Good little write up.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #77 on: 06 December 2011, 14:17:49 »
Watch Your Border!

   I hated parties.  Capital H Hate.  About the only thing I hated more than a party were the damned Snakes.  How on Earth I ever managed to get on the invitation list to the Princes wedding I am not sure, but when your Prince invites you along, you go.  Luckily I didn't have to alter the dress uniform to much, I had managed to keep the weight off, and I sounded like a glockenspiel when I came to attention, but then most every other military man there.  There were quite a few there I'm surprised didn't have a permanent lean or spinal damage, all the hardware they were sporting.  Lyrans.  To much folderol there...
Anyways, I'm doing my best to hob nob.  You get in a group, people gather with them that's like them, especially if your uncomfortable in social situations like I am.  So I'm in a corner talking shop with a Marik and a Lyran, when all the sudden the chatter dies down, and everyone is looking in a certain direction.
   I'm lucky I am tall or I never would have seen it all happen. 
   “You are welcome here, Colonel Wolf,” the head guy in the robe says.  And there, standing still, surveying the crowd is Colonel Jaime Wolf, wearing a dirty everyday uniform.  I'd've thought he'd be taller myself, but he spied who he was looking for, and walked right up to him.  Now, I know our Prince fairly well, we're on the first name basis where he calls me “Mick” and I call him “Sire” and it works for us, but even I wouldn't have the big brass ones it would take to walk up to the Snake Coordinator like that, and then your going to stare down Yorinaga Kurita?  I didn't think Wolf had a death wish, but Yorinaga stepped aside when old Takashi put his hand on his shoulder.  Then Wolf takes this bundle of his shoulder and throws it down at the Coordinators feet, and a couple of Swords come out, then Wolf starts speaking in this fast, angry voice.  At first old Tak is angry, you can see it on his face, but then he gets calm, which if you know Dracs mean they have their emotions under control and its going to get bad.
   “These are all that's left of Minobu Tetsuhara, a good man, a good father, a loyal samurai.  He stood by his honor until the end.  Return them to his family with the honor they deserve.  Be satisfied with what you arranged.  You are a fool for forcing him to this end.”
   Now, I have no idea who this Tetsuhara is, but I do know that calling the Coordinator a fool is not the best thing in the world to do.  As much as I hate to say it, old Tak kept his composure.  He started to speak but Wolf cut him off.
   “Anton Marik tried and failed.  You tried and failed.  The blood you have spilled is on your hands, the property you destroyed is on your hands.  We Dragoons set great store by our people.  No one touches them and gets away clean.  You and your plans have failed.  The Dragoons honored their contract to the letter, and we are clear of the Combine.  Your puny schemes and over rated military have been no obstacle, your Warlord is licking his wounds.  You need a better, smarter type of thug to do your dirty work.”
   Wolf stopped talking, clearly waiting for a response.
   Takashi gestured to the swords.  “This was never my wish.  I valued Minobu Tetsuhara, I value his service to the Dragon.  I warned you that others would take independent action.  Samsonov did not act with my approval-”
   And then it happened.
   My First thought was “Holy Jesus Christ Mother Mary Mercy of God, did he just slap the Coordinator of the Combine?”
   And he had.  Jaime Wolf stepped in and with a right hand slapped the coordinator.  When I realized that, the pucker factor went to 11.  There was a collective gasp from the room, and several Snakes stepped forward.  I started looking for the nearest exit.
   “No!” cried Takashi, throwing his arm out to stop Yorinaga Kurita.  Old Tak never took his eyes of Wolf though.
   “You are not in a mech Yorinaga, you can be hit here.”
   Morgan Kell's voice rang out clear and true, and half the crowd turned to look at him. 
   Talk about conflicted.  Yorinaga Kurita took a step, stopped,  then stepped back.  But his posture told everyone that he was on edge.
   “Do you think we're that gullible” snapped Wolf.  “Samsonov is a Warlord of the Combine.  Either he acted with your approval, or your grip on your domain is such that men like that can rise to power and get away with such things, or attempt to.  You've paid a high price for what you've wrought already, and it does not begin to cover what you have bought.  If you were an honorable man I would meet you in the Circle of Eq-”
   Wolf paused.  Maybe he realized he had crossed a line.  Maybe physically hitting the coordinator and then calling him a dishonorable coward would be, as they say: A Bad Thing.
   “From this day on, the Dragoons are at war with the House of Kurita.  We'll see you in ruins.  No kokkyō o kanshi suru!”
   Watch your Border.
   Wolf stopped speaking, but his rage was still evident. 
   Takashi stood there and absorbed it all, must have been one of those “Reed in the Wind” things, but when he realized Wolf was done speaking, he did the one thing I didn't expect him to do:  He bowed.  Not a deep bow by any means, but everyone saw his head move.  His eyes never left Wolf, but he bowed.
   Wolf did do one thing I thought he would.  He snorted, turned around and stalked off.  For a few seconds his boots on the floor were the only noise.  The crowd chatter picked up as Wolf made his way to Morgan Kell.  I kept my eyes on Takashi and the Dracs.  There was a series of hushed conversations,  but old Tak never took his eyes of Wolf.
    No kokkyō o kanshi suru.
   Watch your Border.
   Oh, there was going to be some interesting times ahead.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #78 on: 06 December 2011, 21:14:44 »
DUDE!!!!!


Jaime pimp-slapped Taki?????
holy crap you know how to start a war
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #79 on: 06 December 2011, 21:25:17 »
DUDE!!!!!


Jaime pimp-slapped Taki?????
holy crap you know how to start a war
  Indeed.    I'm reminded of a certain motivational macro featuring Kitchener, but I'd have to Warn myself for posting it.  :o

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« Reply #80 on: 06 December 2011, 23:10:33 »

“Two Zeus, an Atlas, and a Warhammer are standing-”
“Wait, whats a Warhammer doing in a recon lance?”

   Popular LCAF joke of the day.

 XD LOL i loved it!  [applause]

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« Reply #81 on: 06 December 2011, 23:17:29 »

   Takashi gestured to the swords.  “This was never my wish.  I valued Minobu Tetsuhara, I value his service to the Dragon.  I warned you that others would take independent action.  Samsonov did not act with my approval-”
   And then it happened.
   My First thought was “Holy Jesus Christ Mother Mary Mercy of God, did he just slap the Coordinator of the Combine?”
   And he had.  Jaime Wolf stepped in and with a right hand slapped the coordinator.  When I realized that, the pucker factor went to 11.  There was a collective gasp from the room, and several Snakes stepped forward.  I started looking for the nearest exit.


 OMG! how classy! XD lol, i couldn't stop laughing for a few minuets, it was perfect!  O0

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #82 on: 07 December 2011, 02:28:31 »
Great way to make friends and influence enemies.
Slap down the coordinator. [rockon] [watch] [cheers]
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #83 on: 10 December 2011, 19:40:39 »
Chapter 17 _Why interrupt a Good thing?

November 15th, 3028
New Avalon      

   He couldn't remember when he last saw the sun.  Although given the weather reports it had been a few days since anyone else surface side had seen the sun either.  Reading the reports that had trickled in through his desk, and looking at data compiled on his wall, Marshall Thomas Zibler was a conflicted man.
   “No plan survives contact with the enemy” was a military aphorism as old as time.  Lord knows he was certainly a proponent of doing what he could to inflict that sort of result on his opponent's.  But now, he was staring at it from the other side of the window.  The First Two waves of Operation SPIKE were unqualified successes.  The Capellan Military was reeling, Tikonov had fallen, Pavel Ridzik had surrendered.  YELLOW BIRD had succeeded beyond his wildest dreams as well.  He hadn't expected those battles to be over as fast as they were.  And on the Lyran side, VALKRYIE was just as successful.   
   And Wolf's Dragoons were getting pummeled.  It appeared as if Takashi Kurita was ignoring everything else going on in his realm to redeem his honor.
   And despite that...well, Everything was going well.  Everything was on schedule.  Usually the enemy was the one who forced you to change.  You didn't change them unless you had a compelling reason to do so. 
   And he didn't. 
   He waited for a half hour, pacing back and forth, looking at the Intel reports, the printouts, the maps.  Ran a couple of ideas through the computer.  Then he stood in front of his wall for five minutes, taking it all in.  Making his mind up, he made a call.

   “You want to do what!”  Field Marshal Lawsons face was shocked.  It was no the only one.
   “I am proposing we change the direction of the 2nd Wave of YELLOW BIRD.” Marshal Zibler replied as calmly as he could.  His hands gripped the sides of the rostrum tight enough that he feared the cracking of the wood might soon be heard.
   “May I ask why, Marshal?” asked Yvonne Davion.  Her face was composed, but you could see the concern in her eyes.
   “Because I have come to the conclusion that our goals on the Draconis Front have been driven by the wrong set of data.  With Operation SPIKE and the Capellans, our goal has been territory, with the qualifiers being that territory has to be important to the Confederation in some tangible fashion.  Planets like Tikonov and Styk were military goals, Bharat and Liao were moral goals.  In looking at YELLOW BIRD, the targets we have chosen in the first wave were geared towards those similar goals.  Beyond that, I think we've made mistakes.”
   The Marshals were quiet, but he could tell several had questions.
   “Lets be honest,” Zibler said, “This war is about much more than destroying the ability of our enemies to fight, it's about destroying his will to fight as well.  It's about giving them pause, to confuse them and mark them react to us.  We've already got people asking “Is that it?” for YELLOW BIRD.  Was the Princes declaration at the wedding a misdirection?  Is the Confederation our primary target?  Anyone with half a military  can look at our transportation assets and see why we've structured our attacks this way.  And to be honest, we've always known that additional waves of YELLOW BIRD would be predicated on what happened after the first waves.”
   “But not the first wave.” stated Marshal Davion, with some interest on the word first.
   “So what do you propose?” asked another Marshal.  Zibler didn't notice who, he was busy taking a drink of water, trying to calm himself.
   Zibler took a breath and typed in a few commands.  The holotank spun and wheeled to the Combine Border.  Planned second wave moves dissolved, to be replaced by new arrows. 
   Zibler looked out over his audience.  Quite a few were looking on with interest.  He could see the wheels working. 
   “That move is just a preamble for your proposed third wave, right?” Marshal Tronly asked, a smile on his face.  He had thought he had figured out what Zibler was up to.  Thomas smiled, and typed in a few more commands.  This time more arrows came up, transportation lines, attack lines, a schedule of troop movements.
   Even Yvonne Davion gasped.
   “What sort of fantasy world are you living in Zibler?” Field Marshal Lawson's voice was hard.
   “Well, it's certainly audacious.” replied another Marshal.
   “Look,” Zibler started, then paused, taking a breath.  “I am not saying this plan isn't risky.  I'm not saying there are potential pitfalls to this plan.  But I have to say I am not looking at this from just a military perspective.  There's the morale side of it as well.  It's not just the lands we take from our enemy that hurts them, it's what on those lands as well.  The current iteration of YELLOW BIRD does that, but not as well as this version does.”
   “In your opinion.” replied the Princes Champion.
   “Yes ma'am.”
   “And what of the Capellan March?” asked Marshal Lawson.  Zibler sighed.
   “What of it Field Marshal?” he asked.
   “If anything the success of SPIKE has shown that they are a hollow force.  SPIKE was a good kick in the door.  We should capitalize on it and bring the whole rotten house down!”  Lawson pounded her fist on the table for emphasis.  It was a common theme with her.  Zibler suspected had he been in her position it would have been one of his as well.
   “We've always maintained that SPIKE was going to be an offensive with limited goals,” he replied.  “Also, the transportation is just not there.  The First Prince has always maintained that the Combine is the primary target, as such it will ultimately receive the bulk of the assets.”
   Marshal Davion chimed in.  “This is old ground Marshal.  The decision's been made.”  Lawson was silent, but her face was hard.
   “A Question,” asked Marshal Tronley. “In putting together this new proposal, why do you think that the Kuritan Forces will not see it coming and prepare accordingly?”
   Zibler paused a moment before answering.  “It is my belief that the Combine is currently hobbled by its present situation.  It is being assailed on both sides, and it's losing, in many cases badly.  There are reports that several high ranking Combine commanders have committed seppuku because they've lost minor skirmishes against the Lyrans, which has hurt them even more.  The only DCMS commanders who seem to be doing anything constructive at the moment are Theodore Kurita and Warlord Dieron, but I suspect the Warlord is going off on his own, the actions on Northwind do not seem part of any plan.  Intel agrees with me on this more than they disagree.”
   “And what about the Combine offensive against the Dragoons?”
   “That's...personal.”  Zibler's voice was soft.  He had seen the slap on the vid, known why Jaime had done it.  But it was a severe breach of Kuritan honor, one that demanded retribution. “That is a private war, between Takashi Kurita and the Galedon District versus the Dragoons.  Colonel Wolf's actions shamed the Coordinator in public, and to remove that shame The Coordinator has to make Wolf pay.  The Combine knows what we have in the region, at least they have a good guess.  Yet they bypassed other worlds to hit Wapokoneta and Glenmora.  The Galedon District is chomping at the bit, and their only target is the Dragoons.   They've jumped to worlds we have left ungarrisoned, recharged, and continued on to where the Dragoons are.  There are certainly higher value targets to hit in the Region.  Which in a round about way brings us back to the proposed changes.
   “Whats ultimately important is that we not hold just any piece of territory, but key territory.  We don't need to destroy just their industry, or their military, or their planets in order to win.  Yes, those things help, but ultimately what we need to do is destroy their will to fight.  We need to Destroy their morale.  We can not afford a War to the Bone.  We have to end this, sooner rather than later.  And the best way to end this is to convince them...to make them believe...they've already lost.”

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #84 on: 10 December 2011, 20:31:16 »
Nice story once again.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #85 on: 10 December 2011, 21:20:26 »
Looks like the DC is going to be really hurting soon. >:D
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« Reply #86 on: 11 December 2011, 06:29:38 »
I doint think they will outright die, but i sure think they will be a MUCH diminished threat. I wounder though, will the Free Fasalhague republic still be reborn though?

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #87 on: 14 December 2011, 21:05:18 »
All will be revealed.  :-)

I've got a rough sketch of what I am going to do out to 3067 done...getting there...well, that's the fun part ;-)

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I doint think they will outright die, but i sure think they will be a MUCH diminished threat. I wounder though, will the Free Fasalhague republic still be reborn though?
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #88 on: 14 December 2011, 21:14:00 »
Snippets

“If there is one thing I fear, it is that we are letting the Capellans of too lightly.  SPIKE has shown what a hollow force they are.  We could end the Capellan Tyranny for all time, yet Hanse is to blinded by his hatred of the Combine to see this.  Why sting both enemies?  Pick one, smash them, then turn around and smash the other in due time.  We have already demonstrated the weakness of the Confederation, we should concentrate our efforts there.”

   From the Journal of Michael Hasek-Davion


“Guilty?  Good.  Now all he has to do is track down all the relatives of the boys and girls he got killed and tell them how sorry he is.  And until he's finished with that, he should watch his back.”

   Colonel Jack Esteves, 8th Crucis Lancers, commenting on the guilty verdict of former CO    Marshal Wargo


“Has any military in recent memory ever suffered the shocks and reverses of the Capellan Confederation?  Almost 20 regiments worth of Mechs destroyed, including several Warrior Houses.  The loss of Tikonov, Styk, Tigress and Liao?  A counterattack brutally repulsed?  It's as if the Confederation has suffered such a series of body blows that it will take some time to react.  Which is perhaps what the planners at the AFFS wanted.  Now that the CCAF is reeling, the AFFS is shifting its attention.
   Or is it?”

      Garret Wolsley
       Pundit, Good Morning New Avalon
      December 28th, 3028


“On September 3rd elements of the 3rd Proserpina Hussars jumped into Barlow's End.  There, they made no attempt to engage the planetary defense forces, nor did they move towards the planet.  Once their jumpships had recharged they jumped out, I do not know where”
   
   Intel report filed by MIIO agent on Barlows End, Sept 8th ,3028


“All this tap dancing around, this maneuvering back and forth, stabbing at the enemy like a picador of old, it's...unbecoming.  There is your enemy, hit him with your fist, let him know you are there, make sure he feels it.  This trying to inflict death on our enemies by a thousand papercuts will cost us.  You mark my words.”

   General Frederick Steiner, February 3027


“I've been in a Commando since I joined, but this new Wolfhound, if it could cook...anyways...Sure, they laughed at us.  Made fun of us.  It's a Lyran thing, unless your surrounded by at least 70 tons of machine you feel naked, or so they say.  Then we saved their bacon on Harvest, the laughing grew less.  Then we saved them on Kirchbach, and it stopped altogether.  Last week someone mentioned it was nice to have some excellent intel to act on.  I told them that for 300 years we've always had the ability, it was the institution that was blind to what it was seeing.  Maybe that will get me a black mark in the personnel file, but the fact of the matter is its true.  And by the silence I encountered after I made it, they knew it as well.”
   
   Kommandant Peter Model, CO, Blitz Company, 4th Donegal RCT
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« Reply #89 on: 14 December 2011, 23:39:52 »
SECOND WAVE
   
   The first wave of Operation SPIKE took place from August 19th to September 15th.  The second wave luanched September 23rd and ended on October 31st.  The Capellan Operation RIPOSTE was launched November 28th, and is generally considered to have ended on December 3oth, when the Northwind Highlanders arrived at the Northwind jump point.  The so called “Third” Wave of Operation Spike took place from January 5th to February 15th.    The longest the Capellan front went without combat was the Four weeks of November, as the AFFS prepared Operation PAVISE. 
   On the Draconis Front, the timeline was much slower, for a variety of reasons.  The first wave of YELLOW BIRD started August 19th and ended September 20th, but the second wave did not launch until December 1st.  There were several reasons for this, many of them minor, but the most important reason was transport.  As ambitious as the AFFS High Command was, it required a great degree of coordination and timing between jumpships and dropships, and for the most part, the plan succeeded.  The majority of the transportation assets not tasked to Operation PAVISE at the end of the sseocnd wave of Operation SPIKE were moved to the Draconis border, and this took some time. 
   The lull also had the added effect, intentional or otherwise, of giving both the Capellans and Kuritans pause.  Who was the main target?  Was the AFFS dividing it’s effort?  Was one attack merely a diversion, while the other was real?  And if so, which attack was the diversion?
   With the Lyran’s Operation VALKYRIE proceeding on or ahead of schedule in many respects, some felt the AFFS would increase the tempo of its operations as well, and there were several debates about this in the High command meetings.  The first wave of YELLOW BIRD had gone exceedingly well, in fact every wave thus far had exceeded expectations, and there were some calls to slow things down, and not overreach.  There was a series of debates during the Novemeber 3028 AFFS High Command meetings about what to do, but ultimately the First Prince and his generals decides to stick to the basic framework of each plan.  However, with the apparent paralysis of the DCMS, several target worlds were changed.
   Little did observers know what those changes meant, but  it can be safely assumed that on December 1st few in the DCMS High Command were thinking about the future.  Instead, the second wave of YELLOW BIRD was launched, as 14 regiments attacked 10 worlds.

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