Very good stuff in there, thank you for assembling it.
A few questions/notes/nitpicks:
The Weapons:
What is the difference between "Damage/Hit" and "Dmg Txt"? These values are identical for the weapons listed.
Nitpick: I prefer ranges to be (minimum) Short/Medium/Long, as that way it only takes up one line instead of 4. So instead of the Class 2 Chain Gun being:
Minimum Range: 3
Short Range: 8
Medium Range: 17
Long Range: 25
It would be:
Ranges: (3) 8/17/25
(Of course if there is no minimum range, then Excel might try to translate this as August 17, 2025)
Potential Error: page 26: Snub-nosed Gauss Rifle has a Crit size of 0
Potential Error: page 26: "
Duel-Purpose" -> "Dual-Purpose" (unless the purpose of this weapon is only to duel other units)
Potential Error: Page 28: Starling's 3065 update, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: "prospector's" -> "prospectors"
Nitpick: page 31: the map of Military Regions (I didn't read the details about the systems I just went by the map colors and system names):
- If the HQ for Port Stanley was at San Antonio, this would allow support for Hamunaptra but might lose Helios/Solitude to Rorke's Drift military region
- If the HQ for New Jersey was at Rockall, that would allow it to support all of its existing systems and Forts Kerium and Centrum
- New Jamaica looks good, it can support Fort Centrum as-is
- If the HQ for Rorke's Drift was at Pacifica, it would only be one jump away from nearly all of its assigned systems (except for Redemption and Fort Dixie).
With these changes Rorke's Drift could become the national military HQ, as 3 Military Region HQ would only be one jump away, and the base at San Antonio would be the testing ground for future national military leaders.
Error: page 31: 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: "standard
fair" -> "standard fare"
Error: page 31: 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "But
it's the events" -> "But its the events"
Error: page 31: 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "descendent" -> "descendants"
Error: page 31: 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "buy" -> "by"
Error: page 31: 4th paragraph, 1st sentence: "president" -> "precedent"
Error: page 31: 4th paragraph, 2nd sentence: "who
know how" -> "who knows how"
Error: page 31: 5th paragraph, 1st sentence: "if the other
Clan's" -> "if the other Clans"
Error: page 31: 5th paragraph, 1st sentence: "strait" -> "straight"
Error: page 35: 2nd title: "MAJOR CASTLE
BRIAN'S" -> "MAJOR CASTLE BRIANS"
Error: page 40 (and 41): Several times you have "The New Americas" and other times you have "The New America's". Recommend picking just one.
Error: page 40: National Symbol: "a bald eagle
clutch a" -> "a bald eagle clutching a"
Error: page 40: 1st paragraph, 7th line, the word "forefather’s" has a translation symbol in it, and should instead be "forefathers' "
Error: page 41: 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "that has
lead them" -> "that has led them"
Error: page 41: 2nd paragraph, 5th line: there are font translation characters in the word 'Española'
Error: page 41: 2nd paragraph, 5th line: "in turn
reviving aid" -> "in turn are receiving aid"
Error: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 3rd line: "capable of producing
BattleMech's" -> "capable of producing BattleMechs"
Error: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 4th-5th line: "several armed JumpShip's" -> "several armed JumpShips"
Error: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 6th line: "Nebular" -> "Nebula"
Clarification: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 6th line: "Titans Gate"? As written this is a gate for multiple Titans, unless it is a gate for a Titan "Titan's Gate"
Error: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 7th line: "nebular" -> "nebula"
Error: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 8th line: "automated
defence s, possible even," -> "automated defenses, possibly even"
Error: page 41: 3rd paragraph, 10th line: "nebular" -> "nebula"
Error: page 41: 4th paragraph, 2nd line: "between their
boards and" -> between their borders and"
Error: page 41: Unit of Currency: "Pound (£)" -> "Pound (£)"
I think that is all for now, I was just glancing over bits here and there.